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Yug Purush

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I don’t know how many of you are still active here, but I’m going to complete this story.
The hardest part of restarting and finishing any story is revision...at least for me. But now I’ve done that. So there’s a 90% chance I’ll actually complete it.
I’m not giving false hope. It’s just hope… because I always come back 😎 even if it takes 4–5 years and I finish what I started.
Let’s see what happens this time.
 
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Yug Purush

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nice update ..hero cigarrate nahi peeta par daru to peeta hai aur sach me khudko chutiya keh raha hai 🤣🤣🤣..
rewa jaa rahe hai dono aur ved ko itni peshab kyu aa rahi hai 😅..

riya rose 2nd ladki hai to 1st kaun hai 🤔🤔..ved ne to pehle hi dara diya riya ko ki atharva ka character kharab hai 🤣🤣..

mobile todte hai school me par aisa abhi tak hua nahi phir riya ko kyu bata raha tha ki aisa hota hai sirf baat karne ke liye 😁..
Deprrssion me aadmi khud ko chutiya vutiya bol deta hai... Bol deta hai aadmi khud ko kabhi-kabhi :D
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funny update
Waiting for next
Updated :cool:
Sometimes it is necessary to turn the pages of the past and this also helps.:approve: I think Atharva is upset with all this, no one likes failure every time. Today returning from where started, I'm feeling exciting. :yippi:

SGP 2009 is your ID name, you have not kept this 2009 due to Riya Rose. :D It is very strange to remember the past, Our antics of that time, happiness also accompanies. :love3:The name Riya Rose is good, she is also good, but it would be fun to know what happened at that time, what was lacking.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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Noone likes failure everytime... Kya line likhi hai bhai :D bas-bas bhai pura samajh gaye... :lol:
1st of all :congrats: and thank you for starting this story .
Starting is as good as always .

Purush :think: , purush is ruler of this kingdom :D
Fir purush kya hai... Uska bhi jawab milega... Wo scene aane do... :p:
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Excellent Update Sir..
Sunayana mem ka character kafi khubsurat tareeqe se dikhaya gaya h..

Baki ved air atharva to hain hi :doh:
Unke to kya hi kahne


Is update ke liye chhotaa hi review :shy:
Thanks..... Sunayana mam is love :love: :heart: :D
nice update ..ye ved to pura hawasi hai 🤣🤣..baat karte karte hila raha hai ..

sunayana mam ki taarif zabardast thi 🤩..aur sab ladke unko taadte the aur deo ki khushboo lekar bathroom me muthiyate the 🤣🤣🤣..

aur ye dono erotic sawaal puchhkar saare class ke ladko ko bhi enjoy kara rahe hai 😁😁..

waise ved tharki hone ke saath hoshiyar bhi hai ...
in dono ki baate aisi ho rahi thi class me jaise ghar ya park me baithke baat kar rahe ho 🤣..

aur ye mam ki taarif ki aakhri me ( mam you are looking ) uske aage kuch sune bina mam chali gayi 😁..
aur ab class khatm hone par apni tharak bujhane ke liye bathroom jayenge dono 🤣🤣🤣..
Utne bhi masoom nahi ho.. Ek ek chiz ka matlab samajh jaa rahe yaha :p:
waise kabhi kabhi samajh nahi aata ki kaun baat kar raha hai ,,,jab aage padhte jao aur phir pata chalta hai ki ye baat isne kahi ..
Usme kya problem hai.. Jab dialogue shuru hota hai toh bata hee deta hoon aur fir next wala dusare shaks ka rahta hai aur next wala jisne start kiya hota hai... Aise hee serial me chalta hai.
P. S. Waise jaha ashleelta ho samajh jao Ved ka hai :lol:
अथर्व ने अपने बारे में सोचा इतना सबकुछ बढ़िया क्वालिटी होने के बावजूद भी लड़कियां मुझे क्यों नहीं पसंद करती है... तो इसका मतलब कहीं न कहीं उससे गलती तो हो रही है ।
लड़कियां उन लड़कों से तो कभी भी नहीं पटती जो उसे हर समय , किसी के भी सामने टकटकी लगाए आंखों से ताड़ते रहते हैं ।
लड़कियों को अपनी इज्जत बहुत प्यारी लगती है । उन्हें ऐसे हरकतों से कभी भी पटाया नहीं जा सकता । ऐसे लड़के आवारा टाइप मजनू लगते हैं ।
उन्हें तो वो लड़कें पसंद आती है जो उनके इज्जत का सम्मान कर सकें । जो उन्हें चोरी चोरी... चुपके चुपके देखें... सभी के नजरों से छुपाकर और जब वो उस लड़के को पलटकर देखें तो लडका अपनी नजर दुसरी तरफ फेर ले ।
तब लड़कियों को लगता है कि लड़का शरीफ है और वो समाज से डरने वाला व्यक्ति है ।
लड़कियां अधिकतर उन लड़कों को पसंद करती है जो उन्हें शरीफ़ और स्मार्ट लगें । खासकर कुंवारी लड़कियां । :D

( वैसे मेरा कोई प्रैक्टिकल एक्सपिरियंस नहीं है :D )

अथर्व अपने दोस्त वेद के साथ अपने गांव रिवा जा रहा है । अपनी लाइफ की दुसरी उस लड़की से मिलने जिससे उसे प्यार हुआ था । रिया रोज ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत शहर है रिवा । मध्यप्रदेश में सतना से आगे । इस शहर के आगे सिधि शहर है । मैं यहां बहुत साल पहले गया था ।

रिया से पहली मुलाकात...... अथर्ववेद.....कालेज परिसर..... और इनकी बातें !
ज्ञानी भाई ! आप को तो कोई मूवी डायरेक्शन करना चाहिए था । क्या बेहतरीन सीन क्रिएट किया है ! अद्भुत ! बहुत बहुत सुंदर ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट ज्ञानी भाई । जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
वैसे ये अथर्व राजपूत है या बंगाली ।
अथर्व सिंह भट्टाचार्य ।
Kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi lagta hai ki movie, series banana chahiye :p: par fir jab sochta hu toh lagta hai.. Saala bahut tough hai. :shy: waise :thanks: aise comment se ek writer kafi motivate hota hai 😋😍
Iinke review karna bhit mehnat ka kaam hai...
Phir bhi i will try my best
aapne to atmakami ka kiya hai.. Wo bhi alag hee lvl me :bow:
Bahana nahi chalega :bat:
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Thank you Everyone :cheers:
 

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Chapter-3: Exotic Atoms

Update-6



“जिसने चूत ना चखिया, चख के लिया ना चाट l

बिन दही का दही बड़ा, क्या जाने सम्भोग ललाट ll”

kya bake jaa raha hai...”jab main bahar se daudkar andar aaya toh Ved apne aap me mantra-mugdh aankhe band kiye hue kuch chut-chaat kar raha tha....

“भावार्थ : सेक्सी साहित्यकार यहाँ पर सेक्स के दौरान चूत चाटने के महत्व पर प्रकाश डाल रहे है.”aankhe band kiye hue hee usne vyakhya ki aur fir apni aankhe kholi

“ Waise, kya hua… ? tu haanf kyun raha hai…”jab hanfte hue main class me apni jagah par baitha toh peechhe wali bench se Ved puchha…

“physics wali aa gayi…. Riya ke sath baat karte dekh leti toh sham ko ghar me bata deti…”

“tera bhi alag chodan hai… kya gunda banoge..”

“gunda kisko banna hai, mujhe toh hero banna hai… ab wo Physics wali mam… achanak aa gayi toh main kya kar sakta hu…”

“wo achanak nahi aayi… roj isi time pe aati hai aur tu us-se itna darta kyun hai…”

“mere ghar ke thik saamne rahti hai wo aur aksar sham ko meri maa ke sath ghanto gappe ladati hai aur jara imagine kar toh… adhikatar wo kiske bare me baat karti hai…?”

Jispar Ved chup raha…

“exactly… isiliye… bas isiliye... kyunki main use mere bare me baat karne ka ek aur topic nahi dena chahta….”bolte hue main peechhe muda… toh dekha ki Ved class ki ek ladki ko dekh raha tha…

“abey tu sun bhi raha hai, main kya bol raha hu….”

“aye hat na… maal dekhne de…”

“kise dekh raha hai…”

“Mira…. Ye kuch jyada nahi phail rahi aajkal… 11th me kaise suski-suski thi… kisi ne badhiya bajaya hai, lagta hai…. Doodh dekh… kya gol-gol hai aur gand toh…..aaaahhhh”pant ke upar se apna lund masalte hue Ved bola…

“doodh se yaad aaya…. Physics wali kal sham ko chhat ke ekdum kinare baith kar phone me ghanto batiya rahi thi… hawa bhi chal rahi thi… unka saree mast hawa me lahra raha tha. maine photo bhi kheechi hai…”

“dikha….. dikha….”

Maine Ved ko Physics wali mam ki photo dikhayi…. Jise dekhkar Ved fir se apna lund masalne laga…

“kya mast bade-bade do atoms mam ke seene me hai... inhe bina vastro ke dekh loon toh param sukh ki prapti ho jayegi... aur in atoms ke nipple roopi nucleus ko ungaliyo se sahlaane, dabane, kheenche , daant se kaatne aur fir chusne ko mill jaye toh....”



Physics wali mam… yani Sunayana mam… 28-29 saal ki thi, us waqt… shadi ek saal pahle jab hum 11th me the tabhi hui thi… wo kaisi dikhti thi ispar humlog kabhi detail me gaye hee nahi kyunki unhe dekhne ke baad koyi detail me jaa hee nahi pata ki unki sundarta ka bakhaan kar sake... kyunki unko dekhkar hee on the spot sabka khada ho jata tha… Ved kahta tha ki Sunayana mam ki skin aisi chikni thi ki unko dekhte hee lagta hai ki daudkar unse chipak jao aur unki saree ke upar se lund ragade… alag hee tharakpan bhara tha Ved ke andar, Sunayana mam ko lekar aur Sunayana mam jab class me hoti toh pure period Ved ka aankhe sunayana mam ke jism par aur hath lund me rahta….



Sunayana mam thi bhi bahut badhiya, matlab faltu ka koyi attitude nahi tha unke andar… isliye launde aur bhi pagal the unke peechhe… pahle toh ladke phhir bhi kuch control me the, lekin shadi ke baad jab wo puri ban-thankar gold-vold marke school aane lagi toh ladke toh maano asylum me bharti karane ki halat me ho gaye the… Lunch ke baad jab Sunayana mam humara class lene ke liye staff room se nikalti toh neeche se lekar upar tak ladke line lagakar Sunayana mam ko wish karte aur fir jab wo aage nikal jaati toh unke upar neeche hote hue nitambo ko dekh aise laar tapkaate, maano Sunayana mam ko yadi koyi apatti naa ho toh wo unke nitamb tak chaat le... wo bhi pura. 1 mm2 ka area tak naa chhode kisi kone ka.



Upar se unke deo ki khusboo… aisa lagta mano wo deo sirf unhi ke liye banaya gaya tha… jo Sunayana ke peechhe had se jyada muthiyate the, wo dukan se jo deo Sunayana mam lagati thi, use kharid kar… School ke bathroom me Sunayana mam ki ek jhalak milne ke baad deo sunghate hue Mutth visarjan karte the… Sunayana mam ka craze humare school me aisa tha ki pichhale 4 saal se best teacher ka award jo ki student ki voting ke through milta tha… wo unhe hee mil raha tha. unko akele jitne votes milte , baki teachers ke votes ko yadi combine bhi kar diya jaaye tab bhi wo aagehee rahti. Matlab God Level popularity thi Sunayana mam ki... maano Sunayana mam yadi antaheen aakash thi toh baaki ke teachers us antaheen aakash ke baadal....matlab koyi comparison hee nahi tha.

“bhai… maal hai…” Ved se apna mobile kheechte hue maine kaha… “dekh kaise kinare baithi hai chhat ke… girne ka dar bhi nahi…”

“ye roj aise chhat me kinare par baithkar baat karti hai kya…? ”

“haan…”

“Atharva , fir tu neeche nanga hokar let ja, upar giregi toh maja aayega…”

“ chal lawde…”

“sahi me… tu uske ghar ke neeche ekdum nanga, lund khada karke leta rahega aur jab wo tere upar giregi toh uski chikni chut me tera lund , char-chara ke ghusega… aaaahhhh…. Iski chut se machis ki tilli bas touch karega na toh lawda, machis ki tilli jal uthegi, itni garam hai Sunayana mam…. Iska husband kitna lucky hai be… ye yadi chut chatne ke liye bhi bolti hogi na toh…wo din bhar chat-ta hoga… sala, burchatta. Wo bhi bina koyi break ke… aur fir iski chut chat-te hue iski chut me apni ungali dal deta hoga aur fir apne lund ke tope me thook lagakar lund iski chut ke paas rakhta hoga….. uuuhhooooooooo”kanpte hue Ved bola…

“gir gaya kya be…”

“hat be… aur achchha phone le le, clear photo aana chahiye… aise clear… abey idhar dekh, aage kya dekh raha hai…. Achcha Sunayana mam aa gayi…”

Sunayana mam class me aa chuki thi aur aate hee unohe marker nikala aur seedhe topic me aa gayi… ATOMS

“Atharva timepass karwa na mam se…”

“kyun…?”

“ab iska bhi jawab chahiye tujhe…? Koyi question puchh de, jis-se pura period nikal jaye… aur erotic question puchhna… taki erotic timepass ho…”

“toh tu puchh le na… tere toh number bhi mujhse jyada the is subject me last year…”

“puchh toh main lu.. par fir meri image kharab ho jayegi naa Sunayana mam ke saamne. Ved sir ki reputation hai bahut ... samjha kar, tu puchh…”

“tu kuch dikha raha tha na, Sunayana mam ke aane ke pahle…”Sunayana mam bhale hee class me aa chuki thi par humari baat-chit aise hee jaari thi... topper hone ka yahi fayda hai. especially jab top rank waale hee aapas me baat kar rahe ho... teacher bhi gadfati me rahta hai ki kahi ye bhadak gaya toh question naa karne lage... siway Gupta ji ke... Gupta ji Bhagwan hai, unke liye sab samaan hai aur to aur unka naam bhi Bhagwan Das Gupta hai. khair... wo thodi der baad aayenge....

“pahle question puchh fir dikhata hu… bataunga toh bilkul bhi nahi ki kya dikhaunga par wo related hai mere ghar ke upar rahne wali ladkiyo ke pics se, jab wo chhat me jati hai aur apne boyfriends se baat karte hue joshiya jaati hai”

“dikha pahle…”

“pahle question puchh…”

“mam…”khada karke maine kaha… hath khada karke.

“yes, Atharva…”

“do… your atoms… I mean atoms.. ever actually … toooouccchh… touch each other… like humans do…”ruk ruk kar... sentence ke ek-ek shabd par jor dete hue maine apna sawal daga

“it depends on what do you mean by touch…. There are three possible positions of touch…”

“position.. ?”khush hote hue main bola aur isi ke sath class ke tharki ladke bhi khush hue....

“Position... Position means mam…? which position ?”andar hee andar rakshasi hansi haste hue maine puchha…

“i mean.. there are three possible meanings of touch at the atomic level…”

“three positions... wow...”

Iske baad mam pure class ko atmos ke positions batane lagi ki kis-kis positions me atoms ek dusare ko touch kar sakte hai aur idhar atoms ko mann hee mann class ke ati talented ladko ne lund aur chut se replace kar diya... ek atom ko unhone apna lund bana liya aur dusare Atom ko Sunayana mam ki chut aur lage touch karaane. idhar main aur Ved apne kaam me lag gaye…

“kya question puchha hai… tere ko erotic wala noble prize dunga main…”

“tere ghar ke upar kiraye me jo family rahti hai… unki ladki ki photo hai na tere paas…”

“hao… ye dekh…”mobile bench ke neeche se sarkate hue Ved ne mujhe thamaya…

Jaise humara school do manjila tha, waise hee Ved ka ghar bhi do manjila tha… school jitna toh bada nahi par itna bada tha ki usko kisi family ko kiraye pe de sake… aur kiraye par de bhi rakha tha. Jo family Ved ke yaha kiraye se rahti thi… unki do beti thi…. Ek isi saal Indore kahi padhne gayi thi, par dusari abhi bhi family ke sath hee rahti thi aur aksar boyfriend se baat karne ke liye chhat par aa jati… Ved bhi wahi chori-chhipe pahuch jata aur chhat par ek kinare khade hokar chupke-chupke uski photo kheencha karta….

“abbey iska baap kuch bolta nahi kya … ise”photo zoom karte hue maine kaha

“baap ko bolti hai, mausam achcha hai… jaa rahi hu chhat par aur yaha lagi rahti hai apne bf se…”

“baap andha hai kya be…? Usko dikhta nahi ki mausam kaisa hai… kayi din se gaand maar rakhi hai dhoop ne..ek toh august ka mahina upar se barsaat bhi nahi ho rahi... ”

“chodu hai jhaat…”

“dono bahan ko line maar tu, koyi bachni nahi chahiye….”

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“Ved… can you explain what did I say…”

“kyun nahi…”Ved jhat se khada hua… BC, koyi khauff hee nahi.

Sunayana mam , saamne se idhar humari taraf aane lagi , maine mobile chhipaya aur ekdum serious hokar Sunayana mam ko aate hue dekhne laga…

Ved, kyun nahi… bol kar khada toh ho gaya tha.. par ab chup tha… Mam, Ved ki desk ke paas khadi ho gayi thi aur unke deo ki khushboo hum dono ke andar sama rahi thi… Sunayana mam Ved ki desk ke paas khadi thi, jiske karan unki gori-gori chikni kamar mere aankh ke thik seedh me thi… ek pal ko laga ki Sunayana mam ko gori-gori, chikni-chikni kamar ko.... Anyway… ashleel baat nahi..



“ab bolega bhai.. ya mam, tere liye shankh-naad kare… tab tu shuru hoga…”Ved ko chup dekh main bola…

“no rush… you can answer that at a time suitable to you…”

“mam…”aankh band karke dimag par jor dalte hue Ved bola

“I cant describe the whole theory you described earlier, but the bottom line is atoms never touch in the everyday sense of the word… touch… for the simple reason that they don’t have any hard boundaries. But in every other sense of the word ‘touch’ that has meaning at the atomic level, atoms certainly touch…. I think…”

“excellent, not the answer I wanted. but......... a better one…”

Shocked ...? khair aksar hota hai un logo ke sath jo Ved ko thik se nahi jaante... especially ladke. Wo Ved ko apni tarah gali bakne wala, ladkiyo ko dekhkar muthiyaane wala ladka samajh lete hai aur fir unhe aise jhatke lagterahte hai. par iska matlab ye nahi ki jaisa wo Ved ko samajhte hai, Ved waisa nahi hai... Ved bilkul waisa hee hai par intelligent bhi hai. jo ki aksar uski harkato ko dekhkar nahi lagta ki... wo ho sakta hai aur yahi sab bhramit ho jaate hai. first time yaani jab hum kuch khas mitra nahi the toh uske exam ke number dekh... mujhe bhi aashcharya hua tha aur main kayi din isi soch me raha ki... isne pakka cheating ki hai. ye toh chutiya, hawasi hai.

baahari duniya jaise ki humare parents, teachers Ved ke performance aur grades dekh kar use bahut sharif samajhte hai aur humari andruni duniya yaani ki school ke ladke – ladkiya school me uski harkate dekh use chodu , abuser, MutthManav samajhte hai. par Ved in dono ka adbhut combination hai , jo kabhi-kabhar hee dekhne ko milta hai... matlab Ved ke character ko explain nahi kiya jaa sakta.. use sirf enjoy kiya jaa sakta hai.



Ved ke answer se impress hokar Sunayana mam ne uski desk me apna dono hath rakhka aur humari taraf thoda jhuk kar dheere se fusfusayi

“ye ... is week me 2nd time maine tum dono ko apni class me mobile use karte hue dekha hai, next time warning nahi… war hoga… okay…”

“mam, you are looking….”warning ke beech me Ved bola… jiske baad mam muskurayi aur Ved ka pura sentence sune bina waha se chali gayi aur hum dono aankh band karke sirf lambi-lambi saans lete rahe...

Sunayana mam toh waha se saamne gayi par hum dono coma me chale gaye… isliye nahi kyunki mam ne hum dono ko mobile use karte hue pakad liya tha aur hume warning di thi . balki isliye kyunki jab wo hume warning de rahi thi toh wo hum dono ki taraf thoda jhuki thi aur unke jhukne ke sath hee atmosphere ekdum charged ho gaya tha aur sath me hum dono bhi….



“main is period ke baad… bathroom ja raha hu…”Mam jab board par kuch likh rahi thi toh unke peechhe ke do vishal gol atoms ko dekh Ved bola

“main bhi sath me chalunga…”



Sunayana mam bahut hee sundar, susheel, sabhya aur sahansheel thi… wo shayad jaanti thi ki unka ladko par kya asar hota hai aur yadi koyi unki tareef kare toh wo use lightly leti thi… ye nahi ki jaake complaint kar de. Aur ek humare school ki ladkiya thi… sundarta me Sunayana mam se aadhi rahi hongi par ghamand itna khayegi jaise… swarg ki apsara yahi ho aur inhone hee Rishi Vishwamitra ki tapasya apne saundarya se bhang ki ho…



“ladkiyo ko aisich hona chahiye be, Atharva… abhi toh main shadi ke layak nahi hu, par jab ho jaunga toh … Sunayana mam ka divorce kara ke unse shadi karunga…. Kitni badi hogi umra me …”

“8-10 saal….”

“I will manage it…”

“toh Sunayana mam ki jagah Sunayana bhabhi bolna chalu kar du main….”

“chal na, apna kaam kar… ye mere aur Sunayana mam ka personal matter hai… waise... ye kahne ke liye tere muh me chuchi , chut....”

“matlab...”

“ ~tere muh me ghee, shakkar~ kahne ka riwaaz purana ho chuka hai... modern time requires modern dialogues. Isliye Sexy Saahityakar ki oor se tere muh me chuchi-chut...”

“aisa kahne ke liye tere muh me bhi chuchi-chut...”

mann ki param shanti aur gyan ke dwaar guru ke bina milna durlav hai... prerna dene wale bhi guru, sach batane wale guru, raah dikhane wale guru, shiksha dene wale guru, bodh karane wale bhi guru... unhe hath jod kar mann se aur dil se pranam karne ki jagah yeh dono atharva ved aise jaghanya kaam karte phir rahe hai... inke hath nahi kaanpe aise ku karm karte huye, un teacher ki aise aapattijanak photo lete huye... jinse gyaan arjeet kare unhi ko leke aise grinit vichar rakhne wale, aise gandi soch aur dristi rakhne wale.. jaake chullu bhar paani dubkar mar jaana chahiye... aur inhe sachha pyaar chahiye... uska arth kya hai kya jante hai yeh dono... itni discussion kyun... dono jaake sidhe Sunayana mam ke amne samne saari kyun nahi kar deta after all dono hi kahani ke heros hai :p: thode na koi ade gere hai :D
Khair... yeh toh hua purana kissa indono ka... joh inke yaadon mein basa hai... aate hai hum kahani pe.... so atharva ko tin ladkiyon se pyar hua aur izhaar karne par tino ladkiyon ne pehli avsar pe hai hi sire se kharij kar diya uske pratav ko... yahan tak ek ne yaani nivedita ne khadi khoti bhi suna di... Maybe aane wale din koi achha sandesha leke aaye.... par ek sawal hai kya aane wale waqt pe thrill suspense brutally kiye gaye murders scenes aayenge is story pe ? phir surag aur evidence ki talash...
well update kaafi dilchasp tha, kirdaar apna role har mod par achhe se nibha rahe hai...aur mul dono kirdaaro ke asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai....
drama se leke comedy, heavy Sharabi dialogues aur hansh hansh ke lot pot kar dene wale situations , toh kabhi yeh dosti bachpan ki , kuch twists aur kuch thodi bahot suspense totally blockbuster.. aur sath hi reality ko bhi touch kiya hai kayi mamlo mein .. jisse kahani ka jayeka barkarar hai...
yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bin mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein lage ki sabhi kirdaaro ki apna hi ek role hai..
Khair let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill gyani sir.. :applause: :applause:
 
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Chapter-3: Exotic Atoms

Update-6



“जिसने चूत ना चखिया, चख के लिया ना चाट l

बिन दही का दही बड़ा, क्या जाने सम्भोग ललाट ll”

kya bake jaa raha hai...”jab main bahar se daudkar andar aaya toh Ved apne aap me mantra-mugdh aankhe band kiye hue kuch chut-chaat kar raha tha....

“भावार्थ : सेक्सी साहित्यकार यहाँ पर सेक्स के दौरान चूत चाटने के महत्व पर प्रकाश डाल रहे है.”aankhe band kiye hue hee usne vyakhya ki aur fir apni aankhe kholi

“ Waise, kya hua… ? tu haanf kyun raha hai…”jab hanfte hue main class me apni jagah par baitha toh peechhe wali bench se Ved puchha…

“physics wali aa gayi…. Riya ke sath baat karte dekh leti toh sham ko ghar me bata deti…”

“tera bhi alag chodan hai… kya gunda banoge..”

“gunda kisko banna hai, mujhe toh hero banna hai… ab wo Physics wali mam… achanak aa gayi toh main kya kar sakta hu…”

“wo achanak nahi aayi… roj isi time pe aati hai aur tu us-se itna darta kyun hai…”

“mere ghar ke thik saamne rahti hai wo aur aksar sham ko meri maa ke sath ghanto gappe ladati hai aur jara imagine kar toh… adhikatar wo kiske bare me baat karti hai…?”

Jispar Ved chup raha…

“exactly… isiliye… bas isiliye... kyunki main use mere bare me baat karne ka ek aur topic nahi dena chahta….”bolte hue main peechhe muda… toh dekha ki Ved class ki ek ladki ko dekh raha tha…

“abey tu sun bhi raha hai, main kya bol raha hu….”

“aye hat na… maal dekhne de…”

“kise dekh raha hai…”

“Mira…. Ye kuch jyada nahi phail rahi aajkal… 11th me kaise suski-suski thi… kisi ne badhiya bajaya hai, lagta hai…. Doodh dekh… kya gol-gol hai aur gand toh…..aaaahhhh”pant ke upar se apna lund masalte hue Ved bola…

“doodh se yaad aaya…. Physics wali kal sham ko chhat ke ekdum kinare baith kar phone me ghanto batiya rahi thi… hawa bhi chal rahi thi… unka saree mast hawa me lahra raha tha. maine photo bhi kheechi hai…”

“dikha….. dikha….”

Maine Ved ko Physics wali mam ki photo dikhayi…. Jise dekhkar Ved fir se apna lund masalne laga…

“kya mast bade-bade do atoms mam ke seene me hai... inhe bina vastro ke dekh loon toh param sukh ki prapti ho jayegi... aur in atoms ke nipple roopi nucleus ko ungaliyo se sahlaane, dabane, kheenche , daant se kaatne aur fir chusne ko mill jaye toh....”



Physics wali mam… yani Sunayana mam… 28-29 saal ki thi, us waqt… shadi ek saal pahle jab hum 11th me the tabhi hui thi… wo kaisi dikhti thi ispar humlog kabhi detail me gaye hee nahi kyunki unhe dekhne ke baad koyi detail me jaa hee nahi pata ki unki sundarta ka bakhaan kar sake... kyunki unko dekhkar hee on the spot sabka khada ho jata tha… Ved kahta tha ki Sunayana mam ki skin aisi chikni thi ki unko dekhte hee lagta hai ki daudkar unse chipak jao aur unki saree ke upar se lund ragade… alag hee tharakpan bhara tha Ved ke andar, Sunayana mam ko lekar aur Sunayana mam jab class me hoti toh pure period Ved ka aankhe sunayana mam ke jism par aur hath lund me rahta….



Sunayana mam thi bhi bahut badhiya, matlab faltu ka koyi attitude nahi tha unke andar… isliye launde aur bhi pagal the unke peechhe… pahle toh ladke phhir bhi kuch control me the, lekin shadi ke baad jab wo puri ban-thankar gold-vold marke school aane lagi toh ladke toh maano asylum me bharti karane ki halat me ho gaye the… Lunch ke baad jab Sunayana mam humara class lene ke liye staff room se nikalti toh neeche se lekar upar tak ladke line lagakar Sunayana mam ko wish karte aur fir jab wo aage nikal jaati toh unke upar neeche hote hue nitambo ko dekh aise laar tapkaate, maano Sunayana mam ko yadi koyi apatti naa ho toh wo unke nitamb tak chaat le... wo bhi pura. 1 mm2 ka area tak naa chhode kisi kone ka.



Upar se unke deo ki khusboo… aisa lagta mano wo deo sirf unhi ke liye banaya gaya tha… jo Sunayana ke peechhe had se jyada muthiyate the, wo dukan se jo deo Sunayana mam lagati thi, use kharid kar… School ke bathroom me Sunayana mam ki ek jhalak milne ke baad deo sunghate hue Mutth visarjan karte the… Sunayana mam ka craze humare school me aisa tha ki pichhale 4 saal se best teacher ka award jo ki student ki voting ke through milta tha… wo unhe hee mil raha tha. unko akele jitne votes milte , baki teachers ke votes ko yadi combine bhi kar diya jaaye tab bhi wo aagehee rahti. Matlab God Level popularity thi Sunayana mam ki... maano Sunayana mam yadi antaheen aakash thi toh baaki ke teachers us antaheen aakash ke baadal....matlab koyi comparison hee nahi tha.

“bhai… maal hai…” Ved se apna mobile kheechte hue maine kaha… “dekh kaise kinare baithi hai chhat ke… girne ka dar bhi nahi…”

“ye roj aise chhat me kinare par baithkar baat karti hai kya…? ”

“haan…”

“Atharva , fir tu neeche nanga hokar let ja, upar giregi toh maja aayega…”

“ chal lawde…”

“sahi me… tu uske ghar ke neeche ekdum nanga, lund khada karke leta rahega aur jab wo tere upar giregi toh uski chikni chut me tera lund , char-chara ke ghusega… aaaahhhh…. Iski chut se machis ki tilli bas touch karega na toh lawda, machis ki tilli jal uthegi, itni garam hai Sunayana mam…. Iska husband kitna lucky hai be… ye yadi chut chatne ke liye bhi bolti hogi na toh…wo din bhar chat-ta hoga… sala, burchatta. Wo bhi bina koyi break ke… aur fir iski chut chat-te hue iski chut me apni ungali dal deta hoga aur fir apne lund ke tope me thook lagakar lund iski chut ke paas rakhta hoga….. uuuhhooooooooo”kanpte hue Ved bola…

“gir gaya kya be…”

“hat be… aur achchha phone le le, clear photo aana chahiye… aise clear… abey idhar dekh, aage kya dekh raha hai…. Achcha Sunayana mam aa gayi…”

Sunayana mam class me aa chuki thi aur aate hee unohe marker nikala aur seedhe topic me aa gayi… ATOMS

“Atharva timepass karwa na mam se…”

“kyun…?”

“ab iska bhi jawab chahiye tujhe…? Koyi question puchh de, jis-se pura period nikal jaye… aur erotic question puchhna… taki erotic timepass ho…”

“toh tu puchh le na… tere toh number bhi mujhse jyada the is subject me last year…”

“puchh toh main lu.. par fir meri image kharab ho jayegi naa Sunayana mam ke saamne. Ved sir ki reputation hai bahut ... samjha kar, tu puchh…”

“tu kuch dikha raha tha na, Sunayana mam ke aane ke pahle…”Sunayana mam bhale hee class me aa chuki thi par humari baat-chit aise hee jaari thi... topper hone ka yahi fayda hai. especially jab top rank waale hee aapas me baat kar rahe ho... teacher bhi gadfati me rahta hai ki kahi ye bhadak gaya toh question naa karne lage... siway Gupta ji ke... Gupta ji Bhagwan hai, unke liye sab samaan hai aur to aur unka naam bhi Bhagwan Das Gupta hai. khair... wo thodi der baad aayenge....

“pahle question puchh fir dikhata hu… bataunga toh bilkul bhi nahi ki kya dikhaunga par wo related hai mere ghar ke upar rahne wali ladkiyo ke pics se, jab wo chhat me jati hai aur apne boyfriends se baat karte hue joshiya jaati hai”

“dikha pahle…”

“pahle question puchh…”

“mam…”khada karke maine kaha… hath khada karke.

“yes, Atharva…”

“do… your atoms… I mean atoms.. ever actually … toooouccchh… touch each other… like humans do…”ruk ruk kar... sentence ke ek-ek shabd par jor dete hue maine apna sawal daga

“it depends on what do you mean by touch…. There are three possible positions of touch…”

“position.. ?”khush hote hue main bola aur isi ke sath class ke tharki ladke bhi khush hue....

“Position... Position means mam…? which position ?”andar hee andar rakshasi hansi haste hue maine puchha…

“i mean.. there are three possible meanings of touch at the atomic level…”

“three positions... wow...”

Iske baad mam pure class ko atmos ke positions batane lagi ki kis-kis positions me atoms ek dusare ko touch kar sakte hai aur idhar atoms ko mann hee mann class ke ati talented ladko ne lund aur chut se replace kar diya... ek atom ko unhone apna lund bana liya aur dusare Atom ko Sunayana mam ki chut aur lage touch karaane. idhar main aur Ved apne kaam me lag gaye…

“kya question puchha hai… tere ko erotic wala noble prize dunga main…”

“tere ghar ke upar kiraye me jo family rahti hai… unki ladki ki photo hai na tere paas…”

“hao… ye dekh…”mobile bench ke neeche se sarkate hue Ved ne mujhe thamaya…

Jaise humara school do manjila tha, waise hee Ved ka ghar bhi do manjila tha… school jitna toh bada nahi par itna bada tha ki usko kisi family ko kiraye pe de sake… aur kiraye par de bhi rakha tha. Jo family Ved ke yaha kiraye se rahti thi… unki do beti thi…. Ek isi saal Indore kahi padhne gayi thi, par dusari abhi bhi family ke sath hee rahti thi aur aksar boyfriend se baat karne ke liye chhat par aa jati… Ved bhi wahi chori-chhipe pahuch jata aur chhat par ek kinare khade hokar chupke-chupke uski photo kheencha karta….

“abbey iska baap kuch bolta nahi kya … ise”photo zoom karte hue maine kaha

“baap ko bolti hai, mausam achcha hai… jaa rahi hu chhat par aur yaha lagi rahti hai apne bf se…”

“baap andha hai kya be…? Usko dikhta nahi ki mausam kaisa hai… kayi din se gaand maar rakhi hai dhoop ne..ek toh august ka mahina upar se barsaat bhi nahi ho rahi... ”

“chodu hai jhaat…”

“dono bahan ko line maar tu, koyi bachni nahi chahiye….”

.

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“Ved… can you explain what did I say…”

“kyun nahi…”Ved jhat se khada hua… BC, koyi khauff hee nahi.

Sunayana mam , saamne se idhar humari taraf aane lagi , maine mobile chhipaya aur ekdum serious hokar Sunayana mam ko aate hue dekhne laga…

Ved, kyun nahi… bol kar khada toh ho gaya tha.. par ab chup tha… Mam, Ved ki desk ke paas khadi ho gayi thi aur unke deo ki khushboo hum dono ke andar sama rahi thi… Sunayana mam Ved ki desk ke paas khadi thi, jiske karan unki gori-gori chikni kamar mere aankh ke thik seedh me thi… ek pal ko laga ki Sunayana mam ko gori-gori, chikni-chikni kamar ko.... Anyway… ashleel baat nahi..



“ab bolega bhai.. ya mam, tere liye shankh-naad kare… tab tu shuru hoga…”Ved ko chup dekh main bola…

“no rush… you can answer that at a time suitable to you…”

“mam…”aankh band karke dimag par jor dalte hue Ved bola

“I cant describe the whole theory you described earlier, but the bottom line is atoms never touch in the everyday sense of the word… touch… for the simple reason that they don’t have any hard boundaries. But in every other sense of the word ‘touch’ that has meaning at the atomic level, atoms certainly touch…. I think…”

“excellent, not the answer I wanted. but......... a better one…”

Shocked ...? khair aksar hota hai un logo ke sath jo Ved ko thik se nahi jaante... especially ladke. Wo Ved ko apni tarah gali bakne wala, ladkiyo ko dekhkar muthiyaane wala ladka samajh lete hai aur fir unhe aise jhatke lagterahte hai. par iska matlab ye nahi ki jaisa wo Ved ko samajhte hai, Ved waisa nahi hai... Ved bilkul waisa hee hai par intelligent bhi hai. jo ki aksar uski harkato ko dekhkar nahi lagta ki... wo ho sakta hai aur yahi sab bhramit ho jaate hai. first time yaani jab hum kuch khas mitra nahi the toh uske exam ke number dekh... mujhe bhi aashcharya hua tha aur main kayi din isi soch me raha ki... isne pakka cheating ki hai. ye toh chutiya, hawasi hai.

baahari duniya jaise ki humare parents, teachers Ved ke performance aur grades dekh kar use bahut sharif samajhte hai aur humari andruni duniya yaani ki school ke ladke – ladkiya school me uski harkate dekh use chodu , abuser, MutthManav samajhte hai. par Ved in dono ka adbhut combination hai , jo kabhi-kabhar hee dekhne ko milta hai... matlab Ved ke character ko explain nahi kiya jaa sakta.. use sirf enjoy kiya jaa sakta hai.



Ved ke answer se impress hokar Sunayana mam ne uski desk me apna dono hath rakhka aur humari taraf thoda jhuk kar dheere se fusfusayi

“ye ... is week me 2nd time maine tum dono ko apni class me mobile use karte hue dekha hai, next time warning nahi… war hoga… okay…”

“mam, you are looking….”warning ke beech me Ved bola… jiske baad mam muskurayi aur Ved ka pura sentence sune bina waha se chali gayi aur hum dono aankh band karke sirf lambi-lambi saans lete rahe...

Sunayana mam toh waha se saamne gayi par hum dono coma me chale gaye… isliye nahi kyunki mam ne hum dono ko mobile use karte hue pakad liya tha aur hume warning di thi . balki isliye kyunki jab wo hume warning de rahi thi toh wo hum dono ki taraf thoda jhuki thi aur unke jhukne ke sath hee atmosphere ekdum charged ho gaya tha aur sath me hum dono bhi….



“main is period ke baad… bathroom ja raha hu…”Mam jab board par kuch likh rahi thi toh unke peechhe ke do vishal gol atoms ko dekh Ved bola

“main bhi sath me chalunga…”



Sunayana mam bahut hee sundar, susheel, sabhya aur sahansheel thi… wo shayad jaanti thi ki unka ladko par kya asar hota hai aur yadi koyi unki tareef kare toh wo use lightly leti thi… ye nahi ki jaake complaint kar de. Aur ek humare school ki ladkiya thi… sundarta me Sunayana mam se aadhi rahi hongi par ghamand itna khayegi jaise… swarg ki apsara yahi ho aur inhone hee Rishi Vishwamitra ki tapasya apne saundarya se bhang ki ho…



“ladkiyo ko aisich hona chahiye be, Atharva… abhi toh main shadi ke layak nahi hu, par jab ho jaunga toh … Sunayana mam ka divorce kara ke unse shadi karunga…. Kitni badi hogi umra me …”

“8-10 saal….”

“I will manage it…”

“toh Sunayana mam ki jagah Sunayana bhabhi bolna chalu kar du main….”

“chal na, apna kaam kar… ye mere aur Sunayana mam ka personal matter hai… waise... ye kahne ke liye tere muh me chuchi , chut....”

“matlab...”

“ ~tere muh me ghee, shakkar~ kahne ka riwaaz purana ho chuka hai... modern time requires modern dialogues. Isliye Sexy Saahityakar ki oor se tere muh me chuchi-chut...”

“aisa kahne ke liye tere muh me bhi chuchi-chut...”
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You mentioned Sunayana Madam and I remembered my dreams of Sneha Madam... :verysad::sad: Obviously a little different everything is the same.:lol: Described in great detail, recalled old days.:sigh:
“जिसने चूत ना चखिया, चख के लिया ना चाट l
बिन दही का दही बड़ा, क्या जाने सम्भोग ललाट ll"
भावार्थ : सेक्सी साहित्यकार यहाँ पर सेक्स के दौरान चूत चाटने के महत्व पर प्रकाश डाल रहे है।
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dono bahan ko line maar tu, koyi bachni nahi chahiye…

How do Ved and Atharva do such things…:lotpot:

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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First of all thanks bhai Yug Purush
for starting new thread.
Ved ka character to bohut hi badiya hai
Aur sath mai Atharva ka combination lajawab
Ab to dono dost apni pichli life mai phir se nikle apne unch vichar lekar dekhte hai ye journey kitni intresting hoti hai
Aur aap se to bhai kuch bhi ordinary expect kar hi nahi sakte pata nahi kaise aise concept lekar usko itne flow ke sath like ho
Abhi tak ATMAKAMI ka hangover nahi utra hai bhai
8th semester and ATMAKAMI ye dono stories kabhi bhi bhol nahi sakte ek padne ke baad.
 

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Chapter-4: Silky Sanjana

Update-7

Thodi der baad period khatm hua aur uske baad school bhi… main aur Ved class se nikle. class se nikalte hee maine bio walo ki class ki taraf dekha ki tabhi Mira waha hum dono ke paas aa pahuchi… jise dekh kar Ved class me apna lund masal raha tha aur bola tha ki... ye kuch jyada nahi phail rahi..? 11th me toh suski-suski thi. Remember her...?

“Atharva…. Ye lo….”500 ke do kadak-kadak note mujhe dete hue Mira ne kaha aur note dekar turant waha se chali gayi…

“ye kya tha be…”Vedd bhauchakka rah gaya Mira ki ye harkat dekhkar

“udhari li thi mujhse kuch din pahle… wahi wapas ki hai… bahut rahis hoon main , bahut paisa hai mere paas”

“tu sale garib… tere paas itna paisa kaha se aaya… ki tu use ek hazar udhari de sake… sach-sach bata…”

“ye actually use differentiation and integration padhane ka hai… us-se nahi banta na… toh mere paas aayi thi ek din aur bahut request ki... mere kamal roopi charano me girkar guhar lagayi ki main use ye dono topic padha du. par mujhe toh tu jaanta hee hai ki.. is brahmand ki koyi bhi ladki mujhe intimitate nahi kar sakti fir chahe wo swarg ki apsaraye urvashi, menka ityaadi hee kyun naa ho. maine turant kah diya ki... time nahi hai, apun ke paas… jiske baad usne ye offer diya… waise toh Atharva ji kabhi apne gyaan ka durupayog nahi karte par sirf sexually... ”

“mere paas kyun nahi aayi…? Tere se jyada hoshiyar toh main hu…”

“kyunki use maloom hai ki teri nazar din bhar uske gand me ghusi rahti hai… chal aaj idhar se chalte hai, bio waali class ki taraf se…”Ved ko kheech kar bio ki class ki taraf le jate hue maine kaha, par usne apna hath chhuda liya..

“udhar se kaha ja raha hai… idhar se direct seedhiyo se neeche, main gate… udhar se sala pahle arts walo ki class aayegi, fir commerce walo ki, fir bio walo ki…. Iske baad gol gol seedhiyo se utarenge tab neeche pahuchenge , fir waha se gate tak ka safar... too much calories waste. Utne me toh ek baar mutth maar sakta hai tu.... aur idhar se direct railings me sarakte hue seedhe neeche…”Ved bola aur itna bolkar turant ek jhatke me seedhe railings se sarakte hue neeche pahuch gaya…

“ladkiya dekhte jaate na, fir Sanjana se paise lekar samosa khaate...” Ved ko neeche jata dekh main bola , jaise ki wo yahi par khada ho… par tab tak toh Ved sarak kar neeche pahuch chuka tha aur neeche sarakte hue usne ek ladke ko jhapad bhi maara tha. jo ab Ved ko dauda raha tha.

“tu maara kyun be mujhe...”wo ladka Ved par chillaya

“sala, mere saamne style me chalta hai......”



Ved toh neeche pahuch chuka tha, par main lambe raaste se hee neeche jaane ka socha aur 12th bio class ke bahar khada ho gaya aur bahar nikalne wale har prani me nazar rakhne laga… unki class thodi late se chhuti thi aur jaise hee Sunayana mam class se bahar nikli meri nazar unke peeche-peeche nikalne waale har ek insaan par padi. bio ke jo ladke ladkiya bahar nikalte hue mujhe dikhte unhe muskura kar main hii karta aur reply me wo mujhe bye kah kar aage badh jaate…. Aisa bahut der tak chalta raha aur ek-ek karke sab class se nikalte gaye…. par Riya nahi nikli aur ab andar koyi ladki thi bhi nahi…

"fir kaha gayi.. ? mere saamne hee inka last period khatm hua aur teacher ke jaane ke baad hee mere saamne sab nikalna shuru hue…. wo gayi kaha…?"maine socha

“kya bhatti, kise dhoondh riya hai…”

“haan, riya ko… par tujhe kaise pata…”

“abey teri….. maine puchha kise dhoondh riya hai…. Matlab….. kise dhoondh raha hai…”

“bataya toh .... Riya ko….”

“wo nayi ladki jo aaj hee aayi hai…”

“bas-bas , wahi… kaha hai wo, usne toh bio hee bataya tha…”

“wo toh gayi…”apna belt tight karte hue wo bola…

“kab gayi…. main toh shuru se hee yaha khada tha…”

“lunch ke baad hee chali gayi , uska father aaya tha…”apna lund pant ke bahar se hee adjust karte hue wo bola “ye physics wali bhi na… body ka pura physics hila deti hai…”

“thik hai Ranjan, main chalta hu… Ved ki baat maan leni chahiye thi aur railing se sarakte hue chale jaana chahiye tha…”bolkar main waapas jaane ke liye palta

“abey bhatti…. jaata kaha hai, ruk…”peechhe se meri gardan daboch kar apni taraf kheechte hue Ranjan bola “ Sunayana mam ki sexy kahani sunana…”

“Ved abhi aage ki kahani nahi sunaya hai, jab sunayega toh suna dunga... ab chhod…”Ranjan ka hath jhatak kar maine kaha…

“us ladki ka address maloom hai mujhe…”is baar bhi Ranjan ne mujhe daboch liya par abki baar hatho se nahi balki apne shabdo se…

“kya karunga uska address jaankar…”

“wahi jo sab karte hai… ghumna uske ghar ke aaju-baju…. Police Line me jo mandir hai na, udhar hich uska ghar hai… wo lunch me kuch ladkiya us-se baat-chit kar rahi thi… tab maine suna tha…”


Ranjan.... full form Chitranjan.... humare school ka gunda. Kisi ladke ki kisi bhi ladke se ladayi ho… chahe wo school ke andar ho ya bahar, chahe wo engineering college walo se hee kyun naa ho… Ranjan jaroor usme shamil rahta tha. Uski ye gunde wali puri image uske baap ki den thi. Ranjan ka baap ek shuddh bewda tha , wo ek baar daru peekar yaadi apne mohalle me aaya toh log chahe sham ke 5-6 hee kyun na baje ho… apna gate band kar lete the. Kyunki daru peene ke baad Ranjan ka baap jinse khunnas rahti, un sabko gariyata aur fir unke agal-bagal walo ko bhi…


Ranjan ke baap ki ek jo sabse jabardast aadat thi, wo ye ki… pahle wo unki dayi-mahtari karta tha… jo apne ghar se bahar nikalkar tamasha dekhne ke liye aate the, baad me fir main culprit ka number lagata tha. Jiska Nateeza ye hota ki ab uske mohalle me yadi kisi ko bhanak bhi lag jaye ki Ranjan ka baap daru peekar aa raha hai toh , sab apna kaam chhodkar ya toh bheetar ghus jate ya fir bahar kisi dusari oor nikal jaate…

Ek aur aadat jo Ranjan ke baap ki mujhe pasand thi wo ye ki, uska hum ladko ko dekhne ka najariya hee behenchod bilkul alag tha, jaha har koyi humare achievements ki buniyaad me hume achchha ya bura manta tha, wahi Ranjan ke baap ko in sabse lund koyi matlab nahi tha aur main sure hu ki... Ranjan ke baap ko siway Ranjan kis class me padhta hai, iske aalawa kuch nahi maloom hoga..... ki Ranjan ki padhayi kaise chal rahi hai, pichhale class me Ranjan ke grades kya the, ab kya hai, Ranjan 12th ke baad kya karna chahta hai...? kya karna chahiye...? kuch nahi. kul milakar aaj ki duniya me jise laparwaah baap ki sangya log dete hai, Ranjan ka us sangya me fit baithta supreme example tha…


Ranjan ke baap ke liye sabse jyada important tha , Ranjan… uspar koyi hath bhi utha de, toh wo farsa lekar daudta tha. Bas isi karan Ranjan se darne wale bahut the aur is list me teachers tak shamil the... fir wo chahe humara principal hee kyun naa ho… mujhe yaad hai ki kuch saal pahle ek baar homework na karne par ek Teacher ne Ranjan ki hatheli ulta kar, use stick se bahut mara tha aur agle din Ranjan ka baap daru peekar school aaya aur chilla-chilla kar us teacher ki dayi-mahtari kar raha tha. Wo Teacher us din itna dar gaya tha ki nursery ki class me dubak kar chhip gaya. Wo teacher us din toh Ranjan ke baap ko nahi mila par us ghatna ke baad kisi bhi Teacher ki himmat nahi hui ki wo Ranjan ko hath bhi laga sake…


Aur yadi baat karu, mere aur Ranjan ke ki toh… aise bahut kam hee students the school me jo KG se 12th tak isi school me padhe the… infact sirf teen the. Ek main, dusara Ved aur teesara Ranjan. isliye jane-anjane… hum teeno ek –dusare ko bahut achchi tarike se jaante the. Aur Ranjan mujhe bhatti bulata tha, mere surname Bhattacharya ki vazah se…..

“achchha bhatti , ye bata… Sunayana mam, roz sham ko tere ghar aati hai kya…”

“kabhi-kabhi… jis din free rahti hai…”seedhiyo se neeche utarte hue maine kaha

“fir main bhi aaj tere ghar aa raha hu…”

Aur ye sunke main sadme me aa gaya, kyunki mere gharwale bilkul ye nahi chahenge ki main Ranjan ki sangati me rahu… isme mere parents ka dosh nahi hai… laghag sabhi ke parents yahi chahte the ki unke ladke-bachche Ranjan ki sangati me na rahe aur jab future me main baap banunga toh main bhi yahi chahunga. kyunki Ranjan ka baap jab teacher ko maarne ke liye pure school me ghoom raha tha toh, school me police bhi aayi thi… jiske baad school se related har jeevit shaks jaise ki humare parents, Ranjan aur uske baap se bhali-bhaanti parichit ho gaye the.

“kya bhatti, tu nahi chahta ki main tere idhar aaun…”

“kaisi baat kar raha hai…”

“tere ko dekhkar mujhe aisa lag rhaa hai… waise bhi malum hai mere ko. Government school ke ladko ke sath lafda hone par main sabka best friend ban jata hu, par unki ye dosti sirf us lafde ke khatm hone tak simit rahti hai… wo bhi sirf school tak... kabhi ghar tak nahi pahuchati. Itne programmes, functions, parties hoti hai logo ke yaha… parties wagerah hone ke pahle school me mere saamne baat karte hai aur party ho jaane ke baad bhi kayi dino tak baat karte hai. Par sala…. koyi invite nahi karta.”

Ye sunkar main chup ho gaya aur fir chup hee raha… aise hee chup-chap chalte hue main Ranjan ke sath School se bahar aaya , jaha Ranjan apne raaste ho liya aur main apne raaste… par main ab bhi chup-chap hee chale ja raha tha, Ranjan ke shabd ab bhi mere kaano me gunj rahe the. Uski ye haalat ke bare me jaankari mujhe bahut pahle se thi, par realize ab ho raha tha.... aur main isi soch me duba chup-chap chalta jaata yadi kisi ne mere dahine kaan me cheekha naa hota toh....

“Atharvaaaaa…..”

“kyaaaa hai… kaun haiii…”apna dahina kaan me turant ungali dal kar hilate hue, daant piste hue gusse se apni dahini taraf dekha…. “Sanjana tu….”

“aur Atharva kaha jaa raha hai…”

“chand ke paar ja raha hu, chalegi…?”khisiyate hue maine kaha “kaha ja raha hai… dikhayi nahi deta kya… tum arts walo ke paas bheja shuru se hee nahi hota ya fir arts lene ke baad alag se operation karwa ke nikalwa dete ho.. kaha ja raha hai…. kaan faad diya... abhi ek mukka marunga toh mar jayegi... kaha jaa raha hai... mera kaan damage ho gaya lagta hai, operation karwana padega... chal, paise nikal..."

“ho gaya na.. aur kitna bhokega… waise tu us Chitranjan ke sath kya kar raha tha... auntyji ko batati hu, ruk aaj..."
 

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Chapter-4: Silky Sanjana

Update-7

Thodi der baad period khatm hua aur uske baad school bhi… main aur Ved class se nikle. class se nikalte hee maine bio walo ki class ki taraf dekha ki tabhi Mira waha hum dono ke paas aa pahuchi… jise dekh kar Ved class me apna lund masal raha tha aur bola tha ki... ye kuch jyada nahi phail rahi..? 11th me toh suski-suski thi. Remember her...?

“Atharva…. Ye lo….”500 ke do kadak-kadak note mujhe dete hue Mira ne kaha aur note dekar turant waha se chali gayi…

“ye kya tha be…”Vedd bhauchakka rah gaya Mira ki ye harkat dekhkar

“udhari li thi mujhse kuch din pahle… wahi wapas ki hai… bahut rahis hoon main , bahut paisa hai mere paas”

“tu sale garib… tere paas itna paisa kaha se aaya… ki tu use ek hazar udhari de sake… sach-sach bata…”

“ye actually use differentiation and integration padhane ka hai… us-se nahi banta na… toh mere paas aayi thi ek din aur bahut request ki... mere kamal roopi charano me girkar guhar lagayi ki main use ye dono topic padha du. par mujhe toh tu jaanta hee hai ki.. is brahmand ki koyi bhi ladki mujhe intimitate nahi kar sakti fir chahe wo swarg ki apsaraye urvashi, menka ityaadi hee kyun naa ho. maine turant kah diya ki... time nahi hai, apun ke paas… jiske baad usne ye offer diya… waise toh Atharva ji kabhi apne gyaan ka durupayog nahi karte par sirf sexually... ”
agar riya request karti tab bhi mana kar deta is tarah..


“mere paas kyun nahi aayi…? Tere se jyada hoshiyar toh main hu…”

“kyunki use maloom hai ki teri nazar din bhar uske gand me ghusi rahti hai… chal aaj idhar se chalte hai, bio waali class ki taraf se…”Ved ko kheech kar bio ki class ki taraf le jate hue maine kaha, par usne apna hath chhuda liya..

“udhar se kaha ja raha hai… idhar se direct seedhiyo se neeche, main gate… udhar se sala pahle arts walo ki class aayegi, fir commerce walo ki, fir bio walo ki…. Iske baad gol gol seedhiyo se utarenge tab neeche pahuchenge , fir waha se gate tak ka safar... too much calories waste. Utne me toh ek baar mutth maar sakta hai tu.... aur idhar se direct railings me sarakte hue seedhe neeche…”Ved bola aur itna bolkar turant ek jhatke me seedhe railings se sarakte hue neeche pahuch gaya…

“ladkiya dekhte jaate na, fir Sanjana se paise lekar samosa khaate...” Ved ko neeche jata dekh main bola , jaise ki wo yahi par khada ho… par tab tak toh Ved sarak kar neeche pahuch chuka tha aur neeche sarakte hue usne ek ladke ko jhapad bhi maara tha. jo ab Ved ko dauda raha tha.

“tu maara kyun be mujhe...”wo ladka Ved par chillaya

“sala, mere saamne style me chalta hai......”
gussa kisi pe aur bhadas nikla kisi aur pe..
Ved toh neeche pahuch chuka tha, par main lambe raaste se hee neeche jaane ka socha aur 12th bio class ke bahar khada ho gaya aur bahar nikalne wale har prani me nazar rakhne laga… unki class thodi late se chhuti thi aur jaise hee Sunayana mam class se bahar nikli meri nazar unke peeche-peeche nikalne waale har ek insaan par padi. bio ke jo ladke ladkiya bahar nikalte hue mujhe dikhte unhe muskura kar main hii karta aur reply me wo mujhe bye kah kar aage badh jaate…. Aisa bahut der tak chalta raha aur ek-ek karke sab class se nikalte gaye…. par Riya nahi nikli aur ab andar koyi ladki thi bhi nahi…

"fir kaha gayi.. ? mere saamne hee inka last period khatm hua aur teacher ke jaane ke baad hee mere saamne sab nikalna shuru hue…. wo gayi kaha…?"maine socha

“kya bhatti, kise dhoondh riya hai…”

“haan, riya ko… par tujhe kaise pata…”

“abey teri….. maine puchha kise dhoondh riya hai…. Matlab….. kise dhoondh raha hai…”

“bataya toh .... Riya ko….”

“wo nayi ladki jo aaj hee aayi hai…”

“bas-bas , wahi… kaha hai wo, usne toh bio hee bataya tha…”

“wo toh gayi…”apna belt tight karte hue wo bola…

“kab gayi…. main toh shuru se hee yaha khada tha…”

“lunch ke baad hee chali gayi , uska father aaya tha…”apna lund pant ke bahar se hee adjust karte hue wo bola “ye physics wali bhi na… body ka pura physics hila deti hai…”

“thik hai Ranjan, main chalta hu… Ved ki baat maan leni chahiye thi aur railing se sarakte hue chale jaana chahiye tha…”bolkar main waapas jaane ke liye palta

“abey bhatti…. jaata kaha hai, ruk…”peechhe se meri gardan daboch kar apni taraf kheechte hue Ranjan bola “ Sunayana mam ki sexy kahani sunana…”

“Ved abhi aage ki kahani nahi sunaya hai, jab sunayega toh suna dunga... ab chhod…”Ranjan ka hath jhatak kar maine kaha…

“us ladki ka address maloom hai mujhe…”is baar bhi Ranjan ne mujhe daboch liya par abki baar hatho se nahi balki apne shabdo se…

“kya karunga uska address jaankar…”

“wahi jo sab karte hai… ghumna uske ghar ke aaju-baju…. Police Line me jo mandir hai na, udhar hich uska ghar hai… wo lunch me kuch ladkiya us-se baat-chit kar rahi thi… tab maine suna tha…”


Ranjan.... full form Chitranjan.... humare school ka gunda. Kisi ladke ki kisi bhi ladke se ladayi ho… chahe wo school ke andar ho ya bahar, chahe wo engineering college walo se hee kyun naa ho… Ranjan jaroor usme shamil rahta tha. Uski ye gunde wali puri image uske baap ki den thi. Ranjan ka baap ek shuddh bewda tha , wo ek baar daru peekar yaadi apne mohalle me aaya toh log chahe sham ke 5-6 hee kyun na baje ho… apna gate band kar lete the. Kyunki daru peene ke baad Ranjan ka baap jinse khunnas rahti, un sabko gariyata aur fir unke agal-bagal walo ko bhi…


Ranjan ke baap ki ek jo sabse jabardast aadat thi, wo ye ki… pahle wo unki dayi-mahtari karta tha… jo apne ghar se bahar nikalkar tamasha dekhne ke liye aate the, baad me fir main culprit ka number lagata tha. Jiska Nateeza ye hota ki ab uske mohalle me yadi kisi ko bhanak bhi lag jaye ki Ranjan ka baap daru peekar aa raha hai toh , sab apna kaam chhodkar ya toh bheetar ghus jate ya fir bahar kisi dusari oor nikal jaate…

Ek aur aadat jo Ranjan ke baap ki mujhe pasand thi wo ye ki, uska hum ladko ko dekhne ka najariya hee behenchod bilkul alag tha, jaha har koyi humare achievements ki buniyaad me hume achchha ya bura manta tha, wahi Ranjan ke baap ko in sabse lund koyi matlab nahi tha aur main sure hu ki... Ranjan ke baap ko siway Ranjan kis class me padhta hai, iske aalawa kuch nahi maloom hoga..... ki Ranjan ki padhayi kaise chal rahi hai, pichhale class me Ranjan ke grades kya the, ab kya hai, Ranjan 12th ke baad kya karna chahta hai...? kya karna chahiye...? kuch nahi. kul milakar aaj ki duniya me jise laparwaah baap ki sangya log dete hai, Ranjan ka us sangya me fit baithta supreme example tha…


Ranjan ke baap ke liye sabse jyada important tha , Ranjan… uspar koyi hath bhi utha de, toh wo farsa lekar daudta tha. Bas isi karan Ranjan se darne wale bahut the aur is list me teachers tak shamil the... fir wo chahe humara principal hee kyun naa ho… mujhe yaad hai ki kuch saal pahle ek baar homework na karne par ek Teacher ne Ranjan ki hatheli ulta kar, use stick se bahut mara tha aur agle din Ranjan ka baap daru peekar school aaya aur chilla-chilla kar us teacher ki dayi-mahtari kar raha tha. Wo Teacher us din itna dar gaya tha ki nursery ki class me dubak kar chhip gaya. Wo teacher us din toh Ranjan ke baap ko nahi mila par us ghatna ke baad kisi bhi Teacher ki himmat nahi hui ki wo Ranjan ko hath bhi laga sake…


Aur yadi baat karu, mere aur Ranjan ke ki toh… aise bahut kam hee students the school me jo KG se 12th tak isi school me padhe the… infact sirf teen the. Ek main, dusara Ved aur teesara Ranjan. isliye jane-anjane… hum teeno ek –dusare ko bahut achchi tarike se jaante the. Aur Ranjan mujhe bhatti bulata tha, mere surname Bhattacharya ki vazah se…..

“achchha bhatti , ye bata… Sunayana mam, roz sham ko tere ghar aati hai kya…”

“kabhi-kabhi… jis din free rahti hai…”seedhiyo se neeche utarte hue maine kaha

“fir main bhi aaj tere ghar aa raha hu…”

Aur ye sunke main sadme me aa gaya, kyunki mere gharwale bilkul ye nahi chahenge ki main Ranjan ki sangati me rahu… isme mere parents ka dosh nahi hai… laghag sabhi ke parents yahi chahte the ki unke ladke-bachche Ranjan ki sangati me na rahe aur jab future me main baap banunga toh main bhi yahi chahunga. kyunki Ranjan ka baap jab teacher ko maarne ke liye pure school me ghoom raha tha toh, school me police bhi aayi thi… jiske baad school se related har jeevit shaks jaise ki humare parents, Ranjan aur uske baap se bhali-bhaanti parichit ho gaye the.

“kya bhatti, tu nahi chahta ki main tere idhar aaun…”

“kaisi baat kar raha hai…”

“tere ko dekhkar mujhe aisa lag rhaa hai… waise bhi malum hai mere ko. Government school ke ladko ke sath lafda hone par main sabka best friend ban jata hu, par unki ye dosti sirf us lafde ke khatm hone tak simit rahti hai… wo bhi sirf school tak... kabhi ghar tak nahi pahuchati. Itne programmes, functions, parties hoti hai logo ke yaha… parties wagerah hone ke pahle school me mere saamne baat karte hai aur party ho jaane ke baad bhi kayi dino tak baat karte hai. Par sala…. koyi invite nahi karta.”

Ye sunkar main chup ho gaya aur fir chup hee raha… aise hee chup-chap chalte hue main Ranjan ke sath School se bahar aaya , jaha Ranjan apne raaste ho liya aur main apne raaste… par main ab bhi chup-chap hee chale ja raha tha, Ranjan ke shabd ab bhi mere kaano me gunj rahe the. Uski ye haalat ke bare me jaankari mujhe bahut pahle se thi, par realize ab ho raha tha.... aur main isi soch me duba chup-chap chalta jaata yadi kisi ne mere dahine kaan me cheekha naa hota toh....

“Atharvaaaaa…..”

“kyaaaa hai… kaun haiii…”apna dahina kaan me turant ungali dal kar hilate hue, daant piste hue gusse se apni dahini taraf dekha…. “Sanjana tu….”

“aur Atharva kaha jaa raha hai…”

“chand ke paar ja raha hu, chalegi…?”khisiyate hue maine kaha “kaha ja raha hai… dikhayi nahi deta kya… tum arts walo ke paas bheja shuru se hee nahi hota ya fir arts lene ke baad alag se operation karwa ke nikalwa dete ho.. kaha ja raha hai…. kaan faad diya... abhi ek mukka marunga toh mar jayegi... kaha jaa raha hai... mera kaan damage ho gaya lagta hai, operation karwana padega... chal, paise nikal..."

“ho gaya na.. aur kitna bhokega… waise tu us Chitranjan ke sath kya kar raha tha... auntyji ko batati hu, ruk aaj..."
jaisa bhi ho ranjan par bahot badi baat keh gaya..
yahi to reality hai... joh kuch hi panktiyon mein writter sahab us yatharth sach ko explain kar diye ki asal jindagi mein ghatit kuch kadve vaastavikata mein se ek hai .. yeh baat kayi kahani pe notice ki hai ki yahan pe is issue ko palat ke kalpanik kar dete hai... lekin aapne bilkul hakikat ko humare sammukh pesh kiye hai... aur ranjan ne jo bola, us baat pe itni dum aur sachhai hai ki atharva ko bhi sochne par majbur kar diya.. yahan tak ki soch mein khoya itna ki as paas koun hai ya kya ho raha hai yeh tak dhyan na raha... yani kahani ke pramukh kirdaar kalpnao mein khone se zyada sachhai se ru-ba-ru hona jyada pasand karta hai...
Khair... yeh sanjana kya sachme bata degi uske ghar par.. :hmm2:
well... let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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