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[Werewolf]

5mint Nehi 1day v late hota he bro but apun ne bola kuch v nhi waiting for next update bro

No!
Friday ka update Thursday hi consider kiya hai. Iss hisaab se monday is the time for the next update.

 

[Babasarkar]

No!
Friday ka update Thursday hi consider kiya hai. Iss hisaab se monday is the time for the next update.

Avi ka baat nhi kar raha hun bro pehele ka baat kar raha hun bro nd I know ke kuch prblm huatha aap ko but kya karu fan jo hun aap ka update ke bina apna hal bura hota he so bola diya bro

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Update - 107 ~ The Secret Practice
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Ab tak...

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.

'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?

Ab aage...

"Haah! Haah! Haaaahhhh! Urrggghh!!"

*Thud*

Ladkhada ke ek shareer achanak neeche zameen par gira. Saasein tezz, dhadkane tezz, aankhein ekdum laal, poora badan paseene se lathpat, aankho me dhundhlapann aur nirantar khaase jaa raha tha woh shaks.

*Cough* *Cough*

*Cough* *Cough*

*Gwaaakhhhhhhhhh!!*

Khoon!! Muh se uske dherr saara khoon nikla.

[Nooooooooooo~ Masterrrrrrr!!!!!!!]

Pari zorr se cheenkhi. Beshaq, ye Veer hi tha. Wine peene ke kuch derr baad hi Veer ke shareer ke andar na jaane kya kuch hone laga tha.

Woh jese hi gira, Pari ki cheenkhe bhi dheere dheere dheemi sunaayi padne lagi usse.

Usne apne honth khole kuch kehne ke liye par thar-tharaate hue woh waapas band ho gaye.

[Maaaaassssttttteeeerrrrrrrrr~]

Ek dard bhari akhiri awaaz hi Pari ki sunn paaya woh. Aur agle shan hi,

Uski aankhein band ho gayi.

[Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!]

***

"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Achanak jhatke ke saath ek ladki apne bistar se uth gayi. Din ka samay tha. Lagbhag 1 baj rahe the. Woh apne kamre me hi thoda araam farmaane ke liye laiti hui thi jab uski halki neend lag gayi thi. Aur neend me usne na jaane aisa kya dekha jiske chalte woh hadbadaate hue uth ke baith gayi.

Shayad, ek bura sapna tha.

Uske kapde paseene se bheege hue the. Khubsoorat se chehre par bhi paseene ki boonde saji hui thi. Haafte hue usne apne chehre par se ek towel se paseena pocha. Aur ek gehri saans lete hue woh kitchen ki orr chal padi.

Ek glass thanda paani peene ke baad woh waapas aayi, kamre ka darwaza andar se band kiya aur bistar par baith gayi.

'Ye bechaini...!'

Usse kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Usne fauran hi apna phone uthaaya, usme gallery kholi aur uski nazre ek tasveer par jaake theher gayi.

'Thode din aur... Thode din me hi... Tum meri aankho ke saamne hoge. Aur fir uske baad... Tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi mein!'

'Hum firse ek saath rahenge. Mom se saare raaz khulwa ke rahungi mein. Just wait a bit more. I will come to you. Very soon! My younger one!!'

Aur khud mann me ek lakshya thaan, woh waapas se bistar par lait gayi.

***
Las Vegas ~ 1:47 AM

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Ek gaadi sann-sanaati hui raaste par tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Derr raat ka samay tha. Lekin, roads par abhi bhi kuch gaadiya aati jaati maalum pad rahi thi. Ye Vegas tha, jo jaana hi apni night life ke liye jaata tha.

Divya ka perr accelerator par tha aur woh saaye-saaye gaadi bhaga rahi thi. Aankho me ek nami chhaayi hui thi,

'Why?? Why Veer?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Tum bewakoof nahi ho. You solved the Nightwalker's case. Th-Then how can you just...!? God damn it!!! Tum aisa qadam kese utha sakte ho? J-Just why?? Just tell me you were acting. Just tell me!! I just can't...!!!'

Apne hi mann me uth rahe sawaalo ke woh khud hi uttar dete jaa rahi thi. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya tha? Sab kuch theek chal raha tha. Fir eka-ek Fred ki maut aur ab Veer ki haalat ne unhe chinta me daal diya tha.

Kisi ne bhi Veer ko glass se wine peete nahi dekha tha. Lekin sabhi jaante the ki usne kya kiya tha. Camera uski chest ki pocket me laga tha. Aur jab usne wine ka glass neeche rakha tha. Woh khaali ho chuka tha. Zaahir hai ki usne wine pee thi. Aur fir woh khoon...!!

Itne logo ke beech bhala kese kisi ko murkh bana sakta tha woh?

Aur yahi baat Divya ko bechain kare jaa rahi thi.

Jo Divya Veer ki firki lene ke liye aatur rehti thi, usse chidhaane ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi, uske saath nakli flirting karte hue zara bhi peeche nahi hatati thi, aaj wahi Divya uske liye aasu baha rahi thi. Ye naina roye jaa rahe the uske.

Kyu bhala? Divya ki khud nahi samajh aa raha tha. Woh kabse itni emotional bann gayi? Lekin fir kyu ye nain baar baar aasuo ko pochhne ke baad bhi bheeg rahe the?

Ek jo kaaran tha woh tha subah ka unka milan. Bhale hi baahar se Divya kitna hi kyu na keh de ki uske aur Veer ke beech ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Par andar hi andar kahi na kahi jese woh khud chaahti thi ye aur khush bhi thi.

Aur sangam hone ke baad, thoda sa bhi prem na jaage, aisa bhala kese ho sakta tha? Uske dil me ab Veer ke liye ek alag jagah bann chuki thi. Jiski jagah ab koi dusra nahi le sakta tha.

Usne turant gear neeche kar gaadi chauthe gear me daali aur speed aur badha dii.

Aur kuch hi minutes ke andar woh doori bhi tay kar lii.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Brakes maarte hue zorr se usne gaadi roki.

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza band kar woh seedha daudi andar kii orr.

Baahar security guards nahi khade the, aur toh aur andar se kayi log bhaagte hue baahar nikal rahe the.

Mike team aur police ke sang shayad pehle hi andar ghus chuka tha.

Andar se baahar nikalte logo ko ignore kar woh daudte bhaagte hue seedha hotel me andar ghus gayi.

Saamne ka nazaara shaant pada hua tha.



Neeche toh koi chahal pahal hi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Bas upar se neeche aa rahe log hi dikhaayi de rahe the usse.

Jo ki swabhaavik tha. Veer bhi toh second floor me hi gaya tha. Ye dhyaan me aate hi Divya tezz qadmo ke saath seedha stairs ki orr bhaagi.

Lift lene ke liye samay nahi tha. Aur wese bhi, second floor par jaldi pohuchne ke liye khud ke perr hi sabse accha vikalp the.

Andar ghuste hi Divya ki aankho ke saamne chaka-chaundh kar dene waala drishya tha.

Detectives aur police ki team sabhi maujooda logo ko rok ke unhe baithane ki koshish me lagi thi. Sab ke sab under arrest me the. Nolan ke nirdesh ke baad hi Mike samet sabhi ne andar dhaava bol diya tha.

Ek bhi bach ke jaane na paaye, jitne masks lagaaye the woh sabhi iss party ka hissa the. Police ki madad se inn sabhi logo ko giraft me le liya gaya tha.

Divya ki nazre idhar se udhar duvidha me daud rahi thi. Aur tabhi usse dhyaan aaya,

'The washroom!!! Right!!!!'

Aur woh fauran bhaagi...

Aage badhte hi usse Mike nazar aaya. Toh Divya ne ek tezz awaaz lagaayi,

"Miiiiiiikkkke!!!!!"

Mike : We got this!!!! Go and search for him instead!!!

Usne chillaate hue bataaya.

Police aur uske seh karmiyo ne yaha ki paristhiti sambhaal lii thi. Mike ne fauran hi Divya ko Veer ko dhundhne ke liye kaha.

Aur Divya turant haa me sarr hilaate hue sarpat daud laga dii,

Samay badhta jaa raha tha. Kahi aisa na ho ki waqt ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal jaaye aur Veer....!

'Nahiiiii!!!! Nahi!!!! Veeeeerrrr!!!'

Woh mann me chillaayi,

Uske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho rakhi thi.

*Thud*

Pohuchte hi usne washroom ka ek darwaaza khola. Jidhar usse koi dikhaayi na diya.

'Ye waala nahi...! Damn it!!!'

Aur uski ghabraahat aur badh gayi.

Beshaq usne screen par Veer ko washroom jaate dekha tha. Par usse ye yaad nahi tha ki washroom kaun sa tha. Kyuki yaha line se 8 se 10 washrooms the. Aur sabhi ke sabhi behad bade.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!"

Woh usse pukaari!!! Veer ka naam le le kar woh darwaaze kholti rahi. Ek na ek me toh milega hi Veer.

*Thud*

'God damn it!!! Where are you....!!???'

4 darwaaze khol ke usne chaaro washrooms check kar liye the, Par Veer kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Aur na hi woh jawaab de raha tha. Uski bechaini aur badh gayi.

Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh? Toh kya jawaab degi woh Suhana ko? Khud Divya iss buri khabar ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!???"

Usne punaah pukaara aur jese hi usne paachve darwaaze ko kholna chaaha,

*Click*

Darwaaza apne aap khul gaya.

Divya : Haahhh??

Aur Divya ki aankho ke saamne tha, Veer!!

Jeeta jaagta Veer. Apne jyo ke tyo haal me.

Lekin baal thode bikhre hue the uske. Saath hi aisa lag raha tha jese kahi bhaag daud karke aaya tha woh. Aankhein bhi halki halki laal maalum pad rahi thi.

"Ohhh God!!!"

Jo bechaini, jo ghabraahat, jo darr Divya ko abhi inn chand pal pehle pareshaan kar raha tha. Woh Veer ko apni nazro ke saamne dekhte hi jese chhumantar ho gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

Woh aage badh Veer se kass ke lipat gayi. Apne haath uske baalo ke peeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke sarr ko zorr se pakad apne kandhe par tika liya.

Iss waqt aisa prateet ho raha tha jese ye ek badi behan ka chote bhai ke prati prem tha. Divya iss samay Veer ki badi behan ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.

Divya : Ohhhh thank god!!! Thank god! You're okay!!!

Aur kuch pal bas khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Divya aur Veer ek dusre ke aalingan me bane rahe.

Kuch derr baad akhir kaar usne Veer ko chorra aur usse dekhte hue apne sawaalo ki jhadi laga dii.

Divya : Kya tha ye sab haan? Veeerrr??? Bolo kuch? Why did you do that?? Kyu kiya aisa Veer??? Kaho? What really happened? Tell me!!!

Veer ki aankhein adh khuli thi. Woh Divya ko dekh zaroor raha tha. Par jese uske bol par uska dhyaan hi nahi tha. Uska dhyaan toh kahi orr hi tha.

*Ding*

[Mission : 'Assassinate the Pitcher' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[4000 Points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Profit Path has been rewarded.]

[Maaaaaaaassssttttteeerrrrr~]

Pari ki ek chintajanak pukaar uske mann me goonji.

[Why did you do that???? I told you not to-- ]

'Pari! I'm okay!' Veer ne ahista se jawaab diya usse.

Na chaahte hue bhi Pari ko shaant hona pada. Aisa laga jese woh ro rahi thi. Waqai me. Uski udaasi aur niraasha saaf uski awaaz me jhalak rahi thi.

Aur tabhi,

"Kaha kho gaye??? Veeerrrr!???"

Saamne se Divya ki awaaz sunn Veer ko hosh aaya. Woh apne khayalaato se baahar aaya.

Divya uss se jawaab maang rahi thi.

Divya : Bolo? Kya tha ye sab Veer? Kyu pee tumne woh wine??

Veer : Kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya (jhepte hue) : Huh?

Veer : Mene pucha ki kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya : ??? T-Tumne wine nahi pee toh kya piya tha? Bewakoof mat samjho Veer! We all saw it. Bhale hi tumhe directly nahi dekh paaye hum kyuki camera tumhari chest pocket me tha par humne dekha tha kese tumne glass hawa me upar uthaaya aur waapas rakha toh wine nahi thi usme. Where did it went?

Veer : It went right here!

Veer ne apni coat ki inner chest pocket ke andar se kuch nikaalte hue usse dikhaaya.

Aur usse dekhte hi Divya ke hosh udd gaye.

Divya : T-This...!

Veer : Yes!!!

Divya : Y-You--

Uske haatho me ek chota sa container tha.

Divya : N-No!!!! Tumhara matlab hai...!?

Veer : Hmm!

Kisne kaha Veer wine ko pee raha tha? Veer muh me zaroor bhar raha tha wine ko lekin bharne ke baad woh aise dikhaata jese woh wine ko gutak chuka hai. Par mauka dekhte hi woh apni inner coat ki pocket me usse thook ke uss container me daal raha tha.

Divya usse bhoot bann ke dekhe jaa rahi thi. Usse vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha.

Divya : T-Tumne ye kiya tha asal me!?

Veer : Mein paagal hu kya jo woh wine piyunga? Hmm?

Divya : R-Right! T-That was really smart! Par... Par itne logo ke beech tumne kese...!?

Veer : I just got lucky!!!

Divya : I-I see~ Ye boht hi acchi baat hai. Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala tumhaare iss container ke baare me. Y-You did great Veer. Jab screen me tumhe wine peete dekha toh hum logo ki jaan halak me atak gayi thi. I swear. Suhana bechaari toh... I hope she's alright! It's... It's really good that you're fine.

Usne Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh thodi bheegi aankho se jataaya.



Veer ne haami bhari.

Divya : But wait!!!! Y-Your blood!!! Khoon kese aaya tumhe?? Agar tumne nahi pii toh...

Veer : That was a facade!!

Divya : Wh-What?

Veer : Woh khoon nahi tha!

Divya : Toh kya tha?

Veer : Just some color!

Divya : Color???

Veer (nods) : Right!!!

Divya : Par...

Veer : I prepared it beforehand.

Divya : K-Kya matlab!?

Veer : Woh emergency ke liye tha. I needed help. Lekin aenn waqt pe communication device kaam karna band kar diya tha. Meri awaaz aap tak nahi pohuch rahi thi. Uske liye ye sab karna pada taaki department fauran hi help bhej sake.

Divya : Ahhh!!! I-I see!!! T-Toh ye baat thi. Thank god!!! Everything is fine!

Divya ne kehte hue uske coat se woh communication device nikaal liya aur usse halki muskaan dete hue boli,

Divya : You don't need this now.

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badh gaya.

Veer : Come! Aur bhi kuch baatein jaan'ni hai abhi.

Divya : Right!!!

Divya usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Par akasmaat hi uska dhyaan Veer se liye gaye communication device par gaya. Aur,

Divya : H-Hello? Divya speaking!! Can anyone here me??

Aur uske itna bolte hi,

"Yes!!! We can hear you! Loud and clear!!!"

Dusri orr se department ke seh karmi ki spasht awaaz sunaayi dii. Divya hairat me apne haatho me uss device ko dekhti reh gayi.

'This... This is working fine!!!'

Kabhi woh Veer ki peeth ko dekhti jaha Veer dheere dheere apni jebo me haath daale araam se corridor me jaa raha tha. Toh kabhi uss device ko dekhti.

Antatah usne ek baar fir daud lagaayi,

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!!!

Woh chillaayi,

Veer (palat'te hue) : Hmm?

Divya : Ye... Ye toh chal raha hai. It's working fine!!!

Veer : Ohh!? Is it? Well that's good! Kuch derr pehle nahi chal raha tha.

Kehte hue woh ek baar fir aage badh gaya. Machine thi. Kabhi chalti toh kabhi nahi.

Parantu, Divya usse bas jaata hua dekhti rahi. Uski kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. What just happened?

Bhaagte hue woh bhi Veer ki chaal se chaal milaayi aur corridor ke baahar nikal gayi.

***

Baahar aate hi nazara kuch aisa tha ki police ne sab apne control me le liya tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne unke saath milke kayi raaz bhi khol ke rakh diye the.

Mike fauran hi Divya ke paas aaya aur usse sab kuch bataaya.

Jo log yaha masks pehen ke party manaane aate the. Ye darasal koi aur nahi wahi log the jo Nightwalker ke mansion me ho rahe khoon ke khel ko live dekh uska lutf uthaate the.

Udhar Nightwalker ka poora live session dark web par daala jaata tha aur idhar log aankho dekhi hatya ka maza lete the. Yahi inki fetish thi. Na keval woh ye sab dekhte the balki iss par kaafi paisa bhi fekte the. Bets bhi lagti thi. Jiska poora fayda Nightwalker aur Pitcher ko hota tha.

Pitcher ki bhi fetish thi jo unn se aur hatke thi. Usse sundar se sundar actresses, models aur celebrities ko maarne ka shauk tha.

Udhar Nightwalker ka maut ka nanga naach jab khatam hota toh idhar uski khushi me Pitcher party rakhta, jisme woh fir kisi ko maut ke ghaat utaarta.

Yaha do tarfi hatya ka kaand chaalu tha.

Udhar se Nightwalker toh idhar se Pitcher.

Dono hi ek dusre ke sang business me bhi the. Woh jo cameras Mansion me the. Woh isliye the. Unke zariye hi ye log masks pehen ke yaha masoom ki bali ka maza uthaate the.

Chuki aisi footages kisi platform par nahi daali jaa sakti thi isliye Dark web ka sahara liya jaata tha.

Aur inhi cameras me se unhe Veer ke baare me pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Par ek satya aur tha. Jiski wajah se poora department maat khaa gaya tha.

Woh ye ki...

Nat ne jo invitation card diya tha. Uss par ek serial number bhi tha. Ye serial number card par bhi rehta tha aur...

Aur unke paas data sheet me bhi feed rehta tha. Jab Fred uss card ko leke entry kiya tha.

Toh serial number match karte hi unhe pata lag chuka tha ki Fred ke paas jo card tha woh darasal Natalia ko bheja gaya tha.

Poori chori yahi pakad gayi thi unki. Security ne Pitcher ko sachet kar diya tha. Lekin uske bawajood Pitcher ne usse bulaaya. Ab koi darwaaze tak aaya ho toh bhala uski khaatir daari kese bhul sakta tha woh?

Aur Fred bhi...

Maut ke ghaat utaar diya gaya. Khel khatam.

Yahi haal Veer ke sang bhi hua. Card toh uske paas bhi wahi tha. Nat ka.

Aur usse dekhte hi unhe fir abhaas ho chuka tha. Saath hi Veer ki photo bhi unke paas thi.

Lekin Veer ke mann me jo baat abhi bhi khatak rahi thi woh ye thi ki unko khabar kisne dii thi ki woh yaha aane waala hai? Aur mask pehen'ne ke bawajood bhala kese pehchaan liye woh usse? Iska jawaab woh dhundh raha tha. Aur kuch kuch usse samajh aa chuka tha.

Mike ne ye saari jankaari jese hi bataayi toh Divya ekdum gusse se laal ho gayi. Ab inki chori pakdi gayi thi toh zaahir hai kisi na kisi aadmi ne saara sach ugal hi diya tha Mike ko.

Par iss khel me jin maasumo ki jaan gayi unka kya? Daniel, Chester, Jacob, Fred jese kitne hi maare gaye. Woh toh ab waapas nahi aa sakte the na.

Mike : I have something to show you! Hurry!

Mike ne kehte hue unn dono ko hi kahi le jaane ke liye kaha.

Jaldbaazi me woh uss dining table par pohuche jaha Veer pehle baitha hua tha.

Par jese hi woh waha aaye,

Divya ko ek bada sa jhatka laga,

Divya : Y-Ye toh...!!!

Neeche ek dead body padi thi. Aur ye koi aur nahi tha. Wahi tha...

Pitcher!!!!

Muh se uske dherr saara jhaag nikla hua tha. Saaf tha ki woh zeher se marra tha.

Divya : Isn't he the...!?

Mike (nods) : Yes!!! The same guy who served the wine.

Divya : This...!!

Mike : He used poison to kill others. That wine bottle contains poison.

Mike ne wahi rakhi wine bottle ki orr ishaara karte hue bataaya jo Pitcher ne Veer ke liye kholi thi.

Divya (bauhe sikodte hue) : We are still missing something. How did he die?

Veer : I know it.

Veer ke kehte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par focused ho gayi. Hairaani me woh sabhi usse dekhe,

Divya : Whaaattt???

Veer : The secret practice...!!!

Mike : Secret practice?

Divya : Veer saaf saaf shabdo me kaho!!! Please be quick!!!

Veer : Wanna know the name?

Divya : *gulps*

Mike : !!!???

Aur fir Veer ke muh se sirf ek shabd nikla,

"MITHRIDATISM"​

Jisse sunte hi Divya ke poore badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uske kaanpte haatho se Veer ka woh device gir gaya. Kyuki woh jaanti thi. Woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi iss ek shabd ka matlab kya tha.

Mike ki samajh me na aaya. Usne apna phone nikaal google kar uss ek shabd ka matlab search kiya aur jese hi usne uske baare me jaana. Uska badan khud kaanp utha.

Mithridatism, ek aisi practice jisme insaan kam maatra me khud zeher leta hai. Maatra itni ki jaan ke liye ghaatak na bane.

Mithridates VI jo Pontus ke Raja the. Maana jaata hai ki woh apni maut ko lekar itne darre hue rehte the ki unhe harr samay yahi lagta tha ki koi unhe chalaaki se zeher deke maar dega. Ye puraatan kaal me ek aam baat thi. Raja maharajao ko ye bhay aksar bana rehta tha ki kahi koi unka apna hi unke saath vishvaas-ghaat na kar de.

Toh zeher unka kuch bigaad hi na paaye isliye Raja Mithridates VI ne kam maatra me khud hi zeher lena shuru kar diya tha. Iss umeed me ki ye kam zeher lete lete ek na ek din unka shareer iss zeher ke khilaaf rog pratirodhak shakti paida kar hi dega. Yaani ki immunity bana hi lega.

Jese aksar hum navjaat shishu ko injections lagwaate hai, fir chaahe woh polio ke ho ya tetanus ke ya anya koi. Inka uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai ki shareer inn rogo ke khilaaf ek immunity bana le. Raja Mithridates ne bhi yahi karne ka socha tha.

Zeher le le ke uske khilaaf ladne ki shakti banana. Parantu ye daav ulta pad gaya tha. Zeher baar baar nirantar lene ke baad wahi zeher unke shareer me ikhatta hone laga tha, jo baad me aage chalke unki maut ka kaaran bann gaya.

Pitcher ka bhi uddeshya wahi tha.

Aur Pitcher...

Ye karne me qamyaab ho gaya tha.



Aisa nahi tha ki aap yadi iss practice ko apnaate ho toh aapki maut nischit hai.

Hargiz nahi! Yadi non-biological poisons ko liya jaaye toh ye sambhav hai ki aap kuch poisons ke khilaaf immunity nirmit kar sakte ho.

Jo vish ka pyaala hum dusro ko dete hai woh ek na ek din hume khud bhi peena padta hai. Ab tak ye baat Pitcher par sahi se laagu nahi ho rahi thi. Par Veer ke aate hi...

Kaam tamaam ho chuka tha.

Divya : Quick!!! We have to get back to the department. There are still many questions that are left unanswered.

Woh kehti hue aage badhi, Mike bhi haami bharte hue peeche peeche gaya. Parantu idhar Veer ki aankhein Pitcher ki laash par hi tiki hui thi.

Unn aankho me bhayanak gussa tha. Ekdum laal ho rakhi thi woh. Aisa lag raha tha Veer abhi uski laash pe bhi toot padega aur cheer phaad dega.

'I almost died, you bastard!!!'

Woh mann me hi gurraaya.

Uska heart rate bhaiyankar zyaada ho rakha tha. Container?? Kaahe ka container??

Veer Divya ke jaate hue figure ko peeche se dekh raha tha. Siwae Mithridatism ke, jo kuch bhi usne Divya ko bataaya tha.

Woh sab jhooth tha.

Uska asal sach toh uske khud ke antar mann ki gehraiyo aur uske zehen me hi dafn hoke rehne waala tha.

Asli sachhaayi toh kuch aur hi thi...

Jab Veer hotel me ghus neeche Beowulf se check kar raha tha. Tab usse nahi pata tha ki upar balcony me uski photo ko idhar se udhar kiya jaa raha tha.

Parantu...

Ek uss se bhi badi sansani macha dene waali khoj kar lii thi usne.

Neeche uski nazar dur ek aise vyakti par padi thi jo ek wine ki bottle me powder jesa kuch mila raha tha.

Aur ye kya tha ye bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.

Beshaq, zeher!!!!

Veer ka maqsad saaf tha. Na keval usne jaa ke iss baat ka pata kiya balki, usne uss vyakti ke jaate hi wahi powdered substance ki maatra aur badha ke uss wine me daal dii.

Ye sab usne tab kiya tha jab woh vyakti andar kuch lene gaya tha.

Bheed itni thi ki kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. Sirf pitcher hi Veer ke baare me jaanta tha aur chand aur log jinhone Veer ki live footage dekhi thi. Par kuch aise bhi the jo Veer ke pehle ke murder footages dekhe hue the. Woh bhi party ka hissa the.

[Maaastttteeerrrrr!!! Wh-Whaattt are you doing??? Aap usme kyu mila rahe ho?]

'Agar mein sahi hu, toh aaj Pitcher nahi bachega!!!'

[N-Noooo!!! Don't tell me you...!!]

'Yes!! I will do it!!!'

Woh waapas se apni jagah par aaya. Aur Veer ne dekha ki kese woh vyakti dobaara se uss wine ki bottle me packing chadha raha tha taaki aisa lage wine ki bottle ekdum nayi hai.

'This motherfucker...!!'

Aur inn chand lamho me, Veer ne ye saara kaam iss prakaar se kiya tha ki uske jeb ka camera saamne ki orr focused tha. Department waalo ko screen me dekh ye katayi pata nahi lag paaya tha ki Veer ne aisa bhi kuch kiya tha.

Fir aaya woh waqt, jab Pitcher ne Veer ko bulaaya.

Uske saath baith ke jab usne Veer ko woh wine offer kii, Pitcher ke chehre par haivaano waali kapti muskaan thi. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ye Veer aaj marrega hi uske haatho se.

Par woh ye nahi jaanta tha... Ki Veer ek aam insaan nahi tha.

Veer ne jese hi wine se bhare glass ko check kiya,

*Ding*

[A glass full of poisoned wine. Don't drink it.]

Sab kuch saamne tha. Ye wahi wine thi. Jisme ferr badal kiya gaya tha.

Aur isliye Pitcher ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Kyuki woh bhi same wine peeta tha.

Parantu woh iss zeher se ladne me saksham tha. Lekin aam vyakti nahi.

Aur aise hi sabhi maut ke ghaat utar rahe the.

What a horrifying way to kill.

Woh abhi bhi shaitaano ki tarah muskuraa ke Veer ko dekh raha tha.

'This sly bastard!!!'

Lekin aaj khel kuch alag hone waala tha.

'Pari!!! Open the shop!!'

[Yes Master!!!]

'Find me a skill which can cure this poison.'

[Whaaaatttttt??? Nooooooooo!!! Maaassttteeerrrr!!! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. I'm telling you please stop!!! Please!!! I'm begging you~]

'Pari...!!!'

[Nooo noooo nooooooo!!!!? How can I??? Mat kariye.... Please!!!! I...]

'DO IT!!!!!!'

Jab Veer mann me zorr se cheekha toh Pari ek baar fir apne master ke saamne haar gayi.

[Master! This is the one but...]

'Kitne points? Ohhh! 5000 Points? One time use only? Fine then! Purchase this.'

[O-Okay but...]

'DO IT!!!!'

*Ding*

['Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available.]

*Ding*

[Host can only use this skill for one time only.
Warning : Beware of extreme pain, vomit and increased heart rate.]

*Ding*

[Sylvia's Venom cure has been activated.]

Aur agle hi pal, Veer ke andar bhaari maatra me white blood cells bann'na shuru ho gaye. Bann toh pehle bhi rahe the par unki process kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Veer ne fir woh kiya jo sabko hairaan kar diya tha.

Usne wine pee lii thi. Par wine toh container me gayi thi?

Laude ka container! Woh container toh washroom ke soap dispenser ka ek toota hua bhaag tha jo Veer ne washroom se nikalne se pehle hathyaya tha.

Woh color? Ghanta color! Woh toh uska khoon tha jo white blood cells ne poison ke roop me usse baahar fikwaaya tha.

White blood cells hi toh immunity ka kaaran hai hamaare shareer me.

Aur uske baad utha tha Veer ko atyant dard, uska nervous system itne khatarnak sthiti se guzar raha tha ki uska andhruni dard aseem hota jaa raha tha.

Aisa laga tha ki woh ab nahi bachega. Aur behosh hone se pehle usse bas Pari ke bol yaad the.

"Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!???"

Divya ki awaaz usse firse hosh me laayi.

Veer : Coming!!!

Veer ek akhiri nazar Pitcher par daal aage badh gaya.

Aur baahar aate hi,

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki aur Suhana aur Nik usme se baahar nikle.

Suhana ki nigaahein jese hi Veer par jaa kar tiki uski aankhein felti chali gayi,

"Veeeeerrrrrrr!!!"

Woh daudte hue aayi aur zorr se kood ke uski baaho me ucchal gayi.

Uske baad wahi hua. Sawaal pe sawaal. Veer ne jese tese maamla shaant kiya.

Par...

Veer : Huh!!??

Woh aashcharya chakit reh gaya jab usne apne bagal me Suhana ko dekha toh...




Woh ro rahi thi. Unn aankho me pehli baar Veer ne kabhi apne liye itne strong emotions dekhe the.

'Miss Suhana...!?'

Veer : Aap ro rahi ho?

Suhana (muh ferrte hue) : Who's crying? Get lost!

Veer : *smiles*

Divya : Tum dono! Take my keys! Mujhe aane me late ho jaega.

Divya ne car ki keys fekte hue kaha.

Aur kuch derr me hi Veer aur Suhana dono Divya ki car me sawaar hote hue waha se ravaana ho gaye. Udhar ki tehkiqaat lambi chalne waali thi.

Idhar car me,

Suhana (smiles) : I'm happy!

Veer : Why so?

Suhana : Duh!!! You dumb! Kyuki tum sahi salaamat ho.

Veer : Par jab mein waha se jaa raha tha tab toh aap gussa hoke bhaag gayi thi bacchi ki tarah perr patak ke.

Suhana (blushes) : Wh-What do you mean by bacchi ki tarah??? I was looking out for you!! Par tum ho ki... Kherr! Chorro!!! Wait!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suhana : Udhar park hai!

Veer : So!?

Suhana : Stupid! Stop the car! Mujhe thodi fresh air chahiye.

Suhana ki baat maan Veer ne gaadi park ke paas rok dii.

Ye ek open park tha.

Aur dono hi utar ke kuch derr uss khamoshi me tehelne lage. Koi baatein nahi.

Jab achanak hi,

Suhana palti aur Veer se zorr se chipak gayi.




'Huh?'

Suhana : I thought something will happen to you!!!

Usne usse dekh ke bola!!



Veer : But I'm right here! Hai na?

Suhana : Hmm! And that's what matters.

Kehte hue woh uske kandhe par sarr rakh uss se chipki rahi.



Jab achanak hi usse dhyaan aaya...

Ki Veer uska pati nahi tha.

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke jaate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of almost 5k words. Again, normal length se kahi zyaada bada update.
Likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka yaara.
Keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!

जबरदस्त एकदम जबरदस्त भाग भाई....

 

[Werewolf]

Sab Sy pehly TU jaisa aapny kaha tha ye update full of twists hoga no I get it. ye update akdam unexpected tha.

Or jaisa scene hota hai us hisaab Sy Jo aap pictures use krty Hain wo ak dam bawaal hoti hai ak dam perfect.

Sab Sy pehly tu HOK arc khatam HOA wo bhi ak dam dhmakedaar andaaz sy.or ye pitcher ka reward nat NY Kuch Ziyada hi diya Jo Divi expect kr Rahi thi wahi shuii ko thodi bhut jalan bhi ho Rahi thi nat Sy coz wo iski behen ki dost thi isky Ghar Mai khela keto thi or ab wo shuii ko aisy ignore kry gii TU ye shuii ki feeling ana Normal hai.

Jalan toh nahi kahenge par Suhana ko accha Bilkul nahi laga Nat ka behaviour.

Veer ky path trick NY kmaal kr diya mazy k mazy or paisy k paisy ak dam kmaal yl.kiss bhi ly li hot beauty Sy or raqam Mai adha hissa bhi.

Plan tu akdam romantic tha dinner ka or adha TU kamyaab bhi hogaya tha veer or shuii ka .

Hmm

But But sab Sy last or important thing wo unknown man.ye Banda alag hi level ka Banda mujhy lag Raha hai SLOGAN,ATISH,JIM,NW, PITCHER ye Sab is bandy k aagy mujhy ak dam bacchy lagny lagy Hain.

Uske paas system hai toh obviously woh dhaakad hi hoga.

Veer NY sense TU kar Liya danger ko but but but ! bechara veer gaya kaam Sy bhaaga TU bhut par kaam na bana .

Kisi ne pehle se hi jaal biccha ke rakha tha.

Shuii ko bachany k liy usny chupa diya par shuii NY veer KY hissy ki bullet khud ly lii or I think shuii .

Or Sab Sy important us bandy ki wo line jis NY veer ko asmaan Sy patak kar Zameen KY 2,0000 feet nichy phenk diya k system sirf usky pass Nahin mean wo akela Nahin is world Mai system k saath. Or ye bhi pata ni wo kis level tak ka Banda hai veer Sy kahan wo khada hai I Don't think k veer isky aas pass bhi hai.

A tough challenge for Veer. Finally!! A worthy opponent.

Agar veer akela ni hai system k saath is world Mai or wo Banda bhi hai iska mtlb koi or bhi ho sakta hai system wala or system kitny bandu k pass hai ye bhi abhi abhi pata lagna Shuru HOA hai or abhi iski origin ka bhi pata ni ye system kaha Sy aya hai kiyu aya hai kia my bheja hai .ye Sab abhi pata chalny hai.

Or is system ka leader Kon hai Kisi my TU bnaya hoga . Or koi waja TU zaroor hogii and I think main vellian bhi yahi hoga system ko bnany wala right? Acha wo Sab TU pata chal hi Jana hai bas important ye hai .

1) aaj veer ka last day tha vages Mai Jo ab cancel hogaya .

2) HOK ki ending or nat Sy adha paisa bhi veer ko Milla.

3) ak dinner shuii k saath Jo incomplete or horror able Raha.

4) shuii k last FAVOURS, don't tell k ye hot beauty ka ending hai.

5) shuiii ki sacrifice I think kiyu k wo veer k hissy ki goli thi I think.

6) system holder veer k ilawa.jo k bhut dangerous Banda hai.

Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.

Ye update waqai jaisa aapny kaha hai ham ready Nahin thy apny ko bas shuii zinda wapsa chaiy marny ka naii USKO .



Update ak dam peak par tha .

Bas besabri Sy next ka intezaar . Wo aap surprise kr dain hmain or du din Mai dy dain ak or unexpected chiz dy dain hmain

Smash

Dhanyavaad man! Par ek hi comment me na likh de ye sab!?
Anyways, keep supporting bhai!

 

[Werewolf]

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट वेयर वोल्फ भाई
मजा आ गया
कोई ओर भी हैं इस दुनिया में जिसके पास सिस्टम हैं
ये देखना और भी दिलचस्प होगा
ऐसे कितने लोग हैं जिनके पास सिस्टम हैं भाई
बहुत खूब भाई

Spoilers nahi de sakta man. Baaki bane rahiyega dhanyavaad!

romanchak update ..divya ko kiss karne ka task mila jisse profit honewala tha veer ko aur veer ne wo complete bji kar diya .
suhana ke saath maje se shopping ki veer ne par ek aisa aadmi saamne aaya jiski koi bhi information pari ke paas nahi hai .
khatre ka aabhas hote hi veer suhana ko lekar bhag nikla par dushman apna jaal bichha chuka tha .
divya abhi tak madad karne nahi aa paayi par veer ne kuch gundo ko raste se hata diya .suhana ne veer ko bachane ke chakkar me galti kar di aur ghayal ho gayi .
last ke 2 favours bhi yahi maang liye jab wo maut ki kagar par hai .
aur wo aadmi bhi system rakhta hai jaise veer ke paas hai .veer ko shocked. to lagna hi tha ye jaankar ki us aadmi ne kya kaha .

ab bas yahi dua hai ki suhana jaldi se hospital pahuch jaaye aur theek ho jaaye ..

ab ye sochna pad raha hai ki ye system hai kya jo veer ke saath saath kisi aur aadmi ke paas bhi maujud hai aur wo aadmi veer ke kahi guna jyada aage hai .

Hmm! Woh banda definitely week toh nahi hai. Veer ko kese usse handle karna hai ye dekhna hoga. Par sabse zyada jo cheez abhi Veer ko darra rahi hai woh hai uss bande ke motives. Veer ko nahi pata wph banda akhir chaahta kya hai. Aur yahi baat Veer ko ghabrahat me rakhe hue hai. Woh chaahta toh wahi Veer se fight le leta ya Suhana ko maar deta. But usne aisa kuch nahi kiya. Yahi sawaal hai. Veer is unclear of his motives. And that's the most scary thing.

suhana ko lekar jo aapki feelings hai waise meri bhi hai ki usko kuch nahi hona chahiye .
aur agar ye villain house of killers ka top leader hai to bhi wo india aake veer se ladh sakta hai ,veer ko maarna hota to shayad abhi maar deta jab veer pareshan tha aur ladhne ke kaabil bhi nahi kyunki suhana ka tension tha usko .
usne veer ko bas aagah kiya hai system ke baare me .
abhi us aadmi ki mansha saaf nahi huyi ki wo kya chahta hai veer se .
ab shayad india me hi kuch naya dhamaka ho .

Yes! That's exactly what I said.

Bohat hi khatarnak update aur shayad ab tak ka sabse romanchak update hai yah. Is baar dushman veer se kahi zada upar ke level ka hain. Ab dekhna hoga ki kia veer Suhana ko bacha payega aur most important kia woh khud ko bacha payega. Badi be Sabri se intezar rahega agli update ka coz jo goosebumps ubhray hain woh tabhi shant honge jab house of killers arc ka any hoga. Abhi koi bhi assumption dena bewaqufi hoga aur yah cheez ek dam all of sudden samne aayi hain.

Didn't I mention when I started this story ki villains iss story me alag level par rahenge.
Dekhna padega woh comment kaha gaya. Yes! Assumptions laga sakte ho but mostly galat hi saabit honge. Fir bhi guessing game on rakhiyo. Thanks btw! Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Ye update aapke is story ke ab tak ke sare Updates me se one of the best Update tha Werewolf bhai.
Kya kuch nahi dikhaya bhai is update me aapne. Mujhe to read karte time aisa lag raha tha ki mai koi Hollywood movie dekh raha hu, such me Enigma bhai aur Raja chauhan bhai ke baad ab tak ye 3rd story hai jo mujhe dil se bahut jayada pasand aayi hai. Aapka her ek update kisi web series ki tarah chl raha hai. Aur specialy house of the killer arc ka to level hi ekdam alag hai

Dhanyavaad bhaaya!
Mene pehle bhi kaha tha ki house of the killers arc apne aap me aag arc hai. Aur ye mera personally favourite arc bhi hai. Toh iss par mehnat toh banti hi thi. Jaan kar khushi hui ki ju ko pasand aaya. Par uske bawajood, kuch logo ko ye arc Bilkul hi pasand nahi aaya. But as I do always. Plot me koi changes nahi hue readers ke according. Shuru se abhi tak jitne changes hue hai woh meri wish ke according hi hue hai. Aur ant tak aise hi chalegi story.

Mai bina kisi dought ke with proud ye kah skta hu aapki story current time ki is foram ki no. 1 story hai.

Arre bhai! Thanks!

Aapke her ek Update me jo barikiya hoti hai. Aap jo hme apne word ke through feel karwana cahte ho wo almost 80 percent time mujhe feel hota hai. Juth nahi kahunga ki 100 percent her word hi feel hota hai kuch kahi kahi word me wo bhaaw nahi aa pata hai. But fir bhi ye story bahut hi awsm ja rahi hai aur house of the killer arc ne iske level ko 100 times increase kar diya hai.

100% toh kisi ko feel nahi hota bhaaya. Bhale hi story kitni bhi acchi kyu na ho. 99% tak jaa sakta hai par poora kabhi nahi. Meri koshish harr baar yahi rehti hai ki mein updates ko dikhau. Na ki padhwau.

Aur ab to mujhe bhi bhai ye feel hone laga hai ki agar aapke story ka update 2-3 me aata to wo maja nahi aata. Pata nahi kyu lakin ab mujhe ye feel hone laga hai ki ha iske update almost week me 1 baar hi aana cahiye. Aur jo suspens aur maja bana rahata hai pure week uska bhi apna ek alag maja hota hai. Ab bahut se log isko nahi smjha skte hai to mai unke bare me kuch nahi kah skta hu.

Ye toh mein bhi feel karta hu. Ju hi mujhe sabse acche se samajhte ho.

Mai kai baar aapke Updates ki kai lines ko 2 se 3 times read karta hu. Is liye nahi ki mujhe samajh me nahi aaya balki is liye quki mujhe samajh me to 1st time me hi aa gaya tha. Lakin mai us word ke sath jo feelings aayi hai use aur bhi 1 se 2 times again feel karna chahta hu.
Aur story read krne ka bhi 2 tarike hote hai ek aaye Update open kiya jldi jldi read kiya khtam jyada kuch nahi.

Same is the case with me. Aur ye ek acche reader hone ki nishaani hoti hai.

Lakin dusra tarika hota hai mere jaise kuch logo ka quki hum aapka update tabhi open krte hai jab hmare paas almost 30 min free ho fir open karke hum last ke update ki jo aapki lines rahti hai usko read krke apne aap ko last time se connect karte hai. Aur uske baad baad new Update ko read akarna start karte hai. Aur her ek line ko read krte hue him us scene ko imaging karna suru kar dete hai. Ab isme bhi aap hmari bahut help karte ho pic aur gift ke through use dekhne ke baad hum us character ko us dress me us jagah par usi emotions ke sath imagine karna continue kar te hai. Her ek chij jisase bahut hi aasani se imagine hone lagta hai aur aisa lagta hai phone ke screen me word nahi hai video chal rahi hai.

how does it feels when you are immersed while reading? Yes! You have described that feeling very well...

Ab to mujhe ye bhi lagne laga hai kisi Hollywood Director ko aapki story dikhani cahiye, wo definitely ise dekh kar is par web series banane ko maan jayega. Aur pakka ye web series doom macha degi.
Khair upar ka wo sub Update ko raed krne ke baad flow flow me likh diya jo ki bilkul such bhi hai.

Haha~ Abhi apan yahi assume karke chalte hai ki ye abhi bhi uss level ki nahi hai. That will bring the best out of me more.

Ab aate hai Update ke review par :-
Sbse phle to bhai aapse hath jod kar request hai suhana ko marna ya handicap bilkul bhi mat karna please warna mai aapka story read Krna band kar dunga.

Ye toh agla update hi bataega.
Suhana se itna pyaar? Damn!

Nahi ye is story ki filhal ki top female character hai. Aur mai use marte hue to bilkul bhi nahi dekh skta hu.
Ab jab Update ki shuruaat hui aur aapne kaha ki veer ko le kar kal suhana wapas india jane wali hai tabhi mere mind me last update ki baat yaad aa gayi ki aapne suru me kuch aur dikhaya aur last me sub kuch aur aur mai smjha gaya ki ye house of the killer arc ka end to bikul nahi ho skta hai. Aur ye baat bhi mujhe confirm hai ki ye pura arc yaha los Angeles me hi hoga. Aur mai smjha gaya kuch to jarur aisa hoga is Update ke ending me jisase veer india wapas nahi ja payega.

Abhi isme apun spoiler nahi de sakta. Baaki dekhte hai kitni baatein ju ki sahi nikalti hai.

Ab aate hai us bande ke upar jiske bare me system ko bhi kuch pata nahi hai. To nahi use gift me dekhte hi mai smjh gaya tha house of the killer arc ka main villain yahi hai. Aur ye kya aapne to ending me ab tak ka Sabse bada boom fod diya ki uske paas bhi system hai.

Mene pehle hi bataaya tha. You guys are not ready for what's about to come.

Ab jo ye soch rahe honge ki us aadmi ko kaise pata chla ki veer ke paas bhi system hai to hua ye hoga ki wo veer par 1st killer ke marte hi najar rakhna suru kar diya hoga. Aur jab usne veer ko check kiya hoga to uske System ne bhi pari ki tarah veer ka koi information use nahi bataya hoga. Jisase jahir si baat hai ki use bhi kuch samjh me nahi aaya hoga aisa kyu hai lakin fir veer ke action se usne andaja lagaya hoga Aur jab usne veer ke kaan me ye baat tukke se boli hogi to veer ke expression se uska ye shak confirm ho gaya hoga.

Ab main baat ye aati hai ki uske aur veer ke system me similarity hai ya alag hai. Aur agal hai to kya kya alag hai. Aur alag hai to kiska System jyada Powefull hai.
Sath me dono ke system ke hisab se kon jyada high level par hai abhi. Sayad wo main villain hi hoga.

Iske liye pehle system ke baare me hume kayi raaz jaan'ne honge.

Ab agar aisa hai to veer usase kaise nipat payega. Quki usne to saaf kaha hai tum mera sikar ho. Use baki kisi se Matlb nahi hai ab use sirf veer se Matlb hai. Aur aise me veer ab aur na yaha se bhag skta hai. Quki agar wo India bhagta hai to ye waha bhi iske piche aayega aur isase uski family khtare me pad jayegi. Aur yaha bhi veer jiski help lega wo bhi iska target ban jayega.
Waise kahne ko to aur bhi bahut kuchh hai lakin wo sub ab mujhe in bato ke aage kuch bhi nahi lagti hai.
Ab dekhte hai aage aur kya hota hai. Besabri se next update ka intezar rahega.

Dekhte hai kya hota hai.
Baaki thanks a lot yaara for such a beautiful and lovely review. From my side, I'll give my best as always. Toh saath bane rahiyega iss lambe anokhe safar me. Keep reading and Keep supporting as usual.

 

[Werewolf]

Aapne jab is arc ko start kiya tha tab ek do Update baad hi aapke readers ke review ke reply ko read krte hue hi mujhe ye baat kafi had tak samjh me aa gayi thi.
Lakin aapke is post se pahle tak ye mera bas ek thought tha. Jo aapke is post ko read karne ke baad confirm ho gaya. Nd I m happy ki maine sahi socha tha.
Nd mai aapko dil se sukriya kahna cahta hu Werewolf bhai ki aapne bahut bahut bahut acha kiya jo old plot ko le karke aisa kuch nahi kiya idea wo bhi acha tha. Lakin jo abhi Actually me chal raha hai wo epic hai. Mujhe to ye smjha me hi nahi aata jab mai kisi ka comment read krta hu ki H.O.K arc me maja nahi aa raha ise khtam karo. Jabki mujhe to ye story ka best part laga. Ab to mai H.O.K. ke bina aapki is story ko imaging hi nahi kar pata hu.

Thanks man! That is true. House of the killers boht hi important arc hai kyuki yahi arc hai jo hume bataata hai ki system kisi aur ke paas bhi hai. It reveals a huge secret at the last. Also, Veer ka high level underground killers se ladna is again another thing. Aur kuch naye characters dekhne ko mile hai hume isme. It's one of the most important arcs of the story.
Aur jesa ki mene bataya. Plot me samay samay par moderations hote rehte hai. Update 108 me bhi hua. It wasn't supposed to go like that. Suhana wasn't meant to get injured in the first place. But...
I did a few changes. Aur mein jaanta hu kinn changes ko rakhne se kahani behtar hoegi.

Aur bhai phle hi bata du HOK arc se apne apna level kud itna increase kar diya hai to Village arc usase bhi kafi upar ke level ka cahiye hi cahiye. Aapko jo time lena hai kon lakin is arc se koi compromise nahi hona cahiye. Hmari nahi ye aapki hi galti hai ki HOK ARC agr excellent hai to ye epic hona hi chahiye.

Arre man! Par village arc toh family based hai. Ab isme hardcore thriller kaha se lau mein? Aage padhiyega. Aage abhi kayi arcs aane waale hai. Abhi toh humne hardcore fight dekhi hi nahi hai. Just imagine the fight between Veer and that new guy with the system.

Dekh lo Itachi_Uchiha ... Aakhir, ye rishta kya kehlata hai?

Pari is the best.

Waise Death Kiñg bhai ye baat to confirm hai jab tak ki Werewolf bhai next update nahi dete hai. Tab tak is baar inke story me comments ka tufan aane wali hai. Mere hisab se to is baar 109 upadte aane tak 2200 pages complete ya almost complete hone wale honge.
Mai is baat par to bet bhi laga sakta hu.

Ju kuch zyada aage nahi nikal gaye?

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब fabulous excellent outstanding update

Kya twist diya hey bhai apne, veer ka enemy samne aahi gaya,

Ab dekhna padega age kya hota hey

Thanks man!

Bhai yeh kya bawaal tha onther guy have a system...!
What the fuck....!

Dimag ka dahi ho gya hai yar agle update me hi ye thik hoga .....
Suhana jldi bachna chahiye.....​

Dekhte hai man.

Werewolf please suhana ko bacha lena bhai

Kese sab peeche pade hai. Suhana se sabhi ko pyaar ho gaya kya?

Agreed !! Aur aisa hoga mughe umid thi thodi si usi update me jab pari ne apne baare kuch information veer ko batayi thi ki wo earth se nhi hai wagerah-wagerah jo bhi tha.... lekin itni jaldi bilkul nhi aur mughe laga tha ye banda system wala yaa iss se aur bhi related log jo honge jinke pass system hoga wo baad me milenge par nhi ju ne to isse yahi patak diya aur kuch hint bhi de diya jo agar readers ko pata chala to wo to pagla hi jayenge lekin wo hints sahi bhii hona chahiye,dekhte hai apan review me saari baate likhega aur questions bhi !!

Ab ye mat kahna ki pari ne kab bola tha ki wo iss earth se nhi hai to bata du ki ussne ye jarur bola tha ki :-

[Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Ab isme saaf hai ki pari iss earth kya iss solar system se bilkul nhi hai ye sabhi ko pata hoga sabhi ko

Toh mene kab kaha ki mene nahi bola. update 4 me hi ye baat mentioned hai.

Dyamm I knew it sooner or later their will be a second character who will also own a system cuz as Veer was doing the jobs which is too easy for him...

Yes! Veer is growing in a rapid rate. Eventually he will gain his own powerful followers and might establish his own strong empire. Then normal villians won't be able to succeed at all. Now a worthy opponent has arise. A tough challenge for veer.

I guess Werewolf is hiding more powerful characters in his pocket

The entry of the second character just gave goosebumps..

Thanks man!! Keep supporting!

 

[Awan Badshah]

Update - 108 ~ The Last Two Favours
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Ab tak...

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke naate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'

Ab aage...

A day before flight...

Aaj woh din tha jab Suhana aur Veer Las Vegas me antim raatri ke liye rukne waale the.
Aur kal hi unki fir waapas apne vatan lautne ki flight thi.

Inn beete dino me na jaane kya kya pareshaniyo ka saamna karna pada tha unhe. Shuruaat hui thi Jim se jaha unhe iss house of the killers gang ka bodh hua, fir Nightwalker ke Mansion ka maut ka woh nanga naach aur antim me Pitcher ka rehesyamayi tareeqe se sundar hastiyo ko maut ki neend sulaana.

Kuch bhi ho, inn sab me sirf Veer hi nahi tha stress me. Suhana aur Divya ka bhi yahi haal tha. Suhana toh ab apni seema par aa chuki thi.

Itne dino ki bhaag daud aur harr taraf maut ki khabre sunn sunn ke hi uska dimaag phata jaa raha tha. Jald se jald ek refreshment chahiye tha usse toh ab.

Aur isliye, Suhana ne Divya ko baaki sab kuch se deal karne ke liye usse apne haal par hi chorr diya.

Pitcher ka raaz khulne ke baad, Divya ke mann me dherr saare sawaal the, khaas kar Veer ko lekar. Par kya karti bechaari? Veer tha, jo kabhi bhi apna asli sach bataane nahi waala tha. Ant me Divya ko wahi baatein sweekaar karni padi jo Veer ne apne muh se bataayi thi.

Aur aaj teeno Divya, Suhana aur Veer jis musibaat se nijaat paaye the uske liye vasooli karne aaye the.

Dusre shabdo me, woh yaha Nat se paise lene aaye the. Nat ne Divya ko hire kar paise dene ki baat ki thi apne concert ke baad.

Aur Divya apne haath me aaya paisa chorr de? Aisa kese ho sakta tha!?

Teeno hi ek baar firse baahar baithe hue the. Aur pichli hi baar ki tarah Suhana ka muh fula hua tha,

Suhana : Fir wahi scene.

Divya : Hahahahaha~ Kya kar sakte hai? Celebrity hai woh. Hume apne hi paise lene ke liye wait karna hoga.

Suhana : Kitni hi badi celebrity ho. Mujhe abhi bhi uska attitude pasand nahi aaya. Humph~

Veer : Well! At least, hume baat karne ka mauka mil raha hai.

Suhana : Huh? Kya matlab baat karne ka mauka mil raha hai? Veer, woh Sonu ke saath bachpan me khela karti thi. Mere ghar aati thi woh ucchal ucchal ke. And look at her now. Sach kehte hai log. Logo ko badalte derr nahi lagti.

Divya : Hahaha~ Ohh! My Sonny is pissed!

Suhana : Shut up! And don't call me with that fucking name.

Divya : Hehe~

Suhana : Mein washroom se hoke aati hu tab tak.

Woh uthi aur apni kamar matkaate hue baahar nikal gayi. Ab udhar sirf aur sirf Veer aur Divya hi bache hue the.

Veer Pari se kuch baatein karne hi waala tha jab achanak hi,

*Ding*

[Profit Path : Kiss Divya now.]

'Ehhh?'

Uske mann me ek message aake pop hua.

[Aapko Divya ko kiss karna hai Master.]

'What the fuccckkkk!!??'

[Ahem!]

Veer ye puchne hi wala tha ki ye naye scroll ka kaam kya hai aur tabhi iss naye scroll ne ek path de diya.

"Ye kya bakchodi hai? Pari??? Kiss? I mean yeah kissing her is good and all but..."

[Pffftttt~ Hahaha~ Toh kariye kiss fir.]

'Par iska kiss se kya lena dena. Wtf is happening?'

[Master~ Iss scroll ko underestimate mat kariye. Jesa naam hai wesa hi kaam hai iska. Time to time ye aapko profit paths show karta rahega. Aur yakeen maaniye, agar aap iske bataaye gaye path ko follow karenge toh aapko ameer bann'ne se koi nahi rok sakta.]

'Hmm! Toh ye business related hai! Right?'

[Jii haan Master! Ye aapki rich life ke liye hi hai. Dusre shabdo me jaha jaha profit hone ki possibility rahegi. Profit Path aapko paths de dega. Ab ye aapke upar hai ki aap uss path ko follow karke kuch earn karna chaahte ho ya nahi?]

'Hmm! I see! Fir bhi, Miss Divya ko kiss karna aur...!'

[Kar ke dekhiye! Tabhi hume pata chalega na.]

'Aisa lag raha hai mein scam ke daldal me doobne jaa raha hu.'

[Hehe~ Nooo! Just trust me!]

'Fine then! Miss Divya! I'm sorry! But I'm about to taste you~'

Agle hi pal uski nigaahein Divya ke husn par tik gayi. Khud ke upar nazre mehsoos karte hi Divya ne Veer ko dekha,

Divya : What?

Veer : Heh~

[Let's go~ ]

Divya (blushes) : Wh-What is it!?

Divya ke badan par goosebumps aa rahe the. Ye Veer achanak se usse ajeeb nigaaho se kyu dekhne laga tha? Uske andar jese khatre ki ghanti baj rahi thi.

Aur tabhi, Veer aage badha aur uske gaalo ko choomne laga,



Divya : V-Veeeerrrr!!! Wh-What are you doing!!!?

Veer (smiles) : Taking my reward!

Divya (blushes) : K-Kaisa reward?

Veer : Of course! Ye waala...!

Aage badhte hi usne pal bhar me Divya ke raseele honth apne muh me bhar liye.

"Mmmmnnnnnnnnn~"

Divya firse virodh karti rahi par ek do baar me hi jese Veer ke honth uske labo ko choosna shuru kiye, Divya ka virodh saara ka saara gaayab hoke reh gaya. Balki, uske haath khud-ba-khud Veer ki collor ko kass liye,

"Nnnnnnnnngggghhhhhhhhh~"

*Slurp* *Slurp*

Uski saasein fulne lagi, aur usne turant hi dhakka deke Veer ko alag kiya. Thook ki ek patli sii lakeer dono ke muh se jud gayi.

Aur tabhi unhe kisi ke aane ki aahat aayi,

Veer ne muskuraate hue apni ungli se uss lakeer ko toda aur woh chup chaap ek seedhe bacche ki tarah hoke baith gaya. Toh wahi, Divya ne sharmaate hue apna muh haatho se pocha aur apni dress dobaara check karne lagi.

Aane waala shaks aur koi nahi, Suhana thi. Washroom se aake woh waapas sofe par baith gayi.

Kuch chand derri ke baad...

Abhi yaha baatein ho hi rahi thi jab ek cabin se nikal ke ek ladki aayi aur unhe dekhte hue boli,
"Miss is coming!"

Bol kar woh waha se nikal gayi. Aur bas kuch derr me hi Nat cabin se nikli aur baahar aayi. Kaali dress me woh harr baar ki tarah behad khubsoorat lag rahi thi.



Jitni baar usse dekho, utni baar mann machal jaaye kisi bhi aadmi ka. Aur Veer bhi unme se hi ek tha.

Nat ko firse dekhte hi uske dil ki ghanti bajne lagi thi.

'So beautiful...!'

[Hmm! Hmm! She is indeed. I will agree here. ]

Woh aake unke saamne ruki, uske chehre par ek muskaan thi.

Nat (smiles) : Looks like, you did the job!

Divya : Of course!

Nat : Well! Ye raha cheque!

Kehte hue usne Divya ko ek cheque haath me thama diya.

Divya ne jese hi cheque dekha woh hairat me reh gayi. Cheque par keemat million dollar ki thi. Yaani kareeb kareeb 8 crore ke aas paas ki rakam.

Divya : Th-This...!!!

Divya ke haav bhaav dekhte hi Nat ke chehre par ek santushti bhari muskaan sajj gayi,

Nat : Mene pehle hi ye baat boli thi. Right? I will pay you a hefty amount. Toh ye raha! Have it!

Divya : Well...! Iss baar. Saara credit Veer ko jaata hai.

Divya ki baat sunn, Nat ki nazre Veer par tikk gayi aur woh ek chaav ke saath usse ghoorne lagi,

Veer : ...!?

Nat (smiles) : Then, I must thank you too I guess.

Usne apna haath aage badhaaya toh Veer ne apni taraf se zarra sii bhi derri na dikhaayi.

Aur haath milaate hue dono ne hi haami bhar ke ek dusre se mann hi mann baat kar lii.

Suhana ko kuch khaas interest nahi tha. Woh bas haath baandhe apni aankhein ghumaate hue jald se jald yaha se nikalne ka intezaar kar rahi thi.

Nat : I hope we will meet again!

Veer : Maybe!?

Nat (smiles) : Maybe huh!!?

Veer : ...

Nat : I have an appointment. I will take my leave here. Thanks once again Divya! You were a big help!

Divya : That's my job!

Nat ne ek antim baar sarr hilaaya aur waha se woh nikal gayi.

Suhana : Aaarggghhhhh!!! She pisses me so much! Mein jaa rahi hu baahar! Parking me milo tum dono!

Suhana yaha se nikli toh wahi Divya sofe par baith ke apne phone me kisi ka contact dhundh rahi thi.

Aur idhar Veer...! Uski nazre abhi abhi Nat ke jaate hue uss figure par tiki hui thi. Nat ne bhi jese Veer ke mann ki baat sunn lii, woh lift me andar jaane se pehle ek baar palti,

Veer ko dekhi aur,



Muskuraate hue usne ek ishaara kiya. Aur fir muh se 'bye' kehte hue woh lift me ghus gayi.

'Huh!?'

[Uske aur aapke beech kuch pakk raha hai kya Master? Why do I feel weird? Hmm!!! (⁠‘⁠◉⁠⌓⁠◉⁠’⁠) ]

'Naah! You are overthinking!'

Ek lambi saans leke Veer muda ki tabhi Divya uske nazdeek aayi,

Divya : Apna... Apna account number do!

Veer : Hmm?

Divya (blushes) : Idiot! Reward nahi chahiye kya? Abhi itna reward reward kar rahe the. Give me your account number. I'll.. I'll transfer half of the amount to yours.

Veer : Woahhh!

[Dekha! Mene kaha tha na? Profit Path par bharosa rakhiye.]

Divya : Mujhe yaha se ek important kaam se jaana hai. Aaj mein busy rahungi. Tum Suhana ko leke kahi acchi sii jagah jao. Wese bhi kal tum dono ki flight hai. Jaane se pehle ek refreshment zaroori hai. Enjoy kar lo thoda. Itne din frustrate ho gaye hoge. Suhana ko bhi thoda accha feel hoga.

Veer : Are you...!?

Divya : Yeah I'm sure! Ye rahi keys! Go now! Usse wait karna pasand nahi hai.

Divya Veer ko gaadi ki chaavi thama ke waha se ravaana ho gayi.

Aur Veer bhi nirdesh anusaar Suhana ko leke waha se nikal gaya. Profit Path ne toh sach me uska fayda kara diya tha. Upar se tareeqa bhi bada accha tha.

Yadi Veer ne Divya ko kiss kar woh ehsaas na dilaaya hota toh shayad Divya ne paise nahi diye hote. Aur agar deti bhi toh shayad aadhi rakam saath me nahi baatati.

Veer aur Suhana car me baithe hue the jab Veer ne sawaal kiya,

Veer : Toh? Kaha chalna hai?

Suhana : Kaha chalna chaahte ho?



Veer : Mein?

Suhana (smiles) : Haa tum! Kyuki mene sab ghooma hai yaha. Tum hi pehli baar aaye ho.



Veer : I...

Veer confused tha aur uska ye confusion dekh Suhana khil-khila uthi.

Suhana : Mall chalte hai. Sonu ne mujhse kuch accesories laane ko kaha tha. Aaj last day bhi hai hamaara yaha. Hum bhi kuch shopping kar lenge? How about that?

Veer : Ohhh!! Right right!!! Mujhe yaad aaya. Mein ye kese bhul sakta hu?

Suhana : Kya?

Veer (smiles) : Meri Juhi ke liye mujhe chocolates leni hai.

Suhana : Juhi? Ohh that Little kid? I see!

Suhana ek soch me doob gayi. Veer yaha itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi uss choti sii bacchi ki liye chocolates lena nahi bhula? Ek ajeeb sii feeling uske dil me jaagi, jisse woh samajh nahi paayi ki kya thi.

Dono ne dherr saari shoping kii, hassi mazaak toh kahi ek dusre ki taang kheechne me dono ka samay guzra.

Suhana jitna Veer ke sang rehti woh khud ko utna acche se mehsoos kar paati. Usse aisa lag raha tha jese woh bina kisi darr ke Veer ke saamne apni split personality ko bekaabu bhi hone de sakti thi. Jese usse visvaash tha ki agar Veer uske saamne hai. Toh usse koi chinta nahi rahegi.

Dono shopping ke baad street par roadside baithe hue the. Aaj ka din kitna khubsoorti se beeta tha unka.

Suhana : Toh? Raat ka kya plan hai? Kahi aur ghoomna hai?



Veer : Aaj aap dinner ki party kyu nahi deti!?

Suhana : Ab dinner party bhi mein hi du? Abhi itni shopping karwaayi mene!



Veer (smiles) : Toh dijiye! Wese bhi! Aapki dinner party sab ko naseeb kaha hoti hai? Look at Nat. Unhe bhi mauka nahi milne wala.

Suhana pyaar se muh ferrte hue Veer ke joke par muskuraayi,



Suhana : Duh! No way!

Veer : Fine then! Dinner ki party meri taraf se.

Suhana : Yessssss!!!!!



Dono hi behad khush the. Divya ke paas badqismati se samay nahi tha toh sirf Veer aur Suhana hi iss dinner ka hissa the.

Aur keval do logo ke hone ke kaaran, ye dinner kam dinner date zyada lag rahi thi.

Luckily, unn dono ka dinner behad hi acchi tarah se hua. Suhana me jo change aaya tha Veer ke prati woh zameen aasmaan ka tha.

Woh ab Veer ko apne baraabar ke dost ki nigaaho se dekhti thi jo ki ek boht badi baat thi. Saath hi unn aankho me ab kahi bhi nafrat ya chidh nahi thi Veer ke liye. Balki kuch aur hi tha. Kuch aisa... Jis se Suhana abhi anibhigya thi.

Veer iss aalishaan hotel ki first floor ki balcony ke paas khada hua tha, Suhana ka woh wait kar raha tha. Jab tabhi achanak neeche ke ground floor par uski nazar gayi aur usne dekha ki,

Ek suit pehne aadmi usse hi peni nazro se ghoor raha tha.

'Huh? Check!!!'

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Message padhte hi Veer ki aankhein shock ke maare chaudi ho gayi.

'P-Pariiii!???'

Aisa pehle aaj tak nahi hua tha. Ye sab kya tha? Veer ne Kaera ko jab check kiya tha tab usse "you are not eligible to view this person's status." dikhaayi diya tha.

Par ye?

No information available! Yeh kya tha? Woh kuch soch paata ki tabhi woh vyakti chalte hue aage aaya, uske haatho me ek cigarette thi aur Veer ko dekh ek kutil muskaan dete hue woh waha neeche se baayi orr mudd gaya.



Pal bhar me hi Veer ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

'What!?? What is happening!?? Kaun tha wohhh??? Who the fuck he wasss??? Pari?!?'

[Yes master]

*Ding*

[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use.]

*Ding*

[16 enemies were found nearby.]

Ye dekhte hi Veer ki bolti band ho gayi.

'Fucccckkkkkk!!!!!'

Aur agle hi pal woh mud ke turant bhaaga, udhar Suhana apna make-up washroom se check kar ke nikal rahi thi jab Veer ki tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi,

"Miss Suhaaanaaaa!!!!"

Suhana : Hmm? K-Kya h--???

Woh kuch keh paati ki uss se pehle hi Veer ne uski kalaayi thaami aur zorr se usse bhaga ke hotel ke baahar le jaane laga,

Suhana : Ahnn!? V-Veeerrr? Kya hua? Wait!!! What the hell?? Haah... Haah... Tell me!!! Hum bhaag kyu rahe hai!?

Veer : Puchiye mat!!! Jaldi! Car me baithiye!

Usne furti me Suhana ko car ke andar dhakela aur khud driver seat par baith gaya,

Suhana : Veerrr!! Mujhe ye bilkul pasand nahi hai okay? Tell me! Tell me kya hua hai!?

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Aur Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi accelerator par perr rakh diya.

Suhana : Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!

Woh cheenkhi.

[I was right!! Master!!! Koi hamaara peecha kar raha hai.]

Veer ki nazar jese hi rear mirror pe gayi, aur Pari ki baat uske kaano me padi, uski chinta aur badh gayi. Suhana sath me thi. Nahi nahi nahi!!! Ye ladaayi lene ke samay nahi tha.

Veer ne skillfully gaadi ko idhar se udhar nikaala par woh gaadi ab bhi peeche bani hui thi. Aur Veer ka shaq ab yakeen me badal gaya tha.

Suhana (screams) : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!

Veer : Humara koi peecha kar raha hai. We are the targets.

Suhana (jhepte hue) : Whaaatttt???

Veer : Yeah!!! Isliye... Aapko leke waha se bhaagna pada.

Suhana : Y-Ye sab chal kya raha hai?

Idhar Suhana ne call kar Divya ko sab kuch bata diya. Aur yaha Veer ne car me hi gps ki madad se sakre raasto me gaadi daalni shuru kar dii thi.

Par woh gaadi ab bhi peeche lagi hui thi.

'Damn it! Damn it! Damnnn ittt!!!!'

Aur fir,

*BAAAANNNGGG*

*CRAAASSHHHHHH*

Suhana : Aaahhhhhhnnnnnn~

Ek goli aake seedha unki car ke left mirror ko ukhaad ke alag kar dii.

Suhana : Veeeeeerrrrr!!!!

Veer : Don't worry!!!

Suhana ghabraate hue kabhi peeche dekhti toh kabhi saamne toh kabhi Veer ko,

Uski dhadkane train ke maafiq tezz ho chuki thi. Ye sab chal kya raha tha?

Veer ne gaadi ko seedha alleys me ghused diya. Ye alleys bilkul wesi hi thi jese Jim ko pakadte waqt veer aur baaki sab gaye the.

Aur usne gaadi ek alley ke mod me rokte hi Suhana ko usme se baahar nikaala.

Veer : Jab tak Miss Divya help leke nahi aa jaati hume yahi chhupna hoga. Car se dur hi rehna chahiye hume. Come!

Suhana : Ye tum kya keh rahe ho Veer? Hum rukk kyu rahe hai?? Hume toh... Hume toh car me hona chahiye... It's risky... We are fucking getting shot... Let's go!!! Hum unse bach ke nikal sakte hai.

Veer ab kese Suhana ko ye bataata ki Basic Enemy Tracker ne pehle hi ye bata diya tha usse ki aage 8 se 10 enemies harr direction me khadi hoke unka intezaar kar rahi thi.

Aage jaana matlab maut ko aamantran dena tha.

Veer : Trust me!!!

Suhana : What trust me Veerrrr??? We will... We will die...!!!

Aur agle hi shan uske aansu chhalak uthe.

Veer ne usse iss haal me dekh uske sarr ko apne dono haath me thaama aur uski aankho me aankhein daalte hue bola,



"Nothing will happen okay? Hum sahi salaamat iss se baahar niklenge. Okay?"

Uske dono haatho ko thaam Veer ne usse aasvaashan diya.



Suhana aaj darr rahi thi. Divya bhi uske saath nahi thi. Uske paas apni handgun bhi nahi thi. Woh dono hi nihatthe the. Aur toh aur apne desh se baahar. Woh sthiti ko bhali bhaati bhaanp chuki thi. Aur isliye uske aasu nikal pade.

Veer : You go in there. Udhar chhup jaaiye! Quick!

Suhana : What about you!?

Veer : Mein dekh ke aata hu woh nikle ya nahi! Now go!!

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki baat maan woh ek choti sii jagah ke paas jaake raat ke uss andhere me chhip gayi.

Par tabhi,

"There he is...!!!'

"Catch him!!!"

"Let's go!!!"

Kuch anjaan awaazein uske kaan me padi, aur Suhana darr ke maare apna muh band kar wahi dubak ke baith gayi. Veer ki safety ki ek aas liye.

Idhar Veer...!

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Aur uske baad, Suhana ko sirf maar dhaad aur na jaane kesi kesi cheekhne chillaane ki awaazein sunaayi dene lagi.

Woh ghabraate hue apni jagah se bahar nikal sarr se baahar jhaakte hue dekhi toh uske hosh udd gaye.

Neeche 7 se 8 log dale hue the. Toh wahi Veer do aur logo se ladne me laga hua tha.

Woh baahar nikli lekin achanak se,

Apne peeche se usse ek gaadi ki awaz sunaayi dii. Aur uski khidki se ek mask pehne aadmi nikla. Uske haath me ek gun thi.

Suhana ne jese hi ye dekha,

"Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!!" Woh chillaayi aur bhaagi.

Par tabhi,

*BANG*

"Ahhhhnn...!"

Gunshot ki awaaz sunte hi Veer ke kaan khade ho gaye. Usne fauran apna sarr palat'te hue peeche dekha. Uske dono haath do aadmiyo ke gale ko jakde hue the.

Peeche mudte hi, usne dekha,

Suhana ki aankhein fati ki fati hui thi, woh dheere dheere ek kadam, do kadam aage uski orr badhaate hue aa rahi thi apni ladkhadati chaal me.

Tabhi uska kaanpta hua haath apne peeche gaya aur usne apni peeth par mushqil se ferra. Waapas jab usne apni hatheli dekhi toh,

Darr uske chehre par saaf jhalka aur ek ehsaas hua. Uski hatheli gehre laal rang se sani hui thi.

"V-Veer!"

Thar-tharaate hontho se usne pukaara aur agle hi shan, "Haahhh!"

Uska shareer saamne ki orr gir gaya. Veer ki nazro me tab jaake Suhana ki peeth saamne aayi, jo khoon se lathpat thi aur woh gehra laal rang Suhana ke kapdo me harr guzarte pal felta jaa raha tha.

Khoon!

"N-Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!" Woh chillaaya.

*Thump* *Thump*

Uska dil zorro se dhadka aur usne unn do aadmiyo ko pakad ke kass ke ek dusre ke sarr se bhida diya.

Dono aadmi wahi behosh hoke neeche zameen par gir pade.

*Whoosh*

Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah sab kuch chorr seedha Suhana ke paas aaya.

"Yooouuuuu!!!!!!!" Usne gurraate hue peeche roads par unn gaadi me baithe logo ki orr dekha jo turant hi goli maar ke rafu chakkar ho gaye waha se.

Ek ghabraahat Veer ke zehen me janm le uthi.
Usne fauran hi Suhana par focus kiya.

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]

Usne apne kaanpte haatho se Suhana ko uthaaya.

"Noooooooo!!!!! Suhanaaa!!! Suhanaaa!!!!"

Ghabraahat me Veer ye bhi bhul chuka tha ki woh Suhana ko uske naam se pukaar raha tha.

Adhkhuli aankho se Suhana Veer ko dekhi. Aur agle hi shan, uske naino se dherr saari aasuo ki boonde nikal ke girne lagi.

Dard!

"Maaa!!!! Maaaaaaaaaaa~"

Veer ki shirt ko kass ke haatho me jakde hue woh dard se bilakhne lagi,

Veer : Suhana!!!!! N-Nothing will happen to you!!! Tumhe kuch nahi hoega. Don't worry! Abhi... I'm taking you to hospital. Hold your strength!!!

Suhana : V-Veer!

Veer : Haan?

Suhana : I-I don't think... I will make it.

Veer : Don't talk nonsense! Shut up! You'll be fine!!!

Veer ne fatafat apni shirt utaari aur sabse pehle Suhana ki chot par usse baandhne laga. Khoon jitna behna kam ho sake utna hi behtar tha. Halaki ye tareeqa bhi zyaada kuch kaam nahi aane waala tha. Par iss se kuch pal ke liye toh khoon ke bahaav ko kam kiya jaa hi sakta tha.

Suhana ke thar tharaate hontho se fir se kuch bol nikle, "V-Veer!"

Veer : Don't talk!!! Didn't I tell you!?? Just breath!!!

Suhana : Y-Your last two favours!

Veer : Suhana shut up!!! Ye samay nahi hai inn baato ka. Let me tie it up first!!

Woh vyaakulta me chillaaya,

Suhana : Noooo! N-Now is the r-right time. Haah... Haah... Second favour! P-Promise me!!!

Veer : ...!!?

Suhana ke hontho par ek pyaari muskaan sajj gayi,

Suhana : You will protect Sonu!

Veer : You dumbass! Ye koi kehne ki baat hai? And shut up! Aise mat kaho ki ye tumhare akhiri bol hai. Don't act like you're gonna die. Shut the hell up!!!!

Veer ke haanth kaanp kaanp kar shirt par gathaan baandhne me lage hue the. Usse ye ehsaas ho chuka tha aaj ki Suhana se bhale hi usse pyaar nahi tha par woh kya maayne rakhti thi uske liye. Ye baat bhali bhaati jaan gaya tha Veer abhi. Suhana ek dard bhari muskaan ke saath Veer ke saare actions par nazar daali hui thi. Dil me ek khushi ki leher thi uske, ye jaan ke ki Veer ke haath kese kaanp rahe the. Ek sanket tha ye ki Veer ko bhi uski parvaah thi andar se. Aur kitni thi, ye toh uske chehre ke haav bhaav hi sab batla rahe the.

Suhana (smiles) : A-And for your third favour.

Veer : All done!!! Now come...! Jaldi! We can't be late!!!

Usne Suhana ko apni goad me uthaaya,

Suhana : .....

Par, Suhana ne behad dheemi awaaz me kuch kaha. Uske itne qareeb hone ke baad bhi Veer ko Suhana ke woh bol dhang se sunaayi na diye.

Usne sunn'ne ke liye apna sarr jese hi uske chehre ke paas laake neeche jhukaaya ki tabhi,

*Kiss*

Veer : !!!??

Suhana ne apne honth Veer ke honth se laga diye. Bas chand seconds ke liye hi tha ye. Unn komal hontho ka sparsh...!

Kyuki, achanak Suhana ko dard ke baad peeth me jo abhi tak numbness mehsoos ho rahi thi woh bhi ab gaayab ho gayi. Aur uski jagah ek atyant peeda dayak jalan mehsoos hone lagi.

"Nnnghhhh!!!!" Apne hontho ko daato tale zorr se dabaaye aur aankho ko meeste hue woh dard ko bardaasht karne ki koshish karne lagi. Usse aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese kisi ne ekdum garam garam lohe ki rod uski peeth me ghop dii ho. Jalan itni zyaada thi. Uska blood pressure kayi guna badh chuka tha. Heart rate bhi boht high ho chuka tha.

Ye toh dimaagi sanket the. Hamara dimaag aksar hume bachaane ke liye hamaare shareer ko nirdesh deta hai. High blood pressure, heart rate ussi ka kaaran the.

Jab Bullet jese hi Suhana ki peeth ko cheerte hue ghusi thi, chand seconds tak toh usse kuch pata nahi chala tha. Koi anubhooti bhi nahi hui thi. Aisa laga tha jese kisi ne usse chota sa patthar phek ke maara ho.

Parantu aisa nahi tha,

Muzzle se bullet jese hi nikli thi, woh saath me ek air pressure apne ird gird samete hue thi jo ki ghumaavdaar (spiral) tha. Aur ye bullet jab insaan ki chamdi me ghusti hai, toh bullet toh tabaahi machaati hi hai par saath hi woh air pressure poore andhruni ango ki dhajjiya udaa deta hai.

Badqismati yaha ye ki woh bullet ricochet ho gayi.

Ricochet hone ke baad hi bullet ne apni disha badli aur seedha Suhana ki peeth ko cheerte hue andar jaa ghusi.

Aur ye sab hua kyuki Suhana Veer ko ahaat karne ke liye usse bachaane jaa rahi thi.

Jese hi Veer ko iss baat ka bodh hua, uski aankho me peeda saaf jhalakne lagi.

Veer (frowns) : K-Kyu!? Why did you--!?

Suhana (smiles) : I-I don't know!!! M-Mere perr apne aap daud pade...!

Uska bas itna kehna tha ki Veer ki aankhein namm ho chali. Aur ek ashru ki boond tapak ke Suhana ke komal chehre par jaa giri.

Apne seene se laga ke usne Suhana ka maatha chooma aur ek dridhta uske mann me jaag gayi.

Jab akasmaat hi,

*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*

'Huh!!?'

[Maaastttteerrr!!! T-This is bad!!! Run!!!]

Saamne se ek aadmi andhere me se chalte hue aaya. Aur roshni jese hi uske chehre par padi, Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.

Ye wahi vyakti tha. Wahi jo hotel me usse nazar aaya tha.

Veer : Y-You!!! What do you waaaannnttt???

Veer zorr se gurraaya,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Par uss aadmi ne kuch na kaha. Veer zyada samay waste nahi kar sakta tha. Suhana ki haalat gambheer thi. Jald se jald yaha se nikalna tha usse.

Uss aadmi ne apna haath jeb se nikaalte hue haath par bandhi ghadi par samay dekha aur bola,

"Clock is ticking! Aren't you getting late?"

Veer khamoshi me usse ghoorta raha. Iski koi guarant nahi thi ki Veer agar yaha se mud ke jaane ki koshish kare toh peeche se ye aadmi kuch nahi karega. Upar se Pari ko bhi kuch ehsaaa hua tha iss aadmi ko lekar.

[Maaasterrr!!! Y-Ye insaan mujhe bilkul theek nahi lag raha hai. There's... There's something wrong with him. Be careful!]

Pari ke itna kehte hi,

*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*

Woh insaan dheere dheere chalte hue aage badha. Veer ke maathe par paseena saaf jhalak raha tha. Uska ek perr apne aap peeche ho gaya.

Jaldi se usne Suhana par ek nazar maar ke dekha toh uski chinta aur badh gayi. Suhana behosh ho chuki thi.

'Damnnnn ittttt!!!!!!!'

[Master!!!!]

Woh insaan Veer ke ekdum nazdeek aaya,
"I'm just here to remind you something!"

Veer : ???

Woh Veer ke gaal ko thap-thapaaya jese Veer maano koi baccha ho aur fir uske kaan ki taraf aake sirf ek baat boli.

Jisse sunte hi,

Veer ke hosh udd gaye. Uska badan thanda pad gaya. Wo bhoot ki tarah wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Agar Beowulf active na hota toh shayad uske haatho se Suhana bhi chooth ke gir jaati. Jese ek visfot hua tha uske dimaag me.

Aur agle hi second, woh anjaan shaks Veer ko wahi akela chorr gungunaate hue waha se seedha nikal gaya jese Veer uske liye sirf hawa ke samaan tha.

Aur alley me fir ek baar shaanti chhaa gayi,

Par uske bol abhi bhi Veer ke dimaag me zorr zorr se goonj rahe the....

"YOU ARE JUST ME PREY!"

"Also..."

"System... Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai! VEER!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Like thokna na bholna
Iss update ko padhne ke baad ye jaan gaye honge aap sabhi ki house of the killers arc kyu important tha. Dekh sakte hai aap ki kaafi bhaari twist aaya hai. Haha! Agle update bhi important hai. Kuch aur raaz khulenge. Bane rahiyega!
Dhanyavaad!

Fantastic update

 

[Werewolf]

मध्यांतर तक सब कुछ ठीक ही चल रहा था । दिव्या जी को किस करना...लगभग चार करोड़ का फायदा होना.... नटालिया का आंखों एवं उंगलियों के इशारे से गोली मारना..... सुहाना के साथ डीनर प्लानिंग करना । वीर के लिए सब कुछ मन लुभावन था । मस्त मस्त था । वाह वाह था ।
परंतु क्लाइमेक्स में ऐसा धमाका किया आपने कि वीर के ही नहीं बल्कि तमाम रीडर्स के भी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ गए । इसके अलावा सुहाना को ऐसे मुकाम पर पहुंचा दिया कि हमारे इमोशन्स भी भर भरकर बाहर आने लगे ।

वीर एकलौता इंसान नहीं है जिसके पास सिस्टम " परी " है । मतलब परी की ट्विन सिस्टर भी है जो अमेरिका में एक व्यक्ति के अंदरूनी हिस्से में समाहित है ।

Aisa toh mene nahi kaha ki pari ki twin sister hai.

वैसे मुझे अभी भी यह बात हजम नहीं हो रहा है । जरूर कोई लोचा है । और अगर सच में ही ऐसा है तो कहानी यहां से यू टर्न लेती हुई नजर आयेगी । सच इसलिए कहना पड़ रहा है कि उस व्यक्ति की पहचान परी भी नहीं पकड़ पाई । और उस व्यक्ति की स्वीकृति कि , 'वीर अकेला नहीं है जिसके पास परी है '।

He said, "system sirf tumhare paas nahi hai." Pari ka koi zikr nahi tha isme.

यहां पर कुछ प्रश्न भी खड़ा हो रहा है ।
*वीर और सुहाना पर अटैक किसने और क्यों किया ?
*क्या वही व्यक्ति इस अटैक के लिए जिम्मेदार है जिसने खुद को परी सम्पन्न मनुष्य का खिताब दिया था ?
*या अटैक करने वाला व्यक्ति कोई दूसरा है ?
*क्या हमलावर का टारगेट वीर था या सुहाना थी या दोनों ही थे ?
*अगर हमलावर व्यक्ति वही था तो फिर असहाय महसूस करते हुए वीर की हत्या करने की कोशिश क्यों नहीं की ?

Ye sab spoilers hai.

फिलहाल सुहाना की अवस्था बड़ी ही नाज़ुक है । वीर , सुहाना के संरक्षण में अमेरिका आया था । वीर जिम्मेदारी थी उसकी । लेकिन पासा पलट गया है और अब वीर की जिम्मेदारी बनती है कि वो सुहाना को सुरक्षित करे ।

True true!

हमेशा की तरह सुंदर और सुंदरतम अपडेट वेयरवोल्भ भाई ।
और जगमग जगमग भी ।

Dhanyavaad bhaaya. Jag mag jag mag bole ho matlab update sahi tha. Warna aap harr revo me harr jagah ye nahi kehte. Jab update boht accha hota hai tab hi aap ye likhte ho. Kya mein sahi hu?
Btw, keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai aapne rungate khare kar diya! Kya suspence and thrill tha update main.... System&suhana .. Blood pressure high ho gaya, is update ko maine 2 baar pada

Dhanyavaad bhaaya! Bane rahiyega!

Extraordinary update bro,
Please suhana ko nahi maro yaar ....

Dekhte hai kya hota hai Suhi ke saath apni.

प्रणाम भाई सहाब

एक अनुच्छेद में इतने मोड़ इतने तो उत्तराखंड के पहाड़ी इलाक़ों मे मोड़ ना होंगे जितने आप अपने ज्यादातर अनुच्छेद में देते हो पर अब तक के सारे अनुच्छेदों में से इस अनुच्छेद में जो मोड़ आया वो सही में काफी खतरनाक मोड़ हैं,

Dhanyavaad Bhaaya! Hmm! Ye ab tak ka sabse hila dene waala reveal tha. Kyuki, 100 updates ke upar ho jaane ke baad, logo ne ye ummeed nahi rakhi thi ki aisa bhi kuch achanak se aa jaega. So, this was a huge turning point.

मुझे लगता था कि ये कहानी सिस्टम पे निर्धारित है तो सिस्टम ने एक ही सिस्टम तो नहीं बनाया होगा क्यु की अगर एक ही सिस्टम होगा तो कहानी एक तरफा ही चलेगी और जहां तक मेरी समझ है,
कहानी का मुख्य किरदार हमेशा अभिनेता नहीं होता कहानी का मुख्य किरदार हमेशा खलनायक होता हैं, क्योंकि खलनायक जितना दमदार होगा कहानी उतनी अद्भुत होगी,

Bilkul! Jo protagonist ko takkar de sake aur uski khatiya khadi kar de. Iss se zyada exciting aur kya?

आप ने जिस अपरिचित किरदार को समाने लाया है ये तो निश्चित हैं कि वो अपने अभिनेता वीर से काफी मजबूत है पर मैं ये दावे से कह सकता हूँ कि ये अपरिचित व्यक्ति मुख्य खलनायक नहीं हैं,
क्युकि मुख्य खलनायक का आगमन होगा वो अब तक के सारे अनुच्छेदों से अव्वल दर्जे का अनुच्छेद होगा, जिसकी हम कल्पना भी नहीं कर सकते

अब मैं अपने शब्दों को पूर्णविराम देता हूं

अगले रोमांचक अनुच्छेद के लिए मेरी तरफ से आप को शुभकामनाएं

Boht boht dhanyavaad bhaaya. Saath bane rahiyega!

Guess nahi biswas tha. Ek hi to hai jiske charm me werewolf bhai kuchh bhi kar sakte hai.
Pichle 2 updates me review dekha nahi unka...kal tak dekha hu.

Inko sab pata hai....!

Bade bhaiya kya kahte ho aaj Werewolf ka rista lekr chala jaaye kya I meaan veer ka

Ladkiyon par jitna gehan shodh aur vishleshan Sanju bhaiya ne kiya hai, kisine na kiya hoga... Ek counselling centre kaahe nahi kholte aap, hamare jaise nasamajh baalakon ke liye?

Unhone already coaching institute khol ke rakha hai.

Shayad Nupur ji ka kiya hoga... saari khubsurat ladkiya aisi hi hoti hai. Madari ki tarah bandar jaisa naach nachati hai.

Tajurba bolta hai. Kathan sahi hai.

marvelous update hai bhai,
Iss naye character ne to entry ke saath hi tabahi macha di hai,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Dhanyavaad bhaaya!

Ye kyu kiya aapne????? Whyyyyy????
kyu kyu kyu kyuuuuu???? Noooooo Suhana ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.....
Agar usse kuch hua to goliya chal jani h... Main bata rahi hu...

बहुत दिनों बाद आया उसके लिए माफ कीजिएगा
अपडेट बहुत शानदार था हमेशा की तरह
सुहाना का अपने ऊपर ज़ख्म ले लेना वीर के लिए यह एक भावनात्मक क्षण था
पर यह क्या इस दुनिया में वीर अकेला नहीं है कोई और भी है जिसका अपना गैंग भी है
पर उसने वीर को ज़ख़्म देने की क्यूँ कोशिश की
और वीर के गालों को थपथपा कर चल दिया क्यूँ
प्रतीक्षा रहेगी अगले अपडेट की

Dhanyavaad bhaaya!
Inn sawaalo ka jawaab aage ke updates me hi hai. Abhi nahi diya jaa sakta. Bane rahiyega!