Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Kind.devil]

ye aya asmita ki life ma sab sey bara turning point ab dekhna ye h ky asmita kia kry gi r jab anaya ki pata chly ga es sab kay baray ma tu os kasa reaction hoga aur dosri taraf supreme b zid pay aray h ky jo hora h sahi hora mujy sab sey zyda es bat ka intazar h Lucifer ka curse kon c paremika tory gi jahan tak mera andaza h wo asmita ho gi lakin ye aik guess h hoga kya ye tu story writer ko pata h overall mind-blowing fantastic outclass story h ap aur sab sey bari bat ap daily update dyty h r mene aysa koi writer nahi dekha abi tak jo daily update dyta apky es kam ko ma dil sey appreciate karta ho overall keep posting maza ay gya update ka waiting for the next update

 

[Devilsam]

UPDATE-99
Anisha- kaha drop karu aapko?
Lucifer- apne dil me

BOOOOMMMMMMM

Etni smooth line thi ki anisha bhi muskuraye bina rah nahi paye

Anisha- ab batao bhi
Lucifer- mujhe raste me drop kar dena

Anisha- kaha raste me?
Lucifer- main tumhe nahi bataunga
Tum danger ladki ho

Anisha- okay
Aap bata dena kaha karu
Lucifer- tum ne ashmita ko to kuch nahi bola na?

Anisha- nahi sad tone
Lucifer- kya hua?

Anisha- kuch bhi to nahi
Lucifer- sach sach batao

Anisha- kuch bhi nahi hua
Sach me
Lucifer- yahi utaar de fir
Nahi jana mujhe aage

Anisha- vo maine job chhod di
Lucifer- wait what?
Job chhod di?
Tumhe samjh me aa raha hai tum kya bol rahi ho?

Anisha- vo mujhe thoda kaam tha aur Ma'am ne mujhe bahar nahi jane diya to maine quit kar diya
Lucifer- choti bachi ho kya?

Anisha- ab jo ho gaya to so ho gaya
Lucifer- koe nahi main dekhta hu kuch

Anisha- ma'am ko nahi bolna kuch bhi aap
Lucifer- vaise bhi kya hi bol raha hu main usko
Yahi rok do

Aur lucifer vaha se bina anisha ko kuch bole chala gaya

Anisha ne bhi jada force nahi kiya usse aur na kuch pucha bas chhup chhap vaha se car vapas dene chali gaye aur lucifer

Lucifer gaya vaha jaha ke liye aap sab intezaar me bathe the

Jee ha vo gaya naag ke us adde par jaha suresh ko pakad rakha tha

Bahar hi naag aur mansi bathe dikh gaye jo chadni raat enjoy karne ki soch rahe the lekin lucifer unki raat chodne ki puri planning karke batha tha

Lucifer- naag aisa room hai kya yaha jaha par aawaz na aaye?
Naag- aisa to nahi hai bhai
Lucifer ki aawaz se uski aur mansi ki tindra tuti aur uski taraf dekhte hue bola

Lucifer- to mansi tum bahar ghum aao aaj
Mansi- kya karne wale ho aap bhaiya aaj?

Lucifer- vohi jo maine tumhe na dikha sakta hu na bata sakta hu
Mansi- main naag ko le jau?

Lucifer- nahi
Eske bina mera man nahi lagta
Koe achi se movie dekh aao ya shopping kar aao
Ander kamra bhara hua hai paiso se vaha se jitna chahiye le lo aur jao
Mansi- aap mujhe akele bejh rahe ho etni raat ko?

Lucifer- kuch nahi hoga
Maine sab dekh liya hai
Jao jaldi jao ab
Mansi- bahut kharcha karke aaunga fir main

Lucifer- pura sehar khareed aao aaj
Koe tumhe kuch nahi kahega
Mansi- aaj to aisa hi karungi fir
Aur mansi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer- ab tu mujhe kya dekh raha hai
Leke aao mere sasur ji ko
Naag- jee bhai *sad*

Lucifer- aur achi wali sharaab bhi
Bc gandu red wine pee raha hai
Pata nahi aur kya kya dekhna rah gaya hai mujhe
Naag- mansi ko pasand hai

Lucifer- kyuki vo ladki hai aur tu?
Bc rahne hi de aur ja leke aa us gandu ko
Naag ander gaya aur suresh ko bahar le aaya

Jab suresh bahar aaya to uski halaat dekhne layak thi
Chehre ki ronak puri tarah se khatam ho chuki thi aur jo khushi rathore ki image ko chodne ki thi vo ab udasi me badal chuki thi

Lucifer- latka de naag ulta esse
Aaj eski photo viral karenge
Naag- kaise latkau bhai?
Kapdo me, chaddi me ya fir...

Lucifer- alag alag pose me marenge
Naag- kapde se start karte hai bhai
Fir kam karte jayenge

Lucifer- sahi idea hai
Dekho sasur ji cooperate karoge to maje aayenge tumhe bhi aur hume bhi
Nahi to fir tum bewakuf to ho hi

Suresh- mujhe jane do
Tum jante nahi ho main kon hu
Lucifer- aur tu nahi janta main kon hu
Ab jaldi jaldi pose dene suru kar
Bahut bore ho raha hu main

Suresh- main es sehar ka sabse bada businessman hu
Nanga kara dunga tumhe
Naag- bhai sidha nanga hi kar du kya?

Lucifer- agar ek minute me esne pose dene suru nahi kiye to pahle to hunter chatkana eski gand par fir jo marji vo karna
Naag- I'm ready bhai

Suresh jiski halaat pehle se hi kharab thi uski ab aur hone lag gaye aur apni gand matkate hue ek pose dene laga

Lucifer- Haye Haye naag bc eski gand
Naag- bhai nikal lu kya pent main apni?

Lucifer- ruk ja ruk ja thoda sabar kar
Ab gand piche, muh aage aur kamar still karke

Suresh ne aisa hi kiya aur naag maje se photo lene laga

Naag- bhai eski gand kisi ladki ki hoti to kya baat thi
Lucifer- eski se hi kaam chala lena
Sun be ab ye samne pole dikh raha hai?
Kar uspar pole dance

Suresh- mujhe nahi aata
Lucifer- tu karta hai ya fir main naag ko chhod kar jau yaha tere pass?

Suresh bechara kya hi karta
Pole ke pass gaya aur usse pakad kar edar udhar ghumne laga

Naag- ache se kar lodu
Jaise vo actress karti hai vaise hi kar
Suresh aur mahnat karne laga lekin ab es umar me weight bhi badh raha tha kaise lachak aati usme?
Fir bhi apni taraf se kosis kar raha tha puri vo

Naag- bhai mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise esko maje aa rahe hai?
Lucifer- kyuki eske maje aa rahe hai lodu
Ab sun jaise ladkiya nachte hue ek ek karke kapde utarti hai vaise hi utarne suru kar

Suresh- mujhe maaf kar do beta
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Aage se aisa kabhi nahi karunga
Tum bologe to main rathore se bhi mafi maang lunga

Lucifer- ye mafi wala kaam nahi pasand mujhe
Tu kapde utarne suru kar
Raat ki maa behan mat kar

Suresh ne sirf shirt aur pant hi pahan rakhi thi aur vo shirt uski tond dhakne me nakamyab thi

Lucifer- naag ready ho ja
Esko pyaar wali bhasa pasand nahi aa rahi sayad

Lucifer ne aisa bola aur suresh ne apni shirt ke button kholne suru kar diye

Lucifer- good boy
Ache se video bana raha hai na naag?
Esko main ab se apne club me chalayenge
Naag- bhai apna to club hi nahi hai

Lucifer- to khol lenge bc
Kis chhij ki kami hai apne pass?
Naag- sahi bol rahi ho bhai

Tab tak suresh ki shirt utar chuki thi aur uski balo me bhari chhati dekh kar lucifer aur naag dono ka mood chud chuka tha

Naag- bc sare mood ki lanka jala di esne to bhai
Lucifer- ghosla to niche hona chahiye tha
Yaha to upar hi etna sab hai

Naag- vohi to bhai
Ab kya kare?
Lucifer- bc abse tourcher karne ke liye esko use karenge
Continue chalne de

Naag- main kitna acha time spend kar raha tha mansi ke sath
Es buddhe ne sab kharab kar diya
Lucifer- sabka badla lenge naag
Sabka badka
Oye ye pent kyu hai tere upar abhi tak?

Suresh ab bina maar khaye ghayal ho chuka tha
Uski aankhon me pehle baar asli ke aashu aaye the

Puri jindagi usne jo izzat shaurat banaye thi aaj vo sab loot rahi thi
Aaj se pehle kisi me etni himmat nahi thi ki vo suresh ke samne aankh utha kar bhi dekh sake aur aaj do londo ne usko nanga nacha rakha tha

Izzat lutati hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo aaj usse pata chal raha tha

Lucifer- ye natak mat kar
Puri raat nahi hai humare pass
Jaldi jaldi start kar

Suresh ke aashu tej hote gaye aur vo upar dekhte hue apni pant utarne laga
Aur dekhte hi dekhte vo sirf ek underwear me bach gaya tha

Naag- bhai jaldi se khatam karte hai esko
Ab mujhse ye dekha nahi ja raha
Lucifer- naag tu dekh aur ek sabak le ki kisi ki izzat kharab karne se pehle hum bilkul nahi sochte
Bas samne hota dekh haste rahte hai aur jab vo khud ke sath hone lagta hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo dekh

Es se sabak le ki kabhi bhi apne manoranjan ke liye kisi ko chodna nahi chahiye kyuki kahi na kahi aapse bada Lund wala bhi koe dunia me batha hua hai sivay mere se
Mere se bada koe nahi hai

Dekh esko
Suresh the fucking raichand
Raichand empire ka maalik aaj humare samne chaddi me khada hai
Esko ek misaal banane de
Lekin jo sikh mil rahi hai es se usse kabhi bhulna bhi mat

Naag- bhai hum bhi to eski izzat hi utaar rahe hai na?
Lucifer- nahi
Hum esko saja de rahe hai
Esne jo kiya uski saja
Maine apni life me bahut bure bure kaam kiye hai, na jane kitna khoon aur kaisa kaisa khoon bahaya hai lekin kisi ki izzat ke sath khilvaad nahi kiya maine

Lucifer- ye chaddi ko kya ab apni shadi me leke jayega?
Utaar esko bhi

Suresh me ab etni himmat nahi bachi thi ki vo kuch bol paye
Uske hath apne aap apne underwear par chale gaye aur jaise hi utarne wala hu bahar ka gate khula aur ashmita ander dhakil hue

Usse kaise pata chala es jagah ka?
Simple pehle anisha ko follow kiya fir lucifer ko

Jiski aankhon me gussa, dard, aur pata nahi kitne bhaav the
Lucifer ne bahut easily sab mahsus kar liya tha

Vo lucifer ko dekhte hue apne baap ke pass gaye aur usse kapde dene lagi

Naag- bhai...
Lekin lucifer ne usse rok diya aage kuch bolne se

Ashmita ne suresh ko kapde pahanaye aur lucifer ko dekhti hue vaha se usse leke chali gaye
Aankhir me do bond aashu ki tapak hi gaye uski aankhon se
Aur vo chali gaye

Naag- bhai aapne kyu apna rishta kharab kiya?
Ye sab to main bhi kar sakta tha suresh ke sath?
Lucifer- koe rishta humesha ke liye nahi hota naag
Aaj nahi to kal usse totna hi tha
Acha hua aaj toot gaya
Agar tere se karvata to vo tujhe dusman samjh leti aur badle lene ki sochti
Maine kiya to vo mujhe dusman nahi samjhegi khud ko samjhegi
Aur aisi condition me ya to insaan bilkul toot jata hai ya fir etna upar chala jata hai ki koe usse chhu bhi nahi pata
Esliye mere hatho se hona jaruri tha
Ab mujhe bas ye dekhna hai ki en dono me se kya hota hai ashmita ke sath...

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[Skskdada]

UPDATE-99
Anisha- kaha drop karu aapko?
Lucifer- apne dil me

BOOOOMMMMMMM

Etni smooth line thi ki anisha bhi muskuraye bina rah nahi paye

Anisha- ab batao bhi
Lucifer- mujhe raste me drop kar dena

Anisha- kaha raste me?
Lucifer- main tumhe nahi bataunga
Tum danger ladki ho

Anisha- okay
Aap bata dena kaha karu
Lucifer- tum ne ashmita ko to kuch nahi bola na?

Anisha- nahi sad tone
Lucifer- kya hua?

Anisha- kuch bhi to nahi
Lucifer- sach sach batao

Anisha- kuch bhi nahi hua
Sach me
Lucifer- yahi utaar de fir
Nahi jana mujhe aage

Anisha- vo maine job chhod di
Lucifer- wait what?
Job chhod di?
Tumhe samjh me aa raha hai tum kya bol rahi ho?

Anisha- vo mujhe thoda kaam tha aur Ma'am ne mujhe bahar nahi jane diya to maine quit kar diya
Lucifer- choti bachi ho kya?

Anisha- ab jo ho gaya to so ho gaya
Lucifer- koe nahi main dekhta hu kuch

Anisha- ma'am ko nahi bolna kuch bhi aap
Lucifer- vaise bhi kya hi bol raha hu main usko
Yahi rok do

Aur lucifer vaha se bina anisha ko kuch bole chala gaya

Anisha ne bhi jada force nahi kiya usse aur na kuch pucha bas chhup chhap vaha se car vapas dene chali gaye aur lucifer

Lucifer gaya vaha jaha ke liye aap sab intezaar me bathe the

Jee ha vo gaya naag ke us adde par jaha suresh ko pakad rakha tha

Bahar hi naag aur mansi bathe dikh gaye jo chadni raat enjoy karne ki soch rahe the lekin lucifer unki raat chodne ki puri planning karke batha tha

Lucifer- naag aisa room hai kya yaha jaha par aawaz na aaye?
Naag- aisa to nahi hai bhai
Lucifer ki aawaz se uski aur mansi ki tindra tuti aur uski taraf dekhte hue bola

Lucifer- to mansi tum bahar ghum aao aaj
Mansi- kya karne wale ho aap bhaiya aaj?

Lucifer- vohi jo maine tumhe na dikha sakta hu na bata sakta hu
Mansi- main naag ko le jau?

Lucifer- nahi
Eske bina mera man nahi lagta
Koe achi se movie dekh aao ya shopping kar aao
Ander kamra bhara hua hai paiso se vaha se jitna chahiye le lo aur jao
Mansi- aap mujhe akele bejh rahe ho etni raat ko?

Lucifer- kuch nahi hoga
Maine sab dekh liya hai
Jao jaldi jao ab
Mansi- bahut kharcha karke aaunga fir main

Lucifer- pura sehar khareed aao aaj
Koe tumhe kuch nahi kahega
Mansi- aaj to aisa hi karungi fir
Aur mansi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer- ab tu mujhe kya dekh raha hai
Leke aao mere sasur ji ko
Naag- jee bhai *sad*

Lucifer- aur achi wali sharaab bhi
Bc gandu red wine pee raha hai
Pata nahi aur kya kya dekhna rah gaya hai mujhe
Naag- mansi ko pasand hai

Lucifer- kyuki vo ladki hai aur tu?
Bc rahne hi de aur ja leke aa us gandu ko
Naag ander gaya aur suresh ko bahar le aaya

Jab suresh bahar aaya to uski halaat dekhne layak thi
Chehre ki ronak puri tarah se khatam ho chuki thi aur jo khushi rathore ki image ko chodne ki thi vo ab udasi me badal chuki thi

Lucifer- latka de naag ulta esse
Aaj eski photo viral karenge
Naag- kaise latkau bhai?
Kapdo me, chaddi me ya fir...

Lucifer- alag alag pose me marenge
Naag- kapde se start karte hai bhai
Fir kam karte jayenge

Lucifer- sahi idea hai
Dekho sasur ji cooperate karoge to maje aayenge tumhe bhi aur hume bhi
Nahi to fir tum bewakuf to ho hi

Suresh- mujhe jane do
Tum jante nahi ho main kon hu
Lucifer- aur tu nahi janta main kon hu
Ab jaldi jaldi pose dene suru kar
Bahut bore ho raha hu main

Suresh- main es sehar ka sabse bada businessman hu
Nanga kara dunga tumhe
Naag- bhai sidha nanga hi kar du kya?

Lucifer- agar ek minute me esne pose dene suru nahi kiye to pahle to hunter chatkana eski gand par fir jo marji vo karna
Naag- I'm ready bhai

Suresh jiski halaat pehle se hi kharab thi uski ab aur hone lag gaye aur apni gand matkate hue ek pose dene laga

Lucifer- Haye Haye naag bc eski gand
Naag- bhai nikal lu kya pent main apni?

Lucifer- ruk ja ruk ja thoda sabar kar
Ab gand piche, muh aage aur kamar still karke

Suresh ne aisa hi kiya aur naag maje se photo lene laga

Naag- bhai eski gand kisi ladki ki hoti to kya baat thi
Lucifer- eski se hi kaam chala lena
Sun be ab ye samne pole dikh raha hai?
Kar uspar pole dance

Suresh- mujhe nahi aata
Lucifer- tu karta hai ya fir main naag ko chhod kar jau yaha tere pass?

Suresh bechara kya hi karta
Pole ke pass gaya aur usse pakad kar edar udhar ghumne laga

Naag- ache se kar lodu
Jaise vo actress karti hai vaise hi kar
Suresh aur mahnat karne laga lekin ab es umar me weight bhi badh raha tha kaise lachak aati usme?
Fir bhi apni taraf se kosis kar raha tha puri vo

Naag- bhai mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise esko maje aa rahe hai?
Lucifer- kyuki eske maje aa rahe hai lodu
Ab sun jaise ladkiya nachte hue ek ek karke kapde utarti hai vaise hi utarne suru kar

Suresh- mujhe maaf kar do beta
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Aage se aisa kabhi nahi karunga
Tum bologe to main rathore se bhi mafi maang lunga

Lucifer- ye mafi wala kaam nahi pasand mujhe
Tu kapde utarne suru kar
Raat ki maa behan mat kar

Suresh ne sirf shirt aur pant hi pahan rakhi thi aur vo shirt uski tond dhakne me nakamyab thi

Lucifer- naag ready ho ja
Esko pyaar wali bhasa pasand nahi aa rahi sayad

Lucifer ne aisa bola aur suresh ne apni shirt ke button kholne suru kar diye

Lucifer- good boy
Ache se video bana raha hai na naag?
Esko main ab se apne club me chalayenge
Naag- bhai apna to club hi nahi hai

Lucifer- to khol lenge bc
Kis chhij ki kami hai apne pass?
Naag- sahi bol rahi ho bhai

Tab tak suresh ki shirt utar chuki thi aur uski balo me bhari chhati dekh kar lucifer aur naag dono ka mood chud chuka tha

Naag- bc sare mood ki lanka jala di esne to bhai
Lucifer- ghosla to niche hona chahiye tha
Yaha to upar hi etna sab hai

Naag- vohi to bhai
Ab kya kare?
Lucifer- bc abse tourcher karne ke liye esko use karenge
Continue chalne de

Naag- main kitna acha time spend kar raha tha mansi ke sath
Es buddhe ne sab kharab kar diya
Lucifer- sabka badla lenge naag
Sabka badka
Oye ye pent kyu hai tere upar abhi tak?

Suresh ab bina maar khaye ghayal ho chuka tha
Uski aankhon me pehle baar asli ke aashu aaye the

Puri jindagi usne jo izzat shaurat banaye thi aaj vo sab loot rahi thi
Aaj se pehle kisi me etni himmat nahi thi ki vo suresh ke samne aankh utha kar bhi dekh sake aur aaj do londo ne usko nanga nacha rakha tha

Izzat lutati hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo aaj usse pata chal raha tha

Lucifer- ye natak mat kar
Puri raat nahi hai humare pass
Jaldi jaldi start kar

Suresh ke aashu tej hote gaye aur vo upar dekhte hue apni pant utarne laga
Aur dekhte hi dekhte vo sirf ek underwear me bach gaya tha

Naag- bhai jaldi se khatam karte hai esko
Ab mujhse ye dekha nahi ja raha
Lucifer- naag tu dekh aur ek sabak le ki kisi ki izzat kharab karne se pehle hum bilkul nahi sochte
Bas samne hota dekh haste rahte hai aur jab vo khud ke sath hone lagta hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo dekh

Es se sabak le ki kabhi bhi apne manoranjan ke liye kisi ko chodna nahi chahiye kyuki kahi na kahi aapse bada Lund wala bhi koe dunia me batha hua hai sivay mere se
Mere se bada koe nahi hai

Dekh esko
Suresh the fucking raichand
Raichand empire ka maalik aaj humare samne chaddi me khada hai
Esko ek misaal banane de
Lekin jo sikh mil rahi hai es se usse kabhi bhulna bhi mat

Naag- bhai hum bhi to eski izzat hi utaar rahe hai na?
Lucifer- nahi
Hum esko saja de rahe hai
Esne jo kiya uski saja
Maine apni life me bahut bure bure kaam kiye hai, na jane kitna khoon aur kaisa kaisa khoon bahaya hai lekin kisi ki izzat ke sath khilvaad nahi kiya maine

Lucifer- ye chaddi ko kya ab apni shadi me leke jayega?
Utaar esko bhi

Suresh me ab etni himmat nahi bachi thi ki vo kuch bol paye
Uske hath apne aap apne underwear par chale gaye aur jaise hi utarne wala hu bahar ka gate khula aur ashmita ander dhakil hue

Usse kaise pata chala es jagah ka?
Simple pehle anisha ko follow kiya fir lucifer ko

Jiski aankhon me gussa, dard, aur pata nahi kitne bhaav the
Lucifer ne bahut easily sab mahsus kar liya tha

Vo lucifer ko dekhte hue apne baap ke pass gaye aur usse kapde dene lagi

Naag- bhai...
Lekin lucifer ne usse rok diya aage kuch bolne se

Ashmita ne suresh ko kapde pahanaye aur lucifer ko dekhti hue vaha se usse leke chali gaye
Aankhir me do bond aashu ki tapak hi gaye uski aankhon se
Aur vo chali gaye

Naag- bhai aapne kyu apna rishta kharab kiya?
Ye sab to main bhi kar sakta tha suresh ke sath?
Lucifer- koe rishta humesha ke liye nahi hota naag
Aaj nahi to kal usse totna hi tha
Acha hua aaj toot gaya
Agar tere se karvata to vo tujhe dusman samjh leti aur badle lene ki sochti
Maine kiya to vo mujhe dusman nahi samjhegi khud ko samjhegi
Aur aisi condition me ya to insaan bilkul toot jata hai ya fir etna upar chala jata hai ki koe usse chhu bhi nahi pata
Esliye mere hatho se hona jaruri tha
Ab mujhe bas ye dekhna hai ki en dono me se kya hota hai ashmita ke sath...

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LOVE AND RESPECT TO EVERYONE

 

[Skskdada]

Ek no story hai bro maza aagaya bro

 

[Mana6262]

Vai kya Pol dance kya Maja aagya .....lagta hai anisa ab innaya ke liye Kam karegi jo lucifer usko job dega....

Raichand ko samajh aa gya hoga k ijat utarne Kitna dukh milta Hai....Lakin ashmita lucifer ko kya kahegi uska intezar hai ...

Bdw super update ...​

 

[Rider prem]

Are lone bhai ab kya raai de jo aap likh rahe ho wese soche tab hi de na aapne bahut umda khel khela hai ashmita ke saath....but mere khayal se asli saanvi shayad asmita hi ho....aapne uska dil to tod hi diya aage dekhte hai wese suresh ke sath bilkul sahi kiya...ab usko pta chalega ki izzat jaati hai tab kesa lagta hai....khair keep waiting for nextttttt update

 

[A.B.KING]

UPDATE-99
Anisha- kaha drop karu aapko?
Lucifer- apne dil me

BOOOOMMMMMMM

Etni smooth line thi ki anisha bhi muskuraye bina rah nahi paye

Anisha- ab batao bhi
Lucifer- mujhe raste me drop kar dena

Anisha- kaha raste me?
Lucifer- main tumhe nahi bataunga
Tum danger ladki ho

Anisha- okay
Aap bata dena kaha karu
Lucifer- tum ne ashmita ko to kuch nahi bola na?

Anisha- nahi sad tone
Lucifer- kya hua?

Anisha- kuch bhi to nahi
Lucifer- sach sach batao

Anisha- kuch bhi nahi hua
Sach me
Lucifer- yahi utaar de fir
Nahi jana mujhe aage

Anisha- vo maine job chhod di
Lucifer- wait what?
Job chhod di?
Tumhe samjh me aa raha hai tum kya bol rahi ho?

Anisha- vo mujhe thoda kaam tha aur Ma'am ne mujhe bahar nahi jane diya to maine quit kar diya
Lucifer- choti bachi ho kya?

Anisha- ab jo ho gaya to so ho gaya
Lucifer- koe nahi main dekhta hu kuch

Anisha- ma'am ko nahi bolna kuch bhi aap
Lucifer- vaise bhi kya hi bol raha hu main usko
Yahi rok do

Aur lucifer vaha se bina anisha ko kuch bole chala gaya

Anisha ne bhi jada force nahi kiya usse aur na kuch pucha bas chhup chhap vaha se car vapas dene chali gaye aur lucifer

Lucifer gaya vaha jaha ke liye aap sab intezaar me bathe the

Jee ha vo gaya naag ke us adde par jaha suresh ko pakad rakha tha

Bahar hi naag aur mansi bathe dikh gaye jo chadni raat enjoy karne ki soch rahe the lekin lucifer unki raat chodne ki puri planning karke batha tha

Lucifer- naag aisa room hai kya yaha jaha par aawaz na aaye?
Naag- aisa to nahi hai bhai
Lucifer ki aawaz se uski aur mansi ki tindra tuti aur uski taraf dekhte hue bola

Lucifer- to mansi tum bahar ghum aao aaj
Mansi- kya karne wale ho aap bhaiya aaj?

Lucifer- vohi jo maine tumhe na dikha sakta hu na bata sakta hu
Mansi- main naag ko le jau?

Lucifer- nahi
Eske bina mera man nahi lagta
Koe achi se movie dekh aao ya shopping kar aao
Ander kamra bhara hua hai paiso se vaha se jitna chahiye le lo aur jao
Mansi- aap mujhe akele bejh rahe ho etni raat ko?

Lucifer- kuch nahi hoga
Maine sab dekh liya hai
Jao jaldi jao ab
Mansi- bahut kharcha karke aaunga fir main

Lucifer- pura sehar khareed aao aaj
Koe tumhe kuch nahi kahega
Mansi- aaj to aisa hi karungi fir
Aur mansi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer- ab tu mujhe kya dekh raha hai
Leke aao mere sasur ji ko
Naag- jee bhai *sad*

Lucifer- aur achi wali sharaab bhi
Bc gandu red wine pee raha hai
Pata nahi aur kya kya dekhna rah gaya hai mujhe
Naag- mansi ko pasand hai

Lucifer- kyuki vo ladki hai aur tu?
Bc rahne hi de aur ja leke aa us gandu ko
Naag ander gaya aur suresh ko bahar le aaya

Jab suresh bahar aaya to uski halaat dekhne layak thi
Chehre ki ronak puri tarah se khatam ho chuki thi aur jo khushi rathore ki image ko chodne ki thi vo ab udasi me badal chuki thi

Lucifer- latka de naag ulta esse
Aaj eski photo viral karenge
Naag- kaise latkau bhai?
Kapdo me, chaddi me ya fir...

Lucifer- alag alag pose me marenge
Naag- kapde se start karte hai bhai
Fir kam karte jayenge

Lucifer- sahi idea hai
Dekho sasur ji cooperate karoge to maje aayenge tumhe bhi aur hume bhi
Nahi to fir tum bewakuf to ho hi

Suresh- mujhe jane do
Tum jante nahi ho main kon hu
Lucifer- aur tu nahi janta main kon hu
Ab jaldi jaldi pose dene suru kar
Bahut bore ho raha hu main

Suresh- main es sehar ka sabse bada businessman hu
Nanga kara dunga tumhe
Naag- bhai sidha nanga hi kar du kya?

Lucifer- agar ek minute me esne pose dene suru nahi kiye to pahle to hunter chatkana eski gand par fir jo marji vo karna
Naag- I'm ready bhai

Suresh jiski halaat pehle se hi kharab thi uski ab aur hone lag gaye aur apni gand matkate hue ek pose dene laga

Lucifer- Haye Haye naag bc eski gand
Naag- bhai nikal lu kya pent main apni?

Lucifer- ruk ja ruk ja thoda sabar kar
Ab gand piche, muh aage aur kamar still karke

Suresh ne aisa hi kiya aur naag maje se photo lene laga

Naag- bhai eski gand kisi ladki ki hoti to kya baat thi
Lucifer- eski se hi kaam chala lena
Sun be ab ye samne pole dikh raha hai?
Kar uspar pole dance

Suresh- mujhe nahi aata
Lucifer- tu karta hai ya fir main naag ko chhod kar jau yaha tere pass?

Suresh bechara kya hi karta
Pole ke pass gaya aur usse pakad kar edar udhar ghumne laga

Naag- ache se kar lodu
Jaise vo actress karti hai vaise hi kar
Suresh aur mahnat karne laga lekin ab es umar me weight bhi badh raha tha kaise lachak aati usme?
Fir bhi apni taraf se kosis kar raha tha puri vo

Naag- bhai mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise esko maje aa rahe hai?
Lucifer- kyuki eske maje aa rahe hai lodu
Ab sun jaise ladkiya nachte hue ek ek karke kapde utarti hai vaise hi utarne suru kar

Suresh- mujhe maaf kar do beta
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Aage se aisa kabhi nahi karunga
Tum bologe to main rathore se bhi mafi maang lunga

Lucifer- ye mafi wala kaam nahi pasand mujhe
Tu kapde utarne suru kar
Raat ki maa behan mat kar

Suresh ne sirf shirt aur pant hi pahan rakhi thi aur vo shirt uski tond dhakne me nakamyab thi

Lucifer- naag ready ho ja
Esko pyaar wali bhasa pasand nahi aa rahi sayad

Lucifer ne aisa bola aur suresh ne apni shirt ke button kholne suru kar diye

Lucifer- good boy
Ache se video bana raha hai na naag?
Esko main ab se apne club me chalayenge
Naag- bhai apna to club hi nahi hai

Lucifer- to khol lenge bc
Kis chhij ki kami hai apne pass?
Naag- sahi bol rahi ho bhai

Tab tak suresh ki shirt utar chuki thi aur uski balo me bhari chhati dekh kar lucifer aur naag dono ka mood chud chuka tha

Naag- bc sare mood ki lanka jala di esne to bhai
Lucifer- ghosla to niche hona chahiye tha
Yaha to upar hi etna sab hai

Naag- vohi to bhai
Ab kya kare?
Lucifer- bc abse tourcher karne ke liye esko use karenge
Continue chalne de

Naag- main kitna acha time spend kar raha tha mansi ke sath
Es buddhe ne sab kharab kar diya
Lucifer- sabka badla lenge naag
Sabka badka
Oye ye pent kyu hai tere upar abhi tak?

Suresh ab bina maar khaye ghayal ho chuka tha
Uski aankhon me pehle baar asli ke aashu aaye the

Puri jindagi usne jo izzat shaurat banaye thi aaj vo sab loot rahi thi
Aaj se pehle kisi me etni himmat nahi thi ki vo suresh ke samne aankh utha kar bhi dekh sake aur aaj do londo ne usko nanga nacha rakha tha

Izzat lutati hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo aaj usse pata chal raha tha

Lucifer- ye natak mat kar
Puri raat nahi hai humare pass
Jaldi jaldi start kar

Suresh ke aashu tej hote gaye aur vo upar dekhte hue apni pant utarne laga
Aur dekhte hi dekhte vo sirf ek underwear me bach gaya tha

Naag- bhai jaldi se khatam karte hai esko
Ab mujhse ye dekha nahi ja raha
Lucifer- naag tu dekh aur ek sabak le ki kisi ki izzat kharab karne se pehle hum bilkul nahi sochte
Bas samne hota dekh haste rahte hai aur jab vo khud ke sath hone lagta hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo dekh

Es se sabak le ki kabhi bhi apne manoranjan ke liye kisi ko chodna nahi chahiye kyuki kahi na kahi aapse bada Lund wala bhi koe dunia me batha hua hai sivay mere se
Mere se bada koe nahi hai

Dekh esko
Suresh the fucking raichand
Raichand empire ka maalik aaj humare samne chaddi me khada hai
Esko ek misaal banane de
Lekin jo sikh mil rahi hai es se usse kabhi bhulna bhi mat

Naag- bhai hum bhi to eski izzat hi utaar rahe hai na?
Lucifer- nahi
Hum esko saja de rahe hai
Esne jo kiya uski saja
Maine apni life me bahut bure bure kaam kiye hai, na jane kitna khoon aur kaisa kaisa khoon bahaya hai lekin kisi ki izzat ke sath khilvaad nahi kiya maine

Lucifer- ye chaddi ko kya ab apni shadi me leke jayega?
Utaar esko bhi

Suresh me ab etni himmat nahi bachi thi ki vo kuch bol paye
Uske hath apne aap apne underwear par chale gaye aur jaise hi utarne wala hu bahar ka gate khula aur ashmita ander dhakil hue

Usse kaise pata chala es jagah ka?
Simple pehle anisha ko follow kiya fir lucifer ko

Jiski aankhon me gussa, dard, aur pata nahi kitne bhaav the
Lucifer ne bahut easily sab mahsus kar liya tha

Vo lucifer ko dekhte hue apne baap ke pass gaye aur usse kapde dene lagi

Naag- bhai...
Lekin lucifer ne usse rok diya aage kuch bolne se

Ashmita ne suresh ko kapde pahanaye aur lucifer ko dekhti hue vaha se usse leke chali gaye
Aankhir me do bond aashu ki tapak hi gaye uski aankhon se
Aur vo chali gaye

Naag- bhai aapne kyu apna rishta kharab kiya?
Ye sab to main bhi kar sakta tha suresh ke sath?
Lucifer- koe rishta humesha ke liye nahi hota naag
Aaj nahi to kal usse totna hi tha
Acha hua aaj toot gaya
Agar tere se karvata to vo tujhe dusman samjh leti aur badle lene ki sochti
Maine kiya to vo mujhe dusman nahi samjhegi khud ko samjhegi
Aur aisi condition me ya to insaan bilkul toot jata hai ya fir etna upar chala jata hai ki koe usse chhu bhi nahi pata
Esliye mere hatho se hona jaruri tha
Ab mujhe bas ye dekhna hai ki en dono me se kya hota hai ashmita ke sath...

UPDATE 100 TABHI AAYEGA JAB AAP LOG STORY KE BARE ME KHUL KAR APNI RAY DENGE
300 PAGES HO GAYE HAI FIR BHI BOLNA PADTA HAI MUJHE
SO AGAR A VERY IMPORTANT UPDATE JISKA AAP SAB KO BAHUT INTEZAAR THA VO LATE HUR TO ITS YOUR FAULT NOT MINE

LOVE AND RESPECT TO EVERYONE

Excellent update bro,

Such mein feelings badal rahi hai Lucifer mein,

Superb

 

[Death Kiñg]

So, Aghor mar gaya hai..? Kya sach mein? Kyonki soul trading ka zikra kahani mein do baar ho chuka hai isliye koyi mare bhi to uski maut par yakeen karna mushkil hai... Lucifer ke haath paaon to kaat diye the Aghor ne par tabhi Lucifer ka Devil yaani Satan ka roop saamne aa gaya aur apne aap Lucifer ka shareer theek hone laga... Kya raaz hai Lucifer ke in do roop ka? Kyonki Lucifer ke paas apni sabhi shaktiyan nahi hain ya kahun ke wo unhe bhool chuka hai isliye Aghor se ladna uske liye aasan nahi tha... Par, Devil waale swaroop mein usne aasani se Aghor ko maar diya... Ya kahun ke us roop ko dekhne ke baad hi Aghor almost mar gaya tha... Kya Lucifer ki double personality hain? Yaani ek wo jo use Devil kehlane par vivash kar deti hai aur ek wo jismein wo kisi se pyaar kar paata hai... Btw. Us Devil waale roop mein ye bhi kaha tha, ki Lucifer ne use control kiya hua hai... Past, jab tak poora past saamne nahi aayega, rahasya bana rahega...

Idhar, Aghor mar chuka hai par saath hi kuchh sawaal bhi apne pichhe chhod gaya hai... Jo ghaav wo Lucifer ko dene waala tha, jiske baare mein Mitika ne bhavishyavani ki thi, wo sirf Mitika ka bhram tha? Ya fir abhi Aghor waapis lautega? Afterall, usne pehle to yahi kaha tha ki Saanvi yaani Inaaya se sex ke baad hi wo Lucifer ko maarne aayega... To kya ye possible hai ki Aghor ne apni soul kisi aur ko de di ho (Kaal ki tarah), aur jab Lucifer aur Inaaya ka milan ho tab wo dobara hamla kare, jismein Lucifer ko wo gehra ghaav lagega... Sawaal ye bhi hai ki Kaal ne apni soul kise di thi, Aghor ko hi..?

Eda ke saath jo past scene aaya wo bhi kuchh sawaalon ko janam deta hai... Ye to pehle se hi pata hai ki Eda bachpan mein aur shayad uske baad bhi, Lucifer se door rehti thi, jabki Lucifer use pasand karta tha... Guru ji se is baat ka zikr bhi kiya tha usne... Par Eda ki baaton se ye lagta hai ki Eda ne jo bhi kiya wo karna ke liye use shayad kaha gaya tha..? Supreme ne.. Guruji ne..? Par jo ye past scene hai, ye exactly kab ka hai, kya aisi ghatna huyi thi jiske kaaran Lucifer se milne pahunchi thi Eda? Aghor ke baare mein usne bhi Lucifer ko chetaya tha, aur ek aur baat saamne aayi ki Lucifer aur Aghor shayad sage bhai hain/the...

Idhar, Anisha ne naukri chhod di hai! Use is job ki kitni zarurat thi, ye koyi chhupi huyi baat nahi hai fir bhi Lucifer ke liye hi usne ye job chhod di... Ashmita ko shayad uspar doubt tha ki wo Lucifer se hi milne jaa rahi hai, isiliye wo itne sawaal kar rahi thi us se... Khair, Anisha ne Lucifer ko dhoond liya aur Anisha ke aate hi Lucifer ka devil waala roop gaayab ho gaya aur wo normal ho gaya... Kya uski premikaon ki presence mein apne aap hi uska roop normal ho jaata hai? Btw. Anisha too, seems to be Falling in the world of Lucifer...

Suresh... finally use bhi saza de di hai Lucifer ne... Obviously, izzat ke badle izzat, is se behtar nyay kya ho sakta tha uske liye... Par I think ke jo kuchh bhi Lucifer ne uske saath kiya wo kewal Suresh ki wajah se nahi balki Ashmita ke kaaran bhi kiya... Kyonki jo kuchh Lucifer ne Naag se kaha, us se yahi lagta hai ki Lucifer jaanta tha ki Ashmita uska peecha kar rahi thi, aur jaan boojh kar Ashmita ko dikhane ke liye hi ye sab usne Suresh ke saath kiya... Ab dekhte hain ki Lucifer ke kahe mutabik, Ashmita top par pahunchegi ya bilkul toot jaayegi... Afterall, sirf baap ki izzat hi nahi balki ek baar fir se apna ek dost bhi kho diya hai usne aur jo umeed Inaaya ke saath dosti punarjeevit hone ki thi, wo bhi almost khatam ho gayi hai... Beharhal, Anisha ko job waapis milegi ya nahi? Yadi haan, to kya Lucifer usmein bhi kuchh karega?

Ab lagta yahi hai ke Lucifer shayad Inaaya se milne jaaye, because wo Lucifer se naaraz to hogi hi... But naarazgi se jyada dukhi hogi, usne jo messages Lucifer ko kiye the us se to yahi lagta hai... Seems like something big is going to happen in the next update, as you mentioned...

Rahi baat, kahani ke baare mein vichaaron ki, to I don't think ki kuchh bhi kehne ki zarurat hai... You're an experienced writer aur aap bhi jaante hain ki jab koyi is prakar se review deta hai story par that clearly shows the quality of the the story... Shayad koyi ye na bhi kahe, par halki stories par ek reader bhi apna waqt invest karne se parhez karta hai... And it's the quality of your writing that forces me to read and review it... Beharhal, kewal do hi kahaniyan hain filhal jo main Fantasy genre mei padh raha hoon, aur ye usmein se ek hai...

As usual, all the three updates were beautiful... Eda – Lucifer ki conversation ho ya fir Lucifer aur Anisha ki, both of them were written excellently... Wahin Maansi ki baatein bhi chehre par muskaan laane ke liye kafi thi...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[parkas]

UPDATE-99
Anisha- kaha drop karu aapko?
Lucifer- apne dil me

BOOOOMMMMMMM

Etni smooth line thi ki anisha bhi muskuraye bina rah nahi paye

Anisha- ab batao bhi
Lucifer- mujhe raste me drop kar dena

Anisha- kaha raste me?
Lucifer- main tumhe nahi bataunga
Tum danger ladki ho

Anisha- okay
Aap bata dena kaha karu
Lucifer- tum ne ashmita ko to kuch nahi bola na?

Anisha- nahi sad tone
Lucifer- kya hua?

Anisha- kuch bhi to nahi
Lucifer- sach sach batao

Anisha- kuch bhi nahi hua
Sach me
Lucifer- yahi utaar de fir
Nahi jana mujhe aage

Anisha- vo maine job chhod di
Lucifer- wait what?
Job chhod di?
Tumhe samjh me aa raha hai tum kya bol rahi ho?

Anisha- vo mujhe thoda kaam tha aur Ma'am ne mujhe bahar nahi jane diya to maine quit kar diya
Lucifer- choti bachi ho kya?

Anisha- ab jo ho gaya to so ho gaya
Lucifer- koe nahi main dekhta hu kuch

Anisha- ma'am ko nahi bolna kuch bhi aap
Lucifer- vaise bhi kya hi bol raha hu main usko
Yahi rok do

Aur lucifer vaha se bina anisha ko kuch bole chala gaya

Anisha ne bhi jada force nahi kiya usse aur na kuch pucha bas chhup chhap vaha se car vapas dene chali gaye aur lucifer

Lucifer gaya vaha jaha ke liye aap sab intezaar me bathe the

Jee ha vo gaya naag ke us adde par jaha suresh ko pakad rakha tha

Bahar hi naag aur mansi bathe dikh gaye jo chadni raat enjoy karne ki soch rahe the lekin lucifer unki raat chodne ki puri planning karke batha tha

Lucifer- naag aisa room hai kya yaha jaha par aawaz na aaye?
Naag- aisa to nahi hai bhai
Lucifer ki aawaz se uski aur mansi ki tindra tuti aur uski taraf dekhte hue bola

Lucifer- to mansi tum bahar ghum aao aaj
Mansi- kya karne wale ho aap bhaiya aaj?

Lucifer- vohi jo maine tumhe na dikha sakta hu na bata sakta hu
Mansi- main naag ko le jau?

Lucifer- nahi
Eske bina mera man nahi lagta
Koe achi se movie dekh aao ya shopping kar aao
Ander kamra bhara hua hai paiso se vaha se jitna chahiye le lo aur jao
Mansi- aap mujhe akele bejh rahe ho etni raat ko?

Lucifer- kuch nahi hoga
Maine sab dekh liya hai
Jao jaldi jao ab
Mansi- bahut kharcha karke aaunga fir main

Lucifer- pura sehar khareed aao aaj
Koe tumhe kuch nahi kahega
Mansi- aaj to aisa hi karungi fir
Aur mansi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer- ab tu mujhe kya dekh raha hai
Leke aao mere sasur ji ko
Naag- jee bhai *sad*

Lucifer- aur achi wali sharaab bhi
Bc gandu red wine pee raha hai
Pata nahi aur kya kya dekhna rah gaya hai mujhe
Naag- mansi ko pasand hai

Lucifer- kyuki vo ladki hai aur tu?
Bc rahne hi de aur ja leke aa us gandu ko
Naag ander gaya aur suresh ko bahar le aaya

Jab suresh bahar aaya to uski halaat dekhne layak thi
Chehre ki ronak puri tarah se khatam ho chuki thi aur jo khushi rathore ki image ko chodne ki thi vo ab udasi me badal chuki thi

Lucifer- latka de naag ulta esse
Aaj eski photo viral karenge
Naag- kaise latkau bhai?
Kapdo me, chaddi me ya fir...

Lucifer- alag alag pose me marenge
Naag- kapde se start karte hai bhai
Fir kam karte jayenge

Lucifer- sahi idea hai
Dekho sasur ji cooperate karoge to maje aayenge tumhe bhi aur hume bhi
Nahi to fir tum bewakuf to ho hi

Suresh- mujhe jane do
Tum jante nahi ho main kon hu
Lucifer- aur tu nahi janta main kon hu
Ab jaldi jaldi pose dene suru kar
Bahut bore ho raha hu main

Suresh- main es sehar ka sabse bada businessman hu
Nanga kara dunga tumhe
Naag- bhai sidha nanga hi kar du kya?

Lucifer- agar ek minute me esne pose dene suru nahi kiye to pahle to hunter chatkana eski gand par fir jo marji vo karna
Naag- I'm ready bhai

Suresh jiski halaat pehle se hi kharab thi uski ab aur hone lag gaye aur apni gand matkate hue ek pose dene laga

Lucifer- Haye Haye naag bc eski gand
Naag- bhai nikal lu kya pent main apni?

Lucifer- ruk ja ruk ja thoda sabar kar
Ab gand piche, muh aage aur kamar still karke

Suresh ne aisa hi kiya aur naag maje se photo lene laga

Naag- bhai eski gand kisi ladki ki hoti to kya baat thi
Lucifer- eski se hi kaam chala lena
Sun be ab ye samne pole dikh raha hai?
Kar uspar pole dance

Suresh- mujhe nahi aata
Lucifer- tu karta hai ya fir main naag ko chhod kar jau yaha tere pass?

Suresh bechara kya hi karta
Pole ke pass gaya aur usse pakad kar edar udhar ghumne laga

Naag- ache se kar lodu
Jaise vo actress karti hai vaise hi kar
Suresh aur mahnat karne laga lekin ab es umar me weight bhi badh raha tha kaise lachak aati usme?
Fir bhi apni taraf se kosis kar raha tha puri vo

Naag- bhai mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise esko maje aa rahe hai?
Lucifer- kyuki eske maje aa rahe hai lodu
Ab sun jaise ladkiya nachte hue ek ek karke kapde utarti hai vaise hi utarne suru kar

Suresh- mujhe maaf kar do beta
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Aage se aisa kabhi nahi karunga
Tum bologe to main rathore se bhi mafi maang lunga

Lucifer- ye mafi wala kaam nahi pasand mujhe
Tu kapde utarne suru kar
Raat ki maa behan mat kar

Suresh ne sirf shirt aur pant hi pahan rakhi thi aur vo shirt uski tond dhakne me nakamyab thi

Lucifer- naag ready ho ja
Esko pyaar wali bhasa pasand nahi aa rahi sayad

Lucifer ne aisa bola aur suresh ne apni shirt ke button kholne suru kar diye

Lucifer- good boy
Ache se video bana raha hai na naag?
Esko main ab se apne club me chalayenge
Naag- bhai apna to club hi nahi hai

Lucifer- to khol lenge bc
Kis chhij ki kami hai apne pass?
Naag- sahi bol rahi ho bhai

Tab tak suresh ki shirt utar chuki thi aur uski balo me bhari chhati dekh kar lucifer aur naag dono ka mood chud chuka tha

Naag- bc sare mood ki lanka jala di esne to bhai
Lucifer- ghosla to niche hona chahiye tha
Yaha to upar hi etna sab hai

Naag- vohi to bhai
Ab kya kare?
Lucifer- bc abse tourcher karne ke liye esko use karenge
Continue chalne de

Naag- main kitna acha time spend kar raha tha mansi ke sath
Es buddhe ne sab kharab kar diya
Lucifer- sabka badla lenge naag
Sabka badka
Oye ye pent kyu hai tere upar abhi tak?

Suresh ab bina maar khaye ghayal ho chuka tha
Uski aankhon me pehle baar asli ke aashu aaye the

Puri jindagi usne jo izzat shaurat banaye thi aaj vo sab loot rahi thi
Aaj se pehle kisi me etni himmat nahi thi ki vo suresh ke samne aankh utha kar bhi dekh sake aur aaj do londo ne usko nanga nacha rakha tha

Izzat lutati hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo aaj usse pata chal raha tha

Lucifer- ye natak mat kar
Puri raat nahi hai humare pass
Jaldi jaldi start kar

Suresh ke aashu tej hote gaye aur vo upar dekhte hue apni pant utarne laga
Aur dekhte hi dekhte vo sirf ek underwear me bach gaya tha

Naag- bhai jaldi se khatam karte hai esko
Ab mujhse ye dekha nahi ja raha
Lucifer- naag tu dekh aur ek sabak le ki kisi ki izzat kharab karne se pehle hum bilkul nahi sochte
Bas samne hota dekh haste rahte hai aur jab vo khud ke sath hone lagta hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo dekh

Es se sabak le ki kabhi bhi apne manoranjan ke liye kisi ko chodna nahi chahiye kyuki kahi na kahi aapse bada Lund wala bhi koe dunia me batha hua hai sivay mere se
Mere se bada koe nahi hai

Dekh esko
Suresh the fucking raichand
Raichand empire ka maalik aaj humare samne chaddi me khada hai
Esko ek misaal banane de
Lekin jo sikh mil rahi hai es se usse kabhi bhulna bhi mat

Naag- bhai hum bhi to eski izzat hi utaar rahe hai na?
Lucifer- nahi
Hum esko saja de rahe hai
Esne jo kiya uski saja
Maine apni life me bahut bure bure kaam kiye hai, na jane kitna khoon aur kaisa kaisa khoon bahaya hai lekin kisi ki izzat ke sath khilvaad nahi kiya maine

Lucifer- ye chaddi ko kya ab apni shadi me leke jayega?
Utaar esko bhi

Suresh me ab etni himmat nahi bachi thi ki vo kuch bol paye
Uske hath apne aap apne underwear par chale gaye aur jaise hi utarne wala hu bahar ka gate khula aur ashmita ander dhakil hue

Usse kaise pata chala es jagah ka?
Simple pehle anisha ko follow kiya fir lucifer ko

Jiski aankhon me gussa, dard, aur pata nahi kitne bhaav the
Lucifer ne bahut easily sab mahsus kar liya tha

Vo lucifer ko dekhte hue apne baap ke pass gaye aur usse kapde dene lagi

Naag- bhai...
Lekin lucifer ne usse rok diya aage kuch bolne se

Ashmita ne suresh ko kapde pahanaye aur lucifer ko dekhti hue vaha se usse leke chali gaye
Aankhir me do bond aashu ki tapak hi gaye uski aankhon se
Aur vo chali gaye

Naag- bhai aapne kyu apna rishta kharab kiya?
Ye sab to main bhi kar sakta tha suresh ke sath?
Lucifer- koe rishta humesha ke liye nahi hota naag
Aaj nahi to kal usse totna hi tha
Acha hua aaj toot gaya
Agar tere se karvata to vo tujhe dusman samjh leti aur badle lene ki sochti
Maine kiya to vo mujhe dusman nahi samjhegi khud ko samjhegi
Aur aisi condition me ya to insaan bilkul toot jata hai ya fir etna upar chala jata hai ki koe usse chhu bhi nahi pata
Esliye mere hatho se hona jaruri tha
Ab mujhe bas ye dekhna hai ki en dono me se kya hota hai ashmita ke sath...

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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
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[Amir]

Lone bro. Apki story fantastic hai. Mery khiyal say ab he'll or hevan main lusifat ka Dar or bar jay ga k pori powar na hone k bad b apne bhai ko mar diya Jo k khud supreme bna chahta tha. Or ab supreme kiya kry ga ? Or astma wapis to ay gi jab usy guilty hogi agy writer kiya likhta hai ya to wo he jane