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Parsanshniye update mitrUpdate 22
Sharabi ke do thikane ya to theka ya to thane ab na to apna hero full sharabi tha na full mawali aur waise bhi subah subah daru pine ka to chance hi nahi tha isiliye is waqt maharaj canteen me baithe gappe haak rahe the aur unke sath the avinash komal aur shravni.. ab in logo ki bate chal hi rahi thi ke utne me waha entry huyi docter suman ki jo inhe pure college me dhundhte huye yaha pahuchi thi aur use dekhte hi aniket bola
Aniket-O dispensary aaj idhar kaise?
Suman bhi unke paas aakar baith gayi aur boli
Suman-kya aniket ye kya baat huyi aise nahi hota hai? Wo headphone wapis kar du kya? Komal keh rahi thi aniket aisa hai waisa hai par ab lag raha hai faltu me ye badi badi baate kar rahi thi tumse kuch nahi hoga…
Aniket-tumhare kehne ka kya matlab hai, siddharth ab tak kuch nahi bola kya? Par ye kaise ho sakta hai uska game bajane ke chakker me avi ne mera game baja diya aur tum keh rahi ho koi fark nahi pada? Matlab meri party fokat gayi…
Avinash-sachme party ka koi fayda nahi hua kya
Tab aniket ne avi baitha tha us khurchi pe laat mari
Aniket-sale naradmuni maje mat le teko baad me dekhunga
Jispar avinash bhola chehra banate huye bola
Avinash-par maine kya kiya hai…
Ab ye dono ki behasbaji shuru ho isse pehle hi suman unhe rokte huye boli
Suman-ye tumlog ka aise hi chalega to main jau kya…
Tab aniket suman wow aha baithate huye bola
Aniket-arey dispensary ruko jara baitho yaha aur avya harami apna gutter band kar thodi der dekh nahi raha docter ka dimag garam hai, jyada bolega to aisi jagah injection lagega ki har waqt baithte time yaad karega..
Ab avinash shant baith gaya aur aniket suman se bola
Aniket-ek baat batau docter suman, tumhara siddharth hoga bada docter par pyaar ke mamle me wo aadmi ekdum paidal hai, itna samjhaya fir bhi koi fark nahi pada, dekho ek baar aur soch lo tum..
Suman-kuch fark nahi pada aisa nahi hai, thoda to fark aaya hai, baatchit wagaire me par ab mujhe lagta hai ke main hi pasand nahi use, aura b mujhe uska picha chhod dena chahiye
Bolte bolte suman ki aankhen dabdaba gayi thi to aniket use pani ka glass pakdate huye bola
Aniket-arey prem diwani, jara santi rakhone bhai ye ekdum devdas banne ki jarurat nahi hai, wo pasand karta hai tumhe
Suman-mujhe acha lage isliye ye bate mat karo aniket
Aniket- arey nahi sachem wo bahut pasand karta hai tumhe, us din jab wo hotel me aaya tha tab ekdum sata savitra (male version of sati savitri) banne baitha tha ki pucho mat par jaise hi maine tumhara naam liya aur use bataya ke main tumse pyaar karta hu tab banda full devdas mode me chala gaya tha aur char beer khatam kar di thi agle ne, ab isse ye baat to saaf hai ke wo tumhe pasand bhi karta hai aur umse pyaar bhi karta hai…
Wahi idhar jab shravni ne jab suna ke aniket aisa bola ki wo suman se pyaar karta hai shravni madem ekdum bhadak gayi na bhailog
Shravni-aapne aur kitni ladkiyo se kaha hai ke aap unse pyaar karte ho…
Shravni ki baat sunke aniket ne apne sar pe hath maar liya
Aniket-arey deviji aap abhi kripaya gussa mat hoiye yaha docter sahiba pehle hi garam hai pehle unko shant karne dijiye aap kaha chalti train me chadh rahi hai, aapko baad me sara kissa sonata aur samjhata hu pehle inki baat hone dijiye
Aniket ki baat se shravni chup to ho gayi par uske hoth hil rahe the aur wo muh ki muh me kuch badbada rahi thi jise avinash ne dekh liya aur bola
Avinash-shravni apne pyaar pe bharosa rakho jara…
Par shravni kuch nahi boli uska badbadana chalu hi tha par aniket ne uspe dhyan nahi diya aur suman se bola
Aniket-suman tumne itna samay raah dekhi hai na kuch samay aur sahi, ab itna utawala kyu ho rahi ho aur aisa kaha likha hai ke propose sirf ladka hi karega ladki nahi, jab ladkiya har jagaho par ladko se barabari kar rahi hai aur sirf barabari kya ladko se aage nikal rahi hai to fir is mamle me abla nari kyu ban jati hai? Wo propose nahi kar raha tu kar de...
Suman-main propos to kar du par meri himmat hi nahi hoti hai, uske saamne aate hi pair kaampne lagte hai aur muh se shabd hi nahi nikalte aur ha FYI Mr. aniket rane tumne shravni ko propose kiya tha usne tumhe nahi…
Aniket-theek hai theek hai mat kar propose use propose karne lagayenge par kare kya?
Aniket soch raha tha itne me komal boli
Komal-easy hai, jab ghee sidhi ungli se na nikle to ungli tedhi kar lo
Aniket-kammo sidhe sidhe bata na dialogue kya maar rahi hai
Komal-arey lunth aadmi, kisi bhi chiz ki value tab tab nahi samajhti jab tak hame uske khone ka darr na ho, hame kuch aisa karna chahiye ke siddharth ko lage ki suman usse dur ja rahi hai tabhi uski aankhen khulengi…
Aniket-waah! Kya dimag lagaya hai kammo, gazab solid idea diya hai tune
Komal-experience se hi sikhta hai insaan..
Komal ki baat sunkar avinash ne chauk ke use dekha aur usne use shant rehne ka ishara kiya..par aniket ke is baat ki taraf koi dhyan hi nahi diya wo suman ke bare me sochne laga aur shravni boli
Shravni-par aaplog kisi ko jabardasti pyaar me kaise gira sakte ho?
Jiska jawab avinash ne diya
Avinash-hum use pyaar me gira nahi rahe balki wo pehle se pyaar me hai hum to bas use uska ehsaas kara rahe hai isse pehle ki samay hath se nikal jaye…
Avinash ne apni baat bolte huye halke se komal ko aankh maar di aur usne avi ko table ke niche se laat..
Aniket bhi kuch samay tak kuch sochta raha aur fir bola
Aniket-Ok done..suman kal hospital me badhiya ready hoke jane ka…
Suman-par kyu?
Aniket-kyuki tumhara birthday hai kal
Suman-kuch bhi, mera birthday aane me char mahine hai abhi
Aniket-ye baat siddharth ko nahi malum na bas isiliye hum tumhara birthday kal hi manayenge
Suman-aur use pata hua to…
Aniket-to kya, feka feki ke paise nahi lagte, wo us time dekh lenge
Suman-ok done fir aage..
Aniket-kya sari kahani aaj hi sunogi? Kal ke liye bhi kuch bacha ke rakhne ka, tum bas meri ha me ha milate jana baki ka main dekh lunga, aur ha agar use aur jelous feel karwana hai to tum kuch bhi bol sakti ho I don’t mind kal dophar me milta hu…
Suman-theek hai tumhe jo sahi lage karo..
Aniket-don’t worry, don’t fear Aniket Rane is with you dear
Aniket ki baat sun kar suman muskurayi aur boli
Suman-be careful while calling me dear coz seems something is burning there..
Itna bolke aniket ke sar pe tapli maar ke suman waha se chali gayi, suman ki baat sun waha sabhi hase the siway shravni ke aur ye baat aniket ke dhyan me aa gayi aur fir usne shravni ko sara kissa sunaya, us samay ke liye shravni bhi samajh gayi par ek baat uske dimag me baith gayi thi wo ye ki aniket daru pita hai
Fir jaisa decide hua tha dusre din aniket mast ready hua raste me ek jagah ruk ke cake aur buket liya aur hospital me pahucha, siddharth ko najar aaye isiliye jaanbujh ke uske cabin ke saamne se dheere dheere chalta hua gaya,
Aniket k dekhte hi siddharth khurchi se uth khada hua aur aniket ne use dekh ke bhi undekha kiya aur sidha dusre section ki or gaya, usne sabko dikhe aise hath me buket pakda tha aur dusre hath me cake,aur ye baat bhi uske dhyan me aa gayi thi ke siddharth uske piche piche aa raha hai…
To Be Continued……
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Typical girlfriend shravaniUpdate 22
Sharabi ke do thikane ya to theka ya to thane ab na to apna hero full sharabi tha na full mawali aur waise bhi subah subah daru pine ka to chance hi nahi tha isiliye is waqt maharaj canteen me baithe gappe haak rahe the aur unke sath the avinash komal aur shravni.. ab in logo ki bate chal hi rahi thi ke utne me waha entry huyi docter suman ki jo inhe pure college me dhundhte huye yaha pahuchi thi aur use dekhte hi aniket bola
Aniket-O dispensary aaj idhar kaise?
Suman bhi unke paas aakar baith gayi aur boli
Suman-kya aniket ye kya baat huyi aise nahi hota hai? Wo headphone wapis kar du kya? Komal keh rahi thi aniket aisa hai waisa hai par ab lag raha hai faltu me ye badi badi baate kar rahi thi tumse kuch nahi hoga…
Aniket-tumhare kehne ka kya matlab hai, siddharth ab tak kuch nahi bola kya? Par ye kaise ho sakta hai uska game bajane ke chakker me avi ne mera game baja diya aur tum keh rahi ho koi fark nahi pada? Matlab meri party fokat gayi…
Avinash-sachme party ka koi fayda nahi hua kya
Tab aniket ne avi baitha tha us khurchi pe laat mari
Aniket-sale naradmuni maje mat le teko baad me dekhunga
Jispar avinash bhola chehra banate huye bola
Avinash-par maine kya kiya hai…
Ab ye dono ki behasbaji shuru ho isse pehle hi suman unhe rokte huye boli
Suman-ye tumlog ka aise hi chalega to main jau kya…
Tab aniket suman wow aha baithate huye bola
Aniket-arey dispensary ruko jara baitho yaha aur avya harami apna gutter band kar thodi der dekh nahi raha docter ka dimag garam hai, jyada bolega to aisi jagah injection lagega ki har waqt baithte time yaad karega..
Ab avinash shant baith gaya aur aniket suman se bola
Aniket-ek baat batau docter suman, tumhara siddharth hoga bada docter par pyaar ke mamle me wo aadmi ekdum paidal hai, itna samjhaya fir bhi koi fark nahi pada, dekho ek baar aur soch lo tum..
Suman-kuch fark nahi pada aisa nahi hai, thoda to fark aaya hai, baatchit wagaire me par ab mujhe lagta hai ke main hi pasand nahi use, aura b mujhe uska picha chhod dena chahiye
Bolte bolte suman ki aankhen dabdaba gayi thi to aniket use pani ka glass pakdate huye bola
Aniket-arey prem diwani, jara santi rakhone bhai ye ekdum devdas banne ki jarurat nahi hai, wo pasand karta hai tumhe
Suman-mujhe acha lage isliye ye bate mat karo aniket
Aniket- arey nahi sachem wo bahut pasand karta hai tumhe, us din jab wo hotel me aaya tha tab ekdum sata savitra (male version of sati savitri
Wahi idhar jab shravni ne jab suna ke aniket aisa bola ki wo suman se pyaar karta hai shravni madem ekdum bhadak gayi na bhailog
Shravni-aapne aur kitni ladkiyo se kaha hai ke aap unse pyaar karte ho…
Shravni ki baat sunke aniket ne apne sar pe hath maar liya
Aniket-arey deviji aap abhi kripaya gussa mat hoiye yaha docter sahiba pehle hi garam hai pehle unko shant karne dijiye aap kaha chalti train me chadh rahi hai, aapko baad me sara kissa sonata aur samjhata hu pehle inki baat hone dijiye
Aniket ki baat se shravni chup to ho gayi par uske hoth hil rahe the aur wo muh ki muh me kuch badbada rahi thi jise avinash ne dekh liya aur bola
Avinash-shravni apne pyaar pe bharosa rakho jara…
Par shravni kuch nahi boli uska badbadana chalu hi tha par aniket ne uspe dhyan nahi diya aur suman se bola
Aniket-suman tumne itna samay raah dekhi hai na kuch samay aur sahi, ab itna utawala kyu ho rahi ho aur aisa kaha likha hai ke propose sirf ladka hi karega ladki nahi, jab ladkiya har jagaho par ladko se barabari kar rahi hai aur sirf barabari kya ladko se aage nikal rahi hai to fir is mamle me abla nari kyu ban jati hai? Wo propose nahi kar raha tu kar de...
Suman-main propos to kar du par meri himmat hi nahi hoti hai, uske saamne aate hi pair kaampne lagte hai aur muh se shabd hi nahi nikalte aur ha FYI Mr. aniket rane tumne shravni ko propose kiya tha usne tumhe nahi…
Aniket-theek hai theek hai mat kar propose use propose karne lagayenge par kare kya?
Aniket soch raha tha itne me komal boli
Komal-easy hai, jab ghee sidhi ungli se na nikle to ungli tedhi kar lo
Aniket-kammo sidhe sidhe bata na dialogue kya maar rahi hai
Komal-arey lunth aadmi, kisi bhi chiz ki value tab tab nahi samajhti jab tak hame uske khone ka darr na ho, hame kuch aisa karna chahiye ke siddharth ko lage ki suman usse dur ja rahi hai tabhi uski aankhen khulengi…
Aniket-waah! Kya dimag lagaya hai kammo, gazab solid idea diya hai tune
Komal-experience se hi sikhta hai insaan..
Komal ki baat sunkar avinash ne chauk ke use dekha aur usne use shant rehne ka ishara kiya..par aniket ke is baat ki taraf koi dhyan hi nahi diya wo suman ke bare me sochne laga aur shravni boli
Shravni-par aaplog kisi ko jabardasti pyaar me kaise gira sakte ho?
Jiska jawab avinash ne diya
Avinash-hum use pyaar me gira nahi rahe balki wo pehle se pyaar me hai hum to bas use uska ehsaas kara rahe hai isse pehle ki samay hath se nikal jaye…
Avinash ne apni baat bolte huye halke se komal ko aankh maar di aur usne avi ko table ke niche se laat..
Aniket bhi kuch samay tak kuch sochta raha aur fir bola
Aniket-Ok done..suman kal hospital me badhiya ready hoke jane ka…
Suman-par kyu?
Aniket-kyuki tumhara birthday hai kal
Suman-kuch bhi, mera birthday aane me char mahine hai abhi
Aniket-ye baat siddharth ko nahi malum na bas isiliye hum tumhara birthday kal hi manayenge
Suman-aur use pata hua to…
Aniket-to kya, feka feki ke paise nahi lagte, wo us time dekh lenge
Suman-ok done fir aage..
Aniket-kya sari kahani aaj hi sunogi? Kal ke liye bhi kuch bacha ke rakhne ka, tum bas meri ha me ha milate jana baki ka main dekh lunga, aur ha agar use aur jelous feel karwana hai to tum kuch bhi bol sakti ho I don’t mind kal dophar me milta hu…
Suman-theek hai tumhe jo sahi lage karo..
Aniket-don’t worry, don’t fear Aniket Rane is with you dear
Aniket ki baat sun kar suman muskurayi aur boli
Suman-be careful while calling me dear coz seems something is burning there..
Itna bolke aniket ke sar pe tapli maar ke suman waha se chali gayi, suman ki baat sun waha sabhi hase the siway shravni ke aur ye baat aniket ke dhyan me aa gayi aur fir usne shravni ko sara kissa sunaya, us samay ke liye shravni bhi samajh gayi par ek baat uske dimag me baith gayi thi wo ye ki aniket daru pita hai
Fir jaisa decide hua tha dusre din aniket mast ready hua raste me ek jagah ruk ke cake aur buket liya aur hospital me pahucha, siddharth ko najar aaye isiliye jaanbujh ke uske cabin ke saamne se dheere dheere chalta hua gaya,
Aniket k dekhte hi siddharth khurchi se uth khada hua aur aniket ne use dekh ke bhi undekha kiya aur sidha dusre section ki or gaya, usne sabko dikhe aise hath me buket pakda tha aur dusre hath me cake,aur ye baat bhi uske dhyan me aa gayi thi ke siddharth uske piche piche aa raha hai…
To Be Continued……
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उन्नीसवाँ भाग
क्या बात है क्या बात है क्या बात है।
बहुत ही जबरदस्त और बेहतरीन।
प्यार का इज़हार करने का तरीका तो साधारण था, लेकिन कोमल ने जो व्यवस्था की थी अनिकेत के लिए। वो काबिलेतारीफ थी। ऐसी दोस्त सबको दे ऊपरवाला। लेकिन यहां पर लगता है कि कोमल के मन में भी अनिकेत के लिए कुछ तो है, लेकिन वो अपने अरमान जब्द करके बैठी है, लेकिन उसके आँशुओ ने ये बोल दिया जिसे अविनाश ने देख लिया।।
ये वो अविस्मरणीय पल है जिसका हर प्रेमी जोड़ा प्रतीक्षा करता है,प्यार का इज़हार अगर सफल हो गया तो सारे जहां की खुशियां मिल जाती हैं और अगर प्यार असफल हो गया तो सारे जहां का दुःख।
अनिकेत नेट अपने प्यार का इज़हार तो कर दिया है, लेकिन अब देखना ये है कि श्रावणी क्या जवाब देती है।
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आखिर प्यार का इज़हार हो गया। जिसे सुनकर श्रावणी की बोलती बंद हो गई तो उसने अनिकेत को गले लगाकर सेउसके प्यार का जवाब दिया। फिर खूब धूम धड़ाका हुआ। और आखिर में अनिकेत श्रावणी को छोड़ने बाहर चला गया।
प्रेम की असली परिभाषा तो कोमल ने बताई। प्रेम हमेशा देता ही नहीं है कभी कभी कुर्बानी भी मांगता है। और वही कुर्बानी कोमल ने आज कर दी अनिकेत के लिए। और ऊपर से अविनाश को अनिकेत की कसम देकर उसे धर्मसंकट में डाल दिया।
देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है।
बहुत बढ़िया सर जी।
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