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Amazing updateUpdate - 37 ~ Consolation and SchemesAb tak...
Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.
Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??
Veer : ??
Ab aage...
Kal jo kuch bhi khaufnauk haadsa hua tha, uss haadse ke baad se zaahir sii baat thi ki Veer ki haalat iss waqt shabdo me baya karne waali nahi thi.
Wo andar se aur saath hi saath baahar se bhi toota hua tha. Na keval Aatish ne usse andar se toda tha balki uske gundo ne milke, Veer pe haath saaf karne ki bhi koi kasar nahi chorri thi.
Usse jese ek behad bada jhatka sa laga tha. Apne kamre me zameen par paav sikode aur apna sarr jhukaaye baithe hue tha wo. Beech beech me Veer ka shareer kaanp uthata aur wo apne kaanpte hue haath khol unhe dekh khud se hi baat karne lagta...
'I-I killed him... Mene... Mene usse... Mene inhi haatho se G-Golu ko... Mene maar diya... Pari!?? Mene... I killed him Pari... I... *sniff* I killed him.'
[Master! Please! I beg you! Isme aap ki koi galti nahi thi Master. Hume nahi pata tha ki hum jab jab aage badh rahe the, hum Golu ko maar rahe the. Ye sab anjaane me hua Master. Isme saari galti uss aadmi ki hai. He set that trap. M-Master... Please! Khud ko sambhaaliye... Golu ki death ka badla aap ko hi lena hai master. Aap aise haar nahi maan sakte. Wo aadmi yahi chaahta hai master. Usne Ragini ke saath bhi wahi kiya tha na... Dekha nahi aapne? Waha se aane ke baad hi uske aur Vivek ke beech kitni badi daraar aa gayi hai? Master... Aapko hi kuch karna hoga.]
'Pari... Pari... Golu ko mene maar diya Pari... Mene apne hi haatho se... Usne meri jaan do baar bachaayi thi. Aur jaha mujhe usse bachaana chahiye tha. Waha... Waha mene ulta inhi haatho se usse maar diya.'
[Master! No! You didn't! Aapne nahi maara hai Golu ko master. Uss aadmi ne maara hai. Aap toh ye soch ke aage badh rahe the ki hum Golu ko bachaane ke liye uske nazdeek pohuch rahe hai. Par hume kuch nahi pata tha Master.]
'Sab meri galti hai... Sab... Mene kisi ka khoon kar diya Pari... Mene... I'm a murderer now... *sniff* Mein hi doshi hu... Saara ka saara dosh mera hai. Haan! Tum... Tum sab mujhe akela chorr do... Mein... Mein akela hi thik tha. Chali jao Pari tum bhi... I'm really a loser now. Ek dost ko nahi bacha saka mein... Ulta uski hi jaan le liya. Pari... Jao... Mein kuch nahi hu Pari. Tumhe iss shareer me sab bekaar hi milega Pari... *sniff*'
[Master! Please aisa mat kahiye. You are the best master. Aur, I cannot leave your body. Mein aapki body chorr kar jau, iske keval do hi raaste hai. Aur wo dono boht hi extreme hai. Aur mein kabhi aapse alag nahi houngi. Please! Master! Meri baat samajhne ki koshish kariye.]
'No... Pari... I...'
Veer ki maansik haalat itni kharaab thi ki wo Pari ki baat samajhne ka prayaas hi nahi kar paa raha tha. Jo jhatka usse laga tha, wo kahi hadd tak usse andar se hila ke rakha hua tha.
Pari ki harr baat ko wo ignore kar khud ko dosh diye jaa raha tha, jab achanak hi uske kaano me ek awaaz padi...
"V-Veer!?"
'??'
Aur ye awaaz sunte hi Veer ne apna sarr haule se uthaaya.
Uske saamne Nidhi chintit sa chehra liye darwaaze ki dehleez pe khadi hui thi. Aur itna hi nahi, Nidhi ke peeche hi Kavya aur Arohi bhi khadi hui thi.
Dheere dheere...
Nidhi apne kadam badhaate hue aage aayi. Uske perro me bandhi payal ki awaaz Veer bhali bhaati sunn paa raha tha.
Wo uske sameep aake jhuki aur usse dekhne lagi.
Nidhi Veer ki vartmaan haalat dekh ke hi ghabraayi sii hui thi. Aankho me halke halke aasu the, wo laal ho rakhi thi, aur unhi aankho ke neeche kaalapan. Jo ye batla raha tha ki Veer soya nahi hai raat bhar.
'Ye!? Ye kya haalat ho rakhi hai Veer ki!?'
Nidhi mann me soch aage badh Veer ke chehre par apne haath le gayi aur bade hi haule se usne Veer ke gaalo se unn aasuo ko pocha.
"Ma'am!?"
Uske thar tharaate hue hontho se jab wo shabd nikle toh Nidhi ne uski hatheli apne haatho me bheench lii.
Nidhi : Ye... Ye sab kya haal bana rakha hai Veer!?
Par Veer kuch na bola. Uski aankho se aasu nirantar behte chale jaa rahe the, jo Nidhi apne haatho se pochti jaa rahi thi.
'Kahi...!? Kahi Veer ke gharwaalo ne toh kuch nahi kiya uske saath!?'
Ye soch Nidhi ki nazre Kavya aur Arohi ki taraf gayi aur usne thoda gusse se unn dono ko dekha.
Par jab usse laga ki Kavya ne hi toh usse yaha call karke bulaaya tha aur saath hi saath dono behno ke chehre par jab usse chinta nazar aayi toh Nidhi ne ye khayaal forun hi apne mann se nikaal diya.
Nidhi : Veer!? Mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu. Jawaab do meri baat ka. Ye sab kya hai? Kya hua hai?
Par Veer abhi bhi kuch nahi bol raha tha. Yaha se Nidhi ki awaaz, toh andar se Pari ki awaaz aur fir uske khud ke antar mann ki awaaz jo usse doshi thehra rahi thi. Inn sab ke chalte wo bas ek jagah bina kisi hosh ke besudh sa dekhe jaa raha tha.
Nidhi : Tum Kavya ho na!?
Kavya : Huh? J-Jii!
Nidhi : Kal aisa kya hua tha? Jo Veer ki haalat aisi ho gayi hai? Batao mujhe... Jaldi...
Nidhi ke chehre par chinta dekh, Kavya thodi hairaan thi. Par ek baat usse clear ho chuki thi. Wo ye ki usne Nidhi ko yaha bula ke ekdum sahi decision liya tha.
Kavya : Wo... Ma'am... Mein aapko poori baat bataati hu. Darasal... Diwali ki night me mein aur Arohi dii yaha par aa rahe the. Tab raaste me hi kuch gunde hamaare peeche pad gaye the. Mene Veer bhaiya ko call karke bulaaya tha aur unhone hi hume bachaaya tha. Par uss din unn logo ne Veer bhaiya ko kaafi chotil kar diya tha.
Nidhi : Kyaaa?
Kavya : Hmm! Aur fir kal... Achanak hi bhaiya bole ki unhe kuch kaam hai aur raat me hi kareeb 7:30 baje ghar se nikal gaye. Par... *sniff* Par...
Bolte bolte Kavya yu rone lagi toh uski baat ko Arohi ne poora kiya.
Arohi : Par raat me hi... Kal Veer hume ghar ke baahar mila. Veer ko boht chot aayi hui thi. Abhi bhi uske badan par chot ke nishaan hai. Doctor ne treatment kiya aur medicine deke chala gaya tha wo. Par uske baad se... Veer na toh kuch khaa raha hai, na kisi se baat kar raha hai aur kuch bata bhi nahi raha hai. Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai ma'am. Wo log kaun the!? Aur kyu hamaare peeche pade hue the? Aur Veer kaha gaya tha kal jo uski ye haalat ho gayi? Yadi aap kuch hal nikaal sakti hai toh please...
[Master! Look! Nidhi ko aapki kitni chinta hai. Please! Listen to her.]
Nidhi : Veer! Meri taraf dekho... Kidhar gaye the tum kal!? Batao! Mein kuch puch rahi hu tumse Veer! Meri baato ko yu ansuna kar doge!? Mein tumhaari Ma'am hu na!? Bolo!?
Wo usse thoda sa hilaate hue puchi par...
Veer toh jese kisi murde ki tarah ho chuka tha. Koi harqat nahi kar raha tha.
[No! No! No! This is bad... Master ka emotional state itna unstable kese...!? Yadi aisa hi chalta raha toh master pakka depression me chale jaenge. Nooooo! Mujhe kuch karna hoga...]
Aur agle hi pal...
[Maaaaaassssteeeeeeerrrrrrrrr!]
'Huhhhh!?'
Pari uske andar itni zorr se chillaayi jiske chalte Veer ko kuch hosh aaya.
[Wo aadmi ab aapki Nidhi Ma'am ko maarega.]
Ye sunte hi Veer ki aankhein felti chali gayi!
'Huh!? M-Ma'am?? N-Nooo...'
[Yes! Even Shreya ko... Aapki Kavya ko... Arohi too... Ragini ko... Sabko maarega wo.]
'N-Nahi... Aisa nahi...'
[Of course! Aur kabhi aapne zara bhi fikar kii!?]
'???'
[Ki yadi aapki Juhi ko kuch hua toh!?]
Juhi ka naam sunte hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Uss pyaari sii bacchi ka khilkhilaata chehra uske mann me aaya. Yadi usse galti se bhi kuch hua...
Ye sochte hi Veer itna darr gaya ki uska badan kaanpne laga.
[Of course! He will kill them all. Kyuki aap toh yaha haath pe haath dharre baithe rahoge. Uske liye kaam asaan ho jaega. Yahi toh chaahta hai woh...]
'N-Nahiiiii... Aisa... Aisa kabhi nahi...'
[Bilkul hoga. Yadi aapne jald hi action nahi liya toh aisa hi hoga. Kabhi socha hai!? Ki yadi uss raat Kavya ya Arohi me se koi bhi pakdi jaati toh kya haal hota unka!? Fir aap... Apni hi behan ke hatyaare ho jaate Master. Aapki ek behan ki jaan jaati, ya dono ki hi jaa sakti thi.]
Ye baat jese kisi bhaari patthar ki tarah aake Veer ke upar giri. Aur uska poora astitv jese hila kar rakh diya.
[Aapki ye Nidhi Ma'am! Kabhi socha hai ki wo aadmi yadi inke peeche pad jaaye toh!?]
Pari ki baat sunn Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha jo usse hi chintit nazro se dekh rahi thi.
[You will lose her. You will lose everything. She will die.]
'N-Nahiiiiiiii'
[Bilkul! Yahi hoega! Aap sab kuch kho doge. Kaha gayi aapki wo pride? Kaha gaya aapke andar ka wo josh? Kya yu hi haar maan jaoge aap? Bhool gaye apna lakshya!? Aapko toh ek boht bada aadmi bann'na hai na? Kya hoga uss vaade ka jo aapne Juhi ko diya tha? Uske liye chocolate ki poori factory kholne waale the na aap?
Kya Nidhi jii ko uss Rajat ke changul se nahi nikaalenge aap? Bhool gaye ki abhi aapko apni saalo se bichdi Maa ko bhi dhundna hai? Kaha gaye wo saare vaade jo aapne mujh se kiye the? Kya wo sab dhong tha?
Yadi aise hi rahe aap... Toh sab kuch gawa baithoge Master. Nidhi, Shreya, Kavya... Ye sab aapke saamne maari jaengi aur aap kuch nahi kar paoge.]
'N-Nooooooo... I don't want to lose her... I don't want to lose anyone... Mein kisi ko bhi nahi khona chaahta... Nooooo... I really don't...'
Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ko apni baaho me bhar liya.
"Aahhh!? Veeerrr!?"
Nidhi iss hamle se thodi hairaan zaroor thi par jab usse Veer ka kaampta hua badan mehsoos hua aur jab usse apne nagn kandhe par Veer ke aasuo ka ehsaas hua toh Nidhi kuch na boli aur uske haath apne aap hi Veer ke ird gird lapit gaye. Usne uske sarr ke peeche haath le jaa usse thaama aur apne se laga liga. Dheere dheere wo Veer ki peeth sehlaate hue usse shaant karne lagi.
Idhar Kavya aur Arohi dono hi hairat ke maare ye sab dekh rahi thi. Par kahi na kahi unhe iss baat se zyaada khushi thi ki Veer at least ab kuch movements toh show kar raha tha.
[Phew! Master ka dil boht kamzor hai. Unki family ne unke saath itna bura behave kiya hai... Aaarghhh! I hate them all. Hmm? Nidhi ki favourability 56? That's good! Kavya ki...!? 78!! Ohh! And Arohi?? Huh??? 40!?? Wow! This is surprising. Master ko baad me bata dungi mein.]
'Mein... Mein unhe khona nahi chaahta... I will kill him... Mein... Kuch nahi hone dunga kisi ko... I... I...'
"Haaaahhhh haaahhhh haaahhh..."
Aur achanak hi Veer ki saasein itni tezz ho gayi ki waha maujood sabhi ladkiya ghabra gayi.
Nidhi : Veer??? Ye... Ye kya ho raha hai...!? Kya hua tumhe?
Wo lambi lambi saasein le raha tha aur achanak hi usne apna seena zorr se haatho se bheech liya.
"Haaaaahh... Haaahhh"
Kavya : Bhaaaaiyaaaaaa
Kavya chillaayi toh Arohi bina samay gawaaye bhaagte hue neeche gayi aur Ragini ko bula kar laayi.
Ragini samet Suman aur baaki sabhi bhaagti hui aayi aur Veer ki haalat dekh Ragini ne koi galti nahi kii aur seedhe hi doctor ko phone laga diya.
Doctor ka ghar paas me hi tha aur uska clinic bhi uske ghar se bagal me tha toh woh forun hi kuch minutes me aa gaya.
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Kuch derr baad...
Veer bistar par laita hua tha, uski aankhein band thi aur shirt ki saari buttons khuli thi jiske chalte uska saara seena nazar aa raha tha. Shayad doctor ne abhi check up kiya tha.
Ragini : K...Kya hua tha doctor Veer ko?
Doctor : He was hyperventilating.
Kavya : Huh???
Doctor : Samjhaata hu... Emotional stress ya emotional breakdown, anxiety ki wajah se kabhi kabhi aadmi panic kar jaata hai aur lambi lambi saasein lene lagta hai aur isse hum hyperventilation kehte hai.
Kavya : ??
Doctor : Insaan oxygen ko andar leta hai aur carbon dioxide ko baahar chorrta hai right?
Kavya : Hmm!
Doctor : Hyperventilation ke samay... Aap jitna oxygen andar nahi lete ho uss se zyaada carbon dioxide ko baahar chorrne lagte ho, jiske chalte carbon dioxide ki maatra body me kam ho jaati hai aur ye situation create ho jaati hai.
Kavya : Ahhh!
Nidhi : Toh... Toh thik toh hai na Veer!?
Doctor : Jii haa! Bas thoda araam ki zaroorat hai. Inhe rest karne dijiye... Accha! Ragini jii! Ab mein chalta hu. Yadi fir se koi dikkat samajh aati hai toh aap call kar lijiyega.
Ragini : J-Jii! Thank you so much doctor!
Doctor : Ye toh hamaara kaam hai Ragini jii!
Aur itna bol doctor fees leke waha se nikal gaya.
Idhar Veer ki khuli shirt dekh, Kavya aage badh unn buttons ko band karne hi waali thi jab usse apne bagal me achanak hi ek hawa ka jhoka mehsoos hua.
'Huhhh!?'
Dekha toh paaya ki...
Arohi uske bagal se nikal aage badhi aur Veer ke paas jaa pohuchi.
Apne haatho ko aage badha ke wo Veer ki shirt ki buttons dheere dheere band karne lagi.
Kabhi bauhe sikode wo Veer ke chehre ko dekhti toh kabhi uske seene ko jinpar halke halke choto ke nishaan the.
Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me.
Kavya ne jab ye dekha toh uske kadam wahi tham gaye. Par...
Hontho par agle hi pal ek santushti bhari muskaan bhi aa chuki thi.
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Ek bade se ghar me iss waqt ek kamre me ek aadmi idhar se udhar tehel raha tha aur kisi uljhan me nazar aa raha tha.
Toh wahi uske peeche ek sofe pe ek aur naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha.
Aur ye tehelne waala vyakti koi aur nahi, Vivek hi tha. Saath hi saath sofe par baitha yuvak uska chota bhai ~ Pranjal tha.
Pranjal : Aise tehelne se kuch nahi hoga bhaiya.
Vivek : Toh kya karuuuu?? Huh?? Ragini... Ek number ki murkh aurat hai... Idhar apne pati ka saath chorr ke udhar ghar me reh rahi hai. Saala company me na jaane kya kya afwaaye fela rahe hai employees. Ki bhaag gayi hogi, utha ke le gaya koi, talaak ho gaya... Fuck! Aur upar se wo saala Veer bhi wahi hai. Kya soch ke Ragini ne usse apne ghar me rakh liya? Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya uska?
Pranjal : Dekha jaaye toh isme aapki bhi thodi galti thi bhaiya. Ladkiya boht hi sensitive hoti hai. Aapne jo baat kahi thi uske chalte Bhabhi boht zyaada naraaz hai aapse jo ki bani baat hai. Aapko unhe behla fusla kar manaana hoga tab hi kuch hoga.
Vivek : Sab kar chuka hu chote. Yaha tak ki mom dad ko bhi leke gaya tha. Par saala wo sunn'ne ko hi taiyaar nahi hai. Upar se pata nahi kaun sii saheli ko bulaayi hai jo uske ghar me dera jama ke baithi hui hai. Ek baar me usne mom dad aur meri bolti band kar dii thi waha...
Pranjal : Hmm?? Ohh! Thoda samay dijiye fir bhabhi ko. Par harr ek do din me unse baat karte rehna. Unhe jataiye ki aapka unke bagerr mann nahi lagta. Dekhna, wo jald hi maan jaengi.
Vivek : Hmm! Wese... Kuch socha? Property ke baare me!?
Pranjal : Aapki baat Tai jii se hui thi na?
Vivek : Hmm! Haan! Unhe property Bhumika ke liye chaahiye haha~
Pranjal (smiles) : Bada hi mast plan bana ke unhe apne side liya tha humne hai na? Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwaane me akhir unhone bhi samay samay par apna yogdaan dete hue hamaari madad kii thi. Aur humne unhe property ka kuch hissa dene ka waada kiya tha. Toh? Doge aap? Unhe property?
Vivek (smiles) : Hahaha~ pagal hai kya? Dene ke liye thodi hi ye plan kiya hu. Ek rupaya bhi na milne wala unhe. Wo toh upar se sauteli maa hai Veer ki. Bhala jab Veer ko kuch na mila toh hamaare rehte hue ye sauteli Tai aur unki beti ko kaha se kuch milega?
Pranjal : Hmm! Par yadi unhone ye raaz khol diya ki Veer ko baahar nikalwaane me hamaara haath hai toh?
Vivek (smiles) : Toh? Toh kya... Unka muh kese band karwaana hai uska bhi ilaaj hai mere paas... Hahaha~
Pranjal : Waah! Wese... Dada jii ke baare me kuch socha hai? Kyuki jab wo raazi honge tabhi toh property hume milegi bhaiya. Aur unhone toh keh ke rakha hai ki jab tak Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak wo koi faisla nahi lenge.
Vivek : Bas! Ussi ki toh tension hai chote. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha.
Pranjal : Wese... Mere paas ek idea hai. Yadi aap suno toh...
Vivek : Kesa idea?
Pranjal : Idhar aaiye...
Vivek ko apne paas bula ke Pranjal ne dheere se apne kuch bol rakhe, jisse sunn ke Vivek ekdum se hadbada ke uth gaya.
Vivek : Ch-Chote!?? Ye... Ye?? Tu? Ye boht zyaada nahi ho gaya?
Pranjal : Sach me? Yahi baat aapne mujhe tab bhi kahi thi jab hum Veer ko nikalwa rahe the. Kahiye! Kya tab zyaada hua tha? Kya kisi ko pata chala? Nahi na!? Fir?
Vivek : Fir bhi chote...
Pranjal : Isme jitna aap soch rahe ho utna risk nahi hai. Haa thoda maamla gambheer rahega but solution issi se niklega aap dekhna...
Vivek : Hmm! Theek hai fir... Yadi yahi sahi hai toh... Yaad rakhna... Koi gadbad nahi...
Pranjal : Bilkul! Isme mujhe aapki madad lagegi.
Vivek : Hmm!
***
Washington, United States...
Ek bade si 5 stat hotel me iss waqt ek shandaar luxury room me bistar par ek behad hi sundar ladki so rahi thi.
Kuch aahat paate hi uski bauhe sikudi aur agle hi pal wo neend se baahar aa gayi.
Palke jhapkaate hue wo uthi. Keval ek bra aur neeche panty pehni hui thi woh.
Usne jab gaur kiya ki toh dekha side me Dressing table ke paas ek red haired beauty khadi hui thi. Aur dressing ko jama rahi thi.
Ladki : Hmm? Julia?
Uss ladki ne pukaara toh wo laal baalo waali aurat forun hi palti aur usse dekhi...
Ye thi Julia. Bistar par laiti hui ladki ki head maid. Bole toh saari maids ki head.
Russian beauty thi woh. Uske laal baal bade hi acche se ek bun me bandhe hue the. Aur uska aakarshan hi dekhne laayak tha.
Julia : Miss! You are awake!? (Miss! Uth gayi aap?)
Ladki : Yeah!
Aage badh wo dressing ke paas aayi toh Julia ne forun hi uske shareer ko dhakne ke liye ek nighty nikaal aur usse peeche se pehnaane lagi.
Ladki : Julia?
Julia : Yes Miss!?
Ladki : What is life?
Julia : Miss! You are asking me this question for the 12th time. (Miss! Ye prashn aap mujhse baarvi baar puch rahi hai.)
Ladki : Just answer me Julia.
Julia (sighs) : People are born miss. It's a journey. During this journey, they make friends, establish relationships, they laugh, they love, they cry and this goes on. They make kids to teach them how to live and then again this goes on. One day, we die and everything we earned remains here only.
(Logo ka janm hota hai miss! Ye ek safar hai. Aur iss safar me, log dost banaate hai, rishte banaate hai, wo hasste hai, pyaar karte hai, rote hai aur yahi chalta jaata hai. Wo apni santaane karte hai aur unhe sikhaate hai ki zindagi kese jeete hai aur fir wahi chalta jaata hai. Ek din, hum marr jaate hai aur humne jo kuch bhi kamaaya wo yahi reh jaata hai.)
Ladki : ....
Julia : Was my answer to your satisfaction? (Kya mera jawaab aapke liye santushti janak tha?)
Ladki : No! I still don't understand.
Julia (sighs) : Sorry! Miss!
Ladki : No! It's okay! Prepare the tea. I'll take a bath.
Julia : As you wish Miss!
Aue wo ladki itna bol nahaane chali gayi. Aur Julia keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi.
'Poor Miss! If only I could help her...'
***
Mumbai...
Outer area me sthit ek building ki top floor par ek aadmi kursi par baitha hua tha.
Ki tabhi uska phone baj utha...
Aadmi : Hello?
Voice : Kese ho Aatish mere sher!?
Jii haa! Ye Aatish hi tha. Aur phone ke dusre taraf se aa rahi awaaz sunn wo agle pal hi uth ke khada ho gaya.
Aatish : D-Dada aap!?
Voice : Hmm! Suno... Mene ye bataane ke liye phone kiya hai, ki ab tumhe uss ladki ke peecha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mein already India aane waala hu aur wese bhi... Wo mera shikaar hai. Mene toh keval tumhe thode din maza karne ke liye ye kaam de diya tha haha~
Aatish : Ohh! Jesa aap kahe Dada!
Voice : Toh? Tumhaari aadat gayi ya nahi? Ya abhi bhi logo ke vishwaash todne me lage ho?
Aatish : Hahaha~ aap toh jaante hi ho... Yahi mera sukoon hai. Waqai! Abhi kuch dino se maza kaafi aa raha hai.
Voice : Hmm! Chalo! Accha rakhta hu. Meri flight ka time ho raha hai.
Aatish : Okay Dada!
*Call ends*
Aatish muskuraate hue apni hat aur hockey stick uthaaye neeche jaane laga.
'Tumhaare liye ek uphaar hai...'
Soch wo neeche chala gaya.
Par...
Usse nahi pata tha. Ki shayad Veer ko chorr ke usne ek boht badi galti kar dii hai. Shayad apne jeevan ki sabse badi galti...
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Like kar diyo re!
Dhanyavaad!
Ek aur villian jo hai wo Slogan hai bro.शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब
Bole to ekdm zakasss
Bhai ye atish kam tha kya
App aur ek villain le ke agye
Par lagta hey abb bohot maza ane Vala hey
Bole to ekdam rapchik update tha
Veer won't be the same as before.Nice update
Logo ne ab agar use jaga hi diya hai to dekhte ki kya karta hai apna baklol deth veer
Jeet ta hai ya fir se harega baki writer ke andaz se yahi lagta hai ki harega hi
Khair let's kya kya dikhate hai writer sahab
Btw tharki Pari haye haye![]()
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Ladki wahi bro Club waali.ye ladki kaun thi jo apni maid se life ke baare me jaanna chahti thi ,maid ke jawab se bhi khush nahi huyi wo ,uske sawal abhi sawal hi reh gaya hai .
ab ye dada kaun hai jo india aa raha hai aur aatish ko suhana ya uski behan se dur rehne ko keh diya kyunki wo khud apne se handle karna chahta hai wo matter .
lagta hai aatish bhi kuch plan kar raha hai
Thanks a lot bro!Jabardast Updatee
Veer ko uss hadse ka bahot gehra sadma laga hai. Aur woh golu ki maut ka jimmedaar khud ko maan raha hai.
Pari ne ek tarah se sahi kiya. Agar woh waisa naa karti toh shayad Veer puri tarah se depression mein chala jaata.
Yeh Pranjal kamina harami ab kyaa plan kar raha hai Veer ke khilaf. Jo bhi kare par iss baar iss Harami ki mast band bajwana. Aur iska asli rang sabke samne bhi laana.
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
The club one...Awesome update. Who the miss in Washington![]()
Jaan bachaana acchi baat hai.Sidhi si baat hai.......na veer ko us club mein Slogan ki shikaar us ladki sang sex karne ke liye majboor karti... na end time mein guilty feel karke ya insaaniyat dikhake veer us ladki ko atish se bachane ki koshish karta,,na hi wo aaj khud hi atish ka shikaar banta....
Pari sab theek karne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Of course, Veer kuch khoega bhi. Isliye upar poll me wo option diya gaya hai.jis insaan mara wo veer ka dost tha, uski maut ne veer ko andar se bhi aur bahar se bhi puri tarah se tod diya....
aur ye sab hua kiski wajah se.... Sirf aur sirf pari ki wajah se
Dusron ke phate mein taang adane wale kaam karne ko majbur kar aaj pari ne veer ye haalat bana di hai.... jaane aage aur kya kuch nahi karegi....
Because She knew Nidhi ko leke Veer apne trauma se baahar aa jaega.Sabse important baat.....aise nazuk mauke pe kavya aur arohi ke Favorability count kar rahi thi wo tharki pari..
ab to is baat pe bhi yakin hai ....ki wo din door nahi jab ye pari veer ko turu insects lober bana degi![]()
Nice speculation!Golu mara hi nahi kabhi .......
Ye ek saryantra tha ,ek chhal thi veer ko mentally torture karne ke liye ..... golu ki fake murder ke jariye veer ko puri tarah se mentally todna...
Hmm! Pranjal kuch na kuch toh karne wala hai. But kya, wo dekhna baaki hai.Finally pranjal us nichta pe utar aaya hai,, yaha tak ke uski planning ke bare mein sun uska bada bhai vivek bhi ek baar ke liye darr gaya tha....
Yaani mano unke dada Manorath ki maut ki saazish .........property ke liye khud ke dada ji ko maarne koshish, ye baat saaf jaarir karti hai ki bahar villains dhundhne ki jarurat hi nahi hai... Kyunki sabse bada villain pranjal ke roop mein ghar pe hi hai....
Ek aur saazish ke tahat swati aur bhumika ko bhi property se nikal fenkenge vivek aur pranjal.... Aise veer ko bahar ka raasta dikhaya tha....
Dhanyavaad!Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills![]()
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Thanks a lot bhai! Ragini jald hi decision lene waali hai. Pranjal ke liye ginti shuru ho chuki hai.fabulous update..!!
bhai yeh vivek aur pranjal dono bhai bade harami hai..inn dono ko sabak sikhana hi padega veer ko..muze toh lagta hai radhika ko divorce hi lena chahiye vivek kyunki woh ab pyaar toh apne hero veer se hi karegi..aur iss pranjal ko veer ne nanga karke marna chahiye..!!
Arre bhai thanks... Kisi ne toh dhyaan diya.bhai yeh jo aap hamesha jis ladki ki baat karte ho jiska apne abhi tak naam nahi reveal nahi kara..uske liye aap kendall jenner ki jab photo add karte ho toh dil khush ho jata hai..matlab uss ladki ka bina naam jane hi humko pyaar ho gaya usse..!!![]()
Goku ni bhai GoluVeer depressed ho gaya he goku k maut k chalte wo khud ko gunhegar samajh raha he.pari usko bahut himmat diya lekin phir bhi wo dukhi he wo nidhi,juhi,kavya,ragini,Shreya aur aarohi k chalte tension me he.Vivek aur pranjal property k liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain kamine he donno.wo washington wali ladki kon he? Veer ki behen? New villain entry Aatish's boss.Bhai veer ko ab action hero banao naki dukhi hero.Emotional update....
Actually Naina jii, she's one of the most intelligent character in the whole story. But usne kuch kho diya hai, isliye uski personality aisi hai. Jab uski story saamne aaegi tab acche se pata chalega.Extra revo - us nayi kirdaar ke liye
ab ek aur kirdaar ne entry li kahani mein.... yaar sabhi kehte hai America wale bahot amir type ke aur well educated hote hai...
par yaha to ye ladki bahot gareeb type ki nikli... pehne ko kapde hi nahi haiupar se gawaar, .... Anpadh....
kaise kirdaar hai jishe ye tak pata nahi ki jindagi kise kehte hai![]()
isse se zyada educated iski naukrani nikli
usne itni simplicity ke sath samjhane par bhi kya bolti hai ushe kuch bhi samajh mein nahi aaya
Haan yaar... ab kala akshar bhainsh barabar .... thodi na samjhegi wo
BTW let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills![]()