Incest Dil ka raja ( incest magic adultery )

[Parthh123]

Bhai jaan bahut keemti hai usko to magne ka soch bhi nhi sakte rahi bat story ki to ap jante ho jo psnd ho wo na mile to kya hota hai esiliye kahi diya jisko bhi hurt hua ho hmare comment se hm dil se maafi mangte hai sbse. Bura mat maniyega bhai logo.

 

[Mota lo]

SAh

Bhai dhanyabad apka ki apne hmare comment ka reply diya. Hm as a reader to bahut bura lgta hai but hme apka bhi khyal hai ki apke apne work honge apki apni priorities hongi jo sabse pahle hai story writing bad ki. But bhai as a reader jb ek update pdhne ke bad 28 - 30 page pe next next next krte jao aur koi update na ho kitna bura lgta hai bus esiliye hmne msg kiya agr hmari bat se apko hurt hua hai to mafi mangte hai apse. But you know apki story kamaal ki hai ek lagav sa ho gya hai. Sorry bhai.

Ye baat to sahi hai sala ye storie to durg se bhi khatarnaak hai
Update Na mile to chul si hone lagti haii
Jab update aaye to aisa lage ki oxygen mila ho
Jo bhi ho bhai ne lat laga di story ki

 

[Mota lo]

Subh se saam tak aapke karan 2/3 round laga lete hain site ke
Agar kuch bura lage to sorry
And get well soon
Waiting for your reply and ur update

 

[Bhimsen]

SAh

Ye baat to sahi hai sala ye storie to durg se bhi khatarnaak hai
Update Na mile to chul si hone lagti haii
Jab update aaye to aisa lage ki oxygen mila ho
Jo bhi ho bhai ne lat laga di story ki

100%sahi Kaha bhai Aapne

 

[Mota lo]

100%sahi Kaha bhai Aapne

 

[Kalyansurya]

AWESOME update

AWESOME update

Extraordinary update

Waiting for next update

Super DUPER update

Intezar rahega bhai jabardast update
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Mind blowing update

Thank you bhai ANUJ KUMAR

Bhai kal se update dena suru kar raha hun
Sab thik raha to pahle ki tarha roj update Post karuga

 

[Kalyansurya]

U
Umeed pe duniya kayam hai sab achchha hoga

Shi kaha Bhimsen bhai aapne

 

[Sadhu baba]

Bhai kahani toh kamal ki hay abhi tak yehi tak pada hay par lagta hy age bhi mast kahani ja rahi hay... Bura na manana hamari baat ka par aapki story main bahut se spelling mistakes hay kahi kahi toh hume 30 sec lag gaye yeh sochne main ki yaha kya likha hy or uske baad bhi hum figur out nahi kar paye ki yaha kaunsa word hona chahiye.... kahi kahi sentence bhi samajh nahi aya jayse ki ek yeh example ke taur par jo ki is kahani ka hi ek sentence hay (manisha.....tum char pe as rage go na )or khas taur par English wale words to bilkul galat hay....waise toh kahani fantasy or magic par hay toh is main toh kuch bhi ho sakta hay koi reason or logic se koi connection nahi.. par yaha is update main aysa kuch humne mehsoos kiya jo ki fantasy main bhi nahi ho sakta....jaysa ki ek family ke liye uske priyejano ka pyar....ab yaha surya priya ko bacha kar lata hay jo chot bhi khaya hua hay or jab ghar pahucta hay toh kamini ka toh reaction samaj main aya hay ki woh itne salo bad or phir pub main last time milne ke bad surya gayab ho gaya toh woh priya ko chor sorya ke gale lage par us waqt surya baki logon ke liyea ek anjan hay or sab priya ke kidnap hone se pareshan hay or jab sab ne priya ko dekha toh sab ko foran priya to attand karna chahiye khash taur par uski maa or bap,par sab wait karte rahe ki pahle ek anjan insan ki marhum pati ho jaye jismain kamse kam 5 min toh laga he hoga.... phir hum apni beti se milengi or roo kar uska haal chale poochhenge...

 

[Kalyansurya]

Bhai dhanyabad apka ki apne hmare comment ka reply diya. Hm as a reader to bahut bura lgta hai but hme apka bhi khyal hai ki apke apne work honge apki apni priorities hongi jo sabse pahle hai story writing bad ki. But bhai as a reader jb ek update pdhne ke bad 28 - 30 page pe next next next krte jao aur koi update na ho kitna bura lgta hai bus esiliye hmne msg kiya agr hmari bat se apko hurt hua hai to mafi mangte hai apse. But you know apki story kamaal ki hai ek lagav sa ho gya hai. Sorry bhai.

Bhai Parthh123 aapka swagat hai story pe our aap apne dil ki baat khul kar kah sakte hai yaha koi kisi baat ka bura nahi manta jab tak ki aap kisi ko dil dukhane wali baat na kro ( ye keval aapko kahne ke liya hai aapne comments me aisa kuch nahi likha Jo ki kisi ko dukhi kre) tab tak aapko kisi se sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi

Rahi baat aapke comments ke reply dene ki to bhai main sabhi ke chote se chore comments ka reply karta hun fir aapse kaise bhedbhav kar Sakta hun ha kabhi kabhi jyada busy hota hun to comments reply nahi karta hun uske liya main sabhi se sorry bol deta hun

Aapki baat bilkul Shi hai ek reader ke tour pe ke 1 update ke baad 20 .22 Page aise he comments se bhar jate hai to bhai iska main kuch nahi kar Sakta hun kyuki ye ek tarha se baki sabhi dost our bhaiyo ka story ya mere parti Jo pyaar hai wo apne comments ke jariye jata dete hai
Aise me sabhi ko reply dena mera farz hai bina kisi bhedbhav ke

Bhai roj update deta hun jitna mujhe free time milta hai
Jab main Yaha story read karta tha to main bhi aise he sochta tha ki writer update Post karne meitna time kyu leta hai
Per tab samaj nahi aata tha ab khud ko waha rakh kar dekhta hun to samaj aata hai
Aise me main Kisi bhi reader ko galat kaise kah Sakta hun
Bas itna he kahunga bhai ki aapko sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi hai aap sabhi se jyada mujhe jaldi rahti hai update dene ki kyuki mujhe bhi uski lat lag gayi hai

Thank you bhai Parthh123
Khushi rahiye healthy rahiye stay home stay sefe

 

[Kalyansurya]

Bhai jaan bahut keemti hai usko to magne ka soch bhi nhi sakte rahi bat story ki to ap jante ho jo psnd ho wo na mile to kya hota hai esiliye kahi diya jisko bhi hurt hua ho hmare comment se hm dil se maafi mangte hai sbse. Bura mat maniyega bhai logo.

Parthh123 bhai wo Xabhi bhai ne keval majak kiya tha
To Maine bhi ushe ek majakiya reply kar diya na unka koi irada kisi ko thesh phuchane ka na mera bas thoda bhut mazak kabhi kabhi kar leta hai yaha pe

Shi hai bhai jab koi story pasand ho our uspe update time se na mile to thodamond upset hota hai ye baat sabhi samajte bhi hai
Is liya wo aapki bhavnao ko bhi samjenge jaha aapki galti na ho waha sorry nahi bolna chaiye our jaha galti go waha maffi mangne se jijakhna nahi chaiye sab bhul story injoy kro
Aapko ek story suggest karta hun
Bhut acchi story hai my favorite story hai ......pyaar 100 baar...... Writer Enigma .bhai