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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Nandni…



Main to shadi me vyast thi.. Maa ke sath bahas chal rahi thi. Main unhe chidhane ke liye kah rahi thi, jaymala ke waqt main dj bajwaungi aur aise thumke lagaungi…


Pata nahi achanak kya hua. Bahut bad type feeling thi. Laga mera dum ghunt raha ho.. jab aanken khuli to main bistar me thi, aur mere phone ki ghanti lagatar baj rahi thi. Bade bhaiya ke 50 call aa chuke the aur jo koi bhi pone uthata bus itna hi puchhte, Nischal kahan hai..


Main jab jagi aur unse baat hui tab kisi anjaane dar ne mujhe gher liya. Hum dono ko bus yahi lag raha tha kahin koi anhoni to nahi hui tumhare sath. Fir mujhe pata chala ki bade bhaiya ne 4 ghante me hi apne department ko tumhe dhundhne ke liye itna padeshan kar chuke the ki unhe 1 week ka suspension mil gaya tha…


Bade bhaiya Jivisha ke ghar bhi pahunche the, jahan Jivisha nahi thi, Chirag aur Aarsi bhi gayab the aur kisi se contact nahi ho pa raha tha... Unki baat sun'kar main ghabra gayi, mujhe lag gaya ki kuch to galat ho gaya hai.


Fir maine kahani bana diya bade bhaiya se. Unse boli tunhara sandesh aaya tha aur tumne kaha hai wo Jivisha aur uske pyaron ke sath kuch din ke liye chhuti par ja raha hai, apne grah, jab tak laute nahi, tab tak mukhiya ji ko sambhal lena.


Tikhi bahas ho gayi thi uss waqt bade bhaiya ke sath. Wo man'ne ke liye raji nahi the ki tum yun achanak Aarsi aur Chirag ko lekar bhi chale jaoge. Fir jab unse kahi ki Jivisha apne shaktiyon ke karan bekabu ho chuki thi aur tumhe (Nischal) gambhir roop se aisa ghayal kar di ki bachna lagbhag muskil tha. Uss waqt Jatin ne Chirag aur Aarsi ko Jivisha ke samne rakh diya, tab kahin jakar wo shant hui. Ilaz yahan Prithvi par sambhaw nahi tha islye achanak Nischal aur Jivisha dono ke ilaz ke liye Aizem grah nikalna para..


Itna batane ke baad tab kahin jakar wo mane… halanki unhe to shant kar chuki thi, lekin mera man bilkul bechain tha. Main tumhare khyalon me hi dubi thi, tab mere hatheli par sandesh chhapa… Koi aaschrya nahi tha.. Mujhe samjh me aa gaya ki ye emergency sandesh tumne apne mask ke jariye chhoda hai.. kisi GPS ki tarah ye area ko locate kar rahi thi. Main akeli hi nikal rahi thi, lekin pyar ke riste me ehsas dur tak pahunch hi jate hain....


Main tumhare liye padesan thi aur mera baby mujhe lekar chinta me tha.. raat ke 1 baje wo mere pass pahuncha tha. Main apne ghar ke darwaje par hi thi aur Ansh ki car thik mere samne. Main, Ansh se tumhare vishay me batayi ki Nischal khatre me hoga aur Ansh ne kaha ek se bhale 2 aur waise bhi ek doctor sath rahe to khatra kam ho jata hai..


Hum dono hi apne viman ke pass pahunche.. Ansh ko to yakin hi nahi hua tha ki tumne mujhe wo viman gift kiya tha. Tumhare mask ke upar chhape location ko maine viman ke GPS par locate kar diya aur viman hume sidha yahan le aaya..


Tumhare master computer ne hunara welcome kiya. Tumhare indore se nikalne se lekar yahan tumhare barf me girne tak ki puri kahani screen par thi. Yahan aakar pata chala ki tunhara location aur khatre ka andesa, sab ye super computer mujhe bhej rahi thi..


Barf me khudai ke liye sare equipment hume diye gaye aur sambhawit location ki jankari bhi… kya kamal ke equipment the wo.. mahaj 2 ghante me hum tumhe barf ki gahraiyon me dhundh chuke the..


Aahhhh ! Kya haalat banayi thi un kamino ne tumhari.. sale harami kahin ke… Nischal mujhe sabse pahle uss Jatin aur Apini se hi milna hai…


Ansh, Nandni ke kandhe par hath rakhte, usse shant karwate huye aage kahne laga…


"Tum jaise hi hume mile, hum tumhare super computer ki baat ko follow kiye. Wo kahi thi, jab Tum Milo to tumhe bilkul bhi touch na karen, bus ek chhota sa command dekar wahan se wapas chale aana hai"..


Humne thik waise hi kiya, jo sikka abhi tumne Nandu ko diya wo tumhare upar girakar, hum wahan se wapas aa gaye. Jaise hi viman ke ander pahunche.. hume hospital area me aane ke liye kaha gaya…


Hum soch hi rahe the ki hospital area me pahunchenge kaise, tabhi humare pass pick up pahunchi. Hum jaise hi hospital area ke darwaje par the, sabhi kapde utarne ke instructions mile..


Humne wo follow kiya aur jaise hi ander pahla kadam liya humare pure badan par kayi sare liquid ki fuhar barsi aur fir kuch kapde jute sab humare liye khud w khud aa gaye.. kamal ka medical innovation..


Yah kamal ki technology hum pahli baar dekh rahe the. Aage jaise-jaise computer kahte gaya, humne wo kiya.. tumhare body se sare weapon autometic system se nikale gaye the, wo bhi body ke blood flow aur blood pressure ko control karte huye..


Jab tumhara complete body scan hua, hum dono ko aisa laga tumhara super computer sisak rahi hai. Jaise uske ander bhawnaye dal di gayi ho… scanning result dekh'kar to Nandu ko bhi chakkar aa gaya tha… brain cell complete function karna band kar chuki thi aur shwans atak-atak kar ander bahar ho rahi thi..


Mujhe laga jis super computer ke pass bhawna hogi wo mujhe kuch manual control to de hi sakti hai.. tabhi maine pahle to extra oxygen support ke liye ek ventilator ki vaywastha karwayi.. aur brain cell activation ke liye brain ko trigger karna tha, isliye mujhe brain surgery bhi karni pari..


Lagbhag 6 mahine tak medical support ke baad, tunhara brain stable hua tha, lekin ab bhi tumhe hosh me kaise lana hai wo samjh me nahi aa raha tha... Hum sab nirash the.. 6 mahine me lagbhag himmat toot chuki thi.


Tumhare super computer ne hume bahut hausla diya. Hum dono ne milkar kayi sari theory par work out kiye. Lagbhag mahino tak kewal theory par discussion hota raha. Anth me yah tay hua ki hum brain ko deep fridge se bahar nikalne ke liye ek stable high temperature, brain ke blood flow me denge..


Muje yaad tha tumhara body temprature jab 500⁰ ke karib pahuncha tha.. laga ki tunhara brain high heat capabilities hai. Fir kya tha kayi din tak issi par sodh chala ki bina dusre body organ me blood ke high heat temprature ko pahunchaye kaise kewal brain me wo bheja jaye...


Theory maine diya aur lagbhag 4 mahine ke mehnat ke baad tumhara super computer yahan ke needle process me buniyadi ferbadal ke sath commanding ka aisa web banaya ki main jo chahta tha wo possible ho chuka tha..


Humne body temperature ke normal heat se shuru kiya tha .. aur jab tum jage, tab tumhare brain ko 250⁰ celcius ki heat pahunchayi ja rahi thi… Kuch der pahle mujhe super computer bulayi aur kahi ki sabhi medical equipment ko nikaln do, yahan se mera command khatm hota hai… Main uski baato ka matlab samjh pata uss se pahle hi tum jaag chuke the…
uiiiieee :shocked2: :shocked2:  itni advanced medical science .. :iamok:
Nischal:- Doc tum wakai me kamal ke ho, pata nahi tunhara ehsan main kaise utar paunga.. darasal kewal tumhara hi nahi balki tum dono ka… dono ne ab tak kewal mujhe diya hi hai.. main badle me kuch nahi kar paya...


Nandni:- Bus-bus senty dialogue mat maar.… Aur mere sawalon ka jawab de ab.. usme ek aur baat jod dena.. ye pura extreme high tech shahar lekar tu kabse ghum raha hai..


Nischal:- Jab se iss sahar ko maine dobara banaya, tab se main isse lekar ghum raha hun.. Khair tere sawalon ka jawab main aaram se deta hun, pahle mujhe wo weapon dekhna hai jo mere sine me utara gaya tha…


Jaise hi Nischal ne kaha weapon dekhna hai, waise hi Ansh aur Nandni khade ho gaye.. Nischal unhe apni jagah baithne ko bola aur command diya… Kuch hi der me wo weapon unke pass thi…


"Yahan kya koi jadu hai kya.. ya logon ko kahin chhipa kar rakha hai. Har chij pass aa jati hai".. Nandni aashrya se puchne lagi..


Nischal:- Are yaar yahan to kadam-kadam par tere sawal hai. Ye pura viman triple layer ki robotics engineering hai… ab iske bare me batane laga na to din raat lagega samjhane me.. upar-upar samjh ki, ek paper ko mod'kar shape de sakte hai.. jaise ki naaw, jahaj aur ful.


Bus ye jagah bhi ussi ke concept ka hai… 200 square kilometre par, 20 fit mota box dala tha aur uske ander sara machinary fit karne ke baad ye shape de diya... Shape dene ke baad, fir jaroorat ke hisab se ander ki banawat ki gayi hai.. iss se jyada ki detail tu manual me padh lena, pure 10 page ka manual hai…


Nandni:- Haan dekha tha wo manual.... ek page wo iss hall ke 6 guna jyada bada tha…


Nischal apne kaam me lag gaya aur hathiyar ke tip ko jibh se ek baar chata…. jibh se jaise hi tip lagaya Nischal hanste huye kahne laga… "Tum duniya ki sabse innocent shatir ho… kash main tunhare itna durdarshita rakh pata"…


Nischal uss hathiyar ko lekar control room chala gaya. Control room se lage hi ek kafi bada hall tha… Nischal uss hall me jakar wahan ki deewar ko bade gaur se dekhne laga... Aisa laga jaise wo apna bachapan se jawani ko ji raha hai… wahan deewar ki har panting mano jivit ho jaise…


Tasveeron ko dekhte huye, Nischal bachpan se jawani ke ore badhne laga..... Aage ki tasveer par jaise hi najar gayi… "Oh, Nandu kahan rah gayi, usse bhi yahin bula leta hun"..


Nischal ne Nandni aur aakash ko bhi ussi hall me bula liya.. dono jaise hi uss hall me dakhil huye…. "Wowww, ye sab kya hai Nischal"…


Charo ore deewar par lagi tasveere jaise kuch kahna chah rahi ho. Har moment ki tasveer itni khubsurti ke sath wahan lagi hui thi, mano har tasveer apni kahani khud bayan kar raha ho.


Nandni:- Kya baat hai Nischal, aisa lag raha hai yahan ki har deewar jivit ho… ye sab tasveere tumne capture ki hain?


Ansh:- Yahan par to meri bhi kayi tasveere hain.. waise ek baat bahut galat hai..


Nischal aur Nandni dono ek sath… "kya galat hai"..


Ansh:- Yahan par 50% tasveeron me kewal Kasak hai… ye kya ghotala hai?


Nandni:- Haan Nischal main bhi ye puchne wali thi.. waise pahnawe aur jagah se lag nahi raha ki ye Pune me li gayi tasveer hai... Tu Kasak ko alag se kisi khubsurat hill station le jata tha kya? Aur jab Kasak ke sath itni tasveere hai iska matlab..


Niachal:- Matlab duniya me mera pahla pyar wahi hai.. waise wo Kasak nahi hai.. Serin hai.. Kasak se lagbhag uski shakl milti hai..


Nandni:- Oh to ye hai Serin, jisne tunhare maut ki puri planning ki thi… kamal hai Nischal, wo tujhe marna chahti thi aur tere dil me uske liye kewal pyar hai…
aisi ship mil jaye toh maje hi maje hai.. har ek chij bas bolne bhar se hi samne hajir...
yeyyy nischal bhi pyar karta hai kasak se :vhappy:
Ab dono ki shaadi ho jaani chahiye... :vhappy:
Ab yeh chuja jhingul aakash koun hai aur kahan se aa gaya nandu k sath wahan pe :mad2:
nandu bilkul thik kah rahi hai ki sering ek harman dhokhebaz dagabaaz insects lober hai.. uspe vishvas nahi karna chahiye :approve:



Nischal:- Aaram se baith jao sab batata hun, tumlog kuch pina pasand karoge..


Ansh:- Little little wishkey with chill soda, kuch tala ya bhuna item ho jaye to maza aa jayega..


Nandni:- hehehe.. Haan 2 sal se to maine bhi kuch nahi liya…. Yahan 2-3 peg ki vyawastha ho jati to..


Nischal:- pahle nahi tha, lekin mumbai jakar pura stock bhar liya tha.. 30 truck me se 15 truck to har tarah ke sharab aur beer ke he the…


Nischal ne turant sara saman arrange kiya, teeno wahin ke kitchen area se bahut kuch fry karke le aaye aur baith gaye… 2 peg pine ke baad Nischal sabse pahli tasveer ko dekhkar kahne laga…


Wo hain meri maa.. Venyata.. ek Viggo. Tumne puchha tha na Viggo ke bare me, to achhe se dekh lo main apne prajati ka aakhri known Viggo hun… Jise tum dono ne bachaya..


Takriban 1000 varsh purv universe me bade badlaw ki niw rakhi ja chuki thi. Tab Universe me 2 Jan janti ka bol-bala tha… ek the Mosoori Grah ke Dakasht Prajati aur dusra Aaynek grah ke Viggo. Dono hi ati ghamandi aur bakiyon ko kida makoda samjhne wale… Shayad takat ka nasha hi kuch aisa hota hai.


Pure Universe me jo technology ka prasar hua hai wo inhi dono grahon se hua hai, Prithvi ko chhod'kar. Prithvi ki puri technology in dono grahon ki tarah apni hai.


Jab 2 aapas ki barabar takten takrati hain to khamyaja kayi masoomon ko uthana parta hai. Universe me aisa hi kuch chal raha tha. Mosoori aur Aaynek grah ke bich ki ladai me Universe ka kafi santulan bigad raha tha..


Fir aayi shanti Sandhi. Yah prastaw lagbhag 1000 varsh purv Dwitiya Viggo Sigma dwara diya gaya tha. Ab tum dono soch rahe hoge ki ye Viggo Sigma kaun hai? Viggo Sigma yun samjh lo samast Viggo me takat aur buddhi me Sarw-Shresth. Aage jakar uske ander bhi classification hai aur jinke classification nahi ho paye unhe unclassified kahte hain..
Finally ab pata chalega sabhi ko ki actually kahani ki suruwat huyi kahan se thi....
kya hua tha jiske chalte nischal aur uske aas paas wale aaj is mod pe kade hai...
sabse important baat.. nischal ki mom kuch nahi hona chahiye :bat: .. abhi abhi jikar huyi hai unki... abhi unki bhi entry honi baaki hai :smarty:
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :yourock: :yourock:
 
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Bache aise mahol me fase hain ki kya kaha ja sakta hai... :doh: aur ye infected lovers kahan se ho gaye :banghead: .. jaldi jaldi me ki gayi samiksha :beer:
sering insects lober hai toh hai aur yeh final hai :bat:
nischal pe pith piche waar karti hai... bechari chutku chutki pe hamla karvati hai... is sering pering ki toh aisi ki taisi :bat:
 

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Dwitiya Viggo ke kosis ki wajah se dono grah ke bich shanti sandhi ka samjhauta hua… aur isi sandhi ke tahat dwitiya Viggo Sigma ko, Dakshat ke sabse kusal Shasak ki beti ke sath Jodi banana para, matlab shadi karni pari.


Dono hi grah-vashi iss naye kadam ka swagat khule dil se kiye. Kintu inke milan se jo santan paida hui, uske baad ye sari khushiyan gayab ho gayi. Sab ko laga tha sabse shresth Viggo aur sabse shresth Dakshat ke milan se sabse majboot Viggo ki nayi prajati ka janm hoga.


Lekin sabne ek baat ko najarandaj kar diya ki pure universe me sabse shaktisali iska rachayta hai. Dono ke milan se jo pahli santan utapatti hui, wah ek niskriya Viggo tha, jiski buddhi aur takat kisi aam se grah se insano jaisa tha..


Iss khabar ne to jaise Viggo ki bhawishya niti ko gahra aaghat pahunchaya ho. Dwitiya Viggo Sigma ko aane wale waqt ka aabahsh ho chuka tha, isliye usne apni jodi aur beti ko apne kuch wafadaron ke sath Aizem ki seema me bheja tha. Iss pure jahaj ko ussi Viggo Sigma ne apni jodi ke liye banwaya tha, jiski suraksha taknik ko na to koi Viggo aur na hi koi Dakshat bhed sake.


Viggo Sigma ne apni jodi aur bache ko surakshit karke ek kusal Viggo hone ka saboot de diya tha, lekin apni jodi se alag rahna unke komal dil ko bardast nahi hua aur wo jodi viyog me mar gaye..


Viggo Sigma ki maut aur Dakshat prajati se koi labh na ho pane ke sandarv me, sabhi sandhiyon ki dhajjiyan Viggo ne uda di thi. Lagbhag 100 varshon tak Masoori aur Aaynek grah ke bich khuni khel chalta raha, aur tab satta me aaya tha tirtiya Viggo Sigma.


Bahut hi kurur aur apni gandi samrajyavad niti ko bahut hi strongly follow karne wala. Pahle to usne yudh viram lagaya aur uske baad apne sabhi yogya scientist ke sath Mosoori ke purn safaya ki yojna par kaam karna shuru kar diya.


Mosoori ko bhanak bhi nahi lagi thi aur ek raat jab unke grah ke orbit me achanak yudh chhida, tab wo nahi jaan paye ki ye unka aakhri yudh hoga. Antriksh ki seema me samne ki ladai chal rahi thi aur chupke se vidhwansak viman bina kisi ke najar me aaye, Mosoori Grah ke core center tak pahunch gaye..


Kya khauffnak manjar dikhaya tha un logon ne. Jaise hi unke grah ke core me unka kaam khatm ho gaya, un logon ne apne sabhi viman wapas Aaynek par le liye. Masoori wasiyon ko laga ki unhone Viggo ko bhaga diya lekin aisa nahi tha… ek khuni khel Racha ja chuka tha aur 24 ghante baad uska parinam bhi aa gaya.


Agli raat Masoori ki puri antriksh seema Viggo dwara gher li gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte unka pura grah tootne laga. Kuch log jo apni jaan bachakar bhag sakte the aur iss prajati ko vilupt hone se bacha sakte the, unhe gher kar mar diya gaya aur iss prakar ek puri prajati aur garh ka nash Viggo ne kar diya.


Raton raat Aaynek grah ne kururta ki wah kahani likh dali, ki shakti ka ek matr pratik Viggo huye aur samast grah ke sasak ne unki adhinta ko swikar kiya tha.


Purn kuch bhi nahi hota hai aur tirtiya Viggo Sigma ki kururta dekh'kar dhire-dhire kuch Viggo ne Aaynek grah chhodna shuru kar diya, jo iss ladai aur bhisan kururta ke khilaf the.. lekin uss Viggo Sigma ko in sab se koi fark nahi pada..


Pure Viggo itihas ka wo pahla Viggo tha, jisne 4 jodi banayi thi. Halanki koi jaroori nahi ki ek Viggo apne jivan kal me ek hi Jodi banaye, lekin Viggo ke hriday ki bhawna aisi thi ki, agar kisi Viggo ki jodi me se yadi ek sathi mar jaye to dusre uske viyog me mar jata. Yadi uski jodi kisi karan vash bichhad jaye to dono ek dusre ke viyog me mar jate. Shayad Viggo ki zindgi ke taar uske jodi se aise jud jate hai ki bina ek dusre ke zindgi hi saja lagne lagti hai.


Uss Viggo Sigma ki 4 jodi ki kahani ne sabko hatash kiya tha. Uski 3 sangni kewal is viyog me mar gayi kyonki uske jodi ne kisi aur ko chun liya. Shyad ye unhi ke dil ki aah thi ki Viggo ke itihas ka anth najdik aa gaya tha..


Tirtiya Viggo Sigma ki 2 patni vigyan ke kayi project ka hissa thi, aur ussi vidhwansak project par kaam kar chuki thi, jiske karan Mosoori Grah toota tha. Tritiya Viggo Sigma, apne takniki vibhag se kuch anay maha'shakti'sali project par kaam karwa rahe the, jiske pratham aur dwitiya mukhya vaigyanik unhi ki patniya thi.


Dono apne jodi tootne ke karan itni hatash thi ki unse project ke dauran bhadi chuk ho gayi aur parinam wahi hua jo Mosoori grah ke sath in logon ne kiya tha.. Jabtak takniki vibhag isse rok pate tabtak bahut der ho chuki thi aur fir yah tay hua ki grah ko chhod'kar sab nikal jaye..


Kuch Viggo ne isse prabhu ka kahar maan'kar, sab ko saja bhugtne ke liye, yahan ke sabhi viman ke shreni ko aisa barbaad kiya, ki har Viggo yahin fans kar rah gaye… kuch Viggo jo chahte the ki vigyan aur sodh jinda rahe, wo kuch jindgiyan bacha kar Aaynek se nikalne me safal rahe. Uske alwa jitne bhi bache, kya acha aur kya bura sab ek hi taraju me taule gaye aur toot'te Aaiynek ke sath hi Viggo ka wo ahankar bhi toot gaya, jisme wo khud ko sharw'shresth mante the..


Bache huye Viggo ne pran kiya tha, jahan bhi rahenge shanti se rahenge aur yadi kisi Viggo ke ander uske shresth hone ki ikchha jagti hai to wo unhe maut ke ghat utar denge… bache Viggo ne shresth hone ka natija dekh liya tha, 2 sabse shaktisali grah ko duba kar…


Lekin jo Viggo bach gaye, wo bhi apne logon ke purv karmon se achhuta nahi rah paye. Fir wo Aizem grah ho, Zoren ho ya bhag'kar kisi anay grah me gaye ho. Har grah ke sahask ki pahli demand yahi hua karti thi ki unki aur Viggo prajati ki milan aur uss se naye prajati ka nirman..


Viggo apne pran me adig rahe, marna pasand kiya kintu na to wo lade aur na hi kisi bhi shasak ke dimagi upaj ko pura hone diya… aur dekhte hi dekhte Viggo ke purn vilupt ki kahani likhi ja chuki thi…


Dwitiya Viggo Sigma ka pariwar aur uske wafadar pahle se hi Aizem grah par the. Unhone bhi Aaiynek ko toot'te dekha aur dekh'kar itna hi khyal aaya… "Kisi ka takatwar aur buddhiman hona dusron se jyada khud ke liye hi ghatak ho jata hai'…


Aizem par to Viggo ki kahani bilkul alag thi. Aizem grah par jab ye viman utra, tab kisi ko bhi pata nahi tha ki Viggo ka ek bada samuday unke hisse me apni colony basane aaya hai. Shyad ye isliye bhi sambhaw ho paya, kyonki Aizem washi tab sangathit nahi the aur dwitiya Viggo Sigma ne jis hisse me viman ko land karwaya tha, wo kisi bhi shasak ke seema ke adhin nahi tha…


Ek Dakshat putri aur Dwitiya Viggo Sigma ki jodi, jab apne jode se alag hui to apne pati ke viyog aur uske jivan tyag ka aisa asar hua, ki wo bhi kuch varshon baad apna jivan tyag gayi. Dakshat putri kewal apni beti ke karan jivit rahi, taki kuch varshon me khud ko sambhlna sikh le..


Chunki Dakshat putri ek kusal Dakshat sasak ki beti thi aur Viggo ki tarah yah bhi ek kusal prajati thi, isliye jabtak jivit rahi usne kushal netritw kiya aur har kisi ko kewal shanti se jina sikhayi.


Jaisa ki pahle hi bataya tha ye 200² kilometer ki kewal ek chadar hai, isliye Dakshat putri ni iss viman ko bhumigat kar diya aur apne logon ke sath ussi ke upar colony ka nirman ki thi…


Kuch Viggo ko unhone sattadhari ke pass bhej diya, taki wo yahan ke kaam kaj me aham bhumika nibha sake aur yahan ke Jan jivan ko ek disha de, taki unki bhumika yahan ke shasak pariwar ke najar me rahe aur uska labh unko milta rahe..


Bache shantipriya Viggo ne thik waisa hi kiya aur Aizem par Viggo ki ek shantipriya prajati bina kisi ke jankari me aaye shanti se rahti rahi…


Kuch varshon baad wo niskriya Viggo bhi viyog me mar gayi, aur tab satta me aayi thi dusri generation. Chhoti si umr me hi apni maa se usne bahut kuch sikha tha.. Is viman ka ek aur hissa hai jahan jana purn pratibandhit hai, wahan ab bhi sara itihas jivant hai…


Wo bhi bilkul shanti se jeevan bitati, uski bhi ek Viggo ke sath jodi bani aur Viggo itihas ki ye pahli kul thi, jisme lagatar 2 generation kewal beti ko hi janm de saki aur kisi na kisi karan se unke mata pita alpaayu ke shikar ho gaye…


Dwitiya Viggo Sigma ki teesri generation yahan apne logon ka pratinidhitwa kar rahi thi, us waqt Aizem ke seema me bhi badlaw aana shuru ho chuka tha… Yahan ke shasak pariwar ne seemaon ke 2 hisse kar diye aur inke aapas ki barchasw ki ladai shuru ho chuki thi..


Aizem washi, aapas me lagatar sangrash kar rahe the aur idhar Viggo samuday me, tatkalik Viggo ke mukhiya ke aadesh par wahan Aizem ke Viggo ne kewal nutural bhumika nibhayi thi. Ladai karte-karte Aizem shasak ke bhi generation badalte rahe aur nutural bhumika nibhate-nibhate Viggo ke bhi generation badal rahe the..


Dwitiya Viggo Sigma ki 4th generation jab Aizem me thi tab Aaynek grah toota tha.. Aaynek se bhag'kar kayi Viggo yahan Aizem bhi pahunche the.. Aaynek ke tootne se Viggo ki wo takat bhi lagbhah toot chuki thi.. jiska itihas sadiyon purana tha.
kaafi rochak aur dilchasp aur sath bahot dardnaak itihash hai inki... apne hi bhool aur murkhta ke kaaran do grah tabah ho gaye.... shakti agar galat hatho mein aaye toh kya ho sakta aage chalke yeh sameekaran is update ko padhne se pata chalti hai....
toh log bahot baad mein aizem grah pe aaye the... par inki kahani ki suruwat huyi thi Aaynek grah se...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji ... :applause: :applause:
 

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Bina apne prabal vigyaan ke sahare, bina kisi netritw ke Viggo Aizem ki climate me adjust karke, jab tak ladna sikhte, Aizem grah se Viggo ke purn safaya ki kahani rachi ja chuki thi. Viggo ko marne ke liye Aizem ke bantware se bani seema ab ek ho gayi thi aur dono milkar Viggo ka shikar kar rahe the aur shikar ke liye yahi hathiyar istamal kar rahe the jo mere sine me utara…


Sigma ki 4th generation ab tak in sab se achhuta thi, kyonki kisi ko pata nahi tha ki ye log bhi Viggo hai. Lekin kayi Viggo ko darbar me apne aakhon ke samne mara jana dekh'kar, sabka dil dahal gaya.. upar se kisi bhi Viggo ne pratikriya me bachne ki kosis tak nahi kar rahe the..


Kururta ki iss kahani ko aage na badhne diya jaye, isliye 4th generation ne sabhi Viggo ko Raton raat apne colony aane ka sandesh bheji aur sab ko isi viman ke niche chhipa liya gaya tha…


Lagbhag 1000 Viggo pariwar ne yahan apne 3 generation banaye the… lagbhag 4 lacs ki aabadi thi jab 7th generation yani ki meri maa Venyata satta me thi.. apne logon ke sukh dukh ki sathi aur apne 6 generation ke anukul ek kusal shasika…


Lekin 3 generation se iss viman me rahne ke baad yahan ki lagbhag generation ne jo suna tha wo kewal apne purwajon se hi suna tha… Venyata par uske logon ka dawab aa raha tha ki wo log bhi Aizem ke din ka ujala dekhna chahte hai, yadi aisa na hua to wo yahan yudh niti apnakar apne liye seema ka nirman karegi..


Venyata, apne logon ke moh me thi aur kuch uski apni bhi ikchhayen, aur yahin chuk ho gayi. Apne ek kushal sathi aur hone wale jode ke sath Venyata tatkal shasak aur mere baap Bihawan ke pass, ek shanti prastaw ke sath pahunchi thi.


Viggo ka itihas ab purani kahani ho gayi thi, uss baat ko bite lagbhag 400 varshon se jyada ho chuka tha.. Venyata apne logon ke ore se Bihawan ke samne yah prastaw rakhi ki uska kabila khanbadosh hai aur uske rajya me sthayi thikana banana chahta hai..


Raja, Venyata ke roop aur uske apne logon ke prati jimmedari dekh'kar, uske har prastaw ko mante huye apni ek shart rakh di ki wo log yadi yahan sthayi thikana chahte hain to raja ke prati wafadari dikhani hogi…


Venyata ne raja ke samaksh vishwas prastaw par uss se hi rasta puchh li. Raja ki mansa saaf thi, usne kaha yadi Venyata uski ho jayegi to uski samast praja bhi uski hogi…


Venyata ke liye kafi muskil tha ye faisla. Wo apna jodi chun chuki thi... Aur dwidha me fasi Venyata ne wapas bhumigat hone ka fasla liya. Lakin ek Viggo ko uske jodi ka jhuka sar aur ek shasak ki haar bardast na hua, aur usne khud ki jaan lekar Venyata ko aage badhne ka sandesh de gaya…


Kafi bhari wo samay tha jab apne jode se Venyata bichhad chuki thi. Mirtu ab uski kismat thi to marne se pahle kuch achha karne ka faisla wo le li.. Venyata ne Raja Bihavan ke sath apni jodi banayi aur uske sath mahal me rahne lagi.


Uske log rajya ke any hisson me bant gaye.. Ek jode se bichhadne ka dard kya tha, ye har Viggo ke dil janta tha. Jode se bichhadne ke baad, kisi sandhi ke tahat joda banana aur uske sath jivan jina, kisi Viggo ke liye maut se badtar saja thi jo Venyata ji rahi thi…


Dwitiya Sigma ke jitne bhi vanshaj huye unka jivan pahle se tay ho jaise… jodi banane ke kuch varshon me hi jeevan leela ka samapan, lekin Venyata apne logon ki aisi chaheti thi ki sabhi Viggo ne milkar Jaal mahal ka nirman kiya..


Ye Jaal mahal ki rachna ke pichhe bhi kafi bada maksad ko sadha ja raha tha.. vigyan aur technology ka aisa bhawya nirman tha, jisme Venyata ke purane yadon ko mitane ka prayog chal raha tha, taki apne sabse priya shasika ko ek hansi bhada aage ka jeevan diya ja sake..


Unke shadi ke teesre sal mera janm hua tha.. aur mera janm jaal mahal me hua tha.. Dwitiya Sigma ke vansh ka pahla ladka… lekin Viggo ka atit yahan bhi unka sath nahi chhoda..


Vigyan aur technology nirman me Viggo itne vyast the ki apni pahchan ujagar kar gaye… Raja Bihavan ne Viggo ki pahchan kar li thi… Kisi jamane me ek hi purwaj ke santan rah chuke, 2 deshon ke mukhiya ke bich baithak hui aur Viggo se nafrat ki dastan ki kahani tab ek baar fir samne aayi…


Uss raat kewal ek Viggo meri maa aur uska bacha jivit bacha tha, wo bhi isliye kyonki shantipriya raja Bihawan ko Viggo Venyata aur apne bache ko bachana tha... Har kisi ki lash dhoke se gira di gayi thi… aur sara ilzam apne padosi shasahk abhinashi sasak par dal diya gaya…


Venyata hatsh thi aur ab uski ek hi chinta thi, aakhri Viggo ki, yani ki meri.. Tab raja Bihavan ne ek Viggo ki pahchan chhipane ke sare raaj meri maa se janne ke baad wada kiya tha ki mujhe kuch nahi hone dega…


Jaal mahal ki shurwati dhancha taiyar ho chuki thi aur mere pahchan chhipane ki har wo vidhi wahan maujood thi jo Bihawan ko chahiye the. Jis samuday ko mara gaya tha uski mukhiya meri maa thi, isliye darbar ke kayi adhikari ko shak tha ki meri maa bhi ek Viggo hai aur main bhi..


Aag ki tarah faili thi ye afwah aur fir har wo jatan kiye gaye jis'se ek Viggo ki pahchan ho jaye.. lekin aisa nahi hua.... Viggo itihas me maut se bhi jyada bhayanak dard kisi ne dekha tha, to wo meri maa thi... Aur ek din wo bhi apni dard se mukti pakar iss sansar ko chhod'kar chali gayi…



Nischal apni baat kah'kar khamosh ho gaya… Nandni aur Ansh ke aakhon me uski maa ke liye aashu saaf dikh rahe the… Ansh aur Nandni ne Nischal ka chehra dekha, jo apne jode se bichhda hua tha… dono hi Nischal ke dard ki gahrai ko bhanp sakte the…


Nischal ki puri kahani jan'ne ke baad Ansh ko bhi iss baat ka ehsaas ho chuka tha ki kyon Nandni itni badi baat kah gayi
…… "Yadi wo Nischal ke samne purn nagn bhi rahegi to bhi Nischal ki najar usse kabhi uncomfortable mehsus nahi hone de sakti"…


Tasveer dekhne ke dauran kab samay bita pata hi nahi chala… uddan bhade lagbhag 21 ghate ho chuke the.. Nischal ka itihas sunkar uss jivant hall me ab khamoshi chhayi thi.. tabhi jor ki ek syren baji.. aur sabhi logon ka dhyan toota…


Nischal:- Ek hault ka waqt aa gaya hai… hum Decca ke antriksh seema me hai aur uske hawai base par land karke yahan se viman dwara niche jayenge. Dono tayar ho jao...


Teeno uss hall se nikal'kar apne kamre me gaye .. aur jaldi se taiyar hokar control room me laute… Nischal Decca ki hawai seema me apna viman antriksh air base me park kiya aur chhote viman se unki seema me gusne ki permission mangne laga…


Udhar se jaise hi green signal mila, teeno ek chhote viman me nikal gaye… Nischal ne Ansh aur Nandni ko takriban 20 sone ke sikke dete huye kahne laga… "Dono puri masti karna aur yahan 1 dhatu ka sikka lagbhag 10 lakh ke barabar hai.... Isliye masti me koi kami nahi honi chahiye. Kisi bhi tarah ke emergency ke waqt me bus ek signal se dena.. waise yahan koi emergency nahi hogi"..


Nischal ne viman ko park kiya aur uske liye pahle se Decca ki 2 gadiyan khadi thi… Nischal dusri gadi ke driver se… "ye dono tumhari jimmedari hai… dono ke maze karne me koi kami nahi honi chahiye".. aur apni baat kah'kar Nischal wahan se apni gadi me chal diya…


Ek aalishan dukan ke ander Nischal ne prawesh kiya aur wahan ke sofe par jakar baith gaya… jald hi uss dukan ka malik apne kuch logon ke sath aaya, aur ghutne par baith'te huye…. "Sahjade, aap ki kya khidmat ki jaye"..


Nischal:- Okatey, mera ek saman tumhara koi chor yahan le aaya hai.. bus mujhe wo saman chahiye..


Okatey:- Sahjada maaf kijiyega, lekin aisi koi chori ki jankari mujhe nahi hai aur na hi Aizem se aisi koi suchna mili hai..


Nischal, uske ek self ke kuch durlabh saman ko bilkul powder me tabdil karte…. "Okatey, mujhe jawab pasand nahi aaya aur kahin maine sawal dohra diya to tumhe apne 2 aur saman se hath dhona padega"..


Saman ko barbbad hote dekh Okatey apna chhati pakad kar baith gaya... tabhi uske 2 aadmi aawesh me aakar Nischal par gun se humla karne lage. Nischal par humla, chhan bhar me, Okatey ke kaan me kanch ke toone ke sath kuch aur saman ke barbaad hone ki awaz aane lagi…


Okatey:- Jo jahan hai wahin thehar jao… aur sab bahar niklo issi waqt.. Sahjada gusse ko shant karo aur Aao mere sath..


Okatey apne sath usse ander le aaya. Ander aakar usne har ek saman ki list dikhane ke baad kahne laga… "kuch to confusion hai sahjade, warna mai aapka saman yadi rakhta to aap ko suchit jaroor kar deta"..


Nischal:- Chor bhuri aankh aur laal balon wala hai.. jo bilkul shatir aur balwan hai... Naak ke niche se saman udane me mahir aur kisi bhi challenge ko accept karne wala..


Okatey, discription sunne ke baad…. "Aisa to Decca me ek hi hai, yahan ke shasahk ka beta.. HuYu… yadi usne aisa kiya hai to shasahk se hi mil lete hain na..


Nischal:- Abhi chalo.. .


Okatey:- Sahjade itna jaroori hai kya wo?


Nischal:- Mere liye wo bilkul jaroori nahi hai, lekin. Sherin ke liye wo kafi kimti ho… ab bhi koi sawal hai kya..


Okatey ne Nischal ko turant apne sath liya aur sidha mahal me pahuncha… wahan ke hatiyar band guard ne dono ka rasta rokte huye intzar karne ke liya kaha… Nischal ne Okatey ke kaan me kuch bola aur Okatey guard se puchne laga… "Shasak kahan hai iss waqt waise"..


Guard:- Wo apne shewikaon ke sath hai aur purn tripti kar rahe hai.. isliye yahin intzar karen..


Nischal:- Sala ye hawas ka pujari..


Apni baat jor se kahte Nichal aage badh gaya. Guard ne usse rokne ki kosis ki aur dono guard sidha ussi darwaje se takraye, jahan raja apni raas leela me lin tha.. Darwaje par itne jordar dastak sun'kar, Decca ka Raja apne upar kapde dal'kar, gusse me bahar aaya. Tabtak bahar ke aur bhi bahut se guard aakar, Nischal ko gher kar shanti se apni jagah par khade the… shayad wo 2 guard naye the isliye Nischal ko rokne ki himmat kar gaye..


Shasak ki najar jaise hi Nichal par gayi, apne guard ko wapas bhej'kar… "Sahjada bilkul galat waqt par aaye ho.. aao ander hi baith'kar baat karte hain".


Nischal:- Utna waqt nahi hai mere pass.. tumhare bete ne Serin ka ek saman chori kiya hai.. mujhe bus lauta do.. main chala jaunga…


Raja ko bhi pata nahi tha ki aakhir wo saman tha kya aur uske bete ne usse kab aur kahan se churayi thi…. "Dekho sahjade main to iss vishay me nahi janta.. humara digital acess wale ko bolta hun HuYu ko dundh'kar yahan le aaye"..


Nischal ka para satwe aasman me pahunch gaya.. gusse se laal aakhen wo dikhate huye kahne laga… "5 minute deta hun tumhe, kaise bhi khoj'kar apne bete ko yahan lao."..
joh bhi jaise bhi ho kuch bhi ho..... lekin yeh bilkul achhi baat nahi hai nainu ji... nischal ki mom ko jinda kijiye :dwarf:
Ab yeh decca aisi kya anmol chij hai us insects lober sering pering ki :mad: lagta hai insects stories ki potli hogi :lol: aur us cuckold sabbiya ke sath milke padhegi :lollypop: nafrat hai is sering pering se.. woh bhi had zyada :bat:
Kamal hai jab se hosh mein aaya hai bas us sering pering ka naam hi jhap raha hai nischal... :mad1: Bechari jivu:(
Khair.... lagta hai bahot se grah aur wahan rahne wale log nischal ko jante hai..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

CG

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Mast updates hai bhai

ab ye manu koun hai jo ret mein khinch raha hai Nandu aur Jisa ko waise Nandu ko jari rat hai help ki kyunki Jisa to khud super natural power wali hai. Waise ye shayad Nishchal ka soutela bhai hai jo Malkiya ki power hasil karne wala tha Mahamahim ko maar ke.
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Hmmmmm..to apne hero ko pata tha ki kand hone wala h bs bhai pe bharosa karke marne chala gya ...itihas to bada hi dukhdai hero ki maa ka ...apni serin bhi apni hi nikli main supporting character......but ye sala last me kon marne chala aaya dekhte h .......



Ye sb to thik h nain bhai but ab jyada wait na karana sasura dimag hi lul pad gya h kya kare kya na kare karke
 
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