Thriller BEGUNAAH ( Completed )

[TheBlackBlood]

Maybe Avinash abhi ke liye masoom aur sachha lag raha ho lekin yeh jo baar baar ek hi jurm mein fashne ki baatein ho rahi hai..
iske piche ki ek hi wajah ho sakti..
aur agar wajah sach hua to shayad hum readers ko flashback mei jane ko mauka mil jaaye..
aur wajah hai..... Avinash se sach mein koi personal dusmani nikal raha woh bhi kaafi seriously..
dusri baaton par gaur karne se pehle is baat gaur kare to jawab mil jaaye...
Shayad Avinash ne kiske family ke sath wohi kiya hoga ya karne ki koshish kiya ho.. ab wohi jurm culprit abhi Avinash ke fasane ke liye kar raha hai.. jahir si baat hai, shayad Avinash ne us admi ke ghar ki auraton ke sath kuch bahot galat kiya ho aur paise bhi lut liye ho.. jab us aadmi ko pata chala usne Avinash ko jaan se maar diya par Avinash jinda bas gaya...
Maybe abki baar ek hi baar maarne ki wajaye kisto mein aisi jillat ki jindagi de raha hai woh admi Avinash ko..
chaahe Avinash ka yaaddast hi kyun na rahe par admi badla jarur lega.. lekin wo admi hai koun... I think wo wohin se aaya hoga jis jagah par Avinash bhi past mein rehta tha..
Mujhe ab baaki mamlo se zyada ye mamla interesting lagi aur lage ki yahi right track hai
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

Jaisa ki maine pahle hi kaha ki mujhe aapki kaabiliyat par pura yakeen hai. Is liye jald hi aap sahi track par pahuch jayengi....par kya sach me.???
Mere yakeen ko mat todiyega, warna soch lena baat nahi karuga aapse...haan nahi tooo,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

saare patte chupaye baithe hai aise kaise suspense open ho jayegi kahani ki

Iske baavjud naina ji ke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Btw ek baar ek liye to main hairan ki kahi yeh viraj to nahi.." amir dikhta hai achhe kapde pahne par "

Viraj ka is kahani se door door tak koi waasta nahi hai,,,,

 

[Naina]

Jaisa ki maine pahle hi kaha ki mujhe aapki kaabiliyat par pura yakeen hai. Is liye jald hi aap sahi track par pahuch jayengi....par kya sach me.???
Mere yakeen ko mat todiyega, warna soch lena baat nahi karuga aapse...haan nahi tooo,,,,

Actually abhi do stories ki revo baaki hai unko clear karte kal subhah chai ke sath is story ki baari... Chaliye.. hum bas anuman lagayenge kal se... baaki sachhai lekhak mahoday jaane aur jaane woh insaan jiska nata hai purana Avinash se... ek purani dusmani jaane kaha tak le jaye ye story..
Btw baaki characters in dono ke as pas hi ghumenge... chahe flashback ho ya present.. haan sau baat ki ek baat kahani kaafi dilchasp hai

 

[TheBlackBlood]

bahot achi story please update more

Bahut bahut shukriya Rita Kumar ji aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,
Naina ji ki tarah story padhiye aur fir review bhi dijiye. Update to aate hi rahege apne time par,,,,,

 

[Naina]

Viraj ka is kahani se door door tak koi waasta nahi hai,,,,

nahi actually thodi der ke liye laga ki kahi wo viraj to nahi...

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Actually abhi do stories ki revo baaki hai unko clear karte kal subhah chai ke sath is story ki baari... Chaliye.. hum bas anuman lagayenge kal se... baaki sachhai lekhak mahoday jaane aur jaane woh insaan jiska nata hai purana Avinash se... ek purani dusmani jaane kaha tak le jaye ye story..
Btw baaki characters in dono ke as pas hi ghumenge... chahe flashback ho ya present.. haan sau baat ki ek baat kahani kaafi dilchasp hai

Koi baat nahi. Sab waqt ki baate hain. Jab waqt mile tab apne vichaar prastut kijiyega. Tab tak main bhi koshish karuga ki ek do din me agla update de du,,,,

 

[Naina]

Koi baat nahi. Sab waqt ki baate hain. Jab waqt mile tab apne vichaar prastut kijiyega. Tab tak main bhi koshish karuga ki ek do din me agla update de du,,,,

Thank you

 

[Mr. Perfect]

Intjar rahega shubham bhai______

Koi baat nahi. Sab waqt ki baate hain. Jab waqt mile tab apne vichaar prastut kijiyega. Tab tak main bhi koshish karuga ki ek do din me agla update de du,,,,

 

[VIKRANT]

Eagerly waiting for the next update bro.