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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,425 82.9%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 231 13.4%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

  • Total voters
    1,719

Werewolf

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Werewolf

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Awesome Updatee

Toh bechare Golu ki jaan chali gayi. Aur uski jaan Aatish ne chalaki se Veer ke haatho hi li. Veer iss haadse se pata nhi kaise ubhrega. Aatish ne bahot gehra jhatka diya hai Veer ko.

Golu ko bachhane mein naa kamyaab Veer ko 100 points ka chunaa bhi lag gaya jisme 90 kat gaye hai aur 10 baaki hai.

Aatish ne yeh karke Veer ko apna sabse bada dushman bana liya hai. Ab dekhna hai yeh Veer Golu ki maut ka badla kaise leta hai.

Awesome update

Lovely update.

Till now one of the best episodes!!!!!!

Not enough words to praise this update.

Very Upsetable update...


Amazing update brooo...
Awesome...

Fantastic update

Super update bhai

Werewolf update was very good.
But was very sad aur dil pa lagne vala update tha.
Kuch bhi kaho golu ka sath akhir ma acha nahi hua.
This is also a good point for veer to know what he can loose and it should be used as a motivation and acha kiya veer ko nidhi sa milake
Kuch felling nikalni chahiye next update ma and will love to see how veer comes out of this

Bhai ...mujhe toh laga tha ki golu ka pari se koi na koi connection hoga...jab bhi veer ki jaan ko khatra hota hai ...to golu achanak se waha pouch jata hai...lekin yaha toh golu ki kahani suru hone se pahle hi khatam kar di... writers sahab ne...ya koi umeed hai ...aage

Super updated bro


Me wapich aa gya hu yaad kia kia.....agar nahi bhi kia ho to kia huwa hum to yaado me aa ker tang karte rahe gye......acha pichle update subha se parhne start ker du ga saath saath review bhi de du ga......aur haan ek aur baat


:D


Iss smiley ka answer yaad se de dena :lotpot:

Super bhai Mazza AA gaya

Speechless…
Multi colour of emotion…
Expecting something positive as usual but life is challenge…

Is update NY to Kafi upset Ker dia veer ko bhi aur hamen bhi😩😩

Veer wakai mein ch***ya hai. Pari nahi thi tab bhi aur Pari ke aane ke baad bhi. He shouldn't be existed. Bloody loser. Isse to khatam kar dena chahiye tha aur Pari kisi aur bande ko hero bana deti. Very emotional update.

Bos dil dehla dene wala update tha but yr aik suggestion h
No doubt you are a great writer, your writting skills are amazing
But boss yeh jo mgr mach wala scene tha yeh kuch over lga yeh parh kr dil kamp gya boss ho skta h koi kamzor dil ka ya koi heart patient bhi ap ki story parh rha ho yr ap se hath jor kr🙏 binti h
Thora scene ko thanda rkhna please


Baki update bhot acha tha last me jo kavya or nidhi wala scene tha i like the most.

Golu k sath bht bura hua …..or veer ko bhi gehra sadma laga hai ..sala aatish lgata hai main villen jehi hai stry ka


Aap pasand ki baat karte ho hmari Naina ji ko yhi to sabse jyada mazedar or pasand aata hai :D dekhiyega Ispr unka dhamakedar revo aayega :D

What the hell kaise kaise task diye atish bhau ne veer ko, ham logo ko ab golu ka soch kr glani ho rhi hai kitna galat socha tha uske bare me.
Dr. Kahte hain ek haddi ke tut kr judne pr Vo Pahle se behtar or jyada majbooti se judti hai, Vahi kriya yha veer pr lagu hoti hai, jb tk wakt or halat ke thapedo ko sah kr dobara nhi uth khda hota tbtk vo hero kahlane yogya nhi or veer fir uth Khada hoga ek baar, or apni galtiyo se sikhega atish bhau ko Iska Kai guna lautayega vo... Kavya ka nidhi ma'm ko phone karna yah darsata hai ki use kitni fikar hai Apne Bhai ki or Vo abhi ek Acchi bahan ke sare gun rakhti hai...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

Epic :roflol:
btw I blame tharki pari :sip:

Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...

Nice update bhai but totally unexpected...

Fantastic update...


जिस विश्वास के साथ आतिश दुसरों के विश्वास को तोड़ने का अहम भर रहा है.... क्या होगा जब उसका अपना विश्वास टूट जाएगा
अति भावनात्मक और दिल को हिला देने वाली अपडेट था.... प्रतीक्षा रहेगी अगले अपडेट की

Mast update bhai

Congratulations for complete 500 pages

Bhut shandar update bro.

Nice update brother golu to free me hi mara gaya aur uska pura ilzaam veer par aa gaya wese nidhi shayad veer ko depression se nikla degi

Awesome update

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब
Bole to ekdm zakasss

Awesome update

Awesome update

Very Emotional Update

Kabhi haar bhi jaroori hai jeet ka asli maja paane ke liye. Jiyo Werewolf bhai jiyo.

Ese chutiya system kya kya fyda jo jarurat ke waqt sahi kam na kare

Faltu randi rona to yeh pari name system bohat karta hai khas kar aurto waqt

Par jab jarurat hoti hai iski maiya dayiya ek ho jati hai

Har bar hero gand mar jati hai

Kabhi train se girta hai kabhi aatish ke bando se mar padti hai kabhi pari khud hero ke hatho golu ko marwa deti hai

Main atish ka dosh ni manta isme dosh pari ka hai

Aurto ke time yeh hawasi pari name ka system har baat bilkul sahi rakhta hai par aur other time hero ki gand marwa ke rakhta hai


Hatttg bhisi iss pari ki maiya chodo se koi

excellent update....

Ye kya tarika hai badla lene ka main person ko to mara nhi bs usko jhtka deke chor diya or uper se bol rha h ab ye kisi kam ka nhi hai but ab syd veer or khunkhar ho jayega..........
nidhi uske pain se usko nikal ske yhi umeed hai or veer phir se normal ho jaye..........
keep posting bhai..........
waiting for next update............

Nice update

Superb update bro

Superb update bhai

Too much pain for veer.usko sirf dukh jhelna pad raha he....veer ko badla lena hoga atish se...

Excellent update bhai

Super wonderful awesome update

ye kahani bhi pichli kahani (Akhir kyu?) ki tarah rahegi

start dhanshu krte ho bhai
climax conclusion me last kahani me maza nhi aaya.

romanchak update ..pari ki madad se har padaw ko paar karta gaya veer par usko kaha pata tha ki wo apne hi haatho se apne dost ko maut ke mooh me dhakel raha hai .
wo lal button dabane se veer aage badh raha tha aur uske saath hi golu ki maut ek kadam uske ore badh rahi thi 😔..
ab veer puri tarah toot chuka hai aur glaani se bhar gaya hai .
ab kya nidhi samjha payegi veer ko aur theek kar payegi 🤔🤔..
aatish ne veer ko jinda chhodkar apne life ki sabse badi galti kar di hai kyunki agar veer khudko sambhal paya to aatish ko jaan se maarne ki jarur sochega .par usse pehle usko sahi hona hoga .

wakai aatish ek chalakh aur khunkhar villain hai jo apne dushmano ko dard dena pasand karta hai .

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai....
Nice and beautiful update...

Adbhut update bhai

Kya iss story ka main villain attish hai yaa wo sirf thodi dino ka mehman hai ?

This is not good yr Golu k sath Aisa hua nhi hona. Chaiye tha ek baat to h isse veer ko or ekagra hona hoga I think ye h asli dusmani ki suruvaat golu ki mout aise jaya nhi jayegi ab veer apne aapko fir se us bulandi pe le jayega jaha par uske apno ko koi bhi nuksaan na pahucha paye
Ab to mam he usko sabme se nikalege or uski madad Veer ki bahne or bhabhi kregi mujhe to ye lgta h
Aage aapki jo marzi

Boht zabardast update tha

Laajwab update

Fir to paka apne hero ke bade wale L lagne wale hai

One riddle after another was coming in front of Veer which he solved with the help of his powers and Pari but we can't do anything even if we want because Golu was in his possession so we did as he wanted. :approve:
Here it is not Veer's fault, he is just sad and hurt that he could not save his friend but Aatish does not know that he has made the biggest mistake now he has to suffer. :evillaugh:
At the moment Veer is in shock but soon he will emerge again then real fun will come and that's life :dazed: Anyway, the more bastard the enemy is, the more it is fun to take revenge. :cool:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

Ab lag raha hai veer aur nidhi ke beech pyar ki suruaat hogi ....

Sabse badi baat pari ne bhale hi kayi baar madad ki ho lekin musibaton mein daalne wali wohi thi...
Kyun sahi hai na Werewolf :lol:

Ye sabhi kand ki suruwat huyi thi us club se :D
agar wo club na jata to atish ko wo ladki mil jaani thi..... phir bhala kyun atish veer ke gharwalo ko pareshaan karta...

soniya suhaana ki ring dhundhne ke chakkar mein sidha atish ke jhole jaa gira...

Kul milake vaat ye hai ki jab tak pari, soniya, suhana is story pe hai, veer ki aise hi band bajegi... aur aage naa jaane kis kis tarah se baje shayad :rolleyes:

It's bitter truth

Maza nahi aya is update me 😔😰

Superb update

Super update hai Bhai

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Mujhe lagta hai veer ko nidhi is sadme se Bahar nikaal layegi........... ye mein idea laga raha hoon lekhak ke man me kya hai lekhak hi jaane...

Superb update

Hmmm... Mujhe kahin naa kahin lag hi raha tha ke ye mission fail hoga... But I thought ke shayad Veer Time Limit ko exceed kar dega... Golu ki maut ho jaayegi aesa to maine bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha... To ye update apne liye to kaafi shocking raha... Golu ke liye zyada kuchh kehna to mushkil hi hai par yahi keh sakte hain ke wo galath waqt par galath jagah aur haalaat mein maujood tha... Jiski keemat usse apni jaan dekar chukaani padi... Btw. 1% chances mujhe Naa jaane kyon iss baat ke bhi lag rahen hain ke Golu zinda ho sakta hai... I mean agar jaisa maine pehle guess kiya tha ke wo Villain side se hai... In that case wo Magarmacchhon waali laash kisi aur ki ho sakti hai... Par sirf 1% hi aesa lag raha hai... Baaki to Werewolf saahab aap hi jaano... Ham to guess hi laga sakte hain:dazed:

Idhar Kavya ka yun Veer ke liye chintit hona saabit karta hai ke kiss kadar wo apne bhai ko chahati hai... Veer jiski life mein kuchh samay pehle apna kehne ke liye bhi shayad naam maatra ke hi rishte the uske prati iss tarah ka prem... Iske baare mein to yahi kahunga ke ye sab Pari ki Mahima hai... Poori life hi change ho gayi hai Veer ki uske aane ke baad...

Kherr, jaisa ki sabhi jaante hain ke har cheez ke side – effects hote hi hain aur har sikke ke do pehlu hote hain... Likewise har race mein kaamyabi milne lage to kaamyab hone ka asli matlab insaan bhool jata hai... Aese mein iss prakaar ke speed breakers help karte hain apne potential ko increase karne mein... Golu ki maut sahi maayne mein dekha jaaye to bahut hi badi cheez hai iss case mein... Par shayad ab Veer ko wo ek push milegaa jo usse Baadshah ban ne ki aur tezz gati se badhayegaa...

Aatish ka Mouth Organ bajaana, uski entry ke jiss prakaar ke scenes the aur saath hi uski dahshat... Especially Ragini & Vivek waali ghatna... In sabse ek baat to clear hi thi ke Aatish ka asli roop iss update se pehle nazar nahi aaya tha... Ranga ki maut haalanki saabit kar rahi thi ke ab Aatish kuchh Khatarnak hi karne waala hai but this act of Cruelty... It was damn too strong to show his grey side... Ab usse shayad yahi lagega ke Veer ab aaram se paschataap karta hua rota rahega aur apna badla bhool jaayega... Par isse kya maaloom ke uske paas Pari hai...

Nidhi ka ek call par yun bhaage chale aana... Uska Veer ke liye yun chintit hona... Sab saaf darshaata hai ke uske andar ek nayi tarah ki feelings paida ho chuki hai jiska saboot uski favourability ke roop mein shayad agle update mein hi mil jaaye...

Veer ab toot chuka hai joki laazmi bhi hai... Important ye hoga ke kaise wo iss sab se baahar aayega and How he'll make Golu's misfortune count??? Aatish ko uske anjaam tak kaise pahunchaayega ye dekhna interesting rahega... Iss ghatnakram mein Veer ko points ka bhi tagda choona lag gaya hai... Ulta 10 points ka debt bhi chadh gaya hai... Nidhi hi shayad wo zariya bane jo Veer ko uske dukh se baahar nikaale...

Overall kaafi badhiya update tha... Aatish ki side ko saaf kar diya iss update ne aur bata diya ki wo koyi aasan Villain nahi hai... Veer ko bahut mehnat karni padegi usse raaste se hatane ke liye... Golu ke liye dil se bura laga par jab tak Villains aur Negative end impactful naa ho Hero ka poora potential saamne nahi aa paata...

Excellent Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated... 🔥


★ Atish to chahta tha Veer ko ander se tod de jo ussne golu ki mot ka sara iljam uske uper hi laga diya..?

★ Kya veer sambhal payegaga Golu ki mot se..?

★ Muje lagta hai abhi Golu Jinda hai..?

★ Qki jab Usko Dubara Se mission ka Notification mila tha tab to veer ne dekh liya tha ki Golu Mar Chuka hai..?

★ Aur Naa hi Veer ne Marte hue dekha hai Golu ko bs uske bare me batya hai ki Wo mar chuka hai..?

★ jisse veer ko sadma lage aur atish bhi ye hi chahta tha

★ kya atish ne kuch soch kar Golu Ko apne paas ked me chupa kar rkha hai..?

★ kya veer iss dhuk se bhar nikal payega..?

★ Kya kavya ne sahi kiya nidhi ko bula kar..?

★ Kya nidhi usko golu ke dhuk se bhar nikal payegi..?

★kya atish kuch aur plan kar rha h veer ke khilaf...?

★ kya ab tak pari ko bhi mission ke baare me jada nhi pata ki golu jinda hai ki nhi

★ kya mission fail ho chuka hai..?

★ Ab tak uske jitne bhi point the sab mission fail hone par sab chalege jayge..?

★ aur kitni musibat aaigi veer ki life me..

★ Kya veer ab ( Golu jo mara hai ki nhi) ke past ko dekh skta h jese pari ne btya tha ki wo jisko mare ga uska pasr dekh skta hai...?



Dekhte hai aage kya likha hai samaye ke garabh me.... 🤭



Waiting for next update.... 🙏

Mast update bhai

Waiting for next update

Atish ka jaldi he khel khatm hone waala hai aaur aasli vilan ki entry

Zabardast Awesome Fantastic Superb Speechless Update bro
Keep Posting

Ary bhao itna suspense thrill create kiye ho k Banda sanse tham ye dekh raha tha k Abhi bacha golu ,,Abhi bacha golu

Lakin nateja veer k hatho btan dabwa dabwa k golu ko hi Marwa diya or 100 point bhi gay

Sala ek dafa aatish bhao mil Jay bus us ki Maya hi chod dalu
Ufffffffff Asif control Yar control,,,
Guse Mai ashlieil shabd nikal rahe munh se

Ha to Mai ye kh raha tha atish ne veer ko waqai ander se tor k rakh dia bahir se to Jo tora tora

Ek hi dost Mila tha veer ko golu bhaya wo bhi ly doba atish ne

Oh Nidhi k to hath pawo hi fool gay jb veer k bare suna or bus pohnch gayi veer k samne

Very nice update

Action, thillar, romance, sad, sex all in one in one story! Compliment to writer

Aur kya expect kar sakte hein Werewolf se, kyun ki yeh to thehera sanskari writer. Aur koi writer hota to saayad pahle Nidhi ka pet foolta tha!!!!!

Hats off! What an update! Great thinking!

Bhai mjhe acha lga apne mera reply parha or agree bhi kia i appreciate it

Na na veer or suman ki karayenge:winknudge:

:congrats: for completing 1M views

Juhi bahut cute bachi naina ji agar juhi is kahani se jaati hain to me is story padhna chhod dunga

Veer saare padaw paar kerke Golu k paas pahoch tow gaya lekin yeh nahi jaanta tha uska har kadam Golu maut k muh m le ja raha Atish itni chalaki se Veer k hatho Golu marwa dia jaska sadma Veer ko bahot hi ziada laga or Atish yahi chahta tha
Ab dekhte h Veer kab iss sadme se ubherta h
As always shaandaar update bhai

images-1waiting for beast mode on 👿👿

waiting

Bhai update de de yrr

Weldon Bade Bhai Bas Aise Hi Apne Writing Skill Se Sabko Baandhe Rakho Aapse Yahi Ummeed Hai 🙏

Wahhhhh jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update.......


Werewolf brooo too awesome nd amazing.
Main is tarhaan ka kuch expect nai kr rha tha lkn ek axha turn hy ye bhi story main.
Afsoos Naina G ko pari sy jhagrny ka moqa mil gaya phr hy Naina G wesey hi pari ky peechey hath or munh dhoo kr padi rrhtin haan😅😂🤣

abhi isko khatam na kro....
abhi to safar bohat lamba ha....
every one can write story but writer writes master pieces and this is masterpiece and you are a real writer....

Sir aap ek love story likho os story mein only romance he hona chahiye baki aur kuch nhi.... thoda bahut thriller

Werewolf bhai aagla update kab tak aayega

Nice update bro

गोलू की दर्दनाक मौत ने सच में व्यथित कर दिया हमें । आतिश ने वीर का भरसक ब्रेनवाश करने का प्रयास किया कि गोलू के मृत्यु में उस का भी हाथ है । पर मुझे नहीं लगता कि इसमें वीर की कोई भी गलती है ।
उसने पुरी कोशिश की । अपनी जान बाजी पर लगा दिया था । शायद उसकी मृत्यु आतिश के हाथों हो सकती थी । लेकिन इतना सब कुछ दांव पर लगाने के बाद भी वह गोलू को बचा नहीं सका ।
एक्चुअली वो आतिश के ट्रिक में फंस गया था । उसे नहीं पता था कि वो जितना गोलू के करीब पहुंच रहा है उतना ही गोलू की जिंदगी उससे दूर जा रही है ।
इसमें वीर की कोई गलती नहीं है ।
गोलू मर चुका है । यह सिस्टम ने मगरमच्छ और उसका शिकार हुए शख्स को देखते ही कह दिया था और इसीलिए उसने वीर के प्वाइंट भी काट लिए थे ।

खैर , वीर वहां से वापस तो आ गया है लेकिन अब वो पहले से भी ज्यादा अपनी ताकत को बढ़ाने पर मेहनत करेगा । आतिश को उसके कर्मों का फल देना उसकी प्राथमिकता होगी ।

चक्रव्यूह बहुत ही बढ़िया रचा था आतिश ने । ऐसे ऐसे चीज रीडर्स को काफी रोमांचित करते हैं ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट Werewolf bhai.

Feeling so bad for golu he is only one of veer's best friend but atish took him too from him to death veer should collect all his courage mighty and smartness to ruin atish into his feets to beg for his own life

Very nice fantastic update waiting for next

Waiting for next

outstanding update..!!
golu ke sath bahot bura huva..lekin ab veer ko firse uthke khada hona hoga..kyunki uski zindagi me bahot se aise lmhe aayenge jiske liye usse tayyar rehna hai..!! aur ab nidhi aagayi hai toh inki love story ko bhi aage badhao bhai..aur sath sath radhika aur veer ki bhi love story aage badhao..aur suman toh hai hi veer ke paas..!!

मुझे यह जानने की तीव्र जिज्ञासा है
आतिश भाऊ का विश्वास कब वीर तोड़ेगा...
निधि और वीर के मध्य जो संबंध है वह भावनात्मक रूप से निःसंदेह अति उत्तम है
हाँ पुरुष भी टूटता है और उसे उस वक्त जो सम्भाल सकती है वह केवल प्रेमिका या पत्नी ही हो सकती है
इसलिए निधि व वीर के मध्य पुनः मिलन का मुहूर्त बिल्कुल सही समय पर आया है
प्रतीक्षा रहेगी अगले अंक की

भाई आप ज्यादातर लोगो की बात का एक ही जवाब दे रहे हो परी मिशन नहीं देती परी टास्क नहीं देती.
लेकिन भाई जब तक वीर की ज़िन्दगी मे परी नहीं थी तब तक वीर की ज़िन्दगी मे कोई मिशन या टास्क भी तो नहीं था वीर भले ही लुज़र था डरपोक था लेकिन कभी उसकी वजह से किसी की जान नहीं गई भलेही उसके अपने उसके खिलाफ थे लेकिन वो कभी किसी की बर्वादी का कारण नहीं बना
परी मुझे सुरु से ही पसंद ना आई क्योंकि जिस निधी ने वीर की इतनी मद्दत की उस निधी के साथ ही डेट और सेक्स के पॉइंट वो वीर को दे रहि है जबकी अब तक वीर ने परी के इस्तेमाल से निधी के लिए कुछ अच्छा नहीं किया उल्टा उसका टेंसन और बढ़या है

Ye kya hai....????
Dilchasp lekin ajib update....

Awesome story nice update

Wesy aik BAAT pochni thi jab veer kavya aur arohi ko bacha raha tha tab golu NY help ki bad me pichey se phir attack hua TB wo defend nahi Ker Saka apny ap ko Lekin us waqt tk veer NY martial arts skills bhi purchase Ker li thi na aur active thi?
Ya us ko upgrade kerna baqi tha?

Waiting for the next update

Thanks bro I m waiting yeh 2 days wala gap bht mushkil sy guzarta hai

Excellent update 👌👌

Bhai updated

Bhai update ka intezaar hai



Kb tak update ayega

Waiting update bro

I am also waiting

Waiting bro

Werewolf bhai ji eagerly waiting 👀


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Update - 37 ~ Consolation and Schemes
Ab tak...

Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.

Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??

Veer : ??


Ab aage...

Kal jo kuch bhi khaufnauk haadsa hua tha, uss haadse ke baad se zaahir sii baat thi ki Veer ki haalat iss waqt shabdo me baya karne waali nahi thi.

Wo andar se aur saath hi saath baahar se bhi toota hua tha. Na keval Aatish ne usse andar se toda tha balki uske gundo ne milke, Veer pe haath saaf karne ki bhi koi kasar nahi chorri thi.

Usse jese ek behad bada jhatka sa laga tha. Apne kamre me zameen par paav sikode aur apna sarr jhukaaye baithe hue tha wo. Beech beech me Veer ka shareer kaanp uthata aur wo apne kaanpte hue haath khol unhe dekh khud se hi baat karne lagta...

'I-I killed him... Mene... Mene usse... Mene inhi haatho se G-Golu ko... Mene maar diya... Pari!?? Mene... I killed him Pari... I... *sniff* I killed him.'

[Master! Please! I beg you! Isme aap ki koi galti nahi thi Master. Hume nahi pata tha ki hum jab jab aage badh rahe the, hum Golu ko maar rahe the. Ye sab anjaane me hua Master. Isme saari galti uss aadmi ki hai. He set that trap. M-Master... Please! Khud ko sambhaaliye... Golu ki death ka badla aap ko hi lena hai master. Aap aise haar nahi maan sakte. Wo aadmi yahi chaahta hai master. Usne Ragini ke saath bhi wahi kiya tha na... Dekha nahi aapne? Waha se aane ke baad hi uske aur Vivek ke beech kitni badi daraar aa gayi hai? Master... Aapko hi kuch karna hoga.]

'Pari... Pari... Golu ko mene maar diya Pari... Mene apne hi haatho se... Usne meri jaan do baar bachaayi thi. Aur jaha mujhe usse bachaana chahiye tha. Waha... Waha mene ulta inhi haatho se usse maar diya.'

[Master! No! You didn't! Aapne nahi maara hai Golu ko master. Uss aadmi ne maara hai. Aap toh ye soch ke aage badh rahe the ki hum Golu ko bachaane ke liye uske nazdeek pohuch rahe hai. Par hume kuch nahi pata tha Master.]

'Sab meri galti hai... Sab... Mene kisi ka khoon kar diya Pari... Mene... I'm a murderer now... *sniff* Mein hi doshi hu... Saara ka saara dosh mera hai. Haan! Tum... Tum sab mujhe akela chorr do... Mein... Mein akela hi thik tha. Chali jao Pari tum bhi... I'm really a loser now. Ek dost ko nahi bacha saka mein... Ulta uski hi jaan le liya. Pari... Jao... Mein kuch nahi hu Pari. Tumhe iss shareer me sab bekaar hi milega Pari... *sniff*'

[Master! Please aisa mat kahiye. You are the best master. Aur, I cannot leave your body. Mein aapki body chorr kar jau, iske keval do hi raaste hai. Aur wo dono boht hi extreme hai. Aur mein kabhi aapse alag nahi houngi. Please! Master! Meri baat samajhne ki koshish kariye.]

'No... Pari... I...'

Veer ki maansik haalat itni kharaab thi ki wo Pari ki baat samajhne ka prayaas hi nahi kar paa raha tha. Jo jhatka usse laga tha, wo kahi hadd tak usse andar se hila ke rakha hua tha.

Pari ki harr baat ko wo ignore kar khud ko dosh diye jaa raha tha, jab achanak hi uske kaano me ek awaaz padi...

"V-Veer!?"

'??'

Aur ye awaaz sunte hi Veer ne apna sarr haule se uthaaya.

Uske saamne Nidhi chintit sa chehra liye darwaaze ki dehleez pe khadi hui thi. Aur itna hi nahi, Nidhi ke peeche hi Kavya aur Arohi bhi khadi hui thi.

Dheere dheere...

Nidhi apne kadam badhaate hue aage aayi. Uske perro me bandhi payal ki awaaz Veer bhali bhaati sunn paa raha tha.

Wo uske sameep aake jhuki aur usse dekhne lagi.

Nidhi Veer ki vartmaan haalat dekh ke hi ghabraayi sii hui thi. Aankho me halke halke aasu the, wo laal ho rakhi thi, aur unhi aankho ke neeche kaalapan. Jo ye batla raha tha ki Veer soya nahi hai raat bhar.

'Ye!? Ye kya haalat ho rakhi hai Veer ki!?'

Nidhi mann me soch aage badh Veer ke chehre par apne haath le gayi aur bade hi haule se usne Veer ke gaalo se unn aasuo ko pocha.

"Ma'am!?"

Uske thar tharaate hue hontho se jab wo shabd nikle toh Nidhi ne uski hatheli apne haatho me bheench lii.

Nidhi : Ye... Ye sab kya haal bana rakha hai Veer!?

Par Veer kuch na bola. Uski aankho se aasu nirantar behte chale jaa rahe the, jo Nidhi apne haatho se pochti jaa rahi thi.

'Kahi...!? Kahi Veer ke gharwaalo ne toh kuch nahi kiya uske saath!?'

Ye soch Nidhi ki nazre Kavya aur Arohi ki taraf gayi aur usne thoda gusse se unn dono ko dekha.

Par jab usse laga ki Kavya ne hi toh usse yaha call karke bulaaya tha aur saath hi saath dono behno ke chehre par jab usse chinta nazar aayi toh Nidhi ne ye khayaal forun hi apne mann se nikaal diya.

Nidhi : Veer!? Mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu. Jawaab do meri baat ka. Ye sab kya hai? Kya hua hai?

Par Veer abhi bhi kuch nahi bol raha tha. Yaha se Nidhi ki awaaz, toh andar se Pari ki awaaz aur fir uske khud ke antar mann ki awaaz jo usse doshi thehra rahi thi. Inn sab ke chalte wo bas ek jagah bina kisi hosh ke besudh sa dekhe jaa raha tha.

Nidhi : Tum Kavya ho na!?

Kavya : Huh? J-Jii!

Nidhi : Kal aisa kya hua tha? Jo Veer ki haalat aisi ho gayi hai? Batao mujhe... Jaldi...

Nidhi ke chehre par chinta dekh, Kavya thodi hairaan thi. Par ek baat usse clear ho chuki thi. Wo ye ki usne Nidhi ko yaha bula ke ekdum sahi decision liya tha.

Kavya : Wo... Ma'am... Mein aapko poori baat bataati hu. Darasal... Diwali ki night me mein aur Arohi dii yaha par aa rahe the. Tab raaste me hi kuch gunde hamaare peeche pad gaye the. Mene Veer bhaiya ko call karke bulaaya tha aur unhone hi hume bachaaya tha. Par uss din unn logo ne Veer bhaiya ko kaafi chotil kar diya tha.

Nidhi : Kyaaa?

Kavya : Hmm! Aur fir kal... Achanak hi bhaiya bole ki unhe kuch kaam hai aur raat me hi kareeb 7:30 baje ghar se nikal gaye. Par... *sniff* Par...

Bolte bolte Kavya yu rone lagi toh uski baat ko Arohi ne poora kiya.

Arohi : Par raat me hi... Kal Veer hume ghar ke baahar mila. Veer ko boht chot aayi hui thi. Abhi bhi uske badan par chot ke nishaan hai. Doctor ne treatment kiya aur medicine deke chala gaya tha wo. Par uske baad se... Veer na toh kuch khaa raha hai, na kisi se baat kar raha hai aur kuch bata bhi nahi raha hai. Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai ma'am. Wo log kaun the!? Aur kyu hamaare peeche pade hue the? Aur Veer kaha gaya tha kal jo uski ye haalat ho gayi? Yadi aap kuch hal nikaal sakti hai toh please...

[Master! Look! Nidhi ko aapki kitni chinta hai. Please! Listen to her.]

Nidhi : Veer! Meri taraf dekho... Kidhar gaye the tum kal!? Batao! Mein kuch puch rahi hu tumse Veer! Meri baato ko yu ansuna kar doge!? Mein tumhaari Ma'am hu na!? Bolo!?

Wo usse thoda sa hilaate hue puchi par...

Veer toh jese kisi murde ki tarah ho chuka tha. Koi harqat nahi kar raha tha.

[No! No! No! This is bad... Master ka emotional state itna unstable kese...!? Yadi aisa hi chalta raha toh master pakka depression me chale jaenge. Nooooo! Mujhe kuch karna hoga...]

Aur agle hi pal...

[Maaaaaassssteeeeeeerrrrrrrrr!]

'Huhhhh!?'

Pari uske andar itni zorr se chillaayi jiske chalte Veer ko kuch hosh aaya.

[Wo aadmi ab aapki Nidhi Ma'am ko maarega.]

Ye sunte hi Veer ki aankhein felti chali gayi!

'Huh!? M-Ma'am?? N-Nooo...'

[Yes! Even Shreya ko... Aapki Kavya ko... Arohi too... Ragini ko... Sabko maarega wo.]

'N-Nahi... Aisa nahi...'

[Of course! Aur kabhi aapne zara bhi fikar kii!?]

'???'

[Ki yadi aapki Juhi ko kuch hua toh!?]

Juhi ka naam sunte hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Uss pyaari sii bacchi ka khilkhilaata chehra uske mann me aaya. Yadi usse galti se bhi kuch hua...

Ye sochte hi Veer itna darr gaya ki uska badan kaanpne laga.

[Of course! He will kill them all. Kyuki aap toh yaha haath pe haath dharre baithe rahoge. Uske liye kaam asaan ho jaega. Yahi toh chaahta hai woh...]

'N-Nahiiiii... Aisa... Aisa kabhi nahi...'

[Bilkul hoga. Yadi aapne jald hi action nahi liya toh aisa hi hoga. Kabhi socha hai!? Ki yadi uss raat Kavya ya Arohi me se koi bhi pakdi jaati toh kya haal hota unka!? Fir aap... Apni hi behan ke hatyaare ho jaate Master. Aapki ek behan ki jaan jaati, ya dono ki hi jaa sakti thi.]

Ye baat jese kisi bhaari patthar ki tarah aake Veer ke upar giri. Aur uska poora astitv jese hila kar rakh diya.

[Aapki ye Nidhi Ma'am! Kabhi socha hai ki wo aadmi yadi inke peeche pad jaaye toh!?]

Pari ki baat sunn Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha jo usse hi chintit nazro se dekh rahi thi.

[You will lose her. You will lose everything. She will die.]

'N-Nahiiiiiiii'

[Bilkul! Yahi hoega! Aap sab kuch kho doge. Kaha gayi aapki wo pride? Kaha gaya aapke andar ka wo josh? Kya yu hi haar maan jaoge aap? Bhool gaye apna lakshya!? Aapko toh ek boht bada aadmi bann'na hai na? Kya hoga uss vaade ka jo aapne Juhi ko diya tha? Uske liye chocolate ki poori factory kholne waale the na aap?

Kya Nidhi jii ko uss Rajat ke changul se nahi nikaalenge aap? Bhool gaye ki abhi aapko apni saalo se bichdi Maa ko bhi dhundna hai? Kaha gaye wo saare vaade jo aapne mujh se kiye the? Kya wo sab dhong tha?

Yadi aise hi rahe aap... Toh sab kuch gawa baithoge Master. Nidhi, Shreya, Kavya... Ye sab aapke saamne maari jaengi aur aap kuch nahi kar paoge.]

'N-Nooooooo... I don't want to lose her... I don't want to lose anyone... Mein kisi ko bhi nahi khona chaahta... Nooooo... I really don't...'

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ko apni baaho me bhar liya.

"Aahhh!? Veeerrr!?"

Nidhi iss hamle se thodi hairaan zaroor thi par jab usse Veer ka kaampta hua badan mehsoos hua aur jab usse apne nagn kandhe par Veer ke aasuo ka ehsaas hua toh Nidhi kuch na boli aur uske haath apne aap hi Veer ke ird gird lapit gaye. Usne uske sarr ke peeche haath le jaa usse thaama aur apne se laga liga. Dheere dheere wo Veer ki peeth sehlaate hue usse shaant karne lagi.

Idhar Kavya aur Arohi dono hi hairat ke maare ye sab dekh rahi thi. Par kahi na kahi unhe iss baat se zyaada khushi thi ki Veer at least ab kuch movements toh show kar raha tha.

[Phew! Master ka dil boht kamzor hai. Unki family ne unke saath itna bura behave kiya hai... Aaarghhh! I hate them all. Hmm? Nidhi ki favourability 56? That's good! Kavya ki...!? 78!! Ohh! And Arohi?? Huh??? 40!?? Wow! This is surprising. Master ko baad me bata dungi mein.]

'Mein... Mein unhe khona nahi chaahta... I will kill him... Mein... Kuch nahi hone dunga kisi ko... I... I...'

"Haaaahhhh haaahhhh haaahhh..."

Aur achanak hi Veer ki saasein itni tezz ho gayi ki waha maujood sabhi ladkiya ghabra gayi.

Nidhi : Veer??? Ye... Ye kya ho raha hai...!? Kya hua tumhe?

Wo lambi lambi saasein le raha tha aur achanak hi usne apna seena zorr se haatho se bheech liya.

"Haaaaahh... Haaahhh"

Kavya : Bhaaaaiyaaaaaa

Kavya chillaayi toh Arohi bina samay gawaaye bhaagte hue neeche gayi aur Ragini ko bula kar laayi.

Ragini samet Suman aur baaki sabhi bhaagti hui aayi aur Veer ki haalat dekh Ragini ne koi galti nahi kii aur seedhe hi doctor ko phone laga diya.

Doctor ka ghar paas me hi tha aur uska clinic bhi uske ghar se bagal me tha toh woh forun hi kuch minutes me aa gaya.

***

Kuch derr baad...

Veer bistar par laita hua tha, uski aankhein band thi aur shirt ki saari buttons khuli thi jiske chalte uska saara seena nazar aa raha tha. Shayad doctor ne abhi check up kiya tha.

Ragini : K...Kya hua tha doctor Veer ko?

Doctor : He was hyperventilating.

Kavya : Huh???

Doctor : Samjhaata hu... Emotional stress ya emotional breakdown, anxiety ki wajah se kabhi kabhi aadmi panic kar jaata hai aur lambi lambi saasein lene lagta hai aur isse hum hyperventilation kehte hai.

Kavya : ??

Doctor : Insaan oxygen ko andar leta hai aur carbon dioxide ko baahar chorrta hai right?

Kavya : Hmm!

Doctor : Hyperventilation ke samay... Aap jitna oxygen andar nahi lete ho uss se zyaada carbon dioxide ko baahar chorrne lagte ho, jiske chalte carbon dioxide ki maatra body me kam ho jaati hai aur ye situation create ho jaati hai.

Kavya : Ahhh!

Nidhi : Toh... Toh thik toh hai na Veer!?

Doctor : Jii haa! Bas thoda araam ki zaroorat hai. Inhe rest karne dijiye... Accha! Ragini jii! Ab mein chalta hu. Yadi fir se koi dikkat samajh aati hai toh aap call kar lijiyega.

Ragini : J-Jii! Thank you so much doctor!

Doctor : Ye toh hamaara kaam hai Ragini jii!

Aur itna bol doctor fees leke waha se nikal gaya.

Idhar Veer ki khuli shirt dekh, Kavya aage badh unn buttons ko band karne hi waali thi jab usse apne bagal me achanak hi ek hawa ka jhoka mehsoos hua.

'Huhhh!?'

Dekha toh paaya ki...

Arohi uske bagal se nikal aage badhi aur Veer ke paas jaa pohuchi.

Apne haatho ko aage badha ke wo Veer ki shirt ki buttons dheere dheere band karne lagi.

Kabhi bauhe sikode wo Veer ke chehre ko dekhti toh kabhi uske seene ko jinpar halke halke choto ke nishaan the.

Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me.

Kavya ne jab ye dekha toh uske kadam wahi tham gaye. Par...

Hontho par agle hi pal ek santushti bhari muskaan bhi aa chuki thi.

***

Ek bade se ghar me iss waqt ek kamre me ek aadmi idhar se udhar tehel raha tha aur kisi uljhan me nazar aa raha tha.

Toh wahi uske peeche ek sofe pe ek aur naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha.

Aur ye tehelne waala vyakti koi aur nahi, Vivek hi tha. Saath hi saath sofe par baitha yuvak uska chota bhai ~ Pranjal tha.

Pranjal : Aise tehelne se kuch nahi hoga bhaiya.

Vivek : Toh kya karuuuu?? Huh?? Ragini... Ek number ki murkh aurat hai... Idhar apne pati ka saath chorr ke udhar ghar me reh rahi hai. Saala company me na jaane kya kya afwaaye fela rahe hai employees. Ki bhaag gayi hogi, utha ke le gaya koi, talaak ho gaya... Fuck! Aur upar se wo saala Veer bhi wahi hai. Kya soch ke Ragini ne usse apne ghar me rakh liya? Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya uska?

Pranjal : Dekha jaaye toh isme aapki bhi thodi galti thi bhaiya. Ladkiya boht hi sensitive hoti hai. Aapne jo baat kahi thi uske chalte Bhabhi boht zyaada naraaz hai aapse jo ki bani baat hai. Aapko unhe behla fusla kar manaana hoga tab hi kuch hoga.

Vivek : Sab kar chuka hu chote. Yaha tak ki mom dad ko bhi leke gaya tha. Par saala wo sunn'ne ko hi taiyaar nahi hai. Upar se pata nahi kaun sii saheli ko bulaayi hai jo uske ghar me dera jama ke baithi hui hai. Ek baar me usne mom dad aur meri bolti band kar dii thi waha...

Pranjal : Hmm?? Ohh! Thoda samay dijiye fir bhabhi ko. Par harr ek do din me unse baat karte rehna. Unhe jataiye ki aapka unke bagerr mann nahi lagta. Dekhna, wo jald hi maan jaengi.

Vivek : Hmm! Wese... Kuch socha? Property ke baare me!?

Pranjal : Aapki baat Tai jii se hui thi na?

Vivek : Hmm! Haan! Unhe property Bhumika ke liye chaahiye haha~

Pranjal (smiles) : Bada hi mast plan bana ke unhe apne side liya tha humne hai na? Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwaane me akhir unhone bhi samay samay par apna yogdaan dete hue hamaari madad kii thi. Aur humne unhe property ka kuch hissa dene ka waada kiya tha. Toh? Doge aap? Unhe property?

Vivek (smiles) : Hahaha~ pagal hai kya? Dene ke liye thodi hi ye plan kiya hu. Ek rupaya bhi na milne wala unhe. Wo toh upar se sauteli maa hai Veer ki. Bhala jab Veer ko kuch na mila toh hamaare rehte hue ye sauteli Tai aur unki beti ko kaha se kuch milega?

Pranjal : Hmm! Par yadi unhone ye raaz khol diya ki Veer ko baahar nikalwaane me hamaara haath hai toh?

Vivek (smiles) : Toh? Toh kya... Unka muh kese band karwaana hai uska bhi ilaaj hai mere paas... Hahaha~

Pranjal : Waah! Wese... Dada jii ke baare me kuch socha hai? Kyuki jab wo raazi honge tabhi toh property hume milegi bhaiya. Aur unhone toh keh ke rakha hai ki jab tak Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak wo koi faisla nahi lenge.

Vivek : Bas! Ussi ki toh tension hai chote. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Pranjal : Wese... Mere paas ek idea hai. Yadi aap suno toh...

Vivek : Kesa idea?

Pranjal : Idhar aaiye...

Vivek ko apne paas bula ke Pranjal ne dheere se apne kuch bol rakhe, jisse sunn ke Vivek ekdum se hadbada ke uth gaya.

Vivek : Ch-Chote!?? Ye... Ye?? Tu? Ye boht zyaada nahi ho gaya?

Pranjal : Sach me? Yahi baat aapne mujhe tab bhi kahi thi jab hum Veer ko nikalwa rahe the. Kahiye! Kya tab zyaada hua tha? Kya kisi ko pata chala? Nahi na!? Fir?

Vivek : Fir bhi chote...

Pranjal : Isme jitna aap soch rahe ho utna risk nahi hai. Haa thoda maamla gambheer rahega but solution issi se niklega aap dekhna...

Vivek : Hmm! Theek hai fir... Yadi yahi sahi hai toh... Yaad rakhna... Koi gadbad nahi...

Pranjal : Bilkul! Isme mujhe aapki madad lagegi.

Vivek : Hmm!

***

Washington, United States...

Ek bade si 5 stat hotel me iss waqt ek shandaar luxury room me bistar par ek behad hi sundar ladki so rahi thi.

Kuch aahat paate hi uski bauhe sikudi aur agle hi pal wo neend se baahar aa gayi.


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Palke jhapkaate hue wo uthi. Keval ek bra aur neeche panty pehni hui thi woh.

Usne jab gaur kiya ki toh dekha side me Dressing table ke paas ek red haired beauty khadi hui thi. Aur dressing ko jama rahi thi.

Ladki : Hmm? Julia?

Uss ladki ne pukaara toh wo laal baalo waali aurat forun hi palti aur usse dekhi...

Ye thi Julia. Bistar par laiti hui ladki ki head maid. Bole toh saari maids ki head.

Russian beauty thi woh. Uske laal baal bade hi acche se ek bun me bandhe hue the. Aur uska aakarshan hi dekhne laayak tha.

Julia : Miss! You are awake!? (Miss! Uth gayi aap?)

Ladki : Yeah!

Aage badh wo dressing ke paas aayi toh Julia ne forun hi uske shareer ko dhakne ke liye ek night nikaal aur usse peeche se pehnaane lagi.

Ladki : Julia?

Julia : Yes Miss!?

Ladki : What is life?

Julia : Miss! You are asking me this question for the 12th time. (Miss! Ye prashn aap mujhse baarvi baar puch rahi hai.)

Ladki : Just answer me Julia.

Julia (sighs) : People are born miss. It's a journey. During this journey, they make friends, establish relationships, they laugh, they love, they cry and this goes on. They make kids to teach them how to live and then again this goes on. One day, we die and everything we earned remains here only.

(Logo ka janm hota hai miss! Ye ek safar hai. Aur iss safar me, log dost banaate hai, rishte banaate hai, wo hasste hai, pyaar karte hai, rote hai aur yahi chalta jaata hai. Wo apni santaane karte hai aur unhe sikhaate hai ki zindagi kese jeete hai aur fir wahi chalta jaata hai. Ek din, hum marr jaate hai aur humne jo kuch bhi kamaaya wo yahi reh jaata hai.)

Ladki : ....

Julia : Was my answer to your satisfaction? (Kya mera jawaab aapke liye santushti janak tha?)

Ladki : No! I still don't understand.

Julia (sighs) : Sorry! Miss!

Ladki : No! It's okay! Prepare the tea. I'll take a bath.

Julia : As you wish Miss!

Aue wo ladki itna bol nahaane chali gayi. Aur Julia keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi.

'Poor Miss! If only I could help her...'

***

Mumbai...

Outer area me sthit ek building ki top floor par ek aadmi kursi par baitha hua tha.

Ki tabhi uska phone baj utha...

Aadmi : Hello?

Voice : Kese ho Aatish mere sher!?

Jii haa! Ye Aatish hi tha. Aur phone ke dusre taraf se aa rahi awaaz sunn wo agle pal hi uth ke khada ho gaya.

Aatish : D-Dada aap!?

Voice : Hmm! Suno... Mene ye bataane ke liye phone kiya hai, ki ab tumhe uss ladki ke peecha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mein already India aane waala hu aur wese bhi... Wo mera shikaar hai. Mene toh keval tumhe thode din maza karne ke liye ye kaam de diya tha haha~

Aatish : Ohh! Jesa aap kahe Dada!

Voice : Toh? Tumhaari aadat gayi ya nahi? Ya abhi bhi logo ke vishwaash todne me lage ho?

Aatish : Hahaha~ aap toh jaante hi ho... Yahi mera sukoon hai. Waqai! Abhi kuch dino se maza kaafi aa raha hai.

Voice : Hmm! Chalo! Accha rakhta hu. Meri flight ka time ho raha hai.

Aatish : Okay Dada!

*Call ends*

Aatish muskuraate hue apni hat aur hockey stick uthaaye neeche jaane laga.

'Tumhaare liye ek uphaar hai...'

Soch wo neeche chala gaya.

Par...

Usse nahi pata tha. Ki shayad Veer ko chorr ke usne ek boht badi galti kar dii hai. Shayad apne jeevan ki sabse badi galti...
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Update - 37 ~ Consolation and Schemes
Ab tak...

Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.

Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??

Veer : ??


Ab aage...

Kal jo kuch bhi khaufnauk haadsa hua tha, uss haadse ke baad se zaahir sii baat thi ki Veer ki haalat iss waqt shabdo me baya karne waali nahi thi.

Wo andar se aur saath hi saath baahar se bhi toota hua tha. Na keval Aatish ne usse andar se toda tha balki uske gundo ne milke, Veer pe haath saaf karne ki bhi koi kasar nahi chorri thi.

Usse jese ek behad bada jhatka sa laga tha. Apne kamre me zameen par paav sikode aur apna sarr jhukaaye baithe hue tha wo. Beech beech me Veer ka shareer kaanp uthata aur wo apne kaanpte hue haath khol unhe dekh khud se hi baat karne lagta...

'I-I killed him... Mene... Mene usse... Mene inhi haatho se G-Golu ko... Mene maar diya... Pari!?? Mene... I killed him Pari... I... *sniff* I killed him.'

[Master! Please! I beg you! Isme aap ki koi galti nahi thi Master. Hume nahi pata tha ki hum jab jab aage badh rahe the, hum Golu ko maar rahe the. Ye sab anjaane me hua Master. Isme saari galti uss aadmi ki hai. He set that trap. M-Master... Please! Khud ko sambhaaliye... Golu ki death ka badla aap ko hi lena hai master. Aap aise haar nahi maan sakte. Wo aadmi yahi chaahta hai master. Usne Ragini ke saath bhi wahi kiya tha na... Dekha nahi aapne? Waha se aane ke baad hi uske aur Vivek ke beech kitni badi daraar aa gayi hai? Master... Aapko hi kuch karna hoga.]

'Pari... Pari... Golu ko mene maar diya Pari... Mene apne hi haatho se... Usne meri jaan do baar bachaayi thi. Aur jaha mujhe usse bachaana chahiye tha. Waha... Waha mene ulta inhi haatho se usse maar diya.'

[Master! No! You didn't! Aapne nahi maara hai Golu ko master. Uss aadmi ne maara hai. Aap toh ye soch ke aage badh rahe the ki hum Golu ko bachaane ke liye uske nazdeek pohuch rahe hai. Par hume kuch nahi pata tha Master.]

'Sab meri galti hai... Sab... Mene kisi ka khoon kar diya Pari... Mene... I'm a murderer now... *sniff* Mein hi doshi hu... Saara ka saara dosh mera hai. Haan! Tum... Tum sab mujhe akela chorr do... Mein... Mein akela hi thik tha. Chali jao Pari tum bhi... I'm really a loser now. Ek dost ko nahi bacha saka mein... Ulta uski hi jaan le liya. Pari... Jao... Mein kuch nahi hu Pari. Tumhe iss shareer me sab bekaar hi milega Pari... *sniff*'

[Master! Please aisa mat kahiye. You are the best master. Aur, I cannot leave your body. Mein aapki body chorr kar jau, iske keval do hi raaste hai. Aur wo dono boht hi extreme hai. Aur mein kabhi aapse alag nahi houngi. Please! Master! Meri baat samajhne ki koshish kariye.]

'No... Pari... I...'

Veer ki maansik haalat itni kharaab thi ki wo Pari ki baat samajhne ka prayaas hi nahi kar paa raha tha. Jo jhatka usse laga tha, wo kahi hadd tak usse andar se hila ke rakha hua tha.

Pari ki harr baat ko wo ignore kar khud ko dosh diye jaa raha tha, jab achanak hi uske kaano me ek awaaz padi...

"V-Veer!?"

'??'

Aur ye awaaz sunte hi Veer ne apna sarr haule se uthaaya.

Uske saamne Nidhi chintit sa chehra liye darwaaze ki dehleez pe khadi hui thi. Aur itna hi nahi, Nidhi ke peeche hi Kavya aur Arohi bhi khadi hui thi.

Dheere dheere...

Nidhi apne kadam badhaate hue aage aayi. Uske perro me bandhi payal ki awaaz Veer bhali bhaati sunn paa raha tha.

Wo uske sameep aake jhuki aur usse dekhne lagi.

Nidhi Veer ki vartmaan haalat dekh ke hi ghabraayi sii hui thi. Aankho me halke halke aasu the, wo laal ho rakhi thi, aur unhi aankho ke neeche kaalapan. Jo ye batla raha tha ki Veer soya nahi hai raat bhar.

'Ye!? Ye kya haalat ho rakhi hai Veer ki!?'

Nidhi mann me soch aage badh Veer ke chehre par apne haath le gayi aur bade hi haule se usne Veer ke gaalo se unn aasuo ko pocha.

"Ma'am!?"

Uske thar tharaate hue hontho se jab wo shabd nikle toh Nidhi ne uski hatheli apne haatho me bheench lii.

Nidhi : Ye... Ye sab kya haal bana rakha hai Veer!?

Par Veer kuch na bola. Uski aankho se aasu nirantar behte chale jaa rahe the, jo Nidhi apne haatho se pochti jaa rahi thi.

'Kahi...!? Kahi Veer ke gharwaalo ne toh kuch nahi kiya uske saath!?'

Ye soch Nidhi ki nazre Kavya aur Arohi ki taraf gayi aur usne thoda gusse se unn dono ko dekha.

Par jab usse laga ki Kavya ne hi toh usse yaha call karke bulaaya tha aur saath hi saath dono behno ke chehre par jab usse chinta nazar aayi toh Nidhi ne ye khayaal forun hi apne mann se nikaal diya.

Nidhi : Veer!? Mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu. Jawaab do meri baat ka. Ye sab kya hai? Kya hua hai?

Par Veer abhi bhi kuch nahi bol raha tha. Yaha se Nidhi ki awaaz, toh andar se Pari ki awaaz aur fir uske khud ke antar mann ki awaaz jo usse doshi thehra rahi thi. Inn sab ke chalte wo bas ek jagah bina kisi hosh ke besudh sa dekhe jaa raha tha.

Nidhi : Tum Kavya ho na!?

Kavya : Huh? J-Jii!

Nidhi : Kal aisa kya hua tha? Jo Veer ki haalat aisi ho gayi hai? Batao mujhe... Jaldi...

Nidhi ke chehre par chinta dekh, Kavya thodi hairaan thi. Par ek baat usse clear ho chuki thi. Wo ye ki usne Nidhi ko yaha bula ke ekdum sahi decision liya tha.

Kavya : Wo... Ma'am... Mein aapko poori baat bataati hu. Darasal... Diwali ki night me mein aur Arohi dii yaha par aa rahe the. Tab raaste me hi kuch gunde hamaare peeche pad gaye the. Mene Veer bhaiya ko call karke bulaaya tha aur unhone hi hume bachaaya tha. Par uss din unn logo ne Veer bhaiya ko kaafi chotil kar diya tha.

Nidhi : Kyaaa?

Kavya : Hmm! Aur fir kal... Achanak hi bhaiya bole ki unhe kuch kaam hai aur raat me hi kareeb 7:30 baje ghar se nikal gaye. Par... *sniff* Par...

Bolte bolte Kavya yu rone lagi toh uski baat ko Arohi ne poora kiya.

Arohi : Par raat me hi... Kal Veer hume ghar ke baahar mila. Veer ko boht chot aayi hui thi. Abhi bhi uske badan par chot ke nishaan hai. Doctor ne treatment kiya aur medicine deke chala gaya tha wo. Par uske baad se... Veer na toh kuch khaa raha hai, na kisi se baat kar raha hai aur kuch bata bhi nahi raha hai. Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai ma'am. Wo log kaun the!? Aur kyu hamaare peeche pade hue the? Aur Veer kaha gaya tha kal jo uski ye haalat ho gayi? Yadi aap kuch hal nikaal sakti hai toh please...

[Master! Look! Nidhi ko aapki kitni chinta hai. Please! Listen to her.]

Nidhi : Veer! Meri taraf dekho... Kidhar gaye the tum kal!? Batao! Mein kuch puch rahi hu tumse Veer! Meri baato ko yu ansuna kar doge!? Mein tumhaari Ma'am hu na!? Bolo!?

Wo usse thoda sa hilaate hue puchi par...

Veer toh jese kisi murde ki tarah ho chuka tha. Koi harqat nahi kar raha tha.

[No! No! No! This is bad... Master ka emotional state itna unstable kese...!? Yadi aisa hi chalta raha toh master pakka depression me chale jaenge. Nooooo! Mujhe kuch karna hoga...]

Aur agle hi pal...

[Maaaaaassssteeeeeeerrrrrrrrr!]

'Huhhhh!?'

Pari uske andar itni zorr se chillaayi jiske chalte Veer ko kuch hosh aaya.

[Wo aadmi ab aapki Nidhi Ma'am ko maarega.]

Ye sunte hi Veer ki aankhein felti chali gayi!

'Huh!? M-Ma'am?? N-Nooo...'

[Yes! Even Shreya ko... Aapki Kavya ko... Arohi too... Ragini ko... Sabko maarega wo.]

'N-Nahi... Aisa nahi...'

[Of course! Aur kabhi aapne zara bhi fikar kii!?]

'???'

[Ki yadi aapki Juhi ko kuch hua toh!?]

Juhi ka naam sunte hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Uss pyaari sii bacchi ka khilkhilaata chehra uske mann me aaya. Yadi usse galti se bhi kuch hua...

Ye sochte hi Veer itna darr gaya ki uska badan kaanpne laga.

[Of course! He will kill them all. Kyuki aap toh yaha haath pe haath dharre baithe rahoge. Uske liye kaam asaan ho jaega. Yahi toh chaahta hai woh...]

'N-Nahiiiii... Aisa... Aisa kabhi nahi...'

[Bilkul hoga. Yadi aapne jald hi action nahi liya toh aisa hi hoga. Kabhi socha hai!? Ki yadi uss raat Kavya ya Arohi me se koi bhi pakdi jaati toh kya haal hota unka!? Fir aap... Apni hi behan ke hatyaare ho jaate Master. Aapki ek behan ki jaan jaati, ya dono ki hi jaa sakti thi.]

Ye baat jese kisi bhaari patthar ki tarah aake Veer ke upar giri. Aur uska poora astitv jese hila kar rakh diya.

[Aapki ye Nidhi Ma'am! Kabhi socha hai ki wo aadmi yadi inke peeche pad jaaye toh!?]

Pari ki baat sunn Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha jo usse hi chintit nazro se dekh rahi thi.

[You will lose her. You will lose everything. She will die.]

'N-Nahiiiiiiii'

[Bilkul! Yahi hoega! Aap sab kuch kho doge. Kaha gayi aapki wo pride? Kaha gaya aapke andar ka wo josh? Kya yu hi haar maan jaoge aap? Bhool gaye apna lakshya!? Aapko toh ek boht bada aadmi bann'na hai na? Kya hoga uss vaade ka jo aapne Juhi ko diya tha? Uske liye chocolate ki poori factory kholne waale the na aap?

Kya Nidhi jii ko uss Rajat ke changul se nahi nikaalenge aap? Bhool gaye ki abhi aapko apni saalo se bichdi Maa ko bhi dhundna hai? Kaha gaye wo saare vaade jo aapne mujh se kiye the? Kya wo sab dhong tha?

Yadi aise hi rahe aap... Toh sab kuch gawa baithoge Master. Nidhi, Shreya, Kavya... Ye sab aapke saamne maari jaengi aur aap kuch nahi kar paoge.]

'N-Nooooooo... I don't want to lose her... I don't want to lose anyone... Mein kisi ko bhi nahi khona chaahta... Nooooo... I really don't...'

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ko apni baaho me bhar liya.

"Aahhh!? Veeerrr!?"

Nidhi iss hamle se thodi hairaan zaroor thi par jab usse Veer ka kaampta hua badan mehsoos hua aur jab usse apne nagn kandhe par Veer ke aasuo ka ehsaas hua toh Nidhi kuch na boli aur uske haath apne aap hi Veer ke ird gird lapit gaye. Usne uske sarr ke peeche haath le jaa usse thaama aur apne se laga liga. Dheere dheere wo Veer ki peeth sehlaate hue usse shaant karne lagi.

Idhar Kavya aur Arohi dono hi hairat ke maare ye sab dekh rahi thi. Par kahi na kahi unhe iss baat se zyaada khushi thi ki Veer at least ab kuch movements toh show kar raha tha.

[Phew! Master ka dil boht kamzor hai. Unki family ne unke saath itna bura behave kiya hai... Aaarghhh! I hate them all. Hmm? Nidhi ki favourability 56? That's good! Kavya ki...!? 78!! Ohh! And Arohi?? Huh??? 40!?? Wow! This is surprising. Master ko baad me bata dungi mein.]

'Mein... Mein unhe khona nahi chaahta... I will kill him... Mein... Kuch nahi hone dunga kisi ko... I... I...'

"Haaaahhhh haaahhhh haaahhh..."

Aur achanak hi Veer ki saasein itni tezz ho gayi ki waha maujood sabhi ladkiya ghabra gayi.

Nidhi : Veer??? Ye... Ye kya ho raha hai...!? Kya hua tumhe?

Wo lambi lambi saasein le raha tha aur achanak hi usne apna seena zorr se haatho se bheech liya.

"Haaaaahh... Haaahhh"

Kavya : Bhaaaaiyaaaaaa

Kavya chillaayi toh Arohi bina samay gawaaye bhaagte hue neeche gayi aur Ragini ko bula kar laayi.

Ragini samet Suman aur baaki sabhi bhaagti hui aayi aur Veer ki haalat dekh Ragini ne koi galti nahi kii aur seedhe hi doctor ko phone laga diya.

Doctor ka ghar paas me hi tha aur uska clinic bhi uske ghar se bagal me tha toh woh forun hi kuch minutes me aa gaya.

***

Kuch derr baad...

Veer bistar par laita hua tha, uski aankhein band thi aur shirt ki saari buttons khuli thi jiske chalte uska saara seena nazar aa raha tha. Shayad doctor ne abhi check up kiya tha.

Ragini : K...Kya hua tha doctor Veer ko?

Doctor : He was hyperventilating.

Kavya : Huh???

Doctor : Samjhaata hu... Emotional stress ya emotional breakdown, anxiety ki wajah se kabhi kabhi aadmi panic kar jaata hai aur lambi lambi saasein lene lagta hai aur isse hum hyperventilation kehte hai.

Kavya : ??

Doctor : Insaan oxygen ko andar leta hai aur carbon dioxide ko baahar chorrta hai right?

Kavya : Hmm!

Doctor : Hyperventilation ke samay... Aap jitna oxygen andar nahi lete ho uss se zyaada carbon dioxide ko baahar chorrne lagte ho, jiske chalte carbon dioxide ki maatra body me kam ho jaati hai aur ye situation create ho jaati hai.

Kavya : Ahhh!

Nidhi : Toh... Toh thik toh hai na Veer!?

Doctor : Jii haa! Bas thoda araam ki zaroorat hai. Inhe rest karne dijiye... Accha! Ragini jii! Ab mein chalta hu. Yadi fir se koi dikkat samajh aati hai toh aap call kar lijiyega.

Ragini : J-Jii! Thank you so much doctor!

Doctor : Ye toh hamaara kaam hai Ragini jii!

Aur itna bol doctor fees leke waha se nikal gaya.

Idhar Veer ki khuli shirt dekh, Kavya aage badh unn buttons ko band karne hi waali thi jab usse apne bagal me achanak hi ek hawa ka jhoka mehsoos hua.

'Huhhh!?'

Dekha toh paaya ki...

Arohi uske bagal se nikal aage badhi aur Veer ke paas jaa pohuchi.

Apne haatho ko aage badha ke wo Veer ki shirt ki buttons dheere dheere band karne lagi.

Kabhi bauhe sikode wo Veer ke chehre ko dekhti toh kabhi uske seene ko jinpar halke halke choto ke nishaan the.

Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me.

Kavya ne jab ye dekha toh uske kadam wahi tham gaye. Par...

Hontho par agle hi pal ek santushti bhari muskaan bhi aa chuki thi.

***

Ek bade se ghar me iss waqt ek kamre me ek aadmi idhar se udhar tehel raha tha aur kisi uljhan me nazar aa raha tha.

Toh wahi uske peeche ek sofe pe ek aur naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha.

Aur ye tehelne waala vyakti koi aur nahi, Vivek hi tha. Saath hi saath sofe par baitha yuvak uska chota bhai ~ Pranjal tha.

Pranjal : Aise tehelne se kuch nahi hoga bhaiya.

Vivek : Toh kya karuuuu?? Huh?? Ragini... Ek number ki murkh aurat hai... Idhar apne pati ka saath chorr ke udhar ghar me reh rahi hai. Saala company me na jaane kya kya afwaaye fela rahe hai employees. Ki bhaag gayi hogi, utha ke le gaya koi, talaak ho gaya... Fuck! Aur upar se wo saala Veer bhi wahi hai. Kya soch ke Ragini ne usse apne ghar me rakh liya? Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya uska?

Pranjal : Dekha jaaye toh isme aapki bhi thodi galti thi bhaiya. Ladkiya boht hi sensitive hoti hai. Aapne jo baat kahi thi uske chalte Bhabhi boht zyaada naraaz hai aapse jo ki bani baat hai. Aapko unhe behla fusla kar manaana hoga tab hi kuch hoga.

Vivek : Sab kar chuka hu chote. Yaha tak ki mom dad ko bhi leke gaya tha. Par saala wo sunn'ne ko hi taiyaar nahi hai. Upar se pata nahi kaun sii saheli ko bulaayi hai jo uske ghar me dera jama ke baithi hui hai. Ek baar me usne mom dad aur meri bolti band kar dii thi waha...

Pranjal : Hmm?? Ohh! Thoda samay dijiye fir bhabhi ko. Par harr ek do din me unse baat karte rehna. Unhe jataiye ki aapka unke bagerr mann nahi lagta. Dekhna, wo jald hi maan jaengi.

Vivek : Hmm! Wese... Kuch socha? Property ke baare me!?

Pranjal : Aapki baat Tai jii se hui thi na?

Vivek : Hmm! Haan! Unhe property Bhumika ke liye chaahiye haha~

Pranjal (smiles) : Bada hi mast plan bana ke unhe apne side liya tha humne hai na? Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwaane me akhir unhone bhi samay samay par apna yogdaan dete hue hamaari madad kii thi. Aur humne unhe property ka kuch hissa dene ka waada kiya tha. Toh? Doge aap? Unhe property?

Vivek (smiles) : Hahaha~ pagal hai kya? Dene ke liye thodi hi ye plan kiya hu. Ek rupaya bhi na milne wala unhe. Wo toh upar se sauteli maa hai Veer ki. Bhala jab Veer ko kuch na mila toh hamaare rehte hue ye sauteli Tai aur unki beti ko kaha se kuch milega?

Pranjal : Hmm! Par yadi unhone ye raaz khol diya ki Veer ko baahar nikalwaane me hamaara haath hai toh?

Vivek (smiles) : Toh? Toh kya... Unka muh kese band karwaana hai uska bhi ilaaj hai mere paas... Hahaha~

Pranjal : Waah! Wese... Dada jii ke baare me kuch socha hai? Kyuki jab wo raazi honge tabhi toh property hume milegi bhaiya. Aur unhone toh keh ke rakha hai ki jab tak Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak wo koi faisla nahi lenge.

Vivek : Bas! Ussi ki toh tension hai chote. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Pranjal : Wese... Mere paas ek idea hai. Yadi aap suno toh...

Vivek : Kesa idea?

Pranjal : Idhar aaiye...

Vivek ko apne paas bula ke Pranjal ne dheere se apne kuch bol rakhe, jisse sunn ke Vivek ekdum se hadbada ke uth gaya.

Vivek : Ch-Chote!?? Ye... Ye?? Tu? Ye boht zyaada nahi ho gaya?

Pranjal : Sach me? Yahi baat aapne mujhe tab bhi kahi thi jab hum Veer ko nikalwa rahe the. Kahiye! Kya tab zyaada hua tha? Kya kisi ko pata chala? Nahi na!? Fir?

Vivek : Fir bhi chote...

Pranjal : Isme jitna aap soch rahe ho utna risk nahi hai. Haa thoda maamla gambheer rahega but solution issi se niklega aap dekhna...

Vivek : Hmm! Theek hai fir... Yadi yahi sahi hai toh... Yaad rakhna... Koi gadbad nahi...

Pranjal : Bilkul! Isme mujhe aapki madad lagegi.

Vivek : Hmm!

***

Washington, United States...

Ek bade si 5 stat hotel me iss waqt ek shandaar luxury room me bistar par ek behad hi sundar ladki so rahi thi.

Kuch aahat paate hi uski bauhe sikudi aur agle hi pal wo neend se baahar aa gayi.


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Palke jhapkaate hue wo uthi. Keval ek bra aur neeche panty pehni hui thi woh.

Usne jab gaur kiya ki toh dekha side me Dressing table ke paas ek red haired beauty khadi hui thi. Aur dressing ko jama rahi thi.

Ladki : Hmm? Julia?

Uss ladki ne pukaara toh wo laal baalo waali aurat forun hi palti aur usse dekhi...

Ye thi Julia. Bistar par laiti hui ladki ki head maid. Bole toh saari maids ki head.

Russian beauty thi woh. Uske laal baal bade hi acche se ek bun me bandhe hue the. Aur uska aakarshan hi dekhne laayak tha.

Julia : Miss! You are awake!? (Miss! Uth gayi aap?)

Ladki : Yeah!

Aage badh wo dressing ke paas aayi toh Julia ne forun hi uske shareer ko dhakne ke liye ek nighty nikaal aur usse peeche se pehnaane lagi.

Ladki : Julia?

Julia : Yes Miss!?

Ladki : What is life?

Julia : Miss! You are asking me this question for the 12th time. (Miss! Ye prashn aap mujhse baarvi baar puch rahi hai.)

Ladki : Just answer me Julia.

Julia (sighs) : People are born miss. It's a journey. During this journey, they make friends, establish relationships, they laugh, they love, they cry and this goes on. They make kids to teach them how to live and then again this goes on. One day, we die and everything we earned remains here only.

(Logo ka janm hota hai miss! Ye ek safar hai. Aur iss safar me, log dost banaate hai, rishte banaate hai, wo hasste hai, pyaar karte hai, rote hai aur yahi chalta jaata hai. Wo apni santaane karte hai aur unhe sikhaate hai ki zindagi kese jeete hai aur fir wahi chalta jaata hai. Ek din, hum marr jaate hai aur humne jo kuch bhi kamaaya wo yahi reh jaata hai.)

Ladki : ....

Julia : Was my answer to your satisfaction? (Kya mera jawaab aapke liye santushti janak tha?)

Ladki : No! I still don't understand.

Julia (sighs) : Sorry! Miss!

Ladki : No! It's okay! Prepare the tea. I'll take a bath.

Julia : As you wish Miss!

Aue wo ladki itna bol nahaane chali gayi. Aur Julia keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi.

'Poor Miss! If only I could help her...'

***

Mumbai...

Outer area me sthit ek building ki top floor par ek aadmi kursi par baitha hua tha.

Ki tabhi uska phone baj utha...

Aadmi : Hello?

Voice : Kese ho Aatish mere sher!?

Jii haa! Ye Aatish hi tha. Aur phone ke dusre taraf se aa rahi awaaz sunn wo agle pal hi uth ke khada ho gaya.

Aatish : D-Dada aap!?

Voice : Hmm! Suno... Mene ye bataane ke liye phone kiya hai, ki ab tumhe uss ladki ke peecha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mein already India aane waala hu aur wese bhi... Wo mera shikaar hai. Mene toh keval tumhe thode din maza karne ke liye ye kaam de diya tha haha~

Aatish : Ohh! Jesa aap kahe Dada!

Voice : Toh? Tumhaari aadat gayi ya nahi? Ya abhi bhi logo ke vishwaash todne me lage ho?

Aatish : Hahaha~ aap toh jaante hi ho... Yahi mera sukoon hai. Waqai! Abhi kuch dino se maza kaafi aa raha hai.

Voice : Hmm! Chalo! Accha rakhta hu. Meri flight ka time ho raha hai.

Aatish : Okay Dada!

*Call ends*

Aatish muskuraate hue apni hat aur hockey stick uthaaye neeche jaane laga.

'Tumhaare liye ek uphaar hai...'

Soch wo neeche chala gaya.

Par...

Usse nahi pata tha. Ki shayad Veer ko chorr ke usne ek boht badi galti kar dii hai. Shayad apne jeevan ki sabse badi galti...
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Like kar diyo re! :bigboss:
Dhanyavaad!
Awesome update bhai
 
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