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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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Behtrin to sabki location mil chuki h surya ko bss vampire wale ko dhundne me jyada mhnt lgne wali h...khair dekhte h ab kya hone wala h kya iss baar vikraal kabu me aa payega kyuki agr iss baar nikla to firse bhesh bdl lega aur attack bhi kra hi dega ftaak se jo jaisa dev ne btaya h kaafi gambhir attack hone wala h...chliye dekhte h ki surya and team inke mansubo ko fail kr paate h ya nakam ho jaate h. Nakam hone ka matlab h sb kuchh tabah ho jaana...to surya and team puri jaan lga degi pr nakam hone ka risk nhi le skti h dekhte h kya hota h aur dev ki entry kb hoti h. Waiting brother👏👏👏🗡
 

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Awesome update bro
Nice update


Bhai log next update post kar diya hai.

Behtrin to sabki location mil chuki h surya ko bss vampire wale ko dhundne me jyada mhnt lgne wali h...khair dekhte h ab kya hone wala h kya iss baar vikraal kabu me aa payega kyuki agr iss baar nikla to firse bhesh bdl lega aur attack bhi kra hi dega ftaak se jo jaisa dev ne btaya h kaafi gambhir attack hone wala h...chliye dekhte h ki surya and team inke mansubo ko fail kr paate h ya nakam ho jaate h. Nakam hone ka matlab h sb kuchh tabah ho jaana...to surya and team puri jaan lga degi pr nakam hone ka risk nhi le skti h dekhte h kya hota h aur dev ki entry kb hoti h. Waiting brother👏👏👏🗡

Sahi kaha bhai unko zinda chhodne ka risk surya nahi le sakta. Lekin uski main problem filhaal ye hai ki inko maarne ka tarika use nahi pata hai. Baaki ab dekhte hai vo kya karta hai





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Superb Updatee
Adbhut update bhai
Jakash update dost
Suppper fantastic updates
Behtareen update bhai 👌
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Zabardast update
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Awesome update
superb update
very nice update



Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe . Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye surya ka plan kaha tak safal hota hai. Kya sach me vo vikraal ko maar pata hai ya vikraal fir se bach jayega. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe...






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Raat ko ham logo ne apni car ko uske ghar ke bahar roka or rony ko car le ja kar thoda dur rehne ko bola taaki rony unke liye surprise rahe. Vo bhi samajh gya. Or vo car leke ghar se thoda aage chala gya or ek andheri jagah per car ki saari lights band karke baith gya.




Bahi maine uske ghar ki bell bajai.




Thodi der baad usne darwaja khola.




SS- ji kahiye kisse milna hai.






Main- ji mujhe apse hi milna hai. Mera naam Rakesh hai. Or mujhe aapse ek bahut hi imp baat karni hai.






SS- kis baare me.





Main- ji andar chalke baat kare. Yaha thoda khatra ho sakta hai. Raat ho gyi hai. Or aapko to pata hi hai aajkal kya ho raha hai pure desh me.





SS- ok aajaiye.




Ye kehke vo side hua or me andar aagya usne darwaje ke aaju baaju dekha or gate band karke vo bhi aagya. Usne mujhe baithne ko kaha.


Main baitha. Mere saamne vo baitha.







SS- ji kahiye kya baat karni hai aapko






Main- ji darashal mujhe aapse ye kehna haj ki. Me jaan gya hu ki aap suraj Sharma nahi hai. Balki koi behrupiye hai





Ye sunke vo ek dum se khada ho gya.




SS- ye kya bakwas hai.






Main- ye bakwas nahi sach hai.






SS- achha or ye tum sabit kaise karoge.






Main- matlab maine sach hi kaha tum asli suraj nahi ho. Balki koi behrupiye hi ho. Kyuki agar aapki hote to ye sawal nahi karte.






SS- ha tumne sahi pehchana me asli nahi hu.




Ab hairan rehne ki baari meri thi. Kyuki isne itni jaldi jo kabul kar liya tha ye. Mujhe laga ye kuch dakeel dega lekin isne to maan liya. Kahi use pata to nahi ki me surya hu.







SS- kya sochne lage mr. Rakesh. Yahi na ki maine itni jaldi kabul kyu kar liya.






Main- ha.







SS- vo isliye ki mere pass jyada samay nahi hai waste karne ke liye. Isliye jaldi batao kya chahte ho tum.







Main- chahta to tumhari mout hu. Baaki tumhari shraddha.






SS- tumhara naam definately rakesh to nahi hai. Sach batao kon ho tum.






Main- tumhara bahut hi khaas dost hu me.






SS- main apne dosto ko kabhi nahi bhulata.






Main- are yaar ye to galat baat hai tum mujhe kaise bhul gye. Yaad hai ham jungle me mile the. Or maine tumhari bahut pitaai ki thi. Tum almost marne hi wale the. Ki tumhare chamche ne tumhe bacha liya tha.






Ye sunte hi vo seat se ek dum uchhal kar khada ho gya.




SS- surya.






Main- are pehchan liya tumne kya baat hai. Ha me hi hu.




Ye kehke maine apna mask nikaal diya.



Vo ek dum hairan reh gya mujhe apne saamne dekhkar. Use bilkul bhi yakeen nahi tha ki me aise achanak uske saamne aajaunga. Or uska bhaanda itni jaldi foot jayega.







Main- bas karo ab ye suraj ka nakab hatao apne chehre se. Or asli chehra dikhao.





Ye sunna tha ki achanak se hi usne apna roop badal liya. Uske haavbhav sab badal gye. Vo ab vikraal tha. Itna bhayanak chehra ki kamjor dil wale to use dekhkar hi mut de.








Vikraal- kya baat hai yaar tune to mujhe pehchan liya.





Main- shak to mujhe bahut pehle se tha tujhper. Or use hi confirm karne me yaha aaya tha or mera shak sahi nikla.





Vikraal- to ab kya irada hai. Ladna hai mujhse






Main- irada to yahi hai.





Vikraal- janna nahi chahoge ki maine ye roop kyu liya.





Main- mujhe ye janna hai ki tumhe suraj ke baare me pata kaise chala ki ye papa ka dost hai. Or tumhe vo mila kaha.







Vikraal- Mujhe kisi aise ki hi talash thi jo ye bhoot pret vampire bagera me maanta ho. Or meri kismat achhi thi ki mujhe aisa insan mil gya or vo pehle se hi tumhare papa ka dost nikla. Bas mere dono hathon me laddu aagye.







Main- badiya hai. Baise tumne jo kal raat kiya na. Usse itna gussa aaraha hai mujhe ki kya batau me.





Vikraal- isi liye to kiya tha vo sab. Taaki tujhe gussa aaye or tu mujhe pagalon ki tarah yaha baha dhunde. Or me aaram se baith ke tujhe bebas or lachar hota dekhu. Lekin tu dedh Shana nikla. Mujhe pehle hi dhund liya.








Main- to ab seedhe tarike se bata kya chahta hai tu.





Vikraal- jawab tumhe pata hai





Main- vo pathar tujhe nahi milne wala.






Vikraal- to teri jaan dede.






Main- ye bhi tujhe nahi milne wali. Kuch or bol.






Vikraal- mujhe bas yahi dono cheeze chahiye. Or use paane ke liye me kisi bhi had tak jaunga. Fir chahe is pure desh me keval tu hi akela zinda kyu na bache. Tu bhi jaanta hai ki me kya kya kar sakta hu. Or tu har jagah nahi pahuch sakta. Tere 3 bhai hai na. To tum charo milke 4 jagah sambhal loge lekin is desh me hajaron jagah hai jaha me ek sath hamla kar sakta hu. Tu jab tak ek ko bachayega tab tak me kai ilaake saaf kar dunga.









Main- matlab tumhe zinda chhodne ka koi fayeda nahi hai. Tumhe maarna hi padega.





Vikraal- ya fir tumhe marna padega. Tabhi ye sab band hoga.






Main- kaise hoga. Mujhe maar kar tu agar vo pathar hasil kar lega or black heart ko zinda kar dega to fir vo yaha aake aise hi tabahi machayega. Infact sabhi ko maar dega.







Vikraal- kuch ko chhod dega. Varna uski gulami kon karega. Ladkiya ko chhidega jo usse din raat chudwayengi. Ek no. Ka aayash hai vo. Kisi per uski ek baar najar bigad gyi fir to use bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta uske neeche laane se. Or use har din ek nai ladki chahiye hoti hai. To soch le is puri prithvi per total kitni hogi. Vo un sabhi ko ek ek karke bhogega.





Uska ye kehna tha ki mera ek jordar punch laga uske jabde per. Saale ke 4-5 dant uper hawa me uchhal gye. Or vo filhaal super slo-mo me neeche gir raha tha. Tabhi maine jaldi se uske seene me apna super punch mara. Ye punch saamne wale ki body ke aarpaar nikal jata hai. Mera hath uske dil ke baaju se aarpaar nikal gya. Or apna hath bahar nikalte samay maine uske dill ko pakad liya or dum laga kar bahar kheech liya.





Or fir time fir se apni gati se chalne laga or vo dhadam se neeche gira. Uske pure farsh per charo taraf khoon failne laga. Mere hathon me jo uska dill tha vo bilkul bhi nahi dhadak raha tha. Maine is baat per baad me gour kiya ki vo pehle se hi nahi dhadak raha tha. Ye kaafi shocking tha mere liye.




Mujhe laga kahi ye bhi to vampire nahi hai. Lekin vampire ki powers aisi to nahi hoti hai. Ye to din me bhi ghum sakta hai or apna roop bhi badal sakta hai. Fir iska dill kyu nahi dhadak raha tha. Aisa to ho nahj sakta ki mera hath andar jaate hi dill ka dhadakna ruk jaaye. Ye impossible hai.




Me is waqt kaafi confuse tha ki ye ho kya raha hai. Kahi aisa to nahi ki ye vikraal na ho. Lekin dev ki khabar galat bhi to nahi ho sakti hai na. Jarur kuch or hi mamla hai.





Me lagatar uske dill ko dekhkar yahi sab soch raha tha. Tabhi mujhe kisi ki aawaj aai




Maine najre utha kar dekha to vo vikraal tha jo mere saamne sahi salamat khada tha. Or iska ek hi matlab tha ki ye sala kuch alag hi film hai itni aasani se nahi marne wala ye. Farsh per khoon ki ek boond bhi nahi thi. Pura farsh pehle ki tarah chakachak ho gya tha.

Me puri tarah se confuse tha ki ab me kya karu jisse iski kahani yahi khatm ho jaaye.










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Vikraal- kya hua bade confuse lag rahe ho.






Main- ye sab kaise hua. Kya tha ye. Tera dill abhi bhi mere hath me hai. Fir tu zinda kaise hai.







Vikraal- jadu hai ye. Mera sharir ke andar ya bahar ke ang agar kat bhi jaaye ya nikaal liye jaaye to bhi me zinda reh sakta hu. Meri body turant hi dusre ango ka nirmaan kar leti hai. Tune mera dill nikala ab mere andar ek naya dill aagya hai. Chahe to hath laga kar meri dhadkanon ko mehsus kar sakte ho.







Main- jab maine tere dill ko chhua tha tab bhi vo nahi dhadak raha tha.






Vikraal- mera dill 1 min. Me keval 10 baar hi dhadakta hai. Ab teri kismat kharab jo tune aise samay me hath dala andar jab vo nahi dhadak raha tha. Or tune to ye kitni speed se kiya to vaise bhi tujhe ehsas nahi hota sayad.








Main- to kya tujhe maarne ka koi tarika nahi hai






Vikraal- sayad nahi hai. Or agar hai bhi to tujhe kyu batau. Taaki tu mujhe maar sake.






Main- agar tere do tukde kar du to.






Vikraal- to me fir se jud jaunga.





Me totally confuse tha ki kya karu me. Kaise ise maaru. Mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aaraha tha. Tabhi meri najar uske gale me moujud locket per padi. Jo thoda thoda chamak raha tha. Or mujhe yaad aaya ki ye isi se mujhe maarne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or ise pata hai ki meri body bhi kuch kuch aise hi react karti hai. Matlab agar ye locket se me mar sakta hu to sayad ye bhi mar sakta hai. Lekin ab tension ye thi ki ye sala kuch bolta hai mantra type usko activate karne ke liye. Tabhi mujhe ek idea aaya. Ki aaj to ye bach hi jayega lekin kyu na isse ye locket me chheen lu. Fir pata karu ki ye kya bolta hai is locket ko. Mere lences ki madad se.



Kosis kar sakta tha me..





To maine fir se super duper slo-mo kiya time ko. Sab kuch jaise ruk sa gaya. Halaki kamre me sab pehle se hi ruka hua tha. Sivay ghadi ke. Lekin is baar vikraal mujhe achhe se dekh raha tha. Jaise hi me uske karib pahucha mujhe pata tha ya to ye gayab hoke peeche se war karega ya fir mujhper direct hamla karega. Or me dono ke liye ready tha.



Main bhi use dekh raha tha. Maine jaanbhuj kar apna ek hath kuch is prakar se aage kiya jisse use lage ki main uske pet me punch maar raha hu. Taaki vo usse bachne ka prayas karen or baisa hi hua. Vo us punch se bachne ke liye thoda side me hogya. Or jaise hi vo apni jagah se hila side hone ke liye. Mere dusre hath ne apna kamaal dikha diya. Uske gale se locket ko jhatak liya. Or maine use turant hi andar rakh liya jeb me. Or fir sab normal ho gya.





Jaise hi normal hua uska sabse pehle dhyan us locket per hi gya. Or use apne gale me na paakar vo ek dum se hairan reh gya. Or usne ajeeb si najro se meri taraf dekha.





Main- me jaan gya hu ki teri bhi yahi kamjori hai. Jise tu dusro ki kamjori banata hai bahi teri bhi hai. Or ab isi se tera ant hoga.








Vikraal- surya majak nahi. Use vapis de do. Tum usse kuch nahi kar paoge. Pls vo vapis de do mujhe.








Main- ooohho aapke to tevar ek dum se badal gye. Aisa kya hai is locket me.






Vikraal- hai kuch. Vo mujhe vapis de do surya. Vo meri maa ki akhiri nishani hai. Use tum activate bhi nahi kar paoge. Kuch nahi hoga usse.







Main- koi nahi me kisi na kisi tarah pata kar lunga ki ise kaise activate karte hai. Sayad paras pathar meri kuch madad karde.




Ye sunte hi uske hosh udd gye. Me hawa me teer chhod raha tha lekin full confident ke sath. Or uske chehre ke expression dekhke me samajh raha tha ki kahi na kahi mere teer sahi jagah per lag rahe hai.







Vikraal- surya use vapis de do. Verna is puri city ko raakh me badal dunga me. Tumne abhi mera asli roop nahi dekha hai. Isliye keh raha hu maan jaao use Bapis de do.







Main- chalo maan liya ki maine ye tumhe de diya. To badle me mujhe kya milega






Vikraal- kya chahiye tumhe.







Main- shanti tumse or tumhare un tattuo se.






Vikraal- theek hai me vaada karta hu. Aajke baad meri bajah se kisi ki bhi mout nahi hogi yaha per. Laao ab vo mujhe de do.







Main- lekin me tumhari baat per bharosa kaise karu. Kya pata ye tumhe milte hi tum fir se apni asli aukaat per aajao or sabko maarne lago.






Vikraal- to fir tum batao me kya karu. Tumhe yakeen dilane ke liye.







Main- apni kamjori batao. Ki tumhe kaise mara ja sakta hai. Taaki agar tum apna vada todo to me tumhara khatma kar saku.







Vikraal- or is baat ki kya guarantee hai ki ye janne ke baad tum abhi mujhe nahi maroge.





Main- well guarantee to koi nahi hai. Ye sab mere mood per nirbhar karega or filhaal tum ye sawal puchhne ki condition me nahi ho kyuki tumhari ye amanat mere hath me hai.








Ye sunke vikraal sochne laga ki kya karu kya nahi. Bahi usne man me Vanraj ko yaad kiya use madad ke liye bulaya. Taaki surya ko kisi tarah jama de vo. Or vikraal usse vo locket chheen le. Lekin use kya pata ki bahar rony kabse Vanraj ka hi wait kar raha hai. Tab tak yaha surya ka kaam baise hi pura ho jana chahiye tha.








Main- kya faisla kiya tumne. Bolo.







Vikraal- me ye risk nahi le sakta. Tum baise bhi mujhper khunnas khaye hue ho. Meri kamjori jaante hi tumhe ek sec nahi lagega mujhe maarne me.







Main- to fir theek hai is locket ko bhool jaao. Or kamjori bhi mat batao. Is locket se hi tumhara khatma karunga me.





Mera confident dekh kar vo or bhi hairan pareshan ho gya. Use viswas tha ki me kaise na kaise usko activate karne ka rasta dhund hi lunga. Or fir uski khair nahi.





Bahi mujhe ye lag raha tha ki is locket me or bhi kuch baat hai. Jis bajah se vikraal kuch jyada hi react kar raha hai. Sayad uski powers isi se aati ho. Ya ye hi use immortal banata ho. Kuch na kuch baat to jarur hai. Jis bajah se ye or bhi jyada dar raha hai.







Bahi bahar ki side rony car me baitha tha tabhi uske baaju se kuch bahut tez nikala usne dekh liya. Or rony samaj gya ki yahi hai Vanraj. Isliye rony jaldi se car se bahar nikal aaya. Or vanraj ke peeche jaane laga tezi se. Vanraj us ghar ke bahar ruk gya tha. Or bina koi aawaj kiye andar jaane ki kosis kar raha tha. Tabhi rony bhagta hua aaya or usi speed me usne vanraj ko uthaya or baha se dur le jaane laga. Rony ki pakad ek dum majbut thi. Or vanraj kuch samajhta usse pehle hi 1-2 sec me hi rony usko us pure area se hi bahar le aaya or ek khali pade ground me laake patak diya.




Vanraj thodi dur jaake gira. Lekin jaldi hi sambhal gya or dobara khada ho gya.



Usne rony ko dekha to dekhte hi pehchan gya.





Vanraj- ohh to tum ho. Mujhe ummid nahi thi ki koi or bhi hoga baha per






Rony- ha ham to gadhe hai na. Jo aise hi har baar tumhare saamne akele aate rahenge. Or dusri baat ki ham Rajput hai. Or ham barabari walo se hi mukabla karte hai or barabari se hi ladte hai. Ab baha surya tumhare vikraal ki band baja raha hai. Aise me tum baha jaoge to uske kaam me tang adaoge or tum do ho jaoge. Or vo akela. Isliye me khaas tumhare liye aagya uske sath. Taaki ham dono lade or vo dono







Vanraj- dekho mujhe jaane do. Verna vikraal surya ko maar dega. Kisi na kisi tarah.






Rony- tumhe me sakal se kya chutiya lagta hu. Agar vikraal andar jeet raha hota to bo tumhe thodi na bulata. Pakka andar uski badiya se dhulaai ho rahi hogi. Isliye unhe disturb karna theek nahi hai.






Vanraj- dekho mere raste se hat jaao Verna tumhare liye theek nahi hoga.






Rony- aisa kya. To chalo theek hai hata sako to hata lo mujhe apne raaste se.





Ye sunkar Vanraj ne thodi der socha or fir ground ke dusri taraf doud laga di. Rony ye dekhkar turant hi dusri taraf se douda baha jaane ka ek matra rasta yahi se hokar jata tha jaha is waqt rony khada hua tha.


Vo isi taraf bahut hi tez raftaar se doudta hua aaraha tha. Jaise hi vo rony ke karib pahucha rony ne ghum kar or thoda hawa me hokar uske seene me ek jordaar kick maari. Kick kaafi powerfull thi.



Kyuki kick lagte hi vanraaj us ground ki boundary wall se ja takraya or uske takraane se vo deewar hi tut gyi. Or vo uthta usse pehle hi rony uske karib gya or laga punch maarne uske chehre per. Super speed se. Jaisa surya karta hai hamesha. Itne saare punch jab uske thobde per ek sath pade to vo puri tarah se boukhla gya. Vo to surya ne use maarne se mana kiya tha Verna aaj iska kaam bhi tamam hi tha.




Yahi baat yaad aate hi rony ruk gya or use utha ke ground ke beecho beech fek diya. Vo baha girte hi roll hota hua thodi dur tak ja pahuncha.




Ab rony keval use dekh raha tha. Ki ye ab kya karta hai.







Bahi dehradun me. Bhai to ek hotel ke room me baithe hue the. Apna laptop khol ke.


Jisme Harry har sambhav jagah ki xray footage check kar raha tha. Vampires jaha per ho sakte the. Lekin unhe abhi tak koi khaas safalta nahi mili thi. Aadhe se jyada dehradun unhone check kar liya tha. Or robo dehradun ke bahiri ilaako ko check kar raha tha ki pahado me jungalo me koi gufa vagera me to nahi ghuse hai vo. Or uske hath bhi abhi tak khaali the. Use bhi kuch safalta nahi mili thi.





Baaki ab dekhte hai agle update me ki in teeno ka kya hota hai.












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Raat ko ham logo ne apni car ko uske ghar ke bahar roka or rony ko car le ja kar thoda dur rehne ko bola taaki rony unke liye surprise rahe. Vo bhi samajh gya. Or vo car leke ghar se thoda aage chala gya or ek andheri jagah per car ki saari lights band karke baith gya.




Bahi maine uske ghar ki bell bajai.




Thodi der baad usne darwaja khola.




SS- ji kahiye kisse milna hai.






Main- ji mujhe apse hi milna hai. Mera naam Rakesh hai. Or mujhe aapse ek bahut hi imp baat karni hai.






SS- kis baare me.





Main- ji andar chalke baat kare. Yaha thoda khatra ho sakta hai. Raat ho gyi hai. Or aapko to pata hi hai aajkal kya ho raha hai pure desh me.





SS- ok aajaiye.




Ye kehke vo side hua or me andar aagya usne darwaje ke aaju baaju dekha or gate band karke vo bhi aagya. Usne mujhe baithne ko kaha.


Main baitha. Mere saamne vo baitha.







SS- ji kahiye kya baat karni hai aapko






Main- ji darashal mujhe aapse ye kehna haj ki. Me jaan gya hu ki aap suraj Sharma nahi hai. Balki koi behrupiye hai





Ye sunke vo ek dum se khada ho gya.




SS- ye kya bakwas hai.






Main- ye bakwas nahi sach hai.






SS- achha or ye tum sabit kaise karoge.






Main- matlab maine sach hi kaha tum asli suraj nahi ho. Balki koi behrupiye hi ho. Kyuki agar aapki hote to ye sawal nahi karte.






SS- ha tumne sahi pehchana me asli nahi hu.




Ab hairan rehne ki baari meri thi. Kyuki isne itni jaldi jo kabul kar liya tha ye. Mujhe laga ye kuch dakeel dega lekin isne to maan liya. Kahi use pata to nahi ki me surya hu.







SS- kya sochne lage mr. Rakesh. Yahi na ki maine itni jaldi kabul kyu kar liya.






Main- ha.







SS- vo isliye ki mere pass jyada samay nahi hai waste karne ke liye. Isliye jaldi batao kya chahte ho tum.







Main- chahta to tumhari mout hu. Baaki tumhari shraddha.






SS- tumhara naam definately rakesh to nahi hai. Sach batao kon ho tum.






Main- tumhara bahut hi khaas dost hu me.






SS- main apne dosto ko kabhi nahi bhulata.






Main- are yaar ye to galat baat hai tum mujhe kaise bhul gye. Yaad hai ham jungle me mile the. Or maine tumhari bahut pitaai ki thi. Tum almost marne hi wale the. Ki tumhare chamche ne tumhe bacha liya tha.






Ye sunte hi vo seat se ek dum uchhal kar khada ho gya.




SS- surya.






Main- are pehchan liya tumne kya baat hai. Ha me hi hu.




Ye kehke maine apna mask nikaal diya.



Vo ek dum hairan reh gya mujhe apne saamne dekhkar. Use bilkul bhi yakeen nahi tha ki me aise achanak uske saamne aajaunga. Or uska bhaanda itni jaldi foot jayega.







Main- bas karo ab ye suraj ka nakab hatao apne chehre se. Or asli chehra dikhao.





Ye sunna tha ki achanak se hi usne apna roop badal liya. Uske haavbhav sab badal gye. Vo ab vikraal tha. Itna bhayanak chehra ki kamjor dil wale to use dekhkar hi mut de.








Vikraal- kya baat hai yaar tune to mujhe pehchan liya.





Main- shak to mujhe bahut pehle se tha tujhper. Or use hi confirm karne me yaha aaya tha or mera shak sahi nikla.





Vikraal- to ab kya irada hai. Ladna hai mujhse






Main- irada to yahi hai.





Vikraal- janna nahi chahoge ki maine ye roop kyu liya.





Main- mujhe ye janna hai ki tumhe suraj ke baare me pata kaise chala ki ye papa ka dost hai. Or tumhe vo mila kaha.







Vikraal- Mujhe kisi aise ki hi talash thi jo ye bhoot pret vampire bagera me maanta ho. Or meri kismat achhi thi ki mujhe aisa insan mil gya or vo pehle se hi tumhare papa ka dost nikla. Bas mere dono hathon me laddu aagye.







Main- badiya hai. Baise tumne jo kal raat kiya na. Usse itna gussa aaraha hai mujhe ki kya batau me.





Vikraal- isi liye to kiya tha vo sab. Taaki tujhe gussa aaye or tu mujhe pagalon ki tarah yaha baha dhunde. Or me aaram se baith ke tujhe bebas or lachar hota dekhu. Lekin tu dedh Shana nikla. Mujhe pehle hi dhund liya.








Main- to ab seedhe tarike se bata kya chahta hai tu.





Vikraal- jawab tumhe pata hai





Main- vo pathar tujhe nahi milne wala.






Vikraal- to teri jaan dede.






Main- ye bhi tujhe nahi milne wali. Kuch or bol.






Vikraal- mujhe bas yahi dono cheeze chahiye. Or use paane ke liye me kisi bhi had tak jaunga. Fir chahe is pure desh me keval tu hi akela zinda kyu na bache. Tu bhi jaanta hai ki me kya kya kar sakta hu. Or tu har jagah nahi pahuch sakta. Tere 3 bhai hai na. To tum charo milke 4 jagah sambhal loge lekin is desh me hajaron jagah hai jaha me ek sath hamla kar sakta hu. Tu jab tak ek ko bachayega tab tak me kai ilaake saaf kar dunga.









Main- matlab tumhe zinda chhodne ka koi fayeda nahi hai. Tumhe maarna hi padega.





Vikraal- ya fir tumhe marna padega. Tabhi ye sab band hoga.






Main- kaise hoga. Mujhe maar kar tu agar vo pathar hasil kar lega or black heart ko zinda kar dega to fir vo yaha aake aise hi tabahi machayega. Infact sabhi ko maar dega.







Vikraal- kuch ko chhod dega. Varna uski gulami kon karega. Ladkiya ko chhidega jo usse din raat chudwayengi. Ek no. Ka aayash hai vo. Kisi per uski ek baar najar bigad gyi fir to use bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta uske neeche laane se. Or use har din ek nai ladki chahiye hoti hai. To soch le is puri prithvi per total kitni hogi. Vo un sabhi ko ek ek karke bhogega.





Uska ye kehna tha ki mera ek jordar punch laga uske jabde per. Saale ke 4-5 dant uper hawa me uchhal gye. Or vo filhaal super slo-mo me neeche gir raha tha. Tabhi maine jaldi se uske seene me apna super punch mara. Ye punch saamne wale ki body ke aarpaar nikal jata hai. Mera hath uske dil ke baaju se aarpaar nikal gya. Or apna hath bahar nikalte samay maine uske dill ko pakad liya or dum laga kar bahar kheech liya.





Or fir time fir se apni gati se chalne laga or vo dhadam se neeche gira. Uske pure farsh per charo taraf khoon failne laga. Mere hathon me jo uska dill tha vo bilkul bhi nahi dhadak raha tha. Maine is baat per baad me gour kiya ki vo pehle se hi nahi dhadak raha tha. Ye kaafi shocking tha mere liye.




Mujhe laga kahi ye bhi to vampire nahi hai. Lekin vampire ki powers aisi to nahi hoti hai. Ye to din me bhi ghum sakta hai or apna roop bhi badal sakta hai. Fir iska dill kyu nahi dhadak raha tha. Aisa to ho nahj sakta ki mera hath andar jaate hi dill ka dhadakna ruk jaaye. Ye impossible hai.




Me is waqt kaafi confuse tha ki ye ho kya raha hai. Kahi aisa to nahi ki ye vikraal na ho. Lekin dev ki khabar galat bhi to nahi ho sakti hai na. Jarur kuch or hi mamla hai.





Me lagatar uske dill ko dekhkar yahi sab soch raha tha. Tabhi mujhe kisi ki aawaj aai




Maine najre utha kar dekha to vo vikraal tha jo mere saamne sahi salamat khada tha. Or iska ek hi matlab tha ki ye sala kuch alag hi film hai itni aasani se nahi marne wala ye. Farsh per khoon ki ek boond bhi nahi thi. Pura farsh pehle ki tarah chakachak ho gya tha.

Me puri tarah se confuse tha ki ab me kya karu jisse iski kahani yahi khatm ho jaaye.











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Raat ko ham logo ne apni car ko uske ghar ke bahar roka or rony ko car le ja kar thoda dur rehne ko bola taaki rony unke liye surprise rahe. Vo bhi samajh gya. Or vo car leke ghar se thoda aage chala gya or ek andheri jagah per car ki saari lights band karke baith gya.




Bahi maine uske ghar ki bell bajai.




Thodi der baad usne darwaja khola.




SS- ji kahiye kisse milna hai.






Main- ji mujhe apse hi milna hai. Mera naam Rakesh hai. Or mujhe aapse ek bahut hi imp baat karni hai.






SS- kis baare me.





Main- ji andar chalke baat kare. Yaha thoda khatra ho sakta hai. Raat ho gyi hai. Or aapko to pata hi hai aajkal kya ho raha hai pure desh me.





SS- ok aajaiye.




Ye kehke vo side hua or me andar aagya usne darwaje ke aaju baaju dekha or gate band karke vo bhi aagya. Usne mujhe baithne ko kaha.


Main baitha. Mere saamne vo baitha.







SS- ji kahiye kya baat karni hai aapko






Main- ji darashal mujhe aapse ye kehna haj ki. Me jaan gya hu ki aap suraj Sharma nahi hai. Balki koi behrupiye hai





Ye sunke vo ek dum se khada ho gya.




SS- ye kya bakwas hai.






Main- ye bakwas nahi sach hai.






SS- achha or ye tum sabit kaise karoge.






Main- matlab maine sach hi kaha tum asli suraj nahi ho. Balki koi behrupiye hi ho. Kyuki agar aapki hote to ye sawal nahi karte.






SS- ha tumne sahi pehchana me asli nahi hu.




Ab hairan rehne ki baari meri thi. Kyuki isne itni jaldi jo kabul kar liya tha ye. Mujhe laga ye kuch dakeel dega lekin isne to maan liya. Kahi use pata to nahi ki me surya hu.







SS- kya sochne lage mr. Rakesh. Yahi na ki maine itni jaldi kabul kyu kar liya.






Main- ha.







SS- vo isliye ki mere pass jyada samay nahi hai waste karne ke liye. Isliye jaldi batao kya chahte ho tum.







Main- chahta to tumhari mout hu. Baaki tumhari shraddha.






SS- tumhara naam definately rakesh to nahi hai. Sach batao kon ho tum.






Main- tumhara bahut hi khaas dost hu me.






SS- main apne dosto ko kabhi nahi bhulata.






Main- are yaar ye to galat baat hai tum mujhe kaise bhul gye. Yaad hai ham jungle me mile the. Or maine tumhari bahut pitaai ki thi. Tum almost marne hi wale the. Ki tumhare chamche ne tumhe bacha liya tha.






Ye sunte hi vo seat se ek dum uchhal kar khada ho gya.




SS- surya.






Main- are pehchan liya tumne kya baat hai. Ha me hi hu.




Ye kehke maine apna mask nikaal diya.



Vo ek dum hairan reh gya mujhe apne saamne dekhkar. Use bilkul bhi yakeen nahi tha ki me aise achanak uske saamne aajaunga. Or uska bhaanda itni jaldi foot jayega.







Main- bas karo ab ye suraj ka nakab hatao apne chehre se. Or asli chehra dikhao.





Ye sunna tha ki achanak se hi usne apna roop badal liya. Uske haavbhav sab badal gye. Vo ab vikraal tha. Itna bhayanak chehra ki kamjor dil wale to use dekhkar hi mut de.








Vikraal- kya baat hai yaar tune to mujhe pehchan liya.





Main- shak to mujhe bahut pehle se tha tujhper. Or use hi confirm karne me yaha aaya tha or mera shak sahi nikla.





Vikraal- to ab kya irada hai. Ladna hai mujhse






Main- irada to yahi hai.





Vikraal- janna nahi chahoge ki maine ye roop kyu liya.





Main- mujhe ye janna hai ki tumhe suraj ke baare me pata kaise chala ki ye papa ka dost hai. Or tumhe vo mila kaha.







Vikraal- Mujhe kisi aise ki hi talash thi jo ye bhoot pret vampire bagera me maanta ho. Or meri kismat achhi thi ki mujhe aisa insan mil gya or vo pehle se hi tumhare papa ka dost nikla. Bas mere dono hathon me laddu aagye.







Main- badiya hai. Baise tumne jo kal raat kiya na. Usse itna gussa aaraha hai mujhe ki kya batau me.





Vikraal- isi liye to kiya tha vo sab. Taaki tujhe gussa aaye or tu mujhe pagalon ki tarah yaha baha dhunde. Or me aaram se baith ke tujhe bebas or lachar hota dekhu. Lekin tu dedh Shana nikla. Mujhe pehle hi dhund liya.








Main- to ab seedhe tarike se bata kya chahta hai tu.





Vikraal- jawab tumhe pata hai





Main- vo pathar tujhe nahi milne wala.






Vikraal- to teri jaan dede.






Main- ye bhi tujhe nahi milne wali. Kuch or bol.






Vikraal- mujhe bas yahi dono cheeze chahiye. Or use paane ke liye me kisi bhi had tak jaunga. Fir chahe is pure desh me keval tu hi akela zinda kyu na bache. Tu bhi jaanta hai ki me kya kya kar sakta hu. Or tu har jagah nahi pahuch sakta. Tere 3 bhai hai na. To tum charo milke 4 jagah sambhal loge lekin is desh me hajaron jagah hai jaha me ek sath hamla kar sakta hu. Tu jab tak ek ko bachayega tab tak me kai ilaake saaf kar dunga.









Main- matlab tumhe zinda chhodne ka koi fayeda nahi hai. Tumhe maarna hi padega.





Vikraal- ya fir tumhe marna padega. Tabhi ye sab band hoga.






Main- kaise hoga. Mujhe maar kar tu agar vo pathar hasil kar lega or black heart ko zinda kar dega to fir vo yaha aake aise hi tabahi machayega. Infact sabhi ko maar dega.







Vikraal- kuch ko chhod dega. Varna uski gulami kon karega. Ladkiya ko chhidega jo usse din raat chudwayengi. Ek no. Ka aayash hai vo. Kisi per uski ek baar najar bigad gyi fir to use bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta uske neeche laane se. Or use har din ek nai ladki chahiye hoti hai. To soch le is puri prithvi per total kitni hogi. Vo un sabhi ko ek ek karke bhogega.





Uska ye kehna tha ki mera ek jordar punch laga uske jabde per. Saale ke 4-5 dant uper hawa me uchhal gye. Or vo filhaal super slo-mo me neeche gir raha tha. Tabhi maine jaldi se uske seene me apna super punch mara. Ye punch saamne wale ki body ke aarpaar nikal jata hai. Mera hath uske dil ke baaju se aarpaar nikal gya. Or apna hath bahar nikalte samay maine uske dill ko pakad liya or dum laga kar bahar kheech liya.





Or fir time fir se apni gati se chalne laga or vo dhadam se neeche gira. Uske pure farsh per charo taraf khoon failne laga. Mere hathon me jo uska dill tha vo bilkul bhi nahi dhadak raha tha. Maine is baat per baad me gour kiya ki vo pehle se hi nahi dhadak raha tha. Ye kaafi shocking tha mere liye.




Mujhe laga kahi ye bhi to vampire nahi hai. Lekin vampire ki powers aisi to nahi hoti hai. Ye to din me bhi ghum sakta hai or apna roop bhi badal sakta hai. Fir iska dill kyu nahi dhadak raha tha. Aisa to ho nahj sakta ki mera hath andar jaate hi dill ka dhadakna ruk jaaye. Ye impossible hai.




Me is waqt kaafi confuse tha ki ye ho kya raha hai. Kahi aisa to nahi ki ye vikraal na ho. Lekin dev ki khabar galat bhi to nahi ho sakti hai na. Jarur kuch or hi mamla hai.





Me lagatar uske dill ko dekhkar yahi sab soch raha tha. Tabhi mujhe kisi ki aawaj aai




Maine najre utha kar dekha to vo vikraal tha jo mere saamne sahi salamat khada tha. Or iska ek hi matlab tha ki ye sala kuch alag hi film hai itni aasani se nahi marne wala ye. Farsh per khoon ki ek boond bhi nahi thi. Pura farsh pehle ki tarah chakachak ho gya tha.

Me puri tarah se confuse tha ki ab me kya karu jisse iski kahani yahi khatm ho jaaye.











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