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DOSTO UPDATE NYT ME KAL THODA MOOD OFF THA ISLIYE UPDATE NHAI DE PAYEA
Koi baat nahi bhai ham to night ka bhi intjar kar legeDOSTO UPDATE NYT ME KAL THODA MOOD OFF THA ISLIYE UPDATE NHAI DE PAYEA
Ok bro waitingDOSTO UPDATE NYT ME KAL THODA MOOD OFF THA ISLIYE UPDATE NHAI DE PAYEA
Hlo dosto maine sabke comment pahde to jinko update pasand ayea unka sukriya
Par bichme kuch bhaiyo ko update pasand nahi ayea aur kuch ko to meri writing pasand nahi to unse main kuch puchna chahata hun jinko meri writing aachi nahi lagi yan update pasand nahi ayea
To ap sabke according Adi ko apni behno ke sath keya karna chahiyea
1. Keya behno ki har roj sabke samne insult karni chahiyea
2. Uney baat baat par humiliate karna chahiyea
3. Jab vo baat karne aye kya un par hath uthana chahiyea
4. Yan fir unki saza unke sath rape karke deyni chahiyea
5. Yan uney jaan se hi maar deyna chahiyea, na rahe gi behne na unka jikar aye ga
Ap sab batayea inme se konsa point agar main add karu to story padhne me maza aye ga?
Main batau ik bi nahi agar isme se ik bi point ayea to story itni ghatiya ho jaye gi ki main khud nahi likh payu ga.
Dusari baat
Ik bhai jisey bachpan se le ke badey honey tak uski behno ne usey itna pyaar diya to keya vo apni behno ke sath kuch bura kar sakta hai, mana gussa hai naraj hai chalo thodi bohat nafart bi karta hai par hai to ik bhai hi, vo to bs chahata hai sabko pata chale usne keya saha hai
Bhai choti behno ki baat main to nahi tal sakta real life me bi to story me character keyse tal sakta hai, uper se jab dono ko vo itna pyaar karta ho, agar dono ke liye itni logo ki jaan le sakta hai to unke liye ghar nahi ja sakta
Mana story main super powers vala area hai par story hai to human ke uper hi isme konsa koyi aliens hai jinki feelings kuch aur hongi
Tesari baat
Bhai ye revenge story nahi jisme hero apni insult ka badla apni family se leyne ayea hai,
Hero keh raha hai apni family se tum sabne meri bezati ki 2 saal mujey nafrat di main tumey jaan se mar dunga
Eysa kuch nahi hoga bhai, agar eysa kuch mujse expect kar rahe ho to main pehle hi bata dun eysa ik bi scene story me nahi aye ga
Bhai title incest hai agar hero family se nafrat hi karta rahe ga to fir ye title ka keya matlab
Chothi baat
Bhai mujey ye bi samja do nafrat keyse dikhayi jati hai, mere hisab se to jabtak 2 log apse me baat nahi karte ik dusare ke samne nahi atey tabtak unme se kisi ik ko pata keyse chale ga dusara us se nafrat karta hai
Apke according to ye hoga
adi apne ghar betha hai aur uski behne apne ghar, adi ghar par beth khud se keh raha hai main ap sabse nafrat karta hun, aur uski behne apne ghar bethi khud se batey karte huye adi ko mana rahi hai
Yan adi ik table par betha hai clg me aur uski behne 3 4 table chhod ke bethi hai dono ik dusare ik tarf dekh nahi rahe par vahi bethe bethe adi nafrat dikha raha hai aur uski behne mana rahi hai
agar ap eysa kuch padhna chahte ho to fir to sachi me mujey likhna nahi ata ap me se koyi mujey eysa kuch likh ke send kar do jisme 2 logo ik dusare se nafrat karte hai par vo ik dusare se milte nahi ik dusare me samne nahi jatey par ik dusare ko bina miley apni nafart dikhate hai tan jo mujey likhna aa sake fir main next update post karta hun
Agar meri koyi baat buri lagi ho to maffi chahunga
Bhai story jaise bhi jarahi hai badiya jarahi hai koi changes mat karna aapke isaabse liko bhai badiya jarahe ho....Hlo dosto maine sabke comment pahde to jinko update pasand ayea unka sukriya
Par bichme kuch bhaiyo ko update pasand nahi ayea aur kuch ko to meri writing pasand nahi to unse main kuch puchna chahata hun jinko meri writing aachi nahi lagi yan update pasand nahi ayea
To ap sabke according Adi ko apni behno ke sath keya karna chahiyea
1. Keya behno ki har roj sabke samne insult karni chahiyea
2. Uney baat baat par humiliate karna chahiyea
3. Jab vo baat karne aye kya un par hath uthana chahiyea
4. Yan fir unki saza unke sath rape karke deyni chahiyea
5. Yan uney jaan se hi maar deyna chahiyea, na rahe gi behne na unka jikar aye ga
Ap sab batayea inme se konsa point agar main add karu to story padhne me maza aye ga?
Main batau ik bi nahi agar isme se ik bi point ayea to story itni ghatiya ho jaye gi ki main khud nahi likh payu ga.
Dusari baat
Ik bhai jisey bachpan se le ke badey honey tak uski behno ne usey itna pyaar diya to keya vo apni behno ke sath kuch bura kar sakta hai, mana gussa hai naraj hai chalo thodi bohat nafart bi karta hai par hai to ik bhai hi, vo to bs chahata hai sabko pata chale usne keya saha hai
Bhai choti behno ki baat main to nahi tal sakta real life me bi to story me character keyse tal sakta hai, uper se jab dono ko vo itna pyaar karta ho, agar dono ke liye itni logo ki jaan le sakta hai to unke liye ghar nahi ja sakta
Mana story main super powers vala area hai par story hai to human ke uper hi isme konsa koyi aliens hai jinki feelings kuch aur hongi
Tesari baat
Bhai ye revenge story nahi jisme hero apni insult ka badla apni family se leyne ayea hai,
Hero keh raha hai apni family se tum sabne meri bezati ki 2 saal mujey nafrat di main tumey jaan se mar dunga
Eysa kuch nahi hoga bhai, agar eysa kuch mujse expect kar rahe ho to main pehle hi bata dun eysa ik bi scene story me nahi aye ga
Bhai title incest hai agar hero family se nafrat hi karta rahe ga to fir ye title ka keya matlab
Chothi baat
Bhai mujey ye bi samja do nafrat keyse dikhayi jati hai, mere hisab se to jabtak 2 log apse me baat nahi karte ik dusare ke samne nahi atey tabtak unme se kisi ik ko pata keyse chale ga dusara us se nafrat karta hai
Apke according to ye hoga
adi apne ghar betha hai aur uski behne apne ghar, adi ghar par beth khud se keh raha hai main ap sabse nafrat karta hun, aur uski behne apne ghar bethi khud se batey karte huye adi ko mana rahi hai
Yan adi ik table par betha hai clg me aur uski behne 3 4 table chhod ke bethi hai dono ik dusare ik tarf dekh nahi rahe par vahi bethe bethe adi nafrat dikha raha hai aur uski behne mana rahi hai
agar ap eysa kuch padhna chahte ho to fir to sachi me mujey likhna nahi ata ap me se koyi mujey eysa kuch likh ke send kar do jisme 2 logo ik dusare se nafrat karte hai par vo ik dusare se milte nahi ik dusare me samne nahi jatey par ik dusare ko bina miley apni nafart dikhate hai tan jo mujey likhna aa sake fir main next update post karta hun
Agar meri koyi baat buri lagi ho to maffi chahunga
Bro kl morning Mai update padhna writer pehle din SE morning 3 SE 5 bje tk update deta haiKab aayega update Bhai. Aapne night me aayega bole th abhi tak nhi aaya.
Bta do Bhai aaj aayega Ya nhi wait mat krao
Yaar writer ki night morning me hati hai kyaBro kl morning Mai update padhna writer pehle din SE morning 3 SE 5 bje tk update deta hai