Fantasy The Hero..

[MrHandsome]

Update 8 upload kar diya hai friends.
I hope aap sub ko pasend ahye gah..

 

[Xabhi]

Hello friends! Kasy hain ap sub. Mai Xforum mai kafi time sa story parta ah raha hn. Or kuch stories kafi achi lagi. Un k likhany ka style boht acha laga. Khas kar fantasy stories muja pasnd hain. Lekan sub ko likhna ni ahta.


Mera naam Jibran hain. Or main Pakistan k gaon sa taluk rakhta hn. Main 1 fantasy story likhany ka soch raha tha kafi time sa lakan hosla ni hota. Kyo k aj tak bs read karta ahya hn. Kabi likhi nahi. To socha k ap logon sa puch lon. Agir app sub log sath day gay to mai story shoron karon ga. Please comment kar k hosla afzai kary.


2 din k bad main story k characters ko introduce karon ga. Or sunday ko 1st updet da don ga.

Or har Roz nahi to 2 din bad zror update kar diya karon ga. Story zror complete karon ga. Thori lambi ho gi story.
Pyar Action romance, fight, science fiction, family, emotions, sub ho ga story mai lekn sex nahi ho, please apny comments mai muja btana ap log..


App sub ko shukria kahta hn.
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for the story Bhai hope this story touch our hearts

 

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[MrHandsome]

Update1

Raat k andera mai sunsaan paharon ke bech 2 army jeep tazi sa bagti ja rahi thi, rasta to kacha tha lkn drivers kafi mahir lagty thy jo is rasty pa kafi achi drive kar rahy thy. 1st jeep mai 3 log bathy thy, 1 driver or k sath wali seet pa 1 or admi tha jo rank sa Major General lag raha tha. Aur back seat pa 1 or army officer lag raha tha. 2nd jeeo mai 5 jawan bathy thy. Driver k sath captain rank mai jawan tha. Rod k dono traf bary bary pahar thy. Or bech mai ya 1 hu rasta ja raha tha. Kafi dar ki driving k bad door sa un ko 1 chak post nazir ahny lagi to General na jaldi sa radio nikala or usa on kar k call milai. General: Helo no One! sub redy ho jao, ham bs ponch gay hai. Dusri traf sa, No One: Yes boos. Ham sub ready hai. General : good, sub kuch planing k mutabik hona chahya, choti c galti b hmara mission fail kar sakti hy. NO ONE: Don't worry boos, ap befikr rahay. General : ok over and all. Ya kahty howy us na radio off kar diya. Thori dar ma wo chak post pa ponch chuky thy. 1 bary sa gate k samny ja k 2nu jeeps ruk gai, or 1 Soldier bahir ahya or us na jab jeep mai bathy General ko dakha to foji andaz ma salute kiya. Tabi General na kuch papar usa pakra diya. Or jawan wo papar la k cabin mai chala gaya. Jeeps mai sub log normal lag rahy thy. Kuch dar k bad wohi jawan wapis ahya or us na papar wapis kar diya. Soldier: Sir ap ja sakty hai. General : hmmmmm. Chalo driver. Or pir dono i jeep ahgy bar gai. Ahgy pir sa wohi sunsaan pahar or kacha rasta, Kuch 2 km jany k bad un ko 1 bari c dewar nazir ahny lagi. Us dewar ko dakh k lagta tha jasy dewar k pichy koi boht bata base hai.. Jab dono jeeps bary sa jhazi size k gate k pas ponchi to under sa 1 Soldier nikla or sida un ke pass ahya, jeep mai bathy General ko dakh k salute mara. Tabi General k usa be papar dikhay or papars dakh ke soldier na apny sathi ko ishara kiya to us k sathi na gate open kar diya. Or jeep under dakhil ho gai. Uner 1 boht bari Belding bani hoi thi. Or building k 4ron traf watchtower bany howy thy. Jaha pa soldiers guns pakry alert khary thy. Dono jeeps 1 office k samny ja k ruki. General : sub alert rahna. Jab mai red signal don to sub foran harket mai ah jana. Itna kahty hi wo or no 1 nichy utry office mai dakhal ho gay. Waha pa 1 Colonel batha howa tha, door open hoty hi wo chonk gaya or uth khara howa, or ahagy bhara un ko welcome karny k liya. Colonel: welcome sir! Ahya General, mai ap ka hi wait kar raha tha. Or dono na hath milaya or dono sid pa pary sofy par bath gay. Or no 1 wohi sid pa khara ho gaya. General : Colonel! Ap ko pata hai mai yaha kis liya ahya hn. Colonel : no sir. Muja ap ke ahny ki khabir ni thi. Ap btaiya mai ap ki kya help kar sakta hn sir? General : kya ap ko nahi btaya gaya hmary bary mai? Colonel : g sir btaya gaya hai. K ap yaha ki security chak karny k liya ahy hai. Or uper sa orders hai. General : hmmm sai kaha. Ap batay k yaha pa kul kitny Soldier hai? Aur kya kya intzam hai security k? Colonel : sir yaha pa kul 50 soldiers hai. Sub k sub highly trained hai. Har traf yaha cctv cameras lagay howy hy. Yaha par halki c fire ki awaz sa hi alarm activate ho jaty hai. Or 10 mint k under airforce ki jeet ah jaty hai. Ap befikr rahy sir. Yaha ki security biht tit hai sir. General : Aur agir koi bahir ka agent pahly hi ap k sathion mai shamal ho jay to pir? Colonel : No sir, ahsa mumkin hi ni hai sir. Yaha pa koi b bahir ka admi dakhal ni ho sakta sir. Don't worry sir. General : hmmm. Ok Colonel ap sub soldiers ko kisi jaga pa ikatha kary mai un ko sa milna chshta hn. Koi bara room hy to waha bulao sub ko. Colonel : Lekan sir sub ko 1 sath nahi bula sakty. Aur ap ko kaha na k sub mery barosy k admi hai. General : Ap janty hai k ap kis bat kar rahay hai? General na gusay mai kaha to Colonel gabrah gaya. Zahir hai us sa senior jo tha. Colonel : thik hai sir mai abi order data hn sir. Lekn sir chak post waly nahi ah sakty. Un ko bad mai ap chak kar sakty hai sir. Colonel na apni chair sa uthty howy kaha. General : ok. Un ko bad mai chak kar lah gay. Jaldi karo tm, 10 mint mai sub ko ikatha hona chahya. General na usi trha taz taz lahjay mai kaha. Or colonel office sa. Bahir chala gaya. 10 mint k bad door dubara open howa or colonel ander dakhil howa. Colonel : sir sub soldiers room mai ah chukay hai sir. Chaliya. General : ha chalo jaldi.. General na uthy howy kaha k or colonel k pichy chalny laga. Or sub sa pichy no one wala. Jis na abi tak 1 bar b moo ni khola tha. Bahir ahty no one na apny sation ko ishara kar diya. Or sub alert ho gay. Chalty howy wo sub Rahdari mai gus gay. Jis k dono traf room bany howy thy. Thora ahgy jany k 2 door chor k 3rd door pa colonel ruk gaya or door open kar diya. Or General ko rasta da diya. General ander ahya to dakha k waha kafi sary soldiers khary thy. General na 1 nazir sub pa dali. Or pir sa bahir ah gaya. Us k pichy colonel or ni one b ah gay. Colonel : kya bat hai sir ap wapis kyo ah gay. General : 1 mint meri bat suno. General sa sargoshi karty howy colonel ko apny pas bulaya. Colonel jasy hi General k pas ahya pichy sa No One na usa pakir liya. 1 hath sir pa or dusra gardan. Colonel ko apna saans rukta howa mahsoos howa. Or kuch hi palon mai colonel behosh ho chuka tha. Or No One na usa tazi sa 1 sid pa dewar k sath lata diya........ . . . . . . . Ya 1st update tha. 1 koshish ki hai likhnay ki. Lkn 1st time likh raha hn to agir galti hoi ho to please ignor kar dana. Pahly mai fantasy sotry likhni thi lkn ab irada chnge kar k ya thriller action story likh raha. Ap ko zror pasnd ahy. Lekan apny comments or like sa zror btana k kasa laga 1st update. Thanks..

 

[Xabhi]

Update1

Raat k andera mai sunsaan paharon ke bech 2 army jeep tazi sa bagti ja rahi thi, rasta to kacha tha lkn drivers kafi mahir lagty thy jo is rasty pa kafi achi drive kar rahy thy. 1st jeep mai 3 log bathy thy, 1 driver or k sath wali seet pa 1 or admi tha jo rank sa Major General lag raha tha. Aur back seat pa 1 or army officer lag raha tha. 2nd jeeo mai 5 jawan bathy thy. Driver k sath captain rank mai jawan tha. Rod k dono traf bary bary pahar thy. Or bech mai ya 1 hu rasta ja raha tha. Kafi dar ki driving k bad door sa un ko 1 chak post nazir ahny lagi to General na jaldi sa radio nikala or usa on kar k call milai. General: Helo no One! sub redy ho jao, ham bs ponch gay hai. Dusri traf sa, No One: Yes boos. Ham sub ready hai. General : good, sub kuch planing k mutabik hona chahya, choti c galti b hmara mission fail kar sakti hy. NO ONE: Don't worry boos, ap befikr rahay. General : ok over and all. Ya kahty howy us na radio off kar diya. Thori dar ma wo chak post pa ponch chuky thy. 1 bary sa gate k samny ja k 2nu jeeps ruk gai, or 1 Soldier bahir ahya or us na jab jeep mai bathy General ko dakha to foji andaz ma salute kiya. Tabi General na kuch papar usa pakra diya. Or jawan wo papar la k cabin mai chala gaya. Jeeps mai sub log normal lag rahy thy. Kuch dar k bad wohi jawan wapis ahya or us na papar wapis kar diya. Soldier: Sir ap ja sakty hai. General : hmmmmm. Chalo driver. Or pir dono i jeep ahgy bar gai. Ahgy pir sa wohi sunsaan pahar or kacha rasta, Kuch 2 km jany k bad un ko 1 bari c dewar nazir ahny lagi. Us dewar ko dakh k lagta tha jasy dewar k pichy koi boht bata base hai.. Jab dono jeeps bary sa jhazi size k gate k pas ponchi to under sa 1 Soldier nikla or sida un ke pass ahya, jeep mai bathy General ko dakh k salute mara. Tabi General k usa be papar dikhay or papars dakh ke soldier na apny sathi ko ishara kiya to us k sathi na gate open kar diya. Or jeep under dakhil ho gai. Uner 1 boht bari Belding bani hoi thi. Or building k 4ron traf watchtower bany howy thy. Jaha pa soldiers guns pakry alert khary thy. Dono jeeps 1 office k samny ja k ruki. General : sub alert rahna. Jab mai red signal don to sub foran harket mai ah jana. Itna kahty hi wo or no 1 nichy utry office mai dakhal ho gay. Waha pa 1 Colonel batha howa tha, door open hoty hi wo chonk gaya or uth khara howa, or ahagy bhara un ko welcome karny k liya. Colonel: welcome sir! Ahya General, mai ap ka hi wait kar raha tha. Or dono na hath milaya or dono sid pa pary sofy par bath gay. Or no 1 wohi sid pa khara ho gaya. General : Colonel! Ap ko pata hai mai yaha kis liya ahya hn. Colonel : no sir. Muja ap ke ahny ki khabir ni thi. Ap btaiya mai ap ki kya help kar sakta hn sir? General : kya ap ko nahi btaya gaya hmary bary mai? Colonel : g sir btaya gaya hai. K ap yaha ki security chak karny k liya ahy hai. Or uper sa orders hai. General : hmmm sai kaha. Ap batay k yaha pa kul kitny Soldier hai? Aur kya kya intzam hai security k? Colonel : sir yaha pa kul 50 soldiers hai. Sub k sub highly trained hai. Har traf yaha cctv cameras lagay howy hy. Yaha par halki c fire ki awaz sa hi alarm activate ho jaty hai. Or 10 mint k under airforce ki jeet ah jaty hai. Ap befikr rahy sir. Yaha ki security biht tit hai sir. General : Aur agir koi bahir ka agent pahly hi ap k sathion mai shamal ho jay to pir? Colonel : No sir, ahsa mumkin hi ni hai sir. Yaha pa koi b bahir ka admi dakhal ni ho sakta sir. Don't worry sir. General : hmmm. Ok Colonel ap sub soldiers ko kisi jaga pa ikatha kary mai un ko sa milna chshta hn. Koi bara room hy to waha bulao sub ko. Colonel : Lekan sir sub ko 1 sath nahi bula sakty. Aur ap ko kaha na k sub mery barosy k admi hai. General : Ap janty hai k ap kis bat kar rahay hai? General na gusay mai kaha to Colonel gabrah gaya. Zahir hai us sa senior jo tha. Colonel : thik hai sir mai abi order data hn sir. Lekn sir chak post waly nahi ah sakty. Un ko bad mai ap chak kar sakty hai sir. Colonel na apni chair sa uthty howy kaha. General : ok. Un ko bad mai chak kar lah gay. Jaldi karo tm, 10 mint mai sub ko ikatha hona chahya. General na usi trha taz taz lahjay mai kaha. Or colonel office sa. Bahir chala gaya. 10 mint k bad door dubara open howa or colonel ander dakhil howa. Colonel : sir sub soldiers room mai ah chukay hai sir. Chaliya. General : ha chalo jaldi.. General na uthy howy kaha k or colonel k pichy chalny laga. Or sub sa pichy no one wala. Jis na abi tak 1 bar b moo ni khola tha. Bahir ahty no one na apny sation ko ishara kar diya. Or sub alert ho gay. Chalty howy wo sub Rahdari mai gus gay. Jis k dono traf room bany howy thy. Thora ahgy jany k 2 door chor k 3rd door pa colonel ruk gaya or door open kar diya. Or General ko rasta da diya. General ander ahya to dakha k waha kafi sary soldiers khary thy. General na 1 nazir sub pa dali. Or pir sa bahir ah gaya. Us k pichy colonel or ni one b ah gay. Colonel : kya bat hai sir ap wapis kyo ah gay. General : 1 mint meri bat suno. General sa sargoshi karty howy colonel ko apny pas bulaya. Colonel jasy hi General k pas ahya pichy sa No One na usa pakir liya. 1 hath sir pa or dusra gardan. Colonel ko apna saans rukta howa mahsoos howa. Or kuch hi palon mai colonel behosh ho chuka tha. Or No One na usa tazi sa 1 sid pa dewar k sath lata diya........ . . . . . . . Ya 1st update tha. 1 koshish ki hai likhnay ki. Lkn 1st time likh raha hn to agir galti hoi ho to please ignor kar dana. Pahly mai fantasy sotry likhni thi lkn ab irada chnge kar k ya thriller action story likh raha. Ap ko zror pasnd ahy. Lekan apny comments or like sa zror btana k kasa laga 1st update. Thanks..

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Update 2

:> Jasy hi Colonel behosh howa General na No 1 ko ishara kiya, Or No 1 na jaldi sa pocket sa kuch nikala or under room ma phank k jaldi sa door bnd kar diya. Or General na pocket sa 1 device nikali or us ka batten press kar diya. Device pa red light jalny lagi. Koi 10 mint wait karnay k bad un k sathi b ah gay. General : kam ho gaya No 2? General na apny sathion mai sa 1 sa pucha. No 2: yes sir sub kam ho gaya. 4ron watchtower walon ko or bahir walon dono ka b. Sub bahir behosh pary hai. General : koi problm? No 2: No sir. Sub easy tha. Aram sa sub kuch ho gaya.... General: No 1, room mai dakho sub thik hy na? Or Michael sa rabta karo jaldi. Or tm sub har jaga time boom laga do. Jaldi jaldi sub harket mai ah jao.. General na pahly no1 ko pir baki sathion ko hdayat daty howy kaha. Or sub k sub tazi bahir nikal gay. Or no1 na room ka door open kar k dakha or pir bahir ah gaya. No1: Yes boss sub behosh ho chuky hai under. General: Ok ab Colonel ko uthao or office mai la ja k baand do. Us k sathion ma sa 1 na Colonel ko uthaya or usi k office ma la gaya. Thori dar bad General b office mai poncha or dakha k Colonel chair pa bnda howa tha. General: Is hosh mai la aoo jaldi sa. Time kam hy, or No 1. Michal sa bat hoi? Us na pahly 1 sathi sa pir no1 sa bat karty howy kaha. No1: Yes boos. Wo bilkol ready hai, bs hmari call ka wait kar raha hai. Tabi Colonel hosh mai ahny laga. Colonel: Yaaa maaaa kaaahhhh hnnn. Yaaa kyaaa hoooowwwaaa mery sathhh. Us na atak atak k bolty howy kaha, lkn tabi 1 zor dsr thper us k moo oa para. Or wo puri trha hosh mai ah gay. General: jaldi sa hosh mai ah jao Colonel, hmary pass time nahi hai zaya karny k liya. No1 chalo shoron ho jao. No1: yes boss. Kahty howy us na bag khola or us mai sa 1 shishay ki choti c botel nikali jis mai green color ka pani tha, or pir k syringe nikali or us mai wo pani bhar k Colonel ki traf bhara. Colonel : Yaa yaaa kyaaa kar rahy ho. Kon ho tm? Muja chor do warna boht burs ho ga tmary sath. Colonel na chekhty howy kaha. General: chekhny ki zrort ni. Tmy bchany koi nahi ahy ga. Tmary sub sathi maar chukay hai. Ya sunty hi Colonel ki aankhy khoof sa phalti chali gai. No1 na wo injection Colonel k bazoo mai laga diya. Or pir General k pichy ah k khara ho gaya. General ab 1 chair pa bath chuka tha. Koi 2 mint k bad hi Colonel k jism ko jatky lagny shoron ho gay. Or wo buri trha sa kampny laga. Us ka pura jism pasiny sa beeg chuka tha. 2 mint tak us ki yahi halat rahi or pir wo 1 dam sa shaant ho gaya. Jab General na dakha k wo shant ho gaya hy to wo us k kareeb gaya or us sa puchny laga. General: tmara naam kya hai. Colonel: mera naam Johnson hai. Colonel na kisi robot ki trha jwab daty howy kaha. General: hmmm nichy jo laboratory hai us ka rasta kis traf sa jata hai. Colonel: Mery office ki almari k pichy us ka rasta hy. Colonel na usi trha robot ki trha jwab daty howay kaha. General: Or rasta kasy open hota hai. Or '' V missile'' ka formula kaha hai. Puri tafseel sa btao. Colonel: almari k sude pa 1 button hai. Usa press karo gay to almari sid pa hat jay gi or ahgy 1 door nazir ahny lag jay ga. Door oa code lagao gay to open ho jay ga. Nechay seriya jati nazir ahy gi. Nichy jao gay to 1 lift ho gi us mai chaly jana. Pir waha 1 lock ho ga us ki key isi almari mai hy. Lkn wo lift tab tak ni chaly gi jab tak nichy laboratory sa or lift sa same time pa kye use ni ho gi. To lift kam ni kary gi, or alarm b activate ho jay ga. Colonel na puri taseel btaty howy kaha. General: laboratory k androni intzam k bary mai btao. Waha security kasi hy. Sub kuch btao. Us na dubara swal kar diya. Colonel: muja androni halat ka ni pata. Mai waha kabi nahi gaya. Muja waha jany ki ijazat nahi hy. General: hmmm ok. No1 chak karo key. Or sub tyar ho jao. Sara saman la lo sath. Or tm dono yahi uper hi raho gay. Agir kuch problem hoti hai to sambal lana. Or baki sub sath chaly gay. General na pahly no1 ko pir apny baki sathion ko smjaty howy tazz lahjay mai kaha. OK boss. Sub na 1 sath kaha. Or no1 ahgay almari ki traf bhar gaya. Or kuch dar mai us k hath mai 1 lambi c key thi. Us na wo boss ko da di. Tabi Colonel chekhny laga. CColonel: tm tm kabi kamyab ni ho gay. Tm kabi laboratory mai dakhal ni ho sakta. Agir dakhil b ho gay to zinda ni nikal sako gay. Waha ki security boht sakht hai. Doctor Jacob na waha k ittzam boht sakht kiya howy hy. Colonel na chilaty howy kaha. Shad us pa injection ka asir khatm ho gaya tha. General: lagta hy asir khatm ho gaya injection ka. Isa khatm karo is ki abi zrort nahi hy. No1: ok boss. No1 na kaha or tazi sa ahgy bara or pocket sa 1 bara sa knife nikala or us sir pakir k galy pa rakh diya to jaldi sa us ka gala kaat diya. Colonel na chilany ki koshish ki lkn koo fayda ni howa. Us k samjny sa pahly hi us ka gala kaat chuka tha. General: Michael sa bat karwao meri. No1: yes boss. Or usa na jaldi sa radio on kar k frequency mila k boss ko pakra diya. Boss: helo helo Michael! Boss calling you. Boss na call daty howy kaha. Or dusri traf sa foram hi reply ah gaya. Michael: yes boss Michael bol raha boss. Sub ready hai boss. Boss: ok Michael ham ah rahy hai. Tm key point pa ah jao. Radio on hi rakhna. Baki waha ponch k dakhty hai k ahgy kya karna hai. Michael: ok boss. Mai key point pa hi hn boss.......... Dusri traf sa michael na kaha. . . . . . . . Ya 2nd update tha. Friends ap sa kaha tha comments kar k btana. Lkn lagta hy story filhal pasnd ni ah rahi. Ao soch rahy hn gay k story ka sir Paar hi nazir ni ah raha. Wo sub kuch ap ko ahgy ja k pata chaly ga. Thanks....

 

[11 ster fan]

Update 2

:> Jasy hi Colonel behosh howa General na No 1 ko ishara kiya, Or No 1 na jaldi sa pocket sa kuch nikala or under room ma phank k jaldi sa door bnd kar diya. Or General na pocket sa 1 device nikali or us ka batten press kar diya. Device pa red light jalny lagi. Koi 10 mint wait karnay k bad un k sathi b ah gay. General : kam ho gaya No 2? General na apny sathion mai sa 1 sa pucha. No 2: yes sir sub kam ho gaya. 4ron watchtower walon ko or bahir walon dono ka b. Sub bahir behosh pary hai. General : koi problm? No 2: No sir. Sub easy tha. Aram sa sub kuch ho gaya.... General: No 1, room mai dakho sub thik hy na? Or Michael sa rabta karo jaldi. Or tm sub har jaga time boom laga do. Jaldi jaldi sub harket mai ah jao.. General na pahly no1 ko pir baki sathion ko hdayat daty howy kaha. Or sub k sub tazi bahir nikal gay. Or no1 na room ka door open kar k dakha or pir bahir ah gaya. No1: Yes boss sub behosh ho chuky hai under. General: Ok ab Colonel ko uthao or office mai la ja k baand do. Us k sathion ma sa 1 na Colonel ko uthaya or usi k office ma la gaya. Thori dar bad General b office mai poncha or dakha k Colonel chair pa bnda howa tha. General: Is hosh mai la aoo jaldi sa. Time kam hy, or No 1. Michal sa bat hoi? Us na pahly 1 sathi sa pir no1 sa bat karty howy kaha. No1: Yes boos. Wo bilkol ready hai, bs hmari call ka wait kar raha hai. Tabi Colonel hosh mai ahny laga. Colonel: Yaaa maaaa kaaahhhh hnnn. Yaaa kyaaa hoooowwwaaa mery sathhh. Us na atak atak k bolty howy kaha, lkn tabi 1 zor dsr thper us k moo oa para. Or wo puri trha hosh mai ah gay. General: jaldi sa hosh mai ah jao Colonel, hmary pass time nahi hai zaya karny k liya. No1 chalo shoron ho jao. No1: yes boss. Kahty howy us na bag khola or us mai sa 1 shishay ki choti c botel nikali jis mai green color ka pani tha, or pir k syringe nikali or us mai wo pani bhar k Colonel ki traf bhara. Colonel : Yaa yaaa kyaaa kar rahy ho. Kon ho tm? Muja chor do warna boht burs ho ga tmary sath. Colonel na chekhty howy kaha. General: chekhny ki zrort ni. Tmy bchany koi nahi ahy ga. Tmary sub sathi maar chukay hai. Ya sunty hi Colonel ki aankhy khoof sa phalti chali gai. No1 na wo injection Colonel k bazoo mai laga diya. Or pir General k pichy ah k khara ho gaya. General ab 1 chair pa bath chuka tha. Koi 2 mint k bad hi Colonel k jism ko jatky lagny shoron ho gay. Or wo buri trha sa kampny laga. Us ka pura jism pasiny sa beeg chuka tha. 2 mint tak us ki yahi halat rahi or pir wo 1 dam sa shaant ho gaya. Jab General na dakha k wo shant ho gaya hy to wo us k kareeb gaya or us sa puchny laga. General: tmara naam kya hai. Colonel: mera naam Johnson hai. Colonel na kisi robot ki trha jwab daty howy kaha. General: hmmm nichy jo laboratory hai us ka rasta kis traf sa jata hai. Colonel: Mery office ki almari k pichy us ka rasta hy. Colonel na usi trha robot ki trha jwab daty howay kaha. General: Or rasta kasy open hota hai. Or '' V missile'' ka formula kaha hai. Puri tafseel sa btao. Colonel: almari k sude pa 1 button hai. Usa press karo gay to almari sid pa hat jay gi or ahgy 1 door nazir ahny lag jay ga. Door oa code lagao gay to open ho jay ga. Nechay seriya jati nazir ahy gi. Nichy jao gay to 1 lift ho gi us mai chaly jana. Pir waha 1 lock ho ga us ki key isi almari mai hy. Lkn wo lift tab tak ni chaly gi jab tak nichy laboratory sa or lift sa same time pa kye use ni ho gi. To lift kam ni kary gi, or alarm b activate ho jay ga. Colonel na puri taseel btaty howy kaha. General: laboratory k androni intzam k bary mai btao. Waha security kasi hy. Sub kuch btao. Us na dubara swal kar diya. Colonel: muja androni halat ka ni pata. Mai waha kabi nahi gaya. Muja waha jany ki ijazat nahi hy. General: hmmm ok. No1 chak karo key. Or sub tyar ho jao. Sara saman la lo sath. Or tm dono yahi uper hi raho gay. Agir kuch problem hoti hai to sambal lana. Or baki sub sath chaly gay. General na pahly no1 ko pir apny baki sathion ko smjaty howy tazz lahjay mai kaha. OK boss. Sub na 1 sath kaha. Or no1 ahgay almari ki traf bhar gaya. Or kuch dar mai us k hath mai 1 lambi c key thi. Us na wo boss ko da di. Tabi Colonel chekhny laga. CColonel: tm tm kabi kamyab ni ho gay. Tm kabi laboratory mai dakhal ni ho sakta. Agir dakhil b ho gay to zinda ni nikal sako gay. Waha ki security boht sakht hai. Doctor Jacob na waha k ittzam boht sakht kiya howy hy. Colonel na chilaty howy kaha. Shad us pa injection ka asir khatm ho gaya tha. General: lagta hy asir khatm ho gaya injection ka. Isa khatm karo is ki abi zrort nahi hy. No1: ok boss. No1 na kaha or tazi sa ahgy bara or pocket sa 1 bara sa knife nikala or us sir pakir k galy pa rakh diya to jaldi sa us ka gala kaat diya. Colonel na chilany ki koshish ki lkn koo fayda ni howa. Us k samjny sa pahly hi us ka gala kaat chuka tha. General: Michael sa bat karwao meri. No1: yes boss. Or usa na jaldi sa radio on kar k frequency mila k boss ko pakra diya. Boss: helo helo Michael! Boss calling you. Boss na call daty howy kaha. Or dusri traf sa foram hi reply ah gaya. Michael: yes boss Michael bol raha boss. Sub ready hai boss. Boss: ok Michael ham ah rahy hai. Tm key point pa ah jao. Radio on hi rakhna. Baki waha ponch k dakhty hai k ahgy kya karna hai. Michael: ok boss. Mai key point pa hi hn boss.......... Dusri traf sa michael na kaha. . . . . . . . Ya 2nd update tha. Friends ap sa kaha tha comments kar k btana. Lkn lagta hy story filhal pasnd ni ah rahi. Ao soch rahy hn gay k story ka sir Paar hi nazir ni ah raha. Wo sub kuch ap ko ahgy ja k pata chaly ga. Thanks....

Nice update Bhai.....yaha kuchh to golmal chal rha hai... Ye general kuchh to jhol ke chakkar me hai...bechara colonel Mara gaya....Inka bhi koi baap hai Jo inko upar se handle Kar rha hai.. waiting for the next update

 

[11 ster fan]

Abhi reader nhi aa rhe hai to demotivate mat ho Jana Bhai...wo Kya hai na ki yaha par reader incomplete story ko padh padh Kar pareshan ho Gaye hai....bas itna kahana chahunga ki ju bas likhate jao....log aaj nhi to story ke mid aate aate aise Jud jayenge ki puchho mat...so just chill hokar likhane ka

 

[MrHandsome]

Nice update Bhai.....yaha kuchh to golmal chal rha hai... Ye general kuchh to jhol ke chakkar me hai...bechara colonel Mara gaya....Inka bhi koi baap hai Jo inko upar se handle Kar rha hai.. waiting for the next update

Thanks bro. Hosla afzai k liya. Next update mai jhol pata chaly ga.