Adultery BHABHI MAA (Completed)

[Vikram singh rana]

Update 50​

“is kaam me bahut khatra hai jiva bhai ek bar fir se soch lijiye akhir komal aapki bahan hai “

Ye Tiwari ki awaj thi jo ki mere kaano me padi , main abhi uske kamre me hi jane wale the aaj MLA ke ghar me hamla karne ka irada tha sidhe sidhe ladai aar ya paar wali kahani thi ..

Bhuwan aur main wahi ruk gaye the ..

“bahan are kaha ki bahan mera baap mandir se utha kar laya tha use ..”

“kya ..” idhar Tiwari buri tarah se chouk gaya tha wahi mere kano ko is bat par abhi bhi viswas nahi ho raha tha ..

“ha .. iske maa baap ko kisi ne maar diya tha, to pujari ne ise utha liya … mere maa baap dharmik adami the , pujari ne use kaha tha ki ye koi khas ladki hai , bahut takatwar hogi aur pata nahi kya kya, iske sath ek pustak bhi diya tha pujari ne mere baap ko .. isliye mera baap use sakti sakti bolta rahta tha .. mujhe bhi lagta tha ki ye koi khas hogi lekin kabhi samjh nahi aaya ki kya khas hoga … lekin jab isne un lawando ko maara tab samjh aaya ki ye to Sali puri katil hi hai … logo ko aise katati hai jaise koi gajar muli kaat raha ho , tab apun samjh gaya tha ki isme kya khas hai aur mera baap iska itana kyo khyal rakhta tha ..”

“he bhagwan “

Tiwari ka muh khula ka khula rah gaya tha ,

“aapke pas wo pustak hai, kya aapne kabhi wo purstak padhi thi “

Tiwari jaise kuchh soch kar bol utha

“are kaha re , wo to sanskrit me thi aur hame kon sa sanskrit padhna aata hai … aise bhi abhi wo kaha hai mujhe nahi pata , kabhi jyada dhyan bhi nahi diya tha … aise mera baap bolta tha ki jab sakti ko uska sachcha pyar mil jayega tab uski shakti jagrit ho jaayegi , yahi uska bhawishy hai … fir jab maine tujhe dekha to samjh gaya ki ab uske sath kuchh ho sakta hai aur dekh ………”

Tiwari bas jiva ko ankhe fade dekh raha tha

“aur aise hame in sabse kya apna to kaam ho raha hai na , ab MLA aur Kareem ko markar main aur tu is shahar me raaj karenge , tu bas komal ko control kar use pyar me fansa kar rakh taki ham jo bhi bole wo use bas chup chap karti jaaye ..”

Jiva ki bat sunkar mere nasho ka khoon mere dimag me doudane laga tha , chahra tam tama kar lal ho chuka tha , tabhi bhuwan ne mere kande par aapna hath rakha …

“nahi komal , bina puri jankari ke koi bhi nirnay lena ghatak ho sakta hai “

Uski bate jaise tapte hue marshtahl me paani gir gayi ho , main shant hone lagi lekin abhi bhi mere kaan unki bate sun rahi thi , bhaai se bichhudne ka gam to tha lekin abhi apne prem ki bat bhi sunnai baki thi ….

Aur Tiwari bola

“wo to thik hai jiva bhai lekin … main sirf MLA bankar nahi rakhna chahta aur ager aisi bat hai to iska matlab ye hua ki komal ko sirf main hi control kar sakta hu …..

Aur mere karn hi uski takat hai .. tab to dhandhe me meri hissedari aur bhi badhni chahiye “

Main daya ki bato se na sirf stabdh thi balki aisa laga ki mere sine me jaise koi gahara jhakhm kar diya gaya ho …

Maine jis shakhs se prem kiya wo mujhe mahaj istmaal kar rahaa hai ……

Idhr jiva Tiwari ki bat sunkar hansane laga

“waah beta itani jaldi apne rang dikha diya .. chal thik hai lekin 2 me se ek hi chij milegi , ya to power le ya paisa le … ab tujhe khurshi bhi chahiye aur paisa bhi ye kaise ho sakta hai .. tu apne khurshi ke dam par bhi to kamayega “

Jiva ki bat sunkar Tiwari thodi der ke liye chup ho gaya

“ek kaam karte hai jiva bhai pahle is MLA aur Kareem ko nipta dete hai fir aage ki sochate hai “

“ha ye sahi rahega , ja jakar komal ko taiayr kar ..”

Unki ye bat sunkar main jaar jaar ro rahi thi lekin bhuwan mujhe samhalta hua mere kamre me le aaya tha …

Wo na jane mujhe kya kya samjha raha tha , maine use apne banho me kas liya tha .. wo mere balo ko sahlaye ja raha tha main bas roye jaa rahi thi ……..

“abhi nahi komal abhi nahi .. in sabse jawab mangenge lekin abhi nahi “

Usne mere kano me kaha aur jaise maine uske bat ko maan liya , maine apne ansu pochhe ..

“aaj sakti ka khel hoga, khooni khel “

Main apne talwar nikalte hue wanha se nikl gayi thi…………

Aur fir khooni khel shuru hua , maine MLA ko kai tukado me kaat diya , jiva aur Tiwari ka pura gussa maine wanha nikala tha , dekhne wale bas dekh rahe the , goliyo ki bhouchhar ho rahi thi aur apne tej talwaro se logo ko muli ki tarh kaat rahi thi …

Mere alawa kisi ne bhi koi hathiyar nahi uthaya ha … naa jane kitani lashe maine gira di thi ,main to ginati bhi nahi thi .. bas khoon se likh diya tha diwalo par …. Sakti ………

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Tiwari aur jiva MLA ke marne ka jashn mana rahe the tabhi main apne kamre me naha rahi thi ….. pure jism me khoon ki chhite thi , bathroom ke bahar Bhuwan baitha hua tha kisi soch me dooba hua tha ……..

“komal wo pustak wo to tumhare pas hai na “

Main naha kar nikali aur Bhuwan ki ankhe badi ho gayi wo bas ankhe fade mujhe hi dekh raha tha …..

“komal tum “

Bhuwan itana hi bol paya tha , mera pura jism nanga tha aur abhi abhi nahane ke karn paani se puri tarh se bheega hua tha, baalo se paani ki bunde tapak rahi thi .. mere sudol aur narm jism me abhi bhi nami barkraar thi ..

Main ithalati hui aayi aur Bhuwan ki god me baith gayi ..

Bhuwan mano kaanp gaya ho , wo abhi mere bister me hi baitha hua tha …

“ye kya kar rahi ho “

“galti ho gayi thi mujhse ,main samjh nahi paayi ki main kisse pyar karti hu “

Maine apni banhe Bhuwan ke gale me daal di thi , maine apne hotho ko uske hotho par rakh diya lekin Bhuwan abhi bhi koi pratikriya nahi de raha tha ..

“hato komal .. tum abhi pareshan ho .. ye pyar nahi hai ye bas gussa hai ..”

Maine uski ankho me dekha , meri ankhe gusse se lal ho gayi thi , ye shakhs mujhe thukara raha tha … lekin Bhuwan ki ankho me mere liye bas pyar hi tha , koi dar nahi ……..

Maine pas pada talwar utha liya jo abhi bhi na jane kitane logo ke khoon se bheega hua tha , maine use bhwuan ke gale me rakh diya

“mujhe naa bolega “

Maine gusse me kaha , aisa lag raha tha jaise main khud ke kabu me nahi rah gayi hu ,

Lekin wo hansa ..

“tum mujhe dara rahi ho “ main bas gusse se use dekhte rah gayi , mere muh se koi bhi awaj nahi nikal rahi thi ..

Tabhi kamre ka darwaja khul gaya ..

Samne Tiwari muh faade kha tha , uske hatho me sharab ki ek botal thi , wo bahut hi khus lag raha tha… lekin hame is halt me dekhte hi uske chahre ki hawaiya ud gayi …….

Main nagn bister me Bhuwan ke god me baithi hui thi aur mera talwar uske gale se laga hua tha …..

Ham dono ne Tiwari ko dekha , janha Bhuwan thoda jhep gaya tha wahi mujhe jaise koi fark hi nahi pada…

“ye.. ye kya kar rahi ho komal ..”

Mano Tiwari ka pura nasha hi kafur ho gaya ho , wo haklaane laga tha ..

“bhaag ynha se maderchod warna isi talwar se tera gala bhi kaat dungi “

Main garji aur asisa main tab garajti thi jab main shikar karti thi ..

Meri awaj sunkar hi Tiwari kaanp gaya tha , uske ankho me dar utarne laga tha .. uske kadam pichhe hone lage the ..

Wo darwaja band karne laga ..

“ruk … darwaja khol ke rakh …duniya ko bhi to pata chle ki ynha kya ho raha hai ”

Wo kuchh bhi nahi kah paaya … wo bas pichhe hat gaya … mera chahra gusse se tamtma raha tha ..

Lekin abhi bhi Bhuwan ki ankho me koi bhi dar nahi dikh raha tha aur yahi bat mujhe aur bhi bechain kar rahi thi …

Usne mere galo ko sahlaya , mere balo me apni ungaliya feri ……aur … aur mere hotho me apne hotho ko mila diya ……..

Mere ankho se ek ansu gir gaya aisa laga jaise main fir se hosh me aa gayi thi ………

“wo pustak kaha hai komal …… mere pita ji ne kabhi mujhe sakti parampara ke bare me bataya tha , mujhe lag ki wo pagal adami kuchh bhi bolta hai , lekin mere pita ji tumhare aur purajari ji ke mitra the , aur ab mujhe bhi lagta hai ki koi aisi bat hai jo hame janna bahut hi jaruri hai …..”

Maine haa me sar hilaya ..

“pita ji ne apne antim samay me mujhe wo pustak di thi , aur kaha tha ki jab tumhe apna pyar mile to ise padhna … maine aaj tak use nahi padha tha shayd aaj wo samay aa gaya hai “

Ham dono ke hoth fir se mil gaye the …….

Update 51​

Hamare samne ek lal rang ke kapde me lipti hui ek kitab thi , kahne ko to ye mahaj ek ktiab thi lekin mere liye ye mere jivan ka ek adhayay hone wala tha..

Bhuwan ne use khola , ek bahut purana document tha jo ki puri tarh se maila ho chuka tha , kagaj pile pad chuke the , lekin likhawat ab bhi spast thi , bas dikkat ye tha ki ye Sanskrit me tha, aisa nahi tha ki hame Sanskrit nahi aata , ham Sanskrit jante the lekin utana nahi ki pura anuwad kar sake ..

“ise kisi Sanskrit ke jankar ke pas le jana chahiye “Bhuwan ne sujhaw diya ..

“hummm lekin koun ..”

Bhuwan ne bas thode der apna dimag lagaya

“college ke Sanskrit ke professor ke pas chalte hai , wo apne time ke university topper bhi the “

Hamne jyda der nahi ki aur sastri sir ke pas pahuch gaye ..

Ab ham bhale hi pure college me badnaam the lekin fir bhi college ke kai teachers jante the ki ham log ek sidhe sadhe se student hi the jinhe wakt ne aisa bana diya tha ..

Unme ek sastri sir bhi the ..

“ye kya hai … koi bahut hi purani pustak maloom hoti hai “

Unhone pahle to bade hi dhyan se use dekha aur fir padhne lage ..

“ye to koi kahani maloom hoti hai , hai kya ye “

Ab ham unhe kya batate ..

“pata nahi sir bas mere pita ko pandit ji ne diya tha aur kaha tha ki jab main mar jau to kisi gyani wakti ke paas jakar is kahani ko sun lena .. ab isme kya hai hame nahi pata lekin mere pita ji ki aagya thi to… kya aap ise padh sakte hai “

Professor sahab ko gyani bolne ki der thi ,unka chahra hi chamak gaya ..

“ha bilkul , baitho main ise padh kar sunata hu “

Aur wo use padhne lage ….

Saar kuchh aisa tha …….

“ye pustak use padhna ya sunna chahiye jo iska uttradhikari ho , sakti ki santaan ho .

Sakti kon hai ..??

Ek shraap diya gaya tha , ek mahila ko , ek sadhu ke dwara ..

Mahila ki bhi koi galti nahi ki wo to bas sadhu ke prem me fans gayi thi aur sadhu ki sadhna me vighan dalane ki galati kar di ..

Shrap diya gaya ki tere aur tere santaano ke ander kaali sakti aa jaaye ….

Tu manav na rahe balki rakshas ho jaaye , khud ko bhi samhal na paaye, jis prem ko paane ke liye tune ye sab kiya .. ja tu apne sachche prem ko bhi nahi pahchan payegi ………

Mahila komal hriday thi wo royi bahut maafi mangi , sadhu ka dil narm hua use apni galti ka ahsaas hua , lekin jo sankalp le liya gaya tha wo wapas nahi ho sakta tha , isliye unhone ye kaha ki shraap waisa hi rahega ..

Lekin .. ye sakti har pidhi ke sath sath kam hote jaayegi ,kewal mahila santaan me hi payi jaayegi , aur tab tak pragat nahi hongi jab tak sachcha prem na mil jaaye .. sachche prem ko tum to nahi dhundh paogi lekin wo prem tumhe dhundhega , aur tumse milan ko bechain rahega.. tum use inkaar karti rahogi … idhar udhar bhatkogi lekin akhir me pahchan hi logi …..

Ye Sakti ek shraap hai jo pidhi dar pidhi jaati jaayegi , sakti parampara me janmi har mahila ke ander wahi takat hogi jo uski maa ke pas thi , lekin jab tak koi sachcha pyar na mil jaaye ye takat viksit nahi hoga ..

Sakti hamesha apane sachche prem ko lekar uljhan me rah sakti hai , lekin apne dil ki sunne par use sachche prem ki pahchan hogi , aur uska premi hi uski takat ko kabu me karne ki yogyata rakhega ..

Dono premiyo ke milan se utpann mahila santaan ke paas hi ye adamy sakti pahuchegi aur iska jagaran aur samapan dono hi uske premi ke dwara hoga ..is tarh dheere dheere hi sahi lekin ye shrap khatm hote jayega … “

Itana bolte bolte sastri ji ruk gaye …

Aur najar uthakar mujhe dekhne lage ..

“isme antim me likha hai ki , ye pustak jankari ke liye pidhi dar pidhi badate jaayegi …….. matlab tum hi …”

Maine ek gahri sans li

“are nahi , ye pustak to Bhuwan ke pita ji ne ise di thi … bas isme likha kya hai ye jannae ki bahut hi utsukta thi ..”

“ok okk “

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ham dono hi ek kamre me baithe hue the ..

“to ab to maan lo ki main tumhara sachcha pyar hu ..”

Bhuwan ne sharart se kaha..

Main bhi muskura uthi ..

“lekin Bhuwan mere maa baap ko kisne mara hoga “

Bhuwan ne ek gahri sans li ,

“jiske pas aisi takat ho uske to kai dushman ho sakte hai komal … aur ye mat bhulo ki ye takat koi wardaan nahi hai , balki ek shraap hai … tumhe isse mukt hona hoga .. “

Maine bhi ek gahri sans li

“ha lein shraap ya vardaan ye kon tay karega , wo to isse hi tay hoga na ki iska istmaal kaise kiya jata hai “

“nahi komal … aaj tak iska upyoge sirf logo ke katal karne ke liye hi kiya gaya hai , tumne naa jane kitane logo ko aise hi kaat diya .. bina kisi karan hai … ha kya karan tha unhe marne ka .. power .. wo bhi dusaro ke liye .. nahi komal tumhe bas use kiya jaa raha hai aur main ye nahi hone dunga “

Bhuwan ne ek gahri sans chhodi ………

Wahi main bhi isi soch me dubi hui thi …………..

Update 52​

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“to kya uske baad aapne un logo ko chhod diya “

Is bar maine prashn kiya tha , komal ne mere ankho me dhyan se dekha aur fir apni beti yani bhabhi ko bade hi pyar se dekha ..

“ha bachcho , uske bad hi maine aur Bhuwan ne ye faisala kar liya tha ki ham dono in sabse dur chale jayenge , main aur katale aam nahi karna chahti thi , isliye ham dono ne ganw me aakar basane ka faisala kiya ..

Aur rato rat hi wanha se bhaag gaye ,aur Bhuwan ke sath rahte rahte main shant hote gayi , ye sakti badi hi ajib chij hai .. prem se hi jagati hai aur premi ke sath shanti se rahne par dheere dheere ye kam hote jati hai aur ant me khatm ho jati hai …. Shayd meri maa isiliye maari gayi kyoki unki sakti khatm ho chuki thi “

Ham sabhi raat se baithe the abhi subah ke 6 baj chuke the , chaay aa chuki thi aur chuskiyo ke sath sabhi apne apne khayalo me kho gaye the …abhi hame bahut kuchh janna baki tha lekin sabse bada sawaal jo mere dil me aa raha tha wo ye tha ki kya bhabhi me bhi wo takat hogi aur akhir kon hoga unka ashiq ..??

Bhaiya to nahi the ye bat to saaf thi , ager wo hote to abhi tak unme ye power jaag gayi hoti , kahe anusar bhabhi us premi ko nahi pahchan payegi lekin wo usse milan ko bekraar rahega , akhir koun hai jo unse milan ko bekraar rahta hai …??

Main soch me pada tha ki meri najar bhabhi par gayi , wo mujhe ajib nigaho se dekh rahi thi aur mere dil me ek bijali si koundh gayi ………

Main …………

Ha main ……

Main hi to wo ashiq hu … main hi to bhabhi se milan ke liye bekrar rahta hu , main bhabhi ke liye waisa hi hu jaisa komal ke liye Bhuwan tha , jisse bhabhi bhi bahut pyar karti hai lekin us pyar ka naam kuch alag tha , yahi Bhuwan ke sath bhi tha , Bhuwan komal ko pyar karta tha ,use apna banana chahta tha , maje ki bat ye hai ki komal bhi use pyar karti thi lekin uske pyar ko kabhi pahchan nahi paayi , jab tak ki use Tiwari ki bewafai ke bare me nahi pata chal gaya , aur Bhuwan par hi hamla hone par komal ki sakti bahar aayi thi ………?

Yahi same case to mere aur bhabhi ke sath bhi tha , bhabhi ko hamesha hi laga ki wo bhaiya se pyar karti hai , lekin asal me wo mujhse bhai se bhi jyada pyar karti thi, lekin us pyar ka Swaroop kuch aalag hi tha …

Shayd hamare bich jo akarshan hai , wo isi ki or sanket de raha hai ki ham ek dusare ke liye hi hai .. lekin main bhabhi ke liye hu to fir Neha ?? Neha ka kya hoga ..

Meri najar Neha par padi , wo bhi bade hi gahare soch me doobi hui mujhe dekh rahi thi , naa jane uske dil me kya chal raha ho ..

Tabhi mere phone ka ring baja , ye Akki tha …

“Akki itane subah subah kaise phone kar raha hai “

Maine apne man me hi kaha

“hello bro “
“bhai ek ajib chij ho gayi “

“kya ..?”

“yaar mujhe kisi ne dhamki di hai, wo khud ko Shiva batata hai , wahi jisne itane sare katl kiye hai ,wo bol raha tha ki jis ladki se main jyda mil jul raha hu usse na milu warna mujhe bhi waise hi maar dalega jaise ** ganw me logo ko maara tha, wo ye bhi bol raha ha ki jis aourat ganw me wo log pakde hai wo asali Shiva nahi hai asali Shiva to wo hai …….”

Akki ki bat sunkar mere chahre ka rang hi ud gaya tha ,

“tune ye bat aur kisi ko batai kya ??”

“ha sus ko batai thi , usi ne kaha ki tumhe call karu ..”

“okk main tujhe ek no. de raha hu usse bat kar le mera naam batana aur puri bat bata dena… aur ek chij bata aaj kal kya tu sus ke sath jyda ghum raha hai “

“ha tu aur Neha jab se ynha se gaye ho tab se sus ke sath hi ghumta hu , uske sath hi tuition jata hu aur aajkal wo mujhe college ke liye lene bhi aa rahi hai “

Maine ek gahri sans li aur use na darne ka bolkar Kajal ka no. de diya ……

“kya hua “

Bhabhi ke pochhne par maine sari bat bata di

“kya ..?? lekin Shiva bankar to katal komal hi kar rahi thi na ..??”

Neha chilla uthi thi ..

Wahi komal ne Neha ko ajib nigaho se dekha

“tum pagal ho gayi ho kya , maine kab kaha ki main katl kar rahi thi .. maine to bas ye bataya ki main hi sakti thi , aur ha abhi ganw me jo Chanchal ko fasaay tha usme mera hath jarur tha , ye kaam maine aur sonu ne milkar kiya tha .. lekin baki ke katal se mera koi lena dena nahi hai “

Unki bat sunkar sabhi ke chahre ka rang ud gaya tha , abhi tak to sabhi unhe hi wo katil samjh rahe the jisne shahar me bhi Shiva ke naam se katal kiye the ..

“abhi bhi phone karne wala mard hi tha aur sabhi katal to ek aourat ne kiye hai , aisa phone mujhe bhi aaya tha jab main sus ke sath jyada ghum raha tha mere khayal se iske pichhe sus ke bhai sager bhi ho sakta hai kyoki wo sus ke pichhe pagal hai “

“un sabka pata Kajal laga legi , tum log abhi thoda aaram kar lo raat bhar se jaag rahe ho “

Is bat bolne wala Dr. tha …

Ham sabhi ne haa me sar hilaa diya .. aur apne apne kamre me chale gaye , abhi bhi bahut sari bate khulani baki thi , shayd aaj ki mahfil me baki ki bate pata chale ……

Dophar ka waqt tha ham sabhi fir se ek jagah ikaththe hue the abhi bahut sari bate Janani bachi thi …

“to aap logo ne bataya nahi ki komal ji aapke sath kab se thi “

Maine sabse puchha , bhabhi aur mahima (Neha ki maa) ne ek dusare ko dekha ..

Fir mahima bol padi

“shuruwat to tumhe hi karni chahiye Ankit “

Maine muskurate hue komal ki or dekha unhone bhi ankho ke ishare se mujhe aage badne ki hami de di ..

“humm bat tab ki hai jab bhabhi aur bhaiya ki shadi hui , uske bad se hi main kabhi kabhi college ki tarh ghumane jata to inki chay ki dukaan me jarur jata tha , wanha ye(komal ) mujhe pyar se biscuit, ya samoshe khilaya karti thi ,isliye main aur mere dost free ki biscuit ya samoshe khane pahuch jate the …aur ye kyoki meri bhabhi maa ki tarh dikhati thi mujhe inke pas jana aur bhi achcha lagta tha…

Ganw chhodne ke bad mujhe kabhi kabhi inki chinta hote rahti thi ki kahi bhaiya inpar bhi apna gussa na dikha de ..

Jab us din main apne dosto ke paas ganw gaya tha aur wanha se lout raha tha to ynha aane ke bad main fir se wapas ganw chala gaya , main un logo ko jaan se maar dena chahta tha jinhone meri bhabhi aur bhai ki ye halt kar di thi , main wapas ja hi raha tha ki mujhe ye mil gayi .. ye Dr. ke bulawe par wapas aa rahi thi , main behad nashe me tha aur maine inhe bataya ki main Chanchal ka katal karna chahta hu , to inhone meri madad ki bat ki , mujhe laga ki yahi Shiva bhi hai aur isliye logo ko maarna inke liye koi badi bat nahi hogi, to ham dono milkar mere purane gahar pahuch gaye… main apne ghar ke bare me achche se janta tha isliye mujhe jyda dikkat nahi hui aur jo hua wo aap sabke samne hai …….”

Sabhi ne ek bar komal ki taraf dekha jo ki halke halke muskura rahi thi ..

“dekho maine us din sonu ki madad isliye ki kyoki un logo ki wajah se meri beti ko ye din dekhna pada tha, wo to main is ganw me nahi thi warna in logo ko pahle hi sabak sikha deti … lekin main Shiva nahi hu , bas is katal ke liye Shiva ka naam liya tha “

Komal ne bade hi masoom se andaaj me kaha , itane logo ko gajar muli ki tarh katane wali masoom si komal

“aur aap dono .. aapko ye kab mil gayi thi “

Maine bhabhi aur Mahima ( meri sas ) ko dekhte hue kaha ..

Dono ke chahre khail gaye the ..

“to pahle koun batayega “

Bhabhi ne Mahima ki or dekha …

Aur Mahima ke kahna shuru kiya …………

Hmmmmmmm
Good updates
All are good
Mostly last 52.....very good....

50and 51 thode disappointing the.....or iska reason he.....bina kisi kaaran ke fantasy ki shuruwat hona.....
Jabki aapne kanhi bhi fantasy or supernatural ya magic ko tag nahi kiya he....
Dusri chij SUSPENSE or THRILLER tab tak hee dam dar hota hai jab tak ki usme fantasy ko na milaaya jaaye....

Ise aise dekh sakte hai ki....fantasy ko aap kabhi bhi kaise bhi mod sakte ho.....mare ko Zindagi kar sakte ho....Zindagi of mar sakte ho....kisi ko bhi god level power me dikha sakte ho....

Lekin suspense or thriller aisa jo ak bar likh diya jata hai...wo waisa hee rahta hai....fantasy ki tarah usne baad mai sadharan a hi kiya jaaye sakta....

Third.....jiva ka to pahle hee pata the ki use komal se koi khas laga available nahi hai..use paisa or power chahiye Saath hee don ban na he....
Lekin use kaise pata ki komal aisa kuch power hai jo hidden hai.....Saath hee wo markat karegi to iska fayada hoga....
Use to sanskrit padhna nahi aata....prabha a uske baba ne use kuch bataya tha....

Ha last wala update52 kaafi jyada achcha tha...khas kar tab jab Shiva naam use karne wala koi or hee nikla jo ki abhi tak chhupa hua hai....

Ankit agar komal ko pahle se jaanta tha to use iss baat ka kaise pata nahi ki aarti kis gaanv ki hai or agar pata tha to use iss baat ka bhi pata hona chahiye ki ak hee gaanv me ak hee shakal ke 2 logo ka hona coincidence nahi ho sakta.....

Ya to use pahle se pata tha ya phir aapne kuch loop chhod diya...

Khair Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Anyways
Good update
Thanks

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Update 53​

Mahima ne kahna shuru kiya ………

Flash back start

Wo sham mere jivan ki sabse bhayanak sham thi , main apne pati aur beti ke sath ek restaurant khana khane gayi thi , tabhi mere pati {inspector satyaprakash (satya ) } ka mobile baj utha , khana order kiya ja chuka tha ……

“ji .. ji sir ji ji .. “

Unka chahra pila ho raha tha , wo kabhi mujhe dekhte to kabhi beti Neha ko ..

Achank unke chahare ka bhaaw badalne laga ..

“nahi sir , main aisa nahi kar sakta , main nahi darta sir jo gunahgaar hai use to saja milni hi chahiye , ha mere pas pariyapt saboot hai … okk sir , jai hind”

Unhone phone rakha to unke chahre me ek tej tha ..

“kya hua ji ..”

Main unki is dasha ko dekhkar thodi gahbra gayi thi

“koi bat nahi MLA Tiwari ka phone tha , maine jo kareem aur jiva ke kale karnamo ke khilaf saboot ikaththa kiya hai bas usi ke bare me bol rahe the ..”

Jiva aur kareem ka naam sunkar mere chahre me pasina aa gaya tha, ye dono tab tak shahar ke sabse taktwar gunde the , dono ke gang me aaye din ladaiya hote rahti thi , sakti ko gayab hue lagbhag 7-8 saal ho chuke the , sakti ke jaan se jiva gang kamjor to hua tha lekin Tiwari ke chunaaw jiane se use taakt mili thi , Tiwari ab MLA ban chuka tha lekin use aur power chahiye thi , use mantri banne ka bhoot chada hua tha , isliye wo sidhe sidhe kareem ka bhi khatma nahi kar raha tha, chalbaji to Tiwari ke khoon me thi , jiva ki madad se MLA banne ke bad bhi wo kareem se bhi mila hua tha, wo janta tha ki kisi ek gang ko powerful banane ke matlab hai ki uski takat ka kam hona ..

Isiliye usne Pradesh ke sabse immandaar logo me kuchh ko apne ilake me ikaththa kiya jinme mere pati bhi the , aur unhe kareem aur jiva ke khilaf saboot ikaththa karne ke liye kaha aur sahayata bhi pradaan ki , iska maksad us samay mere pati ko nahi pata tha, wo to yahi sochate the ki Tiwari achcha adami hai aur jiva aur kareem ke gang ko khatm karna chahta hai .. lekin asal bat to ye thi ki Tiwari asal me jiva aur kareem gang ke uper ek niyantran chahta tha aur ye un sabooto ke madhyam se sambhw ho sakta tha …….

Tiwari ki jiva se katpat to chal hi rahi thi sath hi sath kareem ka dar bhi use laga hi rahta tha isliye ek teer se dono shikar ko sadhana ki sochi thi , lekin usne galti kar di , galti yahi ho gayi ki saboot hath me aate hi mere pati ne use Adalat me pesh karna chaha, wo in sabooto ko Tiwari ko nahi dena chahte the , Tiwari ne phone karke unhe samjhaya bhi aur ye bhi chetawani di ki isse unki jaan ko khatra bhi ho sakta hai , ager jiva ya kareem ko pata chal gaya to wo unke liye khatra ban sakte hai ..

Lekin mere pati to apne wusulo ke pakke the …….

Unhone mujhe na ghabrane ke liye kaha aur hansi majaak karte rahe , lekin naa jane mera dil aaj kyo ghabra raha tha ……….

Ham khana khakar bahar nikle hi the ki kisi ne hamre uper hamla kar diya , mere sar par chhot lagi thi jisse meri ankhe band hoti gayi …..

Jab ankhe khuli to samne ka najara dekh kar meri ruh hi kaanp gayi thi ..

Satya ji ko ek chair par bandh diya gaya tha wahi Neha kahi bhi dikhai nahi de rahi thi , maine khud ki stithi par gour kiya to main aur bhi chouk gayi thi , main ek table me jhuki hui thi , mere hath samne ki or bandhe hue the , samne mere pati ko bandh kar rakha gaya tha mera chahra unki or hi tha , unki ankho me ansu the aur pura chahra khoon se sana hua tha , mujhe samjhte der nahi lagi ki unke dushman hame utha kar le aaye hai …..

“jaldi se bata de ki wo saboot tune kaha chhupaye , kyo khud ko takleef de raha hai “

Ye jiva tha… unhone satya ko bahut hi mara tha lekin shayd satya ne abhi tak unhe un sabooto ke bare me nahi bataya tha …

“tum meri jaan bhi le lo to main tujhe wo nahi dunga “

Mere pati chillaye aur fir se ek joro ka ghusa unke chahre par ja laga …

“sale apni nahi to apne bachche aur biwi ki to soch .. dekh use .. apni bibi ko dekh bechari jawan hai , khoobsurat hai , iske jism se pura mans noch khayenge ye log … wo bhi tere samne “

Uski us shaitani bat ko sunkar mera dil hi dahal gaya tha , lekin ab bhi mere pati ke chahre par koi bhi dar ka bhaaw nahi aaya tha ..

Tabhi kamra khula aur kuchh log aur wanha aa gaye , ye kya???

Wo to kareem tha … kareem aate hi jiva ko aadab karta hai ..

“kismat dekho jiva , ager ye koi dusari jagah hoti to shayd ham dono ek dusare ke khoon ke pyase hote lekin aaj .. aaj ham dono ko ek hona pada is sale ke karan “

Aate hi kareem ne satya ke muh par ek jordar ghunsa maar diya .. tabhi uski najar mujhpar gayi ..

Kareem ki to jaise ankhe hi chamak uthi thi

“yaar jiva tu sach me abhi dhandhe me naya hi hai , samne maal pada hai aur tu ise hatho se maar raha hai , wanha maar janha iske dil me lage ..”

Wo meri or badhne laga tha ..

“nahi kutte use ager kuchh kiya na to tujhe kutte ki mout marunga “

Satya chillaye aur jiva ki bhi ankho me chamak aa gayi ,

“sala abhi tak ise itana torcher kar raha tha lekin abhi tak itana nahi boukhlaya tha …”

Jiva bhi gandi hansi me hans raha tha , kareem mere pas aa gaya aur meri saree ko uthane laga ..

“nahi ..” main aur satya dono hi joro se chillaye the , lekin wanha moujud sabhi log ek sath joro se hans pade ..

“waah maal to bilkul Mulayam hai , saboot na bhi mile to bhi ise khane me maja aayega “

“kutte .. main tera “

Satya kuchh aur bolte usse pahle jiva ne unke chahre par ek joro ka mukka maar diya , unke muh se khoon nikal aaya tha , wahi main chillati usse pahle hi jiva ne satya ke gale me ek chaku rakh diya , main bilkul hi nirjiv hi ho gayi thi , meri beti ka bhi abhi koi pata nahi tha, pati ki jindagi khatre me thi , in dono ke samne meri ijjat ki kya hi kimat thi …

Kareem ne meri saree ko mere khulho tak utha diya tha , sath hi usne mere petticoat ko bhi utha diya tha , mere pair , janghe nange sabke samne the, main ro rahi thi lekin mera rona kisi ke dil me koi bhi dard nahi jaga raha tha balki sabhi meri majboori me bas hans rahe the , mere antahwastra hi bache the jo meri ijjat ko dhanke hue the , lekin main table me bandhi hui thi , meri chhatiya table se lagi hui thi , mera pichhwada ubhar kar kareem ke samne tha , usne ek jor se tamacha mere nitambho me maar diya ..aur wo joro se hansa

“nahi ..” majboori aur jillat se bhari hui ye aawaj mere muh se nikal gayi thi ..

Main aur bhi joro se rone lagi thi , mere pati ki ankho me bhi ansu the , ek tarh kartawy tha jisko pura karne ki sapth unhone uthai thi aur dusari taraf wo sapth thi jo shadi ke fere lete hue unhone uthai thi , dono hi wachan the jise unhe pura karana tha , wo apne ankho ke samne meri ijjat ko lutata hua to nahi dekh sakte the , wo sachche police wale the jo apne kartawy ke liye mout ko to gale laga sakte the lekin kaise apne patni ki ijjat ko lutata hua dekhte ..

Kareem ke hath mere panty me ghumane lage the aur mere yoni ke uper aa gaye ,usne us jgah ko joro se masal diya tha , main buri tarh se chikhi jisse satya ko pata chal gaya tha ki mere sath kya ho raha hai ……

“ruko ……….” Satya joro se chillaye

Sabhi ki najare unke uper hi thi , unhone faisala kar liya tha , faisala dono hi wachano me se ek ko nibhane ka ..

“main batata hu ki saboot kaha hai , ise aur meri beti ko chhod do , chahe to mujhe maar dena “

Kareem par jaise in bato ka koi asar nahi ho raha tha , wo aage aakar mere nitambho se apne kamar ko laga diya , uska ling tana hua tha jo ki mere nitambho me chubh raha tha , uske pathani suit me wo ling tana hua tha , main fir se joro se royi jise sunkar satya joro se chillaye ……….

“ager maine nahi bataya to saboot automatic hi news channels, kendra sakaar aur rajya sakrato tak pahuch jaayegi …tum sab barbad ho jaoge “

“kareem ruko “ is bar jiva chillaya tha , kareem ne bura sa muh banaya aur jiva ke sath jakar khada ho gaya ,

“batao ..”

“pahle meri bibi aur beti ko chhod do “

Jiva joro se hans pada tha …..

“mujhe chutiya samjh kar rakha hai kya , inhe jane diya to tu hame kabhi nahi batayega “

“aur ager maine bata diya to kya guaranty hai ki tum inhe jane dogo “

satya ki bat sunkar kareem bhadak gaya

“sale ko yahi goli maro aur iski bibi ko mujhe de do bat khatm “

Lekin jiva abhi bhi shant tha

“to tum batao kya karna hai “ jiva ne satya se kaha

“koi aisa jise ham dono ki chinta ho wahi guaranty le sakta hai ..”

Satya ki bat sunkar jiva thode chinta me pad gaya

“kareem Tiwari ko phone lagao … aur use ynha bulwa , wahi ise samjhayega “

Tiwari ka naam sunkar mere pati aur mujhe dono ko ek bada jhatka laga tha ..

MLA in logo ke sath mila hua tha shayd usi ne hamari location aur jankari in logo ko di thi ..

“are Tiwari ka kaam khatm ho gaya , usne hame jankari di aur badale me ham uske next chuanw me funding karenge bat khatm , ab jo bhi mamla hai use hame hi niptana hoga “ kareem ki najare mujh par hi tiki hui thi use ye sab soudebaji bilkul bhi pasand nahi aa rahi thi use to mere jism ko nochna tha chahe uske liye wo koi bhi kimat chukaye ..

Lekin jiva nahi mana aur Tiwari ko wanha bulaya gaya , usne jab meri halat dekhi to ghabra gaya

“ye tum log kya kar rahe ho , maine tumhe sirf inspector ke lane ke liye kaha tha tum uske pariwar ko pakd kar le aaye “

Daya sankar chikha ..

“hame hamara kaam mat samjha ab is inspector se deal karwa bat khatm “

Kareem ne saf saf labjo me kaha tha ..

“dekho satya maine tumhe pahle bhi samjhaya tha ki wo saboot mujhe de do , aise sensitive chijo ko samhalna tumhare bas ka nahi hai “

Tiwari ki bat sunkar mere pati ke chahare me ek katil si muskaan khil gayi

“wah MLA sahab khud mujhe inke pichhe lagakar inlogo se hath mila liya , aapne apan imaan becha hoga lekin main aaj bhi imandar hu , lekin mujhe apne pariwar ki chinta hai main unhe aise nahi chhod sakta “

Satya ki bat sunkar Tiwari ko thodi sharmindagi to hui thi lekin akhir usne bhi apan imaan to bech hi diya tha

“satya ye politics hai , ynha koi dost ya dushman nahi hota, na tum dost the na hi ye dusham the , aur na hi ab ye dost hai aur tum dushman ho , baa yanha kaam ke aur bekar insan hote hai , jo kaam ka hai wo dost hai , aur kaam bigade wo dushman aur jo bekar hai usse koi matlab hi nahi rakha jata … to mujhe naitikta ka path mat padhao main apna kaam janta hu .. tum apne family ko bachao .. chalo main guaranty deta hu ki tumhari bibi aur beti ki hifajat ka jimma mera hoga , tum bas wo sab bata do jo ham tumse janna chahte hai .”

“lekin main aapke bato ka yakin kaise karu “

Satya ki bat sunkar Tiwari ne mano ek gahri sans li

“dekho satya main kameena jarur hu lekin itna nahi ki sirf apne fayade ke liye kisi aourat ke ijjat se khelu ….. aur aise bhi mujhpar yakin karne ke alawa tumhare pas koi chara bhi nahi hai ..”

Satya ne ek najar mujhe dekha , wo aaj mere liye apne kartawy ki ahuti dene ja rahe the , unki ankho me ansu the wo mujhe ankho se hi kah rahe the ki mujhe maaf karna …

“thik hai lekin mujhe ek adami ko bulana hai , meri bibi aur beti ko uske hawale hone ke bad hi main sabooto ko bataunga , chahe to tum log in logo ki nigraani kar lena lekin us insan tak inhe pahuchaoge “

Tiwari ne kuchh sochakar haa me sar hila diya tha ..

Thodi der ke bad mere ankho me patti bandhi gayi thi , mere pati ne antim bar mere kano me bas ye kaha tha

“main tumse aur Neha se bahut pyar karta hu mahima, aur main jiske pas tumhe bhej raha hu usse kahana ki mujhe maaf kar de main tut gaya “

Hame behosh kar diya gaya aur jab hamari ankhe khuli to main Dr. chutiya ke pas thi …….

Mere pati ki to laash bhi baramad nahi hui , Dr. ne bataya ki soude ke mutabik jab main aur Neha unko mile to unhone satya se bat ki thi aur kaha tha ki ham dono unhe mil gaye hai …

Shayd uske bad satya ne sabooto ke bare me bata diya ho…….

Flashback end

Pure kamre me sannata chha gaya tha , Neha apni maa ke gale se lag kar ro rahi thi , Dr. chutiya bhi mayus dikh rahe the ……..

Mahol gamgin tha

“satya ek imandar police wala tha, uski mout jaya nahi jaayegi ..”

Dr. ke muh se bas itana hi nikal paya

Hmmmmmmm
Very good update

Mahima ki story kaafi heart touching thi....or satya ne bhi Kaafi bahaduri dikhaai lekin gundo or politics walo ke Saath bahaduri nahi chalaki ki jarurat hoti hai....
Lekin jab tak ye baat satya ko ka maja aati der ho gayi thi.....

Ab story ka ak or point nikla hai ki satya ko aapne marta hua nahi dikhaya hai.....to ye kahna galat hoga ki wo mar chuka hai ya Inn sab se connected nahi hai....

Dusri chij....mana ki daya ne unn dono ko dhokha diya....lekin ye baat itni bhi badi nahi thi jis se ki tino ak dusre ka khoon kar de....

Khair Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Update 54​

thodi der me mahol thoda shant hua tha

“lekin aapne bataya nahi ki aap komal se kaise mili “

Mahima ki bat sunne ke bad maine sawal kiya ..

Is bat ka jawab mahima ne nahi balki Dr. chutiya ne diya ..

“Ankit bat asal me aisi hai ki jab Bhuwan aur komal ne sab kuchh chhodne man banaya tha to wo usi silsile me mujhse bhi mile the , main Bhuwan ko pahle se janta tha , mere hi madad se ye log is ganw me base the .. uske bad jab komal apni beti ko dhundhate hue mere pas aayi tab maine komal aur mahima ko milwaya tha ….. “

“ohhh “

Maine komal ki or dekha , fir bhabhi ki or aapse ye kaise mili

Isse pahle bhabhi kuchh bole komal bol padi

“main tum dono ko pure shahar me dhundh rai thi jab mujhe inspector pandy ke murder ki bat pata chali to jab maine pata kiya to mujhe samjh aane laga tha ki jarur tum jiva ya sampat ke hath lag chuki ho…. Jiva ab Tiwari se chhup kar rahta tha ya ye kaho ki dono ek dusare ke aamne samne aane se bachte hai , kyoki isi me dono ki bhalai hai , Tiwari ne pathan gang ko hathiyar liya aur kareem ki ladkiyo ke jism ki chaah ne Tiwari ka kaam aur bhi asan kar diya , usne gang walo ko hi kareem ke khilaf bhadak ke uska murder karwa diya .. lekin fir jiva aur uski sidhi takkar thi , Tiwari ne dimag lagaya aur ladne jhagadne ke bajay ek moun samjhota dono me ho gaya ……

To mujhe lag hi gaya tha ki jab jiva ne aarti dekha hoga to uske no.1 don banne ki khwahish balwati ho gayi hogi aur aarti ko apne kaboo me lene ki koshis karega , shayd emotionally, mere pas ab itani takt nahi bachi ki main ek pure gang se bheed jau , ye sakti badi ajeeb hai jo prem ke sath rahne se hi aati hai lekin fir dheere dheere gayab hone lagti hai , mere pas ab bas skills bache hai jo maine sikhi thi lekin wo takat nahi rah gayi , isliye main chahti thi ki apne dimag se kam takat lagaye hi aarati tak pahuchu ..

Aur maine wait kiya pata kiya mujhe tum dono ke bare me kai information ka pta chalta gaya , lekin abhi aarti ke ander ki takat bahar nahi aayi thi matlab saf hai ki abhi use apna pyar nahi mila hai, ya usne use achche se pahchana nahi hai ..

Sampat aur jiva bhi isi khoj me the ki kaise aarati ke ander ki takat ko jagaya jaye , unhone iska brain wash to kar hi diya tha …

Apne juthi kahaniya suna kar ye to yakin dila diya tha ki Tiwari galat hai aur usne mere sath bahut galat kiya hai , aarti Tiwari se badala lene ko aatur ho gayi thi ..

Lekin fir main use mili use samjhaya ki Tiwari bura insasan hai lekin jiva aur sampat bhi koi dudh ke dhule nahi hai …

Main apni saktiya kho chuki hu isliye sidhe ladna to ab mere liye possible nahi tha, aur na hi aarti ko wanha se bhagte hi bana kyoki koi na koi to uske sath hota hi tha, adhikter wo rani , aur kuchh log bhi hamesha iske sath rahte the …

Wo ise iski sakti dilwane ki koshis kar rahe the , ise kabhi college me le jate to kabhi maal me to kabhi market ye sochkar ki koi ladka ise pasand aa jayega

Ab anpadh log to sale rahenge hi beakal , ladne ki training dilwana aur ghumate rahna yahi chal raha tha, unhe itana to pata tha ki jab kisi ladke se pyar me padegi to sakti jaag jaayegi , lekin inhone wo pustak nahi padhi isliye inhe ye nahi pta ki us ladke jo dhundhane me ise kintani dikkat honi hai , ise to khud bhi pata nahi chelga ki yahi wo hai jisse ye dhundh rahi hai ……

Bahut muskil hota hai samjhna, un logo ko ye bhi shak hua ki aarti me power hai bhi ki nahi, kyoki iska pahla pyar to iska pati hi tha fir bhi sakti jagrit nahi hui thi ..

Ager sakti na bhi hota to bhi iska chahra hi kaam me le aate ye log, ye bolkar ki sakti wapas aa gayi hai aur Tiwari ki aise hi fat jaani thi ……..

Inhi sabhi chijo ki sochkar maine ise shant hi rahne ko kaha tha , mouka dekhkar hi koi kaam karne ki hidayat di thi …. Fir jab pata chala ki Tiwari ke ghar me party hai aur Tiwari ke ghar se hi koi jiva ke sath milkar Tiwari ko raste se hatana chahta hai tab wo mouka mil gaya , asal me kuchh karne ka nahi balki tumhe lekar wanha se bhagane ka ……

Sampat aur jiva ka plan tha ki wo aarti ko kisi tarh Tiwari ke samne lakar khada kar de taki ise dekhkar wo shock me chala jaye , main nahi chahati thi ki Tiwari ki najar aarti par pade , isse Tiwari satark ho jayega aur ho sakta hai ki jiva aur sampat se fir se mil jaaye , Tiwari ka koi bharosha nahi hai wo ise khatm karne ke liye ya iski power ko apna banane ke liye koi bhi chaal chal sakta tha ..

Bhala ho ki tum wanha moujud the aur tumhe dekhkar aarti ko bhagne ka bahana mil gaya aur sath hi , aur mujhe goli chalane ka “

“kya , aapko goli chalane ka ??”

Main chouk gaya tha

“ha asal me wo pathan suit wala sampat tha , usne jab goliya chalani shuru ki tabhi maine bhi chalani shuru kar di lekin remote control se … jo dusari tarf se goliya chal rahi thi wo main chala rahi thi “

“to aapne Tiwari ko mara kyo nahi “

“use marker kya milna tha , aur aise bhi in logo ne itane paap kiye hai ki inhe itani asaan mout nahi de sakti main , mujhe to koi matlab bhi nahi tha in logo se wo to meri beti ke karn mujhe ynha aana pad gaya……..”

Maine ek najr bhabhi ko dekha na jane kyo lekin unhone najar niche kar li thi …

Ham sabne bas haa me sar hilaya tha …..
“bhabhi aapko sab ke bare me mujhe batana tha , aapko sab pata hote hue bhi aapne mujhe kuch nahi bataya “

Maine bhabhi se shikayat ki

Aashram se bahahr jangal ke bicho bich ek train ki patari par main aur bhabhi paidal hi chal rahe the …

Raat ka andera tha aur jangali kido ki awaje us shanti ko chir rahi thi ..

Ham wahi ek jagh baith gaye the ..

“main kya karti sonu , maa ne jab mujhe in sabke bare me bataya tha tab se main bahut hi pareshan thi , yahi sochti thi ki wo sachcha pyar kon hoga , ager mujhe milega to kya main use pahchan paungi ..”

Bhabhi mujhe ghurane lagi , andhele me unki najre mujhe utani saaf dikhai to nahi de rahi thi lekin unke dekhne aabhas mujhe jarur ho raha tha , ek ajib nigah thi unki

“kya apne use pahchan liya ??”

Mere sawal se wo thodi chup ho gayi ……

“tumhe kyo lagta hai ki wo mere samne bhi aaya hoga “

Mujhe unki bat par hansi si aa gayi

“na sirf aapke samne aaya hai balki aapke baju me baitha bhi hai .. “ main unke Mulayam julfo ko sarkate hue apne hath unke gale tak le gaya ..

Maine halke se unke chahre ko apni or khincha tha ,

“aah..”

Unki ankhe band ho chuki thi , hotho se ek halki unki halki si siski ne mere dil me na jane itana tufaan sa macha diya tha ….

Main unke sar ko aur bhi khichka unke hotho ko apne hotho ke behad hi kareeb le aaya ..

Hamari sanse tak aaps me takra rahi thi

“bolo na bhabhi kya aapne use pahchan liya , kya apne dil ki dhadkane uske liye teji se dhadkti hai “

Is shant vatavarn me bhabhi ki dil ki dhadkano ki aawaje mere kano tak spast aa rahi thi , unki sanse apratyasit roop se tej ho chuki thi , mere hotho unke najuk hotho se takra rahe the ..

Main unke hotho ka fadakna tak mahsoos kar sakta tha ..

“kya wo pyar main hi nahi hu , kya aapne ye mahsoos nahi kiya ..”

Meri bat ke jawab me wo halke se ro padi thi ,

“hummm” uttejana ke sirsh par wo bhi khud ko samhal nahi paa rahi thi aur main bhi nahi , wo kuchh bol hi nahi pa rahi thi aur isi majboori ne unke muh se wo aah nikal di , wo halke se ro padi .. kuchh na kah pane ki majboori ne unhe jakad liya tha ..

“I love you bhabhi “

Maine unke janho par apne hath rakh diye the , ye bhabhi ki sahan sima ki pariksha thi aur bandh tut gaya , unhone mujhe apne or joro se khinch liya tha aur mere hotho ko apne hotho me bhar liya ……

Pyar ka wo ankaha sa ijahaar tha , lekin apne me sampurn tha , wo bhabhi ki abhi tak bitai sabhi vedanao ka nichod tha , abhi tak jo unhone khud ko roka tha jaa jaise bandh tut gaya ho , pura pani hame bhigone laga ..

Hamare hoth ek dusare ke hotho me aise gul rahe the jaise muh me sahad gul rahi ho , us chasani ke shukh ne hamare jibh ko ek dusare me ghusane par majboor kar diya tha , hamare laar se hamare chahare sanane lage ..

Ham dono ne hi ek dusare ko kaskar jakad liya , aur tabhi ek tej Prakash hamare uper pada ..

Train ke horn ki aawaj kaano me gunj uthi thi aur Prakash hamare sharir ko nahla raha tha , lekin ek dusare se alag hone ka dil hi nahi kar raha tha , maine unhe aur unhone mujhe aur bhi joro se jakad liya , lekin wo aawaj aur Prakash aur bhi gahri ho gayi thi , bas wo tarin mere aankho ke samne aa chuka tha aur aisa laga jaise ab bas bhabhi ke banho me samakar hi ye sharir chhut jayega , jab marna hi tha to alag hoke koun marta aur shayd unka bhi wahi haal tha unhone mujhe dhkka diya , main patari ke bicho bich gir gaya tha aur ab wo mere uper thi ………..

Hotho se hoth mile the , ek dusare ke balo ko hath jakade hue the , jism ek dusare me samane ko betab tha , wo mere uper thi main patri ke patatharo ke bich cement ki patti par lea hua tha, aisa laga jaise ham dono ne hi ek dusare ko khoj liya ho, wo khoj jo sadiyo ki thi aaj khatm ho gayi ho ….

Tabhi train ki awaj aur bhi kareeb aati maloom hui aur aisa laga jaise ab isi Jannat main hamesha ke liye kho jaunga ………..

Hmmmmmmm
KYA KAHU KUCH SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA.....CHALO LAST SE SHURU KARTE HAI.....

Update ka last part kaafi achcha tha... dono ki Tadap.....pyar....or milan kaafi achcha laga....or use aapne kaafi achche se describe kiya hai....very good.....ha bas ye train wala scene kaafi jyada ho gaya....lekin koi na....


Ab baat karte hai main part ki jisme ki flashback wala scene tha.....bahut se logo ne....na na bahut se nahi lagbhag sabhi ne update ko behatrin or awesome bataya hai....lekin sach kahi to meri soch is mamle mai kuch alag hai....

I just want to say.....hhhmmmm not a good update....or reason bahut Saare loops or unlogical and un relatable.....
Ab lagta hai mujhe pura explain karna Padega..... OK.....to bat chit thodi lambi chaegi......so.....
Start.....

Mahima or komal ko Dr ne milwaya tha....good lekin ak bar aapne kaha tha....ki aarti ki maa kisi jagah par chai ki stole lagati hai....lekin kyo or kaise....
Jabki dono kaafi padhe likhe hai....or gaanv mai agricultural ke alawa bhi Kaafi kaam hote hai jo wo kar sakte the...
Dusri baat...tea stole par aksar anjan log bhi aate jaate rahte hai.. kaise bar to musafir or dur wale log bhi....agar tea stole unhone ye soch kar lagaya tha ki wo uss par rahkar sabse chhup sakti hai to ye kaise possible hai....tea stole jaisi jagah par... wo bhi itna famous chahra lekar....


Kareem ko aapne starting mai kaafi bada don bataya tha... jisko hata kar jiva don ban na chahta tha... OK....or Tiwari ne kareem ko maar diya or jiva ne uski gang ko hathiya liya... iska matlab ab uske haath mai....khud ki or kareem dono ki gang ka control tha..

Means ki wo pahle kareem jo tha us se bhi bada don ban gaya tha ab.. Tiwari se politics ke kaaran dur rahne ki baat dusri hai....
To jab jiva don ban hee gaya tha to use aarti ki jarurat kyo thi...jabki uske competition mai koi tha hee nahi... or jiva khud itna takatwar ho kar kyo kisi anjan ladki se takat lena except karega... jabki uske pass pahle se hee hai....or use us ladki ya uski maa ke baare mai ya unki hidden powers ke baare mai kuch pata nahi hai...

Kyoki jiva ke baap ne bas itna bataya tha ki ye special hai....iske alawa nahi....phir jiva kaise samjha ki iske andar kuch powers hai....or use kya jarurat padi kisi ladki ki jabki uske pass sabkuch hai....
Main baat unhe kaise pata chala ki dono mai powers hai jabki book ko Bhuwan or komal ke siwa kisi ne nahi padha....

Dusri baat jiva ke pass sabkuch hai or wo ab bada don bhi hai phir use kisi chhoti see baat ke liye ak na Dan ladki ki jarurat hai....baat kuch logical nahi lag rahi....

KOMAL wanha party mai thi achchi baat hai...lekin jab hungama hua or jo jo bina invitation ke aaye the unhe pakad liya gaya jisme ki mahima or aarti mili....tab komal ko kyo nahi pakda gaya....janha tak main samjhta hu....komal ko bhi invite nahi kiya gaya hoga....

Komal ke anusar party me kuch karna nahi tha bas ak pal ke liye aarti ko Tiwari ko dikha kar use wanha se bahar nikalna tha....Jo Ki kajal ne kiya...to kya ye maan na thik nahi hai ki kajal bhi unn logo se mili hui hai jo Tiwari ke against hai....
Or kya ye nahi maan sakte ki kajal pahle se hee mahima or aarti se mili hui ho....or komal jise ki party me pakda nahi gaya....use bhi kajal ne hee chhupaya ho.....

Maine kaafi Saare sawaal hai....ho sakta hai inke jawab aapke pass ho..lekin ye bhi sahi hai ki ye loops hai... or ab ye dekhne wali baat hogi ki aap Inn sab ko kaise JUSTIFY karte ho.....

INTEZAAR RAHEGA AAPKE REPLY KA.....

Khair Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Anyways
............update
Thanks....

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Update 55​

Train teji se hamare baju wale patri se gujar gayi , ham dono ne ek pal ke liye ek dusare ko chhoda aur ek dusare ki ankho me dekah , mout ka kahi dar hi nahi tha ..

Ham dono hi joro se hans pade ….

Bhabhi ke wo gulabi se hoth mujhe lalcha rahe the , sanse tej thi dhadkano ne bhi thoda aaram karna sikh liya tha, unke ankho me aansu tha ,mere ankho me wo tha ya nahi main nahi janta ..

,maine fir se unhe apni taraf khinch liya tha aur hamare hoth fir se mil gaye the ..

Ye ahsaas kya tha , maine pahle bhi kai ladkiyo ke hotho ko ko chusa tha lekin ye kya tha , ek alag hi khushbu thi unke sharir me jo mere naak se hote hue mere mastisk ko hila ja rahi thi , unke hoth mahaj mans ke tukade nahi the wo ras se bhare hue angur ke dano ki tarh kade the , mere dant kabhi kabhi unhe unhe kha jane ko wyakul ho rahe the , kebhi wo mere hotho ko apne danto se kaant jati ,

Chusane par unke hoth jo ras baha rahe the wo kya tha , mans ke ek tukade par itana lagaw kaise panap raha tha , unke laar se sane hue mare jibh ab mere nahi rah gaye the wo bas shair par the kabhi yanha to kabhi wanha …

Madhoshi badane lagi thi aur uttejana ke sath hi harkate bhi , diware man se to gir hi gayi thi bas tan se girana hi baki rah gaya tha, ek bar jo man ke bandhan khul jaaye to fir duniya me aur koi bandhan bach hi nahi pate, jo bandha hai wo bas man se hi bandha hai …….

Unke khule hue bal fail gaye the aur mere uper aa rahe the , wo mere uper hi thi , maine unke balo ko halke hataya aur unke gale me apne hotho se halke se sparsh karwa diya ..

“aah sonu , mere bete “

Unhone itani madhoshi , uttejana aur prem se kaha ki sabhi ko alag karna hi muskil tha, aur koun ye samjhne ki jahmat bhi uthata ki wo kya tha ..

Unhone mujhe sidhe niche use uper kar diya , unme itani takat thi ye maine aaj hi jana tha , train ki patri me biche bade bade patthar bhi hamr foolo ki tarh lag rahe the ye hamare Suhag wali sej thi ..

Main bhi pagalo ki tarh unke gale aur galo ko chusane laga , wo macahlti hui mere balo ko sahla rahi thi , mere hath bhi unmukt panchhi ki tarah idhr udhar udane lage the aur sidhe bhabhi ki mamata se bhare hue vaksho ko chhune lage …….

“beta .. ohh sonu “

Wo machal gayi aur maine apne hatho ko thoda aur dabate hue us komal si Rachana ka thoda aur bhi awlokan kiya , wo kitne komal the jaise kathor baal par kisi ne makkhan ki palish chada di ho , resham jaise Mulayam badan ki chhuwan se mere ling ka tanaw bhi badhane laga tha ..

Main apne hatho se unke unnat vaksho ko sahlate hue unke gale se apne hotho ko unke chhatiyo tak le jane laga tha, mere laar se unki chhatiya sanne lagi thi , laaj ki mariyada se bandhe ham dono aaj sabhi niyamo ko todane me utaru ho chuke the ..

Maine mere hath aapne aap hi bhabhi ke ke pith ki taraf jane lage unhone bhi jaise sahmati dikhai aur thoda uper uth gayi jisse mere hath unke blouse ke huk par chale gaye the , ek hi jhatake me maine use nikaal liya , shayd ye sus aur rani se li gayi training ka hi kamal tha ki main aasani se unke upari vastro ko nikaal kar unhe uper se purn tah nanga kar diya tha,

Mere bhi kapde utarne lge the , kya kab kaise ho raha tha na hi mujhe kuchh samjh aa raha tha na hi bhabhi ko ..

Thodi hi der me ham dono hi pure marjaat nange train ki us patri me ek dusare se ghuthe hue pade the , main unhe jism ko chuse ja raha tha wo bas mere sar ko pakde hue apni ankhe band kiya padi thi …….

Mere hoth unke jism ka koi bhi kona nahi chhodna chahte the , har jagah mere laar se unka jism gila ho raha tha …

Akhir main us jagah pahucha jise koi Jannat ka darwaja kahta hai to koi nark ka .. mere liye wo mahaj mere bhabhi ko apna prem dikhane ka ek sadhan tha.

Main bhabhi ke jangho ke bich apne jibh se unke yoni ki diwaro ko sahla raha tha , unke yoni me uge hue wo baal bhi mujhe ek sukhad sa ahsaas de rahe the , apni jibh se yoni se nikalte us chipchipa pani ko chaat liya jo ki swad me namkin tha ek ajib si mahak mere naak me ghulane lagi thi ..

Bhabhi ne joro se mere baalo ko pakd liya tha

“aaha sonu mere bete ..”

Unhone mere balo ko khich liya aur mujhe uper khichane lagi , hamare hoth fir se mil chuke the, mera ling jo ki apni puri takat me khada hua tha wo bhabhi ke yoni ki diwaro par halke halek prahar karne laga tha ,bhabhi ke chipchipe gile ras se wo thoda thoda gila hone laga tha ..

Akhir bhabhi ne hi mere ling ko pakd kar apne prem ke antim sikhar par chada diya, unhone pahle to mere ling ko apne yoni se halke halke ghisa , jab main uttejana me halki halki si siskiya lene laga tha to unhone apne us chhed me mere ling ko pravesh dilaya jiske bad ham dono ke bich ke har diwar hamesha ke liye tut jane the ..

Mere ling ki chamadi bhabhi ki yoni se ghisate hue ander jaane lagi thi , mere ling me ek sanvedana ka sanchaar hua aur

“aaahhhhhhhhh bhabhi .. meri jaan .. ummmaa aa aaah “

Mere muh se Anayas hi na jane kya kya nikalne laga tha , aaj tak mujhe aisa ahsaas kabhi nahi hua tha, mujhe pata tha ki yoni me ling ke jane par kaisa ahsaas hota hai lekin ye ahsaas kuchh alag hi tha, main unke ander puri tarh se dhans chuka tha,

Unki yoni aur mera ling ek dusare me aise kase hue the jaise ki wo koi do nahi balki ek hi ang ho , unki yoni ne ek tej dhaar chhodi aur wo sithil ho gai ..

Unke chahre par ek ajib se aand ka atirek naachne laga tha ..

Unki ankhe band thi aur hotho par ek muskan , aisa laga jaise bhabhi ne bahut sara garm paani chhoda ho , maine ek bar apne ling ko bahar khincha use bhabhi ke yoni ke jharne se bahte hue paani se bheego kar fir se unke yoni ki diwaro se ragadne laga ..

Is bar main aasani se ander bahar ho raha tha . mere kamar ek lay me chal rahe the ..

Thodi der tak to bhabhi bhi ankhe band kiye hue hi leti rahi fir unki halki halki si aah nikalne lagi thi , jaise jaise mere kamar ki teji badhti gayi waise waise hi unki anhe bhi tej hone lagi thi ..

Main hanfe jaa raha tha unhone mujhe kaskar jakad liya tha , ham dono hi ek dusare me ghulne lage the , jsbat kabhi aankho se ansu bankar bahte to kabhi aah banakr nikal jaat , bhabhi ki ankho me paani tha aur hotho me ek halki si muskaan , wo mujhse aise jakde hue thi jaise kabhi alag hi nahi hona chati ho ..

Main aur jo joro se dhakke maare ja raha tha jaise ye meri akhari raat ho , ye mera akahri mouka ho ye mere akhari Jannat ho … ye jivan ka akhari pal ho ..

Main hanf raha tha wo hanf rahi thi , ham dono hi ek dusare me sama rahe the , apne danto aur nakhuno se wo mere jism me pyar ke kai nishaniya chhode ja rahi thi , aur tabhi

“are maderchod ye sale koun hai patri me chudai “

Kisi ki aawaj hamare kano me aayi thi , aisa laga jaise kai log ek sath jhund banakar hamare or aa raha the

“aah aah sonu mere bete aur joro se “

“ha meri jaan , haa meri jaan aah aah aah “main aur bhi joro se dhakke lagane laga tha

tabhi unhone apne apne torch hamare or ghuma diye

“are maderchod ye log to wahi hai na jihne hame sampat ne khojane bheja hai , taswir nikaal to be “

Wo hamare bilkul hi najdeek khade the

“sonu rukana mat beta aahaaa aah main teri hu beta main teri hu aaj sorry maine tujhe itane dino tak tadfaya aah meri jaan “

Main apne kamar ko aur bhi teji se chalane laga tha ,yoni aur ling ke ragadaw se ek Madhur si aawaj paida hone lagi thi, kaamras nikal kar bikharne lag tha aur us gharshan se chhap chhap ki aawaj paida hone lagi thi ..

“abe maderchod ye log to wahi hai dekho , pakdo inhe “

Wo hame gher kar kahde hone lage the

“aah bhabhi aah bhabhi , meri jaan main nikalne wala hu “

Main apne teji ke charam par tha

“aaja mujhe bhigo de beta… aaaaah mere sonu .. aah aah aaa jaa aa jaa mere bete “

Bhabhi ne mujhe joro se jakad liya tha main bas unke yoni ke ander chhutane wala tha

“are maderchodo utho … “

Kisne ek laat mere pichhwade me laga di

“aah bhabhi main aa raha hu “

Main joro se chillaya

“aaja mere bete aaj bhigo de mujhe “

Bhabhi chillai

“maderchodo ko maaro aise nahi sunenge “

Wo chillaye

“aah bhabhi …”

Mere ander ka ek sailaab fata aur main joro se bhabhi ke ander hi jhatne laga …

“aah meri jaan “

Unhone mujhe aur hi joro se apni or khinch liya ..

Tabhi ek landa ghumate hue aaya lekin ……………..

Main aaram se bhabhi ke uper hi gir gaya tha , mere pith me padne wale dhande ko bhabhi ne hatho se rok liya tha, ek hath se unhone mujhe jakada hua tha ..

“I LOVE YOU bhabhi “

Main unke hotho ko halke se chumte hue bola

“I LOVE YOU meri jaan .. mera pyara beta ,mera sonu “

Unhone bhi mere hotho ko apne hotho me bhar liya

“abe dekh kya rahe ho salo ek sath maaro “
jisne danda chalaya tha wo chillaya , bhabhi ne turat hi mujhe side kar diya tha wo aise khadi hui jaise unke ander koi bijali ka current doud raha ho ..

Main abhi bhi apni sanse samhal raha tha, un logo ne tourch jalaya hua tha jiske Prakash me mujhe dikhai de raha tha ki koi 10-15 log the . sabhi ke hatho ko dande the kuch shayd badi badi bandukhe bhi padke hue the..

Isse pahle main kuch karta sabhi ne ek sath hamare uper danda chala diya , bhabhi nagn hi thi baal faile hue the,

Unka gora badan aur bade nikale hue pichhwade ko dekhkar mera ling fir se khada hone laga tha , meri najar unke nange badan par hi tiki hui thi ..

“wow ..” mere muh se Anayas hi nikal gaya tha charo tarf dushman the lekin main unke uthe hue nitambho ko nihar raha tha ,mere muh me paani aane lga , main thoda uper utha aur unhe Mulayam gaddedar nitambh ko chum liya ..

Bhabhi ne mere balo ko sahlaya

“beta thodi der ruk ja “

Sabhi dande ek sath chale the lekin bhabhi ne apne pairo se side ek adami ke gale par waar kiya,

“aah mar gaaya “ wo gira hi tha ki uska dahnda utha kar baki ke war ko rok diya , ek hi jhatke me bhabhi ne aise landa chalaya tha ki sabhi log titar bitar ho gaye the ..

“maderchodo ko maar dalo “

Unme se ek chillaya , kisi ne talwar to kisi ne bandhukh hamare or kar di thi kuchh abhi bhi danda liye hi khade the , main kuchh samjhta usse pahle hi meri najre bhabhi ki jhulate hue urojo par pad gayi ..

Jaise koi aam kisi ped par latak raha ho , lekin fir bhi tana hua ho ,

Bhabhi turant hi ghumi aur

“aah mar dala maderchod “

Kisi ka sar fata , wo uchhali aur kisi ke pair tod dale ..

Unke hatho me ek talwaar thi shayd uski jiska kabhi kabhi unhone pair toda tha..

Ek goli chali lekin bekar gayi aur dusare hi pal goli chalane wale ka sar hawa me ud raha tha

Sabhi aise khamoshi ho gaye the jaise mout ko nachate hue dekh liya ho ..

Mout ka sannata bikhra hua tha, tourch ka Prakash bhabhi ke jism par pad raha tha , yanka sabhi ke liye jiti jagati nangi mout thi , gore jism me khoon ke chhite bikhar rahe the ..

Lal khoon aur gora rang gajb dhaa raha tha , abhi ahbi khoon ki bunde unke surahidaar kamar me tairati hui unke pichhwade tak ja rahi thi , mera ling fir se akadne laga tha ..

Bhabhi ki najar mujhpar gayi , main lalchai hui ankho se unhe dekh raha tha unhone ek bar ling ko dekha .. unke hotho par muskan aa gayi …….

“thodi der ruk ja bete jaldi khatm karti hu ye sab “

Wo turant hi action mod me aayi aur sabhi jagah bas chinkhe hi chikhe thi aur thodi hi der me ek aadami unke pairo me gira pada tha ..

“maaf kar do mujhe maaf kar do mujhe “ wo ro raha tha

“tu wahi hai na jisne mere sonu ko laat maari thi “

Bhabhi ki bat sunkar wo chup ho gaya usne ek bar bhabhi ko dekha nange gore rang ka ye dekh uske sathiyo ke khoon se bheega hua tha , wo maano kaanp hi gaya tha , usaka dar uske ankho se chhalak raha tha ……

Wo chup hi raha

Bhabhi ne uske balo ko pakd liya aur uske gale me talwaar tika diya

“tune agar mujhe maara hota to shayd main tujhe maaf bhi kar deti lekin tune mere sonu ko chot pahuchai “

Aur talwaar chala uska sar uske dhad se alag tha , bhabhi ne wo sar utha liya , mano khoon ka jharna bah raha ho , unhone sar utha kar apne jism se uper kiya aur uska garm khoon apne jism me tapakne diya , bhabhi ke chahre aur balo ko chhod kar pura jism hi khoon se bheeg chuka tha , sar ko fekkar wo meri or badhne lagi ……….

Ye vibhatsy (ghrina ke laayk ) tha darawana tha lekin mere liye nahi , abhi meri mano dasha ajib hi stithi me thi, mujhe bas bhabhi ka husn dikh raha tha mujhe unki wo sunderta dikh rahi thi , wo ithalati hui mere pas aayi , khoon se sana hua unka badan dekhkar mera ling aise akade ja raha tha jaise ab tab bad tut hi jayega ,

Mere ling me khoon ki teji itani bad gayi thi ki laga jaise nasho ko faad kar khoon bahar aane wale hai ..

Maine bhabhi ko daboch liya aur unhone mujhe dono ne ek dusare ke hotho me apne hotho ko ghusa diya tha ..

Mera ling sidhe unke yoni se takraya unhone khood fir se mere ling ko apne us chhed me ghusa diya tha ..

Ham dono hi abhi khade the aur ek dusare se jud chuke the , maine bhabhi ne apne pair mere kamar me fansa liye ..

Main teji se dhakke diye ja raha tha , charo taraf logo ki laashe padi hui thi , ham kisi ke lash me khade the kisi ke hath par , main unhe apni god me hi uthaye hue apne se milane ki koshis kar raha tha main chalte hue ek ped ke pas pahuch gaya ..

Maine bhabhi ko ped se tika diya aur joro se dhakke marne laga ..

“aah mera beta jor se bete aur joro se “

Wo uttejana me mano rone lagi thi , wahi halat meri bhi thi main bhi apna pura takat laga raha tha ..

Bhabhi apne pair mere kamr se lapete hue thi aur unhe uchka uchka kar dhakke maar raaha tha unke hath mere gale se lipte hue the ..

Unke jism ka khoon mere jism se lag raha tha ..

“bhabhi I LOVE YOU bhabhi .. main aapke bina nahi ji sakta .. aah bhabhi .. aah bhabhi “

Main unhe apna bana lena chahta tha aur puri takt bhi laga raha tha aur isi uttejana me mano pagal sa ho gaya tha ………..

Ham dono hi apne me mast the duniya jaise hamare liye ab thi hi nahi , ham duniya aur duniya ki sari bandiso se aajad ho chuke the ..

Ham mast the apni hi masti me lekin duniya ……………

Do ankhe ab bhi dur se hame dekh rahi thi lekin iska ilm na mujhe tha na hi bhabhi ko …………

Hmmmmmmm
Good update

Aap to jaanta honge sex ke baare mai kuch bhi nahi likha hu.....
Ha lekin aarti ki fight thik thi...or thodi odd bhi....
Khaskar naked ladna....kaafi azib concept tha.....koi na

Khair Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Anyways
Good update
Thanks

 

[firefox420]

Kal dunga dosto aaj party mana raha hu

kya hui nahi party abhi tak .. Dr. saab ? .. ya fir wahi hilane baith gaye .. yaha iss behari laal saadi aur sindoor wali abla ko to in bhediyo ke beech mein laa patka .. aur aapko party ki padi hai .. sharam karo .. Bhabi-Maa aapke baare mein kya sochegi ...

 

[Yash420]

kya hui nahi party abhi tak .. Dr. saab ? .. ya fir wahi hilane baith gaye .. yaha iss behari laal saadi aur sindoor wali abla ko to in bhediyo ke beech mein laa patka .. aur aapko party ki padi hai .. sharam karo .. Bhabi-Maa aapke baare mein kya sochegi ...

सही है यार

 

[Yash420]

कहां गए सर जी
थोड़ा लाल शाड़ी वाली के बारे में भी तो सोचो क्या हाल करेंगे वह गुंडे

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Update 56​

Ham dono hi apni hi duniya me mast the , jab hawas ka tufaan thama tab tak subah ne bhi apni roshani bikherani shuru kar di thi , halki halki si lalima Aakash me dikhane lagi thi ..

Bhor ka wakt tha aur ham do prem ke panchhi jaise waqt se anjaan se bas apne hi masti me mast the , ham usi ped ke niche ek dusare ke jism me kisi dor se lapate hue baith gaye the …

Tabhi ek sarsaraht se hamara dhyan us or gaya , jab najar padi to bas jaise aisa laga ki mere pair se dharti hi khisak gayi ho ..

Wo ankhe main bhule nahi bhul pau

Itana gussa tha un ankho me , dard tha , jaise viswas tuta ho , koi sapna kisi tash ke mahal sa tut kar bikhar gaya ho ..

Wo dard liye wo do ankhe hame ghur rahi thi ..

Main hi nahi bhabhi bhi mano sadme me thi…

Un do nayano se ansuo ki dhara bahane lagi thi,

Wo rote hue bhagi lekin main chilla utha

“Neha .. ruk jaao “

Wo nahi ruki main uske pichhe bhaga tha uske hatho ko pakdkar apni or khicha

“chhod do mujhe .. tum itane gire hue ho sakte ho maine ye socha hi nahi tha aur tumhari bhabhi … chhi mujhe to sochte hue bhi sharm aa rahi hai “

“Neha jaisa tum soch rahi ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai ,meri bat so samjho “

“Kya samjhu Ankit , kya main apni in ankho se jo dekha hai wo jhuth hai … tum mujhe kya itana murkh samjhte ho .. main bhi kitani pagal thi Ankit jo tumhare pyar ke jhuthe wade me fans gayi , jab maine tumhe sus ke sath dekha tha tabhi mujhe samjh jaana tha .. main sach me pagal hi hu , main bewkoof hi hu “

Wo rote hue jane ko hui tabhi bhabhi bol uthi

“Neha ruko .. suno ye jo kuchh bhi tumne dekha wo aadha sach hai .. aadha sach ye hai ki sonu tumse bahut pyar karta hai , lekin ye hamara bhagya hai .. ham iska kya hi kar sakte hai ……

In lasho ko dekho .. tumhe kya lagta hai ki koi aam insan is tarah se vidhwans faila sakta hai … nahi .. lekin sonu aur mera ye milan aur ye katleaam ye sab hamare naseeb ka hi hissa hai Neha .. ham iska kuchh nahi kar sakte “

Neha ne bhabhi ko bade hi ajib drishti se dekha ..

“aapke kuchh bhi bolne se galat sahi nahi ho jayega , aap dono to maa bete jaise rishte me bandhe hue ho aur ek dusare ke sath is tarah se … chhi , ager aapke jagah koi dusara hota to shayd main maan bhi jati lekin ynha to ……… main kaise samjhu ki ye sahi hai ,kaise maan lu ki ye kudrat ka niyam hai .. nahi main ye nahi maan sakti , ager aisa hona tha to mujhse pyar ka wada hi kyo kiya, ager tum dono ki kismat ki lakire ek hai to mujhe isme kyo shamil kar liya .. tumne mujhse dhokha kiya hai Ankit aur main tumhe kabhi bhi maaf nahi karungi …”

Neha wanha se teji se nikl gayi , main bas use jate hue dekhta rah gaya tha , main usse kahta bhi to kya kahta usne apni ankho se ye sab dekha tha ………..

Bhabhi aur main dono hi is hadse ke bad ek ajib se asmanjas me pad gaye the , ek to hamare bich ki sari diware gir gayi thi lekin wahi dusari or Neha ki kahi bat bhi sahi thi , samaj ke najro me to ham abhi bhi bhabhi aur devar hi hai , ek aisa rishta jo maa-bete ke saman hota hai , samaj ke najro me hamane mariyada ka ullanghan hi kiya tha ham papi hi the …

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Aashram aane se pahle hamne pas hi ek jharne me snan kiya aur apne kapde pahan liye , ham apne rishte ko sabhi se chhipa sakte the lekin kuchh aise bhi log the jisse ham ise nahi chhipa sakte the , isliye hamane kuchh logo ko khulkar batane ki sochi ..

Komal , Bhuwan aur Dr. chutiya ko hamne hamare rishte ke bare me bataya aur ye bhi ki kaise bhabhi ne wanha par lash bicha diye hai ….

Dr. ne jaldi se apne kuchh logo ko bolkar lasho ko thikana lagane ka kaam kar diya …..

“tumhari sakti aur tumhara pyar tumhe mil gaya ye to achchi bat hai “

Komal bhabhi ke balo par apne hatho ko fer rahi thi

“lekin maa kya samaj hamare is rishte ko manjur karega aur main sonu ki jindagi se khilwad nahi kar sakti wo Neha se pyar karta hai aise me main uske sath kaise rah sakti hu “

Bhabhi rone lagi thi , komal ne uske kandhe ko sahlaya

“beti samaj ki chinta karogi to fir jiyogi kaise aur janha tak Neha ki bat hai wo sab to kismat par hi chhod de , abhi se kuchh bhi kahna sahi nahi hai … tum dono hi ek dusare ko purn karte ho aise me tum dono ager ek dusare se alag rahoge to ji nahi paoge , na jane kismat kya khel dikhayega .. “

In sabhi bato ke bich mere phone ki ghanti baj uthi thi

Dekha to Kajal ka no. tha

“hello …”

“hello Ankit jo tumhe aur Aakash ko phone karke dhamki de raha tha hamne use Vikash ki madad se giraftar kar liya hai ..

Bahuch hi chalak tha sala internet alag alag location genrete karke call kar raha tha lekin usne fir se Aakash ko call kiya aur Vikash ne use dark web ke jariye jaal bichha kar pakd liya hai , tum jaldi aa jao ,Purvi ne use apne castudy me rakha hua hai mujhe to wanha jane nahi degi ager tum aa jao to shayd ham wanha ja sakte hai “

Mera to muh khula ka khula rah gaya tha

Jab maine ye bat bakiyo ko batai to wo log bhi khush ho gaye the . tabhi Neha aur uski maa mahima bhi wanha pahuch gaye ..

Neha ne mujhe bina dekhe hi bolna shuru kiya

“Aakash ne mujhe phone kiya tha usne bataya ki jo use call karke dhamka raha tha wo pakda gaya hai .. main uske pas ja rahi hu ..”

Dr. ne uske kandhe par hath rakha

“ab tum logo ke wapas jane ka wakat aa gaya hai lekin yad rakhna abhi tum sabko ek sath hi rahna hoga “

Hmmmmmmm
Good update.....

Neha ne bilkul sahi kaha....reason chahe jo bhi ho....ya phir dono chahe ho bhi excuse de....par unhone jo kiya he use kaise bhi justify nahi kar sakte.....Jo galat he wo hai....na aap use badal sakte he....na usko sahi tahra sakte hai....

Shiva pakda gaya....lekin jisne itna kuch kiya wo itni aasani se pakda gaya....sirf phone call ke sahare kuch odd hai....

Khair Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Anyways
Good update
Thanks

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Update 57​

Purvi ke office ke bahar hi hame Akki aur Kajal mil gaye ..

Baki log Dr. sahab ke sath surakchit jagah par the , kewal main aur Neha wanha aaye hue the, Neha sirf isliye aayi thi kyoki mamla Akki se juda hua tha aur wo usse milna chahti thi ..

“to ander chale “Kajal ne kaha tha

Ham ander gaye Purvi ne pahle to Kajal ko dekhkar naak sikoda lekin fir mujhse bat karne lagi

“to isne tumhe jankari di ki hame us katil ko pakd liya hai “

“ji ha , aise aap ne to kaha tha ki wo bahut hi shatir hai internet se call karta hai aur location har second me baadta hai fir use kaise pakd liya , aur ye jankari aapko hame deni thi jo Kajal ji ne hame di “

Meri bat sukar Purvi ne ek bar Kajal ki or dekha jo ki bas muskurate hue use dekh rai thi

“dekho Ankit pahli bat to is case se tum logo ka koi wasta nahi hona chahiye , tum kyo falatu ke jhmelo me fans rahe ho , tum log students ho apni life ko enjoy karo, aise khatre uthana tum logo ke thik nahi hoga…

vikash ne use trace kar liya , hamne to bahut hi puchhtaj ki lekin usne abhi tak murder ko lekar kuchh bhi nahi bola hai ..

kai tarah se torcher diye lekin nahi tuta , bahut hi sakt aur shatir hai sala ”

Purvi ke chahre me ek gussa aaya , tabhi Kajal bol uthi

“pahli bat to murderer wo nahi hai, sare murder ek aourat ne kiye hai , to tum use kitana bhi maro wo muh nahi kholega kyoki shayd use koi bat pata hi na ho ……. Tum apni policeagiri se baaj nahi aaogi ,bas logo ke hath pair tod do , pahle jaan to lo ki wo hai koun , aur pahle to tumhe ye puchhna tha ki usne Ankit aur Akki ko call kyo kiya tha, aur wo ladki koun hai jisse usne inhe bar bar dur rahne ke liye kaha tha …..

Mujhe pata hai ki tumne use ye sab to puchha bhi nahi hoga bas use murderer maan kar usko todana shuru kar diya hoga “

Kajal ki bat se Purvi jaise jal bhun hi gayi

“tum mujhe mat sikhao ki mujhe kaise kaam karna hai , main on duty police officer hu wo bhi crim branch ki aur tum police department ke kartawyo ko chhodkar bhagane wali ek bhagodi aourat …”

Purvi gusse se lal ho gayi thi

“mind your language Purvi … wo tum aur Vedant the jinke karn mujhe ye force chhodna pada , are Vikash ne tumse rishta tod kar mujhse jod liya to iska matlab ye nahi hua ki main galt hu ..

Aur yad rakhna ki aaj bhi mere naam par karname hai jo maine force me rahte hue kiye hai , aaj bhi pure police force me ab tak ke sabse tej investigator mera naam sumar hota hai..”

“ooh badi aayi , sab janti hu main apne miya miththu na bano ..

Mere boyfriend ko apne husn ke jaal me fansa kar mujhse dur kar diya tha tumne warna Vikash to bechara dusari ladkiyo ki taraf dekhta bhi nahi tha “

Purvi ke chahre me janha dukh aa gaya wahi Kajal ke chahre me ek kamini si muskan khil gayi

“yani ki tum maan rahi ho ki main tumse jyda khubsurat hu “

Kajal ki bat sunkar Purvi ka gussa satve asaman par chad gaya , dekho bhai ladkiyo ki sunderta aur ladko ki mardangi par sawal utahna matlab sidhe sidhe unke sabse bade aham ko chot maarna hota hai .. Purvi boukhla kar futane hi wali thi ki Vikash wanha aa gaya aur dekhte hi sara majra samjh gaya ..

“are yaar tum dono .. ye office hai ladna hai to ghar me ek get together rakhwa dunga din bhar apne dil ki bhadas nikalte rahna .. abhi chalo jis kaam se aaye ho wo to pura kar lo ..”

Vikash ke aane se Purvi thodi shant hui aur Kajal ki tarf se muh mod liya ..

Ham sabhi wahi khade bas us drame ko dekh rahe the..

Ab Purvi aage aage ja rahi thi aur ham sabhi uske pichhe the..

Ham ek kamre me pahuche janha bada sa kanch laga hua tha , samne ek shakhs ko buri tarh se mara gaya tha , wo abhi bhi dar ke mare ek kone me sikhude hue baitha tha , yahi wo shakhs tha jisne mujhe aur Akki ko dhamki bhare phone calls kiye the, abhi wo bas mahaj chaddi pahne baitha hua tha ..

“sale ko nanga karke mara lekin kuchh nahi bol raha hai “

Purvi garj kar boli … wahi Akki kuchh sochkar joro se hans pada aur Neha ki ankhe badi ho gayi aur maine apna matha pit liya ..

Hamara reaction dekhkar sabhi chakit ho gaye the , mujhe samjh aa gaya tha ki wo akhir kis ladki ki bat kar raha tha aur hame kyo call kar raha tha ..

“achcha hua is sale ko to aise hi pitana chahiye tha..” Akki chahak kar bol raha tha ..

Wahi Neha ka muh jo abhi bhi khula hua tha wo bol uthi

“Pawan sir .. inhone tum logo ko call kiya aur dhamki di lekin kyo “Neha ne ashchary se kaha

Maine ek gahri sans chhodi mujhe majara clear ho chuka tha

“Sneha madam ke karn , ise laga hoga ki ham unhe line marte hai.. isliye pahle mujhe call kiya aur fir mere jane ke bad jab Akki aur sus bas tuition jane lage to iska shak Akki par aaya hoga aur fir Akki ko call kiya ..

dhamkane ke liye socha hoga ki bachhe hai aur shahar me katl ke karn Shiva ke naam ka dar hai to wahi naam lekar dara diya jaaye , bachche dar jayenge aur madam ka pichha chhod denge ..

ab is bechare ko kya pata tha ki ham sidhe secret service ke sabse kabil logo ke pas chale jayege .. samay police ise trace nahi kar pati is bat ka to ise bhi confidence raha hoga ..”

meri bat sunkar janha Kajal joro se hans padi wahi Purvi ka chahra dekhane ke layak ho gaya tha ..

Kajal ki hansi use aur bhi jyda chubh rahi thi , wo teji se kamre se bahar chali gayi ……..

Tabhi Kajal Vikash ko dekhkar bolne lagi

“iska aur Vedant ka to dimag ghutane me hai jise dekho todane me lag jati hai lekin tumhe to samjhna chahiye tha ki jo prashn pahle karna chahiye wo karo , aur itana bhi pata nahi laga paye tum ki ye usi college ka professor hai jisme Akki aur Ankit padhte hai “

Kajal thodi serious thi

“mujhe pata tha yaar iske bare me sabhi bate pata laga li thi lekin Purvi ko to janti hai na , use to bas is case ko solve kar tumse aage nikalne ki hod rahti hai , meri bato ko ignore karke sidha ise todana shuru kar diya “

Vikash ki bat se sabse jdya khus to Akki hi ho raha tha , uske chahre me ajib si muskan khil gayi thi

“abe tu itna kyo khus ho raha hai “

Maine usse puchh hi liya

“bhai ager ye log ise nahi todate to main is sale ko marne hi wala tha , ye madam ko jaberdasti pareshan karta rahta hai , jabki meri madam ise bilkul bhi bhaaw nahi deti lekin fir bhi kabhi restaurant chalo to kabhi cinema chalo ..”

Uski bat sunkar main aur Neha hans pade

“teri madam hummm” Neha ne use chheda to Akki ke chahre par ek sharm si aa gayi ..

“sir ek bar ham sir se mil sakte hai , bas apna chahra unhe dikhana hai “

Meri bat par Vikash ne haa me sar hila diya aur hame us kamre me le gaye jisme sir ko rakha gaya tha , unki ye halt dekhkar mujhe to unpar thodi daya aa rahi thi , bechare ko buri tarh se toda gaya tha , nade wali chaddi pahne hue ek kone me dubka hua tha ..

Kamre ka darwaja khule hi wo aur bhi ghabra kar dubak gaya ..

Lekin hame dekhte hi aise roya jaise koi bichhde hue bhai ko dekhkar ro pade , rote hue wo mere pairo ko pakda liya ..

“Ankit .. inhe samjhao na ki maine kuchh nahi kiya hai , maine koi murder nahi kiya hai , maine to bas tum dono ko darane ke liye call kiya tha aur ye sab bol diya .. mujhe bacha log Ankit ye log mujhe kal se maare ja rahe hai , bahut mara mujhe bahut ..”

Uski is halt ko dekhkar mujhe bahut bekar laga lekin sale Akki ke chahre ki muskan to kam hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi ..

Maine unke kandhe ko pakdkar unhe utha liya ..

“thik hai sar koi bat nahi sab thik hai , ab ye aapko nahi marenge aur jane bhi denge “

Maine unhe santwana diya

“nahi Ankit fake call karke dhamkane ke karn IT act ke tahat ispar karwahi hogi koi 6th month ki jail aur jurmana dono hi ho sakta hai .. noukri to jaayegi hi “Vikash ne hame samjhaya

Maine ek bar Pawan ka chahra dekha , ek achcha khasa insan apne chutiyape me aisi harkat kar jata hai ki uska pura jivan hi barbad ho jaaye , college ka professor tha career bright tha , insan bhi koi bura nahi tha lekin ……

Lekin pata nahi ye khurapaat uske dimag me kaha se aa gayi ki ye harkat kar dali aur galt logo ke sath kar dali , shayad koi dusara hota to use koi fark bhi nahi padta lekin pahli galti khud ko Shiva batakar hi kar di aur fir hamko call karke jo ki secrete service walo ke sampark me the ..

“sir hamne abhi tak koi bhi complaint nahi likhwai hai , inhe chhod dijiye inka pura career hi khatm ho jayega “

Maine Vikash se request ki , usne ek gahri sans li aur haami me sir hila diya ..

“thanks Ankit thanks “ Pawan sir ko to mano Jannat mil gayi , lekin meri bat sunkar Akki khus nahi dikh raha tha ..

“wo sab thik hai lekin aap aaj ke bad Sneha madam se dur rahoge “ Akki ne kadai ke sath use kaha , Pawan sir ke pas aur koi chara bhi to nahi tha ..

Lekin Akki ki baat sunkar mere aur Neha ke hotho me muskan aa gayi , ham ek dusare ko dekhte hue muskurane lage ..

Lekin tabhi hame yad aaya ki hamare rishte abhi kaise hai , Neha ke chahre par aayi hui muskan gayab ho gayi aur uski jagah ek gusse mishrit udasi ne le li .. aur uske chare ke baadlte hue bhaaw dekhkar mere chahre ka rang bhi udne laga ………..

Hmmmmmmm
Good update

Kaafi funny tha....khada pahad nikla chuha type....

Becha are master ji pit gaye wo bhi Kaafi sahi se....Akki dur karna chahta tha unhe madam se....lekin ye to log to use duniya se dur karne wale the.....

Ab ye to confirm he ki Shiva abhi bhi aajad he or may be use ye bhi pata ho ki ye sab log yanha wapas aa gaye hai....

Khair Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Anyways
Good update
Thanks

 

[Chutiyadr]

hmm ye ek aur suspense aa gya ki mahima ke badle kon aurat thi jo ab neha ke dimaag mein ghum rahi hai ?

story 2 updates se kuch stranger si lagni lagi hai ?

dhanywad sir ji