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Roshni was tantrik, and killed many people for her rituals but swati forgot to tell us what was her purpose, similarly story lacks the scenes how roshni killed people I think it would be good to read a killing experience.
The story was based on first person.. And she only called Awadesh when her all rituals were done and she needed to get rid of the body.. So the narrator never get to know, neither he was interested in finding the answer. And about her purpose... What could be purpose of a taantrik if she kills innocent people? Definietly something evil.
 
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Road ke side pe baithkey Kalu samney dekh raha tha. Kitney log chal rahe hai. Koi idhar jaa raha hai toh koi udhaar. Koi chalkey jaa raha hai toh koi ajeeb se chis pe baithkey jaa raha hai. Bachpan se kalu yeh sab dekhta hua aa raha hai par aaj tak pata nahi chala usko ke aakhir yeh log kahaan jaate hai? Aakhir yeh sab janaa kahan chahte hai? Inka lakshya kya hai? Aakhir kahaan jakar rokengey yeh? Bus chal hi rahe hai.

Nahin...... Sab nahi chal rahe hai. Woh samney ki chai ki dukaan ke bahaar kuch log baithkey chai peetey huye baat kar rahe hai. Unmein se koi bujurg hai toh koi jawan. Chai peetey huye sab kayi tarikey ki baatein kar rahe hai. Koi bol raha hai - huh! Is desh ka kuch nahi hoga... Jahan dekho bhrastachar, yeh scam woh Loot..... Gaya yeh desh. Koi fir uske baat ko virodh karte huye apna opinion de raha hai.

Kalu unka koi baatein kuch bhi smajh nahi raha hai, dhyaan bhi nahi de raha hai. Uska nazaar hai ek us bench pe baitha ek bujurg aadki ke upar jo bahut saari biscuit lekar chai ke sath khaa raha hai aur baju mein baithi ek jawan ladkey se baat kar raha hai.

Woh bujurg aadmi bol raha hai - arey bhai woh samay beet gaya jab sab jagah shanti aur sukh thaa. Humne woh zindagi dekhi hai. Humarey zamane mein har jagah kitna acchayi thi. Education, politics, family, festival culture sab kitna pure tha. Naa koi pollution aur naahi itna dhokadhaari. Kya zindagi thi humaari. Hum logon mein us waqt bahut taqaat hoti thi. Kitni dur paidal chal chalke hum jaate the. Aur tum log thora sa chalkar hi thaak jate ho, do kadam siri bhi nahi chartey lift lete ho. Aur us samay humare under 2 quality thi. Ek hai dusro ka respect aur dusra hai patience. Ajkalke zamane ke jawan baccho mein in dono ki bahut kami hai. Mujhe dekho.... Akele hi kitne gareeb logon ki help kiya hai maine us waqt. Mera dil bahut naram tha..... Logon ka dukh dard mujhse dekha nahi jataa tha.

Kalu aur rok nahi pata. Subah se pet pe kuch nahi gaya hai. Us admi ke paas biscuits dekhkar Bahut umeed lekar kalu agey barney laga. Uske paas jakar kalu apni poonch hilane laga aur us admi ke taraf dekhne laga.

Woh bujurg admi shayad baju pe baithe us jawan admi ko aur bhi kuch bolney jaa raha tha par apney samney kalu ko dekh kar woh admi chillane laga - eei.... Hat!! Hat!! Hurrr... Jaa yahan se!! Chal bhaag...

Kalu teen chaar kadam peechey hat gaya par bhagaa nahi. Bahut bhookh laga hai usey. Us bujurg admi ke paas baithey woh jawan ladka bola - arey chacha..... Becharey ko aise bhagaao mat... Ek biscuit de do... Itna biscuit toh hai aapke paas. Yeh sunkey abhi abhi jo itni gyaan ki baatein bol raha tha admi woh bola - arey nahi... Nahin...... Ek dunga toh firse dusa khaney ka zid karega... Fir teesra..... Aise zyada barawa nahi dena chahiye inko... Chal bhaag yahan se. Hattt..... Aur ja dustbin se kahan khaa... Bhag.

Teh bolkey neechey se ek chota patthar uthaake woh admi kalu ko marne hi jaa raha tha par kalu bhaag gaya wahan se. Kalu ek janwar hai varna us bujurg aadmi ki gyaan ki baatein aur harkat ka faarak dekh kar us bhookh mein bhi shayad hasi nikal jaati.

Kalu agey barney lagaa. Kal dustbin se ganda purana khana khakey uska pet bahut dard kar raha tha isliye raat ko kuch nahi khaya tha. Ab bhookh ke marey pet dard kar raha hai uska. Socha tha ek biscuit milega par woh bhi nahi mila.

Is duniya mein kalu ka ab koi nahi hai. Ek samay uski Maa thi, bahen bhi thi. Unke sath hi kalu bachpan mein reheta tha. Lekin ek din Maa kahin kho gayi. Lekin usse pehele uski Maa ne kalu aur bahen ko zindagi ko jeene ke barein mein bahut kuch Sikhakar gayi thi. Jaise kaise road cross kiya jata hai, kaise bhookh lagney par dukaan ke samne jakar punch hilana parta hai, kaise apne haq ke liye larna parta hai.

Kalu bachpan mein sirf mamuli ek Roti ke liye uski Maa ko 2 kutto se lartey huye dekha tha. Ek kutta uske maa ke pair kaat raha hai aur ek peeth. Par uski Maa purey zor se jhatka dekar un dono kutto ko hataake gurratey huye unke taraf attack karti hai. Aakhir haar mankey woh dono kuttey bhaag jate hai. Maa ke ek pair se khoon nikal raha hai par usi halat mein jeet ki khusi bhi hai Maa ke ankh mein. Maa woh roti lekar baccho ke paas ati hai. Aur pura roti kalu aur bahen ko de deti hai. Ek tukra bhi khud nahi khaati. Shayad baccho ko khata hua dekhkar hi uska bhookh mit gaya tha. Woh baccho ke samney kharey hokar nazar rakh rahi thi ke koi aur kutta agey na aaye.

Kalu kabhi apne pitaah ko nahi dekha. Uske zindagi mein sirf uski Maa aur bahen hi thi. Uski bahen bahut badmash thi. Hamesha bahi ko pareshan karti thi. Bhai ke sath saradin khelti rehti thi. Bhaen thi safed rang ki aur Kalu khud hai pura kalaa rang ka. Aur unke Maa....... Nahin...... Ma ka rang kya tha yaad nahi. Bus yaad hai ek hi rang. Laal. Maa ke jism ke aaspas para hua tha.

Aaj bhi yaad hai woh din. Dono bacchey ek gali mein khudke sath khel rahe thei. Tabhi ek ajeeb sa cheeeeeeeeekkk jaisa awaz aur sath hi ek cheekh. Yeh awaz woh bacchey jantey hai. Yeh toh unke Maa ki cheekh hai. Woh do bacchey awaz jahan se ayi waha bhagne lagey. Ek jagah bahut sarey log jama huye hai. Kuch log ek dusrey se baat kar rahe hai - arey re.... Bechara kutta..... Ishhh...... Gari ke neeche aa gaya.... Ajkal ke driver saley dekh ke bhi nahin chaltey.... Bechare kutte ko maar diyaa ishhhh....

Kalu aur uski bahen un logon ke prechey khare thei. Woh dono un logon ke baatein samajh nahi paa rahe the. Bus un logon ke pair ke neechey ke gap se samney dekh rahe the. Unki Maa soyi hui hai. Chupchaap soyi hai. Maa ke aaspas laal rang ka paani para hua hai.

Uske baad woh dono kabhi apni Maa ko nahi dekha. Aacha yeh tha ke tabtak woh dono thora barey ho gaye the aur khud khana seekh gaye the varna pata nahi kya hota. Aur fir ekdin uski bahen bhi kahin chali gayi. Shayad uske jeevan mein koi aa gaya tha. Ab Kalu pura akela tha. Aur khudke zindagi ko kaise agey kaatna hai woh seekh gaya tha.

Kalu ko yaad hai ekbaar ek garden ke samney baith ke woh apna badaan khuja raha tha. Tab usne dekha tha uske jaisa ek aur ko. Kitna khoobsurat rang roop... Par uske galey mein chain bandhaa hua tha. Aur usko chain ko pakar ke peechey ek aurat. Kalu jaise usko dekh raha tha, uski nazar bhi kalu pe pari aur woh kalu ke paas aney lagaa. Shayad dosti karne..... Par tabhi us kuttey ke chain pe pressure ayaa aur woh do kadam peechey chali gayi. Kalu dekha woh aurat us dog ke chain ko kheech rahi hai aur bol rahi hai - No... No candy...... You are a good girl.. Aise rastey ke kuttey se dosti nahi kartey... Chalo... Chalo. Fir woh aurat us dog ke sath chali gayi. Jaate waqt bhi woh dog kalu ko bahut bar dekhi. Kalu ko kharap laga tha. Aakhir usko kaise pataa hoga ke dosti barabar walon se hoti hai. Matlab insaan toh aisa hi sochte hai. Aise hi ek dusre se apney aapko alaag rakgte hai . ameer gareeb, ucha neecha, insaan janwar.... Aise hi farak karte hai woh log. Lekin ek mamuli janwar ko yeh sab kaise pata hoga. Kalu bhi toh wahi tha. Lekin ek baat usko acha laga. Uske galey mein koi chain nahi hai. Shayad woh koi bunglow mein nahi reheta par woh azaad hai.

Kalu ko laraai jhagra pasand nahi. Jab baaki ke kuttey khaney ko lekar cheena jhapti, maramari kartey hai tab kalu unke beech nahi jataa. Jo mita hai woh khata hai . isliye woh dusrey kutto ke mamlon mein dubla patla hai. Par iska matlab yeh nahi ke woh kamzor hai. Shayad kamzori deemag ke soch ka ek part hai. Aur zindagi mein itna sab dekhkar ayaa hua kalu deemag se bahut tawatwar ho gaya hai. Isliye kabhi bhi agar kisi dusrey kuttey se agar laraai ho toh kalu bhi Chorta nahi. Apney purey shakti se larta hai. Uske Maa ne bachpan mein jo bhi sikhaya tha woh Kalu kabhi nahi bhula.

Kalu zyada 2 pair mein chalne wale matlab insaan ko zyada pasand nahi karta aur naahi unke paas jata hai. Sirg apna bhookh mitane ke liye unke paas jata hai. Kabhi khana milta hai, kabhi nahi. Baaki kabhi bhi nahi jata. Usey insaan pasand nahi. Iske peechey bhi ek kahaani hai. Jab woh thora chota tha tab school ke bacchey wapas laut te waqt hamesha usko pareshan karta tha, kaan pakar ke kheechta tha, puunch pakar ke kheechta tha, dhakaa deta tha. Kalu ko bilkul accha nahi lagta tha yeh sab. Ekbar aise hi school se laut te waqt kuch students kalu ko samney dekhakr uske sath badamashi karne laga. Koi ek ladka ek lakri se kalu ke badan pe maar raha tha aur khud bhi has taha tha aur baaki ladkey bhi has rahe the. Kalu ko usdin bahut gussa aya aur woh sirf daraane ke liye us ladke ke taraf gurrate huye chillane laga aur akraman kiya. Lekin use nahi pata tha insaan janwar se bhi battar ho sakte hai. Tabhi un ladko mein se ek ladka ek patthar uthaake zor se woh patthar kalu ke taraf maraa. Woh patthar seedha jakar lagaa uske peechey ke pair mein.

Usdin kalu samjha tha dard kya hota hai. Chalne ke halat mein bhi nahi tha kalu uswaqt. Ronaa aa gaya tha. Bar bar Maa ka chehra yaad aa raha tha usey. Maa ko yaad karke ro rahaa tha woh. Lekin Wahan se chalney walein insaano ne usdin ek ghayal kuttey ki chekh hi suni. Us cheekh ke peechey ka dard nahi samjh paye woh log. 3 din theek se chal nahi paya tha kalu . dheere dheere theek hua tha. Tab se woh insaan ko pasand nahi karta.

Aaj bhi ek insaan ka nafraat ko aankhon se dekhke aya hai. Haat mein itna biscuit hote huye bhi ek bhi usko nahi diya. Lagta hai aaj ka subaah bhi kuch khaane ko nahi milegaa. Woh chaltey chalte ek gali ke under ghus gaya. Dopaher ka waqt tha. Sab ghar ke mahilaye padosi ke sath baat kar rahe hai, koi bartan dho raha hai, koi nahaa raha hai. Kalu ke jaise hi kuch aur kuttey idhar udhar soye huye hai. Kalu ka naam kalu kisne rakkha tha pata nahi. Bus bachapan se yahi naam woh logon ke muh se sun raha hai. Woh apne aapko kalu ke naam se hi jaanga hai. Shayad uska rang kala hai isliye yeh naam hai uska.

Kalu chalte huye ek jagah akar ruk gaya. Bhookh ke maarey aur chala nahi jaa raha. Woh wahin pe baithkey so gaya. Shayad isse thori bhookh kam ho.

Gate kholkey ek choti si bacchi apna cycle lekar bahaar ayi. Abhi woh bacchi cycle chalana seekh rahi hai. Waise toh uski Maa usey akeley nahi chorti par is gali ke under koi car nahi aa sakta isliye woh bacchi ko yahan cycle chalane ka permission deti hai. Woh bacchi cycle pe baithkey dheere dheere cycle chalane lagti hai. Uska haat abhi bhi kaapta hai. Theek se chala nahi paa rahi. Bar bar cycle ka handle idhar udhar hil raha hai aur balance bhi theek nahi hai. Lekin itney mein hi ek garbar ho gayi. Ek patthar ke neechey woh cycle ka tyre Aa gaya aur cycle apna balance khokey left ke taraf mur gaya aur woh bacchi isse pehele cycle ko rok paye cycle seedha samney soya hua dog ke paas chala gaya aur us kuttey ke poonch ke upar cycle ka tyre aa gaya.

Keeuuuu!!!! Karkey woh kutta chilla utha. Bechari bacchi ghabrake aur darrke cycle se utarke bhaag ne lagi. Par kuch dur jaake woh bacchi ruk gayi aur peechey murkey dekha. Cycle rastey pe para hua hai aur woh kutta khara hokar usey hi dekh raha hai. Woh kutta chahta toh bacchi ko attack kar sakta tha par woh chupchap dekh raha hai. Fir woh kutta thora agey jakaar firse zameen pe so gaya.

Woh choti bacchi ko yeh baat ajeeb laga. Thora dukh bhi hua. Woh thora samney barkey us dog ko dekhne laga. Kya yeh dog beemar hai? Kamzor lag raha hai. Woh choti si bacchi kuch sochti hai fir daurkey ghar ke under chali jaati hai. Kuch samay baad firse bahaar aati hai. Isbaar uske haat mein kuch biscuit thei.

Woh agey barti hai. Thora darr bhi lag raha tha par fir bhi agey barti hai. Us dog ko chu.. Chu... Karkey bulaati hai. Kalu muh uthaake dekhti hai. Thora gussa bhi ataa hai usey. Par apna gussa man mein hi rakhkey fir se aankh bandh karke so jata hai.

Bacchi firse bulaati hai - aahhh.. Ahh... Chu.. Chu... Biscuit khayega doggy?

Kalu firse muh utha ke dekhta hai. Us bacchi ke haat mein jo hai uske smell se usey pata chalta hai ke khanaa hai. Kalu apna poonch hilata hai. Woh choti bacchi 2 biscuit us kuttey ke samney fekti hai. Bahut bhookha tha kalu isliye samney khana dekhkar woh turant khara hokar woh biscuit khaney lagta hai. Aur fir us bacchi ko dekhkar zor zor se poonch hilane lagta hai.

choti bacchi ke under se ab darr gayab ho jata hai. Woh ab agey barkey us kuttey ke samney baithkey uske sar pe pyar se haat firaate huye bolti hai - sorry doggy... Mere galti ke liye hi tujhe dard hua.... Very sorry....koi baat nahi... Main tujhe pyaar se jhappi deti hoon... Dekhna sab theek ho jayega.

Kalu dekha us bacchi ke aankh pe aasnu tha. Kalu thora hairaan tha. Kisi bhi insaan ke aankhon mein yeh drishti nahi dekha tha. Is aankhon mein uske liye koi daya nahi.. Ek pyaar tha. Kisi bhi do pair mein chalne wale insaan ke aakhon mein yeh aajtak nahi dekha tha kalu. Kalu apna muh agey baraake us bacchi ka dress ko smell kiya.

Haa.... Yeh bhi toh insaan hi hai.. Toh yeh unse alaag kaise?

Woh bacchi apne haat se aur 2 biscuit kalu ke samney rakhkey bolti hai - le khaley doggy... Aaj se hum dost hai. Fir main tujhe jadoo ki jhappi dungi.... Dekhna sab dard chala jayega.

Kalu woh biscuit khaakey us bacchi ko dekha. Aaj zindagi mein pehelibaar kalu us bacchi ke samney aakar us choti bacchi ke gaal ko jiv se chatney laga. Woh bacchi gudgudi se hasney lagi. Fir woh bacchi Kalu ko pakar ke ek jhappi di. Ek rastey ka kutta aur uske badan pe dhul mitti hote huye bhi sabkuch ignore karkey woh choti bacchi kalu ko pyaar se ek jhappi di. Kalu bhi us bacchi ke kandhe pe muh rakhke baitha raha.

Aaj Kalu ko bahut accha lag raha hai. Uska bhookh bilkul bhi nahi mita hai. 4 biscuit se thori naa pet bharta hai? Par bhookh ka dard se bhi barkey ek feeling pehelibaar kalu ke under aaj paida hua hai. Dosti ka feeling. Sacchi dosti ka. Woh Aaj bhool gaya hai 2 pair aur 4 pair ka faarak. Aaj Kalu janaa hai usey iswaqt jo bacchi pakar ke jhappi de rahi hai woh uska dost hai, sirf saccha dost.

Ajtak shayad Kalu galaat janta tha. Jo 2 pair mein chalney waley logon ko kalu ne ajtak dekhta hua ayaa hai shayad unka aur koi naam hai. Aaj, abhi, iswaqt jo usko sab faarak bhulkey dil se, pyar se jhappi de rahi hai shayad usey hi kehete hai - Insaan.
dil ko chhu gayi kahani ..
wo budha aadmi bhashan de raha tha ki usne kitno ki madad ki hai par saamne bhukhe jaanwar ko ek biscuit nahi de paaya .
badi badi baate sab karte hai par madad karne ka waqt aaye to pichhe hat jaate hai ..
kalu ek kutta hai par kahani padhkar aisa laga ki kisi insaan ki hai ye kahani ..
kalu ki maa kaise apne bachcho ke liye do kutto se ladhi aur roti bachakar laayi ,,khud naa khakar apne bachho ko khilaya 😍😍 ...maa shabd hi aisa hai jisse kisi bhi cheej ki tulna nahi ki jaa sakti 😍😍..
jab kalu ke maa ki death huyi wo scene sabse jyada emotional laga ..kalu ko sirf lal rang yaad hai jo uske maa ke aaspaas tha aur kalu ko pata nahi ki wo uski maa ka khoon hai ..

school ke bachche kalu ko pareshan karte the isliye wo 2 pair wale yani insaan se nafrat karta tha ..
waise sab bure nahi hote par kuch logo ko bejuban janwar ko taklif dene me maja aata hai ..

last me jab bhukh se kalu gali me jakar soya aur wo chhoti bachchi ke cycle se usko dard mila phir bhi usne us bachchi ko daraya nahi aur us bachchi ko kalu se lagaw ho gaya aur usne usse dosti ki usko buscuit khilaya 😍😍😍..

us bachchi ka kehna ki jadoo ki jhappi dungi ekdam majedar tha aur masumiyat se bhara kalu ke liye pyar ..

aur aaj sahi maayne me kalu ko koi insaan mila tha us bachchi ke roop me ,,,baaki sab ko kya kahe ...

heart touching kahani thi ....ek jaanwar ki bhawna ko bahut achche se dikhaya hai writer ne ..
 

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जैसा कि कहानी की शुरुआत में लग रहा है कि करन निशा से प्यार नहीं करता बस मजबूरी में या व्यापार में निशा के पापा सहयोग करते हैं इसलिए उससे सगाई कर ली।

लेकिन वो इसके बाद भी परेशान रहता है और अपना मोबाइल बन्द करके एक हफ्ते गायब रहता है।

लेकिन वापस आने पर हवाईअड्डे पर निशा मिलती है। उसके हावभाव से लग रहा है कि वो करन से प्यार करती है।

लेकिन ये क्या निशा तो मर चुकी थी एक हफ्ते पहले।
मतलब वो निशा की रूह थी जो अपने सच्चे प्यार के कारण करन से मिलने आए थी।

हम किसी की कदर तब तक नहीं करते जब तक वो अपने पास होता है। उसकी कमी तब महसूस होती है जब वो दूर जा चुका होता है। बहुत दूर।

करन को भी इसका एहसाह हुआ, लेकिन तब तक देर हो चुकी थी।।

आपने बहुत अच्छा प्रयास किया।
 

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Love With A Gangster - A Short Love Story

Written by Qaatil


Love With A Gangster - A Short Love Story

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"Pyaar, Ishq or Mahobbat" na jane in lafzo ne kitno ki zindagi barbad ki he... Lekin ye pyaar kuch alag sa tha.


Diksha apne pariwar ke saath apne Cousin bhai ki shadi ke liye unke sheher me thi. Diksha or uske pariwar ko dekh kar, sab kafi khush the. Agle din sablog Haldi ki tayari me kafi mashruf the, aaj kafi sare Rishtedar ghar aye hue the. Diksha apni Cousin Behne or Bhaiyo ko gale laga kar milti he. Lekin is baar Diksha apni Cousin behen ki Devarani se pehli baar mil rahi thi. Ek bahot hi cute or pyari ladki Isha, Diksha ke Maa Baap Isha ke parents ko jante the, Isha Diksha ke Parents ke per chuti he.

Pata nahi kyu lekin Isha ko Diksha ki Personality kafi acchi lagi or wo pure din Diksha ke saath ghul mil chuki thi. Shaam ke jab Haldi ki rasm honi thi, tabb Diksha ne pile rang ka suit pehna tha, jisme wo bahot hi zyada jach rahi thi, Sare Rishtedaro ne Diksha ko uski khubsurti ke liye compliment kiya, or Diksha ki Maa ne Diksha ko ek kala tika kiya, jis se Diksha ko kisi ki nazar na lage, lekin Diksha ki Kismat me to shayad kuch or hi tha.

Sablog Ghar ke upar Tarace par chale jate he, jaha Haldi ki rasm shuru ho gayi. Kuch log Dulhe ke saath photos click kar rahe the, kuch apas me baate kar rahe the, or Diksha apni Cousin behen, or uski Devarani Isha ke saath ek corner me bethi hui thi, Diksha ki cousin behen apne bacche ko dudh pilana chahti thi, or usne dudh ki bottle ghar ke ground floor par bane kitchen me rakhi thi. Diksha uthkar niche chali jati he Dudh ki bottle lane ke liye. Jab wo niche pahochi to ghar bilkul khali tha, Diksha Kitchen me dekhti he ke bottle table par hi rakhi he, wo jaldi se bottle ko le kar waha se jane ke liye piche mudi, lekin tabhi wo kisi se takra jati he.

"Ahhh" Diksha ke muh se Shoulder par dard hone se awaz nikal jati he. Or tabhi ek damdar mard ki awaz ati he "Are You Okay"
Diksha upar ki taraf dekhti he to samne khada ek 24-25 saal ka ladka tha, jiske eyebrows or kaan me chandi ki baliya thi, haath me Silver Bracelet, ghani dadhi or chehre par ek ghav ka nishan. Waise to wo kafi Handsome tha, lekin saath hi kafi Arrogant sa bhi lagg raha tha.

"Ha... Ha.... Me thik hu, I'm Sorry mene jaldi jaldi me aapko dekha nahi" wo apne aap ko sambhalte hue kehti he. Wo ladka Emotionless nighao se Diksha ko dekhta he, or uske muh se sirf "Hmm" ki awaz nikalti he, Diksha turant waha se upar Tarace par chali jati he, Aise hi kuch der baad Haldi ki Rasm khatam ho chuki thi, Guests dhire dhire ghar jane lagte he. Sare Relatives is waqt ghar me bethe hue the, tabhi Diksha ki Maa Dulhe se puchti he "Beta Karan wo ladka jiske kaan or eyebrows pierced thi, kya wo Rishi tha?"

"Ha Mami, wo Rishi Hi tha" Karna jawab deta he.
"Kya? Uske bachpan me to wo kafi gentle tha or ab... Mujhe to pehle wo pehchan me hi nahi aya tha" Diksha ki Maa Herani se kehti he.
"Thik kaha Mami, wo kafi change ho chuka he, darasal ab wo kuch gunde type ke logo ke saath rehne laga he, uske Papa bhi ab us se koi rishta nahi rakhte, Rishi akele ek Flat me rehta he... Me bhi purane Rishi ko kafi Miss karta hu" Karan Diksha ki maa ki baat ka jawab dete hue kehta he. Diksha ke Parents ko Rishi ki present situation par kafi afsos hota he. Diksha ko bhi ab yaad ata he ke wo bachpan me ek baar wo or usje parents Rishi ke ghar gaye the. Lekin ab Diksha kafi thaki hui si thi, sare log ja kar so gaye.

Wahi Dusri taraf choti si ladki Isha, Jo ki Rishi ke choti behen thi, wo apne bhai ki itne waqt ke baad dekh kar kafi khush thi, wo ja kar Rishi se bahot si baate karti he, ha Rishi ek Gangster hi tha, jise log darr ke mare salam karte the, wahi Rishi apni choti behen ke saath kafi gently baat kar raha tha. Isha use batati he ke wo aaj Diksha se mili, or wo Diksha ke bare me hi Rishi se baate kar rahi hoti he, apni choti behen ke muh se kisi ladki ki itni baate sunkar Rishi heran sa tha, kyu ke Isha koi aisi ladki nahi thi, jo aise hi kisi se impress ho jaye, Isha Rishi se kehti he "Bhaiya, me agli baar Diksha Di se aapko milaungi, wo bahot acchi ladki he, mujhe to unke saath kafi maza aya"
Rishi bass muskurate hue Haa me apna sar hila deta he.


Aaj tha Mehendi wala din, Diksha or Isha balcony me ruk kar baate kar rahi hoti he, ke tabhi waha kuch ladke ajate he, jo the Diksha ke cousin or saath me Rishi. Isha Rishi ko dekh kar uski taraf Daud padti he, or Rishi ka haath pakad kar use Balcony me lati he, apna Promise pura karne ke liye. Diksha use dekh kar kafi embarrassed ho chuki thi, wahi Rishi bhi awkward si situation me tha.
"Isha jab se tumse mili he, wo tumhari hi baate kar rahi thi" Rishi baat ki Shuruwat karte hue kehta he.

"Isha bhi bahot pyari ladki he..." Diksha apni pyari awaz me kehti he, or bass itni hi baate un dono me hui. Diksha ne apne mann me socha ke Rishi utna bhi bura nahi he, jesa usne kal raat suna tha, wo apni behen ke saath kafi gentle he.

Bairehaal... Shadi ka din agaya tha, bade se hall me bahot se log aye hue the, nachgana, masti mazak, charo taraf khushiyo ka mahol tha, lekin Diksha in sabse alag piche ek chair par bethi hui thi. Tabhi Rishi uske bagal me padi chair par akar beth jata he, or us se kehta he "Tired?"
Diksha apne khayalo me khoyi hui thi, use Rishi ki awaz ate he wo apne khayalo se bahar ati he, or ek jhuti muskurahat ke saath use kehti he " uske baad dono ke aspaa bass shanti chaa jati he, jise Diksha todte hue Rishi se puchti he "umm... Tum kyu un sabko join nahi kar rahe?" Uske sawal par Rishi Diksha ko kuch seconds ek takk dekhta he or kehta he "me nahi chahta ke meri wajah se wo sab log darr ke mare waha se chale jaye"

"Or is liye tum mere samne bethe ho? Umm mean...."
Diksha uski taraf dekhte hue kuch keh rahi hoti he ke tabhi Rishi uski baat ko kaat te hue jawab deta he "me yaha is liye betha hu ke corner me koi mujhe notice nahi kar payega... or tum bhi ho sake to yaha se bhag matt jana, i mean out of fear"

Diksha kehti he "halake me is sheher me nahi rehti hu, or me tumhe janti nahi hu, lekin tum utne bhi bure nahi lagte, mene dekha tum apni behen se bahot kindness or pyaar se pesh ate ho, tum utne bhi bure nahi ho, jitna logo ne kaha" wo Ye sab Rishi ki akho me dekhte hue kaha. Lekin tabhi Diksha ko ek call ajata he, Diksha ne jese hi Mobile screen par call karne wale ka naam dekha to uske chehre par to jese khushiya chaa gayi. Wo jaldi se uthkar Rishi se dur ho kar call pick kar leti he. Darasal ye call Diksha ke Fiance ka tha. Yes, Diksha Engaged thi, or wo us ladke ko kareeb 4 saal se pyaar karti thi.

Yaha Rishi ko Diksha ki baat sunkar kafi accha laga, lekin jese hi wo call par baat karne ke liye dur gayi to Rishi thoda irritate ho gaya tha.

Wo khush tha, kyu ke use ek aisi ladki mili jo kafi honest thi, kyu ke Diksha ne uske andar ke ek positiveness dekhi, jo bakiyo ne kabhi nahi dekhi, ulta dusro ne Rishi ke andar sirf ek shaitan dekha tha. Or wo irritate tha, kyu ke agle hi pal Diksha use akela chhod gayi, usne Diksha ki sharm, uski akho me chamak, or honto par sharmili hasi notice kar li thi. Wo kuch nahi kar paya, siwaye mobile phone ke us taraf baat kar rahe insan ke bare me sochne ke. Akhir wo kyu bina wajah jealous feel kar raha tha? Kya wo Diksha par Attract ho gaya tha? Usne apne dil se pucha.

Diksha apni baat khatam kar ke wahi par wapis akar beth gayi, jaha kuch minutes pehle usne Rishi ko akela chhoda tha. Suddenly Diksha ke chehre par khushi nazar arahi thi.

"Kon tha call par" Rishi dhimi awaz me Diksha se puchta he. "Huh... Umm.. my Fiance" wo apni sharmayi awaz me kehti he. Rishi ki aakhe aag me jalne lagi thi, wo apni jagah se uthkar kahi chala jata he. Diksha soch me padd gayi ke Rishi aise achanak kyu chala gaya.

Bairehaal, Shadi puri hote hote kafi late ho chuka tha, sablog apne apne ghar pahoch gaye the, kal Reception party thi.

Reception me bhi kafi log aye hus the, bacche Dulha or Dulhan ke saath kuch khel khel rahe the. Rishi ne dekha ke waha Isha Diksha ki kamar ko hug karte hue us se baate kar rahi thi, or Rishi ki Maa bhi waha mojud thi. Rishi ki Maa ne use dekh liya or jaldi se Rishi ki taraf agayi. Rishi apni Maa ko apne paas ata dekh kar Muskurane lagta he.

"Mera Beta kesa he tu? Ha? Ghar ata nahi, call karta nahi, khana to thik se khate ho na?" Wo Rishi ke chehre se haath ferte hue kehti he. "Ha Maa... Me thik hu, P..... Papa... Thik he na?" Wo apni ladkhati awaz me puchta he. "Khud ghar akar puch nahi sakta?"

"Maa please ab tum firse shuru matt ho jana" wo Apni Maa ke haath thamkar kehta he. Kuch der tak dono ki baate hoti he.

Function khatam ho gaya tha, lekin isme kafi late ho chuka tha, parking lot me khadi almost sari cars chali gayi thi, or waha bass ek car mojud thi, Manav (Rishi ka chota bhai) Rishi ko zabardasti pakad kar us gadi me bitha deta he, halaki uska ghar jane ka mann nahi tha, uske to kuch or hi plans the. Rishi jab car me betha to usne paya ke piche ki seat par uske saath Diksha so rahi thi, or Isha uski godd me soyi thi. Rishi ke chehre par bass dono ko dekh kar muskurahat ajati he. Tabhi age ki seat par Manav ke saath uski patni ajati he.

"Uhhhh.... To itne din baad apne darshan de hi diye Devar ji aapne" wo ek badi si muskurahat ke saath Rishi se kehti he. "Ha.... Bass... Waise Manav tang to nahi kar raha? Aisa he to mujhe batana, me apne hisab se use sabak sikha dunga" uski baat par dono hasne lagte he. Raat ke 12 baje the, gadi pehle Dulhe ke ghar jani thi, jaha Diksha, Isha or Manav ki patni rukne wale the. Bahar ka mosam kafi thanda tha, car ki windows open thi, or tabhi barish shuru ho gayi. Rishi Manav ko gadi ki speed ko kam rakhne ko kehta he, or khud Diksha ki taraf ki Window close karne ke liye aage jhukta he. Lekin window close hote hi Rishi ki nazar soti hui Diksha par kafi nazdeek se padti he. Wo bass Diksha ko nihar raha tha, or tabhi "Ahhhhh" Diksha ke muh se dard bhari karah nikalti he, kyu ke Diksha ka sar Rishi ke sar se takra gaya tha.

"Manav" Rishi kafi gusse me uspar chillata he. Manav waise bhi Rishi se kafi darta tha. "Bhai, sorry... Wo mene Speed Breaker nahi dekha' wo gadi ki speed bilkul ka karte hue kehta he. Isha bhi bass girne wali thi, lekin Rishi ne use pakad liya tha, Diksha apna matha sehla rahi thi.

"Tum thik ho na" usne fikarmandi se Diksha se pucha.
"Ha... Ha, me thik hu" Diksha kehti he. Rishi uske liye fikarmand tha, jo Manav ki patni ne notice kar liya tha. Tino ladkiyo ko ghar chhod kar Manav Rishi ko apne ghar le jana chahta tha, lekin Rishi mana kar deta he, tabb Manav use uske ghar takk chhod deta he. Rishi puri raat so nahi paya, kyu ke jese hi wo aakhe band karta, uske samne Diksha ka chehra ajata.

Subah Diksha or uska pariwar apne ghar jane ke liye tayar tha, Isha to use jane nahi dena chah rahi thi, lekin fir wo samajh jati he. Diksha or uska pariwar apne ghar laut gaya tha. Raat me Rishi Isha or Manav ki patni ko lene agaya ye jane bina ke Diksha to subah hi ghar laut gayi he. Manav ki patni ne ye dekh liya tha ke Rishi ko Diksha ke liye feelings he, tabb wo Rishi se baat karti he ke ye possible nahi he, use Diksha ke bare me sochna chhod dena chahiye, kyu ke wo pehle se hi kisi se Engaged he. Lekin koi nahi janta tha ke Rishi kuch aisa karne wala he, jis se sabke hosh ud jane the.

Ha, hum baat kar rahe he Rishi ki, ek gangster, ek nirdayi or gusse wala insaan. Rishi katayi aisa insan nahi tha, jis se wo pyaar karne wali ladki ko apni life se dur jane de.

5 Months Later.....

Isha 5 mahine baad Rishi se baat kar rahi thi, baato baato me usne Rishi ki bataya ke wo parso Diksha ki shadi me ja rahi he. Ye sunkar Rishi ka khun khol chuka tha.

Haldi se ek din pehle, jab Diksha apni cousins ke saath parlour se ghar laut rahi thi, tabhi ek black car akar uski car ko rok deti he, jabtak Diksha ki cousins kuch kar pati, tabtak to wo black car Diksha ko le kar faraar ho gayi thi, ghar me shadi ka mahol matang me badal gaya tha. Dulhe ke ghar walo ko jab ye baat pata chali to wo log bhi Diksha ke ghar agaye the.

Pariwar ne Police me faryad likhwa di thi. Lekin Diksha ka kahi koi ata pata nahi tha. Wahi dusri taraf aas pados ke log apni apni tippaniya de rahe the. Koi kehta ke pakka Diksha ka kisi or ke saath chakkar tha, or wo usi ke saath bhag gayi he. To kuch log kehte ke nahi Diksha acchi ladki he, lekin agar wo mil bhi gayi to kon us se shad karega, pata nahi kitne logo ne uske saath kya kya kiya hoga.

Ye sab sunkar Dulhe ke pariwar ke dimag me alag alag bate ghum rahi thi, wo log apne ghar chale gaye yaha sirf Diksha ke family majud thi.

Wahi dusri taraf Diksha kafi dari hui thi, use nahi pata tha ke use kisne kidnap kiya he, or kyu? Lekin jese hi usne Kidnap karne wale ka chehra dekha wo heran reh gayi thi. Rishi, Isha ka bada bhai.... Halaki wo ek gangster tha, lekin Diksha ko pata tha ke usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jis se Rishi ne use kidnap kiya. Rishi ne use ek beach house me rakha tha, or Diksha ke mathe par Gun point kar ke, zabardasti use shadi karne ke liye majbur kiya, waha par ek pandit bhi majud tha, lekin us pandit ki bhi halat darr ke mare buri hui padi thi.

Rishi ne Diksha se kapde change kar ke, usne jo shadi ka joda laya tha, use pehen ne ke liye kaha, Diksha ne saaf mana kar diya, tabb Rishi ne Zabardasti uske kapde badalva hi diye. Diksha bass roye ja rahi thi.

"Please.... Mujhe jane do.... Mene tumhara kya bigada he? Mummy Papa, meri chinta kar rahe honge, or.... Or Anuj(Diksha ka Fiance) please mujhe jane do... Kal... Kal meri haldi he.... Mene....." Diksha aonw haath jod kar rote hue Rishi se keh rahi hoti he ke tabhi Rishi uske honto par ungli rakh kar use bolne se rok deta he, or gusse me Diksha se kehta he "Shhhhhh..... Tumhara pati yaha tumhare samne khada he, or tum kisi or mard ke bare me baat kar raho ho.... Bolo, tumhe kese saza du" Diksha ko Rishi ka touch karna bahot hi ghinona lagg raha tha. Wo jhatke se Rishi ka haath hatate hue kehti he "hum Shadi shuda nahi he... Tumne mujhpar zabardasti ki he...."

"Tum sirf meri ho.... Or ye me tumhe Samjha kar rahunga"
Or fir wo zabardasti Diksha se shadi kar leta he, or jo kuch raat me hona tha, wo to batane ki zarurat nahi thi. Diksha puri tarah se tuti hui thi, subah uski aakh khulti he, uske pure badan me dard ho raha tha. Lekin uska sirf badan hi dard nahi kar raha tha, uska Dil badan se zyada dard me tha. Wo janti thi ke ab ghar jana kafi late ho gaya he, uske dimag me kafi sari baate arahi thi, agar to Diksha yaha se bach bhi jaye to kya Anuj ek aisi ladki se shadi karega, jo Ek Gangster ke saath raat bita kar ayi he? Log uspar kitne sawal khade karenge? Lekin Diksha ko ye bhi pata tha ke agar wo yaha se Anuj ke paas chali bhi jaye to Rishi use jaan se maar dega, kisi dusre mard ke saath dekh kar.

Diksha washroom me ja kar nahane lagti he, or apne badan se Rishi ki smell ko dur karne ki puri koshish karti he, Diksha ek Strong ladki thi, wo aise hi kisi situation me haar maan ne wali nahi thi, lekin is waqt uska hosla puri tarah se tut chuka tha. Wo bahar akar kal pehni jeans me se apna mini purse nikalti he, jisme uske Maa Baap, or bhagwaan ki tasveer lagi hui thi. Diksha us Bhagwaan ki tasveer ko nikal kar apne haatho me rakhti he, or apne aakge band kare unse baate karne lagti he, ye baate shayad itni gehri ho gayi thi ke Diksha apne aap ko rone se rok na payi. Rishi bahar akar Diksha ko dekhta he, or uske nirdayi Dil me Diksha ko dekh dard sa hota he, use kal raat ke apne dwara kiye gaye saluk par pachtava ho raha tha. Lekin Diksha na to use dekhti he, or na hi uski baat ka jawab deti he jab Rishi ne us se pucha "me khane ke liye intezam kar raha hu, tum kya khana pasand karogi?"

Kya Diksha Gussa thi? Nahi, wo to bass apne aap ko calm rakhne ki koshish kar rahi thi, wo janti thi ke ab jo kuch hona he, use bhagwaan par hi chhod dena chahiye. Diksha khidki me bethe apni uljhi life ke sawal dhund rahi thi, tabhi Rishi uske samne akar beth jata he, or Diksha ko khane ke liye kehta he, lekin Diksha ne khane se mana kar diya.
Rishi apne chehre par hasi late hue Diksha se kehta he "to... Meri patni chahti he ke me use apne Haatho se khana khilau?" Uski baat par Diksha bahot gusse me Rishi ko dekhti he. Or Rishi kehta he
"Tum Gusse me or bhi zyada Khubsurat dikhti ho"

"Okay please ab khana kha lo.... Tumhara gussa mujhpar he, khane par gussa utarna thik nahi he..." Rishi ke kafi samjhane ke baad Diksha khana kha leti he.

"Meri patni cute he" wo muskurate hue Diksha se kehta he. Diksha kuch keh nahi rahi thi, lekin wo apne mann me soch rahi thi ke ye kesa insan he? Usne pehle to apna accha swabhav dikhaya, lekin kal raat uska voilent character bhi dikha diya. Wo arrogant tha, lekin wo flirt bhi kar raha tha?

"Jo kuch tumne mere saath kiya, maan lo agar koi tumhari......" Diksha Rishi ki aakho me dekhte hue kehne ja rahi thi, lekin wo aage kuch nahi bol payi, lekin Rishi uski baat samajh gaya, use apne aap par ghin arahi thi. "Thik he.... Me tumhe parso ghar le jaunga....."

Teen din baad......

Rishi ne Manav ki patni ko call kar ke bataya ke Diksha uske saath he. Or wo kal subah hi ghar arahe he. Ye baat sunkar wo kafi heran ho gayi thi, usne Rishi ko kaha ke use Diksha se baat karni he, usne phone Diksha ki maa ko de diya, jese hi Diksha ne ko apni Maa ki awaz ayi to wo bikhar kar rone lagi, kuch seconds baat karte hi, Rishi ne Diksha se phone chin kar kaat diya.

Raat ko Rishi or Diksha ghar jane ke liye nikal chuke the, Diksha pure raste bas yahi soche ja rahi thi ke wo kese apne parents se kahegi jo kuch uske saath hua, wo kese apne hone wali pati ko kahegi ke uski shadi zabardasti ho chuki he....

Subah ke 6 baje Diksha ki aakhe khuli, wo dono ghar pahoch chuke the. Rishi ek shawl Diksha par odh deta he, Diksha dod kar ghar me chali jati he, or apne Maa Baap ko gale laga kar rone lagti he, Rishi bhi andar agaya tha, usne paya ke uske Maa Baap bhi samne khade he. Ye sari baat Dulhe ke pariwar ko bhi bata di gayi thi, lekin afsos ki pichle 4 saal se Diksha ne jise chaha tha, usne ye shadi cancel kara di thi.

Rishi apna sar jhukaye aage badta he, or jese hi wo Kehne jata he "Papa.... Sorry....." Tabhi use kaskar ek thappad padta he. Sablog waha khade Rishi ko dekh rahi the. Rishi ke pita Police ko call karne ja rahe the apne criminal bete ko arrest karwane ke liye, lekin tabhi Rishi kehta he "hum dono ne shadi kar li he... Diksha mujhe nahi pasand karti, lekin wo ye bhi pasand nahi kar sakti ke me jail me jau"

"Dafa ho ja yaha se.... Warna....." Diksha ke Papa bade hi gusse me Rishi se kehte he, lekin Rishi unki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he "me apni patni ko liye bina kahi nahi jaunga"

Waha khada har shaks janta tha ke Rishi sarfira insan he, wo apni baat par ada rahega. Tabb Diksha ke Parents Diksha ko andar kamre me le jate he.

"Beta tum batao tumhe kya karna he?" Uski Maa Diksha se puchti he.
"Mummy meri baat please Anuj se karaye.... Please" wo apne aakh me asu laye kehti he, lekin uski baat par dono hi apna sar jhuka lete he. Jab Diksha dono se puchti he to wo sabkuch Diksha ko bata dete he ke Anuj ne is shadi ko thukra diya he. Diksha ke pichle kuch din itne bure the, lekin ye silsila khatam nahi hua, Diksha ki to jese sari ummide khatam ho chuki thi, uske parents ab Diksha ko chup kara dete he, Diksha kafi gehri soch me thi. Kafi soch vichar karne ke baad Diksha ne faisla le liya tha. Use Rishi e ke saath apni zindagi bitana hi thik samajh liya tha. Uske parents to is baat ke bilkul khilaf the, lekin Diksha ne unhe samjhaya, ke agar jo insan use pichle 4 saal se pyaar kar raha tha, usne hi uska saath chhod diya he to wo dusre kis par bharosa kar sakti he? Or is baat ka jawab to dono ke paas nahi tha, Diksha apne parents ke Ashirwad le kar apni zindagi ki nayi Shuruwat karne ke liye tayar thi.

Diksha ka relation Rishi ke saath koi romantic sa nahi tha, lekin fir bhi wo apni patni hone ki zimmedari acche se nibhati, wo ab Rishi ke pariwar ke saath reh rahi thi, kyu ke unhe dar tha ke kahi Rishi Diksha ko koi nuksan na pahocha paye. Unhone Diksha ko jitna pyaar diya tha wo shayad kabhi apne sage baccho ko bhi nahi diya.

Rishi ke parents Diksha ke liye kafi pareshan the, unhone Diksha ko kuch din tak apne Maa Baap ke paas bhej diya, Rishi jab apne ghar aya to usne paya ke Diksha waha nahi he, or use waha par mojud na dekh kar wo pagla sa gaya tha. Isha use batati he ke Papa ne Bhabi ko apne ghar bhej diya he, kyu ke unki tabiyat kharab thi.

Rishi Diksha ko call kar raha tha, lekin Diksha uske phone ka jawab nahi de rahi thi. Ab Rishi kafi tensed ho gaya tha. Rishi ki Maa uske paas akar apne asu bahate hue Rishi se kehti he "kabtak tum aise rahoge? Ab tum Baap bann ne ja rahe ho.... Abhi bhi mauka he, apne bacche ke bare me or Diksha ke bare me to socho.... Upar wale ne Diksha jesi ladki tumhare naseeb me likhi he, to ab to ye gunda gardi chhod do beta...."

Rishi apni num aakho se apna sar haa me hilata he, or Diksha se milne uske ghar chala jata he. Diksha ke parents use Diksha ka kamra dikhate he, Rishi andar ja kar kamra band kar deta he or usne dekha ke Diksha kamre me bane chote se mandir ke samne bethe aakhe band kiye prarthana kar rahi thi. Usne paya ke Diksha kafi kamzor lagg rahi he, uski aakho ke niche dark circles aye hue the. Diksha apni prarthana puri karte hi Rishi ko waha dekhti he.

"Tum..... Tum yaha betho me tumhare liye khane ka intezam karti hu" ye kehkar wo bahar jane lagti he ke tabhi Rishi uska haath piche se pakad kar use rok deta he. Or Diksha ko kamar se pakad kar apne nazdeek le ata he "I'm Sorry..... Mujhe maaf kar dena un sab situation ke liye jisne tum guzri ho, wo bhi mujh jese Haiwan ke saath.... Mene tumhe bahot dukh diye he... Kabhi tumhe khushiyo ke pal nahi diye, tumhe apne haq nahi diye.... Fir bhi tum mere bacche ko janm dene ke liye tayar ho, Diksha mujhe maaf kar do....." Or wo asuo me beh kar rone lagta he, Diksha uski baato me sacchayi mehsus kar pa rahi thi. Uski bhi aakhe asuo se bhar chuki thi. Rishi ne Diksha se wada kiya ke wo ek nayi life ki Shuruwat karega, or usne apni eyebrows or kano me lagi baliya nikal di, apne haath se bracelet utar diya.

Rishi ne apna wada nibhaye rakha, usne apna flat bech diya, or wo Diksha ke saath is sheher ko chhod kar dusre shehre me chala gaya, Rishi nahi chahta tha ke uske bacche par uske beete kal ka saya pade. Rishi ne ek chota sa business shuru kar diya, kyu ke Rishi ko koi apne company ka employee nahi banana chahenge. Diksha ne ek ladki ko janm diya, or uska naam rakha "Risha" jo ki Rishi or Diksha ke naam ka mel tha.

Kuch saal beet chuke the, is baar Diksha ne ek ladke ko janm de diya tha, in char logo ki family kafi khush thi, ab Diksha Rishi se apne dil ki gehrayi se pyaar karne lagi thi, jese ki mene kaha tha, ye pyaar lafz ne na jane kitno ki zindagi barbad kar di he, lekin Diksha ke pyaar ne Rishi ki zindagi ko ek nayi Shuruwat di thi. Saalo beet chuke the, Diksha or Rishi ki beti 11 saak ki ho gayi thi, or beta 8 saal ka.


Ek din Rishi apna kuch zaruri kaam karne ke liye ja raha tha, usne ghar pe tino ko tayar ho kar uska intezar karne ke liye kaha tha, kyu aaj wo sab kahi jane wale the. Rishi pyaar se Diksha ke mathe par chumkar apne kaam ke liye nikal gaya. Diksha ne apne dono baccho ko tayar hone ke liye kaha, or khud bhi tayar ho gayi, wo tino Rishi ka intezar kar rahe the. Rishi ghar wapis lauta, lekin Zinda nahi, mara hua, mathe par goli kha kar. Kisi ne use maar diya, ye goli kisne chalayi ajatak pata nahi chala.

17 saal beet chuke the, sabne Diksha se kaha tha ke wo dusri shadi kar le, lekin usne kabhi dusri shadi nahi ki, or bass apne or Rishi ke kuch pyaar bhare lamhe yaa karte apni zindagi jine lagi.

To dosto kya Rishi or Diksha ka ye "Pyaar, Ishq ya Mahobbat" safal raha ya adhura? Is baat ka jawab mujhe Review thread me zarur dijiye. Kahani pasand ayi to like zarur karna, or apne kimti Review zarur post karna.
kahani mast thi ...disha ki shadi tay hp gayi thi aur rishi ek gangster tha ..
rishi ne disha ko shadi me dekha aur uske honest behaviour ko dekhke pyar kar baitha ..

jab usko pata chala ki disha ki shadi honewali hai to usko kidnap karke usse shadi ki zabardasti ..aur sex bhi kar liya ..
disha ka fiance anuj ne ye baat sunke usse rishta tod diya waise wo disha ke kaabil tha bhi nahi jo musibat ke waqt saath na de usse shadi karke kya faayda ..
rishi bure kaam chhod deta hai aur dusre shahar jaake business karne lagta hai aur dono pati patni khush rehte hai ,,ek bachchi jiska naam risha ( maa baap ke naam ko milake banaya hua ) ,aur ek ladka jiske naam ka jikr nahi kiya ...charo khushi se rehte the 😍😍..

par ye gangster ka kaam chhodne par 11 saal baad kisne dushmani nikali aur rishi ko maar diya ..

disha ne dobara shadi nahi ki bas rishi ki yaado ke sahare jindagi bitane lagi ..

galat raste par chalnewalo ko kabhi na kabhi uski keemat chukani hi padti hai jaise rishi ne sab chhod diya phir bhi usko maar diya kisine ..

dono ka pyar safal raha bas puri jindagi saath nahi bita paaye ..
rishi ne pyar ke liye galat rasta chhod diya aur ek achcha insaan bana 😍😍..
 

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Me aur mere pati Sagar aur teen saal se shaadi shuda hain
meri age 24 saal ki aur sagar 29 Sal ka ka. Ye bat tab ki hai jab hamari shadi ko 3 sal hua tha.
meri hight 5 feet 4 inches ki hain , uske kamar ekdum nazook .
Inko hamesha majaa aata jab inke dost ya jaan pehchaan wale mere ko gurthe rahte hain.

Us samay mene job leliya hamare bulding apartment Township me club ka ek contract mila.Contract mein Township ka dekhbaal mere ko aaya - jwada tak maintenance works aur parties ko organise karna tha. Parties mein kaafi influential log aate hain aur sabki aankhein mere par rahti. Me jwada tak in parties mein Saree pahenti thi aur kabhi kabhi kuch long modern dresses.

Township mein ek bada swimming pool hain jiska maintenance bhi mere haat mein tha. Township walo ke request main ek pool party organise ho raha tha.Mere pati Sagar bhi township main rahte he toh Sagar ko bhi invitation mila.

Me pool party mein kaafi busy thi. Koi ladki ya aunty pool main nahi utari lekin kaadi aadmi aur bachche lo pool main majhe kar rahe the.
Me ek modern dress pehni thi - blue color ka T shirt jisne cleavage dikh raha tha aur Light blue Jeans. Me har ek ke pass ja kar kuch baat kar rahi mainly event organiser se.
sabhi ne aur mere pati Sagar ne kuch drinks piye huye the, Parties main alcohol tho common hain hamare township main.

Finally ek announcement aata hain Blind matki ko phodne ka aur sab log jam gaye. Maine participate nahi kiya lekin Sagar ne bhi participate nahi kiya wo mujhe hi dekh rahe the ki log mujhe dekh rahe kya bol rahe unke man me kya chal rah tha pat nahi aur matki ko phodne ka game start ho gaya .


( AB AAGE MERE HUSBAND SAGAR KI JUBANI JO UNHONE THODE DIN BAD BATYA )


Mene (Sagar) participate nahi kiya me Sarla ko hi dekh rahe the ki log Sarla ko dekh rahe kya bol rahe Sarla ka cleavage kaafi badh gaya aur Sarla ke Mamme (boobs) aadhe bahar aaye the. Sarla ne ye notice nahi kiya, Bhaut sound tha woh apne game me hi concentrate kar rahi thi.
Maine jaha par matki ko phodne ka game ho raha waha chale gaya. Sarla ne mujhe dekha aur ek smile diya.
Maine dekha ki Sarla ka nipple almost bahar aagaya tha.Competition katam ho gaya aur jitne walo ko Sarla ne prize diya.
Jab main dekha to Sarla ka nipple bahar tha.

Kisine chillya - "Maaja aaya gazab ke boobs hain"

Maine Sarla ko apna Tshirt dikhaya
Sarla ne boons adjust kar liye

Sarla: Yaar ye kaise huaa, Abhi kaise main sharam se mar jaaoongi

Main: sharam mat karo jisne bhi dekha ho aaj uski patni ko chodega nahi

Sarla: Shut up

Main: Aur ladkiya toh jal rahi hongi

Sarla: mujhe ek drink chahiye ab

Sarla ne drink piya aur phir se Party ke organising mein lag gayi. Abhi log khullam kulla uske boobs dekh rahe the. Lekin is baar uska boobs apne bra and tshirt ke andar the.
Mujhe ye party kaffi majha aaya mujhe laga ki Sarla ko bhi Maja aaya hoga.

Hum ghar me khana kha kar soye to SAGAR ne kahaa

Neend aa rahi hain, me ab topic change karna chahati thi

Kaise lag raha hain yeh jaankar ki tumhara nipple mujhe chodkar bhi kisine dekha hoga

Kisine notice nahi kiya maine toorant adjust kar liya mera top, phirse baat goomane ka prayatna ne kiya mene.

bahut logo ne dekha tumhara brown wala nipple." Inhone bola majak kiya . mene kahaa
Oho uske baare main mat chedo mujhe sharam aa rahi hain.

Tumse Sundar Boobs us party main kisi ke nahi honge - tumhe sharam karne ki jarrorat nahi. Mujhe majaa aaya tumhe log jo dekh rahe the.

unki batao se mera bhi mood aagaya

"Abhi kya kare - township wale kaafi log ne dekha hoga" SAGAR ne mujhe bola

Jo hogaya so hogaya, Mujhe majaa aaya unko bhi aayahi hoga

Tumhe kya lagta woh mujhe sexy samjhenga kya mene kahaa mujhe bhi bat karna inka acha lag raha tha.

Ha ha main bhi aadmi hoon sabko tum sexy he lagogi

Pata nahi main unko milti he rahti hoon - maintenance complaints ke liye aate he rahte hain

Ha maloom hain bhool jao aisa kuch huaa hain

US raat ka sex laajawaab tha. bahut horny the hum aur me jyada.
Aaj ka sex amazing tha. Pool party main sab log ko aaj achcha sex milega tumhari wajah se. Hopefully kisi ne tumhara pic liya hoga. SAGAR ne kaha

kya agar kisine pic liya toh woh internet par post karenge kya mene poocha.

Ha kyu nahi aajkal kaafi forums hain aise post karne ke liye jaroor karenge

Oh no.. Agar aisa kuch hua tho. MENE darthe huye SAGAR ko kaha

tab to tum famour ho jaogi aur sab log sex hamare jaise karenge SAGAR ne haste hue kahaa.

hum us rat sex kafi kiya aur so gaye.


2-4 din gujar gaye, me apne township office main thi. Tabhi ek banda RAGHU jo hamari colony me naya aaya tha jo us pool party main tha woh maintenance request lekar aaya. woh ko dekh muskura raha tha.

Main aapko thank you karna chahta hoon us party ko achchi tarah se organise karne ke liye - us aadmi raghu ne bola

Me uski baato ko sun bas muskura diya.

Woh party to yaadgaar ho gayi hain abhi. aapke wajah se.

Oh no toh aapne notice kiya, mujhe bahut sharmindagi hain us baat ke liye surprise hote huye us aadmi se boli.

Notice nahi, aap toh is township ki talk ho abhi

Woh aadmi RAGHU ne apna phone nikala aur mujhe dikhaya. USME pic tha jisme mera nipple dikh raha tha

RAGHU bola main lucky tha jo correct time main pic nikal diya – raghu ne bola

me bus shock main thi

Agar aap bura na maane tho main poori cheez dekh sakhta hoon kya - RAGHU ne mujhse kaha.

mene kahaa main shaadi shuda hoon toh yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta

Ooho, Koi baat nahi kuch toh mila dekhne ke liye raghu bola.

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ye short kahani ka contest hai aur aapne kahani ka link hi de diya 2nd part batake ...
waise aapki kahani achchi hai par wo yahi par puri likhni thi ...
 

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Story kafi fast forwarding thi aur isme diksha ke emotions ko describe nhi kiya gaya waise ye short story thi isliye itna chalta hai but ye long story hoti to bahut behtreen story hoti..
 

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dil ko chhu gayi kahani ..
wo budha aadmi bhashan de raha tha ki usne kitno ki madad ki hai par saamne bhukhe jaanwar ko ek biscuit nahi de paaya .
badi badi baate sab karte hai par madad karne ka waqt aaye to pichhe hat jaate hai ..
kalu ek kutta hai par kahani padhkar aisa laga ki kisi insaan ki hai ye kahani ..
kalu ki maa kaise apne bachcho ke liye do kutto se ladhi aur roti bachakar laayi ,,khud naa khakar apne bachho ko khilaya 😍😍 ...maa shabd hi aisa hai jisse kisi bhi cheej ki tulna nahi ki jaa sakti 😍😍..
jab kalu ke maa ki death huyi wo scene sabse jyada emotional laga ..kalu ko sirf lal rang yaad hai jo uske maa ke aaspaas tha aur kalu ko pata nahi ki wo uski maa ka khoon hai ..

school ke bachche kalu ko pareshan karte the isliye wo 2 pair wale yani insaan se nafrat karta tha ..
waise sab bure nahi hote par kuch logo ko bejuban janwar ko taklif dene me maja aata hai ..

last me jab bhukh se kalu gali me jakar soya aur wo chhoti bachchi ke cycle se usko dard mila phir bhi usne us bachchi ko daraya nahi aur us bachchi ko kalu se lagaw ho gaya aur usne usse dosti ki usko buscuit khilaya 😍😍😍..

us bachchi ka kehna ki jadoo ki jhappi dungi ekdam majedar tha aur masumiyat se bhara kalu ke liye pyar ..

aur aaj sahi maayne me kalu ko koi insaan mila tha us bachchi ke roop me ,,,baaki sab ko kya kahe ...

heart touching kahani thi ....ek jaanwar ki bhawna ko bahut achche se dikhaya hai writer ne ..
Thank you very much❤ kahaani ke har ek pehelu ko aapne barabar se samjha. In bezubaan ko sirf thora khana aur pyaar chahiye... Bus❤ 🐶
 

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ye short kahani ka contest hai aur aapne kahani ka link hi de diya 2nd part batake ...
waise aapki kahani achchi hai par wo yahi par puri likhni thi ...
KEKIUS MAXIMUS sir aapki baat sahi hai, kahani short story contest hai, par time kam ke hote aur khud ek story ke chalte writers ke paas nayi story likhna difficult ho jaata hai, maine bhi admin se discuss karne ke baad h apni story ka ek hissa (update) contest me daala hai, mere paas ek kahani ka naya plot bhi hai par time ki shortage ki wajah se likhna nahi ban rha.
 

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Story kafi fast forwarding thi aur isme diksha ke emotions ko describe nhi kiya gaya waise ye short story thi isliye itna chalta hai but ye long story hoti to bahut behtreen story hoti..
Ye review kaunse story ke liye tha ? Kam se kam pin code ya landmark hi daal dete. :sigh:
 
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