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Adultery Farrar-A revenge story

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Kingfisher

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Well, ye dono bhen ke laude mar kar bhi dinosaur ke munh me apna Lauda de Gaye...jagab topibaaj writer ho be tum kingu...
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Priyanka ne jab Rahul se kaha ki vo Aayushi ko lene uske sath chle but Rahul ne kuch urgent kamm ka bahana bna kar use mna kar diya so Priyanka nirash hokar Nidhi ko sath leke Aayushi ko lene chali gaii



ABB AGGE ...



Edher Priyanka ke jane ke baad Rahul akela nakara room me betha Aaj subahe Jo jungle me karanama Kiya uske bare me soch-2 kar lot-pot hue ja rha tha...Vo Room ka darvaja ander se band karke apne bed par ek Bandar ki trahh uchalne lga...khushi ke mare Rahul Etna bavla ho gya ki bed ke sirhane rkhe 2 takiyo ka chirharan karke uske ander ki ruii/kapas ko nikal Holi ke gulal ki trah pure room me edher-udher bikherne lga ... Uski aisi harkat par vo khud Hairan tha.......



Abhi vo or pagalpanti/ chutiyapanti karta usse pehle hi usne kano me Farrar--- A revange story ke readers ki roabdar awaj gunjne lgi ki usne Kamal or Raghu ka uddhaar kyo nhi kiya ? Unko zinda rkh ke vo sabeet kya karna chahta hai ? Kya pta agar Vo dono by chance zinda bacch gye to Rahul ke g****d na maar le ? or Rahul hihihihi karta rehh jayega ? Aaj din tak Rahul ne jo chutiyapa kiya tha, kya vo kamm tha jo ek or chutiyapa add kar diya ? Bc ye kisi angle se kahani ka Hero nhi lagta ! Eski jagah kahani ka Hero Adhiraj vyom ko hona chahiye tha.



Etne tane or sikayte sunn kar Rahul ki sari Khushi pal bhar me udaan-chhu ho gaii...Vo bina kuch soche apne almirah se Ak-47 nikali or usne sath hi ek super sonic cruise missile + louncher liya our goast rider tipe ki royal Enfield leke Nikal gya Amazon ke jungle ki taraff jagah Jumanji jaisi blockbuster Hollywood movie ki shooting huii thi. Uske sath hi jaha Kamal or Raghu Bhi bandhe hue Justin Bieber ka gana gunguna rhe the .... Khair Rahul 1 minutes ke ander hi vha pahuch gya (WTF lawda )



Rahul ne royal Enfield bullet Raghu or Kamal se kuch duri par hi rok kar apne sath laye modern weapons ko sath leke jhopdi ki or badd chla .... cahlte-2 vo jhopdi ke pass pahucha hi tha ki jhopdi ke aas-pass ka najara dekh uski khopdi chakra gaii kyonki vha ka najara hi kuch aisa tha tha ki, Rahul to kya Marvel Avengers ke superhero bhi hote to unki bhi Gand fatt ke goudam ho jati



Kyonki jhonpdi ke charo or jungali janvaron ka dera jma hua tha, vo bhi sab ke sab mashahari Janvar !! Ajeeb baat ye thi ki un janvaron ke jhund ke bich Kamal or Raghu ghutne ke baal bethe hue the, our to our unke hath pair bhi khule hue the ... Vaha moujud Etne bhayankar janvaron ko dekha Rahul ka pura badan kamp gya our uske hath se AK-47 or super sonic cruise missile our louncher jameen par geer gye kyonki un janvaron me 3 dinosaur bhi the jisme ek naar, dusri mada our tisra unka baccha tha jo 10 hathi or 7 wheal machali ke barabar tha so aap anumaan lga sakte hai uske mom dad ki body ka size kya ho sakta hai ?... Hairaani ke baat ye bhi thi ki vha 5-6 Shark machliya bhi thi jo Kamal ki body ke centre ko dekh rhi thi... Enke alava Tiger, loin, panther, anakonda, Genda, hathi, gadiyal, magarmach, werewolf. Yha tak ki chuha, billi , khargosh, macchar, kide-makode vagerah-vagerah bhi moujud the ...



Rahul to ye sab dekh jald se jald vha se bhag Jana chahta tha but uske pair javab de chuke the. Khair vo kisi trahh jaise-taise karke uske pass hi moujud ek chhoti si chattan ke piche chipp kar vha ka najara dekhne lga. Well udher Kamal or Raghu dar se thar-thar kanp rhe the...vhi Rahul us choti si chhattan ke piche chipa ye soch rha tha ki akhir ye bina Kamal or Raghu ko nuksaan pahuchaye kya khusur-fusur kar rhe hai ?



Par us bavli gand ko kya pta ki vo ye discuss kar rhe ki, vo counting me etne sare or samne pakwaan sirf 2 ? Jinka adha pichwada bhi yha ghasit kar lane se giss chuka tha, So vo dono ko bina pakshpaat ke kaise apas me distributes kre ? ... Khair kuch hi der me natija ye nikla ki jinko Kamal or Raghu ki body ka jo-jo part hath lagega vo use bina mirch-masala ke kha jayega. Fir kya ? Sab ek sath tut pde un dono par ... Kuch hi second me Kamal ke dono hath Tiger leke jungle me bhag gya or uski dekha dekhi lion bhi Raghu ke dono hath ukhad kar tiger ki opposite side me Farrar ho gya... Kamal or Raghu charo pair Shark + magarmach + gadiyal apas me barabar- barabar bant karke vha se teleport ho gye ... ab anakonda kaha piche rehne vala tha, so usne back to back dono ki mundi uske dhhad se alag karke Bijli ki raftar se vha se bhag gya...



Baki bcchi dono ki body se heart, liver, kidney, choti aant, bdi aant, yakratt , pittashay ko naar dinosaur ne apne Bled se bhi tikhe teeth se nikal kar baki bacche janvaron ko kheraat me baant diya .... Ab piche thoda sa mall bccha dekh kar dinosaur ka baccha uchal-uchal kar rone lga ... Apne masoom bcche ko es trahh bilakh kar rota dekh mada dinosaur ka dil chalni-chalni ho gya... Khair usne Kamal or Raghu ki baki bacchi body ka muaaina kiya taki apne bacche ko kuch khila ske. Tabhi uske najar dono ke Aandashay or mutrashay par pdi Jo ab bhi shurakshit the... Well mada dinosaur me bdi bariki se Kamal or Raghu ki body se Aandashay or mutrashay ki khinch kar alag kiya or use apne masoom phool jaise bacche ke mohh me dal diya, jise chote don ne bde chav se khaya, our baki bccho body ko dono Miya Khalifa sorry’ Miya biwi ne kha kar apna pet kharab Kiya or vha se chle gye



Edher Rahul ye sab hota dekh pasine- pasine ho gya... Use to ye sab ek sapna da lag rha tha but ye koi sapna nhi balki hakikat thi, jiska abhash use tab hua jab use meeting me shamil hone vale macchoro me kata, jinhe Kamal or Raghu ki body se kuch nhi mila ... Khair Rahul un maccharo ko ma-behen ki gali dekar vha se apni Ak-47, super sonic cruise missile our louncher ke sath goust rider ki royal Enfield ko vhi chhod kar pedal hi apne ghar ki taraff bhagg gya






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Kyu mazak kar rahe ho yaar ....

Kaun sa sasta Nasha kar liya aapne ...

Had h bhai kahani na koi mazak bana diye...

Jungle me tumhe shark machli dikh rahi...

Dinasour to jaise tum pakad ke le gye....

Ghar se 1 minute ke dur pe aisa jungle.....


Bhai jb nasha utar jate to 1 baar khud bhi update padh lena....
 

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Kyu mazak kar rahe ho yaar ....

Kaun sa sasta Nasha kar liya aapne ...

Had h bhai kahani na koi mazak bana diye...

Jungle me tumhe shark machli dikh rahi...

Dinasour to jaise tum pakad ke le gye....

Ghar se 1 minute ke dur pe aisa jungle.....


Bhai jb nasha utar jate to 1 baar khud bhi update padh lena....
you stop reading my story now... Me tumhara ya es forum ko chalane valo ka noukar nhi hu jo eshara par kahani likhu ! Or tu ye baar bar order dena band kar, samjhe ! Bahut se thread par dekha hai mene tumhare behuda comments ... Jyada talent bhra pda hai to khud hi likh de koi kahani fir de ... Mene mentioned karke Kaha na ki ye update nhi hai fir bhi tumhare bheje me baat nhi ghusi ... Nxt time thoda samabhal kar comments nhi to es thread par ana hi matt ... It's my first & final warning
 
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Ek gar me abhi kuch 5 log the unko dekh kar lag raha tha ki vo bahut dukhi the

" Hume aise akele mat chod rahul akhir kyo jidd le ke betha hai hai tumhe pta hai ki agar tu yha se chala jayega to tere pich es gar me kya hoga sab kuch nikhar jayega ,,ek aurat jo ki dekhne me us ladke ki m alag thi thi jiski ankho me ansu tapak rhe the usi ko sambhale ek or aurat or thi jo unko hausla de rahi thi

" Muje maf karna ma me bhi aap sab ko es tarah akela chod kar nhi jana chahta par me kya Kroo ab mere dum gutne lga hai yha me en haivano ke bich nhi rehna chahte meri hi vajah se aap sabhi ko sabke samne jhukna pda or pta nhi agar me yha rha to na jane mere sath sath aap logon par kitni musibte ayegi or me ye katai nhi chahta ki aap sabhi ke musibto k akaran me bani,, ek ladka apni nam ankho se sabhi ko samjhane ki koshish kar rha tha rha par sayad vo nhi janta tha ki un sab ki khusi us ladke ke shath hi hai par sayad us ladke ne yha se khi dur jane ka faisla kar liya tha

" Tu mujhe yani apni ma ko chod kar jayegi jab tu kuch mahine bhi mujse dur hota tha to muj par kya bitati thi ye me hi janti hu or tu keh rha hai ki me hamesha hamesha ke liye teri es ma ko chod kar ja rhe ho ha bol akhir esme hune kya gunah kiya jiski tum hum sako etni badi sj ade rahe ho ,,us aurat ne ladke ke dono galo ko apne hathon me lete hue kha ek pal ke liye us ladke ka dil bhi pighal gya par uske dimag ne uske dil ki ek na chalne di

" Me ab ruk nhi sakta hu ma muje maf kar dena ,, ladke ne apni ma ko ek bar gale lagte hue kha

" Chote akhir apni ye jidd chod kyo nhi deta tuje to pta hai tera bhai tuj pat jan chidkta hai chahe puri duniya hi tere khilaf kyo na ho jaye tera bhai hamesha tera hi sath dega kya tu muje akela cod kar chla jayega tune jo faisala liya hai usko badal dal ,, ladke ke bhai ne uske kandhe par hatha rakhte hue kha

" Ha dever ji hum sab tumse bahut pyar karte hai jo bhi dukh sukh musibte hogi unka hum mil kar samna karenge me to tumhe sabse himmat vala or bahadur samjhti thi par tum en musibto se ladne ki bajay bhag rhe ho meri mano to ye jidd chod do ,, ye vhi aurat thi jisne ladke ki ma ki thame hue thi usne bhi us ladke ko samjane ki bhartpur koshish ki par sayad en sabki batao par uske uper koi asar nhi hota dikh rha tha

" App ko to sab ptaa hai bhabhi ki kuch dino me mere sath kya kya hua ek bar soch ke dekhiye kya me en hatato me yha reh sakta hu un logo ne jo bhi mere sath kiya uska asar ap logo par bhi pda sayad ye to namuna ho pta nhi or vo mere sath kya kya kar sakte hai vaise bhi un logo ne koi kasar nhi chodi apni taraf se me aap sab se mafi mangta hua me aap logo ko or taklif me nhi dekh sakta hu aap samjne ki koshish kijiye ,,ladke ne bahut dukhi hote hue kha sayad uske sath much din pehle bahut bura hua tha jisse vo puri tarah ahat ho gya tha

" To fir thik hai agar tum yhi chahte ho to hum tuje nhi rokenge par hum sab bhi tumhare sath hi chalenge akhir hum ek parivar hai jo bhi dukh sukh hoga milkar hum uska samna karenge ,,us ladke ki ma ne asha bhari najro se dekhte hue us ladke se kha jisse sunkar us ladke rang hi ud gya

" Ye tum kaisi bat kat rhi ho ma muje khud nhi pta ki me kha ja rha hu es gav ke khet or bhaiya ki nokri ke alava hamare pas kuch bhi nhi hai or me nhi chahata ki meri padai ke sath sath meri behno ki ladai bhi ruk jaye jaye mere karan aap sab apni jindagi barbad mat kijiye muje maloom hai ki un logon ki dushmani muj se hi to vo aap logo ko bina matlab kuch nhi karege aap sabhi ko meri kasam ki aab ne mere ko aap rokne ki koshish ki to

Ab uski jidd ke samne sab har gye the sab kuch vakt par chod diya un logo ne fir vo ladka apne gar ke under gya or ek room ka darwaja khatkhatane lga khattt khattt khattt

" SWEETU darvaja khol me tumse milna chahta hu please ek bar meri bat man ja ,, ladke bahar se awaj dete hue kha kyoki ki under ladki ka koi response nhi aa rha tha

" Me darvaja nhi kholungi bhaiya kyo ki aap mere ko akela chod kar ja rhe ho app ko pta hai ki me apke bagair nhi reh sakti fir bhi aap aisa kar rhe ho agar aap tha se gye to me apse kabhi bat nhi karungi ,, ladki ne ander se hi siskte hue kha par abhi bhi usne darvaja nhi khola

" SWEETU ek bar mujse mil le dekh me bhi tumse dur nhi hona chahta jitana pyar tu mujse karti ye utna hi pyar tera ye bhai tujse karta hai par tuje to pta hai na SWEETU ki mere sath kya hua ,, ladka takatki khaye abhi bhi vhi khda tha esi as me ki sayad ladki darvaja khol de par sayad us ladki ki jidd khe ya kuch or usne darvaja nhi khola

" Agar aab muje bhi apne sath le jao to me darvaja bhi khol. Dungi or me aap ki har bat bhi manungi kya aap muje apne sath le jaoge bolo,, ladki ne sart rakhte hue kha par use pta nhi tha ki ye possible nhi par dono bhai behno ka pyar hi anokha tha dono ek dusre ki jann the kaise ek dusre se alag reh lete

" Me ye chah kar bhi nhi kar sakta SWEETU ...agar tu darvaja nhi kholti to thik hai par tumhe meri kasam mere jane ke bad jyada dukhi nhi hogi or padai bhi karti rahogi ....apna kyal rakhna SWEETU,, ladke ne himmat har ke apne room me jakar apna bag utha kar room se bahar nikal gya jha par uska bhai or ma dono khade de jab us ladke ki ma ne uske hath me bag dekha to vo doudkar uske pass aayi or use gle lgakar rone lagi ladke ke bhi ankho me ansu aa gye fir usne himmat kar ke apni ma ko aoag kiya

" Apna kyal rakhna ma agar kismat me likha hoga to me yha vapas jarur aunga mere jane se aap tut mat jana varna meri behne apne aap ko sambhal nhi payegi.......fir apne bhai ki or dekhkar ......bhaiya muje bus stany chod do ,, ab to sab ki thi shi koshish bhi dhri ki dhri reh gayi us ladke ko samja e ki

Fir uske bhai ne bike nikali jab uss ladke ne apni ma ki or dekha to sweety uski ma ki piche chupi ro rhi thi us ladke ne himmat karke uske pass jana chaha hi tha ki vo ladki vapas rote hue apne room me bhag gai thi
Us ladki ki najar subhe se ek shakhs ke chehre ko dhundne ki koshish kar rhi thi par vo har bar vifal hi rha uska chehra khi nhi dikha vo shakhs koi or nhi balki uski judva behen thi jo subhe se gayab thi gar se uske bad us ladke ne ma bhabhi se vida lekar apne bhai ke sath nikal gya bas stand ki or par raste me uska chacha dikh gya jo uski or dekhkar muskura rha rha usko ignore karte hue dono bhai bika pade

Kuch hi der me dono vha pahuch gye ladke ne bas stand se thoda dur hi bike ruka di vo nhi chahta tha ki uske bhai ko pta chle ki vo kha ja rha hai

" Chote ek bar fir soch le mat ja hume chodkar tere bin aye gar suna ho jayega ,, us ladke ke bhai ne ek aas bhari nigah dalte hue kha

" Sorry bhai ab me nhi ruk sakta aap mere jane ke bad pure gar ka kyal rakhna jis tarah rakhte aye ho aab apko jaldi jana hoga vah ma or SWEETU ka ro rokar bura hal ho gya hoga ,, ladke ne bhai ki bat ko talte hue kha fir uske bhai ne kuch piase the jisko apni jeb se nikal kar us ladki ki jeb me dal kar nikal gya
Edher vo ladka bhi kuch sochte hue main bas stand pahunch gya or delhi ka ticket ktva kar us bas me chad gya

" Agar me un kamino ka mukabala karne ke liyak ho gya to me fir ayunga yha or jo mere sath kiya uska badla jarur lunga me Farrar jarur hua hu par dar ke karan me bhag nhi rha hu me vapas aunga jarur aunga ,,, thi sab sochata rha apne mann me fir kuch hi seconds me vo bas chal padi
Nice story Bhai
 

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Priyanka ne jab Rahul se kaha ki vo Aayushi ko lene uske sath chle but Rahul ne kuch urgent kamm ka bahana bna kar use mna kar diya so Priyanka nirash hokar Nidhi ko sath leke Aayushi ko lene chali gaii



ABB AGGE ...



Edher Priyanka ke jane ke baad Rahul akela nakara room me betha Aaj subahe Jo jungle me karanama Kiya uske bare me soch-2 kar lot-pot hue ja rha tha...Vo Room ka darvaja ander se band karke apne bed par ek Bandar ki trahh uchalne lga...khushi ke mare Rahul Etna bavla ho gya ki bed ke sirhane rkhe 2 takiyo ka chirharan karke uske ander ki ruii/kapas ko nikal Holi ke gulal ki trah pure room me edher-udher bikherne lga ... Uski aisi harkat par vo khud Hairan tha.......



Abhi vo or pagalpanti/ chutiyapanti karta usse pehle hi usne kano me Farrar--- A revange story ke readers ki roabdar awaj gunjne lgi ki usne Kamal or Raghu ka uddhaar kyo nhi kiya ? Unko zinda rkh ke vo sabeet kya karna chahta hai ? Kya pta agar Vo dono by chance zinda bacch gye to Rahul ke g****d na maar le ? or Rahul hihihihi karta rehh jayega ? Aaj din tak Rahul ne jo chutiyapa kiya tha, kya vo kamm tha jo ek or chutiyapa add kar diya ? Bc ye kisi angle se kahani ka Hero nhi lagta ! Eski jagah kahani ka Hero Adhiraj vyom ko hona chahiye tha.



Etne tane or sikayte sunn kar Rahul ki sari Khushi pal bhar me udaan-chhu ho gaii...Vo bina kuch soche apne almirah se Ak-47 nikali or usne sath hi ek super sonic cruise missile + louncher liya our goast rider tipe ki royal Enfield leke Nikal gya Amazon ke jungle ki taraff jagah Jumanji jaisi blockbuster Hollywood movie ki shooting huii thi. Uske sath hi jaha Kamal or Raghu Bhi bandhe hue Justin Bieber ka gana gunguna rhe the .... Khair Rahul 1 minutes ke ander hi vha pahuch gya (WTF lawda )



Rahul ne royal Enfield bullet Raghu or Kamal se kuch duri par hi rok kar apne sath laye modern weapons ko sath leke jhopdi ki or badd chla .... cahlte-2 vo jhopdi ke pass pahucha hi tha ki jhopdi ke aas-pass ka najara dekh uski khopdi chakra gaii kyonki vha ka najara hi kuch aisa tha tha ki, Rahul to kya Marvel Avengers ke superhero bhi hote to unki bhi Gand fatt ke goudam ho jati



Kyonki jhonpdi ke charo or jungali janvaron ka dera jma hua tha, vo bhi sab ke sab mashahari Janvar !! Ajeeb baat ye thi ki un janvaron ke jhund ke bich Kamal or Raghu ghutne ke baal bethe hue the, our to our unke hath pair bhi khule hue the ... Vaha moujud Etne bhayankar janvaron ko dekha Rahul ka pura badan kamp gya our uske hath se AK-47 or super sonic cruise missile our louncher jameen par geer gye kyonki un janvaron me 3 dinosaur bhi the jisme ek naar, dusri mada our tisra unka baccha tha jo 10 hathi or 7 wheal machali ke barabar tha so aap anumaan lga sakte hai uske mom dad ki body ka size kya ho sakta hai ?... Hairaani ke baat ye bhi thi ki vha 5-6 Shark machliya bhi thi jo Kamal ki body ke centre ko dekh rhi thi... Enke alava Tiger, loin, panther, anakonda, Genda, hathi, gadiyal, magarmach, werewolf. Yha tak ki chuha, billi , khargosh, macchar, kide-makode vagerah-vagerah bhi moujud the ...



Rahul to ye sab dekh jald se jald vha se bhag Jana chahta tha but uske pair javab de chuke the. Khair vo kisi trahh jaise-taise karke uske pass hi moujud ek chhoti si chattan ke piche chipp kar vha ka najara dekhne lga. Well udher Kamal or Raghu dar se thar-thar kanp rhe the...vhi Rahul us choti si chhattan ke piche chipa ye soch rha tha ki akhir ye bina Kamal or Raghu ko nuksaan pahuchaye kya khusur-fusur kar rhe hai ?



Par us bavli gand ko kya pta ki vo ye discuss kar rhe ki, vo counting me etne sare or samne pakwaan sirf 2 ? Jinka adha pichwada bhi yha ghasit kar lane se giss chuka tha, So vo dono ko bina pakshpaat ke kaise apas me distributes kre ? ... Khair kuch hi der me natija ye nikla ki jinko Kamal or Raghu ki body ka jo-jo part hath lagega vo use bina mirch-masala ke kha jayega. Fir kya ? Sab ek sath tut pde un dono par ... Kuch hi second me Kamal ke dono hath Tiger leke jungle me bhag gya or uski dekha dekhi lion bhi Raghu ke dono hath ukhad kar tiger ki opposite side me Farrar ho gya... Kamal or Raghu charo pair Shark + magarmach + gadiyal apas me barabar- barabar bant karke vha se teleport ho gye ... ab anakonda kaha piche rehne vala tha, so usne back to back dono ki mundi uske dhhad se alag karke Bijli ki raftar se vha se bhag gya...



Baki bcchi dono ki body se heart, liver, kidney, choti aant, bdi aant, yakratt , pittashay ko naar dinosaur ne apne Bled se bhi tikhe teeth se nikal kar baki bacche janvaron ko kheraat me baant diya .... Ab piche thoda sa mall bccha dekh kar dinosaur ka baccha uchal-uchal kar rone lga ... Apne masoom bcche ko es trahh bilakh kar rota dekh mada dinosaur ka dil chalni-chalni ho gya... Khair usne Kamal or Raghu ki baki bacchi body ka muaaina kiya taki apne bacche ko kuch khila ske. Tabhi uske najar dono ke Aandashay or mutrashay par pdi Jo ab bhi shurakshit the... Well mada dinosaur me bdi bariki se Kamal or Raghu ki body se Aandashay or mutrashay ki khinch kar alag kiya or use apne masoom phool jaise bacche ke mohh me dal diya, jise chote don ne bde chav se khaya, our baki bccho body ko dono Miya Khalifa sorry’ Miya biwi ne kha kar apna pet kharab Kiya or vha se chle gye



Edher Rahul ye sab hota dekh pasine- pasine ho gya... Use to ye sab ek sapna da lag rha tha but ye koi sapna nhi balki hakikat thi, jiska abhash use tab hua jab use meeting me shamil hone vale macchoro me kata, jinhe Kamal or Raghu ki body se kuch nhi mila ... Khair Rahul un maccharo ko ma-behen ki gali dekar vha se apni Ak-47, super sonic cruise missile our louncher ke sath goust rider ki royal Enfield ko vhi chhod kar pedal hi apne ghar ki taraff bhagg gya






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अपडेट बढ़िया था । लेकिन कहानी " इन्सेस्ट " कैटेगरी में है तो ऐसे में कहानी को अपने मूल स्वरूप से भटकना नहीं चाहिए । राहुल बदले की कार्रवाई भी करता रहे और नायिकाओं के साथ प्रेम की कबड्डी भी खेलता रहे ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट किंगफिशर भाई ।
 
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