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luv4sale696969

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Quite nice and fast paced update... Waiting for next....
 

Zas23

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Update 68

Idhar pata nhi palatasur ko kuch aabhas hua or vo nind se jaag gya.

Patalasur teji se Neelam ko rkhe gye vishes kamre ki taraf jane lga jab vo vha pahucha tab usne dekha ki uske sare sainik mare huye hai or kamre me jakar dekha to Neelam bhi vha nhi thi .

Tabhi vo kuch socha or teji se chalte huye darbar ki taraf jane lga .

Idhar hum log darbar me pahuch chuke the or pagasas ki murti ke pas hi khade ho kr dekh rhe the .

Bhairav - yhi hai pagasas namak udne wale ghode ki murti jab patalasur ne ise kaid kr liya or is se udne ki sakti mangi tab pagasas ne sakti dene se mna karte huye murti me tapdil ho gye,Tab
se ye murti yhi pr hai patalasur ko bhi malum hai ki koi nek manusy hi aakar is sakti ko hasil karega tab vo use mar kr is sakti ko pa lega .
Ab der mat kro tiger pagasas ke sir pr hath rakho sakti tumhare ander aa jayegi.

Tabhi vha pr patalasur aa gya .

Patalasur - ha ha jaldi kro uske bad Mai tumhe mar kr vo sakti hasil karunga.

Patalasur ko dekhte hi bhairav ke sath Jo sainik aaye the unhone patalasur pr hamla kr diya.

Patalasur iske liye taiyar tha usne apni maya se talwar le aaya or sabhi sainiko ki marta gya .

Jab sare sainik mare gye tab

Patalasur - bs itne hi sainik khade kiye the mere khilaf sale kamine gaddar , gaddaro ki fouj banayenga ,bula or kitne sare hai bula gaddar .

Jab sare sainik mare gye tab maine apni talwar lekar aa gya patalasur ke pas.

Mai - mujh se lad patalasur aa dikha kitna dam hai tujh me.

Patalasur - a re tu to abhi bachcha hai mujh se yudh krega aa ja manav .

Fir hum dono me yudh suru ho gya dono ki talwar aapas me takrane lgi kabhi vo mujh pr bhari padta to kabhi Mai , jab hum dono ki talware aapas me takrai thi tab vo apni talvar ka dabav dete huye meri taraf jhuane lga tab Maine ek lat uske pet me mari ti to vo thoda pichhe hua tab main takat se ek jordar prahar kiya usne apna talwar bich me la diya to uski talwar do tukde ho gyi tab Maine fir se jor dar prahar kiya tab vo gayab ho gya Mai idhar udher dekha to vo nhi Mila .

Bhairav - lagta hai vo bhag gya hoga .


Fir Mai pagasas ki murti ke pas aaya or uske sir pr hath rakha to murti ek ghode me badal gyi or mere ander sama gyi tab mujhe thoda jhatka lga or mere ander se ek tej rosni niklne lgi tabhi achanak vha pr patalasur aa gya meri pith uski taraf thi, vo apni maya se talwar lekar mujhe nisana banate huye meri taraf uchhal diya aisa krte huye bhairav ne use dekh liya or vo bich me aa gya talwar sidha uske pet me ghus gyi tab Mai piche palat kr dekha to bhairav ke pet me talwar ghusa hai maine talwar khich kar nikal diya tab Tak patalasur ne maya se dusri talwar ka nisana meri taraf kr ke feka iske liye Mai taiyar Mai foran vha se bhairav ko utha kr ud gya or teji se uske ghar ki taraf badh gya.

Patalasur ne socha bhi nhi tha ki sakti milne ke bad mai vha se bhag jauga Kyo ki bhairav ne hi mujhe kaha tha ki tum abhi patalasur ka samna Nhi kr sakte jab Tak ki tumhari Puri sakti tumhe mil nhi jati tab tak .

Is liye mai vha se nikal kr bhairav ke ghar aaya to vha pr bhairav ki patni Mallika bhairav ko is halat me dekh kr rone lgi .

Bhairav - Mai ab jayda samay tak jivit nhi rh paunga tiger tum meri patni or bete ko lekar nikal jao yha se or jab tum patalasur ka ant karoge tab mere bete ko hi patal Lok ka raja banana.

Mallika - nhi swami Mai aap ko chhod kr khi nhi jaugi .

Mallika - tumhe yha se janaaa hogaaa huare bete ke liye .

Ye bol kr Bhairav ne apne pran tyag diye.

Idhar ghar ke bahar patalasur ki sena aa chuki thi or vi log darvaja todne lge tab Neelam ne munne ki god me uthaya or Mai Mallika ko kisi tarah utha kr Neelam or Mallika ko lekar ud gya .
Hum logo ki udte huye jab patalasur ne dekha to vo apne dragon ko hamare piche, lga diya dragon apne muh se aag chhod rha tha .hume to koi problem Nhi ho sakti hai lekin Mallika or uske bete ko problem ho sakti hai is liye maine apni speed badha di or hum log prithvi lok me jaane ke liye darwaje ke pas pahuch gye or hum log vhi nadi ke kinare pahuch gye jaha se hum patal Lok me gye the nadi ke kinare pahuch kr Maine sabhi ko niche utara tabhi us darvaja se dragon bhi bahar nikal aaya to Mai bhi apni talvar lekar udte huye jakar us dragon ke pith pr jakar uski pith me talwar ghusa diya dragon tadpta hua jamin pr aa gira or mar gya .

Fir mai Neelam or Mallika ke pas gya or neelam se kaha .

Mai - hum yha pr usi din or samay pr hi pahuche hai jis samay hum patal Lok me gye theab yha pr ek problem or ho gyi ki hum Mallika ko rakhege kaha pr .

Neelam - mere pas iska hal hai hamara ek farm house hai sahar se dur ek gao ke pas to kyo na hum Mallika ji ko vhi rakhe.

.Mai - ha ye best rhega chalo fir niklte hai .
Fir Mai un logo ko pakad kr udte huye farm house le aaya Neelam mujhe rasta batati gyi .
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Update 69

Jab hum log farm house pahche to vha ke guard ne Neelam ko Salam kahte huye gate khola ,hum ander gye to ek ladies or ek ladka, ladki aaye.

Ladies - namste bitiya bahut dino bad aana hua yha pr.

Neelam - ha kaki vo kya hai na ki samay hi nhi milta yha aane ka or inse. Milo ye hai mere pati tiger or ye hai Mallika ji.
Mallika ji aaj se yhi rahengi to aap ek room inke liye saf kr dijiye or ek room hamare liye bhi saf kr dena or ha khane ka bhi dekh lijiyega.

Ladies - ji bitiya rani Mai abhi karvati hu ye siddhi tum khane pine ka dekho or tu Mohan mere sath chal kamre ki safai karni hai.

Uske bad vo sabhi apne apne kam me lag gye tab Mai Neelam se puchha.

Mai - Neelam yha koi tumhare family members me se to nhi aata jata hai na.

Neelam - nhi yha ka pata kisi ko nhi malum ye farm house mujhe mere nana just ne mere nam pr kiya tha ye bat sirf unhe or mujhe hi malum hai.

Uske bad kuch der me ladies or uska beta aa gya .

Ladies - bitiya kamre ki safai ho gyi hai aap log fresh ho lo tab tak mai khana bhi bana lungi.

Fir hum logo ne ek room me gye vha pr Mallika ko kaha ki ye aapka room hai or baki sab bate bhi samjha di kyo ki patal Lok or prithvi lok ke rahan sahan me bahut anter tha.
Mallika abhi sant hi thi kyo ki unhe abhi bhi pati ke marne ka sadma Jo laga tha .
Fir hum dono dusre kamre me aa gye Mallika ko uske kamare me chhod kr.

Mai - Neelam Mai tumhe kuch sachai batana chahuga ab tum meri patni bhi ho or bahan bhi to tumhe sab chijo ka pata hona bhi jaruri hai .

Dekho bat ye hai ki mere or bhi ladkiyo ke sath sambandh hai usme meri bua uski nanad or uski friend sital or abhi Mallika se bhi ho gya hai.

Neelam - oh my God abhi se itne logo ke sath sex kr chuke ho tum , khair mujhe isme koi problem Nhi hai ha mujhe mera pyar milna chahiye nhi to sabki band baja dungi or ye mai kr sakti hu tum jante hi ho .

Mai - or bhi bate hai suno meri bua pregnant bhi hai.

Neelam - wah Matlab ki bachche bhi paida hone vale hai , lagta hai bahut aage jaoge tum .

Mai - ha or jaise Maine sakti pane ke liye tum se vivah kiya vaise hi pahli sakti ko paane ke liye Maine do sadi or kr chuka hu .

Neelam - Matlab ki Mai tisri hu pahli or dusri kon hai.

Mai - samita or sital .

Neelam - or bhi kuch batana hai to vo bhi bata do .
Mai - ha Mai do ladkiyo se pyar bhi karta hu vo mere bua ki betiya hai kavya or Kavita.

Neelam - or .

Mai - or or ha Maine tumhare pitaji tak pahuchne ke liye Deepika se pyar ka natak kiya tha lekin chodo ab tum mil gyi ho to Deepika ko chhod dunga kyo ki ab tumhare jariye hi tumhare baap tak pahuchunga or puchhunga ki kyo do pariwaro ke bich dusmani paida ki .

Neelam ne ek thappad mujhe laga diya Mai apne gal ki sahlate huye puchha.

Mai - ab mujhe thappad kyo mara ye bhi bata do.

Neelam - vo is liye ki tum meri Didi ko kyo chhodne ki bat kr rhe ho jab itne logo ke sath rista jod hi liye ho to us bichari ne kya bigada hai , tumhe malum hai vo tumhare hi sapne dekhti rahti hai uske juba pe bs tumhara hi naam hota hai or jab use ye pata chalega ki maine tumhe pa liya hai to vo mujhe hi chhodne ka karan manegi or apne aap ko kuch kr legi .


Mai -to tum kya chahti ho.

Neelam - dekho jab tum itna kuch kr chuke ho to usko bhi apna lo hum dono bahne mil kr tumhari help karengi or ek bat tumhe humare papa Tak pahucha hai to tumhe Didi ko patana hoga kyo ki vo hi Papa ki sabse jayda ladli hai vo agar maan gyi to samjho tumhara kam ho jayega, Mujhe papa jayda pyar dular nhi karte Mai to apni mummy ki ladli hu or Deepika didi 50-50 hai.

Mai - oh no Matlab ab tumhari Didi ko bhi patau thik hai vo bhi kr lenge dikhao tumhari didi dikhti kaise hai or uske bare me puri details bhi bata do patane me pareshani nhi hogi.

Jab Neelam ne apne mobile pr apni badi didi ki photo dikhai to Mai use pahchan gya.

Mai - inse to Mai mil chuka hu park me Kya nam bataya tha umm ha Divya to kya yhi tumhari badi bahan hai .

Neelam - ha or tum is kab mil gye ye to abhi Kuch din hi huye or morning walk pr jate huye .

Mai - ha abhi Kuch din hi huye hai hamari mulakat hoti rahti hai.

Neelam - ab Mai samajh gyi ki didi kyo ab se roj morning walk pr jati hai or khush rhati hai samjho tumhara kam jaldi hi pura ho jayega kyo ki lagta hai didi bhi tumhe pasand karti hai.

Mai - tumhe ek bat or batau meri na aakho me jadu hai Jo bhi dekhti hai diwani hi ho jati hai.
Neelam - vo to hai , Mai bhi tumhari aakho me kho jati hu .

Abhi hum bat hi kr rhe the ki siddhi hume khane ke liye bulane aa gyi hum dono bari bari se fresh huye or Mallika or uske bete ko lekar khane ke liye aa gye.

Khane ke bad hum logo ne aaram karne ka faisla kiya kyo ki patal Lok me to raat ko hi nikle the yha to abhi raat ho rhi thi .

Idhar bua ke ghar me mere nhi rahne pr munna Bhai ne sab ko ghar se uthva liya or apne adde pe la liya kyo ki use apne bhai ka badla Jo lena tha.

Udhar Mai befikar ho kr Neelam ko baho me lekar so rha tha Kal ghar jane pr hi pata chalega ki kya hua hai.



 
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