Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[jitutripathi00]

UPDATE - 12













karib 20 min. Me ham ghar pahuch gye. Jaha chopper land hua or ham usse nikal kar car me baithe or ghar ki taraf nikal gye. Thodi hi der me ham ghar pahuch gye.



Main car se bahar nikala to mera pura pariwar darwaje per khada tha or meri raah dekh raha tha. Or sabhi ki aankho me is waqt nami thi jinme main bhi shamil tha.


Main aage bada to maa ne meri aarti utari or apne gale se lagaya. Or uske baad mere shaitan aage aaye or main unse bhi gale laga. Sabhi is waqt bhavnao me beh rahe the. Uske baad main dad ke gale laga unhone mujhe kas ke gale laga liya. Uske baad me sabhi se mila. Hamare beech abhi tak itni si bhi baate nahi hui thi. Sabhi apni baate sirf apni aankho se hi kar rahe the.



Main- radha kaha hai.




Maa- apne kamre main hai. Ja jakar use bahar leke aa.




Main daud kar apne kamre me gya. Or maine darwaje per apna angutha rakha or vo open ho gya. Or main kamre me dakhil hua.



Kamre me andhera laga hua tha. Tabhi meri najar bed per padi jaha radha meri tasveer ko liye usi ko nihar rahi thi.


Maine peeche se use aawaj lagai.





Main- radha



Meri aawaj sunte hi usne peeche mud kar dekha or jaise hi uski najar mujh per padi. Vo turant hi uth kar mere gale lag gyi. Or ham aise gale lage jaise kai janmo ke baad mile ho. Ham dono ki hi aankhe nam thi is waqt.



Main- ye kya haal bana liya hai tumne apna. Aisa koi karta hai bhala.




Radha- main kya karti. Aap mujhse bina kuch kahe chale gye isliye main aapse naraj thi. Or isiliye maine apna aisa haal banaya hai taaki aap jaldi se bapis aajaye or mujhe yaha se bahar le jaye. Ab isme meri kya galti.





Main- ha meri maa galti sab meri hi hai. Ye baat to maine shadi ke pehle se janta hu ki galti sirf meri hai. Ab jaldi se mujhe meri radha bapis loutao Verna me fir chala jaunga or is baar loutkar bhi nahi aaunga.





Radha- sorry na mere babu. Aap gussa kyu karte ho. Mujhe bas 5 min. Do me aapki purani radha ban kar aati hu. Bas 5 min.





Main- theek hai main bahar wait kar raha hu jaldi aana.



Ye kehke main baha se bahar chala gya. Or radha jaldi se bathroom me ghus gyi. Uske chehre ki kushi bata rahi thi ki vo aaj kitni kush hai. Bhagwan kare uski ye hasi kabhi kahi na jaye.



Main jaise hi bahar aaya to maine ek dum se shocked reh gya. Kyuki pura pariwar is waqt mere darwaje per khada tha or mand mand muskura raha tha.





Main- show ab khatm ho chuka hai chalo neeche.




Ye kehke main neeche ko aagya jaha mere peeche peeche baaki sare log.



Main bahi sofe per baith gya tabhi maa mere liye ek badiya si coffee le aai. Or sabhi mujhe ghoor ne lage.






Main- kya hua sab mujhe ghoor kyu rahe ho.





Dad- hame janna hai ki ye sab kaise hua or tu baha se bapis kaise aaya. Or itna time kyu lag gya.





Maine apni coffee ka sip liya or unhe batana suru kiya.




Main- radha ko to aajane do. Tab sabko ek sath bata dunga.




Maa- ha ye bhi theek hai.



Ashk filhaal mujhse chipak kar baithi thi.



Main- baise avi kaha hai vo dikh nahi raha hai.





Dad- ha vo mumbai main hi hai. Tumhare jaane ke baad se hi usne bhi khud ko baha ke base me band kar diya hai. Or pata nahi kya banane me laga hua hai. Taaki tumhe bapis la sake. Hamara to phone tak nahi uthata hai vo.




Main- mera bacha. Harry usse contact karo or meri baat karao usse. Uske to fuse udne wale hai meri baat sunke. Baise vo aayega kaise yaha per.





Harry- sir maine chopper ko pehle hi bhej diya tha. Ab tak to pahuch gya hai. Bas unhe batane ki der hai. Main call karta hu unhe.




Harry- avi tumse koi baat karna chahta hai.





Avi- maine kaha tha na mujhe disturb mat karo



Main- mujhse bhi baat nahi karoge kya aviraj surya pratap singh.




Meri aawaj sunte hi uska dimaag hil gya.




Avi- dad aap ho kya.




Main- ha beta main hi hu. To video on kar.



Avi ne screen per camera on kiya or uske saamne main aagya.




Avi- dad aap kab aaye or kaise. Kaha ho aap abhi.



Main- beta main to ghar per hu sabhi ke sath. Or abhi kuch der pehle hi bapis aaya hu.





Avi- lekin aap kaha per the.




Main- sab batata hu. Pehle tu ghar bapis aaja abhi. Building ki chhat per chopper wait kar raha hai tera.





Avi- abhi aaya main.




Ye kehke avi jaldi se bass ko lock karke lift se uper ki taraf gya jaha chopper already hawa me latka hua tha. Or uske neeche seedi. Jisper chadkar avi jaldi se chopper main baith gya. Or chopper ud gya ghar ki taraf.



Or karib 20 min. Me vo bahi per land ho gya jaha ek car uska wait kar rahi thi. Jisme baith ke vo jaldi hi ghar pahuch gya or aate hi seedha mere gale lag gya.





Main- kaisa hai mera sher.





Avi- ek dum fit n fine. Aap kaha the mujhe sab janana hai.





Main- ha main sab bataunga. Ruko thodi der. Tabhi main chilla ke bola.



( Are avi mumbai se aagya or tum apne kamre se bahar nahi aa pai)



Baise to saare kamre sound proof the lekin fir bhi maine bola aisa. Jisper sabhi hasne lage.





Main- ashk jaake dekh to.



Ye sunkar ashk bhagkar kamre me gyi. Or thodi der baad radha ko bahar le kar hi aai. Or jab maine radha ko dekha to dekhta hi reh gya. Aisa lag raha tha jaise hamari abhi shadi hui hi nahi hai. Or main pehli baar ladki dekhne aaya hu. Itni pyari or khubsurat lag rahi thi vo.




Maa- kya baat hai ye to puri pari banke aai hai




Bua- najar na lage. Kitni pyari lag rahi hai.





Dad- tumhi najar lagaogi meri beti ko.



Isper sabhi fir se hasne lage. Itne main vo mere bagal me aakar baith gyi.





Avi- ab batao dad kya hua tha or kaise.





Main- theek hai to suno. Hua yu ki.



Main us black hole me to chala gya lekin baha per me uske force se ek disha me badta hua ja raha tha. Na baha hawa thi na kuch or. Lekin mere suit ne or sayad meri powers ne mujhe marne nahi diya. Or main ho gya behosh. Or jab meri aankh khuli to main mumbai main tha. Mujhe kuch logo ne hosh me laya. Baha per main utha or unse puchha ki main kaha hu. To unhone mujhe bataya ki main mumbai main hu. To ye sunke mujhe laga jhatka kyuki main to black hole me gya tha fir yaha kaise pahuch gya. Yahi sochte sochte main ek texi main baitha or baha se pahucha apne mumbai wale ghar ke address per. Or jaise hi baha pahucha mujhe ek or jhatka laga kyuki is jagah per ek bahut bada mall bana hua tha. Main hairan paresan kabhi us mall ko to kabhi us texi wale ko dekhta.



Maine aise hi apni puri story sabko batai. Or dev ke bare me bhi. Or sabhi ke aascharya ki koi Seema hi nahi thi. Ye sab sunne ke baad. Halaki maine unko kaal or black heart ki jaankari filhaal nahi di thi. Vo main gol kar gya tha.





Avi- dad aap majak to nahi kar rahe ho na. Aap sach main ek dimensions ka chakkar laga kar aarahe ho.





Main- ha beta. Ye sach hai. Main ek dusri hi earth per pahuch gya tha us warm hole ki madad se.





Avi- omg matlab multiverse sach main exist karta hai.





Main- jaha tak mujhe pata hai HA sach main exist karta hai.





Avi- lekin aapne speed force main rasta kaise dhunda yaha aane ka.





Main- mujhe dhundna hi nahi pada main bas doudta gya or seedha nikla us jagah jaha se Harry or bhai mujhe leke aaye hai. Ye concept filhaal meri samajh me to bilkul nahi aaya hai. Sayad isme bhi us dev ka hi koi hath hoga ya fir sayad ye isi tarah kaam karta hoga. Hamari manjil apne aap hi mil jaati hogi speed force me.




Avi- ha dad. Aisa hi hota hai. Hamara dimaag jis jagah a waqt ke bare me sochata hai vo powers use bahi le jaati hai. Or ye speed force to aapne hi genrate kiya tha isliye use pata tha ki aapko kaha jana hai isliye usne aapko bahi pahucha diya.





Main- matlab vo sach keh raha tha.





Avi- ha dad. Time barrier ke tutte hi sabhi portal apne aap hi khul jaate hai. Or baaki rasta dhundne ka kaam speed force khud hi kar deti hai.





Dad- chalo jo bhi hua achha hua. Tum sahi salamat bapis aagye hame or kuch nahi chahiye.




Maa- mujhe to lagta hai ki vo hamare mahadev hi honge jinhone tumhe sahi salamat rakha or us jagah per us warm hole ko banaya jiski madad se tum us earth per pahuche. Verna space me bina space suit ke koi bhi insan ek sec bhi jinda nahi reh sakta hai.





Radha- aapne sahi kaha maa. Main kal hi mahadev ka abhishek karungi vo bhi pure vidhi vidhan se.





Maa- sahi kaha ham bhi chalenge. Sath main.





Uske baad vo din aise hi baato main nikal gya. Or raat ko maine radha ke uper chadai kar di. Usper itna pyaar jo aaraha tha mujhe.



Or maine use achhe se keh diya ki aainda agar main aise kahi gayab ho jau to aisa mat karna jaisa abhi kiya tha tumne. Tumhe to pariwar ko hosla dena chahiye tha ulta tumne hi sabka hosla tod diya.


Or ye baat sunke use apni bhool ka ehsas hua or usne mujhse vaada kiya ki aainda vo aisa kuch nahi karegi.


Uske baad next day. Subah 4 baje hi hamare gaon ke mandir me mahadev ka rudra abhishek karwaya maa or radha ne milke. Jisme ham sabhi bhi shamil the. Ham sabhi ne mahadev ka koti koti dhanyabaad kiya or unka aasirbaad liya.


Uske baad ham sabhi ghar bapis aagye. Or subah ke chai naste ke baad maine base me ek meeting bulai



Jisme mere sabhi bhai time per aagye or sath me dad bhi.



Veer, Rony, main, aadil, Aarav, sunny, or rishi. Or sath main dad bhi.


Ab hame us kaal ke liye koi solid plan banane ki jarurat thi. Taaki usper nakel kasi ja sake…









To be continue……………….

बहुत शानदार,

 

[jitutripathi00]

UPDATE - 13














sabhi log base me mere bolne ka intjar kar rahe the.




Dad- ab bol bhi do.





Main- dad baat kuch aisi hai jis per bharosa karna thoda kathin hai. Lekin vo sach hai. Or bahi main soch raha hu ki kaise kahu.





Dad- bharosa karna nahi karna vo tu ham per chhod de or saaf saaf bata ki baat kya hai.




Main- theek hai to suniye.




Uske baad maine sabhi ko kaal se releted jaankari di. Or black heart se releted bhi. Jise sunke sabhi ke bheje ka fuse udd gya.





Or mahol me kuch der ki shanti chha gyi.





Bhai- are u serious?



Main- ha bhai. Dev ne mujhe yahi jaankari di thi.





Dad- baise usne jo bhi bataya hoga vo sach hi hoga. Lekin ab problem ye hai iska saamna ham kaise karenge.





Main- dad baat saamna karne ki nahi hai. Balki unko harane ki hai. Aise demons se hamara saamna pehle nahi hua hai. Sirf kaal ko chhod kar. Vo bhi ab pata chala ki uska sirf ek clone tha.







Rony- baise ek yahi tarika hai ki kaal ko hame abhi rokna hoga or jaan se maar dena hoga. Taaki uska ye kaam yahi atak jaye.





Dad- sahi kaha tumne yash. Ya fir usse vo paras pathar chhen lena ye bhi ek tarika ho sakta hai.





Main- agar hamne vo paras pathar usse chhena ya usse pehle hasil kiya to kahi na kahi ham use vo pathar thali me paros ke de denge. Or kaal hamse kisi na kisi tarah vo chheen hi lega. Chhal se ya bal se. Vo kisi ka bhi roop le sakta hai. Vo hamare neeche kab aayega or kab jayega hame pata bhi nahi chalega.








Dad- baise ye baat bhi theek hai. To fir hame kya karna chahiye.






Main- hame use fasana chahiye. Apne jaal me. Baise vo future dekh kar apni ladai ladta hai. To hame karna ye hai ki hame apne kaam ke liye 1 se jyada plan banane honge taaki jab bhi vo hamare saamne aaye uske liye ye ek surprise hi rahe. Use bilkul bhi bhanak na lage ki aisa bhi ho sakta hai. Jaisa usne mere sath kiya kuch aisa hi hame uske sath karna hai.






Sunny- simple batao ki kya karna hai or kaise.




Main- sabse pehle to usper najar rakhni hai. 24 hours. Vo agar mootne bhi jaye to hame khabar honi chahiye.




Rishi- uske liye hame ye pata hona chahiye ki vo kaha hai or kis bhesh main hai.




Main- filhaal vo nagaland main hai baha ka ACP ban kar. Or vo baha usi pathar ki talash hi kar raha hai. Kyuki uske hisaab se pathar bahi per hai. Or dusri baat hame uske har plan ko fail karna hai. Lekin kuch is tarah se ki use bilkul bhi doubt na ho khas kar ham per to bilkul bhi doubt na ho. Jo ki thoda muskil kaam hai. To plane ye hai ki koi ek nagaland jayega or baha per apna chehra badal kar rahega or uske karib rahega. Baki ka kaam Harry kar dega.






Bhai- main jata hu baha per. Koi police wala banke. Ek nakli id ki jarurat padegi jiska intjam chouhan kar dega. Uske karib rahunga or us per najar rakhunga. Or agar kuch khatra bhi laga to maine sambhal lunga. Baaki Harry us per 24 hours najar rakhega hi. Taaki agar kuch mujhse miss ho jaye ya kahi kuch hone wala ho to Harry mujhe batata rahega.





Main- badiya hai. Aap aaj hi delhi jao or chouhan se mil lo. Or use samjha do ki kya or kaise karna hai.baaki main lunga bhai ki identity. Usko ye pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main abhi zinda hu or bapis aagya hu. Taaki vo meri taraf se carefree rahe. Bahi aap log bhi normal rahenge. Kyuki vo kahi na kahi se ham per najar to jarur rakhega taaki agar ham uska kaam bigade to use pata chalta jaye. Tab tak main koi solid plan sochta hu. Usko patakhni dene ke bare me.





Dad- badiya hai. Hame ab har kadam bahut hi savadhani se rakhna hoga. Baise vo bahut hi chalak hai. Lekin hame usse jyada chalak banna hoga.




Main- Harry ye kaal kuch alag tarah ka jeev hai. Tum uski body se nikalne wali tarango ko pakado. Bahut hi baariki se. Agar ek baar vo tarange hamari pakad me aagyi to fir chahe vo kitne hi roop badal le. Hamse chhip nahi payega.







Dad- yes sahi pakda tumne. Har jeev se kuch tarange to nikalti hi hai. Or ye to alien hai pakka kuch alag tarah ki reading niklengi uski body se. Harry main bhi tumhari madad karta hu.




Harry- theek hai sir.




Main- sahi hai. Ab chaliye jara kaam karle.


Uske baad Harry ne do mask ready karno ko chhod diye. Ek kisi naye chehre ka to dusra bhai ke chehre ka.


Meri or bhai ki personality ek hi hai isliye mujhe unki identity me koi nahi pad payega.



Ye mask kuch alag tarah ki technology se bante hai. Body me ek chip jaati hai jisme us insan ke haav bhav pehle se hi install hote hai. Fir us chip ko us mask se connect kiya jata hai or jaise hi dono body se milte hai. Baise hi vo ek naya insaan ban jata hai. Or koi bhi exray ya fir computer uski pehchan nahi kar sakta ki ye bahi insan hai ya koi dusra.



Or ye bhi Avi ka hi ek kaarnama hai. Jise usne 4 saal pehle banaya tha.



Khair ham thodi hi der me puri tarah se ready ho gye. Bhai ab veer pratap singh nahi Balki Avinash Singh ban gye the. Or main ban gya tha veer pratap singh.



Uske baad bhai nikal gye baha se seedhe delhi ke liye. Seedhe Chouhan ke ghar ki taraf. Bahi main gya uper hall main jaha ledies apne kaamo me lagi hui thi. Tabhi amar baha aaya.





Amar- dad ye aapke kapde kaise change ho gye.aapne surya chachu ke kapde pehan liye.





Tabhi maine use bataya.




Main- beta main surya chachu hi hu. Maine mask pehna hai. Lekin abse tum mujhe dad hi kehna. Taaki bahar kisi ko shak na ho ki main veer nahi surya hu. Samajh gye.





Amar- theek hai dad. Baise ye baat ghar me sabhi ko bata dengi chahiye. Verna confusion bad sakta hai.






Main- tumne sahi kaha. Ek kaam karo sabko mere kamre main bhej do. Yaani ki surya ke kamre main.




Amar- ok.



Uske baad amar ne sabhi ko ghar walo ko mere kamre me aane ko keh diya. Or ye sunte hi sabhi apna kaam chhod kar mere kamre me aagye.or baha mujhe na dekh bhai ko dekh kar sabhi hairan the.




Maa- kaha hai surya. Veer.





Main- maa aapke samne to khada hu main.





Maa- ye kaisa majak hai.




Main- maa majak nahi sach hai. Suniye.



Uske baad maine baha moujud sabhi ko bataya ki ye kyu or kaise hua hai. Jise sunke sabse jyada confuse bhabhi or radha the. Kyuki unhe samajh nahi aaraha tha ki unka kya hoga vo ye sab kaise adjust karengi.



Or ye maine bhap liya.




Main- aap dono ghabraye nahi. Main aaj hi mumbai ja raha hu. Or bahi rahunga jab tak ye problem solve nahi ho jaati hai. Isliye aap dono ko koi takleef nahi hogi. Baaki bhabhi agar bhai se baat karni ho to Harry se keh dena vo karwa dega. Or radha tumhara jab man kare aajana mumbai. Tumhare saamne main ye mask nahi pehan sakta isliye us douran main use utaar dunga.




Ye sunte hi sabhi hasne lage. Or radha or bhabhi sharma gyi.




Maa- beta lekin abhi to aaya hai abhi jana jaruri hai.





Main- ha maa jana jaruri hai. Verna sab gadbad ho jayegi. Baaki main sabhi ke touch me rahunga. Or Rony bhai to yahi hai or dad bhi. Aadil sunny or rishi bhi yahi rahenge. Baaki Aarav main or bache bapis jayenge.






Maa- theek hai jaisa tujhe theek lage. Karna. Lekin khabardaar jo abki baar aise kisi jaal me fasa hai to. Tange tod dungi teri. Us kaal ki band baja ke hi aana. Use batana ki usne kisse panga liya hai.or use ye kitna bhari padne wala hai.






Main- don't worry maa. Isbaar vo mujhse bachne nahi ja payega. Chahe iske liye mujhe pure brahmand ka chakkar hi kyu na lagana pade. Ab main chalta hu.



Ye kehke maine bua fufa or maa ka aasirbaad liya or sabko bye bolke ham 6 log baha se mumbai ke liye nikal gye.










To be continue………………..

Nice update brother

 

[Luffy]

UPDATE - 13














sabhi log base me mere bolne ka intjar kar rahe the.




Dad- ab bol bhi do.





Main- dad baat kuch aisi hai jis per bharosa karna thoda kathin hai. Lekin vo sach hai. Or bahi main soch raha hu ki kaise kahu.





Dad- bharosa karna nahi karna vo tu ham per chhod de or saaf saaf bata ki baat kya hai.




Main- theek hai to suniye.




Uske baad maine sabhi ko kaal se releted jaankari di. Or black heart se releted bhi. Jise sunke sabhi ke bheje ka fuse udd gya.





Or mahol me kuch der ki shanti chha gyi.





Bhai- are u serious?



Main- ha bhai. Dev ne mujhe yahi jaankari di thi.





Dad- baise usne jo bhi bataya hoga vo sach hi hoga. Lekin ab problem ye hai iska saamna ham kaise karenge.





Main- dad baat saamna karne ki nahi hai. Balki unko harane ki hai. Aise demons se hamara saamna pehle nahi hua hai. Sirf kaal ko chhod kar. Vo bhi ab pata chala ki uska sirf ek clone tha.







Rony- baise ek yahi tarika hai ki kaal ko hame abhi rokna hoga or jaan se maar dena hoga. Taaki uska ye kaam yahi atak jaye.





Dad- sahi kaha tumne yash. Ya fir usse vo paras pathar chhen lena ye bhi ek tarika ho sakta hai.





Main- agar hamne vo paras pathar usse chhena ya usse pehle hasil kiya to kahi na kahi ham use vo pathar thali me paros ke de denge. Or kaal hamse kisi na kisi tarah vo chheen hi lega. Chhal se ya bal se. Vo kisi ka bhi roop le sakta hai. Vo hamare neeche kab aayega or kab jayega hame pata bhi nahi chalega.








Dad- baise ye baat bhi theek hai. To fir hame kya karna chahiye.






Main- hame use fasana chahiye. Apne jaal me. Baise vo future dekh kar apni ladai ladta hai. To hame karna ye hai ki hame apne kaam ke liye 1 se jyada plan banane honge taaki jab bhi vo hamare saamne aaye uske liye ye ek surprise hi rahe. Use bilkul bhi bhanak na lage ki aisa bhi ho sakta hai. Jaisa usne mere sath kiya kuch aisa hi hame uske sath karna hai.






Sunny- simple batao ki kya karna hai or kaise.




Main- sabse pehle to usper najar rakhni hai. 24 hours. Vo agar mootne bhi jaye to hame khabar honi chahiye.




Rishi- uske liye hame ye pata hona chahiye ki vo kaha hai or kis bhesh main hai.




Main- filhaal vo nagaland main hai baha ka ACP ban kar. Or vo baha usi pathar ki talash hi kar raha hai. Kyuki uske hisaab se pathar bahi per hai. Or dusri baat hame uske har plan ko fail karna hai. Lekin kuch is tarah se ki use bilkul bhi doubt na ho khas kar ham per to bilkul bhi doubt na ho. Jo ki thoda muskil kaam hai. To plane ye hai ki koi ek nagaland jayega or baha per apna chehra badal kar rahega or uske karib rahega. Baki ka kaam Harry kar dega.






Bhai- main jata hu baha per. Koi police wala banke. Ek nakli id ki jarurat padegi jiska intjam chouhan kar dega. Uske karib rahunga or us per najar rakhunga. Or agar kuch khatra bhi laga to maine sambhal lunga. Baaki Harry us per 24 hours najar rakhega hi. Taaki agar kuch mujhse miss ho jaye ya kahi kuch hone wala ho to Harry mujhe batata rahega.





Main- badiya hai. Aap aaj hi delhi jao or chouhan se mil lo. Or use samjha do ki kya or kaise karna hai.baaki main lunga bhai ki identity. Usko ye pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main abhi zinda hu or bapis aagya hu. Taaki vo meri taraf se carefree rahe. Bahi aap log bhi normal rahenge. Kyuki vo kahi na kahi se ham per najar to jarur rakhega taaki agar ham uska kaam bigade to use pata chalta jaye. Tab tak main koi solid plan sochta hu. Usko patakhni dene ke bare me.





Dad- badiya hai. Hame ab har kadam bahut hi savadhani se rakhna hoga. Baise vo bahut hi chalak hai. Lekin hame usse jyada chalak banna hoga.




Main- Harry ye kaal kuch alag tarah ka jeev hai. Tum uski body se nikalne wali tarango ko pakado. Bahut hi baariki se. Agar ek baar vo tarange hamari pakad me aagyi to fir chahe vo kitne hi roop badal le. Hamse chhip nahi payega.







Dad- yes sahi pakda tumne. Har jeev se kuch tarange to nikalti hi hai. Or ye to alien hai pakka kuch alag tarah ki reading niklengi uski body se. Harry main bhi tumhari madad karta hu.




Harry- theek hai sir.




Main- sahi hai. Ab chaliye jara kaam karle.


Uske baad Harry ne do mask ready karno ko chhod diye. Ek kisi naye chehre ka to dusra bhai ke chehre ka.


Meri or bhai ki personality ek hi hai isliye mujhe unki identity me koi nahi pad payega.



Ye mask kuch alag tarah ki technology se bante hai. Body me ek chip jaati hai jisme us insan ke haav bhav pehle se hi install hote hai. Fir us chip ko us mask se connect kiya jata hai or jaise hi dono body se milte hai. Baise hi vo ek naya insaan ban jata hai. Or koi bhi exray ya fir computer uski pehchan nahi kar sakta ki ye bahi insan hai ya koi dusra.



Or ye bhi Avi ka hi ek kaarnama hai. Jise usne 4 saal pehle banaya tha.



Khair ham thodi hi der me puri tarah se ready ho gye. Bhai ab veer pratap singh nahi Balki Avinash Singh ban gye the. Or main ban gya tha veer pratap singh.



Uske baad bhai nikal gye baha se seedhe delhi ke liye. Seedhe Chouhan ke ghar ki taraf. Bahi main gya uper hall main jaha ledies apne kaamo me lagi hui thi. Tabhi amar baha aaya.





Amar- dad ye aapke kapde kaise change ho gye.aapne surya chachu ke kapde pehan liye.





Tabhi maine use bataya.




Main- beta main surya chachu hi hu. Maine mask pehna hai. Lekin abse tum mujhe dad hi kehna. Taaki bahar kisi ko shak na ho ki main veer nahi surya hu. Samajh gye.





Amar- theek hai dad. Baise ye baat ghar me sabhi ko bata dengi chahiye. Verna confusion bad sakta hai.






Main- tumne sahi kaha. Ek kaam karo sabko mere kamre main bhej do. Yaani ki surya ke kamre main.




Amar- ok.



Uske baad amar ne sabhi ko ghar walo ko mere kamre me aane ko keh diya. Or ye sunte hi sabhi apna kaam chhod kar mere kamre me aagye.or baha mujhe na dekh bhai ko dekh kar sabhi hairan the.




Maa- kaha hai surya. Veer.





Main- maa aapke samne to khada hu main.





Maa- ye kaisa majak hai.




Main- maa majak nahi sach hai. Suniye.



Uske baad maine baha moujud sabhi ko bataya ki ye kyu or kaise hua hai. Jise sunke sabse jyada confuse bhabhi or radha the. Kyuki unhe samajh nahi aaraha tha ki unka kya hoga vo ye sab kaise adjust karengi.



Or ye maine bhap liya.




Main- aap dono ghabraye nahi. Main aaj hi mumbai ja raha hu. Or bahi rahunga jab tak ye problem solve nahi ho jaati hai. Isliye aap dono ko koi takleef nahi hogi. Baaki bhabhi agar bhai se baat karni ho to Harry se keh dena vo karwa dega. Or radha tumhara jab man kare aajana mumbai. Tumhare saamne main ye mask nahi pehan sakta isliye us douran main use utaar dunga.




Ye sunte hi sabhi hasne lage. Or radha or bhabhi sharma gyi.




Maa- beta lekin abhi to aaya hai abhi jana jaruri hai.





Main- ha maa jana jaruri hai. Verna sab gadbad ho jayegi. Baaki main sabhi ke touch me rahunga. Or Rony bhai to yahi hai or dad bhi. Aadil sunny or rishi bhi yahi rahenge. Baaki Aarav main or bache bapis jayenge.






Maa- theek hai jaisa tujhe theek lage. Karna. Lekin khabardaar jo abki baar aise kisi jaal me fasa hai to. Tange tod dungi teri. Us kaal ki band baja ke hi aana. Use batana ki usne kisse panga liya hai.or use ye kitna bhari padne wala hai.






Main- don't worry maa. Isbaar vo mujhse bachne nahi ja payega. Chahe iske liye mujhe pure brahmand ka chakkar hi kyu na lagana pade. Ab main chalta hu.



Ye kehke maine bua fufa or maa ka aasirbaad liya or sabko bye bolke ham 6 log baha se mumbai ke liye nikal gye.










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Fantastic update bro

 

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Fantastic update bro

Nice update brother

बहुत शानदार,

Thanks bhai log apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Dekhiye isme ki surya ka plan kitna kaamyab rehta hai.





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Amezing update ab hoga one to one

behatrin update bro

Nice work dude
Marvelous update

Nice updates beo

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Awesome update bro

Thanks bhai log apna sath u hi banaye rakhe..

Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko.
Isme dekhiye ki surya ka plan kaise aage badta hai. Or kya kaal is plan ko samajh pata hai bhi ya nahi. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe..






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Plan to bdhiya h surya ka aur avi ka ye new mask invention bhi kmaal ka h...pakad me aana bahut hi mushkil h....to ab veer rhega kaal ke paas police wala bnkr hi uske gut me shamil hona chahega wo bhi waha jakar taki jyada se jyada kaal ke paas rehkr uspr nazar rakh sake wahi surya ne bhi apne aap ko chhipa liya veer bnkr taki kaal agr cross check maare to wo jaldi se bhaanp na ske is baat ko...aur thoda carefree ho jaye ab dekhte h ye plan kitna kaam krta h aur kaal kitni jldi iss sachai se parda utha pata h...
Waiting for next brother 🗡

Sahi kaha bhai. Plan hai to badiya. Lekin saamne wala bhi kam nahi hai. Ab to keval surya ki kismat hi hai. Agar usne sahi sath diya to sab sahi rahega varna sab bekaar hai. Baaki dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.






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Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast with awesome writing skills
To Vo unknown dev hai plan to kafi thik hai pr dekhte hai kaha tk Kamyab hota hai
Avi ne is 1 saal me kya kya bnaya hai Ye bhi dekhte hai

Ha bhai plan to sahi hai. Lekin ye kitna safal hoga ye dekhne wali bat hai. Baaki ummid to aisi hi hai ki pura safal hi hoga baki dekhte hai.
And rahi baat avi ke experiments ki to vo bhi aage chalke aayenge saamne filhaal to avi ne bhi use adhura hi chhod diya hai.





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Nice mind blowing update brother

superb update

Shaandaar update mitr

Superb update

Excellent update

Nice update

Thanks bhai log apna sath banaye rakhe. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye ki bhai kaise si plan ko exicute karte hai. Or kya kaal is plan ko samajh payega ya nahi ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe..






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Tarqeeb toh achchhi sochi hai unhone par kya Kaal ko nahin pata laga hoga ki Surya ab waapas aa chuka hai aur uske khilaaf phir se khada ho chuka hai
Dekhte hain ki Kaal ko phansaane ke liye yeh sab kya karenge

Aapka kehna sahi hai.ab kaal ko is. Baare me pata hai ya nahi. Ye to aane wale 1-2 updates me pata chal hi jayega. Bas sath bane rahe.





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UPDATE - 14















bahi bhai pahuche seedhe Chouhan ke ghar. Jaha use bilkul bhi idea nahi tha ki kon aane wala hai.


Pehle to use guard ne roka. Isliye bhai ne unhe apna asli naam bataya. Or bahi naam guard ne andar call karke chouhan ko bataya. To usne foran hi use andar bhejne ko keh diya.



Bhai ghar ke darwaje per pahuche or unhone bell bajayi. To Chouhan ne hi darwaja khola. Or apne saamne kisi or ko khada dekhkar vo hairan reh gya.





Chouhan- kon ho tum. Guard ne to bataya tha ki veer aaya hai. Or tum veer nahi ho.





Bhai- sir main veer hi hu. Maine mask pehan rakha hai is waqt. Andar chaliye sab batata hu bistaar se.




Ye kehke bhai andar aagye or darwaja band karke chouhan bhi uske peeche.



Tabhi bhai ne apne chehre per kaan ke pass ek click kiya. Or unka chehra badal gya. Vo ab veer ban gye the.



Ye dekhkar Chouhan hairan tha.




Chouhan- ye sab kya hai tum bhesh badal kar kyu ghoom rahe ho.




Uske baad bhai ne unhe bataya ki ye sab surya ka plan hai. Or surya ke bapis loutne ki khabar sunkar vo bhi bahut kush ho gye. Unhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha.




Bhai- sir ab sabse pehle meri ek nakli id banaiye polive wali. Or aisi ki jisse me us acp ke ek dum najdeek reh saku.







Chouhan- ha ho jayega. Aao mere sath.



Uske baad chouhan apne ghar me bane ek kamre me gya. Or baha per ek self per rakhi book ko thoda sa hilaya or aisa karte hi baha per ek secrate door open ho gya. Uske baad dono us door se andar chale gye. Or door apne aap band ho gya.



Andar jaake Chouhan ne ek passport or ek police ki I'd nikali. Fir bhai ne mask dobara on kiya or chouhan ne unki kuch photos kheechi. Or uske baad karib ek ghante me bhai ka passport or I'd dono ready ho gye. Ab vo senior inspector avinash singh ban gye the. Jinka delhi se transfer hota hai nagaland ke liye. Or jo jaruri paperwork the. Chouhan ne un sabka bhi arrangement kar diya. Koi kitna hi bariki se janch kyu na kare lekin in sab me galti nahi nikaal sakta tha. Or chouhan ne ek nakli data bhi police ki official I'd per upload karwa diya Aarav ko kehke. Jisse avinash ka background bhi ban gya. Ab bas baha jaane ki deri thi.





Chouhan- ho gya tumhara kaam. Tumhe kal baha per report karni hai. Baaki ka kaam to tum jante hi ho.




Bhai- ha sir main janta hu. Achha ab me nikal raha hu. Aaj hi. Taaki jara janch padtaal bhi kar saku ki akhir chal kya raha hai baha per.





Chouhan- theek hai all the best. Or agar koi tumse jyada sawal kare to uski baat seedhe mujhse kara dena. Main sambhal lunga.






Bhai- theek hai.



Uske baad bhai baha se nikal gye seedhe airport ke liye. Or baha se next flight leke udd gye nagaland ki capital city Kohima.


Jo ki behad hi khubsurat city mese ek hai india ki.



Baha pahuch kar bhai yani ki avinash ek hotel me checkin karte hai or thoda fresh hoke nikal jaate hai kaal ko dekhne ke liye.



Police headquarter ke saamne hi bhai ek chai ki tapri per khade hoke chai pi rahe the. Tabhi unhe Vo ACP bahar aate hue dikhai deta hai. Vo akele hi jeep leke baha se nikal gya. Sayad kisi personal kaam se ja raha tha. Or ye dekhkar bhai ke chehre per ek muskaan aagyi. Or unhone bahar jaake ek texi ko roka or kaal ki jeep ka peechha karna suru kar diya.



Texi wale ko bhai per shak hone laga tha ki kahi kuch gadbad to nahi hai. Or bhai ye samajh rahe the. Isliye unhone apna id us texi wale ko dikhaya jise dekhkar vo nischint ho gya. Or usne puri siddat se kaal ki jeep ka peechha kiya. Vo city se bahar kahi ja raha tha. Or ham usse karib 100 meter ki dusri per chal rahe the taaki use hamper shak na ho. Lekin vo bhi shatir hi tha. Or isliye ab mujhe plan badalne ki deri thi.



Bhai ne texi ko ek chhote se dhabe per rukwaya or use bahi se bapis bhej diya. Or bhai khud restarant ke andar chale gye. Bahi us texi ke bapis lout jaane per ACP nischint ho gya or apni car ko tezi se chalane laga.



Bahi bhai ne apne mobile me us pure area ka ek 3D model Harry se mangwaya or vo usme dekhne lage ki ye ACP akhir ja kaha raha hai. Baha per jungalo ke aalawa kuch bhi nahi tha. Isliye bhai ne Harry ko us car ki direction batate rehne ko kaha. Harry us per barabar najar jamaye hue tha.



Bahi dad kaal se nikalne wali tarango ki pehchan karne me lage hue the. Ek alag screen per. Jisme bhi Harry unki puri tarah se madad kar raha tha. Lekin. Ye tarange un dono ki hi pakad se bahar jaane lagi thi. Unhe ek to ye samajh me nahi aaraha tha ki ye akhir konsi tarange hai. Or dusra vo unki pakad me bhi nahi aarahi thi. Isliye dono ho paresaan the.





Bahi karib 2 ghante baad kaal usi road se bapis usi office ke liye nikal gya. Or bhai ne use jaate hue bhi dekh liya. Jisse vo nischint ho gye. Or unhone Harry se us jagah ki jaankari li jaha vo gya tha.




Harry ne turant hi us jagah ke baare me bata diya. Vo jagah bhai se karib 15 km door highway se andar ki taraf thi. Jaha per car to ja ho nahi sakti thi. Or kaal baha per doud kar hi gya tha. Or ab bhai ki baari thi baha jaane ki. Isliye vo us dhabe se thode aage road per paidal hi nikal gye. Or thodi dur aane per jab road thoda sunsaan sa hua to bhai ne baha se doud laga di usi taraf jaha kaal gya tha. Abhi sham hone lagi thi isliye andhera hona suru ho gya tha. Isliye bhai ko jyada tension nahi thi. Lekin road per unke doudne se jo lights utpann ho rahi thi use dekhkar kaafi logo ka muh khula ka khula reh gya tha. Unhe to samajh me hi nahi aaraha tha ki ye akhir hai kya. Bahi kuch logo ne iska video bhi banane ki kosis ki lekin unke mob. Harry ke control me the. Jaise hi video unhone save kiya baise hi vo delete bhi ho gya. Bahi thode aage jaake bhai ne ek right turn liye or jungle me ghus gye. Bahi jungle ka rasta pura teda meda tha. Jaha per theek se chal pana bhi muskil tha. Lekin yaha bhai pure jor shor se doud laga rahe the.




Thodi hi der me vo Harry ke dwara mark ki hui jagah per pahuch gye.




Bhai- Harry confirm yahi jgah hai.




Harry- ha sir yahi jagah hai.





Bhai- lekin yaha to kuch bhi nahi hai. Jhadiyon ke aalawa.




Harry- sir is jagah ko achhe se scan keejiye right side ki jhadiyo ko khas kar.



Bhai ne baisa hi kiya to vo bhi hairan reh gye. Kyuki baha per jhadiyo ke andar ek bahut hi gehri gufa type bani hui thi.




Bhai- your right Harry.




Harry- sir be careful aage censor bagera kuch ho sakte hai. Jisse unko aapki moujudgi ka ehsas ho jaye. Filhaal mujhe to kuch nahi dikh raha hai lekin fir bhi





Bhai- ok Harry.




Bhai thoda aage bade to unke aage bahut hi ghani jhadiyan thi. Or jaise ho bhai ne jhadiyo ko hatane ke liye chhua unhe bahut hi tez jhatka laga. Or vo udte hue dur ek ped se ja takraye. Pura ped hi hil gya is takkar me. Or bhai bhi ek dum shom reh gye.


Khair bhai jaldi se uthe apne aap ko sambhala.




Bhai- ye kya tha.




Harry- lagta hai ye jhadiya artificial hai. Jinme current doud raha hai or ho sakta hai ki inko band karne ke liye bahi per koi jugaad kiya gya hai. Lekin ye meri pakad me nahi aaraha hai baha per sab kuch ek dum asli lag raha hai.



Tabhi bhai ko kisi ke aane ka ehsas hota hai. Or vo tezi se bahi moujud ek ghane ped per chad jaate hai or usme chhip jaate hai.



Or vo neeche dekhne lagte hai.



Tabhi achanak se vo samne wali jhadiya puri tarah se gayab ho jaati hai. Or usme se kuch 5-6 log bahar nikalte hai. Jo ye dekhne aaye the ki ye alarm kyu baja tha. Kisi ne un jhadiyo ko touch kiya tha.



Vo charo traf dekhte hai. Tabhi unhe ek ped ki kuch tehniya tuti hui dikhai deti hai or baha per kuch juto ke nishan bhi. Jise dekhkar vo samajh jaate haj ki yaha per koi insaan aaya tha. Koi jaanwar nahi. Vo or bhi satark ho jaate hai or un juto ke nishano ka peechha karne lagte hai. Or ek jagah per aake vo nishan gayab ho jaate hai. Or vo jagah thi vo ped jisper bhai chhipe hue the.




Bhai samajh jaate hai ki ab chhipne se koi fayeda nahi hai.


Isliye vo apni watch se apne suit ko open karte hai or sword leke neeche kud jaate hai. Or vo log kuch samajh paate usse pehle hi sabke sir unke dhad se alag ho jaate hai. Or bhai bina koi der kiye us khule hue darwaje me ghus jaate hai.or unke andar jaate hi darwaja band ho jata hai.or puri gufa me red light jalne lagti hai or siren bajne lagta hai. Kyuki vo darwaje andar jaane wale sabhi ki identity check karta hai. Or agar koi bhi anjaan us darwaje me ghusta hai to ye light jalne lagti hai. Tabhi baha per ek gas leak hone lagti hai. Lekin bhai ne is waqt apna suit pehna hua tha jis bajah se vo gas unke andar nahi jaa pati hai. Or bhai same direction me aage badte hai.


Saamne se bahut sare kadmo ki aawaj bhai ko saaf saaf sunai deti hai. Jaise vo sab isi taraf aarahe the.


Bhai bina koi der kiye us gufa ke upri hisse me chipak jaate hai kisi makdi ki tarah. Unka suit apne aap hi girgit ki tarah apna colour change kar leta hai or mitti ke rang ka ho jaata hai. Ab koi agar jyada hi dhyan se dekhega tab hi unhe dhund payega Verna nahi. Vo Spiderman ki tarah usi upri hisse per rengte hue andar ki taraf jaane lagte hai. Bahi unke neeche se bahut se guard baha per aa jate hai or charo taraf dekhne lagte hai ki kon andar ghus aaya hai.tabhi kismat se unki najar ek chuhe per pad jaati hai or unhe samajh me aajata hai ki ye alarm aakhir kyu baja hai. Tabhi vo baha per apne hath me lagi ek badi se screen per koi password dalte hai or samne ka darwaja khul jaata hai. Or vo us chuhe ko bahar kar dete hai. Lekin unhe ye bhi pata tha ki unke kuch log bahar gaye hue hai. Isliye unme se kuch log unhe dhundne ke liye bahar chale jaate hai or baaki darwaje per ho khade ho jaate hai. Bhai ye sab dekh rahe the. Or vo bhi turant hi andar chale jaate hai.



Thode aage jaane per unki aankhe hairat se fati reh jaati hai. Kyuki us darwaje se nikli tunnel ke khatm hote hi ek bahut hi badi khadan jaisi aajati hai. Jaha per joro shoro as khudai ka kaam chal raha tha. Ye khadan jameen ke andar hi khodi ja rahi thi. Baha per karib 50 se jyada log kaam kar rahe the.or unhe dekhkar bilkul bhi nahi lag raha tha ki unhen yaha jabardasti laya hua hai. Vo sab kushi se apna kaam kar rahe the. Or time time per pani bhi per rahe the.



Ye khadan karib 1000 feet gehri to lag hi rahi thi. Bahi per neeche jaane ke liye seediya bhi banai gyi thi.



Lekin ek baat tay thi ki jaise hi kaam pura hoga in sabko yahi per gaad diya jayega. Jo baat sayad ye log nahi jaante the. Baha per kuch log kuch aadhunik machinon se koi reading pakad rahe the.jaise sayad paras pathar ki reading. Sayad usse koi energy nikalti ho jise ye log catch karna chah rahe ho. Halaki reading baha per kaafi jyada aarahi thi. Lekin unhe abhi tak pathar nahi mila tha.



Bhai ne jaldi se baha ki kuch photos click ki. Or Harry ko bhej di.



Halaki yaha ka mahool dekhkar lag raha tha ki sayad jaldi hi inhe vo pathar mil jayega. Or uske baad asli tabahi shuru hogi.

Bhai ki samajh me nahi aaraha tha ki akhir vo ab kare kya. Yaha moujud guards ko maar kar baaki sabhi ko yaha se bhaga de. Ya fir yaha se lout jaye. Or pathar ke milne ka wait kare….



Samay hath se nikalta ja raha tha lekin bhai kisi bhi natije per nahi pahuch pa rahe the.










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