Incest Rishta

[Guruji]

तकल्लुफ न उठाइये तारीफ़ों का,
बे नज़र है ये इनका कोई ईमान नही....
चाहत फ़क़त किसी इंसान की है,
यक़ीनन हम कोई बेईमान नही।।

 

[amita]

I was desperate to know what happens next but you changed the stance of the story but it does not matter because I am interested in both sides.
Sandhya was aroused by her son's touch, perhaps after taking care of Aditya, she liked it and emotions come on their own, we can't stop it. You have praised Sandhya and made me crazy about her, Sandhya is really beautiful. But it is said that there is also a black spot in the moon, that is why Sandhya is sad.
Now I think Aditya will get rid of all the troubles of Sandhya. You have explained each thing very deeply, I like you and your style. Aditya is lost in the beauty of that flower.
Today's update was very seductive and Sensual. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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You would soon be able to know what happened.
You can understand that there was lot of pressure on me to write some updates on Sandhya and Aditya.
Well the original story needs that Flashback should be in one go and then come to the present but many Readers have their own view.

Well I had to find the way how could it be balanced.

Anyway Thanks so much for providing fantastic review.

Next update would come soon

 

[amita]

finally shandya and Aditya story started. Wait for next update

Aap sahi keh rahe hain lekin ye aap ke dabav me hua hai.

Agar aap meri baat mane tu Flashback ko khatam karke kahani ko vartmaan me aane de usse aapko kahani me jayada maza aayegaa, nahi tu kahani ki originality khatam hone ke pure chance hain aur kahani me bahut sare badlav karne padenge.

Aap sab ki rai mere liye bahut mehtav rakhti hai.

Dhanyawad.

 

[Oxfordian]

Aap sahi keh rahe hain lekin ye aap ke dabav me hua hai.

Agar aap meri baat mane tu Flashback ko khatam karke kahani ko vartmaan me aane de usse aapko kahani me jayada maza aayegaa, nahi tu kahani ki originality khatam hone ke pure chance hain aur kahani me bahut sare badlav karne padenge.

Aap sab ki rai mere liye bahut mehtav rakhti hai.

Dhanyawad.

Mai bs ye chahta tha ki flashback ko aap jldi jdi updates deke story ko present me le aae.
Flashback ko beech me mat chhode.
Aur waise bhi hum aap ke likhne ke andazz ke mureed hai.
Aap befikr ho kr flashback complete kre , jahan itne din wait kiya wahan todha aur kr lenge.

Pr promise kriye ki sandhya aur aditya ka part bhi ruchika aur Mohanlal jaisa jabardast aur lamba hoga. Sandhya ko bhi full priority dena updates me.


Agr apko meri wajah se pressure mahsoos hua ho to maaf krna

 

[pie]

Aap sahi keh rahe hain lekin ye aap ke dabav me hua hai.

Agar aap meri baat mane tu Flashback ko khatam karke kahani ko vartmaan me aane de usse aapko kahani me jayada maza aayegaa, nahi tu kahani ki originality khatam hone ke pure chance hain aur kahani me bahut sare badlav karne padenge.

Aap sab ki rai mere liye bahut mehtav rakhti hai.

Dhanyawad.

Hey Amita, I hope not forced you to present Aditya and Sandhya updates if it is my sincere apologies to you. What can I do you are such an amazing and excellent writer that I cannot stop myself from demanding Aditya and Sandhya updates......
Please write as per your decisionand yu have cleared the confusion. This is a request not demand please pile up the flashback as earlier as possible.....
Thank you.......

 

[amita]

Mai bs ye chahta tha ki flashback ko aap jldi jdi updates deke story ko present me le aae.
Flashback ko beech me mat chhode.
Aur waise bhi hum aap ke likhne ke andazz ke mureed hai.
Aap befikr ho kr flashback complete kre , jahan itne din wait kiya wahan todha aur kr lenge.

Pr promise kriye ki sandhya aur aditya ka part bhi ruchika aur Mohanlal jaisa jabardast aur lamba hoga. Sandhya ko bhi full priority dena updates me.


Agr apko meri wajah se pressure mahsoos hua ho to maaf krna

Hey Amita, I hope not forced you to present Aditya and Sandhya updates if it is my sincere apologies to you. What can I do you are such an amazing and excellent writer that I cannot stop myself from demanding Aditya and Sandhya updates......
Please write as per your decisionand yu have cleared the confusion. This is a request not demand please pile up the flashback as earlier as possible.....
Thank you.......

I am really relieved with your well required support.

Well if I shorten the Flashback would be injustice to the story and many things would be missed which is not a good view point

Well with regards to Sandhya and Aditya, they are also in the Lead Role as I have stated earlier and you would appreciate that too.

Let the flow of the story be Flashback and then present would be the right sequence of events.

Both parts have equal and purposeful meaning and you would enjoy both parts.

Please give your sincere opinions without prejudices.

Thanks

 

[amita]

agar kahani ko sirf incest yani sex ke nazariye se dekha jaye to bahut sahi chal rahi hai

aur agar story ke factors ke hisab se dekha jaye...........................to
ap kitne bhi clarification de do...............
sandhya ka role mujhe negative hi lag raha hai.................. just like a bitch


use pati se pyar na milne ka dard bhi hai (pati ka dosh)..........................aur pati ko bahar jane ka dosh dekar apni galtiyon ko uske sir par thop rahi hai

agar wo pati se khulkar baat karti............dr ne jo kaha wo batati................ to pati se hi pyar to milta...........aur aage chalkar shayad wo sex mein bhi comfortable ho jati

lekin usne har sawal jo uske dimag mein utha...................uska khud hi jawab bhi soch liya.................. ki mohan kya kahega ya karega

koi bhi pati........... agar patni se pyar (not just sex... but closeness and emotional bonding) to wo apne time ko manage karke sath jarur deta hai............. aur mohan to mujhe kafi positive character laga..............
uske ghar se bahar rahne ka karan hi.............wife ka bach-bach ke rahna tha.............. practically...........
aur wo kabhi bhi sandhya ko majburi mein sath lekar nahin gaya.................balki wo hamesha le jana chahta tha..............aisa apke pichhle updates se clear hai

ruchika mein mohanlal ka interest.................... ruchika ke liye nahi................... sandhya ke substitute ke taur par hai........... jo aage chalkar emotional bond mein badalega hi

lekin sandhya ke liye uske bete ko..........................sirf attraction hai.......................... is umr ka opposit sex ke prati akarshan.......... bahan sath rahti, ghulti-milti to uske liye hota... lekin maa hai sath.........aur najdik ati ja rahi hai to uske liye hai...........nothing else

aur bete ke liye sandhya ka pyar................. sirf apni guilty........... mohan ko pyar na de pane ki guilty........... ke prayaschit ki tarah hai
jo ki dhire dhire lust mein badal raha hai........................ lustiness................ bitchiness

dekhte hain ap ise kaise describe aur negotiate karti hain..............

otherwise................... all is well................. like every fucktale............especially ----incest

keep it up

Itna satik aur gehrai se vishleshan, bahut khub.

Lekin aapko ek baat bataun ki meri kahani me love jayada hota hai vo dusri baat hai ki love incest relationship me hai leki mera abhi kucch kehna kahani ka maza kharab kar dega, vaise agar aap thodha aur dhyaan se padhenge tu maine bahut sare sanket diye hain aane wali kahani ke liye.

Abhi tu kahani ki bhumika ban rahi hai asli kahani tu abhi baki hai.

Aap gussa na ho aap ko sab kucch milega jiski aapne iss kahani se ummid ki hogi.

Dhanyawad

Aapne jis bindu par baat ki hai vo bahut hi makul hai

 

[Iron Man]

Waiting for next update

 

[kamdev99008]

no comment

 

[amita]

Nice update keep updating the story

Thanks so much for your kind words.
Next update soon