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RE: Greed Always Pays Off...(Short Story By AP 316)
Mast waat laga ke rakh di shakeel ke londo ki wah maza aa gaya. Naya thread naya site but apna purana lonfa AP wow bada deadly combination bana hain.
Mast waat laga ke rakh di shakeel ke londo ki wah maza aa gaya. Naya thread naya site but apna purana lonfa AP wow bada deadly combination bana hain.
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Assassin said:Update 2 and 3
Gajab bas Gajab, is baar story me Viren ki life normal par thodi hatke dikhayi hemarried he par interested nahi he, koi pichha kar raha he par parwah nahi he
encounters ke credit ki bhi parwah nahi he
totally different story
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Assassin said:Ahahaaha
Sanp se dushmani nikalne ke liye dusre Sanp ne nevale se dosti kar li :friends:
Aur bhai paisa matlab title ko sach he kar ke rahega AP bawa "Greed Always Pays Off" :dd:
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The game said:AP mahan
:congrats.jpeg: for new story
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Thanks bhailog keep supporting next update ASAP.RAAZ said:
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Update-5(The Impossible Happened)
Shakeel-kyun majaak kartey ho guptaji aapko kabse kissiko tapkaane k liye humaari jarurat paddne lagi...fir bhi boliye kisko tapkaana hai...
Gupta-viren Chaudhary...
Ye suntey he Shakeel ko toh mano dill kaa doura padda ho uski aankhein khuli ki khulli rehgayi uska sans takk attak gaya...
Gupta-haan-2 jaanta hun ab tu puchega kya,kyun kisliye...?toh jawaab sun tune sahi suna Viren ko tapkaana hai kyunki mujhe uski jagah caahiye ab uske niche kaam nahi kar shakta main bahot hua uska...ab usme tera faayda sun 5 crore rupaey or Viren se humessa k liye chuttkara next ACP main toh pure Mumbai mein tera dankaa bajenga....isliye jyaada matt sochh or fataafat haan boldey .....
Ye sunkar Shakeel ko Jitana aascharya horaha tha utani he khussi bhi horahi thi...
Shakeel-guptaji kahin meri fielding toh nahi lagaarahe ho.....
Gupta-be jhantu tera game bajaane waastey mujhe fielding ki kya jarurat be khajuur....caahun toh abhi thokdun...
Kuch derr samjhaana k baad shakeel maangaya ....
Gupta-toh ab apna best se best banda bulla or kal raat theek 9 baje thokdena usko or dhyaan rahe dhangse se...pata nahi chalna caahiye or agar woh Bach gaya toh beta hum sabko aisi moutt millegi ki kutte bhi naa muttenge humpar....harr Saturday raat 8 baje woh CD bar mein jaata hai or theek 9 baje bahaar aata hai...tabhi thokdena or deadbody kahin daaldena durr wahaan se....
Shakeel-chinta matt karo Guptaji Raka ko bulaunga special....Underworld mein uske naam ki tutti bolti hai patta hillne se pehle paid kaatdeta hai woh...Viren ki toh laash kutton ko khilaadunga main.....
Gupta shakeel se deal karke uss raat Ek bar mein Mukesh se milla...usko details bataai...
Mukesh-gajab guptaji sab set hai Viren caahe kitana bhi shaatir or khatarnaak ho iss baat ki toh usse bhanaka bhi nahi lag paaegi ..
Gupta-haan Mukesh Raka ek killing machine hai usase aajtak koi naa Bach paaya hai viren bhi naa Bach paaega tum bus paison ko set karo.....
Mukesh-chinta matt karo Guptaji uss paise k nikaalne kaa saara intejaam ho chuka hai bus humein viren kaa death certificate caahiye or woh sara paisa aapka hoga humaare bank k CeO se meri baat hogayi hai 5% uska hissa or paisa sidha bahaar or notes bhi alag-2 millenge jaisa aapne kahaa tha serial no. Alag..
Gupta-shabbas 5% tera hua issi khuss mein....
Mukesh-are thanku thanku guptaji....
Gupta wahaan se ghar aagaya apne....sab planning ho chuki thi Misha ki khussi kaa koi thikaana nahi tha akhirkaar. Woh viren k changull se aajaad hone walli thi......
Ab agar sab plan k according hua toh unsabki jindagi sanwar shakti thi....
Or hua bhi kuch aisa he agli raat jaise he viren nashe ki haalat mein uss bar ki sunshaan parking mein aaya usi time Raka jaake uske saamne gun taanke khadda hogaya...viren kaafi nashe mien tha usse sab dhundalla -2 dikhraha tha ...
Viren-kon haibe...
Or uske itana boltey he "dhayn" karke ek Goli challi or Viren dhadaam se niche girra or turant he Raka ne usko usiki gaadi mein daala or wahaan se nikal liya.....
Idhar Gupta ,Mukesh or misha Viren k ghar mein baithey Shakeel k call kaa intejaar kar rahe they unsabka sareer garmi mein bhi kaanp raha tha or udhar shakeel Raka k call kaa intejaar kar raha tha uska pura shareer paseene mein bharra tha usse pata tha ki agar Viren Bach gaya toh Shakeel or uske pariwaar mein se koi nahi bachega ...or tabhi woh ghaddi aagayi jiska beshabri se intejaar tha...raka ne shakeel ko call kiya or usse bataaya ki Viren marr chuka hai...or uski lash uski gaadi k sammet road k bagal mein ek khaai mein girri hai or gaadi k sath-2 puri lash bhi jall gayi hogi taaki postmortem k time Goli ka jikkar naa ho..Ye suntey he Shakeel toh maano khussi se baawlaa hogaya...usne Gupta ko call karke bataaya ye sab suntey he unki khussi kaa bhi koi thikaana nahi tha misha kaa pati Mara tha lekin woh itani khuss thi maano uska koi dushman mara ho...or kuch he derr mein jab kissi ne police ko khabbar ki toh police ne gaadi ko bahar nikalwaaya or kuch derr jaanch k baad ye ghositt kardiya ki Marne walla Viren he hai Gupta bhi wahaan pohanch chuka tha lash puri tarah jall chuki thi kapde shareer ki banawat or kuch aadhe jalle I'd cards plus viren ki gaadi ne ye shaabit kardiya tha ki woh Viren he tha media ka jamghat lag gaya tha wahaan par 11 baje takk ye khabar pure Mumbai mein fail gayi thi uss raat underworld mein jassan kaa maahol tha...ho bhi kyun naa unka sabse bada dushman Jo maara gaya tha ab unhe rokane walla koi nahi bacha tha puri Mumbai shocked thi kissi ne ye nahi socha tha ki viren kaa end aise hoga lekin ye ho chuka tha...Bade se bade gangsters khussi k maare paglaa gaye they Viren k dushmanon k liye toh maano yahin diwali thi kyunki unki life mein Jo Raavan tha woh maara gaya tha ...Jiske naam se woh mutt detey they woh naam humessa k liye chala gaya tha ...puri Mumbai underworld se darrti thi or underworld Viren se ...Aajtak kaiyon me try ki or karwayi Viren ko khatam karke ki lekin un sabki kabar Viren ne khod daali ab toh log try karna he bandh kar chukey they usse naam diya gaya tha "The Man Who Can not be Killed " yaa "The Devil's Favorite Demon"... lekin aaj woh ho chuka tha Jo kabhi impossible lagta tha Viren maara gaya tha so nothing is impossible...
Ek respected police officer ki body ki garima rakhne k liye uski Biwi ne dead body kaa postmortem na karwaane ki gujaarish ki jisse Commissioner ne sawekaar karliya waise bhi postmortem k liye kuch bacha nahi tha body mein ye simple accident tha or kuch nahi....Viren k koi Jyaada riatedaar they nahi isliye Agle din subah he uski lash kaa anteem sanskaar kiya gaya usse fully police k way mein respected gun salute diya gaya or...at last ye confirmed hogaya the Devil's favorite demon ,the hand of death, the incounter specialist Viren Chaudhary maara gaya tha...
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Update-5(The Impossible Happened)
Shakeel-kyun majaak kartey ho guptaji aapko kabse kissiko tapkaane k liye humaari jarurat paddne lagi...fir bhi boliye kisko tapkaana hai...
Gupta-viren Chaudhary...
Ye suntey he Shakeel ko toh mano dill kaa doura padda ho uski aankhein khuli ki khulli rehgayi uska sans takk attak gaya...
Gupta-haan-2 jaanta hun ab tu puchega kya,kyun kisliye...?toh jawaab sun tune sahi suna Viren ko tapkaana hai kyunki mujhe uski jagah caahiye ab uske niche kaam nahi kar shakta main bahot hua uska...ab usme tera faayda sun 5 crore rupaey or Viren se humessa k liye chuttkara next ACP main toh pure Mumbai mein tera dankaa bajenga....isliye jyaada matt sochh or fataafat haan boldey .....
Ye sunkar Shakeel ko Jitana aascharya horaha tha utani he khussi bhi horahi thi...
Shakeel-guptaji kahin meri fielding toh nahi lagaarahe ho.....
Gupta-be jhantu tera game bajaane waastey mujhe fielding ki kya jarurat be khajuur....caahun toh abhi thokdun...
Kuch derr samjhaana k baad shakeel maangaya ....
Gupta-toh ab apna best se best banda bulla or kal raat theek 9 baje thokdena usko or dhyaan rahe dhangse se...pata nahi chalna caahiye or agar woh Bach gaya toh beta hum sabko aisi moutt millegi ki kutte bhi naa muttenge humpar....harr Saturday raat 8 baje woh CD bar mein jaata hai or theek 9 baje bahaar aata hai...tabhi thokdena or deadbody kahin daaldena durr wahaan se....
Shakeel-chinta matt karo Guptaji Raka ko bulaunga special....Underworld mein uske naam ki tutti bolti hai patta hillne se pehle paid kaatdeta hai woh...Viren ki toh laash kutton ko khilaadunga main.....
Gupta shakeel se deal karke uss raat Ek bar mein Mukesh se milla...usko details bataai...
Mukesh-gajab guptaji sab set hai Viren caahe kitana bhi shaatir or khatarnaak ho iss baat ki toh usse bhanaka bhi nahi lag paaegi ..
Gupta-haan Mukesh Raka ek killing machine hai usase aajtak koi naa Bach paaya hai viren bhi naa Bach paaega tum bus paison ko set karo.....
Mukesh-chinta matt karo Guptaji uss paise k nikaalne kaa saara intejaam ho chuka hai bus humein viren kaa death certificate caahiye or woh sara paisa aapka hoga humaare bank k CeO se meri baat hogayi hai 5% uska hissa or paisa sidha bahaar or notes bhi alag-2 millenge jaisa aapne kahaa tha serial no. Alag..
Gupta-shabbas 5% tera hua issi khuss mein....
Mukesh-are thanku thanku guptaji....
Gupta wahaan se ghar aagaya apne....sab planning ho chuki thi Misha ki khussi kaa koi thikaana nahi tha akhirkaar. Woh viren k changull se aajaad hone walli thi......
Ab agar sab plan k according hua toh unsabki jindagi sanwar shakti thi....
Or hua bhi kuch aisa he agli raat jaise he viren nashe ki haalat mein uss bar ki sunshaan parking mein aaya usi time Raka jaake uske saamne gun taanke khadda hogaya...viren kaafi nashe mien tha usse sab dhundalla -2 dikhraha tha ...
Viren-kon haibe...
Or uske itana boltey he "dhayn" karke ek Goli challi or Viren dhadaam se niche girra or turant he Raka ne usko usiki gaadi mein daala or wahaan se nikal liya.....
Idhar Gupta ,Mukesh or misha Viren k ghar mein baithey Shakeel k call kaa intejaar kar rahe they unsabka sareer garmi mein bhi kaanp raha tha or udhar shakeel Raka k call kaa intejaar kar raha tha uska pura shareer paseene mein bharra tha usse pata tha ki agar Viren Bach gaya toh Shakeel or uske pariwaar mein se koi nahi bachega ...or tabhi woh ghaddi aagayi jiska beshabri se intejaar tha...raka ne shakeel ko call kiya or usse bataaya ki Viren marr chuka hai...or uski lash uski gaadi k sammet road k bagal mein ek khaai mein girri hai or gaadi k sath-2 puri lash bhi jall gayi hogi taaki postmortem k time Goli ka jikkar naa ho..Ye suntey he Shakeel toh maano khussi se baawlaa hogaya...usne Gupta ko call karke bataaya ye sab suntey he unki khussi kaa bhi koi thikaana nahi tha misha kaa pati Mara tha lekin woh itani khuss thi maano uska koi dushman mara ho...or kuch he derr mein jab kissi ne police ko khabbar ki toh police ne gaadi ko bahar nikalwaaya or kuch derr jaanch k baad ye ghositt kardiya ki Marne walla Viren he hai Gupta bhi wahaan pohanch chuka tha lash puri tarah jall chuki thi kapde shareer ki banawat or kuch aadhe jalle I'd cards plus viren ki gaadi ne ye shaabit kardiya tha ki woh Viren he tha media ka jamghat lag gaya tha wahaan par 11 baje takk ye khabar pure Mumbai mein fail gayi thi uss raat underworld mein jassan kaa maahol tha...ho bhi kyun naa unka sabse bada dushman Jo maara gaya tha ab unhe rokane walla koi nahi bacha tha puri Mumbai shocked thi kissi ne ye nahi socha tha ki viren kaa end aise hoga lekin ye ho chuka tha...Bade se bade gangsters khussi k maare paglaa gaye they Viren k dushmanon k liye toh maano yahin diwali thi kyunki unki life mein Jo Raavan tha woh maara gaya tha ...Jiske naam se woh mutt detey they woh naam humessa k liye chala gaya tha ...puri Mumbai underworld se darrti thi or underworld Viren se ...Aajtak kaiyon me try ki or karwayi Viren ko khatam karke ki lekin un sabki kabar Viren ne khod daali ab toh log try karna he bandh kar chukey they usse naam diya gaya tha "The Man Who Can not be Killed " yaa "The Devil's Favorite Demon"... lekin aaj woh ho chuka tha Jo kabhi impossible lagta tha Viren maara gaya tha so nothing is impossible...
Ek respected police officer ki body ki garima rakhne k liye uski Biwi ne dead body kaa postmortem na karwaane ki gujaarish ki jisse Commissioner ne sawekaar karliya waise bhi postmortem k liye kuch bacha nahi tha body mein ye simple accident tha or kuch nahi....Viren k koi Jyaada riatedaar they nahi isliye Agle din subah he uski lash kaa anteem sanskaar kiya gaya usse fully police k way mein respected gun salute diya gaya or...at last ye confirmed hogaya the Devil's favorite demon ,the hand of death, the incounter specialist Viren Chaudhary maara gaya tha...
Continued....
RE: Greed Always Pays Off...(Short Story By AP 316)
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Are bhai kaisa mod dal diya story me......itna ganda end viren ka matlab ye hero to ho nahi sakta....ab dekhna hai ki age kya hota hai....waiting for next update .....and also waiting for your story "wah life ho to aisi".......
Are bhai kaisa mod dal diya story me......itna ganda end viren ka matlab ye hero to ho nahi sakta....ab dekhna hai ki age kya hota hai....waiting for next update .....and also waiting for your story "wah life ho to aisi".......
