Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Sandy307]

UPDATE-09
Suresh- beta tum dono se kuch baat karni thi
Tara- bataeye dad

Suresh- main soch raha tha ki tum dono thoda thoda business bhi sambhalne lago
Ashmita- lekin humara to college chal raha hai dad

Suresh- mujhe pata hai beta
Dekho Tara to final year me hai usko jada stress nahi hai aur tum bhi apne exams dene chali jaya karna

Tara- lekin dad aise achanak?
Suresh- achanak nahi beta main kafi dino se es baare me soch raha tha aur ab main buddha bhi hone laga hu sab kuch akele se handle nahi ho raha

Ashmita- haha mere dad ab buddhe hone lag gaye
Vaise bol to sahi rahe ho aap chehra murjha gaya hai aapka
Hahaha
Tara- dad aap humse kuch chhupa rahe ho

Suresh- ab main tumse kya chhupaunga?
Jitna jaldi business join karoge, samjhne lagoge utna hi acha hai na beta
Aur baad me bhi to tum dono ko hi dekhna hai esse acha abhi se start kar do
Ashmita- jab tak aap sach nahi batoge main kuch nahi karenge

Suresh- are ye hi sach hai beta
Tara- ashmita sahi bol rahi hai
Ab agar aap chahte ho ki hum business join kare to aapko hume sab sach sach batana padega

Suresh- tum dono to mujh par bilkul bhi trust nahi karte
Tara- aap sach nahi bataoge to kaise karenge?

Suresh- dekho beta jab aadmi tarakki karne lag jata hai na to uske dusman bahut ban jate hai fir vo sirf unse fayda kaise uthaya jaye ye hi sochta hai
Esliye bol raha hu ki business join kar lo yaha security issues bhi nahi hoga aur mera workload bhi kam ho jayega
Ashmita- aap esliye bol rahe ho na kyuki aapko dar hai ki hume kuch ho na jaye college me?

Suresh- ye bhi ek reason hai
Tumhe mana thodi kar raha hu main
Exam dene chale jana
Tara- theek haia hum soch ke batayenge lekin aap hume force nahi karoge?

Suresh- aaj tak kiya hai kya?
Ashmita- mere pyaare dad
Thank you

Uske baad vo dono suresh ke room se chale jate hai

Ab suresh ko pura yakeen tha ki uski dono betiya ha hi karegi kyuki usne baaton me fasaya hi aisa hai dono ko
Esliye thoda relax hogya tha vo

Dusri taraf

Naag- bhai vo ashmita kisi se pyaar karti thi bachpan me
Lucifer- to main kya karu?

Naag- bhai vo ladka fir kahi chala gaya Ashmita ko chhod ke
Lucifer- to?

Naag- esliye usse ladke pasand nahi hai ab
Vo sochti hai jisse vo pyaar karegi vo fir usse chhod ke bhag jayega
Lucifer- kuch jada hi chutiya hai insaan jitna maine socha tha usse bhi jada

Naag- bhai maine bata di information aapko ab mujhe nikalo es muskil se
Lucifer- Abe underground hojana kuch dino ke liye
Main bachaunga to fir kuch logo ko marna padega aur fir aur log teri marne aayenge

Naag- ye to dhokha hai
Aapne bola tha aap bachaoge mujhe
Lucifer- dekh mujhe ek hi tarika pata hai bas fir baad me mat bolna ki aur jada fasa diya maine tujhe

Naag- kaha underground hu?
Koe jagah to bata do
Lucifer- sale gunda tu hai ya main?

Naag- aap to hawan ho
Lucifer- to fir aana hell me kabhi achi achi jagah dikhaunga

Naag- bhai please kuch kar do
Mere sare addo par police ka kabja hai
Lucifer- thoda under ground rah karta hu main kuch

Fir lucifer phone kaat deta hai aur college chala jata hai lekin aaj dono behane to aaye hi nahi thi

Fir usse laga koe issue na ban gaya ho esliye bechara bhagte hue unke ghar ke bahar pahuch gaya

Ashmita aur Tara terrace par ghum rahi thi esliye unhone lucifer ko dekh liya tha aur lucifer ko bhi unki smell aagaye thi esliye usne bhi acting start kar di aur kisi se address puchne laga

Ashmita upar se lucifer ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi fir pata nahi usse kya hua ki vo niche aagye aur bahar nikal aaye

Tab tak lucifer guards se thoda door ja chuka tha aur ashmita uske piche piche ja rahi thi

Kuch hi door me ashmita ne lucifer ko pakad liya ya fir yu kaha jaye ki lucifer ne khud ko pakdva diya

Lucifer- aap mera picha kyu kar rahi ho?
Ashmita- ye to main tumse puchna chahti hu
Aur aap?

Lucifer- mujhe kaam hai to bye
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kya kar rahe the?

Lucifer- man nahi lag raha tha tumhe dekhe bina esliye dekhne aagya tha
Ashmita- aagaye na apni aukat me

Lucifer- tumhri problem kya hai?
Main apne kaam se ja raha hu vo bhi tumse dekha nahi ja raha kya?
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kyu khade the?

Lucifer- konsa ghar tha tumhra?
Ashmita- jada bano mat
Bahut ache se janti hu main tum jaise logo ko

Lucifer- kyu istemaal karti ho fir etne jada ko?
Ashmita- youuuu

Lucifer- jada you you you karne ki koe jarurat nahi hai
Tum ameer baap ki beti ho swarg jaisi zindagi hai aur meri narak jaisi
Esliye apne kaam se kaam rakho
Ashmita- vohi rakh rahi thi lekin fir tu aagya

Lucifer- ha ha vo bachpan wala to nahi aaya na?
Sala ek dhokha saha jata nahi ense aur bante aise hai jaise pata nahi kya hi kar denge
Bathi rahna puri zindagi aur rote rahna ki meri kya galti thi kyu chhod ke gaya vo mujhe kya main etni buri hu...
Yehi karna kyuki tum jaisi kamjor ladkiya sirf etna hi kar sakti hai
Baki ladkiyo ka bhi naam kharab kar rahi hai
Dobara mere samne mat aana nahi to jo thodi bahut izzat main rakh raha hu vo bhi utaar dunga puri

Aur lucifer etna sab sunane ke baad vaha se chala gaya lekin ashmita ke dil ke chithade uda gaya
Usne jo dard salo se daba rakha tha aaj vo ek jhatke me hara hogya
Usse ab vaha khada bhi nahi raha ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uske pairo me jaan hi nahi bachi
Aankhon se lagatar aashu bahe ja rahe the aur najare door jate lucifer par tiki hue thi

Vo tab tak vahi khadi rahi jab tak Tara usse dundte dundte vaha nahi aagaye ho fir badi muskil se usse samjha bujha kar ghar leke aaye

Lucifer ko bhi nahi pata tha ki usse kya hogya tha vo to bc vaha ashmita ko sahi salamaat dekhne aaya tha aur yaha usse dunia bhar ka gum deke chala gaya

Lekin abhi tak usse realize nahi hua tha ki usne kya kar diya tha

Vo ghum fir ke dusre raste se vapas aa raha tha
Raste se kuch chocolates vagra li aur vahi tahalne laga

Lucifer ka man to tha madhuri ma'am ke pass jane ka
Vo ma'am se kahi na kahi attract ho raha tha kyu?
Ye to pata nahi lekin ashmita ya Tara se kahi jada lucifer madhuri ma'am ki taraf khich raha tha aur usse ye bhi pata tha ki ma'am ki ek beti hai jispar lucifer ka galat asar pad sakta hai
Lekin jab insaano ke bich rahega aur soch bhi to insaano jaisi ho jayegi
KUTTI

Shandaar Update Bhai

Pita Ji Ne Order De Diya Par Pita Ji Ko Kon Bataye Agar Itni Aasani Se Bache Baat Maan Ne Lag Jaye To Fir Ham Jese Maal Na Fhoonk Rahe Hotey, Aur Agar Dono Me Se Kisi Ke Piche Gunde Hi Na Lage To Fir Hamare Lucifer Bhaiya Ka Keya Hoga Unka To Yaha Ana Hi Bekaar Ho Jaye Ga.

Ashmita Behanji Ki To Bin Baat Ke Vaat Laga Dali Apne Lucifer Bhaiya Ne Bhai Bichari Ka Dil Hi Tod Diya, Ab Ashmita Behanji Keya Kare Gi Keya Vo Bi Maal Fhoonk Apna Dukh Dur Kare Gi Ya Koyi Aur Tarika Apnaye Gi, Vasey Maal Vala Scene Badiya Hoga Dono Nadi Kinare Bethe Honge Aur Ek Suta Tun Maar Ek Main Marta Hun.

Naag To Mujey Lagta Backchodi Ke Liye Rakha Hai Aur Kisi Kam Nahi Aney Vala Vo.

Lucifer Ne Chocolate Le Hai To Khud To Vo Khane Nahi Vala Alisha Ko Hi Dega Matlab Lucifer Chachu Chocolate Le Kar Ja Rahe Hai.

Ma'am Ke Sath Mujey Lagta Jald Hi Kuch Hoga Itni Jaldi Attract Ho Raha Hai To Haweli Me Jald Hi Dikhe Gaye Dono.

Ab Bhai Jab Soch Hi Badal Rahi Hai To Insan Keyse Na Badle Ab Dekhte Hai Keya Keya Sochte Hai Apne Lucifer Bhaiya.

 

[jitutripathi00]

UPDATE-09
Suresh- beta tum dono se kuch baat karni thi
Tara- bataeye dad

Suresh- main soch raha tha ki tum dono thoda thoda business bhi sambhalne lago
Ashmita- lekin humara to college chal raha hai dad

Suresh- mujhe pata hai beta
Dekho Tara to final year me hai usko jada stress nahi hai aur tum bhi apne exams dene chali jaya karna

Tara- lekin dad aise achanak?
Suresh- achanak nahi beta main kafi dino se es baare me soch raha tha aur ab main buddha bhi hone laga hu sab kuch akele se handle nahi ho raha

Ashmita- haha mere dad ab buddhe hone lag gaye
Vaise bol to sahi rahe ho aap chehra murjha gaya hai aapka
Hahaha
Tara- dad aap humse kuch chhupa rahe ho

Suresh- ab main tumse kya chhupaunga?
Jitna jaldi business join karoge, samjhne lagoge utna hi acha hai na beta
Aur baad me bhi to tum dono ko hi dekhna hai esse acha abhi se start kar do
Ashmita- jab tak aap sach nahi batoge main kuch nahi karenge

Suresh- are ye hi sach hai beta
Tara- ashmita sahi bol rahi hai
Ab agar aap chahte ho ki hum business join kare to aapko hume sab sach sach batana padega

Suresh- tum dono to mujh par bilkul bhi trust nahi karte
Tara- aap sach nahi bataoge to kaise karenge?

Suresh- dekho beta jab aadmi tarakki karne lag jata hai na to uske dusman bahut ban jate hai fir vo sirf unse fayda kaise uthaya jaye ye hi sochta hai
Esliye bol raha hu ki business join kar lo yaha security issues bhi nahi hoga aur mera workload bhi kam ho jayega
Ashmita- aap esliye bol rahe ho na kyuki aapko dar hai ki hume kuch ho na jaye college me?

Suresh- ye bhi ek reason hai
Tumhe mana thodi kar raha hu main
Exam dene chale jana
Tara- theek haia hum soch ke batayenge lekin aap hume force nahi karoge?

Suresh- aaj tak kiya hai kya?
Ashmita- mere pyaare dad
Thank you

Uske baad vo dono suresh ke room se chale jate hai

Ab suresh ko pura yakeen tha ki uski dono betiya ha hi karegi kyuki usne baaton me fasaya hi aisa hai dono ko
Esliye thoda relax hogya tha vo

Dusri taraf

Naag- bhai vo ashmita kisi se pyaar karti thi bachpan me
Lucifer- to main kya karu?

Naag- bhai vo ladka fir kahi chala gaya Ashmita ko chhod ke
Lucifer- to?

Naag- esliye usse ladke pasand nahi hai ab
Vo sochti hai jisse vo pyaar karegi vo fir usse chhod ke bhag jayega
Lucifer- kuch jada hi chutiya hai insaan jitna maine socha tha usse bhi jada

Naag- bhai maine bata di information aapko ab mujhe nikalo es muskil se
Lucifer- Abe underground hojana kuch dino ke liye
Main bachaunga to fir kuch logo ko marna padega aur fir aur log teri marne aayenge

Naag- ye to dhokha hai
Aapne bola tha aap bachaoge mujhe
Lucifer- dekh mujhe ek hi tarika pata hai bas fir baad me mat bolna ki aur jada fasa diya maine tujhe

Naag- kaha underground hu?
Koe jagah to bata do
Lucifer- sale gunda tu hai ya main?

Naag- aap to hawan ho
Lucifer- to fir aana hell me kabhi achi achi jagah dikhaunga

Naag- bhai please kuch kar do
Mere sare addo par police ka kabja hai
Lucifer- thoda under ground rah karta hu main kuch

Fir lucifer phone kaat deta hai aur college chala jata hai lekin aaj dono behane to aaye hi nahi thi

Fir usse laga koe issue na ban gaya ho esliye bechara bhagte hue unke ghar ke bahar pahuch gaya

Ashmita aur Tara terrace par ghum rahi thi esliye unhone lucifer ko dekh liya tha aur lucifer ko bhi unki smell aagaye thi esliye usne bhi acting start kar di aur kisi se address puchne laga

Ashmita upar se lucifer ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi fir pata nahi usse kya hua ki vo niche aagye aur bahar nikal aaye

Tab tak lucifer guards se thoda door ja chuka tha aur ashmita uske piche piche ja rahi thi

Kuch hi door me ashmita ne lucifer ko pakad liya ya fir yu kaha jaye ki lucifer ne khud ko pakdva diya

Lucifer- aap mera picha kyu kar rahi ho?
Ashmita- ye to main tumse puchna chahti hu
Aur aap?

Lucifer- mujhe kaam hai to bye
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kya kar rahe the?

Lucifer- man nahi lag raha tha tumhe dekhe bina esliye dekhne aagya tha
Ashmita- aagaye na apni aukat me

Lucifer- tumhri problem kya hai?
Main apne kaam se ja raha hu vo bhi tumse dekha nahi ja raha kya?
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kyu khade the?

Lucifer- konsa ghar tha tumhra?
Ashmita- jada bano mat
Bahut ache se janti hu main tum jaise logo ko

Lucifer- kyu istemaal karti ho fir etne jada ko?
Ashmita- youuuu

Lucifer- jada you you you karne ki koe jarurat nahi hai
Tum ameer baap ki beti ho swarg jaisi zindagi hai aur meri narak jaisi
Esliye apne kaam se kaam rakho
Ashmita- vohi rakh rahi thi lekin fir tu aagya

Lucifer- ha ha vo bachpan wala to nahi aaya na?
Sala ek dhokha saha jata nahi ense aur bante aise hai jaise pata nahi kya hi kar denge
Bathi rahna puri zindagi aur rote rahna ki meri kya galti thi kyu chhod ke gaya vo mujhe kya main etni buri hu...
Yehi karna kyuki tum jaisi kamjor ladkiya sirf etna hi kar sakti hai
Baki ladkiyo ka bhi naam kharab kar rahi hai
Dobara mere samne mat aana nahi to jo thodi bahut izzat main rakh raha hu vo bhi utaar dunga puri

Aur lucifer etna sab sunane ke baad vaha se chala gaya lekin ashmita ke dil ke chithade uda gaya
Usne jo dard salo se daba rakha tha aaj vo ek jhatke me hara hogya
Usse ab vaha khada bhi nahi raha ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uske pairo me jaan hi nahi bachi
Aankhon se lagatar aashu bahe ja rahe the aur najare door jate lucifer par tiki hue thi

Vo tab tak vahi khadi rahi jab tak Tara usse dundte dundte vaha nahi aagaye ho fir badi muskil se usse samjha bujha kar ghar leke aaye

Lucifer ko bhi nahi pata tha ki usse kya hogya tha vo to bc vaha ashmita ko sahi salamaat dekhne aaya tha aur yaha usse dunia bhar ka gum deke chala gaya

Lekin abhi tak usse realize nahi hua tha ki usne kya kar diya tha

Vo ghum fir ke dusre raste se vapas aa raha tha
Raste se kuch chocolates vagra li aur vahi tahalne laga

Lucifer ka man to tha madhuri ma'am ke pass jane ka
Vo ma'am se kahi na kahi attract ho raha tha kyu?
Ye to pata nahi lekin ashmita ya Tara se kahi jada lucifer madhuri ma'am ki taraf khich raha tha aur usse ye bhi pata tha ki ma'am ki ek beti hai jispar lucifer ka galat asar pad sakta hai
Lekin jab insaano ke bich rahega aur soch bhi to insaano jaisi ho jayegi
KUTTI

Bahut hi shandaar update bhai. Ashmita ke purane jakhm hare kar diye Lucifer ne.
Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Waiting for next update brother...

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Very Nice Update Bro
Keep Posting

 

[Lone survivor]

Excellent update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice and lovely update....

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Kya yaar itna chota update
Update acha hai but suru hote hi khatam ho gaya ese to interest hi chala jata hai padhne ka please kuch karo

Bhai har roj bhi to deta hu ya fir aise kar lete hai ek din chhod ke dene lag jau fir bada size ho jayega
Aap decide karo kaise chahiye

 

[Lone survivor]

Lucifer jeisa teacher ho to say students ek dum sudhar jayenge........

Ya fir bahut jada bigad jaye dono possibilities hai bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thank you