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Update-6(The Devil Cannot Be Killed)
at last ye confirmed hogaya the Devil's favorite demon ,the hand of death, the incounter specialist Viren Chaudhary maara gaya tha...
Ussi din Gupta ne apne influence se Jaldbaaji mein Death certificate banwaadiya Viren kaa or us black money k saare documents usse Viren ki tijori mein millgaye Jo ussi ne rakhe they...usne saare documents or woh death certificate Mukesh ko diya or paise lekar Viren k ghar par he millane ko kahaa...Mukesh ko kareb 3 ghantey lage pura paper work complete karne mein or at last pure 100 crore 3 bade bags mein bharke woh taiyaar tha...in cash can you imagine 100 crore cash se bharre bags Mukesh toh itana paisa dekh chamak gaya tha...
(((Harr ek bank mein aisi black money k liye lockers hotey hain woh uss black money ko police or CBI ki najron se bachaakar apne pass rakhtey hain or apna commision kamatey hain aise he viren ne bhi iss bank k puraane manager or ceose mill kar apna kuch kaala paisa iss bank mein jama karwaaya tha or uske documents banwaaliye they..Gupta Jo ki Viren kaa sathi tHA or uske baad wahi uss paise kaa legally holder tha bank k rules k hissab se kyunki Viren ne ussi kaa naam daala tha because woh usse bahot jyaada trust karta tha...))))
Woh paise or ek gun lekar (Jo usane kal he ek dealer se kharide thi) Mukesh apni gaadi se Viren k ghar pohancha ....jahaa Gupta usse milla dono ne Millkar bags utaare because bahot bade bags they..andar Gupta ne 3no bags khole 2000 or 500 k notes se khachaa-khach bharre bags they teeno ki aankhein khulli ki khulli rehgayi...
Wohlog paise ko ghurr he rahe they ki dhaddam karke gate par ek waar hua or turant gate ki kundi tutti or darwaaja sapaat khullgaya sabne chownk kar uss taraf dekha toh abhi jitana excitement paison ko dekh kar tha utana he shock unhe Darwaaje par khadde shaks ko dekh kar hua saamne Viren khadda tha ...Misha k munh se toh cheekh nikal gayi Viren ko dekh kar .....unlog k toh devta kuch kar gaye Gupta ne hath mein Jo paison ki gaddi uthaai thi woh niche girrgayi.....
Viren-""""bhago bhenchod bhoot aaya'""
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Ye kehkar Viren andar enter hua....
Viren-humein toh apno ne loota gairon mein kya khaak dum tha humaari toh kisshti thi dubbi wahaan bhenchod jahaan paani he naa tha... khuss toh nahi lag rahe tumlog mujhe dekhkar....
Gupta or Mukesh ne turant apni guns Viren par taandi....Or Mukesh k pass gun dekh Gupta bhi chownka...
Viren-hahaha aise matt chownk Gupta jaise tu ye bandukk Mukesh or Misha ko Marne k liye laaya hai waise he ye bandukk Mukesh tujhe or Misha ko Marne k liye laaya hai...
Ye sun woh teeno chownkey...
Misha-kya...
Viren-bhenchod mera paisa salla aaj dikha mujhe itane time baad....
Gupta-hath uppar warna thokdunga...
Viren-guptaji yeda samjha hai kya...
Ye suntey he ek shaks enter hua or woh dono jabtak uski taraf mudtey usase pehle he Gupta k hath par Viren ne laatdi or Mukesh k hath par uss shakss ne Goli daagdi bandukk par silencer lagaa tha kyunki awaaj naa aai or undono k hath se guns chutt gayi or turant Viren ne unpar apni guns taandi...
Viren-Haanji sir boliye...
Woh shaks koi or nahi underworld kaa killer Raka tha..Jo viren k sath milla tha....
Viren-ohh behan k bhai chilla matt Goli lagi hai koi topp naa chal gaya tujhpar...
Thodi derr mein Mukesh normal hua...uske munh se bus itana he nikala "HOW""
Viren-Abe halwa hai kya labdulog Viren naam hai mera bhencho tumhe kya laga tumlog dhoka de doge toh Viren haar jaaega Abe tumjaise 36 ghumme hain mere pass... Misha tujhpar toh mujhe pehle se he shakk hogaya tha jab uss din Maine.2 coffee mugs dekhe tune kahaa Ek mamta kaa hai tabhich mujhe yaad aaya ki Mamta Mousi toh Chaay coffee kabhi peeti he nahi... Fir mera maatha thanka ki BC tu juth kaahe bolli..fir woh tera perfume I mean tera nahi Mukesh kaa perfume jiski baans pure ghar mein aati hai par bedroom mein nahi aai jabki perfume toh tu wahich lagaati hai ussi din mujhe shakk hua par Maine ye kehtey hue baat taal di ki mujhe daru peeni hai...fir tere sone k baad Maine pura ghar chaan maara lekin waisa koi perfume mujhe pure ghar mein milla he nahi...fir toh mera shakk yakin mein badal gaya main kuch or jaankaari nikalata usase pehle Gupta ne mujhe uljhaa diya usne mujhe kaha ki woh mera kaam bhulgaya Jo ki lagbhag impossible tha Gupta mera kaam kabhi nahi bhulshakta fir Maine Sekhar sir se baat kari toh unhone mujhe bataaya ki unhone toh Gupta ko koi kaam nahi bolla hai mera maatha fir se thankaa mujhe ye pata chall gaya tha ki tumlog mujhe dhoka de rahe ho par ye nahi pata tha ki dono ek sath mille ho ye mujhe meri juthi moutt k pichle din pata challa jab Maine tum dono k phone records nikalwaae Jo kudratti ek sath meri table par aae or Maine jab dono dekha toh mujhe ek baat kaafi ajeeb lagi woh tha ek phone no. Jo no doubt iss manager kaa tha uss time main ghumm gaya ki bhencho ye common no. Kaa kya chakkar hai fir maine uss no. ka address nikala toh main raatko chupke se uske ghar gaya andar ghussa toh mujhe kuch ajeeb laga or guess what woh ajeeb cheej thi woh perfume jo uss pure ghar mein faili thi ussi time main samjh gaya ki tera or misha kaa chakkar hai or wahin se mujhe bank k documents mille or tere I'd cards jissase ye Saaf hua ki tum bank manager ho ab jab Maine dimag chalaaya toh ye saamne aaya ki Gupta tujhe kyun milla paison k liye fir main wahaan se aagaya or mere shakk ko confirm kiya tere bank k CEO ne woh bola Viren bhai ye ek manager aapke paise nikalwaana caahta hai mujhe 5% kaa laalach deraha hai ...tujhe kya laga be tu logon ko khareedlega woh bhi moutt k khilaaf waah re waah paison se uppar jindagi hove hai...uske baad toh sab confirm hogaya thoda jhatka toh laga mujhe par sambhall gaya pencho tum do log ko he toh trust karta tha main or tumlog dhoka diye ye nahi chalega "ee naa cholbey"" ....uske baad fir Shakeel aaya BC tujhe kya laga tu shakeel ko mere khilaaf kar shakta hai salla mere naam se mutt deta hai woh or tu usko mere khilaaf leke aaya waah re waah woh rota padta girrta uthata mere pass aaya or bataaya bhai Gupta aapke khilaaf planning kar raha hai..fir Raka aya ye bhi toh apna he chella hai underworld se hai toh kya hua fattati toh iski bhi hai apan se toh fir maine socha ki salla paisa toh nikale kam se kam ye plan tumhaara gajab laga mujhe salla bina kuch kiye saare paise black k white hogaye income tax wallon ki najar mein Maine koi paisa nahi nikaala or aakhirkaar saara paisa mere pass...
Viren-Bilkul bhi sad naa hun afun Gupta ko pata hai Marne walla hai isliye woh chup chaap baitha hai koi chance naa hai bachne kaa or tumlog ko lagraha hai ki shayad main s khaajaaun tumpar...
Misha-viren please meri baat.....
Woh aage kuch bolta usase pehle viren ne uski khopadi kholadi orr ussi waqt Raka ne in dono ki khopadiyaan bhi khol di....
Viren cahe jitana cool rehney ki koshish kar raha ho lekin ab uski aankhon mein bhi aansu aagaye they.....uska sabkuch they woh dono or unn dono ne hehe laallach mein aakar usko tapkaane kaa plan banaya...paisa badi kutti cheej hoti hai jiske pass hota hai woh Bachaane k liye rota or jiske pass nahu hota woh paane k liye rota par rota jarur...
Greed Always Pays off...
Viren-sambhaal Lena be raka...
Raka-aapka naam nahi aaega bhai....
दिल का दर्द एक राज बनकर रह गया,
मेरा भरोसा मजाक बनकर रह गया,
दिल के सोदागरो से दिललगी कर बैठे,
शायद इसीलिए मेरा प्यार इक अल्फाज बनकर रह गया।......
The End....
Update-6(The Devil Cannot Be Killed)
at last ye confirmed hogaya the Devil's favorite demon ,the hand of death, the incounter specialist Viren Chaudhary maara gaya tha...
Ussi din Gupta ne apne influence se Jaldbaaji mein Death certificate banwaadiya Viren kaa or us black money k saare documents usse Viren ki tijori mein millgaye Jo ussi ne rakhe they...usne saare documents or woh death certificate Mukesh ko diya or paise lekar Viren k ghar par he millane ko kahaa...Mukesh ko kareb 3 ghantey lage pura paper work complete karne mein or at last pure 100 crore 3 bade bags mein bharke woh taiyaar tha...in cash can you imagine 100 crore cash se bharre bags Mukesh toh itana paisa dekh chamak gaya tha...
(((Harr ek bank mein aisi black money k liye lockers hotey hain woh uss black money ko police or CBI ki najron se bachaakar apne pass rakhtey hain or apna commision kamatey hain aise he viren ne bhi iss bank k puraane manager or ceose mill kar apna kuch kaala paisa iss bank mein jama karwaaya tha or uske documents banwaaliye they..Gupta Jo ki Viren kaa sathi tHA or uske baad wahi uss paise kaa legally holder tha bank k rules k hissab se kyunki Viren ne ussi kaa naam daala tha because woh usse bahot jyaada trust karta tha...))))
Woh paise or ek gun lekar (Jo usane kal he ek dealer se kharide thi) Mukesh apni gaadi se Viren k ghar pohancha ....jahaa Gupta usse milla dono ne Millkar bags utaare because bahot bade bags they..andar Gupta ne 3no bags khole 2000 or 500 k notes se khachaa-khach bharre bags they teeno ki aankhein khulli ki khulli rehgayi...
Wohlog paise ko ghurr he rahe they ki dhaddam karke gate par ek waar hua or turant gate ki kundi tutti or darwaaja sapaat khullgaya sabne chownk kar uss taraf dekha toh abhi jitana excitement paison ko dekh kar tha utana he shock unhe Darwaaje par khadde shaks ko dekh kar hua saamne Viren khadda tha ...Misha k munh se toh cheekh nikal gayi Viren ko dekh kar .....unlog k toh devta kuch kar gaye Gupta ne hath mein Jo paison ki gaddi uthaai thi woh niche girrgayi.....
Viren-""""bhago bhenchod bhoot aaya'""
...Ye kehkar Viren andar enter hua....
Viren-humein toh apno ne loota gairon mein kya khaak dum tha humaari toh kisshti thi dubbi wahaan bhenchod jahaan paani he naa tha... khuss toh nahi lag rahe tumlog mujhe dekhkar....
Gupta or Mukesh ne turant apni guns Viren par taandi....Or Mukesh k pass gun dekh Gupta bhi chownka...
Viren-hahaha aise matt chownk Gupta jaise tu ye bandukk Mukesh or Misha ko Marne k liye laaya hai waise he ye bandukk Mukesh tujhe or Misha ko Marne k liye laaya hai...
Ye sun woh teeno chownkey...
Misha-kya...
Viren-bhenchod mera paisa salla aaj dikha mujhe itane time baad....
Gupta-hath uppar warna thokdunga...
Viren-guptaji yeda samjha hai kya...
Ye suntey he ek shaks enter hua or woh dono jabtak uski taraf mudtey usase pehle he Gupta k hath par Viren ne laatdi or Mukesh k hath par uss shakss ne Goli daagdi bandukk par silencer lagaa tha kyunki awaaj naa aai or undono k hath se guns chutt gayi or turant Viren ne unpar apni guns taandi...
Viren-Haanji sir boliye...
Woh shaks koi or nahi underworld kaa killer Raka tha..Jo viren k sath milla tha....
Viren-ohh behan k bhai chilla matt Goli lagi hai koi topp naa chal gaya tujhpar...
Thodi derr mein Mukesh normal hua...uske munh se bus itana he nikala "HOW""
Viren-Abe halwa hai kya labdulog Viren naam hai mera bhencho tumhe kya laga tumlog dhoka de doge toh Viren haar jaaega Abe tumjaise 36 ghumme hain mere pass... Misha tujhpar toh mujhe pehle se he shakk hogaya tha jab uss din Maine.2 coffee mugs dekhe tune kahaa Ek mamta kaa hai tabhich mujhe yaad aaya ki Mamta Mousi toh Chaay coffee kabhi peeti he nahi... Fir mera maatha thanka ki BC tu juth kaahe bolli..fir woh tera perfume I mean tera nahi Mukesh kaa perfume jiski baans pure ghar mein aati hai par bedroom mein nahi aai jabki perfume toh tu wahich lagaati hai ussi din mujhe shakk hua par Maine ye kehtey hue baat taal di ki mujhe daru peeni hai...fir tere sone k baad Maine pura ghar chaan maara lekin waisa koi perfume mujhe pure ghar mein milla he nahi...fir toh mera shakk yakin mein badal gaya main kuch or jaankaari nikalata usase pehle Gupta ne mujhe uljhaa diya usne mujhe kaha ki woh mera kaam bhulgaya Jo ki lagbhag impossible tha Gupta mera kaam kabhi nahi bhulshakta fir Maine Sekhar sir se baat kari toh unhone mujhe bataaya ki unhone toh Gupta ko koi kaam nahi bolla hai mera maatha fir se thankaa mujhe ye pata chall gaya tha ki tumlog mujhe dhoka de rahe ho par ye nahi pata tha ki dono ek sath mille ho ye mujhe meri juthi moutt k pichle din pata challa jab Maine tum dono k phone records nikalwaae Jo kudratti ek sath meri table par aae or Maine jab dono dekha toh mujhe ek baat kaafi ajeeb lagi woh tha ek phone no. Jo no doubt iss manager kaa tha uss time main ghumm gaya ki bhencho ye common no. Kaa kya chakkar hai fir maine uss no. ka address nikala toh main raatko chupke se uske ghar gaya andar ghussa toh mujhe kuch ajeeb laga or guess what woh ajeeb cheej thi woh perfume jo uss pure ghar mein faili thi ussi time main samjh gaya ki tera or misha kaa chakkar hai or wahin se mujhe bank k documents mille or tere I'd cards jissase ye Saaf hua ki tum bank manager ho ab jab Maine dimag chalaaya toh ye saamne aaya ki Gupta tujhe kyun milla paison k liye fir main wahaan se aagaya or mere shakk ko confirm kiya tere bank k CEO ne woh bola Viren bhai ye ek manager aapke paise nikalwaana caahta hai mujhe 5% kaa laalach deraha hai ...tujhe kya laga be tu logon ko khareedlega woh bhi moutt k khilaaf waah re waah paison se uppar jindagi hove hai...uske baad toh sab confirm hogaya thoda jhatka toh laga mujhe par sambhall gaya pencho tum do log ko he toh trust karta tha main or tumlog dhoka diye ye nahi chalega "ee naa cholbey"" ....uske baad fir Shakeel aaya BC tujhe kya laga tu shakeel ko mere khilaaf kar shakta hai salla mere naam se mutt deta hai woh or tu usko mere khilaaf leke aaya waah re waah woh rota padta girrta uthata mere pass aaya or bataaya bhai Gupta aapke khilaaf planning kar raha hai..fir Raka aya ye bhi toh apna he chella hai underworld se hai toh kya hua fattati toh iski bhi hai apan se toh fir maine socha ki salla paisa toh nikale kam se kam ye plan tumhaara gajab laga mujhe salla bina kuch kiye saare paise black k white hogaye income tax wallon ki najar mein Maine koi paisa nahi nikaala or aakhirkaar saara paisa mere pass...
Viren-Bilkul bhi sad naa hun afun Gupta ko pata hai Marne walla hai isliye woh chup chaap baitha hai koi chance naa hai bachne kaa or tumlog ko lagraha hai ki shayad main s khaajaaun tumpar...
Misha-viren please meri baat.....
Woh aage kuch bolta usase pehle viren ne uski khopadi kholadi orr ussi waqt Raka ne in dono ki khopadiyaan bhi khol di....
Viren cahe jitana cool rehney ki koshish kar raha ho lekin ab uski aankhon mein bhi aansu aagaye they.....uska sabkuch they woh dono or unn dono ne hehe laallach mein aakar usko tapkaane kaa plan banaya...paisa badi kutti cheej hoti hai jiske pass hota hai woh Bachaane k liye rota or jiske pass nahu hota woh paane k liye rota par rota jarur...
Greed Always Pays off...
Viren-sambhaal Lena be raka...
Raka-aapka naam nahi aaega bhai....
दिल का दर्द एक राज बनकर रह गया,
मेरा भरोसा मजाक बनकर रह गया,
दिल के सोदागरो से दिललगी कर बैठे,
शायद इसीलिए मेरा प्यार इक अल्फाज बनकर रह गया।......
The End....
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RE: Greed Always Pays Off...(Short Story By AP 316)
Superb ending bhai....hum sab kuch aur soch rahe the aur hua kuch aur....sala viren sab janta tha...par kisiko is bat ka ehsas bhi nahi hone diya...ab bhai wah life ho to aisi ko bhi jaldi restart karo...
Superb ending bhai....hum sab kuch aur soch rahe the aur hua kuch aur....sala viren sab janta tha...par kisiko is bat ka ehsas bhi nahi hone diya...ab bhai wah life ho to aisi ko bhi jaldi restart karo...
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Gajab ki ending thi, bilkul unexpected 
RE: Greed Always Pays Off...(Short Story By AP 316)
Very sad nice ending but really very nice story
Very sad nice ending but really very nice story
