Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

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[nain11ster]

Update:-113 (J) ​

Aircraft me chain phansa'kar, half circle gardan ke pichhe se, round maar'kar ek kaan se dusre kaan tak pahunch gaya... Bina samay gawaye, visohot ki raushni nikalte "dhammm dhammm dhammm dhammmm" ki awaz aur laga'tar punch ki bauchhar kar diya...


Ek baar fir Astak ke poore sarir par hazaron hath nikal aaye. Ek baar fir Nischal par thap dene badhe ye extra hath. Nischal ke sharir ko jaise hi parchhayi ne ghera, Nischal kud'kar, Astak ke badan se nikle hazaron hath me se ek par kuda.


Kuda me toofan samete. Hathon me khanjar tha aur nikle har hath par 2 aankhen tukur-tukur charo ore dekh rahi thi. Hawa se ek khanjar kisi ek aankh me ghusa aur fir visphot ki raushni ke sath "dhammmm, dhammmm, dhammmm, dhammmm", ki awaz shuru thi.


Kahar ab double dose me shuru hua. Serin jo ek minute ke liye uljhi thi, wo bhi hawa se chhalang lagati kud chuki thi kisi ek hath par... Khanjar ghus chuke the uss nikle hath ke aankhon me aur raushni ke sath visphotak punch lagne shuru ho chuke the.


Yahan fir dono ne 1 second ka bhi waqt na liya maarne ka. Astak ke badan se nikle extra hath par dhapa'dhap fraction second me 100 punch chalate aur hawa me chhalang laga'kar, khanjar ghused'te dusre hath par. Dhapa'dhap visphot ki raushni ke sath 100 punch aur fir hawa me chhalang.


Mahaj 10 second me dono pith par nikle kayi hath ki thukai kar chuke the. Serin ne bus ek chhota sa ishara kiya aur dono kud'kar jab hath badal rahe the, Nischal ne ek baar fir Serin ko hawa me upar uchhal diya aur khud dure hath par land kar chuka tha...


Pith par se Nischal ko bhagane me Astak ka extra haath jab kaam na aaye, tab sale ne apna body ke shape ko ghuma diya … Turant hi sab hath gayab aur pith ke ore ulta hath sidha ho gaya... Issi bich Serin uske kaan par land ki... Dhapa'dhap visphitak raushni wali 1000 punch jadti wo viman ka me chain fasayi aur ghum'kar circle leti pith par...


Thik virtible column ke bich me pahunch gayi aur khanjar se virtibral line ke bich atki... 1 sec ke hazar punch.. jabtak hath ki parchhayi pahunchi Serin drop aur niche khanjar ghuskara 1000 punch... Viman charo ore gulati kha'kar aur kartab dikha'kar mandra rahe the...


Bindu jaise 2 insan baar-baar Astak ke najron ke samne se gujar raha tha... Chhote-chhote aircrafts makkhi ki bhinbhina rahe the… Kalpna se bhi pare ye sahas thi, kyonki Astak ki najar jaise hi uth'ti laser ki rauhni aircraft ko bhedne nikal jati aur thik ussi waqt Nischal aur Serin un aircrafts ko chain me fansa'kar raushni ke niche khinch lete...


Kalpana se pade tha wo drishya... 2km ki lamabai wala ek maha daanav jiski shaktiyan anant thi, uske aas-pass makkhi ki tarah aircrafts aur usse bhi kayi guna chhote 2 insan hawa me mandra rahe the... Astak kabhi gardan dayen karta, kabhi bayen karta aur dono bhai bahan ko pakadne ki nakamyab kosis karta. To kabhi banna kar Aircrafts par humla karta... Kabhi safal hota kabhi asafal. Lekin focus dono bhai-bahan par tha aur wo hath hi nahi aa rahe the…


Ek baar me 30-40 viman ko astak jaise muh me khinchne ko hota... Kabhi Serin, to kabhi Nischal hawa se uddte, uske kano tak pahunchte aur kaan par 2 second tak visohotak punch barsa'kar gayab...


Astak na to apne hath se apne badan par koi wave chhod sakta tha aur na hi koi jadu apne body par kar sakta tha tha … Uski badi-badi aankhon se samne se Nischal aur Serin hawa me hote... Ek ko pakadne jate to dusra baja'kar nikal jate...


Hawa me udde, vishal se badan ke kisi bhi hisse me chipke aur punch barsana shuru... Adbhut najara... Har sec dono aage pichhe hawa me... Ek second dono uske badan par... Visohotak raushni ke sath "Dhamm dammm dhammm dhammmm" ki awaj aati rahi… na koi tarkib thi bachne ki aur naa hi, khud ko bhagwan kahne wala kuchh kar pa raha tha, siway apni badi aakhon ke samne se gujarte huye dekhne ke...


Bus najar uth gayi to sarir se laser takra'kar leela samapt... Lekin uski uthti najar ki gati utni nahi thi, jitni gati se Nischal aur Serin, ek dusre ko chain se khinche ke sath save karte huye, punch chala kar bhag rahe the...


Ye to one by one humla ki position varnan karne par lagta hai ki kitni der se humla ho raha hai.. lekin dono "fraction of second" me speed ka aisa istamal kar rahe the ki... Tej visphotak raushni, Dhammm dhammm dhammm dhammmm ki awaj... Aur bina ruke sharir ke kisi bhi hisse par lagataar punch se humla ho raha tha.


Charo ore Gulati khate viman, kabhi football ban jate, to kabhi Astak ke dono hath ke dayen-bayen uthne se, dhakka lag'kar idhar udhar gir Jate... Har viman me baithe pilot ko kabhi ye na laga ki uspar humla ho raha... Balki Nischal aur Serin par huye nakamyab humle ke bhul-chuk ka asar unpar ho raha tha.


Har pilot me kan me visohotak tej awaj aati... Aankhon ke same aisa lagta jaise kisi ek jagah par Visphot ki tej rausni hui aur ek rauhni band nahi hui thi, uss se pahle hi sharir ke kahin dusre hisse se bhi wahi visphotak raushni shuru thi.


Aisa lag raha tha jaise Astak ke badan se lagatar jagah-jagah se chingariyan phoot rahi ho... 2 log jo apne ladne ke kshmta me hi poori taknik develope kar chuke the… Jitni gati thi, uss se bhi jyada uss gati ke sath humla karne se le'kar, ek dusre ko shhrakshit karne ki kshmta…


Dono lagatar apne bahubal ka parichay de rahe the… unke ye visohotak punch kya asar karta ya nahi, uska aakalan to wahi dono karte. Lekin kahin dur baitha koi aur bhi ye najara apni khuli aankh se dekh rahe the aur dushman ke liye bhi uske muh se waah hi nikal raha tha...


2 dridh sankalp insan, gati aur hawa ko apna hayhiyar bana'kar, ek aise dushman se lad rahe the, jo apne aap me arbon ki sankhya wale fauj se kahin badi thi... Lekin sankhya ki parwaah hi kab kiye the dono... ..


Lagatar 1 ghante tak prahaar hota raha. Nischal aur Serin ke hath jaise machine bane huye the. Ek baar jab shuru huye rukne ka naam hi nahi liye. Khud ke vishwas aur atmbal ki kahani thi ye. Haath hi aaj hathiyar the aur sine me bhada josh bina parinaam ki parwaah kiye, visphotak raushni wale... "Dharaam dhurumm dhishumm dhishummm" punch lagaatar chalate rah gaye.


Fir wo hairatangej najara bhi sabke samne tha, jis ummid me shayad dono lagatar, 1 ghatne se Astak ke vishalkay badan par, bindu ke barabar punch se humla to kar rahe the, lekin uske vishphot ki raushni bayaan kar rahi thi ki Astak ke sharir ka kitna hissa prabhavit hua hai... Ek tana aur akda hua parvat dum tod chuka tha...


Astak ka vishalkay sharir poora toot chuka tha. Dono kandhe jhuk gaye, hath jhul raha tha... Gardan ki haddiyan jaise jawab de gayi ho aur sar jhuka hua tha. Virtibral columns ki pira itni ashaniya thi ki pahle uske dard bhari chikh charo ore gunji, baad me dard bardast to hua lekin dard ki siskiyan band na hui... Ek tana hua ahankari jiski shaktiyan kisi ne adbhut kar di thi... Jis par kisi bhi humle ka asar nahi hota, wo bindu jaise insano ke mukke se maar khaye huye tha...


Nischal aur Serin vijayi muskaan ke sath aakhri humle ke liye nikle. Toofan sa utha tha dono ke sine me aur dono ke dimag me ek jaisi ran'niti panap gayi... Fir se tej hawaon par sawar ho gaye... Kayi milon duri par tha uska apna viman aur poore raste kayi sare aircrafts... Chain fansa'kar dono khinch chale apne viman ke ore... Dono kayi mil dur aa chuke the aur Astak ka jhulta sharir dono ke najron ke samne tha...


Ek pal ka vishram dono ne liya... Dono ne dur khade, sar jhukaye uss bade aur vishalkay sharir ko dekha, jiska dum Nischal aur Serin apne punch se nikal chuke the...


Ek dusre se najar mili... Chhota sa ishara hua aur dono ne apne khanjar ke "energy releasing Stone" ko active kar diya. Ab tak jitni energy "Energy Absorbing Stone" ne khinchi thi, sab chain me bahne laga.. Dikh to nahi raha tha, lekin uss energy ko dono ke chain ke ander daudte mehsus kiya ja sakta tha... Kaplna se pare uss chain me energy daur rahi thi... Jiska calculation karne me calculator fail ho jaye...


Poori chain me "sarrrrrrrr sarrrrrrrr" ki ek ajib si sarsarahat bhikher rahi thi. Chain se tej raushni nikal rahi thi. Dono apne hath me thame the maut ka prachand hathiyar... Serin aur Nichal ne aapas me duri banayi... Dono sine me shwans bharte daud lagane ko taiyar huye... Daudne se pahle gardan ghuma'kar ek dusre ko dekhe aur fir samne….


Dono ne daudna shuru kiya. Tej si wo raftaar thi. Piche dhul aur kayi sare kano ki aandhi si uthi thi. Jahan se dono gujre... Shaynnnn-Shaynnnn karte gujre... toofan sa uth raha tha... Tej daudte huye dono ne fir mud'kar ek dusre ko dekha... Aur agle hi pal energy ki wo chain aircraft se chipki.…


Autopilot mode par hawa me khadi aircraft ko jaise hi chain ne touch kiya... Poore metallic body par tej rauhni hui. Hyber metal mask kiya aircraft dhuyen ki tarah hawa me bikhar gaya. Aag ke sole jamin se lekar aakash ko chhu rahe the…


Chain chipki bada sa visphot hua, aag ke bawandar uthe aur uss bawandar ke bich se, super speed se nikle Nischal aur Serin. Aniyantrit si gati thi dono me... Unki apni gati ko chain 4 guna jyada badha'kar khinch chuka tha… Ek pal me aag ki lapton ke paar the... Dono ke poore badan se aag aise lipti thi mano wo lapten bhi iss antim drishya ka najara lena chahti ho...


Aag ke paar huye, aur dono (Nischal aur Serin) ek dusre se najre milaya. Aankho ki sehmati ke sath hi dono ke chain ke sire jud gaye the aur chain me bahne wali energy bhi inki gati ki tarah aniyantrit thi, kyonki dono ne "Releasing Stone" ki poori energy ko khula chhod diya...


Samne 2 km uncha shikar. Nischal aur Serin ke badan se aag ki lapte uthti hui. Do kinaro se chain ko poore majbooti ke sath khinche, tej gati se badhte huye... Astak 100 kilometer dur se chain me bah rahi uss energy ko mehsus karne laga. 100 km dur uss energy ko dekhne ki kosis me sar uthana shuru kiya aur itne me Nischal aur Serin, ek sath, uske dayen aur bayen se gujar chuke the...


Kayi kilometer dur Astak ko energy mehsus hui thi, gardan jabtak upar poora uth'ta, shayannnn se dono uske kandhe ko cross kar chuke the.


Kisi makhhan par jaise garam blade ko bullet ki raftaar se aar-paar karwa diya ho. Aniyantrit tej raftaar, 2 sire se khinch'kar rakha gaya ek chain me aniyantrit urja… 100 kilometer dur jo energy mehsus hui, usse dekhne ke liye sar upar karne ki kosis. Sar utha'kar samne dekhne se pahle hi poori tarah se khincha hua chain, gale ke iss paar se le'kar uss paar tak cross kar chuka tha...


Astak ka bada sa gala dhar se alag ho'kar jamin par gir chuka tha... Chain ki energy itni prabhavshali thi ki, inch dar inch jab wo gardan se gujar rahi thi... Gardan ke upar aur niche Astak ke sharir me bhada poora khun, kisi chumbak ki tarah khinch gaya... Sari si jalne ki uski bu thi... Gala katne ke baad na to gale se khun nikla na dhar se... Bus pran nikalne tak aankh idhar udhar tukur-tukur dekhti rahi aur dhar kampan karta raha.…


Astak ka bada sa sharir niche gir chuka tha. Gala kat'kar jamin par alag gira hua tha. Nischal aur Serin dono kuchh kilometer aage land kiye. Apne chain ko alag kar'ke khanjar kamar me khose. Kisi dost ki tarah dono kandhe par hath rakhte...


Serin:- Ye navsikhiye hume formation sikha rahe the... Humari copy kar rahe the...


Nischal:- Aaram se baat karte hain… Abhi to ek hi chij ki tiwr ikchha hai...


Serin:- Haan apni biwi se milne ki hi ikchha hoga...


Dono kandhe par hath dale the... Serin ne jaise hi apna dialogue complete kiya... Nischal mud'kar usse dekha... Serin bhi usse dekh'kar hansti... "Chidh gaya haan... Soch le... Kandhe se hath hata to main ye maanugi ki tu mujhe ek laat dene wala hai... Isliye kandhe se hath hatane ki sochna bhi mat, warna main laat de chuki houngi"…


Nischal:- Haan bus yahi soch'kar kandhe se haath nahi hataya... Waise wo hathoda kamal ka tha... Next project wo hathoda... Iss baar aakar chhota denge.. vajan 500 tan aur hathoda poora Hyber metal ka banayenge...


Serin:- Duffer wo pighalta nahi hai...


Nischal:- Kandhe se hath hata kar baat karen kya... Ek laat de hi dun ja'kar kahin dur giregi, aircraft ka haal na dekhiiii.…. Aaoooo pagal... Naak tod di...


Serin:- Bakwas karega to yahi hoga... Thik hai hathoda hum dono ka next project…


Dono aaram se baat karte badh rahe the. Astak ko gire karib 2 minute ho chuke the. Yudhh viram tha. Astak vansaj atm-samarpan kar rahe the, jise Nandni ne apni badi si Nilbhut aur earth pilots ki sena se ghere khade the...


Njschal aur Serin kuchh dur kadam badhaye hi the, tabhi Jivisha ki aawaj aayi... "Shayad koi shakti hume dur se roki hui thi love... Mahal abhi-abhi poora nasht ho gaya hai"...


Idhar Jivisha ka sandesh aaya aur udhar ek sath poore maidan se sari hui badboo aani shuru ho gayi... Bina prakriti ke niyam ke ji rahe logon ka sharir galne laga... Jisme prithvi par ek vansaj Vardali ka sharir bhi tha... Jinka jivan kaal bacha tha kewal wahi jivat rahe, bakiyon ka sharir sara hua badbu kar raha tha. Sharir jamin par gal kar girta aur sari hui sharir se upje chhote pillu aur kide sharir se bahar aa rahe the... .


Nischal aur Serin dono thik se jamin par paun bhi nahi jamaye the aur agle hi pal sari si badboo aani shuru ho chuki thi... Dono bina ruke bhage... Nischal raste se naag-dansh uthaya aur sidha pahuncha viman me... Serin apne kamre me pahunchne ke raste se hi sare kapde utarne shuru kar chuki thi... Nischal ke badan par to matr chhal thi jo, shayad germ aur badboo rahit tha...


Nischal bathroom me ghuste hi nahate huye hi packup aur udan ka order de diya... Sabhi log kuchh der me wapasi huye... Udhar se Jivisha bhi nikal chuki thi... HuYu ke cease fire ka command Luna ko mil chuka tha, aur unke vimano ko safe passage dene ka order bhi... Haan lekin yahan ke bare me na hi HuYu ne koi adhikarik suchna di aur na hi Luna ko iss vishay me kisi se baat karne kaha... Kewal Luna ko itna pata tha ki sab laut rahe hain…


Luna khush thi aur khush hoti hui usne bhi order jari kar diya... "OMU ki army chief sabko order de rahi hai, boost engine par nikle... Apne war heros ko lene, hum Viggo viman ke sath yahan se nikal rahe hain. Bich ke calculated point par milenge agle kuchh der me"….

 

[nain11ster]

romanchak update ..nischal aur serin bhi ghayal ho gaye hai ..

aur ye dushman ki bomb wali taknik kaam kar gayi aur dono ko buri tarah ghayal kar gayi ..

itna ghayal hone ke baad bhi hausla nahi haare aur kaatne ki raftar badhte hi jaa rahi hai ..

ab kisiko to aana chahiye inki madad karne ,warna ye marte dum tak ladhte rahenge ..
kuch aaram to milna hi chahiye ..aur ye fauz hai ki kam hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi ..

Haw aap ki baat jayaj hai... Aap ki maang poori ho sula dete hain pora ka poora dono ko

 

[Naina]

Let's wait and watch ... Anth hi shurwat hai... Sabke kaleje me bhale aag lage aap ka kaleja sukoon me rahega

Sabka badla lega re ye tera nainu

kya ant mein apsyu aur imli ki aisi ki taisi kar denge aap

 

[nain11ster]

Superb jabarjast sandar lajvab kya hi yudha niti apnai hai nishchal or serin ne jig jag formation kmal dhmal tha Nainu bhai dushman kheme se senapati ne kaam to man bhatkane vala hi kiya tha pr kya hi kre jb samne nishchal or serin Jaise maha bali yodha ho jo Atyant hi suljhe or ekagrachit hokr yudha bhumi me tandav dikhane aaye ho to fir sb bekar sa hai dekhte hai ab kon si niti ke tahat Hamle ka muh tod jvaab dete hai
Awesome wonderful writing skills Nainu bhai

Khub dekhiye abhi to yuddh ka rang chadha hai... Fir rang jamega ... Aur fir ek nasaha ka suroor bana rahega... Thanks for your lovely words

 

[nain11ster]

kya ant mein apsyu aur imli ki aisi ki taisi kar denge aap

Ye kahani Dear Apasyu ki to hai hi nahi ... :d

 

[Naina]

Ye kahani Dear Apasyu ki to hai hi nahi ... :d

Kya farak padta hai ki kiski kahani hai... farak to is baat se pade ki apsyu aur imli ki band baj rahi hai ki nahi

 

[Naina]

 

[nain11ster]

Sangathit, anusasan, lgatar abhyash karne ke karan apna pad va name kmaya hai master serin or nishchal ne aise hi thodi koi sar utha chla aaya astak se ladne...
Yah guru vishdhar or dono mao ke atut prem va athak parishram ka natija hai or baki ki madad Acchi sangati ke tahat Jo sikhne ko mila usse hai...
To jis vish ke bare me nishchal ne pahle btaya tha Vo prakratik kato ke roop me hai yah bhi Bahut hi umdha ran niti hai pr isme vipaksh ka ghinauna roop dikhta hai mana ki Apne dushman ko marna hai pr uske liye apne hi logo ko usi kato ke bich chod dena kaha ki samajhdari hai pr Lagta hai astak baukhla gya hai Isiliye aisa kiya...
Har ek pahlu or Har ek mod me romanch badhta hi ja rha hai ek bhi pal ke liye aankh idhar se udhar Hui Matlab khel khatm...





Jabardast superb action bhai



Aage samajh me nhi aa rha ki kya likhu ab Mai to bs popcorn khate huye padhunga stories...

Hahaha kamal ka expression hai aap ka Xabhi bhai....mast maza aa gaya .. lekin ek baat tay hai aur wo hai aaj un dono ko koi tab tak nahi rok sakta jab tak ki wo sab ko khtam na kar de

 

[nain11ster]

Kya farak padta hai ki kiski kahani hai... farak to is baat se pade ki apsyu aur imli ki band baj rahi hai ki nahi

Sab ka number aayega re jara dhiraj dharne ka re baba

 

[nain11ster]

Hoo ooo ju ne hathi bola kya Nainu bhaya ko vo hathi na hai Sher (Lion) hai Sher or Sher ke pichhe Mrs. Sher rahve hai The king ragish7357 Chinturocky Bhaiyo Naina ji kya Bol rhi hai

Yes Naina ji nothing personal...

Sher hun main sher thankooo maza aaya isse padhkar itne update me ek extra update aap ke kosison ka b natija hai