Adultery Farrar-A revenge story

[Kingfisher]

point to be noted..
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Revos se waar aise karo ki writer pata bhi na chale aur khud ki hi favorite kirdaar ko galat sabit kar de...
matlab agar humare dwara likhi sushma ke liye prasansha se bhari baaton ka koi logic nahi hai writer sahab ke ke liye to unke hisab kin baaton mein logic hai


to finally Kingfisher sahab ne khud indirectly sabit kar diya hai ki sachhayi kya hai .. . aur sach ye hai Sushma sach mein kusurwaar hai, ek doshi jisne atit mein bahot saare Gul khilaye vyom ke sang .. . har kisike baare mein bura sochne wali, dil se kali us tharki sushma ab vyom se kab mulaqat ki, kab mulaqat hawas ke khel mein badla uski tharakpan ke chalte.. bas uski details flashback ke jariye jaanna baaki hai Rahul ko
chaahe koi maane ya maane lekin Kingfisher ke logic ke hisab se Sushma ek Behad hi tharki, hawasi gharane se belong karne wali, swarthi dil ke, apne pariwar se apni tharakpan ki kahani chupane wali, vyom ke yaadon mein khoyi side kirdaar hai....... aur akhiri sachhai bhi yahin hai....
lo ji Kingfisher sahab ne indirectly logic lagake khud hi sabit kar diya... baaki 11 ster fan ya Devil The Kiñg kya hi kahe

Meri Kuch lines Ka apne galat matalab Nikal liya ...mere kehne Ka ye matalb tha ki jaisa fainuuu ne Sushma or Rahul ke bare me kha uska koi logic nhi tha means ab tak Rahul or Sushma ne aisa koi harkat ya kam nhi Kiya jiske chalte unhe Etna badna Kiya Ka ske ...well aap vapas apne original rang me aa gai ye jankar thodi nirash hui ...I hope ki app apna opinion badal dogi

 

[Kingfisher]

No issue bro agar hum padhte hai to samjhate bhi hai so bura mat Mano bhai just take your time

Bura manne ki koi bat hi nhi hai dost ..apka kehna Shi bhi tha roj ke mukable vo Update chota tha ...Baki jaise time milta Jayega usi ke according Update deta rahunga

 

[11 ster fan]

point to be noted..
11 ster fan & Jaguaar
Revos se waar aise karo ki writer pata bhi na chale aur khud ki hi favorite kirdaar ko galat sabit kar de...
matlab agar humare dwara likhi sushma ke liye prasansha se bhari baaton ka koi logic nahi hai writer sahab ke ke liye to unke hisab kin baaton mein logic hai


to finally Kingfisher sahab ne khud indirectly sabit kar diya hai ki sachhayi kya hai .. . aur sach ye hai Sushma sach mein kusurwaar hai, ek doshi jisne atit mein bahot saare Gul khilaye vyom ke sang .. . har kisike baare mein bura sochne wali, dil se kali us tharki sushma ab vyom se kab mulaqat ki, kab mulaqat hawas ke khel mein badla uski tharakpan ke chalte.. bas uski details flashback ke jariye jaanna baaki hai Rahul ko
chaahe koi maane ya maane lekin Kingfisher ke logic ke hisab se Sushma ek Behad hi tharki, hawasi gharane se belong karne wali, swarthi dil ke, apne pariwar se apni tharakpan ki kahani chupane wali, vyom ke yaadon mein khoyi side kirdaar hai....... aur akhiri sachhai bhi yahin hai....
lo ji Kingfisher sahab ne indirectly logic lagake khud hi sabit kar diya... baaki 11 ster fan ya Devil The Kiñg kya hi kahe

Aadesh ka jarur palan hoga...aakhirkar ju ka wachan hi to shashan hai...

 

[11 ster fan]

Meri Kuch lines Ka apne galat matalab Nikal liya ...mere kehne Ka ye matalb tha ki jaisa fainuuu ne Sushma or Rahul ke bare me kha uska koi logic nhi tha means ab tak Rahul or Sushma ne aisa koi harkat ya kam nhi Kiya jiske chalte unhe Etna badna Kiya Ka ske ...well aap vapas apne original rang me aa gai ye jankar thodi nirash hui ...I hope ki app apna opinion badal dogi

Maine Jo bhi baate kahi hai wo sari bate story se relate hai,apne man se kuchh bhi nhi joda gaya....

 

[Kingfisher]

Maine Jo bhi baate kahi hai wo sari bate story se relate hai,apne man se kuchh bhi nhi joda gaya....

Ab Bhai sushma ke bare me Jo kha vo kha se story relate hai

 

[11 ster fan]

Ab Bhai sushma ke bare me Jo kha vo kha se story relate hai

Susama aur vyom ek dusare ko jante hai ki nhi,wo bhi kafi achchhe se ...
Vyom susama ko nhi Mara jabaki uske pati ko maar Diya hai kyo????
Susama itne salo se akeli hai ,jab uske anadar aag lagati hai to wo kaha jati hai aag bujhane ?????
Aur sabase bada saboot ye hai ki jab kisi kothewali ke bachche hote hai to uss kothe ke dalla usse marate nhi hai usse bachate hai aur yaha par vyom Rahul ko dushman hone ke babjood bacha rha hai...to iss baat se ye proove ho gaya ki susama GB ROAD ki maal thi...

 

[Kingfisher]

Update ....75






" En na ek din sabko marna hi hai , to fir darke kya fayda hai ye afsos jarur rehega ki Marne se pehle me do Jann ko Dekh nhi paunga , kash me unko baho me Marta to thoda sukun jarur milta ,, Rahul ki ankhe muskil se khul or band ho rhi thi , aisa lag rha tha ki vo jism me Jann hi nhi bchi thi ek murde ki trah deewar ke Sahar betha hua tha , Thakur chahkar bhi putr mohh ke Karan Rahul ki sanse hamesha ke liye band nhi Kar par rha tha ....................vhi mehek or vishwa apni manjil ke bahut karib pahunch gye the



ABB AGGE....



Mehek or vishwa chupte hue goudam ke piche aa gya or vha unke pass me ek khidki thi , jab vishwa ne us khadki ke pass jakar Uske Ander jhanka to us room me char panch ladke the jiski juba par Rahul Ka name as rha tha ab vishwa ko ye confirm ho gya ki Rahul ESI goudam me hai , vishwa ne bat mehek ko bhi bta Di ki Rahul yhi hai or sakushal (jhut ) hai ye sunKar mehek ne ek nai urja Ka sanchar ho gya


" Mehek tum us side se jao or me es side se jata hu or ha Josh me apne hosh mat kho dena ye bat apne jehen me rakhna ki agar tumhe Kuch ho gya to hum Rahul ko jinda nhi bcha payenge tumhe khud ki Jaan ki hifajat Karna means Rahul ki jindagi bachana , ab jao mahare pass jyada vakt nhi hai ,, mehek vishwa ko apni taraf se asvasth karva Kar dusri side Nikal gai ..
Mehek deewar ke Sahare sahare age bad rhi rhi thi ki Uske samne do admi aa gye jinhe sayad bahut jor se mutash / peshab lgi thi ...chalte chalte unki najar mehek par pdi par mehek unke dekhne se pehle hi sambhal chuki thi or apne ek hath me chaku leke unme se ek admi ki gardan ko nishana bna Kar fenk Diya , chaku sidha us admi ke gle ke aarpar ho gya dusra admi Kuch karta ya bolta usse pehle hi mehek ne gun se Uske bheje ko uda Diya ( revolver me silencer lga hua tha esliye awaj nhi nikli ) dono vhi bejan hokar jamin par gir pde , mehek jaldi se Nikal Kar ek Piller ke piche chip gaii



Vhi Vishwa ek admi ke piche karib pahunch gya vo admi hath me banduk liye yha Vha najar douda rha tha Vishwa ne piche se uska muhh daboch Kar chaku Uske gardan par chla Diya vo admi jab tak bejaan nhi ho gya tak tak Vishwa ne use nhi choda fir use Aram se leta Kar age bad gya , vo age bda hi tha ki ek gamle se takra gya jisse gamla niche gir gya , Kuch girne ki awaj sunkar do admi Us or aye tab tak Vishwa vhi deewar ke pich chip gya dono admi chalte chalte Vishwa ke bahut karib aa gye Vishwa ko lagne lag gya ki agar usne age se pehel nhi ki to Uske liye ghatak ho Sakta hai esliye Vishwa deewar ke kinare aa gya Jaise hi dono admi Uske pass aye Vishwa ne niche jhuk Kar ek admi ke par par lat mar di jisse vo muhh ke bal fir gya Vishwa ne vakt Jaya na karte hue dusre admi ke sambhle se pehle hi uska sar Puri takat se pakadkar deewar se jor se bhida Diya aisa usne tin char bar Kiya tab tak us admi ne dum Tod Diya deewar sar lagne se lal ho gaii , dusra admi uthta usse pehle hi Vishwa ne apne pair ke panje ko kas Kar apne hath me pakadte hue gutne ko us niche pde admi ki gardan me Tek Diya jisse uss admi ne muhh se khoon ki ulti Kar Di ek bar girne ke bad vo vapas nhi uth ska , Vishwa vha se Nikal gya


Mehek Piller ke piche chipi hui thi par ek admi ki najar us par pad gaii vo bdi savdhani se kadam badate hue Piller ke opposite side aa gya or thodi mehek ke Karib jakar uski gardan par chaku rakh Diya


" Hilna mat Varna gardan dhad se alag Kar dunga , koun ho tum or yha kya Kar rhi ho ,, us admi ke pet me Kuch chubta hua mehsus hua , jab usne niche Dekha to mehek ne Uske pet me revolver point Kar rkhi thi ye Dekh Uske hath se chaku gir gya or usne apne hath upper Kar liye for mehek ne revolver ko Uske sar par point Karne lgi par usse pehle hi us shaks ne mehek ke hath par lat mar di jisse mehek ke hath se gun side me gir gai , ye Dekh vo shaks muskurane lga par mehek gusse se lal ho gai or apni pith par se sword nikar Kar uski gardan par chla Di uski gardan Bali ke bakre ki trah Uske dhad se alag hokar side for gaii


" Kutta khi Ka mujh par hasta hai , has ab hasna ,, mehek gusse se us kte sar ko dekhkar bol rhi thi vo age Kuch bolti usse pehle hi 4--5 admi uski or teji se bde mehek ko bhi eska Bhan ho gya tha mehek Kuch Karti usse pehle unhone mehek par goliya barsani shuru Kar Di par mehek niche ludakti hui apni revolver ko lekar Piller ke piche chip gaii ... Ab vo sabhi mehek ke bahut karib aa gye the mehek ne bahut bariki se sabhi ki position dekhi or ek ke bad revolver ki sari goliya unke sarir ke aarparr Kar Di , sabhi ek ke bad ek jamin par gir pde


Achanak Etna kotuhal Dekh Kar sabhi admi doudakar bahar aa gye , Thakur Harish or Kamal ko bhi Kuch gadbad hone Ka abhash hua to usne Ander se Kuch admiyon ko eska pta lagane bheja , vhi Vishwa bhi chupte chipate mehek ke pass aa gya


" Himmat mat harna mehek , ye Sankhya me bhle hi bahut jyada hai par Hume bhi dimag se enka samna Karna Hoga ,, abhi ye bate Kar hi the the ki 10--15 admi inke karib aa gye , mehek ne bhi apni revolver me magazine Dal Di par Vishwa ne usse revolver lekar dono hath se dhdadhad un admiyon par chla Di sabbi chalni chalni ho gye mehek Ka Dyan bhi use taraf tha par unke piche 7--8 admi teji se aa rhe mehek ki kismat Achi thi ki unke hatho me banduk nhi thi keval chaku chura or hockey stick hi the , mehek bhi ek hath me chaku or dusre hath me sword gumate hue unki or doud pdi ..............sabse age vale admi ne chure se mehek par war Kiya par mehek niche jhuk Kar unke nachte hue agg bad gai or pure gusse se jhkte hue sword dusre admi ke pet ke aarparr Kar Di tisra shaks ne mehek ke pet me chaku marna chahta par mehek thodi kinare hi gai jisse uska Ballance bigad gya or vo niche jhuk gya mehek me time vast na karte hue gutna Uske muhh mar Diya vo Jaise hi sidha hua mehek ne chaku uski gardan par chla Diya vo admi apne dono hath se gardan ko pakadte hue niche gir gya , fir mehek ne kis admi ke pet me sword ghusai thi use nikar Kar pass ate shaks ke pet me gusa Di , ab un sabke Dil me dar Beth gya tha fir bhi vo mehek ko Marne ke liye age bde mehek bhi Puri tyar thi unka samna Karne ke liye in sabhi me mehek ko ger Kar Uske Charo or ghumne lge unme se ek me Jaise hi mehek par hamla Kiya mehek niche jhuk Kar dusre admi ke pair par sword chla Di jisse vo ghutno ke bal niche Beth gya mehek ne gumte hue Puri takat se sword Uske gardan par chla Di jisse uski gardan cucumber ki trah cut Kar alag ho gai mehek ne Der na karte hue dusre admi ke sine par ke ke bad ek chaku se ched Kar diye , unme se ek admi mehek par war Karne hi wala tha ki mehek ne sword se Uske war ko bich me hi rok Diya or dusre hath me moujud chaku uski gardan par chla Diya , piche se mehek par war hone hi wala tha ki mehek ko eska abhash ho gya esliye vo ghutno me bal Beth gai jisse us admi Ka war khali chuk gya par mehek Ka war kha chukne wala tha usne apni gardan upper karte hue us shaks ko Dekh Jo sambhalne ki koshish Kar rha tha par mehek ne Uske pet me chaku mar Diya jisse vo mehek ke uper girne hi vala tha ki mehek side me ho gai or us jagah par sword khdi Kar Di jiska parinam ye hua ki vo admi sidha us sword par ja Gira or sword Uske sine ke aarparr ho gai mehek ne use side me ludkakar sword ko Uske sine se Nikal liya Baki bche admiyon me na to mehek par bar Karne ki himmat hui na hi na bhagne ki matija ye hua ki sab mehek ki sword ko khoon ckha Kar dharashahi ho gye



Vhi Vishwa ne vapas Dino revolver me magazine Bhar Di or vhi chip gya mehek bhi Uske pass chali gai par tak tak thakar ke jitne bhi admi the sab as gya par ab vo ginti me jyada nhi the , sath hi Thakur Harish or Kamal bhi bahar aa gye or jab unki najar apne mart admiyon par pdi to unke sar par pasine ki bunde saf jhalkane lgi vhi Thakur ke sabhi admiyon ko ye Bhan ho gya ki mehek or Vishwa kha chipe hue hai vhi dono Puri trah that the Vishwa ne revolver vapas mehek ko De Di vo log in par hamla karte esse pehle hi dono sabke samne khde ho gye Vishwa ko to koi janta nhi tha par jab mehek par UN tino ki najar pdi to ankhe fade unhe dekhne lge mehek Ka Pura sharir khoon se bhiga hua tha Uske sunder chehre par Khun ki bunde tapak rhi thi , mehek ki najar Jaise hi um tino par pdi uski ankhe lal ho gai or gusse se usne un par goli chla Di par tino Ander ghus gye



Vishwa or mehek ne sabse pehle unhi ko nishana banaya jiske hath me guns thi unke gun chalne se pehle hi mehek or Vishwa me unhe bhoon Diya , mehek ki gun me goliya khatam ho gai esliye usne gun ko fenk Diya , ab khatra nhi tha to chaku or sword lekar unki or teji se doud pdi fir kya tha Jo bhi samne Aya gajar muli ki trah kata gya abhi mehek me Kuch hi logo ko tha ki mehek ke Kano me Kamal ki awaj pdi , Vishwa padte ladte mehek se dur chla gya to uska dhyan nhi gya


Mehek ki najar Jaise hi us pdi unke hath se sword or chaku chutt Kar niche gir gye or vo bejan hokar apne ghutno par Beth gai or uski ankho se anshuo ki dhara behne lgi uski najar bs ek shaks par kendrit thi Jo koi or nhi balki Rahul hi tha vo khoon se lal tha or ankhe band thi Kamal Uske gireban pakde mehek ki taraf muskurate hue Dekh rha tha sath Thakur or Harish bhi mand mand muskura the the vhi Kamal Rahul ko chod Kar mehek ke pass akar mehek ki sword utha li or sword ko mehek ki gardan par rakh Di par mehek ko to Kuch realise nhi ho rha tha vo to ektak Rahul ko Dekh rhi yhi

" Hahaha apne Bhai ke sath Marne ke liye Tu bhi aa gaii , par Kuch bhi kho mene tumhare jaisi Bahadur ladki aaj din tak nhi dekhi , par baby tumhe pta Hona Chahiye ke upervale ne tumhe ye khubsurat sharir hum jaiso ke bistar garm Karne ke liye Diya hai ki yu Jhansi ki Rani banne ke liye ,,,, abhi Kamal Kuch or bolta usse pehle hi ek goli chli Jo sidhe Uske hath par lgi jisse Uske hath se talvar chutt gai jab Kamal Harish or Thakur ne goli chalne ki Disha me Dekha to samne Vishwa khda tha , ye Dekhkar sab dar gye Vishwa ne kamal ko nishana banate hue revolver Ka trigger DBA Diya par goli nhi chli sayad usme goliya khatam ho gai thi mouka dekhte hue tino Ander bhag gye Vishwa Rahul ke pass na akar dusri side se tino ko pakadne ke liye dusre raste se Ander chla gya


Rahul ki jab thodi ankh khuli to uski najar sidhi mehek par pdi Jo nirantar ashru bahaye ja rhi uski himmat nhi ho rhi thi ki vo Rahul ke Karib Jaye ......mehek Ka chehra dikhate hi Rahul me Mano jaan aa gai or itne dard hone ke bavjud bhi chehre par muskan vo deewar Ka Sahara Lete hue khda hone ki koshish Kar rha tha par har bar nakam rha par end time Puri takat lga Kar deewar ke Sahare khda ho gya or muskute hue mehek ko dekhne lga ....abhi age Kuch or hote usse pehle hi Ander se Harish hath me chaku liye Rahul ki or bad rha tha mehek ki najar us or chli gai ,
harish Rahul ke Karib ate hi uske pet ki Orr chaku se war Kar Diya


"Aaahhhhh ....ek dardnak awaj fizao me gunj gaii or ye awaj Kisi or ki nhi mehek ki thi kyoki Jaise hi Harish Rahul ko chaku Marne hi vala tha usse pehle hi mehek samne aa gai jiska matija ye hua ki Harish Ka war sidha mehek ke pet me his or vo chaku adha mehek ke pet me ghus gya , jab eska ahesas Rahul ko hua to mano uski dhadkan abhi band ho jayegi , abhi koi bolta usse pehle hi Harish me mehek ke pet se chaku Nikal liya jisse mehek ke muhh se ek or dardnak chikh Nikal gai sath hi Uske pet se khoon ki dhara bhi behne lgi jis par mehek ne apna hath rakh Diya


" Madarchod mujhe pure gavv ke samne badnam Kiya ab me eska badla tum dono ko mar Kar Lunga ,, ye kehkar usne vapas war Kiya par es bar Rahul ne mehek ko due dhakel Diya jisse vo chaku Rahul ke pet me ja lga , ye dekhkar Harish hasne lga , par ye hasi Kuch hi Der ki thi kyoki agle hi par Rahul me uski gardan padkar use uper utha liya Harish chutne ke liye chatpatane lga , Rahul ke hath me jyada takat nhi thi esliye vo niche gir gya or khasne lga par Rahul nhi ruka usne Harish Ka hath pakadkar Puri takat se khinch liya jiska matija ye hua ki Harish Ka ek hath Uske sharir se alag go gya Harish etni jor se chilaya ki aaspass Panchi bhi ud gye , Rahul etne me hi nhi ruka or dusre hath ko bhi khinckar use bhi alag Kar Diya Harish bin Pani machli ki trah tadapne lga ......Rahul ek najar mehek ki or Dekha Jo niche pdi dard se karha rhi thi Rahul se ye Dekh nhi gya or usne apni ankhe band Kar li jab vapas khuli to Puri lal thi ....fir Rahul ne Apne pet se chaku nikar Kar Harish ki gardan ke thoda niche gonp Diya or Pura takat se use khincta hua Harish ki nabhi (navel) tak le Aya Harish Ka Pura Shari chir gya or Kuch hi seconds me uski sanse band ho gai Rahul yhi nhi ruka or pass me hi pda pathar utha Kar Uske sar par latak Diya Harish Ka sar kharbuje ki trah fatt gya tab jakar Rahul ki atma ko Santi Mili


" Rahulll ...mehek ki dardnak awaj sunkar Rahul bdi muskil se Uske pass chla gya or jakar mehek ka sar apni godd me rakh liya , mehek ki aisi halat Dekh Rahul ke Anshu rukne Ka name hi nhi le rhe the vhi mehek ka bhi yhi hal tha

" Kyo aii yha mehek kyo , Dekh kya ho gya hai tujhe , Kitna khoon Nikal rha hai or tujhe Kitna dard ho rha hai , kash ye dekhne se pehle me mar jata ,, Rahul mehek ke galo par hath ferne lga

" Tumhare liye me hajar bar aise jhakm sehene ke liye tyar hu , you know Maine maut ko bahut kareeb se dekha hai Rahul par tumhare liye marna hi meri manzil hai ,,

" Please aisi bate mat kho mehek tumhe Kuch nhi Hoga , hey bhagvan ye Tumne kya Kar Diya ...aaj mere karmo Ka fall tumhe mil rha hai , ab me kya Kru me chahkar bhi Kuch nhi Kar Sakta ...mehek tumhe Kuch nhi Hoga tum thik ho jaogi .....are koi hai hai yha jo Meri mehek ko bcha ske ,, Rahul jor se chilana Chahta rha tha par usme itni himmat nhi thi, vhi mehek ki ankhe bojhil hone lgi


" Aahhh Rahul ye pta nhi tha ki hamara sath yhi tak tha ...aahh mujhe bahut dard ho rha hai Rahul kash hum Kuch pal or sath bita pate ,, Rahul lachar rone ke Siva Kuch nhi Kar pa rha tha , dard to use bhi asehniye ho rha tha ye kehna galat nhi Hoga ki mehek se jyada Rahul ki halat kharab thi par use en sabka abhash nhi ho rha tha

" Mujhe maf karde mehek mere sanse chalte hue bhi me Kuch nhi Kar pa rha hu kabhi socha nhi tha ki ye din bhi dekhna Hoga ....ahhh mehek meri ankhe band ho rhi hai mujhe nhi pta ki hum jinda bachenge ya nhi par me tumse vada karta hu me agle janam me hum sath Saath jarur rehenge ,, ye kehte hue Rahul mehek ke sine me ludak gya ye dekh mehek bahut jyada gabra gaii vo bar bar Rahul Rahul kehne lgi par Rahul ki or se koi pratituar nhi Aya ... rote rote mehek ki bhi ankhe band ho gai ...Kuch Der bad Vishwa hatash nirash Jha Rahul or mehek the vha aa gya par jab uski najar dono par pdi to Uske hosh ud gye vo kampte hue unke pass chla gya




to be countinue ..............

 

[Jaguaar]

point to be noted..
11 ster fan & Jaguaar
Revos se waar aise karo ki writer pata bhi na chale aur khud ki hi favorite kirdaar ko galat sabit kar de...
matlab agar humare dwara likhi sushma ke liye prasansha se bhari baaton ka koi logic nahi hai writer sahab ke ke liye to unke hisab kin baaton mein logic hai


to finally Kingfisher sahab ne khud indirectly sabit kar diya hai ki sachhayi kya hai .. . aur sach ye hai Sushma sach mein kusurwaar hai, ek doshi jisne atit mein bahot saare Gul khilaye vyom ke sang .. . har kisike baare mein bura sochne wali, dil se kali us tharki sushma ab vyom se kab mulaqat ki, kab mulaqat hawas ke khel mein badla uski tharakpan ke chalte.. bas uski details flashback ke jariye jaanna baaki hai Rahul ko
chaahe koi maane ya maane lekin Kingfisher ke logic ke hisab se Sushma ek Behad hi tharki, hawasi gharane se belong karne wali, swarthi dil ke, apne pariwar se apni tharakpan ki kahani chupane wali, vyom ke yaadon mein khoyi side kirdaar hai....... aur akhiri sachhai bhi yahin hai....
lo ji Kingfisher sahab ne indirectly logic lagake khud hi sabit kar diya... baaki 11 ster fan ya Devil The Kiñg kya hi kahe

Ab kyaa hi bolee. Main toh bahot din pehle se bol raha tha Sushma aur Vyom ki raasleela hui thi last mein. Par writer sahab maan hi nhi rahe the. Phir aap bhi writer sahab ke saath mil gayi.

Ab toh khud writer ne indirectly hi boldiya Sushma ka character kitna gira hua hai. Vyom ke saath usne kitni hi raate rangeen ki hai. Aur ussi hawas ke chalte aaj usko yeh din dekhna par raha hai.

 

[Kingfisher]

Update ...75 posted dosto

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Padkar apni pratikriya jarur De khas vo log Jo keval like Karke chle jate hai ... bhaiya Update ke bare me do line likhne se apke sath Kuch thodi Hoga ..to bhaiyo apna farz nibhao jis prakar me nibha rha hu app sabka manoranjan Karke ...I hope ki aap mind nhi karoge ...
sabse khas bat subh ratri have a nice dreams all of the

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Update ....75






" En na ek din sabko marna hi hai , to fir darke kya fayda hai ye afsos jarur rehega ki Marne se pehle me do Jann ko Dekh nhi paunga , kash me unko baho me Marta to thoda sukun jarur milta ,, Rahul ki ankhe muskil se khul or band ho rhi thi , aisa lag rha tha ki vo jism me Jann hi nhi bchi thi ek murde ki trah deewar ke Sahar betha hua tha , Thakur chahkar bhi putr mohh ke Karan Rahul ki sanse hamesha ke liye band nhi Kar par rha tha ....................vhi mehek or vishwa apni manjil ke bahut karib pahunch gye the



ABB AGGE....



Mehek or vishwa chupte hue goudam ke piche aa gya or vha unke pass me ek khidki thi , jab vishwa ne us khadki ke pass jakar Uske Ander jhanka to us room me char panch ladke the jiski juba par Rahul Ka name as rha tha ab vishwa ko ye confirm ho gya ki Rahul ESI goudam me hai , vishwa ne bat mehek ko bhi bta Di ki Rahul yhi hai or sakushal (jhut ) hai ye sunKar mehek ne ek nai urja Ka sanchar ho gya


" Mehek tum us side se jao or me es side se jata hu or ha Josh me apne hosh mat kho dena ye bat apne jehen me rakhna ki agar tumhe Kuch ho gya to hum Rahul ko jinda nhi bcha payenge tumhe khud ki Jaan ki hifajat Karna means Rahul ki jindagi bachana , ab jao mahare pass jyada vakt nhi hai ,, mehek vishwa ko apni taraf se asvasth karva Kar dusri side Nikal gai ..
Mehek deewar ke Sahare sahare age bad rhi rhi thi ki Uske samne do admi aa gye jinhe sayad bahut jor se mutash / peshab lgi thi ...chalte chalte unki najar mehek par pdi par mehek unke dekhne se pehle hi sambhal chuki thi or apne ek hath me chaku leke unme se ek admi ki gardan ko nishana bna Kar fenk Diya , chaku sidha us admi ke gle ke aarpar ho gya dusra admi Kuch karta ya bolta usse pehle hi mehek ne gun se Uske bheje ko uda Diya ( revolver me silencer lga hua tha esliye awaj nhi nikli ) dono vhi bejan hokar jamin par gir pde , mehek jaldi se Nikal Kar ek Piller ke piche chip gaii



Vhi Vishwa ek admi ke piche karib pahunch gya vo admi hath me banduk liye yha Vha najar douda rha tha Vishwa ne piche se uska muhh daboch Kar chaku Uske gardan par chla Diya vo admi jab tak bejaan nhi ho gya tak tak Vishwa ne use nhi choda fir use Aram se leta Kar age bad gya , vo age bda hi tha ki ek gamle se takra gya jisse gamla niche gir gya , Kuch girne ki awaj sunkar do admi Us or aye tab tak Vishwa vhi deewar ke pich chip gya dono admi chalte chalte Vishwa ke bahut karib aa gye Vishwa ko lagne lag gya ki agar usne age se pehel nhi ki to Uske liye ghatak ho Sakta hai esliye Vishwa deewar ke kinare aa gya Jaise hi dono admi Uske pass aye Vishwa ne niche jhuk Kar ek admi ke par par lat mar di jisse vo muhh ke bal fir gya Vishwa ne vakt Jaya na karte hue dusre admi ke sambhle se pehle hi uska sar Puri takat se pakadkar deewar se jor se bhida Diya aisa usne tin char bar Kiya tab tak us admi ne dum Tod Diya deewar sar lagne se lal ho gaii , dusra admi uthta usse pehle hi Vishwa ne apne pair ke panje ko kas Kar apne hath me pakadte hue gutne ko us niche pde admi ki gardan me Tek Diya jisse uss admi ne muhh se khoon ki ulti Kar Di ek bar girne ke bad vo vapas nhi uth ska , Vishwa vha se Nikal gya


Mehek Piller ke piche chipi hui thi par ek admi ki najar us par pad gaii vo bdi savdhani se kadam badate hue Piller ke opposite side aa gya or thodi mehek ke Karib jakar uski gardan par chaku rakh Diya


" Hilna mat Varna gardan dhad se alag Kar dunga , koun ho tum or yha kya Kar rhi ho ,, us admi ke pet me Kuch chubta hua mehsus hua , jab usne niche Dekha to mehek ne Uske pet me revolver point Kar rkhi thi ye Dekh Uske hath se chaku gir gya or usne apne hath upper Kar liye for mehek ne revolver ko Uske sar par point Karne lgi par usse pehle hi us shaks ne mehek ke hath par lat mar di jisse mehek ke hath se gun side me gir gai , ye Dekh vo shaks muskurane lga par mehek gusse se lal ho gai or apni pith par se sword nikar Kar uski gardan par chla Di uski gardan Bali ke bakre ki trah Uske dhad se alag hokar side for gaii


" Kutta khi Ka mujh par hasta hai , has ab hasna ,, mehek gusse se us kte sar ko dekhkar bol rhi thi vo age Kuch bolti usse pehle hi 4--5 admi uski or teji se bde mehek ko bhi eska Bhan ho gya tha mehek Kuch Karti usse pehle unhone mehek par goliya barsani shuru Kar Di par mehek niche ludakti hui apni revolver ko lekar Piller ke piche chip gaii ... Ab vo sabhi mehek ke bahut karib aa gye the mehek ne bahut bariki se sabhi ki position dekhi or ek ke bad revolver ki sari goliya unke sarir ke aarparr Kar Di , sabhi ek ke bad ek jamin par gir pde


Achanak Etna kotuhal Dekh Kar sabhi admi doudakar bahar aa gye , Thakur Harish or Kamal ko bhi Kuch gadbad hone Ka abhash hua to usne Ander se Kuch admiyon ko eska pta lagane bheja , vhi Vishwa bhi chupte chipate mehek ke pass aa gya


" Himmat mat harna mehek , ye Sankhya me bhle hi bahut jyada hai par Hume bhi dimag se enka samna Karna Hoga ,, abhi ye bate Kar hi the the ki 10--15 admi inke karib aa gye , mehek ne bhi apni revolver me magazine Dal Di par Vishwa ne usse revolver lekar dono hath se dhdadhad un admiyon par chla Di sabbi chalni chalni ho gye mehek Ka Dyan bhi use taraf tha par unke piche 7--8 admi teji se aa rhe mehek ki kismat Achi thi ki unke hatho me banduk nhi thi keval chaku chura or hockey stick hi the , mehek bhi ek hath me chaku or dusre hath me sword gumate hue unki or doud pdi ..............sabse age vale admi ne chure se mehek par war Kiya par mehek niche jhuk Kar unke nachte hue agg bad gai or pure gusse se jhkte hue sword dusre admi ke pet ke aarparr Kar Di tisra shaks ne mehek ke pet me chaku marna chahta par mehek thodi kinare hi gai jisse uska Ballance bigad gya or vo niche jhuk gya mehek me time vast na karte hue gutna Uske muhh mar Diya vo Jaise hi sidha hua mehek ne chaku uski gardan par chla Diya vo admi apne dono hath se gardan ko pakadte hue niche gir gya , fir mehek ne kis admi ke pet me sword ghusai thi use nikar Kar pass ate shaks ke pet me gusa Di , ab un sabke Dil me dar Beth gya tha fir bhi vo mehek ko Marne ke liye age bde mehek bhi Puri tyar thi unka samna Karne ke liye in sabhi me mehek ko ger Kar Uske Charo or ghumne lge unme se ek me Jaise hi mehek par hamla Kiya mehek niche jhuk Kar dusre admi ke pair par sword chla Di jisse vo ghutno ke bal niche Beth gya mehek ne gumte hue Puri takat se sword Uske gardan par chla Di jisse uski gardan cucumber ki trah cut Kar alag ho gai mehek ne Der na karte hue dusre admi ke sine par ke ke bad ek chaku se ched Kar diye , unme se ek admi mehek par war Karne hi wala tha ki mehek ne sword se Uske war ko bich me hi rok Diya or dusre hath me moujud chaku uski gardan par chla Diya , piche se mehek par war hone hi wala tha ki mehek ko eska abhash ho gya esliye vo ghutno me bal Beth gai jisse us admi Ka war khali chuk gya par mehek Ka war kha chukne wala tha usne apni gardan upper karte hue us shaks ko Dekh Jo sambhalne ki koshish Kar rha tha par mehek ne Uske pet me chaku mar Diya jisse vo mehek ke uper girne hi vala tha ki mehek side me ho gai or us jagah par sword khdi Kar Di jiska parinam ye hua ki vo admi sidha us sword par ja Gira or sword Uske sine ke aarparr ho gai mehek ne use side me ludkakar sword ko Uske sine se Nikal liya Baki bche admiyon me na to mehek par bar Karne ki himmat hui na hi na bhagne ki matija ye hua ki sab mehek ki sword ko khoon ckha Kar dharashahi ho gye



Vhi Vishwa ne vapas Dino revolver me magazine Bhar Di or vhi chip gya mehek bhi Uske pass chali gai par tak tak thakar ke jitne bhi admi the sab as gya par ab vo ginti me jyada nhi the , sath hi Thakur Harish or Kamal bhi bahar aa gye or jab unki najar apne mart admiyon par pdi to unke sar par pasine ki bunde saf jhalkane lgi vhi Thakur ke sabhi admiyon ko ye Bhan ho gya ki mehek or Vishwa kha chipe hue hai vhi dono Puri trah that the Vishwa ne revolver vapas mehek ko De Di vo log in par hamla karte esse pehle hi dono sabke samne khde ho gye Vishwa ko to koi janta nhi tha par jab mehek par UN tino ki najar pdi to ankhe fade unhe dekhne lge mehek Ka Pura sharir khoon se bhiga hua tha Uske sunder chehre par Khun ki bunde tapak rhi thi , mehek ki najar Jaise hi um tino par pdi uski ankhe lal ho gai or gusse se usne un par goli chla Di par tino Ander ghus gye



Vishwa or mehek ne sabse pehle unhi ko nishana banaya jiske hath me guns thi unke gun chalne se pehle hi mehek or Vishwa me unhe bhoon Diya , mehek ki gun me goliya khatam ho gai esliye usne gun ko fenk Diya , ab khatra nhi tha to chaku or sword lekar unki or teji se doud pdi fir kya tha Jo bhi samne Aya gajar muli ki trah kata gya abhi mehek me Kuch hi logo ko tha ki mehek ke Kano me Kamal ki awaj pdi , Vishwa padte ladte mehek se dur chla gya to uska dhyan nhi gya


Mehek ki najar Jaise hi us pdi unke hath se sword or chaku chutt Kar niche gir gye or vo bejan hokar apne ghutno par Beth gai or uski ankho se anshuo ki dhara behne lgi uski najar bs ek shaks par kendrit thi Jo koi or nhi balki Rahul hi tha vo khoon se lal tha or ankhe band thi Kamal Uske gireban pakde mehek ki taraf muskurate hue Dekh rha tha sath Thakur or Harish bhi mand mand muskura the the vhi Kamal Rahul ko chod Kar mehek ke pass akar mehek ki sword utha li or sword ko mehek ki gardan par rakh Di par mehek ko to Kuch realise nhi ho rha tha vo to ektak Rahul ko Dekh rhi yhi

" Hahaha apne Bhai ke sath Marne ke liye Tu bhi aa gaii , par Kuch bhi kho mene tumhare jaisi Bahadur ladki aaj din tak nhi dekhi , par baby tumhe pta Hona Chahiye ke upervale ne tumhe ye khubsurat sharir hum jaiso ke bistar garm Karne ke liye Diya hai ki yu Jhansi ki Rani banne ke liye ,,,, abhi Kamal Kuch or bolta usse pehle hi ek goli chli Jo sidhe Uske hath par lgi jisse Uske hath se talvar chutt gai jab Kamal Harish or Thakur ne goli chalne ki Disha me Dekha to samne Vishwa khda tha , ye Dekhkar sab far gye Vishwa ne Vishwa ko hi nishana banate hue revolver Ka trigger DBA Diya par goli nhi chli sayad usme goliya khatam ho gai thi mouka dekhte hue tino Ander bhag gye Vishwa Rahul ke pass na akar dusri side se tino ko pakadne ke liye dusre raste se Ander chla gya


Rahul ki jab thodi ankh khuli to uski najar sidhi mehek par pdi Jo nirantar ashru bahaye ja rhi uski himmat nhi ho rhi thi ki vo Rahul ke Karib Jaye ......mehek Ka chehra dikhate hi Rahul me Mano jaan aa gai or itne dard hone ke bavjud bhi chehre par muskan vo deewar Ka Sahara Lete hue khda hone ki koshish Kar rha tha par har bar nakam rha par end time Puri takat lga Kar deewar ke Sahare khda ho gya or muskute hue mehek ko dekhne lga ....abhi age Kuch or hote usse pehle hi Ander se Harish hath me chaku liye Rahul ki or bad rha tha mehek ki najar us or chli gai ,
harish Rahul ke Karib ate hi uske pet ki Orr chaku se war Kar Diya


"Aaahhhhh ....ek dardnak awaj fizao me gunj gaii or ye awaj Kisi or ki nhi mehek ki thi kyoki Jaise hi Harish Rahul ko chaku Marne hi vala tha usse pehle hi mehek samne aa gai jiska matija ye hua ki Harish Ka war sidha mehek ke pet me his or vo chaku adha mehek ke pet me ghus gya , jab eska ahesas Rahul ko hua to mano uski dhadkan abhi band ho jayegi , abhi koi bolta usse pehle hi Harish me mehek ke pet se chaku Nikal liya jisse mehek ke muhh se ek or dardnak chikh Nikal gai sath hi Uske pet se khoon ki dhara bhi behne lgi jis par mehek ne apna hath rakh Diya


" Madarchod mujhe pure gavv ke samne badnam Kiya ab me eska badla tum dono ko mar Kar Lunga ,, ye kehkar usne vapas war Kiya par es bar Rahul ne mehek ko due dhakel Diya jisse vo chaku Rahul ke pet me ja lga , ye dekhkar Harish hasne lga , par ye hasi Kuch hi Der ki thi kyoki agle hi par Rahul me uski gardan padkar use uper utha liya Harish chutne ke liye chatpatane lga , Rahul ke hath me jyada takat nhi thi esliye vo niche gir gya or khasne lga par Rahul nhi ruka usne Harish Ka hath pakadkar Puri takat se khinch liya jiska matija ye hua ki Harish Ka ek hath Uske sharir se alag go gya Harish etni jor se chilaya ki aaspass Panchi bhi ud gye , Rahul etne me hi nhi ruka or dusre hath ko bhi khinckar use bhi alag Kar Diya Harish bin Pani machli ki trah tadapne lga ......Rahul ek najar mehek ki or Dekha Jo niche pdi dard se karha rhi thi Rahul se ye Dekh nhi gya or usne apni ankhe band Kar li jab vapas khuli to Puri lal thi ....fir Rahul ne Apne pet se chaku nikar Kar Harish ki gardan ke thoda niche gonp Diya or Pura takat se use khincta hua Harish ki nabhi (navel) tak le Aya Harish Ka Pura Shari chir gya or Kuch hi seconds me uski sanse band ho gai Rahul yhi nhi ruka or pass me hi pda pathar utha Kar Uske sar par latak Diya Harish Ka sar kharbuje ki trah fatt gya tab jakar Rahul ki atma ko Santi Mili


" Rahulll ...mehek ki dardnak awaj sunkar Rahul bdi muskil se Uske pass chla gya or jakar mehek ka sar apni godd me rakh liya , mehek ki aisi halat Dekh Rahul ke Anshu rukne Ka name hi nhi le rhe the vhi mehek ka bhi yhi hal tha

" Kyo aii yha mehek kyo , Dekh kya ho gya hai tujhe , Kitna khoon Nikal rha hai or tujhe Kitna dard ho rha hai , kash ye dekhne se pehle me mar jata ,, Rahul mehek ke galo par hath ferne lga

" Tumhare liye me hajar bar aise jhakm sehene ke liye tyar hu , you know Maine maut ko bahut kareeb se dekha hai Rahul par tumhare liye marna hi meri manzil hai ,,

" Please aisi bate mat kho mehek tumhe Kuch nhi Hoga , hey bhagvan ye Tumne kya Kar Diya ...aaj mere karmo Ka fall tumhe mil rha hai , ab me kya Kru me chahkar bhi Kuch nhi Kar Sakta ...mehek tumhe Kuch nhi Hoga tum thik ho jaogi .....are koi hai hai yha jo Meri mehek ko bcha ske ,, Rahul jor se chilana Chahta rha tha par usme itni himmat nhi thi, vhi mehek ki ankhe bojhil hone lgi


" Aahhh Rahul ye pta nhi tha ki hamara sath yhi tak tha ...aahh mujhe bahut dard ho rha hai Rahul kash hum Kuch pal or sath bita pate ,, Rahul lachar rone ke Siva Kuch nhi Kar pa rha tha , dard to use bhi asehniye ho rha tha ye kehna galat nhi Hoga ki mehek se jyada Rahul ki halat kharab thi par use en sabka abhash nhi ho rha tha

" Mujhe maf karde mehek mere sanse chalte hue bhi me Kuch nhi Kar pa rha hu kabhi socha nhi tha ki ye din bhi dekhna Hoga ....ahhh mehek meri ankhe band ho rhi hai mujhe nhi pta ki hum jinda bachenge ya nhi par me tumse vada karta hu me agle janam me hum sath Saath jarur rehenge ,, ye kehte hue Rahul mehek ke sine me ludak gya ye dekh mehek bahut jyada gabra gaii vo bar bar Rahul Rahul kehne lgi par Rahul ki or se koi pratituar nhi Aya ... rote rote mehek ki bhi ankhe band ho gai ...Kuch Der bad Vishwa hatash nirash Jha Rahul or mehek the vha aa gya par jab uski najar dono par pdi to Uske hosh ud gye vo kampte hue unke pass chla gya




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