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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 234 13.6%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

  • Total voters
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Werewolf

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Aakash.

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I can understand Veer's condition, he was lonely since childhood and family's rude behavior towards him, he became friend for the first time and also left his side, it hurts, now everyone is with him and especially Pari who will Don't let him give up, so hopefully everything will be alright soon. :?:
Well may Nidhi mam's love be the support of his strength and loneliness. :blush: I feel relieved to see Vivek upset :D Pranjal and Vivek made a new plan, now let's see what ruckus these people create.
It's good you explained, I don't remember anything :sad: I have come to see a wonderful romantic scene, hope my wish will come true soon. :pray:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...
 

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Arre mere pyaare tuchkulo... :laughing:
Update me kitni saari hints dii gayi hai. Par samjhe hi nahi ju log?
Wo Dada jo Aatish se baat kiya wo koi aur nahi SLOGAN tha. Arre ussi ne toh Aatish ko kaha tha na uss club waali ladki ko pakadne ke liye!? Toh ab wo India aa raha hai, aur usne Aatish ko rok diya hai. Wo khud apne target ko pakdega.

Jo ladki dekhi iss update me, wo koi aur nahi club waali ladki hi hai. Bhul kese jaate ho ju log? :laughing:

Harr baar uski same face ki pic lagaata hu mein. Upar se keval usko hi Miss kehkar bulaate hai Sab. Julia ko bhi nahi pehchaan paaye!? Uski entry toh second time thi yaha par. Update 11 ka end part firse padho jaake. Sab bhul jaate ho ju log. :slap:
Bhai ap hi bata do ki ek update me kitane story line chal raha hai. Aatish ki story line. Nidhi ki story line. Vivek aur pranjal. Suhana. Veer ki stepmother aur stepsister. Veer ki real mom aur sister jiska nam pata nahi. Aur club wali ladki. main Veer ki story line. Har update me 2 se 3 story line chal rahi hoti hai. Na ki koi ek story line focus hoti hai. Jis se bada update bhi adhura lagta. mujhe har update adhura lagta hai kyunki.
Uska ek hi resone hai. Ek sath 2 se 3 story line chalna. Wo bhi adhe adhura.
Pahile 10 se update sirf veer pe focus the isliye update pure lagte the. Par abhi ke nahi lagte.
 

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Pranjal khud ke dada manorath ka kaam tamaam karne wala hai vivek ke sath milke...
Agar Usne Aisa kiya to Khai sari property uske haath se hi na chali jaye.

★ Agar Aisa Hua Tha yha to sari property trust me ya apne favorite pote ke paas hi jani hai yani (Veer) ke hath me.
 

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Update - 37 ~ Consolation and Schemes
Ab tak...

Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.

Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??

Veer : ??


Ab aage...

Kal jo kuch bhi khaufnauk haadsa hua tha, uss haadse ke baad se zaahir sii baat thi ki Veer ki haalat iss waqt shabdo me baya karne waali nahi thi.

Wo andar se aur saath hi saath baahar se bhi toota hua tha. Na keval Aatish ne usse andar se toda tha balki uske gundo ne milke, Veer pe haath saaf karne ki bhi koi kasar nahi chorri thi.

Usse jese ek behad bada jhatka sa laga tha. Apne kamre me zameen par paav sikode aur apna sarr jhukaaye baithe hue tha wo. Beech beech me Veer ka shareer kaanp uthata aur wo apne kaanpte hue haath khol unhe dekh khud se hi baat karne lagta...

'I-I killed him... Mene... Mene usse... Mene inhi haatho se G-Golu ko... Mene maar diya... Pari!?? Mene... I killed him Pari... I... *sniff* I killed him.'

[Master! Please! I beg you! Isme aap ki koi galti nahi thi Master. Hume nahi pata tha ki hum jab jab aage badh rahe the, hum Golu ko maar rahe the. Ye sab anjaane me hua Master. Isme saari galti uss aadmi ki hai. He set that trap. M-Master... Please! Khud ko sambhaaliye... Golu ki death ka badla aap ko hi lena hai master. Aap aise haar nahi maan sakte. Wo aadmi yahi chaahta hai master. Usne Ragini ke saath bhi wahi kiya tha na... Dekha nahi aapne? Waha se aane ke baad hi uske aur Vivek ke beech kitni badi daraar aa gayi hai? Master... Aapko hi kuch karna hoga.]

'Pari... Pari... Golu ko mene maar diya Pari... Mene apne hi haatho se... Usne meri jaan do baar bachaayi thi. Aur jaha mujhe usse bachaana chahiye tha. Waha... Waha mene ulta inhi haatho se usse maar diya.'

[Master! No! You didn't! Aapne nahi maara hai Golu ko master. Uss aadmi ne maara hai. Aap toh ye soch ke aage badh rahe the ki hum Golu ko bachaane ke liye uske nazdeek pohuch rahe hai. Par hume kuch nahi pata tha Master.]

'Sab meri galti hai... Sab... Mene kisi ka khoon kar diya Pari... Mene... I'm a murderer now... *sniff* Mein hi doshi hu... Saara ka saara dosh mera hai. Haan! Tum... Tum sab mujhe akela chorr do... Mein... Mein akela hi thik tha. Chali jao Pari tum bhi... I'm really a loser now. Ek dost ko nahi bacha saka mein... Ulta uski hi jaan le liya. Pari... Jao... Mein kuch nahi hu Pari. Tumhe iss shareer me sab bekaar hi milega Pari... *sniff*'

[Master! Please aisa mat kahiye. You are the best master. Aur, I cannot leave your body. Mein aapki body chorr kar jau, iske keval do hi raaste hai. Aur wo dono boht hi extreme hai. Aur mein kabhi aapse alag nahi houngi. Please! Master! Meri baat samajhne ki koshish kariye.]

'No... Pari... I...'

Veer ki maansik haalat itni kharaab thi ki wo Pari ki baat samajhne ka prayaas hi nahi kar paa raha tha. Jo jhatka usse laga tha, wo kahi hadd tak usse andar se hila ke rakha hua tha.

Pari ki harr baat ko wo ignore kar khud ko dosh diye jaa raha tha, jab achanak hi uske kaano me ek awaaz padi...

"V-Veer!?"

'??'

Aur ye awaaz sunte hi Veer ne apna sarr haule se uthaaya.

Uske saamne Nidhi chintit sa chehra liye darwaaze ki dehleez pe khadi hui thi. Aur itna hi nahi, Nidhi ke peeche hi Kavya aur Arohi bhi khadi hui thi.

Dheere dheere...

Nidhi apne kadam badhaate hue aage aayi. Uske perro me bandhi payal ki awaaz Veer bhali bhaati sunn paa raha tha.

Wo uske sameep aake jhuki aur usse dekhne lagi.

Nidhi Veer ki vartmaan haalat dekh ke hi ghabraayi sii hui thi. Aankho me halke halke aasu the, wo laal ho rakhi thi, aur unhi aankho ke neeche kaalapan. Jo ye batla raha tha ki Veer soya nahi hai raat bhar.

'Ye!? Ye kya haalat ho rakhi hai Veer ki!?'

Nidhi mann me soch aage badh Veer ke chehre par apne haath le gayi aur bade hi haule se usne Veer ke gaalo se unn aasuo ko pocha.

"Ma'am!?"

Uske thar tharaate hue hontho se jab wo shabd nikle toh Nidhi ne uski hatheli apne haatho me bheench lii.

Nidhi : Ye... Ye sab kya haal bana rakha hai Veer!?

Par Veer kuch na bola. Uski aankho se aasu nirantar behte chale jaa rahe the, jo Nidhi apne haatho se pochti jaa rahi thi.

'Kahi...!? Kahi Veer ke gharwaalo ne toh kuch nahi kiya uske saath!?'

Ye soch Nidhi ki nazre Kavya aur Arohi ki taraf gayi aur usne thoda gusse se unn dono ko dekha.

Par jab usse laga ki Kavya ne hi toh usse yaha call karke bulaaya tha aur saath hi saath dono behno ke chehre par jab usse chinta nazar aayi toh Nidhi ne ye khayaal forun hi apne mann se nikaal diya.

Nidhi : Veer!? Mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu. Jawaab do meri baat ka. Ye sab kya hai? Kya hua hai?

Par Veer abhi bhi kuch nahi bol raha tha. Yaha se Nidhi ki awaaz, toh andar se Pari ki awaaz aur fir uske khud ke antar mann ki awaaz jo usse doshi thehra rahi thi. Inn sab ke chalte wo bas ek jagah bina kisi hosh ke besudh sa dekhe jaa raha tha.

Nidhi : Tum Kavya ho na!?

Kavya : Huh? J-Jii!

Nidhi : Kal aisa kya hua tha? Jo Veer ki haalat aisi ho gayi hai? Batao mujhe... Jaldi...

Nidhi ke chehre par chinta dekh, Kavya thodi hairaan thi. Par ek baat usse clear ho chuki thi. Wo ye ki usne Nidhi ko yaha bula ke ekdum sahi decision liya tha.

Kavya : Wo... Ma'am... Mein aapko poori baat bataati hu. Darasal... Diwali ki night me mein aur Arohi dii yaha par aa rahe the. Tab raaste me hi kuch gunde hamaare peeche pad gaye the. Mene Veer bhaiya ko call karke bulaaya tha aur unhone hi hume bachaaya tha. Par uss din unn logo ne Veer bhaiya ko kaafi chotil kar diya tha.

Nidhi : Kyaaa?

Kavya : Hmm! Aur fir kal... Achanak hi bhaiya bole ki unhe kuch kaam hai aur raat me hi kareeb 7:30 baje ghar se nikal gaye. Par... *sniff* Par...

Bolte bolte Kavya yu rone lagi toh uski baat ko Arohi ne poora kiya.

Arohi : Par raat me hi... Kal Veer hume ghar ke baahar mila. Veer ko boht chot aayi hui thi. Abhi bhi uske badan par chot ke nishaan hai. Doctor ne treatment kiya aur medicine deke chala gaya tha wo. Par uske baad se... Veer na toh kuch khaa raha hai, na kisi se baat kar raha hai aur kuch bata bhi nahi raha hai. Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai ma'am. Wo log kaun the!? Aur kyu hamaare peeche pade hue the? Aur Veer kaha gaya tha kal jo uski ye haalat ho gayi? Yadi aap kuch hal nikaal sakti hai toh please...

[Master! Look! Nidhi ko aapki kitni chinta hai. Please! Listen to her.]

Nidhi : Veer! Meri taraf dekho... Kidhar gaye the tum kal!? Batao! Mein kuch puch rahi hu tumse Veer! Meri baato ko yu ansuna kar doge!? Mein tumhaari Ma'am hu na!? Bolo!?

Wo usse thoda sa hilaate hue puchi par...

Veer toh jese kisi murde ki tarah ho chuka tha. Koi harqat nahi kar raha tha.

[No! No! No! This is bad... Master ka emotional state itna unstable kese...!? Yadi aisa hi chalta raha toh master pakka depression me chale jaenge. Nooooo! Mujhe kuch karna hoga...]

Aur agle hi pal...

[Maaaaaassssteeeeeeerrrrrrrrr!]

'Huhhhh!?'

Pari uske andar itni zorr se chillaayi jiske chalte Veer ko kuch hosh aaya.

[Wo aadmi ab aapki Nidhi Ma'am ko maarega.]

Ye sunte hi Veer ki aankhein felti chali gayi!

'Huh!? M-Ma'am?? N-Nooo...'

[Yes! Even Shreya ko... Aapki Kavya ko... Arohi too... Ragini ko... Sabko maarega wo.]

'N-Nahi... Aisa nahi...'

[Of course! Aur kabhi aapne zara bhi fikar kii!?]

'???'

[Ki yadi aapki Juhi ko kuch hua toh!?]

Juhi ka naam sunte hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Uss pyaari sii bacchi ka khilkhilaata chehra uske mann me aaya. Yadi usse galti se bhi kuch hua...

Ye sochte hi Veer itna darr gaya ki uska badan kaanpne laga.

[Of course! He will kill them all. Kyuki aap toh yaha haath pe haath dharre baithe rahoge. Uske liye kaam asaan ho jaega. Yahi toh chaahta hai woh...]

'N-Nahiiiii... Aisa... Aisa kabhi nahi...'

[Bilkul hoga. Yadi aapne jald hi action nahi liya toh aisa hi hoga. Kabhi socha hai!? Ki yadi uss raat Kavya ya Arohi me se koi bhi pakdi jaati toh kya haal hota unka!? Fir aap... Apni hi behan ke hatyaare ho jaate Master. Aapki ek behan ki jaan jaati, ya dono ki hi jaa sakti thi.]

Ye baat jese kisi bhaari patthar ki tarah aake Veer ke upar giri. Aur uska poora astitv jese hila kar rakh diya.

[Aapki ye Nidhi Ma'am! Kabhi socha hai ki wo aadmi yadi inke peeche pad jaaye toh!?]

Pari ki baat sunn Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha jo usse hi chintit nazro se dekh rahi thi.

[You will lose her. You will lose everything. She will die.]

'N-Nahiiiiiiii'

[Bilkul! Yahi hoega! Aap sab kuch kho doge. Kaha gayi aapki wo pride? Kaha gaya aapke andar ka wo josh? Kya yu hi haar maan jaoge aap? Bhool gaye apna lakshya!? Aapko toh ek boht bada aadmi bann'na hai na? Kya hoga uss vaade ka jo aapne Juhi ko diya tha? Uske liye chocolate ki poori factory kholne waale the na aap?

Kya Nidhi jii ko uss Rajat ke changul se nahi nikaalenge aap? Bhool gaye ki abhi aapko apni saalo se bichdi Maa ko bhi dhundna hai? Kaha gaye wo saare vaade jo aapne mujh se kiye the? Kya wo sab dhong tha?

Yadi aise hi rahe aap... Toh sab kuch gawa baithoge Master. Nidhi, Shreya, Kavya... Ye sab aapke saamne maari jaengi aur aap kuch nahi kar paoge.]

'N-Nooooooo... I don't want to lose her... I don't want to lose anyone... Mein kisi ko bhi nahi khona chaahta... Nooooo... I really don't...'

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ko apni baaho me bhar liya.

"Aahhh!? Veeerrr!?"

Nidhi iss hamle se thodi hairaan zaroor thi par jab usse Veer ka kaampta hua badan mehsoos hua aur jab usse apne nagn kandhe par Veer ke aasuo ka ehsaas hua toh Nidhi kuch na boli aur uske haath apne aap hi Veer ke ird gird lapit gaye. Usne uske sarr ke peeche haath le jaa usse thaama aur apne se laga liga. Dheere dheere wo Veer ki peeth sehlaate hue usse shaant karne lagi.

Idhar Kavya aur Arohi dono hi hairat ke maare ye sab dekh rahi thi. Par kahi na kahi unhe iss baat se zyaada khushi thi ki Veer at least ab kuch movements toh show kar raha tha.

[Phew! Master ka dil boht kamzor hai. Unki family ne unke saath itna bura behave kiya hai... Aaarghhh! I hate them all. Hmm? Nidhi ki favourability 56? That's good! Kavya ki...!? 78!! Ohh! And Arohi?? Huh??? 40!?? Wow! This is surprising. Master ko baad me bata dungi mein.]

'Mein... Mein unhe khona nahi chaahta... I will kill him... Mein... Kuch nahi hone dunga kisi ko... I... I...'

"Haaaahhhh haaahhhh haaahhh..."

Aur achanak hi Veer ki saasein itni tezz ho gayi ki waha maujood sabhi ladkiya ghabra gayi.

Nidhi : Veer??? Ye... Ye kya ho raha hai...!? Kya hua tumhe?

Wo lambi lambi saasein le raha tha aur achanak hi usne apna seena zorr se haatho se bheech liya.

"Haaaaahh... Haaahhh"

Kavya : Bhaaaaiyaaaaaa

Kavya chillaayi toh Arohi bina samay gawaaye bhaagte hue neeche gayi aur Ragini ko bula kar laayi.

Ragini samet Suman aur baaki sabhi bhaagti hui aayi aur Veer ki haalat dekh Ragini ne koi galti nahi kii aur seedhe hi doctor ko phone laga diya.

Doctor ka ghar paas me hi tha aur uska clinic bhi uske ghar se bagal me tha toh woh forun hi kuch minutes me aa gaya.

***

Kuch derr baad...

Veer bistar par laita hua tha, uski aankhein band thi aur shirt ki saari buttons khuli thi jiske chalte uska saara seena nazar aa raha tha. Shayad doctor ne abhi check up kiya tha.

Ragini : K...Kya hua tha doctor Veer ko?

Doctor : He was hyperventilating.

Kavya : Huh???

Doctor : Samjhaata hu... Emotional stress ya emotional breakdown, anxiety ki wajah se kabhi kabhi aadmi panic kar jaata hai aur lambi lambi saasein lene lagta hai aur isse hum hyperventilation kehte hai.

Kavya : ??

Doctor : Insaan oxygen ko andar leta hai aur carbon dioxide ko baahar chorrta hai right?

Kavya : Hmm!

Doctor : Hyperventilation ke samay... Aap jitna oxygen andar nahi lete ho uss se zyaada carbon dioxide ko baahar chorrne lagte ho, jiske chalte carbon dioxide ki maatra body me kam ho jaati hai aur ye situation create ho jaati hai.

Kavya : Ahhh!

Nidhi : Toh... Toh thik toh hai na Veer!?

Doctor : Jii haa! Bas thoda araam ki zaroorat hai. Inhe rest karne dijiye... Accha! Ragini jii! Ab mein chalta hu. Yadi fir se koi dikkat samajh aati hai toh aap call kar lijiyega.

Ragini : J-Jii! Thank you so much doctor!

Doctor : Ye toh hamaara kaam hai Ragini jii!

Aur itna bol doctor fees leke waha se nikal gaya.

Idhar Veer ki khuli shirt dekh, Kavya aage badh unn buttons ko band karne hi waali thi jab usse apne bagal me achanak hi ek hawa ka jhoka mehsoos hua.

'Huhhh!?'

Dekha toh paaya ki...

Arohi uske bagal se nikal aage badhi aur Veer ke paas jaa pohuchi.

Apne haatho ko aage badha ke wo Veer ki shirt ki buttons dheere dheere band karne lagi.

Kabhi bauhe sikode wo Veer ke chehre ko dekhti toh kabhi uske seene ko jinpar halke halke choto ke nishaan the.

Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me.

Kavya ne jab ye dekha toh uske kadam wahi tham gaye. Par...

Hontho par agle hi pal ek santushti bhari muskaan bhi aa chuki thi.

***

Ek bade se ghar me iss waqt ek kamre me ek aadmi idhar se udhar tehel raha tha aur kisi uljhan me nazar aa raha tha.

Toh wahi uske peeche ek sofe pe ek aur naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha.

Aur ye tehelne waala vyakti koi aur nahi, Vivek hi tha. Saath hi saath sofe par baitha yuvak uska chota bhai ~ Pranjal tha.

Pranjal : Aise tehelne se kuch nahi hoga bhaiya.

Vivek : Toh kya karuuuu?? Huh?? Ragini... Ek number ki murkh aurat hai... Idhar apne pati ka saath chorr ke udhar ghar me reh rahi hai. Saala company me na jaane kya kya afwaaye fela rahe hai employees. Ki bhaag gayi hogi, utha ke le gaya koi, talaak ho gaya... Fuck! Aur upar se wo saala Veer bhi wahi hai. Kya soch ke Ragini ne usse apne ghar me rakh liya? Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya uska?

Pranjal : Dekha jaaye toh isme aapki bhi thodi galti thi bhaiya. Ladkiya boht hi sensitive hoti hai. Aapne jo baat kahi thi uske chalte Bhabhi boht zyaada naraaz hai aapse jo ki bani baat hai. Aapko unhe behla fusla kar manaana hoga tab hi kuch hoga.

Vivek : Sab kar chuka hu chote. Yaha tak ki mom dad ko bhi leke gaya tha. Par saala wo sunn'ne ko hi taiyaar nahi hai. Upar se pata nahi kaun sii saheli ko bulaayi hai jo uske ghar me dera jama ke baithi hui hai. Ek baar me usne mom dad aur meri bolti band kar dii thi waha...

Pranjal : Hmm?? Ohh! Thoda samay dijiye fir bhabhi ko. Par harr ek do din me unse baat karte rehna. Unhe jataiye ki aapka unke bagerr mann nahi lagta. Dekhna, wo jald hi maan jaengi.

Vivek : Hmm! Wese... Kuch socha? Property ke baare me!?

Pranjal : Aapki baat Tai jii se hui thi na?

Vivek : Hmm! Haan! Unhe property Bhumika ke liye chaahiye haha~

Pranjal (smiles) : Bada hi mast plan bana ke unhe apne side liya tha humne hai na? Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwaane me akhir unhone bhi samay samay par apna yogdaan dete hue hamaari madad kii thi. Aur humne unhe property ka kuch hissa dene ka waada kiya tha. Toh? Doge aap? Unhe property?

Vivek (smiles) : Hahaha~ pagal hai kya? Dene ke liye thodi hi ye plan kiya hu. Ek rupaya bhi na milne wala unhe. Wo toh upar se sauteli maa hai Veer ki. Bhala jab Veer ko kuch na mila toh hamaare rehte hue ye sauteli Tai aur unki beti ko kaha se kuch milega?

Pranjal : Hmm! Par yadi unhone ye raaz khol diya ki Veer ko baahar nikalwaane me hamaara haath hai toh?

Vivek (smiles) : Toh? Toh kya... Unka muh kese band karwaana hai uska bhi ilaaj hai mere paas... Hahaha~

Pranjal : Waah! Wese... Dada jii ke baare me kuch socha hai? Kyuki jab wo raazi honge tabhi toh property hume milegi bhaiya. Aur unhone toh keh ke rakha hai ki jab tak Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak wo koi faisla nahi lenge.

Vivek : Bas! Ussi ki toh tension hai chote. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Pranjal : Wese... Mere paas ek idea hai. Yadi aap suno toh...

Vivek : Kesa idea?

Pranjal : Idhar aaiye...

Vivek ko apne paas bula ke Pranjal ne dheere se apne kuch bol rakhe, jisse sunn ke Vivek ekdum se hadbada ke uth gaya.

Vivek : Ch-Chote!?? Ye... Ye?? Tu? Ye boht zyaada nahi ho gaya?

Pranjal : Sach me? Yahi baat aapne mujhe tab bhi kahi thi jab hum Veer ko nikalwa rahe the. Kahiye! Kya tab zyaada hua tha? Kya kisi ko pata chala? Nahi na!? Fir?

Vivek : Fir bhi chote...

Pranjal : Isme jitna aap soch rahe ho utna risk nahi hai. Haa thoda maamla gambheer rahega but solution issi se niklega aap dekhna...

Vivek : Hmm! Theek hai fir... Yadi yahi sahi hai toh... Yaad rakhna... Koi gadbad nahi...

Pranjal : Bilkul! Isme mujhe aapki madad lagegi.

Vivek : Hmm!

***

Washington, United States...

Ek bade si 5 stat hotel me iss waqt ek shandaar luxury room me bistar par ek behad hi sundar ladki so rahi thi.

Kuch aahat paate hi uski bauhe sikudi aur agle hi pal wo neend se baahar aa gayi.


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Palke jhapkaate hue wo uthi. Keval ek bra aur neeche panty pehni hui thi woh.

Usne jab gaur kiya ki toh dekha side me Dressing table ke paas ek red haired beauty khadi hui thi. Aur dressing ko jama rahi thi.

Ladki : Hmm? Julia?

Uss ladki ne pukaara toh wo laal baalo waali aurat forun hi palti aur usse dekhi...

Ye thi Julia. Bistar par laiti hui ladki ki head maid. Bole toh saari maids ki head.

Russian beauty thi woh. Uske laal baal bade hi acche se ek bun me bandhe hue the. Aur uska aakarshan hi dekhne laayak tha.

Julia : Miss! You are awake!? (Miss! Uth gayi aap?)

Ladki : Yeah!

Aage badh wo dressing ke paas aayi toh Julia ne forun hi uske shareer ko dhakne ke liye ek nighty nikaal aur usse peeche se pehnaane lagi.

Ladki : Julia?

Julia : Yes Miss!?

Ladki : What is life?

Julia : Miss! You are asking me this question for the 12th time. (Miss! Ye prashn aap mujhse baarvi baar puch rahi hai.)

Ladki : Just answer me Julia.

Julia (sighs) : People are born miss. It's a journey. During this journey, they make friends, establish relationships, they laugh, they love, they cry and this goes on. They make kids to teach them how to live and then again this goes on. One day, we die and everything we earned remains here only.

(Logo ka janm hota hai miss! Ye ek safar hai. Aur iss safar me, log dost banaate hai, rishte banaate hai, wo hasste hai, pyaar karte hai, rote hai aur yahi chalta jaata hai. Wo apni santaane karte hai aur unhe sikhaate hai ki zindagi kese jeete hai aur fir wahi chalta jaata hai. Ek din, hum marr jaate hai aur humne jo kuch bhi kamaaya wo yahi reh jaata hai.)

Ladki : ....

Julia : Was my answer to your satisfaction? (Kya mera jawaab aapke liye santushti janak tha?)

Ladki : No! I still don't understand.

Julia (sighs) : Sorry! Miss!

Ladki : No! It's okay! Prepare the tea. I'll take a bath.

Julia : As you wish Miss!

Aue wo ladki itna bol nahaane chali gayi. Aur Julia keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi.

'Poor Miss! If only I could help her...'

***

Mumbai...

Outer area me sthit ek building ki top floor par ek aadmi kursi par baitha hua tha.

Ki tabhi uska phone baj utha...

Aadmi : Hello?

Voice : Kese ho Aatish mere sher!?

Jii haa! Ye Aatish hi tha. Aur phone ke dusre taraf se aa rahi awaaz sunn wo agle pal hi uth ke khada ho gaya.

Aatish : D-Dada aap!?

Voice : Hmm! Suno... Mene ye bataane ke liye phone kiya hai, ki ab tumhe uss ladki ke peecha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mein already India aane waala hu aur wese bhi... Wo mera shikaar hai. Mene toh keval tumhe thode din maza karne ke liye ye kaam de diya tha haha~

Aatish : Ohh! Jesa aap kahe Dada!

Voice : Toh? Tumhaari aadat gayi ya nahi? Ya abhi bhi logo ke vishwaash todne me lage ho?

Aatish : Hahaha~ aap toh jaante hi ho... Yahi mera sukoon hai. Waqai! Abhi kuch dino se maza kaafi aa raha hai.

Voice : Hmm! Chalo! Accha rakhta hu. Meri flight ka time ho raha hai.

Aatish : Okay Dada!

*Call ends*

Aatish muskuraate hue apni hat aur hockey stick uthaaye neeche jaane laga.

'Tumhaare liye ek uphaar hai...'

Soch wo neeche chala gaya.

Par...

Usse nahi pata tha. Ki shayad Veer ko chorr ke usne ek boht badi galti kar dii hai. Shayad apne jeevan ki sabse badi galti...
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Update - 35 ~ The Deadliest Trap

Ab tak...

Aur jab saamne nazar padi... Toh...

Ek yuvak peeche khada hua tha. Jisne patthar fek uss aadmi ke sarr pe maar, usse yu gira diya.

Par Veer ki nazar jese hi uspe padi uski aankhein hairat ke maare felti chali gayi...

Veer : G... Goluuuu!???


Golu : Huh!?? Arre... T-Tum...!?

Ab aage...

*Vrrrrroooooooooooooommmmm*

Aaj ki iss Diyo se jagmag raat me jaha jagah jagah log tyohaar ka aanand utha rahe the, toh wahi Arohi aur Kavya apni scooty me baith uss sunsaan raaste me ghar ki orr bhaagti jaa rahi thi.

Dono ki dhadkane train ke maafik tezz ho chuki thi. Jab jaan par aati hai toh acche accho ki haalat kharaab ho jaati hai, badan thande pad jaate hai. Fir yaha toh wo dono ladkiya thi. Upar se aisa kuch bhi unke saath pehle kabhi ghatit nahi hua tha aur na hi unhone aisa kuch kabhi apne saamne dekha tha. Ekdum se jab aaj itni saari vaardaate unke saath hui toh bhaybheet hona toh swabhaavik tha.

Kavya sehami sehami sii aasu bahaate jaa rahi thi aur Arohi ke kandhe par apni chin rakhe uski kamar me zorr se haath baandhe hue thi.

Tabhi achanak...

*Tip*

'Huh!?'

Usse apne gaal pe kuch geela geela mehsoos hua.

Maano jese laga ki upar aasmaan se paani ki ek boond giri ho uske chehre pe aa kar.

Aur ek baar fir...

*Tip*

'??'

Usse fir ye andaaza lagaane me samay na laga ki ye paani ki boond kaha se aa rahi thi.

Kavya : D-Dii?? *sniff*

Ye Arohi ke aasu the. Jo hawa ke kaaran uske gaal se udd ke peeche jaa ke Kavya ke gaal se jaa takraaye the.

Ye abhaas hote hi ki uski badi behan bhi aasu baha rahi hai, Kavya aur zorr zorr se rone lagi aur Arohi ko bheench lii.

Unki scooty ab chowk tak aa chuki thi. Aur iss ilaake me aate hi ab jaake dono ko thodi raahat sii mehsoos hui. Kyuki yaha ujaala hi ujaala tha, Chahal pahal thi, raunak thi, raaste se aati jaati gaadiya thi, log the jo apne manoranjan me lage hue the.

Paas hi unhe ek thaana bhi dikha, par iss waqt Arohi seedhe ghar jaana chaahti thi. Usne soch liya tha ki ek baar ghar pohuch jaaye uske baad police ko inform karegi taaki wo jald se jald Veer ke liye madad leke jaa sake. Wo ye bhuli nahi thi, ki wo Veer ko waha akela kis situation me chorr kar aayi thi.

Aaj apne aap uski aankho se aasu beh rahe the. Kyuki abhi ki ghatna ne usse poora andar tak jhakjhor ke rakh diya tha. Bhale hi wo apne chehre par dikha nahi rahi thi, par andar se wo itna zyaada darri hui thi even Kavya se bhi zyaada. Par wo badi thi, aur yadi wo hi apna darr show karne lagti toh uski choti behan ka kya hota?

Bas isliye, Arohi andar hi andar sab dabaaye thi.
Ab jab wo uss situation se baahar nikli toh usse samajh aaya ki aakhir kitna affected thi wo uss situation me. Aur wo yadi abhi sahi salaamat apni scooty par apni behan ke saath baithi hui thi toh aaj ye keval ek hi shaks ke kaaran mumkin hua tha.

Aur wo tha ~ Veer.

Wahi Veer jisse wo hamesha ek cold shoulder deke chali jaaya karti thi. Rookha rookha vyavhaar karti thi uske saath. Kabhi baatein nahi karti thi. Kabhi uske baare me nahi sochti thi. Usne humesha se hi Veer ko ek stranger ki tarah treat kiya tha.

'Arohi Dii!? Wo hamaara bhai kehlaane ke laayak hi nahi hai.'

'Arohi uss se dur raha karo. Warna uske saath rehna kahi tumhe bhi affect na kar de. Harqate toh jaanti hi ho tum uski.'

'Dii! Aap hi dekhiye. Hum sabhi bhai behno me kitni acchi acchi qualities hai. We are talented. But ussi jagah Veer ko dekhiye. Kya wo kahi se bhi hamaara bhai lagta hai? Wo ek loser hai dii. Maana ki hamaara cousin hai, par Bhumika dii ko dekhiye aap ussi jagah. Wo bhi toh cousin hai hamaari. Par kitni alag personality hai unki. Isliye aap dur hi raha karo uss se.'

'Arohi! Kabhi socho ki tum apni high class friends ke beech ho aur achanak hi Veer waha aa jaaye aur kuch na kuch harqat kar de. Kya sochengi tunhari friends? Kitna embarassed feel karogi tum? Toh aisi situation kabhi na bane uske liye behtar hi ki uss se dur raho. Dekho, khud Tau jii bhi apne bete ko pasand nahi karte. Matlab gadbad Veer me hi hai. Ye toh uske liye khushkismat ki baat honi chaahiye ki uske iss ravaiyye ke baad bhi hum usse ghar par jhel rahe hai... Warna...'

Apne dono bhai, Pranjal aur Vivek ki baatein iss waqt Arohi ke mann me goonj rahi thi. Aur inhi baato ko liye wo aankho se aasu bahaaye road me apni gaadi bhagaaye jaa rahi thi bas.

Na jaane kitne beete saalo se yahi baatein uske mann me daali jaa rahi thi. Jiske chalte, Veer ko anjaan ki tarah treat karna usko ab normal lagne laga tha. Usse kahi se bhi ye galat nahi lagta tha. Lagta tha jese Veer ko aise hi treat karna sahi hai. Jese maano kisi samaaj ka niyam follow kar rahi thi wo. Kabhi kuch galat nahi laga.

Aur ye sab aaj bhi usse normal hi lagta yadi...

Yadi uss din usne college me Kavya ko Veer ki baaho me na dekha hota toh...

'Ye Kavya ko achanak kya ho gaya?'

Uss din wo issi sawaal ko liye poori raat tension me thi. Bhala uski choti behan, jo aaj tak uski hi tarah Veer se baat nahi karti thi. Wo bhala achanak uski baaho me!? Kyuuuu???

Ye kisi jhatke se kam nahi tha uske liye...

Par usse kya pata tha ki Kavya ghar me chori chori Veer se thodi boht baatein zaroor kar liya karti thi jo wo nahi karti thi.

Usse yaad tha kese uss din Veer Kavya ko uski class chorrne bhi gaya tha. Usse yaad tha ki uss din wo kitna badla badla sa lag raha tha.

Aur uss din ke baad toh jese usse na jaane kya kya jaan'ne ko mila tha.

Kavya uske liye kapde khareedne lagi thi, uske liye gifts khareedti. Derr raat raat tak usse messages bhej baatein karti...

Aur ye sab kuch ghatit hote hue wo apni aankho ke saamne dekh paa rahi thi.

'Kyuuuuuu!??? K-Kya mein hi galat thi? Vivek bhaiya aur Pranjal kyu kehte the aisa fir? Kyu aaya wo hume bachaane? Ek call pe hi wo aa gaya. Wahi Pranjal ka phone busy tha toh Vivek Bhaiya ne uthaaya nahi. Par usne... Kavya ka phone ek ring me utha liya... Aur... Itni jaldi wo waha par tha. Na jaane kitni tezz bike chalaayi hogi usne waha pohuchne ke liye. Mein... Mein...'

Aaj apne aap uski rulaayi chooth padi. Aaj Apna naam Veer ke muh se sunte waqt uske raungte khade ho gaye the. Kyuki wo jaanti thi uss awaaz me kitni chinta thi, kitni ghabraahat thi.

Aur ye chinta Veer ki unn dono ke liye thi. Sawaal wahi tha.

Akhir Kyuuu???

Anek prashn liye wo akhir kaar apni manzil par pohuchi...

Kismat se Ragini aur baaki sabhi porch me hi usse mil gayi.

Ragini : Arre!? Aa gayi tum dono!? Aao...! ??? Y-Ye kya??? Tum dono ke chehre ka rang kyu udaa hua hai aise? K-Kavya!?? Ro kyu rahi ho tum? Arohi tum bhiii!??

Jese hi unki dasha Ragini ne dekhi wo hadbada ke baahar aayi. Wo aur Suman iss waqt Veer ko hi dhund rahi thi kyuki achaanak wo bina kuch bataaye ghar se nikal gaya tha aur phone bhi nahi utha raha tha. Zaahir sii baat thi wo sabhi chintit thi.

Arohi : Bh-Bhabhi!!! Wo...

Uske baad Arohi ne shuru se ant tak saari baat bata dii, jisse sunn kar Ragini samet sabhi tension me aa gayi.

Ragini : Hey Bhagwaan! Tum dono theek toh ho na? A-Aur Veer??? W-Wo waha akela hai?? N-Nahi!!

Wo agle pal hi bhaag ke apna phone uthaayi aur police ko call kii.

Aaj tyohaar ka ye mahaul itna tension se bhar gaya. Sabhi ke chehre par bas darr, ghabraahat aur bechaini thi.

Aur sabhi police ka intezaar karne lage. Arohi aur Kavya toh jese tese bach gayi thi. Par yahi baat Veer ke liye kehna thoda mushqil tha.

***

"Arre...!? T-Tum!??"

Veer ke saamne iss waqt ek shaks khada tha, jis se Veer train me mila tha.

~Golu.

Par ye waqt uske liye sochne ka nahi tha. Golu ke aane se jo aadmi Veer ko peeche se daboche hue tha, uska dhyaan bhi bhatak chuka tha.

Aur issi ka fayda uthaate hue, Veer ne apni kohni seedha uski pasli me de maari...

"Aaaarrrrghhh!"

Wo dard ke maare karaaha aur apni pasli pakad jhuk gaya aur...

*Pooooooooowwwwww*

Ek zordaar ghusa uske gaal par aake pada jo usse poora hila ke rakh diya.

"Fuccckkk youuuu!" Next second hi, Veer ne full taakat se ek kick aur jadd dii uske pait me.

Aur wo banda peeche jaa gira.

Golu bhaagte hue uski taraf aaya. Veer ne dekha ki ek cycle zameen par padi hui thi jiska pichla chaka halka halka abhi bhi ghoom raha tha. Matlab Golu yaha cycle se guzar raha tha aur usne jese hi ye sab dekha toh madad ke liye aa pada.

Golu : Arre Bhai... Tum firse?? Aur ye chakkar kya hai? Saare aadmi tumhaare peeche kyu lage hai? Theek toh ho? K-Kya tha ye sab?

Veer : M-Mein theek hu. Boht boht shukriya, meri madad karne ke liye. Uss din train me bhi tumne... Par tum yaha? Wait! Kya hi ittefaaq hai ye...!? Uss din bhi tumne hi mujhe bachaaya tha aur aaj bhi...

Pranjal : Haha~ Kismat bhai. Jab jise mila de. Wese naam toh yaad hai na mera? Tumhara toh Veer hai.
Mujhe yaad hai.

Veer : And tum Golu!? Mujhe bhi yaad hai...

Golu : Hahaha~ Bilkul! Chalo yaad toh hai kam se kam. Par ye sab!? Kya tha?

Veer : Kuch Dushmani hak meri inse shayad. Jo ye mere parivaar ke peeche pade hai. Teh tak jaana padega mujhe iski. Na jaane kaun hai inn sab ke peeche.

Golu : Ohhh!

Veer : Par tum yaha...!? Sunsaan raaaste me!? Wo bhi... Cycle me!?

Golu : Apna kya hai Bhai... Uss din mein bhi apne gaav ke liye nikla tha, train se. Kyuki wahi apniichh janmbhumi hai. Apna koi haiich nahi. Aashram me pala bada, fir 18 baras ki umr ke baad paisa kamaane idhar Mumbai aa gaya. Suna tha paisa kamaana hai toh mayanagri jao. Haha~

Veer : ....

Golu : Mein idhar hi peeche ek hotel hai. Udhar kaam karta hu. Khaana peena wahi ho jaata hai. Rehne ka koi na koi jugaad ho hi jaata hai. Aaj Diwali ki kharchi lene gaya tha. Bas ab jaake hotel ke hi kuch dost log hai unke saath Diwali manaunga.

Veer : Ohhh!! Tumhari zindagii bhi... Kaafi...

Golu : Zindagi ka kya hai bhai. Ek din upar jaana hi hai. Tab tak jitne maze le sako le lo. Ek accha jeevan guzaaro aur kya. Apna toh ek hi sapna hai...
Hamesha se chaahta tha ki ek aisho araam ki zindagi jiyu. Par... Saala kismat hiich gaandu nikli haha~

Veer (smiles) : Kismat gaandu hi hoti hai.

[W-What master!?? Bhuliye mat... Mera aapke andar aana bhi kismat hi thi. Kismat ko aisa na boliye... Master!]

'Ohh really now!?'

Tabhi achanak hi Golu ne apna haath aage badhaaya aur Veer ki taraf kiya...

Golu (smiles) : Wese toh tum kisi bade ghar ke lagte ho. Par yadi mujh jeso se tumhe dikkat na ho toh... Aaj se hum dost!???

'Huh!?'

Aaj...

Aaj ye pehli baar tha, jab Veer ki taraf kisi ne apni taraf se dosti ka haath badhaaya tha. Kabhi kisi ne bhi uska dost bann ne ki pahal nahi kari thi. Ye jaante hue bhi ki Veer kisi na kisi pareshani me rehta hai aur uske paala khatarnaak aadmiyo se hai, fir bhi aaj Golu ne uski taraf ye dosti ka haath badhaaya tha.

Aise me...

Golu : Huh?? Oo bhai... Tum ro kyu rahe ho? Arre mein itna bura bhi na hu yaar
... Tum toh... Dekho bhai aisi beizzati na karo yaar...

Veer (hasste hue aasu pochh kar) : Nahi... Wo *smiles* Iske pehle kabhi kisi ne mera dost bann'ne ki koshish na kari... Aaj ye pehli baar hai. Isliye... Isliye... Bilkul... Aaj se hum dost hue...

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne kass ke Golu ka haath thaam liya.

Golu : Itna bhaavuk ni hote bhai... Zindagi me chill maarne ka... Aur kisi ne haath nahi badhaaya toh kya hua? Ab mene toh badha diya hai na? Haha~

Veer (smiles) : Hmmm!

Dono ko aaj ek naya dost mila tha. Jaha Veer Golu ka abhaari tha aur uske raviyye se impressed tha wahi Golu bhi iss baat se khush tha ki Veer jesa bade ghar ka ladka aaj uska yu dost ban gaya tha.

Par jese...

Dono ki iss khushi par kisi ki nazar lag chuki thi.

Kyuki agle hi pal...

Jhaadiyo me se 5 se 6 aadmi nikle aur Veer aur Golu pe toot pade...

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki dono ko kuch sochne ka time hi nahi mila. Do se teen bando ko jhelna toh Veer wese bhi kaafi hadd tak handle kar leta. Par 5 se 6!?

Ye toh namumkin jesa kaam tha uske liye. Uske stats abhi itne nahi the.

Golu bhi koi fighter nahi tha. Wo dubla aur lamba sa ladka tha. Ladaayi bhidaayi se shuru se hi dur rehne waala.

Nateeja obvious tha.

Jaha Golu ko maar maar ke unhone behosh kar diya tha toh wahi Veer kuch pal unse ladd waha unka saamna karta raha. Par...

Wo outnumbered ho chuka tha.

Enemies zyaadi thi, aur wo akela.

[Maaaasttteerrrr!!!]

Pari ki chinta janak awaaz aayi toh sanket samajh Veer muda par...

*Thud*

Uske sarr ke peeche se ek vaar aaya aur wo sarr pakad neeche girne laga...

[Noooooo
! Maaastteeerrr!!]

Aankhein uski band hone lagi...

Behoshi me jaane se pehle usse bas ek hi awaaz mann me sunaayi dii...

*Ding*

['Mission : Save Kavya and Arohi before it gets too late' has been completed.]

[40 points have been rewarded.]

'K-Kavya... Arohi...' Mann me wo apni behno ke baare me soch... Behoshi me chala gaya.

***

Aadmi 1 : Wo toh accha hua hum chhipe hue the. Jaldi nipat gaya maamla.

Aadmi 2 : Sahi kaha! Aur Bhau ne ekdum sahi kaha tha. Ki inn 4 logo se kaam nahi ho paega. Isliye unhone hume bhi bhej diya. Aur dekho... Unki baat ekdum sahi nikli.

Aadmi 1 : Hmm! Ab inka kya karna hai? Mujhe phone aaya unka, wo bata rahe hai ki wo dono, unn dono ladkiyo ko pakadne me nakaam rahe.

Aadmi 4 : Karna kya hai? Bhau ne toh pehle hi hume bataaya tha ki hume iss ladke ko nahi pakadna hai. Iske aas paas ke log yaani iske chaheeto ko pakad ke laana hai.

Aadmi 5 : Ekdum sahi kaha. Wo do ladkiya bach gayi toh kya hua. Ye dekho... Ye ek aur ladka pada hai yaha. Isne iss ladke ki madad kii... Matlab zaroor ye iska koi khaas hai, aur isse jaanta hai. Warna aise koi apni jaan khatre me nahi daalta. Aur dono haath bhi mila rahe the abhi.

Aadmi 3 : Haan! Isse uthao.

Aadmi 1 : Aur iss ladke ka kya!?

Aadmi 3 : Usse wahi pade rehne do. Bhau ne uske liye hi toh Jalsa me taiyaariya kii hai. Hume keval iss ladke se matlab hai. Ab jaldi chalo, wo dono ladkiya police ko lekar yaha zaroor aaengi.

Aadmi 6 : Jalsa!?? Baap re! Iss bande ki shaamat aayi hai lagta.

Aadmi 4 : Hmm! Zindagi me kuch bhi kar lo, par bhool ke bhi Bhau se panga na lo. Iss ladke ne anjaane me hi ek aisi jagah khud ko daal diya hai, jaha iska vinaash nishchit hai. Ab chalo jaldi...

Aur wo sabhi aadmi Golu aur apne aadmiyo ko waha se uthaa ke nikal gaye.

Veer idhar road ke kinaare besudh sa dala hua tha.

***

Raat ke 10 baj chuke the. Jab achanak hi Veer ko apne chehre par kuch geelapan sa mehsoos hua.

Aur wo apne hosh me aaya.

Dekha toh paaya ki...

Wo apne bed par tha. Aur uske ird gird, Ragini, Kavya, Arohi, Suman, Aabha, Sonali ye sabhi khadi hui thi.

'Huh??'

[Aap behosh ho gaye the master. Luckily, wo aapko wahi chorr ke chale gaye. You know... I was so worried... *sniff* Mein... Mein... Abhi aap kesa feel kar rahe ho? Wait! Mein khud hi check kar leti hu. You should rest.]

Kavya : Bhaiyyaaaaaaaaa!!!!

Kavya aage badh Veer se lipat gayi. Uski aankho me abhi bhi aasuo ki boonde saji hui thi.

Veer mehsoos kar paa raha tha ki Kavya ke dil ki dhadkan kitni tezz thi. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki Arohi ke chehre par tak aasuo ke nishaan the. Ragini aur Suman ki aankhein bhi nam thi. Aabha bhi chintit nazar se dekh r
ahi thi. Sonali bhi usse bauhe sikode dekh rahi thi.

Usse abhaas ho raha tha ki ye sabhi log uski kitni parvaah karte hai.

Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaaa!!! *sniff* *sniff*

Veer : Mein yaha!?

Arohi (aage aate hue) : M-Mein bataati hu...

Uske baad Arohi ne sab kuch bataaya.

Kese wo ghar pohuchi, kese Police ko Ragini ne
inform kiya, Police aayi aur Kavya Arohi ko leke uss jagah par pohuchi jaha Veer unhe bachaana aaya tha.

Kese unn ne Veer ko waha behosh paaya aur yaha ghar waapas laaye. Police aasvaashan dete huye ki wo apni jaach jaari rakhenge keh ke chali gayi. Ye saari baatein Arohi ne Veer ko bata dii.

Veer : I see...!

Arohi : Wo...

Veer : Hmm???

Arohi : N-Nothing... Tum rest karo.

'Mere kaaran aaj ye sabhi tyohaar bhi na mana paaye.'

Ragini : Veer tum rest karo. Okay!

Veer : Mere kaaran aap sabhi... Aaj tyohaar bhi...

Ragini : Don't even think about that okay? Tyohaar toh harr saal aata hai Veer. Tum zyada zaroori ho ya tyohaar!? Rest karo okay!?

Kavya : Bhaiya! Aap bistar se nahi nikloge. Rest karo. Mein aapka dhyaan yahi rakhungi.

Ragini : Nahi Kavya! Veer ko kuch derr akela rehne do. Usse neend ki zaroorat hai. Mene doctor ko bhi inform kar diya hai. Wo aate hi honge...

Suman : Maali... Ahem! Veer jii! Apna dhyaan rakhiyega. Koi bhi pareshani ho toh mujhe awaaz laga dena. Mera kamra aapke bagal se hi jo hai. Ragini jii ko pareshan karne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Mein hu na.

Aur sabhi uske kamre se baahar nikal gaye. Aaj bechaara Veer itna bada parv Diwali na mana saka. Ek ke baad ek jese uski zindagi me bas pareshaniya hi likhi hui thi. Na jaane kab uski zindagi me khushiyo ki bauchhaar aaegi!?

***

'Wait!!! G-Golu? Golu ka kya hua? Wo bhi toh wahi tha!? Uska kya hua? Bechaara wo bhi mere kaaran...'

Sochte hue Veer derr raat bistar se uth khada hua.

Par jese...

Ye ghabraahat kam thi? Jo ek aur awaaz ne uski iss ghabraahat ko badha diya...?

*Ding*

[Mission : Get to Golu as fast as possible and save him.

Rewards : ?? Points.
Location : Jalsa Building. xxxxxxx road, near xxxxxxx route.
Time Limit : 19 hours.
Mission Fail Penalty : 100 Points Deduction.]

'N-Noo... No... Noooo Nooooooooooo...'

Mission padhte hi Veer apne bistar par gir pada.

'Nooooooo... Wo meri wajah se... Wo...'

Par jese ye sab kuch bhi kam tha uske liye jab achanak hi uska phone baj utha. Ek unknown number se call.

Veer : H-Hello!??

Voice : Hello! Wese... Hello kehne laayak mahaul toh nahi hoga tumhaare liye Haha~ Kyu!? Jhatka laga na?

Veer (frowns) : K-Kaun!?

Voice : Kaun hu, Kya hu ye sab baad me jaan jaoge apne aap. Tumne ek boht badi galti kar dii. Anjaane me hi kari par galti toh galti hoti hai. Hai na? Aur galti kii hai toh saza toh milti hi hai. Hai na?

Veer : ??

Voice : Toh ye tumhaara dost hai na!?? Kya naam hai iska!??

Veer : Huhhhh!??? G-Goluuuuu!?

Voice : Ohhh! Toh Golu hai iska naam. Haa toh tumhara ye Golu mere qabze me hai. Wese toh mein tumhari unn do behno me se ek ko uthaane waala tha par... Ye bhi bura target nahi hai. Haha~

Ye sunte hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Ki uski behne kitni badi musibat se bach ke baahar aayi thi. Warna na jaane kya hota Veer ka.

Veer : N-Nahiiiii! No..... Tummmm...

Voice (gusse me) : Kal! Kal raat 8 baje... xxxxx route par xxxxx road hai. Udhar ek dhalaan waala raasta milega. Andarr jaate jaana, aur ek building dikhegi.
Tumhaare swaagat ke liye waha bade se aksharo me Jalsa likha hoga. Police ko khabar karne ka koi fayda nahi hai. Wo mere naam se hi kaapte hai. Fir bhi bataana chaaho toh bata lena, par tumhaare dost ki guarantee fir mein nahi lunga. Yadi apne dost ko bachaana chaahte ho toh kal..bataayi gayi jagah par pohuch jaana... Warna...

*Call ends*

Veer ko maano saanp sungh gaya tha. Wo agle pal apna sarr pakad, baal kheechne laga.

'Nooooo!!!! Nooooooo!!! Ye sab kyaaa... Mere kaaran aaj sabhi Diwali nahi mana paaye... Aur bechaara Golu... no no no no noooo... Jiska koi kasoor nahi tha... Wo... Aaj mere kaaran... Arohi ya Kavya bhi uski jagah ho sakti thi... Sab kuch mere kaaran... Kaash... Right... I... I shouldn't have existed... I shouldn't have... *sniff*'

[Maaaaaaaasttteeeeeerrrrrrrr!!!]

'Huh!?'

[Please master! Don't get demotivated. Mein hu aapke saath. Aisa kabhi mat sochiyega. I'm always with you. Aap akele nahi ho. We... We will save Golu, just like we saved Arohi and Kavya. Ghabraaiye mat Master... Please! Mein aapko aise nahi dekhna chaahti. Aapki himmat tootate hue... Because, it hurts me too... Pleaassee! Be strong Master. Mein aapke harr ek kadam par aapke saath hu.]

'P-Pariii!??'

Pari ki baato ne jese apna asar kar diya tha. Kyuki agle hi pal Veer ne aapne aasu poche aur usne nishchay kar liya.

'Right! We... We will save him... We will... Pehli baar koi dost bana hai. *smiles* Mein usse kuch nahi hone dunga. I don't know ye kaun hai aur kyu meri family ke peeche pada hai. But... Mein apni family aur friends ko kuch nahi hone dunga. Right!!'

[That's the spirit master!]

'Mere stats dikhaao Pari!'

[ Stats :
Strength - 50/100
Intelligence - 35/100
Agility - 30/100
Endurance - 45/100
Appearance - 22/100]

'Hmm! Mere paas 90 points available hai. Mein... Mein unhe add kar sakta hu right?'

[Yes but changes subah dekhne ko nahi milenge master. Changes ke liye night time zaroori hai. Raat ke 12 se subah ke 8 tak. Abhi raat ke 2 baj chuke hai. Aapko points add 12 ke pehle karne the, tab jaake subah 8 ke baad aapko changes dekhne ko milte.]

'I see! Well koi nahi. Ab Golu ko bachaane ke baad hi... Mein ikhatte points invest karunga. I will save him.'

[As you wish Master. It's time to rest.]

'Yeaaaahhhh!!'

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Diwali ki agli raat...

Aaj ke iss din sab kuch band rehta hai. Market se leke sab kuch...

Yaha tak ki aaj ke din akhbaar waale bhi chhutti lete the. Aur aaj ki iss raat Veer ek building ke saamne khada hua tha.

Samay 7:55 ho raha tha.

Usse uss aadmi ne 8 baje ka bola tha.

Building ek sunsaan sii jagah hi bani hui thi. Behad badi, aur kaafi puraani lag rahi thi.

Uski banaavat bhi puraane tareeko se kii gayi thi. Modern kahi se nahi lag rahi thi woh...

Saamne ek bada sa lohe ka gate tha. Aur upar LED lights se likha hua tha.

JALSA

'Bhala kesi jagah hai ye!?'

[It looks old master. Par saath hi saath modern touch bhi hai.]

'Yeah!!!'

Wo yaha keval ek shirt pehne aur neeche jeans daale poora prepared hoke aaya tha.

Uske jeans me ek lighter tha, saath hi saath wahi pocket knife bhi dali hui thi. Aur Kuch cash bhi tha.

'Hang in there.... Golu! Tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Tumne meri jaan do baar bachaayi... Now it's my time to save you.'

8 baj chuke the...

Aur...

*Ring* *Ring*

Wahi unknown number dekhte hi Veer ne call uthaaya,

Veer : Mein pohuch gaya hu. Aage batao.

Voice : Ohhh!? Itna confidence? I like it... Andar aao. Darwaaza khula hai.

*Call ends*

Ek lambi saas lete hue Veer ne apne dhadakte dil ko thoda calm karte hue aage badh, darwaaze ko khola...

*Creeeaakkk*

Par andar aate hi...

Ekdum ghapp andhera tha...

Kuch kadam wo chala ki tabhi peeche ka darwaaza apne aap band ho gaya.

'Huh???'

Aur uski calmness yu pal me gaayab ho gayi.

*Badump*

Andhera itna tha ki usse kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Poora kaala andheraa... Ekdum shaant mahaul...

Aur tabhi Veer ne apne jeb se lighter nikaal usse jalaaya...

*Click*

Lighter ki maddham aag ki roshni se jese hi usse saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya toh uske raungte khade ho gaye...

Saamne toh kuch nahi tha...

Par...

Neeche...

Dherr saare laal rang ke gubbaare dale huye the. Yadi ye scene kisi horror movie ka hota toh aadmi ki dekh ke hi phat jaati.

Aur Veer toh khud waha uss situation me tha.

'Y-Ye...!?'

Tabhi achanak...

*Tuck*

Ekdum se kisi button ki awaaz aayi aur Veer ke saamne LED lights se bade se akshar jagmaga uthe...

Likha hua tha..

WELCOME

'????'

Wo kuch soch paata ki tabhi...

Uske kaano me ek awaaz padi...

*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*

"Welcome! Welcome! Jalsa me tumhaara swaagat hai.... Veeeerrrr!!!"

Ye awaaz upar lage intercom se aayi. Ek kaale rang ka box tha jo basically school aur colleges me classrooms me lagaaya jaata hai announcement ke liye.

Veer : ??? Tum... Mera naam...

Voice : Bilkul! Bilkul! Mein toh tumhaare baare me sab jaanta hu. Akhir tumne itna pareshan jo kiya hai mujhe. Itna pareshan ki mujhe tum jese chuho se khud deal karna pad raha hai batao.

Veer (chillaate hue) : Golu kaha hai!???


Voice : Shaant! Usse dhundne toh tumhe khud aana padega. Wese mein tumhe lighter dene waala tha par dekh ke accha laga ki tum poore intezaam se aaye ho.

Veer (frowns) : What do you mean ki mujhe usse dhundna padega!?

Voice : Tumhaara dost third floor par hai. Yadi bacha sakte ho toh bacha lo... Sab kuch tumhaare upar hai... Teesre floor par pohuchne ke liye teen padaav paar karne hai. Sabse pehle bagal me lagi lift me jao. Aur first floor ke liye button dabaana. Dhyaan rahe... No cheating... Pehli manzil yaani pehli manzil... Yadi baaki buttons dabaayi aur yadi... Current ka jhatka lagne se tumhaari maut ho gayi... Toh... Tumhaara dost bechaara... Hahahaha~

Veer (screams) : Daaaaamnnnnnn yooouuuuu...

Voice : Hahahaha~ Yahi toh pasand hai mujhe... Logo ki tadap, ghabrahat, darr...

Veer : Kyuuu??? Kya bigaada hai mene tumhaara? Kyuu kar rahe ho ye sab meri family ke saath? Mein toh tumhe jaanta bhi nahi hu... Fir kyuuuuu??

Voice (gusse me) : Shyaaana banta hai saale!? Club se tu hi uss ladki ko bhaga ke le gaya tha na? Bol!?? Uss Ragini ko bachaane bhi tu hi aaya tha na?? Bol?? Aur uss anguthi ko bhi tu hi chhina ke laaya tha na??? Haan? Ab samajh aaya tujheee!?? Bol!!!! Harr waqt tu kahi na kahi mere plan ke beech me aaya hai. Aur tere kaaran... Tere kaaran mere plans bikhar ke reh gaye... Maatr ek chuhe ke kaaran... Saza toh banti hai. Nahi?

Ye baat sunte hi Veer ko ek zordaar jhatka laga. Aur usse jese ateet yaad aane laga. Jese usse sab kuch samajh me aane laga.

'Huh? N-No way... Ragini Bhabhi... W-Wo ladki... Wo ring...'

[Iska matlab harr kartoot ke peeche ye aadmi ka haath tha master. Yahi hai jo hamaari family ke peeche pada hua hai. We have to take him down.]

Aur tabhi Veer ke kaano me ek jaani pehchaani sii dhun padi...

Jisse sunte hi uske haath kap kapaane lage...

Intercom se hi wahi mouth organ ki awaaz aa rahi thi aur ye wahi dhun thi jo Veer ne uss din club me suni thi.

'N-Nooo... Ye... Ye toh... It was him!???'

Ye abhaas hote hi uski aankhein shock ke maare felti chali gayi. Akhir wo banda Aatish tha.

Aatish : Aahhh! Waqai! Mera pyaara mouth organ hi mere gusse ko kaabu me karta hai.

Veer (shivers) : T-Tumm... Tum...

Aatish : Ohhh! Mujhe jaante ho? Koi baat nahi. Aur acche se jaan jaoge... Jese tumhaari... Kya naam tha uska... Haa! Ragini mujhe jaan gayi. Aaahhhh! Kya scene tha uss din... Uska rona... Uske pati ka apni zindagi ki bheek maangna... Kya toda tha mene uss din usko andar se...

Veer : Bh-Bhabhiii!???

Aatish : Haan! Aahhh maza aa gaya tha uss din.
Mujhe logo ka vishwaash todne me boht maza aata hai. Pata Veer!? Matlab boht zyaada... Jab... Jab unki wo shaqal banti hai na, baad me jab unka vishwaash toot'ta hai, aur fir wo bina koi aasha waala chehra banaate hai na... Wo... Usse dekh ke na... Usse dekh ke na... Pata nahi kyu par... Par mujhe boht zyaada sukoon milta hai. Kya gazab ka chehra banaaya tha uss Ragini ne... Ab toh poori tarah se toot gayi hogi... Aur yahi tumhaare saath hone waala hai... *smiles*

Veer : Tumne... Tumne ye sab kiya tha... I... I will kill you... Mein tujhe chorunga nahi haraam zaade...

Aatish : Lift me jao aur pehla padaav paar karo... Ye bilbilaana baad me... Tumhara samay shuru hota hai ab...

Na chaahte hue bhi, Veer ko akhir lift me jaana hi tha.

Andar ghuste hi lighter ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. Kyuki lift me lights on thi.

Lift ke andar sab kuch normal dikh raha tha.

Isliye ahista se Veer andar gaya aur jesa ki bataaya gaya tha usse first floor par jaane ke liye. Veer ne theek wesa hi kiya.

Lift ka darwaaza band hua aur lift chalna shuru ho gayi.

Par...

Aadhe raste me hi jese wo ruk sii gayi.

'There's something wrong... Hmmmm!???'

Khatre ka abhaas hote hi Veer ki nazar upar gayi aur...

*Hissss*

Ek ajeeb sii gas leak ki awaaz usse sunaayi dii...

Upar dekha toh paaya ki upar lift me kahi se gas leak ho rahi thi.

Bina ek second gawaaye...

'Check'

[Description : Fluothane gas. Ek baar inhale karte hi behosh kar sakti hai. Common cases me vomiting, nausea, breathing problems. Worst case - Death.]

'Shiiitttttttt!!!!'

Veer ko jese hi realize hua ki wo kya tha, maano jese uska dil baahar ko aa gaya tha.

*Badump* *Badump*

Dil ki tezz dhadkan control kar usne upar firse dhyaan diya toh dekha...

Upar kuch wires guccho me maujood the.

[Cover your mouth master.]

Pari ki salaah sunn Veer ne forun hi muh pe rumaal baandh liya...

Tabhi neeche ki floor se intercom se firse Aatish ki dheemi awaaz aayi,

"Sahi soch rahe ho. Hahahaha~ Unn saare wires me se keval 3 hi wire hai jo lift ki upar lagi gas machine ko rok sakte hai. Kaam simple hai. Sahi wire kaato, aur machine band karo. Wese itni jaldi behosh nahi hoege tum. Kyuki mene concentration uska thoda sa kam rakha hai. Aur haa... Wire kaatne ke liye... Neeche chaaku pada hai. Good luck! Hahahaha~ "

Veer (screams) : Daaaamnnnnnn youuuu....

Veer ne apni khud ki pocket knife nikaali aur...

'Wait! Mein wires ko check kar sakta hu. Mujhe harr ek kaatne ki zaroorat nahi hai.'

[Right master!]

'Check!... Ye nahi...'

'Check... Not this...'

'Check... Shiitttt!'

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'Check'

[Description : One of the wires of the gas machine.]

'Mil gaya...'

*Cuts*

Aur kuch hi palo me Veer ko teeno wire mil chuke the. Jese hi usne teeno wire kaate...

Machine apne aap band pad gayi...

Halaaki halki sii gas Veer inhale kar chuka tha jiske chalte khaasi aur uske seene me dard shuru ho chuka tha. Yaha tak ki uska ab ulti karne ka bhi mann kar raha tha.

Aur lift ke chaalu hote hi first floor par pohuchte hi wo lift se baahar nikal neeche gir pada.

Apna seena dabaaye wo tezz tezz saasein le raha tha.

[Master! Are you okay??? Maaasteerrrr!!!]

'Haaah! Haaahhh haaaahhh haaaahh!!! Pariiii...'

*Cough* *Cough*

[Mein... Aap... Aap ko breathe karne me problem ho rahi hai master.]

'It's... It's okay Pari... I'm fine...'

[But...]

'Mene kaha na... *Cough* I'm... I'm fine...'

'I will kill him... Mein usse nahi... *Cough* nahi chorrunga... Golu... Mein tumhe bacha ke rahunga...'

Aatish (claps) : Maan na padega... Ki tumne meri umeed se kahi zyaada accha perform kiya. Toh? Taiyaar ho? Agle padaav ke liye? Saamne ek kamra hai. Kamre ke baahar ek laal button hai. Usse dabao... Darwaaza khul jaega.

Ladkhadaate hue Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur button dabaayi toh darwaaza khul gaya.

Par...

Andar aate hi usse ek behad hi bhaiyankar darr ki anubhooti hui. Jese maano uski maut aane waali ho. Usse nahi pata tha ki agla padaav uske liye kya kuch laane waala tha. Kya wo waqai Golu ko bacha paega!?
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Update - 35 ~ The Deadliest Trap

Ab tak...

Aur jab saamne nazar padi... Toh...

Ek yuvak peeche khada hua tha. Jisne patthar fek uss aadmi ke sarr pe maar, usse yu gira diya.

Par Veer ki nazar jese hi uspe padi uski aankhein hairat ke maare felti chali gayi...

Veer : G... Goluuuu!???


Golu : Huh!?? Arre... T-Tum...!?

Ab aage...

*Vrrrrroooooooooooooommmmm*

Aaj ki iss Diyo se jagmag raat me jaha jagah jagah log tyohaar ka aanand utha rahe the, toh wahi Arohi aur Kavya apni scooty me baith uss sunsaan raaste me ghar ki orr bhaagti jaa rahi thi.

Dono ki dhadkane train ke maafik tezz ho chuki thi. Jab jaan par aati hai toh acche accho ki haalat kharaab ho jaati hai, badan thande pad jaate hai. Fir yaha toh wo dono ladkiya thi. Upar se aisa kuch bhi unke saath pehle kabhi ghatit nahi hua tha aur na hi unhone aisa kuch kabhi apne saamne dekha tha. Ekdum se jab aaj itni saari vaardaate unke saath hui toh bhaybheet hona toh swabhaavik tha.

Kavya sehami sehami sii aasu bahaate jaa rahi thi aur Arohi ke kandhe par apni chin rakhe uski kamar me zorr se haath baandhe hue thi.

Tabhi achanak...

*Tip*

'Huh!?'

Usse apne gaal pe kuch geela geela mehsoos hua.

Maano jese laga ki upar aasmaan se paani ki ek boond giri ho uske chehre pe aa kar.

Aur ek baar fir...

*Tip*

'??'

Usse fir ye andaaza lagaane me samay na laga ki ye paani ki boond kaha se aa rahi thi.

Kavya : D-Dii?? *sniff*

Ye Arohi ke aasu the. Jo hawa ke kaaran uske gaal se udd ke peeche jaa ke Kavya ke gaal se jaa takraaye the.

Ye abhaas hote hi ki uski badi behan bhi aasu baha rahi hai, Kavya aur zorr zorr se rone lagi aur Arohi ko bheench lii.

Unki scooty ab chowk tak aa chuki thi. Aur iss ilaake me aate hi ab jaake dono ko thodi raahat sii mehsoos hui. Kyuki yaha ujaala hi ujaala tha, Chahal pahal thi, raunak thi, raaste se aati jaati gaadiya thi, log the jo apne manoranjan me lage hue the.

Paas hi unhe ek thaana bhi dikha, par iss waqt Arohi seedhe ghar jaana chaahti thi. Usne soch liya tha ki ek baar ghar pohuch jaaye uske baad police ko inform karegi taaki wo jald se jald Veer ke liye madad leke jaa sake. Wo ye bhuli nahi thi, ki wo Veer ko waha akela kis situation me chorr kar aayi thi.

Aaj apne aap uski aankho se aasu beh rahe the. Kyuki abhi ki ghatna ne usse poora andar tak jhakjhor ke rakh diya tha. Bhale hi wo apne chehre par dikha nahi rahi thi, par andar se wo itna zyaada darri hui thi even Kavya se bhi zyaada. Par wo badi thi, aur yadi wo hi apna darr show karne lagti toh uski choti behan ka kya hota?

Bas isliye, Arohi andar hi andar sab dabaaye thi.
Ab jab wo uss situation se baahar nikli toh usse samajh aaya ki aakhir kitna affected thi wo uss situation me. Aur wo yadi abhi sahi salaamat apni scooty par apni behan ke saath baithi hui thi toh aaj ye keval ek hi shaks ke kaaran mumkin hua tha.

Aur wo tha ~ Veer.

Wahi Veer jisse wo hamesha ek cold shoulder deke chali jaaya karti thi. Rookha rookha vyavhaar karti thi uske saath. Kabhi baatein nahi karti thi. Kabhi uske baare me nahi sochti thi. Usne humesha se hi Veer ko ek stranger ki tarah treat kiya tha.

'Arohi Dii!? Wo hamaara bhai kehlaane ke laayak hi nahi hai.'

'Arohi uss se dur raha karo. Warna uske saath rehna kahi tumhe bhi affect na kar de. Harqate toh jaanti hi ho tum uski.'

'Dii! Aap hi dekhiye. Hum sabhi bhai behno me kitni acchi acchi qualities hai. We are talented. But ussi jagah Veer ko dekhiye. Kya wo kahi se bhi hamaara bhai lagta hai? Wo ek loser hai dii. Maana ki hamaara cousin hai, par Bhumika dii ko dekhiye aap ussi jagah. Wo bhi toh cousin hai hamaari. Par kitni alag personality hai unki. Isliye aap dur hi raha karo uss se.'

'Arohi! Kabhi socho ki tum apni high class friends ke beech ho aur achanak hi Veer waha aa jaaye aur kuch na kuch harqat kar de. Kya sochengi tunhari friends? Kitna embarassed feel karogi tum? Toh aisi situation kabhi na bane uske liye behtar hi ki uss se dur raho. Dekho, khud Tau jii bhi apne bete ko pasand nahi karte. Matlab gadbad Veer me hi hai. Ye toh uske liye khushkismat ki baat honi chaahiye ki uske iss ravaiyye ke baad bhi hum usse ghar par jhel rahe hai... Warna...'

Apne dono bhai, Pranjal aur Vivek ki baatein iss waqt Arohi ke mann me goonj rahi thi. Aur inhi baato ko liye wo aankho se aasu bahaaye road me apni gaadi bhagaaye jaa rahi thi bas.

Na jaane kitne beete saalo se yahi baatein uske mann me daali jaa rahi thi. Jiske chalte, Veer ko anjaan ki tarah treat karna usko ab normal lagne laga tha. Usse kahi se bhi ye galat nahi lagta tha. Lagta tha jese Veer ko aise hi treat karna sahi hai. Jese maano kisi samaaj ka niyam follow kar rahi thi wo. Kabhi kuch galat nahi laga.

Aur ye sab aaj bhi usse normal hi lagta yadi...

Yadi uss din usne college me Kavya ko Veer ki baaho me na dekha hota toh...

'Ye Kavya ko achanak kya ho gaya?'

Uss din wo issi sawaal ko liye poori raat tension me thi. Bhala uski choti behan, jo aaj tak uski hi tarah Veer se baat nahi karti thi. Wo bhala achanak uski baaho me!? Kyuuuu???

Ye kisi jhatke se kam nahi tha uske liye...

Par usse kya pata tha ki Kavya ghar me chori chori Veer se thodi boht baatein zaroor kar liya karti thi jo wo nahi karti thi.

Usse yaad tha kese uss din Veer Kavya ko uski class chorrne bhi gaya tha. Usse yaad tha ki uss din wo kitna badla badla sa lag raha tha.

Aur uss din ke baad toh jese usse na jaane kya kya jaan'ne ko mila tha.

Kavya uske liye kapde khareedne lagi thi, uske liye gifts khareedti. Derr raat raat tak usse messages bhej baatein karti...

Aur ye sab kuch ghatit hote hue wo apni aankho ke saamne dekh paa rahi thi.

'Kyuuuuuu!??? K-Kya mein hi galat thi? Vivek bhaiya aur Pranjal kyu kehte the aisa fir? Kyu aaya wo hume bachaane? Ek call pe hi wo aa gaya. Wahi Pranjal ka phone busy tha toh Vivek Bhaiya ne uthaaya nahi. Par usne... Kavya ka phone ek ring me utha liya... Aur... Itni jaldi wo waha par tha. Na jaane kitni tezz bike chalaayi hogi usne waha pohuchne ke liye. Mein... Mein...'

Aaj apne aap uski rulaayi chooth padi. Aaj Apna naam Veer ke muh se sunte waqt uske raungte khade ho gaye the. Kyuki wo jaanti thi uss awaaz me kitni chinta thi, kitni ghabraahat thi.

Aur ye chinta Veer ki unn dono ke liye thi. Sawaal wahi tha.

Akhir Kyuuu???

Anek prashn liye wo akhir kaar apni manzil par pohuchi...

Kismat se Ragini aur baaki sabhi porch me hi usse mil gayi.

Ragini : Arre!? Aa gayi tum dono!? Aao...! ??? Y-Ye kya??? Tum dono ke chehre ka rang kyu udaa hua hai aise? K-Kavya!?? Ro kyu rahi ho tum? Arohi tum bhiii!??

Jese hi unki dasha Ragini ne dekhi wo hadbada ke baahar aayi. Wo aur Suman iss waqt Veer ko hi dhund rahi thi kyuki achaanak wo bina kuch bataaye ghar se nikal gaya tha aur phone bhi nahi utha raha tha. Zaahir sii baat thi wo sabhi chintit thi.

Arohi : Bh-Bhabhi!!! Wo...

Uske baad Arohi ne shuru se ant tak saari baat bata dii, jisse sunn kar Ragini samet sabhi tension me aa gayi.

Ragini : Hey Bhagwaan! Tum dono theek toh ho na? A-Aur Veer??? W-Wo waha akela hai?? N-Nahi!!

Wo agle pal hi bhaag ke apna phone uthaayi aur police ko call kii.

Aaj tyohaar ka ye mahaul itna tension se bhar gaya. Sabhi ke chehre par bas darr, ghabraahat aur bechaini thi.

Aur sabhi police ka intezaar karne lage. Arohi aur Kavya toh jese tese bach gayi thi. Par yahi baat Veer ke liye kehna thoda mushqil tha.

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"Arre...!? T-Tum!??"

Veer ke saamne iss waqt ek shaks khada tha, jis se Veer train me mila tha.

~Golu.

Par ye waqt uske liye sochne ka nahi tha. Golu ke aane se jo aadmi Veer ko peeche se daboche hue tha, uska dhyaan bhi bhatak chuka tha.

Aur issi ka fayda uthaate hue, Veer ne apni kohni seedha uski pasli me de maari...

"Aaaarrrrghhh!"

Wo dard ke maare karaaha aur apni pasli pakad jhuk gaya aur...

*Pooooooooowwwwww*

Ek zordaar ghusa uske gaal par aake pada jo usse poora hila ke rakh diya.

"Fuccckkk youuuu!" Next second hi, Veer ne full taakat se ek kick aur jadd dii uske pait me.

Aur wo banda peeche jaa gira.

Golu bhaagte hue uski taraf aaya. Veer ne dekha ki ek cycle zameen par padi hui thi jiska pichla chaka halka halka abhi bhi ghoom raha tha. Matlab Golu yaha cycle se guzar raha tha aur usne jese hi ye sab dekha toh madad ke liye aa pada.

Golu : Arre Bhai... Tum firse?? Aur ye chakkar kya hai? Saare aadmi tumhaare peeche kyu lage hai? Theek toh ho? K-Kya tha ye sab?

Veer : M-Mein theek hu. Boht boht shukriya, meri madad karne ke liye. Uss din train me bhi tumne... Par tum yaha? Wait! Kya hi ittefaaq hai ye...!? Uss din bhi tumne hi mujhe bachaaya tha aur aaj bhi...

Pranjal : Haha~ Kismat bhai. Jab jise mila de. Wese naam toh yaad hai na mera? Tumhara toh Veer hai.
Mujhe yaad hai.

Veer : And tum Golu!? Mujhe bhi yaad hai...

Golu : Hahaha~ Bilkul! Chalo yaad toh hai kam se kam. Par ye sab!? Kya tha?

Veer : Kuch Dushmani hak meri inse shayad. Jo ye mere parivaar ke peeche pade hai. Teh tak jaana padega mujhe iski. Na jaane kaun hai inn sab ke peeche.

Golu : Ohhh!

Veer : Par tum yaha...!? Sunsaan raaaste me!? Wo bhi... Cycle me!?

Golu : Apna kya hai Bhai... Uss din mein bhi apne gaav ke liye nikla tha, train se. Kyuki wahi apniichh janmbhumi hai. Apna koi haiich nahi. Aashram me pala bada, fir 18 baras ki umr ke baad paisa kamaane idhar Mumbai aa gaya. Suna tha paisa kamaana hai toh mayanagri jao. Haha~

Veer : ....

Golu : Mein idhar hi peeche ek hotel hai. Udhar kaam karta hu. Khaana peena wahi ho jaata hai. Rehne ka koi na koi jugaad ho hi jaata hai. Aaj Diwali ki kharchi lene gaya tha. Bas ab jaake hotel ke hi kuch dost log hai unke saath Diwali manaunga.

Veer : Ohhh!! Tumhari zindagii bhi... Kaafi...

Golu : Zindagi ka kya hai bhai. Ek din upar jaana hi hai. Tab tak jitne maze le sako le lo. Ek accha jeevan guzaaro aur kya. Apna toh ek hi sapna hai...
Hamesha se chaahta tha ki ek aisho araam ki zindagi jiyu. Par... Saala kismat hiich gaandu nikli haha~

Veer (smiles) : Kismat gaandu hi hoti hai.

[W-What master!?? Bhuliye mat... Mera aapke andar aana bhi kismat hi thi. Kismat ko aisa na boliye... Master!]

'Ohh really now!?'

Tabhi achanak hi Golu ne apna haath aage badhaaya aur Veer ki taraf kiya...

Golu (smiles) : Wese toh tum kisi bade ghar ke lagte ho. Par yadi mujh jeso se tumhe dikkat na ho toh... Aaj se hum dost!???

'Huh!?'

Aaj...

Aaj ye pehli baar tha, jab Veer ki taraf kisi ne apni taraf se dosti ka haath badhaaya tha. Kabhi kisi ne bhi uska dost bann ne ki pahal nahi kari thi. Ye jaante hue bhi ki Veer kisi na kisi pareshani me rehta hai aur uske paala khatarnaak aadmiyo se hai, fir bhi aaj Golu ne uski taraf ye dosti ka haath badhaaya tha.

Aise me...

Golu : Huh?? Oo bhai... Tum ro kyu rahe ho? Arre mein itna bura bhi na hu yaar
... Tum toh... Dekho bhai aisi beizzati na karo yaar...

Veer (hasste hue aasu pochh kar) : Nahi... Wo *smiles* Iske pehle kabhi kisi ne mera dost bann'ne ki koshish na kari... Aaj ye pehli baar hai. Isliye... Isliye... Bilkul... Aaj se hum dost hue...

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne kass ke Golu ka haath thaam liya.

Golu : Itna bhaavuk ni hote bhai... Zindagi me chill maarne ka... Aur kisi ne haath nahi badhaaya toh kya hua? Ab mene toh badha diya hai na? Haha~

Veer (smiles) : Hmmm!

Dono ko aaj ek naya dost mila tha. Jaha Veer Golu ka abhaari tha aur uske raviyye se impressed tha wahi Golu bhi iss baat se khush tha ki Veer jesa bade ghar ka ladka aaj uska yu dost ban gaya tha.

Par jese...

Dono ki iss khushi par kisi ki nazar lag chuki thi.

Kyuki agle hi pal...

Jhaadiyo me se 5 se 6 aadmi nikle aur Veer aur Golu pe toot pade...

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki dono ko kuch sochne ka time hi nahi mila. Do se teen bando ko jhelna toh Veer wese bhi kaafi hadd tak handle kar leta. Par 5 se 6!?

Ye toh namumkin jesa kaam tha uske liye. Uske stats abhi itne nahi the.

Golu bhi koi fighter nahi tha. Wo dubla aur lamba sa ladka tha. Ladaayi bhidaayi se shuru se hi dur rehne waala.

Nateeja obvious tha.

Jaha Golu ko maar maar ke unhone behosh kar diya tha toh wahi Veer kuch pal unse ladd waha unka saamna karta raha. Par...

Wo outnumbered ho chuka tha.

Enemies zyaadi thi, aur wo akela.

[Maaaasttteerrrr!!!]

Pari ki chinta janak awaaz aayi toh sanket samajh Veer muda par...

*Thud*

Uske sarr ke peeche se ek vaar aaya aur wo sarr pakad neeche girne laga...

[Noooooo
! Maaastteeerrr!!]

Aankhein uski band hone lagi...

Behoshi me jaane se pehle usse bas ek hi awaaz mann me sunaayi dii...

*Ding*

['Mission : Save Kavya and Arohi before it gets too late' has been completed.]

[40 points have been rewarded.]

'K-Kavya... Arohi...' Mann me wo apni behno ke baare me soch... Behoshi me chala gaya.

***

Aadmi 1 : Wo toh accha hua hum chhipe hue the. Jaldi nipat gaya maamla.

Aadmi 2 : Sahi kaha! Aur Bhau ne ekdum sahi kaha tha. Ki inn 4 logo se kaam nahi ho paega. Isliye unhone hume bhi bhej diya. Aur dekho... Unki baat ekdum sahi nikli.

Aadmi 1 : Hmm! Ab inka kya karna hai? Mujhe phone aaya unka, wo bata rahe hai ki wo dono, unn dono ladkiyo ko pakadne me nakaam rahe.

Aadmi 4 : Karna kya hai? Bhau ne toh pehle hi hume bataaya tha ki hume iss ladke ko nahi pakadna hai. Iske aas paas ke log yaani iske chaheeto ko pakad ke laana hai.

Aadmi 5 : Ekdum sahi kaha. Wo do ladkiya bach gayi toh kya hua. Ye dekho... Ye ek aur ladka pada hai yaha. Isne iss ladke ki madad kii... Matlab zaroor ye iska koi khaas hai, aur isse jaanta hai. Warna aise koi apni jaan khatre me nahi daalta. Aur dono haath bhi mila rahe the abhi.

Aadmi 3 : Haan! Isse uthao.

Aadmi 1 : Aur iss ladke ka kya!?

Aadmi 3 : Usse wahi pade rehne do. Bhau ne uske liye hi toh Jalsa me taiyaariya kii hai. Hume keval iss ladke se matlab hai. Ab jaldi chalo, wo dono ladkiya police ko lekar yaha zaroor aaengi.

Aadmi 6 : Jalsa!?? Baap re! Iss bande ki shaamat aayi hai lagta.

Aadmi 4 : Hmm! Zindagi me kuch bhi kar lo, par bhool ke bhi Bhau se panga na lo. Iss ladke ne anjaane me hi ek aisi jagah khud ko daal diya hai, jaha iska vinaash nishchit hai. Ab chalo jaldi...

Aur wo sabhi aadmi Golu aur apne aadmiyo ko waha se uthaa ke nikal gaye.

Veer idhar road ke kinaare besudh sa dala hua tha.

***

Raat ke 10 baj chuke the. Jab achanak hi Veer ko apne chehre par kuch geelapan sa mehsoos hua.

Aur wo apne hosh me aaya.

Dekha toh paaya ki...

Wo apne bed par tha. Aur uske ird gird, Ragini, Kavya, Arohi, Suman, Aabha, Sonali ye sabhi khadi hui thi.

'Huh??'

[Aap behosh ho gaye the master. Luckily, wo aapko wahi chorr ke chale gaye. You know... I was so worried... *sniff* Mein... Mein... Abhi aap kesa feel kar rahe ho? Wait! Mein khud hi check kar leti hu. You should rest.]

Kavya : Bhaiyyaaaaaaaaa!!!!

Kavya aage badh Veer se lipat gayi. Uski aankho me abhi bhi aasuo ki boonde saji hui thi.

Veer mehsoos kar paa raha tha ki Kavya ke dil ki dhadkan kitni tezz thi. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki Arohi ke chehre par tak aasuo ke nishaan the. Ragini aur Suman ki aankhein bhi nam thi. Aabha bhi chintit nazar se dekh r
ahi thi. Sonali bhi usse bauhe sikode dekh rahi thi.

Usse abhaas ho raha tha ki ye sabhi log uski kitni parvaah karte hai.

Kavya : Bhaiyaaaaaaa!!! *sniff* *sniff*

Veer : Mein yaha!?

Arohi (aage aate hue) : M-Mein bataati hu...

Uske baad Arohi ne sab kuch bataaya.

Kese wo ghar pohuchi, kese Police ko Ragini ne
inform kiya, Police aayi aur Kavya Arohi ko leke uss jagah par pohuchi jaha Veer unhe bachaana aaya tha.

Kese unn ne Veer ko waha behosh paaya aur yaha ghar waapas laaye. Police aasvaashan dete huye ki wo apni jaach jaari rakhenge keh ke chali gayi. Ye saari baatein Arohi ne Veer ko bata dii.

Veer : I see...!

Arohi : Wo...

Veer : Hmm???

Arohi : N-Nothing... Tum rest karo.

'Mere kaaran aaj ye sabhi tyohaar bhi na mana paaye.'

Ragini : Veer tum rest karo. Okay!

Veer : Mere kaaran aap sabhi... Aaj tyohaar bhi...

Ragini : Don't even think about that okay? Tyohaar toh harr saal aata hai Veer. Tum zyada zaroori ho ya tyohaar!? Rest karo okay!?

Kavya : Bhaiya! Aap bistar se nahi nikloge. Rest karo. Mein aapka dhyaan yahi rakhungi.

Ragini : Nahi Kavya! Veer ko kuch derr akela rehne do. Usse neend ki zaroorat hai. Mene doctor ko bhi inform kar diya hai. Wo aate hi honge...

Suman : Maali... Ahem! Veer jii! Apna dhyaan rakhiyega. Koi bhi pareshani ho toh mujhe awaaz laga dena. Mera kamra aapke bagal se hi jo hai. Ragini jii ko pareshan karne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Mein hu na.

Aur sabhi uske kamre se baahar nikal gaye. Aaj bechaara Veer itna bada parv Diwali na mana saka. Ek ke baad ek jese uski zindagi me bas pareshaniya hi likhi hui thi. Na jaane kab uski zindagi me khushiyo ki bauchhaar aaegi!?

***

'Wait!!! G-Golu? Golu ka kya hua? Wo bhi toh wahi tha!? Uska kya hua? Bechaara wo bhi mere kaaran...'

Sochte hue Veer derr raat bistar se uth khada hua.

Par jese...

Ye ghabraahat kam thi? Jo ek aur awaaz ne uski iss ghabraahat ko badha diya...?

*Ding*

[Mission : Get to Golu as fast as possible and save him.

Rewards : ?? Points.
Location : Jalsa Building. xxxxxxx road, near xxxxxxx route.
Time Limit : 19 hours.
Mission Fail Penalty : 100 Points Deduction.]

'N-Noo... No... Noooo Nooooooooooo...'

Mission padhte hi Veer apne bistar par gir pada.

'Nooooooo... Wo meri wajah se... Wo...'

Par jese ye sab kuch bhi kam tha uske liye jab achanak hi uska phone baj utha. Ek unknown number se call.

Veer : H-Hello!??

Voice : Hello! Wese... Hello kehne laayak mahaul toh nahi hoga tumhaare liye Haha~ Kyu!? Jhatka laga na?

Veer (frowns) : K-Kaun!?

Voice : Kaun hu, Kya hu ye sab baad me jaan jaoge apne aap. Tumne ek boht badi galti kar dii. Anjaane me hi kari par galti toh galti hoti hai. Hai na? Aur galti kii hai toh saza toh milti hi hai. Hai na?

Veer : ??

Voice : Toh ye tumhaara dost hai na!?? Kya naam hai iska!??

Veer : Huhhhh!??? G-Goluuuuu!?

Voice : Ohhh! Toh Golu hai iska naam. Haa toh tumhara ye Golu mere qabze me hai. Wese toh mein tumhari unn do behno me se ek ko uthaane waala tha par... Ye bhi bura target nahi hai. Haha~

Ye sunte hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Ki uski behne kitni badi musibat se bach ke baahar aayi thi. Warna na jaane kya hota Veer ka.

Veer : N-Nahiiiii! No..... Tummmm...

Voice (gusse me) : Kal! Kal raat 8 baje... xxxxx route par xxxxx road hai. Udhar ek dhalaan waala raasta milega. Andarr jaate jaana, aur ek building dikhegi.
Tumhaare swaagat ke liye waha bade se aksharo me Jalsa likha hoga. Police ko khabar karne ka koi fayda nahi hai. Wo mere naam se hi kaapte hai. Fir bhi bataana chaaho toh bata lena, par tumhaare dost ki guarantee fir mein nahi lunga. Yadi apne dost ko bachaana chaahte ho toh kal..bataayi gayi jagah par pohuch jaana... Warna...

*Call ends*

Veer ko maano saanp sungh gaya tha. Wo agle pal apna sarr pakad, baal kheechne laga.

'Nooooo!!!! Nooooooo!!! Ye sab kyaaa... Mere kaaran aaj sabhi Diwali nahi mana paaye... Aur bechaara Golu... no no no no noooo... Jiska koi kasoor nahi tha... Wo... Aaj mere kaaran... Arohi ya Kavya bhi uski jagah ho sakti thi... Sab kuch mere kaaran... Kaash... Right... I... I shouldn't have existed... I shouldn't have... *sniff*'

[Maaaaaaaasttteeeeeerrrrrrrr!!!]

'Huh!?'

[Please master! Don't get demotivated. Mein hu aapke saath. Aisa kabhi mat sochiyega. I'm always with you. Aap akele nahi ho. We... We will save Golu, just like we saved Arohi and Kavya. Ghabraaiye mat Master... Please! Mein aapko aise nahi dekhna chaahti. Aapki himmat tootate hue... Because, it hurts me too... Pleaassee! Be strong Master. Mein aapke harr ek kadam par aapke saath hu.]

'P-Pariii!??'

Pari ki baato ne jese apna asar kar diya tha. Kyuki agle hi pal Veer ne aapne aasu poche aur usne nishchay kar liya.

'Right! We... We will save him... We will... Pehli baar koi dost bana hai. *smiles* Mein usse kuch nahi hone dunga. I don't know ye kaun hai aur kyu meri family ke peeche pada hai. But... Mein apni family aur friends ko kuch nahi hone dunga. Right!!'

[That's the spirit master!]

'Mere stats dikhaao Pari!'

[ Stats :
Strength - 50/100
Intelligence - 35/100
Agility - 30/100
Endurance - 45/100
Appearance - 22/100]

'Hmm! Mere paas 90 points available hai. Mein... Mein unhe add kar sakta hu right?'

[Yes but changes subah dekhne ko nahi milenge master. Changes ke liye night time zaroori hai. Raat ke 12 se subah ke 8 tak. Abhi raat ke 2 baj chuke hai. Aapko points add 12 ke pehle karne the, tab jaake subah 8 ke baad aapko changes dekhne ko milte.]

'I see! Well koi nahi. Ab Golu ko bachaane ke baad hi... Mein ikhatte points invest karunga. I will save him.'

[As you wish Master. It's time to rest.]

'Yeaaaahhhh!!'

***

Diwali ki agli raat...

Aaj ke iss din sab kuch band rehta hai. Market se leke sab kuch...

Yaha tak ki aaj ke din akhbaar waale bhi chhutti lete the. Aur aaj ki iss raat Veer ek building ke saamne khada hua tha.

Samay 7:55 ho raha tha.

Usse uss aadmi ne 8 baje ka bola tha.

Building ek sunsaan sii jagah hi bani hui thi. Behad badi, aur kaafi puraani lag rahi thi.

Uski banaavat bhi puraane tareeko se kii gayi thi. Modern kahi se nahi lag rahi thi woh...

Saamne ek bada sa lohe ka gate tha. Aur upar LED lights se likha hua tha.

JALSA

'Bhala kesi jagah hai ye!?'

[It looks old master. Par saath hi saath modern touch bhi hai.]

'Yeah!!!'

Wo yaha keval ek shirt pehne aur neeche jeans daale poora prepared hoke aaya tha.

Uske jeans me ek lighter tha, saath hi saath wahi pocket knife bhi dali hui thi. Aur Kuch cash bhi tha.

'Hang in there.... Golu! Tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Tumne meri jaan do baar bachaayi... Now it's my time to save you.'

8 baj chuke the...

Aur...

*Ring* *Ring*

Wahi unknown number dekhte hi Veer ne call uthaaya,

Veer : Mein pohuch gaya hu. Aage batao.

Voice : Ohhh!? Itna confidence? I like it... Andar aao. Darwaaza khula hai.

*Call ends*

Ek lambi saas lete hue Veer ne apne dhadakte dil ko thoda calm karte hue aage badh, darwaaze ko khola...

*Creeeaakkk*

Par andar aate hi...

Ekdum ghapp andhera tha...

Kuch kadam wo chala ki tabhi peeche ka darwaaza apne aap band ho gaya.

'Huh???'

Aur uski calmness yu pal me gaayab ho gayi.

*Badump*

Andhera itna tha ki usse kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Poora kaala andheraa... Ekdum shaant mahaul...

Aur tabhi Veer ne apne jeb se lighter nikaal usse jalaaya...

*Click*

Lighter ki maddham aag ki roshni se jese hi usse saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya toh uske raungte khade ho gaye...

Saamne toh kuch nahi tha...

Par...

Neeche...

Dherr saare laal rang ke gubbaare dale huye the. Yadi ye scene kisi horror movie ka hota toh aadmi ki dekh ke hi phat jaati.

Aur Veer toh khud waha uss situation me tha.

'Y-Ye...!?'

Tabhi achanak...

*Tuck*

Ekdum se kisi button ki awaaz aayi aur Veer ke saamne LED lights se bade se akshar jagmaga uthe...

Likha hua tha..

WELCOME

'????'

Wo kuch soch paata ki tabhi...

Uske kaano me ek awaaz padi...

*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*

"Welcome! Welcome! Jalsa me tumhaara swaagat hai.... Veeeerrrr!!!"

Ye awaaz upar lage intercom se aayi. Ek kaale rang ka box tha jo basically school aur colleges me classrooms me lagaaya jaata hai announcement ke liye.

Veer : ??? Tum... Mera naam...

Voice : Bilkul! Bilkul! Mein toh tumhaare baare me sab jaanta hu. Akhir tumne itna pareshan jo kiya hai mujhe. Itna pareshan ki mujhe tum jese chuho se khud deal karna pad raha hai batao.

Veer (chillaate hue) : Golu kaha hai!???


Voice : Shaant! Usse dhundne toh tumhe khud aana padega. Wese mein tumhe lighter dene waala tha par dekh ke accha laga ki tum poore intezaam se aaye ho.

Veer (frowns) : What do you mean ki mujhe usse dhundna padega!?

Voice : Tumhaara dost third floor par hai. Yadi bacha sakte ho toh bacha lo... Sab kuch tumhaare upar hai... Teesre floor par pohuchne ke liye teen padaav paar karne hai. Sabse pehle bagal me lagi lift me jao. Aur first floor ke liye button dabaana. Dhyaan rahe... No cheating... Pehli manzil yaani pehli manzil... Yadi baaki buttons dabaayi aur yadi... Current ka jhatka lagne se tumhaari maut ho gayi... Toh... Tumhaara dost bechaara... Hahahaha~

Veer (screams) : Daaaaamnnnnnn yooouuuuu...

Voice : Hahahaha~ Yahi toh pasand hai mujhe... Logo ki tadap, ghabrahat, darr...

Veer : Kyuuu??? Kya bigaada hai mene tumhaara? Kyuu kar rahe ho ye sab meri family ke saath? Mein toh tumhe jaanta bhi nahi hu... Fir kyuuuuu??

Voice (gusse me) : Shyaaana banta hai saale!? Club se tu hi uss ladki ko bhaga ke le gaya tha na? Bol!?? Uss Ragini ko bachaane bhi tu hi aaya tha na?? Bol?? Aur uss anguthi ko bhi tu hi chhina ke laaya tha na??? Haan? Ab samajh aaya tujheee!?? Bol!!!! Harr waqt tu kahi na kahi mere plan ke beech me aaya hai. Aur tere kaaran... Tere kaaran mere plans bikhar ke reh gaye... Maatr ek chuhe ke kaaran... Saza toh banti hai. Nahi?

Ye baat sunte hi Veer ko ek zordaar jhatka laga. Aur usse jese ateet yaad aane laga. Jese usse sab kuch samajh me aane laga.

'Huh? N-No way... Ragini Bhabhi... W-Wo ladki... Wo ring...'

[Iska matlab harr kartoot ke peeche ye aadmi ka haath tha master. Yahi hai jo hamaari family ke peeche pada hua hai. We have to take him down.]

Aur tabhi Veer ke kaano me ek jaani pehchaani sii dhun padi...

Jisse sunte hi uske haath kap kapaane lage...

Intercom se hi wahi mouth organ ki awaaz aa rahi thi aur ye wahi dhun thi jo Veer ne uss din club me suni thi.

'N-Nooo... Ye... Ye toh... It was him!???'

Ye abhaas hote hi uski aankhein shock ke maare felti chali gayi. Akhir wo banda Aatish tha.

Aatish : Aahhh! Waqai! Mera pyaara mouth organ hi mere gusse ko kaabu me karta hai.

Veer (shivers) : T-Tumm... Tum...

Aatish : Ohhh! Mujhe jaante ho? Koi baat nahi. Aur acche se jaan jaoge... Jese tumhaari... Kya naam tha uska... Haa! Ragini mujhe jaan gayi. Aaahhhh! Kya scene tha uss din... Uska rona... Uske pati ka apni zindagi ki bheek maangna... Kya toda tha mene uss din usko andar se...

Veer : Bh-Bhabhiii!???

Aatish : Haan! Aahhh maza aa gaya tha uss din.
Mujhe logo ka vishwaash todne me boht maza aata hai. Pata Veer!? Matlab boht zyaada... Jab... Jab unki wo shaqal banti hai na, baad me jab unka vishwaash toot'ta hai, aur fir wo bina koi aasha waala chehra banaate hai na... Wo... Usse dekh ke na... Usse dekh ke na... Pata nahi kyu par... Par mujhe boht zyaada sukoon milta hai. Kya gazab ka chehra banaaya tha uss Ragini ne... Ab toh poori tarah se toot gayi hogi... Aur yahi tumhaare saath hone waala hai... *smiles*

Veer : Tumne... Tumne ye sab kiya tha... I... I will kill you... Mein tujhe chorunga nahi haraam zaade...

Aatish : Lift me jao aur pehla padaav paar karo... Ye bilbilaana baad me... Tumhara samay shuru hota hai ab...

Na chaahte hue bhi, Veer ko akhir lift me jaana hi tha.

Andar ghuste hi lighter ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. Kyuki lift me lights on thi.

Lift ke andar sab kuch normal dikh raha tha.

Isliye ahista se Veer andar gaya aur jesa ki bataaya gaya tha usse first floor par jaane ke liye. Veer ne theek wesa hi kiya.

Lift ka darwaaza band hua aur lift chalna shuru ho gayi.

Par...

Aadhe raste me hi jese wo ruk sii gayi.

'There's something wrong... Hmmmm!???'

Khatre ka abhaas hote hi Veer ki nazar upar gayi aur...

*Hissss*

Ek ajeeb sii gas leak ki awaaz usse sunaayi dii...

Upar dekha toh paaya ki upar lift me kahi se gas leak ho rahi thi.

Bina ek second gawaaye...

'Check'

[Description : Fluothane gas. Ek baar inhale karte hi behosh kar sakti hai. Common cases me vomiting, nausea, breathing problems. Worst case - Death.]

'Shiiitttttttt!!!!'

Veer ko jese hi realize hua ki wo kya tha, maano jese uska dil baahar ko aa gaya tha.

*Badump* *Badump*

Dil ki tezz dhadkan control kar usne upar firse dhyaan diya toh dekha...

Upar kuch wires guccho me maujood the.

[Cover your mouth master.]

Pari ki salaah sunn Veer ne forun hi muh pe rumaal baandh liya...

Tabhi neeche ki floor se intercom se firse Aatish ki dheemi awaaz aayi,

"Sahi soch rahe ho. Hahahaha~ Unn saare wires me se keval 3 hi wire hai jo lift ki upar lagi gas machine ko rok sakte hai. Kaam simple hai. Sahi wire kaato, aur machine band karo. Wese itni jaldi behosh nahi hoege tum. Kyuki mene concentration uska thoda sa kam rakha hai. Aur haa... Wire kaatne ke liye... Neeche chaaku pada hai. Good luck! Hahahaha~ "

Veer (screams) : Daaaamnnnnnn youuuu....

Veer ne apni khud ki pocket knife nikaali aur...

'Wait! Mein wires ko check kar sakta hu. Mujhe harr ek kaatne ki zaroorat nahi hai.'

[Right master!]

'Check!... Ye nahi...'

'Check... Not this...'

'Check... Shiitttt!'

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'Check'

[Description : One of the wires of the gas machine.]

'Mil gaya...'

*Cuts*

Aur kuch hi palo me Veer ko teeno wire mil chuke the. Jese hi usne teeno wire kaate...

Machine apne aap band pad gayi...

Halaaki halki sii gas Veer inhale kar chuka tha jiske chalte khaasi aur uske seene me dard shuru ho chuka tha. Yaha tak ki uska ab ulti karne ka bhi mann kar raha tha.

Aur lift ke chaalu hote hi first floor par pohuchte hi wo lift se baahar nikal neeche gir pada.

Apna seena dabaaye wo tezz tezz saasein le raha tha.

[Master! Are you okay??? Maaasteerrrr!!!]

'Haaah! Haaahhh haaaahhh haaaahh!!! Pariiii...'

*Cough* *Cough*

[Mein... Aap... Aap ko breathe karne me problem ho rahi hai master.]

'It's... It's okay Pari... I'm fine...'

[But...]

'Mene kaha na... *Cough* I'm... I'm fine...'

'I will kill him... Mein usse nahi... *Cough* nahi chorrunga... Golu... Mein tumhe bacha ke rahunga...'

Aatish (claps) : Maan na padega... Ki tumne meri umeed se kahi zyaada accha perform kiya. Toh? Taiyaar ho? Agle padaav ke liye? Saamne ek kamra hai. Kamre ke baahar ek laal button hai. Usse dabao... Darwaaza khul jaega.

Ladkhadaate hue Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur button dabaayi toh darwaaza khul gaya.

Par...

Andar aate hi usse ek behad hi bhaiyankar darr ki anubhooti hui. Jese maano uski maut aane waali ho. Usse nahi pata tha ki agla padaav uske liye kya kuch laane waala tha. Kya wo waqai Golu ko bacha paega!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
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Agar Usne Aisa kiya to Khai sari property uske haath se hi na chali jaye.

★ Agar Aisa Hua Tha yha to sari property trust me ya apne favorite pote ke paas hi jani hai yani (Veer) ke hath me.
Villan hai.... Kuch na kuch jugad jarur karke rakha hoga.... yaar ju kya first time story padh rahe ho kya :verysad: hints tak samajh nahi sakte :sad:
 

Kajal...

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Sabhi ko sabse pehle Hello! :hi:

Ye meri iss forum par dusri kahani hogi. Pehli kahaani [Akhir kyu?From hatred to love] ko aap sabhi ne itna saraaha aur pyaar diya ki mujhe dusri kahaani likhne par majboor kar diya.

By the way meri pehli kahani padhi ya nahi? Nahi padhi toh jao yaar pehle usko padho. Fir ye nayi kahani me dubki lagaana.

Toh finally, aapke saamne prastut hu apni ek aur nayi kahani lekar,


"Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery"




Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani sub genre - 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss sub genre ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss sub genre ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.

Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.

1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.

2. Story harem par based hai.

3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.


4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.

Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.


Dhanyavaad!
:hi:
:reading:
 
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