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Jivisha ko jaise hosh aaya ho aur wo hansti hui khud se hi kahne lagi… "Aaj love lagta hai meri jaan nikal kar rahenge".. Jivisha sabse kuch nahi kahti hui wahin baith'kar sabse baat karne lagi… tabhi Jivisha ki aakhen badi ho gayi aur wo Nischal ko ghurne lagi…


Nischal kahin aur dekh'kar baten kar raha tha.. Jivisha thodi hairan hoti hui fir se khud se kahne lagi.… "Aaj ye ho kya raha hai"…


Lekin sabhi ke sath baith'kar jab teesri baar aisa hua ki usse laga Nischal uske stan par hath fer raha hai.. Jivisha samjh chuki thi ye sari shararat Nischal ki hi hai.. bus Jivisha kewal yah soch'kar shant ho gayi ki jo bhi raaj hai pata chal hi jayega….


Jitna bahar gum gin mahol tha, ander aa kar khushiyon me badal gaya. Kisi ke dil me bhi Nischal ke liye afsos nahi tha balki bus sab yahi kamna kar rahe the ki ye waqt kisi tarah tal jaye aur Nischal kisi tarah apne pairon par khada ho jaye.


Nandni jo kal nikalne wali thi, Nischal aur Jivisha ke jid ke karan usse ek din pahle hi nikalna para...Jate waqt Nischal sabhi janewalon ke liye unka ek bag diya jise ghar pahunch'kar kholne ke liye kaha gaya..


Nandni, Ansh, Chirag aur Aarsi ke sath prithvi ke liye urr chali. Serin ne auto pilot system ke sath auto location bhi on kar di, taki landing ki koi samasya na ho. In logon ke jate hi Serin NilBhut ke hospital chali gayi aur wahan ke ghaylon ko dekhne lagi..


Idhar pure viman me Nischal aur Jivisha dono akele the.. Jivisha Nischal ke bistar par chadh gayi. Uske kamar par baith'kar, uska colloar pakadti hui… "Sab ke samne mere hoton par pappi, mere stano par hath dalna, mere kano me aa kar gungunana… Mr Nischal ab ugalna shuru karo"..


Nischal:- Had hai baba, main to bina hath paun ke yahan para hun, aur tum ho ki mujh garib par ilzam laga rahi ho.. ab jarra ek kiss to de do... Dekho mere honth sukh rahe hain"..


Jivisha:- Jhuthe ab tum batana shuru karoge..


Nischal:- Kya tum iske bare me kah rahi thi…


Fir se wahi hua, Nischal leta tha aur Jivisha ko pura feel hua ki Nischal uske honth ko chum'kar piche hata. Yahan tak ki uski shwans ko apne chehre par takrati hui mehsus bhi ki..


Jivihsa:- Bilkul issi ki baat kar rahi thi…


Nischal:- Ye mera chanchal man hai jo ab kahin bhi ja sakta hai bina kisi ke najar me aaye..


Jivisha badi si aakhen kiye… "Like mister India"


Nischal:- Haan kuch kuch waisa he..


Jivisha:- Hadd hai.. pahle to samne se rok bhi sakti thi, ab to tum har waqt mujhe hi padesan karoge..


Nischal:- Kya pata kahin tumhe hi mann ho tang hone ka aur tunhari bhawna ko bhanp kar main tang karun..


Jivisha:- Ohk .. kar lena mujhe tang, lekin iss adrishya power ki aad me kahin idhar udhar muh mare to dekh lena..


Nischal:- Chhi chhi .. ye kaisi baat kar rahi ho..


Jivisha:- Baat jaisi bhi ho lekin kaan khol kar samjh lo aur wada karo kabhi kahin idhar udhar najar nahi daloge..


Nischal:- Sakki kahin ki… aur galti se aisa hota hai to…


Jivisha:- Huhhh ! Galti se kaise hoga jarra bataoge..


Nischal:- Maan lo tum apne bathroom me naha rahi ho aisa mujhe lage aur tunhari jagah koi aur ho to..


Jivisha:- Haan to aisi galti na ho uske liye abhi wada karo ki tum aise chori se bathroom nahi jaoge.. jana hoga to mere sath jaoge..


Nischal:- Haan thik hai wada karta hun..


Jivisha:- Aise murjha kar nahi.. hans'kar kaho..


Nischal:- Pagal kahin ki, meri sari ikchhayen kewal tumse hai.. mera love, lust, pagalpan.. sab kuch..


Jivisha, muskurati hui… "Wo to mujhe pata hai baby… ye baat tumhe explain karne ki jaroorat nahi"..



Dono ki baaten kafi lambi hoti rahi. Kuch der baad Serin bhi wapas aa gayi.. dono ko hanste dekh'kar wo bhi kafi khush ho gayi… Taano baith'kar baten kar hi rahe the ki pichhe se HuYu pahuncha jo pichhle 3-4 din se yudh samapt hone ki raah dekh raha tha… darwaje se hi knock karte… "Kya aap sab ki mehfil ko thoda distrub kar sakta hun"..


Serin:- HuYu tum ab tak apna kachra batorne nahi gaye..


HuYu:- Kuch ho batorne layak to na batorun... Jo mile wo faltu ke gun the uss se to yahan tak aane ka kharcha bhi nahi niklega… Khair main deal ka pakka hun isliye tumhe force nahi kar sakta..


Jivisha:- Ladka pahli baar kuch sach bol raha hai.. Kyon HuYu humare yahan se kuch churaya to nahi..


HuYu:- Nahi yahan se kuch nahi liya… haan lekin aapka main fan jaroor ho gaya hun… jis tarah se aapne yahan ke logon me unki satta ka batwara kiya aur sari power praja ke hath me de dee.. kafi sarahniya tha..


Serin:- HuYu tumhe bolne ka mauka kya de do tum to lamba chauda bhashan de dete ho… Khair aaj tum bhi bol lo. Bhale tumhare yahan aane ke piche tumhara swarth chhipa tha, lekin tumhare imandar swarth ne mujhe bahut prabhawit kiya hai… Iss yudh ke natije ke piche tumhare dhan ka bahut bada yogdan hai, isliye maine faisla kiya hai ki tumhe bache huye sone ke sikke aur kuch uss se bhi kimti dhatu di jaye.


HuYu:- Shayad aaj main imandar tha isliye mehnat ka fal mil gaya… thik hai main yahan se apne saman samet leta hun… aur apne viman ko wapas jane ke liye taiyar karta hun..


Serin:- Thik hai HuYu.. ek baar fir tumhara shukriya.. aur haan ye lete jao… kabhi tumhe humari bahut jaroorat ho to hume yaad kar lena… haan lekin ye sikka kewal ek baar istmal kar sakte ho..


HuYu:- Jab itna hi dhanywad kah rahe to meri bhi ek arji maan lo…


Jivisha:- Haan bolo na HuYu..


HuYu:- Jab aap prithvi lauto to ek din ka hault Decca me jaroor lena, bus ek chhoti si request hai..


Nischal:- Tum nahi bhi kahte to bhi viman Decca me hault karti he.. haan bus ek din jo nahi rukne wale the wo ruk lenge.. khush na..


HuYu:- Bahut khush.. ji ab izazat chahunga..


HuYu wahan se nikal gaya. Serin khud usse chhodne aayi. Sone ke sikke ke sath jab usse platinum jaisi dhatu mili, usse dekh'kar wo pagal sa ho gaya. Aisa laga jaise uski mehnat ki kimat kayi guna jyada mil gayi hai…


Idhar Serin, Nischal aur Jivisha ke pass pahunch'kar usse kal hi wahan se Aizem rawana hone ki khabar deti hai… ab chunki viman Nischal ke bina chalana tha, isliye raat bhar Serin aur Nischal baith'kar viman ko uss patthar ki energy ko viman se jodne ke liye engine me kaam karna shuru kar chuke the..


Lagbhag 12 ghante ki mehnat ke baad engine ko single button se access kiya ja sakta tha.. Serin aur Nischal ka chehra dekhne layak tha.. dono aise khush the mano koi naya kirtiman hasil kiya ho… yahin se Nischal ne Serin ko un 2 patthar aur Surpmarich ki kahani bhi batane laga…


Surpmarich ke bare me sun'kar Serin ka itna hi kahna tha ki… "To ye hai sabhi kahani ka rachayta.. bhai uss se to jald mulakat ki ikchha badh gayi hai"..


Nischal:- Har chij ka waqt hota hai Serin, pahle apne ghar ko thoda sambhal le..


Serin:- Kyon nahi Nischal, lekin ek baat jo tay hai.. main tumhare sath aaungi..


Jivisha:- 12 ghante ke boring science ke baad ye ek achhi baat hui hai jo mujhe khushi de rahi hai..


Serin Jivisha se lipati hui… "Mujhe laga tha aap mujhe sath nahi rakhna chahogi"..


Jivisha:- Pagal ho tum Serin.. tum to pariwar ho.. wo bhi Nischal ke sabse jyada karibi.. mujhe to yah doubt tha ki kis muh se kahti humare sath hi chalo..


Serin:- Kyon bhabhi 2 muh hain kya aap ke..


Jivisha:- Hihihihihi.. nana ek hi muh hai.. waise tumne koi ladka pasand kar rakha hai ya wo kaam abhi baki hai..


Nischal:- Humne bahar ki duniya dekhi hi kab thi jo kisi aur ke liye fursat ke pal nikal pate.. upar se Serin to shuru se hi ulajh kar rah gayi thi..


Jivisha:- Bus re baba bus.. happy hour me unhappy baten yaad nahi karte.. aur waise bhi vartman me jine wale tum logon ko atit ki baat karte sunti hun to thoda ajib lagta hai..


Serin:- Bilkul sahi bhabhi.. waise bhi koi ladka pahle pasand nahi aaya to kya hua.. aap ka koi bhai to hoga na ussi par chance marungi.. .


Jivisha:- Sambhaw na hai Serin, tumhari shakl humari bahan se milti hai to kahin aur dekhna padega tere liye ladka..


Serin:- Rahne do fir, kahin na kahin koi na koi mere liye bhi bana hoga.. kabhi na kabhi takra hi jayega…


Baton me waqt kaise bit jata hai kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalta… teeno ek sath pahli baar safar par the.. Serin bhi dhire-dhire Jivisha se kuch ladkiyon wali adayen aur nautanki sikh rahi thi, badle me Serin Jivisha ko apni aur Nischal ke bachpan ke kayi sare kisse bataya karti thi.


Diye huye thik saatwe din Nischal ka viman Aizem ke madhya rajya, yani ke Sabaiyya ke rajya ki hawai seema par thi aur niche utarne ki anumati maang rahi thi… Jaal Mahal se Lobhu ne viman ko utarne ka izazat diya aur Serin viman ko rajdhani we takriban 1200 km ki duri par, Nischal ke sahar me utari.


Serin viman ko bhumigat utari aur kadi suraksha uske aas-pass karti, wahan se teeno chhote se viman me sidha Nischal ke mahal pahunche… Serin Nischal ko aankh marti hui kahne lagi… "Bhabhi pahle subh kadam aapke niche parne chahiye.. utro aap"..


Jivisha chhote se viman se bahar aati.. "Aare main to bahar chali aayi, ab tum dono kya muhrat dekh rahe"..


Jivisha apni baat kah hi rahi thi ki itne me Adhmya aa pahuncha, jo apne panje se Jivisha ko uss viman se dur fenkte, viman par apne sar aur panje chalane laga… "Serin ye Adhmya itne gusse me kyon hai"..


Serin:- Pahle viman ko kone me laga dun warna.. ye pagal sher pure viman ko tod dalega..


Nischal:- Haan haan kyon nahi..


Viman udd chali aur Jivisha apni lalat sikodti, aankhen chhoti kar unhe bhagte dekh rahi thi… "Bhag jao dono mujhe fasa'kar, kamino aana dono yahan fir khabar leti hun"..



Jivisha jabtak chilla rahi thi Adhmya uske karib pahunch'kar apna bada sa muh khola aur itni tej dahar lagaya ki Jivisha ki chhati upar niche hone lagi. Daityakar ka ek bada sa sher lagbhag 20 fit uncha aur 15 fit lamba. Jitna bada wo muh fara tha, utne bade muh me to 10 Jivisha ek sath sama jaye bina kisi samsya ke..


Jivisha dhire-dhire pichhe khiskti… "Dekho sher bhai, main janti hun aap harmful nahi hoge, tabhi in dono ne mujhe yahan chhoda hoga… lekin wo kya hai na ki aap ko dekh'kar meri fat rahi hai. Aap samjh rahe hai na.. "


Jivisha jaise hi bolna band ki sher aaram se uske pass baith kar dhire se dahara.… "Saabash, lagta hai ye samajh gaya. Thankyou sher bhai".


Jivisha khadi ho'kar mahal ke ore teji se apne kadam badha di. Idhar Adhmya kudkar thik uske aage pahunch gaya aur dobara panja mar'kar usse bich maidan me pahuncha diya".


Jivisha gusse me uske karib gayi aur hathon ke ishare se … "Jaldi jhuk ja niche badtamij.. tujhe abhi batati hu"..

 

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Update:- 101​

Adhmya bada sa muh faarkar apna sar jaise hi niche jhukaya, Jivisha usse ek thappad marti hui kahne lagi… "Tu janta hai dar ke aage jeet hai. Fati padi hai to kya hua, thappad to maar hi sakti hun"..


Jivisha jaise hi apni baat puri ki, Adhmya ne apna bara sa muh khola aur Jivisha ko apne muh ke ander dal'kar muh band kar liya… "Yakkk, eyuwww, ye kya mujhe khane wala hai. Baby ye tumhara paltu hai ya Jungli janwar tumhare mahal ke aas pass ghumte hai"..


Tabhi jor ki aawaz gunji wahan…. "Adhmya, tumhari himmat kaise hui Jisa ko darane ki, abhi ke abhi mafi mango"..


Adhmya apna sar dayen bayen karke charo ore dekha aur usne Jivisha ko bade pyar se mahal ke minar par chhod'kar teji ke sath Nischal par daura aur usse kursi se girakar apne panje se bahut tej mara. Uska marna itna tej tha ki Nischal 400 meter dur jakar boundry se bahut tej takraya.


Jivisha ye najara dekh'kar gusse se pagal ho gayi, lekin Serin usse rokti hui bus sab kuch chupchap hote dekhne ke liye kahne lagi. Idhar Adhmya teji se daud'kar Nischal ke pass pahuncha aur Nischal ko marne ke liye apna pura panja utha liya…


Adhmya apna pura panja utha'kar kuch der tak Nischal ko gaur se dekhta raha, fir apna panja niche karte Nischal ke hath ko tatola, uske paun ko tatola. Kabhi sar laga'kar Nischal ke hath aur paun ko totolta to kabhi panje se.. tabhi wo itne tej chinkhna ki uss pure sahar ne Adhmya ki dahar suni.


Adhmya Serin me pass aakar uske paun ko chat'te huye khinchne laga… "Bhabhi chalo aao mere sath".. Jivisha bhi Serin ke sath chal di.. Adhmya Serin ko khinch'kar Nischal ke pass laya aur uske hath ko panje se idhar udhar karte Serin ko dekhne laga.. Adhmya ke aakhon se aashu gir rahe the aur wo lagatar Serin se uske hath aur paun dikha raha tha..


Serin niche baith'kar Nischal ke hath ko upar utha'kar chhod di aur kahne lagi… "Adhmya iska kuch nahi kar sakte"..


Adhmya bada sa muh faad kar Serin ke upar pure jor se garja aur paglon ki tarah idhar udhar daurta raha boundry se takrane laga…. "Ye sab kya hai Serin, wo Nischal ko itna chahta hai"..


Serin:- Jab ye paida hua tha tab iski mata pita ka shikar ho gaya tha. Nischal ne isse pahle din se pala hai..


Jivisha:- Baby usse shant karwao, bahut dard me lag raha hai.. computer ji mere love ka chair laya jaye..


Jivisha apne hath ke command se Nischal ki automatic chair wahin bulwa lee. Jivisha ke aakhon ke ishare se hi Nischal hawa me upar hua aur jakar kursi se baith gaya. Nischal Adhmya ke ore muskurate huye dekhne laga..


Adhmya jo baukhlahat me idhar udhar daur raha tha wo achanak hi Nischal ke ore mud gaya. Nischal ki ore mud kar mano kafi shant ho gaya ho. Khushi se wo Nischal ke pass pahuncha aur uske gode me apna bada sa sar rakh diya, lekin koi bhi asprash na pakar wo ajib hi dahar marne laga.


Kuch der tak Adhmya ke sath hi raha. Adhmya ko Jivisha ke bare me jaise hi pata chala, wo jabtak Jivisha ke sath kuch der khel nahi liya, usse jane nahi diya. Kuch der baad teeno mahal ke darwaje par the… "Bhabhi ander ka haal dekh'kar yadi kisi ko gali dene ka man ho to dil khol'kar aap gali de sakti hai"…


Apni baat kah'kar Serin ne jaise hi darwaja khola.. itna ganda aur badbudar najara dekh'kar Jivisha ki himmat nahi hui ander ghusne ki…. "Serin ye kya haalat hai yahan ki. Bahar se kitna tip top building dikh rahi thi, ander to gatar jaisa mahol hai"..


Serin:- Nischal jawab doge bhabhi ki baat ka..


Nischal:- Ab becharon ko ander ka security code nahi mila hoga isliye saaf safai karke nahi gaye honge..


Serin:- Achha, isliye mahal se kimti saman gayab hai.. acha mazak tha ye Nischal.. ye kyon nahi kahte kewal chaplus pal rakha tha tumne…


Nischal:- Nana, koi chaplus nahi the.. wo koi chor yahan ka saman le gaya hoga…


Jivisha:- Aaj main khush hun isliye yahan ki dhul aur gandgi hata deti hun.. baki saman ko vaywathit karne ke liye log aayenge ya wo bhi mujhe hi karna hoga…


Nischal:- Haan aa jayenge.. Adhmya sabhi nikamme logon ko bula lao kaam karne.. usse bhej diya Jivisha, tum shuru ho jao.. ..


Jivisha:- Computer ji yahan pure mahal me jarra tej hawa ka jhonka to faila dijiye jo dhul aur uske sath ye badbu wale bacteria ko bhi gayab kar de..


Jivisha ne jaise hi apni ikchha shakti ko command di.. wahan tej hawa ka jhonka ander ke kewal dhul aur gandgi ko apne sath udati hui bahar lekar chali aayi.…


"Suno na love wo aage 2-3 kursiyan laga do na, log aane wale hain to ek chhoti si sabha ho jaye. Aaj sab tumse mil bhi lenge aur humari news yahan viral bhi ho jayegi"…


Jivisha:- Main koi jadugarni nahi hun ki hath ghumaya aur sare kaam ho gaye. Command dena parta hai specific kaam ke liye aur balance banana parta hai. Ek kaam kya kar do tumhari to ummiden hi badh gayi. Computer ji jakar aage teen char kursiyon ko vaywathit kar dijiye"..


Itne me Adhmya bhi wapas chala aaya aur panje ke ishare se batane laga ki log ko bahar khada karke aaya hai. Nischal apna sar jhuka kar uska abhivadan kiya aur teeno jakar sabhapati wali kursi par baith gaye aur niche ka bada hall khali chhod diya.


Nischal ne Adhmya ko aakhon ki bhasha se samjhaya aur Adhmya sab ko ander ka security pass dete, panja aur dahar lagane laga. Log Adhmya se kat'kar ander sabha bhawan me jane lage..


Sabha bhawa me kam se kam 1000 logon ka hujum lag gaya. Pure Aizem me Nischal aur uske Jodi ki kahani aag ki tarah faili hui thi, sath me maha sena aur uske shasahk Mahamahim ko yudh me harane ki ghatna bhi kafi charcha me thi…


Puri bhir najar gada kar kewal Jivisha ko hi dekh rahi thi aur khusur fusar kar rahi thi… "Tum log aise aapas me kya baat kar rahe ho"… Serin pure gusse me puchhi..


Bhid se ek awaz… "Sahjade ki jodi kamal ki hai.. kahin se pakad kar le aaye hain kya"


Dusri awaz:- Sahjade ko aisi jodi kahan se mil gayi, jaroor khanjar ke dum par jodi bani hai.. ye sundri to shashika banne ke layak hai..


Jivisha, apni jagah se khadi hoti hui kahne lagi… "Mujhe nahi pata ki aap log ye sab baten kyon kah rahe. Yadi baat mere Nischal ke laparwah hone ki hai, to wo matr ek dharna hai, jise aap logon ne apne jahan me bitha liya hai.. na to Nischal aur na hi Serin kabhi laparwah rahi hai. Uska saboot hai Jaal mahal.


Aur yadi aap logon ko inke kirtiman nahi dikhe aur Nischal me ek laparwah aur bewakoof insan dikh raha hai, to maaf kijiyega yahan maujood aap sab se bada bewakoof koi nahi. Yadi baat Nischal ke yahan Aizem se jane ki hai, jiske baad aap sab ne inhe bhagoda ghoshit kar diye the to ye bhi ek pakshiya faisla tha, jabtak sabha ka faisla na aa jaye tabtak wo matr ilzam hai..


Ab sabse jaroori kaam ki baat. Aap sab mere aangan aaye hain, isliye aadar ke patr hain. Lekin mere Nischal ki kisi ne bhi bejjati karne ki kosis ki to main dobara baat nahi karungi… Adhmya abhi iss waqt sabha me aao… jispar main ishara karun usse pura nigal'kar apna bhojan bana lena..



Jivisha ne jaise he Adhmya ko pukari wo daud'kar wahan chala aaya.. aur un sab ke pichhe ja'kar baith gaya. Sabha me aaye jitne bhi log the wo Jivisha aur Nischal ko badhai de rahe the aur koi faltu ki charcha nahi kar raha tha…


Jivisha ko sun'ne ke thodi der baad hi uss sabha se log gayab hone lage.. logon ke bich se wo log bhi gayab hote ja rahe the jispar iss mahal ke safai ka bhar tha.. Nischal un sabhi ko rokte huye bakiyon ko jane diya..


Jab baat samne aayi to pata chala ab Nischal kabhi laut'kar wapas nahi aayega isliye un logon ne ander ki saaf-safai par kabhi dhyan nahi diya. Jabki wahin mahal ke bahar ki safai ka kaam jin logon ko diya gaya tha un logon ne apna kaam puri imandari se kiya tha..


Serin ne laparwah logon ko khub khari khoti sunayi, wahin jin logon ne apna kaam kiya tha, unke kaam ko Serin ne saraha. Mahal ke ander aur bahar ka kaam unhi logon ko shaunp diya. Uss sabha bhawan se lagbhag sabhi log ja chuke the, Jivisha gahri shwans leti hui kahne lagi… "Tum dono ne sari umr jin logon ke bhalai ke liye char deewari me gujar di, unhe hi tumhari kadar nahi hai"..


Nischal:- Uss badi si 4 deewari ke ander 1200 scientist aur takriban chhote bade 50000 karamchari kaam karte hain Jisa, kise pata hoga ki wahan ander kaun kya kar raha hai..


Serin:- Kya baat hai Nischal chha gaye.. Ye sahi hai bhabhi, Jaal mahal ke ander ki khabar kabhi bahar nahi aati.


Teeno abhi sabha samapt kar aage ke bare me kuch baat karna hi chah rahe the, ki ussi waqt ek darbaan ander aaya aur Uttari shasak Mahavinashi ke sath Sabaiyya unke darwaje tak unse milne ki ikchha se aaye hain, yah baat batane laga..


Nischal ne un sab ko ander bulaya. Sabaiyya aur Mahavinashi ke sath unka pura hujoom aaya hua tha. Dekhte hi dekhte wo sabha bhawan lagbhag bhar gaya..


Sabaiyya:- Sahjada ne kisi aur grah par jodi banayi aur yahan aane par hume bulaya tak nahi..


Nischal:- Sabaiyya socha ki pahle tumhari sabha se nipat lun.. abhi tak to main aur Serin yahan ke bhagode hi hai na. Jab se aaya hun logon ki pratikriya hi dekh raha hun..


Sabaiyya:- Nyayik sabha to apna kaam karegi, lekin pariwar hone ke nate apna kaam to hote rahna tha na..


Serin:- Ha ha ha ha… Pariwar Sabaiyya, tumhare muh se sunkar achha nahi lag raha…


Nischal:- Khair half blood aur sunao kaisa chal raha hai yahan ka kaam kaaj. Kya Ruki, kya Suko… tum par to najar hi nahi gayi. Kaisa raha Prithvi ka tour…

 

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Update:- 87​

Jivisha:- Kya yaar Shwetna, jo mere Nischal ke kaam ka tha wo mujhe bata gayi. Isme to mera computer bhi madad nahi karega, mujhe Nischal ko khud puri baat batani hogi… waise tumhe kya pakka yakin hai ki main hi wo ladki hun jise rani Vishi Kritima ki shaktiyan mili hai, aur issi wajah se tum mujhe Rajkumari kah rahi ho..


Shwetna:- Aap ko ye shaktiyan kahin aakash se nahi mili hain.. aap unhi ki vansaj hai.. aur vivaah ke purv Rajkumari aur vivah ke baad hongi humari Rani…


Jivisha:- Tum koi kahani to nahi bana rahi, jaise aksar main banaya karti hun…


Shwetna, badi utsah se….. Ye eklauti aisi kahani hai jo hum me jine ki ummid diye hai… itihaas ki yah sachai hi to humara bacha hausla hai, lekin Rajkumari humari utsah to abhi aap ki kahaniyon me hai… ek lamba arsa huye kuch naya sune… hume bhi kuch kahaniyan sunao na…


Jivisha:- Abhi nahi Shwetna, mera aadha dhyan to unhi logon par hai…


Shwetna, ne apne partham mukhya sahayak Lin se kuch kahi aur wo turant uski baat par amal karta hua Nischal aur Nandni ki haalat ka jayja lekar Shwetna ke pass pahuncha….. "Rajkumari aap ke sath aayi wo ladki…"


Jivisha:- Nandni, naam hai uska..


Shwetna:- Ji Rajkumari, wo kewal behosh matr thi, unhe kuch nahi hua tha. Wo abhi hosh me aa chuki hai. Aur wo ladka..


Jivisha:- Ladka nahi hai wo… meri jaan hai.. meri dhadkan.. mera pyar.. Nischal..


Jivisha ke mukh se ye shabd sunkar Shwetna hasi, aur kahne lagi… "42000 sapon ka vish unke ander gaya tha, kintu zahar jaise sama gaya ho unke ander. Behosh hain wo, kintu koi khatra nahi hai… unhe aaram karne dijye, jab aankh khulegi to wapas pahle jaise ho jayenge"..


Jivisha:- Hmmm ! Mujhe milwao dono se..


Ajib si bhumigat jagah thi, jahan charo ore kafi nami thi. Aisa lag raha tha chattano se bani pillar par, iss jagah ka pura dhacha taiyar kiya gaya tha aur wahan ki har chattan halke hare aur nile rang ke ghas jaisi paudho ke chadar se dhaki thi. Un paudho ke patti ka aakar bindu jitna tha, jo pure chattan ko dhake huye tha aur uss jagah ko kafi manmohak bana raha tha..


Jivisha uss jagah ko niharti hui aage badhne lagi. Ek jagah ke manmohak banawat ne Jivisha ka kadam rok liya…. "Shwetna ye itni sare manmohak aur khubsurat tane ki jal ki deewar kitni pyari lag rahi hai…..


Shwetna:- Rajkumari wo ek tarah ka deewar hai, jiske piche ek khubsurat vatika aur alokik talab hai…


Jivisha:- Aisa kya, fir to main bhi wo vatika aur talab ghumungi…


Jivisha, Shwetna se baat karte huye Nandni ke kamre tak aayi. Nandni kisi se baat kar rahi, Jivisha ko dekhte hi uske ore bhagi… "Ahhhh ! Tu thik hai Jisa"…


Jaise hi Nandni ne Jivisha ka haal lee, pass khadi Shwetna ke muh se "khiii-khiii" nikal gaya… Jivisha usse tej najron se ghur'kar pura dhyan Nandni par lagayi…


Jivisha:- Main bilkul thik hun.. tu kaisi hai.. koi taklif to nahi diya inhone..


Nandni:- Andhere me to kuch pata bhi nahi chala mujhe, sadme se sayad main behosh ho gayi thi. Aankh khuli to main yahan thi. Bahut ache hai ye log aur kafi pyari baten karte hain. Nischal kahan hai..


Jivisha:- Wo aur uska vigyaan, jab se yahan raushni hui hai, bus sodh kar rahe hain… chal aaj raat tu yahin aaram kar, main jarra unki khabar lekar aaun..


Nandni:- Nahi yaar, ya to Ansh ko yahan bula de ya chal wahin chalte hain… Chinta kar raha hoga bechara..


Jivisha:- Kamini sab samjhti hun main.. Shwetna, kya tumhe humare jahaj ke bare me pata hai..


Shwetna:- Haan Rajkumari, aap ke viman ki jankari hai mujhe..


Nandni:- Rajkumari, ye kab hua…


Jivisha:- Shwetna, Nandu ko bhi wo itihaas bata do jo tumne mujhe sunaya hai… aur haan humare viman me 3 log honge.. dhyan se sunna 3 log.. jisme se 2 issi grah ke hain... Tumhari jimmedari hai un tino ko yahan surakshit lekar aao..


Shwetna:- Rajkumari uss Parijivi Mittoso (Mahamahim ka naam) ke log ke baare me sochkar hi aap logon par aise humle ho rahe the.. aap soch sakti hai kitna rosh hai unke liye..


Jivisha:- Thik hai fir hum hi yahan se chale jate hain…


Shwetna:- Rukiye, kisi ko kuch nahi hoga yah mera wada hai.. lekin hum viman ke ander nahi ja sakte… pahle bhi kosis karke dekh chuke hain...


Jivisha:- Computer ji iss kharnak si ladki aur iske sathi ko wahan please acess de dijiye.. Shwetna is baar mukhya dwar se jana aur haan suno wahan Ansh hoga, tum pahchan jaogi..


Shwetna:- 2 uss Mittoso ke log hain, to bache huye teesre ki aap baat kar rahi hai na, bilkul pahchan jayenge…


Jivisha:- Smart haan. Ansh ko mere dost ke kamre me chhodna aur khyal rahe unhe koi padesan na kare..


Shwetna:- hihihi.. thik hai Rajkumari main samjh gayi..


Jivisha:- Nandu ab to khush.. chal ab main jarra apne unke pass jati hun... Tu aaram kar..


Jivisha Nandni ko aankh maar kar wahan se nikali aur Shwetna ke gair maujoodgi me uska pratham sahayak Len Jivisha ko Nischal ke pass tak lekar gaya…


Nischal khule badan behosh para hua tha. Kamar par kapda matr tha aur wahan aas pas baithi kuch ladkiyan Nischal ke dilkash badan ko dekh'kar mand-mand muskura rahi thi…. Jivisha unhe ghurti hui… "Chalo bahar niklo yahan se… Ye sab kaun thi, Lin"..


Lin:- Ye sewika thi, jo inki sewa aur jaroorton ke liye rakhi gayi thi..


Jivisha, badi si aakhen kiye… "Kis tarah ki jaroorat"..


Lin:- Aushdhi aur any vastu ki jaroorat…


Jivisha:- Nana koi nahi rahega yahan.. inki har chhoti badi jaroorat ke liye main hun yahan … abhi ke abhi jao sabhi yahan se…


Lin aur wahan jitni bhi ladkiyan thi, wo sab sar jhuka kar wahan se bahar nikal gayi… Jivisha ne aaram se uss kamre ko lock kar di. Nischal ke khule badan ko dekh'kar thandi aahen bharti … "hayyyyyyy".. ki madhoshi bhadi awaj Jivisha ke shwanson se nikli aur sine me gud-guda ehsas machalne laga…


Jivisha apna pura panja Nischal ke sine par rakhti, uska chehra dekhne lagi. Idhar jaise hi Jivisha ka hath Nischal ke sine se laga, wo tej gahri shwans apne ander khincha.. aur fir sukoon ki shwans lene laga…


Hath lagane se uske chehre par aaye sukoon ko dekhkar Jivisha hasne lagi… "Behoshi me bhi sparsh pahchan rahe ho haan.. natkhat kahin ke"… Jivisha hasti hui apne sar ko jhuka li aur pyar se Nischal ke naak par apne naak firati wo honth se honth ko sparsh karne lagi"..


Jivisha jab honth ko chum'kar uthi tab wo Nischal ke badan par huye kuch badlaw ko dekh rahi thi. Kuch der tak wo uske badan ko gaur se dekhti rahi.. uska skin aisa lag raha tha jaise bilkul soft hokar hawa me ek madam khusboo chhod rahi thi, jiska asar Jivisha ko pagal banane laga…


Jivisha turant hi uske pass se uthi aur thodi dur khadi hokar apni shwans samanya karti hui… "Baby tum to pagal banane lage mujhe… Aahhh ! Aise behosi me rijhane ka kya matlab hai jaan… Hosh me to khud ko kabu me rakhte ho"..


Jivisha apni swans samanya karne lagi… kuch duri bana kar uske badan ki dilkash najara leti rahi. Kuch der baad jab sab kuch samanya hua, tabhi Jivisha ki najar paun se khinche mans par gayi.. itne gahre jakhm dekh'kar uski aakhen badi ho gayi….. gusse me aakhen laal kiye wo fir ek baar nikli…


Shwetna aur uske log Jatin aur Baby ko ghere baithi aapas me hi hans rahe the, jaise hi Jivisha pahunchi, sab ke sab apna sar pakad kar niche jhuka liye….. "Mari jaan ka ye haal kisne kiya.. unke paun me itne sare jakhm kaise huye.. jitne bhi uske jimmedar hain wo samne aa jaye"..


Shwetna:- Rajkumari, wo kisi ghor dushman ko marne ke aawesh uthaya gaya kadam tha, kintu aap to jaan-bujh'kar har baat par apne logon ko yatnayen de rahi hain… shakti ke sath itna aawesh thik nahi.. aap bekabu ho rahi hain..


Shwetna ki baat sun'kar Jivisha khud ko kabu ki aur wahin baith gayi…. "Maaf karna wo Nischal ki haalat dekh'kar mujhe rah-rah kar gussa aa raha hai"..


Shwetna:- Ab to gussa nahi aa raha na Rajkumari, ab to muskura sakti hai.. kash is waqt aap humare dil ka haal bhi samjh pati…


Jivisha:- Hmmm ! Chalo mera to dil bechain hai, tum sab apne hi dil ka haal bata do..


Shwetna ne apne mukhya sahayak ko kuch vaywastha karne kahi aur baki sabhi mehmano ko unke kamre me pack kar diya gaya, ek khas jashn jo apne samuday ke bich hi manaya jata tha…


Jivisha ke liye fulon se saji ek baithki ka intzam kiya gaya jahan uske khane aur pine ki vises suwdhyen thi... Charo ore fulon ki khusbu se vatavaran mahak utha… dekhte hi dekhte wo jagah kewal aur kewal sapon se bhad gayi jo ek madhur sangit par jhum rahe the..


Kayi sharp Jivisha ke paun ke charo ore chakkar laga rahe the to kayi Jivisha ke hathon se lipte rahe… utsaw jaisa mahol tha jo kafi lamba chala tha… anth me sabha ka samapan ho gaya aur sabhi log sone chale gaye..


Jivisha ek baar fir Nischal ke pass thi. Muskurati hui, fir wo lamha ek baar mehsus karna chahti thi, jo ab se chand ghantey pahle wo mehsus ki thi. Ek baar fir Jivisha pyar se Nischal ke honth ko chum'kar, un madak ehsas ke sath Nischal ke sine se lipat kar so gayi.


Kafi khili hui subah thi. Charo ore se manmohak pusp ki khushboo aa rahi thi, mithi si angdai lekar Jivisha jab apni apni aakh kholi… "Ufff baby ab kitna tadpaoge. Ek lambe arse ke baad dono sath hain.. lekin sath milkar ab tak sukoon ke wo pal humne bitaye nahi. Mujhe chhod'kar kahan chale gaye"..


Jivisha muskurati hui uthi aur charo ore ka najara lene lagi. Char kadam chali hogi ki tabhi wo hari bhari ladiyon ki unchi deewar najar aayi. Jivisha uske banawat ko dekh'kar uss ore aakrashit hoti hui, apne kadam badha di.


Jaise hi Jivisha uss dwar ke pass pahunchi, bahar khadi sewika apna muh niche karke hansi aur talab ka darwaja khol di.... Jivisha khule darwaje se jhank'kar ander ke lubhawne drishya ko apne jehan me samet'ti hui ander ghusi, aur sewika ne uss dwar ko band kar diya.


Itna khubsurat talab Jivisha ne aajtak nahi dekha tha… aisa pratit ho raha tha mano kisi dev lok ki vatika me wo aa gayi ho.. Jivisha talab kinare bane ghat ki sidhiyon se pani me utarne lagi… Talab ka shital jal jaise hi Jivisha ke paun ko chhune lage… Jivisha ka man prashann ho gaya..


Wo dhime-dhime talab me utar'ti chali gayi aur ghat ke kinare baith'kar, shital jal ka aanad lene lagi… Jivisha ka pura mann shant ho gaya aur aakhen mund'kar wo sukoon ki gahraiyon me chali gayi… Bahut hi umda anubhaw tha ye..


Tabhi achanak uss pani me hulchal hui aur Jivisha ki aakhen khul gayi… Jaise hi uski aakhen khuli aur samne Nischal ka khula pith dikha… Jivisha ka dil joron se dhak-dhak karne laga….. "Baby tum yahan"..

nice update ..taalab me kuch ho sakta hai dono ke bich ?..

 

[nain11ster]

nice update ..taalab me kuch ho sakta hai dono ke bich ?..

Ye baat to aapko update 88 me hi pata chalegi Leon bhai .. waise ummid to kafi laga rakha hai aapne

 

[nain11ster]

aaain.......
yeh dono apne ghar mein the abhi toh..... alien ship pe kaise pahunch gaye..

jahir si baat hai.. hospital jaane ki baat kar raha hai toh of course ghar par hi hoga... Phir aline ship par do saal se koun reh raha tha... I mean to say yeh dono bata rahe the ki ship se nikle hi nahi toh hospital kaise jaa raha hai ansh.... Kya ek waqt pe do jagah pe reh raha tha dono...
aur itne kapde gahne kharidne ka kya matlab? kasak ke liye kharida ki nahi? kya nandu aur ansh ke liye nahi kharida kuch bhi? chutku chutki ke liye kuch liya ki nahi?
sawelkar kaha hai?
kya nandu aur jivu ke gharwale pareshan nahi hai...?
nischal ke paas kaise pahunche yeh dono aur sawelkar kyun nahi aaya sath mein?
aur sabse important baat yeh ki kasak kahan hai...?
Khair .. chalo yeh toh badi khushi ki baat hai ki nischal ko hosh aa gaya hai... ab un aliens ki khair nahi....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji

Hahahaha ... Alian ship 200 square kilometer me faila hai.. ye mohtarma kyon bhul jati hai... Jatin jab pahli baar aaya tha iss ship par to brief detail diya to tha... Aur haan medical section ship ka hi hai.. Khair aage to jawab mil hi jana hai..

Gharwalon ka kissa nahi dikhaya kyonki udhar to jahir si baat hai preshan honge hi .. aur rote huye yaad b kar rahe honge ...

Khair sawal jitne bhi hain .. mere khyal se sab ke jawab hai bus vary next to next update me aab ke sab ...

Aap ke detail review ka bahut bahut shukriya

 

[nain11ster]

Punjirithanji konjikko
Munthiri muththoli chindhikko
Munjani varna chundhari vaavae
Thaanginnakkath thakadhimiyaadum thanganilaavae hoi.. Thanga kolusallae kurugum kuyilallae, Maarana mayilallae
Bin kasak nischal ki jindgi adhuri... Tanha si lage ushe har ek mod... ek khamoshi ghir jaati hai uske aas paas

Ye kya tha .. itni jyada khushi .. ... Achha ye sab naya hoga.. last time wo update nahi aaya tha na jisme pata chale ki kyon pahli mulakat me Nischal Kasak ko itna ghur raha tha .. Khair aap ko utsah tham jayegi aage

 

[nain11ster]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Ji shukriya

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Update:- 88​

Nischal, ghabrakar pani me pura baith'te… "Jisa, unhe maine mana kiya tha yahan kisi ko nahi aane de"..


Jivisha:- Dil mera joron se dharak raha, paun mere kanp rahe, aur ghabrahat tumhare chehre par… dekha jaye to mujhe ghabrana chahiye… lekin main ghabrayi kya?


Nischal:- Baat to samjho please, tum to kapdon me ho lekin main…. Ye log bhi na bade careless log hain. Tumhe kaise yahan bhej sakte hain…


Jivisha:- Unpar kyon gussa ho rahe ho jaan, wo log bhi yahan kisi ko nahi nahi bheji balki jise tumhare sath hona chahiye usse hi bheji hai. Dur kyon ho baby, aao mere pass.. tumhe yaad bhi hai ki aakhri baar kab hum sukoon se ek dusre ke sath baithe the… Jindgi me itna thrill bharta ja raha hai, romance to lagta hai dur hi chala gaya… please ab dur mat raho mere pass aao na…


Jivisha apni baat kah'kar, hasrat bhari najron se Nischal ko dekhne lagi. Nischal uski najron se najar milaye, thik uske karib ghat ki deewar se tik'kar baith gaya. Jivisha ki kalai ko apne hath me lekar uski hatheli ko pura sparsh karte, uski aakhon me dekhte huye puchhne laga… "Meri jaan kya tum meri Jodi banogi"


Jivisha, Nischal ke ore mudti, halki si hansi ke sath haan me apna sar jor-jor se hilane lagi.. Nischal apna ek hath piche rakhe apne bag par le gaya aur bag se ek chhota sa box nikala…. "Ye kya hai Nischal"…


Nischal, Jivisha ki baat ka uttar na dete huye uss box se 2 ring nikala, ek ring Jivisha ke hath me diya aur dusri khud rakha… Jivisha pyar me dubi pyari hansi ke sath, Nischal ko dekhne lagi.... Nischal bhi muskura'kar usse hi dekh raha tha..


Gudgudate armaan aur dono ke khile huye se chehre. Najren ek dusre par thehar si gayi thi. Jivisha, Nischal ka pura chehra kyon na dekh rahi, iss baat ki tis uske sine me uthne laga, aur wo bina apni najar Nischal se hataye, apne paun uske paun ke dono ore rakhti, kamar ke upar baith'kar, Nischal ke pure chehre ko nikarti, apne hatheli se uske chehre ko sparsh karne lagi.


Nischal, uske hatheli ko apne hath me liya. Pyar se hatheli ko apne honth se sparsh karte, Jivisha ki aakhon me jhakne laga aur muskurate huye ring uski ungli me dal diya. Ring ungli me ja rahi thi aur Jivisha ke khile chehre par aayi pyari si hasi ne wahan ka pura mahol hi khila raha tha..


Jivisha bhi Nischal ki hatheli ko apne hath me tham'kar, usse anguthi pahna di aur dhire-dhire jhukti hui, usse chumne ke liye apne honth badha di… Nischal kisi madhosh swar me dhime se kahne laga… "Kuch der thehar jao jaan"..


Nichal Jivisha ko rok'kar uski kamar ko apne dono hath se tham liya… Hath lagte hi Jivisha ka dil joron se dhadkne laga aur shwans thodi atakne lagi.. Jivisha, Nischal se najren milane me asmarth si ho gayi aur uske sine se lipat kar apna chehra Nischal ke kandhe aur gale ke bich chhipa li.


Tabhi Nischal, Jivisha ke kamar ke dono kinaro par apne hath ki pakad banate, pura sidha ho'kar baitha aur piche se Jivisha ke dress ki chain ko khiska'kar kamar tak le gaya. Jivisha ki atki shwans tej ho gayi aur Nischal ke kandon se takrane lagi.


Nischal bina koi der kiye piche se bra ke huk ko khol'kar Jivisha ko thoda upar uthaya, phale bra ko dhime se khinch'kar nikala, fir ek-ek kandhe se dress ko niche sarkate huye dono kandhe se bahar nikal diya. Jivisha ki dress uske kamar me thi aur uska khula pith Nischal ke sine ke upar. Jivisha apne dharakte armano ke sath Nischal ke sine se pure chipak'kar usme samati ja rahi thi.


Khule badan par takrati pani ki hilkor alag hi aisa ehsas karwa rahi thi. Jivisha apni bekabu dhadkano ke sath agle pal me hone wali harkat ko soch'kar aur bhi jyada romanchit hui ja rahi thi…


Khule stan Nischal ke sine se yun chipke the ki uska ehsaas madak aur romanchit karne wala tha. Nischal ek pal ke liye bhul gaya ki wo kya karne wala tha aur ye kahan kho sa gaya hai… Nischal ke armaan bhi bekabu the, aur issi kram me uske badan se fir se wo khusbu nikalna shuru hui, jo Jivisha ke dimag me Nischal ke prati madak aakarshan ke ras ghol gayi…


Nischal, Jivisha ke chehre ko kandhe se alag kar upar kiya aur usse sidhe baithne ke liye ishare karne laga.. Jivisha laaj se naa me apna sar hila di aur apne chehre ko uske gardan aur kandhe ke bich chhipa li. Nischal thoda sa jod laga'kar Jivisha ko jaise hi bilkul sidha bithaya, Jivisha apne ek hath ke ghere me dono stan chhipa'kar apna sar niche jhuka li…


Nischal, uske dusre hath ke ki ungli me ek pendent fasa diya jiski chain gadhe nile rang ki aakarshit karne wali kisi nayab patthar ki bani thi, jiske niche ek ati durlabh patthar laga tha jiski raushni aakhon ko apne ore khinch rahi thi…


Nischal ke hath me jo haar tha uske niche shwet rang ka patthar laga tha aur Jivisha ke hath me jo haar thi usme heere ke saman pardarshi patthar laga tha, jo dekhne me halka laal pratit ho raha tha..


Nischal ne apne hath ka haar Jivisha ke gale me pahna diya, kintu Jivisha ek hath se kosis karti rah gayi lekin haar nahi pahna payi…. "Baby please ghurna mat, warna mujhe uncomfortable feel hoga"…


Nischal:- Main to tab bhi tumhare aakhon me dekh raha tha, ab bhi tumhari aakhon me dekh raha hun sangini.


Jivisha, himmat juta kar ek baar fir Nischal ke aakhon me dekhi. Wahi khila sa muskurata chehra jo najron ko lubha raha tha. Laaj ke karan jo najar Nischal se milne ki himmat nahi juta pa rahi thi, wo ab muskurate huye bus gahraiyon me utar rahi thi. Jivisha, Nischal ki najar se najar milaye apne hath ke ghere ko khol'kar dono hathon se wo haar Nischal gale me pahna di.


Jivisha ne jaise hi wo haar Nischal ko pahnayi, Nischal uska hath pakad kar apne sine ke upar, haar ke patthar ko cover karte huye rakh diya, aur khud bhi apna hath uske sine par dalkar uss patthar ko cover kiya..


Dono ke hath ek dusre ke sine par the, najar se najar mil rahi thi aur najren bus ek dusre ko hi dekh rahe the, bina yah jane ki dono ke hath ke niche jo patthar hai, uss se tej raushni hona shuru ho chuki thi. Jaise hi raushni aur bhi tej aani shuru hui, dono ka najaren milna toota aur najar ek dusre ke hath par gayi, jise pura bhed'kar raushni bahar ek dusre ke upar par rahi thi.


"Hum jodi bane chalo iss baat ka gawan hum punchbhut ko banate hain." Jivisha, Nischal ki baat to nahi samjh payi kintu wo ab jodi hai, ye sun'kar hi uska rome rome khil gaya. Nichal ne dono anguthi wali ungli ko thik apne madhya me lakar, anguthi se anguthi ghisne laga. Kewal 7 bar usne ghisa aur wahan agni prajwalit hoti hui bade se panchhi ka aakar li aur unke charo ore chakkar lagane lagi…


"Hihihihihi, tum to jadu kar rahe ho baby"…. "Lekin tumhara jadu jyada kharnak hai, mere sar chadh raha"… Nichal ne ek jhalak Jivisha ke stan ko dekhte huye kaha. Jivisha koi uttar na deti, dhime se hansti hui apni najren Nischal ke upar se hata li…


Dono ke patthar se ab bhi tej raushni nikal rahi thi jo ek dusre ke sine se takra'kar wahan charo ore fail rahi thi. Nischal, Jivisha ka hath tham'kar…. "Jivisha, hume punchbhut ka aashirwad lena hai"..


Jivisha:- Kaise lenge..


Nichal:- Pranam kar ke aashirwad lenge Jisa. Iss sampurn brahmand me, jis kan me bhi humare purwaj honge, wo humri jodi hone ke gawah honge..


Anguthi wali hath dono ne aage badhaye. Raushni ke bilkul madhya me dono apne ek-ek hath aage badha kar pranam kar liye. Jaise hi dono ki purn hatheli aapas me mili, Jivisha ke patthar se nikal rahi shwet raushni aur Nischal ke patthar ki pardarshi chamkili laal raushni, dono ke anguthi me purn roop se sama gayi…


Dono ki ungliyan milkar upar aasman ke ore thi. Laal aur shwet raushni mishrit hokar ungliyon ke upar se nikalna shuru ho chuki thi. Ati sundar divya raushni pure gufa ko behd'kar upar aasamn me ja rahi thi. Kya bhawya najara tha.


Raushni gufa se nikal'kar aasman me fail rahi thi. Ek sampurna aawran banate wo daso disha me badh rahi thi. 800 salon se jinhone satah nahi dekha tha, wo pura aasman dekh rahe the. Pure NilBhut samuday me khushi ki lahar si daur gayi. Shwetna apne mehmano ke sath satah par aayi.. aur uss raushni ke aawran ke niche, kayi sare madhur sangeet bajate, pura samuday nachne aur jhumne laga.


Jo samuday na jane kitne pidhiyon se bhumigat rahne par majboor the, aaj sab ke sab satah par the… Aasman ka najara aise tha mano unke dukh ke badal chhant rahe ho… yah tej raushni Mahamahim aur uske log bhi dekh rahe the.. aaj se pahle aisa najara kabhi kisi ne nahi dekha tha..


Idhar ek baar jab dono ke patthar ki raushni upar jana shuru hui… dono ki najren ek baar fir mil gaye… Nischal ke jism ki wahi madak si khusboo Jivisha ke rom-rom me mehsus hone lagi, jo kal raat mehsus karke wo machal si gayi thi..


Aatma se aatma ka yun milan hua, ki tan se tan ke milan ki jalan me aise magan huye dono ke hont ki milan pyas me vyakul hokar, apne aap hi badh gaye…


Ek dusre me chur hokar, hont ko behatasa chumne lage.. Nischal ka hath swath hi Jivisha ke badan par chalne laga jo upar se niche iss prakar ho raha tha ki uske badan ki aag ko aur bhi jyada bhadka rahi thi..


Nichal hont ko chumte huye apne hath dhire-dhire uske stano par chalane laga.. Jaise hi hath uske stan ko chhuye.. Jivisha kiss ko todti mithi si aaahhhh apne hoton se nikali aur niche apne dress ko thoda adjust karti apne dono paun Nischal ke ling ke thik bich le aayi… Nischal Jivisha ke honth ko fir se apne honth se laga'kar chumte huye, apna hath uske kamar par le gaya aur teji ke sath uske dress ko upar karke, painty ko niche karne laga..


Jivisha, purn madak ehsas me dubi, apni kamar thodi upar ki aur Nischal uske painty ko niche sarka chuka tha.. Jivisha kiss karna chhod'kar apna chehra Nischal ke chehre ke upar lati, uske najron se najar mila'kar dekhne lagi…

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Nischal, ghabrakar pani me pura baith'te… "Jisa, unhe maine mana kiya tha yahan kisi ko nahi aane de"..


Jivisha:- Dil mera joron se dharak raha, paun mere kanp rahe, aur ghabrahat tumhare chehre par… dekha jaye to mujhe ghabrana chahiye… lekin main ghabrayi kya?


Nischal:- Baat to samjho please, tum to kapdon me ho lekin main…. Ye log bhi na bade careless log hain. Tumhe kaise yahan bhej sakte hain…


Jivisha:- Unpar kyon gussa ho rahe ho jaan, wo log bhi yahan kisi ko nahi nahi bheji balki jise tumhare sath hona chahiye usse hi bheji hai. Dur kyon ho baby, aao mere pass.. tumhe yaad bhi hai ki aakhri baar kab hum sukoon se ek dusre ke sath baithe the… Jindgi me itna thrill bharta ja raha hai, romance to lagta hai dur hi chala gaya… please ab dur mat raho mere pass aao na…


Jivisha apni baat kah'kar, hasrat bhari najron se Nischal ko dekhne lagi. Nischal uski najron se najar milaye, thik uske karib ghat ki deewar se tik'kar baith gaya. Jivisha ki kalai ko apne hath me lekar uski hatheli ko pura sparsh karte, uski aakhon me dekhte huye puchhne laga… "Meri jaan kya tum meri Jodi banogi"


Jivisha, Nischal ke ore mudti, halki si hansi ke sath haan me apna sar jor-jor se hilane lagi.. Nischal apna ek hath piche rakhe apne bag par le gaya aur bag se ek chhota sa box nikala…. "Ye kya hai Nischal"…


Nischal, Jivisha ki baat ka uttar na dete huye uss box se 2 ring nikala, ek ring Jivisha ke hath me diya aur dusri khud rakha… Jivisha pyar me dubi pyari hansi ke sath, Nischal ko dekhne lagi.... Nischal bhi muskura'kar usse hi dekh raha tha..


Gudgudate armaan aur dono ke khile huye se chehre. Najren ek dusre par thehar si gayi thi. Jivisha, Nischal ka pura chehra kyon na dekh rahi, iss baat ki tis uske sine me uthne laga, aur wo bina apni najar Nischal se hataye, apne paun uske paun ke dono ore rakhti, kamar ke upar baith'kar, Nischal ke pure chehre ko nikarti, apne hatheli se uske chehre ko sparsh karne lagi.


Nischal, uske hatheli ko apne hath me liya. Pyar se hatheli ko apne honth se sparsh karte, Jivisha ki aakhon me jhakne laga aur muskurate huye ring uski ungli me dal diya. Ring ungli me ja rahi thi aur Jivisha ke khile chehre par aayi pyari si hasi ne wahan ka pura mahol hi khila raha tha..


Jivisha bhi Nischal ki hatheli ko apne hath me tham'kar, usse anguthi pahna di aur dhire-dhire jhukti hui, usse chumne ke liye apne honth badha di… Nischal kisi madhosh swar me dhime se kahne laga… "Kuch der thehar jao jaan"..


Nichal Jivisha ko rok'kar uski kamar ko apne dono hath se tham liya… Hath lagte hi Jivisha ka dil joron se dhadkne laga aur shwans thodi atakne lagi.. Jivisha, Nischal se najren milane me asmarth si ho gayi aur uske sine se lipat kar apna chehra Nischal ke kandhe aur gale ke bich chhipa li.


Tabhi Nischal, Jivisha ke kamar ke dono kinaro par apne hath ki pakad banate, pura sidha ho'kar baitha aur piche se Jivisha ke dress ki chain ko khiska'kar kamar tak le gaya. Jivisha ki atki shwans tej ho gayi aur Nischal ke kandon se takrane lagi.


Nischal bina koi der kiye piche se bra ke huk ko khol'kar Jivisha ko thoda upar uthaya, phale bra ko dhime se khinch'kar nikala, fir ek-ek kandhe se dress ko niche sarkate huye dono kandhe se bahar nikal diya. Jivisha ki dress uske kamar me thi aur uska khula pith Nischal ke sine ke upar. Jivisha apne dharakte armano ke sath Nischal ke sine se pure chipak'kar usme samati ja rahi thi.


Khule badan par takrati pani ki hilkor alag hi aisa ehsas karwa rahi thi. Jivisha apni bekabu dhadkano ke sath agle pal me hone wali harkat ko soch'kar aur bhi jyada romanchit hui ja rahi thi…


Khule stan Nischal ke sine se yun chipke the ki uska ehsaas madak aur romanchit karne wala tha. Nischal ek pal ke liye bhul gaya ki wo kya karne wala tha aur ye kahan kho sa gaya hai… Nischal ke armaan bhi bekabu the, aur issi kram me uske badan se fir se wo khusbu nikalna shuru hui, jo Jivisha ke dimag me Nischal ke prati madak aakarshan ke ras ghol gayi…


Nischal, Jivisha ke chehre ko kandhe se alag kar upar kiya aur usse sidhe baithne ke liye ishare karne laga.. Jivisha laaj se naa me apna sar hila di aur apne chehre ko uske gardan aur kandhe ke bich chhipa li. Nischal thoda sa jod laga'kar Jivisha ko jaise hi bilkul sidha bithaya, Jivisha apne ek hath ke ghere me dono stan chhipa'kar apna sar niche jhuka li…


Nischal, uske dusre hath ke ki ungli me ek pendent fasa diya jiski chain gadhe nile rang ki aakarshit karne wali kisi nayab patthar ki bani thi, jiske niche ek ati durlabh patthar laga tha jiski raushni aakhon ko apne ore khinch rahi thi…


Nischal ke hath me jo haar tha uske niche shwet rang ka patthar laga tha aur Jivisha ke hath me jo haar thi usme heere ke saman pardarshi patthar laga tha, jo dekhne me halka laal pratit ho raha tha..


Nischal ne apne hath ka haar Jivisha ke gale me pahna diya, kintu Jivisha ek hath se kosis karti rah gayi lekin haar nahi pahna payi…. "Baby please ghurna mat, warna mujhe uncomfortable feel hoga"…


Nischal:- Main to tab bhi tumhare aakhon me dekh raha tha, ab bhi tumhari aakhon me dekh raha hun sangini.


Jivisha, himmat juta kar ek baar fir Nischal ke aakhon me dekhi. Wahi khila sa muskurata chehra jo najron ko lubha raha tha. Laaj ke karan jo najar Nischal se milne ki himmat nahi juta pa rahi thi, wo ab muskurate huye bus gahraiyon me utar rahi thi. Jivisha, Nischal ki najar se najar milaye apne hath ke ghere ko khol'kar dono hathon se wo haar Nischal gale me pahna di.


Jivisha ne jaise hi wo haar Nischal ko pahnayi, Nischal uska hath pakad kar apne sine ke upar, haar ke patthar ko cover karte huye rakh diya, aur khud bhi apna hath uske sine par dalkar uss patthar ko cover kiya..


Dono ke hath ek dusre ke sine par the, najar se najar mil rahi thi aur najren bus ek dusre ko hi dekh rahe the, bina yah jane ki dono ke hath ke niche jo patthar hai, uss se tej raushni hona shuru ho chuki thi. Jaise hi raushni aur bhi tej aani shuru hui, dono ka najaren milna toota aur najar ek dusre ke hath par gayi, jise pura bhed'kar raushni bahar ek dusre ke upar par rahi thi.


"Hum jodi bane chalo iss baat ka gawan hum punchbhut ko banate hain." Jivisha, Nischal ki baat to nahi samjh payi kintu wo ab jodi hai, ye sun'kar hi uska rome rome khil gaya. Nichal ne dono anguthi wali ungli ko thik apne madhya me lakar, anguthi se anguthi ghisne laga. Kewal 7 bar usne ghisa aur wahan agni prajwalit hoti hui bade se panchhi ka aakar li aur unke charo ore chakkar lagane lagi…


"Hihihihihi, tum to jadu kar rahe ho baby"…. "Lekin tumhara jadu jyada kharnak hai, mere sar chadh raha"… Nichal ne ek jhalak Jivisha ke stan ko dekhte huye kaha. Jivisha koi uttar na deti, dhime se hansti hui apni najren Nischal ke upar se hata li…


Dono ke patthar se ab bhi tej raushni nikal rahi thi jo ek dusre ke sine se takra'kar wahan charo ore fail rahi thi. Nischal, Jivisha ka hath tham'kar…. "Jivisha, hume punchbhut ka aashirwad lena hai"..


Jivisha:- Kaise lenge..


Nichal:- Pranam kar ke aashirwad lenge Jisa. Iss sampurn brahmand me, jis kan me bhi humare purwaj honge, wo humri jodi hone ke gawah honge..


Anguthi wali hath dono ne aage badhaye. Raushni ke bilkul madhya me dono apne ek-ek hath aage badha kar pranam kar liye. Jaise hi dono ki purn hatheli aapas me mili, Jivisha ke patthar se nikal rahi shwet raushni aur Nischal ke patthar ki pardarshi chamkili laal raushni, dono ke anguthi me purn roop se sama gayi…


Dono ki ungliyan milkar upar aasman ke ore thi. Laal aur shwet raushni mishrit hokar ungliyon ke upar se nikalna shuru ho chuki thi. Ati sundar divya raushni pure gufa ko behd'kar upar aasamn me ja rahi thi. Kya bhawya najara tha.


Raushni gufa se nikal'kar aasman me fail rahi thi. Ek sampurna aawran banate wo daso disha me badh rahi thi. 800 salon se jinhone satah nahi dekha tha, wo pura aasman dekh rahe the. Pure NilBhut samuday me khushi ki lahar si daur gayi. Shwetna apne mehmano ke sath satah par aayi.. aur uss raushni ke aawran ke niche, kayi sare madhur sangeet bajate, pura samuday nachne aur jhumne laga.


Jo samuday na jane kitne pidhiyon se bhumigat rahne par majboor the, aaj sab ke sab satah par the… Aasman ka najara aise tha mano unke dukh ke badal chhant rahe ho… yah tej raushni Mahamahim aur uske log bhi dekh rahe the.. aaj se pahle aisa najara kabhi kisi ne nahi dekha tha..


Idhar ek baar jab dono ke patthar ki raushni upar jana shuru hui… dono ki najren ek baar fir mil gaye… Nischal ke jism ki wahi madak si khusboo Jivisha ke rom-rom me mehsus hone lagi, jo kal raat mehsus karke wo machal si gayi thi..


Aatma se aatma ka yun milan hua, ki tan se tan ke milan ki jalan me aise magan huye dono ke hont ki milan pyas me vyakul hokar, apne aap hi badh gaye…


Ek dusre me chur hokar, hont ko behatasa chumne lage.. Nischal ka hath swath hi Jivisha ke badan par chalne laga jo upar se niche iss prakar ho raha tha ki uske badan ki aag ko aur bhi jyada bhadka rahi thi..


Nichal hont ko chumte huye apne hath dhire-dhire uske stano par chalane laga.. Jaise hi hath uske stan ko chhuye.. Jivisha kiss ko todti mithi si aaahhhh apne hoton se nikali aur niche apne dress ko thoda adjust karti apne dono paun Nischal ke ling ke thik bich le aayi… Nischal Jivisha ke honth ko fir se apne honth se laga'kar chumte huye, apna hath uske kamar par le gaya aur teji ke sath uske dress ko upar karke, painty ko niche karne laga..


Jivisha, purn madak ehsas me dubi, apni kamar thodi upar ki aur Nischal uske painty ko niche sarka chuka tha.. Jivisha kiss karna chhod'kar apna chehra Nischal ke chehre ke upar lati, uske najron se najar mila'kar dekhne lagi…

nice update ...dono jodi ban gaye ..aur panchbhut ka aashirwad lete waqt jo roshni nikli wo mahamahim ne bhi dekh lee ,,,ab wo koi plan na banaye aur inka milan adhura reh jaaye ?..

par ajib rasm thi jodi banane ki ?..kya bra sirf shadi karne ke liye nikali thi pehle hero ne ?..phir dil pe haath rakhke jodi ban gayi ..

 

[nain11ster]

uiiiieee  itni advanced medical science ..

aisi ship mil jaye toh maje hi maje hai.. har ek chij bas bolne bhar se hi samne hajir...
yeyyy nischal bhi pyar karta hai kasak se
Ab dono ki shaadi ho jaani chahiye...
Ab yeh chuja jhingul aakash koun hai aur kahan se aa gaya nandu k sath wahan pe
nandu bilkul thik kah rahi hai ki sering ek harman dhokhebaz dagabaaz insects lober hai.. uspe vishvas nahi karna chahiye




Finally ab pata chalega sabhi ko ki actually kahani ki suruwat huyi kahan se thi....
kya hua tha jiske chalte nischal aur uske aas paas wale aaj is mod pe kade hai...
sabse important baat.. nischal ki mom kuch nahi hona chahiye .. abhi abhi jikar huyi hai unki... abhi unki bhi entry honi baaki hai
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji

mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai aage jakar kuch roking aur shocking milne wala hai.. Khair .. Nischal ki maa ko na dikhana ek lajmi process tha .. story ko aap connect karengi to sab kuch ek lay me payengi.. last time jo ek chhoti si mistake hui thi yahan re posting me usse sudharne ka mauka mil gaya mujhe..

Iske alawa Viggo ki kahani to aani hi thi lekin wo Aizem ja kar aati.. iss baar origin shuru se diya hai .. aur bahut se important points ship par hi cover kar liye hain maine jo events Aizem me hone wale the .. isliye iss baat kuch chijen pahle aa gayi to kuch chijen apne samay se aayengi..

Baki sab kuch as it is hai.. isliye yah na soch lijiyega ki story line me badlaw aaya hai .. Khair .. badhte hain aap ke aage ke revoo par

 

[nain11ster]

nice update ...dono jodi ban gaye ..aur panchbhut ka aashirwad lete waqt jo roshni nikli wo mahamahim ne bhi dekh lee ,,,ab wo koi plan na banaye aur inka milan adhura reh jaaye ?..

par ajib rasm thi jodi banane ki ?..kya bra sirf shadi karne ke liye nikali thi pehle hero ne ?..phir dil pe haath rakhke jodi ban gayi ..

Haan jis hisab ka act tha uss se to wahi lagta hai ki bra ko kewal issi waajh se nikala gaya tha ... Aap ko kuch aur sanka hua tha kya ..

Ab ajib se log hain to ajib si rashmen bhi hongi hi... Bus aage dekhte jaeye Leon bahi abhi to present aur past ka anutha sangam dekhne ko milega