Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

[Werewolf]

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[Damha]

Trouble

Sahi naam rakha hai Update ka agar agla update jaldi na aya to trouble me per jao gye

Ek zordaar awaaz uss floor par ek stick ke patakne se aayi jo uske haatho ne jakad rakhi thi.

Aur sab kuch ekdum se shaant ho gaya.

Usne apni hockey stick uthaayi aur saamne vyakti ki orr apni stick taante hue uss se bola,

"Ab samajh aaya

Reader jab kisi scene ko parh rahe hote hai to saath saath use imagine bhi ker rahe hote hai......BC is character ko imagine karte huwe Sholay film ke gabbar ko kiu imagine ker raha hu main I Don't know

Aatish (smiles) : Iski umeed nahi thi hai na? Par hume toh issi macchli ki talaash thi, ya yu kahe ki issi macchli ke zariye hume badi macchli haasil hoegi.

Konsi Machli konsa machwara.....Ye atish pichle janam me machwara tha kia

Revolver ka muzzle Vivek ke maathe par tika hua tha. Usne ye dekh apna sarr jhukaate hue nichla honth zorr se daato tale dabaaya aur ek awaaz me zorr se bola,

"Mujhe mat maaro... Mujhe chorr do!!!

Vivek ki aise phatne ke baad mere dil se vivek ke liye kuch shabd yun nikle

Veer ne Shreya se katori haath me lete hue ek spoon se taste kiya aur fir usse dekhte hue bola,
"Ek number... Aur aapne toh banayi nahi hogi hai na?!"

Bhai bhabhi aur bhabhi ka baap kidnap hai......Pari ko kho sakta hai......lekin phir bhi harami pan nahi chore ga....ungli zaroor karni hai iss ko kia chull machti hai iss ko

Juhi : Veer maamu... Maasi se kuch nahi aata... Mummy hi banaati hai saara khaana

Shreya : What??? Ab tumhe aenn time pe konsa urgent kaam yaad aa gaya? Kahi firse ladki ke chakkar kaatne jaa rahe ho kya? Mein bata rahi hu... Hamaare ghar me firse wo sab karke mat aana...

Ab ungli karo gye to smell to aye gi na.....kis ne kaha tha bechari ko tang karne ko.....Waise yaad aya larki to gayab ho gayi us ka scene kab aye ga

Na jaane kab Veer baato hi baato me kabhi daudte hue, toh kabhi kisi se lift lete hue apni

Taxi Driver Be like:





Matlab aisi bhi kia gareebi ab socho Batman duniya ko lift le ker bacahane ja raha......uhhh.....Bhai thore paise udhar le ker bacahane chala ja aise gareebo wali entry to naa maar

[You'll have to kill.... ]

 

[Lucky..]

Waiting

 

[Damha]

Review Time

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Update bohat maze ka to nahi okay okay tha..... Jo main ache se samajhta hu ab har update me action to nahi ho sakta.....kuch update thore kam interesting hote hai lekin wohi update story me ek ahem jagha rakhte hai un updates ke bina story ka koi point he nahi hota jo har koi nahi samajhta


Ab ki sab se achi baat hai ke ap chote chote points per bohat ache se kaam karte ho for example

[Ek aadmi ke qadmo ke chalne ki awaaz uss jagah par goonj rahi thi. Perro me D and G ke wo kaale genuine leather waale formal shoes jinki keemat lakh ke bhi upar hogi. ]

ap ne yahab shoes ka jis tarha zikar kia hai us se story ka taluk to hai lekin us ko na bhi likhte to chalta....lekin ap ne iss ko bhi khubsoorati se likha hai jis se story me ek naya rang bhar gaya us character me ek jaan si aa gayi hai......Ab us character ka rob nazar aa raha hai.....Aise he bohat se points hai jaise update ke beeche me ap words use karte ho


[Noods.....Uuaaah.....arghhhh]


In se ap jis tarha feeling ko Express karte ho bohat he bareeki ka kaam hai ek galat expression aur pura scene barbad ho jata hai lekin ap ne us per bhi bohat ache se dhayan dia hai



Ashish akhir kin larkiyo ke peeche laga hai? ye janna bohat maze ka ho ga akhir wo chahta kia hai un larkiyo se? Vivek ki asliyat janne ke baad ragni toot si gayi hai agar vivek aur ragini bach bhi gaye to un ka rishta bohat kamzoor ho ga......Ab ragini ko Ehsaas ho ga ghar me sab ke hote huwe bhi akele rehne ka kia matlab hota kaisi feeling hoti hai wo.....jo veer bachpan se bardasht kar raha tha......Wanhi Nidhi ke saath Rishta kamzoor hote dikha lekin veer ne apne pyaar se us rishte ko aur Mazboot ker lia hai......Juhi ke saath veer ka mama bhanji wala pyaar barhta ja raha hai juhi jo kisi ka jootha nahi khaati wo veer ka jutha kha rahi hai iss se para chalta hau veer ka us ghar me ek kirdaar ban gaya hai jo us family ka hissa hai.....Ab daikhna ye hai ke veer kaise bachaye ga un teeno ko Ashish se kia veer Ashish ki nazro me aa jaye ga? kia veer ek naya dushman banane ja raha hai? kia Veer un teeno ko bacha paye ga? Ye sab janne ke liye agle update ka intezar hai


Agar agla update sunday tak na aya to

 

[Werewolf]

Reader jab kisi scene ko parh rahe hote hai to saath saath use imagine bhi ker rahe hote hai......BC is character ko imagine karte huwe Sholay film ke gabbar ko kiu imagine ker raha hu main I Don't know

Aatish is >>>>> than gabbar

Konsi Machli konsa machwara.....Ye atish pichle janam me machwara tha kia

Aatish ne metaphor use kiya yaha, machli means his targets...

Bhai bhabhi aur bhabhi ka baap kidnap hai......Pari ko kho sakta hai......lekin phir bhi harami pan nahi chore ga....ungli zaroor karni hai iss ko kia chull machti hai iss ko

Arre... Veer doesn't know na.. he only knows ki ragini ko bachaana h. Kis se? Kese? Kya situation h, he don't know anything...

Taxi Driver Be like:





Matlab aisi bhi kia gareebi ab socho Batman duniya ko lift le ker bacahane ja raha......uhhh.....Bhai thore paise udhar le ker bacahane chala ja aise gareebo wali entry to naa maar

Veer doesn't takes money from Nidhi...
Result - Too gareeb...
He'll be rich very soon

And, Thanks a lot for the lovely review.

 

[Werewolf]

ap ne yahab shoes ka jis tarha zikar kia hai us se story ka taluk to hai lekin us ko na bhi likhte to chalta....lekin ap ne iss ko bhi khubsoorati se likha hai jis se story me ek naya rang bhar gaya us character me ek jaan si aa gayi hai.

Thanks a lot!!!
But yaha ek baat bataana chaahta hu. Meri story me koi bhi scene faaltu nahi rehta... (Mostly)
Jo kuch bhi darshaaya gaya hai, wo aage jaake ek bada role play karenge... Chaahe wo joote ho ya hockey stick...
Harr ek cheez ka reason hai. Harr ek cheez ke peeche ek logic hai.

 

[Werewolf]

Agar agla update sunday tak na aya to

Sunday ko aa jaega...

 

[DeepHeart💘]

Bhia story gajab ki hai concept updates thrill maza aa rha hai love u bhau

 

[tpk]

waiting

 

[Sudipkr]

Waiting for next update broo...

 

[Arjun kr nayak]

Waiting.