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Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-
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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...



Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....


Aap sab ka :welcome1: hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...


 
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aap pehle se hi jaante the jab bhi apsyu ya imli ke jikar honge to kya reactions aayegi... phir bhi ye savaal...
Khair baaki readers ka pata nahi..
1) story abhi ek pehlu se dusri pehlu pe jumping maar rahi hai... haan iski jarurat bhi hai... Kyunki sabhi kirdaar kya kar rahe hai unko dikhana bhi jaruri hai...
Lekin apsyu ya ye baksi jaise kirdaar kyun aaye hai is story mein?
2) kahani mein kayi mudde hote kahani ko leke, kahani ke mul ya side ke kirdaar ko leke..
Lekin in muddo pe apsyu aur baksi jaise kirdaaro ki entry kyun..
3) maan leti hun ki hero heroine yaaddast bhool ke dusro ke sath sambandh bana rahe hai... lekin gaur talab baat yeh hai ki jivu ko kyun us apsyu ke hi sang prem pranay mamle mein jod ke dikhaya jaa raha hai...
Why apsyu....? wo hi kyun jivu ke liye?
jabki yahan pe nischal aur amee ko bhi jodi ban sakti thi.. hisab barabar ho jaati.. kahe nischal new characters ke sang jodi bana raha hai...
is hisab jivu naya kirdaar aana chahiye tha na story mein
4) rahi baat dusre kirdaar ki... to kahani mein ab to bas apsyu hi chaya hua hai...
Gaur farmayiye is baat par ki jab tak ye apsyu hai is story par mujhe nahi lagta ki un side characters
Shwetna, HuYu, .Alexa ko koi role bhi milega is story mein...

ant mein.... mujhe chahiye kahani mein kahani ki mul kirdaar ya mul kahani se jude huye wo kirdaar jo pehle part mein the ya ab is aane wale hai... aur un kirdaar ko bhi dekhne ko utshuk hu jo naye hai is kahani mein lekin shart yeh hai wo naye mul kirdaaro se aur mul kahani se jude huye ho..
guests appearance mahaz kuch palo ke liye hi achhe lagte hai.. lekin wohi agar story par apni adhikar jamake baith jaaye to wohi guests appearance wale kirdaar nasur si lagti hai..

Mujhe to ab shak ho raha hai ki aap story bhi padhti hain ya fir kewal negative negative hi comment karne hai isliye upar upar padh leti hain....

Janta hun baat teer ki tarah chubhi hogi lekin pacha lijiye... Vyom ka charecter tha kahani me... Apasyu 30 update me kewal 3 update aaya kaun sa usko maine kitna bada dikhaya hai..

Baki pahle 2 shishya .. vish Kritima aur surp marich ko dekhna tha aapko... Fir Jivisha ke origin ko dekhna tha... Tab aapko lagta ki .. yesss Apsyu is the key vital role.. kyonki last time Jivisha ne apne origin ko miss kiya tha... kahani me sab kuch tatha astu nahi hota... Isske mul bhav ke hisab se chareter ko rakhna hota hai...

Khair aap sab ne pressure banaya ki Jivisha aur Nischal ko dekhna hai... Aapne to nischal aur Jivisha ki manodasha jante huye charecterless sabit kiya.... So the final result ki jabtak dono sath nahi honge tab tak ab dusra kuch bhi nahi ho sakta... unhe milane ke liye jitne kirdaron ki jaroorat thi utne ko lekar aage badh gaya...

Haan maine sidha javab diya hai baten aapko chubhj jaroor hogi .... Iske liye aap muh fula sakti hain... Ya fir kahani ke mul ko samjh kar smile kar sakti hai ye sochkar ki main kuch bhi troll karne ke chakkar me kuch bhi likhte aa gayi thi..

Baki story apne pace me hain aur 27 ke baad aapko sare kirdar action aur pagalpan karte najar ayaenge ... Lekin un sab ko jyada explore karne se pahle inhe milana jaroori tha..

So chill ... Mere reply ke chubhi hui teer jo jyada garai se nahi lijiyega..
 

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Dekhiye nain sir bat simple sa hai jo ham story read karte hai usse bhavanatmak judaw ho jata so jab koi bahari story ke character munh utha ke story ke main Kahani ko disturb karte hai to use ham disturb ki kar dete hai aur is ham ka matabal Naina mam se hai aa we aa sakte hai par bataur helper not a side character aur rhi bat inside story ki to use samay samay par aap bomb ki tarah phode Taki ham bhi chakit ho
Ji aap apni baat rakhen ... Main naina ki baat ka javab de dunga... Aur deta rahunga... Mere kuch sawal hai.. javab dijiyega jarra.. ye aapke bhavnatak judav ke liye puchh raha..

Kya nichal ek sex menia charecter tha... Nahi.. to fir second part me isse kya hua...

Kya Jivisha pahle bhag me boy friend banate ghum rahi thi ... Nahi... Fir ab iss baar aise behave kyon kar rahi hai...

What is the origin of Jivisha power...

What is the origin of Surpmarich power...

Tanik aur tatkaal iska jawab dijiyega to bahut kuch aapko iss kahani ke bare me pata hota... Naina mam ke sawalo ka jawab de diya hai... Wahan aap descriptive reply dekh sakte hain..

Baharhaal ab main aapke reply ka intzar kar raha
 

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Mujhe to ab shak ho raha hai ki aap story bhi padhti hain ya fir kewal negative negative hi comment karne hai isliye upar upar padh leti hain....

Janta hun baat teer ki tarah chubhi hogi lekin pacha lijiye... Vyom ka charecter tha kahani me... Apasyu 30 update me kewal 3 update aaya kaun sa usko maine kitna bada dikhaya hai..

Baki pahle 2 shishya .. vish Kritima aur surp marich ko dekhna tha aapko... Fir Jivisha ke origin ko dekhna tha... Tab aapko lagta ki .. yesss Apsyu is the key vital role.. kyonki last time Jivisha ne apne origin ko miss kiya tha... kahani me sab kuch tatha astu nahi hota... Isske mul bhav ke hisab se chareter ko rakhna hota hai...

Khair aap sab ne pressure banaya ki Jivisha aur Nischal ko dekhna hai... Aapne to nischal aur Jivisha ki manodasha jante huye charecterless sabit kiya.... So the final result ki jabtak dono sath nahi honge tab tak ab dusra kuch bhi nahi ho sakta... unhe milane ke liye jitne kirdaron ki jaroorat thi utne ko lekar aage badh gaya...

Haan maine sidha javab diya hai baten aapko chubhj jaroor hogi .... Iske liye aap muh fula sakti hain... Ya fir kahani ke mul ko samjh kar smile kar sakti hai ye sochkar ki main kuch bhi troll karne ke chakkar me kuch bhi likhte aa gayi thi..

Baki story apne pace me hain aur 27 ke baad aapko sare kirdar action aur pagalpan karte najar ayaenge ... Lekin un sab ko jyada explore karne se pahle inhe milana jaroori tha..

So chill ... Mere reply ke chubhi hui teer jo jyada garai se nahi lijiyega..
agar chubhti to ye reply bhi shayad na milti aapko :D
Khair...
Pehli baat aapne aapne apsyu aur amy ko lekar jikar story ki suruwat mein hi ki hai.... ab isme meri kya galti..
dusri yeh dawav tab bhi aur aaj bhi..
Nischal aur jivu milane ke liye... chahe writer sahab hi gusse mein dhamki kyun na de, de par is kadar dawav daali jaaye ki dono favorite kirdaar phir se mil jaaye aur jo inke bich ya aas paas kaante hai unka bhi samul I repeat Samul roop se nash ho jaye... (apsyu se leke woh alien ladkiya sabhi ;))
 

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agar chubhti to ye reply bhi shayad na milti aapko :D
Khair...
Pehli baat aapne aapne apsyu aur amy ko lekar jikar story ki suruwat mein hi ki hai.... ab isme meri kya galti..
dusri yeh dawav tab bhi aur aaj bhi..
Nischal aur jivu milane ke liye... chahe writer sahab hi gusse mein dhamki kyun na de, de par is kadar dawav daali jaaye ki dono favorite kirdaar phir se mil jaaye aur jo inke bich ya aas paas kaante hai unka bhi samul I repeat Samul roop se nash ho jaye... (apsyu se leke woh alien ladkiya sabhi ;))
Don't worry don't worry don't worrry... Kahani apne plot se nahi khiski hai... Iska matlab samjhti hain .... Main jitne situation aur part ko upar se niche kiya hun... Usme ab Jivisha aur Nischal to mil liye...

Ab ek bahut aham naat... Nandni 3 lead charecter me se ek lead charecter hai jo kewal aur kewal nischal ki upastithi me hi complete lead me dikhti hai...

Wo ab iss shifting ka natija ye hua hai ki aapke teeno lead .. kuch waqt ke liye bilkul side chatecter me jane wale hai.. and believe me ... Ab dono mil gaye hain to mujhe yahan kisi aur dikhane ki jaroorat nahi hogi..

Mujhe jo history jodni thi so maine jod diya hai... Now it's my turn .. enjoy mul charecters ..
 

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Mujhe to ab shak ho raha hai ki aap story bhi padhti hain ya fir kewal negative negative hi comment karne hai isliye upar upar padh leti hain....

Janta hun baat teer ki tarah chubhi hogi lekin pacha lijiye... Vyom ka charecter tha kahani me... Apasyu 30 update me kewal 3 update aaya kaun sa usko maine kitna bada dikhaya hai..

Baki pahle 2 shishya .. vish Kritima aur surp marich ko dekhna tha aapko... Fir Jivisha ke origin ko dekhna tha... Tab aapko lagta ki .. yesss Apsyu is the key vital role.. kyonki last time Jivisha ne apne origin ko miss kiya tha... kahani me sab kuch tatha astu nahi hota... Isske mul bhav ke hisab se chareter ko rakhna hota hai...

Khair aap sab ne pressure banaya ki Jivisha aur Nischal ko dekhna hai... Aapne to nischal aur Jivisha ki manodasha jante huye charecterless sabit kiya.... So the final result ki jabtak dono sath nahi honge tab tak ab dusra kuch bhi nahi ho sakta... unhe milane ke liye jitne kirdaron ki jaroorat thi utne ko lekar aage badh gaya...

Haan maine sidha javab diya hai baten aapko chubhj jaroor hogi .... Iske liye aap muh fula sakti hain... Ya fir kahani ke mul ko samjh kar smile kar sakti hai ye sochkar ki main kuch bhi troll karne ke chakkar me kuch bhi likhte aa gayi thi..

Baki story apne pace me hain aur 27 ke baad aapko sare kirdar action aur pagalpan karte najar ayaenge ... Lekin un sab ko jyada explore karne se pahle inhe milana jaroori tha..

So chill ... Mere reply ke chubhi hui teer jo jyada garai se nahi lijiyega..
story line superb...
kirdaar aur wo jo kaam kar rahe ya karne wale hai... chahe positive ho ya negative... uske details jis tarike se pesh kiya gaya wo kaafi dilchasp hai...
Even
Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...
Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
thrill, romance aur suspense ki anokhi sangam ke sath sath hairan kar dene drishyo ko bich bich create kar ke story ko aur bhi interesting bana rahe hai ... kuch cheejo se shayad dhire dhire raaz ka parda hatenge... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai.. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi hai... joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe hai kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....
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Don't worry don't worry don't worrry... Kahani apne plot se nahi khiski hai... Iska matlab samjhti hain .... Main jitne situation aur part ko upar se niche kiya hun... Usme ab Jivisha aur Nischal to mil liye...

Ab ek bahut aham naat... Nandni 3 lead charecter me se ek lead charecter hai jo kewal aur kewal nischal ki upastithi me hi complete lead me dikhti hai...

Wo ab iss shifting ka natija ye hua hai ki aapke teeno lead .. kuch waqt ke liye bilkul side chatecter me jane wale hai.. and believe me ... Ab dono mil gaye hain to mujhe yahan kisi aur dikhane ki jaroorat nahi hogi..

Mujhe jo history jodni thi so maine jod diya hai... Now it's my turn .. enjoy mul charecters ..
Actually ab bata hi dun real problem..
jab tak tino main lead mein nahi aate. actually nischal, jivu, nandu, sawelkar sir jyoti bhabhi, kasak, Ansh, aarshi chirag yeh sabhi lead mein nahi aate tab tak mujhe kuch kehne se aap rokenge nahi aur na hi aap kabhi bhadkenge :D aur na hi naraz honge
Ab deal yeh hai ki.... -
(wada hai aapse mul kirdaaro ke liye ek bhi bad word nahi... ekdum positive reviews.. writer sahab bhi wah wah kar jaaye jise padh kar :angel:) (bas guests appearances walo ke mamle mein koi rok tok na kare aap mujhe :D)
to yeh deal pakki samjhu..:D
 
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Actually ab bata hi dun real problem..
jab tak tino main lead mein nahi aate. actually nischal, jivu, nandu, sawelkar sir jyoti bhabhi, kasak, Ansh, aarshi chirag yeh sabhi lead mein nahi aate tab tak mujhe kuch kehne se aap rokenge nahi aur na hi aap kabhi bhadkenge :D aur na hi naraz honge
Ab deal yeh hai ki.... -
(wada hai aapse mul kirdaaro ke liye ek bhi bad word nahi... ekdum positive reviews.. writer sahab bhi wah wah kar jaaye jise padh kar :angel:) (bas guests appearances walo ke mamle mein koi rok tok na kare aap mujhe :D)
to yeh deal pakki samjhu..:D

Ohk deal done ... But main bhi reply simlar tarike se karunga... Fir ye na mujhe likhna pare ant me.. "lagega gussa me reply kar raha.. lekin ye matr aapke reply ka counter reply hai"...
 

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Ohk deal done ... But main bhi reply simlar tarike se karunga... Fir ye na mujhe likhna pare ant me.. "lagega gussa me reply kar raha.. lekin ye matr aapke reply ka counter reply hai"...
How many would have started writing the story by reading your story! For how many people you'll be an inspiration! Needless to say.

You entertained people with your story for years… You never used any wrong words in exchange for a negative comment… This is also one reason that you are my favorite writer.

Nainu ji...When you were absent here. You're always missed and remembered here and I missed you and your stories the most.

So don't worry...
(apsyu nd imli...hi ha ha ha ha ha ha :evillaugh:)
...........

Well....
Nischal, jivu, nandu, sawelkar sir, jyoti bhabhi, kasak, Ansh, aarshi nd chirag....

Hmmm....
In fact, sometimes we've higher expectations from the characters that should not have been imposed. We get away from our real life. Fantasy and dreams are considered as part of our life. In them, they start finding sorrow and happiness.
(It should never happen)
 

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To janab ne nischal ka Jodi banane aur Dhokha Dene ki glani Kam karne ke liye, jivisha ke jindagi me apasyu Ko laya hai.
Aur saath hi uski shaktiyan bhi jagrit Ho gayi hai ye to ke panth do kaaz Ho Gaya.
 
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