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Arre itni chikallas kaun karega. Bas yaha likh diya hai. Ab jo vote jisse dena chaahe...
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Update 109 bc ye Update tha bc nope bilkul na sala ye emotionally torture tha khair Update was full of emotional stuff. Haa kabhi khushi wale scenes laye ju ne to kabhi dukh wale to kabhi itte emotional kar diya ki bc ankhh se ansoo tapkne ke jagah apan gussa tha.
khair Werewolf ju ne har scenes khaskar butterfly wala jo scene tha school ka wo bohot hi touchy tha jo aage ke scenes se related tha wo saaf saaf usme jhalak raha tha.....and main baat ye rahi ki ju ne jo scenes suhana ke butterfly se compare kr ke jo dikhaya aur usse jis trah yaani jiss emotion me ju ne prastut kiya hamare samne bich-bich me wo bohot hi lajavaab tha and ek aur baat maine notice ki maine ki ju ne jo ye butterfly aur suhana ka scene jo ek dusre se comparison yaa similar dikhaya hai emotions ke saath wo tareeka poems aur poetry me poets jyadatar paryog krte hai chahe wo literature ki poems ho yaa hindi ki yaa sanskrit ye chis hame sare ki gayi poetry me aksar dikhta hi hai khair haa bhale isse story me bhi use krte hai as a "Comparison & Contrasting" jaise ju ne yaha paryog kiya wo bohot hi lajavaab tha lekin ju ne ye poetry wala tareeka hi use kiya.
Kaera ka wo tone literally wo mature talk uski wo baate just intense feeling. :
***{Pathetic! Insignificant! Pitiful!"}
{Titliya mujhe pasand nahi." "Inki life sirf 15 se 28 days tak ki hi hoti hai. Ye jaldi marr jaati hai. I hate it."}
{"Hmm~}***
Yaha Kaera ke har reaction har expression me jaise uski wo maturness utni choti si umar me bohot hi ajjib tha akhir ho bhi kyu na ussne bachpan me ussne kya kya nhi jhela...wo baba wala kaand,wo blood se uski chidh matlab usse jo problem hoti hai blood se uska wo dar blood ke prati aur uska baap kishore wo bhi ek kaaran tha ki Kaera bachpan se hi kitni mature thi.
haa Kaera koi normal ladki nhi hai ye yaha se bhi confirm ho gaya yes she is on high wave of life.....uski maturness bachpan me hi thi to future me batane ki jarurat bhi nhi kyuki wo hamsab dekh hi chuke hai... literally she is queen himself.....wo wo hai jiske jaisa sayad hi koi ban paaye yaa uss se koi compare kar paye khair apan ne jyada hi ghasit diya iss ko
Ab aate Sonia aur ava par to yaar wo dono kitne masoom the yaar bachpan me
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Inki Bachpana saaf jhalak rahi thi inke bato se yaar ju ne bohot hi bariki se inke scenes likhe just imaginable tha ye scenes matlab padhte hi ankho ke samne aarahe the scenes just epic was it.
Aur ab Suhana ka wo har scenes jo ju ne butterfly se compare ki that's the scenes bc wo scenes mere sabse favourite rahe just love it that scenes.
Khair ab aate hai sabse best scene par jo tha jab suhana uss bhid se alag khhadi thi aur apni bahen sonia ki wo muskurahat aur uski khushio se apne dil me uth rahe dard ko jis tarike se usne dabaye rakha....wo scene ek alag hi ahsas tha jisme saaf jhalak raha tha ki wo apni bahen se kitta pyaar krti hai,ussne apne dukh ko uski khilkhilati hui muskurahat aur khushio ke niche daba dala. Ussne sonia ki hi khushi ko apni khushi maan liya ye emotion jo suhana ke saaf jhalak rahe the wo ek alag hi scene tha mere liye.
Ab aate hai dadaji ke scene par jab unhone suhana ko ye baat boli
{"Ek baat yaad rakhna. Samay! Ghaav ko theek nahi karta. Woh sirf hume unke sang jeena sikhaata hai."}
......aur ye baat aaj suhana ke jindagi me saaf saaf dikh bhi raha hai jab maine ye pura flash back padha suhana ka to apan ke sabse pahli baat yahi aayi mere zahen me ki "samay tumhare dard ko nhi kam krta naaki unn ghavo ko balki wo to tumhe jina sikhata hai uss dard yaa uss ghav ke saath jo aaj Suhana jee rahi hai wo jindagi jiska dard bhale hi kam na ho par usne uss jindagi ko accept kiya,yaha suhana ke dadaji aur veer ke dada ji me koi antar na raha akhir dono hi jagah unn buzurgo ne sahi gyan aur baate hi to batayi thi.....khair apan aata ab aage ke scenes par
Ab aate suhana aur sonia ke unn scene par jab sonia me kuch ussne badlav mahsus kiya suhana ne and wo badlav tha sonia ka ki wo kaise Kaera se bhi behtar ban jaye akhir wo kaise wo Kaera se har cheej me aage rahe aur issi se related badlav ussne I guess notice kiye honge jaise ki alag alag books padhna bola tha suhana ne apni bato me means knowledge me aage. Khair Suhana ne uss se jaane ki koshish ki par sonia ne ye baat batayi tak nhi Khair ye baat hi darar banti gayi unke bich akhir sonia ko batana chahiye tha akhir Suhana ne badi bahan ke nate pucha tha aur sonia ko apni pareshani yaa apni wo baate uss se jarur share krni chahiiye thi.
Yes apan galat tha mera 100% guess galat tha(ab apan koi guessich na krega sala apan ka guess galat hi hojata hai
).....mughe nhi pata tha ju suhana ke saath saath divya ki bhi shadi aisi hui thi....uss update me jab veer ne kahha tha ki tumne kisi ko pahle mara hai.... that's one bc ju ne kya hi scene likhe hai yaar
Ab aate uss Nicholas wahi gandu Nik bahen ka lawda bhosdika.....chutiye ko batao saadi krni hai bhosdike......iss maachudal ke aur uss gaurav ke har scene par bohot gussa aaya.....bhale divya kee scene par apan jyada weird na laga lekin jab Gaurav ne suhana ko saddi ke liye bola literally idhar bc laga ki goli daag di ho bahenchod batao bhosdiwale ko shadi karni hai aur idhar divya aur suhana ne unki baat ko maan liya......divya pareshan aur udass suhana ke liye thi naaki khud ke liye akhir wo to yahi chahti thi bhale uski shadi ki baat agayi lekin usse ektrah se to wo sab kuch milne wala tha department me nik ke dwara lekin suhana uss bechari ka kya uske saath aisa
hua .
Pushkar that boy......wo kitna masoom tha bachpan me lekin future kisne dekha tha ki wo kya se kya banjayega.....isme Pushkar ki bhi koi galti nhi thi akhir jindagi tumhe kis mod par khada kr de laakr ye to hum bhi nhi jante.....haa Pushkar ki baate sunkr realise to hua ki uske saath family me hi kuch hua but no ussne to yaha tk ki Sonu ko bhi galat smjh liya aur duniya sari ko bhi khair Pushkar ka jo pahla scene tha school life wala ek wo scene wo kitta ossm tha lekin ab jo ye Pushkar ka dusra scene jis raah par wo chal diya tha jaha sirf maut thi aur wahi hua bhi usse maut hi mili.
Aur wo suhana ka wo shadi wala scene literally wo scene sabse jyada emotional part tha mere liye.....iss part me literally jo Werewolf ju ne iss scene ko likha tha wo apan ka sabse jyada emotional part raha aur wo khaskar jistrah se suhana ne apne yaha bhi apne dard ko apne dil me hi daba kr samet kiya aur usse bahar nna aane diya wo apan ke liye sabse jyada emotional part tha.khair apan jyada na likhna chahta iss scene ke baare me.
DID wo splits personality disorder....suhana ko kaise hua ye bhi ju ne clear kr hi diya.
Aur wo scene jo ju ne likha jisme har baate ju ne suhana ke past se dohrate hue dikhaya aur fir jis tarah Suhana ko hosh me laaya wo kya hi likha tha gajab ka tha.
Khair Suhana ne to uthte hi veer ko hi dhunda tha but wo to wapas mumbai gaya lekin jo message Suhana ko dekr gaya tha wo Khair suhana ne sahi hi kaha ki veer ne hi usse bachaya hai but veer ka wo message ??
pale na para matlab ye line {I couldn't save you.}
Khair ye Update abhi tak sabse emotional raha literally abhi tak pure forum par ju ke aur Dusra Sandeep bhaya ke hi story ke emotional updates aur scenes pasand aaye.Update bohot hi lajavaab tha Werewolf !!
Take care........
khair Werewolf ju ne har scenes khaskar butterfly wala jo scene tha school ka wo bohot hi touchy tha jo aage ke scenes se related tha wo saaf saaf usme jhalak raha tha.....and main baat ye rahi ki ju ne jo scenes suhana ke butterfly se compare kr ke jo dikhaya aur usse jis trah yaani jiss emotion me ju ne prastut kiya hamare samne bich-bich me wo bohot hi lajavaab tha and ek aur baat maine notice ki maine ki ju ne jo ye butterfly aur suhana ka scene jo ek dusre se comparison yaa similar dikhaya hai emotions ke saath wo tareeka poems aur poetry me poets jyadatar paryog krte hai chahe wo literature ki poems ho yaa hindi ki yaa sanskrit ye chis hame sare ki gayi poetry me aksar dikhta hi hai khair haa bhale isse story me bhi use krte hai as a "Comparison & Contrasting" jaise ju ne yaha paryog kiya wo bohot hi lajavaab tha lekin ju ne ye poetry wala tareeka hi use kiya.
Kaera ka wo tone literally wo mature talk uski wo baate just intense feeling. :
***{Pathetic! Insignificant! Pitiful!"}
{Titliya mujhe pasand nahi." "Inki life sirf 15 se 28 days tak ki hi hoti hai. Ye jaldi marr jaati hai. I hate it."}
{"Hmm~}***
Yaha Kaera ke har reaction har expression me jaise uski wo maturness utni choti si umar me bohot hi ajjib tha akhir ho bhi kyu na ussne bachpan me ussne kya kya nhi jhela...wo baba wala kaand,wo blood se uski chidh matlab usse jo problem hoti hai blood se uska wo dar blood ke prati aur uska baap kishore wo bhi ek kaaran tha ki Kaera bachpan se hi kitni mature thi.
haa Kaera koi normal ladki nhi hai ye yaha se bhi confirm ho gaya yes she is on high wave of life.....uski maturness bachpan me hi thi to future me batane ki jarurat bhi nhi kyuki wo hamsab dekh hi chuke hai... literally she is queen himself.....wo wo hai jiske jaisa sayad hi koi ban paaye yaa uss se koi compare kar paye khair apan ne jyada hi ghasit diya iss ko
Ab aate Sonia aur ava par to yaar wo dono kitne masoom the yaar bachpan me
{****Ahhh!!! T-Toh ye titli bhi marr jaegi?" Ava bechain ho uthi.****}
{"Waaaaaa~ Didiiiii!!! Titliii~"}
Inki Bachpana saaf jhalak rahi thi inke bato se yaar ju ne bohot hi bariki se inke scenes likhe just imaginable tha ye scenes matlab padhte hi ankho ke samne aarahe the scenes just epic was it.
Aur ab Suhana ka wo har scenes jo ju ne butterfly se compare ki that's the scenes bc wo scenes mere sabse favourite rahe just love it that scenes.
Khair ab aate hai sabse best scene par jo tha jab suhana uss bhid se alag khhadi thi aur apni bahen sonia ki wo muskurahat aur uski khushio se apne dil me uth rahe dard ko jis tarike se usne dabaye rakha....wo scene ek alag hi ahsas tha jisme saaf jhalak raha tha ki wo apni bahen se kitta pyaar krti hai,ussne apne dukh ko uski khilkhilati hui muskurahat aur khushio ke niche daba dala. Ussne sonia ki hi khushi ko apni khushi maan liya ye emotion jo suhana ke saaf jhalak rahe the wo ek alag hi scene tha mere liye.
Ab aate hai dadaji ke scene par jab unhone suhana ko ye baat boli
{"Ek baat yaad rakhna. Samay! Ghaav ko theek nahi karta. Woh sirf hume unke sang jeena sikhaata hai."}
......aur ye baat aaj suhana ke jindagi me saaf saaf dikh bhi raha hai jab maine ye pura flash back padha suhana ka to apan ke sabse pahli baat yahi aayi mere zahen me ki "samay tumhare dard ko nhi kam krta naaki unn ghavo ko balki wo to tumhe jina sikhata hai uss dard yaa uss ghav ke saath jo aaj Suhana jee rahi hai wo jindagi jiska dard bhale hi kam na ho par usne uss jindagi ko accept kiya,yaha suhana ke dadaji aur veer ke dada ji me koi antar na raha akhir dono hi jagah unn buzurgo ne sahi gyan aur baate hi to batayi thi.....khair apan aata ab aage ke scenes par Ab aate suhana aur sonia ke unn scene par jab sonia me kuch ussne badlav mahsus kiya suhana ne and wo badlav tha sonia ka ki wo kaise Kaera se bhi behtar ban jaye akhir wo kaise wo Kaera se har cheej me aage rahe aur issi se related badlav ussne I guess notice kiye honge jaise ki alag alag books padhna bola tha suhana ne apni bato me means knowledge me aage
. Khair Suhana ne uss se jaane ki koshish ki par sonia ne ye baat batayi tak nhi Khair ye baat hi darar banti gayi unke bich akhir sonia ko batana chahiye tha akhir Suhana ne badi bahan ke nate pucha tha aur sonia ko apni pareshani yaa apni wo baate uss se jarur share krni chahiiye thi.Yes apan galat tha mera 100% guess galat tha(ab apan koi guessich na krega sala apan ka guess galat hi hojata hai
).....mughe nhi pata tha ju suhana ke saath saath divya ki bhi shadi aisi hui thi....uss update me jab veer ne kahha tha ki tumne kisi ko pahle mara hai.... that's one bc ju ne kya hi scene likhe hai yaar Ab aate uss Nicholas wahi gandu Nik bahen ka lawda bhosdika.....chutiye ko batao saadi krni hai bhosdike......iss maachudal ke aur uss gaurav ke har scene par bohot gussa aaya.....bhale divya kee scene par apan jyada weird na laga lekin jab Gaurav ne suhana ko saddi ke liye bola literally idhar bc laga ki goli daag di ho bahenchod batao bhosdiwale ko shadi karni hai aur idhar divya aur suhana ne unki baat ko maan liya......divya pareshan aur udass suhana ke liye thi naaki khud ke liye akhir wo to yahi chahti thi bhale uski shadi ki baat agayi lekin usse ektrah se to wo sab kuch milne wala tha department me nik ke dwara lekin suhana uss bechari ka kya uske saath aisa
hua .Pushkar that boy......wo kitna masoom tha bachpan me lekin future kisne dekha tha ki wo kya se kya banjayega.....isme Pushkar ki bhi koi galti nhi thi akhir jindagi tumhe kis mod par khada kr de laakr ye to hum bhi nhi jante.....haa Pushkar ki baate sunkr realise to hua ki uske saath family me hi kuch hua but no ussne to yaha tk ki Sonu ko bhi galat smjh liya aur duniya sari ko bhi khair Pushkar ka jo pahla scene tha school life wala ek wo scene wo kitta ossm tha lekin ab jo ye Pushkar ka dusra scene jis raah par wo chal diya tha jaha sirf maut thi aur wahi hua bhi usse maut hi mili.
Aur wo suhana ka wo shadi wala scene literally wo scene sabse jyada emotional part tha mere liye.....iss part me literally jo Werewolf ju ne iss scene ko likha tha wo apan ka sabse jyada emotional part raha aur wo khaskar jistrah se suhana ne apne yaha bhi apne dard ko apne dil me hi daba kr samet kiya aur usse bahar nna aane diya wo apan ke liye sabse jyada emotional part tha.khair apan jyada na likhna chahta iss scene ke baare me.
DID wo splits personality disorder....suhana ko kaise hua ye bhi ju ne clear kr hi diya.
Aur wo scene jo ju ne likha jisme har baate ju ne suhana ke past se dohrate hue dikhaya aur fir jis tarah Suhana ko hosh me laaya wo kya hi likha tha gajab ka tha.
Khair Suhana ne to uthte hi veer ko hi dhunda tha but wo to wapas mumbai gaya lekin jo message Suhana ko dekr gaya tha wo Khair suhana ne sahi hi kaha ki veer ne hi usse bachaya hai but veer ka wo message ??
pale na para matlab ye line {I couldn't save you.}Khair ye Update abhi tak sabse emotional raha literally abhi tak pure forum par ju ke aur Dusra Sandeep bhaya ke hi story ke emotional updates aur scenes pasand aaye.Update bohot hi lajavaab tha Werewolf !!
Take care........
SANJU ( V. R. )
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Aasan nahi hone wala hai contest kyonki Mod. bhi participate karenge. Mere baaton ko halke me mat lijiye.Arre itni chikallas kaun karega. Bas yaha likh diya hai. Ab jo vote jisse dena chaahe...
PM bahut jyada asar karta hai.
Jab election hua tha to jaguar bhai aur kaamdev bhai dono se kaha tha ki aap dono apne team ka Marj kar lo. Kaamdev bhai taiyar the lekin jaguar bhai ne mana kar diya due to Naina ji.
Dono se kaha tha ki Agar marj nahi hua to Hunk bhai se jeet hi nahi sakte kyonki A.K. bhai aur Gyani bhai ke saath saath sare mod. Ka support hasil tha enhe.
Agar jitna hai to pahle se hi preparation kijiye.
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Arre nahi jeete toh nahi jeete.
Usme kya ho gaya!? Abhi kuch dino se kaafi vyast hu bhaaya. Toh bas naam de dunga apna contest me. Baaki jeetna ya na jeetna. Ye logo ki voting ke upar. 
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Kuchh aisa hai bhi jiske baare mein Sanju guruji ko maaloom naa ho...
SANJU ( V. R. )
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Attitude jit ki honi chahiye. Anyatha kisi bhi competition me participate karna Mahaj aupcharikta hi hai.Arre nahi jeete toh nahi jeete.
Yaha bhi wahi rules lagu hota hai jo aap ne ekadh din pehle kaha tha....Saam damm dand bhed.
Mughe yakeen hai A.K.bhai ya Gyani bhai es contest me participate karenge... Aur agar inhone participate Kiya to samgh jao kitna tuf compilation hoga.
SANJU ( V. R. )
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Us waqt main personal reasons se kisi bhi team ka hissa nahi bana tha. Kaamdev bhai ne to mujhe apne team ke liye mughe sab kuch nirdharit karne ko kaha tha. Jaguar bhai aur Naina ji sabhi barabar mere sampark me the... Love bhai ne mujhe pm kiya tha.Kuchh aisa hai bhi jiske baare mein Sanju guruji ko maaloom naa ho...
Actually sabhi ke saath mera relation badhiya tha. Ek reason ya bhi tha mere active na hone ke liye.
IP aur Mahi maurya ka matbhed bahut jyada badh gaya tha...wo maine hi band karwaya tha.
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Ladkiyon ka jhagda band karwa dene waale ke samaksh hum naadan natmastak hain...IP aur Mahi maurya ka matbhed bahut jyada badh gaya tha...wo maine hi band karwaya tha.
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Bhai sabse pehle toh dhanyavaad boht boht. Thread se judne ke liye shukriya. Aur swagat hai aapka.
Kahani adhuri chorrne ke peeche kayi saare kaaran hote hai bhaaya. Jinme se sabse common kaaran hota hai ki writer out of imagination phase me chala jaata hai. Usse samajh nahi aata ki ab yaha se kahani ko aage kese le jaaya jaaye. Uske liye tagdi brainstorming karni padti hai. Agar story complex hai toh samajh lo dimaag ka dahi hona hai.
Toh wahi kuch personal issues ke chalte chorr dete hai.
mera poora focus characters ke development ko dikhaane me tha aur aage bhi rahega. Shayad isliye ye apne sahi pace se jaa rahi hai.Itna sab aapne likh diya hai. Ab aur kya bacha hai.
Bas saath bane rahiyega. Naya arc jald hi shuru hoga.
