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[prkin]

ससुराल की नयी दिशा: Chapter 58 is posted
पात्र परिचय

अध्याय ५८: पल्लू का मायका और ससुराल

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[अंजुम]

Eagerly waiting

 

[prkin]

नए रूप में लिखा है.

इसे हटाया गया है.

 

[prkin]

Update Posted.
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[prkin]

Waiting for new update bhai

Update Posted.
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[prkin]

Nice update

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[prkin]

मेरे विचार से ये समुदाय वाला भाग हटाया जा सकता था। 8 परिवारों में आपस में संबंध ही काफी होते। सिवाय कहानी को उलझाने के समुदाय का कोई और योगदान नज़र नही आता। आगे के लिए समुदाय को हटा कर आठो परिवारों के बीच में संबंधों को और भी सुचारु रूप से दिखाया जा सकता है। कहानी और लेखन बहुत ही उत्तम है। इसी तरह लिखते रहिये। धन्यवाद।

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[prkin]

Bhai..even though this story is a little bit complex to follow (since so many families are involved), your characterization and scene creation are superb. As Anita had mentioned earlier, your writing skills are outstanding.
I know..you are not getting much responses to this story and you may feel not good about it. but I hope you are not disappointed. I really appreciate the fact that you keep your readers informed about the progress of your story and update as and when you get time...these are really good qualities that you have.
Coming to the story, I think, now all the families are getting together...that makes it more interesting...also, should i assume that we are heading for the climax of this story??
On a seperate note, I find the Disha story equally interesting and easy to follow...as there are fewer characters and also little bit easy to give ideas/opinions.
I had given one suggestion which you said you'll consider it. Thanks for the same. looking forward to that story as well.
Thanks and hope you have recovered from your illness. Take care.

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[prkin]

badalaav har ek insaan ki jindagi ka ek abhinna ang hai.. aur ye baat is kahani ke har kirdaar pe bhi laagu hoti hai...
aur ye jo kamvasna se bhare badalaav aa rahe hai in kirdaaro ke jeevan mein kayi baar naye mod ke saath, ek exacting bhare mann prafullit parivartan bhi laa rahe hai sath . jo in logo ke liye romaanchak to hote hi hai aur ek nayi urja bhi bhar dete in kirdaaro ke jindagi mein ..
aap kahani aur isse jude kirdaaro ke jindagi aaye in kamuk parivartan ko jis tarah se ek details ke sath arthpurn tarike se pesh karte aa rahe hai wo apne apme kabile tarif hai.. update se related saadharan se saadharan si baaton ko bhi bahot hi khubsurat aur rochak tarike se prastut karne aap mahir hai..

well, har hamesha ki tarah kalam ka jaadu bikhed rahe hai update ke madhyam se... Har baar ki tarah kayi naye mod aur pehlu ke sath sath update kirdaaro ke bich prachur mantra mein kamvasna se paripurn baatcheet aur gatividhiya bani rahi....

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

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[prkin]

Mehul se sambandhit update padhne main accha lagta hai.baki aap apne hisab se hi likhen.batane wale bahut kuch bata denge.lekin likhne wala janta hai ki kaise koi story likhi jati hai.time aur dimag lagta hai.aap ko salaam hai aap ki stories ke liye.

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[prkin]

Nice

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