Romance Ek Hateli Lovestory ;) (complete)

[Gaandu No 1]

Update 9​

Aniket, Avinash aur Komal teeno ek se badhkar ek the aur teeno ke dimag ke khurafat bhari huyi thi aur college bole to inke liye apne khurafati ideas ko sakriya karne ki inki apni haq ki jagah, padhai wagaire ka to ye waise bhi itna tension nahi lete the halanki aisa bhi nahi tha ke padhte hi nahi the, padhte the the padhai ke samay padhai jaruri hoti hai teeno ye baat jaante the padhai ke samay padhai aur masti ke samay masti ha ab ye baat alag hai ke masti ko inka 90% time milta tha

Top rank lane ki race me participate karna to dur inhone uski taraf dekh bhi nahi tha, teeno ki rank hamesha beech me rehti thi, aur sabse khas baat ye thi ke teeno bhale hi dinbhar ek dusre ka majak banate rehte ho par kisi ke bhi man me kisi ke liye dwesh bhavna nahi thi thi to sirf aur sirf dosti, teeno jindagi ke in anmol palo ka bharpur aanad lutne me lage the unhe to pata bhi nahi tha ye yahi man aage bhavishya me unke chehro par muskan le aayenge (is bhavna ki tivrata wohi samajh sakta hai joy a to is samay college me hai ya jiska college khatam ho gaya hai aur unhone apne college life ko mukthast jiya hai, jara apne dosto ko aur unke sath bitaye apne palo ko yaad kariye aur jo smile aapke chehre par aayegi uska koi mol nahi laga sakta)

To aise ye hamare buddhijivi khurfatveer is samay ek nayi khurafat dhundhte huye canteen me baithe the aura vi hamesha ki taraf deri se aaya tha tab tak aniket aur komal apne pasandida dish yani vadapav khane me busy the avi bhi unke paas aake baith gaya tab komal vadapav ke sath mirchi kha rahi thi jise dekh ke aniket bola

Aniket-kammo tu mirchi kha leti hai aisi sabut teko tej na lagti kya ?

Komal ne jaise hi aniket ki baat suni wo samajh gayi ke isse mirchi nahi khayi jayegi aur uske dimagi ghode daudne lage arey matlab use nayi khurafat sijh gayi

Komal-anya vadapav ki maja mirchi ke bagair nahi aati, hai na avi

Avinash(mirchi uthate huye)- bilkul sahi par kya kare ye ani se mirchi khayi nahi jati na

Aniket-oye avi tu jyada ud mat samjha, tujhe kya lagta hai maine mirchi nahi khata?

Bas yahi komal ka kaam ho gaya unse yyaha machis ki tili laga di aura b to avi bhai bhi bhadak gaye na

Avinash-abe main to mirchi ke bagair khana bhi nahi khata

Avinash bole jar aha tha aur komal use aur bhi chane ke jhad pe chadha rahi thi aur wo chadh bhi gaya

Aniket-avya itna bhi fekna shai nahi hai chal main bhi kha ke dikhata hu ke ye koi badi baat nahi hai

Komal ne barabar dono ko uksa diya tha aura b to na avi na ani koi bhi piche hatne tayar nahi tha

Avinash-lagi bet? Bol kitne ki bet lagi ?



Aniket-chal lagi hajar rupaye ki

Dono ne canteen wale se plate bhar ke mirchiya bulwayi aur fir shuru hua mirchi khane ka competition, aniket aur avinash dono me se koi haar nahi maan raha tha aur komal wo to mast maje le rahi thi wo kabhi avinash ko support karti to kabhi aniket ko cheer karti aur ab mukabala apne charam pe pahuch raha tha dono parties ne 14-14 mirchiya kha li thi aura b isse jyada khane ki kisi me himmat nahi thi to mutual understanding se ye mukabala unhe yahi khatam karna pada

Ab josh josh me inhone mirchiya to kha li thi par kuch hi samay baad mirchi ne apna kamaal dikhana shuru kar diya aur dono college se sidha ghar ki taraf bhag liye

Us din us mirchi ne kuch aisa kamaal dikhaya ki avinash do acre khet ko kaam aaye itna sendriya khat(khad, organic fertilizer) kheet me faila aaya, aur ye khad failane ka kaam itne speed me shuru tha kea vi bhai ne baad me din bhar payjama pehanne ki risk hi nahi li

Dusri taraf aniket bhi apne ghar ke tanki ka pani khatam karne me laga hua tha, maa ke dhyan kea a gaya tha ke aaj unke yuvraj diwan-e-khas me 7-8 baar jakar aaye hai to akhir maa to maa hoti hai ma wo shahad ki botal lekar aniket ke room me pahuchi, aniket abhi abhi aathva akraman karke baye hath ki laday karke bed par aada pada hua tha, sharir me jaan hi nahi bachi thi uske aur khud se hi badbad kar raha tha

Anikey-haayy! Kammo tera satyanash ho…kide pade tujhe haayy, dusht dakini chudail…baith ke maja le rahi thi waha…haayyy chhodunga nahi

Ab ye sab kya chal raha hai ye kaushalya ke dhyan me aa gaya tha aur wo bhi hasne lagi, us din aur agla ddin aniket aur avinas dono me se kisi ne ghar ke baahar kadam nahi rakha uske agler din….

Subah ka samay tha aur aniket mast apne bed pe pada hua tha tabhi uske kano me awaj aaya

“aniket”

Aniket ko laga ki wo ab bhi neend me hi hai kyuki ya to use sab ani bulate the ya anya bolte the koi bhi itne pyaar se aniket nahi bolta tha isiliye wo waise hi pada raha

“aniket…….ani……ye anya”

Bas anya sunna tha ke aniket tadkan uth ke baith gaya aur saamne dekha to waha komal khadi thi bas fir kya tha use dekhte hi bhai bhadak gaya

Aniket-teri to…..haramio ladki…tu aaj gayi….aaj to tera khun hoga mere hatho

Aur aniket room me idhar udhar dekhne laga to uske hath ek jhadu lag gayi bas fir kyat ha komal ke kuch bolne se pehle hi bechari ko jhadu ka fatka baith gaya aura b apna bachna mushkil hai ye dhyan me aate hi komal kitchen ki taraf bhagi aur aniket uske piche jhadu leke bhaga

Kaku, kaku bachao bolte huye komal kitchen me ghusi aur kaushalya ke piche jakar chip gayi aur piche se aniket jhadu liye waha pahucha

Komal-kaku dekho ye kya kar raha hai

Tab kaushalya aniket ko daatte huye bol

Kushalya-ani kya hai ye sab kyumaar rahe ho bechari ko

Aniket-bichaaaari ye aur bichari arey ye to bhutni hai

Komal ekdun bholi surat bana ke kaushalya ke piche chippi huyi thi

Kaushalya-kuch bhi kya bakte rehte ho

Aniket-maa tumko malum nahi hai ye chudail hai chudail, kammo tu baahar nikal aaj to nahi chhodunga tujhe

Kaushalya(chidhte huye)- arey ye subah subah kya natak lagaya hai? Koi batayega kya hua hai

Fir aniket ne pura kissa une sunaya itne me awaj sunkar narayanrao bhi waha aa gaye aur unhone bhi pura kissa suna to wo hasne lage aur narayanrao aniket ki taraf se bole

Narayanrao-arey beta komal kya hai ye koi aise karta hai kya?

Ab komal kuch bole usse pehle hi kaushalya uski side lete huye boli

Kaushalya-arey mana ki komal ne waisa kaha tha par mirchi khate huye inki akal kaha ghas charne gayi thi, kal ko komal kuye me kudne bolegi to kya ye kud jayenge

Aab jawab me narayanrao kuch bolte isse pehle aniket bol pada

Aniket-dekha…dekha isne aap dono ko bhi ladwa diya, pehle to meko shak tha ab pura yakin hai ye koi jadugarni hai, ye aam ladki hai hi nahi bhut chudail hai ye ab confirm ho gaya meko, amawas ke din asli rup nikalta hoga iska aur raat me jhadu pe ghumti hogi ye, meko malum hai dekha kaise jadu se maa ko ape side kar liya

Tab kaushalya baat khatam karte huye boli

Kaushalya-aaha ha um bhi kuch kam nahi ho nawab sahab wo chudail to tum bhi rkshas ho, itna bada ghodfe jaisa ho gaya hai fir bhi baccho jaise uske piche jhadu leke pada hai, khudko samajh nahi hai aur use chudail keh raha hai, rakh wo jhadu aur ja nahane

Kaushalya se aniket ko daat padte dekh komal has rahi thi

Aniket-kammo daat tod dunga jyada hasi to

Aniket to waha se nikal gaya aur kaushalya komal ko samjhate huye boli

Kaushalya-ye sab kya hai komal aise karta hai kya koi aur thoda to ladkiyo jaise raha karo mujhe batao kyu kiya ye sab?

Komal(aankhen michkate huye)- maja..

Narayanrao has rahe the aur kaushalya ne apne sar pe hath laga liya

Kaushalya-is ladki ka kya hoga bhagwaan jane…..

To Be Continued…..

Nice Update dost

Avinash bole jar aha tha aur komal use aur bhi chane ke jhad pe chadha rahi thi aur wo chadh bhi gaya

Komal ne to agg laga Diya

 

[Gaandu No 1]

Update 10​

Masti hasi thitholi karte huye samay kab bita pata hi nahi chala au dekhte dekhte tikdi ab 11th se 12th main pahuch gayi thi, ab chuki ye saal in log ki 12th thi to thode bahut badlav sabhi me huye mata pita ne inhe padhai ko lekar serious hone kaha, teachers bhi change ho gaye the aur baki logo me bhi badlav huye the par hamari tikdi ko in sab bato se fark kaha padne wala tha wo to apni hi dhun me jiye ja rahe the

Ek din komal ke jijaji yani uske ek cousin ke husband jo usi college ke purine student bhi the college me aaye, jijaji ke college me aane se komal ekdum sadguni bacche jaisa behave kar rahi thi ekdum vinamrata se sabse baat kar rahi thi aur jab ye sab aniket ne dekha to usne is sab ke bare me avinash se pucha aura vi ne bhi puri information aniket ko de di jispar aniket rakshas ke mafik kutilta se haste huye bola

Niket-abi maja aayega na bhidu ab aaya unt pahad ke niche, abi dekh main kya karta hu

Fir aniket avi ko lekar sidha canteen ke kitchen me pahucha aura vi ko baahar rukne ka bolkar ander gaya, aur kuch 10 minute bite honge aniket baahar aaya aur avinash ko chalne kaha, ab dono komal ko dhundh rahe the aur komal jijaji ke sath office ke paas ruki huyi thi aniket dheere se uske paas pahucha aur dhime awaj me usse bola jise jijaji aaram se sun sake

Aniket-aye kammo wo baahar paan tapri wala tere naam se chuilla raha tha teri jo cigarette ki udhari baki hai use pehle clear karne bol raha tha wo aur ha jo pichli baar tu ganja layi thi usse kuch bhi nahi hua tha duplicate maal tha wo…

Aniket komal ko kuch bhi bolne nahi de raha tha aur komal ke jiju ashcharya se unki baate sun rahe the par aniket ne unki taraf dekha bhi nahi iski apni hi badbad chalu thi

Aniket-kammo aaj bahut mast plan set hua hai maja aa jayega teko

Fir aniket ke ani jeb se ek choti hi plastic ki pudiya baahar nikali aur koi dekhne ka aise batate huye bola

Aniket-aaj sham ko mil mujhe brown sugar mili hai, dhamaal karenge chal main chalta hu…

Aniket ki bate sunkar komal ke chehre ka rang hi ud gaya tha, ye abhi abhi yaha kya hua use kuch samaj hi nahi aa raha tha aur aniket waha se daat nikalte huye canteen me aa baitha aur avinash use gusse se ghur raha tha

Avinash-anya kuch akkal wagair hai kya tere me? Abe ladki hai wo aur tu harami cigarette ganja aur brown sugar tak pahuch gaya bsdk kuch andaja hai ki iska kya parinam ho sakta hai ? lawde majak jyada hogaya ye

Aniket(haste huye)- BC lota parade bhul gaya kya tu? Dekh ab usko uske karmo ka fal to bhugatna hi padega isse koi nahi bacha hai aaj tak aur jyada se jyada kya hoga baap marega hi na, kal jakar bata denge ki ham majak kar rahe the, par kal aaj nahi aaj jara usko thoda maar khane de

Avinash-tu dost hai ki dushman ye hi samajh nahi aa raha mere to

Aniket-oye satyawadi agar jyada kharab lag raha hai na to ja jake bata de sab nikal….

Anikash(do minute sochne ke baad)- dekh bura to lag raha tha fir dhyan me aaya ke lota parade ke baad baithne me bahut takleef huyi thi yaar, jane de jo hota hai ache ke liye hi hota hai

Fir dono tali dete huye hasne lage…

Thoda samay beeta tha ke avinash ne aniket ko baahar dekhne ka ishara kiya to komal aur uske jiju dono canteen me aa rahe the aur dono ka chehra utra hua tha aur dono unhi ke table par aakar baith gaye, jiju aniket ke bagal wali khurchi par aakar baithe aur dheere se usse bole

Jiju-ani tumhe shayad pata nahi hai par main bhi isi college ka purana student hu, khair jo sab jane do aur sabse pehle to mujhe tum ye batao ki maal original to hai na?

Aniket ke liye ye anapekshit tha use ab is baat pe kya hi bole samajh nahi aa raha tha tabhi jiju wapis bole

Jiju-jara batana to wo brown sugar, bahut saal ho gaye taste kare huye

Aniket ne chup chap bagair kuch bole apni jeb se wo pudiya nikali aur jiju ke hath me rakh di, jiju ne wo packet khola aur chunti me thoda saw o brown powder liya aur muh me dala aur sambhal ke uska taste lene lage aur baad me wo us pudiya ko aniket ke saamne rakhte huye bole

Jiju-ani bhai kisi ne bahut bura kata hai tumhara, brown sugar bolke kisi ne brownvita de diya tumhe to

Fir juju thoda haste huye aniket ke kandhe par hath maarte huye bole

Jiju-wo film ka dialogue hai ka ek ki jis school me tum padhte ho ham waha ke principal hai, waise tumhari ye idea bahut purani aur ghisipiti hai dosto ko satane ki, komal ne mujhe pehle hi tumhare aur tumhare college ke kisso ke bare me bata diya tha barkhurdar

Aniket-arey yaar jiju main to khud ko hoshiyar samajh raha tha aap to mere bhi guru nikle, aapko aniket rane ki taraf se full respect

Ab sab has rahe the aur komal aniket ki taraf gusse se dekh rahi thi

Aniket-kammo jiju ki wajah se bach gayi tu to has na kya sadi si shakal banayi hai ham bhi to dekhe tu haste huye achi dikhti hai ya nahi

Aniket ki baat sun kar komal ke chehre par bhi hasi aa gayi

Aniket-aye bas bas haste huye aur bhi jyada buri dikhti tu rende

Sablog badhiya haste huye baatchit kar rahe the aur haste huye aniket ka dhyan canteen ke darwaje ki taraf gaya aur wo ekdum shock lage jaisa usi taraf dekhne laga, kano me ghanti bajne lagi thi, aniket bas usi tarf ektak dekh raha tha, uske liye to mano duniya ruk gayi thi, saas lena tak bhul raha tha wo, jindagi me pehli baar aniket is chiz ka anubhav kar raha tha, jiju jane lage to aniket ne bas kisi yantravat unse hath milaya par uski najre ab bhi wahi thi, avi aur komal kuch badbad kar rahe the par aniket ka us taraf bhi dhyan nahi thaw o to saamne ka najara dekhne me vyast tha aur dimag me uske bas kuch shabd ghum rahe the….

“Chehra ik phool ki tarh shaadaab hai
Chehra us ka hai ya koyi mahtaab hai
Chehra jaise ghazal chehra jaan-I ghazal
Chehra jaise kali chehra jaise kanwal
Chehra jaise tasawwur bhi tasweer bhi

Chehra ik khaab bhi chehra taa’beer bhi
Chehra koyi alf lailawi daastaan
Chehra ik pal yaqeen chehra ik pal gumaan
Chehra jaisa ke chehra kaheen bhi nahi
Maah-ru maah-ru mah-jabeen mah-jabeen

Husn e jaanaa ki tareef mumkin nahi ”​

Ye baat avi aur komal ke bhi dhyan me aa gayi aur unhone bhi us taraf dekha jaga aniket apni sudh budh kho kar dekh raha tha

Ab ye alag se batane ki jarurat nahi hai ke woe k ladki thi, khubsurat, simple yet beautiful, black skirt aur pink color ka tshirt pehni huyi, uske lambe baal pony tail me bande huye the, hotho pe halki si lipstick, kano me bade rings aur mathe par ek chhoti si tikli, gori tikhi naak aur kisi ko bhi ghayal kar de aisi gehri aankhen, aniket is waqt usi ladki me khoya hua tha aur avi bhi us ladki ko dekh ke halke se siti bajate huye bola

Avinash- kammo kaun hai ye menka jisne apne vishwamitra ki tapasya bhag kar di hai…….



To Be Continued…..

Nice Update dost

Ek din komal ke jijaji yani uske ek cousin ke husband jo usi college ke purine student bhi the college me aaye, jijaji ke college me aane se komal ekdum sadguni bacche jaisa behave kar rahi thi ekdum vinamrata se sabse baat kar rahi thi

Vha komal to sadguni ban gai

 

[Gaandu No 1]

Update 11​

Aniket ektak us ladki ki taraf dekhe ja raha tha, aaj pehli baar kisi ladki ne iskadar uske dil ko chua tha, aniket ke liye to mano wo samay wahi ruk sa gaya tha aur wo ladki kisi hawa ke jhoke ki taraf waha aayi aur chali bhi gayi,wahi komal aniket ki is halat pe has rahi thi

Komal-anya lagta hai wicket gir gayi teri, kano me ghanti to nahi baji na

Aniket-haayyy kammo kaun thi ye pari

Komal-pari?? Mujhe to chapri lag rahi thi

Aniket ke komal ke kandhe par ek chamat mara

Aniket-pagal jaise kuch bhi mat bola kar, waise kammo info nikal ka iski, kaun hai ye jo aaj tak mujhe na dikhi aur dikhi to sidha ghayal kar gayi re

Komal-tune kya mujhe kaam pe rakha hai info nikalne ke liye aur jaise main to ekdum khalipili hu na, teko pasand aayi tu nikal info

Aniket-avya kuch jalne ka baas aa raha hai kya teko?

Komal-jale meri juti, chal fut!

Aur fir aniket aur avinash dono waha se apni mohim par nikal gaye, dono ne pura college chan maara lekin wo ladki unhe kahi par bhi nahi dikhi aur akhir me dono thak ke wapis canteen me aakar baith gaye jaha komal ab bhi koi book padhte huye baithi thi, avinash dhad se khurchi pe baithte huye bola

Avinash-sala ladki hai ke bhoot pehle hamare dost ko pagal banaya ab khud gayab ho gayi

Aniket(muskurate huye)- abe jayegi kaha, kal college me aayegi hi

Komal uthi aur boli

Komal-tum log tumhari aashiki chalu rakho main nikalti hu kal milte hai

Aniket(komal ka hath pakad ke rokte huye)- ruk na kammo ghar jake kya karegi, help kar na thodi

Par komal nahi ruki aur jate huye bol gayi “dekhte hai”……

Agle din jo kabhi nahi hua wo hua, aniket aur avinash samay ke pehle hi college pahuch gaye aur us ladki ki raah dekhne lage gate par hi ruk kar par jab kafi samay tak wo nahi aayi to dono thak ke canteen me aake baith gaye, udhar class me do lectures ho gaye the aur kuch samay baad komal bhi canteen me aayi use dekhte hi aniket bola

Aniket-kya kammo itni der laga di, lecture kar rahi thi kya? Tabiyat theek hai na teri?

Komal ne apni bag table par patki aur khurchi par baithte huye boli

Komal-pehle chai nashta khila fir baat karenge

Aniket ne aviki taraf sawaliya najro se dekha par usne bhi kandhe jhatak kar kaha ki use kuch nahi pata hai

Aniket-aaj mera janamdin hai kya jo tujhe nashta khilau

Komal (khurchi kar aaram se baithte huye)- theek hai teri marji, fir main bhi tujhe teri chammak challo ke bare me nahi batane wali

Ab to komal ki baat sunkar aniket bhai ekdum khush

Aniket-bas kya kammo yahi dosti apni, bata na kya naam hai uska?

Komal-dosti gayi bhad me abhi kya bol raha tha nashta khilane ke liye?

Avinash(chidhte huye)- abe yaar anya jab tak iske muh me ek cup chai aur ek vada nahi thusega ye kuch nahi batane wali

Aniket ne jaldise chai nashte ka order diya aur komal mast nashta karne lagi fir usne full aaram se chai pi par yaha aniket utawala hua ja raha tha

Aniket-kammo kitne nakhre karegi be batana kya naam hai uska

Komal ne chai ka aakhri ghut liya aur cup niche rakhte huye kaha

Komal-shravni

Aniket ko to wo naam sun ke aisa laga mano kisine uske kano me shahad ghol diya ho

Aniket-shravni! Waah, jitni wo sunder hai utna hi uska naam sunder hai, shravni, sawan ki pehli bearish jaisa sunder, naam lete hi sharir par pani ki bunde mehsus hone lagi

Komal ne aniket ki baat sunkar apna sar pit liya

Komal-ha wo shravni aur tu sawan a mendhak, naam sunte hi laga darav darav karne

Aniket-kammo kaun hai wo aur kaunse class me hai batana na

Komal-sari info milegi balak par fokat me nahi milegi

Aniket-arey tu bol kya chahiye tujhe

Komal-multiplex me ek picture aur interval me popcorn

Aniket-bas, chal diya ab info bata jaldi

Komal-naam hai shravni patvardhan, class 12th commerce, baap cleark hai gov office me aur ladki thoda kiski huyi hai :relievied:

Aniket-khiski huyi ?

Komal-samajh jaoge jaldi hi

Aniket-kammo tu sach bol rahi hai na

Komal-arey ekdum sach ye, ye avi ki kasam

Avinash- oye oye oye tumlog ko udhar kya game khelne ka hai khelo meri kasam kha ke meri jaan ke piche kyu pade ho be

Aniket table se uthte huye avinash se bola

Aniket-avya chal teri bhabhi se milne jana hai

Par komal ne use rok liya aur uska hath pakad kar use tablepar wapis bithaya

Komal-arey raja murad shakal ke tujhe kya lagta hai tu usse milne jayega aur wo slow motion main bhag kar aakar tere gale lag jayegi? Baith niche pata chala karne kya gaye the aura aye thappad kha kar, arey college me tumhari na sahi meri ijjat hai uske bare me to kuch socho

Aniket-to yaha baithe baithe kuch hone wala hai kya?

Komal-teko pyaar hua hai ya pyaar ka julab hua hai, thoda sabar rakho, wo aayegi yaha

Aniket-aur ye kaise hoga

Komal-hey bhagwan ab kya har baat samjhani padegi, Ishq Ne Nakara Bana Diya Galib, Warna Tu Bhi Insaan Tha Kuch Kaam Ka….

Aniket-kammo kabhi to jindagi me kuch sidhe sidhe bola kar sidhe sidhe bolegi to kyat era baap mere naam property kar dega kya

Komal- main to sidhe shabdo me baat kar lungi par use samajhne ke liye tumhara dimag bhi jagah pe hona chahiye na

Aniket-hua baitho yahi

Aniket chidh kar utha aur baahar jane laga to komal ne jakar uska rasta rok liya

Komal-anya ladkiyo jaise kyu cidhta hai be? Jana hai to ja gobar me muh dene, sala meko hi akkal nahi hai to tere liye itnifielding laga kar aayi hu, par nahi tumhe to us bare me kuch sochna hi nahi hai, anya tu badal gaya hai re, us kal ki aayi ladki ke liye badal gaya hai tu, ja, ja ke mar udhar

Itna bol ke komal ne aniket ko dhakka diya aur pair patakte huye wapis canteen me apni jagah pe aake baith gayi, uske piche piche aniket bhi aakar baith gaya, komal dusri taraf muh karke baithi thi, do minute tak dono bhi shant baithe huye the, fir aniket ko hasi aa gayi

Aniket-kammo! Aye kammo!

Par komal ne koi reply nahi diya

Aniket- aye kammo! Arey sorry na yaar, bas kar na ab ye nautnki dekh kaan pakadta hu

Aur aniket ne komal ke kaan pakad liye, komal aniket ki taraf mudi aur ekdum aath dus mukke aniket ko pade, aniket sorry sorry bol raha tha aura b komal ka gussa bhi ja chuka tha aur dono hasne lage fir komal boli

Komal-wo shravni meri dost ki dost hai, mainer puri fielding laga li hai wo use break me yaha canteen me lekar aayegi

Aniket-arey gazab! Kammo agar tu ladki hoti na to yahi chum leta main tujhe itna jabardast kaam kiya hai tune

Aniket ki baat sunkar komal ne ek jordar gudda aniket ke pet me mara

Komal-aye haadd! Sala halkat

Aur jis tarah se komal ne sab setting kit hi usi hisab se break me wo ladki canteen me aayi…



To Be Continued….

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[Gaandu No 1]

Update 39​

Aniket aur komal ekdum khush the aur khush rehna bhi chahiye, unki life ka ek naya chapter shuru ho gaya tha, avinash bhi pandhra din aaram karke ab wapis college aane laga tha par ab wo sabke saamne komal ko bhabhi bolna taalta tha, dheere dheere ye news sare college ko pata chal gayi thi..

Pehle dost aur ab premi to masti ka dose bhi double ho gaya tha par ek baat thi, koi bhi agar majak me bhi shadi ki baat chedta to aniket chidh jata tha,

Ek din aniket akela hi baitha tha to komal uske piche se aayi aur pat se usne aniket ka gaal chum liya, ab hamesha sher banke ghumne wala apna aniket aise time pe bhigi billiban gaya karta tha

Aniket-kya kau, koi dekh lega to kya bolega

Komal-palu ye na mera dialogue hona chahiye tha

Aniket-pa..lu ye kya hai ab naya?

Komal-wo maine aaj tumhara naamkaran kiya hai

Aniket-chee matlab kuch bhi ? palu, kya palu kutta palu billi palu bakri palu, kya hai ye

To komal use samjha ke batane lagi

Komal-dekho palu ke do matlab hote hai ek to hindi me hi hai, palu matlab kisi chiz ko pa lena hasil karna aur maine tumhe pa liya hai aur dusra hai telegu me, doodh ko telegu me palu bolte hai..

Aniket-ab doodh aur mera kya sambandh hai?

Komal-ek to tum gore ho bilkul doodh jais aur dusra doodh sabme adjust o jata hai bilkul tumhare jaise isiliye aaj se tumhara naam palu

Aniket-kyu aniket naam pasamd nahi kya?

Komal-tumhe komal naam pasand nahi kya? Kau kyu?

Aniket-arey komal naam sabke liye hai kau sirf mere liye sirf main bulaunga is naam se

Komal-fir plau bhi sirf mere liye..

Aniket hasa

Aniket-bato me aaj tak tumse koi jeet paya hai kya

Komal-bato ka kya hai tumne to muhe hi jeet liya hai

Dono hath me hath daal ke waha baith gaye

(these nibba nibbi aur inki bate avi kidhar hai be tu ye nibba nibbi pagal kar denge meko avi-aur likh bsdk meko chhod ke scene abhi thoda time aur nahi aayega apun )

Komal-ani ek baat puchu

Aniket-nahi bola to nahi puchegi kya?

Komal-mujhe batao ham dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai fir jab shadi ki baat aati hai to tum chidh kyu jaye ho?

Aniket-uska kya hai na kau apni shadi matlab ek special event hona chahiye, kuch to thrilling hona chahiye tab to maja aayega na..

Komal-thrilling matlab kehna kya chahte ho

Aniket-sach batau to abhi mujhe bhi samajh nahi aaya hai me par abhi samay hai usme…

Komal-pata hai apni shadi ke bare me soch kar hi main khushi se sihar jati hu, main bachpan se meri shadi ki planning karti aayi hu aura b to main meri sari icchaye puri karungi..

(these kids, story me ho isiliye itni bate kar rahe ho warna yaha to do ghante aur 20 logo me shadiya ho rahi covid ke chakker me #CKMKB stay home, wash your hands regularly, wear mask )

Aniket-kar kau jo planning karni hai kar par abhi time hai usme

Komal ne apni gardan aniket ke kandhe par rakh di aur apni shadi ke sapne sajane lagi aur kuch samay baad aniket hasa

Komal-kya hua? Aise hase kyu?

Aniket-wo mere dimag me na ek sawal aaya hai

Komal-sawal? Kaisa sawal palu?

Aniket-nahi jane do tum hasogi..

Komal-nahi hasungi batao

Aniket-hasne ka nahi bata raha hu

Komal-arey baba nahi hasungi ab batao bhi

Aniket-thodi der pehle jab tum aayi tab tumne kya kiya?

Komal-kyu tumne nahi pata maine kya kiya?

Aniket-batao na

Komal-usme kya hai batane jaisa, maine kiss kiya hai usme kya sawal hai

Aniket-tumne chummi di hai ke li hai

Komal-aur dono me kya fark hai

Aniketwaisa nahi par fark to hai na dene ka aur lene ka

Aniket ki baat sunkar komal apni his nahi rok payi

Aniket-dekha maine bola than a tu hasegi

Komal-arey waise nahi par mujhe samajh nahi aa raha iska kya jawab du, maine chummi di bhi aur li bhi

Aniket-aise kaise koi ek baat batao

Komal-theek hai to maine chummi di

Aniket-to fir maine bhi tumhe wo wapis deni chahiye na

Komal haste huye boli

Komal-nahi nahi maine chummi li hai

Aniket- to fir maine bhi to ab leni chahiye na

Aisa bol ke aniket ne komal ko apni baho me bhara aur apne hoth uske hotho par tika diye, kuch pal bad komal usse alag huyi aur boli

Komal-ab batao tumne ye kya kiya hai

Aniket-kau ye na process hi difficult hai waise main kya bolta hu shakkar khud khao ya koi jabardast khilaye lagegi to wo meethi hi

Komal-aajkal tumhari ye harkate bahut badh gayi hai palu

Aniket-ab tumhare sath ye harkate nahi karunga to ko college ke watchman ke sath karunga

Ye dono apne pyaar ki gulugulu kar hi rahe the ke itne me piche se awaj aaya

Avinash-tum log ka ye gulu gulu karke ho gaya ho to main aau kya?

Dono jhatke se piche mude to avinash aasman ki taraf mu karke khada tha usko dekh ke aniket bola

Aniket-aa gaya betal mewri pith pe baithne, ab teko nahi bolenge to aayega nahi kya?

Avinash mu uper karke andhe log jaise chalte hai waise hath aage karke chalte huye unki taraf aa raha tha..

Avinash-anya ek locha ho gaya yaar, aaj subah se meko kuch dikh hi nahi raha hai

komal-aisa kya..

Avinash-hao be sach me kuch nahi dikh raha

Aniket-aur tu sach bol raha hai ye kaise maan le

Avinash-arey tu abhi kiss kar raha thaw o bhi meko nahi dikha..

Avinash ki baat sunkar komal ne sandel nikal ki aur wo kuch bolti isse pehle hi avi waha se bhag liya

Komal-nalayak aa idhar main karti hut era ilaj pura dikhna band ho jayega

Jispar avinash bhagte huye bola

Avinash-waah beta ani kya sasural dhundha hai be, baap pair tod raha beti andha kar rahi

Avinash kuch komal ke hath me nahi laga aur wo thak ke wapis aniket ke paas aake baith gayi aur avinash ke dur se hi apne dono kaan pakde

Avinash-sorry sorry, abbey maine pura college tum log ko dhundha par tum kahi dikhe hi nahi fir kisi ne bataya ke tum yaha ho to main aa gaya par don’t worry mere aane tak tumhara saka karyakram ho gaya tha jyada kuch nahi dekha maine..

Fir aniket komal ko gale lagate huye bola

Aniket-abey pyaar karte hai darte hai kya kisi ke baap se..

Avinash abbey whi to batane aaya tha ke komal ke pitaji aaye hai college me..

Ye sunte hi dono jhatke me alag ho gaye aye ek sath pucha

Komal-kya? Kab kidhar hai abhi papa?

Aur inki ye halat dekh ke avi has raha tha

Avinash- ab kidhar gayi himmat, sasur ka naam aate hi dur h gaye dono, kya gunda bano ge re tum

Aniket bhag ke avinash ke paas gaya aur uski pith me mast do char mukke jade

Aniket-bahut masti sujh rahi hai teko ruk sale teri masti hi nikalta hu baahar

Avinash-anya sorry na yaar jane de chal picture dekhne jate hai pichture meri taraf se

Jispar komal boli

Komal-arey waah avi tu kab se sudhar gaya, picture aur wo bhi tere taraf se, kya baat hai…

Avinash-ha to apun hai hi dildar yaro ke yaar

Aniket-apan teeno jayenge

Avinash-hao

Aniket-thodi to sharam rakh

Avinash- sharam main aaj hi bech khayi hai aur Dakar bhi de chukka hu, aane ka hai to aa nahi to main chala akela..

Aisa bol ke avinash jake gadi ke paas khada ho gaya aur piche se ye dono bhi aaye aur teeno theater par pahuche aur avinash aage jake ticket le aaya, picture shuru hone me abhi samay tha teeno bate karte huye khade ho gaye aur jab cinema hall me jane ka time hua to avinas ne ticket checker ko do tickets di aur khud baju me ho gaya aur haste huye aniket ko aankh mari

Avinash-ja anya ja jile apni jindagi

Jispar aniket hasa aur bola

Aniket-sala nautanki

Avinash-abe jao maje karo main kabab me haddi nahi banta..

Itna bol ke avinash waha se nikal gaya

Mast update hai bhai

Avinash- ab kidhar gayi himmat, sasur ka naam aate hi dur h gaye dono, kya gunda bano ge re tum

Kya dialogue bola

 

[Adirshi]

Sbse phle to maaf krna mitra ki kahani ke sath nhi chal paya beech me hi beemar ho gya tha to samay jyada lg gya tha pura half april aur may typhoid aur recovery me hi nikl gya jb tk wapas aaya to story hi completed ho gyi... Online to beemari ke dauran bhi aata tha pr jyada samay nhi de pa rha tha sbhi stories ko uske liye maafi chahta hu...pr bakai me ye story bhi lajabab rhi tumhari baki stories ki trha...jaha ye story shuru hui mastikhori se wahi iska ant ek serious note se hua...pyaar ki ek saaf paribhasha samjhate hue..ki aakhir ye pyaar shabd h kya...rishte kya koi bandhan ka mahatv kya h...dosti kya h...jb tk aapka in sbke liye aapke dil me purn samarpan aur imandari nhi h tb tk inka mahatv koi nhi smjh skta h..aur sahi maayne me iss kahani ka asli hero avinash aur heroine komal hi h...pr avinash ke vyaktitv ne to dil hi jeet liya.. Wo din jb aniket ne shravni ko propose kiya us din ne iss kahani ke sabhi characters ki zindgi hi badal di thi...us din ke baad se kahani me komal aur avi ne apni pakad bnai aur avi to kya hi kahe...uske jaisa dost aur lover koi bn hi nhi paya ..apne pyaar ki bhanak usne kisi ko nhi lgne di aur dosti nibhate nibhate pyaar ki kurbani bhi de daali. Hats off
Sabhi characters ne apna bakhubi role nibhaya aur kirdaar ko justify bhi kiya ...bahut hi hateli kahani thi ye. Mja aavi gyo...aur shadi me bulane ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad. Beemari me pde pde bhi dawat khane ka moka mil gya.
behtrin storywaiting for ur next lekhani🗡

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai and sorry for late reply

 

[Adirshi]

Nice Update dost

Maja aa gaya

Heroine ki entry ho gai sayad

Wha kya dialogue mara h

Kya bate h Komal ki dadi ko hi Marne pe tule ho

Bhai mast update hai

Nice Update dost

Kya bate h

Nice post

Nice Update dost

Komal ne to agg laga Diya

Nice Update dost

Vha komal to sadguni ban gai

Nice Update dost

Mast update hai bhai
Kya dialogue bola

shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

New story The Mirror..

 

[Adirshi]

New Story :- Uff! Ye Mohabbat !

 

[raman chopra]

Superb story

 

[Bull Wit]

Namaskar! XF ke bhaiyo aur ladkiyo, kya haal chal hai sabke hope sab apne apne gharo me hai aur mauj kar rahe hai, kaam ke bagair baahar mat jaya karo be covid khatam nahi hua hai aur aap sab jaante hai meko aap sab ki kitni chinta hai aaplog ko kuch ho gaya to mera reader kam ho jayega yaar, waise majak ki baat nahi hai ye sab log khayal rakhna apna.

sala ye to mudda hi change ho gaya ekdum se, khair to mudda ye hai dosto ki aapka ye dost ek baar fir hajir hai aapki khidmat main ek nayi kahani ke sath, ye koi thriller ya fantasy nahi hai ye aap sab kahani ke prefix se samajh hi jaye honge, utne to aap samajhdaar hai hi , wo kya hai na thriller aur fantasy likhkar ab bore ho gaya hu bas wohi khun kharaba isiliye kuch alag likhna hai ab to socha kyu na wahi se shuru kiya jaye jis prefix main apni pehli kahani likhi thi 'Romance' se.....

So here I am Presenting you a Romantic Comedy

Ek Hateli Lovestory

ab ye likhne me main kitna safal hua ye aaplog apne comment main jaroor batana to milte hai kahani ke pehle update ke sath tab tak ke liye ciao

Regards
Adirshi

बाबा तुसी तो छा गए हम भी हंसकर लोट पोट होने को तैयार बैठें हैं।