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Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...



Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....


Aap sab ka :welcome1: hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...


 
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Final Chepter :-: The Rise Of Glaxian:- A







Hurriyent ka safar sanyog ka safar tha... Jahan pahle Roffa space station mila... Jahan par pahla kadam rakhte hi Jivisha ko aabash ho chuka tha ki yahan kayi nishkriya patthar hai... Wahin Nischal ka Hurriyent bhi kayi naye tathyon ko samne laya tha. Uska Hurriyent planet pahunchna aur ek aise samuday se milna jo Wishper planet par bhi tha...


Kuchh baton ki samiksha Nischal ke dimag me thi aur uska poora mantham ek alag hi disha me, aakhir universe traveller ke apne hi fayde hain. Alag-alag grahon ki bahut si bahu-prachalit lok katha jo dimag me hoti hai...


Sari taiyariyon ke sath Jivisha mahal me bhi ghusne ke liye poori tarah se taiyar thi.… Jahan na sirf kayi lakh Nilbhut samuday ki aatamyen Jivisha judi hoti balki Saatvik Aashram ke Aacharya aur sabhi sanyasi bhi uske sath khade the.…


Har koi Decca ke uss darshnaik parivar ke sodh ki jankari par kaam kar raha tha jisne architecture aur jamin ke istamal ko samjh'kar mahal ke nirman ki poori roop rekha khinch di thi... Aur Jivisha uske upar poora mashtishk bana'kar, dimag ke uss hisse me safe ghusne se le'kar urja ke shrot ko khinch'kar nikalne ke liye taiyar thi, jiske dum par wo mrit mashtisk mahal tika tha...


Hone wale yudhh ki taiyari alag-alag hisson me thi, aur har koi ussi ke hisab se kaam kar raha tha. Yudhh ki poori taiyari.… Mahal, Surpmarich, Astak, Far Universe ke anumanit humla, ya Dark Universe ke jahaji bede se lekar uske vayu sena ka middle universe me hona, aur uss mahal ke tootne ke baad uss mahal ke malik se har front par hone wale yudhh ki lagbhag taiyari, tay samay me poori ho chuki thi...


Halaanki inhi badi-badi taiyariyon ke bich Astak ke sath yudhh me chuk ho gayi... Perfect planning jaisa kuchh bhi nahi hota. Har musibat me fansna yojna ka ek hissa nahi hota… khas'kar Nischal yudhh me maidan me jis paristithi me fansa tha, uska aaklan khud Nischal aur Serin ne bhi nahi kiya tha…


Kabhi-kabhi satranj ke khel me jab najar raja par hoti hai, tab sah aur maat ke iss khel me najar pyade se chuk jaati hai jo haari hui baji ko bhi palat sakta hai...


Apne 200 carore viiman aur 200 carore sainikon ko Dark Universe ke bahar rakhna, Nischal aur Serin ke plan ka hissa tha… Vardali ke hathon apni sari taiyari ki suchna bhijwana wo bhi yojna ka hissa tha, taki Astak aur Surpmarich ki jo bhi yojna ho wo pridicted ho...


Dark Universe ke bahar surveillance rakhna tatha Arhcemia ke dimagi tarangon ko kabu karna, yah bhi sochi samjhi yojna ka hissa tha, taki andhere me jab inki taiyari ho rahi ho, tab Vardali jab apni jankari kuchh facts ke sath de, tab ye apni ran'niti banaye. Ek Napa tula ran'niti jiske hisab se Nischal aur Serin ne 3 hisson me taiyari ki thi aur teeno hisse alag-alag kaman me swatantr roop se kaam karte…


Yah Vardali ki hi suchna thi, jo usne Astak ko bataya tha ki Nischal aur uski team ko yakin hoga ki core planet ke mahal me koi rani nahi sab Astak ke sath yuddh me honge.. taki sabhi Raniyan mahal me hi Mile, ek bhi Astak ke sath yudhh ke maidan me na jaye, khas'kar Arhcemia.


Ye Vardali ki hi suchna thi ki yadi aise kisi planet par hum lade, jahan kisi bhi prakar ke ammunation aur artillaery ko nature me ghola ja sake, to Nischal ka sabse majboot hathiyar, technology, usme wo aundhe muh gir jayega aur usse jamin par aana hi hoga... Taki iss suchna ke baad Astak apni vansaj fauj ko jyada se jyada ladai ke maidan me hi rakhe, usse middle Universe ke ore na bheje…


Vardali, Astak ke sath hone wali yudhh me, Nischal ke taiyari ka wah hissa thi, jisne Nischal aur Serin ki poori niti tay karna aasan kar chuki thi… aur taiyari ka sabse aakhri hissa tha Astak ke vishal bede ki commanding ko hi tabah kar dena...


Vardali ki information aa chuki thi ki vansaj Kiyuke ki jagah ab Joy sena ki command sambhalega... Arhcemia ke sath-sath Surpmarich ke hath me bhi ab sabhi vansajon ka dimag hai, jise 2 jagah se control kiya jayega... Ek core planet ke mahal se Arhcemia aur Pratham dwara... Doosra York planet ke maidan se Joy dwara...


Yah sena itni vishal thi ki yadi isse command me rakha gaya to natije kafi bhayawaah ho sakte the... Fir ek hi baat hoti kitna maroge... Aur yadi kahin ye log Middle Universe ke planets par land karna shuru kar dete, fir sawal yah hota... "Kaise bachaoge apne logon ko"….


Sabse mushkil jimma Luna ke pass hi tha, kyonki Dark Universe me shikast hoti to nuksan simit hota... Aur yadi kahin Middle Universe ke air strike me Luna dushman ke vishal viman ke bede ko nahi sambhal pati to uss nukshan ki kalpna bhi nahi ki ja sakti thi... Fir yadi Dark Universe me jung jit'kar bhi aate to uss jit ka kya matlab rahta... Isliye ab bhi mukhya bindu wahi tha.… "Sena ke command ko samapt karna"… Aur iski poori jimmrdari uthayi thi Jivisha ne"...


Wah nirantar apne ander ki kshmtaon ko nikhar rahi thi... Wah niratar apne Aashram ke sampark me thi... Wah nirantar Prithvi se madad le rahi aur prithvi par madad bhej rahi thi...


Bina koi jaldbaji kiye Jivisha apni taiyariyon me lagi hui thi... Haan lekin sabhi pahlu aur humle ki ran'niti ke baare me vichar karte waqt bahut purani Dakshat ki khoj najarandaj ho gayi.… Pahla "Vegparivartak" jo Viggo ki gati ko shunya kar sakta hai aur Dusra "Astak Zahar" jo blood flow ke jariye jaise hi kisi Viggo ke sine me chadhta uski mirtyu ho jati...


Ye wahi Astak zahar hai, jo kabhi Ruki aur Suko ne Nischal ke sine me lagbhag utar hi diya tha, lekin usse pata nahi tha ki Serin ne wo Astak zahar ko badal diya tha.… Iss baar Nischal ki ye chuk uski jaan lene wali thi. Nischal aur Serin ki taiyari ke ye bahut hi risky hissa hota hai, jahan ye dono wahi karte hain jo uska dushman pridict kar raha hota hai... Fans gaya tha veg parivartak aur Astak zahar me...


Yah yudhh jab shuru hua, Surpmarich, Adharv aur Savdha teeno hi viprit duniya ke Dark universe me the aur wahin se poori ladai dekh rahe the... Adharv aur Savdha iss ladai ko dekh'kar hanste huye jaam lahrate... "Kaise-kaise kartab dikha rahe hain ye mul duniya wale"..


Haan lekin Adharv ke chehre par gusse ke bhav tab aa gaye, jab usne pahli jhalak Jivisha ka dekha... Ahankar se bhade uske shabd the..... "Mere kul ki ek ladki ab bhi bachi hai"…


Savdha, pyar se Adhrv ke honth chumti... "Tumhare kul ki hai tabhi to bekuff hokar mahal me ghusi... Dekhne to do ye kya-kya kar sakti hai"…


Yudhh ke pahle minute se hi Jivisha mashtishk mahal par aise haavi hui ki Surpmarich, Adharv aur Savdha ko afsos sa ho raha tha ki unhe sunischit nahi hona chahiye tha ki mul duniya wale mashtishk mahal ka kuchh nahi kar sakte... Dark universe ke mahal ki haalat aisi ho gayi ki dono duniye ke raste ke connection ban rahe the aur bigad rahe the...


Surpmarich ke hathon me tha ek lamba kala sa dansh.. jiska nichla sira patla sa tip tha aur upar 7 rekhaon me failte huye aada tirchha gola'kar shape. Uska upri sira thoda mota tha jiske niche ek chhota sa muh bana hua tha, uske ander ek kaala patthar laga hua tha...


Surpmarich ne jaise hi dansh hath me uthaya, Atharv uska rasta rokte... "Baba kahan ja rahe ho"..


Surpmarich:- Unhe masthisk mahal ka raaj pata chal gaya hai... Iss se pahle ki wo mahal ko barbaad kar de, mujhe turant uss paar jana hoga...


Savdha:- Baba lekin dark universe ke mashtishk mahal me chhed-chhad ho raha hai... Uss paar nikalne wale raste badal rahe hai... Ek bhatka rasta lenge to kayi salon tak fase rah sakte hain…


Surpmarich:- Main hi prakriti hun... Aur mashtishk mahal ka har bharm meri gulaam hai kyonki ye meri rachna hai…


Adhrva:- Thik hai baba aap jao... Aur mahal surakhsit karo... Aaj akele chha jana aur ye namune jo uchhal kud kar rahe hain... Sab jab ek jagah baithe kar apne jit ka jashn mana rahe ho, tab unke logon ke samne pahle un sabko maarna, fir wahan ke logon me sandesh pahuncha dena... "Jinhe maara gaya wo to bus gulaam the... mamuli se kide-makode, jaise ye marne wale tumhare heros kide-makode hain, aur aap hai uske bhagwan"...


Savdha:- Jao dikha do baba jinhe wo alag-alag naam se jante hain... Wo bhagwan kaun hai.…


Surpmarich apna kaala danah le'kar akela nikla... Jivisha lagatar mashtishk mahal me aisa udham machaya hui thi ki Surpmarich ko iss paar se uss paar nikalne me lamba waqt lag gaya... Iss bich Jivisha poore core planet jit'kar mashtisk mahal ke sabhi aatma ko uss jaal se chhutkara deti hui, mashtisk ke kendr tak pahunch chuki thi.


Arthav bilkul shant ho'kar sab dekh raha tha. Lekin uski pyari patni Savdha apne pati ke ore dekh'kar najron se hi dhutkaar di ho jaise.… "Itna shant kaise ho sakte ho Adharv"…


Patni to sabko pyari hoti hai lekin Savdha to jaan thi Adharv ki. Muskurate ussne bus itna hi kaha tha…. "Baba uss paar nikal jayenge aur un sabhi ko saja denge... Hum shayad ye mashtisk mahal bacha na paye... Baba wahan gaye hain wo sabko saja de'kar aur mashtisk mahal ka nirman kar'ke laut aayenge...


Savdha:- Adharv ye purvanuman apne pass rakho aur mahal ko bachao... Aatama ki majbooti do usme jabtak baba Mul Duniya me pahunch nahi jate ..


Adharv, Savdha ki baat sun'kar ussi waqt Astak ko wo roop diya jis wahjah se mahaj kuchh hi der me wo apne 2000 caror vansajon ko nigalta chala gaya. Na kewal vansajon ko nigla, balki asankhya kide makode ko bhi jamin se nigal gaya... Har wo jiv jisme pran the sabko Astak nigalta chala gaya.…


Lekin Astak se huye yudhh me Nischal aur Serin ko jab Savdha ne dekha tab uske muh se bhi "Waahhh" nikal gaya...


Adharv hanste huye... "Kya hua iss gulaam par dil aa gaya kya"


Savdha:- Karnaame hi aise kiye hain isne... Kya usne tumhara dil na jita..


Adrava:- Haan adbhut kashmta hai dono me... Humare yahan aise ek bhi ladake nahi aur shayad mul duniya me bhi in dono jaise ladake na honge...


Savdha:- Baba ko bolti hun inhe gulaam bana'kar le aaye...


Adharv:- Baba ko ye bhi bol dena mann me maze lene ki ikchha jodon par hai..


Savdha:- Tum bhi na Adharv... Ye to chori chhupe wala kaam hai... Yahan ke andheron me...


Adharv, apni patni ki shrarati ikchha par hanste huye kahne laga... "Pahle mashtisk mahal ko bachane ka tumhara gussa aur ab ye tumhari dilfek tammnayen, dono me se ek bhi poori nahi hogi"…


Savdha:- Dono hi poori hongi Adharv aur tumhara purvanuman aaj main galat sabhit kar dungi...


Savdha apni baat kah'kar Astak ko mashtisk mahal ki poori urja hi de dali... Jabtak Astak khada, tab'tak masthisk mahal ko koi gira na sake... Jivisha mashtisk mahal ke core point tak pahunch chuki thi. Apne sath 20 lakh striyon aur Saatvik Aashram ke phunche sabhi logon ka jod laga di lekin wahan lage patthar ko hila nahi payi thi.


Itna kam tha jo Astak ke chabaye arbon log uske muh se pet me jate aur sab mahal ke charo ore jama hote gaye… takriban 200 carore aatmayen jab ikattha ho gayi, sabhi sangathit roop se ek baar aur humla kar chuke the...


Yun to Jivisha kahar ban'kar sab par baras rahi thi, lekin iss baar jo aatmayen mahal ki raksha ke liye aayi thi, wo pasine chhuda rahi thi, upar se unki taadat thi ki kam hone ka naam nahi le...


Savdha apni lalaat unchi karti, khil, khila'kar hansti hui Adharv ke chehre par hath ferti hui... "Bus ek baar baba ko wahan pahunchne ki der hai"…


Adharv ki sukoon bhadi muskaan ab bhi kam nahi hui thi... Wo bus muskura'kar jata raha tha ki, mashtisk mahal jayega, Baba mul duniya pahunchenge aur un sab ko ikattha marenge…


Yudhh ke maidan me Nischal ke jit ke sath hi, Jivisha ko ehsas sa hua ki mahal kamjor hua hai... Ek naag dansh aur apni poori kashmta ko sanyukt karti hui Jivisha ne naag-dansh ko wahin core point ke pass gaad kar, poore jagah ko hi bandhi aur iss baar apne hath ke ishare se hi wo 2 patthar khinch chuki thi...


Patthar khinchte hi aisa laga jaise 2 lahren takra'kar visphot ke sath pani ko hawa me bikher deti hai, waise hi wahan ke charo ore ka sama tha... Atharv ka pahla purvanuman satya hua tha... Mashtishk mahal ke toot'te hi dono duniya ka rasta bhi toot gaya tha, lekin kuchh waqt pahle hi far Universe me Surpmarich apne sabse shaktisali mashtishk mahal me pahuncha tha aur uska gussa apne uffan par...


Vyakul sa mann tha Surpmarich ka... Gusse me bilbila raha tha aur ab bus sabke ek sath hone ka intzar kar raha tha... Surpmarich aaj bhag'kar ek bhi shikar nahi karna chahta tha... Naa hi chahta tha ki uska ek bhi shikar ko dushman ki purv suchna ho aur wo bhag jaye...


Surpmarich apne gusse se sabko bhasm to karna chahta tha, lekin chuhe-billi ka khel shuru kar'ke apne kisi bhi shikar ko ek din aur jivit dekhna, usse ganvara nahi tha. Luna ki poori baat wo sun chuka tha aur bus intzar kar raha tha... Har kisi ko relax ho'kar aaram se jit ke jashn me samil hote dekhna.…


Idhar takriban 3 ghante baad hi Jivisha aur Nischal ke viman Viggo viman ke sath lage... Sabhi Viggo viman me pahunche lekin ek ore se Nischal gayab tha to dusri ore se Jivisha. Dono hi bhag'kar hall me mile aur mil'kar jo jhappatte maar'kar ek dusre ke gale lag'kar chipake the... Aahh haaa !!! Sukoon ke sagar me gote laga rahe the...


Armaan bikhar rahe the aur dono bekhyali me honth se honth lagaye chumne lage.… Sabhi bacche apne maa aur baba se milne pahunche, lekin koi bhi hall me pahunch na paya tha.… Surpmarich khun jalata khud se kahne laga…. "Bus ye aakhri milan hoga tera... Bus jaldi sab ek jagah jama ho jao"…


Dono na jane kitni der tak bus honth se honth lagaye, ek dusre me sama'kar chumte rahe.… Jivisha, Nischal se alag hoti... "Kya counting badhani hai ya 3 baar ka lifetime achievement award jitna hai"…


Nischal, utsukta me Jivisha ko idhar-udhar hath lagate, uske kamar me chikoti kaat'te... "Chalo jaldi... Abhi se le'kar subah tak sala iss counting ko triple to kar hi dena hai"…


"Hihihihi... Besharm kahin ke... Wo to achha hua poore hall ko bandh diya warna bacche aa jate"…


Nischal chidhte huye.… "Ja'kar sabhi bacchon ko guruji ke pass de aao"…


"Areee bus baba... Chalo abhi celebration sabke sath, fir baad me apna celebration lekin uss se pahle... Jaraa thande thande pani se nahane ka luft utha len... Aur haan love mujhe lagta hai pani se jyada hak to tumhe hai mujhe chhune ka.... Tumhe nahi lagta kya???"..


Nischal ke aankhon me dil chhap gaya ho jaise. Jivisha ko uthaya, honth se honth jud gaye aur dono sidha apne kamre ke bathroom me...


Wahin hall ke sabhi raste par bacche khade the... Bitti aur Gopan poore raste par hi aag lagate... "Hall ka rasta kisne block kiya hai, abhi kholo... Maa, baba... Sun rahe ho"…


Pichhe se Nandni aur Ansh uss section ke me khade sabhi bacchon ke pass pahunchte... "Secret meeting ho rahi hai dono ki... Wo shayad block na khole chalo humare sath… iss section ko hi hall bana lete hain.."..


Bitti, Gopal aur baki sab mayus hote... "Ek baar maa se mil lete na... Baba aur aap sab to sath hi the... Unke apne bacche aane se maa hume bhul rahi hai kya??"


Nandni, apna hath aage badha'kar pyar se dono ke bade se muh ke upar apna hath ferti... "Aisa sochna bhi mat"… itne me hi kayi sare jhuke sar aage the... Nandni sab par hath ferti... "Jabtak Jivisha nahi aati tumlog Meena ke team se kyon nahi mil lete"…


"Maasi aapko bhi to meeting me jane ki der ho rahi na... Bua (Serin) bhi to gayi"… Meena apni baat kahti bada ha muh ko khol'kar "ho ho ho ho" kar'ke hasne lagi... "Aaaooowwww massi… jhatka dene se pahle bata to do"…


Nandni:- Meri baat suno sab... 1 ghante me sabhi naha dho kar taiyar hokar hall me aayenge... Hum bhi thoda fresh ho le...


Sabhi bacche haan karte huye nikal gaye.. Mina jhat se ek hi baar me Ansh aur Nandni ke sath lapet'ti... "Aap dono thik hai na"..


Ansh aur Nandni dono sath me... "Haan baba thik hun... Tu kaahe itna emotional ho rahi hai"..


Meena:- Kuchh nahi bus kuchh bhi achha nahi lag raha... Sab sath me milte hain …


Sabhi apne-apne kamre me the aur apne sathi ke sath pyar bhare pal bita rahe the, siway Serin aur HuYu ke... Kyonki dono kuchh jyada hi romance ke mood se the aur darvaja lock kar'ke bus shuru the..


Poore Viggo viman me computer ji ka announcement hone laga… 10Pm sharp (yahi koi lagbhag sawa ghanta (1.15 hour) baad) Serin, HuYu, Shwetna, Ansh, Nandni, Air commander Canon, Saras ke sath main (Nischal) aur Jivisha 15 minute ki meeting lenge aur thik 10.15 PM ke baad hum jaise hi Middle Universe ki seema me honge, sab hall me aa jaye poore middle universe ke sath jashn-e-sham manane...


HuYu, Serin ke hoth kaat'te... "Tere bhai ko aur koi kaam nahi… aaj ki raat sab ko aaram karne deta... Kal nahi kar sakta tha ye sab kaam"…


"Abhi tum apne kaam par dhyan lagao… bhatko mat... Abhi samay bahut hai humare pass"…


Idhar Nandni aur Ansh bhi poore masti me... Ansh thoda chidhte..."Hume kyon bula raha... Kaun sa hum war hero hai... Khud hi sabhi meeting le'kar bahar wo jashn manate aur ander hum"…


Nandni:- Mujhe ab bhi Meena ka khyal aa raha.… Kitni mayus thi wo...


Ansh:- Mayus Bitti aur Gopal ke sath aur sab bhi dragon babies the... Bus wo khul'kar kah nahi paye ..


Nandni:- Jivisha jab sabko sath me gale lagayegi, tabhi sabko sukoon aayega...


Ansh:- Filhaal tum mujhe kaske gale lagao... ..


Nandni bath tub me utarti… "tum khud hi yahan kyon nahi aa'kar, gale laga lete baby"…


Raat ke thik 10 baje... Sabhi hall me baithe the... Hall area ko bada sa maidan bana diya gaya tha… charo ore lamba chauda jagah...


Sabhi aaram se apne-apne sathi ke bahon me baithe the... Jivisha sabko badhaeyan deti... "Ek bada yudhh samapt hua hai.. main chahti hun ek baar hum uss mahal par bhi discuss kar le... Astak ke core planet me basa wo mahal insano ke ander kayi sari vikrut mansikta ke sath-sath usse kurur bana deta hai aur ek waisa hi mahal Zoren me bhi hai"…


HuYu:- Mujhe lagta hai ki waisa hi ek mahal Far Universe me bhi hoga aur wahin se sab oprate hota hoga... Tabhi to uss daur me Astak jaisa vishal sena lekar aaye the… ho na ho Astak jaisa samrajya hoga far universe me...


Nischal:- To kya sirf 3 hi honge... Humne universe ke 3 hisse me 3 mashtisk mahal ko dekha hai… Halanki Far Universe ka confirm nahi lekin fir bhi yadi Universe ke uss hisse me ho sakta hai to kisi aur hisse me kyon nahi…


Saras:- Maine jo dekha waisi fantasy to kisi book me bhi nahi thi... Kya in sab ka koi center point hai, jo insano ke ander aisi shaktiyan daal deta hai... ..


"Tum sab thode sahi aur thode galat aakalan ke sath discussion kar rahe ho... Uss mahal ka rachyata aur iss Mul duniya se lekar Viprit Duniya ka bhagvan Surpmarich, tumhare samne khada hai... Marne se pahle apni jigyasa jahir kar do"…


Hawa se jaise awaj aa rahi thi. Issi awaj ke bich ek jhonka sa aaya jisme kewal kaale kan (particles) the. Parat dar parat kaale-kaale kan judte chale gaye... Awaj uski charo ore gunj rahi thi… jaise hi uski awaj band hui, samne ek poorn kala sawaroop khada tha, jiska chehra poora ujla... Apna poorn swaroop me Surpmarich sabke bich khada tha.


Sabhi samjhne ki kosis kar rahe the ki ye hai kya... Matr chhanik waqt hi kaha jaye aur itne me uske hath ka wo kaala dansh, jo dekhne me hi kisi shaitan ki takat samete huye lag raha tha... Surpmarich ne wah dansh ko bhumi par patka aur sab ke sab kewal apne aankhe ghuma pa rahe the lekin kuchh bolne ya karne ki haalat me nahi the...


Fir Surpmarich ek poora itihas 10 minute tak sunata raha aur sabhi sunte rahe... Poore 18 mashtisk mahal ki jankari batayi jisme se ek abhi se kuchh der pahle in logon ne mil'kar samapt kar diya tha…


Bade se maidani hall me, viggo viman par majood sabhi log jut chuke the... Dragon babies Luna, lakho crew member, lekin panje matr ke ishare se hi sabhi tej jhatka kha'kar pichhe huye…


"Aaj maut inki aayi hai... Tum sab ko bus tamasha dekhna hai... Haan to aur koi sawal tum logon ke diamg me mahal ko le'kar… bolte kyon nahi"…


"Inke muh hath khol'kar dekho... Jo bhi tilishm tumne kiya ek baar hata'kar dobara kosis karo... Fir apni haalat dekhna tu shaitan"… Luna ki awaj charo ore gunji..


Surpmarich attahas bhadi hansi hanste huye... "Tumhari baat bhi sahi hai ladki, warna main hi bhagwan hun, tum sab ko pata kaise chalega"…


Dansh ko ek baar usne hawa me gumaya aur kuchh meter ke dayre ko baandhte, agle hi pal usne sabko azad kar diya... Nischal aur Serin ek dusre ko dekhti... "Bhai tu aakhri hi hai na... Yaar har yudhh ke end me Surpmarich se hi ladte rahenge kya?"


Jivisha:- Sahi kaha baby... Waise sun oye kapti... In insano ko to dayre se bahar kar… inhe to hum sath lekar aaye the..


Juvisha, Canon, Saras, Nandni aur Ansh ko dekhti hui kahne lagi...


Surpmarich:- Jo yahan hai wo sab marenge... Haan ye dono (canon aur saras) nahi the aaj marne ki list me, lekin inhe tumhare sath baithne ka khamiyaja bhugatna hoga... Ab kya bakwas hi hogi ya apne bhagwan ke hath se mukti paoge…


Nischal aur Serin ne ek najar dekha... Nischal ne Serin ka hath pakad kar usse hawa me uchhal diya aur apna hath aage badhaya tha... Idhar Jivisha khadi hokar apne dono hatha hawa me karti viman se hi energy khinchna shuru hi ki thi...


Jahan ek ore Nischal apna hath aage badhaye... Wahin Serin apna hath niche kar'ke Nischal ko bhi uchhalne ko taiyar aur idhar Jivisha tej jhatke dene ko taiyar thi... Nandni wahin bus apni ungli se bijli ka path bana rahi thi...


Nischal aur Serin ke hath milne wale the… Jivisha hath jhatakne wali thi aur Nandni jhatka tay kar'ke command dene wali thi... Ek chhanik padaw second ka chhita hissa jiske agle pal sab ek sath humla karte, tabhi.…


"Dhammm dhamnnn dhammnnn dahammmm"... Wahan maujood sabhi ek sath upar-niche deewar se takra rahe the… bus takrane ki awaj aa rahi thi. Dayre ke bahar khade logon ko takrane ki aawaz to aa rahi thi lekin kuchh dikh nahi raha tha. Wahin sabhi dragon babies ka dil pahle se bhar aaya tha. Apne sine me dard jaisa mehsus karte wahin baith gaye... Aanshu the ki apne aap hi nikal rahe the...


Pata nahi kitni raftar thi upar niche dhap-dhap takra hi rahe the... Khun ke chhinte upar aur niche bikhar rahe the...


Surpmarich ne dansh aage badhaya, kisi ek ka gala hath me, aur agle hi pal uske sarir se gala alag kar'ke, chehre ko hawa me uchhal diya... Dayre ki seema se lag'kar ye pahla gala Jivisha ka hawa me...


Tej hi dahar thi Adhmya aur uske poore pariwar ki... Viyog aur dard me sabhi dragon babies bilbila uthe... Wahan maujood sabhi logon ke aakhon se aanshu rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the... .


Dhap dhap teji se upar niche sabhi takra rahe the. Serin aur Nischal uss speed me dekh tak nahi pa rahe the... Chain fenk'kar kitni hi kosis kiye, lekin chain thi ki mano kisi kaam hi nahi rahi aur na to jamin hath lag rahi thi na hi chhat...


Bahar khade logon ka viyog kam nahi hua tha ki dusra sar bhi wahin Jivisha ke karib aa'kar laga... Nischal ka sar... Nischal ka sar dekh'kar to wahan maujood sabhi ke hausle hi toot gayaaye Ho... Sab ke sab ek sath ghtno par baith'kar apne master Serin ko jindgi ke liye gidgidane lage...


"Hahahaha... Aise hi ro kar fariyad karo apne bhagwan se... Shayad tum sab ke liye dil me daya aa jaye lekin inki mirtyu atal hai, kyonki ye mirtyu iss bhagwan ne likhi hai...


Dur baitha Adharv hanste huye Savdha ko chhedte.… "Mere hi purvanuman ko chunauti… ab to meri sharaten tumhe jhelni hogi"..


Savdha:- Huhhhh !!! Baba ko dekhne do abhi... Pareshan mat karo… in janvaron ko ehsas karwa gaye bhagwan kaun hai...


Idhar Surpmarich unki roti fariyad ko sun'kar agla sar pesh kiya... Nandni ki thi wo... Sabhi fariyadi, usse rukne aur Serin ko chhodne ki minnaten karne lage... Siway Nilbhut ke sabhi ro rahe the… Jivisha aur Nischal ko dekh'kar to pahle hi unki aatma kalap gayi thi bus khud ko Shwetna ke liye majboot bana rahe the...


Jyada intzar nahi karna para kyonki Ansh ke sar ke baad Shwetna ka sar hi hawa me tha….. Sabhi rote rahe fariyad karte rahe.... Dragon babies apne maa-baba aur maasi-mausa ka sar hawa me dekhte hi achet ho gaye the... Adhmya, Nischal ko dekh bilbila raha tha… Daharte huye usne na jane kitni baar humla kiya hoga uss dayre par… aur har baar na jane kitna tej jhtka kha'kar uska sarir kaam karne layak na bacha ho...


Adhmee aur uske bachhe rokte rahe lekin pal-pal jaise uske aankhon ke samne Nischal aur apna bachpan yaad aata raha... Sath me daurna... Nischal ka hawa me chhalang lagana… Sath me Serin ke sath 2-2 serious wala hath karna, jisme gusse me wo Serin ko ghayal tak kar deta tha... Ek dost ander fasa tha aur jise bachane ke liye eklauta Adhmya kosis karta raha... Baki sab to kata gala dekh'kar hi hatash the...


Fir ek-ek karke sare sar hawa me lagte gaye aur sabse anth me aaya Serin ka sar... Issi ke sath Surpmarich sabke samne apna dansh patakte.… "Apne naye bhagwan ke samne jhukoooo... Tum jaanvaron ka main hi palanhar hun. Apne palanhaar ke sam'maan me jhuko"


Charo ore gol-gol sar ghum rahe the… Dayra khulte hi Adhmya hawa me uchhal'kar Surpmarich ke itne karib pahunch gaya ki uske poore muh me hi uaka sar aane wala tha, lekin agle hi pal wo bhid ke upar gira... Dayra khulte hi sabne ladne ki sochi hi thi aur Surpmarich par humla karte, uss se pahle hi matr hath bhar ke ishare se, Nilbhut samuday ko bhi pura ghutno par le aaya wo Surpmarich…


"Hum jhuk kaise sakte hain jab humara mukhiya nahi jhuka… Adhmya chacha, lagao dahar"… Gopal sar uthane ki kosis karte huye kahne laga...


Adhyma jo chot khaya bhid me ja gira tha, uske sharir me jaan nahi bachi thi... Sharir bilkul dhila sa para hua tha... Surpmarich lagatar hanste huye kahta ja raha tha... "Gulaami ki zindgi hi kismat hai tumhari, apne bhagwan ke aage jhuke raho"… Dur baithe uski beti aur jamai bhi inki haalat par hans rahe the...


Issi bhich ek tej dahar hui.… Aur ussi ke sath uth khade huye the sabhi dragon babies... Surpmarich apne hath ka poora jod laga diye lekin fir bhi sabhi dragon babies uth khade huye. Gopal hawa me poora aag lagata hua apna sar uncha kiya... Bitti aur Meena katar me sabse aage khade... Aankhon ke kinaron se unke aanshu lagaatar bahte ja rahe the…


"Tum sab ki ye harkat kahin tumhari jaan na lele bacche"…. Surpmarich chillaya… .


"Mere baba kahte hain, mirtyu hi ek matr satya hai, jo sabko aani hai dhurt Surpmarich"…


Agle hi pal tej dahar ke sath Adhmya ke bete Mohan aur Sohan dur se chhalang laga chuke the. Surpmarich khud me hairan sa tha, kyonki ye dono sher bhi itne karib pahunche the ki iss baar panjon ki halki kharoch uske kandhe par thi...


Surpmarich gusse me maut ka tandav shuru karne ja raha tha... Uss hall me maujood har kisi ko teji se upar uthaya hi tha.… thik tabhi ussi waqt... Nayjo samuday ki ladkiyan jo iss viman par mehman thi, wo Surpmarich ko ghere khadi thi... Har kisi ki aankhon se Kiran nikal raha tha siway 1 ladki ke... Sabhi kiran floor par pad rahi thi aur Surpmarich ke charo ore se gol ghere khadi thi..


Jaise hi wo gol ghere khadi hui, tabhi poore bhid se Surpmarich ke shaktiyon ka prabhav hat gaya... Surpmarich shant khada bus dekhta raha...


Nayjo samuday ki ladki Deevu, apne kamar ke thik upar kuchh nishan dikhati hui kahne lagi... "Hum apne samuday se toot chuke hain, Apna wo dansh de do hum chale jayenge"…


Surpmarich:- Tumhari shaktiyan kamal ki hai, lekin tum 10 minute se jyada nahi bandh sakti... Tumhe jo chahiye wo main tumhari himmat aur mehnat se khush ho'kar de dunga... Lekin in sab ke gale me fossil stone kahan se aayi...


(Surpmarich un 6 stone ke bare me puchhne laga jise Roffa Space Station me dekh'kar Jivisha ko laga tha ki iss stone ko usne kahin dekha hai)


Deevu:- Hume bhi nahi pata ki ye Fossil stone inke pass kaise aaye... Maine iss viman par mage stone aur pious stone, energy stone, aur inke alawa lagbhag 6 aur stone ki maujoodgi feel kar sakti hun... Kafi shandaar collection hai... aur haan 2 taza stone ki charcha to ki hi nahi jo wo veer le'kar pahunchi, jisne tumhare mahal ko barbaad kar diya…


Surpmarich:- Kya fayda un collection ka, jab uske gun aur kshmtaon ka bhi gyan nahi... Mujhe in stone me koi ruchi nahi...


Deevu:- Aan haan !!! Isliye najar niche Fossil stone par hai...


Surpmarich:- Baaten bahut hui, tumhe bus ye dansh chahiye na... To le lo...


Deevu:- Meri sathi ke ore badhao…


Surpmarich:- Circle ke bahar dansh to waise bhi nahi jaeyega… Hatti bachon ne mujhe hi bandh diya...


Deevu:- Hatti bhi hai ye bacche aur man mauji bhi...


Deevu apni ek sathi ko aage bheji dansh lane, jaise hi circle par uss ladki ke paun pare... Niche raushni tooti aur agle hi pal sabhi Nayjo samuday ki 18 ladkiyan hawa me thi aur sabhi ke aankh bahar...


Sabhi 18 ladkiyan hawa me gol circle banaye tangi hui thi. Aankhon ke niche khun ki moti dhar bahti hui niche aa rahi thi. Kajeja chir dena wala dard bhari chinkh unke muh se nikal rahi thi… aur Surpmarich hanste huye.… "Pratidwandi kisi khiladi ko banati murkhon, rachayita ke sath khelne ke dushparinam tumhe pahle sochne chahiye the… aur wahi haal ab main karne wala hun tum sabka. Mamuli janvar ne mujhe chhu liya"..
 

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Tha ksss for your lovely samiksha ... Ek anumanit tha ki aap aise hi react kare... Nandni thi na iss update me :D...

Lekin main chahunga ... 3 part aur hai... Aap teeno samapt karke ek sath poori samiksha karen ranbhumi ki :hug:...

Mere liye har update ke comment reply muskil sa ho jayega :hug:
Okay.. :D
Btw great Nandu hai isliye kayi kirdaar hamari prakop se bache huye hai :D
 

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Nandni:- Tera dimag kaam na kar raha... Wo bhumigat ho'kar bhi aa sakte the...


Nischal:- Tabhi tu Sonu ke sath gulatiyan khati aayi hai... Unhe nahi bhej sakti thi...


Nandni, gusse me Nischal ko ghurti... "Teri ye gende si sooji shakal aisi hi permanent ho jaye to achha hai... Bilkul baingan shape me suji hui... Gadhe, kinare par bhi najar dal jo ye giant fauj poore maidan ko kinare se gher kar deewar banaye hai. Nilbhut bhumigat ho'kar unke pass se gujarte to wo giants jamin ke ander se unhe khinch lete"…


Serin:- 10 minute ke 2 minute to yahin tum dono ke bahas me khatm ho gaye...


"Iss gadhe ko samjhao, main chali"… Nandni turant wahan se nikli, uske jaate hi, Serin ek kataa sar utha'kar thodi dur par baithe sainik ke ore fenkte... "Oye harami, iss fauj ki koi reserve tukdi bhi rakhe ho ya jitne dikh rahe hain utne hi ho"…


Ek sainik:- Haramiyon tum aate kyon nahi humla karne... Raham na karne wali baat to samjh gaya... Lekin "Na rukenge" wala dialogue kya apne maa ke yaar ko suna rahi thi, jo unke marte hi ruk gaye...


Serin:- Bahut charbi chadhi hai tere upar… teri to charbi utarni hogi re...


Nischal:- Haramiyon ki juban hi gandi hai... Humari maa ke bare me bolta hai badbola...


Serin:- Gala to uska katega hi chahe tu kaat ya main… ghanto se lad rahe hain... Aise ladte rahe to inhe maarne me mahino lag jayeng.. Aur haan aise haalat me hum inke samne aur 1 ghanta nahi tik payenge… mahino ladne ki to dur ki baat hai...


Nischal:- Hmmm !! Tu ye soch rahi hai... Lekin ab gati badhane ko taiyar ho ja... Kyonki kuchh to ran'niti nandni bana chuki hai... Tabhi yahan pahunchi... Aur wo jo bhi ran'niti banayegi, hum sab ke liye naya hoga... Ye sainik jaise hi surprise honge aur bus toot parna hai. Lekin meri chinta wo nahi hai...


Serin:- To fir kya hai??


Nischal:- Iske baad in logon ne kaun sa surprise rakha hai... Inke hisab se 6000 carore ki inki fauj hai... Aur abhi tak humne 800 se 900 carore mare honge... Baki ke reserve to jamin se hi niklenge...


Serin:- Ek kaam kar inka commandar ko maar kyonki mujhe lagta hai poora operation ek team kar raha hai... Jo Hella aur Messa ke karibi honge... Wo mar gaye fir inko naye formation ki jankari nahi milegi… tab hum bakiyon ko unki manjil par aaj hi pahuncha denge...


Nischal:- Kahin ye total command Astak to na de raha... Jab se usse maine laat maari hai, wo tab se gayab hai maidan se... Vardali ne kaha tha ki uska commander jaise hi marega Astak khud command sambhalne aayega... Aur Surpmarich to kabka maara gaya aur dusre planet se inka sampark nahi...


Serin:- Ho sakta hai... Matlab isne koi yahan network develope kiya hoga aur uss waqt jo hume uksa raha tha wo mukhauta tha. Usne mukhaute ko humare samne rakha taki hum usse commander samjhe...


Nischal:- Nandni ko aane de... HuYu tak sandesh pahunchana hoga ki unke networking ko tod de taki jamin se upar hawa me jo aartllary humla ho raha hai, wo kam se kam ruk jaye taki apne millitary commader niche ki ladai ke liye active ho.. Ek baar unka Central command gaya fir hum bhi aage badhte rahenge…


Aisa nahi tha ki dono kewal baten hi kar rahe the... Balki dono apne charo ore bakayda vayumandaliya aavran banaye huye the... Nischal aur Serin samne baithe fauj ko hi dekh rahe the... Wo fauj ab jaan chuki thi ki jitna faila'kar rahenge, unhe dono par humla karne me aasan hoga aur jit bhi jayenge... Isliye aaram se baithe bus Nischal aur Serin ke humle ka intzar kar rahe the…


Idhar Nandni correct 10 minute baad pahunchi, aur upar se hi bag unke ore uchhalti... "Mask lagane ke baad Aerobok ko bula lena, wo ye jagah surakhit kar dega... Tum dono ke badan kafi suje huye hain… bina rest ke ladai nahi kar paoge"..


Nischal:- Aree bachoo...


Nandni jabtak baat kar rahi thi tabtak hazaro bomb Nandni aur Sonu ke ore pahunche… Sonu jhat se dive lagaya wahin dono ke complete mettalic suit total protection mode par aa gaye the. Bachne ke soorat me Complete mettalic suit ke bich 2 layer me hard spring active tha jhatka jhalne ke liye aur poora face bhi cover tha dono ke. Wahin aankhon ke upar hard sisa aur sise par chhota viper chal raha tha... Muh jahan par tha uske pichhe Mike aur aage speaker laga tha…


"Chinta mat karo mujhe kuchh nahi hoga. Dono rest kar lo. Jamini humla Nilbhut surakhsit kar denge... Baki ladai ke maidan me aur bhi hero hain, wo kab herogiri dikhayenge. Humare pass 1 crore 70 lakh ke karib zahar se marne wale sainik kab kaam aayenge"…


Nandni apni baat kahti hui wahan se turant nikli aur sidha pahunchi Saras aur Canon ke pass.… "Aap dono kuchh nahi kar sakte kya, humare pass matr ek team hai aur unke pass army ka amabaar"…


Canon aur Saras dono ek dusre ka muh dekhte... "Tumhare pass jo tecnology expert hai usse bhej do, aur 10 minute do, kuchh jugad lagata hun... Hello boys, we need some support on groung need a complete battalion… 30 log chahiye turant"..


Nandni, wahan se gayi bache huye dragon babies ke pass inhe command samjhati hui kahne lagi.. "hawa se ek bhi ye kale bomb Nischal ke area ke aas pass nahi blast hona chahiye"


Idhar jab'tak HuYu bhi pahunch chuka tha… uski technical team Canon aur Saras se baat kar rahi thi... Issi bich Canon aur Saras dono ne Nandni ko bulaya... "Maim, kya yahan ke air strike ka command yahin ke log de rahe hain"…


Nandni:- Haan kya hua so...


Saras:- Agar air strike ka command band ho jaye to niche ka maidan hum jit lenge… main kab se ek baat par kafi gaur kar raha hun, lekin uske liye humare aircrafts free hone chahiye…


Nandni:- Abhi main HuYu se unhi command ke upar baat karne aayi thi... Kaise bhi kar'ke unka Central command khatm karna hai… Haan lekin yudh ke maidan me, Nischal aur Serin buri tarah fanse hain... Unki haalat thik nahi...


Saras:- Main unhe mark kar lunga, aur total support milega bus missile humle band karwa dijiye... Aap command cut karwaeye yadi mera ganit sahi hua to agle 2 gahnte me hum unse jung jit jayenge... Fir ye purane daur ke talvar takra'kar ek-ek kar'ke maarna nahi hoga... Hum wo karenge jisme hum mahir hai... Ek missile aur 50km ka area saaf...


Nandni ummid bahdi najron se dekhti, HuYu se kaam karwane lagi aur idhar dono earth ke air strike commander aur uske sahayak nayi ran'niti tay karne lage… takriban aadhe ghante lage, lekin HuYu unke system me tha... "Nandni done"… idhar se Nandni ne un dono (Saras aur Canon) ko done kiya...


Saras aur Canon ne area mark kiya jahan Nischal aur Serin the. 2 carore aircrats me se kitne aircrafts bache the, uski ginti na karte, Saras ne 1 carore aircraft ko apne pichhe, ladai se nikal'kar niche bulaya aur unme se 20 lakh air crafts ko order dete...


"Boys tumhare jet ko kuchh nahi hoga... Humare pass kewal 1 mauka hai… isliye pahle 20 lakh plane poore maidan ko gerenge... Reserve area effect kiye bina sare aretellary ko burust fire do.….. plane jahan giregi wahan kewal jamin ke niche aakar khade ho jana... Tumhe safely rescue kar liya jayega"...


Idhar Serin ne jaise hi apna mask lagaya waise hi Nischal ne sabko bahar bula liya... Nischal ne to 30 ko hi bulaya tha lekin wahan takriban 1 lakh sarp upar aaye jo pura hi Nischal aur Serin ko dhak diye aur dekhte hi dekhte wahan aas-pass baithe sainikon me bhagdar hone lagi...


Central command se un sainikon ka Sampark toot gaya tha, isliye aise zahar ke situatiom me kaise humla karna hai uska koi jawab nahi aa raha tha... Jabki un gadhon ko apne poshak ki technology tak pata nahi thi, jo unhe complete mask kar sakte the…


Jaise-jaise wahan me sainik zahar ki chapet me aa rahe the, wo jagah logon ke maut ya bhagdar ke sath khali ho rahi thi. Saanp failte huye jamin par aage badh rahe the aur dono (Nischal aur Serin) ke upar se hathane lage...


Dono ki haalat itni kharab thi ki jaldi se body cell recovery drink, energy drink aur na jane kaun-kaun sa drink piya dono ne... Aur drink pite hi jaise behosi sa chhane laga tha... Idhar 30 air force soldires ki team complete metllic suit pahne uss complete suit ko hi viman banaye huye the...


Jab wo 30 log mark area me pahunche, tab paya ki Nischal aur Serin bilkul behosh pare hain... Un 30 logon ne dono ko utha kar le jane ki kosis ki, lekin jahan soye the uske 100 meter ka dayra bhi cross nahi kar paye aur tab unhe pata chala vayumandaliya aavran ke bare me...


Wo kya karne wale hain iss baat ki suchna de'kar Nilbhut se puchhne lage ki ye cover kitna safe hai... Tab ek Nilbhut sainik kahne laga... Kitne bhi atom bomb gira lo kuchh nahi hoga, lekin humare dushman iss cover ko tod denge...


Uss team ne turant poori suchna apne commander tak pahunchayi… Nilbhut sainikon ko sari baat samjha'kar wahan se 5 minute baad bhumigat hone ke oreder mil gaye... In 5 minute me in logon ne itna zahar chhod diya ki agle 10 minute tak ek kilometer tak koi pass na aa paye...


Ab tak to khauff tukdon me mil raha tha lekin tooti-footi planning hote-hote, anth me 2 sena-naykon ne yahan ke natur me loop dhundh liya tha... 20 lakh viman uss lakhon varg kilometer me phaile ladai ke maidan ke har hisse me thi... Single order aur sabhi misile jamin se hi chipka'kar chhod di gayi...


Brust fire ke sath koi missile 10 komorer tak gaya aur 50 Km ke kshetr ka blast range diya to koi missile 1 km par 10km ka blast range... 1 baar me 1 jet se, jamin se jamin par chhote bade 1000 missile chhode gaye, jo poore yudhh ke maidan ko tabah kar chuke the. Sath me unka khud ka plane kahan aur kitni dur ja gira, unhe khud pata nahi... Yadi ye Hyber metal ka viman na hota to samadhi ban'ni tay thi...


Ek sath ek hi waqt me sabhi 20 lakh viman ki sari missiles chhodi gayi... Ek hi baar me lagbhag 1500 carore ki fauj saaf ho chuki thi. Jamin se maar karne wala atterllary system sab barbaad... Air strike ka command khatm tha sath me dushman ke humle bhi band. Fir to upar ke aircrafts ab pooro azadi se un 1000 carore me se bache-khuche vimano ke bede ko samapt karne me lage huye the...


Niche dil dahla dene wale visphot ke sath, poora ladai ka maidan dhuwan-dhuwan tha.. Maidan saaf ho chuka tha, fir bhi Canon aur Saras ne kisi ko jshn nahi manane diya aur complete metallic suit ke jawano ko Nischal aur Serin ko dekhne bheje…. Dono aaram se sukoon ki nind n le rahe the…. Idhar sabhi Nilbhut samuday ke log kayi group me bantkar, aircraft aur uske pilot ko bhumigat karke, mukhya viman ke pichhe la rahe the...


Sainikon ko to rok liye lekin ye bacche.… jit ki hooting ke sath hi, dragon babies ne viman ke shape ko thoda change karke, apne viman ke missiles ko jamin ke satah se chipka chuke the...


Poore maidan me dhuwan hi dhuwan tha aur dhuwan jab dhire-dhire chhantne laga tab wapas se poora maidan bhada tha… Saras aur Canon unhe dekhte.… "As aspected... Welcome dear"… 20 lakh pilot aur taiyar the… 500 se 800 carore sainikon ki capacity wapas se uss maidan me thi, aur lakho varg kilometer me kewal aur kewal khachakhach log bhade the... Ab to ladai technology vs vayumandaliya energy aur talvar-bhale ki rah gayi thi... Mahaj 15 minute me postion, 10 minute ki firing aur poora ilaka saaf...


"Uthoooo... Uthoooo... Uthhh jaoooo"… Nsichal aur Serin ko jaise ek hi sapna aa raha tha... Dono behosi se bahar to aa rahe the lekin ek ke dimag ke ander HuYu to dusre ke dimag ke ander Jivisha thi. Aur dono ko chum'kar uthaya ja raha tha... Dono ek sath hi aankeh khole aur mithi si angdai lekar… "Hum kahan hai... Yudhh samapt ho gayi kya"…


Bahar se Nandni uss vayumandaliya aavran par laat maarti... "Haramkhor bahar aao dono abhi... Kamino yudhh ke maindan me so gaye"…


Nischal:- Serin ye pagal ho gayi... Ghera khol...


Nischal apne energy dring ka ek ghunt pite huye khada hokar mast angdai liya... Pichhe se Nandni kya kah rahi kaun sunta hai… jamhai.. angdai aur kamar ko lachcka'kar aahhh karte jaise thoda pichhe muda... "Woooo ye kya bala hai"..


Nandni bijli ka ek karara jhatka deti, apne fauj ne ne 3000 se 3500 carore fauj ko kaise khathm kiye usse batane ke baad kahne lagi... "Lagbhag 2 ghante tak koi nahi bahar aaya aur jab bahar aaya to pahle ye namuna aaya aur baad me ye maidan sainikon se bhadi thi. lekin wo sainik kisi aur ka shikar ho rahe hain, khud dekh le...


Samne Astak giant bana tha... Kilometer lamba giant, shayad 2 km lambai ho... Uska sar 100 km dur se bhi dekhne par bada aur bhayanak dikh raha tha. Uske ek ungli par to poora ek aircraft land kar jata... Khair giant hona to kharnaak nahi hi tha, lekin jo wo kar raha tha, khatarnaak...


Halka jhuka bada sa muh khola aur uska wo 300-400 fit wala chauda muh jab khulta, saaf najar aa raha tha ek line si bani thi khinchne ki... Uske khud ke vansajon ki to upar se lekar niche tak rail bani hui thi jo muh ke ander gapagap nigalta chala ja raha tha. Bechare wahan ke anya shukshm aur kide-makode. Uske sath jamin ke kide makode, wahan ki ghas, lavan, dhatu sab wo chaba raha tha... Shayad kankad ki bhanti Hyber metel ka koi aircraft muh me aaya tha... Jab hatheli upar kar'ke uss viman ko muh se nikal'kar fenk raha tha, Nischal aur Serin ki aankhen badi ho gayi...


Serin:- Saala kismat hi jhand hai... Puchh apni jodi se udhar kaun sa mantr foonk rahi hai, jo ek ke baad ek musibat humari badhti ja rahi hai... Kuchh musibat bol khud bhi wahan le le...


Nischal:- 20 lakh ladies, kuchh bacche aur Shwetna ke sath to gayi hai... Sabse kamjor team to wahi le'kar gayi hai...


Serin:- Haan lekin wo jadugarni akele hum jaison ke 100 ke barabar hai. Nilbhut samuday ka to compare mat kar apni biwi se... 1 lakh striyon ke barabar to uska naag phans sammohan hai... Sab ko akele nanga nacha degi wo...


Nischal:- Ab kya usse yahan bula lun, aur bol dun ladne ke liye...


Nandni:- Areee jahilon... Wo humari ore badh raha hai...


Nischal aur Serin dono ek sath... "To kaam ki baat pahle batani thi na... Sab try kar chuke hoge tum sab"…


Nandni:- Haan...


Serin aur Nischal dono ek dusre ko dekhte... Aapas me najron se hi kuchh salaah mashwara kar rahe ho... "Ek try ya sidha attack"


Nischal:- Tu kya kahti hai...


Serin:- Hathoda aur sidha aatack par uss se pahle wo Roffa se laya gift pahan le...


Nischal:- Kahan hai gift…


Serin, HuYu ko sandesh bheji aur wo le'kar pahunchs Roffa space station ka gift... Serin, dane jaise motiyon ki ek patli chain Nischal ke hath par bandhti…. "Kabhi-kabhi badi ladai me aise chhoti-chhoti chijen kaam aati hai"… Serin bhi wo chain apne kalai me dali...


Nischal:- Aur ye chhoti chij hai kya...


Serin:- Prime Universe ke kisi planet ka hai... Exact pata nahi kaun se planet ka hai… chhote-chhote dane jitne nayab patthar, jo kisi bhi khichav ke force ko zero kar dete hai..


Nischal, ek baar Astak ko dekhte... "Abhi ke waqt ke liye to yahi Jivan hai... Jis hisab ka giant hai mujhe doubt hai ki iss par kisi bhi chij ka asar hoga...
Mind-blowing update Bhai ab 1 hi baat last update pe hi comment karunga koi bhi shabd nahi mil raha aap ki tarif ke liye is liye ab last update pe hi comment karunga
 

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Mind-blowing update Bhai ab 1 hi baat last update pe hi comment karunga koi bhi shabd nahi mil raha aap ki tarif ke liye is liye ab last update pe hi comment karunga
Areee notice board dekh lijiye... Aise emotion rokne nahi kaha hai... Bus 3 part me poore update hain...

Main chahta hun part by part samiksha karen..

Ladai ek part
Master second
Rise ore Glaxian third part
 

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In 5 minute me in logon ne itna zahar chhod diya ki agle 10 minute tak ek kilometer tak koi pass na aa paye...
:lol: :lol1:
ye epic tha :roflol:
matlab jameen mein ghus ne se pehle jee bhar ke jahar ugal diya :roflol:
Oh God... :lol:
aisa lage ki kahi jaane pehle jee bhar gaaliya di ho jitni ho sake :laugh: :roflol:
 

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Bahar se Nandni uss vayumandaliya aavran par laat maarti... "Haramkhor bahar aao dono abhi... Kamino yudhh ke maindan me so gaye"…
ek to bechari itni mehnat kar rahi hai dusmano se lad rahi hai aur ye dono :roflol:
wah kya hero hai.. ranbhumi mein hi so gaya :lol: inko dekh to kisika bhi dimag kharab ho jayega... :D
 

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Nandni:- Tera dimag kaam na kar raha... Wo bhumigat ho'kar bhi aa sakte the...


Nischal:- Tabhi tu Sonu ke sath gulatiyan khati aayi hai... Unhe nahi bhej sakti thi...


Nandni, gusse me Nischal ko ghurti... "Teri ye gende si sooji shakal aisi hi permanent ho jaye to achha hai... Bilkul baingan shape me suji hui... Gadhe, kinare par bhi najar dal jo ye giant fauj poore maidan ko kinare se gher kar deewar banaye hai. Nilbhut bhumigat ho'kar unke pass se gujarte to wo giants jamin ke ander se unhe khinch lete"…


Serin:- 10 minute ke 2 minute to yahin tum dono ke bahas me khatm ho gaye...


"Iss gadhe ko samjhao, main chali"… Nandni turant wahan se nikli, uske jaate hi, Serin ek kataa sar utha'kar thodi dur par baithe sainik ke ore fenkte... "Oye harami, iss fauj ki koi reserve tukdi bhi rakhe ho ya jitne dikh rahe hain utne hi ho"…


Ek sainik:- Haramiyon tum aate kyon nahi humla karne... Raham na karne wali baat to samjh gaya... Lekin "Na rukenge" wala dialogue kya apne maa ke yaar ko suna rahi thi, jo unke marte hi ruk gaye...


Serin:- Bahut charbi chadhi hai tere upar… teri to charbi utarni hogi re...


Nischal:- Haramiyon ki juban hi gandi hai... Humari maa ke bare me bolta hai badbola...


Serin:- Gala to uska katega hi chahe tu kaat ya main… ghanto se lad rahe hain... Aise ladte rahe to inhe maarne me mahino lag jayeng.. Aur haan aise haalat me hum inke samne aur 1 ghanta nahi tik payenge… mahino ladne ki to dur ki baat hai...


Nischal:- Hmmm !! Tu ye soch rahi hai... Lekin ab gati badhane ko taiyar ho ja... Kyonki kuchh to ran'niti nandni bana chuki hai... Tabhi yahan pahunchi... Aur wo jo bhi ran'niti banayegi, hum sab ke liye naya hoga... Ye sainik jaise hi surprise honge aur bus toot parna hai. Lekin meri chinta wo nahi hai...


Serin:- To fir kya hai??


Nischal:- Iske baad in logon ne kaun sa surprise rakha hai... Inke hisab se 6000 carore ki inki fauj hai... Aur abhi tak humne 800 se 900 carore mare honge... Baki ke reserve to jamin se hi niklenge...


Serin:- Ek kaam kar inka commandar ko maar kyonki mujhe lagta hai poora operation ek team kar raha hai... Jo Hella aur Messa ke karibi honge... Wo mar gaye fir inko naye formation ki jankari nahi milegi… tab hum bakiyon ko unki manjil par aaj hi pahuncha denge...


Nischal:- Kahin ye total command Astak to na de raha... Jab se usse maine laat maari hai, wo tab se gayab hai maidan se... Vardali ne kaha tha ki uska commander jaise hi marega Astak khud command sambhalne aayega... Aur Surpmarich to kabka maara gaya aur dusre planet se inka sampark nahi...


Serin:- Ho sakta hai... Matlab isne koi yahan network develope kiya hoga aur uss waqt jo hume uksa raha tha wo mukhauta tha. Usne mukhaute ko humare samne rakha taki hum usse commander samjhe...


Nischal:- Nandni ko aane de... HuYu tak sandesh pahunchana hoga ki unke networking ko tod de taki jamin se upar hawa me jo aartllary humla ho raha hai, wo kam se kam ruk jaye taki apne millitary commader niche ki ladai ke liye active ho.. Ek baar unka Central command gaya fir hum bhi aage badhte rahenge…


Aisa nahi tha ki dono kewal baten hi kar rahe the... Balki dono apne charo ore bakayda vayumandaliya aavran banaye huye the... Nischal aur Serin samne baithe fauj ko hi dekh rahe the... Wo fauj ab jaan chuki thi ki jitna faila'kar rahenge, unhe dono par humla karne me aasan hoga aur jit bhi jayenge... Isliye aaram se baithe bus Nischal aur Serin ke humle ka intzar kar rahe the…


Idhar Nandni correct 10 minute baad pahunchi, aur upar se hi bag unke ore uchhalti... "Mask lagane ke baad Aerobok ko bula lena, wo ye jagah surakhit kar dega... Tum dono ke badan kafi suje huye hain… bina rest ke ladai nahi kar paoge"..


Nischal:- Aree bachoo...


Nandni jabtak baat kar rahi thi tabtak hazaro bomb Nandni aur Sonu ke ore pahunche… Sonu jhat se dive lagaya wahin dono ke complete mettalic suit total protection mode par aa gaye the. Bachne ke soorat me Complete mettalic suit ke bich 2 layer me hard spring active tha jhatka jhalne ke liye aur poora face bhi cover tha dono ke. Wahin aankhon ke upar hard sisa aur sise par chhota viper chal raha tha... Muh jahan par tha uske pichhe Mike aur aage speaker laga tha…


"Chinta mat karo mujhe kuchh nahi hoga. Dono rest kar lo. Jamini humla Nilbhut surakhsit kar denge... Baki ladai ke maidan me aur bhi hero hain, wo kab herogiri dikhayenge. Humare pass 1 crore 70 lakh ke karib zahar se marne wale sainik kab kaam aayenge"…


Nandni apni baat kahti hui wahan se turant nikli aur sidha pahunchi Saras aur Canon ke pass.… "Aap dono kuchh nahi kar sakte kya, humare pass matr ek team hai aur unke pass army ka amabaar"…


Canon aur Saras dono ek dusre ka muh dekhte... "Tumhare pass jo tecnology expert hai usse bhej do, aur 10 minute do, kuchh jugad lagata hun... Hello boys, we need some support on groung need a complete battalion… 30 log chahiye turant"..


Nandni, wahan se gayi bache huye dragon babies ke pass inhe command samjhati hui kahne lagi.. "hawa se ek bhi ye kale bomb Nischal ke area ke aas pass nahi blast hona chahiye"


Idhar jab'tak HuYu bhi pahunch chuka tha… uski technical team Canon aur Saras se baat kar rahi thi... Issi bich Canon aur Saras dono ne Nandni ko bulaya... "Maim, kya yahan ke air strike ka command yahin ke log de rahe hain"…


Nandni:- Haan kya hua so...


Saras:- Agar air strike ka command band ho jaye to niche ka maidan hum jit lenge… main kab se ek baat par kafi gaur kar raha hun, lekin uske liye humare aircrafts free hone chahiye…


Nandni:- Abhi main HuYu se unhi command ke upar baat karne aayi thi... Kaise bhi kar'ke unka Central command khatm karna hai… Haan lekin yudh ke maidan me, Nischal aur Serin buri tarah fanse hain... Unki haalat thik nahi...


Saras:- Main unhe mark kar lunga, aur total support milega bus missile humle band karwa dijiye... Aap command cut karwaeye yadi mera ganit sahi hua to agle 2 gahnte me hum unse jung jit jayenge... Fir ye purane daur ke talvar takra'kar ek-ek kar'ke maarna nahi hoga... Hum wo karenge jisme hum mahir hai... Ek missile aur 50km ka area saaf...


Nandni ummid bahdi najron se dekhti, HuYu se kaam karwane lagi aur idhar dono earth ke air strike commander aur uske sahayak nayi ran'niti tay karne lage… takriban aadhe ghante lage, lekin HuYu unke system me tha... "Nandni done"… idhar se Nandni ne un dono (Saras aur Canon) ko done kiya...


Saras aur Canon ne area mark kiya jahan Nischal aur Serin the. 2 carore aircrats me se kitne aircrafts bache the, uski ginti na karte, Saras ne 1 carore aircraft ko apne pichhe, ladai se nikal'kar niche bulaya aur unme se 20 lakh air crafts ko order dete...


"Boys tumhare jet ko kuchh nahi hoga... Humare pass kewal 1 mauka hai… isliye pahle 20 lakh plane poore maidan ko gerenge... Reserve area effect kiye bina sare aretellary ko burust fire do.….. plane jahan giregi wahan kewal jamin ke niche aakar khade ho jana... Tumhe safely rescue kar liya jayega"...


Idhar Serin ne jaise hi apna mask lagaya waise hi Nischal ne sabko bahar bula liya... Nischal ne to 30 ko hi bulaya tha lekin wahan takriban 1 lakh sarp upar aaye jo pura hi Nischal aur Serin ko dhak diye aur dekhte hi dekhte wahan aas-pass baithe sainikon me bhagdar hone lagi...


Central command se un sainikon ka Sampark toot gaya tha, isliye aise zahar ke situatiom me kaise humla karna hai uska koi jawab nahi aa raha tha... Jabki un gadhon ko apne poshak ki technology tak pata nahi thi, jo unhe complete mask kar sakte the…


Jaise-jaise wahan me sainik zahar ki chapet me aa rahe the, wo jagah logon ke maut ya bhagdar ke sath khali ho rahi thi. Saanp failte huye jamin par aage badh rahe the aur dono (Nischal aur Serin) ke upar se hathane lage...


Dono ki haalat itni kharab thi ki jaldi se body cell recovery drink, energy drink aur na jane kaun-kaun sa drink piya dono ne... Aur drink pite hi jaise behosi sa chhane laga tha... Idhar 30 air force soldires ki team complete metllic suit pahne uss complete suit ko hi viman banaye huye the...


Jab wo 30 log mark area me pahunche, tab paya ki Nischal aur Serin bilkul behosh pare hain... Un 30 logon ne dono ko utha kar le jane ki kosis ki, lekin jahan soye the uske 100 meter ka dayra bhi cross nahi kar paye aur tab unhe pata chala vayumandaliya aavran ke bare me...


Wo kya karne wale hain iss baat ki suchna de'kar Nilbhut se puchhne lage ki ye cover kitna safe hai... Tab ek Nilbhut sainik kahne laga... Kitne bhi atom bomb gira lo kuchh nahi hoga, lekin humare dushman iss cover ko tod denge...


Uss team ne turant poori suchna apne commander tak pahunchayi… Nilbhut sainikon ko sari baat samjha'kar wahan se 5 minute baad bhumigat hone ke oreder mil gaye... In 5 minute me in logon ne itna zahar chhod diya ki agle 10 minute tak ek kilometer tak koi pass na aa paye...


Ab tak to khauff tukdon me mil raha tha lekin tooti-footi planning hote-hote, anth me 2 sena-naykon ne yahan ke natur me loop dhundh liya tha... 20 lakh viman uss lakhon varg kilometer me phaile ladai ke maidan ke har hisse me thi... Single order aur sabhi misile jamin se hi chipka'kar chhod di gayi...


Brust fire ke sath koi missile 10 komorer tak gaya aur 50 Km ke kshetr ka blast range diya to koi missile 1 km par 10km ka blast range... 1 baar me 1 jet se, jamin se jamin par chhote bade 1000 missile chhode gaye, jo poore yudhh ke maidan ko tabah kar chuke the. Sath me unka khud ka plane kahan aur kitni dur ja gira, unhe khud pata nahi... Yadi ye Hyber metal ka viman na hota to samadhi ban'ni tay thi...


Ek sath ek hi waqt me sabhi 20 lakh viman ki sari missiles chhodi gayi... Ek hi baar me lagbhag 1500 carore ki fauj saaf ho chuki thi. Jamin se maar karne wala atterllary system sab barbaad... Air strike ka command khatm tha sath me dushman ke humle bhi band. Fir to upar ke aircrafts ab pooro azadi se un 1000 carore me se bache-khuche vimano ke bede ko samapt karne me lage huye the...


Niche dil dahla dene wale visphot ke sath, poora ladai ka maidan dhuwan-dhuwan tha.. Maidan saaf ho chuka tha, fir bhi Canon aur Saras ne kisi ko jshn nahi manane diya aur complete metallic suit ke jawano ko Nischal aur Serin ko dekhne bheje…. Dono aaram se sukoon ki nind n le rahe the…. Idhar sabhi Nilbhut samuday ke log kayi group me bantkar, aircraft aur uske pilot ko bhumigat karke, mukhya viman ke pichhe la rahe the...


Sainikon ko to rok liye lekin ye bacche.… jit ki hooting ke sath hi, dragon babies ne viman ke shape ko thoda change karke, apne viman ke missiles ko jamin ke satah se chipka chuke the...


Poore maidan me dhuwan hi dhuwan tha aur dhuwan jab dhire-dhire chhantne laga tab wapas se poora maidan bhada tha… Saras aur Canon unhe dekhte.… "As aspected... Welcome dear"… 20 lakh pilot aur taiyar the… 500 se 800 carore sainikon ki capacity wapas se uss maidan me thi, aur lakho varg kilometer me kewal aur kewal khachakhach log bhade the... Ab to ladai technology vs vayumandaliya energy aur talvar-bhale ki rah gayi thi... Mahaj 15 minute me postion, 10 minute ki firing aur poora ilaka saaf...


"Uthoooo... Uthoooo... Uthhh jaoooo"… Nsichal aur Serin ko jaise ek hi sapna aa raha tha... Dono behosi se bahar to aa rahe the lekin ek ke dimag ke ander HuYu to dusre ke dimag ke ander Jivisha thi. Aur dono ko chum'kar uthaya ja raha tha... Dono ek sath hi aankeh khole aur mithi si angdai lekar… "Hum kahan hai... Yudhh samapt ho gayi kya"…


Bahar se Nandni uss vayumandaliya aavran par laat maarti... "Haramkhor bahar aao dono abhi... Kamino yudhh ke maindan me so gaye"…


Nischal:- Serin ye pagal ho gayi... Ghera khol...


Nischal apne energy dring ka ek ghunt pite huye khada hokar mast angdai liya... Pichhe se Nandni kya kah rahi kaun sunta hai… jamhai.. angdai aur kamar ko lachcka'kar aahhh karte jaise thoda pichhe muda... "Woooo ye kya bala hai"..


Nandni bijli ka ek karara jhatka deti, apne fauj ne ne 3000 se 3500 carore fauj ko kaise khathm kiye usse batane ke baad kahne lagi... "Lagbhag 2 ghante tak koi nahi bahar aaya aur jab bahar aaya to pahle ye namuna aaya aur baad me ye maidan sainikon se bhadi thi. lekin wo sainik kisi aur ka shikar ho rahe hain, khud dekh le...


Samne Astak giant bana tha... Kilometer lamba giant, shayad 2 km lambai ho... Uska sar 100 km dur se bhi dekhne par bada aur bhayanak dikh raha tha. Uske ek ungli par to poora ek aircraft land kar jata... Khair giant hona to kharnaak nahi hi tha, lekin jo wo kar raha tha, khatarnaak...


Halka jhuka bada sa muh khola aur uska wo 300-400 fit wala chauda muh jab khulta, saaf najar aa raha tha ek line si bani thi khinchne ki... Uske khud ke vansajon ki to upar se lekar niche tak rail bani hui thi jo muh ke ander gapagap nigalta chala ja raha tha. Bechare wahan ke anya shukshm aur kide-makode. Uske sath jamin ke kide makode, wahan ki ghas, lavan, dhatu sab wo chaba raha tha... Shayad kankad ki bhanti Hyber metel ka koi aircraft muh me aaya tha... Jab hatheli upar kar'ke uss viman ko muh se nikal'kar fenk raha tha, Nischal aur Serin ki aankhen badi ho gayi...


Serin:- Saala kismat hi jhand hai... Puchh apni jodi se udhar kaun sa mantr foonk rahi hai, jo ek ke baad ek musibat humari badhti ja rahi hai... Kuchh musibat bol khud bhi wahan le le...


Nischal:- 20 lakh ladies, kuchh bacche aur Shwetna ke sath to gayi hai... Sabse kamjor team to wahi le'kar gayi hai...


Serin:- Haan lekin wo jadugarni akele hum jaison ke 100 ke barabar hai. Nilbhut samuday ka to compare mat kar apni biwi se... 1 lakh striyon ke barabar to uska naag phans sammohan hai... Sab ko akele nanga nacha degi wo...


Nischal:- Ab kya usse yahan bula lun, aur bol dun ladne ke liye...


Nandni:- Areee jahilon... Wo humari ore badh raha hai...


Nischal aur Serin dono ek sath... "To kaam ki baat pahle batani thi na... Sab try kar chuke hoge tum sab"…


Nandni:- Haan...


Serin aur Nischal dono ek dusre ko dekhte... Aapas me najron se hi kuchh salaah mashwara kar rahe ho... "Ek try ya sidha attack"


Nischal:- Tu kya kahti hai...


Serin:- Hathoda aur sidha aatack par uss se pahle wo Roffa se laya gift pahan le...


Nischal:- Kahan hai gift…


Serin, HuYu ko sandesh bheji aur wo le'kar pahunchs Roffa space station ka gift... Serin, dane jaise motiyon ki ek patli chain Nischal ke hath par bandhti…. "Kabhi-kabhi badi ladai me aise chhoti-chhoti chijen kaam aati hai"… Serin bhi wo chain apne kalai me dali...


Nischal:- Aur ye chhoti chij hai kya...


Serin:- Prime Universe ke kisi planet ka hai... Exact pata nahi kaun se planet ka hai… chhote-chhote dane jitne nayab patthar, jo kisi bhi khichav ke force ko zero kar dete hai..


Nischal, ek baar Astak ko dekhte... "Abhi ke waqt ke liye to yahi Jivan hai... Jis hisab ka giant hai mujhe doubt hai ki iss par kisi bhi chij ka asar hoga...
is update mein nandu ke sath sath agar sabse zyada highlights mein rahe to wo hai saras aur canon...
jis tarah se yuddhniti taiyar karke uspe amal ki hai inlogo ne wo Lajawab hai... Haan wo saap logis ne bhi bahot madad ki hai dusmano ko tabah karne ke liye..
waise in logo ne ye badhiya idea lagaya... "ek hi baar mein khatma karo dusman ko " by hook or by crook, ran neeti badhiya thi.... aur parinaam bhi safal...
waise in giants logis ne naak mein dum karke rakha hai.. in logis ka bhi kissa khatam ho jaana chahiye jald se jald...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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