Fantasy The great warrior

[(( DEVIL KING ))]

Read nand enjoy friend next update 11.30 pe ayega .
Sath bnaye rkhe friends

Abhi tak nhi aaya update

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

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[ashish_1982_in]

Update .......... 9

Location........Forest of Alaska

Senapati ......... Hme Isla phuchne me avi 10 days lagege ager koi asan rasta ho to hm jldi Isla phuch skte hi

1st ....... Sanik..... Senapati ji yha se age bech jungle se ek rasta jata hi wha se hm Isla country keval 4 days me phuch skte hi .

2 Sanik .... Tum chup rho tumhe kuch nhi pta hota hi to kyo bolte ho malik us raste se jo vi gya hi wo kbhi wapas nhi ata hi

Meri bat mane to appko wha nhai jana chahiye

2 Senik ki bat sun kr Senapati bhut gussa ho gya aur usne kha tum kya khna chahte ho
Ki hm ko bcche hi Jo kho jayenge
hm ab usi raste jayenge aur dekhte hi
hm kese nhi phuch skte
Isla kon hme rokta hi

2 Senik ...... Nhi Malik mere khne ka ye mtlab nhai hi app ke pass to bhut shaktiyan
hi lakin Malik is jungle ke raste se mhan Saint Vera gye the wo vi waps nhi aye

isiliye mene app ko mana kia tha jane ko lekin ager app jana hi chte hi to chle
( Mn me pagal senapati ise marne ka bhut shok hi to mare mughe kya chutiya khin ka )

jb senapati ne suna ye wo khaternak forest of Alaska hi jha Mahan bera jese yodha vi phas gye to wo bhut dar gya

Senapati ...... Bhut ache Senik 2 tum budhiman ho meri trah hm tumse bhut kush hi aur tum 1 st Senik avi thumhari wajah se hmari Jan chli jati wo to Senik 2 ki wajah se hm bcch gye tumhe Rajya wapas jaker
hm tumhe uchit saja denge

Itna bolker senapati apne seniko ke sath chl dia

( Age hm dekhenge ki Isla ke janglo me esa kya hi ki koi wha se wapas nhi a pata hi)

Back to hero.........

jb Sam ko me so ke utha to socha khona ajj thoda ghum liya jaye me tyar hoke apne kmrw se nikla our school park puhch gya ek bechara ladka mughse ake tkra gya jb us ladke ne !ughe dekha to mere pero me beth gya aur
khne lga ki kripya mughe karna se bcha le

Me..... Kya hua yu bhag ku rhe ho

ladka..... Wo karna aur uske sathi mughe bhut tang ker rhe the to mene uske ek sathi ko ek chata mar dia to wo log mughe
marne ke liye a rhe hi kripya app mughe bca lijiye warna wo log mughe bhut marenge

please .

Tvi karna mere ass ata hi aur mughse khta hi ki

karna...... Raj uc ladke ko mughe dedonwarna acha nhi hoga

Me....... Kyo ye koi saman hi jo me ese tumhe de du es se phle me tumhe kuch kr di tum tha se bhag jao

karna ........ Bhut pachtaoge tum Raj mughse Dushmani kerke

Me....... Shi kha tumne me bhut phachtunga kyo ki mughe tum jesa kutta khin dhudne pr vinnhi milega

meri bat sun ke karna nhut gussa ho gya

karna ....... Raj me tumhe chodunga nhi dekh lunga me tumhe

ME..... Mere pass itna time nhi hi tum meri tasvir le lo aur itminan se dekhte rhna thik hi ab tum ja skte ho

karna gusse me chla gya

uske jane ke bad

ladka ........ Dhanyawad Raj mughe bxhane ke liye mera nam Rohit hi kya hm dost bn sakte hi

Me...... Nhi aur ha me dost nhi bnata aur tum ja skte ho

jitne log ground me the sb mughe dekh rhe the

WO ladka ke chle jane ke bad me thodi der ground me rha aur uske bad mene socha kyo na toda library me chl kr khuch magic ki book jinke liya jaye

uske bad me library ki aur chl dia wha bhot si book thi mughe ek book dikhi clone book ( ye book badi class ke log padhte the isse hm apna clone bna sakte hi mene us book le
liya aur jane laga tvi meri najar ek book pr gyi jispe likha tha jin ko kabu karna

Mene kuch soch kr wo wali book vi le li aur apne room ki trafh chl dia




Room me phuch kr me book apne bag me rkhi aur khana khake so gya

very nice update bhai

 

[Naina]

Update no. 7.2 ...............


Location........ School

apne kmre me ane ke bad me sochne lga ki ho na ho karna jrur apne pita se
es bare me jarur btye ga

Mughe Pahle se hi iske liye taiyar rahana hoga mere dimag mein ek upay ata hi
ME apne man me ( Ab dekhta hu me karna ko ki wo mera kya karta hi
sayad use pta nhi ki me Raj hu )

Location ........head master office

Head master soch rhe the ki Ho Na Ho Karna jarur Apne Pita se bataya hoga aur wo Raj ko Marne ke liye kuchh Na kuchh jarur kar rahe honge mujhe Raja ke pass Jana hoga aur unhen apni taraf Milana hoga taki Me Raj ki Suraksha kar sakun Raj hamare Rajya ke liye bahut mahatvpurn hai uske pass 2 -----2 world kenpowerful element hai mujhe kuchh na kuch karna hoga han main Raja ke pass jaunga aur unhen aur Raj ki Suraksha karne ke liye ye apni taraf milunga isase Raja Ko bhi fayda hoga
Aur Raj ki Suraksha ci ho
jiegi.

location....... Maharaja Aditya ka mahal


karna ke pita king Aditya apne bete ki bat sun kr bhut gussa ho
gye unhone apne ek sanik ko bulaya
aur kha ki jao aur senapati ko
kho ki turant rajdarbar
me hajir ho

jb senapati Darbar me aya to usne phle jukh kr Raja ka abiwadn kiya

Senapati .... Maharaj ki Jai Ho Maharaj apne hme Bulaya koi khas kam

Aditya ...... Senapati hmare bete Rajkumar karna ko school me kisi ne apmanit kia hi app turant kuch saniko ko le jae aur us ladke ko khatam kr do

Senapati.... Jesa app khe Maharaj hm ajj hi Isla ke liye niklte hi

Aditya..... Thik hi

Uske bad Senapati apne kuch seniko ko laker Isla Rajya ke traf chl dia

Location.... Isla Raj mhal

Intro....

king of Isla ................. Maharaja Vikram

Wife of Maharaja Vikram .................
Maharani Swati

Daughter of Maharaja Vikram .............. Rajkumari Aarti

Maha Raja Vikram aur Maharani bethe kuch bate kr rhe
the ki ek sewak aya

Sanik ...... Gushtakhi ki mafhi hujur Great magician school ke head master apse milna chte hi

Maharaj Vikram ...... Unhe ader purwk leker ayo

Sanik ..... Jo agya maharaj

kuch der bad head master mharaj ke pass aye

H M..... Prnam maharaj prnam maharani ji

Vikram ...... Ayie H M ji bethiye

H M ...... Dhnya bad maharaj

Vikram...... Bataye kese ana hua


H M ......... Maharaj hmere school me ek ladke ne Maharaj Aditya ke bete
Rajkumar karna ko bhut
mara hi aur Raja Aditya ne apne senapati ko is ladke ko khatam karne ke
Liye bheja hi hm chate hi app hmari
Us ladke ki surcha karne
me madad kriye

Vikarm ....... Hme jha tk pta hi karna bhut hard training kiye hi
to kese us ladke ne karna ko hara dia
aur kon hi wo ladka

Maharani Swati....... Ha H. M ji Maharaj
shi kh rhe hi

H M .... Maharaj us ladke ka nam Raj hi


H. M .... Maharaj Raj ke pass duniya ke do sbse khaternak element hi Lightning aur Thunder element wo hmare Rajya ke liye bhut hi important hi ager Raj hmare Rajya me rha aur humne Rajkumari Aarti ki sadi
ager Raj se kerde to hm world ke sabse powerful country me ane lge ge

1) is update mein ye baat saaf Dikh rahi hai.... ki Raj aur Aditya & karna ke swabhav mein koi antar nahi..
jaha Aditya aur karna apne shaktishali hone ka gurur hai, wohi dusri taraf Raj apni powers ko lekar din ba din ahankari hota jaa raha hai...
Raj kar sakta ye viswash hai,
sirf Raj hi kar sakta hai ye ahankar hai.. Raj viswash ko chhod ahankar ke raah par chal para hai...
Raj ke hisap se sirf wohi sab kuch hai,
in baaton gaur kare to us hisap se Raj is kahani ka Nayak kehlane ki layak hi nahi... uski soch ek Nayak ki nahi balki ek ghamandi insaan tarah hai..
2) head Master... iske bhi apne hi chochle.....
Raj ko bachao abhijan hai ya phir koi shauda kar raha hai wo... Ki Raj ko bacha lo, badle mein Raj Vikram ka damad banke ilsa ko shaktishali kar dega..
is update ye banda head Master kam aur marriage broker zyada lag raha hai.. LOL..
Khair.... Mujhe kya.. tulshi is sanshar mein bhaanti bhaanti ke log I mean to say bhaanti bhaanti ke story characters...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

1) is update mein ye baat saaf Dikh rahi hai.... ki Raj aur Aditya & karna ke swabhav mein koi antar nahi..
jaha Aditya aur karna apne shaktishali hone ka gurur hai, wohi dusri taraf Raj apni powers ko lekar din ba din ahankari hota jaa raha hai...
Raj kar sakta ye viswash hai,
sirf Raj hi kar sakta hai ye ahankar hai.. Raj viswash ko chhod ahankar ke raah par chal para hai...
Raj ke hisap se sirf wohi sab kuch hai,
in baaton gaur kare to us hisap se Raj is kahani ka Nayak kehlane ki layak hi nahi... uski soch ek Nayak ki nahi balki ek ghamandi insaan tarah hai..
2) head Master... iske bhi apne hi chochle.....
Raj ko bachao abhijan hai ya phir koi shauda kar raha hai wo... Ki Raj ko bacha lo, badle mein Raj Vikram ka damad banke ilsa ko shaktishali kar dega..
is update ye banda head Master kam aur marriage broker zyada lag raha hai.. LOL..
Khair.... Mujhe kya.. tulshi is sanshar mein bhaanti bhaanti ke log I mean to say bhaanti bhaanti ke story characters...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Thank you

 

[Naina]

Update .......... 9

Location........Forest of Alaska

Senapati ......... Hme Isla phuchne me avi 10 days lagege ager koi asan rasta ho to hm jldi Isla phuch skte hi

1st ....... Sanik..... Senapati ji yha se age bech jungle se ek rasta jata hi wha se hm Isla country keval 4 days me phuch skte hi .

2 Sanik .... Tum chup rho tumhe kuch nhi pta hota hi to kyo bolte ho malik us raste se jo vi gya hi wo kbhi wapas nhi ata hi

Meri bat mane to appko wha nhai jana chahiye

2 Senik ki bat sun kr Senapati bhut gussa ho gya aur usne kha tum kya khna chahte ho
Ki hm ko bcche hi Jo kho jayenge
hm ab usi raste jayenge aur dekhte hi
hm kese nhi phuch skte
Isla kon hme rokta hi

2 Senik ...... Nhi Malik mere khne ka ye mtlab nhai hi app ke pass to bhut shaktiyan
hi lakin Malik is jungle ke raste se mhan Saint Vera gye the wo vi waps nhi aye

isiliye mene app ko mana kia tha jane ko lekin ager app jana hi chte hi to chle
( Mn me pagal senapati ise marne ka bhut shok hi to mare mughe kya chutiya khin ka )

jb senapati ne suna ye wo khaternak forest of Alaska hi jha Mahan bera jese yodha vi phas gye to wo bhut dar gya

Senapati ...... Bhut ache Senik 2 tum budhiman ho meri trah hm tumse bhut kush hi aur tum 1 st Senik avi thumhari wajah se hmari Jan chli jati wo to Senik 2 ki wajah se hm bcch gye tumhe Rajya wapas jaker
hm tumhe uchit saja denge

Itna bolker senapati apne seniko ke sath chl dia

( Age hm dekhenge ki Isla ke janglo me esa kya hi ki koi wha se wapas nhi a pata hi)

Back to hero.........

jb Sam ko me so ke utha to socha khona ajj thoda ghum liya jaye me tyar hoke apne kmrw se nikla our school park puhch gya ek bechara ladka mughse ake tkra gya jb us ladke ne !ughe dekha to mere pero me beth gya aur
khne lga ki kripya mughe karna se bcha le

Me..... Kya hua yu bhag ku rhe ho

ladka..... Wo karna aur uske sathi mughe bhut tang ker rhe the to mene uske ek sathi ko ek chata mar dia to wo log mughe
marne ke liye a rhe hi kripya app mughe bca lijiye warna wo log mughe bhut marenge

please .

Tvi karna mere ass ata hi aur mughse khta hi ki

karna...... Raj uc ladke ko mughe dedonwarna acha nhi hoga

Me....... Kyo ye koi saman hi jo me ese tumhe de du es se phle me tumhe kuch kr di tum tha se bhag jao

karna ........ Bhut pachtaoge tum Raj mughse Dushmani kerke

Me....... Shi kha tumne me bhut phachtunga kyo ki mughe tum jesa kutta khin dhudne pr vinnhi milega

meri bat sun ke karna nhut gussa ho gya

karna ....... Raj me tumhe chodunga nhi dekh lunga me tumhe

ME..... Mere pass itna time nhi hi tum meri tasvir le lo aur itminan se dekhte rhna thik hi ab tum ja skte ho

karna gusse me chla gya

uske jane ke bad

ladka ........ Dhanyawad Raj mughe bxhane ke liye mera nam Rohit hi kya hm dost bn sakte hi

Me...... Nhi aur ha me dost nhi bnata aur tum ja skte ho

jitne log ground me the sb mughe dekh rhe the

WO ladka ke chle jane ke bad me thodi der ground me rha aur uske bad mene socha kyo na toda library me chl kr khuch magic ki book jinke liya jaye

uske bad me library ki aur chl dia wha bhot si book thi mughe ek book dikhi clone book ( ye book badi class ke log padhte the isse hm apna clone bna sakte hi mene us book le
liya aur jane laga tvi meri najar ek book pr gyi jispe likha tha jin ko kabu karna

Mene kuch soch kr wo wali book vi le li aur apne room ki trafh chl dia




Room me phuch kr me book apne bag me rkhi aur khana khake so gya

Kisi agyani ki baat sun bina soche samjhe liye gaye faisle aur chune gaye galat raah ka natiza bahot gatak sabit ho sakta hai.. jaise us sainik ki baat sun senapati jungle ke us maarg pe jaane wala tha jaha log gayab ho jaate the... wo to sukar hai ki us jungle ke bare mein jaankari rakhne wala ek sainik majud tha waha.. warna aaj senapati ke sath sath baaki ke sainik bhi lapata ho jaate us raah pe...
Raj Singh Thakur sahab ne bahot achha sandesh diya hai is update jariye ki kabhi kisi agyaani ke baaton mein aake koi kaam karenge to natiza kaafi khaufnaak bhi ho sakta hai... isliye koi bhi naya kaam karne ya raah chun ne se pehle kisi experienced holder se vichar vimarsh kar leni chahiye...
wohi dusri taraf Raj... jaise ki maine pehle bhi jikar kar rahi thi ye baat ki Raj had zyada abhimaani aur ghamandi hota jaa raha hai, Raj ne khud hi is baat ko ab shat pratishat sach sabit kar diya..
rohit ko bachaya karna ke hatho se lekin uske baad jis tarike se baat ki rohit se..
I think.... free mein itne saari powers mil jaane ke chalte Raj ke tevar hi badal gaye hai... aur Nayak ki soch aur tevar ke ulat zyada khalnayak ki soch aur tevar aa gaye hai Raj mein..

Khair....
shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan,
Dilchasp har ek mod aur pehlu.. sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab

 

[Naina]

( Mn me pagal senapati ise marne ka bhut shok hi to mare mughe kya chutiya khin ka )

 

[(( DEVIL KING ))]

Update no. 7.2 ...............


Location........ School

apne kmre me ane ke bad me sochne lga ki ho na ho karna jrur apne pita se
es bare me jarur btye ga

Mughe Pahle se hi iske liye taiyar rahana hoga mere dimag mein ek upay ata hi
ME apne man me ( Ab dekhta hu me karna ko ki wo mera kya karta hi
sayad use pta nhi ki me Raj hu )

Location ........head master office

Head master soch rhe the ki Ho Na Ho Karna jarur Apne Pita se bataya hoga aur wo Raj ko Marne ke liye kuchh Na kuchh jarur kar rahe honge mujhe Raja ke pass Jana hoga aur unhen apni taraf Milana hoga taki Me Raj ki Suraksha kar sakun Raj hamare Rajya ke liye bahut mahatvpurn hai uske pass 2 -----2 world kenpowerful element hai mujhe kuchh na kuch karna hoga han main Raja ke pass jaunga aur unhen aur Raj ki Suraksha karne ke liye ye apni taraf milunga isase Raja Ko bhi fayda hoga
Aur Raj ki Suraksha ci ho
jiegi.

location....... Maharaja Aditya ka mahal


karna ke pita king Aditya apne bete ki bat sun kr bhut gussa ho
gye unhone apne ek sanik ko bulaya
aur kha ki jao aur senapati ko
kho ki turant rajdarbar
me hajir ho

jb senapati Darbar me aya to usne phle jukh kr Raja ka abiwadn kiya

Senapati .... Maharaj ki Jai Ho Maharaj apne hme Bulaya koi khas kam

Aditya ...... Senapati hmare bete Rajkumar karna ko school me kisi ne apmanit kia hi app turant kuch saniko ko le jae aur us ladke ko khatam kr do

Senapati.... Jesa app khe Maharaj hm ajj hi Isla ke liye niklte hi

Aditya..... Thik hi

Uske bad Senapati apne kuch seniko ko laker Isla Rajya ke traf chl dia

Location.... Isla Raj mhal

Intro....

king of Isla ................. Maharaja Vikram

Wife of Maharaja Vikram .................
Maharani Swati

Daughter of Maharaja Vikram .............. Rajkumari Aarti

Maha Raja Vikram aur Maharani bethe kuch bate kr rhe
the ki ek sewak aya

Sanik ...... Gushtakhi ki mafhi hujur Great magician school ke head master apse milna chte hi

Maharaj Vikram ...... Unhe ader purwk leker ayo

Sanik ..... Jo agya maharaj

kuch der bad head master mharaj ke pass aye

H M..... Prnam maharaj prnam maharani ji

Vikram ...... Ayie H M ji bethiye

H M ...... Dhnya bad maharaj

Vikram...... Bataye kese ana hua


H M ......... Maharaj hmere school me ek ladke ne Maharaj Aditya ke bete
Rajkumar karna ko bhut
mara hi aur Raja Aditya ne apne senapati ko is ladke ko khatam karne ke
Liye bheja hi hm chate hi app hmari
Us ladke ki surcha karne
me madad kriye

Vikarm ....... Hme jha tk pta hi karna bhut hard training kiye hi
to kese us ladke ne karna ko hara dia
aur kon hi wo ladka

Maharani Swati....... Ha H. M ji Maharaj
shi kh rhe hi

H M .... Maharaj us ladke ka nam Raj hi


H. M .... Maharaj Raj ke pass duniya ke do sbse khaternak element hi Lightning aur Thunder element wo hmare Rajya ke liye bhut hi important hi ager Raj hmare Rajya me rha aur humne Rajkumari Aarti ki sadi
ager Raj se kerde to hm world ke sabse powerful country me ane lge ge

Raj kisi se dhng se baat bhi nhi krta
Or H.M. uska rista krwane gya hai Rajmahal.
Lgta hai use apni bezzati krwane ka bhot shok hai . H.M ne Raj se is bare me koi baat hi nhi ki. bs chal dia muh uthakr

 

[(( DEVIL KING ))]

1) is update mein ye baat saaf Dikh rahi hai.... ki Raj aur Aditya & karna ke swabhav mein koi antar nahi..
jaha Aditya aur karna apne shaktishali hone ka gurur hai, wohi dusri taraf Raj apni powers ko lekar din ba din ahankari hota jaa raha hai...
Raj kar sakta ye viswash hai,
sirf Raj hi kar sakta hai ye ahankar hai.. Raj viswash ko chhod ahankar ke raah par chal para hai...
Raj ke hisap se sirf wohi sab kuch hai,
in baaton gaur kare to us hisap se Raj is kahani ka Nayak kehlane ki layak hi nahi... uski soch ek Nayak ki nahi balki ek ghamandi insaan tarah hai..
2) head Master... iske bhi apne hi chochle.....
Raj ko bachao abhijan hai ya phir koi shauda kar raha hai wo... Ki Raj ko bacha lo, badle mein Raj Vikram ka damad banke ilsa ko shaktishali kar dega..
is update ye banda head Master kam aur marriage broker zyada lag raha hai.. LOL..
Khair.... Mujhe kya.. tulshi is sanshar mein bhaanti bhaanti ke log I mean to say bhaanti bhaanti ke story characters...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Raj ,Karna or Aditya k sawbhav me antar to hai . Tino k paas power hain . Karna Raja ka beta hai isly us k pass political power bhi hai . Pr karna hmesha dusro ko nicha dikhata rhta hai un k gareeb hone ki vjjh se . Hmesha dusro ko marne ki sochta hai . Pr Raj ye kaam to nhi karta . Agar wo itna bura hota to wo Rohit ko Karna se nhi bchata or usse khud ldne lgta kyoki bhaagte time Rohit bhi to tkra gya tha Raj se . Agar use power ka ghmand hota to wo apni power ko aise chupata nhi sab k samne dikhata . Chaye wo ( lightning or thunder element ) ko hi show krta kyoki wo in dono element ki kuch power ko to abhi bhi control kr skta hai . Haa maan lia Raj kisi se dhng se baat nhi krta to ho skta hai Raj k past life k experience ki vjjh se ho . Isly wo kisi k jyada baat ya dosti nhi krta .

Karna ne phle ache se baat ki thi Raj se pr usse bhi phle wo apna character show kr chuka tha class me . Chaye wo dono ache se baat bhi krlete ya friend bhi bnjate pr ek na ek din to ye situation aani hi thi kyoki Karna dusro ko preshan krne ki sochta hai or Raj dusro ko bachane ki .

Arti ne Raj k sath kuch bura nhi kia lekin jab uski friend Raj k sath baato - baato me ldai kr rhi thi to usne apni friend ko roka bhi nhi . Wo bhi to Isla k Raja ki beti thi agar chahti to apni friend ko chup rhne k liye bhi kh skti thi . Pr isse koi frrk nhi padta . Koi bhi hmesha acha bnne ka natak nhi kr skta . Ho skta hai Raj ye baat janta ho . Ab wo phli hi bar me kisi se bhi dosti to kr nhi skta . Agar Arti acchi hui to baad me Indono ki friendship apne aap hojaegi

Rohit se dosti nhi ki to kya Raj ghamandi hogya isi baat se . Sab ka apna apna man hota hai kya pta uska man akele rhne ka krta ho . Raj sbko plz plz to kh nhi skta isly aisi baate krta ho jise sun kr dusre us k bare me bura soche or usse dur rhe . Sb ne ye to dekha ki Raj ne Rohit se aise baat ki pr Raj ne use Karna se bachaya bhi to tha . Jb Karna apne pita k paas sandesh bhej skta hai Raj ko marne k liye to socho wo Rohit ka kya haal krta .

Bhot sare amir or powerful logo ki adat hoti hai dusro ka fayda uthane ki pr time k sath unki achai or burai ka pta chlta hai . Arti or Rohit ache hain to Raj baad me khud hi inse dosti krlega . Kya pta wo abhi sbke nature experience kr rha ho .

Lekin H.M k bare me shi kha
Raja k paas jaise kisi chiz ki deal krne gya ho aise bta rha hai Raj k bare me .
Abhi to chhote bcche hain ye . Raj ko ye pta chla to shyd hi wo H.M ko kbhi respect de apne man se .

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Update no . 10
Subha jb me utha to time dekha
4 ho rha tha me utha aur apne T F me dyan me beth gya aur apne
Thunder element ko jagrit karne ki kosis
karne lga mene apne ander dekha Yellow gere me Green calour ka gola
tha mughe Priya mam ki
bat yad agyi
aur me us gole ki trafh chl dia lakin mughe apne body me bhut
dard ho rha tha fir
bhi me
kisi tarah apne Thunder element ke karib jane laga meri ankho ke samne andera cha gya aur me
behos hogya jb mughe hos aya
to Subha ho gyi thi me
apne body me toda dard mehsoos kr
rha tha fir bhi me class me
jane ke liye tyar hone lga

Me tyar hoke class ki trafh chl dia ajj meri class nhi thi kyoki kisi ko
pata nhi thanki mere pass
sare element hi

Jb me wha phucga to dekha ajj Aarti
Bi ayi th kyoki uske pass me fier element
Vi tha
karna to mughe gusse me goor rha tha
jese ager pa jaye to mugje khaa jaye

Lakin bechara kuch kr bhi nhi sakta tha
tha to mughe gorta rhta tha me ja kr second seat or beh gya kyoki ajj
first seat phle se Full thi
kyoki ajj me bhut der behos rha tha

Me jaker 2 seat pr beth gya mere bagal ek ladka betha tha

Me chup chap beth gya aur apne clone ke bare me sochne lga ki kese me
clone bnane ki power hasil karu
mene socha ajj Priya mam se puchunga

kuch der bad Shalini mam class me ayi
aur jb unhone mujhe class me dekha to pucha

Shalini.....
Raj apko ye wali class keval three days hi lini thi wo vi physical ki apke pass
to lightning element aur thunder element hi

Me.......
Master Shalini me sari class lunga mudhe vi sikhna hi ki kese Air, water, earth , Akash, fier ko jagrit kia jata hi
kyoki koi bhi gyan hnikarak
nhi hota hi

Shalini........
Very good Raj bhut ache

Uske bad mam sabko batane lagi dyan karne ke bare me kyoki abi bhut se student dyan bhi nhi lga

pate the yese hi ye wali class khatam ho
gyi tvi Master Dav hmari class me agye

Intro of some important character of story..........

1. Master Dev........... Ye magic school ke top 10 master me ate hi inki hmare Rajya me bhut ejjat hi inke pass three element hi Air , water, earth aur ye ek bhut
AChe Talwar baj hi .

Dev.......
Student abi app sb shi se dyan nhi lga pate hi to app sb ko 10 days ki
chutti di jati app sb ko in
dino me ache se dyan lgana sikhna
hi aur ager koi problem ho to

Salini mam se phuch skte hi ok student

sab student........
ok sir

Ese hi ye wali class khatam ho gyi ab Lightning element nki class thinto ma Aur Aarti lightning elememt
Ki class ki trafh chl die

us class me bhi hme whi notice mili jo dev sir ne btaya tha

ME.......
Es class me bhi whi notice hi ye jisko dyan karna ata hi use kya karna hi
ye to btaya nhi gya hi

Aarti........
Raj tumko dyan lagana ata hi kya

Me........
Ha

Aarti........
TO ab hm kya krenge

Me........
Tumhe bhi dyan lagan ata hi

Aarti.....
Ha

Me. Koi bat nhi hm jaker library me koi
magic book le lete hi fir usi se practice
krenge

Aarti.......
Ha yahi sahi rhega

Uske bad me aur Aarti library ke trafh chl die wha jaker hmne kuch magic ki book
li

Uske bad hm dono apne class ki trafh chl die

jb Aarti apne room me phuchi to usse se Priya ne pucha ki

Priya.......
Tum us Raj ke sath kha gyi thi

Aarti.........
wo hm logo ko dyan lagana ata hi to kuch magic book lene gye the

Priya .........
hu magic book lene gye the mere sath nhi chl skti thi jo us ke sath gyi thi wo bada badtameez hi pta nhi apne apko kya samajhta hi

Aarti .......
Ab tum chup bhi rho

Aur uske bad Aarti Teacher stop room ki trafh chl deti hi

Location.......... Planet Alpha xy
ye ek hmare planet se bhut bada aur sktisali hi es ke aur hmare nich ek
surcha kawach hi jo ki
5 year bad tutega

Is planet me Keval ek hi Raja ka Adhikar hi uska nam hi king Mureko

Mureko apne drbar me apne sighsan pr betha tha aur kuch chrcha kr rha tha

Mureko.........

bs ab srif 5 year hi ek bar wo surcha kawach ht jaye fir hm Tha great S of God ko hasil kr lenge aur fir hm bhut sktisali ho jayege

Mantri 1 ......
Ji Mere Malik app shi kh rhe hi us Talwar me bhut skti hi

Mantri 2........
Hm bhi malik mantri 1 ki bato se etfhak rkhte hi

Mureko......
Hahahaha bs ab sirf 5 year hi


Location Davil lok

Is lok me kewal Dark magic ka upyog hota tha yha ke king Lucifier bhut
skti shali tha

Abi Devil king apne upasna me betha Mata Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha pichle 800 salo se demon king maa Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha aur ab mata ke prakat hone ka samay a gya tha

Location......... Angel lok

yha pr lord of Angel bhut