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Aakhirkar, Tejal ko Veer aur Veer ke ateet ke baare mein kaafi kuchh pata chal chuka hai, shayad sab kuchh! Obviously, Veer ke saath past mein exactly kya – kya hua, kis prakar ke shadyantra uske khilaaf rache gaye, aur kis – kis prakar se use hurt kiya gaya, iski poori jaankari kewal Veer ke hi paas hai... Parantu, mere khyal se Nidhi se behtar koyi nahi ho sakta tha, Veer ka past explain karne ke liye... That's because, I think Nidhi is the one,who knows the most about Veer, mujhe nahi lagta ki Veer ne itna sab kisi aur ko bataya hoga, jitna ki Nidhi ko bataya tha... But haan, mere khyal se Tejal ko abhi aur bhi bohot kuchh pata chalna baaki hai, sabhi family members ke baare mein, shayad Veer khud hi batayega use aage chalkar...
Tejal, as expected, had a bit of negativity in her heart, all because of the comparisons she made in between herself & Veer... But obviously, thise comparisons were just a result of half – knowledge, she possessed regarding Veer... Par ab Nidhi ki kripa se sab clear ho hi chuka hai, to jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha tha, we might see a different version of Tejal... Purvi ko dekhte huye usne khudse kaha ki wo apne plan ko postponed kar rahi hai, yaani abhi ek – do din baad hi milegi wo Veer se, but that meeting & conversation would be one of the highlights of this story!
Waise intezar to us pal ka hai jab Veer apne ateet ki poori dastan use sunayega, I'm sure, she has something really good in store, for those who were responsible for Veer being hurt, doesn't matter whether they did it knowingly or unknowingly!
Btw. Tejal's past, just like all other characters of the story, seems to be painful... That's quite understood too, living without a father in our society, that's not an easy thing... No matter, whether we accept it or not, but the truth is, this modern or progressed society is still really, really bad! Ye to kewal un taano aur vyangya ki bata huyi jo baahri logon ne uspar athva Bhavana par kase honge, we cannot ignore the fact that Tejal must have developed certain feelings and thoughts on her own, regarding her unknown family and relatives... Jab dekhti hogi wo anya bachon ko apne pita athva bhai – behan ke saath, tab uski manodasha kaisi rehti hogi? Bachpan se hi usne ye sab kuchh jhela aur jab use pata chala hoga ki uski Maa us se, uske bhai ki existence hi chhupati aayi hai saalon se.. Truly, she has gone through a lot too!
But for now, there is definitely a ray of hope! Naa kewal wo apne bhai se milan ke nazdeek hai, balki umeed yahi hai ki dono mein yahaan se kewal nazdeekiyan hi aayengi, kisi bhi soorat mein Tejal ki takleef athva peeda, badhne ke aasar kam hi hain... The reason is, dono hamesha se ek – doosre se door rahe, kayi varshon tak ek – doosre ki shakal ki pehchan tak na thi dono ko, ab is se zyada aur kya ho sakta hai!?
Btw. I think ki wo shayad jald hi Aarohi aur Kavya se bhi milegi, Veer se milne ke baad ya us se pehle, ye dekhne laayak hoga... But it can prove to be a good step, I don't think she'll need it though, but still Kavya – Aarohi could prove to be the bridge between her and Veer! 
Baharhal, Ragini ke baare mein bhi bataya Nidhi ne use, par mujhe nahi lagta ki Ragini se abhi Milne pahunch sakti hai wo... 
Idhar Ragini ne ek baar fir apni feelings Veer ke saamne keh di hain, waise Veer ki taraf se kiya gaya ye chumban hi kaafi hai, but still I think Veer ab jald hi apni taraf se bhi haami bhar sakta hai us rishte ke liye jiska sapna Ragini kaafi samay se dekh rahi hai... There were a good number of little things, that went on between Ragini & Veer, but all of them were presented in a beautiful way, a really beautiful way! Ragini asking him not to call her ‘Bhabhi’, her reaction when Veer called her by her name, that complete scene on the beach, how she gathered herself up to tell Veer everything, and of course, how kiss broke out! The narration was top notch and the words you chose,were on point, as per the requirement of the situation!
But there are tough times ahead, for Ragini! Sarvpratham, Veer ne abhi tak seedhe shabdon mein uske proposal ka uttar diya nahi hai, haan hi kahega wo, ye lagbhag tay hai, but still ‘keh chuka hai’ aur ‘keh dega’ mein fark to hota hi hai... Wahin Shweta naamak speed – breaker ghar par hi maujood hai... Zyada aage ki na sochen to bhi, Shweta ko doubt to hoga hi jab use Aabha dwara pata chalega ki uski aur Suman ki gair – haaziri mein Ragini, Veer ke saath baahar nikal gayi thi... Aage to jo hona hai, wo abhi sochne ka faayeda hi nahi, depend karega is baat par ki Ragini – Veer ka rishta kis Shweta ko pata chalega!? Use jo Veer se maafi ki talabgar hai, ya use jo Veer ki maafi haasil kar chuki hai... Ragini ke Mata – Pita, wo maanege is rishte ke liye, accept kar paayenge, a lot of questions and challenges are there for Ragini, but that's what love is about!
Nidhi ka maamla abhi ke liye aage badhna thoda mushkil hi hai... Firstly, abhi Purvi se milne ke baad, Veer ka adhik dhyan shayad Bhavana aur Tejal ki hi taraf hoga, wahin Nidhi ka sharmeela swabhav itni aasani se jaane se raha... But I think, after Veer eliminates the potential threat as in Rajat, the ice might break! Nidhi bhi jaanti hai ki Rajat ek khatra hai, naa kewal uske liye, balki uski behen aur bachon ke liye bhi, aise mein Veer jab Rajat ka hisaab karega, tab Nidhi par iska seedha asar padna tay hai... Btw. Nidhi ne jaane – anjaane,ek baar fir Veer ke bhale ka kaam kar diya hai, Tejal ko sab kuchh batakar, she's such an angel in Veer's life!
Btw. Juhi's scene was cute too! It was real, and I was able to connect to it... Aksar chhite bache yunhi, parde athva darwaze ke pichhe chhip jaate hain, anjaan vyakti ko dekhkar, uske baad Juhi ka deewar se lagkar Nidhi ke paas aana, just too realistic man! 
Btw. Masi hi bulayegi na wo aage chalkar Tejal ko!? 
Shreya abhi gaayab hai, aur ye samjha bhi jaa sakta hai, office ke kaam se fursat hi kahaan milti hogi use! But definitely, jab wo picture mein lautegi, I mean, her next meeting with Veer, would be interesting to read... Idhar, Kavya aur Aarohi se mulakat ho gayi hai Veer ki, kaafi din baad huyi, aise mein Kavya ka desperation samjha jaa sakta hai, wahin Aarohi pooro tarah apni personality aur shy nature ko darsha rahi hai! Kavya cute to hai, par saath hi she's one of those characters jo aate hi kahani mein roshni bhar dete hain... Juhi is the only one except Kavya, who is capable of doing it again & again... But yes, grown up characters mein se Kavya ke alawa koyi Aisa atmosphere nahi bana sakta, kahani mein...
Yahaan bhi wahi hua, zyada der tak to nahi chali inki baatein, but is arc mein kayi mauke aane waale hain... Btw. wo table ke neeche kya ho raha tha!? 
Aarohi... As I said, she's comfortable in her own shell! And she looks adorable & cute in that personality only! Wahin Karan aur Kritika ka alag hi nain – matakka chal raha hai... Kritika's attraction towards Veer has been overshadowed by Karan's behaviour, that he has been showing towards Kritika! Jab Veer, Vegas mein tha, obviously, tab bhi kuchh ek baar mulakat huyi hogi dono ki, clearly Karan se impressed hai wo, aur aage chalkar dono ke beech aur bhi nazdeeki aane waali hai... Btw. Kritika ko realise bhi ho gaya tha ki Veer shayad uski pahunch se baahar hai joki sahi bhi hai, Kaera – Sonia jaisi jiske aas – paas ho, wo kahaan sabhi par dhyan kendrit karega... But at the same time, Kishor ka dialogue bhi taiyar ho chuka hai, “What is this , you fool! Apne status ki ladki nahi mili thi tumhe koyi”!!
Idhar Sonali ke liye bhi Veer ne achha decision liya hai, uski yahi ichha thi ki wo padhayi kare, aur Veer ne isi ka ek mauka diya hai use... Par dekhna ye hai ki Sonali kya faisla legi! Clearly, wo confused thi ki kis raah ko chune, Food Truck ka kaam bhi use bhaa gaya hai, wahin doosri taraf uski ek puraani ichha hai... Let's see kis aur jaayegi wo! Sonali ka behaviour chulbula hai, munhfat bhi hai wo parantu uske yahi characteristics use khaas banate hain... Jis kahani mein itni maatra mein female characters hon, wahaan apni khaas pehchan banane ke liye, koyi na koyi uniqueness to honi hi chahiye! Aur jab Veer ko uska ye bartav aur nature pasand aa raha hai to obviously,kya hi dikkat hai! But you mentioned in one of your replies that Suman being a bit hard on Sonali, when she says something to Veer has a different reason! Would be waiting for that suspense to open up... Btw. I think Bhavana aur Suman ka itihaas hi iski wajah hai shayad...
Baharhal, Veer ne apne Food Trucks ki ek chain banane ka nirnay liya hai, jismein 8 trucks hone waali hain... Aur apna ek alag brand banane ke liye unique equipments ki manufacturing ka order bhi wo de aaya hai! Wahin future business ke liye Karan ne investment ka offer diya hai use, par saath hi Kaera se baat karne ko bhi kaha hai, dekhte hain Veer kab apne business ko ek step oopar lekar jaayega, aur investment ke liye kis ki sahayta lega, lega bhi ya nahi!? Sonali yadi padhayi ko chunti hai, tab Veer ko na kewal ek Food Trucks ko handle karne waale/waali ki zaroorat padegi, balki use shayad ek assistant ki bhi zarurat hai! Madhuri ka hi naam yaad aata hai sabse pehle, uske alawa shayad Pragya!? Baaki koyi aur ho to kaha nahi jaa sakta...
Idhar Rajat ne apni moorkhta ka parichay de diya hai! Usne attack kiya hai Mahila – Mandal ki reputation par, ya kahun ki seedha Suman par hi... Uske aur Nidhi ke maamle mein direct involvement thi Mahila – Mandal, especially Suman ki, aise mein expected hi tha ki wo khaar khaya baitha hoga... Shayad Balhaar ke zariye yahi pata chala tha Veer ko, Suman ne nahi bataya use par Suman ka bhi apna kaaran tha... Khair, abhi ke liye Veer aur Pari ki charcha se spasht ho chuka hai ki unka pehla target Rajat hi hai, Veer ko naa kewal Suman aur Mahila – Mandal ka hisaab lena hai, balki apne 40 Lakh bhi wasoolne hain... Wahin Nidhi ke saath jo kuchh kiya tha usne, uska hisaab hona bhi abhi baaki hai... Pranjal ka maamla iske baad hi shuru hoga shayad, kyonki dono mile huye hain to Rajat ke safaye ke baad Pranjal ki dum apne aap hi pakad mein aa jaayegi... Wahin Pari ko shakh ho gaya hai “back-up” ke baare mein, let's see Veer Karunesh ka pata kaise lagayega!
Suman ko bhi ‘punishment’ mil gayi hai Veer se wo baatein chhupane ki, khair punishment kam, maza zyada tha wo... Wahin Niharika jo Veer ko dekhkar hi almost marr gayi thi, uski bhi thukayi kar di hai Veer ne! Abhi ke liye Niharika ko lekar kahin jaa raha hai Veer, maybe yahi Mahila – Mandla waala maamla sultane, ya ho sakta hai ki jo hacking waala kaand karne ki usne koshish ki thi, uska prasad dene! Sarika ka bhi naam saamne aaya is beech, shayad ek member hai Mahila – Mandal ki, dekhte hain iska kya role hoga aage! Abhi ke liye Veer ko pehle Niharika ke saath jaana hai aur uske baad Purvi aur Kaera se! Dono ke diye samay mein kewal ek hi ghante ka antar hai, dekhte hain Veer is situation ko kaise manage karega...
Kaera is going to enter the story after a considerable amount of time! Looking forward to her scene, what she said to Karan, about Veer not informing her about his Vegas trip, points towards a bit of improvement on her ‘emotional side’! Waise abhi Kaera ke completely normal hone ke aasar to nahi hai, koyi badi situation chahiye use normal karne ke liye, like danger on Veer, or maybe Sonia.. or maybe Ava herself! Wahin Purvi se mulakat ka kya nishkarsh niklega ye bhi dekhne laayak hoga, dekhte hain Bhavana ne kya idea nikaala hoga un dono ki baatein sun ne ka... What Tejal wants to do is a question too!
Both the updates were really beautiful, as I mentioned above, that Juhi's scene was too realistic! The one of Kavya was cute! And obviously, all that between Veer & Ragini was the most adorable scene... Tejal aur Nidhi ki poori proceeding bhi kaafi badhiya likhi aapne, cheers for that!
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Aakhirkar, Tejal ko Veer aur Veer ke ateet ke baare mein kaafi kuchh pata chal chuka hai, shayad sab kuchh! Obviously, Veer ke saath past mein exactly kya – kya hua, kis prakar ke shadyantra uske khilaaf rache gaye, aur kis – kis prakar se use hurt kiya gaya, iski poori jaankari kewal Veer ke hi paas hai... Parantu, mere khyal se Nidhi se behtar koyi nahi ho sakta tha, Veer ka past explain karne ke liye... That's because, I think Nidhi is the one,who knows the most about Veer, mujhe nahi lagta ki Veer ne itna sab kisi aur ko bataya hoga, jitna ki Nidhi ko bataya tha... But haan, mere khyal se Tejal ko abhi aur bhi bohot kuchh pata chalna baaki hai, sabhi family members ke baare mein, shayad Veer khud hi batayega use aage chalkar...
Tejal, as expected, had a bit of negativity in her heart, all because of the comparisons she made in between herself & Veer... But obviously, thise comparisons were just a result of half – knowledge, she possessed regarding Veer... Par ab Nidhi ki kripa se sab clear ho hi chuka hai, to jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha tha, we might see a different version of Tejal... Purvi ko dekhte huye usne khudse kaha ki wo apne plan ko postponed kar rahi hai, yaani abhi ek – do din baad hi milegi wo Veer se, but that meeting & conversation would be one of the highlights of this story!
Waise intezar to us pal ka hai jab Veer apne ateet ki poori dastan use sunayega, I'm sure, she has something really good in store, for those who were responsible for Veer being hurt, doesn't matter whether they did it knowingly or unknowingly!Btw. Tejal's past, just like all other characters of the story, seems to be painful... That's quite understood too, living without a father in our society, that's not an easy thing... No matter, whether we accept it or not, but the truth is, this modern or progressed society is still really, really bad! Ye to kewal un taano aur vyangya ki bata huyi jo baahri logon ne uspar athva Bhavana par kase honge, we cannot ignore the fact that Tejal must have developed certain feelings and thoughts on her own, regarding her unknown family and relatives... Jab dekhti hogi wo anya bachon ko apne pita athva bhai – behan ke saath, tab uski manodasha kaisi rehti hogi? Bachpan se hi usne ye sab kuchh jhela aur jab use pata chala hoga ki uski Maa us se, uske bhai ki existence hi chhupati aayi hai saalon se.. Truly, she has gone through a lot too!
But for now, there is definitely a ray of hope! Naa kewal wo apne bhai se milan ke nazdeek hai, balki umeed yahi hai ki dono mein yahaan se kewal nazdeekiyan hi aayengi, kisi bhi soorat mein Tejal ki takleef athva peeda, badhne ke aasar kam hi hain... The reason is, dono hamesha se ek – doosre se door rahe, kayi varshon tak ek – doosre ki shakal ki pehchan tak na thi dono ko, ab is se zyada aur kya ho sakta hai!?
Btw. I think ki wo shayad jald hi Aarohi aur Kavya se bhi milegi, Veer se milne ke baad ya us se pehle, ye dekhne laayak hoga... But it can prove to be a good step, I don't think she'll need it though, but still Kavya – Aarohi could prove to be the bridge between her and Veer! Baharhal, Ragini ke baare mein bhi bataya Nidhi ne use, par mujhe nahi lagta ki Ragini se abhi Milne pahunch sakti hai wo... Idhar Ragini ne ek baar fir apni feelings Veer ke saamne keh di hain, waise Veer ki taraf se kiya gaya ye chumban hi kaafi hai, but still I think Veer ab jald hi apni taraf se bhi haami bhar sakta hai us rishte ke liye jiska sapna Ragini kaafi samay se dekh rahi hai... There were a good number of little things, that went on between Ragini & Veer, but all of them were presented in a beautiful way, a really beautiful way! Ragini asking him not to call her ‘Bhabhi’, her reaction when Veer called her by her name, that complete scene on the beach, how she gathered herself up to tell Veer everything, and of course, how kiss broke out! The narration was top notch and the words you chose,were on point, as per the requirement of the situation!
But there are tough times ahead, for Ragini! Sarvpratham, Veer ne abhi tak seedhe shabdon mein uske proposal ka uttar diya nahi hai, haan hi kahega wo, ye lagbhag tay hai, but still ‘keh chuka hai’ aur ‘keh dega’ mein fark to hota hi hai... Wahin Shweta naamak speed – breaker ghar par hi maujood hai... Zyada aage ki na sochen to bhi, Shweta ko doubt to hoga hi jab use Aabha dwara pata chalega ki uski aur Suman ki gair – haaziri mein Ragini, Veer ke saath baahar nikal gayi thi... Aage to jo hona hai, wo abhi sochne ka faayeda hi nahi, depend karega is baat par ki Ragini – Veer ka rishta kis Shweta ko pata chalega!? Use jo Veer se maafi ki talabgar hai, ya use jo Veer ki maafi haasil kar chuki hai...
Ragini ke Mata – Pita, wo maanege is rishte ke liye, accept kar paayenge, a lot of questions and challenges are there for Ragini, but that's what love is about! Nidhi ka maamla abhi ke liye aage badhna thoda mushkil hi hai... Firstly, abhi Purvi se milne ke baad, Veer ka adhik dhyan shayad Bhavana aur Tejal ki hi taraf hoga, wahin Nidhi ka sharmeela swabhav itni aasani se jaane se raha... But I think, after Veer eliminates the potential threat as in Rajat, the ice might break! Nidhi bhi jaanti hai ki Rajat ek khatra hai, naa kewal uske liye, balki uski behen aur bachon ke liye bhi, aise mein Veer jab Rajat ka hisaab karega, tab Nidhi par iska seedha asar padna tay hai... Btw. Nidhi ne jaane – anjaane,ek baar fir Veer ke bhale ka kaam kar diya hai, Tejal ko sab kuchh batakar, she's such an angel in Veer's life!
Btw. Juhi's scene was cute too! It was real, and I was able to connect to it... Aksar chhite bache yunhi, parde athva darwaze ke pichhe chhip jaate hain, anjaan vyakti ko dekhkar, uske baad Juhi ka deewar se lagkar Nidhi ke paas aana, just too realistic man! Btw. Masi hi bulayegi na wo aage chalkar Tejal ko!? Shreya abhi gaayab hai, aur ye samjha bhi jaa sakta hai, office ke kaam se fursat hi kahaan milti hogi use! But definitely, jab wo picture mein lautegi, I mean, her next meeting with Veer, would be interesting to read... Idhar, Kavya aur Aarohi se mulakat ho gayi hai Veer ki, kaafi din baad huyi, aise mein Kavya ka desperation samjha jaa sakta hai, wahin Aarohi pooro tarah apni personality aur shy nature ko darsha rahi hai! Kavya cute to hai, par saath hi she's one of those characters jo aate hi kahani mein roshni bhar dete hain... Juhi is the only one except Kavya, who is capable of doing it again & again... But yes, grown up characters mein se Kavya ke alawa koyi Aisa atmosphere nahi bana sakta, kahani mein...
Yahaan bhi wahi hua, zyada der tak to nahi chali inki baatein, but is arc mein kayi mauke aane waale hain... Btw. wo table ke neeche kya ho raha tha!? Aarohi... As I said, she's comfortable in her own shell! And she looks adorable & cute in that personality only!
Wahin Karan aur Kritika ka alag hi nain – matakka chal raha hai... Kritika's attraction towards Veer has been overshadowed by Karan's behaviour, that he has been showing towards Kritika! Jab Veer, Vegas mein tha, obviously, tab bhi kuchh ek baar mulakat huyi hogi dono ki, clearly Karan se impressed hai wo, aur aage chalkar dono ke beech aur bhi nazdeeki aane waali hai... Btw. Kritika ko realise bhi ho gaya tha ki Veer shayad uski pahunch se baahar hai joki sahi bhi hai, Kaera – Sonia jaisi jiske aas – paas ho, wo kahaan sabhi par dhyan kendrit karega... But at the same time, Kishor ka dialogue bhi taiyar ho chuka hai, “What is this , you fool! Apne status ki ladki nahi mili thi tumhe koyi”!! Idhar Sonali ke liye bhi Veer ne achha decision liya hai, uski yahi ichha thi ki wo padhayi kare, aur Veer ne isi ka ek mauka diya hai use... Par dekhna ye hai ki Sonali kya faisla legi! Clearly, wo confused thi ki kis raah ko chune, Food Truck ka kaam bhi use bhaa gaya hai, wahin doosri taraf uski ek puraani ichha hai... Let's see kis aur jaayegi wo! Sonali ka behaviour chulbula hai, munhfat bhi hai wo parantu uske yahi characteristics use khaas banate hain... Jis kahani mein itni maatra mein female characters hon, wahaan apni khaas pehchan banane ke liye, koyi na koyi uniqueness to honi hi chahiye! Aur jab Veer ko uska ye bartav aur nature pasand aa raha hai to obviously,kya hi dikkat hai! But you mentioned in one of your replies that Suman being a bit hard on Sonali, when she says something to Veer has a different reason! Would be waiting for that suspense to open up... Btw. I think Bhavana aur Suman ka itihaas hi iski wajah hai shayad...
Baharhal, Veer ne apne Food Trucks ki ek chain banane ka nirnay liya hai, jismein 8 trucks hone waali hain... Aur apna ek alag brand banane ke liye unique equipments ki manufacturing ka order bhi wo de aaya hai! Wahin future business ke liye Karan ne investment ka offer diya hai use, par saath hi Kaera se baat karne ko bhi kaha hai, dekhte hain Veer kab apne business ko ek step oopar lekar jaayega, aur investment ke liye kis ki sahayta lega, lega bhi ya nahi!? Sonali yadi padhayi ko chunti hai, tab Veer ko na kewal ek Food Trucks ko handle karne waale/waali ki zaroorat padegi, balki use shayad ek assistant ki bhi zarurat hai! Madhuri ka hi naam yaad aata hai sabse pehle, uske alawa shayad Pragya!? Baaki koyi aur ho to kaha nahi jaa sakta...
Idhar Rajat ne apni moorkhta ka parichay de diya hai! Usne attack kiya hai Mahila – Mandal ki reputation par, ya kahun ki seedha Suman par hi... Uske aur Nidhi ke maamle mein direct involvement thi Mahila – Mandal, especially Suman ki, aise mein expected hi tha ki wo khaar khaya baitha hoga... Shayad Balhaar ke zariye yahi pata chala tha Veer ko, Suman ne nahi bataya use par Suman ka bhi apna kaaran tha... Khair, abhi ke liye Veer aur Pari ki charcha se spasht ho chuka hai ki unka pehla target Rajat hi hai, Veer ko naa kewal Suman aur Mahila – Mandal ka hisaab lena hai, balki apne 40 Lakh bhi wasoolne hain... Wahin Nidhi ke saath jo kuchh kiya tha usne, uska hisaab hona bhi abhi baaki hai... Pranjal ka maamla iske baad hi shuru hoga shayad, kyonki dono mile huye hain to Rajat ke safaye ke baad Pranjal ki dum apne aap hi pakad mein aa jaayegi... Wahin Pari ko shakh ho gaya hai “back-up” ke baare mein, let's see Veer Karunesh ka pata kaise lagayega!
Suman ko bhi ‘punishment’ mil gayi hai Veer se wo baatein chhupane ki, khair punishment kam, maza zyada tha wo... Wahin Niharika jo Veer ko dekhkar hi almost marr gayi thi, uski bhi thukayi kar di hai Veer ne! Abhi ke liye Niharika ko lekar kahin jaa raha hai Veer, maybe yahi Mahila – Mandla waala maamla sultane, ya ho sakta hai ki jo hacking waala kaand karne ki usne koshish ki thi, uska prasad dene! Sarika ka bhi naam saamne aaya is beech, shayad ek member hai Mahila – Mandal ki, dekhte hain iska kya role hoga aage! Abhi ke liye Veer ko pehle Niharika ke saath jaana hai aur uske baad Purvi aur Kaera se! Dono ke diye samay mein kewal ek hi ghante ka antar hai, dekhte hain Veer is situation ko kaise manage karega...
Kaera is going to enter the story after a considerable amount of time! Looking forward to her scene, what she said to Karan, about Veer not informing her about his Vegas trip, points towards a bit of improvement on her ‘emotional side’! Waise abhi Kaera ke completely normal hone ke aasar to nahi hai, koyi badi situation chahiye use normal karne ke liye, like danger on Veer, or maybe Sonia.. or maybe Ava herself!
Wahin Purvi se mulakat ka kya nishkarsh niklega ye bhi dekhne laayak hoga, dekhte hain Bhavana ne kya idea nikaala hoga un dono ki baatein sun ne ka... What Tejal wants to do is a question too! Both the updates were really beautiful, as I mentioned above, that Juhi's scene was too realistic! The one of Kavya was cute! And obviously, all that between Veer & Ragini was the most adorable scene... Tejal aur Nidhi ki poori proceeding bhi kaafi badhiya likhi aapne, cheers for that!
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
kisi ko nidhi kya lagi ye unki soch .. mujhe nidhi ek simple si ladki lagi jiske armaan sapne adhoore ek bhai hone ke ... umeed bhi na thi .. so koi aim na tha bhsi behan ke rishte ko lekar .... bt aaj usko pata chal chuka hai ki uska bhi bhai hai ... uski tarah same blood same DNA wala .... kuch connection to hota hi hsi fir wo door ho ya anjaan .... bas yahi desperation hai aane bhai se milne ki ... by hook n crook ... jhuth bola sach bola .. royi .. minnaten ki ... kyuki agar wo bhai ke pyaar ke bina rahi hai ... to uska bhai bhi behan ke pyaar se mehroom hai ... us ehsaas ko paane ki desperation... koi behan ya did bulane ki desperation... could not be described in words
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Nidhi ne hi sahi se Veer ko uske struggling days me dekha hai.
Attachment dheere dheere badhega. Abhi toh sirf woh ye jaan ke dukhi ho gayi ki Veer ne kya kuch jhela hai. Zara sochiye ki jab woh Veer ko aur acche se jaanegi, uske prati aur strong feelings rakhegi tab kya hoga!? Tab toh Tejal poore logo ki gaand me dam kar ke rakh degi.
Sab hoega issi arc me.
Sumitra unexplored hai for now. Par jesa ki mene kaha hai. Harr ek character ka samay aata hai. Jab usse limelight milegi toh hume uske baare me kaafi kuch Jaan'ne ko milega.
Dekhte hai kese milte hai woh. Directly ya indirectly.
Shweta yaha actually me Bhavna se zyaada mehnat karegi Veer ko apne side karne ke liye. Aur zaahir hai do maao me kya kya teekhe bol ek dusre ke upar feke jaenge Veer ko apne side karne ke liye ye dekhna dilchasp hoga.
Beshaq, abhi uski saza khatam thodi hui hai.
Time ka chakkar toh shuru se hi Veer ke saath raha hai.
Hahahaha!! Aaega wo bhi.
Replies aane me derri ho sakti hai bhai! Par replies aaenge zaroor hamesha!
Bohot bohot dhanyavaad mitr itne pyaare review ke liye.
Saath bane rahiyega!
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Kese kar sakti hai show? Pyaar ek student ke liye hai. Jo ki galat hai. Apni feelings se harr baar bhaagti aayi hai woh.
Filhaal toh Tej ne kuch soch rakha hai. Koi plan execute karne waali hai woh.
Niharika apne aap me cute hai.Rhe Suman ki bat wo to Veer ke lye kuch bi krne to tyaar baithi hai chahe hsss ke jaan bi Deni pde tyaar rhti hai
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Whe Niharika Veer ke samne bhigi billi bn jati hai aaj bi or pith pithe sherni
Woh uss billi ki tarah hai jo pinjre ke andar se toh khoob hiss karti hai aur pinjra khol jese hi usse baahar lao toh meow pe aa jaati hai.Blunder hui gawa...Or yha pe Kamal ka quiencedenc dekhne ko mila wo alag
Ek tarf Purvi jo Veer ki mausi hai usne Vikram ko Milne bulaya shaam ko 6 bje
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Or
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Miss Kera jo story ki half Heroine hai usne shaam ko 7 bje bulaya Veer ko
Jo ki kal aa sakta hai.
Maybe within 2-4 updates. Maybe!
Jab story samaapt hone par tumhe invest na mile tab kehna bhai. Beshaq, prefix me hai toh hoga hi. Ye arc kafi kuch dikha dega. Thanks a lot fora lovely revo. Keep supporting!
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Story ko boring mat banao..itna late updt de kr
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