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[Raj Singh Thakur]

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[Raj Singh Thakur]

very nice update bhai

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[Raj Singh Thakur]

Kisi agyani ki baat sun bina soche samjhe liye gaye faisle aur chune gaye galat raah ka natiza bahot gatak sabit ho sakta hai.. jaise us sainik ki baat sun senapati jungle ke us maarg pe jaane wala tha jaha log gayab ho jaate the... wo to sukar hai ki us jungle ke bare mein jaankari rakhne wala ek sainik majud tha waha.. warna aaj senapati ke sath sath baaki ke sainik bhi lapata ho jaate us raah pe...
Raj Singh Thakur sahab ne bahot achha sandesh diya hai is update jariye ki kabhi kisi agyaani ke baaton mein aake koi kaam karenge to natiza kaafi khaufnaak bhi ho sakta hai... isliye koi bhi naya kaam karne ya raah chun ne se pehle kisi experienced holder se vichar vimarsh kar leni chahiye...
wohi dusri taraf Raj... jaise ki maine pehle bhi jikar kar rahi thi ye baat ki Raj had zyada abhimaani aur ghamandi hota jaa raha hai, Raj ne khud hi is baat ko ab shat pratishat sach sabit kar diya..
rohit ko bachaya karna ke hatho se lekin uske baad jis tarike se baat ki rohit se..
I think.... free mein itne saari powers mil jaane ke chalte Raj ke tevar hi badal gaye hai... aur Nayak ki soch aur tevar ke ulat zyada khalnayak ki soch aur tevar aa gaye hai Raj mein..

Khair....
shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan,
Dilchasp har ek mod aur pehlu.. sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab

Thank you Naina ji

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Awesome update

Thanks

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Very nice update bhai

Thank you Shanu bhai

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Thank you to all my friends

 

[Devil hunter123]

Nice update

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Nice update

Thanks

 

[Silentreader0]

Superb updates

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Update no . 10
Subha jb me utha to time dekha
4 ho rha tha me utha aur apne T F me dyan me beth gya aur apne
Thunder element ko jagrit karne ki kosis
karne lga mene apne ander dekha Yellow gere me Green calour ka gola
tha mughe Priya mam ki
bat yad agyi
aur me us gole ki trafh chl dia lakin mughe apne body me bhut
dard ho rha tha fir
bhi me
kisi tarah apne Thunder element ke karib jane laga meri ankho ke samne andera cha gya aur me
behos hogya jb mughe hos aya
to Subha ho gyi thi me
apne body me toda dard mehsoos kr
rha tha fir bhi me class me
jane ke liye tyar hone lga

Me tyar hoke class ki trafh chl dia ajj meri class nhi thi kyoki kisi ko
pata nhi thanki mere pass
sare element hi

Jb me wha phucga to dekha ajj Aarti
Bi ayi th kyoki uske pass me fier element
Vi tha
karna to mughe gusse me goor rha tha
jese ager pa jaye to mugje khaa jaye

Lakin bechara kuch kr bhi nhi sakta tha
tha to mughe gorta rhta tha me ja kr second seat or beh gya kyoki ajj
first seat phle se Full thi
kyoki ajj me bhut der behos rha tha

Me jaker 2 seat pr beth gya mere bagal ek ladka betha tha

Me chup chap beth gya aur apne clone ke bare me sochne lga ki kese me
clone bnane ki power hasil karu
mene socha ajj Priya mam se puchunga

kuch der bad Shalini mam class me ayi
aur jb unhone mujhe class me dekha to pucha

Shalini.....
Raj apko ye wali class keval three days hi lini thi wo vi physical ki apke pass
to lightning element aur thunder element hi

Me.......
Master Shalini me sari class lunga mudhe vi sikhna hi ki kese Air, water, earth , Akash, fier ko jagrit kia jata hi
kyoki koi bhi gyan hnikarak
nhi hota hi

Shalini........
Very good Raj bhut ache

Uske bad mam sabko batane lagi dyan karne ke bare me kyoki abi bhut se student dyan bhi nhi lga

pate the yese hi ye wali class khatam ho
gyi tvi Master Dav hmari class me agye

Intro of some important character of story..........

1. Master Dev........... Ye magic school ke top 10 master me ate hi inki hmare Rajya me bhut ejjat hi inke pass three element hi Air , water, earth aur ye ek bhut
AChe Talwar baj hi .

Dev.......
Student abi app sb shi se dyan nhi lga pate hi to app sb ko 10 days ki
chutti di jati app sb ko in
dino me ache se dyan lgana sikhna
hi aur ager koi problem ho to

Salini mam se phuch skte hi ok student

sab student........
ok sir

Ese hi ye wali class khatam ho gyi ab Lightning element nki class thinto ma Aur Aarti lightning elememt
Ki class ki trafh chl die

us class me bhi hme whi notice mili jo dev sir ne btaya tha

ME.......
Es class me bhi whi notice hi ye jisko dyan karna ata hi use kya karna hi
ye to btaya nhi gya hi

Aarti........
Raj tumko dyan lagana ata hi kya

Me........
Ha

Aarti........
TO ab hm kya krenge

Me........
Tumhe bhi dyan lagan ata hi

Aarti.....
Ha

Me. Koi bat nhi hm jaker library me koi
magic book le lete hi fir usi se practice
krenge

Aarti.......
Ha yahi sahi rhega

Uske bad me aur Aarti library ke trafh chl die wha jaker hmne kuch magic ki book
li

Uske bad hm dono apne class ki trafh chl die

jb Aarti apne room me phuchi to usse se Priya ne pucha ki

Priya.......
Tum us Raj ke sath kha gyi thi

Aarti.........
wo hm logo ko dyan lagana ata hi to kuch magic book lene gye the

Priya .........
hu magic book lene gye the mere sath nhi chl skti thi jo us ke sath gyi thi wo bada badtameez hi pta nhi apne apko kya samajhta hi

Aarti .......
Ab tum chup bhi rho

Aur uske bad Aarti Teacher stop room ki trafh chl deti hi

Location.......... Planet Alpha xy
ye ek hmare planet se bhut bada aur sktisali hi es ke aur hmare nich ek
surcha kawach hi jo ki
5 year bad tutega

Is planet me Keval ek hi Raja ka Adhikar hi uska nam hi king Mureko

Mureko apne drbar me apne sighsan pr betha tha aur kuch chrcha kr rha tha

Mureko.........

bs ab srif 5 year hi ek bar wo surcha kawach ht jaye fir hm Tha great S of God ko hasil kr lenge aur fir hm bhut sktisali ho jayege

Mantri 1 ......
Ji Mere Malik app shi kh rhe hi us Talwar me bhut skti hi

Mantri 2........
Hm bhi malik mantri 1 ki bato se etfhak rkhte hi

Mureko......
Hahahaha bs ab sirf 5 year hi


Location Davil lok

Is lok me kewal Dark magic ka upyog hota tha yha ke king Lucifier bhut
skti shali tha

Abi Devil king apne upasna me betha Mata Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha pichle 800 salo se demon king maa Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha aur ab mata ke prakat hone ka samay a gya tha

Location......... Angel lok

yha pr lord of Angel bhut

Superb update