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Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...



Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....


Aap sab ka :welcome1: hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...


 
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Sabhi logon ko ye mehsus Hoti khushi mano 2 maa (Serin aur Nischal ki maa) ki marmik kahani se ubarne me madad kar rahi ho.... Kasak utsukta vash puchhne lagi... "Ye kitne vishalkay sher ka jhund hai. Yahi Adhmya aur uska parivar hai na??"…


Nandni aur Nischal ne jaise hi haan me sar hilaye, Kasak... "Ye itne khush hai ki uski khushi main yahan tak mehsus kar rahi, Shwetna ki shadi me to lagta hai sab deewane huye ja rahe hain"..


Nandni ko baat shuru karne ka jaise mauka mil gaya ho... Aur usne Adhmya aur uske parivar ke khush hone ke pichhe ka karan Nischal ke 4 jodi se hone wale bacchon ko batayi, jise Jivisha ki sahmati par plan kiya gaya tha. Isliye Jivisha bhi usse apna baccha maanti hai...


Haalanki Nandni ko wakai pata nahi tha ki Adhmya aur uska parivar kyon khush hai... Lekin Nandni ko apne doston ki khushi ya gum bhaanpne ke liye kisi shakti ki jaroorat nahi thi. Wo brahmand ke kisi bhi kone se unki khushiyan aur gum, dono mehsus kar sakti thi... Fir wo Nischal ho ya Jivisha, dono dukh me ho ya khushi me, mehsus ho hi jata tha...


Haalanki jis baat ka dar tha wahi hua... Abhishek gusse me aa'kar Nischal ko ek thappad laga diya... Asis bhi ghurti najron se dono (Nischal aur Nandni) ko dekha aur apni bahan Nandni ko ek thappad jad diya...


Baat koi bhi ho Nandni ko thappad padte hi Ansh aur Nischal ki bhavna badal gayi, lekin Asis se dono hi kuchh nahi hi kah sakte the... Wahin Kasak ko bhi chubh gayi ye baat... Jivisha ki 4 shaut aur charon se bachhe honge...


Haan lekin Kasak ko sab ke upar viswas tha... Isliye wo Jivisha ko bulane kahi... Issi bich Shwetna bhi wahan Lin ke sath pahunch gayi... Wahan ke khinche mahol ko dekh'kar wo bhi Nandni se isharon me puchhne lagi ki "yahan hua kya tha"???


Nandni ne bhi isharon me hi samjha diya ki, usne aur HuYu ne jo raaj daba rakha tha wo samne aa gaya hai... Kasak ke kahne par Nischal ne Jivisha ko bula liya... Wo aur Serin bilkul masti aur khushi me pahunchi…


Jivisha ka kafila jahan se bhi gujar raha tha, har koi alag hi tarah ke santusti ko mehsus karte, jhumte huye apne jaam lahra rahe the... Jaise hi Jivisha apne logon ke bich, Adhmya aur dragon babies ke sath pahunchi… wo log bhi kuchh sukoon aur santust bhada ehsaas mehsus kar rahe the...


Abhi to kewal 2 ke sath Jivisha ne apni khushiya saajha ki thi... Lekin jaise hi usse pata chala ki Nandni ne sabko sach bata diya... Wo paglon ki tarah uske poore chehre ko hi chumti.… "Aa gale lag ja... Mere vajah se tujhe abhi sun'na para kya yahan???"..


Itne me hi Abhishek, Jivisha ke iss pagalpan ke liye, jaise hi usse chilla'kar daantne laga... Adhmee kud'kar Jivisha aur Abhishek ke bich khadi ho gayi... Gussa Adhmee par aisa haavi, ki wah shant hone ko taiyar hi nahi thi. Anth me Nischal aur Jivisha ko, Adhmya ko bulana para tab kahin jaa'kar wo shant hui...


Jaise hi Adhmee alag hui, Jivisha apne bhai ke samne haath jodti... "Samjh lo na koi bhi chij fir gala hi daba dena.... Aise kyon over react kar rahe ho"..


Abhishek, gusse me usse ghurte... "4 shadiyan tujhe mazak lag raha hai.… Upar se wo najayaj"….


Nandni ne apni aankhen badi kar lee. Abhishek najayaj par hi tha, ki Serin kud'kar Abhishek ke aage aayi aur usse apne pichhe ki, aur in sab ke ke bich Jivisha bus itna hi kahi.…


"Bhaiya tumhare jagah agar kisi aur ne mere bacche ke bare me itni badi baat kah di hoti na... Khair yahan aao mere pass, main tumhe mehsus karwati hun ki kyon main khush hun... Aur tum log jo nahi dekh pa rahe ho un 2 aatmaon ko, lekin main saaf mehsus kar shati hun.. Nischal aur Serin ki maa.… Unke dono hath lagatar uth rahe hain hum sab ko aashirwad dene ke liye"..


Kasak, Serin ke pichhe se Abhishek ko aage layi… Aur aakhir me jab Jivisha ne sabhi se apni khushi saajha ki… har kisi ke aascharya ki koi seema nahi thi… Har koi stabdh bus sochta hi rah gaya…


Kasak, Nandni, Ert, Luna, Shwetna, Ansh, Abhishek, Asis aur Saahil, sab ke sab kayi baar uss asambhav se aascharya ko mehsus karte rahe. Wakai Jivisha kitni khush thi uska aabhash sab ko jo raha tha... Har koi aaschrya aur khushi ke bich aanshu baha rahe the… Jivisha ne kewal Nischal ko pass aane se mana kar diya... Muskurati hui wo kahne lagi... "Apne bacchon se mere love bahut dur rahe, meri vajah se... Main nischint se unhe milvaungi"…


Jivisha ki baat sunkar sabhi hasne lage... Tabhi Shwetna apna naag dansh hanth me lee… Nischal aur Jivisha, dono ke naag dansh ko bhi nikali... Nischal aur Jivisha ko ek point par khade karne ke baad, teeno naag dansh ko teen kone par ghus'kar ek triangle shape ka nirman ki, jiske bich me dono khade the…


Shwetna jor se chillati hui kahne lagi... "Humari khushi ye poora Zoren mehsus karega"….


Teen alag-alag tarah ki raushni, Nischal aur Jivisha ke sar ke thik upar, aapas me mil'kar, upar hawa me rang-birangi raushni bikher rahi thi…. Wo bikhri raushni, kafi teji se wahan ke vayumandal me failne lagi... Jiske pravaah me jo bhi fase ek alag hi alokik khushi ko mehsus karne lage…


Shwetna aur Lin aaye hi huye the yahan apne mukhiya ko lene. Shwetna aur Lin ne unhe sath me lee aur bakiyon ko jaldi se taiyar ho'kar pahunchne bol dee. Khas'kar Ert ko, kyonki Shwetna ko bhi pata tha ye kitni badi mastikhor hai aur kahan jane wali hai...


Shaam dhal chuki thi. Charo ore rang-birangi raushni rang bikher rahi thi. Har jagah lage huye the chhote bade high class woofer. Unme se nikalti masti bhadi dhun jhumne ko vivas kar de. Saikdon kilometer me faila hua bada sa maidan... jiske thik bich me 6 km unchi minar bani thi aur 1600 meter ka golaakar stage bandha gaya tha...


Maidan lakhon yuvak aur yuvtiyon se bhada hua tha jo jode me aaye the. Aur jinke jode nahi the, wo kinare khade hokar apna joda bana rahe the. Wahan pahunchi har Stri kafi aakarshak libas me thi.. khule aur aakarshak vastr, jise pahan'kar jhumti har stri apne aakarshak badan se apne sathi ko rijha rahi thi. Aur unke sathi upar lagbhag khule badan, jis par bina button ya chain ke sleevless chhote jacket ya chhote shirt pahne, apne partners ke sath poore madhoshi me jhum rahe the... Jaam lahra rahe the... Aur ek dusre ko chum'kar mahol ko kafi Khushnuma bana rahe the.…


Nilbhut samuday ki sardar Shwetna ki wo pahli jhalak aur sabhi yuvak-yuvtiyan paglon ki tarah hooting karte, apne jaam ko hawa me lahraye, tabhi samne se Shwetna ne bhi apne hatho me jaam uthaya... Jaise hi jaam uthe, thik ussi waqt Lin bhi wahan pahuncha...


Majakiya yuvakon ne mahol banate huye apne sardar ko apne chunav par punar vichar karne kah'kar, khud ko chun'ne ke liye kahne lage... Shwetna pyara sa chehra bana'kar, Lin ke honth se honth laga'kar chumti hui, apna faisla jaise hi batayi, Ek baar fir se sabhi yuvak-yuvtiyan apne sathi ke sath chipak'kar jhumna shuru kar chuke the.... Aur inhi bhid me sab ke sab alag-alag jagah par masti kar rahe the, Siway Nandni aur Ansh ke koi bhi nahi gaya uss stage par...


Jodi banane ki rashm nibhayi jane lagi...Jashn-e- mahol me sab jhum rahe the... Poori khushiyan bikherte log apne sardar ki sadi ka jashan me dube the... Jaise hi jodi banane ki rashm samapt hui aur naye jode dwara hawa me jaam lahraye gaye...


Fir to Ert apna jaam samapt karti, Abhisek ko le'kar bhumigat ho gayi... Honth se honth laga'kar usse chunti hui apne sathi ko poorn kamuk karne ke liye, naah phans sammohan halka fijaon me bikher dee...


Fir to dono ek dusre ko behatsha chumte huye, poorn kamuk milan karne lage... Wahin upar jhumte kayi yuvak-yuvtiyan bhi apne sathi ke sath bhumigat ho gaye... Apne sathi ko samjhne wali aur shant rahne wali Luna bhi poorn apne kaam-uttejna me thi...


Luna, Asis ko khinch'kar guest ke liye bane tent me se, ek tent me ghus gayi aur batti bujha di... Batti bujhte hi Asis pahli baar ek kamuk Aizem ki stri ka roop dekh raha tha... Fir to wo bhi sex aanand me bilkul dub sa gaya...


Kasak aur Sahil to iss jahan-e-mahol me iss kadar dube the ki jodi ban'ne ke kafi der baad tak bhi, kayi sare yuvak-yuvtiyon ki tarah, chipak'kar jhumte rahe... Mohol hi kuchh aisa tha ki ang se ang lagana ek anokha anubhav de raha tha... Jab'tak Serin aur HuYu unke pass nahi pahunche, tab'tak dono ne wahan ke jashn ko poora enjoy kiya...


Jivisha aur Nischal, Shwetna aur Lin ko le'kar sidha alfas grih pahunche… Yah alfas grih ek andheri gufa numa sanrachna thi, jo Nilbhut samuday ke rituals me tha... Naye jode ko yahin andheri gufa me apni pahli raat bitni hoti hai, jahan inke liye kuchh na kuchh inke puravaj dwara chhoda jata tha..


Alfas grih me dono ko chhod'kar jab sabhi laut rahe the, Nandni ki ikchha hui sabke sath vatika me samay bitaya jaye... Nandni ki ikchha thi, isliye uska bada sa parivar jisme Nischal, Ansh, aur Jivisha ke alawa dragon babies aur Adhmya ka poora privar sath tha, sab chal diye wahan waqt bitane...


Lekin jaise hi sabhi vatika ke dwar par pahunche, wahan ke dwarpaal ne rasta rokte huye kaha... "Pahle hi Shwetna ke kahne par... Master Serin aur uski humshakal ke liye poore vatika ko 2 hisson me deewar bana di gayi hai... Ab itne logon sath jayenge to pareshani hogi... Main kitne deevar baan'ta rahoon...


Nandni aur Jivisha jab yah suni, wo dono hansti hui sabko le'kar Viggo viman me hi lautna uchit samjhi.… Sabhi wapas laut aaye... Khushi ka mahol tha sabne pana jamavda hall me hi lagaye aur sabhi saithan bacchon ko khelne ke liye dusre hisse me bhej diya gaya…


Jivisha jab sukoon se baithi, tab Nischal ka sar apne gode me le'kar uske sar par haat ferti hui, uske bachhon se milawane lagi... Nischal ke liye ye kafi anmol kshn the… Apne ansh ko jab usne mehsus kiya hairat bhadi uski aankhon me halki nami thi.


Jivisha uske aanshu pochhti hui wapas se Nischal ko apne gode me sulayee aur samne Nandni ko dekh'kar…. "Mere love ka kafi komal hriday hai na... Main nahi chahti thi uske aanshu koi wahan bahar wale dekhe"…


Nandni aur Ansh dono hi Jivisha ko gher'kar baithe... Jivisha gahri shwans leti.… "Sorry Nandu mere vajah se tu hamesa fans jaati hai"…


Nandni:- Aage bol Jhalli… ye to aadha hua..


Nandni:- Areee ab main sensitive ho gayi hun...


Tabhi bich me Adhmee dahari, mano kahna chah rahi ho… "Bilkul yakin mat karna"… aur ye baat Nandni aur Jivisha dono hi saaf samajh paa rahi thi... Dono hi hasne lagi... Tabhi ek baar fir Nandni boli... "Jaldi muh ka shutter khol'kar bol kya paka rahi dimag me"…


Jivisha:- Nahi re iss baar kuchh bhi aisa nahi... Main soch rahi thi bichare ye Middle Universe wale... Inke pass koi entertainment source nahi, isliye jab dekho tab ya to ladte rahte hain, ya har mauke par apni aabadi badhane me lag jate hain"..


Nandni, Jivisha ke sar ko thokti... "Abhi ye inke jashn manane ka tarika hai"..


Jivisha:- Haan lekin aaj jab main dragon babies ke sath thi… to ek maa ke liye ajib lagega na ye.. apne bacchon ke sath aise jashn attend karna…


Nandni:- Wahan koi parivar nahi aaya tha... Sabhi parivar apne bacchon ke sath screen par ye shadi dekh rahe the aur bhavishya me tu bhi aisa hi karegi. Ab iss mudde par tu apni saitan khopdi chalana band kar de. Aur haan shoorwaat me tune sahi kaha tha, ki main teri vajah se fans jati hun... Mujhe aur na fansa...


Nischal:- Ek Baar uski poori baat sun to le… .


Nandni:- Chup be jodu ke gulaam. Kaash tere jaisa 1% bhi gun mere pati me hota, to ab tak tum dono se jhagra kar raha hota... Ye teri biwi kitni sensitive baaten shuru ki thi... Lekin jis hisab se isne entertainment par jod diya na main samjh gayi ki ye kya kahne wali hogi...


Jivisha:- Kya???


Nandni:- Yahi na ki main yahan ke logon ke sath film nirman karun...


Jivisha aur Nischal ek sath... "Yesss sahi samjhi hai... Yahan bhi filmon ki pratispardha hogi. Itne sare grah hain, har garh se kitni filmen relese hogi. Sabke hindi dubbed hum dekhenge… waise bhi pahli nirmata, nirdesak, ho sake to actress bhi tu hi rahegi, to hamesa tera hi naam pahle liya jayega. Godess of Middle univese cinema"…


Pichhli baar ek movie banane ki kosis hui thi... Goli maarne ka scene tha... Dummy istamal karne kaha gaya tha... Filmon ki deewani Nandu aur Jivisha ko wo scene pasand na aaya tha, aur jab bhi wo camera me dekhti, artist ko bolti "ek aur kosis natural nahi lag raha"...


Baar-baar ek hi baat sun'ne ke baad natural lagne ke liye bhai ne orignal gun laa'kar shoot kar diya tha, jiske khun ke chhinten Nandni ke poore chehre par bhi pare the... Sahi waqt par ilaj ho gaya, warna natural acting karwane ke chakkar me ek tapak hi gaya tha...


Nandni uss ghatna ko yaad karke poori tarah se sihar gayi... Ansh ko ghurti hui kahne lagi…. "Kuchh to bolo... Kam se kam mere khatir dono ka jabda hi tod do"…


Ansh:- Had hai yaar, tum teeno ke bich main kahan se aa gaya ….. main to sath baitha hun bus. Mujhe mat ghasito...


Nandni:- Ansh, lakshan dikh rahe hain tunhare. Tunhare ander kaale dil me hamesa se yahi chalta hai na ki kaise main fans jaun, isliye aise mamlon me kabhi mere favour me nahi bologe.... Abhi to waise bhi ander se dil ke armaan jhum rahe honge... "Achha hai fansi ab ye"…


Nischal, apna haath badha'kar Nandni ke sar par ek haath maarte... "Tum dono (Jivisha aur Nandni) apne pagalpan me doctor sahab ko kyon fansa rahi. Kitne sarif hai ye"..


Nandni:- Ohhh hoo hoo sarif… 2 baar gusse se mujhe khinch'kar thappad laga chuka hai... Sarif hai ye...


Nischal hadbara kar uth'te… "Aree doctor sahab kaise kar liye ye kaarnama… mujhe bhi sikhao... Aap to hum patiyon ki shaan ho"…


Tabhi ek kadada panja para aur Nischal 5 fit dur jakar gira aur ussi ke upar docotor sahab bhi land kar rahe the... Ye karnaama Adhmee kar chuki thi... Pahle Nischal ko ek laafa lagayi, uske baad Ansh ko utha'kar Nischal ke upar fenk dee...


Jivisha aur Nandni hansti hui Adhmee ke sath khadi ho'kar Adhmya ko ghurti... "Tumhe bhi in patyon ke group me samil hona hai kya???"… Adhmya bechara apna dum samet'kar Adhmee ke paun me let gaya...


Nischal aur Ansh usse dekh'kar… "Thuuu hai, patiyon ke naam par dhabbe Adhmya"…


Nandni:- Lagta hai poore sanskar na aaye hain... Adhmee jarra wapas se sanskaar sikhao…


Nischal aur Ansh bahar bhagte... "Sale issi Adhmya ko dekh'kar kahavat bani hogi... Bahar ka sher, ghar me chuha"…


Nandni unhe bhagte dekh hansti hui kahne lagi.… "Sala apne baton ka koi sar pair hi nahi hota, topic kya start hoti hai.… Aur baat kahan aakar khatm hoti hai"…


Jivisha:- Kaun sa desh ki artvayvasta ke bich me hum cinema ghused rahe hain… aise charha to ghar-ghar ki baat hai... Kaun sa humne kuchh naya teer maara hai...


Hansi mazak aur sabhi ke pagalpan ke bich, ek dusre ke sath ka luft uthane ke baad sabhi sone chale gaye. kafi sukoon bhadi raat ke baad, khili si subah ki shurwaat ho rahi thi. Shwetna ke saja anusar 20 hazar Zoren wasiyon ko Nischal ne der raat hi uthwa liya tha aur subah ke pahli kiran ke sath hi, Nischal apne safar par nikal chuka tha…
Very interesting lajawab dhmakedar update

Ye sare cherecter kaha se develop kiye hain bahi
Jaha bhi nazar jati h Sala maiend blanck ho jata h in ki conversation comady sun k

Sab ek se barh k ek hain
Or ek baat btao ye panchi Raj ne dragons k ande 21000 rakhway thy ship k ander
Or bache nikle 8400 baqiyo ka kia bna
 

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Or ek baat btao ye panchi Raj ne dragons k ande 21000 rakhway thy ship k ander
Or bache nikle 8400 baqiyo ka kia bna
Har 10 ande me 3 anda hi sucess hota tha... Artificial hatching ke jariye ye aakda badha diya nischal ne ... Jahan 21000 andon se 6300 bacche hote ab 8400 hai...

Baki ke barbaad huye andon ko un logon ne kya kiya puchh kar bata dunga :laugh:
 

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Hansi mazak aur sabhi ke pagalpan ke bich, ek dusre ke sath ka luft uthane ke baad sabhi sone chale gaye. kafi sukoon bhadi raat ke baad, khili si subah ki shurwaat ho rahi thi. Shwetna ke saja anusar 20 hazar Zoren wasiyon ko Nischal ne der raat hi uthwa liya tha aur subah ke pahli kiran ke sath hi, Nischal apne safar par nikal chuka tha…


Nischal Middle Universe se, North-East upper point se badh raha tha.. Takriban 40 hazar km ke unchai tak pahunchna tha aur wahan se takriban 1 mahine ki, uske aage ki journey thi...


Nischal up-side east Universe ke kshetr me badh raha tha... Middle Universe ka hissa takriban ek din me samapt ho jata.. wo bhi lagbhag 12000 kilometer up side ki unchai par aakhri planet tha. Sambhavna hi nahi thi, ki Nischal Middle Universe ke kisi bhi boarder planet par hault karta…


Up side Universe me wah pahla chakkar laga raha tha, isliye settelite viman ki position 1000km aage rakha hua tha.. 4 se 5 din ke baad kisi planet ya space sation me hault ka plan bana tha... Aadhe din ke safar ke baad, HuYu aur Nischal ka sampark hua... Serin kafi gussa jatate hui kahne lagi, jane se pahle ek baar sab se mil'kar jaana chahiye tha...


Nischal ne aupcharik baten samapt kar'ke sab ko kewal aur kewal kaam par dhyan lagane ke liye kahne laga... Wo jab'tak surya ke sabse najdik wale planet Hirriyent par pahunch'kar, beskimti dhatu le aaye jise tabaah nahi kiya ja sakta... Tab'tak inki idhar ki poori taiyari ho jani chahiye….


Nischal nikla tha ek aisi dhatu lene, jiske 100 gram ko faila'kar 100 logon ke liye full body mask taiyar kiya ja sakta tha... Kisi temlrature par ye dhatu nutural rahti thi. Yahi vajah thi ki iss dhatu ke ander pack kisi bhi chij par, kisi bhi temprature ka koi asar nahi hota tha. Iss dhatu ke 1mm ke 1000we hisse me bhi itni majbooti thi ki bade se bada missile bhed na sake...


Ekmatr Huriyent planet par milne wala iss nayab dhatu ka naam in logon ne Hyber rakha tha. Viggo viman kafi teji se badh raha tha... Bacche viman ke kayi hisson me udham-chaukdi macha rahe the... Adhmya aur Adhmee par sabhi bacchon ke dekh'bhal ki jimmedari shuanp di gayi thi... Haalanki kahna galat nahi hoga ki sabhi bacche mil'kar Adhmya aur Adhmee ke hi dekhbhal kar rahe the…


Nandni hall me baith'kar aaram se apne paun me nail polish laga rahi thi, wahin Nischal, Jivisha ke balon me tel laga raha tha. Doctor sahab aaram se un sab ko dekhte... "Kya aur kuchh nahi bacha hai karne ko"..


Nischal:- Hum dono ka kismat me breakup likha tha kuchh salon ka. Aapko kya hua tha doctor sahab. Dhang se mehnat kiye hote to bacchon ke diaper to kam se kam badal rahe hote...


Ye udta hua nailpolish Ki sisi Nischal ke mathe ke ore aur nisana chuk gaya... Jivisha ke sar se takrayi wo nail polish ki sisi aur pura nail paint mathe se line banate huye chehre par failne laga...


Nischal:- Batao aaj tak kabhi jo ye ladki dhang se nishana laga pati...


Jivisha:- Tum dono jhagra karo... Main apna chehra saaf kar aayi...


Nandni:- Ansh kuchh to bolo tum... Ya chup chap kewal sun'ne ke liye aaye ho... Muh tod do sale ka...


Ansh, iss baar gusse me aaya aur poori takat se ek punch ghuma'kar Nischal ke muh par jamate... "Aaaaaaaaa aabbb khushhhh"…


Punch wakai tagda tha... Itna jordar ki Ansh ki kalai ki haddiyan chatak gayi.. Kahin hair line fracture na aa gaya ho... Nischal ke naak se khun nikalne ke alawa, muh se uff tak na nikla... Ulta doctor sahab baap-baap chillane lage...


Nandni harbada kar pahunchi aur apne aanchal se Nischal ke naak ka khun saaf karti hui... "Had hai.. tum kya pagal ho Ansh… mazak me maarna tha to tum kya punching bag practice karne lage... Main medical section se aati hun fir batati hun tumhe"


"Sala main hi gadha hun jo inke bich me padta hun. Mere dard se chillana na dikha aur uss gende chamri wale ka ilaj karne ja rahi hai... Usse asar bhi hua hoga... Sala apni hi mati maari gayi thi"….


A few moment latter...


Computer ji:- 20 hazar sagird alag-alag hisson se puchh rahe hain unhe kya karna hai...


Nischal:- Ohhhh nooo !!! Ye bhi aaye hain… main to bhul hi gaya..... Computer ji.. doctors ki team ko right wing ke mediacal section me assemble hone kahiye. Scientist aur Computer experts ko right wing ke lab me, aur sabhi soldier ko right wing ke traning area me aane ke liye kahiye...


Computer ji:- Jarra dhyan se trained karna, iss baar tumhare pass speed nahi hai... Viman ke body me aayi kharabi, bahut dard de jayegi tumhe Nischal…


Nischal:- Thanks for suggestion computer ji... Par iss baar mere sath 10000 Nilbhut samuday ke...


Computer ji:- Kya hua kahan atak gaye...


Nischal:- Computer ji sabhi 20 hazar logon ko unki sahi jagah par bhej'kar test lijiye... aur unka level pata kijiye... Aur mere agle aadesh tak aap mujhe distrub na kare...


Computer ji:- Abhaga pati, computer ko chup karwa'kar ghanta karega... patni ko bol na distrub na kare...


Uski baat sun'kar Nandni aur Ansh dono hansne lage… tabhi Nischal doctor sahab ko le'kar sidha apne mukhya lab me chala gaya... Kuchh der baad jab Jivisha wapas aayi... "Ye dono kahan gaye"


Nandni:- Pata na... Nischal, Nilbhut ke bare me kuchh kahte huye ruka... Aur fir Ansh ko le'kar teji se chala gaya...


Jivisha:- Dimag me koi theory aa gayi hogi ussi ko test karne gaya hoga... Chal hum bacchon ke pass chalte hain...


Lagbhag 5 din bit chuke the.. in 5 dino me, Nischal aur doctor ansh lab se bahar hi nahi aaye... Khana pina sab wahin ho raha tha… Nandni aur Jivisha ko unki shakl bhi dekhni hoti thi, to unhe hi lab jana padta tha...


Khair viman ko aage Jivisha hi oprate kar rahi thi aur isme uski madad uska natkhat Gopal aur uski toli kar rahi thi... Adhmya ke bacchon ki apeksha, dragon babies ke bade hone ki kshmta kafi tej thi. Mahaj kuchh hi dino me ye sabhi ek murge ke size ke ab takriban 3 fit tak badh gaye tha... Yadi pankh wagairah faila le to kafi vishal dikhne lage the…


Viggo viman kafi teji se up-side east ke ore badh rahi thi... Settelite viman se tasveeren lagatar mil rahi thi... Tabhi screen par kafi hairan kar dene wala tasveer najar aane lagi...


Ek viran sa space station tha, jo kafi jar-jar haalat me thi… Uss space station ke charo ore se duvan nikal raha tha.. aisa lag raha tha ki mano abhi-abhi humla hua hai...


Jivisha ko kuchh thik nahi laga… Wo viman ko space station ke ore le jane lagi aur poore viman me alert tone jari karti…. "Computer ji ek midium range viman taiyar kijiye aur hathiyar ke sath 2000 Nilbhut sainik viman aise chhipe ki unki pahchan ujagar na ho... Bakiyon ko viman par rukne ke hi aadesh de aur mere love ko sandesh bhejiye ki uski pyari patni yaad kar rahi"…


Computer ji:- Hateli wo alert tone sun'kar aa raha hai... Sandesh dene ki jaroorat nahi hai...


Jivisha, apne badbole computer ko pagal bolti wapas se screen dekhne lagi... Tabhi Nischal, Ansh aur Nandni control room me pahunch gaye...


Nischal:- Kya hua?


Jivisha:- Mujhe kya hua uski khabar baad me lungi, abhi bahar kya hone wala hai, pahle uss ke liye taiyar raho. Hum trap hone ja rahe hain...


Teeno ek sath:- What???


Jivisha:- Lagbhag 5 din baad ek space station mila hai, lekin dekhne se lag raha hai ki choron ne apna Jaal bichhaya hai...


Nischal:- Tumhe kaise pata???...


Jivisha:- HuYu guruji se... Usne mujhe Universe ke chor aur unke trap karne ke tarike ko bataya tha...


Nischal:- To ab kya socha hai tumne...


Jivisha:- Yahan hum trap honge aur unke sath uske planet jayenge... Viman ki servicing ke sath sath jaroori saman bhi lenge aur Universe ke iss hisse ke kuchh local guide ko le'kar niklenge...


Jivisha ko sun'ne ke baad Nischal ne computer ji ko wahi sab wapas se order de dala, jaisa Jivisha ne diya tha... Jivisha apne dono hath kamar par rakhti…. "Tum mardon ko yakin kyon nahi hota ki hum ladies bhi mission oprate kar sakti hain"…


Computer ji:- De ek ghuma'kar Jivisha... Akal thikane aa jaye...


Jivisha:- Shut up computer ji... Tigte situation hai... ..


Computer ji:- Tumhari kripa rahi to tum isse bhi comedy bana dogi... ..


Jivisha:- Main bhi kahan iske muh lag rahi hun... Nandu tu aur Ansh Jiju yahan se oprate karne. Viggo viman ki total command ab tumhare hath me hai, hume backup deti rahna…


Itne me hi viman space station ke kafi najdik pahunch gaya... Jivisha aur Nischal ek dusre ka hath thame, apne midium size viman ke ore badh gaye... Wahin Nandni aur Ansh control room me pack ho'kar, secondry control room ke section ko, centeral area me le aayi aur mukhya control room ko uske pichhe hide kar diya...


Viggo viman space station ke bahar jaise hi khada hua, Jivisha aur Nischal midium size ka ek viman le'kar nikal gaye. Space station ke surface par wo charo ore chakkar laga hi rahe the ki unhe 30 aadmiyon ka jhund, uncha uth'te dhuyen ke pass dikh gaya...


Viman space station ke surface par land hui... Jaise hi viman land hui, sabhi fase log bhagte huye viman ke pass pahunche. Unki haalat dekh'kar lag raha tha ghayal hai.. Unke body par kayi sare chhote bade scratch mark the.. Chehre aur badan par aisi kalikh lagi hui thi, mano bomb ke dhamakon ko kafi najdik se jhel gaye ho...


Nischal ne viman ka darvaja jaise hi space station ke surface par khola, sabhi sidhiyon se upar chadhte.… jod, jod se chillate huye kuchh kah rahe the... Unke poore line me sirf ek hi baat samjh me aayi... "Biokono"…


Bhasha samajh se pare tha... Nischal sabko darvaje par hi rokte…. "Kaun ho tum log, aur iss space station ki ye haalat kisne banayi"…


Aage wale kuchh logon ne jo bola aisa laga kah rahe ho.… "Aajuuu... Maxiuu... Depa aka lei "Biokonooooo"…. Bus ye aakhri ka Biokono sahi tarike se aur ghabra'kar liya gaya naam tha... Nischal unki baat sun'kar, samjhne ki kosis me dohraya.. "Biokono"… wo log bhi dar aur ander ghusne ki kosis karte huye... "Biokono-Biokono" karne lage...


Nischal apne dono haath se sawaliya ishare karte huye ek baar fir "Biokono" dohraya.. Iss baar ek aadmi ne haath ke ishare se sambodhit karte huye, jod se chillaya... "Biokono"… Nischal ki jaise hi najar uss gayi.… Sabko viman me lete, jaldi se darvaja band kiya... "Jivisha plane bhagao, Biokono aa raha hai"…


Jivisha bhi iss shabd ko samjhne ki kosis me muh se pahla tej awaj me "Biokono" dohrayi, aur fir jaise hi bahar najar gayi, Biokono ko samjh'kar aaschrya me aankhen badi kar'ke kahne lagi..… "Biokono"… aur plane ko wahan se bhagati hui Viggo viman ko pichhe aane ke liye kahi...


Jivisha viman ko auto piolot mode me daal'kar 2 ghunt pani gatakti... "Ye kaun sa jaanvar tha... Aisa lag raha tha kisi bichhu ko khada kar diya gaya ho... Muh par 2 bade dank... Sarir par to, kinaron se jaise kewal hath hi najar aa rahe the... Aur ye space me kuch normal kyon nahi hota... Ye aadha kilometer uncha jaanvar.. insano ki hight to barabar prithvi ke insano se match kar rahi, fir ye jaanvar aadha kilometer uncha kaise ho gaye???"…


Nischal:- Kitna bolti hai... Maine bhi dekha hai usse... Tum ander ja'kar uddan sambhalo aur mujhe inki bhasha decode karne do...


Nischal, Viman ke yatriyon ke baithne wale hisse me tha. Lobby area isse bolte the. Lobby me lage kayi sare machino ke bich se ek mini computer ko Nischal bahar nikal'kar unki bhasha decode karne ki kosis karne laga, lekin wo hua nahi... Tabhi un 30 logon me se, ek Nischal ke pass khade ho'kar… jaldi-jaldi me kuchh bolne laga. "haanchu-faanchu" karke ek pura antra suna diya nischal ko.... Nischal apna sar khujate... "Kuch samjhne layak bol le"…


Nischal ki baat sun'kar wo aadmi muskuraya... aur isharon me pichhe hatne kaha... Uss admi ne aaram se apna pendrive sarikhe ek chhoti sa device Viman ke technology panel me thoka aur apne pass rakhe screen par kaam karne laga...


Nischal ek jhalak wahan maujood sabke chehre ko dekha aur Jivisha ke pass aa'kar aaram se baith'te huye, pyar se uske chehre par haath ferte... "Main lab me busy tha, uss baat ke naraaj ho???"..


Jivisha:- Tumhari bholi shoorat aur mithi-mithi baaton se mera gussa kam nahi ho sakta... Haan abhi dil ko sukoon aa jaye, aisa ek mast kiss de do…


Nischal, Jivisha ko pyar se dekhte... "Wakai, abhi ek kiss.. wo bhi aise mahol me"..


Jivisha thoda sa ghum'kar, uchak'kar apne honth Nischal ke honth ke karib laati... "Tum mahol sambhalte raho... Main jarra kiss sambhalti hun"… Apni baat kah'kar Jivisha ne apne honth Nischal ke honth se lagati... Usse pyar se sparsh ki... Aur fir kiss me dubti chali gayi...


"Biokonoooo"… Tej awaj Nischal aur Jivisha ke kano tak pahunchi aur dono apna kiss todte... Pichhe mude...


Jivisha:- Tum ander kaise aaye, lobby me rahna chahiye, itni bhi tamij nahi kya...


Nischal:- Tumhari baat wo samjha bhi hoga ki nahi...


Shyad wo fase huye logon ka mukhiya tha, apna parichay dete huye... "Mera naam Bailoo hai. Hum Lofa planet se hai"…


Jivisha:- Oye Lofa grah ke lofer, ja'kar lobby me sabke saath baitho, aur waham par lage misc se baat karo...


Bailoo:- Kamal ka confidence hai dost… Ek shikari ko hi jaal me fasane ka plan bana'kar aaye… jaan bujh'kar trap hone aaye... Ab isse main tumhari hoshiyari kahun, ya bewakoofi ya fir majboori...


Nischal:- Smart chor haan... Jivisha HuYu ne lagta hai poori jaankari saajha nahi ki thi kya trap ke baare me...


Bailoo:- Ussi ke vajah se to main pahchan batane aa gaya... Tum dono ke yahan pahunchne ki suchna pahle se hi thi hume... Hurriyent jane ke liye aksar yahan se viman gujarti hai... Aur hume pata hai ki koi bhi Universe traveller, Universe ke dusre hisse ke border planet ya space station istamaal nahi karte, isliye permanent trap bichhaye rahte hain...


Jivisha:- Aur wo jaanvar...


Bailoo:- Bilkul asli tha, lekin humare ishare ka gulaam..Tum sab ab relax ho jao. Ek din ki mehmaannavaji humare Lofa planet par. Wahan apne jaroorat ka saman aur aage ki detail le'kar nikal jana... aur Biokono se bhi bade aur bhimkay kal jiv se milwa dunga...


Nischal:- Ek chor ho'kar itni meharbaani kyon...


Bailoo:- HuYu, association of best artist ka head hai.… Uska baat apan taal nahi sakte...


Jivisha:- Areee yaar... Yahan par humne maar dhar aur action ka sochi thi. Lekin yahan to sab kuchh friendly hai..


Bailoo:- Up side east Universe viran si duniya hai... Yahan lad'kar kya karoge... Dhatu ki talaash me hurriyent Planet jane walon ko loot'kar to hum apna gujara chalta hai... Waise yahan 2000 extra log hai... Wo kahan chhipa rakha tum logon ne bahar nikal lo... Hum sab harmful nahi hai...


Jivisha, Aascharya se usse dekhti... "Tumhe pata kaise chala yahan 2000 log chhipe hain"…


Bailoo:- Kaam hi aisa hai Malkia, hume technically update rahna padta hai... Kisi bhi jagah par maujood insan ya jaanvar ki dharkan hum trace kar sakte hain. 30⁰ north east le lijiye viman. Badolon ke bich me humara planet najar aayeg...


Nischal aur Jivisha kuchh pal ek dusre ki najron me jhaankte huye muskuraye, aur apne chhotu viman ko Lofa planet ke bhumi par land krane chal diya... Ussi ke pichhe bada sa Viggo viman chala aa raha tha…


Upar se jab Jivisha aur Nischal ne wo planet dekha, universe ke ek aur vichitr planet ko dekh rahe the... Ye Planet kam aur kabadkhane jyada lag raha tha... Aadhe viman ko kaat'kar ghar ki tarah banaya gaya tha... Jahan jung lage viman me shandar lighting ki gayi thi...


Charo ore rahne ke liye aise viman ki koi kami nahi thi... Unhi jung lage kayi vimano ke bich se kayi sare chhote-chhote double storey ghar bane huye the... Lekin iss se jyada uncha koi makan nahi tha...


Aaschrya se aankhen tab fati rah gayi jab ek bade sa maidan... Maidan kitna bada hoga, wo to aakalan nahi ho paya lekin wahan ummid se bhi pare, bade-bade kaal jiv ke haddi ka dhancha charo ore najar aa raha tha... Aisa lag raha tha jaise yahan kaal jivon ka graveyard ho...


Land karne ke dauran Jivisha aur Nischal iss bade se maidan ko hairani se dekh rahe the. Tabhi wo Bailoo, Nischal ke kandhe par hath rakhte.… "Humare pass aircraft graveyard bhi hai... Ye viman wahin park kar do... Hum bahri viman ko apne planet ke issi hisse me land karne ki anumati dete hain"…


Bailoo dwara jab wahan ka direction set kiya gaya aur pahli baar jab wo graveyard inke najron ke samne aaya... "Ab ye kaisi jagah hai"...


Nischal aur Jivisha niche ka najara dekh'kar ek sath bole. Kayi hazar kilometer tak graveyard kshetr faila hua tha... Bich ke khali hisson ko chhod'kar charo ore gagan chumbi vimano ka dher laga hua tha... Aisa lag raha tha jaise unka viman 10 hazar fit niche kisi kuyen me land ho rahe hai…


Najara hi kuchh aisa tha... Charo ore se vimano ke scrap ko 10 hazar fit se bhi jyada unchai tak pahuncha diya gaya tha. Isse vimano ka graveyard kahna galat nahi tha...
Excellent fantastic shandar update
 

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Har 10 ande me 3 anda hi sucess hota tha... Artificial hatching ke jariye ye aakda badha diya nischal ne ... Jahan 21000 andon se 6300 bacche hote ab 8400 hai...

Baki ke barbaad huye andon ko un logon ne kya kiya puchh kar bata dunga :laugh:
Matlab 1100 ando se izafi bache hoy good

Or haan poch k btana zaroor
 

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Najara hi kuchh aisa tha... Charo ore se vimano ke scrap ko 10 hazar fit se bhi jyada unchai tak pahuncha diya gaya tha. Isse vimano ka graveyard kahna galat nahi tha...


Viman land kar chuki thi. Wo apna sar uncha kar'ke badlon tak dekhne ki kosis karti hui... "Ek baat batao Bailoo, ye itna uncha dher lagane ke liye tumhare pass utni unchi crane to honi chahiye na"..


Bailoo:- Achha sawal hai... Abhi dikhata hun...


Apni baat kahte huye Bailoo ne hathon ka ishara kiya aur sabko pichhe aane ke liye kah diya..… Jaise hi ye log pichhe aaye, tabhi samne se wahi Biokono jaanvar chala aa raha tha… Pahli bar Nischal aur Jivisha usse karib se dekh rahe the…


500 meter uncha jaanvar. Sar uncha karke dekho to bhi uska chehra najar na aaye... Bus jo dikh raha tha wo tha uske 20 fit cahude sharir ke dono kinare se nikle huye hath... Ab wo hath tha, ya 500 meter ka kida jamin par sidha hota to rengne wale paun the, pata nahi... Lekin har 2 fit ki unchai par dono ore se hath nikle huye the aur har hath me hathoda...


Jaisa ki pahle se andaja tha, wo koi jamin par rengne wala kida hi tha. Do panje se khafa tha... Aisa laga jaise uske ridh ki haddi rubber ki bani hai ya bina haddi ka bana ho uska sharir.… Ek shreni kram lahar ke sath, uss Biobino ka sharir me poori lachak aayi...


Paun ke thik upar ka badan, yani ki uske sharir ka sabse nichla hissa lachak'kar bhumi par chipka aur paun ke thik upar wala hath jamin se tik gaya... Fir uska sharir niche se step by step lachak kar bhumi ko chhuta chala gaya aur dekhte hi dekhte uska khada sharir poora ka poora jamin par tha. Uske aage ka vishal muh jiske aage half circle me 2 itne bade dank the ki wo madhyam range ke viman se bhi bada dikh raja tha.


Aisa lag raha tha uske naak ke dono ore half round ka bada sa hathiyar jod diya tha... Biokono apne dono half circle dank ko, dono kinare se faila'kar teji ke sath thik waise chop kar sakta tha, jaise paudon ke patte ya tahni katne wali badi si kainchi chalti hai... Bus fark sirf itna tha ki Biokono ka dank half round tha aur itna bada ki kisi building ko chop kar de...


Aage fir jo hua wo bhauchakki najar bus takte hi rah gayi... Wo kida apne dono ore lage 1600 hath ke sath rengte huye viman ke pass pahunch gaya. Aur uske baad jo aakhon ke samne ho raha tha, usse dekh'kar to Jivisha aur Nischal ka muh hi khula rah gaya...


Kya ho jab ek 500 meter lamba regne wala kida, rengte huye badh raha hai aur apne 1600 hathon me pakde 1600 hathode ko, ek sath dhamm-dhamm karke patakte huye badh raha ho...


Paun ke thik aage jo hath hathoda patak raha hoga wahan shayad 2 hathode pade lekin 500 meter aage jahan sar ke pichhe ka jo hath tha, wahan par hathoda maarte huye rengna shuru kare... to uss point par kitne hathode lagenge, jab ek-ek karke sare hath wahin se hathoda chalate huye aage badhte... Bus yahi viman ke sath hua...


Wo kida rengte huye jaise hi madhyam size viman ke pass pahuncha, apne dono dank se viman ko chop karte huye aage badh gaya aur niche ke hath dana'dan hathoda pit rahe the… Ek sath poore viman par hathoda chala aur wo janvar ka sar khisak kar aage badh gaya... Fir pichhe ka sharir aage badhne laga aur sath me pichhe wala hath, viman par hathoda pit'te huye aage badh rahe the...


Dhama'dham hathode ki awaj charo ore sound kar rahi thi, jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Poore viman ko hathode se kuchal'kar, ek Biokono aage nikla aur agle hi pal dusra Biokono hathoda pit'te huye wahi sab kar gaya, fir teesra..… Biokono jitne bade the utne hi tej bhi, aur dekhte hi dekhte wo medium size ka viman malwe me tabdil ho gaya... Sabse aakhri me jo Biobino jaanvar aaya... Usne apne dono dank viman me ghus'kar, viman ko apne left side se hawa me uchhal diya...


Nischal aur Jivisha apne gardan unchi kar'ke bus dekhte rahe, lekin wo viman niche nahi aaya, baki kaano ke dhimi se metal takrane ki awaj aayi thi… jo shayad 10000 fit upar ja'kar viman ke apni jagah par settel hone ka nofication sound tha.


Nischal aur Jivisha kuchh kah pate, uss se pahle hi wo viman scrap ban'kar apni jagah par pahunch chuka tha aur idhar Jivisha uss Bailoo ko ghur-ghur kar dekh rahi thi...


Bailoo, Jivisha ki ghurti najar ko dekh'kar, jod se hanste huye, jaise hi Jivisha ko chhune ke liye hath aage badhaya... Nischal thik uske samne khada ho'kar…. "Tum to HuYu ke dost ho na, fir aisa kyon kiya???"


Bailoo Nischal ko ek chaanta rashid karte... "Kaun HuYu be… sale mujhe trap karne aaye the aur itni akl nahi, ki hum tere system ki jaankari chura'kar tujhe achhe se jhaanse me le sakte hain"


Nischal:- Haan to humara viman loot lete, usse bhangaar kyon bana diya...


Bailoo:- Kitna bhola hai tu... Yahan jo ek baar aaya, fir koi bahar nahi ja sakta... Ab tere uss viman ki bari hai jise dekh'kar main hairan hun… Abe tu to pura sahar liye ghum raha hai... Waise ek baat hai sala tu hai hum me se ek...


Nischal:- Matlab...


Bailoo:- Viman me tune 2000 log chhipa rakhe the, wo to bahar aaye hi nahi..… unke marne ka gum nahi, lekin viman ka gum hai… achha hai...


Jivisha, Nischal ko samne se hata'ti... "To ab kya karoge"…


Bailoo:- Apne uss bade se viman se apne logon ko nikal... Uss viman me ghusne ka hume access de... 2, 3 din tak ghus'kar hum ander pooraa saman khali karnr ke baad tere viman ke chhote-chhote hisse kar'ke bhangar me daal dunga...


Jivisha:- Aur hume...


Bailoo:- Achha sawal hai… Lekin pahle tumhare log uss vishalkay viman se utar aaye, tab batayenge... Yaad rahe hum dharkan trace kar sakte hain. Sabko bahar bolo aane, kyonki agle 10 minute baad hum kayi sare Biokono jaanvar ko ander ghusane wale hain...


Nischal aur Jivisha hansne lagte hain... "Nandu tu Ansh jiju ko le'kar bahar aa ja... Hum tab'tak masti kar len"...


Bailoo:- Tumhari ye gustakhi kahin tumhe bhadi na par jaye...


Tabhi pichhe se Nandni uss Bailoo ke sar par ek tafli deti... "Kya re khajoor, tu hume hi hool de raha hai… Boys Voggo viman ko gayab karne ki taiyari karo aur isne apna nusksan kiya hai, isliye isse chhod'kar baki sabko gayab kar do"…


Bailoo:- Galti kar diya tum sab ne...


Bailoo apni baat kahta hath se ishara karne laga. Ek kosis, 2 kosis, teesri baar hath uthaya to Ansh usse ek thappad khinch'kar dete... "Ghonchu tu to lull nikla re... Itni jaldi to humare Aarsi aur Chirag bhi trap na ho"…


Ek sath teeno Doctor sahab ko ghurne lage….. "Zindgi me ek hi baar trap huye the dono… Wo bhi tab kuchh jyada hi chhote the… achhe-achhe shikari na usse trap kar paye"…


Nandni ghurti hui boli, uske baad Nischal aur Jivisha ne bhi khade-khade suna diya... Doctor sahab haat ke ishare se sabko rukne bol'kar…. "Areee iss baloon ya jo bhi naam hai... Iss bechare ki bhi to izzat hai... Isliye compare kar diya... Bhul ho gayi, bus bhi karo"…



"Nahi nahi uthak baital karo" … Nandni..

"Main to kahti hun doctor sahab ko murga bana do"… Jivisha

"Na na doctor sahab ko ulta taang'kar pichhwada laal kar do"… Nischal..

"Bolte-bolte sadak chhap bhasha par aa gaye. Tumhe kina sudharun Nischal"… Jivisha

"Ye hai hi badtamij Jivisha, achhe se khabar lo" … Ansh..

"Kya yaar doctor sahab humare patiyon ki union bhul gaye, kya decide hua tha... Inke muh par kya kahna hai aur inke pichh kya karna hai"…. Niachal..

"Dekho Nandu, sweetheart aaj pakka hathkadi wali show. Aur hathkadi tumhara, promise"… Doctor Ansh.. Nischal ke pol khol par compansation offer karte…

"Kutte ki dum hai dono Nandu, 4 din se lab me the, jarra bhi dono ko khyal aaya ki hum akele honge… humari bhi ikchhayen hongi... Kaam mila to biwi ko bhul gaye aur jab apna tharak chadha tab biwi yaad aati hai... Romance to jaise shadi ke baad itihaas hi ban jata hai"… Jivisha..



"Sabko abhi goli maro, 5 minute me hi mujhe pagal bana diye. Aur koi mujhe batayega ki apne gulaam janvar aur kaam kar rahe logon ka kya hua... Koi mere ishare par respond kyon nahi kar raha"…


Hatiyaron se laish sainik jaise hi wahan pahunche Bailoo jor se chinkhte huye goli maarne ke aadesh de diya.. Bailoo ke bich me dakhalandazi se, in charo ka dhyan toota aur apne charo ore jaise hi dekhe... Kayi sare hathiyarband log unhe gun point par liye the...


Jivisha:- Nilbhut Boys... Tum sab ko main ulta taang dungi... Hum yahan family discussion me the, fir hume distrub karne kaun aa gaya...


Biokono ka action dikha'kar Bailoo ne Nischal aur Jivisha ko ek hairatangej kaarnama dikhaya tha... Ab Nilbhut samuday ka kaarnama dikha'kar Jivisha usse payback de rahi thi...


Bailoo gussa'kar shoot karne ka aadesh diya. Weapons tan gaye... Aur fire hone se pahle hi Bailoo apne sabhi logon ko jamin me ghuste huye dekh raha tha... Ek hi baar me uske sabhi armed force ghus gaye...


Bailoo ghabrayi si awaj me... "Ye kaisa jadoo hai"…


Ansh aage aa'kar ek thappad maarte... "Sale jab pata tha ki ye shikariyon ka shikar karne aa rahe hain aur itni aasani se tumhare haath phans gaye, tujhe tabhi samjhna chahiye tha ki ye nahi tu trap ho raha hai... Hath ka ishara jab fail hua, tabhi samjh jana chahiye ki tujh se jyada ye log homework kar rahe hai"…


Nandni khinch'kar doctor sahab ko pichhe karti... "Tum kya trap krane ke tips and trick de rahe ho... Bata do yahan sab kuch, ki hum kaise kaam karte hain"…


Jivisha:- Bus bhi kar inke 4 din ka gussa nikalna... Wo hum lautkar khabar lenge… Abhi bol'kar gussa khatm mat kar…


Jivisha, Nandni se apni baat kahne ke baad, Bailoo ke ore palti aur khinch'kar ek thappad maarti... "Sale humara family matter kyon sun raha hai kamine"…


Nischal:- Boys poore viman ko bhumigat karo aur computer ji se instruction le'kar kaam pura karne ke baad hum se sampark karo… jab'tak hum iske planet ghum aate hai..


Nischal bhi apni baat kahte huye palta aur ek thappad chipka diya Bailoo ko. Usse dekh'kar Nandni bhi aage aayi aur usne bhi khinch'kar ek thappad jar dee..


Nischal:- Any valuable comment...


Nandni:- Iski beep beep.. chal yahan se..


Nichal:- Viman ka kaam ho jane de, jab'tak iski mehman navaji to dekh le...


Jivisha:- Computer ji... Adhmya aur Admee ke parivar ke sath mere sabhi dragon babies ko bhi bahar nikalo... Wo bhi jarra ye jagah ghum le.…


Nandni:- Hum paidal ghumenge kya... Badi si gadi nikalo… Aur kafila hona chahiye apna… full too rera wala...


Nischal, Nandni ki demand sun'kar, 40 vahan jamin par utara. Ek vahan me ye log khud sawar huye... Ek bade vahan me Adhmya aur uska parivar... 2 bich ke vahan me ye log, aur baki aage aur pichhe ke 19 vahan me Zoren ke, Dridh aayu rastr ke 20 hathiyarband sainik, har vahan me sawar ho gaye...


Bailoo ke hath aur paun me bediyan pahna'kar, sabse aage wale vahan ke bonnet se taang diya gaya tha... kafila aage badhne laga... Wakai vichitr si jagah thi ye... Har jagah viman ko kaat'kar ghar banaye gaye the... Koi prashasnik vyavastha nahi. Sadak kinare kayi tarah ke chhote-bade jaanvar apne gale me electric patta pahne mayus se the...


Takriban ek kilometer aaye honege... Tabhi Adhmya dahara... Adhmaya jaise hi dahara uske baad uska poora parivar hi daharne laga... Jivisha, Nischal, Nandni aur Ansh sabhi iss dahar me viyog aur gussa dono mehsus kar rahe the...
Dhanso jhakass maiend blowing update
 

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romanchak update ..to bailoo sachme bail hi niklaa jo shikariyo ko shikar banane chala tha 🤣🤣..
par ye biokono ko kisne thikane lagaya 🤔..
bailoo ko sabne achche se thappad pe thappad maare 🤣🤣..
aur ab ye adhmaya dard me chilla kyu raha hai 🤔.
kya inke jaise aur kaid hai yaha pe 🤔..

bailoo ka plan fail kaise kiya ye abhi bataya hi nahi 🤔..
 

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Matlab 1100 ando se izafi bache hoy good

Or haan poch k btana zaroor
Are ju ko nhi pata ki un ando kya hota hai..to jakar aap ek baar ishq risk part 1 pade ..usme saf taur pe likha hai ki vigo viman me omlet ki subidha hai ..to baki aap kudh samajhdar hai ki omlet kiske ande ka banta hai
 

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Update:- 83 & 84 Posted on page 597


चलिए इस कारवां को भी अपनी मंजिल दे दी जाए। कभी कभी जैसा सोचते है, उस अनुसार मेहनत करने के बावजूद भी, वैसे नतीजा नहीं आता, लेकिन हम भी जरा ढिट है... जबतक मन चाहा नतीजा नहीं आता कोशिश जारी रहेगी :cheers:

आपके फेवरेट किरदार एक बार फिर पागलपन करते नजर आएंगे... "दी गलैक्सियन:- डिमोलिशन ऑफ़ सर्किल" मे...

उम्मीद है आने वाले रविवार से लेकर मंगलवार के बीच यह कहानी समाप्त हो जाएगी। आप सब के सहयोग और साथ का आभार।

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