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Fantasy The Hero..

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Xabhi

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Boss: No1 key la k tayar ho jao, or Michael tm b, mery 3 kahnh pa key guma dana dono.
No1 or Michael dono na 1 sath Yes Boss kaha or no1 na key ko key hole mai dal diya.
Pir Boss na 1 2 3 kaha or dono na key guma di.
Key gumaty hi lift ki lights jal uthi or lift ki machine chalny sooft c awaz i. Or stah hi lift nuchy jany lagi.
Kuch dar tak lift chalti rahi pir hod hi ruk gai.

Samny 1 door tha. Jisy no1 na ahgy bar k open kiya to samny 1 room tha. Room bilkol khali tha bs 1 table or chair pari thi or samny 1 admi khara tha jis na soldier wala dress pahna howa tha.
Wo admi ahgy bara, ya yaqenan Michael tha.
Michael: hello Boss.

Boss: hello Michael. Sub kass hai under. Under kisi ko pata to ni chala bahir ki karwai ka?. Or laboratory ka naksha mila kya?.
Boss na Michael sa puchty howa kaha.

Michael: yes sub ok hai. Kisi ko kuch ni pata abu tak. Or naksha to ni mila lekn jaha tak muja jany ki ijazat hy waha tak ka sub intzamat ka muja pata hai.

MMichael na tafseel btaty howy kaha. Or boss sir hilata howa bola.

Boss: ok pir tm leed karo or rast btaty jao. Or baki sub ready ho jao. Lkn koshish karna kam sa kam goliya chalao.
Boss na sub ko hdayat daty howa kaha. Or sub sir hila k apni guns ko pir sa chak karny lagay.
Sub automatic guns pakri hoi thi jin pa silencer lagay howy thy. Tahk sund na ho.
Samny 1 door tha sub ahgy bary or Michael na door open kiya, samny 1 lambi rahdari thi jo thora ahgy ja k left sid pa goom rahi thi.
Sub ahgy barny lagy. Thora ahgy sid pa 1 or door tha. Door ko dakh k Boss na Michael ki traf dakha to Michael smj gaya k Boss kya puchna chahta hai.

Michael: ya mera room hai Boss. Jaha mai rest karts hn.
To Boss na sirf sir hilaya.
Rahdari k gomty hi thori door hi rahdari end ho rahi thi jaha 1 or door tha.
Door k pas ponch k sub ruk gay.

Michael: boss door k dusri traf 1 or rahdari hai jaha oa Red Raises hai. Un ko hoty howy ham ahgy ni ja sakty.

Boss: no3 bag sa chaking machine nikalo.
Boss na apny pichy khary 1 sathi ko kaha or wo bag nuchy rakh k under sa machine nikalny laga.
Kuch dar ma hi us na 1 machine nikali.
1 lambi c machine jis ki lambai 1 feet k kareeb thi or curai half feet. Machine k uper 1 screen lagi hoi thi or nichy kafi sary button lagy howy thy.

Boss: No1. Machine lo or chak karo.
Boss na no1 ko kaha. To no1 ahgy bhar k machine la li. Or door k pas chala gaya. Or kuch buttons press karny laga.
Kuch daar k bad wo bola.
No1: Boss door safe hai, lkn door k bad red raises hai.

Boss: Zero machine do muja.
Boss na usi sathi ko kaha to wo dubara bag sa machine nikalny laga.
Pir us na 1 chakoor c machine nikal k boss ko pakra di.
Boss na machin li or No1 ko door open karny ko kaha.
No1 na door open kiya or Boss ahgy bara or door k pas ponch k ruk gaya or machine operate karny laga. Machine sa 2 atina nikal k bahir ah gay. Machine pa red light jal rahi thi. Kuch dar k bad hi red light green ho gai.
Boss: chalo ab intzaam zero ho gay hai.
No1 ahgy bhar k dubara chak karnu laga. Or thori dar bad bola.
No1: ha boss abi red reises ni hai.
Pir sub ahgy bhary. Ahgy pir sa 1 rahdari thi, right sid pa pa 1 door ahya.
Boss na pir sa Michael ki traf dakha, jasy puch raha ho k yaha kya hai. Michael boss ki aankhon ka matlb smjty howy hod hi bola.
Michael: ya store room hai boss. Is mai khany piny ka saman para hai bs.

Boss na sir hilaya or pir ahgy barny ka ishara kiya. Machine abi tak boss k hath mai thi. Rahdari pir goom gai. Or pir thori door un ko pir sa 1 door nazir ahya. Door k pas ponch k sub ruk gay, to Michael hod hi bola.
Michael: boss ya room security k head Arthur ka hai. Or is room mai Arthur akla hota hai. Us room mai 1 it door hai jis k bad 1 bara haal hy jis mai machines lagi hoi hai security ki. Or 1 chota room hai jis mai 2 admi bath k sub kuch monitor karty hai.

Boss: ok hamy us ko zinda pakrna hai. Lkn dayan sa koi masla ni hona chahya.
Michael tm ahgy jao gay, tmy dakh k wo chonk jay ga. Kyo k usa yaha kisi k ahny ki umeed nahi hai is liya is liya wo befikr ho ga. Or No1 tm us k pichy jao gay or usa jaldi sa behosh kar do gay.

Boss na plan smjaty howy kaha.
Dono na sir hilaya or no1 na apna bag nichy rakha. Michael k pichy chal k door tak ah gaya. Or pir Michael ko ishara kiya to Michael door khol k 1 dam sa andrr chala gaya.
Ander 1 mazboot jism ka admi batha howa chair pa kuch likha raha tha. Or door k khulny ki awaz sun k us na sir uper uthaya, or Michael ko dakh k us aankhy hart sa phalti chali gai. Or us moo sa apny app hi nikla., TUM OR YAHA KASY,, tabi Michael tazi sa ahgy bara or us k pichy no1 b bagta howa us admi k sir pa ponch chuka tha.
Jab tak wo admi kuch samjta no1 1 zor dar machine postal ka war us k sir oa kiya or cheekhta howa nichy ja gira.
Wo sir ko jatkty howa uthny ki koshish karny laga lekn no1 na 1 or war kar diya or wo wohi nichy gir gaya.
Wo behish ho chuka tha.
No1 na usa uthaya or dubara chair pa daal diya or jab kuch nikal k us hath bandny laga.
Tabi door pir sa open howa or Boss or baki k sathi ander dakhil howy.
Boss na dakha to wo admi banda howa para tha.
Boss: good job, ab isa uthao jaldi sa. Time nahi hai. Koi b ah sakta hai.
Boss k moo sa treef sun k Michael khush ho gaya lekn no1 k chahry pa koi badlao nai ahya.
No1 ahgy bara or us admi ko thper marny laga. Abi us na 1 thper hi mara tha k Boss na usa rok diya,

Boss: ruko no1. Ya ahsy nahi btay ga. Sakhyjaan lagta hai. Or kafi trand b. Isa injection lagao. Lekn tab jab ya hosh mai ah raha ho ga. Tahk isa samblny ka moka na mil jay. Ho sakta hai is na training li hoi.
Boss na no1 ko rokty howy kaha.
To no1 na pir sa wohi injection tyar karna shoron kar diya. Injection tayar k usa table pa rakha or pir sa us admi ki traf matwajo ho gaya, or usa thper marny shoron kar diya. 3 ya 4 thper pa hi wo hosha mai ahny laga. To no1 na jaldi sa us k bazoo pa injection laga diya jasy hi wo admi hosh mai ahya us na ider dakha itny sary admio ko dakh k boht haran howa,

Admi: tmmm tmmmm subbb kooon hoooo. Or yahaaa taaakk kassyy ponch gayyy.
Us na atkty howy pucha. K tabi us k jism ko jatky lagany shoron ho gay. Or kampny laga.
Thori dar mai wo shaant bo gaya,
Boss ahgy bara or us sa swal karny laga.

Boss: kya naam hai tmara?
Admi: Arthur.
Us admi na robot ki trha jwab daty howy kaha.
Boss: Doctor Jacob kaha hai or V Missile ka formula kaha hai.

Arthur: Dr. Jacob apny office mai ho ga or formula ka muja nahi pata.

Boss: kaha hai Dr. Jacob kar office, puri tafseel sa batao.
Pir Arthur na robot ki trha btana shoron kar diya.
Boss na us sa swal kar k sub kuch jan liya to wo pichy hat gaya or no1 ko ishara kiya k Arthur ko khatm kar da.
No1 na sir hilaya or pistol us k sir oa rakh k Trigger daba diya. Or Arthur ki khopei mai surakh ho gaya.
Boss: is ki pocket sa wo card nikalo, or no1 tm jao ja k security room mai jo admi hai un ko khatn kar do. Or sary security intazamt ko band kar do or guns ka use karo ab. Ab yaha pa koi alarm nahi hai. Jaldi sa sub khatm karo.
No1: yes Boss.
Apni ahdat k mutabik no1 na chots sa jwab diya or Arthur ki pocket sa wo card nikal liya.
Is card mai ss ahsi reises niklti thi k ya jis k pas hota tha laboratory k ander us ko koi b sciencey huraba nuksaan nahi poncha sakta. Lekn yaha bs 1 hi card tha is liya bs akla no1 hi bahit ja sakta tha.
Or pir no1 na card nikal or usa pocket mai daal k bahir nikal gaya.
Boss ko no1 ki taqat qualities ka pata tha. Usa yaqeen tha k wo sub smbal la gay.
Koi 5 mint k bad k door dubara open howa or No 1 ander dakhil howa.

Boss: kasa raha no1?

No1: veery easy boss. 2 admi thy mai na un ko goli mar k khatm kar diya. Or sary intzamat bnd kar diya security k. Ab ap aram sa bahir ja sakty hai.

Boss: ok to pir chalo. Tm sub logon na sun liya ho ga. Sari tfseel sa. Jo b nazir ahy khtm karty jao. 3 admi or hai security k or 15 scientist hai. Muja bas Dr. Jacob zinda chahya baki sub ko khatm karo. Mai yahi rahon ga. Jab sara kam ho jay to muja ah k batao.

BBoss na hdayt daty howy kaha. To sub na sir hila k yes kaha or sub na begs sa machine guns nikalni shoron kar di. Or sub set ho k door sa bahir nikal gay...
Boss office mai akla rah gaya.

NNo1 un ko lead karta howa ahgy bar raha tha. Boht hoshyari sa. Jasy hi haal room k dusry k pas poncha us na sub ishara kiya. K door ki dusri traf 1 admi hai bs.
No 1 na bary dayan sa door open kiya, door ki dusri traf 1 admi dusri trf moo kar k khara tha. No1 na us ki gardn k girad bazon dala or 1 hath us k sir oa rakh diya. Wo admi buri trha machlny laga. Hod ko churany ki koshish karny laga lkn hod ko no1 k mazbot shikanjay sa na churah saka. Or thori dar mai wo dhela par gay. Wo mar chuka tha.
Rahdari mai ahgy bara lekn tabi wo ruk gaya. Jasy kuch yad ah gaya ho.

No1: tum sub log bahir smbalo mai Dr. Jacob k office mai jaon ga. Us ka office soundproof hai is liya koi awaz nahi jay gi. Baki sub ko khatm kar dana..
Ha ho sakta hai Dr. Jacob b bahir hi ho. Tm na Arthur sa us ka Huliya jan liya hai, is liya pahchan jao gay usa dakh k. Usa mat mar dana.

No1 na taz or bhari awaz mai sub ko smjaty howy kaha.
Sub na sir hila k ok kaha or pir ahgy bhar gay.
Jasy hi wo haal mai dakhil howy waha pa kafi cabin bany howy thy shishay k. Har cabin mai 1 ya 2 Doctors kam mai lagay howy thy. Or waha pa 2 security k admi b goom rahy thy. Lkn un guns pichy latki hoi thi. Un ko pata tha yaha koi nahi ah sakta is liya wo skoon sa khary thy.
No1 na 1 nazir haal mai dali to usa Dr Jacob nazir nahi ahya. To us na ishara kat diya fire.. Or hod tazi ss left sid ki traf bhar gaya jaha Dr Jacob ka office tha.
Usa aony pichy sa taz firing ki awaz sunai dani lagi lkn wo ruka nahi or ahgay bar k 1 door k samny ruk gaya. Or door ko laat mar k door khola or under dakhil hi gaya.
Under 1 bhuda ahdmi batha kuch kam kar raha tha.
Admi kafi age ka tha. Or ki aankhon pa nazir ka kafi bara sa chashma tha.
No1 usa dakhty hi smj gaya k yahi Dr Jacob hai. Arthur na un ko Doctor ka huliya bta diya tha.

No1: tum Dr Jacob ho?
No1 na tszi sa ahgy barty howy pucha to.
To us admi na rawani mai sir hila k Ha kaha.
No1: doctor V missile ka formula kaha hai?
No1 na sakht lahjay maj us sa pucha.

Dr. : kon ho tum or yaha kasy ahy. Mai abi security ko bulata hn.
Doctor abi smbal chuka tha us na harat sa no1 sa puchty howy kaha.
Lrkn no1 na 1 zor dar thper Doctor k chahry pa mara. Chataak ki awaz room mai gunj gai.
Or Doctor ka chashma nikal k door ja gira.
Pir no1 na pistol us k sir pa laga diya.

No1: jaldi bolo kaha hai formula, warna khooopri mai sorakh kar don ga.
No1 na kisi bhariya ki trha gooraty howy kaha.
Jisa sun Doctor kaamp gaya.
Wo 1 doctor tha koi agent ya soldier nahi, wo dar k 1 traf ishara karny laga,
Jaha 1 almari thi.

No1: chalo nikal k do formula.
No1 na usi trha sakht lahjay mai kaha.

DDoctor: mujaaa maaat maroooo mai 1 doctor hn tmy jo chahya la lo, bs muja chor do please..
Doctor na dar sa kamoty howy kaha or ahgy bhar k almari kholi. Almari k under sa 1 or saif thi. Jis pa button thy code k liya.
Doctor na us pa code lgaya or saif khul gai.
Us k ander 1 fail pari hoi thi. Us wo file utha k no1 ko da di.
No1 na file khol dakhi us pa file koi 10 12 paper thy. No1 usa dakha or jab usa yaqeen ho gaya k yahi formula hai to us goli chala thi jo sida doctor ki khoopri torti hoi dusri traf sa nikal gai. Or doctor bina cheekhy wohi gir gaya.

No1 tazi sa bahir ah gaya, bahir har traf khoon or lashay pari hoi thi.
No1 na apny sation ko awaz lagai to sub us k pas ah gay. Sub bilkol thik thy.

No1. Har jaga boom laga do or time set kar do. Or niklo yaha sa.
No1 na kaha to sub sir hila k pir sa chaly gay.
Thori dar k bad Boss k pas thy.
No1 na file Boss ko di or boss file chak karny laga. Thori dar mai us k chahry oar muskraht phal gai.

Boss: good job boys.
Koi problm to nahi hoi?
Boss na un sa puchty howy kaha.

No1: no boss sub aram sa ho gaya. Hat jaga boom laga diya gay hai. 1 ganty bad sub phat jay gay.
No1 na tafseel btaty howy kaha.

Boss: to niklo pir yaha sa. Or no1 ja k sari security pahly jasy on kar do. Hurry up.
Ya sunty hi no1 bahir nikal gaya or 2 mint hi wapis ah gaya. Boss na pir sa zero machine on kar k bahir nikal ahya or lift ki traf bhar gay. Lift mai dakhil ho unon na lift wali key gumai to lift chal pari.
Colonel na un ko bta diya tha k bs nuchy jany k liya 2key ki zrort hoti hai wapisi b 1 hi key ki.
Uper ponch k sub jaldi sa apni jeeps ki traf bary.
Bahir bilkul snata tha. Koi awaz nahi ah rahi.
Tabi no1 kuch sochty howy bola.

No1: Boss jo soldiers haaall mai behosh pary hai wo kahi hosh mai na ah jay.

BOss: don't worry. Wo kal suba tak hosh mai nahi ahy gay. Is gass sa 6 ganty tak hosh nahi ahta.
Boss na muskraty howy kaha. Ab jeeps tazi sa chak post ki traf bari ja rahi thi. Jab chak post kareeb i to boss na no1 ko ishara kiya. Or no1 na machine pistal nikal liya jis pa silencer laga howa tha.
Chak post pa sirf 2 hi soldiers thy.
Jeeps waha ja ruki to no1 jeep ka door khol k nichy utra or jaldi sa dono soldiers pa goli chala di. Goliya thik un ki khoprion par pari. Or wo 1 sec mai khatm ho chukay thy.
No na cabin mai ja door open kiya or ah k jeeo mai bath gaya. Door open hoty hi dono jeeps dubary bagnh lagi.

Lekn ab jeeos ki speed boht tazz thi. Koi 30 mint k bad wo 1 paki road pa ah gay pir.
Paki road pa koi 5 mint ka safir kiya ho ga k road ki left sid pa 1 chota sa ghar nazir ahny laga.
Ghar k kareeb ponch k driver na jeep us ghar ki traf moor di. Door k kareeb ponchty hi door khul gaya. Or 1 admi nazir ahny laga.
Ghar k ahaty mai 2 bari bari station ghariya khari thi. Jin pa America ka flag laga howa tha. Or un ki number plate b Red color ki thi. Jeeps rukty hi sub tazi ss nichy utry..

Boss: jladi sa saman shift karo jaldi. Time ni hai hmary pas. Kuch hi dar mai yaha har traf army hi army ho gi oir hmara niklana mushakl ho jay ga. Hurry up..
Boss k kahty sub na sman nikalna shoron kar diya or station gharion mai rakhna shoron kar diya. Boss na apny 1 hath pa zor sa cutki kati to us k hath sa 1 jali c utrany lagi. Or dakhty hi dono hathon sa jaliya urar di. Pir us na apny chahry pa b chutki kati to us k chahry sa b jali utrny lagi. Jasy bi us k chahry sa jali utri us ki shakal bilkol chnge ho chuki thi.
Us k sation na b ahsa hi kiya. Or sub k chahry ab pahly boht zads mukhtlif thy.
Sub na apny kapry nikal k change karny shoron kar diya. Ab sub army dress ki jaga normal suits maj thy
Sara sman unon na jeeps mai rakh diya kapry or jaliya.
No1 na ahgy bhar k jeeps pa b boom laga diya or jaldi sa ah k ghari mai bath gaya. Or dono ghariya bahir nik i. Na uter k door bnd kiya or pir sa gari mai bath gaya. Or pir gariya puri raftar sa bagny lagi.

Boss: no1 kitna time rah gaya hy blast mai?
Boss na no1 sa pucha.


No1: boss bs 10 mint baki hai. Ham aram sa ponch gay.
Boss na bs sir hila diya 5 mint mai wo sub city mai enter ho chukay thy. Boss na gari rukwai or pir nichy utr ahya or no1 b utar ahya. Baki sub gari mai hi thy..
Boss: tm sub abi headquarter poncho. Or in garion ko chupa do.
Boss na no2 sa kaha.

No2: ok boss.
No2 na kaha or pir dono gariya ahgy bhar gai.
Pir dono chaltu howy ahgy bhary or un ko 1 taxi mil gai pir wo us mai bathy chaly ja rahy. Kuch dar mai un ko army ki boht c gariya or or ahsman helicopter nazir ahny lagy. Un dakh k Boss k chahry pa 1 zahrili muskan ah gai. Lkn wo bola kuch ni.
10 mint k bad wo Colony mai dakhil howy jaha bary bary gar thy. Ghar kya Mahal thy.
Us na colony mai enter hoty hi taxi roki. Payment ki taxi ko or padal chalny lagay.
5 6 ghar chor k 1 alishan ghar k samny ponch gay. Waha chokidar khara tha us na un ko dakhty hi jaldi sa gate khola or wo dono ander chaly gay.
Ghar babir sa jitna khubsort tha ander us b zada khunsort tha. Wo 1 room mai chaly gay. Jo office k jasa saja howa tha. Waha dakhil hoty hi Boss na zor zor kahky lgany shoron kar diya.
Victory victory chilany laga.
No1 k chahray pa b halki sa muskan thi.
Kuch dar bad dono chairs pa bath gay. Tabi no1 na 1 sawal boss sa pucha.

No1: boss agir ap bura na many to ap sa 1 swal puchon?.

Boss: ha ha no1 pucho pucho. Aj mai boht khush ham na boht bara mission pura kiya hai. Or wasy b tm mery number 2 ho. Pucho?

No1: boss pahli bat to ya k ya koi boht bara mission ni tha. Boht easy sa pura ho gaya,
Or dusri bat k "Black Ghost" jasi bari tanzeem ko is formula ki kya zort par gai.
Block Ghost jitni taktwar tanzeem k pas to is sa bary or achy missile hn pir yahi q?
Us ki bat sun Boss hasny laga or thori dar wo no1 ko dakhta raha pir bola.....

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To be continue....
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Aj k liya itna hi. Baki next update mai.
Next update 2 3 din k bad karon ga. 2 update mai na 2 din mai kar diya hai. Lkn abi 2 3 din lagy. Is liya sory.
Apny likes or comments zaror karna. Tahk meri hoslaafzai ho or mai khushi khushi agla update da sakon. Koi galti hoi ho to maaf karna.
Milty hai next update mai.
Abhi tk yah pta nhi chala ki ye kon si country thi pr America sabd se thoda Bahut samajh aa rha hai...

Ye Black Ghost ko missile formula chahiye tha, Lagta hai ye koi organization hai kisi Desh ki, or jinhone Ise anjam diya vo koi contract me karne vale hai...

Mind blowing superb update bro Jabardast
 

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Abhi tk yah pta nhi chala ki ye kon si country thi pr America sabd se thoda Bahut samajh aa rha hai...

Ye Black Ghost ko missile formula chahiye tha, Lagta hai ye koi organization hai kisi Desh ki, or jinhone Ise anjam diya vo koi contract me karne vale hai...

Mind blowing superb update bro Jabardast
Next update isi bary mai ho gi bro.
Baki thanks story like karny k liya.
Jald hi next update karon ga.
 
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Next update isi bary mai ho gi bro.
Baki thanks story like karny k liya.
Jald hi next update karon ga.
Baki ka sab thik hai pr colour dark or word size bada rakhne ka bhai sath hi bold karke post karne ka, Jisse padhne me asani Ho...
 
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Firstly :congrats:for your nawa thread.Keep writing and keep showing your creativity of writing.Story bohot achi bas kuch mistake hai jo samay rahte ju thik kr loge i hope so,tab story aur bhi jyada intresting mod le legi.Well keep going in bhai and keep entertaining us that as you can !!
 

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Update 4



Boht boht shukria bhai.
Ab sa ya mistakes ka khas dayan rakhon ga. Next update to likh liya hai. Leakn abi usa 2 3 bar hod read kar k us ma mistakes khatm karon ga. Next update ap sub ko pasnd ahy gah. Is mai puri tafseel hai. Ap sub smj jao gay story k bary mai.
Aapko apna yah msg edit karne ki jarurt hai
 
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Ha lekn ya galti sa ho gaya. Mai na abi ya complete nahi kiya tha. Or samj b nahi ah rahi k kasy karon ab 😒😒
Niche teen dot aayenge uss comment ke bas uspe click kro aur fir waha edit ka option aajayega aur fir simple hai jo hatana chahte ho usse hata do aur fir save par click kr dena.
 
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