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Thriller The Girl Next Door (Hindi) - (Completed)

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First of all thank you Indian Princess madam for writing this story,,,:love:
The story has started in a very nice and interesting way. All the characters of the story have already been introduced, so it will be easy to understand the story in a better way. Till now I have read three updates of this story. In these three episodes, it is understood that the main characters of the story are Neil and Meera or there may be others. Well, whatever has happened in the story so far, it is understood that Meera is a mysterious girl who has suddenly come into Neil's married life for some purpose. She comes to Neil's neighborhood to buy a house and live. Soon Meera comes face-to-face with Neil's family. Neil learns about him that Meera is a writer and that her parents live abroad. Well after seeing Meera, Neil feels that he has seen her somewhere but at the moment he cannot remember. Meera very quickly mingles with Neil and his family. They do not know what is going to happen in their smiling life with the arrival of Meera. Meera brings a plum cake to Neil's house which Neil eats. After that when he starts having sex with his wife Aditi, his behavior changes and he hurts Aditi a lot while having sex. Later he is very surprised for his such behavior. While on the one hand Neil was upset for his behavior, on the other hand Aditi was also upset for the cruel behavior of her husband. Coincidentally, Neel once again eats the plum cake brought by Meera. After which his behavior changes completely again and he torments his wife Aditi while having sex like an animal,,,,:dazed:
After this incident, Neil decides to find out about Meera. When Meera came to ask Neil for help, Neil found a better way to know about Meera. Neil cleverly creates a new ID and talks to Meera as the godfather. Neil comes to know what kind of girl Meera is.
At the end of the update, what happened between Neil and Meera was unbelievable but that vicious smile of Meera made it a mystery. It is clear that there is something in Meera's mind which is beyond thought and imagination at the moment. Well this is just the beginning, let's see what kind of mysteries are uncovered next???? :daru:

The story is very beautiful, the story line and content of the story is also good but there were errors in words and sentences somewhere. Aisa mujhe hi lag raha hai IP madam ya aapne updates ko post karne se pahle khud padh kar edit nahi kiya??? :?:
 
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First of all thank you Indian Princess madam for writing this story,,,:love:
The story has started in a very nice and interesting way. All the characters of the story have already been introduced, so it will be easy to understand the story in a better way. Till now I have read three updates of this story. In these three episodes, it is understood that the main characters of the story are Neil and Meera or there may be others. Well, whatever has happened in the story so far, it is understood that Meera is a mysterious girl who has suddenly come into Neil's married life for some purpose. She comes to Neil's neighborhood to buy a house and live. Soon Meera comes face-to-face with Neil's family. Neil learns about him that Meera is a writer and that her parents live abroad. Well after seeing Meera, Neil feels that he has seen her somewhere but at the moment he cannot remember. Meera very quickly mingles with Neil and his family. They do not know what is going to happen in their smiling life with the arrival of Meera. Meera brings a plum cake to Neil's house which Neil eats. After that when he starts having sex with his wife Aditi, his behavior changes and he hurts Aditi a lot while having sex. Later he is very surprised for his such behavior. While on the one hand Neil was upset for his behavior, on the other hand Aditi was also upset for the cruel behavior of her husband. Coincidentally, Neel once again eats the plum cake brought by Meera. After which his behavior changes completely again and he torments his wife Aditi while having sex like an animal,,,,:dazed:
After this incident, Neil decides to find out about Meera. When Meera came to ask Neil for help, Neil found a better way to know about Meera. Neil cleverly creates a new ID and talks to Meera as the godfather. Neil comes to know what kind of girl Meera is.
At the end of the update, what happened between Neil and Meera was unbelievable but that vicious smile of Meera made it a mystery. It is clear that there is something in Meera's mind which is beyond thought and imagination at the moment. Well this is just the beginning, let's see what kind of mysteries are uncovered next???? :daru:

The story is very beautiful, the story line and content of the story is also good but there were errors in words and sentences somewhere. Aisa mujhe hi lag raha hai IP madam ya aapne updates ko post karne se pahle khud padh kar edit nahi kiya??? :?:

Thanks so musch for jor awesome review :love:

Meri hindi perfect nahi hai. Aapko itni acchi english aati hai to aap yeh story English mein padh sakte hai :D

1. The Girl Next Door
2. A Game of Chess
3. The story of Meera
4.
The search for Amairah
 
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Is kahani ko padh kar samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki is kahani ke prati apne vichaar kis tarah ke shabdo me byakt karu? Zahen me kahne ko to bahut kuch tha lekin kaha se aur kis tarah se shuru karu ye mushkil lag raha tha. Khair, sabse pahle baat karte hain Neil aur uske dosto ki:- :?:

Neil, Arman, Aarav aur Reyansh ye sab ke sab ameer log the jinki soch aur fitrat avval darze ki ghatiya thi. Dhan daulat aur taakat se ameer hone se fark nahi padta balki fark padta hai soch, nazariye aur fitrat se. Duniya me aise bhi log hote hain jo ameer ya taakatwar nahi hote lekin unki soch kuch isi tarah ki hoti hai aur wo apni ghatiya choice ke anusaar aise hi ghatiya kaam karte hain. Sawaal hai ki kya aisi soch rakhna sahi hai? Kya is soch ke sath kisi ki zindagi barbaad karna sahi hai? Kya aisi soch ke sath kisi ke jazbaato ko bedardi se kuchal dena sahi hai? Aakhir log itne andhe aur itne patthar dil kyo ho jate hain jisse kisi ki pavitra bhavnaao ka hanan ho jaye ya kisi ki aatma tak dukhi ho jaye? Ye aise sawaal athwa khayaal hain jinke bare me sabke vichaar alag alag ho sakte hain. Khair jo bhi ho lekin aisi soch aisi fitrat kisi ki bhi nahi honi chahiye. Neil aur uske dosto ke prati mere andar bhi theek waisi hi ghrina gussa aur nafrat paida huyi jaise ki meera ke andar thi. Usne in logo ke sath jo bhi kiya wo kahi se bhi galat nahi tha,,,,:yes2:

Meera:- Ek aisi ladki jiska is duniya me naina ke siwa koi nahi tha. Jab use pata chala ki use pyar karne wali naina didi ne kin paristhitiyo me apni jaan de di hai to uske man me Neil aur uske dosto ke prati zahar bhar gaya. Halaaki un logo ne uske sath bhi bahut bura salook kiya lekin vidhi ke lekh ko bhala wo kaise mita sakte the? Waqt guzra, halaat badle aur fir 13 saal baad apraadhiyo ka bura waqt shuru hua. Ek aisa bura waqt jisme meera ka bhayawah intkaam chhupa hua tha. Jin logo ne uske aur uski naina didi ke sath amanweeyata ka har kukarm kiya tha unki zindagiyo ko ek ek kar ke usne nestanaboot kar diya. Meera ne jis tareeke se aur jis haalat me ye sab kiya wo hairatangez to tha hi lekin jayaz bhi tha,,,,:approve:

Storyline & Writer:- Madam ki jo tareef suni thi wo bewajah nahi thi. Kahne ka matlab ye ki indian princess madam ne gazab ki kahani likhi jisme pyar tha, emotion tha, tragedy thi, nafrat thi aur uchch level ka revenge tha jo ek achhi kahani me hona chahiye. Jaha tak bhasha shaili aur dialogue delivery ki baat hai to wo mujhe bilkul western type lagi. Ho sakta hai ki ye English me likhi gayi story ka anuvaad karne se hua ho ya fir madam khud hi western ho. :DKahani me sab kuch perfect tha. Har baat ko suniyojit dhang se sahi jagah par fit kiya gaya tha. Is kahani me sabse zyada mujhe meera aur naina ke kirdaar ne prabhavit kiya. Neil aur uske dost aaakthooooo,,,,:buttkick:

Naina:- Ek aisi ladki jo apne mata pita ke marne ke baad duniya me akeli rah gayi. Kahne ko to pariwar me uske chacha chachi the lekin wo apne ho kar bhi begaane the. Uska agar koi apna tha to wo thi naukraani ki beti meenu urf meera jise wo apni chhoti bahan maan kar behad pyar karti thi. Uske liye usne wo sab kuch kiya jo ek badi bahan ko karna chahiye tha. Ise uska durbhaagya hi kahenge ki use Neil se bepanaah ishq hua aur us ishq ne use sirf dukh hi diye. Apni aakhiri saans tak wo sirf pyar ke liye hi tarasti rahi lekin uska dil itna paak tha ki usne kabhi apne mahboob par koi ilzaam nahi lagaya. Naina ke dwara Neil ko kahe gaye wo aakhiri waakya itne sanjeeda aur itne emotions se bhare huye the ki unhone Neil ke patthar dil ko bhale hi na pighla paye ho lekin meri aankho ko nam zarur kar diya.:cry2:Aaj ki duniya me agar sabse zyada kisi cheez ka patan ho raha hai to wo isi cheez ka hai, yaani pyar aur mohabbat ka. Aaj kal log is pyar ko bewajah aur bematlab samajhte hain jabki duniya ka sabse bada sach yahi hai ki isi pyar ki vajah se duniya ka vajood kaayam hai. Pata nahi log kyo apne andar se dusro ke prati pavitra jazbaato ko khatm karte ja rahe hain??? :verysad:

Naina ke sath jo kuch bhi hua wo har tarah se amanveeya tha. Us masoom ne to aakhiri saans tak sirf is liye itne kast sahe taaki Neil use apna bana sake, taaki wo Neil ki ho sake aur Neil ne kya kiya??? Baad marne ke agar kisi ki ahmiyat ka ehsaas ho to kya usse kuch haasil ho jata hai?? Naina ki haalat aur uske nishchhal prem ko padh kar man bahut dravit hua. Kisi ko mohabbat me jab aisa koi dard milta hai to ek dard idhar bhi hara ho jata hai. Naina ke kirdaar ko jaan kar uske bare me mere zahen me chand aisi lines ubhar aayi hain jinhe main yaha par ghazal ke roop me byakt karna chahuga,,,,:innocent:


तुम्हारी हर अदा को अहदे-वफ़ा कह दिया मैंने।
अजीब रोग़ है इश्क़, इसे नशा कह दिया मैंने।।

हर उम्मीद फक़त तुमसे ही कायम थी सनम,
दिल के टुकड़े हुए तो नसीब को बुरा कह दिया मैंने।।

तुम्हें टूट कर चाहूं और तुम पर निसार हो जाऊं,
किसी और को नहीं, तुम्हें खुदा कह दिया मैंने।।

मेरे बाद कभी तुम पर कोई इल्ज़ाम न आए,
यही सोच कर खुद को बेवफ़ा कह दिया मैंने।।

क्यों भला नसीबों से कोई शिकवा गिला करना,
ऐसी ज़िन्दगी को फक़त बद्दुआ कह दिया मैंने।।

शुक्रिया कुछ पल के साथ के लिए मगर अब,

जीने की आरज़ू नहीं सो अलविदा कह दिया मैंने।।

Outstanding story Indian Princess madam and now I will start reading the next part of this story,,,,:yo:
 

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Is kahani ko padh kar samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki is kahani ke prati apne vichaar kis tarah ke shabdo me byakt karu? Zahen me kahne ko to bahut kuch tha lekin kaha se aur kis tarah se shuru karu ye mushkil lag raha tha. Khair, sabse pahle baat karte hain Neil aur uske dosto ki:- :?:

Neil, Arman, Aarav aur Reyansh ye sab ke sab ameer log the jinki soch aur fitrat avval darze ki ghatiya thi. Dhan daulat aur taakat se ameer hone se fark nahi padta balki fark padta hai soch, nazariye aur fitrat se. Duniya me aise bhi log hote hain jo ameer ya taakatwar nahi hote lekin unki soch kuch isi tarah ki hoti hai aur wo apni ghatiya choice ke anusaar aise hi ghatiya kaam karte hain. Sawaal hai ki kya aisi soch rakhna sahi hai? Kya is soch ke sath kisi ki zindagi barbaad karna sahi hai? Kya aisi soch ke sath kisi ke jazbaato ko bedardi se kuchal dena sahi hai? Aakhir log itne andhe aur itne patthar dil kyo ho jate hain jisse kisi ki pavitra bhavnaao ka hanan ho jaye ya kisi ki aatma tak dukhi ho jaye? Ye aise sawaal athwa khayaal hain jinke bare me sabke vichaar alag alag ho sakte hain. Khair jo bhi ho lekin aisi soch aisi fitrat kisi ki bhi nahi honi chahiye. Neil aur uske dosto ke prati mere andar bhi theek waisi hi ghrina gussa aur nafrat paida huyi jaise ki meera ke andar thi. Usne in logo ke sath jo bhi kiya wo kahi se bhi galat nahi tha,,,,:yes2:

Meera:- Ek aisi ladki jiska is duniya me naina ke siwa koi nahi tha. Jab use pata chala ki use pyar karne wali naina didi ne kin paristhitiyo me apni jaan de di hai to uske man me Neil aur uske dosto ke prati zahar bhar gaya. Halaaki un logo ne uske sath bhi bahut bura salook kiya lekin vidhi ke lekh ko bhala wo kaise mita sakte the? Waqt guzra, halaat badle aur fir 13 saal baad apraadhiyo ka bura waqt shuru hua. Ek aisa bura waqt jisme meera ka bhayawah intkaam chhupa hua tha. Jin logo ne uske aur uski naina didi ke sath amanweeyata ka har kukarm kiya tha unki zindagiyo ko ek ek kar ke usne nestanaboot kar diya. Meera ne jis tareeke se aur jis haalat me ye sab kiya wo hairatangez to tha hi lekin jayaz bhi tha,,,,:approve:

Storyline & Writer:- Madam ki jo tareef suni thi wo bewajah nahi thi. Kahne ka matlab ye ki indian princess madam ne gazab ki kahani likhi jisme pyar tha, emotion tha, tragedy thi, nafrat thi aur uchch level ka revenge tha jo ek achhi kahani me hona chahiye. Jaha tak bhasha shaili aur dialogue delivery ki baat hai to wo mujhe bilkul western type lagi. Ho sakta hai ki ye English me likhi gayi story ka anuvaad karne se hua ho ya fir madam khud hi western ho. :DKahani me sab kuch perfect tha. Har baat ko suniyojit dhang se sahi jagah par fit kiya gaya tha. Is kahani me sabse zyada mujhe meera aur naina ke kirdaar ne prabhavit kiya. Neil aur uske dost aaakthooooo,,,,:buttkick:

Naina:- Ek aisi ladki jo apne mata pita ke marne ke baad duniya me akeli rah gayi. Kahne ko to pariwar me uske chacha chachi the lekin wo apne ho kar bhi begaane the. Uska agar koi apna tha to wo thi naukraani ki beti meenu urf meera jise wo apni chhoti bahan maan kar behad pyar karti thi. Uske liye usne wo sab kuch kiya jo ek badi bahan ko karna chahiye tha. Ise uska durbhaagya hi kahenge ki use Neil se bepanaah ishq hua aur us ishq ne use sirf dukh hi diye. Apni aakhiri saans tak wo sirf pyar ke liye hi tarasti rahi lekin uska dil itna paak tha ki usne kabhi apne mahboob par koi ilzaam nahi lagaya. Naina ke dwara Neil ko kahe gaye wo aakhiri waakya itne sanjeeda aur itne emotions se bhare huye the ki unhone Neil ke patthar dil ko bhale hi na pighla paye ho lekin meri aankho ko nam zarur kar diya.:cry2:Aaj ki duniya me agar sabse zyada kisi cheez ka patan ho raha hai to wo isi cheez ka hai, yaani pyar aur mohabbat ka. Aaj kal log is pyar ko bewajah aur bematlab samajhte hain jabki duniya ka sabse bada sach yahi hai ki isi pyar ki vajah se duniya ka vajood kaayam hai. Pata nahi log kyo apne andar se dusro ke prati pavitra jazbaato ko khatm karte ja rahe hain??? :verysad:

Naina ke sath jo kuch bhi hua wo har tarah se amanveeya tha. Us masoom ne to aakhiri saans tak sirf is liye itne kast sahe taaki Neil use apna bana sake, taaki wo Neil ki ho sake aur Neil ne kya kiya??? Baad marne ke agar kisi ki ahmiyat ka ehsaas ho to kya usse kuch haasil ho jata hai?? Naina ki haalat aur uske nishchhal prem ko padh kar man bahut dravit hua. Kisi ko mohabbat me jab aisa koi dard milta hai to ek dard idhar bhi hara ho jata hai. Naina ke kirdaar ko jaan kar uske bare me mere zahen me chand aisi lines ubhar aayi hain jinhe main yaha par ghazal ke roop me byakt karna chahuga,,,,:innocent:


तुम्हारी हर अदा को अहदे-वफ़ा कह दिया मैंने।
अजीब रोग़ है इश्क़, इसे नशा कह दिया मैंने।।

हर उम्मीद फक़त तुमसे ही कायम थी सनम,
दिल के टुकड़े हुए तो नसीब को बुरा कह दिया मैंने।।

तुम्हें टूट कर चाहूं और तुम पर निसार हो जाऊं,
किसी और को नहीं, तुम्हें खुदा कह दिया मैंने।।

मेरे बाद कभी तुम पर कोई इल्ज़ाम न आए,
यही सोच कर खुद को बेवफ़ा कह दिया मैंने।।

क्यों भला नसीबों से कोई शिकवा गिला करना,
ऐसी ज़िन्दगी को फक़त बद्दुआ कह दिया मैंने।।

शुक्रिया कुछ पल के साथ के लिए मगर अब,

जीने की आरज़ू नहीं सो अलविदा कह दिया मैंने।।

Outstanding story Indian Princess madam and now I will start reading the next part of this story,,,,:yo:

Thanks for such detailed and awesome review :thanks:
 
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Is kahani ko padh kar samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki is kahani ke prati apne vichaar kis tarah ke shabdo me byakt karu? Zahen me kahne ko to bahut kuch tha lekin kaha se aur kis tarah se shuru karu ye mushkil lag raha tha. Khair, sabse pahle baat karte hain Neil aur uske dosto ki:- :?:

Neil, Arman, Aarav aur Reyansh ye sab ke sab ameer log the jinki soch aur fitrat avval darze ki ghatiya thi. Dhan daulat aur taakat se ameer hone se fark nahi padta balki fark padta hai soch, nazariye aur fitrat se. Duniya me aise bhi log hote hain jo ameer ya taakatwar nahi hote lekin unki soch kuch isi tarah ki hoti hai aur wo apni ghatiya choice ke anusaar aise hi ghatiya kaam karte hain. Sawaal hai ki kya aisi soch rakhna sahi hai? Kya is soch ke sath kisi ki zindagi barbaad karna sahi hai? Kya aisi soch ke sath kisi ke jazbaato ko bedardi se kuchal dena sahi hai? Aakhir log itne andhe aur itne patthar dil kyo ho jate hain jisse kisi ki pavitra bhavnaao ka hanan ho jaye ya kisi ki aatma tak dukhi ho jaye? Ye aise sawaal athwa khayaal hain jinke bare me sabke vichaar alag alag ho sakte hain. Khair jo bhi ho lekin aisi soch aisi fitrat kisi ki bhi nahi honi chahiye. Neil aur uske dosto ke prati mere andar bhi theek waisi hi ghrina gussa aur nafrat paida huyi jaise ki meera ke andar thi. Usne in logo ke sath jo bhi kiya wo kahi se bhi galat nahi tha,,,,:yes2:

Meera:- Ek aisi ladki jiska is duniya me naina ke siwa koi nahi tha. Jab use pata chala ki use pyar karne wali naina didi ne kin paristhitiyo me apni jaan de di hai to uske man me Neil aur uske dosto ke prati zahar bhar gaya. Halaaki un logo ne uske sath bhi bahut bura salook kiya lekin vidhi ke lekh ko bhala wo kaise mita sakte the? Waqt guzra, halaat badle aur fir 13 saal baad apraadhiyo ka bura waqt shuru hua. Ek aisa bura waqt jisme meera ka bhayawah intkaam chhupa hua tha. Jin logo ne uske aur uski naina didi ke sath amanweeyata ka har kukarm kiya tha unki zindagiyo ko ek ek kar ke usne nestanaboot kar diya. Meera ne jis tareeke se aur jis haalat me ye sab kiya wo hairatangez to tha hi lekin jayaz bhi tha,,,,:approve:

Storyline & Writer:- Madam ki jo tareef suni thi wo bewajah nahi thi. Kahne ka matlab ye ki indian princess madam ne gazab ki kahani likhi jisme pyar tha, emotion tha, tragedy thi, nafrat thi aur uchch level ka revenge tha jo ek achhi kahani me hona chahiye. Jaha tak bhasha shaili aur dialogue delivery ki baat hai to wo mujhe bilkul western type lagi. Ho sakta hai ki ye English me likhi gayi story ka anuvaad karne se hua ho ya fir madam khud hi western ho. :DKahani me sab kuch perfect tha. Har baat ko suniyojit dhang se sahi jagah par fit kiya gaya tha. Is kahani me sabse zyada mujhe meera aur naina ke kirdaar ne prabhavit kiya. Neil aur uske dost aaakthooooo,,,,:buttkick:

Naina:- Ek aisi ladki jo apne mata pita ke marne ke baad duniya me akeli rah gayi. Kahne ko to pariwar me uske chacha chachi the lekin wo apne ho kar bhi begaane the. Uska agar koi apna tha to wo thi naukraani ki beti meenu urf meera jise wo apni chhoti bahan maan kar behad pyar karti thi. Uske liye usne wo sab kuch kiya jo ek badi bahan ko karna chahiye tha. Ise uska durbhaagya hi kahenge ki use Neil se bepanaah ishq hua aur us ishq ne use sirf dukh hi diye. Apni aakhiri saans tak wo sirf pyar ke liye hi tarasti rahi lekin uska dil itna paak tha ki usne kabhi apne mahboob par koi ilzaam nahi lagaya. Naina ke dwara Neil ko kahe gaye wo aakhiri waakya itne sanjeeda aur itne emotions se bhare huye the ki unhone Neil ke patthar dil ko bhale hi na pighla paye ho lekin meri aankho ko nam zarur kar diya.:cry2:Aaj ki duniya me agar sabse zyada kisi cheez ka patan ho raha hai to wo isi cheez ka hai, yaani pyar aur mohabbat ka. Aaj kal log is pyar ko bewajah aur bematlab samajhte hain jabki duniya ka sabse bada sach yahi hai ki isi pyar ki vajah se duniya ka vajood kaayam hai. Pata nahi log kyo apne andar se dusro ke prati pavitra jazbaato ko khatm karte ja rahe hain??? :verysad:

Naina ke sath jo kuch bhi hua wo har tarah se amanveeya tha. Us masoom ne to aakhiri saans tak sirf is liye itne kast sahe taaki Neil use apna bana sake, taaki wo Neil ki ho sake aur Neil ne kya kiya??? Baad marne ke agar kisi ki ahmiyat ka ehsaas ho to kya usse kuch haasil ho jata hai?? Naina ki haalat aur uske nishchhal prem ko padh kar man bahut dravit hua. Kisi ko mohabbat me jab aisa koi dard milta hai to ek dard idhar bhi hara ho jata hai. Naina ke kirdaar ko jaan kar uske bare me mere zahen me chand aisi lines ubhar aayi hain jinhe main yaha par ghazal ke roop me byakt karna chahuga,,,,:innocent:


तुम्हारी हर अदा को अहदे-वफ़ा कह दिया मैंने।
अजीब रोग़ है इश्क़, इसे नशा कह दिया मैंने।।

हर उम्मीद फक़त तुमसे ही कायम थी सनम,
दिल के टुकड़े हुए तो नसीब को बुरा कह दिया मैंने।।

तुम्हें टूट कर चाहूं और तुम पर निसार हो जाऊं,
किसी और को नहीं, तुम्हें खुदा कह दिया मैंने।।

मेरे बाद कभी तुम पर कोई इल्ज़ाम न आए,
यही सोच कर खुद को बेवफ़ा कह दिया मैंने।।

क्यों भला नसीबों से कोई शिकवा गिला करना,
ऐसी ज़िन्दगी को फक़त बद्दुआ कह दिया मैंने।।

शुक्रिया कुछ पल के साथ के लिए मगर अब,

जीने की आरज़ू नहीं सो अलविदा कह दिया मैंने।।

Outstanding story Indian Princess madam and now I will start reading the next part of this story,,,,:yo:
Outstanding review Shubham bhai.
 
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Outstanding review Shubham bhai.
Indian Princess madam ki is kahani ne dil ko chhu liya bhaiya ji aur naina ke nishchhal prem ne aisa asar kiya ki ek Ghazal likh daali maine. Ye alag baat hai ki meri likhi ghazal ke bare me na to aapne koi pratikriya di aur na hi madam ne,,,,:beee:
 
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