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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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abhi1008

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abhi1008

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Superb mindblowing Fantastic amazing update.....................
Keep it up bro ...................
Waiting for next update ....................
Thanku soo much bhai for your wonder ful support & comment
:thanks: :thanks::thanks:

Aise hi saath banaye rakhe....

Latest update 92 posted......
 

abhi1008

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Execllent , Superb & awesome Review Ritika ji :applause::applause:

Thanku soo much for your wonder ful support & comment

:thanks: :thanks::thanks:

aapne bilkul sahi kaha hai relations k baare mein:yes2:

Aise hi saath banaye rakhe....


Latest update 92 posted......

Wow sUper excellent update Sabse khatarnaak sakti to Ritu ke pass thi wow kya dand diya Usne Markesh ko bhut badta.
Ye sach h lig do din ke pyar ke chakar mai apni family ko apna dusman samjh lete h or un pe belive nhi karte jabke agar jo duniya mai layaa h to uska bura kabhi sapne mai bhi sochta. Nice update and messages for everyone.


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abhi1008

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Superb ...Fantastic ...jabardust Review Akhil bhai :applause::applause:

Thanku soo much for your wonder ful support & comment
:thanks: :thanks::thanks:

Ritu k baare mein lag toh kuch aisa hi raha hai ...dekhte hai aage kahani kya mod leti hai....

Aise hi saath banaye rakhe....

Latest update 92 posted......


Wese I doubt ki uske akelepan ka ek kaaran kisi na kisi tarah uska betu toh nahin na?
Todays update was awesome one ab dekhte hain next update mein kya kya rahasya ujaagar honge
 
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abhi1008

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Excellent Reveiw bhai :applause::applause:

Thanku soo much for your wonder ful support & comment
:thanks: :thanks::thanks:

Aise hi saath banaye rakhe....

Latest update 92 posted......


bhit hi shandar update... to markesh ko b uski saza mil gai... ab dekhte hain next kia hota hai... ab abhi konse lok jata hai apni next shakti hasil kernay...
 

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Update - 92

ab tak aapne dekha markesh ko uske kiye ki sazaa Ritu k dwara hi mili

ab aage......

Makesh pada tadp raha tha kamjori k kaaran usse hila bhi nahi jaa raha tha........woh maut ki bheek mang raha ...........

Pahli baar shakti ka prayog karne k kaaran Ritu behosh ho gayi thi........

Abhi Ritu ka si godi mein liye baitha hua tha.........abhi yaha ka kuch kaam baki tha ........toh usne Shivali ki taraf dekha .......toh woh aage aayi aur Aur Ritu ko sambhala ......

Abhi waha se uthkar khander k ander gaya .....aur apne Shakti trishool ko pragat kiya ..........Phir koi asur iss jagah tak na pahunch paaye isiliye usne ......Waha k pooja sthal k paas jo jaha ek gahra gadda sa tha ...jaha.....Asuri mata Devi Nikumbala ki murti thi ussko poori tarah band kar diya ......aur bahar aakar uss jagah ko nast ka diya ..........

Markesh ki khabar kisi ko na pata lage aur koi asur waha na pahunch sake osiliye uane waha ek satvik urja se ek kawach banaya ........

Aur sabko lekar teleport ho gaya........Chacha ji k ghar k cottege mein .......

Lima aur Rimpy bahar hamara intejar kar rahi thi ..........Cottage se bahar nikalkar Rinku dono se mila aur Lima ko lekar apne cottage mein chal pada........Rimpy bhi ander aagayi thi.....Uske mann mein badi jigyasa thi k waha kya hua .......toh Abhi ne usse baad mein sab batane ka ishara kiya ......

Yaha Abhi ne Apne prati roop ko yaad kiya ....aur usse apne bhiter sama liya ........

Party khatam ho gayi thi ...aur sabhi gahr aagaye the .....Abhi ka pratiroop unke saath tha isiliye uhne kuch bhi pata na chala .......

Ritu ko ab hosh aagaya tha......Woh Abhi se bahut kuch kahna chahti thi......hosh mein aane k baad ......uske aansoo tham nahi rahe the .......
Shivali aur Rimpy ne usse sambhala .....Abhi k kahne par Dono Ritu ko uake kamte mein chodne gayi.........

Naina abhi room mein nahi aayi thi....woh Shuahila chachi k room mein baato mein magan thi .......isiliye koi problem nahi thi........

Shivali aur Rimpy Riti k saath room mein pahunchi .....

Rimpy - Di jo kuch hua usse ab bhul jaao......

Ritu - kahna bahut aasan hai Rimpy ....lekin bhulana bahut mushkil........

Shivali - koi mushkil nahi hai ....hamesha bas itna yaad rakho k aapke saath aapki family humesha khadi hai ......aap kya samzte ho ...yadi aap unhe apna dukh nahi bataoge toh kya woh mehsus nahi karenge ........

Itne din se aapke pareshani ki wajah se Maine Abhi ki tadap mehsus ki hai........Bahar se sabke saath hasta tha ....lekin andar hi andar usse aapki pateshani khaye jaa rahi thi.....

Aur aapke mom dad ...aapne socha k aapke badle hue vayhar k kaaran .....Unhe kaisa laga hoga.........

yadi aapko koi pareshani hai toh usse apne family k saath share kare .....aapki family k siwa aapka bhala chahne wala aur koi nahi .........

Ritu - Shayad tum thik kahti ho.........apne dhun mein mein itni andi ho gayi thi k apne family ka apne liye pyar na dekh saki ..........aur rone lagi........

Shivali - issmein aapse bas ek hi chuk ho gayi k aap apni baatein apno se chupane lagi bas isi ka fayada usne utahaya aur aappar mohini vidya ka prayog kiya.......aur aap apni family se aur dur ho gayi........hume apni galtiyo se sabak lena chahiye.....

isiliye kah rahi hu woh sab chodiye ......aur naye sire se jeewan shuru kariye......

Ritu ab normal ho gayi thi.......Tabhi Naina bhi room mein aagayi thi......

Naina - Beta ab kaisi tabiyat hai......

( Ritu jab waha se nikli tab Naina usse waha na paakar pareshan ho gayi thi ....tab Abhi k prati roop ne bataya k di k sir mein thoda dard ho raha tha toh woh Rinku & group k saath ghar chali gayi hai)

Shivali - Di ab thik hai maa......bas thoda sirdard tha.......

Naina - Maa k bacchi yeen do din se saath hai aur muzhse mili bhi nahi ........aur woh ..Sulekha...Shalu ...woh bhi .......tum teeno ki toh mein khabar leti hu ......

Shivali - woh maa.....yaha....itne log.....aur aage badke Naina k pair chune lagti hai...

Niana - usse uthakar gale laga leti hai.......

Ritu - maa aap Shivali ko kaise jaanti hai.....

Maa - Beta tu iss bare mein Abhi se hi puch lena woh hi batayega .....
.....Shivali ki taraf dekhkar .....kyu beta thik kaha na maine.......

Shivali garden zhukakar niche dekhne lagti hai.......

thodi der aise hi baatein chalti rahti hai air phir Shivali aur Rimpy ....wapas cottage aajati hai.......

Abhi waha se Sona k Room mein gaya Toh waha Sona Addu aur Deepu teeno baithe hue kuch soch rahe the........

Abhi - lagta hai baccha prty kuch gahri soch mein hai........

teeno Abhi ki aawaj sunkar chank gaye......

Deepu - bahi yeh sona itne saare gifts se confuse ho gayi hai........

Abhi - kyu bahla ....sona ...gifts se bhi koi confuse hota hai....

Sona - woh bhai itne saare gifts ka kya karungi.......

Addu - bhai maine isse kaha k orphanage mein de dete hai .....toh wahi soch rahe the

Abhi - arre wah yeh toh bahut acchi baat hai.......

Phir sona meri goad mein aakar baith gayi.......Addu aur Deepu mere bagal mein .......
kuch der masti aur baatein chali aur phir sona k zidd par hum wahi So gaye....

Subah apne time par utha teeno abhi gahri nind mein aoye the......Sona mera baaju kaskar pakad kar soyi thi......jaise woh muzhe apne se dur jaane hi nahi dena chahti thi.....

Main dheere se utha aur fresh hokar niche lawan mein chala gaya ........aur ghaas par baithkar dhyan karne laga........

aaj bhi dhyan mein muzhe kich drishya dikhayi dene lage the .........maine dekha k ek bahut hi sunder bilkul devlok ki apsara ki tarah .....ek ladki kisi sarover k kinare baithkar koi geet gaa rahi hai......Aur jal mein na jaane kiski chavi dekha rahi hai......Tabhi kisiki awaaj se mera dhyan tuta.....

toh dekha Payal aur shreya thi waha par...........jo muzhe brekfast k liye bulane aayi thi........
tab mera dhyan gaya k 9 baj rahe hai ...koi 4 hrs ho gaye the dhyan karte karte.....

Phir main waha se dono k saath dinning hall gaya.........breakfast k dauran ab wapas lautne ki baat hone lagi .......jo Sona ko bilkul acchi nahi lagi ....

Sona muh fulakar apne room mein chali gayi ........
aur main bhi chala usse manane .......maine usse bahut manaya.....lekin woh maane ko tayar hi nahi thi .........maine usse bich bich mein milne aane ka wada koya tab jaakar badi mushkil se maani ......

Lunch k baad hum sab nikal pade wapas apne desh........

Yaha pahunchkar Maine Rimpy ko drop kiya uske ghar aur wapas ghar aakar apne Room mein gaya.......

Waha Ritu di .....baithi hui thi......

Mein - Di aap.....soyi nahi abhi...itne lambe safar se thak gayi hogi .......

Ritu - kyu kay ab mein tuzhse baat nahi kar sakti........

Abhi - maine aisa toh nahi kaha .......

Ritu - maine kal se dekh rahi hu tu muzhse baat hi nahi kar raha hai..............betu ab tu bhi apni di ko nahi samzhe ga toh mein kaha jaau........maaf karde na galti ho gayi muzhse ........
aur rone lagi , di ka rona muzhse dekha nahi gaya.....aur main unke paas jaakar unke aansoo poche aur gale laga liya .......

Mein - bas karo di ....bas....karo ....main aapse kaise naraz ho sakta hu ......aap toh meri pyari di ho ......lekin di aapko yeh bhi samzna chahiye k itna bada decision le ne se pahele Mom Dad k baare mein toh sochna tha.....yadi aapko kuch ho jaata toh hum kya karte....

Di - toh mein kya karti betu ....Dad apne business mein busy ...aur mom social work mein aur tu bhi apne kaamo mein ........

tuzhe Aur Rimpy ko jab bhi saath dekhti thi ......toh muzhe lagta k kash mere bhi koi hota jo meri feelings ko samazta ......ab ..akelepan aur kaam k bojh se main ukta gayi thi .........aur yeh galti kar baithi.........

lekin jaati thi k mera betu muzhe kuch nahi hone dega......

Main samaz gaya di ki asli prob ......

Main - Accha toh di ko muzhe Jija ji se milwane ki jaldi hai..........koi nahi main abhi dad ko bata detu hu ........

Ritu - Betu jija ji se milna hai ruk tu abhi tuzhe batati hu ......Aur Abhi ko thapad marne aage badti hai toh abhi daud laga deta hai ......door ki taraf aur darwaje par jaakar ...Ritu ko angutha dikhakar bhag jaata hai ......aur Ritu k chehre par smile aajati hai.......

Dusre din Abhi ne Iss baare mein Dad se baat ki ......Toh dad ne Di aur mom se iss baare mein poori salah kar ki baat kahi .......

kuch din Abhi ki wahi daily routine chlane lagi ......Yog ..excersie....dhyan......
Rinku aur baaki frnds se milna ......aur Apni team k saath sangharak k roop mein under world pat rok lagaye rakhna.......

Kabhi kabhi teleport hokar apni patniyo se bhi milne chala jaata tha......

Yaha patal lok mein KS aur Bhayaksha ko Markesh ki koi jaankari nahi mil rahi thi........achanak se uske aise gayab hone Ks bada pareshan ho gaya tha .......

woh apne kaali shaktiyo ki takat ko Markesh k baare main pata karne laga hi raha tha k ...Ebils ne usse aisa karne se mana kar diya ........

KS ko andaja hone laga k kahi devtao ne toh usse bandi nahi bana liya .......iske liye apne khunkhar aur mayavi asur Aantak k saath asuri sena ko devlok bhejne k baare mein socha.....


yaha Abhi ko roz dhyan mein woh kanya dikhayi dene lagi ........Abhi ko itna toh andaja ho gaya tha......yeh hi uski agli shakti hai.......par yeh kaha hai uska Abhi ko pata nahi chal paataha tha.......

Abhi ka college bhi ab shuru ho gaya tha......Iski wajah se Abhi aur busy ho gaya tha....

Aise hi ek Raat Shivali mere saath thi tab maine usse apne dyan mein dikh rahi ladki k baare mein bataya ..........

Shivali - toh ab aapki agli shakti prapt karne ki yatra shuru hone wali hai......

Abhi - haa lag toh muzhe bhi aise hi raha hai......lekin kis lok mein ....

Shivali - Dhyan mein dikhi hui jis jagah ka jikar aapne kiya hai ...woh jagah swarg mein hai ........

Abhi - toh kya woh koi devkanya hai ...

Shivali - nahi Maa parvati ji k shrap k kaaran devtao ki santan nahi hoti.....jaha tak muzhe lagta hai yeh koi Gandharva kanya hai.........

Humare Bhuva lok se uper SWAHA LOK hai ....jiske teen bhag hai ek bhag mein Swarg lok .....dusre mein Gandharva lok Aur teesre mein Kinnar lok ........

inmein devtao aur kinnaro ki santane nahi hoti toh yeh kanya koi Ghandharva lok ki hi hai.......

Aur Jaan ab tumhe jalf hi apne lakshya ko prapt karna hai.....kyuki ab hamare paas kewal 8 mahine rah gaye hai.........inn 8 mahino mein tumhe apni saari shaktiya prapt karni ...jinmein se abhi 9 bakki hai........

Abhi - jaan sachmuch tumhe jaana bada hi kathin hai.........tumhe kaise pahle se hi pata hai jaise tum pahele hi sab dekh chuki ho .........

Aur Abhi usse apni baahon mein le leta hai....Aur usnke hontho ko chumne lagta hai ....aaj dono ki kiss mein koi vasana nahi thi.....bas tha toh ek dusre k liye pavitra prem .......badi der tak dono chumte rahe......phir alag ho gaye.......

Abhi - Toh jaan muzhe kal hi apni yatra k liye nikalna hoga.......

Shivali - nahi ...kyuki Swarg mein Bina devraj Indra k bulave k koi bhi manusya pravesh nahi paa sakta ........

Abhi - toh kya kiya jaaye......

Shivali - kuch nahi ..bas pratiksha .....bas ek do din mein devraj Indra ka bulawa aapko aajayega..........Thik hai ab main chalti hu....aur woh waha se gayab ho jaati hai.....

Main mann mein - uff yeh Shivali bhi ek bahut bada rashasya hai.....

Abhi k liye itna hi ......

Agla update raat ko.......
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