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Fantasy A YOUNG WEREWOLF (COMPLETED)

Just yes or no

  • Yes

    Votes: 34 91.9%
  • No

    Votes: 3 8.1%

  • Total voters
    37
  • Poll closed .

Naina

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WRITER NOTE:- ye ek fantasy story hai iska real life se koi lena dena nahi hai and fantasy means imagination to ye na kahe ki ye kyu hua aisa nahi ho sakta. Simple sa answer hai its work of imagination or imagination mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai to isey real life se na jode. :Redface:
matlab masoom savaalon pe full stop laga diya ju ne :D
 

Naina

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{UPDATE:-24}



Wtf ek second mein mar gaya wo process bhi nahi kar paya, taniya to ye scene dekh ke behosh ho gayi aur khushal ke mom dad bhi lekin khushal uska dil kha gaya kyuki alpha ka dil khaane se takat kayi guna badh jaati hai.


Ab aage:-


Ab chalte hai thoda flashback mein yaani ke is stroy ke origin pe.


Flashback:-


Baat us samay ki hai jab god ne do energies ko create kiya tha ek blue energy aur ek red energy, in dono energies ka main kaam earth ka santulan banaye rakhna hai. In energies ko khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta aur inke dharko ko koi maar nahi sakta hai siway ek doosre ke wo bhi ek aise khanjar se jo is waqt kaha hai kisi ko nahi maloom. Na in dono energies ko koi doosra maar sakta hai na khatam kar sakta hai.


Khushal aur king abse nahi hai ye do naam suru se chalte aa rahe hai. Ye dono bahut saalo tak theek se earth ka santulan banaye huye they lekin dheere dheere in dono mein thoda ghamand aa gaya. Aur dono mein ladayi hone lagi lekin is ladayi ko rokne ke liye god ko bich mein aana pada aur unhone kuch niyam banaye jinme 3 niyam sabse ahem they


  1. In dono ka janam 100 saal mein ek baar hoga aur inka lakshay hoga ek doosre ko mitake khud ke hisab se chalna pute 100 saal tak.
  2. Doosra niyam ye tha ki ye dono sirf ek khanjar se hi ek doosre ko maar sakte hai.
  3. Inme koi human emotion nahi hoga agar human emotion aaye to ye mare. Aur inka janam har baar ek nayi species mein hoga.

Aur har baar red gaurdian yaani king khushal ko maarta aa raha tha dhoke se kyuki khushal mein human emotions aane lage they aur wo kamjor padne laga tha lekin is baar wo ek werewolf bana tha to usme human emotion control karne ki aur khatam karne ki ability thi.


Khushal ne khudko aliya se katwana aur devastator se panga lena khushal ka plan tha usey lag raha tha ki devastator hi red gaurdian hai lekin aisa nahi nikla to usne apne plan badal diye aur sidha sabke samne khul ke aa gaya.


WRITER NOTE:- ye ek fantasy story hai iska real life se koi lena dena nahi hai and fantasy means imagination to ye na kahe ki ye kyu hua aisa nahi ho sakta. Simple sa answer hai its work of imagination or imagination mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai to isey real life se na jode. :Redface:


Back to story:-


Khushal, taniya aur uske mom dad sofe pe baithe huye they ek naye apartment mein aur khushal ko chodke sab ke face pe dukh tha, lekin khushal ne apne human emotion ko control kar rakha tha usey sadiyo se chali aa rahi is ladayi ko hamesa ke liye khatam karna tha aur wo usi ke baare mein soch raha tha.

Dad:- beta ab kya karna hai.

Khushal:- ab bas wo khanjar dhoondna hai aur ye sab khatam karna hai.

Dad:- lekin tumhe pata hai ye sab khatam nahi hone wala.

Khushal:- nahi is baar ye sab khatam hoke rahega kyuki main king ke sath sath khud ko bhi khatam kar lunga.

Dad:- par beta wo possible nahi hai kyuki wo khanjar tum dono mein se kisi ek sine mein ghuste hi gayab ho jayega.


Khushal:- haa pata hai lekin usko roka jaa sakta hai agar hum dono mein se koi chahe to

Dad:- tumhara plan kya hai ?


Khushal:- wo to baad mein bataunga lekin abhi filhal taniya is kahani ki main character hai usey sambhal ke rakhna hoga kyuki iska wo hi karegi.


Dad:- hmm mein samjh raha hu maine apne pack ke logo ko bula liya hai tum ab free ho


Khushal:- kya aapke pack ke werewolf king ko rok payenge

Dad:- usey to nahi rok sakte lekin uski mandli ko to rok hi sakte hai na .

Khushal:- mujhe nahi pata aap kya karoge lekin taniya ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.

Dad:- wo hum dekh lenge lekin tumhe black mountain jaana hoga na khanjar lene us king se pehle.

Khushal ke face pe ek devil smile aa gayi ye line sunke

Khushal:- nahi is baar wo hi khanjar leke aayega main to uski gair mojudgi mein un dhokebaazo ko khatam karunga.

Mom:- beta bas tumhe kuch hona nahi chahiye.

Khushal:- mujhe kuch nahi hoga waise bhi khatam to hona hi hai in sab ko rokne ke liye.

Taniya jo chupchap baithi thi wo apne bhai ke gale lag gayi.


TO BE CONTINUED ??
matlab yeh king pehle se hi dhokhebazi karta aa raha hai khushal ke sath par isbaari nahi...
So saara khel khushal hi khel raha hai matlab...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
 

SHADOW KING

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matlab masoom savaalon pe full stop laga diya ju ne :D
sahi kaha ????...jab maine ye padha to samajh gaya ki ye sirf aapke liye hai ??????...baaki kahani mast hai ....kyunki me aapke comment aur sawaalo ko bhi padh raha hu ....aapne poori kahani ko achche se padhkar postmartam karne ka socha jisse jawaab mil sake . .

par ek baat aapki achchi lagi ki meri tarah aapne bhi ye poochha( maine bas padhkar socha ) ki kushal aur taniya ko naina ne kyu paal poskar bada kiya ,,pehle bhi maar sakte the ....
 
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Naina

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sahi kaha ????...jab maine ye padha to samajh gaya ki ye sirf aapke liye hai ??????...baaki kahani mast hai ....kyunki me aapke comment aur sawaalo ko bhi padh raha hu ....aapne poori kahani ko achche se padhkar postmartam karne ka socha jisse jawaab mil sake . .

par ek baat aapki achchi lagi ki meri tarah aapne bhi ye poochha( maine bas padhkar socha ) ki kushal aur taniya ko naina ne kyu paal poskar bada kiya ,,pehle bhi maar sakte the ....
ab aap puch lo writer sahab se
Idhar toh muh hi band kar diya writer sahab ne :D
 

SHADOW KING

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matlab yeh king pehle se hi dhokhebazi karta aa raha hai khushal ke sath par isbaari nahi...
So saara khel khushal hi khel raha hai matlab...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
sara ke marne ka dukh hua ....wo to masoom thi ...king ne usko nahi maarna tha ,,par kushal ne uske bete ko maarkar kuch had tak badlaa le liya
 

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Wtf ek second mein mar gaya wo process bhi nahi kar paya, taniya to ye scene dekh ke behosh ho gayi aur khushal ke mom dad bhi lekin khushal uska dil kha gaya kyuki alpha ka dil khaane se takat kayi guna badh jaati hai.


Ab aage:-


Ab chalte hai thoda flashback mein yaani ke is stroy ke origin pe.


Flashback:-


Baat us samay ki hai jab god ne do energies ko create kiya tha ek blue energy aur ek red energy, in dono energies ka main kaam earth ka santulan banaye rakhna hai. In energies ko khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta aur inke dharko ko koi maar nahi sakta hai siway ek doosre ke wo bhi ek aise khanjar se jo is waqt kaha hai kisi ko nahi maloom. Na in dono energies ko koi doosra maar sakta hai na khatam kar sakta hai.


Khushal aur king abse nahi hai ye do naam suru se chalte aa rahe hai. Ye dono bahut saalo tak theek se earth ka santulan banaye huye they lekin dheere dheere in dono mein thoda ghamand aa gaya. Aur dono mein ladayi hone lagi lekin is ladayi ko rokne ke liye god ko bich mein aana pada aur unhone kuch niyam banaye jinme 3 niyam sabse ahem they


  1. In dono ka janam 100 saal mein ek baar hoga aur inka lakshay hoga ek doosre ko mitake khud ke hisab se chalna pute 100 saal tak.
  2. Doosra niyam ye tha ki ye dono sirf ek khanjar se hi ek doosre ko maar sakte hai.
  3. Inme koi human emotion nahi hoga agar human emotion aaye to ye mare. Aur inka janam har baar ek nayi species mein hoga.

Aur har baar red gaurdian yaani king khushal ko maarta aa raha tha dhoke se kyuki khushal mein human emotions aane lage they aur wo kamjor padne laga tha lekin is baar wo ek werewolf bana tha to usme human emotion control karne ki aur khatam karne ki ability thi.


Khushal ne khudko aliya se katwana aur devastator se panga lena khushal ka plan tha usey lag raha tha ki devastator hi red gaurdian hai lekin aisa nahi nikla to usne apne plan badal diye aur sidha sabke samne khul ke aa gaya.


WRITER NOTE:- ye ek fantasy story hai iska real life se koi lena dena nahi hai and fantasy means imagination to ye na kahe ki ye kyu hua aisa nahi ho sakta. Simple sa answer hai its work of imagination or imagination mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai to isey real life se na jode. :Redface:


Back to story:-


Khushal, taniya aur uske mom dad sofe pe baithe huye they ek naye apartment mein aur khushal ko chodke sab ke face pe dukh tha, lekin khushal ne apne human emotion ko control kar rakha tha usey sadiyo se chali aa rahi is ladayi ko hamesa ke liye khatam karna tha aur wo usi ke baare mein soch raha tha.

Dad:- beta ab kya karna hai.

Khushal:- ab bas wo khanjar dhoondna hai aur ye sab khatam karna hai.

Dad:- lekin tumhe pata hai ye sab khatam nahi hone wala.

Khushal:- nahi is baar ye sab khatam hoke rahega kyuki main king ke sath sath khud ko bhi khatam kar lunga.

Dad:- par beta wo possible nahi hai kyuki wo khanjar tum dono mein se kisi ek sine mein ghuste hi gayab ho jayega.


Khushal:- haa pata hai lekin usko roka jaa sakta hai agar hum dono mein se koi chahe to

Dad:- tumhara plan kya hai ?


Khushal:- wo to baad mein bataunga lekin abhi filhal taniya is kahani ki main character hai usey sambhal ke rakhna hoga kyuki iska wo hi karegi.


Dad:- hmm mein samjh raha hu maine apne pack ke logo ko bula liya hai tum ab free ho


Khushal:- kya aapke pack ke werewolf king ko rok payenge

Dad:- usey to nahi rok sakte lekin uski mandli ko to rok hi sakte hai na .

Khushal:- mujhe nahi pata aap kya karoge lekin taniya ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.

Dad:- wo hum dekh lenge lekin tumhe black mountain jaana hoga na khanjar lene us king se pehle.

Khushal ke face pe ek devil smile aa gayi ye line sunke

Khushal:- nahi is baar wo hi khanjar leke aayega main to uski gair mojudgi mein un dhokebaazo ko khatam karunga.

Mom:- beta bas tumhe kuch hona nahi chahiye.

Khushal:- mujhe kuch nahi hoga waise bhi khatam to hona hi hai in sab ko rokne ke liye.

Taniya jo chupchap baithi thi wo apne bhai ke gale lag gayi.


TO BE CONTINUED ??
Awesome update bhai ji
Chota hai lekin
 

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Jis Tyler ke ek hawwa bana rakha thaa uska to ek hi baar me ram nam satya ho gaya aur taniya aur Maa baap ka behosh hona samjh nahi aaya kyuki woh aisay kaisay jabki woh ek Alpha aur Alpha ko janamdata hain.
Thanks buddy and wo behosh isliye huye kyuki wo ek blue gaurdian ke aura ko seh nahi sakte
 
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