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Aunty yeh dhokha dene se pahale sochana chahiye tha aur apane omega home pe itra rahi thi sab ke sab kutte ki maut mare nice update bhai....
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Story to achhi h lekin sare character ko hi khatm kar diya to bacha kya ab ya likhne ka man nahin ab 30 updates pe story close kar rahe ho ???
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Awesome update bhai ji{UPDATE-27}
King is time ek forest ke samne khada tha jo ki aabadi wale ilake se bhut dur hai, wo khada hoke us forest ko dekh raha tha ki wo kaise paar karega isko fir se kyuki pichli baar wo badi muskil se bahar nikla tha, usey pata tha ki wo marega nahi lekin kaid to ho sakta hai na aur ye khayal aate hi uski maathe pe pareshani ki kuch lakeere ubhari lekin wo kuch sexon mein chali gayi, aur wo badh gaya us jungle ki taraf jo ki bahar se jitna sunder hai ander se utna khatarnak.
Black forest naam isliye hai kyuki sab pedh black colour ke hai aur iske ander to suraj ki ek kiran nahi pahuch sakti aur is jungle ko sabse khatarnak banati hai iske under ki 5 level aur iske ander rehne wale narbhaksi, ab aap ye sochoge ki jab jungle itna khatarnak hai to narbhakshi ko nuksaan kyu nahi pahuchata kyuki narbhakshi yahi se upje huye jeev hai inka kaam hi jungle ko saaf rakhna hai. In narbhakshi ki ek alag smell hoti hai jisse inhe jungle koi nuksaan nahi pahuchata. Aur main baat yaha koi supernatural powers kaam nahi karti.
Ab aate hai jungle ke 5 level pe jinko paar karke pahuchte hai black mountain pe aur fir milti hai ek sena jo ki sirf black kapdo mein hoti hai unka koi naam nahi koi origin nahi bas wo kisi ko jaane nahi dete black mountain pe.
Level 1:- ye basically ek daldal ki tarah hai jo ki kisi cheez ko apne ander nahi kheechta balki gala deta hai, aur agar aage badhna hai to isme se hi jaana hoga agar nahi jaaye paye to khatam.
Level 2:- thoda aage jaane pe aate hai ped paudhe jo ki kisi bhi jeev ka khoon chuste hai aur khatam kar dete hai usey kuch seconds mein.
Level 3 :- ye ek khaayi hai jiska koi aant nazar nahi aata ab kisi ko aage badhna hai to isey paar karna hoga aur iski chaudayi bhi bahut jyada hai ki koi kood ke bhi paar na kar paaye aur agar khayi mein niche girne oe kya milega wo kisi ko nahi pata.
Level 4:- khayi ko paar karte hi aa jata hai narbhakshi ka ilaka aur yaha kya hota hai batane ki jaroorat nahi.
Level 5 :- ye ek aisa jharna hai jaha pe khoon behta hai pani ki jagah aur aage ka rasta jharne ke ander se jaata hai aur jharne mein utarna hai to 3 sawalo ke jawab dene hote hai aur agar ek bhi galat to wahi tumhari body ka sara khoon ye jharna le leta hai.
King is samay us daldal ke samne khada tha aur soch raha tha ki kaise paar karu isey, kuch der sochne ke baad usne ek pathar uthaya aur usme fek ke mara to wo pathar kuch seconds mein chura banke gayab ho gaya, ab king ne socha kyun na wo ek baar khud ka pair bidha ke dekhe aur jaise hi usne ye kya to uska pair seconds mein galna start ho gaya aur usey itna dard achanak hua ki wo us daldal ki taraf ludak gaya ab daldal mein girna matlab puri body galna aur uske sath bhi aisa hi hone laga lekin king ko dard ke sath sath ab gusaa aane laga tha aur ab uski aankhe ek dum red ho gayi uski body ka temperature apne aap itna badh gaya ki wo ret khud door hone lag gayi usse aur kuch seconds mein wo dal dal mein khada lekin uski body pe ret touch nahi ho rahi thi lekin uske body ka kuch hissa gal chuka tha par wo bhi dheere dheere nahi ek dum se sahi ho Gaya ab wo aaage badhne laga aur jaha wo pair rakhta waha se ret apne aap hatt jati kyuki uski body ka temperature bhut jyada tha us waqt agar ret touch bhi hoti to uska wajood mit jata. Khair king ne wo daldal paar ki aur aage badh gaya.
Thoda aage chalne ke baad achanak se uspe ek waar sa huya lekin king ke reflexes bhut tez hai to wo bach gaya seconds mein and usey pata lag gaya ki wo second level pe aa gaya hai aur ye khayal aate hi wo bhut speed se piche hua aur samne ki taraf dekhke ki isko kaise paar kare kyuki yaha wo apni heat ka use nahi kar sakta tha kyuki second ke hisab se uski body mein se aur bina blood ke body uski energy sambhal nahi payegi aur wo fat jayega.
Usne kayi der tak waha khade reh ke socha aur fir achanak se piche mud ke chal diya thodi dur chalne pe usey talab mila aur wo us talab mei kud gaya aur pura gilla hoke bahaar aaya aur apni puri body pe waha ki ret lapet li body gilli hone ki wajah se wo ret usse chipak gayi aur uske body ki smell ruk gayi. Aur fir wo tezi se badh gaya second level ki taraf kyuki ret sukte hi jhadne lag jata.
Usne bhut tez gati se second level paar kiya lekin speed tez hone ko wajah se ret sukh gaya aur jab 2 3 ped bache they to ret hata aur ret hatte hi ek ped ki tez tehni aake lagi king ki garden pe aur khoon choosna start lekin king ne apne nakhoon bade kiye aur usko kaat ke jhatke se aage gir pada. Hasshh bach gaya
Ye sab bhut tez hua tha means kuch seconds mein ye sab hua tha king ka aadha khoon khatam ho gaya tha isliye wo aram karne ke liye ruk gaya.
WRITER NOTE:- BAKI KE 3 LEVEL NEXT UPDATE MEIN JO RAAT KO AA SAKTA HAI :LIAR:
To BE CONTINUED ??

Bhai update toh achaa hai aur rai baat 3500 words ki. Toh mane abi tak jitne stories read ki hai uska size 5500 or more 6000 to rha hai. Toh mane apne hisaab se bola hai. Kyu ki ye update short se v short laga. Anyways.{UPDATE-27}
King is time ek forest ke samne khada tha jo ki aabadi wale ilake se bhut dur hai, wo khada hoke us forest ko dekh raha tha ki wo kaise paar karega isko fir se kyuki pichli baar wo badi muskil se bahar nikla tha, usey pata tha ki wo marega nahi lekin kaid to ho sakta hai na aur ye khayal aate hi uski maathe pe pareshani ki kuch lakeere ubhari lekin wo kuch sexon mein chali gayi, aur wo badh gaya us jungle ki taraf jo ki bahar se jitna sunder hai ander se utna khatarnak.
Black forest naam isliye hai kyuki sab pedh black colour ke hai aur iske ander to suraj ki ek kiran nahi pahuch sakti aur is jungle ko sabse khatarnak banati hai iske under ki 5 level aur iske ander rehne wale narbhaksi, ab aap ye sochoge ki jab jungle itna khatarnak hai to narbhakshi ko nuksaan kyu nahi pahuchata kyuki narbhakshi yahi se upje huye jeev hai inka kaam hi jungle ko saaf rakhna hai. In narbhakshi ki ek alag smell hoti hai jisse inhe jungle koi nuksaan nahi pahuchata. Aur main baat yaha koi supernatural powers kaam nahi karti.
Ab aate hai jungle ke 5 level pe jinko paar karke pahuchte hai black mountain pe aur fir milti hai ek sena jo ki sirf black kapdo mein hoti hai unka koi naam nahi koi origin nahi bas wo kisi ko jaane nahi dete black mountain pe.
Level 1:- ye basically ek daldal ki tarah hai jo ki kisi cheez ko apne ander nahi kheechta balki gala deta hai, aur agar aage badhna hai to isme se hi jaana hoga agar nahi jaaye paye to khatam.
Level 2:- thoda aage jaane pe aate hai ped paudhe jo ki kisi bhi jeev ka khoon chuste hai aur khatam kar dete hai usey kuch seconds mein.
Level 3 :- ye ek khaayi hai jiska koi aant nazar nahi aata ab kisi ko aage badhna hai to isey paar karna hoga aur iski chaudayi bhi bahut jyada hai ki koi kood ke bhi paar na kar paaye aur agar khayi mein niche girne oe kya milega wo kisi ko nahi pata.
Level 4:- khayi ko paar karte hi aa jata hai narbhakshi ka ilaka aur yaha kya hota hai batane ki jaroorat nahi.
Level 5 :- ye ek aisa jharna hai jaha pe khoon behta hai pani ki jagah aur aage ka rasta jharne ke ander se jaata hai aur jharne mein utarna hai to 3 sawalo ke jawab dene hote hai aur agar ek bhi galat to wahi tumhari body ka sara khoon ye jharna le leta hai.
King is samay us daldal ke samne khada tha aur soch raha tha ki kaise paar karu isey, kuch der sochne ke baad usne ek pathar uthaya aur usme fek ke mara to wo pathar kuch seconds mein chura banke gayab ho gaya, ab king ne socha kyun na wo ek baar khud ka pair bidha ke dekhe aur jaise hi usne ye kya to uska pair seconds mein galna start ho gaya aur usey itna dard achanak hua ki wo us daldal ki taraf ludak gaya ab daldal mein girna matlab puri body galna aur uske sath bhi aisa hi hone laga lekin king ko dard ke sath sath ab gusaa aane laga tha aur ab uski aankhe ek dum red ho gayi uski body ka temperature apne aap itna badh gaya ki wo ret khud door hone lag gayi usse aur kuch seconds mein wo dal dal mein khada lekin uski body pe ret touch nahi ho rahi thi lekin uske body ka kuch hissa gal chuka tha par wo bhi dheere dheere nahi ek dum se sahi ho Gaya ab wo aaage badhne laga aur jaha wo pair rakhta waha se ret apne aap hatt jati kyuki uski body ka temperature bhut jyada tha us waqt agar ret touch bhi hoti to uska wajood mit jata. Khair king ne wo daldal paar ki aur aage badh gaya.
Thoda aage chalne ke baad achanak se uspe ek waar sa huya lekin king ke reflexes bhut tez hai to wo bach gaya seconds mein and usey pata lag gaya ki wo second level pe aa gaya hai aur ye khayal aate hi wo bhut speed se piche hua aur samne ki taraf dekhke ki isko kaise paar kare kyuki yaha wo apni heat ka use nahi kar sakta tha kyuki second ke hisab se uski body mein se aur bina blood ke body uski energy sambhal nahi payegi aur wo fat jayega.
Usne kayi der tak waha khade reh ke socha aur fir achanak se piche mud ke chal diya thodi dur chalne pe usey talab mila aur wo us talab mei kud gaya aur pura gilla hoke bahaar aaya aur apni puri body pe waha ki ret lapet li body gilli hone ki wajah se wo ret usse chipak gayi aur uske body ki smell ruk gayi. Aur fir wo tezi se badh gaya second level ki taraf kyuki ret sukte hi jhadne lag jata.
Usne bhut tez gati se second level paar kiya lekin speed tez hone ko wajah se ret sukh gaya aur jab 2 3 ped bache they to ret hata aur ret hatte hi ek ped ki tez tehni aake lagi king ki garden pe aur khoon choosna start lekin king ne apne nakhoon bade kiye aur usko kaat ke jhatke se aage gir pada. Hasshh bach gaya
Ye sab bhut tez hua tha means kuch seconds mein ye sab hua tha king ka aadha khoon khatam ho gaya tha isliye wo aram karne ke liye ruk gaya.
WRITER NOTE:- BAKI KE 3 LEVEL NEXT UPDATE MEIN JO RAAT KO AA SAKTA HAI :LIAR:
To BE CONTINUED ??