Incest SAAJAN

[Naina]

I knew it..... MRINAL, veer ko bacha hi legi chahe situation koi bhi ho.... Agar ushki saktiya bandhi huyi na hoti to veer kab ka thik kar deti.....
Oh to ush shisha me sirf yog sadhna karne wale andar se future aur bahar se past dekh sakte hai.... akhir Kar raj log tillasm se bahar aa hi gaye aur sidha hospital jaa pahunche....
Wah ab to raj bhi maan raha hai ki mrinal is great..

Oh ho ye vidhya ko marne ki jaldi hai jo raj ko itna sab suna diya... bhagwan hi bachaye ab to ushe...... yamraj se na sahi.... payal ke hatho se sahi... Vidhya to gayi...
Brilliant update Anand ji.... Great going

 

[Rahul]

Badhiya update waise bhi yahan kewal mrinal ke liye aata hun

 

[King of light]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 251​

Udhar dusri taraf dharti lok me vidhya ke behosh hote hi yamraj uske charo taraf chakkar kaatne laga, iss pratiksha me ki kab usko hosh aaye aur vo apna shikar kare.

Yamraj—Ye to behoshhhh ho gayiiiii.....mareee…huyeee ko..kyaaa maarnaaa……aise me mera khauf logo ke dil se kam ho jayega.....mujhe logo ki ankho me mout ka darr dekhne me bahut maza aata hai.....hoshhh me aane ke baaddd phirr aunga.. tab takkk koiii dusraa shikar dekhta huu.

Yamraj vaha se gayab ho gaya....vahi veer lagatar apni dhun me gadi chalaye ja raha tha....tab tak uss sher ki parchhayi ne uss jagah ko apni giraft me le liya.

Veer ki gaadi jaise hi narmada nadi ke ek lambe pul ke upar pahuchi...tabhi uss sher ki parchhayi ne apna vishal muh khola aur ussi samay samne se tezi se aa rahe tuck ke driver ko usne side se hi khich liya aur vo uske muh me hath pair maarte chillate huye samata chala gaya....uss parchhayi ne usko nigal liya.

Ye dekh kar veer ke hath pair phool gaye....veer kuch samajh pata ki tabhi vo bina driver ka truck badi tezi se veer ki car se takra gaya……takrane ke baad car kafi upar tak uchhali aur phir BOOOOMMMM kar ke hawa me hi blast ho gayi….vo truck nadi me ja gira….tabhi….

"Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr"

Ab aage.....

Truck se takrate hi jaise hi car hawa me udti huyi upar gayi vaise hi blast hone se pahle side window toot kar niche girne se veer bhi niche girne laga aur ussi kshan car me blast ho gaya.

Jaise hi car me blast hua tabhi mrinal adrishya halat me vaha pahuch gayi aur jor se veeerrrr kah ke cheekh uthi jo ki niche girte huye bas pul ki railing se takrane hi vala tha ki vaise hi mrinal ne jaldi se bhag kar usko pakad liya.

Mrinal ne usko railing me takrane aur nadi me girne se to bacha liya lekin samne se truck ki takkar ki vajah se usko behad gambhir chote aayi thi….veer ke sir se bahut jyada khoon bah raha tha aur vah behoshi ki halat me tha.

Mrinal ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki vo kya kare.... ? shaktiya to uski bandhi huyi thi to unka prayog kar ke theek karne me asmarth thi….yaha kshan prati kshan veer ki hriday gati dheemi hoti ja rahi thi….antatah usne adrishya halat me hi turant usko le kar hospital aa gayi aur visible ho kar usko god me uthaye tezi se andar bhagi aur doctor ke cabin me ghus gayi jaha vahi takla doctor baitha tha….uske aise achanak tezi se andar aane aur phir veer ki halat dekhte hi vo bhi chounk gaya.

Mrinal (chillate huye)—ye…takle dok tarrrr…jaldi se ilaz kar nahi to tera ye takla aaj phod dalungi….dekh kya raha hai…vaha khade khade….? Chal jaldi se ilaz kar.

Sabhi veer ko achchi tarah se jante the ki ye maa cement industries ka malik hone ke sath sath raj ka best friend bhi hai..isliye usne turant harkat me aate huye aanan fanan me veer ko Operation theatre me bhijvaya….sath me police ko bhi inform karwa diya, jisse baad me koi problem na ho.

Veer ke accident hone ki khabar aag ki tarah kuch hi minutes ke andar poore city me phail gayi….har news channels ki main head lines ban gayi ye khabar.

Pahle paridhi ki kharab tabiyat, phir raj ko jaan se maarne ki sazish me nani aur vidhya ka hath hone ki sachchayi jaan kar, phir chanchal ka sach samne aana aur inn sab ke karan mamta ki bigadti halat se abhi sabhi khud ko sambhal bhi nahi paye the theek se ki veer ke sath huyi iss durghatna ne sab ke hath pair hi jaise jamin se alag kar diye.

Thakur pariwar ek baar phir se gum ke athaah sagar me doob gaya…..sab ek dusre se lipat kar ro rahe the…sab buri tarah se ab tak ki ghatnao se toot chuke the.

Mamta (rote huye)—ye kis ki buri nazar lag gayi mere pariwar ko….? Kya meri kismat me zindagi bhar apne bachcho ke liye rona hi likha hai….? Isse achcha to ye din dekhne se pahle main marr hi jati to achcha hota.

Ruchi (anshu bahate huye)—maaaa….aisa mat kaho....agar tum bhi aisa kahogi to hame koun sambhalega…? Betu ko koun samjhayega….? Ab to kisi par bharosa bhi nahi rah gaya..maa

Nani (rote huye)—aisa mat bol ruchi beta…..main apne kiye par bahut sharminda hu…aaj jo bhi kuch hua uska mujhe bhi behad dukh hai.

Andar abhi bhi veer ka operation chal raha tha….police bhi aa chuki thi….chunki vo sabhi ruchi ke under me kaam kar chuke hain to kisi ne bhi jyada bahas nahi ki aur sirf formility poori kar ke chale gaye….doctor’s aur nurses ka bar bar O.T, ke andar bahar aana jana laga hua tha….lekin koi bhi kuch bata nahi raha tha ki veer ki condition kaisi hai.

Sabhi pareshan bahar khade ho kar prarthana kar rahe the veer ki salamti ke liye….tabhi ek bar phir se cabin ka darwaja khula aur ek doctor bahar aaya.

Meera—dr. ab kaisi hai veer ki halat….?

Doctor—dekhiye unki halat bahut hi nazuk hai….sir me bahut jyada chot aayi hai unke….khoon bhi bahut bah chuka hai… agar aap me se kisi ka blood group*** hai to pls jaldi se check karwa ke bataiye…..warna bahut der ho jayegi.

Soniya—mera blood group bhi yahi hai doctor….aap mera khoon le lijiye

Doctor—theek hai…aap andar aaiye mere sath.

Soniya ne apna blood veer ko diya….udhar vidhya ko jaise hi hosh aaya to turant uske samne behosh hone se pahle ki vah bhayanak ghatna yaad aa gayi.

Vo jaldi se khadi huyi aur darr se chillate huye darwaja khol kar tezi se bahar bhagi….uske jehan me abhi tak Yamraj ka darr aur uski dahshat buri tarah se haavi thi…vo har kisi ke kamre me ja kar awaz laga kar apni jaan bachane ke liye madad ki bheekh maangne lagi…kintu usko ye kya pata tha ki vo sab to raat se hi hospital me hain…kyon ki vidhya to ussi samay se apne room se bahar hi nahi nikli thi.

Bhagte huye vo gate me gayi jaha guard ne usko sab bataya ki vo sab hospital me hain….to vo bhi ek driver ko le kar turant hospital ke liye nikal gayi.

Hospital pahuchte hi jab usko veer ke baare me malum hua to vo bhi jor jor se rone lagi….idhar chanchal bhi raat bhar mandir me hi rahne ke baad subah bhagwan ke darshan kar ke hospital pahuch gayi….jaha uski maa abhi bhi bistar me hi leti huyi thi…lekin chanchal unme se kisi ke paas nahi gayi aur door se hi chhup kar sab ko dekhti rahi.

Vahi dusri taraf minakshi ka antim sanskar karne ke uparant jaise hi mani mere andar vileen huyi vaise hi meri aur divya ki ankho ke samne pichle janam ki sari baate aur ghatnaye kisi chalchitra ki bhanti tarotaza ho gayi….hum dono ki ankho me pani aa gaya tha…divya rote huye mujhse lipat gayi.

Vahi haal paridhi ka bhi…usko bhi apne 6th janam ki minakshi se judi sabhi yaade smaran ho chuki thi..vo bhi mujhse lipat gayi thi….payal didi 5th janam ke bare me janna chahti thi lekin maine unko ye kah diya ki uss kitab ko raat me ghar jane ke baad padh lena.

Main kuch der tak uss samadhi sthal ko hi dekhta raha …uske baad phir se hum ussi murti vale kamre me aa gaye achanak meri nazar khidki par lage shisha ki oor chali gayi jisme mujhe kuch dikhayi dene laga usko dekhte hi main thoda serious ho gaya.

Payal—kya baat hai raj…? Tum kuch chintit lag rahe ho…..?

Raj—nahi aisa kuch nahi hai…mera khyal hai ki ab hame ghar chalna chahiye.

Neha—hmmmm…vaise bhi yaha ka tilism to ab toot hi gaya hai.

Raj—abhi tilism poori tarah se nahi toota hai….kuch bhag abhi bhi baki hai…haa ab ye qila shapit jarur nahi hai

Paridhi—to kya hum ab yaha se bahar ja sakte hain.... ?

Raj—hmmmm....ye qila shapit isliye tha kyon ki ye murti khandit dasha me thi jab ki ye maa mahakali ki jeevant pratima hai.

Rajlaxmi—to phir mera kya hoga saajan.... ?

Raj—tumhe kuch samay aur intazar karna hoga….main bahut jald vapis aunga….abhi iss qile se judi bahut si mahatvapurna jankariya hasil karni hain mujhe.

Rajlaxmi—theek hai….jaha itne saal intazar kiya hai vahi kuch din aur sahi lekin din ko saal mat banne dena..saajan

Raj—maine kaha na ki jaldi hi aunga.....vaise bhi abhi kisi se purana hisab kitab chukta karna baki jo hai…. Aur phir yaha ki maharani se kiya hua vada bhi to abhi poora karna hai….aana to padega hi mujhe.

Payal—lekin hum yaha se bahar niklenge kaise….?

Raj—iss khidki se….jaise andar aaye the vaise hi….?

Neha—hum kisi darwaje se bhi to bahar ja sakte hain…? Phir khidki hi kyo…?

Divya—kyon ki abhi raj sabha se juda tilism tootna baki hai…vo paheli hal ho jane se hum yaha se bahar ja sakte hain ab aur shayad black hole se bhi.

Raj—hmmmm…sahi hai…chalo ab

Maine uss khidki me lage shisha ko nikal diya aur sab ko uske jariye bahar kar ke vo talwar vapis nikal li aur khidki se bahar kood gaya jaldi se…..sabne palat ke dekha to vo shisha phir se khidki me fit ho chuka tha.

Payal (shocked)—ye shishe ka kya tilism hai….? Ye kyo bar bar apne aap hi fit ho jata hai nikal ke door rakh dene ke baad bhi….? Aur isme se jo maine dekha tha vo sab kya rahasya hai…?

Raj—ye shisha trikal darshi hai.....agar isme bahar se andar dekhoge to bhoot kaal (past) dikhayi dega aur agar andar se bahar ki taraf dekhoge to bhavishya kaal me hone wali ghatnaye dikhengi isme se.

Payal (shocked)—to iska matlab ye hua ki maine shaam ko jo kuch bhi dekha tha vo sab yaha pahle hi ghatit ho chuka tha... ?

Raj--hmmmmm

Neha—lekin mujhe to kuch bhi nahi dikha ek baar bhi..jabki maine bhi to kayi baar uski taraf dekha tha... ?

Raj—ye shisha usko hi kuch dikhata hai jo ki yog sadhna karta ho aur jisne kundalini jagrit ki ho...

Payal—lekin maine to kabhi koi yog sadhna nahi ki to phir ye mujhe kyo dikha…?

Raj—aap ne nahi ki to kya hua par pari ne to ki hai….aur ye shisha kabhi tootega nahi chahe iske upar train bhi chadha do tab bhi nahi tootega.

Paridhi—ye talwar tumne kyo nikal li phir se..isse to vo murti phir khandit ho jayegi….?

Raj—ye talwar maine isliye nikal li kyon ki jisse koi na to andar ja sake aur na hi andar se koi bahar aa sake… bina iss talwar ke qile me koi nahi ja sakta aur na bahar aa sakta hai.

Maine sab ko ek sath ghere me le kar teleport ho gaya aur sidha hospital pahuch gaya…shishe me mujhe veer ka hi accident dikhayi diya tha…jiske karan mujhe qile ka kaam adhura chhod kar beech me hi aana pada.

Mujhe hospital me dekh kar sab chounk gaye…aur sath me paridhi ko sahi salamat dekh kar unki hairani aur bhi badh gayi…maine ek nazar maa ki oor dekha jo ki so gayi thi shayad unko need ka injection diya gaya tha.

Ruchi (mujhe dekh bhagte huye)—betuuu…tu aa gaya…..

Sab bhag kar mujhse lipat gaye….ruchi didi sabse adhik ro rahi thi…maine unko apni baho me samet kar samjhaya tab vo chup huyi….vahi mujhe dekh kar chanchal bhi kuch khush huyi lekin agle hi pal vo phir se udas ho gayi.

Ruchi (rote huye)—betuu...vo..veerrr

Raj—didi…main aa gaya hu..na…kuch nahi hoga veer ko….main hu na….mere jane ke baad kya hua yaha…? Maaki ye halat kyo hai…?

Maine bari bari se sab ko samjhaya….kisi ne kuch bhi nahi bataya ki mere jane ke baad kya hua….? Veer ki halat dekh kar meri bhi ankhe dabdaba uthi….Mujhe mrinal dikhi to main uske samne baith gaya.

Raj (nam ankhe)—tum nahi janti mrinal..ki tumne aaj mere upar kitna bada upkar kiya hai….veer sirf mera dost hi nahi..vo mera bhai…nahii…bhai se badhkar hai…vo meri saans hai….veer mera gurur, mera abhiman hai vo…usko bacha kar aaj tumne apne karz ke bojh se daba diya mujhe….

Vidhya (gusse me jor se)—band karrr apni ye bakwas…..aaj teri hi vajah se mere bete ki ye halat hai….na jane kitno ko kha kar tu marega….bachpan me tere seene me itne khanjar maare maine phir bhi tu bach gaya…..mere bete ki halat ka jimmedar tu aur teri ye maa hai…..tum dono ke dono hi manhoos ho…. dhyan rakhna…agar mere veer ko kuch bhi hua to main teri jaan le lungiiii.

Aur yahi vidhya ne gusse me aa kar bahut hi jyada badi galti kar di…….uski iss teekhi baat se mere paas me hi khade kisi shakhs ke rom rom me gusse ki lahar doud gayi.. jin ankho me abhi kuch der pahle pani tha …ab unme prachand kroadh ki jwala dahak uthi…..hath pair aur naak sab gusse se kaampne lage aur ankho me chingariya nikalne lagi.

Awesome update bhai
Ab to vindhya gyi or uska kaam shayad payal ya fir ruchi hi tamam kregi

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[Mr.X796]

Aw

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 251​

Udhar dusri taraf dharti lok me vidhya ke behosh hote hi yamraj uske charo taraf chakkar kaatne laga, iss pratiksha me ki kab usko hosh aaye aur vo apna shikar kare.

Yamraj—Ye to behoshhhh ho gayiiiii.....mareee…huyeee ko..kyaaa maarnaaa……aise me mera khauf logo ke dil se kam ho jayega.....mujhe logo ki ankho me mout ka darr dekhne me bahut maza aata hai.....hoshhh me aane ke baaddd phirr aunga.. tab takkk koiii dusraa shikar dekhta huu.

Yamraj vaha se gayab ho gaya....vahi veer lagatar apni dhun me gadi chalaye ja raha tha....tab tak uss sher ki parchhayi ne uss jagah ko apni giraft me le liya.

Veer ki gaadi jaise hi narmada nadi ke ek lambe pul ke upar pahuchi...tabhi uss sher ki parchhayi ne apna vishal muh khola aur ussi samay samne se tezi se aa rahe tuck ke driver ko usne side se hi khich liya aur vo uske muh me hath pair maarte chillate huye samata chala gaya....uss parchhayi ne usko nigal liya.

Ye dekh kar veer ke hath pair phool gaye....veer kuch samajh pata ki tabhi vo bina driver ka truck badi tezi se veer ki car se takra gaya……takrane ke baad car kafi upar tak uchhali aur phir BOOOOMMMM kar ke hawa me hi blast ho gayi….vo truck nadi me ja gira….tabhi….

"Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr"

Ab aage.....

Truck se takrate hi jaise hi car hawa me udti huyi upar gayi vaise hi blast hone se pahle side window toot kar niche girne se veer bhi niche girne laga aur ussi kshan car me blast ho gaya.

Jaise hi car me blast hua tabhi mrinal adrishya halat me vaha pahuch gayi aur jor se veeerrrr kah ke cheekh uthi jo ki niche girte huye bas pul ki railing se takrane hi vala tha ki vaise hi mrinal ne jaldi se bhag kar usko pakad liya.

Mrinal ne usko railing me takrane aur nadi me girne se to bacha liya lekin samne se truck ki takkar ki vajah se usko behad gambhir chote aayi thi….veer ke sir se bahut jyada khoon bah raha tha aur vah behoshi ki halat me tha.

Mrinal ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki vo kya kare.... ? shaktiya to uski bandhi huyi thi to unka prayog kar ke theek karne me asmarth thi….yaha kshan prati kshan veer ki hriday gati dheemi hoti ja rahi thi….antatah usne adrishya halat me hi turant usko le kar hospital aa gayi aur visible ho kar usko god me uthaye tezi se andar bhagi aur doctor ke cabin me ghus gayi jaha vahi takla doctor baitha tha….uske aise achanak tezi se andar aane aur phir veer ki halat dekhte hi vo bhi chounk gaya.

Mrinal (chillate huye)—ye…takle dok tarrrr…jaldi se ilaz kar nahi to tera ye takla aaj phod dalungi….dekh kya raha hai…vaha khade khade….? Chal jaldi se ilaz kar.

Sabhi veer ko achchi tarah se jante the ki ye maa cement industries ka malik hone ke sath sath raj ka best friend bhi hai..isliye usne turant harkat me aate huye aanan fanan me veer ko Operation theatre me bhijvaya….sath me police ko bhi inform karwa diya, jisse baad me koi problem na ho.

Veer ke accident hone ki khabar aag ki tarah kuch hi minutes ke andar poore city me phail gayi….har news channels ki main head lines ban gayi ye khabar.

Pahle paridhi ki kharab tabiyat, phir raj ko jaan se maarne ki sazish me nani aur vidhya ka hath hone ki sachchayi jaan kar, phir chanchal ka sach samne aana aur inn sab ke karan mamta ki bigadti halat se abhi sabhi khud ko sambhal bhi nahi paye the theek se ki veer ke sath huyi iss durghatna ne sab ke hath pair hi jaise jamin se alag kar diye.

Thakur pariwar ek baar phir se gum ke athaah sagar me doob gaya…..sab ek dusre se lipat kar ro rahe the…sab buri tarah se ab tak ki ghatnao se toot chuke the.

Mamta (rote huye)—ye kis ki buri nazar lag gayi mere pariwar ko….? Kya meri kismat me zindagi bhar apne bachcho ke liye rona hi likha hai….? Isse achcha to ye din dekhne se pahle main marr hi jati to achcha hota.

Ruchi (anshu bahate huye)—maaaa….aisa mat kaho....agar tum bhi aisa kahogi to hame koun sambhalega…? Betu ko koun samjhayega….? Ab to kisi par bharosa bhi nahi rah gaya..maa

Nani (rote huye)—aisa mat bol ruchi beta…..main apne kiye par bahut sharminda hu…aaj jo bhi kuch hua uska mujhe bhi behad dukh hai.

Andar abhi bhi veer ka operation chal raha tha….police bhi aa chuki thi….chunki vo sabhi ruchi ke under me kaam kar chuke hain to kisi ne bhi jyada bahas nahi ki aur sirf formility poori kar ke chale gaye….doctor’s aur nurses ka bar bar O.T, ke andar bahar aana jana laga hua tha….lekin koi bhi kuch bata nahi raha tha ki veer ki condition kaisi hai.

Sabhi pareshan bahar khade ho kar prarthana kar rahe the veer ki salamti ke liye….tabhi ek bar phir se cabin ka darwaja khula aur ek doctor bahar aaya.

Meera—dr. ab kaisi hai veer ki halat….?

Doctor—dekhiye unki halat bahut hi nazuk hai….sir me bahut jyada chot aayi hai unke….khoon bhi bahut bah chuka hai… agar aap me se kisi ka blood group*** hai to pls jaldi se check karwa ke bataiye…..warna bahut der ho jayegi.

Soniya—mera blood group bhi yahi hai doctor….aap mera khoon le lijiye

Doctor—theek hai…aap andar aaiye mere sath.

Soniya ne apna blood veer ko diya….udhar vidhya ko jaise hi hosh aaya to turant uske samne behosh hone se pahle ki vah bhayanak ghatna yaad aa gayi.

Vo jaldi se khadi huyi aur darr se chillate huye darwaja khol kar tezi se bahar bhagi….uske jehan me abhi tak Yamraj ka darr aur uski dahshat buri tarah se haavi thi…vo har kisi ke kamre me ja kar awaz laga kar apni jaan bachane ke liye madad ki bheekh maangne lagi…kintu usko ye kya pata tha ki vo sab to raat se hi hospital me hain…kyon ki vidhya to ussi samay se apne room se bahar hi nahi nikli thi.

Bhagte huye vo gate me gayi jaha guard ne usko sab bataya ki vo sab hospital me hain….to vo bhi ek driver ko le kar turant hospital ke liye nikal gayi.

Hospital pahuchte hi jab usko veer ke baare me malum hua to vo bhi jor jor se rone lagi….idhar chanchal bhi raat bhar mandir me hi rahne ke baad subah bhagwan ke darshan kar ke hospital pahuch gayi….jaha uski maa abhi bhi bistar me hi leti huyi thi…lekin chanchal unme se kisi ke paas nahi gayi aur door se hi chhup kar sab ko dekhti rahi.

Vahi dusri taraf minakshi ka antim sanskar karne ke uparant jaise hi mani mere andar vileen huyi vaise hi meri aur divya ki ankho ke samne pichle janam ki sari baate aur ghatnaye kisi chalchitra ki bhanti tarotaza ho gayi….hum dono ki ankho me pani aa gaya tha…divya rote huye mujhse lipat gayi.

Vahi haal paridhi ka bhi…usko bhi apne 6th janam ki minakshi se judi sabhi yaade smaran ho chuki thi..vo bhi mujhse lipat gayi thi….payal didi 5th janam ke bare me janna chahti thi lekin maine unko ye kah diya ki uss kitab ko raat me ghar jane ke baad padh lena.

Main kuch der tak uss samadhi sthal ko hi dekhta raha …uske baad phir se hum ussi murti vale kamre me aa gaye achanak meri nazar khidki par lage shisha ki oor chali gayi jisme mujhe kuch dikhayi dene laga usko dekhte hi main thoda serious ho gaya.

Payal—kya baat hai raj…? Tum kuch chintit lag rahe ho…..?

Raj—nahi aisa kuch nahi hai…mera khyal hai ki ab hame ghar chalna chahiye.

Neha—hmmmm…vaise bhi yaha ka tilism to ab toot hi gaya hai.

Raj—abhi tilism poori tarah se nahi toota hai….kuch bhag abhi bhi baki hai…haa ab ye qila shapit jarur nahi hai

Paridhi—to kya hum ab yaha se bahar ja sakte hain.... ?

Raj—hmmmm....ye qila shapit isliye tha kyon ki ye murti khandit dasha me thi jab ki ye maa mahakali ki jeevant pratima hai.

Rajlaxmi—to phir mera kya hoga saajan.... ?

Raj—tumhe kuch samay aur intazar karna hoga….main bahut jald vapis aunga….abhi iss qile se judi bahut si mahatvapurna jankariya hasil karni hain mujhe.

Rajlaxmi—theek hai….jaha itne saal intazar kiya hai vahi kuch din aur sahi lekin din ko saal mat banne dena..saajan

Raj—maine kaha na ki jaldi hi aunga.....vaise bhi abhi kisi se purana hisab kitab chukta karna baki jo hai…. Aur phir yaha ki maharani se kiya hua vada bhi to abhi poora karna hai….aana to padega hi mujhe.

Payal—lekin hum yaha se bahar niklenge kaise….?

Raj—iss khidki se….jaise andar aaye the vaise hi….?

Neha—hum kisi darwaje se bhi to bahar ja sakte hain…? Phir khidki hi kyo…?

Divya—kyon ki abhi raj sabha se juda tilism tootna baki hai…vo paheli hal ho jane se hum yaha se bahar ja sakte hain ab aur shayad black hole se bhi.

Raj—hmmmm…sahi hai…chalo ab

Maine uss khidki me lage shisha ko nikal diya aur sab ko uske jariye bahar kar ke vo talwar vapis nikal li aur khidki se bahar kood gaya jaldi se…..sabne palat ke dekha to vo shisha phir se khidki me fit ho chuka tha.

Payal (shocked)—ye shishe ka kya tilism hai….? Ye kyo bar bar apne aap hi fit ho jata hai nikal ke door rakh dene ke baad bhi….? Aur isme se jo maine dekha tha vo sab kya rahasya hai…?

Raj—ye shisha trikal darshi hai.....agar isme bahar se andar dekhoge to bhoot kaal (past) dikhayi dega aur agar andar se bahar ki taraf dekhoge to bhavishya kaal me hone wali ghatnaye dikhengi isme se.

Payal (shocked)—to iska matlab ye hua ki maine shaam ko jo kuch bhi dekha tha vo sab yaha pahle hi ghatit ho chuka tha... ?

Raj--hmmmmm

Neha—lekin mujhe to kuch bhi nahi dikha ek baar bhi..jabki maine bhi to kayi baar uski taraf dekha tha... ?

Raj—ye shisha usko hi kuch dikhata hai jo ki yog sadhna karta ho aur jisne kundalini jagrit ki ho...

Payal—lekin maine to kabhi koi yog sadhna nahi ki to phir ye mujhe kyo dikha…?

Raj—aap ne nahi ki to kya hua par pari ne to ki hai….aur ye shisha kabhi tootega nahi chahe iske upar train bhi chadha do tab bhi nahi tootega.

Paridhi—ye talwar tumne kyo nikal li phir se..isse to vo murti phir khandit ho jayegi….?

Raj—ye talwar maine isliye nikal li kyon ki jisse koi na to andar ja sake aur na hi andar se koi bahar aa sake… bina iss talwar ke qile me koi nahi ja sakta aur na bahar aa sakta hai.

Maine sab ko ek sath ghere me le kar teleport ho gaya aur sidha hospital pahuch gaya…shishe me mujhe veer ka hi accident dikhayi diya tha…jiske karan mujhe qile ka kaam adhura chhod kar beech me hi aana pada.

Mujhe hospital me dekh kar sab chounk gaye…aur sath me paridhi ko sahi salamat dekh kar unki hairani aur bhi badh gayi…maine ek nazar maa ki oor dekha jo ki so gayi thi shayad unko need ka injection diya gaya tha.

Ruchi (mujhe dekh bhagte huye)—betuuu…tu aa gaya…..

Sab bhag kar mujhse lipat gaye….ruchi didi sabse adhik ro rahi thi…maine unko apni baho me samet kar samjhaya tab vo chup huyi….vahi mujhe dekh kar chanchal bhi kuch khush huyi lekin agle hi pal vo phir se udas ho gayi.

Ruchi (rote huye)—betuu...vo..veerrr

Raj—didi…main aa gaya hu..na…kuch nahi hoga veer ko….main hu na….mere jane ke baad kya hua yaha…? Maaki ye halat kyo hai…?

Maine bari bari se sab ko samjhaya….kisi ne kuch bhi nahi bataya ki mere jane ke baad kya hua….? Veer ki halat dekh kar meri bhi ankhe dabdaba uthi….Mujhe mrinal dikhi to main uske samne baith gaya.

Raj (nam ankhe)—tum nahi janti mrinal..ki tumne aaj mere upar kitna bada upkar kiya hai….veer sirf mera dost hi nahi..vo mera bhai…nahii…bhai se badhkar hai…vo meri saans hai….veer mera gurur, mera abhiman hai vo…usko bacha kar aaj tumne apne karz ke bojh se daba diya mujhe….

Vidhya (gusse me jor se)—band karrr apni ye bakwas…..aaj teri hi vajah se mere bete ki ye halat hai….na jane kitno ko kha kar tu marega….bachpan me tere seene me itne khanjar maare maine phir bhi tu bach gaya…..mere bete ki halat ka jimmedar tu aur teri ye maa hai…..tum dono ke dono hi manhoos ho…. dhyan rakhna…agar mere veer ko kuch bhi hua to main teri jaan le lungiiii.

Aur yahi vidhya ne gusse me aa kar bahut hi jyada badi galti kar di…….uski iss teekhi baat se mere paas me hi khade kisi shakhs ke rom rom me gusse ki lahar doud gayi.. jin ankho me abhi kuch der pahle pani tha …ab unme prachand kroadh ki jwala dahak uthi…..hath pair aur naak sab gusse se kaampne lage aur ankho me chingariya nikalne lagi.

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[Riyansh]

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[RAAZ]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 196​

Iske baad vah sidhe meri taraf aaya aur pahle apni dono ankho se mujhe dekhta raha….phir mathe par ka teesra netra khula uska….atyant tivra prakash ki kiran jaisi nikli uski teesri ankh se….aur phir meri ankho ke samne andhera chha gaya.

Tad tad aur phir jhann ki awaz huyi…mere seene me dard sa uthne laga aur phir cheekh maar kar main behosh hota chala gaya

Ab Aage……..

Mere behosh hote hi mani ki roshni bhi band ho gayi….sath hi mere behosh hone ke karan unke upar mere dwara banaya gaya suraksha kawach bhi khandit ho gaya…..uss kamre me ek baar phir se andhera chha gaya…mere aise cheekh kar behosh ho jane se sab ghabra gayi…upar andhere aur anjan jagah ka darr alag.

Payal (ghabrate huye)—rajjj….kya huaaa….? Tujhe kya hua….uth na….rajjj….tu cheekha kyo….? Ye andhera kyo ho gaya…? Doctor dekho na…kya ho gaya hai mere raj ko….? Rajjj uth na.

Divya (hilate huye)—saajann…kyaaa huaaa…utho naaa…kisne kiya hai ye….samne kyo nahi aata…bujdil kahi ka….? Saajan utho…kya maine sadiyo se isliye intazar kiya hai ki har baar tum mujhe chhod kar chale jao…? Iss baar main aisa nahi hone dungi……samajh gaye na…..tumhe meri khatir uthna hoga…..saajan tumhe apni divya ke liye uthna hoga.

Paridhi (nam ankho se)—rajjj…kya ho gaya…mummy dekho na mere rajj ko kya hua hai…ye kuch bol kyo nahi raha hai….kya meri qurbani bekar chali jayegi….? Nahi..nahi..aisa nahi ho sakta

Neha—rajj…kya hua beta….uth na….dekh agar tu hi aise karega to hum sab ka kya hoga…..koun sambhalega hame yah hame to sirf tera hi bharosa hai.

Saloni—aap log shanti rakho…raj ko kuch nahi hoga….dekhna jaldi hi uthega vo…raj ko maarna itna asan nahi hai kisi ke liye…shayad thakan ke karan aisa hua hoga

Sabhi buri tarah se ghabra chuke the….unki ankho me nami utar aayi thi….lekin sabse jyada ghabrahat payal didi aur paridhi ko ho rahi thi……neha bhi pareshan thi…..halanki ghabra to divya bhi gayi thi kintu jaise hi usko guru maa aur devi laxmi ki baate smaran huyi to uski ghabrahat kuch kam ho gayi thi lekin phir bhi raj ko dard me mahsoos kar ke uske seene me bhi taklif ho rahi thi.

Tabhi neha chachi jor jor se cheekhne lagi…..ek baar phir se vahi payal bajne aur kisi ladki ke hasne ki awaz aas paas me sab ko sunayi dene lagi….sab darr se kampne lagi.

Neha (cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaa….bachaooooo….rajjjjjj…..aaaaaaaa…….koi mere pair pakad ke mujhe ghasit raha hai…aaaaaaaaa

“Chhan….chhan…chhan…..chhan……hihihihihihihi”

Paridhi—mummyyyyy…..aap kaha hoooooo…..?

Payal—chachiiiiiii……?

Divya—chachiiiii…..aap bolti kyo nahiiiiiiii……..?

Neha—(koi jawab nahi)

Sab ne aas paas tatol kar dekha lekin neha ka kahi koi pata nahi tha……ab to sab ki halat bahut jyada kharab hone lagi thi……sab rajjjjj….rajjjj…chillate huye andhere me mujhe tatolne lagi.

Tabhi ek baar phir se vahi payal ki goonj sunayi dene lagi…..payal aur paridhi ek dusre se chipak gayi darte huye… kyon ki andhera hone ke karan mujhe dhoondh hi nahi pa rahi thi….lekin main unhe kahi nahi mila…to unki dasha par kate pakshi ki tarah ho gayi.

“Chhan….chhann…chhan…chhann…chhannn”

Paridhi (darte huye)—kkkkkk…..koun hai yaha…….?

‘’Hihihihihihihihihihihi......chhan......chhann...chhan...chhan’’

Paridhi (chillate huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaa.......raajjjjjjjjjj......mummyyyy.......rajjjjj...bachaaoooooo....koi mujhe bhiii pair pakad kar ghasit raha hai......aaaaaaaa.....raaajjjjjjjj

Payal (jor se)—paridhiiiiiiiiiiiii.......rajjjj uthooooo......nahi to hum sab maare jayenge yahaaaa....paridhiiiii

Divya—didiiiiiiiiiiiii

Paridhi—(no response)

‘’Chhan...chhan....chhan...hihihihihihi’’

Payal (rote chillate)—raaaaajjjjjjj.......bachaaaooooooooo......raaaajjjjjjjjjj.....aaaaaaaa.....koi mujhe bhi ghasit raha hai...rajjj

Divya—didiiiiiiiiii.......saajannnnn....uthoooooo....saajannnnnn

Saloni—payallllllll

Payal ka bhi koi jawab nahi aaya.....ab to divya aur saloni bhi buri tarah se dahshat aur khauf ke saaye me doob chuki thi....dono baar baar sabhi ko awaz laga rahi thi lekin kisi ki taraf se koi bhi prattuttar nahi aa raha tha.... agar kuch sunayi de rahi thi to sirf kisi ke payal ki ghungharoo ki awaz aur uski dil dahla dene wali bhayanak hasi.

Jaise hi ye awaz paas aane lagi to divya aur saloni bhi ghabra kar yaha vaha andhere me bhagne lagi....divya mera naam lekar chillaye ja rahi thi to saloni bhi.....par dono ko ye pata nahi tha ki vo ek hi jagah par bhag rahi hai... ek kadam bhi vaha se nahi bhag payi thi jabki unhe lag raha tha ki vo bhagte huye door nikal aayi hain kamre se.

‘’Hihihihihi.....bhago....aur tez....aur tez.....hihihihihihihi....Ek baar aane ke baad koi yaha se kahi nahi bhag sakta...hihihi’’

Divya (chillate huye—saajaannnnnnnn

Saloni—rajjjjjjjj.....aaaaaa......mujhe bhi koi ghasitttt raha haiiii....aaaaaaaa

Par ab ki baar kuch alag hua......saloni ki cheekh ke sath ek cheekh aur bhi vaha goonj uthi....dusri cheekh uski thi jo saloni ko ghasit raha tha ya rahi thi.

Aur dusri cheekh ki vajah ye thi ki jo bhi saloni ko ghasit rahi thi....dard se cheekhte huye achanak saloni ki ankho se aag nikalne lagi....jaise hi vo aag ghasitne wale ke upar padi to uski bhi cheekh nikal gayi jabki divya ye dekh kar stabdh rah gayi.

Divya (shocked)—koun ho tum.... ? tum doctor nahi ho sakti... ? koun ho…?

Saloni—mere baare me saajan ko pata hai…pahle isse to nipat lu.

‘’Ohhhh...to tu mujhe takkar dena chahti hai…..ab dekh main tera kya haal karti hu’’

Saloni (jor se)—koun hai tu...... ?....baki logo ka kya kiya tune....jaldi bata warna tere liye achcha nahi hoga

Magar jawab dene ki jagah usne bhi aag ka jawab aag se dena shuru kar diya...lekin uss aag ki roshni me jo chehra nazar aaya vo bada hi bhayanak tha...divya ke to hath pair hi dheele pad gaye.

Lekin saloni bhi jyada der tak uska samna nahi kar payi.....aur akhir kuch der baad uski bhi cheekhe goonjne lagi aur uska bhi vahi haal hua jo baki ka hua tha.

Divya akeli asahay saajan ko ghabrate huye phir se tatol tatol kar andhere me khojne lagi aur sath me roti bhi ja rahi thi...tab tak saloni ko thikane lagane ke baad vo phir se payal chhankati huyi uske hasne ki awaz paas me sunayi dene lagi.

‘’Hihihihihi...chhan...chhan....chhann....ab tu bhi cheekh....bachaoo...bachaaooo....cheekh...hihihihihihi’’

Divya (darr se chillate huye)—dekho...mere paas nahi aana....door raho mujhse.....saajan tumhe chhodega nahiii

‘’Saajannnn....hhihihihihi...vo to kabbbb kaa marrr chukaaa...hihihihi...ab teri bari hai’’

Divya (chillate huye)—saajan ko maar sake aisi teri aukat nahi.

Aur agle hi pal kroadhit ho kar usne jaise hi divya ko ghasitne ke liye usko hath lagaya hi tha ki usse aisa jabardast jhatka laga ki vo uss aakashiya bijli ke jhatke se phisalti huyi aur dard se cheekhti na jane kaha aur kitni door ja kar giri.

Divya andhere me mera naam le kar har taraf mujhe dhoondhne lagi.....idhar mere behosh hone ke baad meri ankho ke samne kuch drishya baar baar jhilmilane lage.

Meri ankho ke samne ek kamra dikha jisme bahut sara saman rakha hua hai, uske baad raj sabha ka drishya dikhayi diya.....sabha ke beecho beech latakta hua ek tarazu nazar aaya aur phir uske baad mata mahakali ki ek pratma dikhayi dene lagi.

Ye sab drishya meri ankho ke samne baar baar jaldi jaldi ghum aur badal rahe the...ant me ek tahkhana nazar aaya aur uss tahkhane ke andar ek darwaja dikha....jaise hi vo darwaja khula ki tabhi.......

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Dusri taraf yaha ghar me mamta ko hosh to aa gaya tha lekin vo phir se jaldi hi behosh ho gayi thi dubara...aise me doctors ne unhe hospital me admitt karne ke liye kaha.

Doctor—dekhiye...ye abhi hi to coma se bahar aayi thi...aise me kisi bhi tarah ka sadma inko phir se coma me le ja sakta hai...inka baar baar behosh hona theek nahi hai....behtar yahi hoga ki mrs. Thakur ko hospital me rakha jaye jaha 24 hrs. Doctors ki nazar rahegi inki condition par.

Veer—theek hai doctor...jaisa aap theek samjhe

Mamta ko turant hospital admitt kar diya gaya….ghar ke lagbhag sabhi log hospital me moujud the…..siwaye vidhya aur chanchal ke.

Vidhya to uske baad se apne room se bahar hi nahi nikli thi, pata nahi kis soch me doobi huyi thi jabki chanchal mamta ke hospital le jate hi sidhe ek mandir ke bahar dharne par baith gayi thi.

Halanki Raat hone ki vajah se mandir ke darwaje band the….tathapi vo bahar hi baith kar upar wale se prarthana karne me lag gayi thi.

Chanchal (rote huye mann me)—hey bhagwan….meri maa ko theek kar do…..ye sab mere hi paapo ka dund hai jo aaj unhe bhugatna pad raha hai….mere hi kadam manhoos hain….mujhe paida hi kyo kiya bhagwan tune….? Mere kadam uss mandir me padte hi vaha gum ke badal chha gaye hain….bas ek baar meri maa ko theek kar do bhagwan aur mere raj ko jindagi ki har khushi dena….main aaj ke baad kabhi apni manhoos shakal kisi ko nahi dikhaungi…bahut door chali jaungi sab ki zindagi se.

Vahi hospital me doctor barabar mamta ka check up karne me lage huye the…mamta ko VIP ward me shift kiya gaya tha…doctor ke mana karne ke bavjud sab andar ghus gaye the…..jo doctor chair par baithe huye mamta ko check kar raha tha uske sir me baal nahi the ye dekh kar mrinal ke hath me khujli hone lagi thi…jo ki doctor se thoda hat ke khadi thi.

Doctor ke agal bagal ruchi aur veer khade the..veer ke baju me mrinal khadi thi….usne ek baar sab ki taraf dekha aur phir piche se hath le ja kar chatttt se doctor ke sir me maar diya.

Mrinal (mann me)—hmmmmm…..bajta hai….maza aa gaya….ek baar aur baja kar dekhti hu.

Iss achanak maar se doctor chakra gaya aur usne charo taraf dekha lekin sabhi ka dhyan mamta ki oor tha….usne ek baar veer ko ghur kar dekha aur phir se ilaz karne me lag gaya apne sir me hath ferte huye.

Jaise hi usne sir se hath hataya vaise hi mrinal ne ek baar phir se uske takle par chatt se maar diya lekin ab ki baar jara jor se hath pad gaya…jiski awaz bhi sab ko sunayi de gayi.

Doctor apne takle ko sahlate huye baukhla kar khada ho gaya aur veer ko gusse se dekhne laga…

Anand bhai Maza aa Gaya it I seriousness me bhi comedy yah sirf aapka hi hunar hain. Zabardast bhai.

 

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