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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Jatin:- Koi baat nahi agar kosis achhi rahi to mehnat karke hum 4-5 bache jaldi-jaldi paida karke yahan bhi chahal, pahal wala mahol bana sakte hain…


Kasak apni badi si aakhen ki … "Oyeee, Jyada bole to tumhara khun kar dungi… jao chup chap jaldi se kahan pakao, jabtak main fresh hokar aati hun…


Jatin:- Upar jakar left se pahla kamra…


Kasak:- Kya..


Jatin:- Arre upar jakar left se pahle kamre jao.. bus.. samajh jaogi…


Kasak, Jatin ke bataye kamre me chali gayi aur jaise hi wo kamre ke ander ghusi, charo ore ki deewar par apni badi-badi tasveere dekhkar khush ho gayi.. kayi sari tasveere thi.. kayi aise pal, jisme wo kabhi Jivisha ke sath khulkar hans rahi hai to kisi me pure pariwar ke sath baithi hui hai…


Kasak jod-jod se chillati hui Jatin ko awaz lagane lagi… Jatin teji se wahan pahuncha… "Kya ho gaya, itni ghabrayi hui awaz me kyon pukar rahi ho"..


Kasak:- Ghabrayi main hun aur kaanp tum rahe ho, kahin koi raaj to chhipa nahi rakhe yahan?


Jatin:- Ab tum aise chilla'kar pukar lagaogi, tab darna to swabhawik hai..


Kasak:- Chor !!! Tum meri jasoosi karwate ho. Jaldi batao ye sab tasveere tumhare pass kaise aayi..


Jatin Kasak ko khinch kar apne bahon me bharte, uske chehre par aaye laton ko apne hath se hata'te huye kahne laga…. "Jab tumhe dekhne ke liye pagal sa ho jata hun to ye kuch tasveere jo maine chupke se bina izazat ke khinchi hai.. usse dekh, khud ko shant kar leta hun…


"Achha, aur jab ye tasveren nahi thi, tab kya karte the"… Kasak apni bahen Jatin ke gale me dalti hui puchhne lagi…


Jatin apni aakhen mund'kar kahne laga… "Bus Yun hi aakhen mund'kar tumhare khyalon me kho jata hun"..


Jatin apni baat kah'kar apni aakhen khol'kar, Kasak ki najron se najar mila kar dekhne laga… Kasak kabhi apne palkon ko niche jhukati to kabhi Jatin ke najron par thehra leti… "Hume chalna chaiye ab"…


Jatin, Kasak se alag hote huye bilkul dhime se kahne laga… "Thik hai".. aur wo palat kar apna ek kadam aage badha liya.. Kasak thik piche se uska hath pakad lee… Jatin apne gardan ko ghuma kar piche dekha… dono ki najren jaise ek dusre par thehar kar bahut kuch kahna chah rahi ho…


Dono apni jagah thehar kar ek dusre ko kuch der dekhte rahe.. Kasak apne ek kadam aage badhati, thik Jatin ke samne pahunchi aur apni aeriyon ko uncha karke Jatin ke honth se honth lagakar chumne lagi..


Jatin jis baat ko nahi hone dena chah raha tha, wahi kahani hote ja rahi thi... Jatin ke sabhi sathiyon ne shikar kiye the, aur lagatar karte aa rahe the, isliye unki body santulit thi.. lekin Jatin ne kayi dino se Shikar nahi kiya tha aur Kasak ke chumte hi uski pyas bhi badhne lagi…


Uske sharir ka ek swabhawik pariwaratan jo sahwas ke waqt hota hai, wo abhi se dikhne laga tha… Jatin, Kasak ko khud se dur karte huye kahne laga… "Nahi Kasak ye sab thik nahi"..


"Haan ye sab thik nahi warna jaise hi tum sex me khoti chali jaogi, ye tumhari boti-boti noch lega.."


Nischal thik uske piche bistar par baith'kar apni baat kahne laga… Nischal ko dekh'kar Jatin teji se darwaje ke ore bhaga… zoom se ek hawa gujri aur darwaje ke aage Nischal khada tha… "Aaram se baith jao, jabtak tum Kasak ke sath ho wo tumhari sequrity hai… Kasak se dur gaye to tumhara patta saaf hai"..


Jatin ne jab Kasak ko dekha to wo bistar par behosh pari thi… Usse achet awastha me dekh'kar Jatin ghabrate huye puchhne laga…. "Usse kya kiya"..


Nischal, apni badi si aakhen kiye uske ek jangh par paun rakh'kar, uske gale ko daboch liye. Apna chehra thik uske chehre ke upar le jate huye, apni bhadi si awaz me kahne laga….

"Viggo jab samne aa jaye to jante ho kya hota hai… Viggo ko kabhi apne aas-pass mehsus kiya hai.. Kya hoga jise tum Aizem ka sahjada samjhte ho, wo ek Viggo ho.


Nischal ki pakad ka pahili bar Jatin ne maza liya tha. Jaise hi gala chhuta, wo hafte huye khasne laga. Viggo naam sunkar hi Jatin ke pasine chhutne lage… wo Nischal ke vikral roop ko dekhte huye kahne laga…. "Viiii.. Viggo.. lekin ye jan-samuh to kai varshon purv aapas me lad'kar samapt ho gayi thi"


Nischal:- Yahan tum mujhe mera istihas mat batao… mujhe jo jaan'na hai kewal wo batao. Wo bhi bina bhatkaye…


Jatin, apna hath jod kar sar ko niche jhukaye…. "Viggo, Kasak ko kya hua hai.. wo aise kyon pari hai"..


Nischal:- Ye jinda rahe ya mar jaye, tumhe koi fark parna hai kya…


Jatin:- Viggo aap jaisa soch rahe hai, waisa sabhi Zoren niwasi nahi hote…


Nischal:- Jinda maans to tumne bhi khaya hai.. nocha to tumne bhi hai kaiyon ko… Jatin kuch naya batao…


Jatin:- Hmmm ! Aap sahi ho.. Main kuch bhi kar lun rahunga unme se ek hi..


Nischal:- Tum jante ho maine uss raat tumhari jaan kyon baksh di thi...


Jatin:- Koi idea nahi… waise aapne pahchana kaise mujhe...


Nischal:- Ajib si ghinn wali badbu aati hai tum logon se.... Kabhi us ghrina ke gandh ko mehsus kiya hai ki nahi..


Jatin, khud me ander se bebas aur lachar mehsus karte huye…. "Viggo aap ko kya jaan'na hai mujhse"…


Nischal:- Malkia ki jankari do mujhe..


Jatin:- "Viggo main bus itna janta hun ki Malkia ki shaktiyan asim hoti hai. Ek Malkia huamare mahamahim ko kayi varshon tak jivit rakhti hai aur unhe asim takat pradan karti hai"…

"Ab tak hum prithvi se 12 Malkia, Zoren ki seema tak le ja chuke hain… lekin Mahamhim aur Rijo, Malkia Jivisha ke liye pagal bane huye hain... Inki shakti Zoren tak mehsus ho rahi hai. Unka ye kahna hai ki ye Pahli (first) hai.. Aur ek baar yadi Juvisha hath lag gayi, fir pure bhrhmand me kewal Mahamahim ka jhanda lahrayega"…


Nischal:- Aisi kaun si shaktiyan hain Jivisha ke ander, jo tumlog usse chain se rahne nahi de rahe…


Jatin, Nischal ki baat sunkar jor jor se hanste huye kahne laga…. "Ek Viggo Malkia ke prem me hai… hahaha… Viggo ka dil bhi prithwi par dhadkne laga"…


Nischal:- Mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai ki main apne hath ka dawab tere gardan par dala aur tera gardan tamatar ki bhanti kachumar hokar ajib si haalat me hai.


Jatin:- Maf karna Viggo.. Jahan tak Malika ki shatiyon ki baat hai, uska namuna aap dekh chuke ho, Jab Malkia apni soyi ikcha shakti se aap par humla ki thi. (Jatin kuch pal khamosh rahkar Nischal ko gaur se dekhne ke baad)

"Jahan tak mujhe lagta hai, wo afwah sahi hai jisme ek Viggo ka jikr aata hai… Purn santulit.. shakti ke hote huye bhi shaktiyon ka prayog na karne wala… to wo cross mutant aap hi ho… Ek Viggo rani aur Aizem ke sabse surveer aur shanti priya shasak ka bacha… Nischal"..


Nischal:- Tere yahan ke school book me hai kya Viggo ka chepter, ya ek research subject hi Viggo ke upar rahta hai tumhare yahan… Ye batao Malkia ki itni shaktishali prajati ke bare me hume kaise pata nahi… inka itihas kya hai.. inke log kahan hai... Aur ye Malkia apne samaj me na paida hokar aise aam insano ke bich kahan se paida ho jati hai..


Jatin:- Iski jankari mujhe to kya pure Zoren me koi nahi bata sakta siway Mahamahim ke. Rijo tak ko iski puri jankari nahi hai. Upar se Malkia, Prithvi par basse, kamjor prajati ke yahan paida leti hai, jiski shaktiyan bahar aane se pahle hi hum Zoren ki seema tak pahuncha dete hain… Aisi shurat me Malkia ki jankari kahan se kisi anya grah par hogi….


Nischal:- "Ha ha ha… Teri Malkia, Prithvi par hai aur tu yahin ke mul niwasi ko kamjor bata raha hai. Sach me jitna suna tha, uss se kahin adhik gire huye prajati ke tum log ho… Yahan ki jalvayu kisi vardan se kam nahi.. yahan ki technology wakai kamal ki hai.. aur sabse kamal ke to yahan ke log hai… Lekin tu aur tere log nahi samjhenge.. bahut hi nich kism ke ho na"..

"Khair tu ye bata mere rahte Jivisha ko 2 din me le jane ki baat ho rahi thi … iski wajah…….."


Jatin:- Viggo, humara Rijo sabse khatrnak tukdi ke sath aa raha hai… aur uske sath kayi adrishi janwar kal raat tak yahan pahunch jayenge… Malkia ke pure pariwar ko mar'kar, sab uska roop lenge aur Malkia ko bharmakar apne sath le jaynge..


Nischal:- hahahaha… aur mere bare me kya yojna thi…


Jatin:- Viggo wo .. wo..


Nischal:- Kya wo..


Jatin:- wo kal aap ke doston ko marne ke liye samst sena toot paregi, jabtak aap udhar vyast rahenge… tabtak wo Malkia ko le jayenge…


"Hahahaha…. Ja jakar mere liye 1 bottol daru le aa aur apna mobile dete jana"… Jatin chala gaya yah kahte ki.. "bus aakhri bottol hai mere pass" aur mobile dete chala gaya…


Nischal, ne Nandni ko call lagaya, lekin iss'se pahle ki wo kuch bolta, Nandni usse ghar wapas na aane ka bol'kar call disconnet kar di. Idhar Jatin bhi apni aakhri bottol lakar Nischal ko bhent kar diya… Nischal puri bottol ek baar me samapt karte...

"Achhi yojna hai … lekin main kyon na aisa karun ki tumhare khatrnak tukdi ke pahunchte hi, main unpar humla kar dun aur sabka safaya ek sath kar dun"…..


Jatin:- Viggo wo humari khatrnak tukdi hai… uske samne tik nahi paoge..


Nischal:- "Chalo maan liya main tik nahi paunga, lekin yadi main aisa micro device bana kar, yahan ke prashashan ko de dun, jo tumhare micro practical ko orignal shape me dikha sake. Fir to tum.. tumhara wo kamjor sa adrishi janwar aur tumhara sare viman, unke najar me hoga…"

"Aukkad to mujhe tum logon ki pata hi hai… ek ladki par jhund me humla karte ho. Jab tum logon se akeli si ek ladki nahi sambhalti, fir tum inke latest hathiyar aur ache trained officier se kya ladoge re Gotiya.. Tu to lut jayega re Gotiya..


Jatin:- Hammm ! Iska matlab aap wo device bana chuke ho… Mujhe Ruko aur Suki ne Jaal Mahal ke vishay me bataya tha, yakin nahi hua.. ab samjh me aa raha hai ki unhone sahi kaha tha… Waise bhi pata to ab chal raha hai ki aap ek Viggo ho. Jahan tak mujhe lagta hai, aap prithvi par bhi apni jigyasa ke karan hi aaye ho"..


Nischal:- Pata nahi kyon tu mujhe pahle din se pasand hai. Tujh se abhi baat kiya, tera dimag bahut sharp hai.. iska matlab tera Mahamahim aur Rijo kafi buddhiman log hain, jo logon ko uske talent ke hisab se kaam saunpta hai… Ek chaalak shasak aur uske sath ek yogya mantri.. Kamal ka combo hai…


Jatin:- Haan Viggo..


Nischal:- Tu apni Malkia aur uski shaktiyon ko janta hai… Mere yani ek Viggo ke bare me bhi tu suna hai. Ab tu hum dono ki shakti se tulna karke andaza laga ki Jivisha ki shakti mujh se kitne guna jyada bhadi hogi..


Jatin hanste huye…. "Bahut chahne lage ho aap Malkia ko… Khair hume Malkia ki shakti ko dekhne ka kabhi mauka nahi mila.. to kya kahun main kis tarah ki shaktiyan hai. Bus jo sunta aa raha hun wo itna ki Malkia ke pass asim shaktiyan hoti hai. Unki ikchha shakti ke virudh koi tik nahi pata…

"Main tulna karne ki stithi me nahi hun.. kyonki ek to aap Viggo upar se aise cross mutant ho jiski shaktiyon ki kalpan hi ki ja sakti hai bus. Dekhne wala to kabhi bata bhi nahi sakta, kyonki wo jivit bhi nahi bacha hoga… Ek kaam karna Viggo, aap aur Malkia ek din aamne samne ki ladai ladna fir main Judge karke bataunga"..


Nischal:- Tu to bada hi close ho raha hai.. ladwa kar dobara meri pasli tudwane ka plan hai, ya mujhe marwa dene ka…
Writer sahab ki jai ho kya likha hai ab ese hi likhte rhe or hame apki writting skil ka jalwa dikhate rhe
 

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Nischal:- Tu to bada hi close ho raha hai.. ladva kar dobara meri pasli tudwane ka plan hai, ya mujhe marwa dene ka…


Jatin:- Aap ko khud kuch bhi andaza hi nahi tha ki Jivisha ke ander koi shakti bhi ho sakti hai.. ussi ka parinam tha wo pasli tootna… warna aap aam Viggo to nahi ho... Main jab aap se pahle din mila tha, mujhe laga bhi tha ki aap ek aam sahjade nahi ho sakte… lekin baat ko maine tul isliye nahi diya, kyonki aap ke bhai ya uske jasoos ne kabhi nahi bataya ki aap ek Viggo ho.. Kya hua tha wahan ke Viggo ke sath, aap aur aap ki maa pahchan kyon chhipaye hain..


Nischal:- Tu beta jitne mere sawal ke jawab na diye, uss se jyada sawal to mere bare me puchh liya… chutiye tu Zoren me baith kar Aizem ki afwah ache se yaad kiye hai, lekin sala tujhe apne grah ki ek bhi baat pata nahi..


Jatin:- Sala… Acha laga sunkar.. meri ek bahan hai "baby".. uss se jode banwa lo Viggo.. fir to aap hi wahan ke Mahamahim hoge..


Nischal:- sale nich .. tu chahta hai main teri tarah maans noch-noch kar khane wala banu..


Jatin:- Humara narbhakshi samuh nahi tha Viggo.. Maine to 2 mahine se koi shikar bhi nahi kiya, fir bhi jivit hun.. ye sab Mahamahim ki maya hai… Malkia ki puri shakti to unhi ke ander nihit hoti hai…


Nischal:- To kya tumlog bagawat nahi kar sakte apne Mahamahim se..


Jatin:- Mahamahim hai wo, uss se bagawat.. hahaha.. Aisa to khyal bhi shayad hi kisi kis ko aata hoga aur jise aata bhi hoga wo chupchap jakar atmhatya kar leta hoga... Kyonki Mahamahim ke darbar ki saza jhelne se acha hai aatmhatya karna…


Nischal:- Ek baat batao sala tumlogon ko pata kaise chalta hai ki yahi Malkia hai, aur usse fasne ke liye kya-kya tarike apnate ho… 12 Malkia ko le gaye ho to jara fasne ke tarike par bhi gaur farma le…


Jatin:- koi 15 ya 18 sal me ek yog banta hai.. Sabhi grahon ki ek vises stithi hoti hai aur tabhi Malkia ka janm hota hai… Malkia ka janm hua hai ye kewal Mahamahim ko pata hota hai. Mahamahim khud prithvi par aate hain… Unke ghar kisi sadhu ke vesh me jate hain aur kahte hain ki upyukt samay par yadi ladki ka vivah na hua aur uska kamurya ko bhang na kiya gaya to iske ander ki shakti sampurn vinash kar degi…


Nischal:- Kya baat kar raha hai.. Matlab Jivisha ki kamurya bhang aur udhar uski shakti gayi..


Jatin:- Kya Viggo, Inheritance power ka sex se kya lena dena hai… kayi baar to rashmon ke chakkar me kayi khoji ko yahin Malkia ke sath suhaagrat manani padi thi….


Nischal, Jatin ko khinch kar ek thappad marte huye…. "Sala ye shadi aur suhaagrat wali baat batani jaroori thi. Samjh to gaya tha main inheritance power. Tu aage bata…


Jatin, Nischal ke chehre ke bhaw ko dekh'kar hanste huye aage batana shuru kiya….

"Mahamahim apna kaam karke chale jate hain. Fir yahan humari 2 khoji team hai.. Ek Apini ki aur ek meri. Humara kaam hota hai, Malkia ki soyi ikchha shakti ko jagrit hone ke purv unhe yahan se Zoren ki seema tak pahunchana. 14-15 sal baad hume bataya jata hai ki Malkia kaun hai… Hum sabhi sambhawna par gaur karte hain aur jis-jis ladke se shadi ho sakti hai, usko badal diya jata hai… Dar ka mahol to gharwalon me pahle se rahta hai, isliye kuch samay baad kisi ek ladke se shadi ho gayi aur fir humara kaam aasan."

"Lekin eklauti Jivisha aisi thi, jiski umr lagbhag 21 ki hui, tab jakar uske ghar wale shadi ke liye jaage.. wo bhi tab jab humne apne shikar ko jaan bujh kar pune me fekna shuru kiya. Is ghatna se uske pitaji ko lagne laga ki anhoni ghatnayen shuru ho chuki hai… Upar se samsya ye bhi thi ki Jivisha kisi ladke ko pasand bhi nahi karti aur na hi uske pitaji kabhi charcha karte ki Jivisha ki shadi kis ladke se karni hai".

"Shadi ki baat clear hote hi hume ladke ki detail pata chal gayi thi, aur hum sari taiyarion ko pukhta karne ke baad, bus shadi khatm hone ka intzar kar rahe the. Humara kaam lagbhag ban chuka tha, lekin lagbhag aadhi shadi ke baad Malkia bhag gayi… shayad unki soyi ikchha shakti ne unhe aagah kiya hoga… uske baad kya hua wo to aap ko bhi pata hai Viggo.. Humari kismat me aap aa gaye .. aur mujhe ab lagta hai, wapas Zoren jana to dur ki baat hai.. jinda bachunga ya nahi uspar bhi shanka hai"..


Nischal:- Tere se baat karke laga ki tu utna bhi bura nahi hai lekin masoomo ko to mara hi hai.. ek hi baat kahunga… Kasak se dur ho ja aur apni jindgi bacha le… Tumlog ek aise apradh me samlipt ho, jisme koi mafi nahi milegi… Haan lekin yadi wada karo ki dobara Kasak ko apne moh jaal me nahi fasaoge, to main tumhe jivit jane dunga…


Jatin:- Maine Kasak ke liye moh jaal ka istamal nahi kiya tha Viggo, lekin jane do. Puri kosis karunga ki main ab Kasak ke najdik bhi na aaun. Lekin Viggo aapke dimag me chal kya raha hai… aapne device bana lee… humari tukdi ki information bhi nikal liye… Shayad aap yahan ke logon ki madad se abhi ke liye unhe wapas bhaga bhi do… lekin tab kya hoga jab Mahamahim aamne-samne ki ladai me honge…


Nischal:- "Tab tum apni Malkia ki shakti ko pahli baar apne aakhon se dekh paoge. Mehsus hoga Jivisha ke ander ki shaktiyan, jab wo Mahamahim se lad rahi hogi… Mujhe yah to yakin tha ki tumhe kitni jankari hogi Jivisha ke shakti ke bare me.. Lekin ummid thi ki iss shakti ke origin ka tumhe pata hoga"

"Khair koi nahi.. Mujhe pata hai ki Jivisha ke shakti ka origin ka kaise pata lagana hai aur kaise main Jivisha ko uski shaktiyon par kabu karna sikha sakta hun...


Jatin:- Aur aap ka pyar Viggo..


Nischal:- Shayad adhura hai... Khair samay kitna ho gaya Jatin wo to bata de…


Jatin:- Viggo 10.10 baj gaye.. waise ek varshon ki jigyasa hai jiske jawab ke liye main bahut vyakul hu… please sun lo..


Nischal:- Abe main tujhse jankari nikal raha hun ya tu mujh se…


Jatin:- "Bus yun hi ek jigyasa thi man me kahin dabi. Aaynek planet ke tabah hone ke baad, Viggo ka ek samuday jo khud ko Hayfa Viggo batata tha.. wo humare yahan migrant tha. Chhota sa samuh tha aur aapas me kafi pyar se rahte the.. Tab jo Mahamahim the Salvik, unka ek sainik hua karta tha Mittoso.. Mittoso ne badi hi chalaki se un chand mutthi bhar Hayfa Viggo ko apne sath milaya .. aur tab ke tatkalik Mahamahim aur Rijo ko usne Viggo ki madad se samapt kar diya…"

"Khair uss waqt humari seema bhi chhoti thi aur sainya bal bhi, kintu itna bhi kam nahi tha ki mahaj 100 log unhe dwast kar jaye. Lekin 100 Viggo ke samne koi nahi tika… Mittoso jo aaj ka Mahamahim hai. Usse Mahamahim banane me Viggo ka pura yogdan tha... Zoren ki puri tecnology ke janak wahi log hai... Mahamahim ek cross breed chahte the.. Viggo aur apna … lekin Viggo wo cross breed ke liye raji nahi huye, kyonki unke hisab se Mahamahim ne kewal unka istamal kiya tha apne bharm ke kshmta par, aur aise me unhe cross breed swikar nahi tha"..

"Wo Viggo chahte to Mahamahim ka badi aasani se takhta palat kar sakte the… naye generation ke Viggo iske liye taiyar bhi the, lekin unke purane generation ne Zoren ko chhodne ka faisla kar liya… Bechare… jis viman me sawar the ussi me malwa ho gaye"

"Aisa hi kuch humne Aizem aur Miyaka planet ka bhi suna tha.. wahan to Viggo ke 2 generation ke bich, aapas me hi matbhed itna badh gaya ki sabhi lad'kar mar gaye, lekin ek bhi cross breed sambhaw nahi ho paya.. Mujhe ye bata do.. aap logon ke pass kashmta hote huye bhi aap kyon nahi ladte.. aap ka itna bara samuday Aaynek se palayan hokar Zoren, Aizem, Miyaka, Yahan tak Luceto bhi gaye.. Chahte to in sabhi par Viggo ka hi Raj hota, fir bhi koi pagalpan ki bimari thi jo sab kuch chhod kar mar gaye"

"Marna hi tha to Aaynek jab tabah ho raha tha, wahin mar lete. Wahan se fir bhage kyon?"


Nischal:- Aur daru rakha hai kya yahan.. wo pilayega tab main jawab dunga iska…


Jatin daud kar daru le aaya… Nischal bade maze se aadha khambha gatakne ke baad thodi shwans liya… "Abe aise aakhen kyon faad rara hai"..


Jatin:- Viggo wo jawab..


Nischal:- Tu pahle time bata…


Jatin:- 10.20…


Nischal:- Tune jo sawal puchna na Jatin, uska jawab bhi tere baton aur teri kahani me hai… thoda sochega to mere khyal se pata chal jayega.. Thik hai ab main ja raha hun... Kasak ko ghar bhi chhodna hoga..


Jatin:- Acha suno to bhai .. 2 min ruk to jao….. ek baat aur janne ki jigyasa hai… waise to sanka mujhe ussi ka ho raha hai, lekin fir bhi aapke muh se sun lun to.. aap kaun se varn ke Viggo ho..


Nischal:- wahi jo tu samjh raha hai… Viggo Sigma .. Alpha, unidentified first class..


Jatin hairani se Nischal ko dekhne laga… aur Nischal bade aaram se bachi hui bottol khali karne laga… jaise hi Nischal ki bottol khali hui…. "Abe pagal fir aise ghur raha hai. Ja jakar so ja"


Jatin:- Bhai ek request hai…


Nischal:- bol sun raha hun…


Jatin :- Yadi Malkia se baat nahi bani to kya aap meri bahan ko chun sakte ho…


Nischal uski ore dekhte huye hasne laga…. "Tera Viggo puran me kya jawab hai iske bare me jara bata"….


Jatin:- Ek Jindgi Aur Ek partner… Itihas nahi aisa ki ek jindgi me kisi Viggo ne 2 partner banaye ho. Shayad yahi ek badi wajah hai ki Viggo kabhi kisi dusre samuday me cross breed ke liye taiyar nahi hote, kyonki wahan partner badlna samanya si ghatna hoti hai, jabki ek Viggo ne kisi ko pasand kiya to fir uske baad koi dusra na to usse chhal se jit sakta hai na bal se… marna pasand karte hain lekin partner badal jaye, aisa khyalon me bhi nahi hota…


Nischal:- Shabash.... Ab tu ye bata tujhe itni jankari kaise Viggo ke bare me..


Jatin:- Mera 2rd generation pariwar se Rijo rahe hai mere ghar ek sadsya. Ussi ne Viggo ko Zoren par basaya tha.
Unhi ki kahani sunte hum bade huye hain... Aur unki sabhi kahani me Viggo hi the.…


"Thik hai Jatin ab main ja raha.. ab teri soorat dekh kar bore ho gaya… jabtak Jivisha ko na dekhun chain na milega. Baki tu mera sandesh Rijo tak pahuncha dena ki maine parso sham ke waqt, baatchit ka prastaw rakha hai, aur main khud akele aaunga baatchit karne. Sath me mere device ke bare me bhi sangyan dena, jise maine ab tak kisi manav ko nahi diya hai… Ek aur baat, Kasak se dur rah, teri lambi umr hogi"…


Nischal, Kasak ko utha'kar wahan se le gaya aur sidha uske kamre me lita diya. Jivisha ko bahut dhundha lekin wo apne kamre me nahi thi... Dekhne ko vyakul man usse hall me taak- jhank karne par majboor kar raha tha..


Nichal ne jab hall me dekha, tab uske chehre ki khili muskaan byan jar rahi thi ki wo Jivisha ko dekh'kar kitna khush hai, lekin ye matr ek chhanik khushi thi… kyonki hall me sabhi pariwar ke log khushiyan mana rahe the… karan Jivisha ne Shresh ke sath shadi ke liye haan kar di thi…


Nischal ko ek pal me hi jaise laga ho ki uski sari khushiyan bikhar gayi ho. Gum ye nahi tha ki Jivisha ne ek aise aadmi ko chuna, jo ek behrupiya tha aur uska marna to tay tha… dukh to iss baat ka tha ki Jivisha bhi iss shadi ke liye raji thi. Mayus hi wo lauta aur khamoshi ke sath apne bistar par jakar let gaya…



Idhar Nandni



Nischal Apini ko uske bhadkane ki saja dene baad, badi teji se bahar nikal raha tha aur uske piche-piche Nandni bhi bahar nikli. Jaise hi wo mukhya dwar se bahar nikli uske paun ke niche Nischal ka mobile gira aur wahan Nischal ka koi pata bhi nahi tha...


Nandni mobile utha'kar bhadkti hui jor-jor se kahne lagi… "Aa tu wapas fir batati hun. Jab pachti nahi hai to pi kyon leta hai kamina… Nischal.. Nischal"..


"Wo nahi hai yahan, Kyon chilla rahi ho"… Ansh pichhe se kahndhe par hath rakhte huye kahne laga...


Nandni:- Batao pagalpan ki had hoti hai.. ek to public place par jhagra karta hai, upar se attitude dekho bhai sahab ke.. Paun me mobile fek kar bhag gaya hai… Iski to main puri khabar lungi…
 
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Nandni:- Batao pagalpan ki had hoti hai.. ek to public place par jhagra karta hai upar se attitude dekho bhai sahab ke.. Paun me mobile fek kar bhag gaya hai… Iski to main puri khabar lungi…


Ansh:- Lekin Nandu usne Shresh se jhagra kab kiya tha..


Nandni:- Jab wo Shresh ke sath jhagra kar raha tha, tab kya kisi ladki ko tar rahe the?


Ansh:- Usne Shresh se jhagra nahi kiya tha.. balki Shresh ko to usne gala pakad kar uthaya aur dharam se bar counter par patak diya… yahan dhyan dene wali kuch baaten hain.. pahli baat to ye ki Nischal ne ek hath se Shresh ka gala pakda tha aur thik uss waqt dusre hath me uske wine ki glass thi … dusra paun jamin me touch nahi kar rahe the.. teesra wo apni jagah se bina hile ye karnama kar chuka tha…


Nandni, Ansh ko ghurti hui… "Tumhe tv serial ki bimari lagi hai kya, jo ek saas ki tarah behave kar rahe ho aur bahu ki har bariki ko janch-partal me lage ho"..


Ansh:- Pagal ho gayi ho tum Nandu.. Wo koi insan nahi lagta.. mujhe to koi alian lagta hai.. dekhi nahi bina koi pakad banaye kaise usse utha kar patak diya..


Nandni:- Mere ander bhi ek alian wali power hai, jante ho kya?


Ansh:- Kya?


Nandni:- Apne aakhon ke ishare se tumhe raat bhar bahar sula sakti hun.. dekhna pasand karoge kya… pata nahi tumhare dimag me ye sab bakwas baaten aati kahan se hai…


Ansh:- lekin Nandu..


Nandni:- ekdum chup, yadi uss bare me ek shabd bhi nikale to tumhe alian banakar space ship me dalwa dungi…


Ansh ki baat par puri tarah se naraj hokar, Nandni, Ansh ko akele chhod'kar, wahan se car lekar nikal gayi. Ansh bhi uske pichhe-pichhe bhaga lekin Nandni usse ansuni karke nikal gayi…


Piche se taxi lekar Ansh bhi flat pahuncha… "Kya bachpana hai yaar, aise naraj hokar chali aayi"…


Nandni, apne kapde nikalti… "Tum analysis karte raho ki kaun alian hai aur kaun insan"…


Ansh, Nandni ka hath pakad kar uske kadmo me baith'te… "Sorry baba, ab mujhe jo laga wahi to maine kaha tumse.. Ab main tumse nahi share karunga to kis se karunga…


"Isse baat share karna nahi kahte hain Ansh. Baat mazak ki ho to hansi me kahin jati hai, lekin tum jis tone me kah rahe the usse yakin ke sath shaq hona kahta hain".... Nandni apni baat kahti hui, bijli ka bilkul halka jhatka Ansh ko de di.. Ansh jhatke se apna hath khincha aur hairan hokar dekhne laga ki ye jhatka kahan se laga..


Ansh jabtak jhatke aur aashraya se uabarta, tabtak Nandni apne upar kapde dal'kar kitchen me pahunch chuki thi… Ansh bhi Nandni ke piche-piche kitchen tak aaya, lekin Nandni usse jakar hall me baithkar tv dekhne bol di.


Takriban ghante bhar baad Nandni pasine se tar hoti hui kitchen se nikli… tabhi siti ke awaz ke sath… "Pasine me naha'kar aur bhi namkin ho gayi ho"… Nandni ko apne kano par yakin nahi hua tha.. wo ander he ander hanti hui khud se hi kahne lagi… "What… Doctor ne comment kiya.. ye kab se sudhar gaya"..


Baharhaal Nandni bika koi pratikriya diye sidhe jakar bathroom me ghus gayi. Nandni jaise hi ander kamre me gayi , thik ussi waqt Ansh, mukhya darwaja band karke sidha bathroom me ghus gaya… tabhi ek aur siti ki awaz aur… "gore badan par ye kali bra kayamat lag rahi hai"..


Nandni:- Chhi aisi baton ka koi tuk bhi banta hai kya… aur tum bathroom me kya kar rahe ho... Nischal aa jayega kabhi bhi..


Ansh:- Kaise aayega, maine mukhya dwar band kar diya hai..


Nandni:- To uske pass hamesa key hoti hai ek... Samjhe…


Ansh:- What, uske pass key hai.. koi nahi main yahan ka gate band kar'ke aata hun..


Nandni apne bache kapde utar'ti hui shawar chalayi… "uske pass mere room ki key bhi hai"..


Ansh… What ??? Iss room ki key..


Nandni:- Haan iss room ki key…


Ansh:- Lekin kyon???


Nandni:- Bharosa hai isliye... Kyon jaisi kya baat hai..


Ansh:- Aur kabhi hum dono sath huye exactly jaise abhi tum ho to…


Nandni:- Litrally ye tumhari query hai?


Ansh thoda gussa hote huye… "bhadosa, dosti aur close hone ke naam par kya tum kuch bhi karogi"..


Nandni, Ansh ki baat par thodi bhadki jaroor thi lekin shanti se uski stithi ko aakalan karne ke baad, aaram se puchhne lagi…. "Hmmmm ! Yadi mere mammi papa aa gaye aur hum dono ander huye fir kya hoga Ansh..


Ansh:- Wo to mammi papa hai yaar … wo honge to hum aisa karenge hi kyon ..


Nandni:- Aur Nischal hoga to koi fark nahi padega … manate raho rangraliya…


Ansh:- Haan to kisne kaha tha usse sath rakhne ke liye… Humari sari privacy chali gayi..


Nandni:- U know mr Ansh .. tumhe insecurity feel ho rahi hai. Nischal hai isliye tum ho iss ghar me Ansh, warna main yahan akeli hi thik thi..


Ansh:- Ye kuch jyada nahi ho raha hai kya?


Nandni:- Tum itna chidh kyon rahe ho Ansh. Main to aaram se baat kar rahi hun na... Ek baat batao kya humari shadi ho gayi Ansh..


Ansh:- Aaj na kal to ho hi jani hai..


Nandni:- Aur agar main abhi break up kar lun fir…


Ansh:- Yahi to hai tum ladkiyon me, kuch bhi ho to break up kar lo… lekin apni galti mat mano..


"Main tumse na to chidh kar puchh rahi hun aur na hi mera tone high hai. Ek sawal puchhi jawab do"… Nandni apna badan ko tauliye se pochhti hui puchne lagi…


Ansh:- Mujhe nahi pata… yadii break up hua to main ji nahi paunga…


Nandni:- wo to tumhara side hua… aur mere sath jo sex kiye … wo to bina relation ke maze lekar nikal jana hi hua na…


Ansh:- Hadd bewakoof ho tum Nandni… relation hai tab to hum aage badhe na… ek Nischal naam ke complication ke karan yadi tum break up karti ho, aur fir ye sawal puchhti ho to kahan tak jayaj hai…


Nandni, apne upar kapde dal chuki thi.. Ansh ko apne pass bulayi aur usse bistar par bitha'kar uske balon ko bikherti hui kahne lagi….


"Ansh pyar to bahut karte ho tum mujhse lekin fir bhi relation insecure hai"….. "Nahi aisi baat nahi hai Nandu, wo to bus Nischal ko lekar"…. "Now let me finish first" .


Nandni:- "Ek insecure relation, fir wajah chahe jo bhi rahe. Aaj wajah Nischal hai to kal Jivisha ho sakti hai. Fir ye bhi ho sakta hai ki tum apne hospital me pura samay do, aur tumhare pass aaj ke itna kal samay na ho… To break up ki wajah to kuch bhi ho sakti hai na baby… Center kewal Nischal hi kyon?"..

"To ek insecure relation me, main tumhare secure pyar ko feel karti, jab main secure ho sakti hun… Fir to Nischal ke sath mera complete relation hai. Purn viswas samjhte ho. Ruko samjhati hun kitna viswas hai. Main yadi achet awastha mein, complete nude bhi hoti hun to bhi uski najar nahi fisal sakti hai. Tane de dega meri haalat par openly.. ho sakta hai mujhe tease bhi kar de, lekin bhadosa itna hai ki uska meri ore dekhna, mujhe incesure nahi kar sakta."

Bhadose ka bahut bada aur shayad ghatiya example diya hai tumhe…. Shayad thoda asamajik example tha, lekin Nischal ke prati mere viswas ki kahani tum nahi samjh sakte aur na ye samjh sakte ho ki hum me dosti ke alawa koi relation ki feeling tak nahi. Waqt parne par mere liye wo maa bhi hai, baap bhi hai.. bhai bhi hai .. aur un sab se kahin badh'kar ek sacha dost hai"..

"Fir tum kaise soch sakte ho ki main bina shadi ke husband and wife wali privacy kar dun aur usse apne kamre me aane se mana kar dun"..


Ansh:- I am sorry Nandu..


Nandni:- Kamal hai Ansh, yadi mere mammi papa yahan honge to tab tum kyon mere sath romance karoge.. kyonki wo mere blood relation hai, aur abhi hum unmarried. Humari shadi bhi hui hoti, to bhi hum kuch aise rahte jaise unhe kuch pata na chale… lekin baat agar Nischal ki ho to tumhare dimag me sirf itna hi hota, ek anjaan ladka yahan kya kar raha hai…


Ansh, sharminda hote… "Baby I am sorry"


Nandni:- Tumhre dimag ke channel me to yahi chalta hoga na Nandni apne ghar ke kapde aise pahnti hogi, waise pahnati hogi.. pata na uss ladke ki najar hamesa kahan rahti hogi… lekin wahi yahan mera bhai ya baap hota, to Ansh babu ko koi fikr nahi hoti, kyonki ek ladki ka kapda pahn'na relation par depend karta hai… Bhai baap hoga to ache se kapde pahnegi … Aur yadi koi dost hoga jispar pura badhosa hai… oh sorry chhota sa correction… Flat me Nandni ke sath koi anjaan ladka ho to Nandni badan dikhati firegi…


Ansh, uth'kar Nandni ke pass baith'te huye usse side se pakad kar…. "Hey cutieeee… main apni baton ke liye behad sharminda hun… Gadha hun main jo gusse me kuch bhi kah gaya"…


Nandni:- Gusse me nahi nikla hai Ansh, jo khyal dimag me chalte hain, wahi juban par aa gayi tumhare... Kamal hai na Ansh, baap aur bhai apni kuwari beti ya bahan ke kamre me aa jaye to koi objection nahi, lekin Nischal hota kaun hai… Abhi nikal do usko. Tum to abtak humare physical relation ke bare me bhi soch chuke ho... My friend Nischal … Main tumse abhi baat karna chahti hun … please kisi tarah mujhse contact karo… just contact me any how….


Ansh:- Nandu main bahut sharminda hun…


Nandni:- Khana khao Ansh.. thanda ho jayega...


Abhi 10 minute bhi nahi huye the… Ek unknown number se ghanti bajne lagi. Nandni ki aakhen bhar aayi aur wo call utha'kar bus "hello" ki awaz ka intzar karne lagi. Nandni ko jaise hi pata chala dusri ore se Nischal hai...... "Nischal tumhe yahan aane ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.. tum ab apna kahin aur intzam dekh lo…"


Nandni, Nischal se baat karke call disconnet kar di aur apne kamre ko band karke lagatar roye ja rahi thi. Ansh darwaje par khada knock karne laga, lekin kafi der tak knock karne ke baad bhi jab Nandni ne koi jawab nahi diya tab Ansh khud ki baton par guilt feel karte, wo Nischal ko dhundhne ke liye Sawalker ki madad lene chala gaya.


Sawalker thane me nahi tha. Isliye uss se milne ke liye wo uske ghar chala gaya… Sawalker apni patni jyoti ke sath baithkar fursat ke pal bant raha tha aur dono pyar se ek dusre se baaten kar rahe the…


Tabhi unke ghar ke darwaje ki ghanti baji… "Are doctor sahab aap.. aaeye ander aaeye"…


Jyoti, Ansh ko dekhti hui puchhne lagi, "ye kaun hai".. Sawalker bhi uska parichay dete huye Ansh ke vishay me sari jankari de diya. Ek chhote parichay ke baad Sawalker, Ansh se uske aane ka karan puchhne laga…

Ansh kya kahe aur kya nahi… Dabe huye shabdon me bus itna kaha ki kuch gadbad ho gayi hai aur Nandni ne Nischal ko flat par wapas aane se mana kar diya…


Jyoti jise mamle ke bare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha.… "Doctor sahab humare shadi ko 12 sal ho gaye hain.. aur mera pati ek police wala hai. Police wala ka matlab samjhte ho aap. Main batati hun, kisi par yakin nahi karna. Aap ke pass baitha hai mera pati, puchh lo ki yadi Nandni ke jagah wo humare sath rahta to wo kya sochta"..


Sawalker:- Nischal ke case me sochna jaisa to kuch bhi hai hi nahi. Wo to dwapar yug ka koi balak lagta hai jiski bhasha aur najar dono me koi chhal nahi... Pahle din wo raat ke 2 baje mujhe sadak par mila tha deewano ki tarah bhatkte.. bus uss waqt usse 2 line suna tha aur samjh gaya sab kuch uske bare me..


Jyoti:- Itne salon me ek wahi hai jise main ghar me aana allowed nahi ki, balki uske yahan aane ya jane se koi fark hi nahi parna hai. Aisa lagta hai pariwar me ek pyara sadsya ne entry le lee hai. Bus iss piyaakad ne uss bache ko bigad diya hai..


Ansh:- Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi. Nandni ne khana bhi nahi khaya aur darwaje lagakar soyi hai..


Jyoti:- Soyi nahi hogi ro rahi hogi. Jyada socho nahi Ansh, yah ek aam ghatna hai… dampatti jivan me aisi samsya to hote rahti hai… Lekin riston ke bich jhagra aur pyar hi rakhna .. nafrat aur shaq nahi. Ab jao tum Nandni ko manao, Nischal ko bura lagega to bhi wo flat wapas aayega.. aur bura nahi lagega to bhi wo flat wapas aayega…


Ansh:- Bura laga hoga to kyon aayega wo wapas..


Sawaker:- Kyonki wo sacha dost hai, usse samjh me aa gaya hoga ki Nandni gusse me hogi, isliye uss se jhagra karega usse 4 baten sunayega, lekin wapas aayega…


Sawalker aur Jyoti se milne ke Ansh ko apne dil ka bojh kuch halka sa lagne laga… wah flat wapas gaya, lagbhag 1 ghante lage honge usse khade-kahde darwaje par tab kahin jakar Nandni ne darwaja khola…
 
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Mast update yha bhi jagdha karva diya ab jaldi se mana lo Dr babu kahi aisa na ho ki aap ka role kat karde nainu sarkar
 

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Su-swagatam :welcome1:.. ab main jyada to nahi kah sakta aap ke anubhaw ke upar .. siway itna ki ...

Thoda risk hai .. lekin ye ishq hai..

Ummid hai jadl se jald aap kahani par pratikriya den..

:thanks: for your beautiful response... keep reading and keep commenting :yo: :rock: :yay: :dj: ...
Bilkul nain bhai, ek ek kar ke sare update padhuga. Uske baad apne vichaar prastut karuga,,,,:dost:
 

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Nishchal ne to superman ki tarah apini ko pachhada :D ye wala scene sahi laga. Ab to jivisha ke andar wali takat ko dekhna hai ki kya hoga jab wo purn ichchha shakti ka istemal karegi kisi par.
 
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