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Adultery Farrar-A revenge story

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Kingfisher

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majedar update ..rahul aur mahek ke thode se emotional drame ke baad dono maan gaye ek dusre ki baat aur saath milkar kamal ka kaam tamam karne nikal pade .
kamal to wakai kam dimaag hai jo ye bhi samajh nahi paya ki jab wo kisi shrikant ko jaanta nahi to uski baat maanke jungle kyu jana 🤣 .
waise plan to kaam kar gaya par end me galti ho gayi jisko sudhar bhi liya rahul ne .
kamal aur raghu ko tadpaya bahut aur apna gussa shant kiya .
par ye end me unko maut de di ya nahi ye samajh nahi aaya ??.

ab aarushi toofan banke aa rahi hai rahul ke paas to usko kaise handle karega rahul dekhte hai .

majak type me ekdam mast likha hai update 😍..
Thanks Bhai ...
Nhi Bhai abhi dono Zinda hai ... Baki Leon bro bs action ko funny type likhne me mujhe bahut maja hai 😂 baki ke scans me serious type hi likhta hu .. agar har update aisa likhne lag jau to sab readers bhag jayenge 😌
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Subahe meri nind 5 bje alarm se khool gaii or me ankhe malte hue apna phone liya bahar nikal kar muhh dhoya or apne phone se ek number par call lga Diya ... Ye number kisi or ka nhi balki Kamal ka tha jo bahut jald parlok ki yatra par jane vala tha... Ab us par depend karta hai ki vo us yatra par akela Jana chahega ya apne sath kisi or ko bhi lekar jayega ???????????



ABB AGGE ...



Bhosdiwala gandu insan late uthta tha sayad, esliye Rahul ka call pick nhi Kiya



“ Rahul ” Vo vapas us Kamal ke murjhaye hue fool ko phone karta usse pehle hi use sumadhur awaj sunaii di. Jab usne piche mud kar dekha to uske just piche Mehek khdi thi .



Chand ki madhyam roshni me bhi Uska chehra joognu ki trah chamak rha tha, our uske Reshmi balo se pani ki bunde girti aise pratit ho rhi thi mano moti ki bunde gir rhi ho ... Ek pal to Rahul mehek ko dekh kar kho gya tha, fir jald se hosh me akar uske our karib chla gya



“ Tum etni thand me kyo nahaii agal ladki ? Kahi bukharr aa gya to ? Din-b-din tum bahut laparvah hoti ja rhi ho Mehek ” Rahul mehek ko dant bhi rha tha or apne dono hath se uske gile balo ko jhad bhi rha tha taki uske gile Baal jaldi se sukh jaye ... Mehek Rahul ko aisa karta dekh mand-2 muskurane lgi



Usne rahul ke dono galo ko apni mulayam Hatheli me thamte kaha“ Tumhare rehte mujhe kuch nhi ho sakta, Vaise buddhu mera ye Daily ka routine hai, kuch nhi hoga mujhe ... Our tu Etna jaldi uthkar kisko phone lga rha hai ? ”



Hadbada kar mehek ke hath ko hatate hue bola “ n..nhi to, me to bs aise hi yha khda tha ”


“ jab se tum yha khde ho tabse me tumhe dekh rhi hu ” sad hokar “ tumne mujhse promise Kiya tha na ki mujhse kuch bhi nhi chupaoge ? Apne promise se Etna jald mukar gye ? ”


Rahul ab puri trahh fass chuka tha, use es situation ki katai ummid nhi thi. Vo mehek ko apne plan / mansubo ke bare me batana bhi nhi chahta tha, our na batakar mehek ka dil bhi nhi dukhana chahta tha....Rahul ka udas or ek gehri socch me duba hua dekh mehek ke chehre ka noor gayab ho gya



“ Me tumhe force nhi kar hu rhi Rahul ! Agar tum mujhe nhi batana chahte ho to esse mujhe koi appati nhi ” kehkar vo vha se jane hi lgi ki rahul ne uska hath tham liya or use vha se thoda side me le gya taki unki bato ko koi sunn na le



Side me lejakar Rahul ne bina ek baat chipaye jo vo abhi karne ja rha tha vo sab mehek ko bta diya... Rahul ka plan sun’kar mehek ek pal sihar gaii. Use vo pal yaad ane lga jis pal ungle me Kamal, Raghu or uske chacha ne lagbhag Rahul ko mar hi Diya tha



“ Nhi ! Tum aisa hargij nhi karoge. Mene pehle bhi tumhe lagbhag kho diya, par es baar me aisa nhi hone dungi. Jao apne room me varna me ma ko sabkuchh bta dungi ” kehte vakt mehek ki ankho me nami aa gaii, jise Rahul ne un anshuo ko girne se pehle hi saaf kar diya


“ tumhare es imotional ke karan hi me tumhe nhi batana chahta tha, or Me tumhe pehle bhi apne mansube bta chuka hu ” thoda ruk kar “ try to understand Mehek ! Me chahkar bhi apne kadam piche nhi hta sakta. Agar me koi step nhi uthaungaa to vo log Hume chain se jine nhi denge, our vaise bhi me Etna kamjor bhi nhi ki haar baar maat kha jau ”



“ kuch din pehle kya hua tha ? Yaad hai ya bhul gye ? Manti hu tum duniya ke sabse balshali mahayoddha ho jo pal-bhar me apne samne vale ko nastanaboot kar sakte ho , par fir bhi me tumhe nhi jane dungi ” mehek ne Rahul par tanj ksa


“ Me to tumhe apni takat samajhta tha, but tum to meri sabse bdi kamjori nikli ” Ek gehri sans lekar “ Thik hai ! Nhi jaunga me. Ab Khush ! ” Fir Rahul hatash nirash hokar vha se apne room me chla gya



Mehek vhi khdi Rahul ko jata hua dekhti rhi our tab tak dekhti rhi jabtak Rahul uski ankhon se oujal hokar apne room me na chla gya............ “ kya mene Rahul ko rok kar sahi kiya ? Sayad nhi ! Mujhe bhi ye acche se pta hai ki Rahul agar kuch nhi karega to bhi vo haramjade shant nhi rehenge. Par me use kaise musibat mol lene du ? Par vo Etna bhi kamjor nhi hai, par fir bhi kahi use kuch ho gya to ? Pichli baar dekha mene ki kaise vo khoon se lal meri agosh me zindagii or mout ke bich lad rha tha. Me kya kru, kuch samajh me nhi rha ” Mehek vhi khdi mann hi mann khud se sawal karti or khud hi uska jawab deti rhi



Khair vo apne sawalo ko side me rakhkar Rahul ke room me chali gaii. Jab usne gate par khde rehkar dekha to ander bed par sweety or Drishti gehri nind me soii huii thi, or Rahul unke bed ke pass hi chair par lamba pasar kar ek gehri soch me duba hua tha. Mehek bina halchal kiye Rahul ke pass jakar khdi ho gaii or bina kuch bole ektak Rahul ko dekhne rhi



“ Naraj ho mujhse ? ” Mehek ki awaj si Rahul ki tandra tuti or vo chair se uthkar khda ho gya


“ Tumse naraj to me sapne me bhi nhi ho sakta hu cutie ” muskurate hue Rahul ne dhire se jawab diya taki Sweety or drishti ki nind kharab na ho



“ I know ! Vaise tum jo karne ja rhe ho vo sahi hai ? You know that agar tumhe kuch ho gya to mere sath -2 sweety or Drishti ka kya hoga ? Me esiliye tumhe jane se mna kar rhi thi ” thodi ruk kar “ Thik hai me tumhe nhi rokungi but meri ek condition hai ”


Khush hote hue “ kya ? ”


“ Me bhi tumhari sath chalungi ” Mehek ki baat sunkar Rahul ki khushi pal bhar me chu-mantar ho gaii


“ Are you mad ? Tumhe pta hai tum kya kehh rhi ho ? Our tumne socch bhi kaise liya ki me tumhe apne sath le jaunga ? Me kahi nhi ja rha, tum jao apne room me ”



“ same yhi sawal me tumse bhi puchti hu. Hai koi jawab ? Nhi na ! Me janti hu tumhare mann me kya chal rha hai but me tumhe akele khatre me kaise jane de sakti hu ? Vaise bhi tumhe to khud par bahut bharosha hai na to fir mujhe sath le jane me kya dikkat hai ? Tum ho na vha mere sath ! ”



“ Try to understand Mehek. Me apne makshad ke liye tumhe khatre me nhi dal sakta ” pareshan hote hue Rahul ne kaha



“ mujhe kuch nhi hoga, vaise bhi me tumse bhi mighty & brave hu ” muskurate hue mehek boli


“ Ok ! But vha me jo kahunga vo karna padega ”


“ manjoor hai ”


“ thik hai, tum jaldi se ready ho jao. Tab tak me bahar jakar us kamine ko chara dalkar halal hone ke liye bulata hu ” kehkar Rahul bahar chla gya



Apne bike ko leke vo Bahar jakar ek baar fir Kamal ko phone lagane vala hi hota hai, ki kuch sochkar apna phone switch off karke apne jeb me dal deta hai, or vha bahar bike ke pass khda mehek ke ane ka intezar karta hai ... Kuch der me Mehek bahar aa jati or uske ate hi Rahul usse apna phone dene ko kehta hai. Mehek bhi bina kuch bole Rahul ko phone de deti hai. Btw hamare hero yani Rahul ka mind bahut sharp tha so use apne sare contact number yaad the. Khair usne mehek ke phone me Kamal ka number dial kiya or use call kar diya



“ Hello ” us taraf se Kamal ki awaj aaii


Rahul ne jaldi se apni jeb se romal nikal kar use phone par lapetkar apni awaj bhari karte hue bola “ Kamal Bhai, me Shrikant bol rha hu ”



“ Koun shrikant ? Me kisi shrikant ko nhi janta ”


“ Aapka admi jo ****** fectory me vaha ka k Kamm dekhta hai ”


Kuch der tak Kamal apne dimag par jhor deta rha par uske jhant barabar dimag me Shrikant ki tasveer nhi ubhri, so vo apne sar ko jhatakte hue bola “ Ha ha thik hai bolo, subahe-2 phone kisliye kiya ? ”



“ Me apko aisi khabar sunale vala hu jise sun’kar aap mujhe malamaal kar doge ”


“ Abe bhosdike jo bhi batana hai jaldi bta, mujhe tumhari faltu bate sunne ke alava or bhi bahut sare kamm hai ” jallate hue Kamal ne kaha



“ Vo Kamal Bhai apko yaad hai ' Rahul ' jo hamse jungle vale adde par bacch ke nikal gya tha ? Vhi Rahul abhi mere samne pda apni Akhiri sanse Ginn rha hai ” ye khabar sunte hi Kamal ke rongte khde ho gye



“ mujhe puri baat bta ”


“ Kamal Bhai jab me apna mall truck se lekar ****** ja rha tha tab Rahul mujhe ***** ke vha samne se bike se ata hua dikhai Diya. To bhai mene bina der kiye truck us par chda diya... Abhi vo mere samne hi pda hai. Agar aap kahe to eska kamm tamam kar du ya ye Shubh kamm aap apne hatho se karoge ” kehkar Rahul mand-2 muskurane lga. Vhi uske pass khdi Mehek uski ankhe fade dekhe ja rhi thi



“ Shabash mere sher Shabash. Tune to vo kamm kar diya jo hum sabhi milkar bhi kabhi nhi kar sake or sayad kar bhi nhi pate . Tu usko kuch matt karna. Me abhi 20 minutes me pahuchta hu. Madarchod ko apne hatho se marunga use. Our sunn, ye baat kisi ko Matt batana or sath hi apne truck ko side me karde or us harami ko vhi kahi chupa de, taki kisi ko maloom na chal ske ” kehkar usne jaldi se phone cut kar diya



Uske bagal me hi Raghu ka makan tha so use apne 2-3 admiyon ko sath leke nikal gya us veeran jagah par jiske bare me Rahul ne use bataya tha .................. Well edher Rahul mehek ko sath liye bike start karke nikal gya ... Kuch hi der me dono Kamal or Raghu ke pahuchne se pehle hi us jagah pahuch gye jaha ka address unhone Kamal ko bataya tha... Vaise ye jagah gaon se karib 18 km dur thi or puri trahh gane jungle si giri huii thi, Jaha se ek kacchi sadak gujar kar highway se milti thi ... Khair Rahul ne bike apne gantavya sthan se kuch meter dur jungle ke ander khadi kar di taki kamal ko pta na chal ske. Eske sath hi mehek ko bhi bike ke pass rehne ko kehkar uske opposite dusri side jakar ek jhadi ke piche chipp kar Kamal ke ane ka intezar karne lga



Kuch der baat Rahul ko ghadi ki awaj sunai di. Vo samajh gya ki ho na ho es ghadi me Kamal ho hai because abhi subahe ke 6 baj rhe the or etni jaldi es raste se na ke barabar ghadiya gujarti hai ... Well uska guess ekdum sahi nikla because uske just pass hi vo ghadi ruki jisme Kamal Raghu or apne 3 admiyon ke sath bahar nikla or edher-udher dekhne lga ... Jab use koi nhi dikha to usne apne jeb se phone nikala or kuch der pehle Rahul ne jis number se yani Mehek ke phone se call kiya tha us number par call lga diya



Call karte hi Mehek ka phone ring hone lga. Ringtone ki awaj Kamal or Raghu ke alava Rahul tak ane lgi because es vakt jungle me ghanghor Shanti thi so thoda sa shor bhi jungle ki fizao me awaj bikher deta tha ... edher Mehek acchanak apna phone ring hota dekh thodi ghabra gaii or usse bhi jyada uske dusri side chipa Rahul... Use khud par hi gussa ane lga ki usne mehek ka phone silent kyo nhi kiya. Khair ye wakt sochne ka nhi balki sidha action lene ka tha vo bhi jald se jald ... Usne shuru me jo plan banaya tha us plan ki gand mar gaii thi vo bhi uski galti se



Khair Kamal Mehek ki taraf jata usse pehle hi usne revolver hath me li or furti se uske uper silencer lga kar ek perfect Olympics ki trahh Kamal ke admiyon ke sar ko nishana banaya or ek ke baad ek goli unke sar me dag di ... Tino jaha the vhi Kati patang ki trahh jameen par dharashahi ho gye ... Apne admiyon ko achanak jameen par gira dekha Kamal or Raghu ke hosh ud gaye ... Vo dono Newtown ke third low ka use kar pate usse pehle hi Rahul ne dono ke peir par ek-2 goli chipka di, jisse dono chillate hue ghutno ke ball ho gye.



Apna rasta clear dekh Rahul filmy style me jhadiya se bahar nikla or muskurate hue dono ke samne khda ho gya... Rahul ke ane ke kuch second baad Mehek bhi vha aa gaii, but usne Rahul ki trahh heroine ke mafik entry nhi mari balki ek side cherecter ki trahh dari-sehemi vha aaii, or vha pde Kamal ke admiyon ko dekhne lgi jinka kuch der pehle Rahul me Uddhar kiya tha... Vhi Kamal or Raghu apne dard ko bhul kar ankhe or gand fade Rahul ko dekhne lge



“ Kamal Bhai. Apke khash admi ne Etna bda kamm kiya hai to app badle me use kuch bhi nhi doge ? Are esne etni bahaduri ka kamm kiya hai, tum log jis Rahul ka kuch nhi kar paye us Rahul ko mene lagbhag yamlok pahucha hi diya hahahahaha ” Rahul ki baat sunkar Kamal ko samajh me aa gya ki vo Rahul ke dvara bichaye gye trap me fass chuka hai. Ab usne sath kya hone vala hai ? Ye ya to Rahul janta tha ya swayam bhagwan ( ya fir me aka kingfisher 😜)



“ Tumne mere sath chall kiya hai Madarchodd. Me tumhe chhodunga nhi haramjade ” uthane ki nakam koshish karte hue Kamal gurraya



“ Chattaak” vo apni jagah par utth pata usse pehle hi Rahul ne etni jhor se use thappad mara ki vo jameen par chouda hokar fell gya



“ Gali nhi deneka deneka, haramkhor ! Rassi jhal gaii par baal nhi gya. Gandmaro mene to socha ki tum log mujhse maafi mangoge to me thodi punishment deke tumhe chhod dunga, par nhi ! Tum thehre suvar ki oulad, kutte ki dum ki trahh ho jo kabhi sidhe nhi ho sakte ” Rahul ki baat sunkar uske pass hi khdi Mehek mann hi mann hasne lgi, kyonki use pta tha ki Rahul unhe kisi bhi keemat par chhodne vala nhi tha



“ Kamal bhaii ki taraf se me tumse maffi mahta hu Rahul. Please Hume maff kardo. I promise aaj ke baad hum kabhi tumhe nukshan pahuchane ke bare me sochenge bhi nhi. Our to our hum ye hum gaon chhodkar bhi bahut dur chle jayenge ” hath kodte hue Raghu veenti karne lga



“ chatatak ” ek karara thapad Rahul ne Raghu ko bhi gift kar diya jisse vo bhi Kamal ke sath suhag sej par chouda hokar fell gya



“ Abhi mene tumhe kutte ki dum ka example Diya tha na ? Fir bhi mere samne maafi ki bhikh mangega nalayak. Kya tumhare ma-baap ne tumhe yhi sikhaya ? ” kehkar Rahul ne Kamal ke pair par usi jagah kaske laat Mari jaha goli lgi huii thi ... Ek baar feer kamal ki koyal se bhi Madhur awaj jungle ki fizao me ghunjne lgi



“ Rahul ek baar mujhe bhi in athithiyon ki sewa karne ka mouka do ” mehek Rahul ke kandhe par hath rkhte hue boli



“ why not, my beautiful Psych sister ” kehkar Rahul thoda side hatt gya



Fir kya, mehek lag gaii unki sutaii karne ... Kabhi vo pure dum se lat un dono ke muhh par Marti to kabhi unke Aamashya, pitashay, anndashay, mutrashay par ... Mehek ki es dardnak maar se dono dard se tadafne lge ... Rahul bhi Hairan tha ki uski flower 🌺 ki trahh najuk behen etni berehemi se kaise maar sakti hai ? Par vo ye bhi janta tha ki mehek ne bhi vhi dard saha jo usne Saha tha bs anter sirf yhi tha ki mehek kabhi jta nhi paii .... Khair mehek unke vahi pran pakheru uda deti agar Rahul aage badkar uske sar par hath rakh ke Mantra jhap karke use shant nhi karta to, kyonki vo Etna jaldi or asani se dono ko marne nhi dena chahta tha



Mehek ka hath pakadkar use side me late hue bola “ bs kar meri Jhansi ki Rani. Yhi unka sanghar karegi kya ? Abhi to inhe or tadapna hai, after then enko raajkiye samman ke sath parlok me vida karenge. And you fikar not , enko mukhagni dene ka sobhagya me tumhe dunga, Okkkk meri cutie pie ”



Mehek gehri sans leke apne gusse ko control karne lgi. Udher jamin par pde Kamal or Raghu ki halat mehek ne etni kharab kardi ki unke muhh se awaj tak nhi nikal par rhi thi ... Vo jab bhi bolne ki koshish bhi karte tab unke mukhmandal se lar ke sath dher sara khoon nikalta ............ Khair Rahul time vaste nhi karna chahta tha so sune jaldi se kuch soch-vichar Kamal ke 3no admiyon ki death body ko ghadi/car ke ander dal diya or Uski najar car me pdi ek rassi par gaii jise usne bahar nikal kar Kamal or Raghu ke uper fenk di



Rahul car se thoda dur jakar apne jeb me se lighter dhundne lga. Ab vo Ghar se lighter laya hi nhi to kya ghanta use lighter milta. Khair vo Kamal or Raghu ke pass gya or dono ke pure dum se 2-2 lat gift kri jisse dono Aasman ki taraf muhh fade sidhe ho gaye... Rahul unke pass bethkar unki jebo ko tatolne lga. Kamal ki jeb me use kuch hath nhi lga par Raghu ki jeb me se use lighter hath lag hi gya kyonki Raghu ek number ka suttebaaz tha, lawda ek sath 2-2 cigrette sulga ke pita tha ... Khair Rahul ne bina der kiye lighter on karke use car ke ander fenk diya jiska natija ye hua ki 1 hi minute ke bhitar car dhu-dhu karke jalne lgi ... Rahul, mehek ke pass jakar uske kann me kucch fusfusaya jiske pratyuttar me mehek ne muskurate hue hami bhri



Uske baad rahun ne dono ki chati ko rassiyon se kaske banda or jungle ke ander jakar apni bike ko bahar nikalnkar rassiyon ka dusra sira bike ke piche band diya ... Fir mehek ko piche baitha ka jungle ke vikat raste se Mehek ke drava bataye gye disha nirdeshak ke anusar Kamal or Raghu ko us jagah le gya jaha kabhi Rahul ke jane ke baad Mehek Jay or uske sathi ke sath fighting ki training liya karti thi or ye vhi jagah thi jaha Digvijay, Kamal, Raghu or Harish ne un dono ko berehemi se mout ke ghatt utar diya tha



Well pure raste ghasitne ke karan Kamal or Raghu ki halat kharab ho gaii . Vo to accha tha ki jungle me ghani ghass ke karan unka pichwada hi adha adhura gisa tha baki sab sahi salamat rha . Agar pakka rasta hota to dono ka adhe raste me hi Kalyan ho jata ... Khair Rahul or Mehek dono ko ghasitate hue ek choti se jhonpdi ke ander ke gye or vha dono ko acche se band diya or vha se nikalne hi Wale thi ki unke kano kano me unke dil ko sukoon pahuchane vali aawaj aaii “ please Hume maar do ” Rahul or Mehek bs muskura kar vha se ghar ki or chle gye



Ghar jane ke baad sushma ne dono par swalo ke Bano ki agnivarsha ki to dono apne bachav me brahmashtra ko Sushma par dag diya jisse Sushma ek dum jheel ke shant jhal/pani ki trah shant ho gaii ... Well mehek apne Room me jakar ek fir acche se nahakat apne aap ko pavitra kiya or deo-vio lgakar Sweety, drishti, Ritu ko sath leke college chali gaii ... Priyanka aaj college nhi gaii thi because Aaj vo Rahul ki Zindagi me ek toofan ko Lana chahti. Jis toofan ka name tha “ Aayushi bawander ” us Toofan ka abhys kisi ko nhi tha even Priyanka, Rahul ke sath-2 Aayushi ko bhi nhi ( it’s not funny guyz ) .... Well kareeb 4 gante baad Priyanka ko massage aaya ki Aayushi unke pass ke sheher me pahuch gaii, jis shehre me Mehek padti thi ... Priyanka ne jab Rahul se kaha ki vo Aayushi ko lene uske sath chle but Rahul ne kuch urgent kamm ka bahana bna kar use mna kar diya so Priyanka nirash hokar Nidhi ko sath leke Aayushi ko lene chali gaii




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Priyanka ne jab Rahul se kaha ki vo Aayushi ko lene uske sath chle but Rahul ne kuch urgent kamm ka bahana bna kar use mna kar diya so Priyanka nirash hokar Nidhi ko sath leke Aayushi ko lene chali gaii



ABB AGGE ...



Edher Priyanka ke jane ke baad Rahul akela nakara room me betha Aaj subahe Jo jungle me karanama Kiya uske bare me soch-2 kar lot-pot hue ja rha tha...Vo Room ka darvaja ander se band karke apne bed par ek Bandar ki trahh uchalne lga...khushi ke mare Rahul Etna bavla ho gya ki bed ke sirhane rkhe 2 takiyo ka chirharan karke uske ander ki ruii/kapas ko nikal Holi ke gulal ki trah pure room me edher-udher bikherne lga ... Uski aisi harkat par vo khud Hairan tha.......



Abhi vo or pagalpanti/ chutiyapanti karta usse pehle hi usne kano me Farrar--- A revange story ke readers ki roabdar awaj gunjne lgi ki usne Kamal or Raghu ka uddhaar kyo nhi kiya ? Unko zinda rkh ke vo sabeet kya karna chahta hai ? Kya pta agar Vo dono by chance zinda bacch gye to Rahul ke g****d na maar le ? or Rahul hihihihi karta rehh jayega ? Aaj din tak Rahul ne jo chutiyapa kiya tha, kya vo kamm tha jo ek or chutiyapa add kar diya ? Bc ye kisi angle se kahani ka Hero nhi lagta ! Eski jagah kahani ka Hero Adhiraj vyom ko hona chahiye tha.



Etne tane or sikayte sunn kar Rahul ki sari Khushi pal bhar me udaan-chhu ho gaii...Vo bina kuch soche apne almirah se Ak-47 nikali or usne sath hi ek super sonic cruise missile + louncher liya our goast rider tipe ki royal Enfield leke Nikal gya Amazon ke jungle ki taraff jagah Jumanji jaisi blockbuster Hollywood movie ki shooting huii thi. Uske sath hi jaha Kamal or Raghu Bhi bandhe hue Justin Bieber ka gana gunguna rhe the .... Khair Rahul 1 minutes ke ander hi vha pahuch gya (WTF lawda )



Rahul ne royal Enfield bullet Raghu or Kamal se kuch duri par hi rok kar apne sath laye modern weapons ko sath leke jhopdi ki or badd chla .... cahlte-2 vo jhopdi ke pass pahucha hi tha ki jhopdi ke aas-pass ka najara dekh uski khopdi chakra gaii kyonki vha ka najara hi kuch aisa tha tha ki, Rahul to kya Marvel Avengers ke superhero bhi hote to unki bhi Gand fatt ke goudam ho jati



Kyonki jhonpdi ke charo or jungali janvaron ka dera jma hua tha, vo bhi sab ke sab mashahari Janvar !! Ajeeb baat ye thi ki un janvaron ke jhund ke bich Kamal or Raghu ghutne ke baal bethe hue the, our to our unke hath pair bhi khule hue the ... Vaha moujud Etne bhayankar janvaron ko dekha Rahul ka pura badan kamp gya our uske hath se AK-47 or super sonic cruise missile our louncher jameen par geer gye kyonki un janvaron me 3 dinosaur bhi the jisme ek naar, dusri mada our tisra unka baccha tha jo 10 hathi or 7 wheal machali ke barabar tha so aap anumaan lga sakte hai uske mom dad ki body ka size kya ho sakta hai ?... Hairaani ke baat ye bhi thi ki vha 5-6 Shark machliya bhi thi jo Kamal ki body ke centre ko dekh rhi thi... Enke alava Tiger, loin, panther, anakonda, Genda, hathi, gadiyal, magarmach, werewolf. Yha tak ki chuha, billi , khargosh, macchar, kide-makode vagerah-vagerah bhi moujud the ...



Rahul to ye sab dekh jald se jald vha se bhag Jana chahta tha but uske pair javab de chuke the. Khair vo kisi trahh jaise-taise karke uske pass hi moujud ek chhoti si chattan ke piche chipp kar vha ka najara dekhne lga. Well udher Kamal or Raghu dar se thar-thar kanp rhe the...vhi Rahul us choti si chhattan ke piche chipa ye soch rha tha ki akhir ye bina Kamal or Raghu ko nuksaan pahuchaye kya khusur-fusur kar rhe hai ?



Par us bavli gand ko kya pta ki vo ye discuss kar rhe ki, vo counting me etne sare or samne pakwaan sirf 2 ? Jinka adha pichwada bhi yha ghasit kar lane se giss chuka tha, So vo dono ko bina pakshpaat ke kaise apas me distributes kre ? ... Khair kuch hi der me natija ye nikla ki jinko Kamal or Raghu ki body ka jo-jo part hath lagega vo use bina mirch-masala ke kha jayega. Fir kya ? Sab ek sath tut pde un dono par ... Kuch hi second me Kamal ke dono hath Tiger leke jungle me bhag gya or uski dekha dekhi lion bhi Raghu ke dono hath ukhad kar tiger ki opposite side me Farrar ho gya... Kamal or Raghu charo pair Shark + magarmach + gadiyal apas me barabar- barabar bant karke vha se teleport ho gye ... ab anakonda kaha piche rehne vala tha, so usne back to back dono ki mundi uske dhhad se alag karke Bijli ki raftar se vha se bhag gya...



Baki bcchi dono ki body se heart, liver, kidney, choti aant, bdi aant, yakratt , pittashay ko naar dinosaur ne apne Bled se bhi tikhe teeth se nikal kar baki bacche janvaron ko kheraat me baant diya .... Ab piche thoda sa mall bccha dekh kar dinosaur ka baccha uchal-uchal kar rone lga ... Apne masoom bcche ko es trahh bilakh kar rota dekh mada dinosaur ka dil chalni-chalni ho gya... Khair usne Kamal or Raghu ki baki bacchi body ka muaaina kiya taki apne bacche ko kuch khila ske. Tabhi uske najar dono ke Aandashay or mutrashay par pdi Jo ab bhi shurakshit the... Well mada dinosaur me bdi bariki se Kamal or Raghu ki body se Aandashay or mutrashay ki khinch kar alag kiya or use apne masoom phool jaise bacche ke mohh me dal diya, jise chote don ne bde chav se khaya, our baki bccho body ko dono Miya Khalifa sorry’ Miya biwi ne kha kar apna pet kharab Kiya or vha se chle gye



Edher Rahul ye sab hota dekh pasine- pasine ho gya... Use to ye sab ek sapna da lag rha tha but ye koi sapna nhi balki hakikat thi, jiska abhash use tab hua jab use meeting me shamil hone vale macchoro me kata, jinhe Kamal or Raghu ki body se kuch nhi mila ... Khair Rahul un maccharo ko ma-behen ki gali dekar vha se apni Ak-47, super sonic cruise missile our louncher ke sath goust rider ki royal Enfield ko vhi chhod kar pedal hi apne ghar ki taraff bhagg gya






To be countinue
 
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Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

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Superb update

Bhai bahut time baad shruti ka jikar ayea mix feelings ke sath pyaar or narazgi Dono agar wo rahul ko marne ki dhamki dekar chup krwa skti hai to Rahul ko bhi same trick usi pr ajmana chahyie bol se ki agar sachai nahi btayi to drishti or uska mara hua moonh bhi dekhne ko naseeb nhi ho payega

Or kamal ka dekhte hai kab next update ayega or usme uska or uske sath kya 2 hota hai

Btw mujhe ye neha, priyanka, or uski gf kum behan ki kuch to planning chal rhi hai

Fantastic update bhai,struti achi hone ka role kar rahi he sahi se ..vakt batayega arushi aur rahul milke apni badla le payenge ya nehni

Bro where's update????

Shaandaar update Kingfisher bhai....

Sabhi Updatess phir se padhee. Bahott hi badhiya tarike se restart kiyaa hai. Umeed hai ab complete karogee.

Khairr Rahul ne Mehak ke saath milke ek jaal bichaya jisme Raghu aur Kamal aasani se fhass gayee jiske baad Rahul ne unki achhe se sutai ki. Par uss ghar mein kyoo baand diyaa. Directt maar dete.

Khairr dekhte hai yeh Ayushi Bawandar kyaa kyaa tabahi laata hai Rahul ki zindagi mein.

दगाबाज किसके लिए लिखा आपने ?
शायद ये आपने आलू भाई के लिए लिखा होगा । जब उन्हें फोरम से बैन कर दिया गया था तब आपने बहुत ही हौ-हल्ला मचाया था और मैंने भी इसका प्रतिवाद किया था ।

कुछ समस्याएं होंगी उनकी क्योंकि फिलहाल बहुत ही कम स्टोरी में उनका रेभो आता है । ये किसी के भी साथ हो सकती है मेरे भाई ।
मैंने भी बहुत बार उन्हें टैग किया था पर कभी भी उन्होंने रिस्पांस ही नहीं दिया ।
मुझे भी बहुत लोगों ने कहीं न कहीं टैग किया था लेकिन मैं भी किसी को रिस्पांस नहीं कर सका। हर लोगों की अपनी प्रोब्लम होती है । इसके लिए बुरा कभी भी नहीं मानना ।

और कहानी में एक बार भी ब्रेक लग जाए तो बहुत ही मुश्किल होता है रीडर्स को जोड़ना । रीडर्स का विश्वास कम हो जाता है और स्टोरी भी भुल जाते हैं ।

रीडर्स आयेंगे नहीं आयेंगे....भुल जाइए । बस अपना कमिटमेंट याद रखिए ।

Chha gae maharaj jabardast update kamal aur raghu ko badi tasalli se pela hai Rahul aur Mehek ne par unka kriyakarm kab hoga unhr jinda kyo chhod diya Ayushi v ab pahonchne wali hai aur wo kya dhamaka karti hai ye to wakt hi bataega aur tumne kaha ki is tufan ka andaja Ayushi ko v nahi hai that means kuch aysa raaj hai jo Ayushi v nahi janti aur shayad bahot bada raaj hai anyways dekhte hai kab tak Rahul bhag paata hai Ayushi se aur jab saamna hoga to kya bawal hoga maza aaega superb gurudev🙏

Awesome update

Konsa toofan leke aa rhi hai vo jo itna suspense bna rhe ho bhai soch soch ke hi mn me toofan aa rha hai............
Kamal or raghu ka to Kalyan ho gya ab bakio ka kb number aayega uska beshabri se intejar hai..........
thode romantic scene bhi dalo Bhai Rahul or mehek ke bich............
keep posting bhai.............
waiting for next update.............

Jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update......

super awesome update to gud luvd their chemistry plz do cont asap Takecare

Hero sach me chutiya h kya kamal aur Raghu ko jinda kyu chhoda.....

Iska dimag ghas charne gaya h lag raha....

majedar update ..rahul aur mahek ke thode se emotional drame ke baad dono maan gaye ek dusre ki baat aur saath milkar kamal ka kaam tamam karne nikal pade .
kamal to wakai kam dimaag hai jo ye bhi samajh nahi paya ki jab wo kisi shrikant ko jaanta nahi to uski baat maanke jungle kyu jana 🤣 .
waise plan to kaam kar gaya par end me galti ho gayi jisko sudhar bhi liya rahul ne .
kamal aur raghu ko tadpaya bahut aur apna gussa shant kiya .
par ye end me unko maut de di ya nahi ye samajh nahi aaya ??.

ab aarushi toofan banke aa rahi hai rahul ke paas to usko kaise handle karega rahul dekhte hai .

majak type me ekdam mast likha hai update 😍..

Behtareen shaandaar update
Kaha pehle sirf kamal ka kaam tamam hone wala tha lekin beech m Raghu m aa gaya apni band bajwane lekin Rahil ko kia zaroorat thi waha jhopdi bandh chodne ki seedha khatam ker dete kia pata beech m kuch or ho jaye kyon Rahul k saath kab kia ho jaye kisi ko nahi pata
Baherhal dekhte h ab yeh priyanka or Ayushi milker kon sa bomb chodne wale h Rahul k ooper
As always shaandaar update bhai

Okay Bro we'll wait for updates.

Awesome update

Time dekhane aata hai na kingu..ya wo bhi bhool Gaye...just puchhing

So guyz Kamal or Raghu ka end ho gya hai ( only entertainment ke liye likha hai guyz .. it's not update ) Next update me time lag sakta hai but jyada nhi ...

Good night 😴 ...
 
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Priyanka ne jab Rahul se kaha ki vo Aayushi ko lene uske sath chle but Rahul ne kuch urgent kamm ka bahana bna kar use mna kar diya so Priyanka nirash hokar Nidhi ko sath leke Aayushi ko lene chali gaii



ABB AGGE ...



Edher Priyanka ke jane ke baad Rahul akela nakara room me betha Aaj subahe Jo jungle me karanama Kiya uske bare me soch-2 kar lot-pot hue ja rha tha...Vo Room ka darvaja ander se band karke apne bed par ek Bandar ki trahh uchalne lga...khushi ke mare Rahul Etna bavla ho gya ki bed ke sirhane rkhe 2 takiyo ka chirharan karke uske ander ki ruii/kapas ko nikal Holi ke gulal ki trah pure room me edher-udher bikherne lga ... Uski aisi harkat par vo khud Hairan tha.......



Abhi vo or pagalpanti/ chutiyapanti karta usse pehle hi usne kano me Farrar--- A revange story ke readers ki roabdar awaj gunjne lgi ki usne Kamal or Raghu ka uddhaar kyo nhi kiya ? Unko zinda rkh ke vo sabeet kya karna chahta hai ? Kya pta agar Vo dono by chance zinda bacch gye to Rahul ke g****d na maar le ? or Rahul hihihihi karta rehh jayega ? Aaj din tak Rahul ne jo chutiyapa kiya tha, kya vo kamm tha jo ek or chutiyapa add kar diya ? Bc ye kisi angle se kahani ka Hero nhi lagta ! Eski jagah kahani ka Hero Adhiraj vyom ko hona chahiye tha.



Etne tane or sikayte sunn kar Rahul ki sari Khushi pal bhar me udaan-chhu ho gaii...Vo bina kuch soche apne almirah se Ak-47 nikali or usne sath hi ek super sonic cruise missile + louncher liya our goast rider tipe ki royal Enfield leke Nikal gya Amazon ke jungle ki taraff jagah Jumanji jaisi blockbuster Hollywood movie ki shooting huii thi. Uske sath hi jaha Kamal or Raghu Bhi bandhe hue Justin Bieber ka gana gunguna rhe the .... Khair Rahul 1 minutes ke ander hi vha pahuch gya (WTF lawda )



Rahul ne royal Enfield bullet Raghu or Kamal se kuch duri par hi rok kar apne sath laye modern weapons ko sath leke jhopdi ki or badd chla .... cahlte-2 vo jhopdi ke pass pahucha hi tha ki jhopdi ke aas-pass ka najara dekh uski khopdi chakra gaii kyonki vha ka najara hi kuch aisa tha tha ki, Rahul to kya Marvel Avengers ke superhero bhi hote to unki bhi Gand fatt ke goudam ho jati



Kyonki jhonpdi ke charo or jungali janvaron ka dera jma hua tha, vo bhi sab ke sab mashahari Janvar !! Ajeeb baat ye thi ki un janvaron ke jhund ke bich Kamal or Raghu ghutne ke baal bethe hue the, our to our unke hath pair bhi khule hue the ... Vaha moujud Etne bhayankar janvaron ko dekha Rahul ka pura badan kamp gya our uske hath se AK-47 or super sonic cruise missile our louncher jameen par geer gye kyonki un janvaron me 3 dinosaur bhi the jisme ek naar, dusri mada our tisra unka baccha tha jo 10 hathi or 7 wheal machali ke barabar tha so aap anumaan lga sakte hai uske mom dad ki body ka size kya ho sakta hai ?... Hairaani ke baat ye bhi thi ki vha 5-6 Shark machliya bhi thi jo Kamal ki body ke centre ko dekh rhi thi... Enke alava Tiger, loin, panther, anakonda, Genda, hathi, gadiyal, magarmach, werewolf. Yha tak ki chuha, billi , khargosh, macchar, kide-makode vagerah-vagerah bhi moujud the ...



Rahul to ye sab dekh jald se jald vha se bhag Jana chahta tha but uske pair javab de chuke the. Khair vo kisi trahh jaise-taise karke uske pass hi moujud ek chhoti si chattan ke piche chipp kar vha ka najara dekhne lga. Well udher Kamal or Raghu dar se thar-thar kanp rhe the...vhi Rahul us choti si chhattan ke piche chipa ye soch rha tha ki akhir ye bina Kamal or Raghu ko nuksaan pahuchaye kya khusur-fusur kar rhe hai ?



Par us bavli gand ko kya pta ki vo ye discuss kar rhe ki, vo counting me etne sare or samne pakwaan sirf 2 ? Jinka adha pichwada bhi yha ghasit kar lane se giss chuka tha, So vo dono ko bina pakshpaat ke kaise apas me distributes kre ? ... Khair kuch hi der me natija ye nikla ki jinko Kamal or Raghu ki body ka jo-jo part hath lagega vo use bina mirch-masala ke kha jayega. Fir kya ? Sab ek sath tut pde un dono par ... Kuch hi second me Kamal ke dono hath Tiger leke jungle me bhag gya or uski dekha dekhi lion bhi Raghu ke dono hath ukhad kar tiger ki opposite side me Farrar ho gya... Kamal or Raghu charo pair Shark + magarmach + gadiyal apas me barabar- barabar bant karke vha se teleport ho gye ... ab anakonda kaha piche rehne vala tha, so usne back to back dono ki mundi uske dhhad se alag karke Bijli ki raftar se vha se bhag gya...



Baki bcchi dono ki body se heart, liver, kidney, choti aant, bdi aant, yakratt , pittashay ko naar dinosaur ne apne Bled se bhi tikhe teeth se nikal kar baki bacche janvaron ko kheraat me baant diya .... Ab piche thoda sa mall bccha dekh kar dinosaur ka baccha uchal-uchal kar rone lga ... Apne masoom bcche ko es trahh bilakh kar rota dekh mada dinosaur ka dil chalni-chalni ho gya... Khair usne Kamal or Raghu ki baki bacchi body ka muaaina kiya taki apne bacche ko kuch khila ske. Tabhi uske najar dono ke Aandashay or mutrashay par pdi Jo ab bhi shurakshit the... Well mada dinosaur me bdi bariki se Kamal or Raghu ki body se Aandashay or mutrashay ki khinch kar alag kiya or use apne masoom phool jaise bacche ke mohh me dal diya, jise chote don ne bde chav se khaya, our baki bccho body ko dono Miya Khalifa sorry’ Miya biwi ne kha kar apna pet kharab Kiya or vha se chle gye



Edher Rahul ye sab hota dekh pasine- pasine ho gya... Use to ye sab ek sapna da lag rha tha but ye koi sapna nhi balki hakikat thi, jiska abhash use tab hua jab use meeting me shamil hone vale macchoro me kata, jinhe Kamal or Raghu ki body se kuch nhi mila ... Khair Rahul un maccharo ko ma-behen ki gali dekar vha se apni Ak-47, super sonic cruise missile our louncher ke sath goust rider ki royal Enfield ko vhi chhod kar pedal hi apne ghar ki taraff bhagg gya





To be countinue​
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