Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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[Aakash.]

Seeing Jivisha sad, the flowers also stopped blooming, you have confused that innocent, I wish everything is good. Jivisha looks very cute in the disco, just like the moon. It is heartfelt to see them together and there is also a fear in the mind that what will happen next?
I knew something bad would happen at the disco, I feel so bad. It is very important to take revenge on Apini, Josefer, Jatin, all these people. This has been done intentionally. Can't understand what to say. All the questions asked by Nischal were correct, I think Nischal should have killed Jatin. We only have 2 days and everything has to be done in these two days. Tell me the plan of Nishchal, I am very restless. And what is Viggo, race or species.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[rgcrazyboy]

o tere yaha to namak mirchi dal kar updates diye jaa rahai hai.
pahale jo adhura chhoda tha usko pura kiya jaa raha hai

 

[Aakash.]

It was now understood that Mahamahim had come to Jivisha's house that day and told Jivisha's parents. I understood everything about the enemy side, but how did Jatin tell the truth so easily, maybe Jatin is lying. Nischal wants to have a meeting with Rajio, well I think we are not yet fully aware of Nischal. To be honest, I feel very bad, I am against this decision of Jivisha.
Ansh cares about Nandni, he should not do it. By the way, it is very important to trust each other. Nandani is very angry...?
Why are all the couples fighting?
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[sorbobhuk]

Jabardast update hai bhai...... Nischal ke sath apini jhagda kiya or kasak ko ulta sidha samjha diya jatin ne......or jatin ka interview achhe se liya nischal.....
Or jivisha kise shresh ko haa keh di......o
Or ansh or nandu k jhagda ho geya apash me...or sawalkar ke pash pouch geya or flat me jane ke liye bola....or abki bar nandini ne darwaja khol diya.....
Waiting for next update

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:- 12​

Uday fir wahan se nikal gaya, aur jate-jate kahta gaya..... "Main aap ke yahan se nikalne ki vaywastha karwata hun. Mej par kuch fruites aur pani ki bottol rakhi hai. Jaroorat lage to kha-pi lena. Aur yahan se bahar nikalne ki kosis bhi mat karna warna apne sath hone wali ghatnao ke liye tum khud jimmedar ho"....

Uday itna bol kar nikal gaya aur Sweksha dar ke mare pura din ussi ek chhote se kamre me dubki rahi. Jaise-jaise din dhal raha tha waise-waise thand bhi badh rahi thi. Sweksha ne pahle ek, fir do aur jab nahi bardast hua to Uday ke garam kapdey bhi pahan li.


Thand kafi thi, itna pahn'ne ke baad bhi kap-kapi si lag he rahi thi. Saam ke takriban 6:30 baj gaye the. Ek to jungle ka ilaka jahan din me bhi saam ke waqt jaisa lagta hai, aur saam ko to kali ghani andheri raat jaisa maloom par raha tha.


Sweksha bistar me dubki leti hui thi tabhi tourch ki raushni uss kamre me aayi. Wo uth kar dhime se puchhi.... "Kaun, Uday ji hain"


Uday "haan" bolta hua lamp jala diya. Kamre me jab raushni hui tab Sweksha ke jaan me jaan aayi.... Sweksha roni si awaz me kahne lagi.... "Uday ji joron ki bhukh lagi hai"


Uday.... Aap veg ho ya non-veg..


Sweksha.... Main sab kuch kha leti hun, bas aap jaldi se kuch khane ki vaywastha kar do...


Uday usse aadhe ghantey rukne ka bol kar, bahar chala gaya. Aur jaldi se aag par mans ko bhun kar, apne aur Sweksha ke liye paka kar le aaya... Swekha uss mans ko khate he kahne lagi.... "Ummmm, kafi yammi aur tasty hai. Aap to bahut achha khana paka lete hain Uday ji"


Uday... Ji sukriya...


Mahol ko garam karne ke liye Uday ne wahan thodi si aag jalayi aur aag ke niche baith kar rum pine laga. Sweksha usse apne samne rum pite dekh thoda asahaj mehsus karne lagi. Raat ka andhera aur ek chhote se kamre me akela ladka.


"Uday ji aap ye kya kar rahe hain".. Sweksha ghighyati si awaz mein puchne lagi…


Uday:- Tum ek jawan ladki, andhere junglon me ekdum akeli. Main ek ranger jo kabhi-kabhi insano ko dekhta hun..


Sweksha, lagbhag mimyati hui… "Uday ji.. aap ye kya kah rahe hai"..


Uday:- Tum itni khubsurat ho. Tumhari jaan bachayi hai, mehnatana to lena banta hai na..


Sweksha:- Sir aap to bahut sajjan purush lagte hai. Ek ashay ladki ke sath aap aisa karoge…


Uday uski baat par jod-jod se hanste huye kahne laga…. "Dariye nahi main bus mazak kar raha tha. Aap mere sare kapdey pahni hain. Thand se bachne ka koi upay nahi kiya to subah tak main jam jaunga.


Sweksha, Uday ki baat par sharminda hoti bistar par let gayi. Uske let'te hi Uday uske paun ke pass aaya aur moch wali paun me kuch jadi-buti ki lep lagakar uspar pattiyan laga diya.


Thodi hi der me Sweksha gahri nind me thi aur subah jab uski nind khuli, to ek khubsoorat subah ki surwat ho rahi thi. Chudiyon ke chahchahane ki awaz, kuch khubsoorat Jungli janwar aas-pass the jinke sath Uday khel raha tha.


Sweksha dande ke sahare chalkar bahar aayi… "good morning"


"Uth gayi aap, ek good news hai, kal subah tak machanic pahunch jayega, aap kal tak apne group ke sath hongi"… Uday janwaron ko apne hath se khilate huye kahne laga.


Sweksha:- Ji shukriya. Waise aap kitne salon se yahan hain…


Uday:- Main 8 sal se hun…


Sweksha:- Aur aap ka pariwar…


Uday:- Up me hain, 6-7 mahine me 2-4 din ki chutti me chala jata hun.


Sweksha:- Kafi tough life hai aap ki bhi. Aap ki patni to intzar me rahti hongi sada.


Uday, Sweksha ki baat par jod se hanste huye apne kaam mein laga raha.


Sweksha:- Kya hua maine kuch galat bol di kya..


Uday uski ore palta aur Sweksha se puchne laga…. "Kya tum mujh se shadi karogi"


Sweksha:- Kya ?


Uday:- Wahi jo tumne suna… kya tum mujhse shadi karogi…


Sweksha:- Ye aap kya puch rahe hai?


Uday:- Maaf kijiyega madam, wo kya hai na jaise shadi ke naam par aap ka dimag shunn par gaya, thik usi tarah baki ladki ka bhi haal tha. Sabko jungle ghumna hi pasand hota hai, jungle me rahna nahi. So, ab to shadi ka khyal bhi nahi aata.


Sweksha:- Oh sorry… Mujhe itna personal nahi hona chahiye tha.


Uday:- Matlab tum meri bebasi par aisi pratikriya de rahi ho.


Sweksha:- Kya Uday ji, aap to taunt karne lag gaye. By the way washroom kahan hai. I need badly..


Uday:- Wo bhi kafi badly condition me hai.. aaiye mere sath..


Sweksha ne jab ander ka haal dekha to "wayak-waiyak".. karti wahan se bhagi…. "Uday ji aise haal me aap kaise jite hain"..


Uday:- Meri chhod dijiye, main to maze se kat leta hun yahan. Apna socho, tum kya karogi.


Sweksha:- Uday ji main wahan nahi jaungi…


Uday ne fir jungle ki puri kahani use samjha diya. Yahan jarooraton par kaise manage kiya jata tha. High society me pali badhi Sweksha jungle ke niyam ko hi apnakar sare kaam ki.


Anth me usne nahane ki jid pakad li, lekin Uday usse mana karta raha, ki yahan jungle me uska yun akela rahna surakhit nahi, isliye kal jab wo apne safe house pahunch jaye, fir baki sare kaam kare. Lekin kal ki ghatna se wo khud me kafi ganda sa mehsus kar rahi thi, aur isi wajah se wo jid par adi rahi.


Anth mein Uday usse jhil ke pass lekar gaya. Wahan ka pani dekhkar to Sweksha uss jhil me nahane ke liye betab ho gayi. Aaj tak aisa najara kewal usne filmon me hi dekha tha.


Sweksha apne kapde utar kar apne upar chadar ko bandhi aur jhil me utar gayi. Pani mein utarte hi Sweksha ka mann bilkul prashnn ho gaya. Pani ke ander jate hi Sweksha ne apne upar se wo chadar bhi hata li aur halke gungune pani ka pura aanand lene lagi.


Lagbhag aadhe ghante ho gaye the usse jhil mein gaye aur wo bahar aane ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Uday dur se hi chillaya… "O madam ji, yahan ke sher ache tairak bhi hote hain, kyon daawat de rahi hain usse. Bahar nikal aao"


Sweksha:- Bas thodi der aur Uday ji.. yahan pani me maza aa raha hai.


Takriban ghantey bhar nahane ke baad Sweksha punah wo chadar apne upar dalkar bahar nikli. Chadar patli, aur bhingne ke karan wo bilkul pardarshi ho chuki thi. Uska khubsurat badan ke puri banawt us bhinge chadar se saaf pata chal raha tha.


Pani se bahar aate hi, Sweksha ek baar fir se thand ke mare kanpne lagi aur jaldi se dusri sukhi chadar apne upar dalne lagi… itne me hi tej gurrahat ki awaz Sweksha ke bilkul karib se aayi, jise Uday ne bhi suna.


Uday dur se hi dummy firing karte huye Sweksha ki taraf bahaga. Wahan jab pahuncha, tab Sweksha lagbhag ardh nandn, niche jamin par dar se baithi thi. Uday apne kartvya ka nirvahan karte huye sher ke samne khada tha.


Iss se pahle ki wo firing karta, sher apne shikar ke ore chhlang laga chuka tha, jiske bich ab Uday khada tha. Sher ke jabre me Uday ka bayan hath tha. Dayen hath se Uday ne uske sir par dummy bullet mari. Bullet lagte hi sher wahan se bhaag gaya, aur Sweksha utha kar Uday se chipak gayi.


Thodi der use lage shant hone me. Jab wo shant hokar khud ki haalat dekhi tab usne turant apne upar kapda dala.. idhar jabtak Uday apni bhawnao ko dabaye, idhar-udhar dhyan diye huye tha.


Kuch hi der me dono ghar ke ander the. Uday ne raat me hi uske kapdon ko saf karke, aag par sukha diya tha. Sweksha un kapdon ko lekar kamre ke dusre hisse mein chali gayi aur Uday apne forehand ke upar se, ladki ki majboot chadar ko hata kar ander huye nukshan par marham laga raha tha.



Jabron ke dawav ke karan haddi me crack aa gaya tha aur forehand me sujan tha. Uday unpar pattiyan laga hi raha tha ki Sweksha wahan aakar puchhne lagi…. "Uday ji sher ne aap ke upar itne najdik se humla kiya, aap ko dar nahi laga".


Uday:- Main dar gaya hota to pata chalta humdono uske pariwar ka aaj lunch hote…. Aahhhh .. ye hath..


Uday thode dard me bola.. Sweksha uski hath dekhkar chaunkti hui puchne lagi…. "Aap ke hath ko kya hua, ye to kafi suj gaya hai. Ye hua kaise…"


Uday:- Sher aap ki gardan par jhaptne wala tha, maine apna hath aage kar diya. Inse niptane ke liye hum ye aksar karte hain. Bus kabhi-kabhi, kisi gussaye sher ka jabra jab pura dawav banata hai, tab kuch crak hath me aa jate hai.


Sweksha:- Aap ko itna dard hua hoga, lekin aap chillaye kyun nahi?


Uday:- Aap to dar me thi, lekin mujh jaise sukhe insan ke pass us waqt najara hi aisa chal raha tha, ki main kisi aur mood me tha us waqt…


Sweksha uski baton ko sunkar thoda muskurayi aur baat ko badalte huye, kuch aur baton par dono ke bich charcha hone lagi. Sweksha kafi prabhawit dikh rahi thi aur Uday ki haalat par kuch taras bhi aane laga tha… Ek insan jungle ke is mahol me bhi apna pura dhairya banaye huye tha, jabki uske pass kayi mauke the.

Bahut umda update hai bandhu

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-13​

Sweksha uski baton ko sunkar thoda muskurayi aur baat ko badalte huye, kuch aur baton par dono ke bich charcha hone lagi. Sweksha kafi prabhawit dikh rahi thi aur Uday ki haalat par kuch taras bhi aane laga tha… Ek insan jungle ke is mahol me bhi apna pura dhairya banaye huye tha, jabki uske pass kayi mauke the.


Raat ka waqt tha aur Uday fir aaj apni vaywastha ke sath jamin par letne ki taiyari karne laga. Niche aag jali hui thi. Wahin jamin par pual ka mota dher bichha tha, uske upar bans aur bans ke upar fir moti pual.


Uday wahin baith kar apna rum pi raha tha aur bina Sweksha ke ore dekhe, apna kaam karta raha. Sweksha uski haalat dekh kar thoda muskurayi, aur shararati iradon ke sath uske karib aakar baith gayi.


Uday:- Aap soyi nahi…


Sweksha:- Nind nahi aa rahi, to sochi aap se thodi baten hi ho jaye, waise bhi subah jana hi hai fir kabhi mulakat ho ya na ho.


Uday:- Hammm !! Ye bhi acha hai.…


Sweksha uske thoda aur karib aakar baith'ti hui… "aap apna hath dikhaiye…"


Sweksha uske hath ki chot ko dekhne lagi aur Uday aschrya se Sweksha ko dekhne laga. Sweksha uska hath dekhti-dekhti dono ki najre mili. Uday ko apne ore dekhte Sweksha muskurati hui usse dekhne lagi..


Uday apni najre churate, idhar-udhar dekhte huye kahne laga… "Aap ko so jana chahiye".... Lekin Sweksha uski baten ansuni karke, uske chehre ko apne ore ghumayi, dono ki najren ek dusre se takra rahi thi aur Sweksha apne hont aage badha kar uske hont se hont laga kar chumne lagi.


Uday jaise tilmila gaya. Uss se aur jyada khud ko rok pana ab sambhaw nahi tha. Wo bhi pura sath dete huye uske hont ko chusne laga. Apna muh khol kar apna pura jibh Sweksha ke muh ke ander dal diya aur bina ruke chumte aur chuste chala gaya.


Sweksha kiss ko todti hui khadi hui aur wahan se uth kar bhag gayi.. usse yun aise bhagte dekh Uday mayus ho gaya aur kamre ke usi ore hasrat bhadi najron se dekhne laga, jis ore Sweksha bhagi thi. Abhi kuch hi der huye the, Sweksha fir wapas najar aayi. Ek matr patli si ek ujali shirt pahne jiske niche kuch nahi tha.


Uske stan ke pura aakar shirt ke upar se dikh rahe the aur nipple ki ubhar kuch jyada madak lag rahi thi. Jangho tak aati hui shirt ke niche, uski moti safed chikni tang itna sexy lag rahi thi, ki Uday ab apna aapa khote ja raha tha. Uday khada hokar teji se uske pass pahuncha aur Sweksha ko gode me uthakar, uske hont ko chuste huye pual ke upar lita diya aur shirt ke upar se uske stan par muh lagate usse chusne aur katne laga.


Badan par naam matr ka kapda hone se thand kanpkapi de rahi thi aur Uday ka passion Sweksha ke ander ki aag bhadka raha tha. Uday itne paglon ki tarah stan ko shirt ke upar se aise chuse ja raha tha, ki shirt puri bhing kar pardarshi ho chuki thi aur Sweksha ka pura stan saaf najar aane laga tha.


Uday josh me aakar shirt ke jod se khincha aur sare button toot kar shirt kinare ho gaya aur Uday khule stan ko dekhkar, uski najron ki lalach se chamak rahi thi. Wo thoda upar hokar ek baar fir hont se hont lagakar, Sweksha ke jibh ko paglon ki tarah chusne ke baad, uske stan tak aaya. Apne hath se stan ko daboch kar, bara sa muh khola aur stan ko muh me bharkar, apne daton ke nishan lagana shuru kar diya. Ek hath wo niche le jakar panty ke ander dal diya aur uske yoni se khlena shuru kar diya…


Uske yoni ke upar apni ungliyan tej-tej firate usse pure josh ke sath rub karte huye, uske stano ko katne aur chusne laga… Sweksha puri garam hokar tej-tej shwans leti hui aahen bharne lagi.. Uski madak siskari mahol ko aur bhi madak bana rahi thi.


Uday khda hua aur apne kapde utarne laga. Sweksha jo ab tak let kar maze le rahi thi, wo uth kar baith gayi aur uske paint ki zip kholkar, uske ling ko bahar nikalkar apne mutthi me pakdi, aur usse aage piche karti aadhe khade ling ko pura khada karti apne muh me le li.


Ling ke muh me jate hi Uday ki aakhen band ho gayi. Wo teji se apne paint ko nikal kar bahar feka aur Sweksha ke bal ko muthi me pakad kar tej-tej jhatke uske muh me hi marne laga. Wo itne dino ka sukha tha ki jaldi hi wo apne charm par pahunchne wala tha. Sweksha uske ling ko muh se bahar nikalti, tej-tej apne hath se hastmaithun karna shuru ki aur jald hi Uday tej aah ke sath wo chhut gaya…


Sweksha uski haalat par hasti hui kahne lagi.. "Gaya Uday wicket"…. Uday uski baton ko ansuna karke, Sweksha ko balon se pakda aur wapas apna ling uske muh me dal kar fir se usse chusne ke ishare dene laga… Sweksha bhi puri garam thi, aur mahol ko katai bich me nahi chhodna chahti thi.


So chuke ling ko, ball ke sath apne muh me lekar Sweksha bhi usse paglon ki tarah fir se chusne lagi aur uske sath khelne lagi. Kuch hi der me ling wapas apna aakar lene laga. Uday Sweksha ke kandhon se usse dhakka dekar niche litaya aur uske painty ko bahar nikal kar, uske dono paun pure khol diye…


Najron ke samne jo najara tha Uday ke liye adbhut tha. Na jane kitne dino ka sukha, jab puri khuli yoni najron ke samne thi, apna do ungli uske ander ghusate, clit ko chusne laga aur apne daton se kuredne laga… Sweksha tej-tej siskariyan leti, apne paun ko uske sir se bandh kar, apne chhati ko pure josh ke sath hawa me le jati.


Lagatar uske yoni me apni ungliyan ander bahar karne se Sweksha bhi apne pure charam par pahunch gayi. Apne paun ka dawab uske gardan par pura banati, Sweksha apni kamar ko puri takat se hawa me uthayi … aur tej ki aah ke sath fir wapas kamar ko niche layi.. uske paun dhile pad gaye aur fande ko hatati, usne apne dono paun wapas se niche rakhi.


Sweksha hanfti hui bolne lagi… "mat ruko Uday ab…. "


Uday bhi kahan rukne wala tha... Wo ab bhi utne hi Josh ke sath apni dono ungli ko aage piche kiye ja raha tha. Wo yoni ko chhod kar Sweksha ke upar aaya, uske stan ko dekhkar apni dono hath ki mutthi me jakad kar josh ke sath dabocha.


Wapas se fir ek bar uske hont se hont lagakar uske jibh ko chusne ke baad, uske hont ko chhoda aur wo apne paun uske chhati ke dono ore rakhkar, apne aadhe khade ling ko uske hont ke upar rakh diya… Sweksha bhi uske arman ko samjhti hui apna muh khol kar uske ling ko apne muh ke ander li, aur chusne lagi.


Kuch hi der me Uday bhi pura taiyar ho chuka tha... Josh dono ke ander apne pure uffan par thi. Uday niche aate ek bar fir dono paun ko pura khola aur jibh se pure yoni ko upar se niche tak chat'te huye, yoni ko pura gila kar diya aur apne ling ko yoni ke upar rakhkar, uspar thoda dawav banate huye rub karne laga..


Sweksha machlti hui apni kamar hilane lagi. Uday bhi hilte kamar ko dekhkar, josh ke sath yoni me pura jhatka mara… Sweksha madak si aah bhari.. uska pura badan jhatka khaya aur uske stan upar niche hilne lage.


Uday hilte satno ko dekh, usse apne mutthi me bhar liya aur mutthi me dabochkar, tej-tej jhatka marne laga. Jhatke marte huye wo Sweksha ke upar aa gaya, uske hont ko wapas se chumte huye Sweksha ko apne gode mein uthaya.


Uday apne dono paun failakar niche baitha tha aur Sweksha Uday ke ling ke upar baithi, uske gode mein thi aur dono ek dusre ke hont ko chuste aur kat'te, apne kamar ko hilate pure sex ka aanand utha rahe the…


Har jhatka purn aanand de rahi thi.. dono ke kamar pure josh ke sath upar niche ho rahe the aur aakhen madhoshi me dubi…. Lekin isi bich Sweksha apne pith, chhati par ajib se nakhun aur panja mehsus hua....


Swekha jaldi se apni aakhen kholi, aur najara dekh kar uss ki aankhen fati ki fati rah gayi. Uss ke chhatiyon par sher ka panje the, aur charon ore se wo sheron se ghiri thi... Tabhi dekhte he dekhte uske aakhon ke samne wo sabhi sher apna roop badalte, insani roop le liya.... Fir jor ki ek aakhri chinkh..... Sweksha ki ek aakhri chinkh uske muh se nikli jo pure jungle me gunj gayi.....


Khun me sane kayi muh, aur muh me sarir ke ander ka mans daba... Sabhi Sweksha ko noch-noch kar kha rahe the........


"Achha kaam kiya Josefer, iski sari indriyan khul chuki thi, ab hume kayi dino tak shikar ki koi jaroorat nahi hogi"


Kayi kathayen hain jivan ki. Kuch ka man'na hai prithvi jaisi kai aise grah hain, jahan par jivan basta hai, to kaiyon ka man'na hai ki ye sab kewal magadhant kahaniyan hai. Alians ka astitw lagbhag waisa he hai jaisa bhut ka astitw.


Kuch log jo mante hain unhe viswas hai aur jo log nahi mante wo log un viswas karne walon ko andh-viswasi mante hain. Sach ka koi sakshay nahi, isliye iss baat ko kabhi sabit nahi kiya ja sakta.

Pura guma diya dost dimag ka dahi ban gaya. Kya khoob likhte ho sunder atisunder rachnakriti hai.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-14​

Kayi kathayen hain jivan ki. Kuch ka man'na hai prithvi jaisi kai aise grah hain, jahan par jivan basta hai, to kaiyon ka man'na hai ki ye sab kewal magadhant kahaniyan hai. Alians ka astitw lagbhag waisa he hai jaisa bhut ka astitw.


Kuch log jo mante hain unhe viswas hai aur jo log nahi mante wo log un viswas karne walon ko andh-viswasi mante hain. Sach ka koi sakshay nahi, isliye iss baat ko kabhi sabit nahi kiya ja sakta.


Dusre grah se rah rahe iss prajati ki bhi kahani lagbhag kuch aisi he thi. Inke astitw ka koi sakshya tha nahi, aur jinhone bhi inhe dekha ya mehsus kiya, koi bhi iss baat ko batane ke liye jinda nahi bache.


Ek prajati, Zoren grah ke, jiss ke kuch sadsya dharti par khoji the, aur unke hone ka kisi ko ilm tak nahi tha. Aesi prajati jo kisi bhi sajiw ka roop le sakte the, narbhakchhiyon ka ek samuh jinhe insani mans khane me ajib sa sukoon milta tha.


Kai varshon se ye sher ke roop me rahte the aur apna shikar ko aise he fasa kar uski sari indriyan jagrit karke, usse noch-nich kar khate the.... panch logon ka samuh jisme 3 nar aur 2 madyen thi. Josefer, Uday ka asli naam tha aur wo iss samuh ka mukhiya tha.


Josefer..... Iss ladki ke ander cotten dal kar isse thik karo, hum isse bhi kahin fek aate hain jaise baki do ko pahle feka tha....


Ek adrisya viman, jo macro particle se bana tha. Jise insani aakhon se dekh pana muskil tha. Palak jhapakte he ye viman light wave se travel karte duniya ke ek chhor se dusre chhor par pahunch sakta tha.


Josefer apna viman taiyar kar raha tha, jab tak uske baki ke sathi Sweksha ke ander cotton bhar kar, uske upar ke fate chamri ko sil kar thik kar rahe the ... tabhi char bare viman uss jagah par utra...


Kai sare logon ke bich se ek lamba kad-kathi ka aadmi bahar nikla..... usse dekh kar panchon apne ghutne par baith kar apna sir jhuka liya....


Wo aadmi sare sena ko command dena wala Rijo tha. Rijo koi naam nahi balki ek padwi thi, jo pure Zoren grah me eklauta hota tha. Wahan ke mahamahim ka sab se karibi aur uss ke baad uss jagah ka sab se shaktisali sadasya.


Rijo, Josefer ko utha kar uske kandhe par hath rakhta...... "Tumhara kaam kabil-e-tarif hai. Hum tum se bahut khush hain"


Josefer, bakiyon ki tarah sir jhukaye...... "Sukriya Rijo"


Rijo.... Tumhe pata hai na humari malkia ka pata chal chuka hai.


Josefer..... Haan pata hai Rijo. Par usse to Apini dekh raha hai na.


Rijo.... Haan par iss baar Apini bhi usse kabu nahi kar sakta. Yun samjh lo ki ab tak jitni bhi Malkia ka pata chala hai, unme ye sabse shaktisali hai. Uss ki ikchha shakti ka koi mel nahi. Apni soyi hui ikchha skatiyon me bhi usne khatre ko itni dur se bhanpa ki, Apini bhi bas dekhta rah gaya.


Josefer.... Humare liye kya hukum hai Rijo.


Rijo..... Tum apne logon ke sath Apini se sampark karo. Malkia ko dhundho aur hifajat ke sath usse Zoren ki seema tak le kar aao.


Josefer..... Ji Rizo main aap ko niras nahi karunga.


Rijo.... Tum aur Apini ne mil kar, yadi ye kaam kar diye, to fir hum, tum dono ko khoji ke kaam se hata kar, uttari aur dakhsni sima ki kaman de denge.


Josefer.... Sukriya Rijo hume wapas bulane ke liye.


Rijo..... Haan tum dono ne yahan apni bahut sewayen di hai isliye hum ne ye faisla kiya. Lekin uss se pahle tumhe ye kaam karna hoga. Malkia ko puri hifajat se, aur bina uski jankari ke lana hai. Malkia ke bare me tumhe jankari to hai na.


Josefer.... Haan Rijo, Apini ne hume bataya tha. Humari malkia yahan Jivisha naam se jani jati hain. Aur wo Pune sahar se kahin gayab ho gayi hain.


Rijo.....Thik hai tum sab mil kar iss kaam ko anjaam do. Tab tak main tumhari jagah kisi aur khoji ke samuh ko yahan par bhejne ki taiyari karta hun.



Rijo ke jate he pure samuh me khushi ki lahar daur gayi. Pura samuh khushi se nachne laga.... Sab ko shant karte huye Josefer kahne laga.... "Adrish Janwar ko nind se jagane ka waqt aa gaya hai. Usse jagao hum abhi Apini se milne chalenge"



Evening time ..... Indore....



Kaam ki thakan se jivisha ke paun me jaise pankhe lage ho, paun itne kanp rahe the ki bechari thik se khadi bhi nahi ho pa rahi thi. Sabse najren bacha kar aaram karne ke liye Durga devi ke he kamre me ghus gayi.


Dusri ore Durga devi ne Nischal ko apne kamre se anguthi lane bheji thi, jo wo dhund raha tha. Jaise he Jivisha ander ghusi, Nischal ko uss kamre me kuch dhundhte dekhi...... "Mujhe pakka yakin ho gaya ki tum chor ho"


Nischal..... Ye almira kidhar hai...


Jivisha, Shocked..... Himmat to dekho mujh se he puchh raha, almira kidhar hai. Bhago iss kamre se, iss kamre se to kya mujh se he dur bhag jao.


Nischal.... Teri problem kya hai, main tere kisi kaam me tang arrata hun, jo tu mujhe har waqt kuch na kuch kahti rahti hai.


Jivisha..... Sadak chhap, tum jaise choron se aur kaisi bhasha ki ummid kar sakti hun.... tumhe kya chahiye, paise, jewar... sab main de dungi, par tum iss ghar se kuch nahi churaoge.


Nischal kuch sochte huye..... Hmmm ! Thik hai tu chidh mat main he jata hun...


Nischal sidha uss ghar se he bahar nikal kar aaya, aur khali si jagah dekh kar fir se ek baar Serin se contact kiya.....


Serin, ne ke device par ussi frequency se dobara contact.. wo harbara kar Nischal ko frequency ko line par leti kahne lagi..... "Nischal tumhe locate kiya ja raha hai, jald he ek team yahan se nikalne wali hai".


Nischal..... Kis commander ko apni maut itni pyari ho gayi...


Serin.... Commander nahi Sabaiya aa raha hai tumhare pichhe...


Nischal....... Kya ??? Sabaiya..... Yahan se main nikal nahi paunga bina yahan ki jankari ke. Tum se ek kaam thik se nahi ho paya. Ye kaisi decoding ki ho Serin, main inke bich famlier nahi ho pa raha. Sab mujhe shaq ki najar se dekh rahe hain. Main apni chijen wapas nahi le pa raha uski wajah sirf tum ho.


Serin..... Mera viswas karo, maine puri jankari tumhe bhej di hai. Waise kya tumne uss jagah ko bina jane he apni chijen wapas khud se jorne ki kosis kiye...


Nischal..... Haan, mujhe laga main iss jagah ko jaan chuka hun, isliye khud ko sari chijon se jorne ki kosis kiya tha, par asafal raha.


Serin..... Tabhi tumhe locate kar pa raha hain...


Nischal.... Tum kuch kar sakti ho kya....


Serin.... Nahi, main kuch nahi kar sakti. Sari chijen active ho chuki hai, usse jab tak tum se jora na gaya active he rahega. Signal weak hai, par ek baar uss signal ko trace karne wo log yahan nikal gaye to tumhara pata laga lenge.


Nischal.... Yahan ki bhasha ko ek baar aur decode karo aur pata karo ki mujhse kya chuk ho rahi hai. Tabtak main bhi yahan dekhta hun... sayad kuch madad yahan se mil jaye....


Serin ko sari baten samjhakar, Nichal contact karne ki sari chijen samet, jaise he pichhe mura, samne Nandni thi. Nandni usse hairani se dekhte huye puchhne lagi..... "Ye tum paglon ki tarah mathe aur hathon par pura wire lagaye kis bhasha me baat kar rahe the".


"Lagta hai yahan ek raajdar banana he parega, ab samay nahi bacha hai mere pass"...... Nischal, Nandni ka hath pakrte usse khinchte huye.... "Chal mere sath"


Nandni.... Hath chhoro mera jungli....


Nischal... Tu mere sath aisi jagah chal jahan hume koi na dekh sake..... Tu chal to main sab samjhata hun....


Nadni, apna hath chhurane ki kosis karti huyi..... "Pagal, gawar main tumhare sath kahin nahi jane wali"


Nischa..... Kaise tujhe samjhaun. Tu meri juban par mat ja, bas itna samjh ki main tum se madad mang raha hun...


Nandni, hairani se Nischal ko dekhne lagi, aankhon me minnat aur juban par ajib si bhasha... kuch sochti wo nischal ko ek aisi jagah le gayi jahan un dono ko koi sun aur dekh nahi sakta tha....


Nadni.... Kaho kya kahna hai tumhe..


Nischal ek gahri sans leta.... "Main tum logon ke bich ka nahi hun, kahin dur se aaya hun"...


Nandni.... Haan dekh kar he lagta hai, kisi jungle se aaye ho...


Nischal.... Nahi tu samjhti kyon nahi, main tumhare iss grah ka he nahi hun... kahin dur antriksh se aaya hun...


Nandni jor-jor se hasti hui...... "Aaj din bhar alian wali bahut sari filmen dekh chuke na. Ab mujhe samjh me aa raha hai, kyon tum wire laga kar aise paglon ki tarah kar rahe the. Suno Nischal wo movie me dikhayi ghatna sab kalpnik hoti hai".....


Nischal..... Kaise samjhaun. Tujhe meri baton par yakin kyon nahi ho raha.....


Nandni.... Hehehehe.... haan jungli tumhari baton par pura yakin hai... chalen ab ghar...


Nischal.... Chup ekdum... achha tu bata, apni aankhon se kahan tak dekh sakti hai....


Nandni hasti hui.... "Kyon uss jagah se tum pani nikal kar dikhane wale ho kya ??"....


Nischal ki ore dekhte huye wo bolte-bolte apni najar kahin dur tak daurayi. Dhak se kaleja, aur hansi bilkul gayab. Nandni ka muh khula ka khula rah gaya....


Abhi to bagal me usse dekte huye najar dusri ore ki thi, aur wahan dur Nischal khara tha. Nandni chaunk kar fir najron ko wahan ki jahan par Nischal pahle tha.... sir jaise ghum gaya ho aur hath paun kapne lage..... Nischal wahan pass me bhi tha...


Nandni ke chehre par dar ka pasina aa gaya. Nichal apna hath badha kahne laga..... "Main tumhari najron ke wave se jyada tej daur sakta hun"....


Nandni usse sunegi kya.... Jaise he Nischal apne hath uski ore badhate huye ye baat kah raha tha wo chakkar kha kar gir gayi......

khubsurat update hai mitr.

 

[Naina]

Update:-52​

Kasak khush hoti hui Jatin ke gale lag gayi. Uska chehra bayan kar raha tha ki wo kitni khush thi… Kasak ko aisa lag raha tha, jaise bhagwan ne uski sun lee ho aur Jivisha ki samasya aaj sham disco me solve ho jani hai…


Kasak ander se kuch acha mehsus karti Jivisha ke pass pahunchi. Jivisha ke liye bhi khamosh sa sama tha, jaise anterman me andhera chha raha ho aur sab kala-kala dikh raha tha...


"Hmmmm ! Naraj hai mujhe se"… Kasak, Jivisha ke kandhe par hath deti hui kahne lagi…


"Nahi bus aise hi leti thi.. aur naraj main tum se ho sakti hun kya"… Jivisha uthkar baith'ti hui kahne lagi..


"Tere chehre par likha hai, kitna tension me hai tu.. Janti hai jab kuch nahi samjh me aaye to kya karna chahiye"… Kasak apni baat kahti hui, Jivisha ko dekhkar muskurane lagi…


Jivisha, bhi thodi si khushi ka izhar karti…. "Haan pata hai, jab kuch samjh me nahi aaye to… Go With Flow.… Shayad bite dino ki gahri chhap aisi pari hai Kasak, ki dimag ne kaam karna band kar diya ho jaise. Kabhi-kabhi to lagta hai, sara jahan mera hai aur main iss jahan me khushiyon ke rang bhar rahi hun. Wahin kabhi-kabhi aisa lagta hai jaise sab jar-jar ki stithi me hai, aur main kisi virane me kahin akeli pari hun".. ..


Kasak:- Sorry bahna, wo chhote papa ko sunkar main thodi paresan ho gayi thi, aur apni pareshani me ye tak bhul gayi ki yadi maine sabke samne tumhari jhuti shadi ki baat nahi kahi hoti to ho sakta tha Nischal yahan ka chaheta ban jata.


Jivisha:- Shayad wo meri kismat me hi nahi Kasak, isliye jab bhi mere karib aata hai, kuch aisi ghatna ghat jati hai ki wo mujhse dur chala jata hai… Uski chahat mujhe khinchti hai bahan…


Kasak thodi bhawuk hokar Kasak ke gale lagti apna dil halka karne lagi… kuch der tak dono bahan shant rahi. Fir Kasak, Jivisha ko khud se alag karti hui, uske aanshu ponchhti kahne lagi…. "Rone se koi samsya ka samadhan to hona nahi hai.. isliye….."


Jivisha hansti hui… "Isliye… Go With The Flow. Kismat ko apna kaam karne do, hum apna kaam karte hai aur parinam waqt par chhodna hi samjhdari hai"..


(Kasak ki ek theory, jise usne apni bahan ko bhi sikhaya tha. Aksar un mamlon ke liye, jab dono he shararat karti payi jati thi. Parinam ki parwah kiye bagair kuch bhi karte chale jana)


Kasak:- Acha sun, chhote papa ne tumhare aur Nischal ke riste se aitraj nahi jataya hai... Bus wo khud me santusht hona chahte hai.. ab sab tere upar hai..


Jivisha:- Dekhte hain Kasak, humari kahani kis mod par hume le jati hai… ab to jo hona hoga wo hokar rahega…

achhi philosophy hai
Par har baar samasya ko kismat ke bharose chhod dena achhi baat nahi hai...
sidhi si baat hai, kismat ko wohi log mante hain bhagya pe vishvas karte hai ... lekin ek baat kahu, kayi log aise bhi hai joh is baat pe vishvas rakhte hai ki aap hi apne kishmat ke lekhak hai aur joh apni kismat khud likhte hai,aur main bhi unme se ek hoon... aur nischal aur jivu ko bhi yahin maanke chalna chaahiye . bhaad mein gayi kasak

Dono bahano ko bich kafi lambi baat chit hoti rahi… sham ke 6.30 baje Nischal, Nandni ke sath unhe pick up karne pahunch gaya aur wahan se teeno disco nikal gaye…


Disco pahunch kar teeno ladkiyan bar counter par baith'kar 2 taqila shot marne ke baad dance floor par pahunch gayi, wahin Nischal bar counter par baith'kar Jivisha ko dekhne me vyast ho gaya…. Usse dekh'kar arman jaise bahen faila rahe ho. Aur hasrat sirf itni si thi ki Jivisha bus chand lamhe usse bhi dede. Chand lamha jo sirf un dono ka ho.


Haal-e-dil to Jivisha ka bhi, kuch Nischal ke jaisa hi tha... Uspar se jab wo taiyar hokar aaj samne aaye, na chahte huye bhi Jivisha ki tirchhi najar, baar-baar Nischal par hi rahti. Uska pyara sa chehra aisa lag raha tha, dhire-dhire dil me utar raha ho…


Kuch der dance karne ke baad Jivisha aakar Nischal ke pass baith gayi…. "Papa mujhe Shresh se shadi ke liye kah rahe the"… aate hi Jivisha, Nischal se apni baat kahi aur uske ore dekhne lagi..


Nischal:- Kal ka wada yaad hai na..


Jivisha muskurati hui… "Haan mujhe to yaad hai lekin tumhe pata hai na, kis shart par tum mujhe le ja rahe ho"..


Nischal:-.Chhodo ye sab, wo to bhawishya hai, aur bhawishya ke bare me koi kuch nahi kah sakta.. Abhi na to tumhari shadi ho rahi hai aur na hi tum mujhse dur ho..


Jivisha apni hath aage badhati… "Ek dance ho jaye fir"..


Shadi ki baat par Nischal ka utra chehra aise khila, jise dekhkar Jivisha pyari si muskan dene se khud ko rok nahi payi. Kuch lamhe dono ek dusre ko muskura'kar dekhte rahe. Nischal, Jivisha ke hath ko thamte chal diya.


Dono ek dusre ke sath dance floor par chal diye. Dhimi awaz ki wo madhur sangit, Jivisha, Nischal ke gale me hath dal kar apne paun dhire-dhire dance floor par chalane lagi aur Nischal uske kamar me hath dal'kar, uska sath dene laga. Dono ek dusre ko mehsus karte apne kadam chala rahe the aur uss pal me khote chale ja rahe the...


Dono ko sath dance karte dekh Nandni aur Kasak dono muskura rahi thi. Itne me Jatin bhi wahan pahunch gaya aur Kasak ke pass baith'te huye… "You are looking gorgious sweetheart"..


Nandni:- Acha !!! Kya yahan isklauti yahi gorgious hai, baki sab to asur kul ke hai na..


Jatin:- Hey Nandni.. shristhi par paida hua har jiv sunder hai.. lekin mere liye to meri ek hi duniya hai…


Kasak:- Hum log filmy hai aur ye pothi wale hain.. suno Jatin tunhari baten bhakti channel par hi achi lagegi.


Waqt shayad sach me Nischal ke anukul nahi tha aur virodhi apni chaal, chal chuke the. Kuch pal ek-dusre me Nischal aur Jivisha khoye huye honge, Kasak ne Jivisha ko bula liya. Dance ka mahol khatm hote hi Nischal aakar bar counter par baith gaya. Idhar Jivisha, Kasak aur Nandni ke pass jakar baith gayi aur Kasak, Nischal ke sath kaise uski shadi ho uske upay par puri charcha karne lagi.


Tabhi uss mahol me ek jordar hooting honi shuru ho gayi. Ansh bhi un sab ke bich pahunch gaya aur wo sab aapas me baat karne lage… Nischal dur se hi sabko hanste aur bolte dekh raha tha.. aur un sab ko aise hanste bolte dekh uska chehre par halki mayusi si aa gayi…


"Shayad ye shama kabhi mera tha hi nahi".. Nischal wine ka pyala ek jhatke me pite huye khud se hi kahne laga…. "Bahut dukhi lag rahe ho Nischal"… Shresh aka Apini uske karib baith'te huye kahne laga…


Apni baat samapt kar, Apini ne 2 large wishkey mangwaya aur ek glass Nischal ke ore badhate…. "Piyo aur jahan se aaye ho wahan laut jao, waise bhi Malkia to 2 din me udd jayegi.


Nischal, wishkey ka wo large peg pite…. "Koi nahi 2 din to hai na Jivisha mere pass, wahi kafi hai.. baki tu jara mujhse dur rah, kyonki tujhe dekhta hun to Sapna mujhe yaad aati hai… gaya tha tere adde par aaj kal tera pura kunwa gayab hai wahan se"..


Apini:- humne suna tha ki koi sanki hume maarne ka pran kar chuka hai. Samjhdari issi me thi ki jis'se jit na pao uss se bhag lo.


Nischal:- Viswas rakh jis din main pakdne aaunga na, bhagne ke liye sara bhrahmand kam par jayega. Tu uss din ko kosega jab tune khushi se yahan prithwi ka kaam apne jimme liya… main tere ander wo dar daalunga ki tu marne se pahle kai maut marega.. ye wada raha.. ..


Apini:- Main uss waqt ka itnzar karunga. Waise tere 2 fan, Ruki aur Suko to tujhe yaad hi honge na…


Nischal ne jaise hi Ruki aur Suko ka naam suna, wo hairani se Apini ko dekhne laga…. "Aise aakhen kyon faad raha hai.. acha shocked ho gaya. Khair tu apna expression continue rakh, main tujhe batata hun un dono ne kya kaha… dono ne kaha hai ki bus ek purn grah ki raat, ek toofan Aizem me aayega aur Nischal ka naam jan'ne wale har kisi ko mitti me mila diya jayega, siway tere Jaal Mahal ke. Kyonki tera bhai Sabaiyya, usse apne kabje me le chuka hai."


Apini ki baat sun'kar Nischal ki aakhon me khun utar aaya… baithe hi baithe usne Apini ka gardan apne ek hath se pakda aur utha kar bar counter par patak diya. Wo pakad itni majboot thi ki Nischal ke hath ka nishan Apini ke gale par chhap gaya.


Bar counter par rakhe kanch ke glass, fut kar jagah-jagah Apini ke pith me chubh chuke the, aur patakne ke karan aayi andruni chot ke bare me to Apini ko hi gyan hoga…


"Jaan hai wo meri… aur koi meri jaan ko chhu bhi le main barbaad kar dunga barbaad… Jakar bata dena sabko"… Nischal bilkul garjte huye aise bola ki wahan maujood logon me, bhay ke karan bhagdar mach gayi.


Chhanik mamla tha… Apini dwara uksaye jane baad ki jo pratikriya thi, wo mahaj chand pal ka tha... Jabtak daudkar sab log pahunche, tabtak Nischal apni baat puri karke bar counter ke ander ghusa aur 2 bottol wine ki nikal kar bahar ka rasta pakad liya… piche se Nandni awaz deti rah gayi, lekin wo ansuna karke nikalte bana… aur Nandni bhi uske piche bhagi… Ab engine jahan jayega, wahan bogi to jayegi hi.. isliye Ansh bhi teji ke sath Nandni ke piche gaya…


Jivisha daud kar jab tak un dono ke pass pahunchi, tabtak Nischal apni baat kah'kar wahan se nikalte bana. Jivisha ko to kuch samjh me hi nahi aa rahi thi ki wo kya react kare..


Wahin in sab mamle ko hota dekh, Kasak bhi apni jagah se utne lagi, lekin Jatin uska hath pakad'kar bithate huye kahne laga…. "Ache dost banaye hain tumne Kasak. Is puri ghatna me yadi dosh main dusri party ka bhi maan lun, to bhi yahan aise gundon ki tarah jhagra karna… baki main tum par chhodta hun".


"Bhaad me gaya wo"… Kahti hui Kasak, Jivisha ke pass chali gayi… "Soch kya rahi hai Jivisha, kabhi-kabhi galat faisle ho jate hain.… Kuch waqt Shresh ko bhi tumhe dena chahiye… Jao isse hospital le jao"…


Jivisha, Kasak ki baat sun'kar khamosh hi rahi aur Shresh ko lekar wahan se hospital nikal gayi, aur Kasak wapas laut'kar Jatin ke pass wapas aa gayi... "Kya hua tum itni khamosh kyon ho"..


Kasak:- Chalo yahan se chalte hain Jatin, ye bhid aur ye shor mujhe ab pasand nahi aa raha.


Jatin muskurate huye Kasak ka hath thama aur apni bike par bitha ka usse ek bade se bunglow me le aaya.. Kasak uss bunglow ko dekh'kar puchhne lagi… "Ye tum kahan le aaye mujhe, Jatin"…


Jatin:- Yahi hai apna chhota sa aashiyana…


Kasak hansti hui…. "Iss hall me to football khela ja sakta hai aur tum kahte ho chhota sa aashiyana. Shandar bunglow hai Jatin."


Jatin:- So my would be, batao ki dinner me kya logi..


Kasak:- Ye koi bhut bunglow hai kya Jatin, yahan to kisi insan ki awaz tak nahi aa rahi..


Jatin:- hahaha.. nahi bhut bunglow nahi hai.. yahan kewal main rahta hun.. ek saaf safai wali aati hai, wo sham tak apna kaam karke chali jati hai.


Kasak:- Nah ye bakwas jagah hai… bada hua to kya hua, lekin yahan ghar wali feeling nahi hai.. jatak 5 log na ho ghar me.. chahal, pahal na ho tabtak wo maza nahi...


Jatin:- Koi baat nahi agar kosis achhi rahi to mehnat karke hum 4-5 bache jaldi-jaldi paida karke yahan bhi chahal, pahal wala mahol bana sakte hain…

jab kasak jaisi ristedaar ho toh dusman ki kya jarurat...chaahe jane anjane mein sahi woh jivu ko khai mein hi toh dhakel rahi hai.. baaki log jaise gandi nali ke kide apini aur josefer toh lalach mein aake apne ghatiya kaam ko anjaam dene ke firak mein hai aur kamyab bhi ho rahe hai..
Ab dekhne wali baat yeh hai ki jivu ke pyaar ko bali chhada ke kasak kaise harami josefer ke sath apne sapno ka sansar basati hai..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji

 

[Naina]

Update:- 53​

Jatin:- Koi baat nahi agar kosis achhi rahi to mehnat karke hum 4-5 bache jaldi-jaldi paida karke yahan bhi chahal, pahal wala mahol bana sakte hain…


Kasak apni badi si aakhen ki … "Oyeee, Jyada bole to tumhara khun kar dungi… jao chup chap jaldi se kahan pakao, jabtak main fresh hokar aati hun…


Jatin:- Upar jakar left se pahla kamra…


Kasak:- Kya..


Jatin:- Arre upar jakar left se pahle kamre jao.. bus.. samajh jaogi…


Kasak, Jatin ke bataye kamre me chali gayi aur jaise hi wo kamre ke ander ghusi, charo ore ki deewar par apni badi-badi tasveere dekhkar khush ho gayi.. kayi sari tasveere thi.. kayi aise pal, jisme wo kabhi Jivisha ke sath khulkar hans rahi hai to kisi me pure pariwar ke sath baithi hui hai…


Kasak jod-jod se chillati hui Jatin ko awaz lagane lagi… Jatin teji se wahan pahuncha… "Kya ho gaya, itni ghabrayi hui awaz me kyon pukar rahi ho"..


Kasak:- Ghabrayi main hun aur kaanp tum rahe ho, kahin koi raaj to chhipa nahi rakhe yahan?


Jatin:- Ab tum aise chilla'kar pukar lagaogi, tab darna to swabhawik hai..


Kasak:- Chor !!! Tum meri jasoosi karwate ho. Jaldi batao ye sab tasveere tumhare pass kaise aayi..


Jatin Kasak ko khinch kar apne bahon me bharte, uske chehre par aaye laton ko apne hath se hata'te huye kahne laga…. "Jab tumhe dekhne ke liye pagal sa ho jata hun to ye kuch tasveere jo maine chupke se bina izazat ke khinchi hai.. usse dekh, khud ko shant kar leta hun…


"Achha, aur jab ye tasveren nahi thi, tab kya karte the"… Kasak apni bahen Jatin ke gale me dalti hui puchhne lagi…


Jatin apni aakhen mund'kar kahne laga… "Bus Yun hi aakhen mund'kar tumhare khyalon me kho jata hun"..


Jatin apni baat kah'kar apni aakhen khol'kar, Kasak ki najron se najar mila kar dekhne laga… Kasak kabhi apne palkon ko niche jhukati to kabhi Jatin ke najron par thehra leti… "Hume chalna chaiye ab"…


Jatin, Kasak se alag hote huye bilkul dhime se kahne laga… "Thik hai".. aur wo palat kar apna ek kadam aage badha liya.. Kasak thik piche se uska hath pakad lee… Jatin apne gardan ko ghuma kar piche dekha… dono ki najren jaise ek dusre par thehar kar bahut kuch kahna chah rahi ho…


Dono apni jagah thehar kar ek dusre ko kuch der dekhte rahe.. Kasak apne ek kadam aage badhati, thik Jatin ke samne pahunchi aur apni aeriyon ko uncha karke Jatin ke honth se honth lagakar chumne lagi..


Jatin jis baat ko nahi hone dena chah raha tha, wahi kahani hote ja rahi thi... Jatin ke sabhi sathiyon ne shikar kiye the, aur lagatar karte aa rahe the, isliye unki body santulit thi.. lekin Jatin ne kayi dino se Shikar nahi kiya tha aur Kasak ke chumte hi uski pyas bhi badhne lagi…


Uske sharir ka ek swabhawik pariwaratan jo sahwas ke waqt hota hai, wo abhi se dikhne laga tha… Jatin, Kasak ko khud se dur karte huye kahne laga… "Nahi Kasak ye sab thik nahi"..


"Haan ye sab thik nahi warna jaise hi tum sex me khoti chali jaogi, ye tumhari boti-boti noch lega.."


Nischal thik uske piche bistar par baith'kar apni baat kahne laga… Nischal ko dekh'kar Jatin teji se darwaje ke ore bhaga… zoom se ek hawa gujri aur darwaje ke aage Nischal khada tha… "Aaram se baith jao, jabtak tum Kasak ke sath ho wo tumhari sequrity hai… Kasak se dur gaye to tumhara patta saaf hai"..


Jatin ne jab Kasak ko dekha to wo bistar par behosh pari thi… Usse achet awastha me dekh'kar Jatin ghabrate huye puchhne laga…. "Usse kya kiya"..


Nischal, apni badi si aakhen kiye uske ek jangh par paun rakh'kar, uske gale ko daboch liye. Apna chehra thik uske chehre ke upar le jate huye, apni bhadi si awaz me kahne laga….

"Viggo jab samne aa jaye to jante ho kya hota hai… Viggo ko kabhi apne aas-pass mehsus kiya hai.. Kya hoga jise tum Aizem ka sahjada samjhte ho, wo ek Viggo ho.


Nischal ki pakad ka pahili bar Jatin ne maza liya tha. Jaise hi gala chhuta, wo hafte huye khasne laga. Viggo naam sunkar hi Jatin ke pasine chhutne lage… wo Nischal ke vikral roop ko dekhte huye kahne laga…. "Viiii.. Viggo.. lekin ye jan-samuh to kai varshon purv aapas me lad'kar samapt ho gayi thi"


Nischal:- Yahan tum mujhe mera istihas mat batao… mujhe jo jaan'na hai kewal wo batao. Wo bhi bina bhatkaye…


Jatin, apna hath jod kar sar ko niche jhukaye…. "Viggo, Kasak ko kya hua hai.. wo aise kyon pari hai"..


Nischal:- Ye jinda rahe ya mar jaye, tumhe koi fark parna hai kya…


Jatin:- Viggo aap jaisa soch rahe hai, waisa sabhi Zoren niwasi nahi hote…


Nischal:- Jinda maans to tumne bhi khaya hai.. nocha to tumne bhi hai kaiyon ko… Jatin kuch naya batao…


Jatin:- Hmmm ! Aap sahi ho.. Main kuch bhi kar lun rahunga unme se ek hi..


Nischal:- Tum jante ho maine uss raat tumhari jaan kyon baksh di thi...


Jatin:- Koi idea nahi… waise aapne pahchana kaise mujhe...


Nischal:- Ajib si ghinn wali badbu aati hai tum logon se.... Kabhi us ghrina ke gandh ko mehsus kiya hai ki nahi..


Jatin, khud me ander se bebas aur lachar mehsus karte huye…. "Viggo aap ko kya jaan'na hai mujhse"…


Nischal:- Malkia ki jankari do mujhe..


Jatin:- "Viggo main bus itna janta hun ki Malkia ki shaktiyan asim hoti hai. Ek Malkia huamare mahamahim ko kayi varshon tak jivit rakhti hai aur unhe asim takat pradan karti hai"…

"Ab tak hum prithvi se 12 Malkia, Zoren ki seema tak le ja chuke hain… lekin Mahamhim aur Rijo, Malkia Jivisha ke liye pagal bane huye hain... Inki shakti Zoren tak mehsus ho rahi hai. Unka ye kahna hai ki ye Pahli (first) hai.. Aur ek baar yadi Juvisha hath lag gayi, fir pure bhrhmand me kewal Mahamahim ka jhanda lahrayega"…


Nischal:- Aisi kaun si shaktiyan hain Jivisha ke ander, jo tumlog usse chain se rahne nahi de rahe…


Jatin, Nischal ki baat sunkar jor jor se hanste huye kahne laga…. "Ek Viggo Malkia ke prem me hai… hahaha… Viggo ka dil bhi prithwi par dhadkne laga"…


Nischal:- Mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai ki main apne hath ka dawab tere gardan par dala aur tera gardan tamatar ki bhanti kachumar hokar ajib si haalat me hai.


Jatin:- Maf karna Viggo.. Jahan tak Malika ki shatiyon ki baat hai, uska namuna aap dekh chuke ho, Jab Malkia apni soyi ikcha shakti se aap par humla ki thi. (Jatin kuch pal khamosh rahkar Nischal ko gaur se dekhne ke baad)

"Jahan tak mujhe lagta hai, wo afwah sahi hai jisme ek Viggo ka jikr aata hai… Purn santulit.. shakti ke hote huye bhi shaktiyon ka prayog na karne wala… to wo cross mutant aap hi ho… Ek Viggo rani aur Aizem ke sabse surveer aur shanti priya shasak ka bacha… Nischal"..


Nischal:- Tere yahan ke school book me hai kya Viggo ka chepter, ya ek research subject hi Viggo ke upar rahta hai tumhare yahan… Ye batao Malkia ki itni shaktishali prajati ke bare me hume kaise pata nahi… inka itihas kya hai.. inke log kahan hai... Aur ye Malkia apne samaj me na paida hokar aise aam insano ke bich kahan se paida ho jati hai..


Jatin:- Iski jankari mujhe to kya pure Zoren me koi nahi bata sakta siway Mahamahim ke. Rijo tak ko iski puri jankari nahi hai. Upar se Malkia, Prithvi par basse, kamjor prajati ke yahan paida leti hai, jiski shaktiyan bahar aane se pahle hi hum Zoren ki seema tak pahuncha dete hain… Aisi shurat me Malkia ki jankari kahan se kisi anya grah par hogi….


Nischal:- "Ha ha ha… Teri Malkia, Prithvi par hai aur tu yahin ke mul niwasi ko kamjor bata raha hai. Sach me jitna suna tha, uss se kahin adhik gire huye prajati ke tum log ho… Yahan ki jalvayu kisi vardan se kam nahi.. yahan ki technology wakai kamal ki hai.. aur sabse kamal ke to yahan ke log hai… Lekin tu aur tere log nahi samjhenge.. bahut hi nich kism ke ho na"..

"Khair tu ye bata mere rahte Jivisha ko 2 din me le jane ki baat ho rahi thi … iski wajah…….."


Jatin:- Viggo, humara Rijo sabse khatrnak tukdi ke sath aa raha hai… aur uske sath kayi adrishi janwar kal raat tak yahan pahunch jayenge… Malkia ke pure pariwar ko mar'kar, sab uska roop lenge aur Malkia ko bharmakar apne sath le jaynge..


Nischal:- hahahaha… aur mere bare me kya yojna thi…


Jatin:- Viggo wo .. wo..


Nischal:- Kya wo..


Jatin:- wo kal aap ke doston ko marne ke liye samst sena toot paregi, jabtak aap udhar vyast rahenge… tabtak wo Malkia ko le jayenge…


"Hahahaha…. Ja jakar mere liye 1 bottol daru le aa aur apna mobile dete jana"… Jatin chala gaya yah kahte ki.. "bus aakhri bottol hai mere pass" aur mobile dete chala gaya…


Nischal, ne Nandni ko call lagaya, lekin iss'se pahle ki wo kuch bolta, Nandni usse ghar wapas na aane ka bol'kar call disconnet kar di. Idhar Jatin bhi apni aakhri bottol lakar Nischal ko bhent kar diya… Nischal puri bottol ek baar me samapt karte...

"Achhi yojna hai … lekin main kyon na aisa karun ki tumhare khatrnak tukdi ke pahunchte hi, main unpar humla kar dun aur sabka safaya ek sath kar dun"…..


Jatin:- Viggo wo humari khatrnak tukdi hai… uske samne tik nahi paoge..


Nischal:- "Chalo maan liya main tik nahi paunga, lekin yadi main aisa micro device bana kar, yahan ke prashashan ko de dun, jo tumhare micro practical ko orignal shape me dikha sake. Fir to tum.. tumhara wo kamjor sa adrishi janwar aur tumhara sare viman, unke najar me hoga…"

"Aukkad to mujhe tum logon ki pata hi hai… ek ladki par jhund me humla karte ho. Jab tum logon se akeli si ek ladki nahi sambhalti, fir tum inke latest hathiyar aur ache trained officier se kya ladoge re Gotiya.. Tu to lut jayega re Gotiya..


Jatin:- Hammm ! Iska matlab aap wo device bana chuke ho… Mujhe Ruko aur Suki ne Jaal Mahal ke vishay me bataya tha, yakin nahi hua.. ab samjh me aa raha hai ki unhone sahi kaha tha… Waise bhi pata to ab chal raha hai ki aap ek Viggo ho. Jahan tak mujhe lagta hai, aap prithvi par bhi apni jigyasa ke karan hi aaye ho"..


Nischal:- Pata nahi kyon tu mujhe pahle din se pasand hai. Tujh se abhi baat kiya, tera dimag bahut sharp hai.. iska matlab tera Mahamahim aur Rijo kafi buddhiman log hain, jo logon ko uske talent ke hisab se kaam saunpta hai… Ek chaalak shasak aur uske sath ek yogya mantri.. Kamal ka combo hai…


Jatin:- Haan Viggo..


Nischal:- Tu apni Malkia aur uski shaktiyon ko janta hai… Mere yani ek Viggo ke bare me bhi tu suna hai. Ab tu hum dono ki shakti se tulna karke andaza laga ki Jivisha ki shakti mujh se kitne guna jyada bhadi hogi..


Jatin hanste huye…. "Bahut chahne lage ho aap Malkia ko… Khair hume Malkia ki shakti ko dekhne ka kabhi mauka nahi mila.. to kya kahun main kis tarah ki shaktiyan hai. Bus jo sunta aa raha hun wo itna ki Malkia ke pass asim shaktiyan hoti hai. Unki ikchha shakti ke virudh koi tik nahi pata…

"Main tulna karne ki stithi me nahi hun.. kyonki ek to aap Viggo upar se aise cross mutant ho jiski shaktiyon ki kalpan hi ki ja sakti hai bus. Dekhne wala to kabhi bata bhi nahi sakta, kyonki wo jivit bhi nahi bacha hoga… Ek kaam karna Viggo, aap aur Malkia ek din aamne samne ki ladai ladna fir main Judge karke bataunga"..


Nischal:- Tu to bada hi close ho raha hai.. ladwa kar dobara meri pasli tudwane ka plan hai, ya mujhe marwa dene ka…

Yeh log ek baat kyun bhool jaate hain ki inka baap hai nischal har mamle mein.. chaahe physically ho ya mentally inse sau kadam aage hai nischal...
hmm... toh kasak ush harami ke sath jishm film banane aayi thi wahan pe.. par harami ki kamjori abhi ushe abhi nahi khana kasak ko... isliye bhagne ka prayas kiya wahan se lekin afsos inka baap khada tha wahan
wah nischal ne toh almost jankari nikal hi liya us gande naali ke kide se.. ab toh in namakul zoren grah walo ka band bajne wala hai
waise yeh nischal kuch zyada hi taras kha raha hai is kide josefer par... are maar kyun nahi deta yaar.. roz roz ki jhik jhik hi khatam... dekho toh nischal ko marvane ke liye kaisa idea de raha hai jhingul.
waise nischal toh alag kisam ka hybrid alien nikla.... lekin lekin lekin twist hai ki woh prithvi aur prithvi wasio ke liye samman ke sath sath ek lagav aur pyar bhi hai..
aur sabse badi baat woh ghrina drishti se dekhta hai kukarm karne wale logo ko chaahe woh insaan ho ya alien..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji

 

[Naina]

Update:-54​

Nischal:- Tu to bada hi close ho raha hai.. ladva kar dobara meri pasli tudwane ka plan hai, ya mujhe marwa dene ka…


Jatin:- Aap ko khud kuch bhi andaza hi nahi tha ki Jivisha ke ander koi shakti bhi ho sakti hai.. ussi ka parinam tha wo pasli tootna… warna aap aam Viggo to nahi ho... Main jab aap se pahle din mila tha, mujhe laga bhi tha ki aap ek aam sahjade nahi ho sakte… lekin baat ko maine tul isliye nahi diya, kyonki aap ke bhai ya uske jasoos ne kabhi nahi bataya ki aap ek Viggo ho.. Kya hua tha wahan ke Viggo ke sath, aap aur aap ki maa pahchan kyon chhipaye hain..


Nischal:- Tu beta jitne mere sawal ke jawab na diye, uss se jyada sawal to mere bare me puchh liya… chutiye tu Zoren me baith kar Aizem ki afwah ache se yaad kiye hai, lekin sala tujhe apne grah ki ek bhi baat pata nahi..


Jatin:- Sala… Acha laga sunkar.. meri ek bahan hai "baby".. uss se jode banwa lo Viggo.. fir to aap hi wahan ke Mahamahim hoge..


Nischal:- sale nich .. tu chahta hai main teri tarah maans noch-noch kar khane wala banu..


Jatin:- Humara narbhakshi samuh nahi tha Viggo.. Maine to 2 mahine se koi shikar bhi nahi kiya, fir bhi jivit hun.. ye sab Mahamahim ki maya hai… Malkia ki puri shakti to unhi ke ander nihit hoti hai…


Nischal:- To kya tumlog bagawat nahi kar sakte apne Mahamahim se..


Jatin:- Mahamahim hai wo, uss se bagawat.. hahaha.. Aisa to khyal bhi shayad hi kisi kis ko aata hoga aur jise aata bhi hoga wo chupchap jakar atmhatya kar leta hoga... Kyonki Mahamahim ke darbar ki saza jhelne se acha hai aatmhatya karna…


Nischal:- Ek baat batao sala tumlogon ko pata kaise chalta hai ki yahi Malkia hai, aur usse fasne ke liye kya-kya tarike apnate ho… 12 Malkia ko le gaye ho to jara fasne ke tarike par bhi gaur farma le…


Jatin:- koi 15 ya 18 sal me ek yog banta hai.. Sabhi grahon ki ek vises stithi hoti hai aur tabhi Malkia ka janm hota hai… Malkia ka janm hua hai ye kewal Mahamahim ko pata hota hai. Mahamahim khud prithvi par aate hain… Unke ghar kisi sadhu ke vesh me jate hain aur kahte hain ki upyukt samay par yadi ladki ka vivah na hua aur uska kamurya ko bhang na kiya gaya to iske ander ki shakti sampurn vinash kar degi…


Nischal:- Kya baat kar raha hai.. Matlab Jivisha ki kamurya bhang aur udhar uski shakti gayi..


Jatin:- Kya Viggo, Inheritance power ka sex se kya lena dena hai… kayi baar to rashmon ke chakkar me kayi khoji ko yahin Malkia ke sath suhaagrat manani padi thi….


Nischal, Jatin ko khinch kar ek thappad marte huye…. "Sala ye shadi aur suhaagrat wali baat batani jaroori thi. Samjh to gaya tha main inheritance power. Tu aage bata…


Jatin, Nischal ke chehre ke bhaw ko dekh'kar hanste huye aage batana shuru kiya….

"Mahamahim apna kaam karke chale jate hain. Fir yahan humari 2 khoji team hai.. Ek Apini ki aur ek meri. Humara kaam hota hai, Malkia ki soyi ikchha shakti ko jagrit hone ke purv unhe yahan se Zoren ki seema tak pahunchana. 14-15 sal baad hume bataya jata hai ki Malkia kaun hai… Hum sabhi sambhawna par gaur karte hain aur jis-jis ladke se shadi ho sakti hai, usko badal diya jata hai… Dar ka mahol to gharwalon me pahle se rahta hai, isliye kuch samay baad kisi ek ladke se shadi ho gayi aur fir humara kaam aasan."

"Lekin eklauti Jivisha aisi thi, jiski umr lagbhag 21 ki hui, tab jakar uske ghar wale shadi ke liye jaage.. wo bhi tab jab humne apne shikar ko jaan bujh kar pune me fekna shuru kiya. Is ghatna se uske pitaji ko lagne laga ki anhoni ghatnayen shuru ho chuki hai… Upar se samsya ye bhi thi ki Jivisha kisi ladke ko pasand bhi nahi karti aur na hi uske pitaji kabhi charcha karte ki Jivisha ki shadi kis ladke se karni hai".

"Shadi ki baat clear hote hi hume ladke ki detail pata chal gayi thi, aur hum sari taiyarion ko pukhta karne ke baad, bus shadi khatm hone ka intzar kar rahe the. Humara kaam lagbhag ban chuka tha, lekin lagbhag aadhi shadi ke baad Malkia bhag gayi… shayad unki soyi ikchha shakti ne unhe aagah kiya hoga… uske baad kya hua wo to aap ko bhi pata hai Viggo.. Humari kismat me aap aa gaye .. aur mujhe ab lagta hai, wapas Zoren jana to dur ki baat hai.. jinda bachunga ya nahi uspar bhi shanka hai"..


Nischal:- Tere se baat karke laga ki tu utna bhi bura nahi hai lekin masoomo ko to mara hi hai.. ek hi baat kahunga… Kasak se dur ho ja aur apni jindgi bacha le… Tumlog ek aise apradh me samlipt ho, jisme koi mafi nahi milegi… Haan lekin yadi wada karo ki dobara Kasak ko apne moh jaal me nahi fasaoge, to main tumhe jivit jane dunga…


Jatin:- Maine Kasak ke liye moh jaal ka istamal nahi kiya tha Viggo, lekin jane do. Puri kosis karunga ki main ab Kasak ke najdik bhi na aaun. Lekin Viggo aapke dimag me chal kya raha hai… aapne device bana lee… humari tukdi ki information bhi nikal liye… Shayad aap yahan ke logon ki madad se abhi ke liye unhe wapas bhaga bhi do… lekin tab kya hoga jab Mahamahim aamne-samne ki ladai me honge…


Nischal:- "Tab tum apni Malkia ki shakti ko pahli baar apne aakhon se dekh paoge. Mehsus hoga Jivisha ke ander ki shaktiyan, jab wo Mahamahim se lad rahi hogi… Mujhe yah to yakin tha ki tumhe kitni jankari hogi Jivisha ke shakti ke bare me.. Lekin ummid thi ki iss shakti ke origin ka tumhe pata hoga"

"Khair koi nahi.. Mujhe pata hai ki Jivisha ke shakti ka origin ka kaise pata lagana hai aur kaise main Jivisha ko uski shaktiyon par kabu karna sikha sakta hun...


Jatin:- Aur aap ka pyar Viggo..


Nischal:- Shayad adhura hai... Khair samay kitna ho gaya Jatin wo to bata de…


Jatin:- Viggo 10.10 baj gaye.. waise ek varshon ki jigyasa hai jiske jawab ke liye main bahut vyakul hu… please sun lo..


Nischal:- Abe main tujhse jankari nikal raha hun ya tu mujh se…


Jatin:- "Bus yun hi ek jigyasa thi man me kahin dabi. Aaynek planet ke tabah hone ke baad, Viggo ka ek samuday jo khud ko Hayfa Viggo batata tha.. wo humare yahan migrant tha. Chhota sa samuh tha aur aapas me kafi pyar se rahte the.. Tab jo Mahamahim the Salvik, unka ek sainik hua karta tha Mittoso.. Mittoso ne badi hi chalaki se un chand mutthi bhar Hayfa Viggo ko apne sath milaya .. aur tab ke tatkalik Mahamahim aur Rijo ko usne Viggo ki madad se samapt kar diya…"

"Khair uss waqt humari seema bhi chhoti thi aur sainya bal bhi, kintu itna bhi kam nahi tha ki mahaj 100 log unhe dwast kar jaye. Lekin 100 Viggo ke samne koi nahi tika… Mittoso jo aaj ka Mahamahim hai. Usse Mahamahim banane me Viggo ka pura yogdan tha... Zoren ki puri tecnology ke janak wahi log hai... Mahamahim ek cross breed chahte the.. Viggo aur apna … lekin Viggo wo cross breed ke liye raji nahi huye, kyonki unke hisab se Mahamahim ne kewal unka istamal kiya tha apne bharm ke kshmta par, aur aise me unhe cross breed swikar nahi tha"..

"Wo Viggo chahte to Mahamahim ka badi aasani se takhta palat kar sakte the… naye generation ke Viggo iske liye taiyar bhi the, lekin unke purane generation ne Zoren ko chhodne ka faisla kar liya… Bechare… jis viman me sawar the ussi me malwa ho gaye"

"Aisa hi kuch humne Aizem aur Miyaka planet ka bhi suna tha.. wahan to Viggo ke 2 generation ke bich, aapas me hi matbhed itna badh gaya ki sabhi lad'kar mar gaye, lekin ek bhi cross breed sambhaw nahi ho paya.. Mujhe ye bata do.. aap logon ke pass kashmta hote huye bhi aap kyon nahi ladte.. aap ka itna bara samuday Aaynek se palayan hokar Zoren, Aizem, Miyaka, Yahan tak Luceto bhi gaye.. Chahte to in sabhi par Viggo ka hi Raj hota, fir bhi koi pagalpan ki bimari thi jo sab kuch chhod kar mar gaye"

"Marna hi tha to Aaynek jab tabah ho raha tha, wahin mar lete. Wahan se fir bhage kyon?"


Nischal:- Aur daru rakha hai kya yahan.. wo pilayega tab main jawab dunga iska…


Jatin daud kar daru le aaya… Nischal bade maze se aadha khambha gatakne ke baad thodi shwans liya… "Abe aise aakhen kyon faad rara hai"..


Jatin:- Viggo wo jawab..


Nischal:- Tu pahle time bata…


Jatin:- 10.20…


Nischal:- Tune jo sawal puchna na Jatin, uska jawab bhi tere baton aur teri kahani me hai… thoda sochega to mere khyal se pata chal jayega.. Thik hai ab main ja raha hun... Kasak ko ghar bhi chhodna hoga..


Jatin:- Acha suno to bhai .. 2 min ruk to jao….. ek baat aur janne ki jigyasa hai… waise to sanka mujhe ussi ka ho raha hai, lekin fir bhi aapke muh se sun lun to.. aap kaun se varn ke Viggo ho..


Nischal:- wahi jo tu samjh raha hai… Viggo Sigma .. Alpha, unidentified first class..


Jatin hairani se Nischal ko dekhne laga… aur Nischal bade aaram se bachi hui bottol khali karne laga… jaise hi Nischal ki bottol khali hui…. "Abe pagal fir aise ghur raha hai. Ja jakar so ja"


Jatin:- Bhai ek request hai…


Nischal:- bol sun raha hun…


Jatin :- Yadi Malkia se baat nahi bani to kya aap meri bahan ko chun sakte ho…


Nischal uski ore dekhte huye hasne laga…. "Tera Viggo puran me kya jawab hai iske bare me jara bata"….


Jatin:- Ek Jindgi Aur Ek partner… Itihas nahi aisa ki ek jindgi me kisi Viggo ne 2 partner banaye ho. Shayad yahi ek badi wajah hai ki Viggo kabhi kisi dusre samuday me cross breed ke liye taiyar nahi hote, kyonki wahan partner badlna samanya si ghatna hoti hai, jabki ek Viggo ne kisi ko pasand kiya to fir uske baad koi dusra na to usse chhal se jit sakta hai na bal se… marna pasand karte hain lekin partner badal jaye, aisa khyalon me bhi nahi hota…


Nischal:- Shabash.... Ab tu ye bata tujhe itni jankari kaise Viggo ke bare me..


Jatin:- Mera 2rd generation pariwar se Rijo rahe hai mere ghar ek sadsya. Ussi ne Viggo ko Zoren par basaya tha.
Unhi ki kahani sunte hum bade huye hain... Aur unki sabhi kahani me Viggo hi the.…


"Thik hai Jatin ab main ja raha.. ab teri soorat dekh kar bore ho gaya… jabtak Jivisha ko na dekhun chain na milega. Baki tu mera sandesh Rijo tak pahuncha dena ki maine parso sham ke waqt, baatchit ka prastaw rakha hai, aur main khud akele aaunga baatchit karne. Sath me mere device ke bare me bhi sangyan dena, jise maine ab tak kisi manav ko nahi diya hai… Ek aur baat, Kasak se dur rah, teri lambi umr hogi"…


Nischal, Kasak ko utha'kar wahan se le gaya aur sidha uske kamre me lita diya. Jivisha ko bahut dhundha lekin wo apne kamre me nahi thi... Dekhne ko vyakul man usse hall me taak- jhank karne par majboor kar raha tha..


Nichal ne jab hall me dekha, tab uske chehre ki khili muskaan byan jar rahi thi ki wo Jivisha ko dekh'kar kitna khush hai, lekin ye matr ek chhanik khushi thi… kyonki hall me sabhi pariwar ke log khushiyan mana rahe the… karan Jivisha ne Shresh ke sath shadi ke liye haan kar di thi…


Nischal ko ek pal me hi jaise laga ho ki uski sari khushiyan bikhar gayi ho. Gum ye nahi tha ki Jivisha ne ek aise aadmi ko chuna, jo ek behrupiya tha aur uska marna to tay tha… dukh to iss baat ka tha ki Jivisha bhi iss shadi ke liye raji thi. Mayus hi wo lauta aur khamoshi ke sath apne bistar par jakar let gaya…

jivu asal mein koun hai kya hai uski shaktiya yeh toh malum hai.. xp mein aapne details mein jikar kiya tha... par nischal baade mein kuch alag hi details de rahe hain Aap... joh thoda complicated hai pehle wale details se..
hmm... toh yeh kahani is prakar ki hai ki joh Viggo samuday hai mul roop se Aaynek planet se hai.. shayad samay kaal mein aaynek planet pe tabahi aayi hogi koi jiske chalte yeh Viggo samuday Aaynek se palayan hokar Zoren, Aizem, Miyake ya Luceto bhi gaye aur wahan ke hoke rahne lage... shayad yeh log shanti priya aliens hai.. isliye shasak na banke aam logo ki tarah mil julke sadharan si zindagi gujarna zyada pasand karte hai..
Ab zoren grah pe kuch alag hi hadsa hua in Viggo aliens ke sath.. wajah Mittoso ki lalach.
aur baki grah pe inki samul nash isliye kyunki apsi mat bhed ke chalte joh jung huyi aapas mein..
yahan tak samajh mein aa gayi kahani par do baatein chhod ke nischal alpha male kaise, kyun? aur nischal ki maa kahan hai ab.. kya woh zinda hai..
So nischal ne farman jaari kar diya hai josefer ke jariye ki jinghul rijo aur mahamahim whatever ke sehat ke liye yahin achha hai ki jab bhi aaye, sidhe tarike se pehle nischal se baat kar le warna ush chu tiyo ki zoren grah sahit band baj jani hai
are wah... chalo achha hai ab ye chuja josefer bhi kasak se dur rahega...
aainn yeh josefer hath pair muh sab dhoke nischal ke piche pad gaya... kahe nischal ko apna jiju banana chahta hai yaar.. power ke liye kya..
are yaar jivu ne bhi haan keh di..... wajah shayad yahin hai ki ya toh joh ghatana pub mein hua uske wajah se ya phir apne gharwalo ko aur dukh nahi dena chaahti hai jivu..
par nischal ka dil tuta gaya...

Idhar Nandni…


Nischal Apini ko uske bhadkane ki saja dene baad, badi teji se bahar nikal raha tha aur uske piche-piche Nandni bhi bahar nikli. Jaise hi wo mukhya dwar se bahar nikli uske paun ke niche Nischal ka mobile gira aur wahan Nischal ka koi pata bhi nahi tha...


Nandni mobile utha'kar bhadkti hui jor-jor se kahne lagi… "Aa tu wapas fir batati hun. Jab pachti nahi hai to pi kyon leta hai kamina… Nischal.. Nischal"..


"Wo nahi hai yahan, Kyon chilla rahi ho"… Ansh pichhe se kahndhe par hath rakhte huye kahne laga...


Nandni:- Batao pagalpan ki had hoti hai.. ek to public place par jhagra karta hai, upar se attitude dekho bhai sahab ke.. Paun me mobile fek kar bhag gaya hai… Iski to main puri khabar lungi…

Idhar nandu bhi gusse mein hai..
par ab ek nandu hi hai joh kuch solution nikal sakti hai jivu ki mamle mein.
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Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji