Incest SAAJAN

[Sp bala]

Update 202 & 252 will come tomorrow.

Ok bhai .... we r waiting ....

 

[Raguhalkal]

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Shukriya Raghu bhai for Liking the update
Koi na bhai...aap padhte rahe yahi mere liye bahut hai
Review ya phir views ke liye main story nahi likhta
Mera uddeshya story likhne ke bahane hi sahi kuch naye dost to bante hain..sath me likhne ke prati mera confidence bhi majboot hota hai.
Main bas yahi chahta hu ki aap sab story read karte rahe....agar kahi koi bhi galti ya koi kami nazar aati hai to usko ujagar kare
Prati kriya chahe possitive ho ya negative, main dono ko hi possitive hi maan ke chalta hu
Haan ye ummid jarur karta hu ki sab apni prati kriya ek dost ki tarah hi de...phir chahe vo negative hi kyo na ho...meri taraf se swagat hai..har prati kriya ka.
Agar ek bhi review nahi ayega tab bhi main update dunga....
Jab tak mere hatho me taqat aur kalam hai tab main aise hi likhta rahunga..Bina Ruke...Bina Jhuke.
Stay with us.

Bhai mera kaha bura laga kya aisa gajab mat kar yaar duniya me me abhi iss waqt kisi ko manta hu ya apna samjta hu tho wo sirf aap hai or kuch mayne nahi rakta mere liye

Or apne bataya ki kahi koi galti.........


Pichle updates ne muje itna vivash kardiya ki jaise keh raha ho ki iss update ka review dena tere bas ki baat nahi aisa lag raha tha or me usse manta bi hu haan mere bas ki baat nahi hai apki story review dena ya jadge karna chahe jo bi


Or ek baat bhai ye baat sirf apke liye nahi me jitne bi story iss forum me padi unsabki writer ke liye hai me har koi update me review nahi deta or me ye bi nahi saamjta ki ohhh writer ne mehnat se likha hai unko bi hamare review ki aas hogi aisa sochke maine kabhi review nahi diya hai


Jo muje sub updates se acha lage mere man ko moh le jab update pade tho itna kho javu ki kabi katam hi naa ho sirf aise updates ke liye me comment karta hu


Mehanat tho sab log karte per uss mehnat me usne apna kitna dil lagake kiya uska yogdaan kitna tha ye sab update padke pata chalta hai so usse hi comment karta hu


Ye nice shandaar awesome ye sab me nahi bolta hu jyadatar kabhi bola hoga jab me kahi busy hu tho

Or bhai me jyada tention nahi leta sirf do saal sirf do saalme iss story ka novel ajayega ye baat aap hi ne kahi thi tho me sirf uska intezaar karta bas usme sex nahi hoga bas itni se baat haina koi baat nahi sex ke liye or kahi tareke hai jaisa ki video audio ye sub sunke me apna samay gava leta hu




Thank you

 

[anandsngh12]

Bhai mera kaha bura laga kya aisa gajab mat kar yaar duniya me me abhi iss waqt kisi ko manta hu ya apna samjta hu tho wo sirf aap hai or kuch mayne nahi rakta mere liye

Or apne bataya ki kahi koi galti.........


Pichle updates ne muje itna vivash kardiya ki jaise keh raha ho ki iss update ka review dena tere bas ki baat nahi aisa lag raha tha or me usse manta bi hu haan mere bas ki baat nahi hai apki story review dena ya jadge karna chahe jo bi


Or ek baat bhai ye baat sirf apke liye nahi me jitne bi story iss forum me padi unsabki writer ke liye hai me har koi update me review nahi deta or me ye bi nahi saamjta ki ohhh writer ne mehnat se likha hai unko bi hamare review ki aas hogi aisa sochke maine kabhi review nahi diya hai


Jo muje sub updates se acha lage mere man ko moh le jab update pade tho itna kho javu ki kabi katam hi naa ho sirf aise updates ke liye me comment karta hu


Mehanat tho sab log karte per uss mehnat me usne apna kitna dil lagake kiya uska yogdaan kitna tha ye sab update padke pata chalta hai so usse hi comment karta hu


Ye nice shandaar awesome ye sab me nahi bolta hu jyadatar kabhi bola hoga jab me kahi busy hu tho

Or bhai me jyada tention nahi leta sirf do saal sirf do saalme iss story ka novel ajayega ye baat aap hi ne kahi thi tho me sirf uska intezaar karta bas usme sex nahi hoga bas itni se baat haina koi baat nahi sex ke liye or kahi tareke hai jaisa ki video audio ye sub sunke me apna samay gava leta hu




Thank you

Raghu bhai aap aisa kyo soch rahe hain ki main aap se kabhi naraz ho sakta hu.....?
Main aap se to kya apne kisi bhi reader se kabhi naraz nahi ho sakta, bhai

Maine comment reply kisi narazagi me nahi kiya hai
Maine to ye kahna chaha hai apne dil ki baat ki bhai aap meri story ko read kar rahe hain ye mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hai.
Koun mera achcha reader hai aur koun nahi, iska aanklan main unke review se nahi karta mere bhai.

Mere kahne ka sirf itna matlab hai ki aap story padhte tahiye dost...review ka aana ya aana mere liye koi maayne nahi rakhta hai
Main review milne ke liye kahani likhta bhi nahi hu.
Maine story likhne ka kewal uddeshya bataya hai reply mein.

Aap mere kuch unn abhinn mitro me se ek hain raghu bhai jinke jagah mere hriday me hai....review aaye ya na aaye vo jagah kahi nahi jane wali yaar.

"Hamare Dil Ke Daftar Mein Tabadle Kaha Hain Dost,
Yaha Jo Ek Baar Aaya Bas Yahi Ka Ho Kar Rah Gaya."

 

[Sp bala]

Main aap se to kya apne kisi bhi reader se kabhi naraz nahi ho sakta, bhai

Maine comment reply kisi narazagi me nahi kiya hai
Maine to ye kahna chaha hai apne dil ki baat ki bhai aap meri story ko read kar rahe hain ye mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hai.
Koun mera achcha reader hai aur koun nahi, iska aanklan main unke review se nahi karta mere bhai.

Thanks anand bhai .... ap ke ish anmol word ke liye ....

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Punha kamal kar diya aapne.
Kapal malini ....
Kya vibhats drishy prakat kiya h aapne .
Batuk nath ki mritu to avashymbhavi hi thi .
Minakshi ko uski sadgati mil gyi or sajan-raj ko mani .
5th janam ki story shuru or yahan rajkumar ke roop me h Jitu kumar bhai.
Bhai badhai ho rajkumar banne pr.
Kya manoram drishy dikhaya h aapne.
Vartaman me , khatarnaak or abhi suspense ??
Ek baar fir se fantastic or lajawab update bhai.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 201​

Main jaise hi uss karagar ko kholne ke liye hath lagaya to kisi adrishya shakti ne mujhe piche dhakel diya..maine teen char baar prayas kiya lekin har baar asafal hi raha.

Raj (jor se)—koun hai …samne aao….?

"Hahahaha.....swagat hai saajannnn....akhirrr tummm aa hi gayeeee....mujheee ish din ki kab se pratiksha thiii..hahaha" aur phir vahi bhayanak sadhu hamare samne aa gaya jisko payal didi ne dekha tha.

Payal (bhag kar mujhse chipak ke)—rajjjj...ye....ye....ye...to vahiii sadhuuu haiii...jisko..maine uss bachche ki hatya karte huye dekha thaa.

"Haaaaa...vo main hi thaaaa....abbbb mainnn tummm sabkiiii baliii dungaaaa....hahahahaha....aaj meraaa intazarrr khatam huaaa"

Ab aage....

Raj—tum apni koshish kar ke dekh lo....

“Tum mujhe….maha tantrik batuk nath ko chunouti de rahe ho….bachche…hahahaha….mere samne tum abhi bachche ho..saajannn,….hahahahaha” usne ghamand me haste huye apna naam bataya.

Raj—mujhe maarne se pahle ye to bata ki tum mera intazar kyo kar rahe the….?

Batuk—tumhe aur iss ladki ko maar kar main vo mani hasil karunga…aur phir poori duniya par meri huqumat chalegi hahahahaha

Raj—ye ladki to tumhari hi qaid me thi…phir ab tak kyo nahi mara isko…..?

Batuk—kyon ki vo mani mujhe tabhi mil sakti hai jab main tum dono ki bali ussi talwar se dunga….main iss vrihadpur qile se bahar nahi ja sakta…tilism me qaid ho kar rah gaya hu…..aur mujhe malum tha ki tum vo talwar le kar isko bachane yaha jarur aaoge….isliye tumhara intazar tha mujhe….sath me ye divya aur vo talwar bhi meri hogi..hahahaha

Raj—jab mujhe yahi maar doge to meri bali kaise doge phir…..?

Batuk—mujhe pagal samjha hai…..main abhi tumhe apni shaktiyo se kewal apne vash me karunga.

Raj—jab tum yaha se bahar nikal hi nahi sakte to qaid kaise kiya iss ladki ko….?

Batuk—ye kaam maine apni shaktiyo ke dum par kiya hai…..bas ab bahut hua…ab marne ke liye taiyar ho ja…

Raj—mere baare me jaan lete to tumhare liye achcha hota…khair koi baat nahi ab tumne ye mouka kho diya hai

Batuk nath (jor se)—mujhse takrayega….ye dekh….

Aur phir usne bhi vahi prahar karne shuru kar diye…jo vo ladki kar rahi thi…aur yaha bhi unka vahi anzam hua….ye dekh kar batuk nath soch me pad gaya…ab uska ghamand me hasta hua chehra gambhir ho chuka tha.

Raj—kyaaa huaa…jhandu baam….tera tarkash khali ho gaya kya…..?

Batuk (gusse me)—meri beijjati karta hai…..mere naam ka uphaas udata hai….? Tujhe kya lagta hai ki tune kuch tantra mantra sikh liye to batuk nath ka bhi muqabla kar lega….? Ab dekh tu meri asli shaktiya…

Vo ankhe band kar ke mantra jaap karne laga…..main vaise hi khada raha chup chap…maine sab ke charo oor pahle hi suraksha kawach bana diya tha jisse unko koi nuksan na ho sake.

Mantra jaap uska poora hote hi usne meri taraf phoonk diya aur mere sharir me achanak aag lag gayi, jise dekh kar vo jor jor se hasne laga, par agle hi pal vo aag gayab ho gayi..mujhe sahi salamat dekh vo chounk gaya.

Agli baar usne apne mantra se hamari taraf hazaro ki sankha me saanp paida kar diye lekin jaise hi vo hamare kawach ke karib aaye vaise hi vo aag me jhulasane lage aur rakh ka dher ban gaye.

Raj—koi badi shakti ho to prahar kar ye kya bachcho ki tarah khel raha hai….?

Batuk—ab tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta…..hahaha

Usne phir se ek vishesh mudra me baith kar mantra jaap karne laga…main samajh gaya ki ab ye kisi maha shakti ka aahvahan kar raha hai…aur phir vaha joro ki hawa chalne lagi…kankad patthar yaha waha udne lage…akhir batuk nath ne kisi vikral shakti ka aahvahan kar hi liya tha.

Uska mantra jaap samapt hone ke kuch hi kshan me vaha jor ka attahas goonjne laga….aur agle hi pal vaha ek maha bhayanak dikhne wali shakti prakat ho gayi…uska bhayanak aur vikral roop dekh kar sabhi darr ke maare mujhse chipak gayi aur ankhe band kar li.

Uska poor sharir ekdam kala tha….badi badi lal ankhe….bade nakhun…lal badi si ghutne tak jhulti jeebh..aisi ki agar sapne me bhi koi dekh le to phir dubara uski ankh na khule, sidhe swarg sidhar jaye.

main samajh gaya ki ye Kapaal Malini hai….maha shakti maa maha kali ki ganika hai kapaal malini…. karodo me koi virla hi inko siddh kar pata hai..inki sadhna karne me 99% mrityu nishchit hoti hai…sadhna me jara si bhi chook matlab mout pakki…jisne kapaal malini ko siddh kar liya vo vastav me maha tantrik kahlane ke yogya hai.

Kapaal malini (gusse me)—meraaaa aahvahannnnn kisssss liye kiyaaaa haiiii murkhhhhhh….? Jaldiiiii bataaaa warnaaa tujheeeee kachchaaaaaa chabaaaaaa jaungiiiiiiii.

Batuk (hath jod kar darr se kaampte huye)—main vivash tha mahadevi…mujhe kshama kare….ab aap hi meri sahayta kar sakti hain.

Kapaal Malini (gusse me)—bataaaa kiskiiii mouttttt ke liyeeeee mujheeeee bulayaaaaa haiiiiiii……?

Batuk (meri taraf ishara karte huye)—uskiiiii maha shakti……uskiiiii mouttttt keeee liyeeeeee

Ishara milte hi vo maha shakti badi tezi se meri taraf lapki….unhe apni taraf aate dekh maine dono hath jod kar unhe pranam kiya……vo mere karib aa kar mujhe dekha aur phir ussi tezi se vapis lout gayi.

Kapal malini (kroadh me)—murkhhhh..tuneeee mujheee kiseee maarneeee kee liyeee bulayaaathaaa, uskoooo jiskoo kiii naa koiii devtaaa, naa danavvv, naa manavvvv…naaa hiii koiii aurrr maarrrr saktaaa haiiii…vo apniiii moutttt khuddd haii tune mujheee bula karrr meraaa samayyy barbadddd kiyaaa haiiii…..abbb mainnn tujheee marungiiiii.

Batuk (darr aur khauf se)—nahiiiiiiiii....mujhe mat maro

Batuk kapal malini ki baat sunte hi darr ke maare thar thar kaampne laga….aur apni jaan bachane ke liye idhar udhar bhagne laga....lekin tabhi kapal malini ne uski taang pakad ke apni taraf khich liya aur ek pair uske pairo ke upar rakh diya....vo hath jod kar kshama ki bheekh maangne laga.

Agle hi pal kapaal malini ne uske baal pakad ke apna bade bade nakhuno wala hath batuk nath ke muh me ghusa diya aur hath ko andar le ja kar uske pet ko phad diya....pet ko phad ke uska garam garam khoon pine lagi...phir uski gardan ukhad kar football ki tarah door phenk di aur uska dusra pair pakad ke beech se uske sharir ko cheer diya aur uske sharir ka poora maans khane ke jab kewal haddiya bachi to vahi phenk kar vo gayab ho gayi aur phir sab kuch shant ho gaya.

Kapaal malini ke vaha se jate hi maine chain ki saans li....aur phir sab ko ankhe kholne ko kaha..sab darte huye dhire dhire apni ankhe kholi..jab vaha koi nahi dikha tab kahi unki jaan me jaan aayi jo ki halak me atki huyi thi.

Payal—baap re...koun thi ye...itni maha bhayanak.... ?

Raj—aisa nahi bolte...vo ek devi thi....vo kewal dushto ka sanghar karti hain.

Maine uske baad karagar ke gate ko ukhad ke alag kar diya kyon ki batuk ke ant ke sath hi uska tantrik mayajal jo yaha phaila hua tha vo ab toot gaya tha.

Maine minakshi ki zanjeero ko tod ke alag kiya to vo meri baaho me jhul gayi....badi mushkil se uske muh se shabd nikal rahe the.

Raj—minakshii ankhe kholo..dekho main aa gaya huu..ankhe kholooooo

Minakshi (dhire se)—tummm……… aa gaye saajannnn......ab ...mainnnnn.....tumhariiiiii bahoooooo meinnnn chainnnn se marrrr sakungiiiiii…..dekho inn logo…ne..mujhe…kitnaaa…maraaa..haiii

Minakshi ke poore jism me chot ke nishan the….jagah jagah se khoon bah raha tha….uski ye halat dekh kar meri ankhe bhar aayi aur bakiyo ki bhi.

Raj—kisne kiya hai ye…aur tumhe yaha koun laya….?

Minakshi (rote huye)—ddd….devillllll…..usne …mujhe…bahutttt…maraaa…..chabukkkk se

Raj—chinta mat karo minakshi…jisne bhi tumhare upar hath uthane ki dhristata ki hai…usko saza jarur milegi

Divya—tumhe kuch nahi hoga minakshi…sab theek ho jayega

Minakshi (rote huye)—nahiiiii…divyaaaa……ab mujheee janaaa hogaaa….mainnn to beeta huaaa…kalll hu…aaj to samnee haiiiii…..saajannn mujhe bhi vahi par le chalo.

Raj—rajlaxmi…vo jagah kaha par hai…?

Rajlaxmi—chaliye main batati hu.

Phir rajlaxmi ke sath chalte huye hum uss kamre tak aa gaye jisko maine dekha tha…uss kund me ghusne se pahle maine divya ko meri jeb se vo locket nikalne ko kaha to usne jaise hi uss locket ko nikal kar dekha to vo buri tarah se chounk gayi aur meri oor dekhne lagi.

Raj—darwaja kholo divya.

Divya ki ankho me anshu the aur mere bhi...shayad hum dono hi ye samajh gaye the ki andar kya hai.... ? usne darwaje me bane saanche par uss locket ko fit kar diya aur phir dhire se darwaja khol diya.

Kamre ke andar full roshni phaili huyi thi.....kamre ke beecho beech ek chabutara (samadhi type ka) bana hua tha aur uss chabutare ke upar ek bahut badi mom batti lagi huyi jal rahi thi....chabutare ke nichle hisse me bade bade shabdo me likha hua tha....

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke Afsaane..
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane..”

(Saajan – Divya)
Kaliyug, Year 340

Rajlaxmi—ye mombatti tabhi se jal rahi hai bina bujhe…iss kamre me andhera kabhi nahi hota

Minakshi—saajannn…mujhe bhi…aaj….apne….iss pyar …me…shamil…kar lo….divya ke sath….bas ..yahi ek..vinti hai…mere mahboob…..aaaaa..divya..main tumhare aage hath..jodti hu.

Divya—saajan ne tumhe swikar kar liya hai minakshi iss janam me bhi…aur jaldi hi tumhe tumhara haq bhi mil jayega.

Minakshi—aaa…tummm sach me…dhanya ho..divyaa….jabki uss haq ke..ke…liye…tum..khud hi sadiyo..se.intazar…kar..rahi ho lekin apna haq tumne..dusro ko diya hai

Divya—mera prem itna kamjor nahi hai minakshi ki ye mrityu mere pyar ko mere hriday se mita sake…. main hamesha se saajan ki thi..saajan ki hu..aur har janam me saajan ki hi rahungi….chahe mujhe kitni hi baar kyo na janam lena pade…..kabhi to uss bhagwan ko mere prem par taras ayega aur hum ek honge.

Raj—divya theek kahti hai…maine tumhe shamil to kar liya hai minakshi…iss janam me bhi maine tumhe swikar kar liya hai aur uska haq bhi jaldi hi dunga.

Minakshi—ab mujhe..koi gum nahi….aaaa…saajannnnn

Aur phir thodi der baad hi usne meri baaho me apna dum tod diya……uske marte hi minakshi ke jism se do jyoti nikli unme se ek to paridhi me sama gayi jabki dusri ja kar pari me vileen ho gayi.

Maine qile ke andar se hi lakdiya ekatthi karne ke baad ussi jagah par minakshi ka antim sanskar kiya….uske jalte hi uski chita ki bhasm chamakne lagi aur vo ekatthi ho kar ek mani me badal gayi…uski roshni lagatar tez hoti chali gayi sabko apni ankhe band karni pad gayi aur phir vo roshni mere andar sama gayi.

Uss roshni ke mere andar samate hi meri aur divya ki ankho ke samne ek drishya dikhayi dene laga….

5th Janam Ki Love Story

"Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke Afsaane
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane"
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Ranga rang jashn ki raat ka mahaul tha.

Mouka hi kuch aisa tha….Vrihadpur rajya ke rajkumar Jitendra Kumar Singh jinhe ki sab pyar se Jitu kahte the, ko yuvraj banaye jane ka din nazdik aaya tha.

Pichhle hafte bhar se rajya me jagah jagah tarah tarah ke ranga ranga karyakramo ki dhoom machi thi…kahi bedaniyo (tawayaf) ke naach ho rahe the. To kahi talwar bazi ke kartab dikhaye ja rahe the.

Kahi masti bhari mahfile saji thi, to kahi malla yuddh ke muqable ho rahe the….kahi saanp newle ki ladayi chal rahi thi, to kahi murgo ki muthbhed ho rahi thi.

Mandiro par nayi patakaye aur naye parcham fahra rahe the......raj kumar Jitu ko sabhi aas mani ashirwad hasil ho, iske liye rajya ka koi mandir aisa nahi tha, jisme aartiya na ho rahi ho aur bhog na lag raha ho.

Chhawni me shama hi alag tha….madmast hathiyo ko jaise jung ke liye sajaya gaya tha…ghodo ki jeene aur lagame mom ki polish se chamkayi gayi thi….unki kalangi ke liye rangeen pankho ke guldaste banaye gaye the.

Vrihadpur me jalte chirag deeye aur mashale ussi tarah gini nahi ja sakti thi jaise aas maan ke taare nahi gine ja sakte hain…..darbar ke mantriyo aur sabhi darbariyo ki haweliyo me sugandhit drivya ke chhidkav ke liye shaam se hi mashkachi utar pade the.

Raj Mahal ki sidhiyo par to khaas taur se gulab jal aur kewde ka chhidkav kiya gaya tha…aas paas ke chote bade rajyo ke raja aur prati nidhi log ek din pahle hi rajya ki rajdhani me pahuch chuke the.

Akhir raj kumar Jitu kumar ko kal yuvraj ki padwi ur rajya ke senapati ka ohada milne wala hai….to phir raat rangeen kyo na ho…? Vishesh mehmano ke liye vrihadpur ke qile ke rang mahal me shandar intazam kiya gaya tha.

Vaha ka shama to dekhte hi banta tha shabab aur surur ki mahfil ka apna rang tha…..Jaydev ka sitar, ustad munna ki sarangi, bhola pandit ka tabla aur raj nartaki keshar ke ghungharuo ki jhankar se rang mahal goonj raha tha.

Raj mahal ke naukar daud bhag rahe the aur jaam chhalak rahe the….tarah tarah ke misthann aur gola kabab ki mahak se rang mahal gamak raha tha.

Mor pankhi pankho se heena ki fuhare baras rahi thi aur tamam rajya ki hardil aziz kamsin nrityangna keshar bade hi purjosh andaz me nritya kar rahi thi….aur nachne ke sath uske gaane aur dilkash adaaon ka daur jari tha.. vo jhoom jhoom ke ga rahi thi……

Mori Gagri ko Neer Raja Chhalak na jaye...
Sari bheegi, Chunri bheegi, Choli bheegi jaye..
Main Mari Jaoon Sharam ke Maare, Mora Joban bheego jaye...
Mori Gagri ko Neer Raja, Chhalak na Jaye

Rang Mahal me waah..waaho aur dil ki kachot se nikli aago ne to mahfil ka rang hi badal diya…. ghungharuon ki jhankar ke sath hi sone ke sikko aur abhusano ki bauchhar hone lagi….to keshar ne apni ankho ke teer chalate huye sabhi mehmano ko ghayal karte huye apne ghungharuon, ko madhyam gati par la kar geet ki dusri kadi ko pesh kiya.

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai……

Munna ustad ki sarangi ne taaro ko sambhal keshar ki baat ki waah waahi ki aur bhola pandit ke table ne gamak ke sath phir keshar ko pukara…..to thirakti, chamakti keshar ne phir waar kiya…

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai…..

Tabhi kisi diljale mehman rajkumar ki awaz aayi thi—Jalim…! Yeh to jahir hai….hum ye bojh utha lenge.

To keshar ne usko jhuk kar baar baar salaam karte huye raj kumar Jitu Singh ko dekha tha jo apne gale ki dasvi mala ko utar rahe the…keshar ki adaaon me ijafa hua aur vah ek thumka lekar gaane lagi….

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai, Pani Bharne Kaise Jaoon..
Mori Gagri Uthye Na Mo Pe..
Pag Pag Thokar Khauun..
Mori Patli Kamar Raja Lachak Na Jaye....

Iss baar kartik ki harmonium ne mouke ko pakda....harmonium par kartik ki ungliya thirak uthi aur uske parde saanse khich khich haafne lage....ustad munna ki sarangi, bhola pandit ka tabla, kartik ka harmonium, jaydev ka sitar vadan aur keshar ke ghungharuon ne vah shama baandh diya tha ki mehman tadap tadap uthe.

Aisa jashn to aas paas ke pachaso rajyo me kabhi nahi manaya gaya...sab log surur me the aur keshar ki adaaon par nichhaawar huye ja rahe the....sarangi, table, harmonium aur ghungharoon ka madmata sangeet sari mahfil par haavi ho chuka tha.

Heena ki fuhar karte pankhe madhoshi ko badhawa de rahe the aur mithaiya apna alag hi rang dikha rahi thi.

Nritya sangeet aur shabab ke sath madira ne poore mahaul me unmaad bhar diya tha....log apne apko bhool gaye the dil ki har dhadkan keshar ke madak geet ka bol ban gayi thi.

Rajkumar Jitu Singh ne sura, sundari aur sangeet ke unmaad me jhumte mehmano par ek nazar daali aur phir samne thaal me rakhe heere jewarat keshar ke thirakte pairo ki taraf uchhal diya aur uth khade huye...geet ke bol aur sangeet ke sur dhire dhire dhime hote chale gaye.

Raat aadhi se adhik beet chuki thi....nagar ki attalikao, haweliyo aur rajprasado parjag magati battiya bujh chuki thi aur tab tak akash ke seema heen vistar ko roundti umadti ghumadti kali kajrari ghataon ne amavas ki raat ki kaalima ko aur bhi gahra tatha bhayanak bana diya tha....iss chhor se uss chhor tak aas maan par ek nanha sa tara bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Vrihadpur rajya ke niwasi din bhar ke raag-rang, nritya-sangeet aur aamod-pramod se thak kar apne gharo me gahri need so chuke the....vrihadpur ke vishal durg me bhi gahri khamoshi aur khumari chha gayi thi, jise kabhi kabhi pahredaro ke kadmo ki aahte rah rah kar bhang kar deti thi.

Aaj se theek ek din baad vrihadpur ke maharaja shailendra singh apne ekloute putra rajkumar Jitendra Singh ko yuvraj ke pad aasin karne wale the....isliye pichhle ek saptah se vrihadpur ke raj mahal aur rajdhani hi nahi balki poora rajya tarah tarah ke utsavo aur samaroho me sarobar tha.

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Udhar dusri taraf dharti lok me vidhya ke behosh hote hi yamraj uske charo taraf chakkar kaatne laga, iss pratiksha me ki kab usko hosh aaye aur vo apna shikar kare.

Yamraj—Ye to behoshhhh ho gayiiiii.....mareee…huyeee ko..kyaaa maarnaaa……aise me mera khauf logo ke dil se kam ho jayega.....mujhe logo ki ankho me mout ka darr dekhne me bahut maza aata hai.....hoshhh me aane ke baaddd phirr aunga.. tab takkk koiii dusraa shikar dekhta huu.

Yamraj vaha se gayab ho gaya....vahi veer lagatar apni dhun me gadi chalaye ja raha tha....tab tak uss sher ki parchhayi ne uss jagah ko apni giraft me le liya.

Veer ki gaadi jaise hi narmada nadi ke ek lambe pul ke upar pahuchi...tabhi uss sher ki parchhayi ne apna vishal muh khola aur ussi samay samne se tezi se aa rahe tuck ke driver ko usne side se hi khich liya aur vo uske muh me hath pair maarte chillate huye samata chala gaya....uss parchhayi ne usko nigal liya.

Ye dekh kar veer ke hath pair phool gaye....veer kuch samajh pata ki tabhi vo bina driver ka truck badi tezi se veer ki car se takra gaya……takrane ke baad car kafi upar tak uchhali aur phir BOOOOMMMM kar ke hawa me hi blast ho gayi….vo truck nadi me ja gira….tabhi….

"Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr"

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Note : Sorry Friends, Raat 11 baje se likhna shuru kiya to subah 8 baje update complete ho paya mushkil se....abhi office me khali samay mila to post kar raha hu.

From Update 201 to 250 will be reserved for 5th Janam ki Love Story.
Present ki story chalu rahegi kintu update 251 se...present ki kahani disturb na ho isliye din me present ki kahani chalegi aur raat me 5th janam ki love story.

Matlab ek update present ka hoga to dusra 5th janam ki story ka...Index updated hai aur aage bhi rahega, isse series barkarar rahegi.

 

[Raguhalkal]

Thanks anand bhai .... ap ke ish anmol word ke liye ....

wooo sahabzaaade ye shayari mere liye tha tum kyu beech me taang ada rahe ho waise mazaak tha me samjta hu ye her uss reader ke liye hai jo iss story ko dil o jaan se pyar karta ho include me

 

[Jitu kumar]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Punha kamal kar diya aapne.
Kapal malini ....
Kya vibhats drishy prakat kiya h aapne .
Batuk nath ki mritu to avashymbhavi hi thi .
Minakshi ko uski sadgati mil gyi or sajan-raj ko mani .
5th janam ki story shuru or yahan rajkumar ke roop me h Jitu kumar bhai.
Bhai badhai ho rajkumar banne pr.
Kya manoram drishy dikhaya h aapne.
Vartaman me , khatarnaak or abhi suspense ??
Ek baar fir se fantastic or lajawab update bhai.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Shukriya bhai

 

[Raguhalkal]

Raghu bhai aap aisa kyo soch rahe hain ki main aap se kabhi naraz ho sakta hu.....?
Main aap se to kya apne kisi bhi reader se kabhi naraz nahi ho sakta, bhai

Maine comment reply kisi narazagi me nahi kiya hai
Maine to ye kahna chaha hai apne dil ki baat ki bhai aap meri story ko read kar rahe hain ye mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hai.
Koun mera achcha reader hai aur koun nahi, iska aanklan main unke review se nahi karta mere bhai.

Mere kahne ka sirf itna matlab hai ki aap story padhte tahiye dost...review ka aana ya aana mere liye koi maayne nahi rakhta hai
Main review milne ke liye kahani likhta bhi nahi hu.
Maine story likhne ka kewal uddeshya bataya hai reply mein.

Aap mere kuch unn abhinn mitro me se ek hain raghu bhai jinke jagah mere hriday me hai....review aaye ya na aaye vo jagah kahi nahi jane wali yaar.

"Hamare Dil Ke Daftar Mein Tabadle Kaha Hain Dost,
Yaha Jo Ek Baar Aaya Bas Yahi Ka Ho Kar Rah Gaya."

Teek hai bhai and thak you so much maine apni zindagi me kaya kamaya ye tho pata nahi ek sache dost ko kamaaya ye baat me hamesha yaad rakhunga mere yaar such me dil pe haath rakhke kehta hu apki last ki do line ki shayari padke kasam se yaar anko ko nami laa diya mere bhai thank you muje itna importants dene ke liye iske liye me abhar rahunga mere yaar

 

[Sp bala]

wooo sahabzaaade ye shayari mere liye tha tum kyu beech me taang ada rahe ho waise mazaak tha me samjta hu ye her uss reader ke liye hai jo iss story ko dil o jaan se pyar karta ho include me

Ha ha .... Ha bhai jo ish story ko bahut like karta hai us mai se me bhi ek hu .... xossip mai update 1 se saajan ka follower tha , kabhi comment nahi Kiya , lekin comment kiye bagair reh nahi paya ....

Or oh shayari bilkul ap ke liye hi tha , or oh good ya bad review bala line ke saath mera exprience bahut kharab rahe chuka hai , isi liye green colour se quote Kiya ....

 

[Jitu kumar]

Update 202 & 252 will come tomorrow.

Intazar rahega bhai