Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

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Inove ne service start karne se pahle, lagbhag kitne ghante ki service chahiye wo puchh liya… sabse pahle in logon ne 24 ghante ki service lete huye l lakh 20 hazar ka payment kiya...


Inova:- Haan kahiye sar pahle kya pasand karenge…


Nandni:- Yahan ka sabse jyada fun aur excitment kis chij me hai...


Inova:- Mere hisab se to har chij yahan ki exciting hi hoti hai, lekin iss waqt ek viman last line paar karne wala hai... Usse dekhna sabse jyada excitment hoga... Baad me shayad mauka fir kab mile kise pata...


Nandni:- Aisa kyon...


Inova:- Last line hum Hurriyent planet se 3000 km bache distance ko kahte hain… Yahan se lagbhag 2 din ke safar ke baad last line aata hai… 38 viman hai iss service station me aur abhi tak kisi ka confirm nahi hua hai ko wo Hurriyent planet ke ore kab niklenge... Isliye aisa kaha..


Sabhi ek sath... "Fir hum intzar kis baat ka kar rahe, chalo pahle Hurriyent planet ja rahe viman ko hi dekha jaye"…


Sabhi log ek bade se hall me pahunche jahan bada-bada screen laga hua tha... Hall me takriban 1000 sitting capacity thi... Wahan yahi koi 20-30 log baithe huye the…


Ye log bhi baith gaye... Sabhi screen par ek hi viman ke ander aur bahar ki tasveer aa rahi thi... Kuch settelite image the jo vikan ko space me aage badhte huye dikha rahe the... Kuchh Viman ke external aur internal camera ki image thi. Sabhi viman ko aage badhte huye har angel se dekh rahe the.


Hurriyent ke ore jane wali viman jaise hi Last line se aage badha, viman sanchalak screen par aa'kar apni baat kahne laga... "Hum log last line se 100km ander aa chuke hai"… fir apne control room me lage screen ke ore ishara karte... "Jaisa ki aap sab dekh pa rahe hai... Takriban 2900 km ki duri par Hurriyent planet dikh raha hai... Hum lagbhag 3 se char ghante ki duri par hai... Humara heat absorbing system kafi shandar hai... Milta hun kuchh der se"…


Tabhi wahan ke screen off ho gaya aur flash hone laga…. Betting for successful vs unsuccessfully mission complition.


Viman Hurriyent planet pahunch gaya, ispar paise lage to 1 coin ke 1000 coin milenge... Yadi Hurriyent nahi pahuncha, ispar 1 coin lagane par... 1.000001 coin milega…


Nandni aur Jivisha screen par batting rate dekhti…. "Lagta hai garib desh ka viman hai, heat ke karan bahut aage nahi ja payega aur lagta hai bich me hi laut aayega, isliye kisi ko inpar yakin nahi...


Ansh:- Itne to coin hai… 1000 coin laga dete hain mission successful par...


Ansh gaya aur 1000 coin mission successful par laga'kar chala aaya... Tabhi screen par fir se viman flash hone laga... Niche distance bhi likha hua tha... 2800 km ahead... 2700, 2600… Ek screen par viman ke ander ka scene aa raha tha... Jahan sabhi machine ko sahi kaam karte dikhaya ja raha tha.…


Distance 2000 km ahead. Inova un logon ke pass pahunchti, ab excitment shuru hoga screen se hatiyega nahi... distance 1900 km.. Viman ka external body heat me tap'kar poora laal ho chuka tha... Nischal apni jagah se khada hua.… "O bewakoof laut aa.... Heat ke karan power source (fuel aur jo bhi source ho viman chalne ka) blast ho jayegi. Ek chingari raakh bana dega... Lauto bewakoof"…


Nischal usse lautne ke liye chilla raha tha, aur udhar wo commander jaam lahrate... "Bahar ka temperature 20 thousand celsius hai... Waise iss se jayada temprature humare device read nahi kar sakta. Haan lekin ander ka normal room temperature par hai.. 23⁰.


Jaise hi diatnace 1700 km par aaya... Sabhi ki aankhen badi ho gayi... Visman ke ander ki sari screen band... Bahar settelite ki image me jo dikha... Kisi ek jagah chhota sa damaka, aur shiyannn se aag uss chhoti si jagah se faila'kar second bhar me poore viman ko apne chapet me le lee. Anth me kewal dhuvan hi najar aaya... Kuchh bacha hi nahi...


Maun, bilkul shant khade sab ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the… Teeno Nischal ke ore dekhte sawaliya najron se... "Kya ab bhi wahi karenge"…


Nischal:- Haan risk to hai, lekin jahan 10 layer par kaam karte wahan 20 layer ke sath jsyenge. Nilbhut team sath hogi kyonki heat absorbing hum sab me kamal ki hai... Tum sab yahin rahoge...


Jivisha:- Lekin Nischal...


Nischal, apna hath aage badhate.… "1% bhi chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai... Yadi mil'kar kaam karenge to Hurriyent jana earth par jane jitna aasaan hoga"…


Jivisha hath badha'kar Nischal ka hath thamti, main sath hun... Nandni dono ka haath chhuda'kar, Nischal ke gale lagti… "Jyada hero ban'ne ki jaroorat na hai... 20 nahi 30 layer ke sath jayega aur yahan se jaise hi hum wapas aane kahen bina koi sawal kiye laut aayega"…


Nischal, Nandni ko khud se alag kar'ke uska chehra saaf kiya... "Jaisa aap kahiye boss"…


Ansh:- To fir 24 ghantey ki service ko istamal kiya jaye...


Nischal:- Bilkul doctor sahab..


Sabhi kaam par lage. Nischal, Inova ko bulaya aur usse kahne laga... "Hum full service access karenge, aur hum par koi servilence nahi chahiye"…


Inova:- Sir, base ke chief aap ke sath dinner karna chahte hain... Yadi aap allowed kare to...


Jivisha:- Hume pahle ek bada sa hall do... Bada hall matlab iss hall jaisa hi bada jahan 1000 logon ki capacity hai... Aur tumhare chief ko milna hai to wo be-jhijhak uss hall me aa sakte hai... Basarte humare kaam me badha na bane aur baat karne ki maryada ko bhang na kare...


Inova:- Aap yahi hall le lijiye. Yahan humari poori team hai help ke liye... Main jab'tak aapki baat, yahan ke chief tak pahuncha dun..


Nischal:- Aur haan, jakar sharab ka full kota le aana...


15 minute ke casual chit-chat ke baad sab kaam me lag gaye... Roffa space station ke staff ko battiyan lagane bola gaya. Idhar Nischal ne poori technology team ko turan kuchh sandesh bheja aur wo hall me aa'kar sab set up karne lage...


20 hazar Zoren niwasi me se 18000 trained soldier the... 9000 Nilbhut samuday aur 9000 Dridh aayu rastr ke... Sabhi ko bula'kar aaram se unka kaam samjha diya gaya…


Sabko kaam samjhane ke baad, Dragon babies aur Adhmya family ko Roffa Space Staion aane ke liye kaha gaya... Jaise hi Dragon babies aur Adhmya family ko Roffa walon ne dekha... Sab hairani se unhe dekhte huye khud se hi sawal karne lage... "Itne bade viman me crew member ko le'kar ghumne ke badle in faltu janvaron ke sath kya hasil karne nikle hai ye log. Hum hote to kam se kam 2 lakh crew member hota"…


Khair unki baten na to Nischal ya kisi aur ne suni, aur na hi unki in baton se koi fark parne wala tha... Abhi to Roffa Sapace Station walon ko eklauti hairani hui thi, aage aur aani baki hi thi...


2 hisson me kayi Bhattiyan taiyar kiye gaye the. Bade-bade vahan, Viggo viman se nikal'kar Space station ke bhatti tak pahunch rahe the.. Ek ore to pata chal raha tha ki metel ko gala'kar, usse 1 fit mota aur 2 meter² ka sheet taiyar kar rahe the...


Lekin dusri bhatti me kya ho raha tha kisi ko pata nahi... Wahan se kewal aur kewal upar raakh nikal rahi thi aur un raakh ko bhi bahar se smet liya jata... Uss bhatti se jo niklalta, wo bhi koi dekh nahi pa rahe the...


Jivisha technical team ke sath baithkar space station se Viggo viman me contact karne ki kshmta ko durust karne me lagi hui thi... Haan lekin Adhmya ke ek natkhat beta Mohan aur dragon baby Bitti ke bich tikhi nok jhonk aur marpit ne sabko pareshan kar rakha tha… Jivisha hansti hui kah bhi dee... Ye mohan nahi Nischal hai aur wo Bitti nahi Nandni hai...


24 ghantey ki service poori hone ke baad Jivisha ne uss hall ke alawa 10 aur hall rent par lee... Ab manual service aur per day charge hi pay karna tha... Haan lekin itne sare logon ke rahne ke liye Jivisha se 2 lakh coin har din ki wasooli ho rahi thi. Roffa Space center par, 46 ghante me inka kafila taiyar ho chuka Hurriyent jane ke liye...


Nischal lagbhag Viggo viman khali kar chuka tha… Ander ke sabhi plane, apna 20 kilometer wala wo jalashay, food, har wo chij jo Viggo viman me jagah gher rahi thi usse bahar nikal diya gaya... Lagbhag 8000 section ko hi nikal liya gaya tha taki Huriyent se jyada se jyada metel laya ja sake...


Viggo viman ke saman ka sanrakhan aur uske rakh rakhav ke liye, 5lakh coin har din ke hisab se liya ja raha tha… jiski bharpai un metal scrape se ki gayi jo Lofa planet se utayi gayi thi... Bhatti me lagbhag aadha scrape istamaal ho chuka tha aur bacha hua scrape lagbhag in logon ne 40 lakh coin me bechi thi.


Khair Roffa space station par sab settel karne ke baad, Nischal 8000 Nilbhut sainikon ke sath vida le hi raha tha, tabhi Bitti aur Gopal ki toli Nischal ke sath jane ki jid karne lagi…


Isbaar jab Jivisha ne usse danntan tab dono ulta Jivisha par chillate huye, poore haal me hi fuu.. fuuu kar'ke aag ka spray maarne lage...


Jivisha:- Kya hai Gopal, Bitti... Tum dono aise kyon kar rahe…


Gopal:- Hume jane do... Bus


Jivisha:- Lekin kyon...


Gopal:- Hum bhi universe tevellers hain... Aap jati to hum jate na... Maa tum kisi karan se nahi ja rahi isliye hum nahi ja pa rahe...


Bitti:- Haan pali baar Bitti sahi kah rahi hai. Tum sab extrem heat nahi jhel sakte, isliye nahi ja rahe... Par maa hum to jhel sakte hain… swarth hai ye... hume bhi baba ke sath jana hai...


Jivisha inki jid par apna sar pakad lee. Wahan Ansh aur Nandni Jivisha ke karib baith'kar usse samjhane lage… Sabhi aag ugalne wale, karib 800 dragon niche baith'kar, Jivisha ko tukur-tukur dekh rahe the.....


Jivisha, gusse se Bitti aur Gopal ko dekhti.… "Tum dono laut'kar aao fir main batati hun... Bitti, Gopal ek baar bhi jhagra nahi hona chahiye… Nischal ko uss jahah koi nayi musibat nahi dena... Nokha (Ek Nilbhut samuday ka sainik)… Apne 500 logon ke sath tum bhi jao, aur mere bacchon ka khyal rakhna... Sabhi nautankiyon kaan khol kar sun lo, tum log ek sipahi ki tarah jaoge aur Nokha tumhara commander hoga"...


"Aiene me muh dekha hai kya"…. Bhid se ek dragon baby ne bol diya... Jivisha Bitti aur Gopal ko ek baar aur ghurti... "Dono apni apni toli ko sambhaloge aur Nokha ki har baat maan'ni hogi"…


Jivisha thoda chintit thi lekin thode sukoon me bhi thi… Ye bacche honge to Nischal jaldi lautega… Nischal sab se vida le'kar udd chala aur uske jate hi yahan sabhi log screen par lag gaye. Jivisha ne 3 logon ko darwaje par khada kar diya tha, aur unhe shakt hidayat mili thi ki koi bhi bahar ka aadmi, kisi bhi paristithi me iss hall me na aaye... Koi jabardasti karne ki kosis kare to turant suchna de. Wahi hidayat 2000 sainikon ko bhi mili thi jo Viggo viman se alag huye saman ki dekhbhal kar rahe the… "kisi bhi condition me koi bahar ka aadmi kisi bhi chij ko hath na lagaye, yadi koi jabardasti kare to turant suchna di jaye"…



Surakhit hall me poori tecnical expert ki team thi. Ussi hall me Jivisha ne sabhi Dragon babies ko rakha tha. Inke alawa Nandni aur Ansh, sath hi sath Adhmya family bhi wahin thi. Uss hall me technology ka poora jaal bichh chuka tha, jahan se na sirf Viggo viman se smpark kiya ja sakta tha, balki poore Roffa space station ki technology ko bhi command diya ja sakta tha. 6 high class Settelite viman Nischal ke uddan bharne se ek din pahle hi Last Line ki seema tak bhej diya gaya tha.


Roffa Space station wale bhi apne settelite ko poora positin kar chuke the… jate waqt Nischal se apni frequency sajha kar gaye... Yadi unka mood bane to apne viman ke sare camera unke server se connect kar de...


Jivisha ek poora din hall me hi baithi rahi. Viggo viman aaj apni samnya gati se aadhi gati me chal rahi thi. Halanki dusre vimano ki apeksha fir bhi yah gati kafi tej thi jo Last Line ko lagbhag 38 ghante me touch karti...

 

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Nischal apne viman ke kuchh crew members ko, Vaiman ke alag-alag hisson ke secondry control panel me bhej'kar, khud Mukhya control pannel me tha... "Computer Ji Settelite image clear kijiye Hurriyent palnet se 2000 kilometer ke bich ki"…


Settelite sabhi abhi postion par nahi thi... Moving settilete se utni dur ki image postion nahi ho pa rahi thi… udhar se nirdesh aaye ki lagbhag 8 ghantey aur lagenge settelite viman ko pisition karne me... Roffa se le'kar Viggo me baitha har insan se le'kar pashu pakchhi tak thode tension me the... Waqt ki ke sath-sath Nischal bhi aage badh raha tha... Aur ab waqt aa chuka tha, uss Last Line ko cross karne ka, jahan se bhay ki seama shuru hoti...


Nischal sabhi crew ko active karte... "Boys poora system on kar'ke, Last Line ke bahar hum ek trail lenge aur uske baad Last Line cross karenge... Sabhi ready….. Sabhi secondry control panel se "ok" ka reply aaya aur Nischal ne command dena shuru kiya...


200km me faila hexagonal viman, jiski rachna lagbhag ek star ki tarah thi… iski motai matlab niche satah se le'kar upar roof ki jo unchai thi, wo takriban 12km kilometer ki thi...


200 kilometer me faile hexgonal viman me, aage se 16 km uncha teer ke nok ka shape tha. Ye viman ke kul unchai se 4 kilometer jyada uncha rakha gaya tha, taki samne se yadi ko ulka se bhada rasta ho to bich ki body surakhit rahe .. Teer ke ek shape ke khatm hone ke baad ussi se lage dusra shape shuru ho jata... aur iss tarah se aage ka pura hexagonal dhancha bana...


Nischal ne jaise hi command diya poora viman re suffle hua... Viman karwat le'kar takriban 4 minute me khada ho gaya.… Ab shape kuchh aisi thi ki pade huye star ko khada kar diya gaya ho...


Star shape ko agar dhyan se dekhen to aisa lagta hai mano kisi circle ke edge par charo ore se triangle shape ko rakh diya gaya hai… Nischal poore aaklan aur viman ko uss bhishan heat se bachane ke liye poore pukhta intzam ke sath nikla tha...


Viman ke aage chhote se triangle shape ke bich me, banti poore circular body ko poora 2 complete sheet se cover kiya gaya tha.. Aur jo aage ki vayvastha thi, wo aur bhi jyada kamal ki thi….


Hexagonal shape jisme 6 points the.. Isse aage se nikla 6 triangle shape bhi maan sakte hain, jo dekhne par bilkul nukile teer ki bhanti dikhta hai... Yun samjhiye ki ek cricke ke upar 6 teer ko sabhi ore se banaya gaya tha... Nischal ne un sabhi teer ke shape ke upar ek ke baad ek 30 teer ko laga diye jo complete sheet ke bane the... Taki ek-ek karke sabhi aage ke capping wale teer jabtak jale, tabtak ye log Hurriyent planet pahunch jaye...


To Nischal ne Bhisham aag se bachne ke liye teer ke shape par aage se 30 complete sheet ka cap chadha diya tha... Aur ye sabi 6 tikono ke liye kiya gaya tha... Uske alawa jo 2 triangle ke upri hisse ka gape ban raha tha, usse ulta triangle space kahna galat nahi hoga...


Yadi star ke shape ko dhyan se dekhenge to pata chalega ki 2 nukile point ke bich me jo khali space hai... Wo bhi khali space triangle jaisa hi hai... Bus wo ulta triangle hai… Aur Nischal ne 2 triangle ke bich ke space ko ek ulte triangle se fill kar diya tha, aur ye khali space bhi 30 complete sheet metal se bhada hua tha...


Ek complete metel sheet ko inlogon ne taiyar kaise kiya tha, wahi sabse jyada rochak tha… 2 meter² ki chhoti-chhoti metal sheet tayar ki gayi thi, jo 1 fit mota tha... Uske alawa jo dusri bhatti me jala, wo thi haddiyan. Wo haddiyan jo poori tarah jalne ke baad bhatti me bacha, ya jo dhuan ban'kar raakh chimni se nikla aur floor par dhul ke saman aakar jamta gaya, usse samet liya gaya tha... Jise kisi bhi tapman par dobara jalaya nahi ja sakta. Yadi un raakh ki 1 inch ki bhi deewar bana de, to aage ka tapman jo bhi rahe wo pichhe pass nahi ho sakta tha.. aur unhi raakh ke bhandar ko ye log bsttiyon se samet liye..


1 fit mote aur 2 meter² ke metel sheet ke upar, hard chipkane wala padarth laga'kar raakh chipkaya gaya... Ek metel ke shit par, layer by layer karke takriban 4 inch ka raakh chipkaya gaya... Aur 2 meter² ke 10 metel sheet ko nut-volt se tight karke 1 complete metel sheet ka nirman kiya gaya tha... Chunki Nilbhut wale kisi bhi surface ke aar, paar ho sakte the, isliye 90000 log, plus poori technical team milkar ye sara kaam Viman ke roof par hi kar rahe the...


2 metel sheet se viman ke bich ki body ko cover kiya gaya tha… Star ki tarah dikhne wale Viggo viman ko khada bhi isliye kiya gaya tha, taki body par heat ka imapact na pade, balki sara head aage ke ore hi rahe jahan 30 layer complete metel sheet chadhaya gaya tha. Sath hi sath 2 triangle ke bich ke space ko bhi cover kar dene se, ab aage se viman complete round shape le chuka tha...


Chunki Viggo viman ki sanrachna part by part ko jod'kar hui thi, aur iske charo ore ki deewar 20 fit ke layer se bana tha. Uss 20 fit layer ke ander itne moving channels the ki kisi bhi section ko move kiya ja sakta tha... Jaise hi Viggo viman ko khada kiya gaya, wo kisi bade tire ki bhanti dikhne laga tha...


Tire ke saman sanrachna wale Viggo viman ke aage ka 500 miter ka hissa, seperately kafi tej gati se gol-gol ghumta, taki heat ka asar distribute hota rahe.


Nischal sari testing ke baad kafi relax sa mehsus karne laga… Viggo viman ki gati ko kuchh kam kar'ke auto pilot mode par dal diya aur hall me aa'kar wo Bitti aur Gopal ke bade se gang ki baten sunn'ne laga.... Bahut hi jyada pyare the ye log...


Nischal ne Bitti ko Jivisha aur baki sabse contact karne ka charge de'kar, Bitti se kah diya ki wahan apni maa ko bol dene "relax kare aur maze kare... Sabhi testing safal raha hai... Jaldi se kaam khatam kar'ke milte hain"...


Bitti apne aaram se pankh faila'kar chair par baithi... Wo to aur bhi kamal ki nikli... Apne pankh ke nichle kinare se bhi wo key-board par khitir-pitir kar sakti thi... Bitti ne sabse turant sampark kiya... "Kaisi ho maa, ye chehre ki hawaeyan kyon udi hai... Hi massi... Hello mausa ji"…


Jivisha:- To contact karne ki jimmedari humari Bitti ko mili hai.…


Bitti:- Maa, Maasi, aur mausa ji... Aap teeno relax karo, kyonki yahan sab parikashan safal raha hai... Baba aap sab se kaam khatm karne ke baad aaram se milenge... Right baby..


Jivisha hansti hui... "Yes my sweeto, tum sab apne baba ko pareshan to nahi kar rahe"…


Bitti:- Ohkey bye...


Jivisha:- Areee kya hua…


Bitti:- Faltu ki sawal puchhogi to yahi aayega...


Jivisha:- Haan thik hai nahi puchhti…


Sabhi baith'kar gappe ladane lage... Inki baten thi ki khatm hi nahi ho rahi thi... Tabhi Jivisha ke hall me ek sandesh aaya... Usse Roffa Space Center ke Chief ki party me aane ka nimantran mila tha...


Jivisha line disconnect karti… "Hmmmm, thik hai, dekh lete hain yahan ke chief ki bhi party… kya kahti hai Nandu…


Nandni:- Haan haan kyon nahi...


Sahamti bani aur teeno party ke liye taiyar hone lage… 37 ghante bit chuke the aur jis hisab se Viggo viman ki gati thi, lagbhag ek ghante aur kuchh minton me Last Line tak pahunch jate, jahan se viggo viman apni poorn kshmta me aage badhta aur takriban 1 ghante me wo 3000 km ka safar tay karta…


Choonk hone ki koi gunjaish nahi thi, isliye Nischal viman ko slow kar chuka tha taki ek baar aur achhe se wo sab kuchh check kar sake ..


Nischal bacchon ke sath baith'kar takribam 45 minute bitane ke baad, viman ki gati lagbhag 5km/hr kar chuka tha... Hall me hi meeting hui, jahan Nilbhut samuday ke logon ko aadesh mila ki jaise hi Hurriyent planet par viman land hoga, poori viman hi bhumigat ho jani chahiye… Khair viman bhumigat ke liye Nilbhut samuday ke sainikon ne haan to kah diya tha, lekin viman ke regular shape aur khade tire wali position me kya fark tha, wo ander baith'kar koi samajh nahi paya tha….


Nischal ke kahte hi Viggo viman ko bhumigat karne ke liye, Nilbhut sainik viman ke alag-alag hisson me postion le chuke the... Kaam thoda muskil tha, lekin utni hi safai ke sath teji se karna tha... 500 Nilbhut sainik jo dragon babies ke liye extra aaye the... Unhone bacchon ko apne bich samet rakha tha... Ek baar sab kuchh set hone ke baad viman ne ab dhire-dhire gati badhana shuru kiya...


Idhar nimantran milte hi, Roffo space station ke chief ki party me Jivisha, Nandni aur Ansh ne shirkat kar rahe the... Teeno jaise hi wahan pahunche, chief unke pass baithne ka aamatarn dete.… "Jivisha, tumhe kya lagta hai... Kitni dur jane ke baad tumhara ye bada sa viman jalega"…


Jivisha:- Itna vishawas kaise...


Chief:- Itihaas me ek hi viman hai jo ab tak Hurriyent planet tak pahunchi thi, wo bhi bus kuch der ruke, thodi si dhatu samet'kar nikal gaye... Yahan har dusre din ek viman Hurriyent ke ore nikalta hai. Kabhi kabhi to 3-4 viman Hurriyent ke liye ek sath nikalte aur unme me ek bhi laut'kar nahi aaya... Kayi aise viman hai jo Hurriyent planet tak bhi pahunche bus sirf hume itna hi pata hai. Aage wahan unke sath kya hua ye batane ke liye koi lauta hi nahi...


Nandni:- bhav kya hai aaj ka wo to batao....


Chief:- Mission successful hone par, 1 sikke ke 5000 sikke... kyonki ye viman to last line ke thik pichhe hi khada ho gaya... Lagta hai aage jaye ki na jaye ussi soch me doobe hain... Achha hi hoga wapas laut aaye to.… Insan to roj hi marte hain, lekin tumhara viman, wo poore Universe me apne jaisa eklauta hoga... Kayi sare viman dekhe hain lekin aaj tak uss jaisa viman nahi dekha...


Nandni:- Koi baat nahi tum to humare 10 lakh coin abhi laga do mission successful par…


Chief:- Tunhare pass yahan rukne ke liye mere khyal se 6 din se jyada ke coin nahi bache hai... Usme se bhi 10 lakh sikka laga rahi...


Jivisha:- 10 lakh main bhi laga deti hun mission successful par...


Chief:- Haar gaye to bahut hi jayada afsos hoga.… Soch lo...


Ansh:- Total hum teeno ka mila'kar 50 lakh coin laga do...


Chief:- 50 lakh coin dene ke baad to tumhare kal ke baad ke liye bhi coin nahi bachenge... aur iss betting ka result to Hurriyent se lautne ke baad hi declare hoga... So yahan rukne ke minimum 2 din ke paise to hone hi chahiye...


Nandni:- Wo to hum coin exchange kar lenge...


Chief:- Wo kaise.…


Ansh:- Machhliyan bech'kar


Chief:- Mazak to nahi kar rahi... Main bahut jyada kimat dunga to 1 piece machhli ka 10 coin dunga...


Ansh:- Main kam se kam 10 hazar coin lunga 1 piece ka...


Chief:- Rakh lo apne pass...


Nandni:- Yahan 200 guest lag rahe hain iss hall me... Aaj 800 fish jayegi... 20 hazark piece shayad abhi jyada lag raha hoga... Lekin kewal nar aur nar lene se kaun wo char din me 20 hazar machhli se 1 lakh honge, isliye ab kimat badh gayi... 40000 coin 1 piece ke...


Chief:- Ye humare sath cheating hui hai... Aur kisi ke ghar me ghus'kar usse hi cheat karna mahnga par sakta hai...


Jivisha:- 20 hazar piece bola gaya tha hume... Na ki usme nar kitne honge ya mada... Hume dhamkao mat... Ab to kimat hogi 1 lakh coin 1 piece ki aur kam se kam 10 hazar piece leni hogi...


Chief chillaya "guards"... Aur agle hi pal uss hall me sabhi dragon babies katar me khade ho gaye. Upar dragon babies ki katar, niche 12 dus futiya sher ke bachhe line lagaye aur unke pichhe 20 futiya Sher aur Sherni Adhmya aur Admee samne se sabko ghurti hui khadi thi...

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Hahahah... Kya baat hai itni jyada prashansa... Waise main bata dun ki fantasy likhne ke liye maine bahut mehnat ki hai...

Iss se pahle main 1 hi kahani 2 baar shuru ki thi... Cap jack sparrow.. the tragic comedy in deep blue sea...

Jab tak fantasy part nahi aaya tha uske comedy se sab lot pot ho gaye the... Lekin jab adventure journey aur rashaya ko solve karne nikle to main wo moment banane me asmarth ho gaya tha...

Mujhe pata nahi chalta ki main sabdon ke madhyam se kaise bata dun ki in raston par aisa jaal bicha hai... Mere momery me thi ki rasta aisa hoga par panne par jab likhta to boaring lagta...

Treasure hunt journey ek likhne ki ikchha hai... Bus ho nahi pa raha... Main kayi baar kosis kiya lekin fail ho gaya.... Aur wahin se fail hote hote main aise ajibo garib crrature nirman karta tha... Jo treasure hunt ke dauran badha banege... Wahan to kaam aaya nahi sooo yahin istamal ho raha.....

Thanks a lot for your beautiful words.... Aise hi hausla buland karte rahen

मैं किसी की झुठी प्रशंसा नहीं करता नैन भाई ! हां , रेभो जब भी लिखता हूं तो भरसक प्रयास करता हूं कि कोई राइटर्स हर्ट न हो जाए ।
इसमें कोई संदेह नहीं है कि आप का फैंटेसी लिखने में कोई जवाब नहीं है ।
जैसे ज्ञानी भाई को रोमांटिक स्टोरी लिखने में , हर्षित भाई को थ्रीलर स्टोरी लिखने में उसी तरह आपका फैंटेसी स्टोरी लिखने में ।
और ये सब गाॅड गिफ्टेड होता है ।

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-83 ​

Inove ne service start karne se pahle, lagbhag kitne ghante ki service chahiye wo puchh liya… sabse pahle in logon ne 24 ghante ki service lete huye l lakh 20 hazar ka payment kiya...


Inova:- Haan kahiye sar pahle kya pasand karenge…


Nandni:- Yahan ka sabse jyada fun aur excitment kis chij me hai...


Inova:- Mere hisab se to har chij yahan ki exciting hi hoti hai, lekin iss waqt ek viman last line paar karne wala hai... Usse dekhna sabse jyada excitment hoga... Baad me shayad mauka fir kab mile kise pata...


Nandni:- Aisa kyon...


Inova:- Last line hum Hurriyent planet se 3000 km bache distance ko kahte hain… Yahan se lagbhag 2 din ke safar ke baad last line aata hai… 38 viman hai iss service station me aur abhi tak kisi ka confirm nahi hua hai ko wo Hurriyent planet ke ore kab niklenge... Isliye aisa kaha..


Sabhi ek sath... "Fir hum intzar kis baat ka kar rahe, chalo pahle Hurriyent planet ja rahe viman ko hi dekha jaye"…


Sabhi log ek bade se hall me pahunche jahan bada-bada screen laga hua tha... Hall me takriban 1000 sitting capacity thi... Wahan yahi koi 20-30 log baithe huye the…


Ye log bhi baith gaye... Sabhi screen par ek hi viman ke ander aur bahar ki tasveer aa rahi thi... Kuch settelite image the jo vikan ko space me aage badhte huye dikha rahe the... Kuchh Viman ke external aur internal camera ki image thi. Sabhi viman ko aage badhte huye har angel se dekh rahe the.


Hurriyent ke ore jane wali viman jaise hi Last line se aage badha, viman sanchalak screen par aa'kar apni baat kahne laga... "Hum log last line se 100km ander aa chuke hai"… fir apne control room me lage screen ke ore ishara karte... "Jaisa ki aap sab dekh pa rahe hai... Takriban 2900 km ki duri par Hurriyent planet dikh raha hai... Hum lagbhag 3 se char ghante ki duri par hai... Humara heat absorbing system kafi shandar hai... Milta hun kuchh der se"…


Tabhi wahan ke screen off ho gaya aur flash hone laga…. Betting for successful vs unsuccessfully mission complition.


Viman Hurriyent planet pahunch gaya, ispar paise lage to 1 coin ke 1000 coin milenge... Yadi Hurriyent nahi pahuncha, ispar 1 coin lagane par... 1.000001 coin milega…


Nandni aur Jivisha screen par batting rate dekhti…. "Lagta hai garib desh ka viman hai, heat ke karan bahut aage nahi ja payega aur lagta hai bich me hi laut aayega, isliye kisi ko inpar yakin nahi...


Ansh:- Itne to coin hai… 1000 coin laga dete hain mission successful par...


Ansh gaya aur 1000 coin mission successful par laga'kar chala aaya... Tabhi screen par fir se viman flash hone laga... Niche distance bhi likha hua tha... 2800 km ahead... 2700, 2600… Ek screen par viman ke ander ka scene aa raha tha... Jahan sabhi machine ko sahi kaam karte dikhaya ja raha tha.…


Distance 2000 km ahead. Inova un logon ke pass pahunchti, ab excitment shuru hoga screen se hatiyega nahi... distance 1900 km.. Viman ka external body heat me tap'kar poora laal ho chuka tha... Nischal apni jagah se khada hua.… "O bewakoof laut aa.... Heat ke karan power source (fuel aur jo bhi source ho viman chalne ka) blast ho jayegi. Ek chingari raakh bana dega... Lauto bewakoof"…


Nischal usse lautne ke liye chilla raha tha, aur udhar wo commander jaam lahrate... "Bahar ka temperature 20 thousand celsius hai... Waise iss se jayada temprature humare device read nahi kar sakta. Haan lekin ander ka normal room temperature par hai.. 23⁰.


Jaise hi diatnace 1700 km par aaya... Sabhi ki aankhen badi ho gayi... Visman ke ander ki sari screen band... Bahar settelite ki image me jo dikha... Kisi ek jagah chhota sa damaka, aur shiyannn se aag uss chhoti si jagah se faila'kar second bhar me poore viman ko apne chapet me le lee. Anth me kewal dhuvan hi najar aaya... Kuchh bacha hi nahi...


Maun, bilkul shant khade sab ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the… Teeno Nischal ke ore dekhte sawaliya najron se... "Kya ab bhi wahi karenge"…


Nischal:- Haan risk to hai, lekin jahan 10 layer par kaam karte wahan 20 layer ke sath jsyenge. Nilbhut team sath hogi kyonki heat absorbing hum sab me kamal ki hai... Tum sab yahin rahoge...


Jivisha:- Lekin Nischal...


Nischal, apna hath aage badhate.… "1% bhi chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai... Yadi mil'kar kaam karenge to Hurriyent jana earth par jane jitna aasaan hoga"…


Jivisha hath badha'kar Nischal ka hath thamti, main sath hun... Nandni dono ka haath chhuda'kar, Nischal ke gale lagti… "Jyada hero ban'ne ki jaroorat na hai... 20 nahi 30 layer ke sath jayega aur yahan se jaise hi hum wapas aane kahen bina koi sawal kiye laut aayega"…


Nischal, Nandni ko khud se alag kar'ke uska chehra saaf kiya... "Jaisa aap kahiye boss"…


Ansh:- To fir 24 ghantey ki service ko istamal kiya jaye...


Nischal:- Bilkul doctor sahab..


Sabhi kaam par lage. Nischal, Inova ko bulaya aur usse kahne laga... "Hum full service access karenge, aur hum par koi servilence nahi chahiye"…


Inova:- Sir, base ke chief aap ke sath dinner karna chahte hain... Yadi aap allowed kare to...


Jivisha:- Hume pahle ek bada sa hall do... Bada hall matlab iss hall jaisa hi bada jahan 1000 logon ki capacity hai... Aur tumhare chief ko milna hai to wo be-jhijhak uss hall me aa sakte hai... Basarte humare kaam me badha na bane aur baat karne ki maryada ko bhang na kare...


Inova:- Aap yahi hall le lijiye. Yahan humari poori team hai help ke liye... Main jab'tak aapki baat, yahan ke chief tak pahuncha dun..


Nischal:- Aur haan, jakar sharab ka full kota le aana...


15 minute ke casual chit-chat ke baad sab kaam me lag gaye... Roffa space station ke staff ko battiyan lagane bola gaya. Idhar Nischal ne poori technology team ko turan kuchh sandesh bheja aur wo hall me aa'kar sab set up karne lage...


20 hazar Zoren niwasi me se 18000 trained soldier the... 9000 Nilbhut samuday aur 9000 Dridh aayu rastr ke... Sabhi ko bula'kar aaram se unka kaam samjha diya gaya…


Sabko kaam samjhane ke baad, Dragon babies aur Adhmya family ko Roffa Space Staion aane ke liye kaha gaya... Jaise hi Dragon babies aur Adhmya family ko Roffa walon ne dekha... Sab hairani se unhe dekhte huye khud se hi sawal karne lage... "Itne bade viman me crew member ko le'kar ghumne ke badle in faltu janvaron ke sath kya hasil karne nikle hai ye log. Hum hote to kam se kam 2 lakh crew member hota"…


Khair unki baten na to Nischal ya kisi aur ne suni, aur na hi unki in baton se koi fark parne wala tha... Abhi to Roffa Sapace Station walon ko eklauti hairani hui thi, aage aur aani baki hi thi...


2 hisson me kayi Bhattiyan taiyar kiye gaye the. Bade-bade vahan, Viggo viman se nikal'kar Space station ke bhatti tak pahunch rahe the.. Ek ore to pata chal raha tha ki metel ko gala'kar, usse 1 fit mota aur 2 meter² ka sheet taiyar kar rahe the...


Lekin dusri bhatti me kya ho raha tha kisi ko pata nahi... Wahan se kewal aur kewal upar raakh nikal rahi thi aur un raakh ko bhi bahar se smet liya jata... Uss bhatti se jo niklalta, wo bhi koi dekh nahi pa rahe the...


Jivisha technical team ke sath baithkar space station se Viggo viman me contact karne ki kshmta ko durust karne me lagi hui thi... Haan lekin Adhmya ke ek natkhat beta Mohan aur dragon baby Bitti ke bich tikhi nok jhonk aur marpit ne sabko pareshan kar rakha tha… Jivisha hansti hui kah bhi dee... Ye mohan nahi Nischal hai aur wo Bitti nahi Nandni hai...


24 ghantey ki service poori hone ke baad Jivisha ne uss hall ke alawa 10 aur hall rent par lee... Ab manual service aur per day charge hi pay karna tha... Haan lekin itne sare logon ke rahne ke liye Jivisha se 2 lakh coin har din ki wasooli ho rahi thi. Roffa Space center par, 46 ghante me inka kafila taiyar ho chuka Hurriyent jane ke liye...


Nischal lagbhag Viggo viman khali kar chuka tha… Ander ke sabhi plane, apna 20 kilometer wala wo jalashay, food, har wo chij jo Viggo viman me jagah gher rahi thi usse bahar nikal diya gaya... Lagbhag 8000 section ko hi nikal liya gaya tha taki Huriyent se jyada se jyada metel laya ja sake...


Viggo viman ke saman ka sanrakhan aur uske rakh rakhav ke liye, 5lakh coin har din ke hisab se liya ja raha tha… jiski bharpai un metal scrape se ki gayi jo Lofa planet se utayi gayi thi... Bhatti me lagbhag aadha scrape istamaal ho chuka tha aur bacha hua scrape lagbhag in logon ne 40 lakh coin me bechi thi.


Khair Roffa space station par sab settel karne ke baad, Nischal 8000 Nilbhut sainikon ke sath vida le hi raha tha, tabhi Bitti aur Gopal ki toli Nischal ke sath jane ki jid karne lagi…


Isbaar jab Jivisha ne usse danntan tab dono ulta Jivisha par chillate huye, poore haal me hi fuu.. fuuu kar'ke aag ka spray maarne lage...


Jivisha:- Kya hai Gopal, Bitti... Tum dono aise kyon kar rahe…


Gopal:- Hume jane do... Bus


Jivisha:- Lekin kyon...


Gopal:- Hum bhi universe tevellers hain... Aap jati to hum jate na... Maa tum kisi karan se nahi ja rahi isliye hum nahi ja pa rahe...


Bitti:- Haan pali baar Bitti sahi kah rahi hai. Tum sab extrem heat nahi jhel sakte, isliye nahi ja rahe... Par maa hum to jhel sakte hain… swarth hai ye... hume bhi baba ke sath jana hai...


Jivisha inki jid par apna sar pakad lee. Wahan Ansh aur Nandni Jivisha ke karib baith'kar usse samjhane lage… Sabhi aag ugalne wale, karib 800 dragon niche baith'kar, Jivisha ko tukur-tukur dekh rahe the.....


Jivisha, gusse se Bitti aur Gopal ko dekhti.… "Tum dono laut'kar aao fir main batati hun... Bitti, Gopal ek baar bhi jhagra nahi hona chahiye… Nischal ko uss jahah koi nayi musibat nahi dena... Nokha (Ek Nilbhut samuday ka sainik)… Apne 500 logon ke sath tum bhi jao, aur mere bacchon ka khyal rakhna... Sabhi nautankiyon kaan khol kar sun lo, tum log ek sipahi ki tarah jaoge aur Nokha tumhara commander hoga"...


"Aiene me muh dekha hai kya"…. Bhid se ek dragon baby ne bol diya... Jivisha Bitti aur Gopal ko ek baar aur ghurti... "Dono apni apni toli ko sambhaloge aur Nokha ki har baat maan'ni hogi"…


Jivisha thoda chintit thi lekin thode sukoon me bhi thi… Ye bacche honge to Nischal jaldi lautega… Nischal sab se vida le'kar udd chala aur uske jate hi yahan sabhi log screen par lag gaye. Jivisha ne 3 logon ko darwaje par khada kar diya tha, aur unhe shakt hidayat mili thi ki koi bhi bahar ka aadmi, kisi bhi paristithi me iss hall me na aaye... Koi jabardasti karne ki kosis kare to turant suchna de. Wahi hidayat 2000 sainikon ko bhi mili thi jo Viggo viman se alag huye saman ki dekhbhal kar rahe the… "kisi bhi condition me koi bahar ka aadmi kisi bhi chij ko hath na lagaye, yadi koi jabardasti kare to turant suchna di jaye"…



Surakhit hall me poori tecnical expert ki team thi. Ussi hall me Jivisha ne sabhi Dragon babies ko rakha tha. Inke alawa Nandni aur Ansh, sath hi sath Adhmya family bhi wahin thi. Uss hall me technology ka poora jaal bichh chuka tha, jahan se na sirf Viggo viman se smpark kiya ja sakta tha, balki poore Roffa space station ki technology ko bhi command diya ja sakta tha. 6 high class Settelite viman Nischal ke uddan bharne se ek din pahle hi Last Line ki seema tak bhej diya gaya tha.


Roffa Space station wale bhi apne settelite ko poora positin kar chuke the… jate waqt Nischal se apni frequency sajha kar gaye... Yadi unka mood bane to apne viman ke sare camera unke server se connect kar de...


Jivisha ek poora din hall me hi baithi rahi. Viggo viman aaj apni samnya gati se aadhi gati me chal rahi thi. Halanki dusre vimano ki apeksha fir bhi yah gati kafi tej thi jo Last Line ko lagbhag 38 ghante me touch karti...

Gajab ki update mitr

 

[Mbindas]

Bada hi romanchak update diya hai bhai, lagta hai ki ye yaha par bhi sidhe nahi rahenge aur yaha par bhi ek chhoti si ladai to hokar hi rahegi. Dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-84 ​

Nischal apne viman ke kuchh crew members ko, Vaiman ke alag-alag hisson ke secondry control panel me bhej'kar, khud Mukhya control pannel me tha... "Computer Ji Settelite image clear kijiye Hurriyent palnet se 2000 kilometer ke bich ki"…


Settelite sabhi abhi postion par nahi thi... Moving settilete se utni dur ki image postion nahi ho pa rahi thi… udhar se nirdesh aaye ki lagbhag 8 ghantey aur lagenge settelite viman ko pisition karne me... Roffa se le'kar Viggo me baitha har insan se le'kar pashu pakchhi tak thode tension me the... Waqt ki ke sath-sath Nischal bhi aage badh raha tha... Aur ab waqt aa chuka tha, uss Last Line ko cross karne ka, jahan se bhay ki seama shuru hoti...


Nischal sabhi crew ko active karte... "Boys poora system on kar'ke, Last Line ke bahar hum ek trail lenge aur uske baad Last Line cross karenge... Sabhi ready….. Sabhi secondry control panel se "ok" ka reply aaya aur Nischal ne command dena shuru kiya...


200km me faila hexagonal viman, jiski rachna lagbhag ek star ki tarah thi… iski motai matlab niche satah se le'kar upar roof ki jo unchai thi, wo takriban 12km kilometer ki thi...


200 kilometer me faile hexgonal viman me, aage se 16 km uncha teer ke nok ka shape tha. Ye viman ke kul unchai se 4 kilometer jyada uncha rakha gaya tha, taki samne se yadi ko ulka se bhada rasta ho to bich ki body surakhit rahe .. Teer ke ek shape ke khatm hone ke baad ussi se lage dusra shape shuru ho jata... aur iss tarah se aage ka pura hexagonal dhancha bana...


Nischal ne jaise hi command diya poora viman re suffle hua... Viman karwat le'kar takriban 4 minute me khada ho gaya.… Ab shape kuchh aisi thi ki pade huye star ko khada kar diya gaya ho...


Star shape ko agar dhyan se dekhen to aisa lagta hai mano kisi circle ke edge par charo ore se triangle shape ko rakh diya gaya hai… Nischal poore aaklan aur viman ko uss bhishan heat se bachane ke liye poore pukhta intzam ke sath nikla tha...


Viman ke aage chhote se triangle shape ke bich me, banti poore circular body ko poora 2 complete sheet se cover kiya gaya tha.. Aur jo aage ki vayvastha thi, wo aur bhi jyada kamal ki thi….


Hexagonal shape jisme 6 points the.. Isse aage se nikla 6 triangle shape bhi maan sakte hain, jo dekhne par bilkul nukile teer ki bhanti dikhta hai... Yun samjhiye ki ek cricke ke upar 6 teer ko sabhi ore se banaya gaya tha... Nischal ne un sabhi teer ke shape ke upar ek ke baad ek 30 teer ko laga diye jo complete sheet ke bane the... Taki ek-ek karke sabhi aage ke capping wale teer jabtak jale, tabtak ye log Hurriyent planet pahunch jaye...


To Nischal ne Bhisham aag se bachne ke liye teer ke shape par aage se 30 complete sheet ka cap chadha diya tha... Aur ye sabi 6 tikono ke liye kiya gaya tha... Uske alawa jo 2 triangle ke upri hisse ka gape ban raha tha, usse ulta triangle space kahna galat nahi hoga...


Yadi star ke shape ko dhyan se dekhenge to pata chalega ki 2 nukile point ke bich me jo khali space hai... Wo bhi khali space triangle jaisa hi hai... Bus wo ulta triangle hai… Aur Nischal ne 2 triangle ke bich ke space ko ek ulte triangle se fill kar diya tha, aur ye khali space bhi 30 complete sheet metal se bhada hua tha...


Ek complete metel sheet ko inlogon ne taiyar kaise kiya tha, wahi sabse jyada rochak tha… 2 meter² ki chhoti-chhoti metal sheet tayar ki gayi thi, jo 1 fit mota tha... Uske alawa jo dusri bhatti me jala, wo thi haddiyan. Wo haddiyan jo poori tarah jalne ke baad bhatti me bacha, ya jo dhuan ban'kar raakh chimni se nikla aur floor par dhul ke saman aakar jamta gaya, usse samet liya gaya tha... Jise kisi bhi tapman par dobara jalaya nahi ja sakta. Yadi un raakh ki 1 inch ki bhi deewar bana de, to aage ka tapman jo bhi rahe wo pichhe pass nahi ho sakta tha.. aur unhi raakh ke bhandar ko ye log bsttiyon se samet liye..


1 fit mote aur 2 meter² ke metel sheet ke upar, hard chipkane wala padarth laga'kar raakh chipkaya gaya... Ek metel ke shit par, layer by layer karke takriban 4 inch ka raakh chipkaya gaya... Aur 2 meter² ke 10 metel sheet ko nut-volt se tight karke 1 complete metel sheet ka nirman kiya gaya tha... Chunki Nilbhut wale kisi bhi surface ke aar, paar ho sakte the, isliye 90000 log, plus poori technical team milkar ye sara kaam Viman ke roof par hi kar rahe the...


2 metel sheet se viman ke bich ki body ko cover kiya gaya tha… Star ki tarah dikhne wale Viggo viman ko khada bhi isliye kiya gaya tha, taki body par heat ka imapact na pade, balki sara head aage ke ore hi rahe jahan 30 layer complete metel sheet chadhaya gaya tha. Sath hi sath 2 triangle ke bich ke space ko bhi cover kar dene se, ab aage se viman complete round shape le chuka tha...


Chunki Viggo viman ki sanrachna part by part ko jod'kar hui thi, aur iske charo ore ki deewar 20 fit ke layer se bana tha. Uss 20 fit layer ke ander itne moving channels the ki kisi bhi section ko move kiya ja sakta tha... Jaise hi Viggo viman ko khada kiya gaya, wo kisi bade tire ki bhanti dikhne laga tha...


Tire ke saman sanrachna wale Viggo viman ke aage ka 500 miter ka hissa, seperately kafi tej gati se gol-gol ghumta, taki heat ka asar distribute hota rahe.


Nischal sari testing ke baad kafi relax sa mehsus karne laga… Viggo viman ki gati ko kuchh kam kar'ke auto pilot mode par dal diya aur hall me aa'kar wo Bitti aur Gopal ke bade se gang ki baten sunn'ne laga.... Bahut hi jyada pyare the ye log...


Nischal ne Bitti ko Jivisha aur baki sabse contact karne ka charge de'kar, Bitti se kah diya ki wahan apni maa ko bol dene "relax kare aur maze kare... Sabhi testing safal raha hai... Jaldi se kaam khatam kar'ke milte hain"...


Bitti apne aaram se pankh faila'kar chair par baithi... Wo to aur bhi kamal ki nikli... Apne pankh ke nichle kinare se bhi wo key-board par khitir-pitir kar sakti thi... Bitti ne sabse turant sampark kiya... "Kaisi ho maa, ye chehre ki hawaeyan kyon udi hai... Hi massi... Hello mausa ji"…


Jivisha:- To contact karne ki jimmedari humari Bitti ko mili hai.…


Bitti:- Maa, Maasi, aur mausa ji... Aap teeno relax karo, kyonki yahan sab parikashan safal raha hai... Baba aap sab se kaam khatm karne ke baad aaram se milenge... Right baby..


Jivisha hansti hui... "Yes my sweeto, tum sab apne baba ko pareshan to nahi kar rahe"…


Bitti:- Ohkey bye...


Jivisha:- Areee kya hua…


Bitti:- Faltu ki sawal puchhogi to yahi aayega...


Jivisha:- Haan thik hai nahi puchhti…


Sabhi baith'kar gappe ladane lage... Inki baten thi ki khatm hi nahi ho rahi thi... Tabhi Jivisha ke hall me ek sandesh aaya... Usse Roffa Space Center ke Chief ki party me aane ka nimantran mila tha...


Jivisha line disconnect karti… "Hmmmm, thik hai, dekh lete hain yahan ke chief ki bhi party… kya kahti hai Nandu…


Nandni:- Haan haan kyon nahi...


Sahamti bani aur teeno party ke liye taiyar hone lage… 37 ghante bit chuke the aur jis hisab se Viggo viman ki gati thi, lagbhag ek ghante aur kuchh minton me Last Line tak pahunch jate, jahan se viggo viman apni poorn kshmta me aage badhta aur takriban 1 ghante me wo 3000 km ka safar tay karta…


Choonk hone ki koi gunjaish nahi thi, isliye Nischal viman ko slow kar chuka tha taki ek baar aur achhe se wo sab kuchh check kar sake ..


Nischal bacchon ke sath baith'kar takribam 45 minute bitane ke baad, viman ki gati lagbhag 5km/hr kar chuka tha... Hall me hi meeting hui, jahan Nilbhut samuday ke logon ko aadesh mila ki jaise hi Hurriyent planet par viman land hoga, poori viman hi bhumigat ho jani chahiye… Khair viman bhumigat ke liye Nilbhut samuday ke sainikon ne haan to kah diya tha, lekin viman ke regular shape aur khade tire wali position me kya fark tha, wo ander baith'kar koi samajh nahi paya tha….


Nischal ke kahte hi Viggo viman ko bhumigat karne ke liye, Nilbhut sainik viman ke alag-alag hisson me postion le chuke the... Kaam thoda muskil tha, lekin utni hi safai ke sath teji se karna tha... 500 Nilbhut sainik jo dragon babies ke liye extra aaye the... Unhone bacchon ko apne bich samet rakha tha... Ek baar sab kuchh set hone ke baad viman ne ab dhire-dhire gati badhana shuru kiya...


Idhar nimantran milte hi, Roffo space station ke chief ki party me Jivisha, Nandni aur Ansh ne shirkat kar rahe the... Teeno jaise hi wahan pahunche, chief unke pass baithne ka aamatarn dete.… "Jivisha, tumhe kya lagta hai... Kitni dur jane ke baad tumhara ye bada sa viman jalega"…


Jivisha:- Itna vishawas kaise...


Chief:- Itihaas me ek hi viman hai jo ab tak Hurriyent planet tak pahunchi thi, wo bhi bus kuch der ruke, thodi si dhatu samet'kar nikal gaye... Yahan har dusre din ek viman Hurriyent ke ore nikalta hai. Kabhi kabhi to 3-4 viman Hurriyent ke liye ek sath nikalte aur unme me ek bhi laut'kar nahi aaya... Kayi aise viman hai jo Hurriyent planet tak bhi pahunche bus sirf hume itna hi pata hai. Aage wahan unke sath kya hua ye batane ke liye koi lauta hi nahi...


Nandni:- bhav kya hai aaj ka wo to batao....


Chief:- Mission successful hone par, 1 sikke ke 5000 sikke... kyonki ye viman to last line ke thik pichhe hi khada ho gaya... Lagta hai aage jaye ki na jaye ussi soch me doobe hain... Achha hi hoga wapas laut aaye to.… Insan to roj hi marte hain, lekin tumhara viman, wo poore Universe me apne jaisa eklauta hoga... Kayi sare viman dekhe hain lekin aaj tak uss jaisa viman nahi dekha...


Nandni:- Koi baat nahi tum to humare 10 lakh coin abhi laga do mission successful par…


Chief:- Tunhare pass yahan rukne ke liye mere khyal se 6 din se jyada ke coin nahi bache hai... Usme se bhi 10 lakh sikka laga rahi...


Jivisha:- 10 lakh main bhi laga deti hun mission successful par...


Chief:- Haar gaye to bahut hi jayada afsos hoga.… Soch lo...


Ansh:- Total hum teeno ka mila'kar 50 lakh coin laga do...


Chief:- 50 lakh coin dene ke baad to tumhare kal ke baad ke liye bhi coin nahi bachenge... aur iss betting ka result to Hurriyent se lautne ke baad hi declare hoga... So yahan rukne ke minimum 2 din ke paise to hone hi chahiye...


Nandni:- Wo to hum coin exchange kar lenge...


Chief:- Wo kaise.…


Ansh:- Machhliyan bech'kar


Chief:- Mazak to nahi kar rahi... Main bahut jyada kimat dunga to 1 piece machhli ka 10 coin dunga...


Ansh:- Main kam se kam 10 hazar coin lunga 1 piece ka...


Chief:- Rakh lo apne pass...


Nandni:- Yahan 200 guest lag rahe hain iss hall me... Aaj 800 fish jayegi... 20 hazark piece shayad abhi jyada lag raha hoga... Lekin kewal nar aur nar lene se kaun wo char din me 20 hazar machhli se 1 lakh honge, isliye ab kimat badh gayi... 40000 coin 1 piece ke...


Chief:- Ye humare sath cheating hui hai... Aur kisi ke ghar me ghus'kar usse hi cheat karna mahnga par sakta hai...


Jivisha:- 20 hazar piece bola gaya tha hume... Na ki usme nar kitne honge ya mada... Hume dhamkao mat... Ab to kimat hogi 1 lakh coin 1 piece ki aur kam se kam 10 hazar piece leni hogi...


Chief chillaya "guards"... Aur agle hi pal uss hall me sabhi dragon babies katar me khade ho gaye. Upar dragon babies ki katar, niche 12 dus futiya sher ke bachhe line lagaye aur unke pichhe 20 futiya Sher aur Sherni Adhmya aur Admee samne se sabko ghurti hui khadi thi...

Mahilao se soudebaazi me koi naa jeet saka aaj tak per yaha toh khud jivi ne hi chief ka poupat kar diya
Vilakshan partibha ko dikhataa update mitr

 

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[The king]

Update:-83 ​

Inove ne service start karne se pahle, lagbhag kitne ghante ki service chahiye wo puchh liya… sabse pahle in logon ne 24 ghante ki service lete huye l lakh 20 hazar ka payment kiya...


Inova:- Haan kahiye sar pahle kya pasand karenge…


Nandni:- Yahan ka sabse jyada fun aur excitment kis chij me hai...


Inova:- Mere hisab se to har chij yahan ki exciting hi hoti hai, lekin iss waqt ek viman last line paar karne wala hai... Usse dekhna sabse jyada excitment hoga... Baad me shayad mauka fir kab mile kise pata...


Nandni:- Aisa kyon...


Inova:- Last line hum Hurriyent planet se 3000 km bache distance ko kahte hain… Yahan se lagbhag 2 din ke safar ke baad last line aata hai… 38 viman hai iss service station me aur abhi tak kisi ka confirm nahi hua hai ko wo Hurriyent planet ke ore kab niklenge... Isliye aisa kaha..


Sabhi ek sath... "Fir hum intzar kis baat ka kar rahe, chalo pahle Hurriyent planet ja rahe viman ko hi dekha jaye"…


Sabhi log ek bade se hall me pahunche jahan bada-bada screen laga hua tha... Hall me takriban 1000 sitting capacity thi... Wahan yahi koi 20-30 log baithe huye the…


Ye log bhi baith gaye... Sabhi screen par ek hi viman ke ander aur bahar ki tasveer aa rahi thi... Kuch settelite image the jo vikan ko space me aage badhte huye dikha rahe the... Kuchh Viman ke external aur internal camera ki image thi. Sabhi viman ko aage badhte huye har angel se dekh rahe the.


Hurriyent ke ore jane wali viman jaise hi Last line se aage badha, viman sanchalak screen par aa'kar apni baat kahne laga... "Hum log last line se 100km ander aa chuke hai"… fir apne control room me lage screen ke ore ishara karte... "Jaisa ki aap sab dekh pa rahe hai... Takriban 2900 km ki duri par Hurriyent planet dikh raha hai... Hum lagbhag 3 se char ghante ki duri par hai... Humara heat absorbing system kafi shandar hai... Milta hun kuchh der se"…


Tabhi wahan ke screen off ho gaya aur flash hone laga…. Betting for successful vs unsuccessfully mission complition.


Viman Hurriyent planet pahunch gaya, ispar paise lage to 1 coin ke 1000 coin milenge... Yadi Hurriyent nahi pahuncha, ispar 1 coin lagane par... 1.000001 coin milega…


Nandni aur Jivisha screen par batting rate dekhti…. "Lagta hai garib desh ka viman hai, heat ke karan bahut aage nahi ja payega aur lagta hai bich me hi laut aayega, isliye kisi ko inpar yakin nahi...


Ansh:- Itne to coin hai… 1000 coin laga dete hain mission successful par...


Ansh gaya aur 1000 coin mission successful par laga'kar chala aaya... Tabhi screen par fir se viman flash hone laga... Niche distance bhi likha hua tha... 2800 km ahead... 2700, 2600… Ek screen par viman ke ander ka scene aa raha tha... Jahan sabhi machine ko sahi kaam karte dikhaya ja raha tha.…


Distance 2000 km ahead. Inova un logon ke pass pahunchti, ab excitment shuru hoga screen se hatiyega nahi... distance 1900 km.. Viman ka external body heat me tap'kar poora laal ho chuka tha... Nischal apni jagah se khada hua.… "O bewakoof laut aa.... Heat ke karan power source (fuel aur jo bhi source ho viman chalne ka) blast ho jayegi. Ek chingari raakh bana dega... Lauto bewakoof"…


Nischal usse lautne ke liye chilla raha tha, aur udhar wo commander jaam lahrate... "Bahar ka temperature 20 thousand celsius hai... Waise iss se jayada temprature humare device read nahi kar sakta. Haan lekin ander ka normal room temperature par hai.. 23⁰.


Jaise hi diatnace 1700 km par aaya... Sabhi ki aankhen badi ho gayi... Visman ke ander ki sari screen band... Bahar settelite ki image me jo dikha... Kisi ek jagah chhota sa damaka, aur shiyannn se aag uss chhoti si jagah se faila'kar second bhar me poore viman ko apne chapet me le lee. Anth me kewal dhuvan hi najar aaya... Kuchh bacha hi nahi...


Maun, bilkul shant khade sab ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the… Teeno Nischal ke ore dekhte sawaliya najron se... "Kya ab bhi wahi karenge"…


Nischal:- Haan risk to hai, lekin jahan 10 layer par kaam karte wahan 20 layer ke sath jsyenge. Nilbhut team sath hogi kyonki heat absorbing hum sab me kamal ki hai... Tum sab yahin rahoge...


Jivisha:- Lekin Nischal...


Nischal, apna hath aage badhate.… "1% bhi chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai... Yadi mil'kar kaam karenge to Hurriyent jana earth par jane jitna aasaan hoga"…


Jivisha hath badha'kar Nischal ka hath thamti, main sath hun... Nandni dono ka haath chhuda'kar, Nischal ke gale lagti… "Jyada hero ban'ne ki jaroorat na hai... 20 nahi 30 layer ke sath jayega aur yahan se jaise hi hum wapas aane kahen bina koi sawal kiye laut aayega"…


Nischal, Nandni ko khud se alag kar'ke uska chehra saaf kiya... "Jaisa aap kahiye boss"…


Ansh:- To fir 24 ghantey ki service ko istamal kiya jaye...


Nischal:- Bilkul doctor sahab..


Sabhi kaam par lage. Nischal, Inova ko bulaya aur usse kahne laga... "Hum full service access karenge, aur hum par koi servilence nahi chahiye"…


Inova:- Sir, base ke chief aap ke sath dinner karna chahte hain... Yadi aap allowed kare to...


Jivisha:- Hume pahle ek bada sa hall do... Bada hall matlab iss hall jaisa hi bada jahan 1000 logon ki capacity hai... Aur tumhare chief ko milna hai to wo be-jhijhak uss hall me aa sakte hai... Basarte humare kaam me badha na bane aur baat karne ki maryada ko bhang na kare...


Inova:- Aap yahi hall le lijiye. Yahan humari poori team hai help ke liye... Main jab'tak aapki baat, yahan ke chief tak pahuncha dun..


Nischal:- Aur haan, jakar sharab ka full kota le aana...


15 minute ke casual chit-chat ke baad sab kaam me lag gaye... Roffa space station ke staff ko battiyan lagane bola gaya. Idhar Nischal ne poori technology team ko turan kuchh sandesh bheja aur wo hall me aa'kar sab set up karne lage...


20 hazar Zoren niwasi me se 18000 trained soldier the... 9000 Nilbhut samuday aur 9000 Dridh aayu rastr ke... Sabhi ko bula'kar aaram se unka kaam samjha diya gaya…


Sabko kaam samjhane ke baad, Dragon babies aur Adhmya family ko Roffa Space Staion aane ke liye kaha gaya... Jaise hi Dragon babies aur Adhmya family ko Roffa walon ne dekha... Sab hairani se unhe dekhte huye khud se hi sawal karne lage... "Itne bade viman me crew member ko le'kar ghumne ke badle in faltu janvaron ke sath kya hasil karne nikle hai ye log. Hum hote to kam se kam 2 lakh crew member hota"…


Khair unki baten na to Nischal ya kisi aur ne suni, aur na hi unki in baton se koi fark parne wala tha... Abhi to Roffa Sapace Station walon ko eklauti hairani hui thi, aage aur aani baki hi thi...


2 hisson me kayi Bhattiyan taiyar kiye gaye the. Bade-bade vahan, Viggo viman se nikal'kar Space station ke bhatti tak pahunch rahe the.. Ek ore to pata chal raha tha ki metel ko gala'kar, usse 1 fit mota aur 2 meter² ka sheet taiyar kar rahe the...


Lekin dusri bhatti me kya ho raha tha kisi ko pata nahi... Wahan se kewal aur kewal upar raakh nikal rahi thi aur un raakh ko bhi bahar se smet liya jata... Uss bhatti se jo niklalta, wo bhi koi dekh nahi pa rahe the...


Jivisha technical team ke sath baithkar space station se Viggo viman me contact karne ki kshmta ko durust karne me lagi hui thi... Haan lekin Adhmya ke ek natkhat beta Mohan aur dragon baby Bitti ke bich tikhi nok jhonk aur marpit ne sabko pareshan kar rakha tha… Jivisha hansti hui kah bhi dee... Ye mohan nahi Nischal hai aur wo Bitti nahi Nandni hai...


24 ghantey ki service poori hone ke baad Jivisha ne uss hall ke alawa 10 aur hall rent par lee... Ab manual service aur per day charge hi pay karna tha... Haan lekin itne sare logon ke rahne ke liye Jivisha se 2 lakh coin har din ki wasooli ho rahi thi. Roffa Space center par, 46 ghante me inka kafila taiyar ho chuka Hurriyent jane ke liye...


Nischal lagbhag Viggo viman khali kar chuka tha… Ander ke sabhi plane, apna 20 kilometer wala wo jalashay, food, har wo chij jo Viggo viman me jagah gher rahi thi usse bahar nikal diya gaya... Lagbhag 8000 section ko hi nikal liya gaya tha taki Huriyent se jyada se jyada metel laya ja sake...


Viggo viman ke saman ka sanrakhan aur uske rakh rakhav ke liye, 5lakh coin har din ke hisab se liya ja raha tha… jiski bharpai un metal scrape se ki gayi jo Lofa planet se utayi gayi thi... Bhatti me lagbhag aadha scrape istamaal ho chuka tha aur bacha hua scrape lagbhag in logon ne 40 lakh coin me bechi thi.


Khair Roffa space station par sab settel karne ke baad, Nischal 8000 Nilbhut sainikon ke sath vida le hi raha tha, tabhi Bitti aur Gopal ki toli Nischal ke sath jane ki jid karne lagi…


Isbaar jab Jivisha ne usse danntan tab dono ulta Jivisha par chillate huye, poore haal me hi fuu.. fuuu kar'ke aag ka spray maarne lage...


Jivisha:- Kya hai Gopal, Bitti... Tum dono aise kyon kar rahe…


Gopal:- Hume jane do... Bus


Jivisha:- Lekin kyon...


Gopal:- Hum bhi universe tevellers hain... Aap jati to hum jate na... Maa tum kisi karan se nahi ja rahi isliye hum nahi ja pa rahe...


Bitti:- Haan pali baar Bitti sahi kah rahi hai. Tum sab extrem heat nahi jhel sakte, isliye nahi ja rahe... Par maa hum to jhel sakte hain… swarth hai ye... hume bhi baba ke sath jana hai...


Jivisha inki jid par apna sar pakad lee. Wahan Ansh aur Nandni Jivisha ke karib baith'kar usse samjhane lage… Sabhi aag ugalne wale, karib 800 dragon niche baith'kar, Jivisha ko tukur-tukur dekh rahe the.....


Jivisha, gusse se Bitti aur Gopal ko dekhti.… "Tum dono laut'kar aao fir main batati hun... Bitti, Gopal ek baar bhi jhagra nahi hona chahiye… Nischal ko uss jahah koi nayi musibat nahi dena... Nokha (Ek Nilbhut samuday ka sainik)… Apne 500 logon ke sath tum bhi jao, aur mere bacchon ka khyal rakhna... Sabhi nautankiyon kaan khol kar sun lo, tum log ek sipahi ki tarah jaoge aur Nokha tumhara commander hoga"...


"Aiene me muh dekha hai kya"…. Bhid se ek dragon baby ne bol diya... Jivisha Bitti aur Gopal ko ek baar aur ghurti... "Dono apni apni toli ko sambhaloge aur Nokha ki har baat maan'ni hogi"…


Jivisha thoda chintit thi lekin thode sukoon me bhi thi… Ye bacche honge to Nischal jaldi lautega… Nischal sab se vida le'kar udd chala aur uske jate hi yahan sabhi log screen par lag gaye. Jivisha ne 3 logon ko darwaje par khada kar diya tha, aur unhe shakt hidayat mili thi ki koi bhi bahar ka aadmi, kisi bhi paristithi me iss hall me na aaye... Koi jabardasti karne ki kosis kare to turant suchna de. Wahi hidayat 2000 sainikon ko bhi mili thi jo Viggo viman se alag huye saman ki dekhbhal kar rahe the… "kisi bhi condition me koi bahar ka aadmi kisi bhi chij ko hath na lagaye, yadi koi jabardasti kare to turant suchna di jaye"…



Surakhit hall me poori tecnical expert ki team thi. Ussi hall me Jivisha ne sabhi Dragon babies ko rakha tha. Inke alawa Nandni aur Ansh, sath hi sath Adhmya family bhi wahin thi. Uss hall me technology ka poora jaal bichh chuka tha, jahan se na sirf Viggo viman se smpark kiya ja sakta tha, balki poore Roffa space station ki technology ko bhi command diya ja sakta tha. 6 high class Settelite viman Nischal ke uddan bharne se ek din pahle hi Last Line ki seema tak bhej diya gaya tha.


Roffa Space station wale bhi apne settelite ko poora positin kar chuke the… jate waqt Nischal se apni frequency sajha kar gaye... Yadi unka mood bane to apne viman ke sare camera unke server se connect kar de...


Jivisha ek poora din hall me hi baithi rahi. Viggo viman aaj apni samnya gati se aadhi gati me chal rahi thi. Halanki dusre vimano ki apeksha fir bhi yah gati kafi tej thi jo Last Line ko lagbhag 38 ghante me touch karti...

Nice update bhai

 

[The king]

Update:-84 ​

Nischal apne viman ke kuchh crew members ko, Vaiman ke alag-alag hisson ke secondry control panel me bhej'kar, khud Mukhya control pannel me tha... "Computer Ji Settelite image clear kijiye Hurriyent palnet se 2000 kilometer ke bich ki"…


Settelite sabhi abhi postion par nahi thi... Moving settilete se utni dur ki image postion nahi ho pa rahi thi… udhar se nirdesh aaye ki lagbhag 8 ghantey aur lagenge settelite viman ko pisition karne me... Roffa se le'kar Viggo me baitha har insan se le'kar pashu pakchhi tak thode tension me the... Waqt ki ke sath-sath Nischal bhi aage badh raha tha... Aur ab waqt aa chuka tha, uss Last Line ko cross karne ka, jahan se bhay ki seama shuru hoti...


Nischal sabhi crew ko active karte... "Boys poora system on kar'ke, Last Line ke bahar hum ek trail lenge aur uske baad Last Line cross karenge... Sabhi ready….. Sabhi secondry control panel se "ok" ka reply aaya aur Nischal ne command dena shuru kiya...


200km me faila hexagonal viman, jiski rachna lagbhag ek star ki tarah thi… iski motai matlab niche satah se le'kar upar roof ki jo unchai thi, wo takriban 12km kilometer ki thi...


200 kilometer me faile hexgonal viman me, aage se 16 km uncha teer ke nok ka shape tha. Ye viman ke kul unchai se 4 kilometer jyada uncha rakha gaya tha, taki samne se yadi ko ulka se bhada rasta ho to bich ki body surakhit rahe .. Teer ke ek shape ke khatm hone ke baad ussi se lage dusra shape shuru ho jata... aur iss tarah se aage ka pura hexagonal dhancha bana...


Nischal ne jaise hi command diya poora viman re suffle hua... Viman karwat le'kar takriban 4 minute me khada ho gaya.… Ab shape kuchh aisi thi ki pade huye star ko khada kar diya gaya ho...


Star shape ko agar dhyan se dekhen to aisa lagta hai mano kisi circle ke edge par charo ore se triangle shape ko rakh diya gaya hai… Nischal poore aaklan aur viman ko uss bhishan heat se bachane ke liye poore pukhta intzam ke sath nikla tha...


Viman ke aage chhote se triangle shape ke bich me, banti poore circular body ko poora 2 complete sheet se cover kiya gaya tha.. Aur jo aage ki vayvastha thi, wo aur bhi jyada kamal ki thi….


Hexagonal shape jisme 6 points the.. Isse aage se nikla 6 triangle shape bhi maan sakte hain, jo dekhne par bilkul nukile teer ki bhanti dikhta hai... Yun samjhiye ki ek cricke ke upar 6 teer ko sabhi ore se banaya gaya tha... Nischal ne un sabhi teer ke shape ke upar ek ke baad ek 30 teer ko laga diye jo complete sheet ke bane the... Taki ek-ek karke sabhi aage ke capping wale teer jabtak jale, tabtak ye log Hurriyent planet pahunch jaye...


To Nischal ne Bhisham aag se bachne ke liye teer ke shape par aage se 30 complete sheet ka cap chadha diya tha... Aur ye sabi 6 tikono ke liye kiya gaya tha... Uske alawa jo 2 triangle ke upri hisse ka gape ban raha tha, usse ulta triangle space kahna galat nahi hoga...


Yadi star ke shape ko dhyan se dekhenge to pata chalega ki 2 nukile point ke bich me jo khali space hai... Wo bhi khali space triangle jaisa hi hai... Bus wo ulta triangle hai… Aur Nischal ne 2 triangle ke bich ke space ko ek ulte triangle se fill kar diya tha, aur ye khali space bhi 30 complete sheet metal se bhada hua tha...


Ek complete metel sheet ko inlogon ne taiyar kaise kiya tha, wahi sabse jyada rochak tha… 2 meter² ki chhoti-chhoti metal sheet tayar ki gayi thi, jo 1 fit mota tha... Uske alawa jo dusri bhatti me jala, wo thi haddiyan. Wo haddiyan jo poori tarah jalne ke baad bhatti me bacha, ya jo dhuan ban'kar raakh chimni se nikla aur floor par dhul ke saman aakar jamta gaya, usse samet liya gaya tha... Jise kisi bhi tapman par dobara jalaya nahi ja sakta. Yadi un raakh ki 1 inch ki bhi deewar bana de, to aage ka tapman jo bhi rahe wo pichhe pass nahi ho sakta tha.. aur unhi raakh ke bhandar ko ye log bsttiyon se samet liye..


1 fit mote aur 2 meter² ke metel sheet ke upar, hard chipkane wala padarth laga'kar raakh chipkaya gaya... Ek metel ke shit par, layer by layer karke takriban 4 inch ka raakh chipkaya gaya... Aur 2 meter² ke 10 metel sheet ko nut-volt se tight karke 1 complete metel sheet ka nirman kiya gaya tha... Chunki Nilbhut wale kisi bhi surface ke aar, paar ho sakte the, isliye 90000 log, plus poori technical team milkar ye sara kaam Viman ke roof par hi kar rahe the...


2 metel sheet se viman ke bich ki body ko cover kiya gaya tha… Star ki tarah dikhne wale Viggo viman ko khada bhi isliye kiya gaya tha, taki body par heat ka imapact na pade, balki sara head aage ke ore hi rahe jahan 30 layer complete metel sheet chadhaya gaya tha. Sath hi sath 2 triangle ke bich ke space ko bhi cover kar dene se, ab aage se viman complete round shape le chuka tha...


Chunki Viggo viman ki sanrachna part by part ko jod'kar hui thi, aur iske charo ore ki deewar 20 fit ke layer se bana tha. Uss 20 fit layer ke ander itne moving channels the ki kisi bhi section ko move kiya ja sakta tha... Jaise hi Viggo viman ko khada kiya gaya, wo kisi bade tire ki bhanti dikhne laga tha...


Tire ke saman sanrachna wale Viggo viman ke aage ka 500 miter ka hissa, seperately kafi tej gati se gol-gol ghumta, taki heat ka asar distribute hota rahe.


Nischal sari testing ke baad kafi relax sa mehsus karne laga… Viggo viman ki gati ko kuchh kam kar'ke auto pilot mode par dal diya aur hall me aa'kar wo Bitti aur Gopal ke bade se gang ki baten sunn'ne laga.... Bahut hi jyada pyare the ye log...


Nischal ne Bitti ko Jivisha aur baki sabse contact karne ka charge de'kar, Bitti se kah diya ki wahan apni maa ko bol dene "relax kare aur maze kare... Sabhi testing safal raha hai... Jaldi se kaam khatam kar'ke milte hain"...


Bitti apne aaram se pankh faila'kar chair par baithi... Wo to aur bhi kamal ki nikli... Apne pankh ke nichle kinare se bhi wo key-board par khitir-pitir kar sakti thi... Bitti ne sabse turant sampark kiya... "Kaisi ho maa, ye chehre ki hawaeyan kyon udi hai... Hi massi... Hello mausa ji"…


Jivisha:- To contact karne ki jimmedari humari Bitti ko mili hai.…


Bitti:- Maa, Maasi, aur mausa ji... Aap teeno relax karo, kyonki yahan sab parikashan safal raha hai... Baba aap sab se kaam khatm karne ke baad aaram se milenge... Right baby..


Jivisha hansti hui... "Yes my sweeto, tum sab apne baba ko pareshan to nahi kar rahe"…


Bitti:- Ohkey bye...


Jivisha:- Areee kya hua…


Bitti:- Faltu ki sawal puchhogi to yahi aayega...


Jivisha:- Haan thik hai nahi puchhti…


Sabhi baith'kar gappe ladane lage... Inki baten thi ki khatm hi nahi ho rahi thi... Tabhi Jivisha ke hall me ek sandesh aaya... Usse Roffa Space Center ke Chief ki party me aane ka nimantran mila tha...


Jivisha line disconnect karti… "Hmmmm, thik hai, dekh lete hain yahan ke chief ki bhi party… kya kahti hai Nandu…


Nandni:- Haan haan kyon nahi...


Sahamti bani aur teeno party ke liye taiyar hone lage… 37 ghante bit chuke the aur jis hisab se Viggo viman ki gati thi, lagbhag ek ghante aur kuchh minton me Last Line tak pahunch jate, jahan se viggo viman apni poorn kshmta me aage badhta aur takriban 1 ghante me wo 3000 km ka safar tay karta…


Choonk hone ki koi gunjaish nahi thi, isliye Nischal viman ko slow kar chuka tha taki ek baar aur achhe se wo sab kuchh check kar sake ..


Nischal bacchon ke sath baith'kar takribam 45 minute bitane ke baad, viman ki gati lagbhag 5km/hr kar chuka tha... Hall me hi meeting hui, jahan Nilbhut samuday ke logon ko aadesh mila ki jaise hi Hurriyent planet par viman land hoga, poori viman hi bhumigat ho jani chahiye… Khair viman bhumigat ke liye Nilbhut samuday ke sainikon ne haan to kah diya tha, lekin viman ke regular shape aur khade tire wali position me kya fark tha, wo ander baith'kar koi samajh nahi paya tha….


Nischal ke kahte hi Viggo viman ko bhumigat karne ke liye, Nilbhut sainik viman ke alag-alag hisson me postion le chuke the... Kaam thoda muskil tha, lekin utni hi safai ke sath teji se karna tha... 500 Nilbhut sainik jo dragon babies ke liye extra aaye the... Unhone bacchon ko apne bich samet rakha tha... Ek baar sab kuchh set hone ke baad viman ne ab dhire-dhire gati badhana shuru kiya...


Idhar nimantran milte hi, Roffo space station ke chief ki party me Jivisha, Nandni aur Ansh ne shirkat kar rahe the... Teeno jaise hi wahan pahunche, chief unke pass baithne ka aamatarn dete.… "Jivisha, tumhe kya lagta hai... Kitni dur jane ke baad tumhara ye bada sa viman jalega"…


Jivisha:- Itna vishawas kaise...


Chief:- Itihaas me ek hi viman hai jo ab tak Hurriyent planet tak pahunchi thi, wo bhi bus kuch der ruke, thodi si dhatu samet'kar nikal gaye... Yahan har dusre din ek viman Hurriyent ke ore nikalta hai. Kabhi kabhi to 3-4 viman Hurriyent ke liye ek sath nikalte aur unme me ek bhi laut'kar nahi aaya... Kayi aise viman hai jo Hurriyent planet tak bhi pahunche bus sirf hume itna hi pata hai. Aage wahan unke sath kya hua ye batane ke liye koi lauta hi nahi...


Nandni:- bhav kya hai aaj ka wo to batao....


Chief:- Mission successful hone par, 1 sikke ke 5000 sikke... kyonki ye viman to last line ke thik pichhe hi khada ho gaya... Lagta hai aage jaye ki na jaye ussi soch me doobe hain... Achha hi hoga wapas laut aaye to.… Insan to roj hi marte hain, lekin tumhara viman, wo poore Universe me apne jaisa eklauta hoga... Kayi sare viman dekhe hain lekin aaj tak uss jaisa viman nahi dekha...


Nandni:- Koi baat nahi tum to humare 10 lakh coin abhi laga do mission successful par…


Chief:- Tunhare pass yahan rukne ke liye mere khyal se 6 din se jyada ke coin nahi bache hai... Usme se bhi 10 lakh sikka laga rahi...


Jivisha:- 10 lakh main bhi laga deti hun mission successful par...


Chief:- Haar gaye to bahut hi jayada afsos hoga.… Soch lo...


Ansh:- Total hum teeno ka mila'kar 50 lakh coin laga do...


Chief:- 50 lakh coin dene ke baad to tumhare kal ke baad ke liye bhi coin nahi bachenge... aur iss betting ka result to Hurriyent se lautne ke baad hi declare hoga... So yahan rukne ke minimum 2 din ke paise to hone hi chahiye...


Nandni:- Wo to hum coin exchange kar lenge...


Chief:- Wo kaise.…


Ansh:- Machhliyan bech'kar


Chief:- Mazak to nahi kar rahi... Main bahut jyada kimat dunga to 1 piece machhli ka 10 coin dunga...


Ansh:- Main kam se kam 10 hazar coin lunga 1 piece ka...


Chief:- Rakh lo apne pass...


Nandni:- Yahan 200 guest lag rahe hain iss hall me... Aaj 800 fish jayegi... 20 hazark piece shayad abhi jyada lag raha hoga... Lekin kewal nar aur nar lene se kaun wo char din me 20 hazar machhli se 1 lakh honge, isliye ab kimat badh gayi... 40000 coin 1 piece ke...


Chief:- Ye humare sath cheating hui hai... Aur kisi ke ghar me ghus'kar usse hi cheat karna mahnga par sakta hai...


Jivisha:- 20 hazar piece bola gaya tha hume... Na ki usme nar kitne honge ya mada... Hume dhamkao mat... Ab to kimat hogi 1 lakh coin 1 piece ki aur kam se kam 10 hazar piece leni hogi...


Chief chillaya "guards"... Aur agle hi pal uss hall me sabhi dragon babies katar me khade ho gaye. Upar dragon babies ki katar, niche 12 dus futiya sher ke bachhe line lagaye aur unke pichhe 20 futiya Sher aur Sherni Adhmya aur Admee samne se sabko ghurti hui khadi thi...

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

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Inove ne service start karne se pahle, lagbhag kitne ghante ki service chahiye wo puchh liya… sabse pahle in logon ne 24 ghante ki service lete huye l lakh 20 hazar ka payment kiya...


Inova:- Haan kahiye sar pahle kya pasand karenge…


Nandni:- Yahan ka sabse jyada fun aur excitment kis chij me hai...


Inova:- Mere hisab se to har chij yahan ki exciting hi hoti hai, lekin iss waqt ek viman last line paar karne wala hai... Usse dekhna sabse jyada excitment hoga... Baad me shayad mauka fir kab mile kise pata...


Nandni:- Aisa kyon...


Inova:- Last line hum Hurriyent planet se 3000 km bache distance ko kahte hain… Yahan se lagbhag 2 din ke safar ke baad last line aata hai… 38 viman hai iss service station me aur abhi tak kisi ka confirm nahi hua hai ko wo Hurriyent planet ke ore kab niklenge... Isliye aisa kaha..


Sabhi ek sath... "Fir hum intzar kis baat ka kar rahe, chalo pahle Hurriyent planet ja rahe viman ko hi dekha jaye"…


Sabhi log ek bade se hall me pahunche jahan bada-bada screen laga hua tha... Hall me takriban 1000 sitting capacity thi... Wahan yahi koi 20-30 log baithe huye the…


Ye log bhi baith gaye... Sabhi screen par ek hi viman ke ander aur bahar ki tasveer aa rahi thi... Kuch settelite image the jo vikan ko space me aage badhte huye dikha rahe the... Kuchh Viman ke external aur internal camera ki image thi. Sabhi viman ko aage badhte huye har angel se dekh rahe the.


Hurriyent ke ore jane wali viman jaise hi Last line se aage badha, viman sanchalak screen par aa'kar apni baat kahne laga... "Hum log last line se 100km ander aa chuke hai"… fir apne control room me lage screen ke ore ishara karte... "Jaisa ki aap sab dekh pa rahe hai... Takriban 2900 km ki duri par Hurriyent planet dikh raha hai... Hum lagbhag 3 se char ghante ki duri par hai... Humara heat absorbing system kafi shandar hai... Milta hun kuchh der se"…


Tabhi wahan ke screen off ho gaya aur flash hone laga…. Betting for successful vs unsuccessfully mission complition.


Viman Hurriyent planet pahunch gaya, ispar paise lage to 1 coin ke 1000 coin milenge... Yadi Hurriyent nahi pahuncha, ispar 1 coin lagane par... 1.000001 coin milega…


Nandni aur Jivisha screen par batting rate dekhti…. "Lagta hai garib desh ka viman hai, heat ke karan bahut aage nahi ja payega aur lagta hai bich me hi laut aayega, isliye kisi ko inpar yakin nahi...


Ansh:- Itne to coin hai… 1000 coin laga dete hain mission successful par...


Ansh gaya aur 1000 coin mission successful par laga'kar chala aaya... Tabhi screen par fir se viman flash hone laga... Niche distance bhi likha hua tha... 2800 km ahead... 2700, 2600… Ek screen par viman ke ander ka scene aa raha tha... Jahan sabhi machine ko sahi kaam karte dikhaya ja raha tha.…


Distance 2000 km ahead. Inova un logon ke pass pahunchti, ab excitment shuru hoga screen se hatiyega nahi... distance 1900 km.. Viman ka external body heat me tap'kar poora laal ho chuka tha... Nischal apni jagah se khada hua.… "O bewakoof laut aa.... Heat ke karan power source (fuel aur jo bhi source ho viman chalne ka) blast ho jayegi. Ek chingari raakh bana dega... Lauto bewakoof"…


Nischal usse lautne ke liye chilla raha tha, aur udhar wo commander jaam lahrate... "Bahar ka temperature 20 thousand celsius hai... Waise iss se jayada temprature humare device read nahi kar sakta. Haan lekin ander ka normal room temperature par hai.. 23⁰.


Jaise hi diatnace 1700 km par aaya... Sabhi ki aankhen badi ho gayi... Visman ke ander ki sari screen band... Bahar settelite ki image me jo dikha... Kisi ek jagah chhota sa damaka, aur shiyannn se aag uss chhoti si jagah se faila'kar second bhar me poore viman ko apne chapet me le lee. Anth me kewal dhuvan hi najar aaya... Kuchh bacha hi nahi...


Maun, bilkul shant khade sab ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the… Teeno Nischal ke ore dekhte sawaliya najron se... "Kya ab bhi wahi karenge"…


Nischal:- Haan risk to hai, lekin jahan 10 layer par kaam karte wahan 20 layer ke sath jsyenge. Nilbhut team sath hogi kyonki heat absorbing hum sab me kamal ki hai... Tum sab yahin rahoge...


Jivisha:- Lekin Nischal...


Nischal, apna hath aage badhate.… "1% bhi chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai... Yadi mil'kar kaam karenge to Hurriyent jana earth par jane jitna aasaan hoga"…


Jivisha hath badha'kar Nischal ka hath thamti, main sath hun... Nandni dono ka haath chhuda'kar, Nischal ke gale lagti… "Jyada hero ban'ne ki jaroorat na hai... 20 nahi 30 layer ke sath jayega aur yahan se jaise hi hum wapas aane kahen bina koi sawal kiye laut aayega"…


Nischal, Nandni ko khud se alag kar'ke uska chehra saaf kiya... "Jaisa aap kahiye boss"…


Ansh:- To fir 24 ghantey ki service ko istamal kiya jaye...


Nischal:- Bilkul doctor sahab..


Sabhi kaam par lage. Nischal, Inova ko bulaya aur usse kahne laga... "Hum full service access karenge, aur hum par koi servilence nahi chahiye"…


Inova:- Sir, base ke chief aap ke sath dinner karna chahte hain... Yadi aap allowed kare to...


Jivisha:- Hume pahle ek bada sa hall do... Bada hall matlab iss hall jaisa hi bada jahan 1000 logon ki capacity hai... Aur tumhare chief ko milna hai to wo be-jhijhak uss hall me aa sakte hai... Basarte humare kaam me badha na bane aur baat karne ki maryada ko bhang na kare...


Inova:- Aap yahi hall le lijiye. Yahan humari poori team hai help ke liye... Main jab'tak aapki baat, yahan ke chief tak pahuncha dun..


Nischal:- Aur haan, jakar sharab ka full kota le aana...


15 minute ke casual chit-chat ke baad sab kaam me lag gaye... Roffa space station ke staff ko battiyan lagane bola gaya. Idhar Nischal ne poori technology team ko turan kuchh sandesh bheja aur wo hall me aa'kar sab set up karne lage...


20 hazar Zoren niwasi me se 18000 trained soldier the... 9000 Nilbhut samuday aur 9000 Dridh aayu rastr ke... Sabhi ko bula'kar aaram se unka kaam samjha diya gaya…


Sabko kaam samjhane ke baad, Dragon babies aur Adhmya family ko Roffa Space Staion aane ke liye kaha gaya... Jaise hi Dragon babies aur Adhmya family ko Roffa walon ne dekha... Sab hairani se unhe dekhte huye khud se hi sawal karne lage... "Itne bade viman me crew member ko le'kar ghumne ke badle in faltu janvaron ke sath kya hasil karne nikle hai ye log. Hum hote to kam se kam 2 lakh crew member hota"…


Khair unki baten na to Nischal ya kisi aur ne suni, aur na hi unki in baton se koi fark parne wala tha... Abhi to Roffa Sapace Station walon ko eklauti hairani hui thi, aage aur aani baki hi thi...


2 hisson me kayi Bhattiyan taiyar kiye gaye the. Bade-bade vahan, Viggo viman se nikal'kar Space station ke bhatti tak pahunch rahe the.. Ek ore to pata chal raha tha ki metel ko gala'kar, usse 1 fit mota aur 2 meter² ka sheet taiyar kar rahe the...


Lekin dusri bhatti me kya ho raha tha kisi ko pata nahi... Wahan se kewal aur kewal upar raakh nikal rahi thi aur un raakh ko bhi bahar se smet liya jata... Uss bhatti se jo niklalta, wo bhi koi dekh nahi pa rahe the...


Jivisha technical team ke sath baithkar space station se Viggo viman me contact karne ki kshmta ko durust karne me lagi hui thi... Haan lekin Adhmya ke ek natkhat beta Mohan aur dragon baby Bitti ke bich tikhi nok jhonk aur marpit ne sabko pareshan kar rakha tha… Jivisha hansti hui kah bhi dee... Ye mohan nahi Nischal hai aur wo Bitti nahi Nandni hai...


24 ghantey ki service poori hone ke baad Jivisha ne uss hall ke alawa 10 aur hall rent par lee... Ab manual service aur per day charge hi pay karna tha... Haan lekin itne sare logon ke rahne ke liye Jivisha se 2 lakh coin har din ki wasooli ho rahi thi. Roffa Space center par, 46 ghante me inka kafila taiyar ho chuka Hurriyent jane ke liye...


Nischal lagbhag Viggo viman khali kar chuka tha… Ander ke sabhi plane, apna 20 kilometer wala wo jalashay, food, har wo chij jo Viggo viman me jagah gher rahi thi usse bahar nikal diya gaya... Lagbhag 8000 section ko hi nikal liya gaya tha taki Huriyent se jyada se jyada metel laya ja sake...


Viggo viman ke saman ka sanrakhan aur uske rakh rakhav ke liye, 5lakh coin har din ke hisab se liya ja raha tha… jiski bharpai un metal scrape se ki gayi jo Lofa planet se utayi gayi thi... Bhatti me lagbhag aadha scrape istamaal ho chuka tha aur bacha hua scrape lagbhag in logon ne 40 lakh coin me bechi thi.


Khair Roffa space station par sab settel karne ke baad, Nischal 8000 Nilbhut sainikon ke sath vida le hi raha tha, tabhi Bitti aur Gopal ki toli Nischal ke sath jane ki jid karne lagi…


Isbaar jab Jivisha ne usse danntan tab dono ulta Jivisha par chillate huye, poore haal me hi fuu.. fuuu kar'ke aag ka spray maarne lage...


Jivisha:- Kya hai Gopal, Bitti... Tum dono aise kyon kar rahe…


Gopal:- Hume jane do... Bus


Jivisha:- Lekin kyon...


Gopal:- Hum bhi universe tevellers hain... Aap jati to hum jate na... Maa tum kisi karan se nahi ja rahi isliye hum nahi ja pa rahe...


Bitti:- Haan pali baar Bitti sahi kah rahi hai. Tum sab extrem heat nahi jhel sakte, isliye nahi ja rahe... Par maa hum to jhel sakte hain… swarth hai ye... hume bhi baba ke sath jana hai...


Jivisha inki jid par apna sar pakad lee. Wahan Ansh aur Nandni Jivisha ke karib baith'kar usse samjhane lage… Sabhi aag ugalne wale, karib 800 dragon niche baith'kar, Jivisha ko tukur-tukur dekh rahe the.....


Jivisha, gusse se Bitti aur Gopal ko dekhti.… "Tum dono laut'kar aao fir main batati hun... Bitti, Gopal ek baar bhi jhagra nahi hona chahiye… Nischal ko uss jahah koi nayi musibat nahi dena... Nokha (Ek Nilbhut samuday ka sainik)… Apne 500 logon ke sath tum bhi jao, aur mere bacchon ka khyal rakhna... Sabhi nautankiyon kaan khol kar sun lo, tum log ek sipahi ki tarah jaoge aur Nokha tumhara commander hoga"...


"Aiene me muh dekha hai kya"…. Bhid se ek dragon baby ne bol diya... Jivisha Bitti aur Gopal ko ek baar aur ghurti... "Dono apni apni toli ko sambhaloge aur Nokha ki har baat maan'ni hogi"…


Jivisha thoda chintit thi lekin thode sukoon me bhi thi… Ye bacche honge to Nischal jaldi lautega… Nischal sab se vida le'kar udd chala aur uske jate hi yahan sabhi log screen par lag gaye. Jivisha ne 3 logon ko darwaje par khada kar diya tha, aur unhe shakt hidayat mili thi ki koi bhi bahar ka aadmi, kisi bhi paristithi me iss hall me na aaye... Koi jabardasti karne ki kosis kare to turant suchna de. Wahi hidayat 2000 sainikon ko bhi mili thi jo Viggo viman se alag huye saman ki dekhbhal kar rahe the… "kisi bhi condition me koi bahar ka aadmi kisi bhi chij ko hath na lagaye, yadi koi jabardasti kare to turant suchna di jaye"…



Surakhit hall me poori tecnical expert ki team thi. Ussi hall me Jivisha ne sabhi Dragon babies ko rakha tha. Inke alawa Nandni aur Ansh, sath hi sath Adhmya family bhi wahin thi. Uss hall me technology ka poora jaal bichh chuka tha, jahan se na sirf Viggo viman se smpark kiya ja sakta tha, balki poore Roffa space station ki technology ko bhi command diya ja sakta tha. 6 high class Settelite viman Nischal ke uddan bharne se ek din pahle hi Last Line ki seema tak bhej diya gaya tha.


Roffa Space station wale bhi apne settelite ko poora positin kar chuke the… jate waqt Nischal se apni frequency sajha kar gaye... Yadi unka mood bane to apne viman ke sare camera unke server se connect kar de...


Jivisha ek poora din hall me hi baithi rahi. Viggo viman aaj apni samnya gati se aadhi gati me chal rahi thi. Halanki dusre vimano ki apeksha fir bhi yah gati kafi tej thi jo Last Line ko lagbhag 38 ghante me touch karti...

romanchak update ..huriyant planet se bahut dur hi ek vimaan jalkar raakh ho gaya ..
ye najara dekhkar sabne layer badhakar aage jaane ka socha aur lag gaye sab kaam me .

ye raakh un haddiyon ki hogi aisa lagta hai par usse banaya kya abhi pata nahi hai ....

adhmaya ke bete ka bhi naam hai mohan ..
mohan aur bitti ke nok jhok ko nischal aur nandani ki nok jhok hai aisa jivisha ne kaha ..

gopal aur bitti bhi nischal ke saath gaye huriyant ke liye ..
heat seh sakte hai dono bhi to kuch kaam aa hi jaaye ..