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[Pankaj Tripathi_PT]

Update - 98 ~ The Nightwalker
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Ab tak...

[You have established a name of yourself by catching the criminal splendidly. You have been rewarded 200 Fame Points]

'One target down!!! Na jaane kitne baaki hai abhi.'

[It's going to be really tough Master! Really tough!!!]

Pari ki baat se sehmat hoke, Veer chal diya Suhana ke sang car ki orr.

Pehla criminal toh asaani se pakad aa gaya. Par kya baaki bhi itni asaani se pakad me aane waale the? Ye toh waqt hi bataane waala tha.

Ab aage...

Duniya me harr tarah ki ghatnaaye ghatit ho rahi hoti hai. Chaahe khushi ke pal ho, ya naraazgi, kisi se gussa, toh kisi se maar peet. Kahi fame hai toh kahi crime. Kahi controversies toh kahi bhrashtachar.

Aur aise hi Vegas me kal raat ek crime karne waale criminal ko pakda gaya tha. Iss ghatna ko anjaam diya gaya tha.

Aur Iss Operation ka hero kaun tha? Beshaq, Veer!

Par kya khatra tal chuka tha? Hargiz nahi! Jim toh keval shatranj ke khel me ek pyaada tha. Woh pyaada, jo khel me sabse pehle maara jaata tha.

Unn pyaado ke peeche ek se ek dhurindhar baithe hue the. Aise log jinka naam sunn log kaanp uthate.

Ye baat Divya bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Usse ye abhaas ho gaya tha ki boht hi badi koi planning kar raha hai. Par sawaal ye tha usse itna sab kese pata chala?

Kya Divya kuch aur bhi baat chhupa rahi thi? Veer ne ye bhaanp liya tha. Divya kuch na kuch toh zaroor chhipa rahi thi. Par kya? Ye jaan'na baaki tha.

Tab tak Mumbai me kya ho raha tha ye bhi jaan'na zaroori tha.

Idhar Ragini subah ka naashta Suman aur Shweta ke sang banaane ke baad chup chaap apne ghar ki terrace par khadi hui thi.

Bechaari ka mann hi nahi lag raha tha kahi. Kese lagega? Veer ke jaane se pehle hi Ragini ne jee bhar ke usse chooma tha. Aur wo ehsaas usse paagal kar chuka tha.

Ab toh ek pal bhi uske bina jeena mushqil ho raha tha.

'Hey Bhagwaan!! Mene uske jaane se pehle hi kyu kiya wo sab? Ab toh mujhse raha bhi nahi jaa raha. Baar baar wahi yaad aa raha hai. Akhir roz roz kitni video call karu usse?'

Wo apne aap se baatein kar ek chinta me doob gayi. Roz roz video calls par wo Veer se kam se kam ek ghante to baat kar hi leti thi.

Veer ki yaad Ragini ko itni zyaada sataaegi usse iss baat ka bilkul andaaza nahi tha. Pichli baar jab Veer Egypt gaya tha ya Rajasthan. Tab Ragini ko itni yaad nahi aayi thi. Shayad isse hi dil-lagi kehte the!?

Wo yaha niraasha me khadi hui thi ki uske peeche se tabhi Suman baalti bhar kapde leke aayi aur upar taar me geele kapde felaane lagi.

Aahat paate hue Ragini ne mud ke Suman ko dekha aur firse muh ferr ke wo udaasi me doob gayi. Parantu Suman nahi. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan saji hui thi. Wo kapde zaroor fela rahi thi, par uski nazre Ragini ki peeth par hi gadi hui thi.

"Veer jii ko yaad kar rahi ho?"

Ragini ke kaano me Suman ki awaaz peeche se padi. Pal bhar ke liye wo hichkichaayi. Lekin jab usse dhyaan aaya ki Suman toh uski apni hi thi. Ghar ke sadasyo me se ek thi woh. Toh usne dheere se sarr haa me hila diya.

Suman (smiles) : Mein jaanti thi yahi baat hogi.

Ragini : Uski aadat jo ho gayi hai. Uski baatein sunn sunn ke din kese guzar jaata tha pata hi nahi chalta tha. College ke liye jab wo jaata tha toh saara samaan mein ready kar ke deti thi usse. Par uske jaane se din jese katt hi nahi rahe ab...

Suman : Hmm! Ye baat toh hai. Par chinta mat kariye. Veer jii jald hi laut aaenge.

Ragini : Haan! Par kya karu? Mann hai ki maanta nahi. Kherr! Aap bhi araam kar lo. Subah subah machine me itne kapde dhoye hai aaj aapne.

Kehte hue woh neeche jaane lagi, toh Suman ne dheemi sii awaaz me kaha,

"Keval aap hi nahi ho jiski raato ki neend haraam hui hai. Ghar me mere aur aapke alaawa bhi aur koi hai jo mujhse aur aap se bhi zyaada bechain hai... Fufufu~" wo khil-khilaayi.

Suman ki khuspusaahat sunn Ragini palti,

Ragini : Kuch kaha kya aapne?

Suman (smiles) : Hmm? Nahi! Kuch bhi toh nahi.

Ragini : Ohh! Shayad mere hi kaan baj rahe hai...

Kehte hue wo neeche chali gayi. Aur Suman idhar muskuraate hue kapde jhatkaar kar dubaara unhe felaane lagi.

Uske labo se muskaan gayab hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi woh.

***

Wahi idhar Nidhi ke ghar me subah subah Juhi bawaal machaaye hue thi.

Shreya toh job ke liye nikal gayi thi. Par aaj dono Maa beti ne chhutti lii hui thi. Juhi ghar me bechaari Nidhi ko hila ke rakhi hui thi. Aur zidd pe zidd kar rahi thi,

Juhi : Maamu se baat karao pehle... Ni toh mein breakfast nahi khaungi...

Nidhi : Juhiiii~ Gandi baatein nahi karte. Bad manners hai na ye!? Mamma ne samjhaaya hai na aapko. Breakfast ke time zidd nahi karte... Chup chaap breakfast karo apna.

Juhi : Niiiiiiiiii~ Pehle maamu se baat karao!!!

Nidhi : Tumhaare maamu yaha nahi hai. Wo baahar gaye hai.

Juhi : Phone pe baat karao pehle... Ni khaungi mein warna...

Nidhi : Tum bhi na!!!! Hey Bhagwan! Kya karu iss ladki ka!? J-Juhi... Beta... Maamu busy honge... Unhe call karna sahi nahi.

Juhi : Maamu Juhi ke liye busy nahi hote kabhi... Pehle baat karao... Ni to mein ni khaungi... Maamu se mujhe chocolate mangaani hai...

Nidhi : Kal hi toh itni badi chocolate khaayi thi na? Ab aur nahi!!! Roz hi khaati ho tum. Daanto me cavity ho jaegi toh sab chidhaenge tumhe fir school me. Bolenge dekho Juhi ke toh daant kharaab ho gaye. Hassenge sab.... Fir mat aana mamma ke paas rote hue.

Juhi : Haan???

Nidhi : Haan!!!!

Juhi : Toh mein Nana jii ki tarah naye daant lagwa lungi. Jese unke daant nikal jaate hai na? Mere bhi doctor uncle nikaal ke new new daant laga denge.

Nidhi : Ugghhh!!!!! Ye ladki... J-Juhi!!! Tumhaare Nana jii ki batteesi nakli hai.

Juhi : Maamu se baat karaoooo!!!!

Nidhi (sighs) : Ye ladki aise nahi maanegi.

Ab toh phone lagaana hi tha. Aur kya hi kar sakti thi Nidhi? Usne phone laga ke seedha Juhi ko hi pakda diya. Kisi kaaran vash wo Veer se baat karne me hichkicha rahi thi.

Par ye pehle ki tarah naraazgi nahi thi. Kuch aur hi baat thi. Kuch alag sii baat...

Nidhi : Z-Zyaada lambi baat mat karna Juhi.

Juhi : Helllooooo???? Maaaaamuuuuuu~

Veer : Juhiii??? Kesi ho??

Juhi : Acchi hu...!!!!

Veer : School nahi gayi aaj?

Juhi : Aaj mamma aur mein dono nahi gaye. Hehehehe ~ Aaj chhutti...

Veer : Ohh!! Accha?? Aur tumhari mummy kidhar hai?

Nidhi ne phone jaan boojh ke loudspeaker par kar ke diya tha Juhi ko. Toh usse saari baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.

Juhi : Mamma yahi khadi hai.

Veer : Kya kar rahi hai? Bas khadi hi hai kya?

Juhi : Mamma mujhe daant rahi thi. Maamu mamma keh rahi hai ki chocolate khaane se daant kharaab ho jaate hai... Maamu... Aap chocolate laoge na mere liye?

Veer : Hahahahaha ~ Roz roz khaane se toh sach me daant kharab ho jaate hai. Hmm! Mein zaroor launga tumhaare liye chocolate.

Juhi : Badi waalii...

Nidhi : Juhi nahiiii!!! Badi chocolate nahi!!!

Veer : Hahaha~ Theek hai baba badi waali le ke aaunga. Aur tumhari mummy kyu bhadak rahi hai?

Juhi : Mamma roz aisa karti hai. Mamma maamu ko miss kar rahi thi... Aur keh rahi thi...

Nidhi : J-Juuuuuhhhhhiiiiiiiiii...

Iss se pehle ki nanhi Juhi aur raaz khol paati Nidhi ne forun hi uske haatho se phone chhina liya.

Nidhi : H-Hello!!??

Juhi ka apna kaam toh nikal hi gaya tha. Chocolate badi waali aane waali thi. Maamu se baat bhi ho gayi thi. Baccho ka mann wese hi chanchal hota hai. Ek jagah zyaada derr unka mann tikta kaha hai. Apna kaam nikalwaane ke baad wo TV chaalu kar apna favourite program dekhne me lag gayi. Aur sofe par ucchal naachne lagi.

Idhar uski Maa bechaari phone pakde awkwardly wahi khadi hui thi.

Veer : Hello... Ma'am!!

Nidhi : Mmm~

Veer : Kaisi hai aap?

Nidhi : M-Mein theek hu.

Bechaari Nidhi ki awaaz itni dheemi thi ki Veer ko dhang se sunaayi hi nahi dii pal bhar ke liye.

Veer : Aur Shreya jii kesi hai?

Nidhi : W-Wo bhi acchi hai. Office ke liye nikal gayi.

Veer : Accha!!!

Nidhi : T-Tum...

Veer : ???

Nidhi : Tum... Kab tak lautoge?

Veer (smiles) : Are you missing me?

Nidhi (blushes) : Wh-Who would??? Mein... Mein toh Juhi ke liye puch rahi thi. Wese bhi... Tum kaun sa college aate ho? Inn sab ke liye tumne kabhi dhyaan hi nahi diya. S-So who will miss you? I-I don't... Bas! Apni studies pe dhyaan do... Aur...

Veer : Hahahahahahahaha~

Nidhi : Wh-Whaatt? Hass kyu rahe ho?

Veer : Hass isliye raha hu ki itna safed jhooth jab aap bolti ho toh usse pakadne ki zaroorat hi nahi padti. Alag hi pata lag jaata hai. Aur... Yahi baatein aapko cute banaati hai.

Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ke gaal surkh laal ho chale. Wo jawaab me kuch na boli.
Bas khamosh reh gayi.

Veer : Mujhe aane me abhi thoda samay lag sakta hai.

Nidhi : I-I see!!

Veer : Ek urgent call aa raha hai. Mein aapse baad me baat karta hu.

Nidhi : O-Okay!!

Aur Veer ne phone kaat diya.

Nidhi : B-Bye...!!!

Bechaara Veer Nidhi ka bye sunn hi nahi paaya. Ek lambi aah bharte hue Nidhi ne phone rakha. Juhi ko ek nazar dekha jo apna kaam nikalwa ke ekdum mazze me uchhal kood rahi thi. Kya hi Zindagi thi uski.

Aise pyaar lutaane waale maamu mile the usse. Shan bhar ke liye Nidhi ko jalan sii mehsoos hui. Par fir wo Juhi ke liye khush bhi ho gayi.

Gaal abhi bhi laal the uske. Mann ke vichaaro se baahar aane ke liye wk kitchen me bhaag gayi.

***

Veer waha Vegas me tha par uske khilaaf bil me ghuse saanp yaha haath par haath dhare nahi baithe the.

Chaahe Niharika ho, chaahe Pranjal ya chaahe Rajat. Teeno hi apni saazish ko anjaam dene ke liye sahi mauke ka intezaar kar rahe the.

"Yessssss~ Suck my clit bitchesss!!!!"

Harr baar ki tarah, Niharika washroom me thi. Neeche se poori nangi. Uska ek perr toilet seat par tha aur dusra neeche farsh par. Aur uski do slaves, uski chut chaatne me lagi hui thi.

Unn dono ke baalo ko kheech kar wo unka muh apni chut me daba rahi thi.

"Suck it!!!! Zorr se chaato kutiyo!!!! Zorr se!!! Aahhhhnnnn!!!! Mmmm~ Aise hi... Daana chabao... Haan!!! Yessssss~ Chusoooo chusoooo... Aur chusoooo mmmmm~"

Apni kamar matkaate hue wo apni geeli chut ko unke chehre par ragad rahi thi. Unki jeebh ko apne chut ke chhed me ghusa ke woh kamar hilaate jaa rahi thi.




Kahi ek ladki ke muh me apni chut deti toh kahi dusri ke , toh kahi dono ko hi saath me chaatne kehti woh.

Par mann me uske kuch aur bhi chal raha tha. Jab se Veer ne uske dono chhedo ko choda tha. Tab se hi usse masturbation se wo santushti nahi mil paa rahi thi. Yaha tak ki lesbian sex me bhi usse wo maza nahi aa raha tha.

Aur iss baat se Niharika ko apne aap par itna gussa aa raha tha ki usse kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Woh ek aurat... Kese ek mard ke neeche aa sakti thi???? Par uska jism toh kuch aur hi maang raha tha.

Kheejte hue wo pareshaan ho chuki thi. Jab jab wo chut me ungli karti, ya apni slaves se apni chut chatwaati, Veer apna lund uske chhedo me daalte hue... uski woh chhavi uske mann me aa jaati. Aur nateeja?

Uski aankhein khul jaati, aur saari banaayi gayi uttejna gusse ke chalte kahi gaayab ho jaati.

"Fuuuuckkkk thisss....!!!! Urrrgghhhh!!!"

Aaj bhi wahi hua. Jab wo apne climax par lagbhag pohuch hi gayi thi. Tabhi, usse wo drishya yaad aa gaya, jab Veer uski chut me apna lund pel raha tha aur uska apna pati darwaaze ke theek baahar maujood uss se baat kar raha tha.

"Aaarggghhhhh!!!! I hate him soooo muchhh!!!!"

Yaad karte hi uski aankhein khul gayi gusse me par...

*Drip*

"H-Huhhhhh!!??? Ahhnnnnnnnnn ssssss~"

*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*

Uski chut kisi fuwwaare ki tarah khuli aur dherr saara paani bahaate hue unn do ladkiyo ke chehro ko bhigo diya.

"Wh-Whhaaaaattttt? Ahhnnnnnnnnn!!! This... This....!???"

Niharika ko vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Wo jhar gayi??? Jese hi usse pata laga ki wo kya soch ke jhari... Uska badan kaanp utha.

"N-Nooo!!! It can't be!!!"

Wo jhari thi... Veer ko yaad karke. Uski chudaayi yaad karke. Bhale hi wo apne mann se kitna hi kyu na hate kare Veer se. Par ek aurat ka jism kabhi nahi jhooth bolega. Wahi hua...

Apne pati se chhup ke anjaan jawaan ladke se tabadtod chudaayi karwaana. Ye vichaar hi uske jism me ek aag laga diya tha. Kitna hi kyu na chidh le wo Veer se. Par chut ye nahi dekhti thi ki lund kiska hai.

Lund yadi mazboot ho, toh chut uske aage haar hi jaati hai. Niharika bhi haar chuki thi. Aur uski chut bhi.

"Nahiiiiii!!! Aisa hargiz nahi ho sakta.... Uss kameene ke saamne mein jhuk jau? H-Hargiz nahi!!!"

Aur fir usse wo drishya yaad aaya. Jab Veer ke mazboot haath uske baalo ko jakde hue the. Aur kese wo car ke andar usse pakad ke jhukaaya hua tha. Kese wo uske vishaal lund ko muh me bhar ke choos rahi thi. Kese Veer ki dusri slave Suman saare nazaare ko mazze se dekh rahi thi.

*Splllluuuurrrrtttttt*

*Drip* *Drip*

"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnnn~"

Aur ek baar fir, uski chut ne apna pani chorr diya.

Niharika apni chut ko aankhein faade aur muh khole hairat me dekhne lagi. Aisa kese ho sakta tha bhala? Wo ek dominator thi. Submissive female nahi. Fir aisa kese ho sakta tha?

Kese uski chut itna pani bahaa rahi thi???

"I FUCKING HATE THISSS SO MUCCCH!!"

Usne zorr se chillaate hue apne haatho me lii hui apni panty dur fek dii.

"Dur hato kutiyo!!!!! GET FUCKING LOST!!!!"

Wo gurraayi!!! Aur apni dono hi slaves ko baahar bhaagne bol dii.

Uski dono slaves, jinme se ek Ayushi thi. Shreya ki colleague toh wahi dusri ka naam tha Ishani. Dono majboori ke chalte Niharika ki daasi bani hui thi.

Par dono iss baat se anjaan thi, ki unki ye maalkin khud kisi mard ki daasi banti jaa rahi thi.

Niharika haafte hue toilet seat par baith gayi. Chut ka haal behaal tha. Paani chorr chorr ke wo poori geeli ho chuki thi. Aur lund lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.

"Uggghhhhh!!!!" Usne zorr zorr se ungli kari aur kuch hi shan bhar me punah ek baar....

*Splurrrrtttttttt*

*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*

Wo fir jharr gayi.

"I... *huff* I must do something! *huff* Mujhe uske... Mujhe uske paas se wo video haasil karni hi hogi. Yesssss!!! *huff* Veer! Khud ko boht smart samajhte ho??? *huff* Mene already tumhaare phone me keylogger install kar rakha hai. *huff* Hahahaha~"

Sochte hue ek khatarnak muskaan uske chehre par sajj gayi.

"Jald hi... *huff* Jald hi tum mere perro ki neeche hoge...!!"

***

Vegas
Evening ~ 7:14 PM

Subah Veer ki baat jab Nidhi se ho rahi thi. Tab usse ek urgent call aa gaya tha beech me. Jo kisi aur ka nahi, Karan ka tha.

Ek khushkhabri thi.

Veer ne apna paisa jis Vatsala Steel Industries ke shares par lagaaya tha. Uske daam badh chuke the.

Karan ko toh vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Jo company itne loss me chal rahi thi woh akhir achanak se upar kese uth sakti thi? Aur yadi uthi bhi toh Veer ko pehle se itna bharosa kese tha company pe? Usse kese pata chala?

Iska raaz toh Veer hi jaanta tha. Stock Master!!! Ekmaatr skill jo uske business me uski madad ke liye thi.

Veer ne baithe baithe hi laakho rupaaye ka profit kar liya tha. Aur ye lakh jald hi crore me tabdeel hone waale the.

Aaj ki unki toli waapas se investigation department ki orr jaa rahi thi.

Sab pehle ki hi tarah baithe hue the. Driver seat par Nik, uske bagal se Suhana. Aur peeche Divya sang Veer.

Kal ki hui vardaat ke bawajood, Divya apne haatho par patti baandh ke kaam kar rahi thi.

Baat hi kuch aisi thi. Police ne jab Jim ki acchi tarah khaatirdaari kari toh kayi ghanto ke baad jaake Jim ne apna muh khola.

Aur usne kuch details dii thi. Next criminal ki...

Jese hi wo jankaari crime investigation waalo ko pata chali, woh jaan ke unki rooh kaanp gayi.

Divya aur Nik bhi unme se ek the. Din ka daura toh unka chhaan been karne me hi guzar gaya tha. Woh Daniel ki post mortem reports bhi check karne gaye the. Toh wahi crime scene ke aas paas bhi jitna ho sakta tha utna pata lagaya. Par haath kuch na aaya.

Aur Jim ki dii gayi jaankaari ke chalte, uski pushti karne ke liye investigation department ne Connor ko bheja tha.

Woh bhi ek detective tha. Ek senior detective.

Anubhav me koi kami nahi thi uske paas. Sahi nirnay, sahi samay pe lena bakhubi aata tha usse.

Beshaq, wo maut ke kuye me tha ek prakaar se. Par ye hi toh uska kaam tha.

Lekin, jis baat ka darr tha wahi hua. Divya aur Nik ko urgent call aaya achanak8 department se ki woh jaha kahi bhi hai, jald se jald department pohuche.

Isliye, sabhi firse uss orr jaa rahe the.

Peeche ki seat par Divya aaj Veer ko alag nazro se dekh rahi thi. Kal Veer ne points badhaaye the. Appearance ke bhi. Zaahir tha uski twacha aur khili khili nazar aa rahi thi. Divya isliye aaj usse badi hi jigyaasa se nihaar rahi thi.

Kabhi wo sharaarti dhang me kuch soch muskuraati toh kabhi Veer ko dekh usse aankh maar deti.

Eka-ek Veer ki nazar jab Divya par gayi toh usne dekha ki woh uski orr thoda jhukte hue apna ang pradarshan kar rahi thi.

Uske gore badan ka cleavage saaf saaf jhalak raha tha. Veer ko woh smile karte hue dekh rahi thi.

Aur fir badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,

Divya (smiles) : You can touch them.

Veer : Huh??

[I will fuckiinngggg killll herrrr!!!! (ʘᴗʘ✿) Maaassttteeerrrr~ Don't touch her!!]

Divya ki harqat Veer toh dekh hi raha tha acche se par saamne driver seat par baitha Nik bhi mirror se sab kuch dekh chuka tha.

Woh sunn toh nahi paaya ki uski patni ne kya kaha par woh itna zaroor jaan gaya tha ki Divya Veer ke saath flirt kar rahi thi. Filhaal woh kuch nahi bola. Par aankhein gada ke unko dekhta raha toh majbooran Divya ko apni flirting rokni padi.

Unhe nahi pata tha ki department ki taraf se urgently kyu bulaaya gaya hai. Isliye abhi woh aage aane waale jhatke ke pehle thoda relaxed the.

Gaadi ruki, sabhi uss se utre aur andar gaye.

Veer aur Suhana ko baahar hi rok diya gaya tha. Department ke Head ke cabin me keval aur keval Nik aur Divya hi gaye the.

***

*Click*

Darwaaza band hua aur dono pati patni, department ke Head yaani ki Nolan ke saamne baithe hue the.

Nik : What happened ?

Nolan : Look for yourself.

Kehte hue usne dono ke sarr par ek ek headphones pehna diya. Saamne computer screen thi.

Aur connection seedha Conner se tha.

Conner gaya hua tha ek Mansion me. Nik aur Divya dono hi Connor ki shaqal dekh sakte the. Camera connected tha. Aur Audio bhi.

Unn dono ko Connor ki saare baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.

Nolan : It's not live. It happened just a few minutes ago.

Aur fir unhone dekha...

Connor kuch keh raha tha. Uska chehra poora paseene se bheega hua tha. Chehre se ekdum rang udaa hua tha. Bhaybhheet poora!!! Lambi lambi saans lete hue haaf raha tha woh.

Uski haalat dekh aisa lag raha tha jese usne koi bhoot saamne dekh liya ho.

Aur wo bolna shuru kiya,

"I WILL FUCKING DIE!!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! *huff* H-Help me!"

"This is much bigger than we thought of... It's insane... We all will die here!!! Listen to me!!! *huff* This is live killing!!!! FUCKING LIVE KILLING!!! There are few of us. They too participated here. But we are being recorded!! IT'S FUCKING DARK WEB!!!!"

"H-HE WILL KILL ONE OF US!!! REMEMBER! HIS NAME IS... *********** PEOPLE ARE PAYING TO WATCH US GETTING KILLED!!! IT'S A FUCKING HOUSE OF KILLERS. DANIEL WAS GODDAMN RIGHT!! *huff* *huff* THERE'S AIN'T A SINGLE ONE. *huff* P-PLEASE!!! GUYS!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE!!!!"

"H-Huhhhhhh????"

Par tabhi...

Connor kisi jagah dekh ghabraaya. Uski saasein atak gayi. Woh chillaaya,

"WHAT'S...? WHAT'S HAPPENING? N-Nooooo!!?!!!"

Aur agle hi pal...

*Thud* *Thud* *Thud*

Uske haatho se camera gira...

Cheekhne chillaane ki awaaz aane lagi. Connor ki cheenkh waha aur Nik aur Divya ke headphones me goonjne lagi.

Aur fir camera me jo Nik aur Divya ne dekha. Usse dekh dono ka badan thanda pad gaya. Maano jese saanp soongh gaya.

Divya apna muh dhak zorr zorr se bilakhte hue rone lagi. Uske poora badan ke ruye khade ho gaye.

Darr ke maare uska shareer kaanpne laga. Woh ghabraate hue daud kar baahar nikal ke aayi.

Idhar baahar Veer aur Suhana kareeb 1 ghante se unn dono ke baahar aane ka intezaar kar rahe the.

Veer : 1 ghante ke upar ho chuka hai. What are they doing inside?

Suhana : I have no clue!

Veer : Ohhh! Wo aa gaye...!

Suhana : Hmm??

Suhana ne jab Veer ki nazro ko follow kar uss orr dekha toh paaya ki Divya ghabraate hue baahar nikli aur seedha apne ghutno ke bal gir padi.

Suhana : Divyyyaaaaa!!!!

Dono Veer aur Suhana daudate bhaagte hue uske paas aaye aur usse sambhaal ke uthaaya.

Suhana : Divya kya hua????

Par Divya kuch na boli. Usse sambhalne me thoda samay lag gaya.

Jab uski haalat thodi theek hui toh usne rote hue bataaya,

Divya (cries) : C-Connor is dead!!!!

Suhana : Whaaaaaaaaatttttt?

Divya : Connor is dead Suhana.... He died!!!!

Suhana : ...

Divya : I must... I must show you something!!!

Wo aasu poch uth ke andar gayi. Aur usne jo dekha, uska ek paper par printout nikaalne lagi computer screen ko sahi timestamp par rok ke.

Idhar Nolan Divya ko aata dekh apni baat rakha,

Nolan : Who decided to send him alone there?

Nik : That... It was decided in the meeting in the morning.

Nolan : That's what I'm asking... Who voted for him to go there alone?

Nik : Th-That's....

Nolan (chillaate hue) : ANSWER MEEE!!!!

Divya : W-We all supported it. C-Connor too opted for it.

Nolan : YOU DUMB IDIOTSSSS!!!!!!! WE LOST HIM!!! WE LOST OUR ANOTHER PERSON!!!!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU GUYS WILL DO NOW. BUT NEXT... I WANT YOU GUYS TO SEND SOMEONE FROM YOUR TEAM NOW MY SO CALLED PRIVATE DETECTIVES.... WE WON'T BE SENDING OUR DEPARTMENT'S DETECTIVES NOW!!!!!!! YOU GET THAT....??

Nik : W-We... We do!!!

Nolan : YOU CAN LEAVE!!!!

Divya jese hi baahar aayi, woh Suhana aur Veer ko haath pakad apne cabin me le gayi.

Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!

Veer : Huh???

Suhana : !!????

Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patakte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...




Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.

Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...

Ek wanted paper!!!!

Divya : And his name is...

Veer : ?????

"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Samay samay par mein Mumbai ka zikr bhi dikhaunga. Baaki, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Ye sab banaane me mehnat lagti hai.
Dhanyavaad!

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chalo ek baat toh achhi hui jim pakda gya jbki jim shatranz ka ek kamzor piyada hi lag rha.... Jisne police or department ke naak me dam kr rkha tha... Veer ko bhi Beowulf's ka help lena padaa usko handle krne ke liye... Halanki veer ko points or fame points reward ke roop me mila jo veer Ke liyr acha hai.. Sath me divya ke favourability bhi 50 pr fix Ho gya jiska level sirf uper hi jayega niche nahi askta... Divya ne Daniel or Connor dono ka puzzle solve kr liya hai jisme dono ne ek hi baat kaha hai house of killer se related jisme ek Se jyada logo ke hone ke chances hai... OR koi psycho type ring master hoga jo sbko order deta hoga.... Dark web se mujhe Lgta hai isme task dete honge jo jeeta woh jiyega shayad Zinda bachne pr sath me dollars bhi dete honge or isme zinda rhne ke liye sbko marna hi hota hoga jeetna zrruri hoga Or jitoge tabhi Jab jiyoge... ye shayad Hollywood movie hai ek yaad nahi arha Kuch -2 wesa hi concept lag rha hai ya fir Hollywood movie death Race jesa kuch concept hoga baki agey pta chal hi jayega... Divya buri trh darr gai shayad video me nightwalker toh nahi dekh liya... nolan ne saaf kr diya hai ke uske department ke 2log maare gye ab house of killer me divya or nik ko apne admi bhejna hoga jo mere hisaab se divya or nik veer ko hi bhejenge.. Nik ke entry pr hi mujhe woh thik nahi lga tha shayad ane wale time me woh veer ke liye khatra ban skta hai... Veer toh divya ke liye bhi challenge ban gya hai divya ka charm veer pr beasar hota dikh rha hai.... Karan ne bhi news suna diya ke jahan usne paise investe Kiya usme profit hua hai obviously uske 'stock market' Skill ka kamaal hai... Jo karan ko nahi pta... Nidhi ki smile or uska shrmana ye dikha rha hai ilu ilu ke lakshan dikhne lga hai.. Juhi toh kamaal ki hai my sweet bachaa hahaha wohi veer or nidhi ko kareeb layegi uska jariya bnegi..... Niharika itna jldi nahi baaz ane wali akhir uske bachpan ke dimag pr ek mard ki chhavi aisi chhapi hui hai ki veer ko bhot papad belne pdenge... Akhir bache ka dimag hota hi kitna majboot hai ek baar koi baat baith gai toh baith gai dekhte hai veer Kya krta hai niharika ko sudharne ke liye.... Ragini se ab raha nhi ja rha qki iss baar jo smooching wagaireh hua hai uski latt si lag gai hai... Veer ki toh khairr nahi jab woh ayega usko kaccha khane wali hai.... Suman sab smjh rhi hai uski kutil muskaan bta rha hai ki Usko sab khabar hai veer or ragini ka rishta kidhar ja rha hai shayad usko sweta ke bare me bhi pta hai.... Bhawna maa or tej ab jee tod mehnat krenge veer ka pta lgane ke vaaste dekhte hai aise me usko Brijesh and family milta hai ya nahi nidhi milti hai ya nahi bhawna maa ko sbse pehle college jana chahiye pta krne ke liye qki abhi veer ki umr student wali hai to woh college me toh pdhta hi hoga... Shayad iss chakkar me nidhi mil jaye uske baad ragini ke ghar ka pta jahan veer rhta hai.....

Update 99

Veer mission impossible ke liye nikal chuka Hai Mike ko sath me lekr hai... Mike badaa hi nek dil pratit Ho rha hai jisne veer ko akele bhejna thik na lga or sbse lad jhagad ke veer sang Ho liya... Veer ne bhi uski dariyadili ko dekhte hue usko safe rkhne ki soch rkha hai.... Veer or Mike Island pr puhunch gye jahan nightwalker ka mansion hai... Jab divya nightwalker se itna darr gai toh jab or villains ayenge to Kya hoga mujhe nahi lgta nightwalker akhiri hoga uske upr bhi koi hoga.... Mujhe lga hi tha veer ko hi bhejenge iss mission pr, halanki suhana ne virodh kiya sath me divya ne bhi, suhana ke thoughts badal rha hai veer ke liye ek attachment sa dikh rha hai... Divya bhi shayad veer ke Prati kuch soft wala mehsoos krne lgi hai shayad... House of killer ko ek game house me badal diya gya hai... OR task ye hai ki gold bars dhundhna hai... 3 rounds me jo 30 -30 minutes ke honge.... Uske baad nightwalker ka kehar barsega... Ek sawaal bade Bhai agr un participates me koi morning tak zinda Bach gya bina koi gold bars liye to usko safely jane diya jayega ya dobara game khelna hoga ya maar diya jayega?... Zoey jo ldki hai woh kuch jyada hi veer me interest le rhi hai.. Ldkiyon ki fitrat hai apne bachaaw ke liye shayad veer ka istemaal krna chahti Ho? OR shayad aisa hoga bhi agr zoey pr koi musibat hoga to veer zrur usko bachane jayega.... Mujhe toh bss ye dekhna hai veer zinda vapas jayega toh Sath me gold bars bhi lekr jayega ya khali hath or jab zinda Jayega to nik ka reaction hoga? Suhana Kya feel kregi?... Khas kr divya qki uske pati ke wajah se veer musibat me fansa tha... OR ek baat mansion me jo gate hai kyaa? Wahi gold bar hai... Agr hai to veer ne check kyo nahi kiyaa? OR woh chikhne ki awaaz kiski thi? Lgta hai koi tapak gya... Kya emma? Nhi woh darpok ldki room dubki hogi time up hone ke baad risk nhi legi... ya fir woh Chester jo kuch jyada hi udd rha tha.. That's it?? This is so easy krke dekhte hai.. Kon gya?

Werewolf (bade Bhai) maaf krna Maine iss Story se thoda rest liya tha.. Main concentrate nahi kr paa rha tha.. Main mantelly disturbed Ho gya that.... Ap jante Honge main kis baare me baat kr rha hu... ab se regular present rhunga pakka wala vada sorry

 

[Werewolf]

Koi muje bataega conteste kha pe hota h khidr ja kar deknge

Contest lounge me hoega bhaaya. Uska notification aa jaaega jab woh shuru hoega. Abhi kuch din baaki hai usme. Vote dena na bhuliyega hume.

 

[Werewolf]

chalo ek baat toh achhi hui jim pakda gya jbki jim shatranz ka ek kamzor piyada hi lag rha.... Jisne police or department ke naak me dam kr rkha tha... Veer ko bhi Beowulf's ka help lena padaa usko handle krne ke liye... Halanki veer ko points or fame points reward ke roop me mila jo veer Ke liyr acha hai.. Sath me divya ke favourability bhi 50 pr fix Ho gya jiska level sirf uper hi jayega niche nahi askta... Divya ne Daniel or Connor dono ka puzzle solve kr liya hai jisme dono ne ek hi baat kaha hai house of killer se related jisme ek Se jyada logo ke hone ke chances hai... OR koi psycho type ring master hoga jo sbko order deta hoga.... Dark web se mujhe Lgta hai isme task dete honge jo jeeta woh jiyega shayad Zinda bachne pr sath me dollars bhi dete honge or isme zinda rhne ke liye sbko marna hi hota hoga jeetna zrruri hoga Or jitoge tabhi Jab jiyoge... ye shayad Hollywood movie hai ek yaad nahi arha Kuch -2 wesa hi concept lag rha hai ya fir Hollywood movie death Race jesa kuch concept hoga baki agey pta chal hi jayega... Divya buri trh darr gai shayad video me nightwalker toh nahi dekh liya... nolan ne saaf kr diya hai ke uske department ke 2log maare gye ab house of killer me divya or nik ko apne admi bhejna hoga jo mere hisaab se divya or nik veer ko hi bhejenge.. Nik ke entry pr hi mujhe woh thik nahi lga tha shayad ane wale time me woh veer ke liye khatra ban skta hai... Veer toh divya ke liye bhi challenge ban gya hai divya ka charm veer pr beasar hota dikh rha hai.... Karan ne bhi news suna diya ke jahan usne paise investe Kiya usme profit hua hai obviously uske 'stock market' Skill ka kamaal hai... Jo karan ko nahi pta... Nidhi ki smile or uska shrmana ye dikha rha hai ilu ilu ke lakshan dikhne lga hai.. Juhi toh kamaal ki hai my sweet bachaa hahaha wohi veer or nidhi ko kareeb layegi uska jariya bnegi..... Niharika itna jldi nahi baaz ane wali akhir uske bachpan ke dimag pr ek mard ki chhavi aisi chhapi hui hai ki veer ko bhot papad belne pdenge... Akhir bache ka dimag hota hi kitna majboot hai ek baar koi baat baith gai toh baith gai dekhte hai veer Kya krta hai niharika ko sudharne ke liye.... Ragini se ab raha nhi ja rha qki iss baar jo smooching wagaireh hua hai uski latt si lag gai hai... Veer ki toh khairr nahi jab woh ayega usko kaccha khane wali hai.... Suman sab smjh rhi hai uski kutil muskaan bta rha hai ki Usko sab khabar hai veer or ragini ka rishta kidhar ja rha hai shayad usko sweta ke bare me bhi pta hai.... Bhawna maa or tej ab jee tod mehnat krenge veer ka pta lgane ke vaaste dekhte hai aise me usko Brijesh and family milta hai ya nahi nidhi milti hai ya nahi bhawna maa ko sbse pehle college jana chahiye pta krne ke liye qki abhi veer ki umr student wali hai to woh college me toh pdhta hi hoga... Shayad iss chakkar me nidhi mil jaye uske baad ragini ke ghar ka pta jahan veer rhta hai

Ye arc interesting hai aur kayi saare raaz chhupaaye hue hai. Isse dhyaan se padhiyega. Maza aaega. Rahi baat Tej aur Bhavna ki toh bechaari Tej toh kuch bhi nahi jaanti Veer ke baare me. Bas itna ki Veer ka naam Vikram hai. Jo ki galat hai. Jo jaanti hai woh bechaari woh bhi sahi nahi hai. Ek jhooth hai. Ab aise me woh kaha se shuruaat kare? Unhe ye bhi nahi pata ki Veer kis college me hoga. Aise me harr ek college me jaa ke Veer ke baare me pata karna is almost like, khet me sui jese dhudhne ka hai. Fir bhi, Tej lagi hui hai. Dekhte hai Bhavna kab madad karti hai. Kyuki wahi hai jo zyaada jaanti hai.

Update 99

Veer mission impossible ke liye nikal chuka Hai Mike ko sath me lekr hai... Mike badaa hi nek dil pratit Ho rha hai jisne veer ko akele bhejna thik na lga or sbse lad jhagad ke veer sang Ho liya... Veer ne bhi uski dariyadili ko dekhte hue usko safe rkhne ki soch rkha hai.... Veer or Mike Island pr puhunch gye jahan nightwalker ka mansion hai... Jab divya nightwalker se itna darr gai toh jab or villains ayenge to Kya hoga mujhe nahi lgta nightwalker akhiri hoga uske upr bhi koi hoga.... Mujhe lga hi tha veer ko hi bhejenge iss mission pr, halanki suhana ne virodh kiya sath me divya ne bhi, suhana ke thoughts badal rha hai veer ke liye ek attachment sa dikh rha hai... Divya bhi shayad veer ke Prati kuch soft wala mehsoos krne lgi hai shayad... House of killer ko ek game house me badal diya gya hai... OR task ye hai ki gold bars dhundhna hai... 3 rounds me jo 30 -30 minutes ke honge.... Uske baad nightwalker ka kehar barsega... Ek sawaal bade Bhai agr un participates me koi morning tak zinda Bach gya bina koi gold bars liye to usko safely jane diya jayega ya dobara game khelna hoga ya maar diya jayega?...

Iska jawaab shayad aage hi updates me diya gaya hai. Aapko aage ke updates padhne honge iss sawaal ke jawaab ko paane ke liye. Aur agar nahi diya hoga tab mein toh hu hi.

Zoey jo ldki hai woh kuch jyada hi veer me interest le rhi hai.. Ldkiyon ki fitrat hai apne bachaaw ke liye shayad veer ka istemaal krna chahti Ho? OR shayad aisa hoga bhi agr zoey pr koi musibat hoga to veer zrur usko bachane jayega.... Mujhe toh bss ye dekhna hai veer zinda vapas jayega toh Sath me gold bars bhi lekr jayega ya khali hath or jab zinda Jayega to nik ka reaction hoga? Suhana Kya feel kregi?... Khas kr divya qki uske pati ke wajah se veer musibat me fansa tha... OR ek baat mansion me jo gate hai kyaa? Wahi gold bar hai... Agr hai to veer ne check kyo nahi kiyaa? OR woh chikhne ki awaaz kiski thi? Lgta hai koi tapak gya... Kya emma? Nhi woh darpok ldki room dubki hogi time up hone ke baad risk nhi legi... ya fir woh Chester jo kuch jyada hi udd rha tha.. That's it?? This is so easy krke dekhte hai.. Kon gya?

Werewolf (bade Bhai) maaf krna Maine iss Story se thoda rest liya tha.. Main concentrate nahi kr paa rha tha.. Main mantelly disturbed Ho gya that.... Ap jante Honge main kis baare me baat kr rha hu... ab se regular present rhunga pakka wala vada sorry

Dhanyavaad bhai! Koi baat nahi. Aksar hum mentally stressed out hu jaate hai. Jab samay mile tab padhiye. Koi force nahi hai. Par padhiyega zaroor. Raaz toh tabhi jaan paenge jab padhenge. Shukriya ek baar fir.
Saath bane rahiyega!

 

[Werewolf]

Werewolf bhai apse ek request hai, please ap jaldi jaldi update diya kro, janta hu request ke naam par kuch jada hi bol raha hu but kya kru bhai apke story ki aadat lag gai hai, jab kabhi apka new update aane me deri hoti hai to mai us waqt purane updates phad leta hu from the beginning, lekin aasa kar k bhi dil ko tasalli nahi milti bhai, humesha dimag me yehi chalte raheta hai ab aage kya hoga, next update kaisa hoga, kahi koi twist to nai hoga usme, ya koi raaz khulega usme...!!

Updates dene ko toh dede bhai par village arc ko lekar pehle se kuch bhi socha nahi gaya tha. Mene sirf itna socha tha ki iss arc me kaun sii 2 cheezein haasil karwaani hai kahani me. Par kese karwani hai, kya scenes rakhne hai, kahani ko kya disha deni hai iss par koi bhi brainstorming nahi kii gayi thi. Aur ab mein woh kar raha hu.
Ye arc bhi at least 15 se 20 updates tak ka toh rahega hi. Toh mujhe unn saare updates ka path banana hoga. Bhai dikha toh apan jaldbaazi me kuch bhi de. Koi bhi details daal ke updates bhar de. Par kya maza aaega? Nahi! Naya arc exciting hona chahiye. Jisme harr update me ek naya excitement mehsoos hoye aur lage ki ye arc behtar hota jaa raha hai. Bas ussi ko karne me thoda samay toh lagega. Akhir sochne me bhi samay lagta hi hai.

Kabhi kabhi lagata hai bhai ki apke story k chakkar me kisi reader ki jaan na chali jaye is suspense k chalte, lekin kuch bhi bolo bhai apki story hai bhot jabardast aur story ka concept bhi bhot lajawab hai, bas ap aase hi updates dete rahiye aur hum sabhi readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Arre aisa na bolo. Thoda patience rakhiye. Tab tak House of the killers arc fir se padh lijiye agar mann kare toh. Ya slogan arc. Ya Aatish arc. Shayad koi nayi detail ya raaz haath me lag jaaye!?

Agar kio baat buri lagi ho ya maine kuch galat bol diya ho to mafi cahata hu bhai.. ☺

Nahi bhai! Kuch bura nahi laga. Sabr rakhiye. Kaam chal raha hai village arc par. Jald hi dekhne ko milega. Saath bane rahiyega!

 

[Werewolf]

Update 109 bc ye Update tha bc nope bilkul na sala ye emotionally torture tha khair Update was full of emotional stuff. Haa kabhi khushi wale scenes laye ju ne to kabhi dukh wale to kabhi itte emotional kar diya ki bc ankhh se ansoo tapkne ke jagah apan gussa tha.

Itna emotional tha kya?

khair Werewolf ju ne har scenes khaskar butterfly wala jo scene tha school ka wo bohot hi touchy tha jo aage ke scenes se related tha wo saaf saaf usme jhalak raha tha.....and main baat ye rahi ki ju ne jo scenes suhana ke butterfly se compare kr ke jo dikhaya aur usse jis trah yaani jiss emotion me ju ne prastut kiya hamare samne bich-bich me wo bohot hi lajavaab tha and ek aur baat maine notice ki maine ki ju ne jo ye butterfly aur suhana ka scene jo ek dusre se comparison yaa similar dikhaya hai emotions ke saath wo tareeka poems aur poetry me poets jyadatar paryog krte hai chahe wo literature ki poems ho yaa hindi ki yaa sanskrit ye chis hame sare ki gayi poetry me aksar dikhta hi hai khair haa bhale isse story me bhi use krte hai as a "Comparison & Contrasting" jaise ju ne yaha paryog kiya wo bohot hi lajavaab tha lekin ju ne ye poetry wala tareeka hi use kiya.

Rihanna ne point out kiya tha sabse pehle ye. so a big thanks to her.

Kaera ka wo tone literally wo mature talk uski wo baate just intense feeling. :

***{Pathetic! Insignificant! Pitiful!"}
{Titliya mujhe pasand nahi." "Inki life sirf 15 se 28 days tak ki hi hoti hai. Ye jaldi marr jaati hai. I hate it."}
{"Hmm~}***

Yaha Kaera ke har reaction har expression me jaise uski wo maturness utni choti si umar me bohot hi ajjib tha akhir ho bhi kyu na ussne bachpan me ussne kya kya nhi jhela...wo baba wala kaand,wo blood se uski chidh matlab usse jo problem hoti hai blood se uska wo dar blood ke prati aur uska baap kishore wo bhi ek kaaran tha ki Kaera bachpan se hi kitni mature thi

Kyuki Kishore tab dheere dheere Kaera ko parivartit karne me lag gaya tha jiska asar humne iss scene me saaf dekha.

haa Kaera koi normal ladki nhi hai ye yaha se bhi confirm ho gaya yes she is on high wave of life.....uski maturness bachpan me hi thi to future me batane ki jarurat bhi nhi kyuki wo hamsab dekh hi chuke hai... literally she is queen himself....

Himself na re. *herself

wo wo hai jiske jaisa sayad hi koi ban paaye yaa uss se koi compare kar paye khair apan ne jyada hi ghasit diya iss ko

Kya Ava takkar nahi de sakti usse?

Ab aate Sonia aur ava par to yaar wo dono kitne masoom the yaar bachpan me
{****Ahhh!!! T-Toh ye titli bhi marr jaegi?" Ava bechain ho uthi.****}
{"Waaaaaa~ Didiiiii!!! Titliii~"}

Inki Bachpana saaf jhalak rahi thi inke bato se yaar ju ne bohot hi bariki se inke scenes likhe just imaginable tha ye scenes matlab padhte hi ankho ke samne aarahe the scenes just epic was it.

Aur ab Suhana ka wo har scenes jo ju ne butterfly se compare ki that's the scenes bc wo scenes mere sabse favourite rahe just love it that scenes.

Metaphor ki tarah istemaal kiya gaya tha ye.

Khair ab aate hai sabse best scene par jo tha jab suhana uss bhid se alag khhadi thi aur apni bahen sonia ki wo muskurahat aur uski khushio se apne dil me uth rahe dard ko jis tarike se usne dabaye rakha....wo scene ek alag hi ahsas tha jisme saaf jhalak raha tha ki wo apni bahen se kitta pyaar krti hai,ussne apne dukh ko uski khilkhilati hui muskurahat aur khushio ke niche daba dala. Ussne sonia ki hi khushi ko apni khushi maan liya ye emotion jo suhana ke saaf jhalak rahe the wo ek alag hi scene tha mere liye.

Her loneliness...

Ab aate hai dadaji ke scene par jab unhone suhana ko ye baat boli

{"Ek baat yaad rakhna. Samay! Ghaav ko theek nahi karta. Woh sirf hume unke sang jeena sikhaata hai."}

......aur ye baat aaj suhana ke jindagi me saaf saaf dikh bhi raha hai jab maine ye pura flash back padha suhana ka to apan ke sabse pahli baat yahi aayi mere zahen me ki "samay tumhare dard ko nhi kam krta naaki unn ghavo ko balki wo to tumhe jina sikhata hai uss dard yaa uss ghav ke saath jo aaj Suhana jee rahi hai wo jindagi jiska dard bhale hi kam na ho par usne uss jindagi ko accept kiya,yaha suhana ke dadaji aur veer ke dada ji me koi antar na raha akhir dono hi jagah unn buzurgo ne sahi gyan aur baate hi to batayi thi.....khair apan aata ab aage ke scenes par

Uske dada jii ki baat sach thi. Time only teaches you how to live with wounds. Akhirr Suhana andhruni zakhmo ke saath hi jeeti aa rahi jai.

Ab aate suhana aur sonia ke unn scene par jab sonia me kuch ussne badlav mahsus kiya suhana ne and wo badlav tha sonia ka ki wo kaise Kaera se bhi behtar ban jaye akhir wo kaise wo Kaera se har cheej me aage rahe aur issi se related badlav ussne I guess notice kiye honge jaise ki alag alag books padhna bola tha suhana ne apni bato me means knowledge me aage . Khair Suhana ne uss se jaane ki koshish ki par sonia ne ye baat batayi tak nhi Khair ye baat hi darar banti gayi unke bich akhir sonia ko batana chahiye tha akhir Suhana ne badi bahan ke nate pucha tha aur sonia ko apni pareshani yaa apni wo baate uss se jarur share krni chahiiye thi.

Bilkul! Kaera badal rahi thi. Toh Sonia kese peeche hatt sakti thi? Wahi change tha jo Suhana ne observe kiya. Sonia bhi uss race me shaamil ho chuki thi.

Yes apan galat tha mera 100% guess galat tha(ab apan koi guessich na krega sala apan ka guess galat hi hojata hai ).....mughe nhi pata tha ju suhana ke saath saath divya ki bhi shadi aisi hui thi....uss update me jab veer ne kahha tha ki tumne kisi ko pahle mara hai.... that's one bc ju ne kya hi scene likhe hai yaar

Ab aate uss Nicholas wahi gandu Nik bahen ka lawda bhosdika.....chutiye ko batao saadi krni hai bhosdike......iss maachudal ke aur uss gaurav ke har scene par bohot gussa aaya.....bhale divya kee scene par apan jyada weird na laga lekin jab Gaurav ne suhana ko saddi ke liye bola literally idhar bc laga ki goli daag di ho bahenchod batao bhosdiwale ko shadi karni hai aur idhar divya aur suhana ne unki baat ko maan liya......divya pareshan aur udass suhana ke liye thi naaki khud ke liye akhir wo to yahi chahti thi bhale uski shadi ki baat agayi lekin usse ektrah se to wo sab kuch milne wala tha department me nik ke dwara lekin suhana uss bechari ka kya uske saath aisa hua .

Sab Nik aur Gaurav ki gaand maarne me lage.

Pushkar that boy......wo kitna masoom tha bachpan me lekin future kisne dekha tha ki wo kya se kya banjayega.....isme Pushkar ki bhi koi galti nhi thi akhir jindagi tumhe kis mod par khada kr de laakr ye to hum bhi nhi jante.....haa Pushkar ki baate sunkr realise to hua ki uske saath family me hi kuch hua but no ussne to yaha tk ki Sonu ko bhi galat smjh liya aur duniya sari ko bhi khair Pushkar ka jo pahla scene tha school life wala ek wo scene wo kitta ossm tha lekin ab jo ye Pushkar ka dusra scene jis raah par wo chal diya tha jaha sirf maut thi aur wahi hua bhi usse maut hi mili

Galat raah par jaane se anjaam bura hi milta hai.

Aur wo suhana ka wo shadi wala scene literally wo scene sabse jyada emotional part tha mere liye.....iss part me literally jo Werewolf ju ne iss scene ko likha tha wo apan ka sabse jyada emotional part raha aur wo khaskar jistrah se suhana ne apne yaha bhi apne dard ko apne dil me hi daba kr samet kiya aur usse bahar nna aane diya wo apan ke liye sabse jyada emotional part tha.khair apan jyada na likhna chahta iss scene ke baare me.

Channa mereya mereya...!

DID wo splits personality disorder....suhana ko kaise hua ye bhi ju ne clear kr hi diya.


Aur wo scene jo ju ne likha jisme har baate ju ne suhana ke past se dohrate hue dikhaya aur fir jis tarah Suhana ko hosh me laaya wo kya hi likha tha gajab ka tha.

Khair Suhana ne to uthte hi veer ko hi dhunda tha but wo to wapas mumbai gaya lekin jo message Suhana ko dekr gaya tha wo Khair suhana ne sahi hi kaha ki veer ne hi usse bachaya hai but veer ka wo message ?? pale na para matlab ye line {I couldn't save you.}

Veer ka matlab yaha tha I couldn't protect you. Zaahir hai ki Veer ne Suhana ka haath thaam ke usko aasvaashan diya tha ki woh dono yaha se sahi salamat niklenge. Par unfortunately... Aisa nahi hua.
Suhana almost died.
Isliye Veer ne woh likha. I couldn't save you. From getting hurt... Aisa matlab tha uska.
Ek kaaran ye bhi hai jo woh Suhana se uss waqt nahi milna chaahta tha. Ya kahe ki uss se nazre nahi milaana chaahta tha. Because fir guilt uthati. Isliye Veer ko jese hi pata chala she's out of danger. Woh waha se chal pada.

Khair ye Update abhi tak sabse emotional raha literally abhi tak pure forum par ju ke aur Dusra Sandeep bhaya ke hi story ke emotional updates aur scenes pasand aaye.Update bohot hi lajavaab tha Werewolf !!


Take care........

Dhanyavaad bhai. Itna bada revo likh diya man. Thoda khayaal rakha karo humaara bhi. Ju Death Kiñg , Rihanna ke revos padhne me hi alag se samay dena padta hai. Araam se aadha ghanta jaata hai. But keep it raining...! Coz I love them.
Thanks once again man! Keep supporting!

 

[Death Kiñg]

Mene sirf itna socha tha ki iss arc me kaun sii 2 cheezein haasil karwaani hai kahani me.

Ragini ki jannat ka dwar aur Tej, haina..

 

[Hrami manus]

Mujhe lgta h k ab thoda India ka scene b waps se suru hona chahiye...#veer_back_to_india

 

[Werewolf]

दुआओं में काफी ताकत होती है । सैकड़ों लोगों की दुआएं सुहाना के लिए संजीवनी बूटी का काम कर गई । वेयरवोल्भ भाई ने कोई कसर बाकी नहीं रखी थी सुहाना को शमशान पहुंचाने में लेकिन वो भुल गए कि रीडर्स की संवेदना और सहानुभूति सुहाना के साथ थी । इमोशनल अटैचमेंट हो गया था सुहाना के साथ हम रीडर्स का ।
मैं शुक्रगुजार हूं -
G. O. D. ( Leon bro ) , Xabhi , kala Nag , The Angry Man , Nayak 4118 , Lib Am ( Amit ) , Hyper king , Ajay Chauhan , Dobahua , Anky 123 , Velentine rider , Krishdude , Mana6262 , A. B. King , Hiakarji , Gumnaam Singh , Charles William , Nayak 4118 , XYZ2423 , Sanki Rajput jaise sabhi bhaiyo ka aur sabhi ki chaheti Rihanna ji ka.

Rihanna ko toh bhul hi nahi sakte hamaare Sanju bhai. Hai na?

कुछ और भी रीडर्स की फरियाद काम कर गई जो या तो साइलेंट रहकर पढ़ते हैं या जो बिना सदस्यता लिए हुए ।

हमने देखा है जब अमिताभ बच्चन साहब को प्रशंसकों की दुआओं ने उन्हें मौत के दरवाजे से कैसे वापस खींच लिया था ।

Aise boht se hai jo sirf like kar ke nikal jaate hai. Kabhi aaj tak ek shabd nahi likha.

यह कथन मेरा नहीं , गुरू नानक जी का है - " नानक दुखिया सब संसार " ।‌‌ इस संसार में सभी इंसान दुखी हैं ।
गरीब - अमीर , स्वस्थ्य -बीमार , राजा -रंक सभी किसी न किसी वजह से दुखी हैं ।
सुहाना और दिव्या की कहानी भी कोई जुदा नहीं थी । एक ऐसे लड़के के लिए ये अपनी जीवन तबाह कर दी जो सोनिया का मात्र दोस्त भर ही था । जो ड्रग्स का कारोबार कर रहा था । जिससे उसके परिवार वाले भी दुखी थे ।
सुहाना का पुष्कर के बारे में सुनकर तुरंत अमेरिका पहुंच जाना निहायत ही बचपना से भरा हुआ फैसला था । उसके लिए अच्छा होता कि वो सारी जानकारी सोनिया को देती । आखिर वो सोनिया का कभी बेस्ट फ्रेंड हुआ करता था ।
एक गलत फैसला और उसके सपनों का धाराशाई होना ।

Maatr dost nahi tha Sanju bhai. Sonia ke ghar me uthana baithna tha uska. Aur Suhana bhi uss se boht acche se parichit thi. Bachpan se leke teenage tak jo woh unke saath tha. Suhana ko toh waha jaana hi tha. Kyuki tab na hi uski studies chal rahi thi aur na hi business ki koi zyaada zimmedariya thi uss pe. Tabhi toh haar baithi. Gaurav ke aage.

सुहाना की जान है उसकी छोटी बहन सोनिया । बड़ी बहन होने का हमेशा ही फर्ज निभाया ।
बचपन के दिनों में एक तितली को देखकर काइरा की कही बातों को उसने काफी गंभीरता से ले लिया । तितली की उम्र बहुत कम होती है लेकिन जितना भी होती है इंसान को एक सीख देकर जाती है ।
हमेशा तितली की तरह उड़ान भरते रहो । उसके रंग बिरंगी पंखों के समान दुनिया में खुशियों के रंग फैलाते रहो । सभी जीवों में सबसे अधिक पाॅजीटिव जीव होती है तितली ।
सुहाना को तितली की उम्र नहीं बल्कि उसके सीख से प्रेरित होना चाहिए

Ye positive baat toh usse Veer hi samjhaega.

गौरव के साथ सुहाना का विवाह एक विवशता थी । जैसे कि निकोलस के साथ दिव्या की ।
शायद यही कारण था जिससे वो डिसोसिएटिव आइडेंटिटी डिसआर्डर जैसी बिमारी का शिकार हो गई । अगर वो मानसिक रूप से प्रसन्न और संतुष्ट रहती है तो यह बिमारी कोई खास नुकसान नहीं कर सकती । जरूरत है उसे वीर की । जरूरत है उसे वीर के प्यार की ओर जरूरत है उसे वीर के संरक्षण की ।

Par pati agar gaurav jesa ho toh gussa kese nahi aaega?

दोनों लड़कियों की शादी उनकी मजबूरी थी जहां प्रेम का एक तिनका भी नहीं था । एक तरह से इसे ब्लैकमेल ही कहा जायेगा । निकोलस और गौरव ने प्लानिंग के साथ यह गोरखधंधा खेला था । शायद इस के बारे में बाद में और कुछ जानकारी मिले !

मुझे समझ नहीं आया कि दिव्या को सुहाना के मोबाइल से सिर्फ गौरव का ही नाम क्यों दिखाई दिया ! दिव्या सारी खबर उसके माता पिता को भी तो दे सकती थी । ऐसे नाज़ुक क्षण में माता पिता से बढ़कर और कौन हो सकता है !

Divya Gaurav ke baare me jaanti thi. Aapne padha hoga ki Gaurav saalo se College me Suhana ke peeche laga hua tha. Suhana saari baate Divya se share karti thi. Yaha tak ki usne khud bhi Gaurav se baat kii hui thi pehle. Aur Gaurav ne apne usual tareeqe me guroor me bataya tha ki uski family kitni strong hai. Vagarah vagarah... Divya ne isliye seedha gaurav ko call lagaya. Woh jaanti thi ki ye gaandu hi madad kar sakta hai. aur hua bhi wahi.

अपडेट खतम और अमेरिका प्रवास भी खतम लेकिन उस व्यक्ति के बारे में हमें कुछ पता ही नहीं चला जिसने खुद को सिस्टम से लैस बताया था ।
उन लोगों के बारे में भी जानकारी नहीं मिली जिन्होंने ये हमला किया था ।

Uski jhalak beech beech me dikhti rahegi.

अपडेट हमेशा की तरह खुबसूरत और वाह वाह था ।
काफी लम्बा अपडेट था यह । काफी टाइम जाया हुआ होगा । इस कठोर परिश्रम के लिए आपको बहुत बहुत आभार भाई ।

जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

Dhanyavaad boht boht.
Hmm! Samay toh lagta hi hai jab aap ek hi update me sab kuch dikhaane ki koshish karte ho toh.
Anyways! Saath bane rahiyega!
Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..... Akir kar the house of the killer arc khatam hua.... Or kya sachhhi veer ke peyar padh geyi.....or divya or suhana ka shadi wakai me bahut gehra aaghat kiya dono pe....dekhte hai aage kya suhana gourav ke sath erehna chahti hai ya nhi.....or mujhe lagta haisuhana ko uske maan pachand ladka mil geya sathe divya ko.. Bhi
Or wakai sab ki jeevan bhi ek titli kk tarah hi to hota hai...kab koun mar jaye kisko pata chalta hai yaar...
Waiting for next update... Very soon

Dhanyavaad bhai!
Zindagi ka aisa hi hai.
Keep supporting!

Suhana to bahut tadpi hai or Divya v same isliye bo ese ban gayi bahut si bat v Pata chali ...
Btw fantastic mind blowing update​

Thanks man!

Nice mast update bro and awesome update

Nice update

Thanks!

 

[Werewolf]

Superb Fantastic amazing mind blowing Awesome update bhai...

It's called mega update kya update tha bhai maza aa gaya ese update ko mega update khaha jata h log to chota sa update likh k bhi mega update kheh dete h

Dekh rahe ho kitne Mega updates deta hu mein!?

Suhana or Divya ka past bohot acha nahi tha or specially undone ki shaadi jis hisab se dono k husband n unke situation ka fayda uthaya h Nik k bhale kitni bhi phehchan kyu na ho ajj jo wo life ji raha h usme sabse bada haath Divya ka h chahe wo house ho car ho or etc jitni success Divya ne hasil ki h utni Nik Hasil karne m bohot time nikal jata tab jake wo Divya ki barabari kar pata Divya isi liye jab suhana usko gaalo deti thi to jada kuch nahi bolti thi usko bhi pata tha Nik kesa h Suhana ne bhi apni man mar k shaadi ki thi Gaurav se kyu ki agar wo Gaurav ki help nahi leti to uski life or uska future kharab ho jata or Gaurav ne us moke ka fayda uthaya or suhana se shaddi karli per apni Suhana ka to us incidents k bad DID hogaya tha or usme suhana ka wo gusse wala roop or apni husband ki harkato se wo uspe bohot gussa karti thi or child jati thi.

Hmm! Ye baat sach hai ki Divya detective ki field me zyada efficient hai aur zyaada honhaar hai.

But last m Suhana jinda h ye bohot Badi baat h akhir veer ne use bacha hi liya per wo usse mile bina h India return aa gaya ye samaj nahi aya mujhe jis insaan ne appki jaan bachane k liye app ko marne wali bullet khud bich m aake khud ko harm kiya appko bachane k liye app uske hosh m ane k phele h waha se chale jayo bhale appne uski family ko inform kiya ho or uski family bhi hospital m aa gaye ho per appka tab tak rukna banta h jab tak usko hosh na aa jaye ya ye conform na ho jaye ki wo abb fine h ab ye kyu kiya veer ne ye to next update m hi pata chalega...

Uske peeche kayi kaaran hai bhaaya. Pehla ye ki Veer Suhana ko sahi se protect na kar paaya. Toh uske andar guilt hai iss baat ko lekar ki uski goli Suhana ne apne upar lii hai. Toh itni jaldi kese aankhein mila sakta hai woh? Dusri baat ye ki Veer ka role ab yaha sab samaapt ho chuka tha. Suhana ne Divya ko keh hi diya tha ki aage se ab sab kuch usse sambhaalna hoga kyuki woh ab yaha se niklenge. Teesra ye ki woh anjaan aadmi. Jab woh yaha aake Veer ko threat de sakta hai. Toh uske gharwalo kya? Waha Mumbai me Nidhi, Ragini, Ye sab sahi salamat hai bhi ya nahi? Yaha Suhana ka dhyaan rakhne ke liye sab aa jaenge. Par waha ka kya? Isliye woh ravana ho gaya.
Thanks btw!
Keep supporting!