Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[Xabhi]

Mujhe bs itna hi mahsoos hua ki Mai ek kone me baith kr yah Sara ghatna kram apni aankho me durbin lga kr dekh rha hu jb arhsemiya ko Meena ne dhamki di Mai bhi apne muh se bol pda waah! Kya baat hai bagal ke room me chota Bhai so rha hai Vo bhi aake dekhne lga kahi Mai bibi ke gum me pagal to nhi ho gya
Bad me mujhe btana Pda ki Mai apne ek dost ki apratim rachna ko padh kr anand utha rha tha Vo kafi der me convince hua hai Bol rha tha is lockdown me bhabhi ka gum sta rha hai abhi to gye ek hafta na hua
Ab use kya btau yha apne nain11ster bhai ne apni rachna se pagal kr diya hai ek Nainu bhai hai dusre Apne Jay Sutar Bhai hai

Aap dono bhaiyo ki rachna padh kr man prafullit ho uthta hai Mai lot pot ho jata hu mera dimag hi kaam Karna band kr deta hai
Ab kya hi bolu bhaya aise aise mod me ghusa dete ho aisa Aap dono hi kar sakte ho mana ki dono ke writing skills me bahut different hai pr...
Mai bs itna hi bolunga dono hi chate huye suljhe huye or sadhe huye writer hai hme garv hai ki ham aap jaise talented writer ke follower hai

Superb update with awesome writing skills Nainu bhai

 

[Xabhi]

Mujhe bs itna hi mahsoos hua ki Mai ek kone me baith kr yah Sara ghatna kram apni aankho me durbin lga kr dekh rha hu jb arhsemiya ko Meena ne dhamki di Mai bhi apne muh se bol pda waah! Kya baat hai bagal ke room me chota Bhai so rha hai Vo bhi aake dekhne lga kahi Mai bibi ke gum me pagal to nhi ho gya
Bad me mujhe btana Pda ki Mai apne ek dost ki apratim rachna ko padh kr anand utha rha tha Vo kafi der me convince hua hai Bol rha tha is lockdown me bhabhi ka gum sta rha hai abhi to gye ek hafta na hua
Ab use kya btau yha apne nain11ster bhai ne apni rachna se pagal kr diya hai ek Nainu bhai hai dusre Apne Jay Sutar Bhai hai

Aap dono bhaiyo ki rachna padh kr man prafullit ho uthta hai Mai lot pot ho jata hu mera dimag hi kaam Karna band kr deta hai
Ab kya hi bolu bhaya aise aise mod me ghusa dete ho aisa Aap dono hi kar sakte ho mana ki dono ke writing skills me bahut different hai pr...
Mai bs itna hi bolunga dono hi chate huye suljhe huye or sadhe huye writer hai hme garv hai ki ham aap jaise talented writer ke follower hai

Superb update with awesome writing skills Nainu bhai

Yha pr (is thread me) sirf story ke character or story se related baat hogi
Mere kisi bhi comment ko lekar Yadi bat karni hai to aaiye The Intertainment Adda pr khub masti ke sath debate krenge jb online honge
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[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Update:-107 ​

Sabhi baat kar rahi thi tabhi bare se screen par poori ladies gange najar aane lagi.… Jivisha gusse me jor se chilla di... "Humare ye private time hai jahilon, isse public kyon kar rahe... Annahhh, Serin !! tumhara bhai pagal ho gaya hai"… Usse sun'kar sab hansne lagi...


Serin hansti hui khadi hui aur khadi hokar apni janta ke aadar me wo sar jhukati hui chinkh'kar kahne lagi... "Ek jit ka jaam hum sab saath me toast karenge.… Bus humare liye dua kijiye... Aur haan hum jinda laute uski dua mat kijiyega... Hum jab kaatna shuru kare to hum tab'tak na ruke, jabtak poora kaat na de, bus itni dua kijiyega"…


Serin ki baat par sabhi hooting karte huye Master Serin ke nare laga diye... Kafi halka mahol tha. Tabhi achanak pahle organisation ke pass kisi baat ko le'kar hulchal hui aur baad me Zoren planet ke sarkari vibhag ke space center me... 10 carore viman ke bede ke sath, organization of middle universe (OMU) me report kar rahe the earth ke air force. Jinka commanding leader tha Canon Cooper, aur Second commanding ooficer Saras Singh.


Inke sath pahunche the Organisation of Universe Affairs (OUA) ke Director Shivalker Tripathi aur uski team. Earth ke most wanted bhagode, Pratham aur Joy ki lash dekhne, unke sath pahunche the bade-bade agency, FBI, CIA, MOSSAD, aur Indian intelligence ke mukhiya aur uski team. Indian Intelligence ko Bakshi hi lead kar rahe the…


Jaise hi sabko pata chala, sabko hairani si honi lagi. Luma ne sabhi viman ko Zoren par utarne ki izazat dee. Issi ke sath organization of middle Universe se jo eklauta planet dur tha, wo bhi bhagidari lene pahunch gaye.


Earth ke organization se Middle universe ke organization ki baat chal rahi thi. Wahin sena ki mukhiya Luna ne 10 carore viman ki jab jaankari lee, to pata chala ki aircraft me load hokar inke chhote-chhote 10 carore viman aaye hain, jo 2 seater capacity wale hain… Middle Universe ke chhote range ke viman ke mukable bhi yah viman kafi chhota tha aur dau par thi earth ki 20 carore jindgiyan.


Idhar bade bhaiya Director... Nischal to unhe uthva hi liya land hote, aur bakiyon ko Viggo viman me jane diya. Bade bhaiyya Nischal ko dekh'kar… "Asli ruthva to idhar hai tera chhote"….


Nandni:- Kya bade bhaiya mujhse nahi mile...


Bade bhaiya, Nandni ke hath me ek letter thamate huye.… "Mubarak ho, Organization Of Universe Affair (OUA) ki leader aur Chief Secretary Nandni ji"…. Iske baad ek letter Ansh ke hath me dete... "Doctor sahab aap ko bhi badhaeyan… aap ban gaye hain OUA ke deputy secretary"…


Nandni, Apni badi-badi aankhon se Bade bhaiya ko ghurti... "Ye sab kya, kab, kaise, kyon… aapka yahan hona"


Bade bhaiya:- Aree thamba re ek hi baar me kitne sawal puchhogi, Doctor sahab ko dekh, kaise shant hai...


Nandni:- Wo doctor hai, emotionless.. main to nahi hun na... Aur ye OUA kya bala hai...


Bade bhaiya:- "Earth ki sabse badi organization hai aaj ke samay me. Isme 20 alag-alag department hai. Jaise Universal force, Universal IT cell, Universal economic forum... Un department ke 20 alag-alag head aur un 20 ke upar main director, Ansh Deputy Secratary aur tu Chief secretary".

"Jaise apne yahan IAS, IPS rank hai, waise hi bahar gaanv ke ussi tarah ke rank wale duniya bhar ke 10 lakh aala adhikari ki bahali ho gayi hai, aur 10 lakh ki bahali hogi... Uske baad chhote-chhote staff clerk rank tak, so alag... Mere khyal se pahle sal me OUA ke 2 carore karmchari honge duniyabhar me aur tum uski mukhiya...


Ansh:- Duniya ka sabse bada jhol. Ye 20 lakh top rank holders ke upar rahegi... Bhala ho iss OUA ka...


Nandni:- Huhhh !!! Kam bolo Ansh… bade bhaiya ye sun'ne me to kafi achha lag raha hai, lekin poore earth par Universe ke bare me kaise khabar lagi…


Bade bhaiya:- "Abhi kya bataun main.. achanak ye sab ho gaya.... Kisne kiya, kaise kiya, pata nahi. Lekin kuchh din pahle poore world ke network ko hi kisi ne hack kar liya... Aur jis desh ki jo bhi bhasha ho, wahan likha aa raha tha... "Poora earth sharmshar hai"... Uske baad jo hi tasveer usne dikhayi.. uss bande ne to universe ke server tak ko hack kar'ke, tum logon ke yudhh ki taiyari dikha diya"...

"Are kya lade the re baba tum log. Vimano se antriksh dhaka hua tha. Sala wo dusra paksh wala, je mayla wo sala Ghastak ne to Viman ka ambaar lagaye tha aur tum logon ke itna kam Viman the ki sabki shwans si ruki thi… aur jab tum sab ne unhe bhaga diya,tab likha aa raha tha…

"Inka pahla target earth hi hota hai, lekin universe ki ye organization, OMU, na to humare gopiniya tarike se rahne par kabhi sawal uthaye aur na hi kabhi hume kayar kahe... Lekin kab tak, humari ladai ye log ladenge".

"Baba re, uske baad usne dikhaya... Earth par ho rahi ajibo garib gathnao ko aur jo jaan maal ki hani hui, uska doshi wo Astak aur Surpmarich, jis se tum log ladne wale ho"...

"Fir kya tha apne hi desh ko, sabhi janta kosne lage. Sabhi ek sur me maang karne lage... "Humare yahan ghus'kar maarne walon se yadi badla nahi liya to itni surksha intzam kis baat ka... Aapas me bahut veer bane, ab jab sabke frustration nikalne ka mauka mil raha aur sath me poora shakti pradarshan ka, to fir pichhe kyon hat rahe"...

"Kya karishma dikhaya tha uss hacker ne. Ek hi raat me jo duniya humare liye anjaan thi, wo bahar aa gayi… Sab bade-bade parde par alians ko dekh rahe the, jo humse bilkul bhi alag nahi the.... Aur to aur usne teri (Nandni), meri aur doctor sahab ki tasveer duniya ko dikha dee".

"Je mayla kahta hai iske contacts Organization Of Middle Universe (OMU), ke mukhiya se hai... Aur uske baad Shwetna ki tasveer dikah dee.. fir anth me kuchh tasveeren humare aur Shwetna ke sath ki... 3 post to nir'vivad ghoshit kar diye, ye prithvi ke bahari gaanv ka mamale dekhne ke liye"...


Nischal:- Vardali ne lagta hai akl ke parde khol diye guruji ke... Bhannaye guruji ne to kamal hi kar diya…


Bade bhaiya:- Kaun wo Apasyu ki baat kar rahe…

Nischal:- Haan wahi…


Thik ussi waqt, Luna ka call aaya aur usne turant hi Nischal ko viggo viman par bulayi aur 10 carore viman ki detail de'kar pareshani batayi...


Nischal, apne sabhi vimano ke size dikhate... "Hum 20 carore zindgiyon ko dau par nahi laga skate hain sir.. aap humare centeral viman ke crew ko kyun nahi join kar lete..


Canon Cooper:- Ye humare vimano ke size se hume judge kar rahe hain singh...


Saras Singh:- Thik hai fir ek dostana trial ho jaye.. Aapke ye high speed bade-bade viman vs humre ye low speed chhote-chhote viman…


Nischal:- Uski jaroorat nahi hai... Agar samtal maidan ho lakh varg kilometer ka, to viman ko kitne niche tak laa'kar humla kar sakte ho...


Cooper:- Sab pagal hain humare pass... Aur sabse bada pagal to Singh hai.. ye jamin se ek fit upar se viman ko poori gati se bhagate huye humla kar sakta hai. Artillery khatm ho jaye to ye kuchal kar maar dega...


Singh:- Cooper ye kaarname to tum bhi kar sakte ho aur aise pilots ki kami hai kya...


Nischal:- HuYu apne pass bache Matel se aaj ki raat se le'kar kal uddan bharne tak kitne viman ko mask kar sakte ho...


HuYu:- Jitne Matel bache hain usme jitne ho jaye... Shayad inke 10 carore...


Nischal:- Aap dono inke sath chale jaeye... Viman me chhota sa modification hoga uske baad Luna aapko samjha degi kya karna hai...


HuYu jaise hi wahan se nikla, Luna…. "Kya soch rahe ho Sahjade...


Nischal:- Loop me istmal karogi inhe frontline se, to dushman ke jahaji bedon ko ghus'kar maar aayenge ye... Inke mudne ki kashmta adbhut hoti hai... Pichhe se loop nikal hi aayega.. aage se kitna majboot beda kyon na dikhe... Jaise pichhli baar 18 lakh viman ke sath tumne kiya tha. Jarra socho, ye best hain apne iss chhote viman ke sath, wo bhi 10 caror ki sankhya me. Aur inki commanding bhi kafi strong hai...


Luna:- Thik hai fir yahi karungi Sahjade. Aur haan, apna dhyan rakhna...


Baton ke dauran raat ke 11 baj chuke the. Sab settel hi the. Sabhi Viggo viman me hi baithe. Poori vanar sena, yani ke dragon babies ko sun rahe the… Bade bhaiya se aakhir jaan pahchan bhi to karwani thi...


Nandni ne shararat me aankh maar dee. Yun to bade bhaiya upar se fiki muskan hanste huye "haan-haan bacche hain" kah rahe the. Lekin dragon babies ka size dekh'kar ander se utna hi bhaybhit bhi the... Idhar Nandni ka ishara hua aur udhar Bitti apne panje me daboch'kar bade bhaiya ko hawa me le lee... "Bade chachu, humse itna dar kyon rahe" … Bechare bade bhaiya, dar se halat hui patli aur niche se aa rahi thi hansi ki kilkaari….


Luna:- Sab bilkul shant...


Shwetna Wishper se line par thi... Shwetna ne pahle Viggo viman ko connect kiya.… "Nischal koi Serin, Jivisha aur tumse baat karna chahti hai... Main line organization ko transfer karti hun… HuYu se bolo Dark Universe ke relay station ko jarra support kar de... Becharon ki picture quality ghatiya hai"...


Nischal.… "Bilkul... Luna sabko le'kar yahan se jao"…


2 minute baad line connect thi aur Arhcemia line par thi… Ek Screen par Jivisha aur Serin, dusre screen par Nischal najar aa rahe the.…


"Hum kuchh din nind me kya lete rahe, tum sab ne to hume joker sabit kar diya... Suna hai yuddh ki taiyari kafi jodon se chal rahi hai"… .


Jivisha apni haath upar kari sabko shant rahne rahne ka ishara kee... Screen par Jivisha ki muskurati hui tasveer... "Tumhe bhaukte huye sunn'ne ka jarra bhi mood nahi hai Arhcemia.... Hum kal ke baad dark universe me ghusenge. Yadi taiayri poori na ho to abhi bata do... Thodi mohlat tumhe de dungi"…


Saitan si hansi ki tej awaj aur uske baad utni hi karkas chillane ki awaj.… "York planet... Aur ye hain humare thal sainik.... 4000 carore ki force aur 46000 carore waiting me... Oh haan ek baat batana bhul hi gayi"…


Itna kahne ke baad Arhcemia ne najara dikhaya… 4 viman ek ke baad ek 4 bade missile girakar dur gayab ho gaye... Sabhi missile niche pahunchte-pahunchte hawa ho gaye..


"Abhi jo missile dekhi, wo iss brahmand ki itni takatvar missile thi, jiska ek prayog Aaynek walon ne kiya tha... Jiske natije to tumhe yaad hi honge... Haan wo iss se kayi guna shaktishali tha, lekin suna hai prithvi vasiyon se tumhara gahra naata hai. Jarra wahan se pata kar lena ki ek Atom Bomb ko girane ke kya parinaam hote hain"..

"Atom bomb, Brahmand ka sabse vidhvansh'kari bomb. Kya hua dekh liya teeno ne. Yahan niche aate-aate uske chemical aur elements sab raw material me tabdil ho'kar hawa me ghul gaye... That's the power of Drak universe. Tumne ladne ke liye humari jamin par utarna hoga... Jamin.. York ki jamin.. najara dekhoge yahan ke jamin ka... Haan"...

"Yahan 4000 carore wo vansaj fauj hain, jiske ek ki takat tumhare lakh sainik nahi jhel pate... Waise 4000 carore fauj frontline me. 46000 caror waiting me... Dar to nahi lag raha na tum sab ko... Taiyari me kuchh samay chahiye to 30 din ka aur samay le lo... Uske baad bhi fate to kah dena, hum me aane ki himmat nahi... Fir hum aayenge... Aur jab aayenge tab tum paoge ki tumhare middle universe banjar aur registan ho gaya hai... Jaise ki far universe wale desert planet ko bana'kar gaye the"…


Jivisha:- Jaisa ki main pahle kah chuki hun... Hum 2 din baad aayenge... Matlab aayenge... Apni taiyari ko aur pukhta karo… kyonki mere love ke liye waise bhi ye 1000, 2000 ki fauj se bhidna bejjati jaisa lagta hai... Aur mere love ke dialogue jo chori ki ho, wo aisa nahi tha … dhyan se sun'na… aur yaad karne ki katai jaroorat nahi hai kyonki iske baad tum dialogue maarne ke liye jinda na rahogi.… To hoga kuchh aisa jab mere love wahan ki jamin par honge"...

"Nischal jab katna shuru karega tab maut kab aayegi uski chinkh tak nahi niklegi... Bus wahan bhay ka mahol hoga... Hawa me kate-fate sharir ke chithre, ek hi waqt me najar aayenge. Aisa lagega jaise ek hi waqt me lakhon kide makode kaise kat gaye... Pichhe walon ko kisi ke maut ki chinkh to nahi sunai degi, lekin aankhon ke samne jo najara hoga, uske bhay se unka kaleja... Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar… tharrrraaaaa uthega…

"Aur tab tum paoge ki tumahri aabadi badi teji se ghat'ti chali ja rahi hai... Sahjada aur uska beraham khanjar, jab tum sabka imtihaan lena shuru karega, tab tumhe ehsaas hoga ki tumhare napunsak se 50000 carore ki fauj par ek akela bhadi par gaya... Aur parso ka din jab shuru hoga to yahi hokar rahega.. likh kar rakh lo abhi"...


Nischal:- "Bus kar pagal… dar se kahin abhi hi maidan chhod'kar bhag na jaye... Waise kahar ka eklauta manjar main hi nahi dikhaunga... Meri patni ne sirf ek ke bare me bataya hai... Parso ke din tumhe swyam mahakaal ke darshan karwane kayi log ander ghusenge... Tumhari jamin par khade ho'kar tumhe lalkaarenge.. aur tum sab ashaya sa apne samuday ko kamti hote dekhoge"...

"Oh waise mahakaal ke bare me nahi pata ho to humare bade bhaiya aur OUA ke director sawalkar Tripathi se puchh lena. Computer ji jarra bade bhaiya ka shakal dikhao idhar...

gajab ka update ..to earth ke sainik bhi aa gaye is ladhai me hissa lene ..aur ye apasyu ne dikhaya tha sab earth ke logo ko ki kya ho raha hai universe me ..
ab to nandni aur ansh bhi director bann gaye OUA ke ..

bade bhaiya to dragons ko dekhke darr gaye aur bitti ne to hawa ki sair bhi karwayi unko ..

arhcemia theek hokar ab challenge karne aa gayi saamne aur dhamki bhara ek demo bhi diya ki uske hathiyar kitne powerful hai ,,waise astak ke paas abhi bahut fauj hai ..

par jivisha ki dhamki damdar thi .. nischal waise hi kaatega astak ki fauj ko ..

marr gaye to chalega par haarkar nahi aana hai ye serin ne kaha shayad aur wo majedar tha ,,josh kam nahi hona chahiye ..
aur apne earth ke cooper aur singh bhi maharathi hi hai jo darenge nahi ..

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Update:-108 ​

Nischal:- "Bus kar pagal… dar se kahin abhi hi maidan chhod'kar bhag na jaye... Waise kahar ka eklauta manjar main hi nahi dikhaunga... Meri patni ne sirf ek ke bare me bataya hai... Parso ke din tumhe swyam mahakaal ke darshan karwane kayi log ander ghusenge... Tumhari jamin par khade ho'kar tumhe lalkaarenge.. aur tum sab ashaya sa apne samuday ko kamti hote dekhoge"...

"Oh waise mahakaal ke bare me nahi pata ho to humare bade bhaiya aur OUA ke director sawalkar Tripathi se puchh lena. Computer ji jarra bade bhaiya ka shakal dikhao idhar...


Jivisha, khush hoti... Bade bhaiya yahan.. Kya baat kar rahe ho Love... Mujhe pahle nahi bata sakte the...


Nischal:- Abhi chal rahe mahol me rah gaya batana...


Jivisha:- Tumhari himmat kaise hui ye baat bhulne ki...


Shwetna:- Shahsika poora middle universe dono tota-maina ko dekh raha hai aur main bhi batana bhul gayi, middle universe se earth bhi connect hai...


Jivisha apna muh chhipati... "Pahle nahi bata sakti thi"…


Arhcemia:- Aaj ki raat jata lo jitna pyar jatana hai... Kyonki kal jab tum sab mehanat karke wahan se yahan ke liye ravana hoge, uske pahle minute me hi fir kabhi pyar jatane ka mauka nahi milega...


Pichhe se Meena apne dono panje par chal'kar aayi aur pichhe se Jivisha ke kande me, apni wo upar sine ke niche wale 2 chhote paun ko baahn ki tarah lapet'kar apne bade se muh ko, chhota gol bana'kar, Jivisha ke gaal ko chumti….


"Maa isse dekh'kar ulti si aa rahi hai... Suno khisyayi dayan... Kar'ke batane ka, aise baat-baat bahut khel lee. Chalo ab screen band karo… Maa kasam kahti hun, tune itni dhamkiyan di hai na ki mere samne aayi to tujhe main aisa fadungi ki dobara janm lene se teri aatma daregi, chal bhag ab yahan se"….


Jivisha, Meena ke gaal ko chumti... "Tere dar se kahin wo sach me bhag gayi to.… Chal bhagi hogi to pakad lenge, yadi kahin heart attack aa gaya to tu faadegi kise"…


Serin:- Humare daamad ki hi faadegi... Kyon Meena…


Jivisha:- Meri Shashika, ab kya poora universe hume dikhata rahega... Suna nahi meri beti kya boli... Pahle iss Arhcemia ko hatao…..


Nischal:- Tum kaisi ho Baby…


Jivishsa:- Love... Serin ko main udhar bhej rahi hun... Mujhe lagta hai Serin wahan kuchh behatar karegi... Waise bhi master Serin aur master Nischal sath me honge, jispar super master Nandni ka hath hoga, fir maza hi kuchh aur hoga… waise bhi OUA ki Chief Secretary ki team hai... Kahar charo ore se barashna chahiye...


Nandni:- Kamini, to tu kuchh din pahle mujhe issi ki badhai de rahi thi… ghup-chup dimagi chat kar aayi apne atoot mitrvar se...


Jivisha:- Yaar uss khadus ne Jyoti bhabhi ko chhod diya re... Wo bhi hoti...


Ansh:- Organization Of Universal Affair (OUA) ko family affair hi bana dalo... Jo log laut'kar gaye yahan se, unhe kyon chhod dee...


Niachal:- Sab aaj hi baat kar lo. Hum OMU se connect hain aur poora Middle Universe hume sun raha. Ab jara sab shant rahenge… Jisa tumne hi Serin ko apne ore bulaya tha...


Jivishsa:- Haan to abhi main hi kah rahi hun na...


Nischal:- Lekin wahan tum kamjor...


Shwetna:- Main hun na, multivitamin deti rahungi, koi kamjori nahi hogi...


Meena:- Mujhe sab kyon bhul jate ho... Main hun idhar... Apni maa ke sath...


Nayla:- Abhi hum bhi hain idhar... Kisi ko shak hai kya…


Serin:- Nischal iss baar meri bhi ikchha hai ki main York ke uss maidan me rahun...


Tabhi sabhi screen kali ho gayi aur awaj aane lagi…. "Sab dekh rahe hai yahan earth par, aur sath me tumhare ghar ke log bhi... Organization ki line band kar lo, aur tum sab unse baat kar lo"…


Jivisha:- Mitr hume universe me hero bana'kar, khud ki pahchan chhipa liye... Kyon logon ke bich aam si jindgi jini hai tumhe kya???


Serin:- Apni baat bol'kar usne connection cut kar diya hai…


Jivisha:- Isse ulta taang'kar maine thappad nahi lagaya na to fir kahna... Apne logon ke bich chalne wali normal si jindgi ko kamine ne heroic bana diya. Waise mukhiya ji se kya kahungi... Bhagwan itne dino se sab kuchh sahi lay me tha, fir aise situation hi kyon…


Shwetna:- Bhagwan ne nahi ye situation tumhare atoot mitrvar ne diya hai...


Jivisha:- Ab to mitrta nibhani hi hogi... Serin tumhe abhi nikalna chahiye aur ye naag dansh tum le'kar jao... Yahan mere pass ek naag dansh hai...


Serin:- Bhabhi tum apni kshmta kam kar rahi ho...


Shwetna:- Bilkul bhi nahi kam hai... Ye sahi descision hai... Nischal se kahna hum sare connection ab tod rahe hain... Ab sidha nikalte waqt connect honge...


Idhar jab'tak Jivisha ki baaten chal rahi thi, udhar OMU me earth se sandesh aana shuru ho gaya ki kya jo unki aankhon ne atom bomb ka humla dekha, wo satya tha ya koi grafics desine aur VFX ka effect tha...


Organization se ek sandesh jaari hua, jisme na sirf earth ke liye, balki drishya dekh rahe 6000 planets par rah rahe aam log aur aam parivar jinke bacche iss ladai me samil the unke liye bhi tha.…


"Wo apni kshmta dikha'kar hume divert nahi kar sakte. Kisi ko bhaybhit hone ki jaroorat nahi aur Master Serin ne jaisa kaha... Ek jaam hum Middle Universe wale sath me toast karenge..… Isliye apne jaam takrane ko tayar rahiye... Raat jyada hai sabhi sukoon se so jaeye"…


Har koi raat me aaram karne ke baad, agli subah apna-apna suit up kar liye. Sabse pahli uddan Nischal ki team bharti... Jivisha Pvt linr par thi, uske sath Miya bhi thi... Miya muskurati hui Nischal se sirf itna hi kahi.… "Koi raham nahi"…


Itna kah'kar dono screen se out hui. Nischal ne apni team ko taiyar kiya. HuYu jo uss din complete suit par Nandni ki poori theory experiment kar chuka tha. Complete suit ka lab trail to ho chuka tha, ab ground test hone ja raha tha… HuYu ki poori team compete body mask me thi. Nilbhut sainikon ke 2 carore ka beda Nischal ke sath uske viman par tha... Lekin unhone metal ka body mask nahi liya tha…


Ansh, Nandni, sabhi dragon bacche, HuYu aur uski 30 ke team ke liye, HuYu ka complete mettelic suit tha, lekin sabhi ek Nilbhut senapti Aerobok ki command me the aur unhi ke order anusar sabhi Nilbhut sainik, team HuYu aur team dragon niche utarte...


Jivisha, Shwetna aur Nayla ke sath taiyar thi. 20 lakh Nilbhut striyon ka ek bada sa samuh tha inke bede me, aur 50 dragon babies. Yahan bhi same commanding process tha. Nayla yahan ki commanding incharge thi... Yahan bhi HuYu ka complete metallic suit pahunch chuka tha. Yahan bhi kisi Nilbhut stri ne complete body mask ka istamal nahi kiya tha... Haan lekin inke pass 5000 ki tukdi complete mettalic suit me thi.


Luna, the centre of war Machine, Viggo viman me apne 6 lakh crew ke sath pahle uddan bharti, abhiyan ki shuwaat ki. Viggo viman jaise madmast hathi ho, jo apne dumdaar chal se sabko samjha raha ho ki kaun aa raha hai...


Luna ka viman Zoren space center me jakar khada hua aur sabse pahla command Luna ka... "Sahjade, Shashika aap dono uddan bhare"…


Nischal ke banaye 4 prism viman Jivisha ke pass tha aur 1 prism viman Nayla lekar gayi thi.… Paachon viman ko pahle se interconnect kar'ke, ek Central command ke sath, 4 sub command wala 110 varg kilometer ka bada sa prism viman khada tha. Viman me sawar ho'kar Jivisha apni poori team ke sath Wishper planet ke vayumandaliya kshetr se dhire-dhire bahar hui...


Wahin Nischal ne bhi Hyber Matel se bane 4 carore viman me se kuchh viman ko nikal'kar khud se modify kiya, aur 180 varg km ka uska bhi viman, apne sare crew ke sath kafi teji me uddan bharna shuru kiya.. Aage-Aage Nischal ka viman aur pichhe se kayi carore viman ek sath nikle...


Sabse aage Nischal ka viman pichhe 2 kinare se katar lagaye caroron viman ka jakhira... Uske pichhe Viggo viman tha jo Madhya ki postuin me tha kyonki uske charo ore gol formation me arbon viman apne rani, Viggo viman ke sath khadi thi.


Viggo viman ke sath anya large viman, prithvi ke air crafts ka career bana hua tha... Aur uske ander sabhi pilot apne command ka intzar kar rahe the…


Takriban 12 ghante baad sabhi Dark universe ke border par the... Nischal aur Jivisha ki viman sabse aage parellel thi. Wahin uske pichhe caroron viman ka beda aur uske pichhe madhumakkhi ki tarah formation me viggo viman, jiske upar-niche dayen-bayen, aage aur pichhe arbon viman ka beda...


Nischal aur Jivisha ka viman biche se passage ke through connect hua. Nischal apne kamre se jaise hi bahar aaya, aaj poorn mahakal hi ban'kar aaya tha. Kamar me kewal baagh ki chhal, sharir par chita bhashm lagaye. Bhasm ke niche vish ke sevan (zahar pine wala) ke karan uska halke nile rang ka chamkta hua poora badan.


Shant chehre ka wo bhavya swaroop, jise dekh'kar hi alokik roop hone jaisa mehsus ho. Ek aisa swaroop jise dekh'kar bhaybhit hui shamst jan samuday, apne rakshak ko dekhne ke jaisa mehsus kare aur uth khade ho aise, mano hauslon ne nayi unchai de di ho… Wahin shant swaroop ke alokik roop jab dushman dekh le, jiska sanhaar karne nikle ho, fir najaren poori fer le. Himmat jawab de jaye fir uss kaya ko poora dekhne maatr ke liye... Najren milani to dur ki baat hai...


Laal raushni bikherti Nischal ki laal aankhen... Uski chamak aaj dur se dekhi ja sakti thi... Uske shant swaroop par ye laal aankhen jaise bhay ka pratik ho.. khauff to khud hi paida ho jaye.


Jab Nischal ne apni maujoodgi darshayi... Aur mahakaal swaroop me aa'kar khada hua... Arbon vimano ke bede me dur-dur tak kisi ke hone ka ehsas ho raha tha. Koi aisa, jiske hone matr se hi dil me sahas aur josh paida hote ja raha tha...


Gale me raksha sutr ka pendent, jo bilkul gale se chipka aur ek mukhi rudraksha jaisa pratit ho raha tha. Kamar ke opar patle belt se laga uska beraham khanjar aur us khanjar ke handel me lagi 2 energy patthar ki chamak, aaj finki si thi kahin.


Dono naag-dansh sanyukt ho chuke the, jo Nischal ke hathon me tha... Naag dansh ke upar bane naag ki bindi jaisi aankhen, aaj laal aur nili, dono rang barabar bikher rahi thi... . Khule paun, hathon me lambi naag dansh, bevaak aur madmast chaal me Nischal passage ke ore badha...


Wahin Jivisha kisi maharani ki poshak me... Gahre laal rang ki saree, abhushan se gala aur hath bhada hua. Kamar ke halka upar kamarband aur bhadi chham chham karti payal ki awaj. Kamar ke side line se khula hissa, Jivisha ke khule hath, chehra gardan... Sharir ka har khula hissa, hire ki tarah chamkti shwet rang ki raushni bikher raha tha jo halka nila pratit hota.


Halki nili aakhen aur bilkul shwet rang ka uska manmohak chehra jo halka nile rang me lipta dikh raha tha... Jab wo chal rahi thi to mano aisa lag raha tha, gurur chal raha ho. Jab wo chal rahi to aisa lag raha tha abhiman chal raha ho... Dono sirf aur sirf yudhh me sammilit logon ke liye yahan mil rahe the.


Ye internal live telecast tha, jo koi aur nahi dekh sakta tha… Dono, passage ke bilkul madya me the... Viman itni unchai par thi ki wahan se sabhi 200 carore viman saaf najar aa rahe the...


Bade bhaiya aur ansh wahan agni prajwalit kiye huye the... Manntr uchharan jaise wahan ka vayu kar raha ho... Sankh naad hua aur bade bhaiya jab vijayi tilak lagane pahunche, Nischal aur Jivisha ko vayu me guru ke hone ke aabhash hua... Dono ke sar jhuk gaye... Hath naman ko, aur bade bhaiya ne dono ko vijayi tilak lagane ke sath hi, Nischal ke dono kalai aur gale me rudraksh ki maala daal diya...


Wahin Jivisha ke gale me 6 pendent ka ek hissa pahna diye... Aur 3 hissa Shwetna, Meena aur Nayla ke liye diya. Bache 2 hisse me se ek hissa Luna ko pahna diya gaya tha aur ek hissa Serin ko. Aur issi ke sath wahan yudhh ke bigul charo ore se phoonke ja rahe the...


Nischal aur Jivisha apne dono hath jod'kar, apne sabhi sainikon ke samman me sar jhukate huye…. "Mere sabhi sathiyon ko naman hai.…. Mirtyu bhi tab tak nahi aaye, jab tak hum apne lakshya me kamyab na ho jaye"


Jivisha ne hunkaar bhadi aur logon ne samman me sar jhuka'kar ek sath awaj laga diye... Sabhi 200 carore viman me maujood 5000 carore sainik, har koi apne ander romanch sa mehsus karne laga...


Nischal hath me ishare se samne Dark Universe ka darvaja dikhate.… "Iss seema ke pichhe na sirf wo Astak hai jo Dark Universe ka doshi hai aur Middle Universe ke upar buri najar dala, balki iss seema ke pichhe sadiyon se Middle universe par khtra bana, Middle Universe ka bhagoda Surpmarich bhi hai... Aur hum kisi ko bhi nahi bakshne wale."

"Jab jaan lena shuru karo to na koi raham karo, na ruko, aur na jhuko... Bus maro maro aur itna maro ki iss sansar me wapas janm lene se inki rooh bhi kaanp jaye, aage badho"...


Nischal ne jaise hi hath ka ishara kiya... Arbon Viman katar banaye nische se gujarne lage... Nischal aur Jivisha ki najar mili... Dono ke chehre bilkul shant the aur aankhon me ek dusre ke liye samman... Dono ek jhalak ek dusre ko dekhe aur mud chale apne wapas apne-apne viman me…

gajab ka update ...to apasyu ke batane par pata chala ki earth ke log bhi inki tota maina jaisi baate sun rahe hai ..
meena ne bhi sahi dhamki di arhcemia ko ..

aakhir wo din aa hi gaya aur saari sena pahuch gayi dark universe ke darwaje par unka sanhaar karne ..

nischal ka jaisa varnan kiya hai ,uski chaal ,aankhe padhkar maja aa gaya ..

aur nischal jivisha ko dekhkar saare sena ke dil me josh to bharna hi hai ..

bade bhaiya ne dono ko vijay tilak lagaya aur nischal ne aage badhne ko bol diya sabko ..

update padhkar ekdam mast feel hua ki padhte hi rahe aisa lag raha hai .. ek ek shabd jaise chunkar likha ho ,,romanch paida ho gaya ..

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro

 

[Rawat@7]

Na Apasyu ki

 

[ragish7357]

behatrin update bro
sare yuddh ki dono trf ki puri taiyari hi dikha di
middle organisation ka sath dene earth ke yoddha bhi aa gye
or earth walo ko universe ki khabar pahuchai apne guru ji ne
kya hi dialogue dikhaye usne earth walo ko
or apne chote chote vimano ko lekr pahuch gye wo universe m apna khud ka ek organisation banakar
or iss organisation ke mukhiya bna diye ek hi pariwar ke log
wese archemia naam ki nagin ne jagte hi apna faan uthakar jhr uglna suru kr diya h
kya hi daraya baccho ki trh
wese uske jagne ke baad astak ki fauj kafi powerful or anushasit ho gyi h
or phir jivisa ke khr barsati shabdo ne to archemia ko bhi chup kr diya
or phir family drame ke beech yuddh ka aagaj
or nischal ka mahakal roop romanchit krne wala tha
or dusmano ke liye kaal ka paryay bhi
dekhte h yuddh m astak ke asur vijayi hote h
ya phir kaal apne rodra roop se bs khoon hi khoon piche chodega

 

[Naina]

Super se upar har ek pehlu har ek mod aur kaafi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi aur jo dialogue hai
pata nahi kyun par aaj jiviya aur serin ke dialogues ko prasansha karne ko jee kare
Khair...... so akhiri kar wo waqt aa hi gaya hai.....
Baakiyo ka to pata nahi par nischal samne walo ko kide makode ki tarah masal dega....
Btw jis tarah se shabdo dwara kahani roop mein hamare samaks pesh kar rahe hai aap lage ki kahani nahi balki samne ghat rahi ho ye ghatanaye.... bole to

Let's see what happens next
Nischal... Vijay bhava
Sabki band baja do....
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills nainu ji

 

[Naina]

Naina ji chhodengi nhi aapko Nainu bhai dekh lena Naina ji aap

apsyu..? koun apsyu? Khair jo bhi ho .
Btw
Don't Know, Don't Want To Know, Don't Care.