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Nyc updateUPDATE 646
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Nisha subah apne vakt pe hi utth gayi....Uska haal to pehle jaisa hi buraa tha.....Ro ro kar chehra murjha gaya tha....Usse kuch karne me man nahi lag raha tha....Bas Rahul ka intejaar kar rahi thi....Pehle to Rahul par usko bahut hi gussa aaya ki bina bataye kaha chala gaya.....Jab Rahul dusre din bhi nahi lauta to gusse ki jagah fikar ne le liya tha....Bahut fikar ho rahi thi usse ki Rahul kis haal me hai....Bhagwan se bhi bahut baar request kar liya tha ki Rahul ko jaldi se waapas bhej de....Iss judaai se usko ek baat to pata chal hi gaya tha ki wo Rahul se bahut pyaar karti hai....Har ek pal uski dil me ghabraahat badhta hi jaa raha tha....Abb usko bas Riya se hi umeede thi....Lekin kahi na kahi dar bhi lag raha tha ki Raj kahi Riya ko Rahul ke baare me bataane se inkaar na kar de.....Abb usne iss faisle ko vakt ke haatho me de diya tha....
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Nisha ka dukh dekh kar Riya ko bhi bahut dukh ho raha tha.....Wo bhi Nisha ki iss haalat ko jaane ke baad thik se nahi so paayi thi...Wo bhi bechain ho gayi thi Rahul ke baare me jaane ke liye....Usse abhi iss baat se koi matlab nahi tha ki Raj usse kya kahega aur uske saath kaise bartaaw karega....Usse abhi apni dushmani se jyaada apni dost ki fikar thi.....Jaise taise usne lunch time tak intejaar kar liya....Lunch hote hi Raj ki talaash me wo jaldi se canteen pahunch gayi.....Aur Raj ko dhundne lagi....Raj apne dosto ke saath hassi majaak karte hue lunch kar raha tha.....Riya ki himmat nahi hui Rak ke sabhi dosto ke saame Raj se baat kare.....Wo fir se Raj ka lunch khatam hone ka wait karne lagi.....Abb iss baar uska bhaagya accha tha Raj lunch ke baad akela hi Park ki taraf chala gaya....Wo bhi Raj ke picche picche chali gayi.....Jab Raj ek bench par baitha tab usne picche uske pass jaa ke kaha....
Riya:- Raj.
Raj ne jaise hi iss aawaj ko suna wo ek dam se Riya ki taraf dekhne laga....Uska chehra me jaldi se gussa ke bhaaw aane laga....Usne koi jawaab nahi diya....Raj ko jawaab na deta dekh Riya ne fir se kaha....
Riya:- Raj mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai....
Riya ne Raj se request kiya....Raj ko vishwaas hi nahi ho raha tha ki jo ladki usko hamesha gussa dilaati hai aaj wo kaise uske saath itna accha se baat kar rahi hai....
Raj:- Lekin mujhe tum se koi baat nahi karni....
Raj ne itna keh kar apna chehra Riya se hata liya....
Riya:- Mai tumhe pareshaan karne nahi aayi hu....Please ek baar meri baat to sun lo....Ek bahut jaruri baat karni hai.....
Riya ki aawaj se hi pata chal raha tha ki wo kitna serious baat karne waali hai....Lekin isse Raj ko koi farak nahi pada....
Raj:- Ek baar keh diya na tumhe ki mai tumse koi baat nahi karna chahta.....Kyu baar baar mujhe pareshaan karti rehti ho.....Itna din tak mai khush tha ki tumse koi panga nahi ho raha lekin aaj fir tumne shuru kar diya....Abb jaao yaha se....Abhi mera mood bahut accha hai aur mai isse kharab nahi karna chahta...
Raj ne gusse me jawaab diya....Lekin Riya ko koi fark nahi pada....Wo to yaha par Nisha ke liye aayi thi.....Iss liye abb apna kaam pura karke hi jaane waali thi....
Riya:- Tumhe mujhe jo bhi kehna hai keh lo......Mai kuch nahi kahungi.....Chaaho to aur bhadaas nikaal lo.....Par please meri baat sunlo....
Riya ko aaj Raj ki kadwi baato se koi fark nahi pad raha tha....Wo aaj Nisha ke liye khud ki har beizzati ko seh rahi thi....
Raj:- Tum aise nahi maaanogi.....Chalo jaldi se bataao kya baat karna chahti ho aur piccha chhodo mera....
Raj ne socha ki Riya se bahas karne se accha hai usse piccha chhuda lena....
Riya:- Thanks Raj.....Mujhe pata tha ki tum meri baat jarur sunoge....
Raj:- Abb bakwass band karo aur jaldi se apni baat bataao....
Raj iss baar bhi gussa aur attitude ke saath baat kar raha tha.....Riya ko uska iss tarah se bolna bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya....Lekin usne mind nahi kiya aur bolna shuru kar diya....
Riya:- Mujhe tumse Rahul ke baare me baat karna hai....
Rahul ka naam sun kar Raj ko hairaani hua.....Wo soch raha tha ki Riya Rahul se related kya baat karna chahti hai....Usne Riya ko bicch me rokte hue poocha....
Raj:- Rahul ke baare me....Kya baat karna chahti ho....Jaldi se bolo....
Raj ne hadbada kar poocha....
Riya:- Mai wahi to bata rahi hu....Aur tum itna hadbada kyu rahe ho.....Nisha ne kal raat mujhe phone kiya tha aur usne kaha ki Rahul do din se apne flat me nahi hai.....Kaha gaya hai wo bhi nahi bataya...Nisha bahut pareshaan hai....Kya tumhe pata hai Rahul kaha hai????
Raj ko Riya ki baat se jhatka laga....Usko bhi pata nahi tha ki Rahul iss vakt kaha hai.....Usko Rahul se ye ummid nahi tha ki wo kisi ko bina bataaye aisi kaam kar sakta hai....Usko thoda sa gussa bhi aaya aur thoda sa ghabraahat bhi.....Usne apna mobile nikaal kar Rahul ka number me call kiya....
Lekin phone lag hi nahi raha tha.....Abb uska ghabraahat aur badhne laga....Uska dimaag bhi abb kaam karna band ho gaya....Rahul aise kaha jaa sakta hai ye baat usko samajh hi nahi aa raha tha.....Wo abb kya karna chahiye yahi soch raha tha ki tabhi Riya ne usko poonchaa....
Riya:- Kya hua Raj....Tum itna ghabraye kyu ho....Phone nahi lag raha kya????
Riya ki aawaj me bhi abb ghabraahat tha......
Raj:_ Nahi....Nahi lag raha....Pata nahi kaha chala gaya bina bataye....Kaha jaa sakta hai ye ladka....Abb iske parents ko kya jawaab dunga....Mera to kuch samajh me nahi aa raha....
Raj ki aawaj se uska ghabraahat ka pata chal raha tha....
Riya:- Tum uske parents se hi phone karke ek baar pucch lo.....Kya pata wo apna ghar chala gaya ho???
Riya ne ek idea nikaala lekin Raj ne puri tarah se manaa kar diya....
Raj:- Ha ho sakta hai....Lekin agar na hua to aur mushkil badh jaayega....Abhi mai bahut pareshaan hu aur upar se unke sawalon ka jawaab nahi de paaunga....Ek do din tak intejaar karenge aur fir bhi nahi lauta to phone kar dunga uske ghar....
Raj ne itna hi kaha tha ki lunch break ka time khatam ho gaya.....Dono dukhi ho kar apne apne class ki taraf chale gaye....
Raj ko Rahul ki aisi harkat par vishwaas hi nahi ho raha tha....Wo soch raha tha ki Rahul aisa kaise kar sakta hai...Bina usko kuch bataye kaha jaa sakta hai.....Aur kaha gaya hoga.....Abb uske ghar me kya jawaab dega....Yahi sab soch kar wo pareshaan hua jaa raha tha.....
Udhar Riya bhi pareshaan ho gayi thi Rahul ka iss tarah se gaayab ho jaane se.....Usko laga tha ki Raj se poochne ke baad Rahul ka pata mil jaayega lekin iss baat ne to aur bhi pareshaani badha diya....Usko bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki abb Nisha ko kya jawaab de.
Mst updateUPDATE 67
Rahul ki bina bataaye gaaw chale jaane ki vajah se Nisha, Raj aur Riya sabhi pareshaan ho gaye the....Udhar Rahul ka haal bhi thik nahi tha.....Usko bas ek baat ki chhain thaa ki usne apne parents ko bataa diya hai ki wo abhi gaaw me hai aur uske liye koi fikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai.....Lekin wo Raj ko bataana bhul gaya .....Iss baat se usko thoda sa afsos to hua lekin usne Arjun se dobaara town jaane ki baat nahi kaha....Usne socha ki waapas apne town jaakar hi Raj ko batayega.....Aur wo fir se Nisha ki yaad me aur apne aane waali life ki baare me sochte hue so gaya.....
Agle din bhi subah se lekar shaam ho gaya.....Uska man Nisha ke bina lag hi nahi raha tha.....Har pal usko Nisha hi yaad aa raha tha.....Pyaar abhi naya naya tha aur pyaar ki suruwaat me hi usko apne premika se dur hona bilkul bhi accha nahi lag raha tha.....Bas kisi tarah 2 din kaatne ka soch raha tha.....Na chahte he bhi dosto ki bakwaas baatein sun raha tha aur halka sa jawaab bhi jawaab de raha tha....Uska iss taraj ajeeb sa behave karne se uske dosto ko bhi thoda aeeb lagta hai .....Rishabh se jab raha nahi gaya to usne Rahul se pucch hi liya....
Rishabh:- Rahul Kaha khoya hai tu???Idhar ham sab baat kar rahe hai....Lekin tu to koi aur hi duniya me khoya hua hai......
Rahul bhi iss unexpected question se chaunk gaya.....Fir bhi usne ek bahaana bana liya...
Rahul:- Kuch nahi yaar....Bas ek baat soch raha hu....Ussi me kho gaya tha.....
Rishabh:- Tu sochta bahut hai .....Abb kya soch raha hai.....Wo bataane ka kasht karega.....Koi pareshaani to nahi hai naa???
Rahul Rishabh ki baat ka jawaab dene hi waala thaa ki Arjun ne bich me bol diya....
Arjun:- Tujhe ye kis angle se pareshaan dikh raha hai......Tune isko acche se notice nahi kiya.....Maine dekha hai isko kabhi kabhi kuch soch kar muskuraa raha tha.....Pata nahi kya ho gaya hai isse.....Mujhe to lagta hai ye paagal ho gaya hai yaa fir isko kisi se pyaar ho gaya hai.....
Arjun ki baat sun kar sab hairaan ho gaye.....Sabse jyaada Rahul.....Usko abb samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki iss baat ko kaise taalna chahiye.....Wo kuch soch hi raha thaa ki Aditya ne bicch me hi bol diya....
Aditya:- Ye tu kya keh raha hai Arjun.....Pyaar aur wo bhi Rahul ko.....Mujhe to lagta hai tu paagal ho gaya hi jo Rahul ke baare me aisa soch raha hai.....Rahul kisi se pyaar kar sakta hai kya???
Aditya ne jawaab to Arjun ko diya lekin uski nigaah Rahul ki taraf tha aur uski honttho me ek muskaan.....Usne bhi socha yahi accha mauka hai Rahul ki haalat ki majaa lene ka....Jab Rahul ne Aditya ka baat sunaa....Wo thoda sa gusse me Aditya ko ghoorne laga.....Usko iss baat ka gussa aa raha thaa ki Aditya sab jaante hue bhi uske saath majaak kar raha hai....
Risabh ne dono ko dekh liya aur usne bhi dono se kaha....
Risabh:- Tum dono ek dusre ko aise kyu dekh rahe ho......Lagta hai tum dono hamse kuchh chhupa rahe ho.....Tum dono kya chhupa rahe ho wo jaldi se hame bataao...
Risabh ne dono ko hukum de kar kaha....
Aditya:- Rahul....Bol du sab kuch...
Risabh:- Tu ye kya bol du keh kar pucch raha hai....Jaldi se bol baaat kya hai....
Rahul:- Nahi Aditya tujhe kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi hai.....Mai hi sab kuch bol deta hu....
Itna keh kar Rahul chup ho gaya.....Wo khud ko prepare kar raha tha apne pyaar ke baare me bataane ke liye...
Arjun:- To jaldi bol na....Kis cheej ka wait kar raha hai....Yahi to bolna hai ki yaa tu paagal hai yaa fir tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai....Issme itna time kyu le raha hai.....
Arjun ko Rahul ki khaamoshi bardaasht nahi ho raha tha.....Wo uttawala ho gaya tha ye jaane ke liye ki kahi Rahul kisi se pyaar to nahi karta....
Rahul:- Tum logon ko kya jaldbaazi hai yaar.....Bata raha hu .....Sach kaha Arjun tune....Mai pyaar karne lag gaya hu ek ladki se.....Bas kuch din hi hua hai mujhe iss baat ka ehsas huye....Din Raat bas ushi ke baar me sochne laga hu.....Har ek pal tadap raha hu uske pass jaane ke liye.....Bas ushi ke saath rehne ka dil kar raha hai....Usse baate karne ka, saath ghumne ka.....Har pal ushi ko dekhna chahta hu....Ek pal bhi usse duri accha nahi lagta....(Ye kehte vakt Rahul Nisha ko yaad kar raha tha aur har ek baat pe uske hotho se muskaan nikal raha tha) ....Aur aise me tune mujhe apna gaaw laake sab mood bigaad diya....
Last ki line Rahul ne thoda fraustration me kaha....
Rahul ki baat sun kar Risabh aur Arjun bahut khush ho jaate hai.....Aditya aur Raju ko Rahul ki ye baat bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya lekin sabke saamne wo log bhi jabardasti muskuraa rahe the....
Risabh:- Kya tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai.....Kab aur kisse????Uss lucky girl ka naam to bataa jisse tu pyaar karta hai???
Risabh ne bahut khushi ke saath ye baat jaldbaazi me puch liya.....Wo jaana chahta tha ki Rahul kisse pyaar karta hai...
Rahul:- Uska to pata nahi lekin agar wo mujhse pyaar karegi to mai lucky ho jaaunga....
Arjun:- Tu jyaada bakwaas mat kar....Jitna puccha hai bas utna jawaab de....Aur tune abhi kya bola.....Kya tu one sided love kar raha hai????
Rahul:- Mai Nisha se pyaar karta hu.....Abhi to nahi pata ki ye one sided hai ya two sided....Lekin bahut jald pata laga lunga....
Arjun:- Ye Nisha kaun hai....Pehli baar iska naam sun raha hu....Hamara college me to Nisha naam ki koi ladki nahi hai.....
Arjun ki iss baat pe Rahul thoda musjuraa deta hai aur kehta hai...
Rahul:- Matlab tu college me har ladki ka detail rakhta hai....Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega.....Tum log jaante ho Nisha ko....Yaad karo ek din mujhe ek ladki ne road me sabke saamne thappad maar diya tha....
Rahul ko thappad khaane waali baat bolte hue sharmindagi mehsoos ho raha tha.....Lekin usne fir bhi bol diya.....
Risabh:- Haa yaad aaya.....Ham ek din cricket khelne jaa rahe the....Uss din tujhe thappad maara thaa na tujhe....Abb road me sabke saamne propose karega to maar to khaayega hi na.....
Risabh ki iss baat pe sabhi muskuraane lage.....Rahul ko apna majaak banta hua accha nahi laga....Usne sabko ek baar ghoorte hue dekha.....Lekin koi chup na hua....Wo sab hansse hi jaa rahe the....Rahul bas chhup raha kuch nahi bola.....Kuch der baad baad sabhi chup ho gaye....
Arjun:- Rahul ek baat bata.....Uske baad tu Nisha se kab milaa...Wo to hamaare college me bhi nahi padhti hai.....Aur tu college ke baad sidha apna room chala jaata hai.....To uske baad tum dono ki mulakaat kab hua......Yaa fir ye to nahi ki tu Nisha se abhi tak nahi mila aur tera ye love at first and last sight hai.....
Ye kehte hue Arjun hansne laga lekin uska saath iss baar kisi ne nahi diya.....Sabhi thak chuke the hanste hanste....
Rahul:- Uske baad mai 2 saal baad Nisha se mila .....Jab maine apna flat change kiya to new flat me wo mujhse 1 floor upar rehti hai....Suru suru me to hamaare bich nafrat hi chalta raha aur dhire dhire doshti ho gayi......Jab aur close ho gaye to mujhe pata chala ki mai usse pyaar karne laga hu....Lekin uski feelings ke baare me nahi jaanta ki wo mujhse pyaar karti hai yaa nahi.....
Risabh:- Kya .....Wo tera itna pass rehti hai aur tune hame bataya nahi.....
Rahul:- Issme bataane waali kya baat hai....
Arjun:- Abb ye bakwass baatein karna chhodo ....Rahul ye bataa ki tu Nisha ko propose kab karega...
Rahul:- Propose karna itna aasan hai kya.....Pehle to uske dil ki haal jaana hoga.....Wo mujhse pyaar karti hai yaa nahi....Aur fir baad me propose.....Nahi to wo mera proposal reject bhi kar degi aur dosti bhi risk me aa jaayega.....
Arjun:- Kyu.....Abb pata chala na propose karna kitna mushkil hai.....Uss din to tu keh raha tha ki propose karna koi badi baat nahi hai aur tu kisi ko bhi propose kar sakta hai.....Abb pata chala true love me propose karna kitna mushkil kaam hai....
Rahul iss baat ka koi jawaab nahi deta.....Wo chup ho jaata hai....Lekin Risabh ki baat ne fir se uska khaamoshi tod diya....
Risabh:- Arjun tu bhi kya puraani puraani baaton ko yaad kar raha hai....Abb ye baatein chhod ye khushi ke pal me aisi baatein acchi nahi lagti.....Rahul tu kab party dega hame????
Rahul:- Party.....Kaun sa party?
Risabh:- Tujhe pyaar ho jaane ki party....
Rahul:- Abe to isme kaun sa party......Agar Nisha mera proposal accept karti hai to jarur dunga party...Lekin ye one sided love ki party kaun deta hai.....
Risabh:- Tu yakin rakh bhai.....Wo jarur maan jaayegi.....Lekin bhai party to tujhe dena hi padega......
Risabh ne itna keh diya ki sabhi ne jidd pakad liya party lene ka....Ant me majboor hokar Rahul ne bhi party ke liye haa keh diya....
Idhar Rahul party ke baare me soch raha tha aur udhar sabhi log pareshaan ho gaye the Rahul ki gaayab hone se....Raj baar baar phone karke thak chuka tha lekin Rahul ka phone bhi nahi lag raha tha.....Riya bhi Nisha ki flat me chali jaati hai usse baat karne ke liye....Lekin usko samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki Nisha ko kya jawaab de.