Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Thanks mere doubt ka jawab dene ke liye

Bhai Kahey Sharminda Karte Ho Thanks Keh Ke Bhaiyo Me Chalta Hai.

Ek Bhai Dusare Bhai Ki Madad Nahi Kare Ga To Kon Kare Ga

 

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Bhai Kahey Sharminda Karte Ho Thanks Keh Ke Bhaiyo Me Chalta Hai.

Ek Bhai Dusare Bhai Ki Madad Nahi Kare Ga To Kon Kare Ga

Ye bol ke aapne dil jeet liya

 

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Ye bol ke aapne dil jeet liya

Dil Se Dil Ka Rishta Hai
Itni Aasani Se Nahi Tutey Ga,
Aag Lagani Hai To Kahi Aur Jayea
Mehboob Ne Nahi Bhai Ne Hath Thama Hai
Kan Bharne Se Bi Nahi Chutey Ga...

 

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Dil Se Dil Ka Rishta Hai
Itni Aasani Se Nahi Tutey Ga,
Aag Lagani Hai To Kahi Aur Jayea
Mehboob Ne Nahi Bhai Ne Hath Thama Hai
Kan Bharne Se Bi Nahi Chutey Ga...

इतनी सुंदर कि प्रशंशा में मेरे पास बोलने के लिए कुछ नही हैं।

 

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[Werewolf]

Me ye story regularly read karta tha par aab time nahi mil raha Sorry bhai 39 update ke baad meine koi bhi update read nahi kar paya... par bahat jald free ho jaunga... fir se pahele ki tarah read karta rahunga aur reviews deta rahunga...

Koi baat nahi bhai! Jab samay mile tab padh lena.

Jabardast mindblowing superbbb speechless update..........
keep posting bhai..........
waiting for next update...........

Thanks bro!

Rply plz

Kya reply chahiye bhai?

Ragni Duniya Ke Hisab Se Veer Ko Chalna Sikha Rahi Thi Kyoki Aj Kal Ki Duniya Me Jada Tar Log Apne Matlab Ke Liye Hi Rishte Banate Hai Aur Fir Apna Kam Hone Ke Baad Tu Kon Aur Main Kon.

Veer Anjan Hai Ki Usne Ragni Ke Dil Me Halchal Paida Kar Di Hai Ab Dekhna Hai Ye Halchal Keya Roop Leyti Hai Kyoki Abi Veer Ke Dil Me Ragni Ke Liye Kuch Eysa Nahi Hai Sayad Baki Veer Ke Dil Ke Bare Me Pari Aache Se Bata Sakti Hai.

Hmm! Pari Bata toh sakti hai Veer ke dil ka haal par filhaal Veer ne iss Pari waali personality ko apne mann ki baat padhne se mana kiya hua hai. Kyuki uski iss waali personality se Veer ki zyaada patri nahi khaati.

Dada Ji Ne Apni Jayedaat Sabme Bant Di Vivek Aur Bhumika Ko Chhod, Jisme Veer Ko Pyaar Ki Vaja Se 40% Hissa Mila Aur Pranjal Ko Apni Chalaki Se 40% Hissa Mila, Arohi Aur Kavya Ko Bi Veer Ki Vaja Se 10 10% Hisa Mil Hi Gayea, Vivek To Thera Hi Stupid Usey To Keya Hi Milna Tha, Bhumika Ko Apni Maa Ki Vaja Se Kuch Nahi Mila.

Jii haan!

Bhumika Ko Kuch Na Milne Sheweta Hil Gayi, Jab Ham Kuch Pane Ke Liye Jee Jaan Lagate Hai Aur Agar Vo Hame Na Miley To Dukh Hona Aur Gussa Hona Jayeaj Hai, Baat Ye Nahi Thi Ki Bhumika Ke Pass Kuch Nahi Tha Baat Ye Thi Ki Sabko Mila To Usey Bi Milna Chahiyea Tha.

Wahi! Upar se Shweta ne kya kuch nahi kiya tha bas thoda sa hissa paane ke liye. Sadma toh lagega hi.

Pranjal Ka Rang Vivek Ne Hi Dekh Liya Agar Vivek Ko Kuch Hissa Milta To Sayad Usey Pranjal Ki Soch Ke Bare Me Pata Nahi Chalta Par Ab Pranjal Ke Liye Vivek Kisi Kam Ka Nahi, Ab To Vo Arohi Aur Kavya Se Unke Hisse Ki Jayedaad Haradpne Ki Soch Raha Hai Uske Baad Vo Veer Ka Hissa Us Se Chin Ne Ka Plan Banaye Ga.

Planning kar ke baitha hai ladka.

Veer Ne Apne Stats Ko Almost Full Kar Diya Hai Jo Mere Liye Ab Bi Thoda Ajeeb Hai Par Dekhte Hai Writer Shaib Ne Kuch To Socha Hi Hoga.

Koi chinta ki baat nahi!

Ab To Party Me Dekhte Hai Pranjal Ya Veer Keya Karte Hai Dhamaka To Jarur Hoga Kisi Na Kisi Tarha Ka.

Mast Update Tha Bro

Dhanyavaad bhai!
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Update - 70 ~ Face Slapping!
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Ab tak...

Aur stats me appearance 75 dekhte hi Veer ke andar kaafi confidence tha aaj. Kyuki usse pata tha ki andar jaate hi kya hone waala tha.

'Let's go!'

[Yeah!!!]

Ab aage...

Aaj ki ye bhavya daavat, keval kehne ke liye daavat thi. Iska asli maqsad toh kuch aur hi tha. Veer jaanta tha ki uske Dada jii ne ye daavat kyu rakhi thi.

Taaki wo iss daavat me aane waale bade bade logo se ghul mil sake aur unse pehchaan bana sake. Veer ke Dada jii ab buzurg ho chuke the. Toh woh harr samay uske liye kisi badi family ke paas jaa kar usse introduce nahi karwaane waale the. Veer ab baccha nahi tha.

Isliye, aaj unhone apni zimmedaariyo se muqt hone ke baad Veer ko mauqa diya tha. Ab ye Veer ke upar tha ki woh kese iss mauqe ka fayda uthaata hai. Aur beshaq, Veer apne saamne gayi iss parosi hui thaal ko thukraane thodi waala tha. Bhale hi usse jaydaat me koi interest nahi tha. Par ab jab jaydaat ka kuch hissa usse mila tha toh woh uska poora ka poora istemaal karne waala tha.

Aur bina Dada jii ki iccha ke wo ye jaydaat ab kisi ke bhi hawaale nahi karne waala tha. Jab tak ki uske Dada jii khud uss se ye jaydaat nahi maangte, tab tak Veer ki ye jaydaat, uski apni thi. Kisi aur ki katayi nahi.

Car se utarte hi Veer uss aalishaan 5 star hotel ki entrance ke paas pohucha. Aur udhar pohuchte hi usse do jaani maani ladkiya wahi seedhiyo par khadi dikhaayi dii. Aur wo thi...

Arohi aur Kavya.

Jo aaj itni khubsoorat lag rahi thi ki harr andar jaata hua aadmi ek se do baar unhe zaroor dekh raha tha mud mud ke. Kavya maroon colour ki ek shining sii dress pehne hue thi toh wahi Arohi silver colour ki thighs tak aati ek dress me thi.

Veer ki presence ka abhaas hote hi jese hi Arohi aur Kavya ne usse dekha toh dono wahi jamm sii gayi.

Unn dono ko ek bada jhatka sa laga. Dono hi itna shock me thi ki kuch seconds tak toh kuch bol hi nahi paayi. Kyuki, aaj Veer unhe itna zyaada attractive lag raha tha ki dono ki hi nazre uske chehre par jami rahi. Veer ki handsomeness kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Aur uska asar, saaf dikh raha tha.

Arohi : V-Veeeer!??

Kavya : Bhaiya???

Dono ke hi muh khule ke khule reh gaye the.

Veer (smiles) : Kya hua? Party andar hai meri pyaari behno. Why are you guys waiting outside?

Arohi (blushes) : W-We... We were waiting for you.

Kavya (blushes) : Bh-Bhaiya! A-Aap aaj... Aaj boht handsome lag rahe ho.

Dono hi behno ki awaaz thoda ladkhada gayi. Paas se Veer ko dekh wo behad hi shock me thi. Veer ka appearance bhala itna kese badal gaya? Arre kal hi toh mile the wo sab. Fir ek raat me itna badlaav kese aa gaya Veer me?

'He... He looks so handsome!'

'Bh-Bhaiya? Bhaiya itne zyaada handsome kab se ho gaye? Kya mene bhaiya ko theek se nahi dekha tha ab tak? K-Kya bhaiya ne makeover karaaya hai?'

Kuch aisi hi thoughts unke mann me aa rahe the.

Kavya : Bhaiya? A-Aapne kuch lagaaya hai kya apne face pe?

Veer : Hmm? Nahi toh! Haha! Just the usual. Tum toh jaanti hi ho. Mein apne face pe utna dhyaan nahi deta. Bas, bath liya tha. Aur normal moisturizer. Nothing else.

Arohi (jalte hue) : Uske bawajood tumhari skin itni acchi hai. Aur upar se hum ladkiya din bhar apni skin par dhyaan deti hai. Then too, kahi pimples, toh kahi dark circles. I hate it. Sirf muh dhoke hi you... You look so smart. It's so unfair.

Kavya : Right didi!!! Bhaiyaaa~ I hate you!!!

*Thud*

Kavya : Ughhuuu~

Par iske pehle Kavya Veer se aur jal paati, Veer ne uske sarr par ek tapli de maari.

Veer : Let's go inside~

Kavya : Uhuuu~ Maara kyu!? Waaaa~

Iss baar bhi bechaari kuch na keh paayi kyuki Veer ne uske gulaabi narm se gaal ko kheech jo diya tha. Veer Kavya se behad pyaar karta tha. Aur ye choti moti nok jhok uske saath karne me usse boht accha lagta tha. Upar se, ahem Kavya ke gaal bhi boht soft the.

Veer : So? Kaun sii floor par hai?

Arohi : 7th floor!

Veer : Alright!

Teeno hi lift me jaate hue upar hotel ki 7th floor par pohuche aur lift khulte hi usme se baahar nikle.

Baahar nikal kar ek right turn liya aur bas, unhe entrance dikh gayi thi.

Entrance ke baahar 4 khubsoorat ladies ek sii dress pehne hue guests ko welcome kar rahi thi. 2 ladies phool ki pankhudiya phekte hue unka swaagat kar rahi thi toh wahi aage do khadi hui aane waale guests ke kapdo par perfume chidak rahi thi.

Kavya Veer ki baazu ko apne haatho me jakdi hui thi. Jese maano wo uska boyfriend ho. Ye harqat dekh Arohi ke bhi mann me kuch aaya. Par wo Veer ki dusri side hi chalti rahi. Shayad wo bhi Veer ka haath thaamna chaahti thi. But she decided against it.

Jese hi unn ladies ne Veer ko dekha toh pal bhar ke liye unki aankho me bhi chamak aa gayi.

Aur bade hi aadar ke saath muskuraate hue Veer ka swaagat karne lagi woh.

'Ye kitna handsome hai.'

'Haaye~ Ye ladka!'

Na jaane unke mann me kya kya chal raha tha. Par jese Arohi ne unn saari ladkiyo ke dekhne ke dhang ko mehsoos kar liya. Aur iss baar...

Arohi : Let's go fast~

Veer : Hmm?

Arohi Veer ka haath thaam usse jaldbaazi me andar le gayi. Andar jaate jaate wo palat ke unn ladkiyo ko ek look dena nahi bhuli.

Andar aate hi Veer ne dekha ki kya hi shandaar hotel thi ye. Waqai! Ye 5 star hotel kehlaane laayak hi thi.

Upar ceiling se latak rahe bade bade jhoomar itne mehnge aur aakarshak lag rahe the ki unki chamak hi logo ka dhyaan kheech rahi thi. Aur zameen par bicha hua wo shandaar kaaleen. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi Raja ki sabha ka main hall ho.

100 se bhi upar aadmi andar ghus chuka tha iss waqt. Aur uske bawajood, hall me itni space thi ki lag raha tha ki bas kuch hi aadmi aaye hai.

Veer Arohi aur Kavya jese hi andar aaye, andar maujood logo ki bhi nazre unn par padi. Aur unme se jo Veer ki age ki ladkiya thi wo aankho me chamak liye usse dekhne lagi.

Aaj Veer ne personally customized ek high end tuxedo pehna hua tha. Uska lamba seedha aur lean figure ek dum perfect tareeqe se unn kapdo ke upar se jhalak raha tha. Ekdum fit!

Kaali ghani eyebrows, aankho me tej, hontho pe halki muskurahat, kaale wavy medium length baal, aur halki beard me wo kisi celebrity se kam nahi lag raha tha aaj.

Haar khubsoorat ladkiyo se aaj uske eye contacts ho rahe the. Aur kayi toh lagataar usse hi dekhe jaa rahi thi. Uske bagal me khadi Arohi aur Kavya bhi ye notice kar rahi thi.

Toh gusse me Kavya ne apna muh bilkul kisi pufferfish ki tarah phula liya.

"Hmph~ Bhaiya yaha nahi khade hote, chalo kahi aur." Kavya ne Veer ke haath ko kheechte hue bola.

"Hmm~ Hmm~" Aur Arohi bhi uski baat se sehmat hote hue Veer ko kheech ke thoda aage le gayi.

Kyuki ab keval ladkiya hi nahi, kuch shaadi shuda middle aged aunties toh wahi newly married bhabhiya bhi ab Veer ko taadne lagi thi. Arohi aur Kavya isliye jald se jald Veer ko waha se le bhaagi.

Abhi wo thoda hi aage aaye the ki itne me ek Kavya jitni height ki ladki unke paas aayi, "Kavya!!!!"

Kavya : Arre!?? Kritika tum aa gayi!?

Kritika : Haan! Ahahaha~

Ye Kritika Kavya ki classmate thi. Wo bhi Kavya ke jese hi cute thi par wo thodi aur mature thi Kavya se. Dono hi shayad agal bagal baithate the college me. Veer unn dono ko dekh khush tha. Kam se kam uski choti behan apni college life acche se vyateet toh kar rahi thi. Naye dost toh bana rahi thi. Uski tarah nahi, jaha uska college me koi ata pata nahi tha. Aur na hi koi dost.

Kritika (khuspusaate hue) : W-Wow! Kavya! Y-Ye tumhaare bhaiya hai? Tumhare cousin bhaiya toh boht handsome hai. M-Mujhe introduce karwao na.

Kavya : Umm... Bhaiya! Ye meri friend hai Kritika aur Kritika ye mere sabse favourite bhaiya, Veer!

Veer (smiles) : Nice to meet you!

Kritika (blushes) : N-Nice to meet you t-too!!!!

Kavya : Huh!? Kritika? Tum itna kyu sharma rahi ho?

Kritika : Umm... Wo... K-Kya aap mujhe apna insta account bata sakte ho?

Veer : Hmm? Well sure!

Aur Veer ne apni Insta ID ka QR code khol ke Kritika ko scan karne de diya. Usse scan karte hi ab wo Veer ko follow karne lagi thi.

Kritika : Th-Thank you!

Kavya : Huh? Bhaiyaaaaa??

Kritika : Mein chalti hu. Kavya! You enjoy! Hum kal milte hai college me.

Aur Kritika waha se khushi me bhaag gayi. Kavya bechaari usse bas dekhti hi reh gayi.

Kavya : Bhaiya??? Apne apni ID usse kyu dii?? Haan? I hate yo.... Waaaaaaaaa~

Ek baar fir uska sentence adhura hi reh gaya kyuki uske gulaab gaal Veer ke haatho me the.

Veer : By the way, tumhari friend yaha kese?

Kavya (gaal malte hue) : Wo... Dada jii ne mujhe permission de dii thi ki mein apni kuch friends ko bula sakti hu. Hehehe~ Special treatment you know.

***

Veer Arohi aur Kavya ko kuch derr akela chorr aur aage badhte hue jab aaya toh usse ek bada hi parichit chehra dekhne ko mila.

Veer ne apni bauhe usse dekh ke upar kari.

Iss waqt, uske saamne koi aur nahi navy blue suit pehne wo khada hua tha.

Pranjal!!!

Veer ne apni nazre ghumaayi toh usse aur bhi kuch familiar faces dekhne ko mile.

Vivek jo side me khade hoke kisi couple se baat kar raha tha. Veer ke chacha chachi jo kisi buzurg uncle aunty se baat kar rahe the.

Toh wahi Veer ne dekha ki dur Shweta baithi hui thi ek chair par aur uske bagal se khadi Bhumika uss se kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Wahi Veer ke pita abhi abhi aaye the aur entrance ke paas khade hote hue sabhi ko welcome kar rahe the.

Abhi uske Dada jii ka aana baaki tha. Bas kuch derr me hi wo yaha aane waale the.

Par filhaal... Pranjal!!!

Veer ne dekha ki uske bagal me 5 se 6 log khade hue the aur sabhi badi hi hassi khushi se baat kar rahe the. Shayad Pranjal ne apni bhole bhed ki costume pehn lii thi. Meethe bol fek raha tha lagta hai wo unpe.

'I'll have to take the chances.' Veer ne mann me socha.

[Yeah! You better! Warna wo Pranjal apni meethi meethi chikni chupdi baato se tumhaare future potential business partners tumhare haatho se chhina ke le jaega.]

'Don't worry!'

[Hmm~]

Veer ki intelligence already 90 paar nikal chuki thi. Iss waqt wo boht hi calm tha. Ekdum shaant. Bas sherr ki tarah apne shikaar ko jese dekh raha tha uss par hamla karne se pehle.

Aur tabhi...

Pranjal ne bhi usse mud ke dekha. Aur jese dono ki nazre aapas me bhidte hi ek sparking sii hui ho maano. Dono hi apni nazro se ek dusre ko aazma rahe the. Jaanch rahe the.

Bhale hi Pranjal ek nihaayti kapti insaan tha. Par uski pehchaan toh thi. Boht pehchaan thi. Uske baat karne ka dhang bhi accha tha.

Of course! Ye toh swabhaavik sii baat thi. After all, wo dikhne me bhi smart tha. Veer jitna nahi par wo bura nahi dikhta tha. Toh logo ka uski vaani aur uske haav bhaav ke parti rujhaan rakhna, ye swabhaavik tha.

Pranjal ka charm aisa tha ki kuch derr andar aane ke baad hi usne 5 se 6 naye logo se pehchaan bhi bana lii thi. Obviously, wo charm jhootha charm tha. Keval ek dikhaava. Par uska dikhaava itna on point rehta tha ki acche se accha aadmi usse parakh nahi paata tha. Jab Veer ke Dada jii Manorath khud usse nahi jaan paaye toh bhala koi aur kese jaan sakta tha uski asliyat?

Koi Mr. Bhargav Pranjal se baat kar rahe the. Veer ne pehle hi unhe check kar liya tha. Aur unhone jab Veer aur Pranjal ko aapas me nazre milaate dekha toh wo bol uthe, "Arre? Ye!? Manorath jii ka pota hai na?"

Veer unki baat sunn, naturally usse aage jaana hi pada.

Veer (smiles) : Jii namaste! Mein Veer! Jii haan! Aapne sahi kaha. Mein unka sabse chota pota hu.

Mr. Bhargav (smiles) : Kya baat hai! Dono pote kitne smart hai Manorath jii ke. Wo mere pita ke khaas dost rahe hai. Ab mere pita toh nahi rahe. Par mere bhi boht acche sambandh hai unse. Haha~

Veer : Jii!

Mr. Bhargav : Aur sunao aap? Kya chal raha hai beta aapka? Education me?

Veer kuch keh paata ki tabhi Pranjal ne uske gale me haath daala aur khud keh utha.

Pranjal : Hahaha!? Ye!? Uncle! Veer toh science student hai. Iski engineering chal rahi hai. Commerce wala toh mein hu. Mein business me active rehta hu zyada. Hahaha~

Veer muskuraaya aur usne agle hi pal apne kandhe se Pranjal ka haath neeche kiya aur bola,

Veer : Mein science se zaroor hu Uncle. But at the same time, mein apna khud ka business bhi kar raha hu. Dono cheeze parallel me chal rahi hai.

Mr. Bhargav (surprised) : Ohhh!? Ye toh acchi baat hai. Acchi baat hai waqai...

Pranjal (smiles) : Mere chote bhai! FOOD TRUCK ka business bhi koi business hota hai?

Pranjal ne kehte hue 'Food truck' par kaafi zorr dete hue kaha. Jese bataana chaah raha ho ki Manorath ka chota pota kisi kaam ka nahi hai aur itna chota kaam kar raha hai woh.

Veer (smiles) : Aadmi chote business se hi apne business ko bada banaata hai bhai. Kyu? Mr. Bhargav? Mene sahi kaha na? After all, aapke pita jii ne bhi toh tiles ka business ek choti sii dukaan se shuru kiya tha na? Yadi aaj aapka itna bada tiles ka business hai toh kya aap unn dino ko bhula sakte ho? Jaha se aapke iss mazboot business ki shuruaat hui thi.

Mr. Bhargav Veer ki baat sunte hi sann reh gaye the. Unhe Veer se mile abhi kuch hi seconds hue the aur uske bawajood Veer ko itna sab pata tha unke baare me. Of course! Ye sab toh Veer ko khaali Check karke pata lag gaya tha. Par Mr. Bhargav ye nahi jaante the ki Veer ke paas koi system hai.

Mr. Bhargav (surprised) : Huh?? N-Nahi! Bilkul nahi! Mein aaj bhi apne pita jii ke unn beete dino ki mehnat ki daat deta hu. Unhe yaad karta hu. Unhi ke kaaran toh aaj mera itna naam hai. P-Par tumhe itna kuch pata hai mere baare me? Hahaha~ Manorath jii ka chota pota waqai boht knowledgeable hai. Tum boht aage jaoge beta.

Veer (smiles) : Jii Thank you Uncle! I wish you the same. Aapka business bhi aage badhta rahe. By the way, can I have your business card Mr. Bhargav?

Mr. Bhargav : Hahaha~ Arre arre why not? Tum bejhijak mujhe contact kar sakte ho. Koi bhi zaroorat pade toh mujhe yaad kar lena. Okay?

Veer (smiles) : Thank you!

Bagal me khade Pranjal saamne chal rahe conversation sunn ke aisa hakka bakka ho gaya tha ki uski samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye sab kese ho gaya. Usne apne chehre par toh koi bhaav nahi badle, bas smile karte hue dekhta raha. Par andar mann me jese bhuchaal sa aa gaya tha uske.

Uske saamne se Veer uske ek future partner ko jese chheen ke le gaya tha. Gussa toh behad aa raha tha usse.

Veer jese hi mud ke jaane ke liye hua toh Pranjal ne uske kandhe par haath rakha. Aur bade hi dheere se swar me uske kaan ki orr jhukte hue bola,

"Zyaada khush nahi hote Veer! Zyaada udte nahi. Kyuki jo jitna uucha udta hai na, wo zameen par bhi utni hi zorr se girta hai."

Pranjal usse aagah karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Ki hawa me udna aur khayaali pulaav pakaana acchi baat nahi. Warna baad me muh ki khaani padti hai.

Par tabhi, Veer ne bhi uske kaan ke paas aate hue dheere se kaha, "Dragons soar into the sky. Not the insects."

Aur wo Pranjal ko wahi chorr nikal gaya.

Pranjal ko jese apne shabdo se muh par tamaacha maar ke gaya tha Veer. Pranjal kehna chaah raha tha ki Veer hawa me na ude warna neeche aa girega.

Toh wahi Veer ne usse ye kaha ki Dragons hawa me hi udte hai, keede nahi. Ek prakaar se Veer Pranjal ko ye bataana chaah raha tha ki wo Dragon ke bhaati tha jo aakaash me uchaaiyo me udne ke liye paida hua tha. Na ki unn tucch keedo ki tarah tha jo bas nichle starr par mandraate rehte the. Dusre shabdo me wo Pranjal ko neeche mandraane waala keeda bhi keh ke gaya tha.

Aur ye baat Pranjal ko samajh aate hi, uski mutthi apne aap gusse me kass gayi. Daant meesne laga wo par uske bawajood, sabke saamne uski smile abhi bhi maujood thi. Khud ke bhaav chhupaane ka talent bhi koi Pranjal se seekhe.

'Mujhe laga hi tha tum koi na koi harqat zaroor karoge Veer. Isliye, I came prepared. Tum dekhte jao. Kya haalat karta hu mein tumhaari abhi.'

Sochte hue Pranjal ne apne jeb me kuch tatola aur fir waha se nikal gaya.

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Kuch samay beeta aur ab Veer ke Dada jii ka aagman ho chuka tha. Unhe zyaada shor sharaaba pasand nahi tha. Isliye, wo late hi aane waale the aur kuch derr sabhi se milke waapas lautne waale the. Unhone ye party mainly Veer aur Pranjal ke liye hi rakhi thi.

Jese hi Manorath andar aaye sabhi unka swaagat karne lage. Aur unse ghul milkar baatein karne lage. Veer dur khada bas sab kuch dekh raha tha ki itne me hi uske Dada jii ne usse dekha aur uske paas gaye aur dheere se puche, "Kya bahu nahi aayi?"

Veer : Jii nahi Dada jii! Mene kaha bhi tha ki aapne bulaaya hai. Par unhone kaha ki unse nahi aaya jaega. Keh rahi thi ki Dada jii se kehna mujhe maaf kar de.

Manorath (niraash hote hue) : Koi baat nahi! Kya tum mile kisi se yaha par?

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Manorath (smiles) : Boht acche! Aise hi aage badhte raho. Mata rani sab kushal mangal kar dengi.

Aur Manorath fir hall ke center me chale gaye jaha sabhi se wo baatein karne lage.

Aur dekhte hi dekhte gifts dene ka silsila shuru ho chuka tha.

Veer chair par baitha hua kuch soch raha tha ki itne me hi uske bagal se aake Pranjal dusri chair par baith gaya.

Dono ne hi ek dusre par ek nazar maari aur uske baad dono me se hi koi kuch nahi bola.

'Just wait Veer! I'll show you ki mere se panga lena kyu mehnga padega tujhe.'

Pranjal ne sochte hi apne jeb me se tatol ke ek pudiya nikaali. Uske chehre par ek kapti muskuraahat thi.

Pranjal : Waiter!!! Do cold drinks idhar!

Veer : Hmm?

Pranjal ne ek waiter ko dekh bulaaya jo cold drinks guests ko serve kar raha tha aur uss se do glass rakhwa liye.

Pranjal : Chote bhai! Tum shayad sahi the. Dragons really soar into the sky. And of course, mera bhai bhi ek dragon ke samaan hai. Jo ab aage badhta rahega. Aur uski aur kal hume property milne ki khushi me... Here's a toast. Ab wine ya beer toh nahi hai. Toh ye cold drink se hi kaam chalaana padega. Haha~ Hmm? Dada jii ne gifts accept karna start kar diya lagta.

Usne cold drink dene ki baat karte hue, Dada jii ki orr Veer ka dhyaan bhatkaaya aur badi hi chaaplusi se chupke se wo pudiya cold drink me daal dii.

Itni bheed me ghanta koi uske actions ko notice kar raha tha.

Uske baad wo waapas se apne topic par aa gaya.

Pranjal : Arre lo Veer!

Usne Veer ki side waali drink me wo pudiya daal le Veer se peene ko kaha. Veer kyuki Pranjal ke action ko nahi dekh paaya tha isliye usse nahi pata tha ki isme kya mila hua tha.

Isme constipation ka drug mila hua tha. Wahi shit drug jo Jassi ko diya gaya tha jab Kaera ko kidnap kiya gaya tha. Bas, farq ye tha ki Pranjal ka ye drug aur bhi strong tha. Itna ki yadi koi isse le le, toh kuch hi derr me lambi lambi shehnaaiya bajna tay tha.

Par Veer kaun tha? Uska intelligence 95 pe tha. Pranjal ka ab wo sly intelligence Veer ke intelligence ke muqaable kuch bhi nahi tha.

Drink dekhte hi Veer muskuraaya aur...

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Cold drink.
Bio : A cold drink with added constipation drug. Do not consume it.]

Bas, itna sa padhte hi Veer ko saari planning ke baare me pata lag gaya tha jo Pranjal uske peeth peeche kar raha tha.

'I'll show you brother, how it's done!'

[Just smack him in the face. This bastard~]

Veer : Waqai! Gifts toh dene lage hai log. Hmm? Par wo kaun hai?

Iss baar Veer ne achraj me Dada jii ki orr dekhte hue kaha. Aur behsaq, Pranjal bhi uski nazro ko follow karte hue waha dekha.

Aur jese hi wo palta,

*Swap*

Veer ne agle hi pal waapas se apni glass Pranjal ke glass se exchange kar dii.

Pranjal : Ohh! Wo lady? Hmph~ Interior decor ke showrooms hai unke. Already unka visiting card hai mere paas.

Pranjal ne jeb me se ek safed card nikaalte hue Veer ko chamkaane ki koshish kii.

Par Veer bas muskuraa raha tha.

Veer (smiles) : That's so good for you!

Pranjal (mann me) : Of course Veer! Baahar se tu smile kar raha hai. Par andar hi andar jal raha hoga tu. Hahaha~

Pranjal : Arre ye kya? Tumne drink nahi lii?

Veer : Aap ne ek ghooth nahi piya aur mujhe drink karwa rahe ho?

Pranjal : Arre isme kya? Ye lo!

Kehte hue Pranjal gataagat saari cold drink pee gaya. Ye soch ke ki drugged waali drink Veer ke side hai. Aur usne jo pee wo normal thi. Par usse kya pata tha ki kuch derr me hi uske pait me bhuchaal aane waala tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab aapne pee hai toh mujhe toh peeni hi padegi.

Aur fir...

*Gulp* *Gulp* *Gulp*

Veer dheere dheere saari drink pee gaya. Jese jese glass me maujood drink Veer ke pait me jaa rahi thi, wese wese Pranjal ki muskuraahat bhi felti jaa rahi thi.

Pranjal : Good! Hahaha! Ye hui na baat!

Veer : Ye taste kuch ajeeb sa kyu hai?

Pranjal : H-Huh? N-Nahi toh? Mujhe toh ekdum sahi laga.

Veer : Aisa? Well...

Pranjal : A-Anyways! Ab jald hi hamaari baari hai gifts dene ki. Be prepared.

Aur Pranjal sharaarti bhari muskaan lete hue waha se nikal gaya. Veer toh jese bas usse chomu bana raha tha. Usne jaan bujh ke aisa kaha tha taaki Pranjal ko lage ki waqai Veer ne wo drugged drink pee lii. Jab ki aisa koi case hi nahi tha. Veer toh perfectly fine tha. Par Pranjal? Not so much!

Arohi aur Kavya bhi idhar udhar sabse milke aa chuki thi aur Veer ke saath hi aake khadi ho gayi.

Kuch derr ke baad jab sabhi ne gifts de diya. Toh bas ab parivaar waale hi gifts dene ke liye bache hue the.

Par uske pehle Manorath kuch kehna chaahte the.

Mic ke aate hi unhone sabhi guests ki orr dekha aur bolna shuru kiya, "Aaj!!! Aaj mere liye... Ye bada hi khushi ka mauka hai. Mein... Jo apni saari zindagi me aap jese itne preeya logo se jud paaya, ye mere liye saubhaagya ki baat hai. Inn beete saalo me... Jo kuch bhi... Jo kuch bhi mene kamaaya tha. Unke do bade hisse mere pote Veer aur Pranjal ke naam kar chuka hu mein. Aaj! Aaj mein apni iss zimmedaari se muqt ho chuka hu. Aap sabhi yaha aaye, mera maan rakha... Uske liye boht boht Dhanyavaad! Aur... Mere pote... Ye mere do pote, mere liye heera hai. Inki raah me aap inka ho sake toh zaroor saath dena. Bas! Yahi kehna chaahunga. Dhanyavaad!!!"

Aur taaliyo se poora hall goonj utha.

Arohi : It's time for our gift.

Kavya : Hmm hmm! Chalo bhaiya!

Veer : Wait!

Arohi : Hmm?

Veer : Pranjal bhaiya gift dene jaa rahe hai. Look! I think unka gift boht bada hai.

Veer ki baat sunn dono hi behne stage ki taraf dekhne lagi.

Pranjal waqai kaafi kuch cheeze leke aaya tha.

Jaise hi wo muskuraate hue stage par chadha...

*Gudgudgud*

"Huh!??"

Uska pait andar se gudgud hua. Shayad drug ne apna kaam karna shuru kar diya tha.

Andar se pait aisi marod maar raha tha uska ki uss se khada nahi hua jaa raha tha achanak se.

Wo apne face ke expressions ko chhupaate hue aage badha. Kyuki ab photos bhi click ho rahi thi. Itni lights me aur itni bheed me aaj pehli baar Pranjal ko andar se dhak dhak ho rela tha.

"Shit!!"

Wo dheere dheere aage aaya. Aur tabhi...

Uski gaand se jese koi cheez baahar nikalne ka prayaas karne lagi. Pranjal ka muh aisa tha jese abhi usne koi kadvi dawaai kha lii ho.

Apni gaand ko sikod ke wo aage badha aur usne bolna shuru kiya,

"Y-Ye gift... Y-Ye... Ughh! Special gift... Ye... Mein... Dada jii ke liye... Dada... Dada jii ke liye..."

Aur tabhi...

*Phuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

"Huh?"

"Hmm?"

Ek zordaar awaaz Pranjal ki gaand se aayi.

Aisa laga maano kisi ne chinghaada baja diya ho. Ya bhopu...

"Cough cough!!! Mein ye dada jii ke liye..."

Pranjal ne khaaste hue apni shehnaai ki dhun ko cover up karne ki koshish kii, par sab bekaar tha kyuki agle hi pal...

*Phuuuuuuusssssssss*

*Phuuuuiiiiiiiiiii*

*Phurururururuuuuuuuu*

Maano jese kisi ne aatishbaazi shuru kar dii ho. Upar se jidhar wo khada tha, uske theek peeche Manorath ne apna mic ka stand rakha tha. Mic seedha Pranjal ki gaand ki orr focused tha.

Shor hone ke bawajood sabhi ne wo awaaz suni thi.

Suni kya, jo aas paas Pranjal ke khade the, unhone toh soongh bhi lii.

"Yuuuukkkkk!!! Gwaaakkkk!! Chhheeee~"

"Ye kya hai??? Kisi ne paada.... Chheee~"

"Arre... Ye... Isne... Isne paada."

"Aise mauke par... Aisi harqat! Chhee~ Yukkk!! Mujhe vomiting aa rahi hai."

"Mummyyyyy badbu aa rahi hai... Waaaaa~"

Uske peeche khade log sab uss se dur bhaag gaye.
Koi naak pakad ke khada tha toh koi dur bhaag raha tha.

Aur Pranjal apni roti hui shaqal bana ke forun hi Dada jii ko gift Diya aur seedha washroom ki orr bhaag gaya.

Arohi aur Kavya wahi khadi hairaan aur sharminda reh gayi thi. Manorath khud behad sharminda the. Vivek khade hoke muskura raha tha. Toh wahi Karunesh gusse me tha. Aur Brijesh Veer ko dekh raha tha. Shayad aaj wo apne bete par proud tha?

Uske baad Veer ki baari jab aayi toh Veer ne Dada jii ko ek bhagwaan jii ki murti gift kii.

Sabke gifts lene ke baad finally, khaana shuru hua aur Banquet ke khatam hone ke baad sabhi jaane lage.

Par shuru se ant tak Pranjal kahi nazar nahi aaya.

Shayad wo bathroom me alag alag dhunn bana raha tha.

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Hotel ki hi terrace par iss waqt Arohi khadi hui thi.

Mand mand hawaein chal rahi thi aur uske baalo ko hawa me lehra rahi thi.

"You are alone here?"

Tabhi uske peeche se ek awaaz aayi toh woh mudi, paaya ki Veer khada hua tha.

Arohi : Hmm! Bas kuch nahi! Tum yaha?

Veer : Aapko dhundte hue hi aaya.

Arohi : Ohhh!

Veer : You look tensed!?

Arohi : Aaj... Dada jii ko sharminda hona pada.

Veer (smiles) : Ohh you mean!? Pranjal waali baat?

Arohi : Hmm~ But...

Veer : ?

Arohi : Why do I think ki tumhe pehle se pata tha?

Veer (smiles) : Of course mujhe pehle se pata tha.

Arohi (shocked) : Huh!?

Veer dheere se Arohi ke kaan ke paas aaya aur bola, "That drink was made for me."

Arohi : Hmm?

Par Arohi kuch samajh nahi paayi.

Veer : Pranjal! He mixed a constipation drug in my drink and wanted to give that to me.

Aur ab Arohi ko jese saari baat samajh aayi. Hairat ke maare uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Arohi : He... He.. what!?

Veer (smiles) : Yes! But I exchanged mine with his drink. Aur uske baad... Bas pataakho ki awaaz thi.

Arohi bhauchakki sii Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uske baad wo shaant hui aur muskuraayi.

Arohi : You did him good! He deserves it.

Par ek pal ke liye wo ghabra bhi gayi. Kahi ye sab Veer ke saath hua hota toh? Veer ko usne dekha toh paaya ki Veer ekdum confident nazar aa raha tha. Aur wo neeche cars me jaate hue guests ko dekh raha tha.

Pata nahi kyu, par Arohi ko aaj Veer boht hi attractive lag raha tha.

Aur wo aage badhi... Apne honth leke... Uske gaal ki taraf...

Ki tabhi...

"Umm... Wese..."

Aur Veer mud gaya.

Veer : !????

Arohi : Mm!????

Veer aur Arohi dono ki nazre phati ki phati reh gayi thi. Kyuki...

Dono ke honth aapas me jude hue the. Arohi toh keval uske gaal ko chumna chaahti thi. Par utne me hi Veer palat gaya tha... Aur nateeja...

Arohi : Aaahhh!

Wo hadbada ke peeche hati aur bina Veer ko dekhe hi bhaag gayi.

Veer bechaara bas apni thodi kaapti hui ungli se apne honth par firaata reh gaya aur mann me bas yahi kehta raha...

'It... It was an accident!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Ye mega update hai. 5k words bhailog.
Like thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka.

Achchi hawa nikali Veer n Pranjal ki or sahi jagah se maza aagaya padh
Badhiya shaandaar lajawab update bhai

 

[Werewolf]

Ye Bi Sahi Kaha Bhai Apne Agar Usey Maa Ke Pyaar Ke Bare Me Maa Ka Pyaar To Chhodo Usey To Kabi Kisi Se Pyaar Mila Hi Nahi, Usey To Aj Tak Nafrat Hi Mili Thi Vo Bi Apno Se To Usey Keya Pata Pyaar Keya Hota Hai, Abi Pyaar Aur Apne Pan Ke Bare Me Jaan Ne Laga Hai Par Ek Maa Ke Pyaar Ke Bare Me Usey Abi Bi Kuch Pata Hi Nahi To Isi Liye Vo Koyi Bada Kadam Nahi Utha Pa Raha Par Mujey Lagta Hai Jald Hi Vo Apni Maa Ko Dund Lega, Jab Power Miley Gi To Unse Benefit To Jarur Hoga.

Jii haan! Maa ke pyaar ko jab Veer mehsoos karega pehli baar toh woh dekhne laayak hoga. Emotional hoga thoda.

Dekhte Hai Keya Interesting Padhne Ke Liye Pesh Karte Ho Par Ek Baat To Ab Tak Ki Story Padhne Ke Baad Yakeen Se Kahi Ja Sakti Hai Ki Kuch Maze Dar Hi Miley Ga.

Of course!

Ab To Sath Jud Chuke Hai Itni Aasani Se Nahi Chodey Ge, Baki Rahi Review Ki Baat To Update Jesa Lage Ga Review Vasey Hi Miley Ga, Aache Ko Bura Aur Bure Ko Aacha Bolna Hame Nahi Ata.

Jo ki acchi baat hai.
Kyuki mein bhi aisa hu.
Mein boht picky reader hu. Ek baar yadi kisi kahani ko padhta hu toh boht immerse hoke padhta hu. Yadi usme 10 acchiya nikaalta hu toh fir 10 buraaiya bhi. Bareeki se judge karne me jo mil jaaye.

लाज़वाब और बेहतरीन प्रस्तुति रही
प्रंजल और वीर
जाहिर सी बात है वीर बाजी मारेगा जिससे प्रंजल के मन में और भी जहर भर जाएगा
अब किसी भी लिहाज से वीर कोई आम नहीं रहा है l बेशक परी जानती है पर है तो अब खास हो ना
बढ़िया बहुत badjiy

Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai! Pranjal ab shaant nahi baithega.

Wow, to ab Veer har tarah se strong ho chuka hai bas property se thoda dheela tha wo bhi ho gaya. Ab dekhna hai ki wo Prajal ko uske hi game mein kaise harata hai. Superb update

Abhi harr tarah se strong nahi hua bhai. Abhi kaafi jagah usse apni pakad banaani hai.
Anyways! Thanks bro! Keep supporting!

वाह अंत में stats देखके मज़ा आ गया। अब वीर को सिर्फ 104 अंक जोड़ने है अपने stats में, यानी की उसे 208 अंक चाहिए। इतना तो वो किसी भी छोटे मोटे mission से कमा लेगा। क्यों लेखक साहब सही है ना।

Ye baat toh sahi hai jii! 208 ank ka upyog karte hi uske stats full ho jaenge. Par kya yahi ant hai?

 

[Werewolf]

Vivek be like : Koyi poochhe ke hamse khata kya huyi, kya se kya ho gaye dekhte dekhte.

Update ki shuruaat huyi Ragini aur Veer ke beech chalte us scene se.. aage badhne se pehle update ke end mein batayi gayi Ragini ki favourability ko dhyan mein rakhna zaroori hai... Favourability of 70 means a lot, khaskar tab jab Kewal Suman, Juhi aur Kavya ka number hi us se bada hai... It clearly shows that it's not normal between Ragini and Veer... The relationship there was mentioned as close friend and the two are really good friends for sure..

Of course! Roz ke interaction se aur unke beech choti moti nok jhok se unke beech ka rishta behtar toh hona hi tha. Plus, kuch aise scenes bhi dikhaaye gaye hai jinme wo dono Ek devar bhabhi se kahi zyaada close lag rahe the. Isliye favourability toh badhni hi thi.

Ragini finds Veer as the person she can confide in, the person with whom she can share her feelings... Aur jo gesture Veer ka tha, that touch on her waist, that kiss.. I'm speculating a turn of events between the two very soon... Especially taking into consideration that Ragini may be sending the divorce notice soon to Vivek... Filhal Ragini ko bhi shayad realise nahi hua hai ke exactly wo Veer ke liye kya feel karti hai but it's just a matter of a couple of conversations between the two, and Ragini would be clear that she has started Falling for Veer...

That's true! Veer has ignited something inside Ragini. Few conversations and something might happen between the two.

Idhar as I was expecting, Balhaar Doctors ke chakkar laga raha hai ke uska haath theek ho jaaye but Limbo Skill ki badaulat aur saath hi jo laalach Veer ne use diya hai to make him the new Slogan.. Balhaar Veer ka paaltu ban ne waala hai... And If, If Slogan is killed by Veer, which is obvious & in between Balhaar becomes a trustworthy person then Veer will have his own new gang, that would be the biggest thing he has achieved till now, of course it seems to be hilarious to call making a gang an achievement but what challenges he's going to face in future, he needs that support! If Aatish & Slogan, this was the level of the initial negative subjects, one can only imagine what will come in his way once he establishes his business...

Yes! And that will be Veer's first literal step into the world of underground. Of course! If Aatish was the first main villian, and Slogan is the second. Then you can imagine the upcoming villians.

The most anticipated one, matter of property! First of all the distribution that Manorath has done is - 40% to Veer and Pranjal each and 10% to both Kavya and Aarohi... Vivek aur Bhumika ko kuchh nahi milne waala tha ye clear hi tha par jo baat mujhe pasand nahi aayi wo thi ke Manorath ne Ragini ka zikr tak nahi kiya...

Ragini... Well wo alag matter hai. Manorath kisi ke niji jeevan me zyaada dakhal nahi dete. Yahi kaaran hai ki wo Veer ko ghar se baahar nikaalte time rok nahi paaye. Kyuki Brijesh ne ye keh diya tha ki ye uska apna maamla hai. Same kaaran yaha bhi hai. Wo chaahte hai ki Vivek khud iss maamle ko suljhaaye. Pati patni ke beech wo keval apni taraf se bol sakte hai. Haath pakad ke laa nahi sakte. Aur Update 70 me, yadi read kar liya hoga toh Manorath ye puchte hai Veer se ki Ragini bitiya aayi ki nahi!? That means he wanted her to come. But as usual, Ragini kahi nahi jaana chaahti when it comes to Vivek and his family.

Theek hai ke wo ab inke saath nahi rehti par ab bhi wo is ghar ki bahu hai, aur jo Vivek ne uske saath kiya tha uske baad to? Of course Ragini ne property se kuchh nahi lena tha, she would've refused to do so par Manorath ko at least ek baar us se baat karni chahiye thi... Shows that he's not that nice as I expected him to be...

He doesn't interferes much.

Pranjal ka plan flop hua hai, par ab uske dimaag mein ek nayi khichdi pakni shuru ho gayi hai... Firstly, wo Kavya aur Aarohi ka hissa cheen na chahta hai & then Veer... Par aisa kuchh hoga nahi Because Veer is ready with a plan too..

Pranjal aur Veer dono ki hi apni apni planning hai. Kon kisse haraata hai ye dekhna hoga.

Vivek ... Dhobi ka kutta na ghar ka naa ghaat ka . Kya mast kaata hai iska Pranjal ne, biwi gayi, aur ab property bhi gayi... And I'm sure ki jald hi business mein bhi iske tote udne waale hain... Would love to see him repenting in front of Ragini and In answer to that Ragini will tell him that she loves Veer ... Bechara kya haal hoga iska fir!!

Green hat pehnaane waala hai Veer usko.

In the end, the full status of Veer was shown, 90+ in both Strength and Intelligence, especially Intelligence, now I'm damn sure that Pranjal is going to ask himself why he tried to mess with Veer... Secondly Agility & Endurance is 65, which on combining with 90+ strength and Intermediate level Martial Arts skill... Wowww! Veer can handle many opponents at the same time now, not to forget the help Limbo skill will provide...

He is strong. But he has a long way to go. Aur Limbo... Limbo ke apne flaws hai. You'll come to know soon.

Appearance, straight away becoming 75, firstly Aarohi & Kavya would be shocked to see him! Then Maybe Bhumika too, Sonia and Kaera's next meeting with Veer would definitely make some noise inside their hearts...

Yes! They'll get surprised for sure.

Baaki, favourability zyadatar logon ki utni hi hai jitni ke expected thi, top par Suman hai, of course being a “Loyal Slave”... Juhi's 85 is huge too! Afterall she has her best friend and Maamu too in Veer... Sonia and Kaera's favourability have seen a huge Rise... Kaera's status was having “Best - Friend” written there, and that's obvious when we know that Kaera has only one friend as in Veer... Aabha and Sonali have seen a rise too, I felt like Shreya's favourability hasn't increased that much because she hadn't met Veer from a considerable amount of time too... But Nidhi's 54?? I don't know whether the incident of Kaera hugging Veer has hampered it or what, but In this Familigia Arc Nidhi's favourability is going to break all the bars, I think!

Nidhi is quite unstable for now. Aane waale updates uski vyatha ko aur acche se bataenge.

A very beautiful update bro! The scene of Shweta shouting against her Father In Law for her daughter... I loved it, then Brijesh slapping her showed up with the fact that, leave alone everything but Brijesh is a good son at least! Ragini & Veer's scene was again Very beautiful one, these small incidents which spark the relationship between the story characters are fun to read and you're a master at writing such scenes... Distribution of Property and everyone's different reactions to it, was again presented in a superb way...

Next Update would be an exciting one too, let's see what happens in the party, as Pranjal & Veer collide with their plans!

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next

Thank you so much bro!
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